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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One week couple years ago grandparents We went sisters house aunt sister going teach hoe tie shoes I going kindergarten teacher wouldnt They said I learned tie shoes I would get pick something dollar store got excited When got I lunch began teaching The tirck taught went like first crossover step make bop tree put string around bunny loving around tree put bunny darling hole youre bond After many tries starting get hang Later went back house kept helping Finally one afternoon I got happy kept telling good job Later went store picked something My patient She wasnt getting mad I kept messing kept encouraging patient My patient helped learn faster", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Fishing great sports takes lot patience My first fishing trip lake miles home I loved fishing ever since trip wasnt easy I think fishing fun I patient accomplishing I took every oune patience I When uncle visits always brings fishing rods fishes differently I never went one year ago He decided I bring friend So I get boared I would someone talk toThe patience started half way We hit fence The car broken called land breakThe wait hours min friend asked So friend sucked We finally fixed car drove rest way Once got two problem fix bait We found nice spot side lake We sea venge baits took hours enough baitsWe finally ready fish We got rods sat chairs cast waitedThere way make fishing faster sat hoping bites In end uncle friend I caught fish We eat three lunch went home fish left I love go fishing relaxes I felt like anything could happened went fishing relaxed brough couple meals Thats I fishing requires patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, whether art subject should be taught at school or not has become a matter of concern. Some people think art is essential for students and the country, while others oppose this viewpoint. This essay will discuss both views and give a relevant opinion on them.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, art is an essential subject for students in terms of positive development. Students learn about their country's history, culture, and traditions. For example, a country like India has diverse cultures and traditions it is important for the citizen to have knowledge of their country when they move to different parts that will help to a certain extent. Moreover, art is good for mental health, as subjects like math and science are very frustrating and stressful, whereas art helps to relax the mind and Borden the thinking process. Hence, art has an essential place in schools\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people deny this idea of teaching art subjects in schools. First and foremost, taking subjects like math, science and computer provide a better opportunity in their career. For example, artists like painters and singers can hardly manage daily expenses, whereas doctors, managers, and IT professionals get enough to save for the future. In addition, those who graduate from engineering, business, and medical science make more contributions in terms of the country's economic development like improving infrastructure, increasing life expectancy, and increasing country's revenue with better management. \r\n\r\nIn Conclusion, although art is very helpful for students to rejuvenate their minds, get off from a hectic schedule, and learn about their country's history and traditions, science and business subjects help the countries grow more. In my opinion, art and science hold special positions. They should be taught; equally; it should be dependent on students and what they like.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of having driverless cars is something that brings many questions in my head such as how safe they will be and how they will improve our atmosphere. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" they bring up many good ideas about driveless cars and some ideas that I just plain out think would'nt be good for our world at all. In my retrospect after reading \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" I feel as though these driveless cars would be an amazing idea to contribute to our community. These cars would benefit our community in many ways not just for our safety but for our atmosphere.\n\nHaving driverless cars would impact our safety in many ways such as reducing accidents on the streets. Having these driverless cars would reduce car accidents because the driverless car would have laser beams to constantly update the surroundings of the car such as the other cars making it safer for humans to drive. Not only would the human be aware of his or her surroundings but the computer would be tracking the safety too which would help even more while driving.\n\nIn paragraph four of \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\"\n\nit states \" it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings\". Driveless cars would also have antilock brakes which would be provided in these cars incase of rollovers and skids. According to the article of \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" it states \"automakers used speed sensore at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes. Within 10 years,those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out of control skids or roll overs\". These cars would help our safety of everyone in many ways possible.\n\nThese cars would help our atmosphere with all the pollution that we as humans make everyday. The tank for these driverless cars would only use half of what a normal car uses today. This would reduce our pollution by a dramatic decrease and it would help nature and many of the animals but most importantly us. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" it states \"The cars he foresees would use half of the fuel of today's taxis\". Just imagine a cleaner world for everyone. These cars would help make our world a cleaner,greener and greater place to live in.\n\nThe awsome thing about these cars is that it would only make us drive in bad traffic,working zones and around accidents. But the car would announce before we are needed just to be aware. Not many times will the car need someone to be in control over it. It would introduce the problem way ahead of time due to its GPS that the car will include. You will be able to most likely avoid these problems before you even get to them.\n\nIn conclusion I believe these cars would be a huge bonus to our community. Not only in safety but as well as our enviroment and our world. It would gives us a better world to live in and maybe a safe one too if everything goes well as plan. These cars are the future and will make our future better than ever before.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt The Mooring Mast builders constructed Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock building One many obstacles nature The winds top building always shifting violent air currents If dirigible tethered mooring mast back would swivel around around mooring mast said paragraph Another obstacle dirigibles outside US used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammible see quite obstacles builders Empire State Building face attempting allow dirigibles dock building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think a car that could drive itself is very safe? Of course not, people that take drivers test need to be able to pass to drive in public ; If there are driveless cars then these test would not be needed and the roads would be less safe. These drivelress cars are also not safe because they are not fully able to drive themselves, they have a sensor which could have technical difficulties, and if the technology fails it would bring problems to the owner and manufacturer.\n\nThe cars need an alert driver at all times, Google has had cars that can drive themselves under certain conditions since 2009 but need a driver to take over during times. In the text it says \"they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues,\" but if the driver is not alert a wreck could happen.\n\nSecondly, the cars should not drive themselves because they need a ton of sensors. The sensors needed in Google's modified Toyota Prius are uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor. All of these sensors and I still have not named the most important one. A dubbed LIDAR is the most important part of the technology, it is on the roof of the car and it spins. In the article it says \"it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroudings\" but if this is blocked then it cannot sense and there could be a wreck\n\nOverall after those 2 reasons, the last reason would be who to blame when wecking. Accidents happen all the time but in the text it says \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault--the driver or the manufacturer?\" because when tecnology fails its noones fault but someone will want justice.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke had many reasons to join the Seagoing Cowboys. Some of the reasons were he knew it was a once in a lifetime opportunnity as so said in the 1st paragraph, after hearing about it from his friend. The UNRRA hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of: The horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\n\nLuke had made nine trips, the most of any other Seagoing Cowboy. He said, \"the cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy.\" He then also stated in paragraph 5, \"besides helping people I had the benefit of seeing Europe and China. He said seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special. One thing that prepared him most was helping his aunt's farm as a boy, it had prepared him for hard work, but not for dangers at sea. The trip had also made him more aware of the people in other countries and their needs. The trip had also, according to him opened up the world for him.\n\nThose are all things that either: prepared him for work, who hired him, who believed in him. Also who brought up the idea of being a Seagoing Cowboy, what he did, and what he had said. I'm sure Luke had a great time being a Seagoing Cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I patient I got somewhere I always like go This place called point I always look forward place get Im excited One small downer place called waiting Another word would patient Being patient wait someone something You patient everywhere point like way getting campsite also lines But end its worth lots fun patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Competition in sport can play an important role in a teenager’s development. However, we must be careful as this can have both positive and negative effects on the child and people disagree about which is the most significant.\r\n\r\nInitially, let’s think about the reasons why teenagers benefit from competition in sports. On the one hand, sport is a great way to reduce stress and focus the mind away from lessons. Furthermore, a little competition can help teenagers to focus more and give them a reason to perform better. In addition, when playing in teams, these sports help teenagers learn team-building skills and can improve their physical well-being, which is a really important benefit.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, competitive sports can also cause problems for individuals if people feel that when they lose, they fail. This is clearly unsatisