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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, Making Mona Lisa Smile, by Nick D'alto it describe the new advanced technology known as the Facial Action Coding System. This technology helps computers to identify human emotions, and it is planned by the creators to someday be used in classrooms, offices, ads that pop on your computer, and anywhere else they could be. This technology isn't that valuable in a classroom however. The help of understanding emotions isnt needed, it will cause distraction, it is an invasion of peoples privacy, and overall it doesn't actually change anything and isn't worth the money.\n\nFirst off, technology is used to help computers understand human emotions not to help humans understand it, we can see emotions sometimes better that a machine ever could. For example, \" In fact, we human perform this same impressive 'calculation' every day. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look of their face\" (Nick D'alto 5). The quote says we human can do the same thing, therefor, what is the point of investing in expensive technology and putting it in classrooms if we can do it ourselves. Teachers can see our facial expressions and often they will come up to us if we look sad and down and ask what happened or if we look happy they may ask how our weekend was.\n\nSecondly, the technology will be a large distraction to students. An example from the article is, \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify\n\nthe lesson, like an effective human instructor'\" (Nick D'Alto 6). This will not be affective students will be more distracted and constantly making faces into the camera as a joke with their friends. Also teachers have the ability to recognise confusion and boredom, they are the emotions students get all of the time. its also important to mention that the technology hasn't even learned to calculate these emotions yet so why is it relavent to already be putting it in a classroom.\n\nThe technology is an invasion of peoples privacy. One example form the text is, \" But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius. To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a 'smiling' politician or celebrity isn't being truthful\" (Nick D'Alto 8). This shows how inappropriate it is in a classroom enviroment. Kids shouldn't be held to standards like a politican or celebrity, that sort of thing just isn't relevant in a classroom. Maybe the teacher could also engage in a conversation to see how they are rather than creepily seeing every emotion in a persons face that they might be trying to hide. Kids could also try to use the machine if they get their hands on it to get a secret out of some one. People are entitiled to their own emotions and shouldn't have to share them with others if they don't want to.\n\nFinally, the technology won't change anything and it isn't worth it. The technology will be a failure because it is going to be expensive to implement into every computer. In an example from the article, \"Your home computer can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile\" (Nick D'Alto 7). A home PC is often much better that a school computer so they will have to also invest in top tier computers because the technology will destroy normal junky school computers. Also even if the technology is developed and has every emotion known to man it wouldn't be helpful in a classroom setting. Is it important to see if everyone is happy and not confused every day? No it's not, it's the teachers job to go around and make sure everyone is understanding the lesson. Even if the scanner came out with confusion we don't have the technology yet to automatically sort through hundreds of different lessons handpicked by your specific emotion. That would take up so much time. It would be easier if the student could as a question to the teacher, and the teacher can give a much better explantion and helps the child understand.\n\nIn conclusion, the technology descrivbed in the article, Making Mona Lisa Smile, by Nick D'Alto is not fit to be used in a classroom. The technology isn't needed, it is a distraction, it invades peoples privacy, and the technology wouldn't have any benefit in a classroom and would be way to expensive to be worth it. The technology just wouldn't work in a classroom at all, and it would change school as a whole and make it so much worse.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Emotions and facial expressions can sometimes be difficult and complicated to understand. Everyone has emotions and facial expressions and you cant always detect another persons emotions and feelings. In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto the author describes a new technology, FACS (Facial Action Coding System) is a technology that allows you to detect how other are feeling and improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of other. A computer constucts a 3-D computer model of a face and there are \"action units\" which are one or muscles moving, the action unit is the associated with 6 different basic emotions and it lets you see the emotions going on from just detecting the moving muscles on the face. I believe that this new form of technology is valuable when it comes to reading the emotional expressions of students.\n\nFACS could be the start of a lot more important and beneficial technology in the future. This new technology could be either very valueable or not valueable at all. I believe it will end up being very valuable in the future because it will help computers understand emotions and will help students and there education. Some students hide there emotions and thoughts on the way they are being taught even when it isnt beneficial and helpful for them. Everyone can have different preferences on how they are taught and FACS could let the computer know how the student feels about it, \"\"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\"\" stated Dr. Huang which helps understand that the way the lesson is being taught can be changed by the computers because it can read the emotions of the students and will change the lesson in the prefernence of the students which allows them to benefit more. I believe that everyone being able to learn in their prefernce of learning is the most beneficial and valuable thing FACS can do. FACS will be valuebale all over the world because of its capability of reading human emotions, being able to do that is a very important thing because then the coputer can change the things you see and do in your preference.\n\nI believe that FACS will be a valueable use of tecnology to read students emotions. A computer being able to read emotions will be a beneficial and positive thing in society and will help students succeed in there classrooms. Students being able to have there lesson taught differently in there prefernce will help students feel more confident and heppier when learning. The outcome of computers having emotions\n\nwill most likely be a great value in society in the end. The enabling of computers to identify human emotions will change be a beneficial thing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient went It hour flight two hour layover It really hard patient I really wanted go In layover pass time I listend ipod used macbook pro get face book It really helped patient took mind know time arrived patients paid I got swim beaches party I break story time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There's this new technology out called a Facial Action Coding System (facs) that is being brought into classrooms and schools to determine the expressions of students in a classroom. The Facial Action Coding System sounds like an excellent device that will help teachers acknowledge the feelings of students and maybe it will encourage teachers to help. Therefore bring the device into classrooms it'll be a great source for the schools.\n\nUsing this device is in classrooms will be very valuable to teachers and other adults working in the schools. Why is beacuse the device can help teachers figure out the way students feel at times and see if they're hurting or not. In schools students mostly hold in their emotions either if its happy or sad and never seem to get the attention they need if its sad. Even if a student tries to fake their emotions because they dont want anyone to know, it won't wotk. According to the article the author says that the device can detect fake smiles, why is because Facial Action Coding System doesnt only detect your facial emotins it detects your muscles also. So if you put the device into schools maybe a sad kid might pass by one day, get scanned by the device, then an adult will see that they're upset and help them out with there problems and maybe that student will never feel that way again.\n\nGetting scanned by a device every day to get into school might be weird but I assure you that it will help you and other students around you. Another reason being able to reading the emotional expressions of students is good because it can helps teachers know how to teach in class. If a teacher is teaching his or her class and the students can't understand or maintian the ability to learn the teacher will find out due to the Facial Action Code Stsytem. The teacher will simply scan faces of boys and girls and see the facial muscles show that they are confused and in need of a better way to be taught.\n\nTherefore putting a Facial Actions Code Sytem will be valuable in classsrooms to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. The device can help teachers acknowledge how a student is feeling during the day and give him/her help and brighten a students day up. This device can help teachers find out if the way they're are teaching is good enough and get them a better way to teach students if students are confused with the way a teacher is teaching.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Angelina year ago time I best friend house sleepover party We exhausted swimming pool taking dog walk mention partying would asleep nt familysized bag six pack d consumed hour At around three childish minds searching something decided good idea paint tips tongues blue nail polish hopes glowing dark held black light windowsill I first one daring enough touch tongue brush boy hurt The acid alcohol polish stung taste buds The next day hanging house afternoon came house another sleepover sometimes still every time together That night time around two grew hungry came downstairs get snack retreating back room playing computer I used phone text former crush got jars ice water I still nt know uses jars instead cups interrupted spinning around kitchen floor new socks random instantaneous ice chugging contest After ten seconds silence I glanced jar nt even half done water There chin speck dot glob blue nail polish I attempted gasp give enough air start laughing instead air coming windpipe ice cube made way Choking laughing falling floor laughing nail polishpicking laughing stood middle kitchen nothing actually laugh funny dropped jar shattered floor sending shards glass water across kitchen s okay We fun guess fell asleep kitchen floor ten minutes later I suppose tired thought We clean glass though Some people say laughing best medicine doctor use cure disease brighten anyone s day Dentist s apprentices use laughing gas makes people loopy smile lot operations teeth nt hurt much day s tooth pulled Today I still best friends Sure get fights end within week two The longest fight ever lasted month half misunderstood rumor another friend mine started ended us laughing stupid whatever happened really Within five six years I friends realized laughing healthy good physically emotionally relieve stress every time see laugh much possible Inside jokes popping something said totally unrelated funnylooking person walking side road minds saying time happy triggers laughter Sometimes hurts cant help laughing harder fun", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I disagree with the view that celebrities have to accept the manner in which their private lives are made public by the media. lt is undeniable that they are in the spotlight and want to be popular by choice. However, their rights to privacy need to be protected as well, as they too are humans. I shall put forth my arguments in this essay. To commence with, celebrities are already under a lot of pressure to perform well, as they are public figures and are always in the public eye. Be it a politician, a sportsperson, a singer or an actor, all these professions require them to be at their best at all times. This stress of someone constantly following them affects the way they perform, which ultimately leads to a loss for the masses. Secondly, these celebs are role models for the people. When any negative side of their private life is exposed, their followers think it glamorous to do the same, which is definitely detrimental for the society as a whole. For example, if people come to know that the celeb they adore, smokes and drinks in private life, they think there is nothing wrong in doing so and also copy their idol. This is where responsible journalism is needed. Undoubtedly, the celebrities choose this life for the name and fame and to be ln the spotlight. Without the media, the term celebrity will not hold any meaning. However, that doesn't mean that the media and paparazzi have a right to stalk them at all times. To add to it, sensationalizing the news in order for the channel to get more TRP is unethical. Responsible journalism and some ethics need to be followed by those who get the news to the masses, as they may adversely affect someone's personal and professional lives. Who doesn't remember the unfortunate incident when the world lost a very eminent public figure, Lady Diana? That accident happened because the paparazzi were chasing the car she was travelling in. lt is something which could have been easily avoided, had the paparazzi been a little rational in their behavior. To sum up, it can be reiterated that responsible journalism means knowing its limits. Celebs too have their private lives and they have a right to privacy. The media has to be judicious in knowing what to report and how much to report, and should never misuse its power.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Librarys filled hundreds materials many like dislike Books Those books offend re educate subject Censorship youth adult open everything You make desicons live If feel like book song movie offensive stop reading listening watching everyone gets offended I believe citizen right remove anything library every one diffrent outlooks I conclude saying censorship enforced shouldnt great extent us learn learn In school forsed learn learn believe right side knowledge way get data bases computers books music art etc", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everywhere we go we see everyone's face and facial expressions. They could either be good or bad. But what if you had a computer to tell what emotion they were going through if you did not know?\n\nProf. Thomas Huang and his partner have created an algorithm to depict what emotion a person is having. This technology is very valuable because we have never seen something like this before, it can even read emotions on a persons face from a painting. It uses all 44 major muscles in your face and depending on what muscles a person is using, they can depict what emotion you are going through. For example the author states in paragraph 3 that, \"your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrow when you're surprised; your orbicularis ori (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger\".\n\nIn conclusion, this technology could end up being the next big thing just because of the simple fact that it is very new and could be used later on as part of something bigger. This technology could even end up changing how we think as humans and the way the world works today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Despite the popularity of prison sentences as the way to control illegalities, improvements in education have gained social endorsement as a means to eliminate the problem from its root. In my opinion, I disagree that discipline is the best one as it is rather impossible to compare these two method’s effectiveness owing to their distinct impacts.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the reasons why prisons are of indispensable necessity for social security are varied. They are the place to keep people who have broken the law contained, ensuring the safety of other citizens. Especially, dangerous criminals such as murderers or rapists have to be imprisoned for their heinous actions. Furthermore, severe prison sentences act as a deterrent against crimes. Knowing there might be a chance of getting caught and condemned to jail, which also means losing freedom and living a miserable life in a cell, the ones who are having the intention of committing illegalities would reconsider going down the path.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, schooling serves as a remedy for the origin of crimes. Education contributes greatly to heighten people’s intellect and to form a civilized society. With access to better educational services, citizens would be well-informed about the damage that committing crimes would cause to their community and themselves, which eventually leads to the decline in crime rates. Additionally, the possession of certain qualifications through fundamental training like vocational training could secure a person’s stable life, which would dispel any ideas of committing crimes.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe there is no absolute way to deduce whether imprisonment policies or better education would take the dominant role in dealing with crimes as they both tackle the problem just in different ways.\r\n\r\n(280 words)", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", suggests that we study Venus despite the dangers. The article gives good examples such as oceans, familiar features, conditions of what it would be like, and how they are going to go about this journey.\n\nBefore the reasons of why we should keep studying, there is some stuff on Venus on why people say that they shouldn't keeping doing research. The conditions are more extreme than anything people have experianced before. Venus is also the hottest surface teamperature of any other planet in the solar system.\n\nEven thought there are risks astronomers are surprised by the fact that Venus could've been the most Earth-like planet in the solar system. Venus is the second planet from the sun it was probably covered with large amounts of ocean and could've supported various forms of life. It even has a surface of rocky sediments that includes familiar features to Earth such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nThe articles talks about how the temperatures can be dangrously hot even at 30 plus miles above the surface. It states, \"Solar poer would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earths levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" This is saying that it would be hard to adapt to the enviroment but it is possible. This might mean there would never be seasons. It would alsways feel like summer.\n\nAnother thing that is being looked at is old technology called mechanical computers. This was important during World War II. These devices can make calculations by using just gears and levers. There is not required electronics. Modern computers are too powerful and delicate when it comes to the physical conditions.\n\nThe article says that human curiosity will most likely lead us to equally intimidating endeavors to push them to do more tests and reserach. There are many people in this world that travel and would want to go beyond the limits. They shouldn't be limited by the dangers and doubts. For these reasons it is worthy to continue these studies despite the dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patient I patient I waiting football game It I went go get shoulder pads helmet pants football We woke earlly though going first ones thought wrong There like people I freaking man freaking I said mom you said well early said well first ones hear Well wasent totally worng I mad We last people line All thhe good helmets gone Mom said CAPS need patient like parents tried patient It wusent working well I impatient I yelling saying comon dont time sitting around day dontt time christmass CAPS got said loud CAPS The football stuff got mad CAPS I said I hope size football stuff Just didnt I mad said come back tomorrow well size Well thats story kinda patient toward end beging I yelling shows ya patient youll probley wont get youre waiting day", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A device that reads emotions has no value in a classroom. The idea of technology that can read students' expressions would sound appealing to any teacher. Most teachers are always striving to help students enjoy their classes so they'll show up and learn. However we shouldn't try to enforce this technology in our schools. While it sounds good on paper this idea has no real value.\n\nReading a students face is a skill teachers should have on their own, not something they should use a computer to tell them. If a teacher has concerns that a student is upset in class they should talk to the student about it. We don't need a machine to tell us when someone is upset, we already do that ourselves. Paragraph 5 clearly states that \"we humans perform this same calculation every day.\" so we shouldn't rely on technology to do it for us.\n\nIn conclusion, while the idea of using a computer to find out how students feel is appealing, it is ultimately pointless.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Joe Kurmaskies Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit features setting affect cyclist bad way First cyclist dehydrated heat lack water I eased past trying keep balance dehydrated state This sentence text stores dehydrated creates obstacle must face Also another bad affect features setting cyclist facing rough road ahead face ROUGH ROAD AHEAD DO NOT EXcEED POSTED SPEED LIMIT If I cyclist gazing sign I would die knowing trouble ahead Luckily cyclist made way managed obstacles well", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face. A pop icon, a very controversial topic, an alien landform. Those are some of the most common pieces of discussion surrounding this mysterious landfrom captured in 1976. Is it a hub for aliens? Is it a landform much like the ones we study in the American West? There are many theorists that believe the landform has alien origins, but they have no substantial evidence. While many continue to believe given the reality, there are no alien origins to this landform.\n\nThere was no alien life form ever captured in any pictures. In 1998, the picture was retaken 10 times sharper than the one released in 1976. It showed, absolutely no signs of any alien life at all. Still, many believed NASA was covering up some conspiracy surrounding aliens, or blaming the weather, which happened to be cold and cloudy. Since the weather could have been a factor, they reshot the picture in 2001 on a sunny and cloudless day, with a better spacecraft, and Jim Garvin, the chief scientist at NASA stated that it looked like a butte or mesa, landforms common in the midwest. He called it a lava dome that had taken the form of a mesa, having the same height as the face, proving there to be no alien origins, just a natural landform.\n\nIf there was alien life form on Mars,NASA would benefit from it. They would go down in history as the first people to have discovered alien life, get funding for years of research, and become more popular than ever, increasing their livelyhood. A few scientists believed the face was an alien artifact, showing that the scientists had also been hoping for any chance of alien activity, but hadn't found any. They released pictures to the media, asked for feedback, and kept everyone updated on their findings. They themselves seemed optimistic in the first two expeditions to Mars, hoping to find any signs of alien life, reshooting repeatedly to get the best picture. It would be useless for NASA to not release information that could be beneficial to themselves.\n\nThey took multiple sets of pictures in different years. They performed multiple trips to Cydonia, snapping multiple pictures. They went in 1976, when it was first discovered, 1998, revealing no alien life form, and 2001, revealing it to be a lava dome. Each time, they took multiple pictures, studying and publishing them for the world to see. They had found absolutley nothing in 1998 and 2001 that could point to any life forms existing on Mars, proving the theory of aliens on the face to be false.\n\nWhile many people continue to believe that the face is proof of aliens, they have no concrete evidence. They are using old tales, myth, and folklore, with little to no evidence to help their argument. All the arguemnts made against the pictures were silenced, making it impossible to find strong evidence to prove alien origins. After snapping the picture in 2001, it became clear the face was just a mesa, nothing more than a natural landform with odd shadows and ridges, resembling a face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez really see moods love friendship perseverance created In second paragraph see love Narciso Rodriguez s life home Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop lives warm home Love definitely big mood ran throughout Rodriguez home shows greatly memoirAnother mood shown strongly Rodriguez s memoir friendship In last sentence fourth paragraph see My parents always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would us This sentence shows great friendship love Rodriguez family offered always lending helping handThe final mood strongly shown throught memoir perseverance The Rodriguez family moved Cuba oneroom apartment New Jersey states paragraph one The Rodriguez family took whatever jobs could get wanted best children The Rodriguez family always rose fell memoir mood shines greatly In memoir family immensely important mood shows greatly", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays the majority of people are staying away from their beloved ones, there are many reasons that accompany this situation like career growth and so on. Although there are positive signs for this, yet there are a few drawbacks that need to be considered.\r\n\r\nFirstly on the positive side, the main reason the public chooses to stay far from their families is for their career building. Individuals often think about the opportunities they will get when they move to mainstream areas and relocate themselves. There are only a few cities with a plethora of infrastructural commodities and young ones often get attracted to those, in order to lead a better life. Let's talk about Sundar Pichai, he used to live in a small town near Chennai but he had visioned himself attaining great heights and chose America as a destination to showcase all his skills and now he is the CEO of the top IT company. \r\n\r\nOn the other ,hand there are some setbacks people usually go through in this process. The main pushback is that they won't be able to be with their loved ones when in need. Though we have advanced technological enhancements through which we can see and talk to them like Skype, and Whatsapp still we need someone to lean on while going through rough patches and that will lack and it often may lead to depression. Virat Kohli a modern-day legend in Cricket, while interviewed in the article expressed the problems that he had to face during his initial stages in order to achieve this great height. He had to miss his own father's funeral in order to play the national game for his country.\r\n\r\nTo conclude my opinion, People often move to other places far from their families to achieve their goals, yet there are many things that they need to sacrifice to reach the top position in their respective fields although staying far from loved ones affects both themselves and their parents ,still the success they achieve will make them happier.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that driverless cars are really safe to have on the roads. I think that they are manufactured safe enough to have on the roads and may not be for a while or so. For example, the author tells too much about the benefits of driverless cars rather than the bad things or costs about them. Here are some of the things: automatic braking, acceleration, and steering, and many more as well.\n\nI think that if cars have already been manufactured to have built-in braking built into their systems, that they are already off to a good start to things. The most dangerous situation to me would be no being able to brake soon enough or if you are not paying attention. That is when we would ususally need it most.\n\nI think that acceleration would come in handy as well because some people on the roads just do not drive the way that they drive these days. Some people just do not drive fast enough and it makes some people on the road angry or agrivated at them. I think that acceleration would come in handy when it comes to driverless cars.\n\nLast but not least, I think that steering would be of great help to those on the road these days. I think that some people just do not know how to keep their car in between the lines. I think that it is a goood thing that cars are able to steer themselves instead of the driver going into the next lane or something like that.\n\nThis is my argument for driverless cars. I think that driverless cars are a safe alternative for cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Florida Senator:\n\nAfter reading a few articles explaining the Electoral College system and reading arguements for and against it, I have decided the system is not worth keeping in place. The system does not take every voter into account, and our electors are not always reliable. Also, this system of voting can discourage citizens in non-swing states from voting, which may be it's greatest crime. The Electoral College is worn out and ready for retirement.\n\nThe Electoral College, although seemingly based on the people's votes, is really dependent on whoever the chosen electors want as president. It does not seem very fair for voters to spend months listening to drawn out debates, campaign commercials, and becoming educated on the candidates, just to have their vote essentially thrown away if they did not vote for the majority. No, they do not even get to see their vote in action. It is simply erased and given to a slate of electors who stand for the majority of the state, even if the majority is only 50.1%. To the new generation of voters who really want to make a difference in the government, the idea that unless we pick the 'right' candidate for our state, our votes really do not matter is absurd.\n\nIn the electoral college system, even the majority voters in each state can not count on having reliable electors, according to Bradford Plumer, the author of an anti-Electoral College-article. Electors can be anyone who does not hold a public office, and these people can be swayed or unloyal to their own party as well (Plumer). These are the people our votes are really going towards, not the actual president as many uneducated could be led to believe. Although the trust of these people is rarely misplaced (Richard A. Posner, In Defense of the Electoral College: Five Reasons to keep our present method of choosing the President), there is always a possibility of the electors being swayed at the last minute, which is a bit of a scary thought. Imagine if segregationists in the Loisiana legislature had succeeded in replacing Democratic electors with ones who would oppose John F. Kennedy, one of or best presidents (Plumer).\n\nThe final reason keeping the Electoral College system in place is a bad idea is that if you are a voter in a clearly defined state, that is, non-swing, you are more likley to decide not to vote at all. When candidates can clearly define states in which they know they will win, or have no hope of winning, they don't bother spending time there to educate voters. Voters in these states do not get all the information they might want in order to make an educated decision. This would lead to a biased, uneducated state in which voters don't care to vote because of a mindset that almost everyone in the state is of a certain political mindset and their vote is just another piece of paper that will not matter. These voters could also make rash decisions because they did not get to truly hear all of the campaignes. In swing states where there is not a clearly defined political opinion, voters will be bombarded with information, and although they may be educated and well versed in their opinions, the votes, no matter how close, will not really matter because of the nature of the Electoral College system.\n\nIn closing, the Electoral College system is not worth saving. Although some may argue it gives a certainity of outcome or restores the balance to heavily populated states (Posner), it does not give everyone's vote a fair chance. Nor does it guarantee the electors will be reliable. The Electoral College system even dissuades voters from excercising their Constitutional right to vote. Please take this into consideration, Mr. Senator, next time the Electoral College comes into question. Thank you for recieveing my most humble opinion.\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME\n\n9th Grade Student", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the hottest planet in our solar system and is extremely dangerous and deadly, but is also the planet that most like Earth. The author of the article supports his idea that going to Venus is a great idea reasonably well, although he doesn't use that much information to prove his claim. The author states a lot of the dangers of going to Venus and then addresses his points of wanting to study Venus more closely.\n\nThe author tells the reader that many Astronomers are fascinated with Venus because some people have a theory that Venus was once like Earth. He states that in Venus's past it might have been covered largely with oceans and could've had life on it, just like earth. The author even states that Venus still has some features on it that Earth has such as valleys, mountains, and craters. The author also decribes that Venus could sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit. The author uses examples of technology that could help us research more about Venus, such as NASA's blimp-like vehicle which could allow scientists to float above the carbon dioxide littered atmosphere, but most of his points about technology wouldn't work because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, which would make most forms of photographs and videos ineffective.\n\nThe author of this article claims that Venus is worth the cost and risk just to learn more about it but doesn't support his claim well enough to presuade the reader to agree with him. He backs up technology that wouldn't work because of the atmosphere surrounding Venus and doesn't show ways how we can get past the deadly atmosphere without risk. The author doesn't show enough reason that scientist should study Venus besides that it might have closely resembled Earth in the past.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, most students learn many school subjects, not only academic topics like math or language but also non-academic, such as science food and how to prepare it. However, not least have their opinion that students should spend more time on important subjects, particularly academic matters. I believe academic and non-academic subjects should be balanced, and this essay will explain both views.\nHuman brain development makes our kids learn many things in the early phase. Therefore, most elementary students have already learned math or non-native languages, which differs from the past 10 or 20 years ago. Also, they learn subjects unrelated to academics, for instance, science food and how to prepare it. These things are important to them, as they have the knowledge to choose healthy food and prepare it properly, cooked or uncooked. Another reason students should learn about this is that they currently love junk food the most for their daily meals, which is not a good fact for the next generation to have a long life.\nNevertheless, the knowledge of academic subjects should be learned in line with non-academic ones. The main reason is that it will be their foundation for a successful business or career. Without this knowledge, although they have an adequate understanding of the non-academic matter, they will find it hard to compete with other business competitors or candidates in any job recruitment. Eventually, with a long life and a good business or career, they will have a wealthy life ahead and, indeed, their life positively impacts others.\nTo conclude, students with a balanced knowledge of academic and non-academic subjects will have a bright future with a healthy and wealthy life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a very worthy pursuit despite the dangers. Why is it a very worthy persut depsite of the dangers? because Venus is the Safe vantage Point of Earth.Venus is the twin of Earth it is very close to the Earth and many other planets.Venus has a lot of\n\nreasons to be\n\na worthy pursuit.\n\nVenus has some dangers like not\n\na single spaceship has touched down or landed on Venus in three decades. It has a thick atmosphere of 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.The more challenging are the clouds of highly Corrosive sulfuric acid In Venus's Atmosphere. The temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and is 90 times greater than what we have to deal with on our own planet. These temperatures and conditions are far worse than what we humans have to deal with on earth. It could even crush a submarine. There are also frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\n\nNext is the benefits and upsides to Venus. Astronomers are shocked by Venus because it was one of the most\n\nsimilar Earth Like planet in our solar System. Venus today still has some similiarities to Earth.Venus has\n\nsupported most forms of life and has covered largely with\n\noceans..\n\nVenus can be our nearest option regardless of the distance in space travel.\n\nAlthough, there are the upsides there stills questions on how to make going the travel and mission to venus both safe and scientifically productive.\n\nThe\n\nNational Aeroonautics and Space administation (NASA) has an idea by sending humans to study Venus. Nasa's possible soulution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray. Take a Vehicle for example it could hover of venus and avoid the friendly ground conditions\n\nby staying up in the air and our the way. definitely are not easy conditions but humans are capable of surviving it.\n\nScientist are seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand venus and would to\n\nfind a way to get up close and personal regardless of the risks. Systems that use mechanical parts can be resistant and untouchable by pressure heat, and\n\nother forces. Venus still being studied today by Nasa by finding different and safe approaches.\n\nIn conclusion the author idea on Venus being worthy pursuit depsite of the dangers is very true because Venus has value. The knowledge on Venus will clear up human curiousity and will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on earth should not be stopped or limited by dangers and doubts but should expanded by the imaginations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This is my variation of the essay for \"Driveless Cars Are Coming\". I think that it is a great idea, but it should only be for the elderly that can't drave and for the handycap. Regular people want to drive, but some don't because their \"tired, or busy, or its to much work.\" But I believe that driving is a responsability that people signed up for when the got their license. If you don't want to drive, then why did you get your license.\n\nMy second paragraph is about why would you want a driveless car? I personally would never get a driveless car for several reasons but I'll give you three. My first reason is i would like to drive because it gives me a freedom I never had. My second reason is what happens if one night an E.M.P. goes off for some reason and my car locks down, I can't get out with the doors being sealed shut. And finally my last reason is I want to some day listen to my favorite song in my 1970 Dodge Charger Supercharged down the highway to my old house, but if driveless cars are the only cars then i cant live my dream.\n\nMy third paragraph is about which car company should be able to make these \"driveless cars\". Honestly i beleive only Dodge and Chevy should make these cars, because their one of the oldest car companies around and they know cars like Bill Gates knows Microsoft. If you allow them to make these cars then they'll make them better. Imagine a driveless car in every vehicle type, from muscle cars to exotic cars to trucks to RV's to boats to planes to spaceships. We could be the most advanced nation in the world, no we would be the most advanced world in the galaxy.\n\nThis is my conclusion to this article. I believe that we could do this, but we have to be smart about it. Driveless cars must be in safe hands, not reckless drivers. The government just has to let us do this. If we don't then we'll be trapped in our variation of the stone age. So who wouldn't want a Driveless car, but it has to be a great Driveless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The future will inevitably involve new ways of transportation, one of which being a car that doesn't constantly require an operator. The idea may be strange and frightening to some, but creating cars that don't need the constant control of a person behind the wheel will no doubt be beneficial. Having roads filled with driverless cars would benefit humanity and the environment around us. Fewer reckless people would be on the road and cars would take shorter distances while working in unison with other driverless automobiles, helping the passengers and the environment.\n\nSelf-driving cars that have already been created are proving to be trustworthy and safe. The article reports that Google's cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, showing that the new vehicles can be trusted to operate properly. These cars may not currently be completely driverless, but they would still greatly benefit society and eliminate many mistakes of drivers due to impairment or distraction. Currently, drivers in these cars must still be alert to the road in case a situation arises, but they would decrease the risk of using a cell phone while travelling to a new destination and could even help drunk drivers who decide to get behind the wheel return home safely. Fewer human errors means fewer accidents, saving lives and money spent on repairs.\n\nDriverless cars wouldn't only benefit those who own them. The cars would also have a much smaller chance of crashing into a pedestrian passing by due to the motion sensors and cameras attached to them. A network of these cars would cut down on fuel consumption, meaning the air in major cities and near roadways wouldn't be as polluted. Traffic jams would be less common, letting people get to work, school, and appointments on time. Autonomous cars would save time and put out fewer harmful chemicals, which would improve living conditions of society as a whole.\n\nSome may not want to lose the thrill of driving, but the safety that self-controlled vehicles will bring far outweighs any enjoyment that can come from operating a vehicle. The cars would be safer, more efficient, and cheaper than today's current automobiles. The futuristic idea of floating cars flooding the streets may not be immediately achievable, but the technology is here for ones that can drive themselves. These vehicles can soon become readily available, and once they do, the amount of daily accidents on the road worldwide has a chance to decrease to zero.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So one day fifth grade I running around playing tag play ground push I got push slide bout fell back arm went pain went doctors waited two hours I sat patient moving arm watching people walk finily called name told arm broken could put cast went doctor across rode waited minutes got blue cast month later I got taken went back x ray room said I cast time I got eventily got taken thats time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The planet Venus is inhospitable at its current state, but is it worth it to find out the truth? Scientists tell us that Venus is averaging temperatures over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the pressure is 90 times greater than Earth's. Venus has been unexplorable due to these factors with the last mission failing in a few hours, but is it worth the risk? The idea of pursuing Venus is dangerous, but can be worth it to find more about how the geography was similar to earth, and if Venus could ever support life again.\n\nVenus is called Earth's sister planet because it is the closest planet to Earth in density, size, and distance. Humans have tried to explore Venus many times in the past but have all failed due to the intense temperature and pressure of the planet. The planet also has a thick atmosphere of 97% carbon dioxide which makes it even more challenging to visit. Despite these factors, why do scientists want to visit this deadly planet? Scientists are very infatuated with this planet because it used to be just like earth from a geography standpoint. The planet was covered with large oceans, rocky sediment, valleys, mountains, and craters. These are more than enough reasons for scientists to explore Venus because they want to learn more about what occured for the planet to transform from the earth like place. Scientists need to learn more about Venus so they can learn more about our planet too. They are working on ways to observe the planet while being able to come back alive. NASA has developed an interesting idea to send humans to study venus. They want to study Venus by hovering above the planet just like planes fly over storms. This idea would keep humans away from the harmful things Venus has to offer, but there are some down sides to this idea. Observing Venus from above can only do so much for us. Light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, so insight into the ground life of Venus is limited. The biggest down side is the fact that researchers cannot take samples of Venus such as rock and grass back to earth to study. This idea is still better than nothing because anything we learn from this mission is something we did not know before.\n\nThe age old question that most people have on planets is \"could they ever inhabit life again?\" Scientists have studied planets for many years and have seen a variety of things. They have concluded that Mars will be able to inhabit life and have started a program where sign ups are available to leave Earth to help scientists conduct an experiment for life. Venus once held many characteristics similar to earth, but the most important one is that many years ago Venus could have supported a variety of life. The question is what changed? Venus has very hot temperatures and high pressures so it is difficult for scientists to get up close and take samples to study. Scientists are working on different ways to study Venus where they can get closer to take samples. NASA has used some simple electronics made of silicon carbide and simulated it in the chaotic conditions of Venus and it survived for three weeks. This is important because they can use these electronics to send them into the atmosphere of Venus and take pictures and samples from the planet until they find an alternate solution to getting humans past that thick carbon dioxide atmosphere. Scientists also thought of reverting back to mechanical computers to go into the atmosphere. This could work because things that use mechanical parts tend to do better in conditions of high pressure, heat, and other limiting factors. These things could be worth it to the people of Earth because if we determine a way to put life on Venus, the whole world would change.\n\nThe idea of Venus' geography being very similar to Earth's and the fact that it could have supported life makes it worth it to study venus despite the dangers that come with it. Venus used to have oceans. mountains, and valleys just like earth, but have no idea what happened to all of those things which make them want to study the planet even more. Life could have been supported long ago and scientists are working to discover a way around the limiting factors to figure out if it could ever be supported again. Scientists are doing everything they possibly can to study Venus and it is only a matter of time before we have the answers we seek.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do ever fell like going expload Do ever want say something nt said make things worse Well s l felt story Little brothers sisters make mad l want expload The story starts brother got work complaining sick walking home hiself l going surprize walking home l passed high school l heard name called I looked around l heard name called voice keep called l stoped sister friend came behind stopped said I didnt want walk get urself keep walking savanah keep switching scooter got slower slower slower two people riding stoped pressed power reset button began go called said didnt see already said hes friend house mom coming get We turned around two minutes later scooter died keep holding power rest button nothing happened l ran home get bike sweet running face none stop legs numb soon l got house legs colapest l got put shorts grabed bike ran door savanah already party store questioned asked CAPS take long I told happened pushed savanah rode handle bars In l thinking long took get mad l came l thought l going espload scooter died put bike scooter away walked door droped The lesson learned dont something unless foresure happening I learned hard way I m never going", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Visiting a different planet would be nice. Exploring different places would be nice. I think there should be another planet or another place to visit and get out of this boring place we are at right now. I think that we should explore new places and not just stay where we are at now. That is boring just staying in once place without traveling. So I think that scientists should figure out something about Venus, that way we can all travel to a different place.\n\nDoing research on another planet would be great. I think we would all figure out something to do and not just do nothing. Venus could be a great one to study and acknowledge. You can figure out so many things in Venus. It would not be much of a difference from earth because the Earth, Venus, and Mars are like neighbors. The only difference is that the speeds are different and that means that we are sometimes closer to Mars and other times Venus. So if scientists or people from the NASA go visit Venus and try to see how it is and how it works, we would be able to find a solution to visit that planet.\n\nThe reason why nobody has landed on Venus in more than 3 decades is because they can not last more than a few hours. That is why no one can go land on their planet. Humans can not go on it which makes that difficult for the planet to be researched and touched. There is a thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide that covers Venus up. Also something more challenging is that Venus clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere. Something else is that their temperatures average is over 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we expierence on our own planet. So therefore, Venus is the hottest planet even though Mercury is closer to the sun. Venus also has erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning. All that makes it hard for spaceships to land.\n\nA good reason why scientists want to research Venus is because once it was like Earth planet. Venus once was covered by oceans and could have support living life just like we have today in Earth. Today, it still has a few living lifes that we know on our own planet. Venus has a rocky surface and also includes features like valleys, mountians, and craters. Scientists might make a trip safe going back and forth from Venus, but as in right now they are making better inventions to go travel around and make it safe. They might take a chance and get their safe.\n\nIn conclusion, I think scientists should make very better inventions to get other to Venus so they can do more research. I would like them to announce how they can make Venus into another planet like ours they we live in right now. I think it would be good to make this a research and then make more good assumptions on how we can make Venus work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone knows comes coach sr theres always going bunch laughs giggles jokes pranks If dont experience absolutely lame It started lovely sister decided make course nt going want go alone That brought We promised eachother going make best memories Nothing world better sharing emotions care eachother We arrived lovely morning little tired part hungry sure coach took us could buy snacks He course ran straight That old man always one matter Being cross country coach nt good influence athletes Anyway fan either know know never liked people touched stuff especially oh man god forbid touch pop So seeing jittery bouncy walking aisle gave us girls wonderful idea going take Pepper drink ok maybe drink sure going take pop old man It s like stealing candy baby We arrived hotel coach told us upack stuffso could tour place bit So coach getting room keys decided going little unpacking well I took stuffed bag acted like nothing ever happened We got keys told us would stay unpack rest things didnt want would realize took pop immedietly ran rooms threw everything floor could come back make forget unpacking would go straight exoeriencing another one tours It nt till night time arrived back hotel nt said single word We thought coolest people ever already late choice head rooms stay We thought kind lame none us girls tired even raced morning She rebel one us way Tme passed still awake absolutely bored nothing decided would unpack pop We starred prized possesion something We thought drinking would bad We could nt leave room start rave therefore decided hit sheets get shut eye morning going big us girls coach It morning second biggest race life going take place still bed course got everyone We awakened loud knock figured would else would We opened door big old bald man standing said m going say I need It funny acted like nt know talking We found hilarious old bald man turning beet red apparently nt find funny We kind sorta way found pulled racing card terrified lives especially since one going racing We played dumb people five minutes actually serious decided play nice guys Yes gave back We learned valuable lesson day messing like messing pig re going get messy pig likes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do think computers benifit us I think There many way computers nt benifit us lot use full way nt Like kids school use online text books Also lot company s websites see choose job We also use computers look directions places want go nt get lost School kids benifit computers lot would carry home tons books instead go computer get online book instead carrying home really heavy books I know I like go computer better carrying really heavy books home Also look home decorator go computer look websites see work done It helps lot becase nt figure hard way decorator good end spending lot money room nt like Also looking job look website computer avail see get interview rather wasting nature going I also use computer look ways get s lot easier start driving get lost I know gps s cost lot computer find I still think computers benifit us many ways Like using online text book instead carrying huge textbooks home Also using computers look websites search adresses lot easier computers That I think computers benefit us", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can believe people think books banned bad things Well I Children today learning nothing violence cursing days Banned books could way set stait make recognise stuff bad Only handfull kids days choosing read books majority playing video games watching tv Chilren nt alloud swear think violence alright Chilren read bad books think ok shoot someone something nt like s alright Banned books exaclty children need younger years Banned books might foul language violence I believe ok let teen young adault read mature enough handle Teenagers mature enough able read book swear words someone killing another person Some banned books nt even swear words CAPS nt one swear word books still remains banned books list day Some books movies magazines etc removed profanity drugs I believe someone trying make difference banned books list Censorship used person young understand happening say bad word something confusing In conclusion I think censorship great thing used moderatly The children today dont need learning sex drugs swearing violence etc I believe put age limit watchread controlled topic talk", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most people might suggest to keep the electoral college work. Yet some other people don't. The method \"Winner-Takes-All\" is only fair enough, because why should the person who lost earn a reward , the people made their desicions, and whoever lost, goes back home.\n\nKeeping the Electoral College also avoids problem of election, because once the votes are in, and they count the votes, there are no more talking but to accept the winner.\n\nWinner Takes All, when competing in for election, its not right to share your reward with the opposing component. Once you win, you take it all. when election comes and the citizens vote, \"They are likely to be most thoughtful voters, on average(and for the further reasom that they will have recived the most information and attention from the candidiates), and the most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election.\" (source#3, paragraph 20). Although people may disagree and say \"Candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the\"swing\" states.\"(source#2, paragraph 13). Yes, that may be true, but again, when the people vote, they only want what they want, no jokes.\n\nThe Electoral College is helping to avoid problems of election.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The way we approach people on a daily basis differs using our emotions and nonverbal communication. We are able to tell when someone is angry, bored, happy or even disgusted. With todays technology students across the world use computers in nearly every class. Now we have all been in a point where the lesson we're learning isnt the most interesting to us and we get bored and give up. What if there was a way for your computer to tell when you're bored and switch the lesson to accomidate to your wants and needs. Well there is the Facial Action Coding System is a way our computers can detect our emotions through facial expressions. Using this in a classroom would\n\nbe very beneficial to students everywhere.\n\nA student learning on a computermay become easily drained with the lesson. The answer to this may be the Facial Action Coding System. \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Dr.Huang (creator of The FACS) states in the article.This coud be the answer to an incresing college rates and decreasing the amoumt of highschool dropouts.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding Sytem would be extremly valuable to classrooms across the world. Possibly helping the economy, increasing rates in schools everywhere and helping students get the education they deserve.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Growing environment great sense family nothing blood relative Quite contrary neighborhood made mostly spanish", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local Newspaper I think computers exellent benefit people First family friends communicate far distance Secondly typing computer gives people good hand eye cordnation Thirdly give people ability learn faraway places Lastly gives student chance research topic learning Well think Researcher said almost family s live faraway eachother computers give ability familys communicate wether aim webcam chat Also familys live faraway use computer comunicate Hand eye cordination people type without looking people really slow Typing computer give great hand eye cordination Good hand eye cordination could used many things For example playing sports even simple task like throwing something trash Lastly ever wanted learn place faraway live ever researched topic school Well I Computer give people ability learn places faraway For example third grade I research hammer head sharks Do nt teacher always ask student look word topic computer As I said I think computers benifit people I hope three reasons contacting family friend hand eye cordnation lastly researching made think good thing Thank taking time read I say I hope take concideration", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter important part life feeling laughing comforting time everything okayLaughing brings people together makes laugh together like way communication Once laugh something people start laughing connects everybody together happy Its like telling everybody happy without even talking themThat s people laugh laugh well s different storyI remember one day I home washing dishes everyone family frustrated even meI hate mad I hate people get mad I said something I nt remember everyone started laughing put everyone good moodI think laughing like fire one candle light candlesWhen hear people laugh first thing comes mind something must funny And want go see laugh s common people like laughing personally I love laughing good weird feeling", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral college should be eliminated. It should be changed to popular vote for the presidential election. With the electoral college, people don't get to have the freedom to vote for who they want to be elected. Instead they vote for a slate of electors who in turn, elect the president for you. There are a few problems with this. One, the electors could end up not doing their job. They might refuse to vote for their party's candidate and end up voting for whomever they please. That could turn into a riot or just leave a lot of people very unhappy. The electors could also mess up their vote and end up voting for the wrong candidate. Say they are loyal to the president they are suppose to vote for, but then end up choking and voting for the opposing president. Further more, what if a state sends two slates of electors to Congress? It happened in Hawaii in 1960. (\"What's wrong with the electoral college\") Another thing is a tie could happen. A tie in the electoral vote means that the election then gets handed to the House of Reprsentatives, where they will then vote on the president of their choice. Either way the people do not get a say on who they want for president. It is all in the hands of people that can turn their backs on who they promise they will vote for, and end up voting for the opposing president. If the people got to choose who they wanted to be president, then we wouldn't run into any of these problems. There would never be any ties or broken promises. The electoral college is \"unfair, outdated, and irrational.\" The electoral college should be abolished.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus has been the most exciting planet for both scientist and people who are counting on space travel. It is the closets planet to Earth in terms of both characteristics and and distance. That's why Venus is often called as Earth's \"twins\". However, Venus is a quite dangerous planet to explore. It has a thick atmosphere and the hottest surface in our solar system with the high atmospheric pressure.\n\nDespite of several risks, the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" argues that studying Venus is worth. She/He presents the value of Venus in the aspects of curiosity and science, while explaining the progress of Venus studying to support her/his idea.\n\nThe author of \"Challenge of Exploring Venus\" states the importance of Venus in terms of mankind's curiosity and space travel. While explaing the dangers that Venus presents, he/she also says about the curiosities that are drived from the closeness of Venus to Earth. She/He recalls \"that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option... given the ling time frames of space travel\" (\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus, Paragraph 4). Moreover, he/she states the similarities of Earth which Venus has, and this makes readers have curiosity of traveling to Venus. These reasons help readers to believe why the value of Venus is so \"indisputable\" (4).\n\nFurthermore, the author suggests the value of Venus in the aspect of science. In the paragraph 4, she/he states some similarities of Earth that Venus has. It helps readers not only to get curiosity of Venus, but also to get ideas of how scientifically valuable to travel and study Venus. Also, he/she explains that sceintists are trying to take \"samples of rock, gas\" (6). By adding detailed explanation of Venus travel, she/he persuades of the values of the exploring Venus.\n\nFinally, the author explains several progresses of Venus traveling to support his idea. In the paragraph 5 and 6, she/he explains several ways that sceintist are aproaching to travel Venus. These various details support readers to get realistic ideas of why Venus traveling is not only important, but also possible.\n\nVenus has been giving humans the curiosity of possible space travels. The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" makes readers to support exploring Venus by explaining the importance of studying Venus in the aspects of curiosity of space travel and scientific values, while stating the progress of studying to argue that it is possible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke's point of veiw of being a Seagoing Cowboy is that being a Seagoing Cowboy is awsome/cool and it's an opportunity of a lifetime. It made him think about all the people in other countries that are fortunite and unfortunite and their needs. Plus when he was 18 he could of been drafted for the military service but when him draft boat learned he was on a cattle-boat trip, they told me to just keep doing that for my service. And by the time i was discharged in 1947, I made nine trips-most of any Seagoing Cowboy. Besides the cattle-boat trips were unbelievable, cause i got to help people like; I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greese was special. So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. I also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China. But what kept me busy was caring for the animals during the crossings. They had to be fedand watered two or three times a day. Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship. Stalls had to be cleaned. Helping out at my aunt Katie's farm had prepared me for hard work, but not for the dangers at sea. On my second trip I served as night watchmen. My job was to check on all the animalsevery hour. But one night after my hourly checkup I slipped on a ladder and almost fell into the dark Atlantic, luckily a small strip of metal along the edge stopped me from falling. But I couldn't work for a couple of days because of cracked ribs. When us Segoing Cowbays got boared when we had to return the animals I played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where the animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling,and games also helped pass the time. But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more then just a adventuere, it opened up the world to me. And I'm grateful for this opportunity. And that awareness stayed with me, leading my family to host a umber of international students and exchange visitors for many year. And thats my point of veiw of me being Luke and being a Seagoing Cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his idea using evidence and using facts about venus and other planets. He explains them in a factual manner and has many ideas about venus and other planets. He uses evidence by using examples and facts from his point of view.\n\nFor example \"Venus, somethimes called the \"evening star\", is one of the most brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot.\" This is an example of the author supporting his idea of why its called the \"evening star\". In pragraph 5, the author uses NASA as a example to support his claim, \"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus. He is using a method that shows credibilty to reader so they believe his evidence which will help his claim.\n\nIn paragraph 4, the author uses earths importance to reflect him claim that Venus is worth studying no matter how dangerous. \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" He compares earths simarities and tells the readers that its important to study. He uses NASA again in paragraph 7, and tell the reader that they will do further studies on venus.\n\nHe explains that we could use the older style computers that were used during WW11. He also says that modern computers are strong and flexible. He is saying this because he is persuading the reader to use computers that are easy to use to leanr about venus. He uses many factual evidence to support his claim throughout the essay. He uses many different methods to support why Venus is worthy pursuit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Whether you are someone who believes conspiracy theories, or are just plain stupid and think that somehow the Face is evidence of alien life, you are still wrong. It's just a rock, a plain, thousands of years old, heap of rock. The End, no \"Ifs, ands, or buts\", there is evidence saying that this is just a mesa, a landform, we have picture proof of it. However, considering that I must write this for Mr. Toad's Wild Ride, I still have to argue about it pointlessly with an imaginary person who might or might not exist. So, I will cover two major points to prove to you that it's a landform, common sense, and the facts that we here at NASA have proven to be true.\n\nFirst off, this argument is over whether Face was created by aliens, or whether it is just a natural landform. This is a pretty strange argumental topic, as people who believe this stuff anyway will hardly be convinced by a random scientist at NASA. Anyway, there is proof we have that face is just a natural landform, we have taken multiple pictues of it, and have concluded that, as shown with this cite of evidence, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the America West.\" We can even say that it was not obscured by any clouds or haze because it was clear day on Mars the day the picture was taken. That should be the end of the discussion, but yet you say, \"But Mister science man, what if the pictures that you took couldn't see it because it was too small?\" Well, that point can actually be rebuted as well, because of what Jim Garvin, the chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program, said, \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixer size,\" he added. \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\". Factually that should be the end of it, it was a clear picture, that was enhanced for farther detail, on a clear day, with a high resolution camera.\n\nDon't think I don't see you thinking, \"But will a only a photo actually be able to properly discern whether this is natural.\" Well......no, it won't. Actually, you have me entirely beat on the fact that it simply could be a landform, made by aliens. Yes, there I admit it, sit at home and laugh at the fact that I could be wrong. Look, Mister Whoever reads this for a job, I argue for a living with my friend, and there is simply not enough evidence to actually say that there is no way that this is not alien made. There is actually a chance, somewhere, somehow, a superficially small chance that aliens might have had someplay in this. I know that all sounds crazy, but seriously, think about it. All we have is some lously picture that, while it shows us the exteriror, it doesn't show us anything about the interior of the landform.\n\nHere is the other side to the point I just made, think about this rationally for a second, could aliens really have made a monument or some strange thing on Mars, only for it to be found by humans? Probably not, and all of this is so improbable that I really don't even need to write an argumentative essay about it anyway. There is an extremely small and slim chance that aliens had any part in making a mesa on Mars.\n\nSo all in all, there is factual proof we have, cited from the text I was given to say that aliens had no part in the making of Face, and that it is a natural landform. However, it isn't concrete proof, so for all we now it could be an alien itself. I have no idea, and neither will you. Again though, rationally, it has no relation to aliens. So that's all I got, the end.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes studying venus is a worthy pursuit because you never know what we might find just like the author said their could be another form of life. Studying venus might be a very dangerous act but i mean look at who we have as our president. Just walikng down the street is dangerous in some parts. I think it could be a very interesting study.\n\nThe author said that venus has very high conditions but i mean scientists have found a way to live on mars so i mean cant we do that too. Yes it could be very hot and dangerous but what if we found the creators of life not saying we would ut you never know. I just think it is a good idea t study venus. Everyone has questions about how we got here what made life or even who made life but not one person can answer that because we dont know but if we study venus imagine what we could find.\n\nYes this might be a very dangerous act but it could also be a very useful act too. I think studying venus it a great ideo and i hope people agree. So yes we should study venus and try to find a way over the hurdles of venus and figure some things out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of fuel gradually has the worst impact on environmental issues. Some people believe that increasing the price of fuel for vehicles can decrease the impact on the natural surroundings in the future. Even though there are people who are declined, in this paper, I will partially agree with this solution.\r\n\r\nIncreasing the price of oil for vehicles can cause harm for society. Especially the impact on the economy. For instance, the cost of commodities and transportation will be as costly as the cost of fuel. The public would have difficulty fulfilling their basic needs and maybe increase the percentage of poverty in the country. However, this phenomenon might be impactful for the middle down society instead of the wealthy community. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, with regards to the price of oil increasing, users of thefuel energy will decrease. Nevertheless, scientists will then invent alternative energy to replace theoil. For instance, biogas energy which is made from organic waste and a fuel made from plants or vegetable materials. Those fuels are environmentally friendly and can be accepted by society. In addition, inventors will be finding energy efficient vehicles in the future. And Tesla is a good example of this, namely Elon Musk designing an electric car charged by energy from electricity or a solar panel.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe this decision will be better for the environment as well as human beings and I wholeheartedly support this argument, even though some people will feel the enormous impact in the first phase. Better solutions are invented to replace the use of oil.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars, is that we most definitely do not need them. Their are a lot of different disadvantages to having driverless cars. So why try out a driverless car that's going to give you problems in the future? Just because it says that the car is driverless doesn't necassarily means that it's all that great like they to make it sound. Because you never know, their could be a lot of problems and malfunctions, and technical difficulties in having a driverless car in the future.\n\nThe disadvantages on having driverless cars in the future is that, in the passage to the left in paragraph number 3 under the title that says \"Sensing the World\", it states that many futurists believed the key to developing self-driving cars someday wasn't so much smarter cars as smarter roads. They also used an example as well to back up what they were saying. \"In the late 1950s, General Motors created a concept car that could run on a special test track.\" So I'm guessing that means that they to make to make sure that the cars work on the road first before making them in the first place.\n\nIf I were you, I wouldn't even waste my time on getting a driverless car if they don't even know if the cars work on the road or not. And I know it said that it was inthe 1950s, but still. If they had to do that back then, just imagine what they will have to do make sure that they work in the future. You have to think about stuff like that ahead of time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driverless cars sounds so fun, but a good idea? I don't think so. I think that sounds like a bad idea and a bit reckless.\n\nDriving a car as a human you have control over everything, besides the other drivers. How fast you go, which way you turn, how close to the lines you are, it is somewhat safe this way but cars are still deadly no matter how much control you have. You need to have control over them, not a robot. Also in paragraph 2 is talks about how you will still have to navigate through roadwork and accidents, and when pullling out of driveways so what is the use if your still going to have do something or another. It would also be so much more expensive to sell and make. When that money being wasted could be helping getting America out of debt or for something useful but instead why not spend it on something we do not even need.\n\nIn paragraph 9 it talks about accidents and who would be responsible the driver or company? And if it is the company they could sue the place and depending on how bad it is they can have the whole operation shut down. It seems like a big ordeal that could simply be avoided by sticking with normal cars, they are already dangerous enough with humans in control imagine a car controlled by a robot machine...", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Modern society has been facing the problem a dramatic surge in the amount of leaving school . A myriad of factors can be regarded as culprits for this happening that students have not education being to far most prominent unable to find jobs in future . Despite the issue being hard to eradicate swiftly , it is imperative that certain measures be undertaken , which addressed in this essay . \r\n\r\nThe first step is to clarify the factors , which led to the degradation amount of young people who have not a work . To begin, with causes . The foremost reason why students do not want to study is boring school program . Teenagers are in a period when they want to know all of them . For example another feel and emotions . Experts gives information that popularity the of concerts or pirties are increase every year . Mainly especially young people go to festivals. Secondary cause is difficult education program . The hard exercise can violate motivation students .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "IN THE MEMOIR HOME THE BLUEPRINTS OF OUR LIVES HER MOOD IS LOVE BECAUSE SHE LOVES HER PARENTS FOR ALL THE SACRIFICES THEY MADE JUST SO NARCISCO CAN HAVE A BETTER LIFE FOR EXAMPLE I WILL ALWAYS BE GRATEFUL TO MY PARENTS FOR THEIR LOVE AND SACRIFICE SHE MEANS SHE WILL ALWAYS BE GRATEFUL FOR WHAT HER PARENTS DONE FOR HER IN HER CHILDHOOD TO MAKE HER BECOME WHAT SHE IS NOW ANOTHER EXAMPLE I WILL NEVER FORGET HOW MY PARENTS TURNED THIS SIMPLE HOUSE INTO A HOME SHE MEANS THAT HER PARENTS SACRIFICED TO TURN A ROOM APARTMENT INTO HER HOME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the use of this technology is valuable for games or computers or cameras because people can already kinda notice how other people emotions are by how there body movement are and how the tone in there voice is or the looks on there face. I think this technology would be helpful becasue on video games you can see the emotions of the characters on the game or the emotions of a person in a picture. Like It said in the article below the picture she's 83% happy, 9% disgusted and 6% fearful and 2% angry, that's what the new technology recgonized. Using video imagery the new emotion- recognition software tracks these facial movements. The new software can even identify mixed emotions to. His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code. In the article says Dr. Huang predicts then it could modify the lesson like an effective human insturctor; The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery. Dr. Huang also notes that most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication so computers need to under stand that too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In primary group friends would search different adventures part take This group people consisted kids ages Around late hot day got idea head go cliff diving He called cliffs So whole group got together took hour car ride Once got got hotter outside need cooling getting priority They parked walked train tracks The closer got re destination louder voices hearing became The spot secluded area rocky floor people getting running start jump highest peak go crashing waters surface Right away wanted get settled could join others As could wait Once got re first couple jumps thought maybe time try But highest peak Maybe something bit lower Something like bottom cliff starters Before jumped noticed little beach side creek girls conversed boys decided jump time swim little beach Although jumped different heights seemed arrive around time For bit struggle swim far But right side helping along way As group relaxed air became realize hungry much lazy swim back climb rocks walk train tracks back car But hunger taking As swam back climbed rocks gathered re belongings headed back started brainstorming place eat CAPS going going said ORGANIZATION shouted At moment decision made On ride back switched drivers sitting arrangements Once got stopped filled re stomach s They chose stop work say hi friends girlfriend showing They finished saying re hello s went back house cars parked decided shower wanted play video games headed home shower get ready meet back friends hours later headed re hangout spot referred spot They invited couple re friends They made camp fire sun setting grew get colder colder While sitting around fire chairs riding around camp site really huge hunk mom s land quad The group would take turns riding quad one ride particular made memories Once came back wanted give ride around So hopped hopped wrapped arms around waist took There certain trail long way riding driver would always find way maneuver around Usually worked time nt hesitated ride right She afraid power really nt seem care took slammed gas They high tailed log rolled quad right nt weigh much flew got foot caught handle got strength lift quad foot got right decided call boys hopped right come save flipped quad right got drove back behind This memory never forgotten group even group never", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars can potentially change how the world operates and that they can completely revolutionize the world of public and even private transportation. Driverless cars, with the right modifications, adequate moderation, and an alert human capable of taking control of the car in the rare event of a technology failure within the vehicle, can be even more safe than humans driving cars.\n\nIn the United States alone, there are numerous occasions in which people have been severely injured or even killed in car crashes that were caused by people who have fallen asleep at the wheel, driving while intoxicated, or tending to other needs while driving. With driverless cars, a vast majority of these examples of car crashes could potentially cease to exist.\n\nIn the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" it states that \"Their (Google's) cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" With the technology that is present in the world, it is possible to develop a car that is truly driverless. Also in the article, it says that \"He (Sergey Brin) envisions a future witha public transportation system where fleets of deverless cars form a public-transport taxi system. The cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" Although these cars are not available right now, it is, without a doubt, possible for them to be available to the public in only a matter of time.\n\nDriverless cars are truly \"the future of transportation.\" Driverless cars, within a certain number of years, can be available to the population and can be even safer than alert humans driving. Driverless cars truly have the potential to revolutionize the world of transportation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus sometimes the \"Evening star\",is one f the bright poinst of ligh in the nigth sky making in tit simple fo evn anc sind venuz is actually a planet in out is simple to sape plae to examine more closely and accaionally speeds .ist proximity to us challenging planet for humans to despite for study ton us a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus the clouds of hig hly coprrosive sulfuric in atmospheees and trhe temperatiras over tham more .These greatr are far more experience on our own planet .miles above the roiling venus would landscape . just as our jet travel at to flay over mamy stoms a vehicle hovering .\n\nBeyond high present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes powerful earthquakes and frequent linghting strikes ti probes seeking to land on ist suface .liquefy many metals planet in our solar system thom Mecury is closer to our sun beyond.\n\nour sister planet is so inhospitable why are scientists even discussing visits to surface beause it way well and have most are fascinatedlarget in our solar was probable coverred largely wiht oseans and could have supported largely wiht oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. The planet has a surface just to those on\n\nEarst can somentime be\n\nmi ssion both safe and scientifically produstive . More impottantly researcher cannot take sample of rock ,gas or anything else, from a dispite .\n\nspace adminictration NASA has one particulary for humans to study venus. NASA posiible solution to the hosteli con dioyions on the surface of vennus would allow scientists to conditions on the a\n\nblimp like\n\nvehicle hovering to miles.Fahrenheit but the air pressure would be close to sea level solar power wouold be pletifun and radiation not exceed not easy but survivable for humans. Just as uor jry airolanet travel at a would venus power beand survivable for humans temperaturas would still to above the degrees and of the unfriendly miles above the over and aou grupos by staying up pressure\n\nclose to sa level. Not easy conditones but survivable for humans beause most forms of photography and or maybe longb enoght to contibute meannindfutully to our knowledge of venus. For example some simplified electronics ,made of silicon catbedi have been tested in a chamber the chaos is looking role in the calculations envidopnted and played use machanical pars can be made and pther forces .\n\nThese moders computers are delicate whend it phone or tablet to acid physical conditions .by Venus has value and shouls the be likmted ny dangers and doubts buy expanded to meer the very of imajination and innovation .only because\n\nos the insight to be us equally on earth .The dense atmosphere ,\n\nstandars forms of cannot and scientists seeking to canductor\n\nthemp mission on innovations to our hoverinf peerind at vvenus ship surfa have been in chanber\n\ntherr weers the anotherd projecta is lookind just decate a cell .by can be human wiil\n\ninto beyond should not linited and douds but expenden to meet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus, while that sounds unsafe and a waste of time it's not. Venus has many things similar to Earth, and is speculated to once harbor life just like earth. \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" is an example of this.\n\nLanding on Venus with humans is impossible, because of the amount of gasses and solar radiation along with the extremely hot tempatures. However, NASA is working on an idea to let astronauts survey the planet up close without actually landing on it. NASA has the idea to make a blimp like spacecraft that would fly thirty miles above Venuses ground leaving humans in an area that is barely survivable. \"Venus has the hottest surface tempature of any planet in our solar system.\" and \" The National Aeronautics and Space Administraition (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus.\" are both claims from the article.\n\nIn conclusion The authors support of the idea studying Venus, while dangerous is worthwile. there are many dangers, but there are also areas for surviveable conditions. Although there is no way for humans to set foot on venus that doesn't mean there is not a way for people to get as close as possible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter daily part life I m always laughing school home With laughter show many emotions ca nt told words To s also way showing fortunate life I ve numerous occasions laughter solution problem I also agree laughter important part relationship In next paragraphs I going talk laughter affects relationship benefits brings well Approximately three months ago family I decided take trip We planned stay month When I told boyfriend I d gone month right away I saw sadness eyes This truly killed however decision made turning back Our relation tense month We talked times voice different There sadness I knew something wrong Although said everything good I knew sadness due absence After month finally ended time come back I truly excited We arrived I immediately called chance seeing Although knowing I closer made happy anxious We conversed endless hours telling would never far We laughed laughed whole conversation To sound laughter sign happiness priceless The laughter blessing relation From day forward I realized much laughter really affects numerous ways It s brings happiness prosperity life With laugh sadness leaves s happiness jumps", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One walk library look magzine rack think CAPS young adult section content book age appropriate In many libraries books censored catagorized way In reading material one might even realize inappropriate things Supervision children young adults always looked upon people might even know checking Censorship needs pushed libraries In libraries catagories books children young adult adult books genere magazines music needs looked upon inside covers books Some magazine articles appropriate teens even claim age appropriate I remember I fourteen I read series related colors color weel Each one covered different topic suicide alcholism drugs sex sex dating jealousy Looking back I surprised I allowed check library A fourteen year old nt need read books heavy topicsAlso language books music maybe unappropriate children distasteful disrespectful adults The catagories need catogorized even people know getting checking book magazine When child goes check book found librarian sometimes nt even pay attention book getting simply check Libraries rating system like movies Generally people would let tenyearold go movie rated unrated would let child get book holding content If books rating system tenyear old would get hands book rated CAPS CAPS mature In libraries much supervision needs I aware libraries daycare center librarians babysitters also needs stricter guidelines people fully aware children reading For example thirteenyearold girl wants check magazine best friend s older sister gets The girl s mother allows probably wo nt bad assumes daughter wants look pictures new clothes trends What mother realize middle magazine contains article sex protection open whole new world little girl Even though mother nt let daughter check magazine guidelines stricter library girl might never read article Even librarians check scan person s library card make sure section reading certain book would protecting many people would hurting If libraries censored books better children teens reading things age appropriate I CAPS saying books removed shelf maybe put higher watched carefully", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this Facial Action Coding System in a classroom would make the kids and the teacher feel very weird. This sytem should not be used in the classroom, why would want a progam to determed our emtions in the class.\n\nIn the article it say that \" imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad\" don't think that would be wrong, nobody wants a system to tell them how they feel. That is like telling someone if they are ugly or not. Having this in a class would just cause the kids to be happy and try to not show emtions. This facial coding system might great but not for the student or people.\n\nIn the aricle it says \" the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face of all 44 major muscles\" That means that all the muscles in the body would have to work. The use of this technology to read our emotions is not right on there part giving that peole have to show how they feel aleady. Don't think we need a program to tell us how we feel. This woulds be a waste of this coding not a way for people to feel, making them not to show emtion or any feeling.\n\nThe coding system can show six basic emotions they are happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. This machine can tell you how you feel, believe that taking away our way of expessing ourself. A way of hsowing how we can as people show how we feel nobody wants a machine to tell us.\n\nThis facial coding system sounds cool and what a great idea to have something telling us wha we are feeling. But not a good idea that be taking away the human emotions we can express on our own. Taking away something as a human we need to use in the articel it say \" The facial expressions for each emotion are universal\". What that mean or sound like to you, it sounds like we can tell our pown emotion.\n\nIn conclusion feel that we should not have this facial coding system in our school or anywhere else at that. This article is telling us how good the coding works on the way we are feeling. But what it is not telling us is that how would you feel if something was just scanning your face and telling you how you feel. Its not something that people need in school , its like saying the minute you walk into somewhere there the system scanning your fae to see how you feel. Believe can already tell how you feel because we all share the same emotions , happy , sad , angry, fear, disgust etc. So no facial coding system should tell me how we are feeling not even if its the in the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Alleviating the dire state of the environment and housing shortages is thought to be attributable to the prevention of illness and diseases. In this essay, I will offer many compelling reasons why I hold the same viewpoint. \r\n\r\nIt is justifiable to state that encountering environmental problems would culminate in the decrease of health issues. To illustrate, many respiratory problems are triggered conclusively by air pollution, while water contamination is believed to be a primary culprit behind digestive issues and skin cancer. Hence, if these pressing environmental issues were mitigated, the rate of people suffering such diseases would decrease as well, leaving the governments with tolerable welfare burdens such as funding patients' meditations and treatments to shoulder.\r\n\r\nAdditionally, some also argue that fewer people would be infected by contagious diseases provided that accommodation issues are dealt with, and justifiably so. In fact, due to the unaffordability of housing, many people, especially those living under the poverty line, have been forced to reside in dilapidated zones with no access to clean water. Such an unhygienic living environment primarily firstly sets out optimum conditions for the outbreak of digestive diseases including diarrhea, and secondly provides a breeding ground for mosquitoes - the carrier of malaria. Therefore, people can be safeguarded from these aforementioned health issues when being able to live in a better living environment, and the governments may also benefit financially from the mitigation of housing problems, as seen above. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I opine that both the governments and ordinary people can reap benefits regarding health and finance if human and financial resources are allocated to address environmental and housing problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As I sit waiting room waiting waiting grandpa come thee recovery room I think something went wrong doesnt make surgery Then I say can see grandpa now said CAPS patient everything fine sit relax hevan sakes be patient CAPS I say After hour passed I gotten say I thought self said cahlem patient calm patient Then lady come waiting room said the surgery little longer expected everything went perfectly fine staying hospital week half which perfectly fine long I get boring hospital soon I said I mom said soon grandpa gets recovery room go see leave", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I understand people get offended things watch might read nt mean people nt able know one person nt like It s kind matter opinion whether offensive I never really read watched anything completely uncalled On every movie music album produced rate know watching movie nt If movie made somekind offensive parts put rating yes rude language things like So somebody nt read close enough see might something nt like movie nt cause everyone else able see particular movie Personally I nt find books greatest things I sure books magazines tend something rude crude s always horrible If someone thinks book inapproiate readers could tell person charge library maybe letting certain people reading book content You nt throw book shelf one two people thought bad If choosing whether take movies books magazines etc shelfs I would nt I say time things rated someway approved put general store shelfs People simply read details back see s going bother way could offensive nt purchasing If someone complained new cd movie I personally wanted see listen taken shelfs I would upset probley would nt even offened So completely disagree idea movies books music stop sales two three people offended s content", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This year I'm a sophomore in high school I'm gonna be brutally honest sophomore year overall is hard. There a lot of test and homework, the pressure to get good grade and get into a good college is always in the back of my mind.\n\nFor example if I'm learning a new lesson in math class I sometimes find myself always getting confused. But I feel like we all have been there when learning something new. But if we had something to tell teachers that we are confused I think it could help kids understand what were learning better. It's called Facial Action Coding System and I think it could be really useful in a classroom.\n\nI think by being able to read a student's emotional expression is a excellent idea.\n\n\"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D' Alto is a hard arguement about if we should have a Facial Action Coding System in a classroom or not. But Dr. Huang says \"A classroonm computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" Some kids get home from school, they have sports or maybe a job that they have to work to until midnight. In the morning they might become tired and fall alsleep learning something new. So with the Facial Action Coding System we could find out which students need a little bit extra help. Another quote is \"if you smile when a Web ad appears on your sceen, a similar ad might follow.\" \"But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" We could use this same idea in a classroom the computer will know which kids look a little confused and will know which kids aren't understand the lesson. Some kids are shy and don't wanna speak up and say if they don't get it what there learning, now with this technology. We will now know the student that don't understand so they can do better in school.\n\nBy identifying human emotions we could also help the kids that are very stressed out and might just need to take a little break. It says \"They even indicate the different between a genuine smile and a forced one.\" If some is upset in a classroom this technology should pick up right away if a person isn't feeling good or even sad. It could help teacher know what potentially could be wrong with one of her students. Another way we could find out what's on a student's mind is \"to an expert, faces don't lie; there muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" This could as well tell a teacher if a student is telling the truth or not. By having this system we could find out what's wrong with a student or even find out if there lying.\n\nI feel that if we had Facial Action Coding Systems in a classroom the student will understand what there learning better and probably get a better grade in the class overall . We know how important it is to do good in school, we heard it since day one. I want nothing more to graduate from college and go to the college of my dreams. Maybe with this new Coding System can help me get a better grade in the class and help me get the help I need. So I could potentially get into the college I want to get into.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First of all, i think that driverless cars are a very interesting idea, but you never know what could go wrong with a driverless car. I think alot of people would like a driverless car and alot of people would not like the car. Buying a driverless car would be alot of money that alot of people would not have. Technology today is very nice, i think they should just add on to nicer technology to the car, like better radio, or touch screen TVs. Not taking a big step to make a driverless car.\n\nOn the positive side, driverless veicles would help elderly people, stop more wrecks from happining. Driverless cars would stop people from getting into texting and driving accedients, or if you drive drunk it would save your life and life of others. If you didnt feel like driving someday you could count on the car to do it for you but you would still have to pay attention to what you are doing. There is alot of good resons for this driverless cars but alot of people would probably not trust them.\n\nDriverless cars have there ups and there downs. I think they should wait about a decade before they start going this far in technology, this could risk alot of lives. I think the driverless cars would wear out easy and the technology would give out sometimes, then people would have to spend more money to get it replaced. i think making driverless cars would be a money pitt. But they could help alot of people out.\n\nIn conclusion, you can't count on a computer to do everything while you are driving. Technology can always break, i would probable not buy a driverless car because i would want to drive and i think the car would not be safe until they did all the reserch and approve of the car being driverless. Then people mabe would think about buying a driverless car. But until that date that they approve of that car they should never be able to sell a driverless car.\n\nFinal thing, i think driverless cars are a very bad idea, they could put a lot of people in risk. These cars should not allow to be made, peple would forget how to drive. What happens if you are going through construction and the computer on the car stops working. If you forget how to drive you will wreck! Driverless cars are a very bad idea and should not be approved to drive on a U.S street.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When the Constitution of the United States was written our founding fathers decided on an Electoral College as the way to ellect the president instead of a direct vote. The Electoral College is a process that makes a compromise between the popular vote of the citizens and the Congressional vote. When citizens vote for president they are actually voting for a member of the Electoral College that is going to select their president, rather than the citizens voting for the president themselves. The Electoral College is made of 538 electors, the number of electors from each state varies depending on the states Congressional delegation. Washington D.C. is counted as a state for this process and alloted only three electors. The electoral college should be kept in use because it simplifies the outcome and allocates more power to the larger states.\n\nThe Electoral College should continue being used in today's government as a form of selecting the president because it simplifies the outcome of the vote. When voting with a popular vote system a debate over the outcome of the vote is very likely and will probably cause some constroversy. When the votes form the electoral college are counted the margin of victory is much higher which simplifies the result of the poll. During the election of 2012 Obama only recieved 51.3 percent of the vote, however he won the vote of the electoral college with an astounding 61.7 percent, a increase in the margin of victory by 10.4 percent. With this wide of a margin of victory a dispute over the victor of the presidential election is unlikely and almost impossible to argue against. Some might argue that the Electoral College is flawed because electors can choose not to vote for their canidate. It is true that this has happened in the past, \"in 1960, segregationist in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded on replacing the Democratc electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy.\" P.11. If this happened the popular vote for Kennedy would have gone to his adversaries instead. It is true that electors can choose not to vote for the canidate they pledged to and that this has happened in the past however the electors rarely betray their party's nominee and a tie in the electoral vote is extreamly unelikely.\n\nAdditionally, the Electoral College sould be kept in today's democracy because is allocates power to the larger states. It only makes sense that the larger states with a larger population should get more of a say in their government, and recieve more electoral votes than a small state with fewer people. With this system political infulence is restored to the larger states making the canidates focuss on the more populous areas. More power to the more populous states also means that run-off elections are avoided. In 1992 and in 1968 run-off elections were avoided due to the use of the Electoral College; \"Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority of the Electoral College\" P.22. A run-off election extreamly complicates the election process however the chance of this happening is greatly reduced when using the Electoral College which almost always produces a clear winner.\n\nThe electoral college should be kept in use because it simplifies the outcome and allocates more power to the larger states. The Electoral College avoids the outcome of a run-off election. It also greatly reduces the chance of a dispute between the victor. Most people do not like the Electoral College because they are not directly voting for their canidate however many people fail to realize hat it is rare for an elector to betray his nominee. Electors rarely betray their canidate because they are chosen by the canidates party or the canidate themself. The Electoral College gives political weight to states and is very useful in deciding the new president with no debates over who won.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are becoming a big thing in the world today. They can help with traffic problems. They can also help with people who are not qualified enough to be on the road. I am against it because it could still have accidents and they could be just as worse as normal ones today are since before you come up on an accident the passenger in the car has to take over and that could be catastrophic.\n\nHaving cars that are driverless is a bad idea since it could end with fatalities still. If a car crashes right in front of a person then it could switch off of auto onto man and then what if the person is not ready and they collide and have another crash. The text states that \"If traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\" A lot of companies will get sued for if there driverless cars mess up and cause a fatality.\n\nAnother reason as to why this is a bad idea is that what happens when a senser quits working and misreads and collides. The sensers could be a bad idea since nothing lasts forever. What about if the GPS read something wrong and hit something. The technology is the thing that is worse about the driverless cars. What does a person do if something like this were to happen.\n\nLastly, if we do have this technology it will probably get rid of a bunch of jobs and cost people way more money. If it is this smart then a consumer would have to pay a fortune to get it fixed at a dealer more than likely. The older shops that we have now will go out of business and then there will be a lot of jobless people that had their main skill as being a mechanic. Where will they find work? The more we advance this technology the world is growing and there will be no jobs available someday.\n\nOverall, these cars will cause a lot of harm throughout our country. On the other hand they will be able to help people that don't know how to drive very well or physically challenged people to be able to get out and do things on their own.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The authors choice last paragraph short story Winter Hibiscus shows hope future seang feels The winter cold represent feels place upset receiving drivers license In spring piece homeland blooming warm She feel ready take test when came back This shows adapting accepting new life away home memories The last paragraph proves strong enough move past hardships move", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear newspaper In opinion computers benefit society computer like big electronics dictionary help soldiers stay line fire Computers benefit society like electronic encyclopedia Instead leasing dictionary page page trying find word would go internet type search box type word every thing pops When write paper someone I usually use internet The day I write paper I went internet found website took notes put words made works called page I thought easier finding time find childrens books person And also look places like need find place use Computers also benefit society like big cellphones huge keyboard My big sister always computer using talking friends This helped learn type Also new things like play games friend talk youre playing Lastly computers benefit society help keep soldiers line fire When I watch futureweapons I see unnamed helicopters controled hundreds miles away Also robot used digs mines saves many lives When I interviewed military said CAPS use helicopters time also love noone helicopters nt worry In conclusion computers benefit society like big electronic encyclopedias also like big cellphones huge keyboards lastly help keep soldiers line fire In school use computers time writing papers researching different things", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience natural thing s something learn Taking three hour carride perfect example patience Exactly like I experienced As packed suitcases city I contain I already packed mom dad standing CAPS please finish packing see I really want go I exclaimed You ll wait minute Do But I wait I grabed threw trunk car walked kitchen finish reading book packed After finished cooking dad carrying last bags bedroom complain notice setting patiently look He thanked saying CAPS patient mom surprise For He set sultans briskly walked white plastic suddenly pulled rectangular favor wash Kind much man Replied This goes show prince really says Only nt complain course", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed by certain individuals that families have the strongest influences on a child's evolution and others said there are different factors affecting it. Both sides of the argument will be discussed in this essay, followed by my own perspective on this matter.\r\n\r\nIn one hand, in this technology era, we cannot deny the role of TV or friends in children's social and cognitive increase in both positive and negative directions. In today's sophisticated era, it is difficult to avoid children's daily activities from the influence of various existing technologies. For example, a child cannot be separated from entertainment called television, which is the film or series he watches on TV channels. They saw how the actors acted as heroes to fight crime. However, it is often to see fighting scenes are shown, as the result, the children bring them to real life and injure their friends .\r\n\r\nIn the other hand, parents are a place where the children spend most of their time. Parents' role in guiding and encouraging the advancement of their children cannot be underestimated. To illustrate, parents are role models for their children almost in every aspect of life. In addition, they will advise and direct their children when they behave defiantly. Paying special attention to education and serving nutritious food are concrete examples that we always encounter .\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, every part in children's life has impact on their developments, whether the parent's, television and friends. However, I believe that parents' impacts on their children's improvement were most heavy than other effects.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program with me. Its many countries that need to recover from World War 2. We will take care of animals that will be shipped overseas. All you have to do is sign up it will be a opportunity of a lifetime. You will be able to travel to diffrent places for the Seagoing Cowboys Program.\n\nFirst, there's countries that need food supplies and more. After the World War two some countries began to go poor, so 44 nations joined together and created the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitaition Administration. They hired us (Seagoing Cowboys) to take care of animals such as cows,horses, and mules that were shipped. After the Pacific war we got seaman's papers and went to Greece with 335 horses and had enough food for them.\n\nSecond, this is a huge opportunity for your life. If you haven't traveled to a diffrent country before you will. You will be able to take care of people and also go places you never been before like Europe and China, trust me you will be excited. Another cool thing is that you will be able to be watchmen and check the animals on the boat every hour.\n\nThird, some bad things about it is that it will take you weeks to go visit the other places you go to. It took me a month to reach China. You need to be prepared for the hard work you do. If you are the watchmen you have to be carefull not so slip on the ladder on a rainy day.\n\nLast, its good and bad things about being a Seagoing Cowboy but mostly good things. When you returned after a trip overseas you can play baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds. We play games such as Table- tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,and other fun games. It can also show you how you should be thankful because people in diffrent countries don't have what you have. Now would you agree with me that you should sign up in the Seagoing Cowboys?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir mostly gratefulness happiness The author describes house traditional Cuban home unwittingly passed re rich culinary skills love cooking still today This explaines even though author adult still pasion parents together kid The author realizes family nt mean blood realated s around people loves making things little moments life The article states I always grateful parents love sacrifice This shows author admires parents everything given get The end memoir explaines author grateful living house people around He learned real definition family means love truely", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author showing cuban s lived Their cultra lived people cultra s could diffrent nt cared cultra s people care cultra like narciso parents author trying say people respect cultra To different cultra", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While some people argue that parents should take sole responsibility for disciplining their children, others take the view that the government should be in charge of such matters. In my opinion, the young generation should be primarily guided by their parents where rules of behavior and moral principles are concerned. However, in some instances government intervention is necessary.On one side of the argument, there are people who hold the opinion that the responsibility of disciplining a child falls squarely on parents’ shoulders, since they are their first educators, and it is their duty to equip their children with good manners and morals even before their first day at school. In addition, every family has a unique understanding of what a suitable form of discipline entails. Therefore, some parents are concerned that any form of punishment meted out at school might be too harsh. To overcome this issue, they believe that parents should be informed by the school of their child’s wrongdoing so that they could decide an appropriate consequence for their behavior at home.Unfortunately, not all parents are objective enough to make the right decisions when it comes to the upbringing of their children. Some may lack information or sound moral background to discipline their children in a meaningful way. Therefore, the state should shoulder some of the responsibility by implementing a strict set of guidelines and policies on how to discipline children at school. I believe that such policies result in children who flourish and are more likely to become productive citizens that actively contribute to a prosperous nation. Also, this would help both parents and teachers understand which punishments are suitable for minor infractions like missing an assignment or major incidents like bullying or skipping school.In conclusion, while both views are commonly held in society, I believe that the government must be actively involved in the policies related to discipline at schools as this would ensure the well-being and successful development of the youth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think sentence choosen last sentence shows Saeng pass test Although homeland still ability things As plant reminds home returns begins grow Saeng I think good sentence end leaves wondering pass test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Vauban, Germany, the citizens are not allowed to own cars and if they do, they're parked on outskirts of the city or in garages at the end of their developments. The citizens walk and bike ride places, and they refrain from using their vehicle as much as possible. Overall, people are happier. They're getting more exercise and are being able to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with eachother more than if you were passing your neighbor in your car. It leaves the streets safer for the children and creates a more family-centered environment that the rest of Europe is starting to experiment.\n\nMaybe your idea of a family centered area is one of spread out houses with private garages and cars but we can also create that by doing away with vehicles and removing them from our environment.\n\nIn Paris, vehicles were banned for a period of time because the of smog content in the city. If citizens did not comply to this order they were to be fined and your vehicle could be impounded. The increase use of motorized vehicles by mass pollutes cities and makes it unsafe to breath the air. Hybrids, plug in cars, and vehicles transporting 3 or more people were excused from this sudden crack-down on automobile use, but after a few days the French government allowed it to return to the normal use of all vehicles.\n\nIn Bogota, Columbia, no-car days are being experimented with. The citizens have been every enthusiatic in participating and overall it has been a huge opportunity for people to get out and enjoy the city on foot, on bikes, or in buses or taxis. Other cities surrounding Bogota joined in the event this year and also enforced fines upon anyone who did not comply to the rule. Business has boom and overall stress and worry is lowered because of the fresh start people get with biking places instead of driving.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Undoubtedly , in this present world life has become more convenient and comfortable due to the advancement of technology . However , a couple of people thinks that life without technology is easy-going while the involvement of the latest equipment in our life makes it hard . I disagree that simple way is the only solution and this essay will discuss how machinery had made our lives easier . \r\n\r\nIn the early days , everybody lives their life without luxury because of the non-availability of facilities . \r\n\r\nTo explain further , people travelled miles and miles on foot owing to unavailability of means of transport , as well as people live without smartphones , as a result , in case of emergency they were not able to contact their family members . Furthermore , ladies perform their regular household chores manually , such as mopping the floors , blending spices and cooking food on coals . all the above illustrations clear that life at an early age was so difficult and people had to do more hard work as compared to the present generation . \r\n\r\nOn the other hand , continuous science research had shadowed all the globe with its latest advancements and providing feasibility and ease in everyday life, to elaborate, latest and fastest means of transport system make individuals life easy as one can travel without any hassle. Smartphones connect people in a glimpse and easiest mode to receive all the latest news around the world. Along with that, the latest electronic equipment makes lives heaven, for example, vacuums, electric blenders, coffee machines, electric stoves and whatnot. Although, it makes the nation lazy and less physical activity is performed by every individual which raises several health concerns.\r\n\r\nTo conclude , I agree that advanced automation makes everything so easy that you can do anything at your fingertips, however , a person should not depend on these gadgets entirely as this can cause severe health concerns in the long run for future generations. Everyone should balance their routine accordingly and also perform some tasks manually to keep themselves more active.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars are unnecessary because of the liabilities that come with them, there's nothing wrong with standard cars, and too easy to take control over from an outside force.\n\nOne of the reasons I think driverless cars are unnecessary is because of the liabilities. If the car doesn't alert you and tell you that you're about to crash and you end up hitting someone, who's at fault? You or the manufacturer? Certainly it would be the manufacturer, wouldn't it? But you should've been paying attention! You can't just expect the car to alert you every time! But, isn't that what it's supposed to do? How are we supposed to have driverless cars if you can't even come to a clear decision on whether it's the driver's or manufacturer's fault in the case of a crash? These cars will create too many complex legal battles and are unnecessary.\n\nAnother reason I think driverless cars are unnecessary is that there is absolutely nothing with standard cars. Sure, people will be stupid and get behind the wheel under the influence; but, they will be able to be held accountable for their actions and have to pay fines, serve time, etc. What will become of people who just want to drive to drive? Standard cars provide security in knowing that the person behind the wheel will need to know what they're doing. What if a cell tower is down and the car won't be able to drive itself? How does the car drive in places with absolutely no reception? Driverless cars are not big of enough of a step up from standard cars.\n\nThe final reason I feel that driverless cars are unnecessary is because they are too easy to take control over. Now, I do not mean that it's easy to just grab the steering wheel and turn the car into a random tree off the side of the road or anything like that. I mean that if a computer is driving the car, can't it be hacked into? Hackers can get into some of the most secure computers in the world, so what's stopping them from doing that with computers that drive cars? Say someone that is mentally ill enough to not like someone to the extent that they want them dead, isn't it easier to just hire someone to hack into their car computer and make them get into an accident? Driverless cars pose too many risks to people inside them as it is easier to be taken over by an outside force.\n\nSome may say that driverless cars can actually help and are a good invention. They can make driving across the country or down to Florida for spring break much easier than having to sit and pay attention to the road for sixteen hours straight. But, you still have to pay attention to the road. The car isn't completely accident-free. What if the dad who has all of his kids and his partner in the passenger seat starts drifting off at the wheel? It's dark and he doesn't have to focus on anything so what's keeping him awake? What if he doesn't wake up when his car alerts him that it is about to crash and the car gets totalled? Although seemingly incredible, driverless cars offer up far more cons than pros.\n\nThat is why I believe that driverless cars are unnecessary because of the complexities of legal issues that come with them, they aren't much of a step up from standard cars, and they are too easy to take over from an outside perspective. Next time you start thinking about how nice it would be to have something drive your car for you, just think of the dynamics of everything that could be wrong with it and call a taxi service instead.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever had to listen to someone talk about a subject that you were really uninterested in? How about watch an educational video that was boring? This is what a majority of students expierence. It is not the fault of the teachers, they do not know if a specific student will find the video helpful and entertaining. The additon of the Facial Coding System in the classroom would be very benefical to the students and teachers. The teachers would know if the students are learning from the video, how they feel about a lesson, and it would help the teachers keep the learning expirence interesting.\n\nFirst off, teachers would be able to see if the video is actually helpful to students.\"For example,if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different\"(6.) The same logic should apply in the classroom. The video would be useless to show to a specific student if they didn't actually learn anything from it. Showing a video that is not helping the learning process is basically a waste of time, time that could be used to teach them the lesson a different way.\n\nSecond, teaching a boring lesson will not make the students listen and absorb the knowledge.\"The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face\"(6.) The reader of that text piece is more likely to rember the Mona Lisa demonstration because it was interesting. Students generally pay better attention if they find the lesson interesting. Students who find the lesson boring are more likely to not even try to pay attention and learn it. Teachers do not want to bore the young mind, they would much rather fill it with knowledge, however they can not do that if the student is choosing not to pay attention.\n\nThird, the teachers would cater more to that specific childs interest, For example, a kid who likes cars is more likely to enjoy a video thats teaching a lesson through the use of cars than one that is teaching a lesson through the use of frogs. If teachers could understand a specific students emotions while viewing something they could change what the student is viewing. \" ' A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Haung predicts'\"(6.) Dr. Haung ,the professor that created the software, predicts that the use of this technology would help students.\n\nTheir are people who will say that a students emotions has very little to do with how they learn and absorb information. That is simply not the case, if a student is in a sad mood all day they will not be able to focus on their work. They will focus on the thing thats making them sad. Emotions have a lot to do with the information a student absorbs. Certain topics can be a bit touchy to some students then they will fill uncomfortable and tune out whatever lesson you are trying to teach.\n\nFacial Action Coding Systems in the classroom would be greatly beneficial by both students and teaachers. The teachers would know if the students are learning from the videos, how they feel about lessons, and it would help the teachers keep the learning expirence interesting. Everyone has emotions and everyone expresses them differently, especially growing young pupils.Facial expression recognizing computers are needed in classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever mood stop laughing matter ca nt stop That problem good friend I together Most time talking random things find hilarious Luckily teachers two classes together In classes sit next though So teachers nt luck much Just day allowed move seats around new spot class The girl sitting next moved sat next Now nt like girl much I spoke said PERSON sit next grabbed stuff unusually quick manner came sat next The funny thing sat said CAPS saved life For reason I started laughing nonstop We could nt control To honest nt funny I guess way said I saved life I m glad sits next With would boring In sit next good time Our class end day ready go home I sit next taking notes I pass notes backandforth She I talk everything predicaments teenage girl runs high school boys parents I pretty much tell everything s good friend Over years I become closer closer friends Last year I least three four classes together So classes together previously I become acquainted open things I tell everything tells everything One reason I think ve become good friends I find things funny We interests thingsShe good friend I m glad s friend Laughter shortest distance two people I going definitely agree", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the artical \"Driverless cars are coming\" they expain the pros and the cons of the idea of driverless vehichals. In my opinion i believe that its a horrible idea because it says that the car can withhold itsself until the car hits under twenty five miles per hour. This being said in a situation that the car has come up on to an accident or a problem and the person is not awake or aware of the situation that the car needs the humans atttention to help it out and avoid the situation.\n\nThe car could have a vry negative impact on the worl but also a very positive impact on some people it just depends on how your outlook is. This being said I still believe its a bad idea because of the scared people have already expierenced, when I was younger there was always rumors about how robots will take over at one point in time causing americans to lose all jobs and buisness income.\n\nThere wouldn't be jobs for any one, without jobs we do not\n\nget paychecks to buy the food shelter or clothing that we need to survivw off of. I believe that creating this device will put to many lifes at state because of all of the taxi drivers, bus drivers, and anyone else who gets paid by transporting people or goods to different places.\n\nMany say that we are lucky for what we have we sometimes take what we have for grant. The reason I bring this point up is because if we already have automobiles that work perfectly fine why would we add to it. Also it causes drivers who will still want to drive issues because of the drivers who will still be driving they will have to adapt to the self driven cars because they won't have control over the car that can do as it is programmed to do already.\n\nIn the making of all of these cars we will be losing a lot of money also, the reason i bring this up is because the USA is already in so much debt why are creating more reasons to go deeper inti debt instead of trying to figure out ways we can attempt to get out of debt.\n\nIn the debate process it would take multiple people to come together on voting on a idea like this.\n\nThe point im trying to make by writing this paper is safety. we will not have control over when cars will stop nor go causing us issues with car accidents.\n\npeople not obey rules such as wearing a seatbelt or stay seated for that matter.\n\nBecause of all of the safety percaustions I would say im against having self driven vehicals in any state or country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought of going over seas to help your country, well you should really think about it. You can see places daily, that most people dont see in their lifetime.\n\nOne of the best parts are, the ship. The ships are so amazing, the guys usally have tournaments of almost anything, table tennis, fencing, boxing, and games also help to pass the time.\n\nIf your a small town guy this is your chance to see some the most beautiful things that\n\nEarth has to offer. This also gives you a differnt look sbout our great country, how some countrys need alot of help because of the war, and you can be a guy to help that.\n\nThere is alot of free time when you get in\n\ndiffernt places. Are you a animal lover, because we get alot of cargo filled with animals.\n\nHope you don't get sea sick because we travel around the sea some many times its not even funny. After all the animals are gone you can playbaseball or volleyball in the stables.\n\nBut you can get drafted into the Seagoing Cowboys at age 18, so you can just join too!\n\nI hope you made the right choice of going to the Seagoing Cowboys, we would be happy to have you here. Belive me i'm a Seagoing Cowboy, its one of the best things that has ever happend to me. It just started with me going on a small boat ride to Europe. That small thing change my life forever. You won't regret going to the Seagoing Cowboys.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Due various shifts in social value and economic condition, many couples in this day and age decide to have children at a later age compared to the last generation. This essay will explore some of the reaonse behind this trend.\r\n\r\nThe biggest reason of delayed childbearing is that the cost of raising children nowadays, especially in big cities, is becoming exorbitant and many of young couples choose to live in these expensive area because of job prospect. Therefore, they often have no choice but to delay their plan of procreation until they are financially stable enough to raise a child. Moreover, instead of satisfying for being a housewife, a woman of the current generation often has an aspiring career. It is often the case that woman with a strong career mind do not want to be distracted by parenting, which requires a huge amount of attention and effort. \r\n\r\nIn addition, contraceptive methods have become far more robust and the cost of them came down a lot due to the advancement of the manufacturing process in the decades. As a result, the use of contraceptive tools became prevalent among couples and young couples who have regular sexual activity can mostly avoid unwanted child birth.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, It is true that late childbearing can have some drawbacks. The biggest one being the increase of medical risk to the woman and the baby. However, such risk can mostly remedy with modem technology. On the other hand, there are multiple advantage of having children later in life. For one thing, these parents usually have a more robust financial base, therefore, can provide their children a better quality of life and most importantly education. For another thing, it is apparent that people of older age are more mature and less likely to make mistakes in deciding their children's future. As a result, they would be much more suitable parents, compared to their younger self.\r\n\r\nIn summary, the main cause for late childbearing of this generation is economic difficulties and the urgency to become successful in one's career. Modern contraceptive methods also play a minor role in helping young couples to prevent unwanted births. While late childbearing can cause some medical problem in pregnancy, overall, I believe the benefits of a more mature parenthood outbalance the potential downsides.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To State Senator, Electoral college. What a complex process it has become. I am writing to you today to explain to you why the Electoral College should be held. As you know, this is a process which starts off by a meeting of the electors to discuss and vote for the President and the Vice President of United States, then counting the electoral votes by the Congress. The Electoral College isnt a small thing, it consists of 538 electors. It requires at least 270 votes to elect the President.\n\nEvery candidate running has his/her own group of electors. Most states have as its called \"winner-take-all\" system. Which basically, gives all the electors the opportunity to the winning presidential candidate. When the president is elected, the governor sets up a \"Certificate of Ascertainment\". Which concludes a list of names of all the candidates who ran for President. The certificate is then sent to Congress and the National Archives as apart of the presidential election and history.\n\nIt has come to my attention that there has been a majority of people who do not agree with the Electoral College and wish for it to be abolished. A source says and I quote, \" Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, who in turn elect the president.\" Although, this source only has ONE argument against the Electoral College, which is called the disastor factor. It explains that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest mistake in a century, and how it couldve been worse. In all honesty, if it was going to be as worse... then it wouldve. But it did not so why they spend so much time stressing about something that does not exist.\n\nIt also mentions that if a tie were to happen in the electoral votes, the election would be thrown out of the House of Representatives and the state delegations vote for the president. IF a tie were to appear, i doubt very much that it will happen because the people campaign for the president they want in the White house, so they persuade people causing one to have most votes. But in all worst cases, that is why there is a Vice-President. The Vice-President serves a purpose and should be treated like so.\n\nThere are 5 reasons to keep out Electoral College: Certainty of Outcome, Everyone's President, Swing states, Big states, and Avoid run off elections. Certainty of outcome includes that yes, anything is possible, a dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College, but it is very less likely than a popular vote. The winning candidates share of the college go past his share of popular vote. Everyone's President inlcudes that the college requires a presidential candidate to have a trans-regional appeal. Meaning that if it has no region, the electoral votes are already enough votes to select the president.\n\nSwing states consists of the winner-take-all system as mentioned earlier. Voters are more likely to pay attention to the campaign in toss-up states, to really understand what is hapeneing even though they already know what their final desicions is. The most humble and heartfelt voters should be the ones to decide the election. And of course the big states. In other words, the larger the state equals the more attention from presidential candidates in a campiagn than a smaller state. An example, would be that Florida recieved 29 electoral votes for the current president, rather than Wyoming which only got 3. And finally to conclude, the Avoid run-off elections. The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate is favorited. There of course is pressure in run off when no candidate wins a majority of cast votes.\n\nTo end this letter sent to you, State senator. I have explained to you the process of the electoral votes. I also explaind the reasons why you should keep the Electoral College held. Please rethink this over and consider the best option...To keep held the Electoral College. Best wishes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Emotions the things that make us feel happy,sad,angryand scared. But they also show our humanity its difficult for people to understand one another and harder to know how one feels. But a new techology called facial action coding system enables computer to identify human emotions. I think its not right to determin if someone is happy or sad by using a machine. If a simple person can't figure out what emotions someone is feeling then i dont see why they'll trust a coding system that uses 44 muscle found in your face. To see if your feeling whatever emotion your feeling based on how your muscles where being used at the time of the scanning.\n\nFor classroom use i see zero ways this can improve anything for students. Because students are emotionally unstable and there moods can switch at any given time. The artical also said something about imagine being infront of your computer and seeing an add the way you react to the add will make it so you don't see it anymore. I think its useless for a coding system to try and calculate how someone feels. The artical gives a great example\n\n\"you can tell how your friend is feeling simply by looking at there face\"\n\nthis little fact made me think that both a human and computer can see your face and how both might say your sad or mad because of the way your face looks right then and there. But nether a computer nor human can trully know what that person feels inside of them.\n\nI dont see how anyone thought this coding system could benifit anyone let alone students. this coding system that can read human emotions might be fun but serves no use for a school. it might be really good for things like seeing how kids react to new toys or cereal before you make a product go on the shelves of stores. besides that this coding system is useless in my eyes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It one days I sat around day nothing play text laugh It one days one bothered one even really talked one told chores By dinner time someone decided call stairs eat let tell nt anything like pizza Although I d rather eat get lecture thankful My brother came home first time ever ate us decided leave But time I asked come I m tired beating He said coarse I made daddy change mind coarse I nt see would nt let come first place He going hang guys I grew friends Anyways I got ready hit road There I laughing dinner kind music mom listens way pick friends These guys great All crack jokes crack But let s get business I nt tell s time around The Fireworks sale re creating bombs Or Since I m girl I guess I m allowed something lame like But girl brother likes I guess wants impress excuse impress showing house see master pieces ve made That makes feel bad honestly made laugh Maybe ll impressed Key word maybe Although wo nt Because day still friends So bombs Complete duds We tried well I watched make em work would nt thing Eventually friend put whole bunch favorite stuffed animal It made bunch sparkly colors loud noises pretty fun watch We got video total good laugh everyone After brother said goodbye girl decided head home The thing many fireworks left We know kid lives somewhere way home So decided go house get truck light firework porch jump tail trunk drive fast could The first time could nt stop laughing They nt come house They still nt come We one time neighbors They confused That made us laugh even It great wanted keep someone else time We know girl lives near us We thought It s gon na hurt stop real quick fun Apparently thought different Way different actually thought rudest thing ever We joking around gettin laugh fun We nt rude s friend Long story short mom got mad chased us car She never caught us got license plate number The next day The called police They nt think big deal still showed house talked parents went I boyfriend s lucky I talk mom phone She realized fun actually laughed That great It one nights laughed whole time would nt change thing even got trouble law Something I definitely never I m glad I hilarious memory reminisce rest life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nick D'Alto's \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" describes a new technology that has the ability to observe and calculate a person's emotions based on their facial expression. The program uses a virtual three dimensional model of the 44 major muscles in the human face to identify facial expressions and nonverbal communications through the human face. The new software was developed by Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, and Prof. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam. This new technology can be used in many ways and in many places including schools. The intricate algorithms can calculate a student's mood based off of their facial expression and alert teachers or alter online assignments to assist the student. This software has the potential of being exceedingly valuable to schools when it comes to a student's learning experience.\n\nWith modern day technology on the rise many schools are using online platforms for tests and school work which, while easily accessible and secure, can sometimes lead to a student becoming confused on a subject without the teacher's help. However, with this new technology Dr. Huang predicts that when a student is struggling while using a classroom computer for an assignment the algorithm can identify the student's confusion and modify the assignment to help guide the student like an effective human instructor. If the student is still confused after the software has tried to guide them through the lesson it can then alert the instructor to help the student get the asistance they need.\n\nDr. Huang notes that, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\" Due to having multiple students in one classroom teachers can easily miss the nonverbal ques given by a student's facial expressions and actions. This technology can help identify when a student is confused or bored for teachers and alert them so they can help the student before they move on to the next subject. The program can also measure a student's emotions so that if a student is upset or enraged it can notify the instructor so that the student can get the support they need to readjust their mood.\n\nIn conclusion, the new system can help teachers identify students who need the most help in the classroom. If the program is installed in schools it can enhance the learning experience for students and improve the teachers' understanding of their students. With this new system students may be able to learn subjects more thoroughly which could allow students to achieve higher grades and in turn lower the drop out rate in schools.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that studying venus is a Worthy pursuit depite the dangers by saying, \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahernheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on own planet . Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any pkanet in our solar system, even though meercury is closer to out sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additonal impediments like erpting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. NASA's possible soultion to the hositle conditions on the surface of Venes would allow scientists to flot above the fry. just as out jet airplanes travle at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly gound conditions by staying up and out of their way. At thirthy-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure woud be close to tht of sae levle on Earth. solar power woukd be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Noe easy conditions, but survivable for humans. more inportantly, researcher cnnot take samples or rock,gas,or anything else, from a destance. therefore, scientists seeking to the conduct thorugh mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "there are some good and bad things for these driveless cars. like there are so many car crash cause of drink drving are people who are texting with out looking and thers people that like to talk on there cell phones so the driveless car could help in some ways. because they would probably stop peole from getting into crash but there somebad thingds to add to the driveless casrs they can also be bad like if the driver is no paying any mind to the road and thinks their car is doing all the. work and they are to busy texting a friend telling them when there on there way and their doesnt take over. and you end up in a car crash cause your car didnt react in time to either to stop the car or warn u that other car is on coming. but still i thnk there are ways that the driveless car could be helpful. it would stop so many car crash by a big number and it would keep people that been drinking safe to cause then the numbers of deaths cause by drunk drivers are huge. so the driveless care doesnt seem all so bad but then agian. this car could have its problems because if the car get into a crash u going to need to get it fix and we all know thats going to coast alot of money. unless google are willing to help u get it fix but we all know thats not going to happen so this driveless car thing is a big thing maybe the new hit like the hoverboard now of days there so many good and bad things with this u just gotta find it but in my own thought i dont really think this is such a bad ideal i mean cause that almost dive by themselvs is pretty awesome. but then i gotta think about they say it wont use up as much fule but are we really sure about that cause we all know that the car its slef will be reall pricey and all so will alot of people buy it im not sure mysefl but if google is doing this i think its going to be abig hit an maybe tthis will change the futuer to all of the cars we have now .all i can say now is will these driveless cars be a good thing i mean they say that \"why would anyone want a driveless car that still needs a drive\"? and they also say wouldnt u get bored to wait your turn to dive a car but i think it would work because when your on the highway an your diving for long preiod of times and u just wanna relax and let the car do the driving. i mean hey why not i wouldnt mine so i think google should try to step up the game and put these cars out there for people can buy them i really think they are a good idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I patient I broke arm I I playing outside climbing pole I droped I put swore My doctor peaceful And nice In conclusion time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's world there is a lot of amazing technology. Technology has come a long way than what it used to be. The technology that we use today is way better and hytech than what it has ever been before.\n\nIn this article there was a lot of talk on how computer here and their can do Facial Action Coding System. The Facial Action Coding System was created by Dr. Paul Eckman. The FACS (Facial Action Coding System) is designed to pick up every movement in a humans face and can determine different emotions with those sudden movements. There are six basic emotions, happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Each and everyone of those emotions are determined by ones muscle movement in the face. I think the FACS is a very valuable piece of technology that can be used in the classroom for many different purposes. Some of the purposes are learning and just to have fun and mess around with each other to see what your emotions are and how you can change those emotions. The most important purpose for this new piece of technology is the learning purpose behind it. It can be used to learn many different things in a humans body and can learn the different muscles in ones face and how they differ from one to another. The article states that the facial expressions for each emotion are universal, which means that different emotions can go to a different muscle movement in the face.\n\nI think personally that this new peice of technology called FACS (Facial Action Coding System) is a very valuable thing for the classroom. It has many different learning objectives behind it and can be used for other activities besides learning purposes. Yes, also the technology that is around us today is amazing and is amazing what it can do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial action coding system is a good idea to used in estudents beacuse almost the 50% of the students are shy an they dont want to ask when they are confused and bored so if teachers know how they feel they can help them. A classroom computer could reconigze when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts.\"then it could modify the lesson , like an effective human instructor .\" the same technology can make computers-combined faces more expressive- for video games or videos surgery. Many people are going to like this becuase that can help techers, students, and all people that cna get it. Did you know that exist a new sofwart making by Dr. Paul Eckman called \" The Facial Aciton Coding\" that indentify the humans emotion that it can used in all people bout we can used in students to show how they are feeling. The process begin when the computer contructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major mucles in the model must move like humans muscles. movement of one or more muscles is called an \"action unit\". Dr. Paul Eckman has classified six basic emotions that are happiness, surprise, anger, disguits, fear and sadness -and then associated each whit characteristic movements os the facial muscles. The facial expressions for each emotion are universal, Dr. Huang thought individuals often show varying degrees of expression (like not smiling as broadly), The software can even identify mixed emotions, each expression is compared against a natural face showing no emotions. the monal lisa demostration is really intendet to bring a smile to your face. Imagine making a computer that know when you are sad or happy it can be good for people. In conclusion this idea is really amazing besause it helps people and almost all the people are confused beacuse they dont know how they feel about something, this computer with the sofware it can be good for school because al students got confiused in something bout someones are shy an they dont want to ask to the teachers to make the aclaration about the thing that they are confiused and it can be better for teachers making more things intesting.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboys program is a program that helps the world recover from World War Two. It helps different countries around the world come back from the war and suffering. If you join, you will see many amazing different places while helping the world.\n\nBecoming a Seagoing Cowboy means you will help countries by helping ship the food and animals to that country so they can recover what was lost. You just have to take care of the animals by feeding and watering them. On the trips we even had extra time to play baseball and volleyball in the empty holds where the animals were. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and other games also went on. Becoming a Seagoing Cowboy can open up the world to you. It can make you aware of other counties and their needs.\n\nI have seen places around the world like Greece and Vencie, Italy while helping there. The Seagoing Cowboys are doing good things by helping people, and a bonus is being able to see many cool sights. It is really a wonderful thing to do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Image someone having a bad day and no one really can not tell if one is or not. Just think of a technology that can read ones facial expressions and how it could maybe benefit the class room.\n\nMany students in school feel angry, tired, bored, or happy when they walk in to school. Dr. Huang, of Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinios explains its helpful reasons to be used in school.\n\nIn the text Dr. Huang predicts, \"A classroom computer could recongize when a student is becoming confused or bored ... Then it coud modify the lesson\"(D'Alto Paragraph 6). This shows teachers and instructors can come up with plans and lessons that will better student learning. Most of the bored and confused students t do not achieve highly in school is somtimes cause by the lesson that a teacher gives, which can make students struggle in daily learning.\n\nThis can impact the school testing level scores and student actions if school is not enjoyable from them. From the quote, \"A classroom computer could recongize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" can improve the teachers and instructors lesson plans better. Then,\"modify the lesson\" will improve student learning too. This could would be a great way to help the schools and students become smarter and succeed in lessons based on expressons.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Environmental pollution has been a major concern in recent years. The main reason of the air pollution is caused by the combustion of fossil fuel, some people think that government should raise the price of fuel to resolve this issue. In my opinion, it may help to some extent; however, this is not the only way to tackle this issue.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, increasing the price of petrol can help to reduce the environmental pollution to some degree. The excessive use of cars releases carbon dioxide into atmosphere which is detrimental to earth. If the price of petrol hiked, individuals would probably start to drive less often and this in turn can decelerate the rate of air pollution. However, the increase in the cost of petrol would not stop the environmental pollution. Besides, the fuel price determined the market price of essential commodities, and increasing price can affect poor and middle class.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, government can take other measure to mitigate these problems. A better solution is to invest in renewable energy such as solar, wind and tide rather than unrenewable energy like petrol and coal. For example, solar power in the United States has proven its efficiency in energy production.Second, by improving public transport and reducing the cost of traveling, the government can ecourage people to take the transportation; this practice can help clean the environment and reduce traffic.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I strongly believe that the hike in the petrol price is not the best solution to this problem. Improving the efficiency in public transportaiton and investing in renewable resources is better alternatives that ought to be considered.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people say that what children watch influence their behaviour Pandit other believe the amount of time they spend on television influence their behaviour most discuss both view and give your opinion\n behaviour is the way which persons are respond to particular situation or email it depend on person to person because it change according to sitmule. It depends on person to person because it change according to situations comma various adult are influenced by others habit and some are change their by watching TV or mobile phone I discuss both view in details .\nfirst, majority of individuals think that teenagers are influenced by what the see. married children's are changed their habits according to their friends like , in school the youngest will try to be like elders one they will try to adopt their habits like violent behaviour. in the other hand children change their behaviour due to what they see in their homes for examples comma if they watch conflict between their parents children are changed their actions and they can learn abusive language some time parents use abusive words in their conflicts .\nfurthermore, television also impact on adults behaviour. they can easily influenced what they can see and hear on television many toddlers are watching too much TV E and their impact on their eating habits comma now a days the most of the adult could be disconnected with their natural environment and physical habits, set as playing with their peers comma bonding with families. in spite of this variance teenagers are learn it behaviour like ok stalling doing violent behaviour with their peers and other due to watching too much TV. for example they watch action and violent movies try to behave like that. in addition to comma Noida news channel or great impact on children behaviour like the given news on terrorist attacks again and again.\n\n in conclusion comma I recapitulate my views that television influence the behaviour of child parents . parents teach their children to watch those program which gain the knowledge and increase the education level of the children.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people are gradually becoming aware of the historical culture developed by people-lived-in houses or buildings.This shows us its materials, construction and technology, etc. to find out more details about their house or accommodation, positively in the development of cultural diversity. This encourages socially-cultural awareness, helping countries extend their own influence on culture as architecture.\r\n\r\nBy increasing cultural awareness, some people are made to acquire knowledge about the sense of house- or building-related history. They represent major engineering challenges which were faced during construction in their country. This enables people to learn more about its development not only in the past but in the future, by receiving education socially.\r\n\r\nThat means the social movement is to launch through education to focus on the country’s culture developing by a sense of its identity to come to know about the history traced back past time when they lived in ones.\r\n\r\nThis fact comes to that people are carrying research into the historic buildings as precisely/accurately as possible either by paying a visit to the advanced men/women who lived there for a long time or finding information in the museums about artefacts and in libraries about historical records.\r\n\r\nBeing interested in knowing the whole picture of their House or building, some people are likely to visit the advanced citizens to trace the history. Combining with the above, scientific research strategies need to be explored by means of the recorded words or historical items to have in a local museum where to keep articles with your building to know the exact history, provided that the artefacts exist. So do libraries which play a vital role in giving people an opportunity to acquire more knowledge about the local history, as is available to anyone wishing to have.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "During construction Empire State Building s dirigible dock three major obstacles wind structure safety The wind obvious flaw landing dock rough wind currents top building Landing perfectly dock one thing staying impossible would whipped around ORGANIZATION dirigible Los Angeles feared wind would blow dirigible sharp spires buildings area would puncture shell paragraph problem structuring mast hold balloon would also become structural obstical could nt simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof paragraph To get structure sound enough land dirigible would sixty thousand dollars worth modifications frameworkLastly landing huge metal balloon ontop largest skyscraper millions citydwellers even knew balloons highly flamable one reasons mooring mast nt work Although two attempts landing neither succeeded mast decoration", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the new driverless cars there are both negative and positive aspects. The technology is upon us, but it is unsure whether our society is quite ready for this new and dramatic change. Not only would driverless cars change our own habits, but it would also change how the world works around us.\n\nDriverless cars would positively influence the world around us. Common mistakes that are made daily while driving could be prevented when an individual is using their driverless car.The text states that drivers could engage in multitasking such as texting while driving until they are needed to take over.\n\nIn today's world, cell phones and popular social media demand our undivided attention. With smart phones and other possible distractions, a smart car would allow the driving individual to focus on ohter things while they move onward to their destination.\n\nThe text states that laws are very focused on keeping drivers, passengers and pedestrians safe. With safety being a main concern, driverless cares could greatly impact an extremely common cause of death. Car craches happen daily and with the help of advanced technology could easily be prevented. When a typical driver might go to fast on a dangerous road, a driverless car would be watching the driver and correct the speed, making sure that no person is at risk. Although, a driverless car may correct common mistakes,\n\nSince their was a demand for transportation, technology and the ability of man has come a long way. Where once unpredictable conditions were used such as horses, there was an advancement to Henry Ford's automobile that changed the way America and eventually the world went through everyday life. A driverless car would most effeciantly fit the needs and wants of the modern world.\n\nAlthough a driverless car may be deemed as a positive change, there are also negative alternatives. The text states that the expense of these cars are simply impractical, along with the idea of smarter roads. The text also states that although driverless cars would prevent many instances, a driver would still need to remain alert and ready to take control in the case of a car crash or road construction. Another example of an issue would be in the event of a car accident. The technology may fail and if an individual is injured, it might be difficult to know who is at fault. Driverless cars could be deemed as an\n\nidea that needs more advancment and control before being avaliable unto the public.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars would have a positive impact on society, preventing accidents, transporting the distracted people of the modern world. Driverless cars are definately something to be considerd considering today's technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir mood admiration I think mood admiration Narciso admires fact mother father left families friends careers country loved mood memoir sets mood family friends I think memoir sets mood family friend talks alot meaning family example paragraph author says Growing environment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative That means even though someone blood related love much thing memoir said I learned real definition family And I never forget house gracious neighbor hood many things I learned love I never forget parents turned simple house home This means parents turned small house welcoming loving place holds many memories", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driveless cars can be they future of automobiles. But until we can fully control the car its not worth it.\n\nDriveless cars are only useful in certain ways like its good for public transportation and taxis. But does a average middle class citizen need a driveless car....... not really if you have been driving your whole life odds are your not gonna want or need this expensive technology.\n\nI think its dumb to create drivless cars yea it can stop the texting and driving deaths and drunk driving deaths but they should'nt be doing it anyway. The only way drivless cars are useful is buses and taxis but even then your taking away jobs of hard working people. We do not even know how much these so called smart vehicles are gonna cost if its really expensive then its not gonna be used by the middle class people and thats mainly america . Most people dont have 100,000 dollars to spend on a vehicle.\n\nAnother thing is that computers have flaws and if theres one mistake that can mean a persons safety at risk. I think they should keep working uncovering new technology and in maybe 10 years from now they make these vehicles avalible to the public. The smart road is effective but it is very expensive. New laws need to be made for these driveless cars like in a school zone you have to drive. but what about all the people that love driving are these driveless cars gonna be in the way of normal cars?. But what if the driver falls asleep while the car drives and he doesnt see the lights and gets in a car accident.\n\nI think if the car fails and someone gets hurt i think its the manufacturer that should be at fault because how are you gonna call a car a driveless car and not be truly drivless. I think if they want this to succeed they need to make this technology drive like a human. I think this is a great concept but i do not think it will succeed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "venus is a planet also known as the \"evening star\". Venus is the seocnd planet from our sun and is often referred to as earths twin. Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of size and density and ocasionally is the closet planet to earth in distance. Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. Venus is the hottest planet on earth with average temperatures of 800 degrees fahrenheit and atmospheric pressure 90 times greater than earth. Astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may once have been the most earth like planet in our solar system. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment. NASA has a idea of sending a blimp like vehicle over venus . At 30 plus miles above the surface the temperature will still be around 170 degrees fahrenheit but the air prressure would be close to earths, not easy conditons but survivable for humans. Hovering over venus safely can only provide limited sight on ground conditons. Reserchers cannot take samples of rock,gas, or anything else from a distance. Systems that use machanical parts are made more resistant to pressure,heat and other forces. Not only does venus have value but the human curiosity will likley lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edge of imagination and innnovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently, it is has become notoriously difficult for students to focus on their lessons. In my opinion, this is a partly natural phenomenon that has been exacerbated by technology and the solutions lie in strict restriction and supervision.\r\n\r\nThe causes of a lack of concentration at school are both the pervasiveness of technology and human nature. Firstly, people have always struggled to focus. Very few students enjoy concentrating on tedious lessons and completing endless assignments at school. However, this has become worse as corporations exploit fundamental human characteristics. Research has shown that the number of hours one spends on a laptop, smartphone, or tablet has a direct correlation with a shorter attention span. The reason for this is that technology supplies passive, immediate gratification. Therefore, students cannot focus because of a combination of human susceptibility and predatory consumer electronics companies.\r\n\r\nThe most feasible solutions are for parents and schools to monitor students strictly. This begins with parents. They must either approve or purchase a child their first smartphone or tablet and manage their early interactions with technology. Many parents consciously gift young children these devices to help them learn how to use technology and aid their cognitive development. By waiting until later in life to approve a smartphone or limiting daily screen time, this issue can be greatly mitigated from the onset. Schools also have a role to play as they must enforce strict rules banning the use of smartphones at school. For example, in many Asian countries, students’ phones are confiscated if they are found using them during, or even between, classes.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, a lack of focus at school is driven by human nature and modern technology and parents and schools must work together to curb the worst excesses. Government regulation would also help but should not be expected.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has been said that driverless cars are more safer than cars with drivers and I agree with that statement. Cars with drivers can be harmful to people, drivers who don't follow smply traffic laws or teens and adults who think Facebook is more important than paying to the road. There are many pros and cons when it comes to driveless cars but cars with drivers only have cons in my opinion.\n\nThe pros to making a driverless car are fewer accidents and less traffic. Google has already made cars that could drive by itself under some conditions since 2009. Their car went miles without crashing but here comes the cons to a driverless car, its not technically driverless. The car still needed a driver to take over when it needed to pull in or pull out of the driveway or dealing with traffic issues. It still needs a driver but only for assisting on simple things.\n\nNow the cons to a car with a driver is teens texting and driving, adults falling asleep at the wheel causing the car to swerve into another car, or drunk drivers who though driving under the influence was a smart idea. The rate of accidents caused by careless drivers or people looking at their phones is through the roof and there nothing we can do about it except a officer pulling them over and giving them a ticket. That might stop some drivers' habits but to the other, old habits die hard.\n\nin the future, where there are driverless cars or even driveless cars but it still needs some assistance from a human is okay by me because I would rather have fewer accidents than a chance of another human being life taken away because of a drunk driver or a careless teen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, it is suggested that young ones affected the adverse factors by fascinating super stars who has gotten plenty of interests rather than they actually had. In this essay, I will elaborate on both argument of celebrities' influences to youngster but personally, I agree that the critical results which young people had extremely compulsion to maintain the beautiful and charming lifestyle in their ordinary lives.\n\n To begin with, famous people normally provide up-to-dated style for the youth generation, using their attractive physical features such as suitable body proportions and sophisticated makeup. These offered gorgeous and fancy products' information have valuable influences for someones who is into fashion industry or who try to gain new trends knowledge for preparing their achievements in the future. For example, the Kim who was the one of the best celebrities as designer always research the quality clothes for suitable each famous person because the designer insists the importance of celebrities' intense influences for youngster. Therefore, likewise this case, it can be seen that celebrities absolutely have lead the young people's trends.\n\n However, popular stars' effects are not always positive for young ones. That is because, as mentioned above, those celebrities tend to remain beautiful lifestyles so, young men tend to follow their lives. Thus, minors started heavy makeup at the primary schools and adolescents' consumption patterns had changed to purchase useless items, even though those goods are expensive. For instance, in Korea in the year 2010s, one superstar had contracted the North-Face company which produces high prices outers, after then, most youngster bought it and wore at the school. Followed the other problem is, if some students could not have those items, they had been discriminated by peers. That is because, I feel that famous people could attack young people's life as vicious effects.\n\n In conclusion, although celebrities having positive influences for students and youth generations, they are more likely to bring negative situation to the student's lifestyle. Therefore, it is convincing that the relevant entertainment businesses should control the youngster's industry like well-refined.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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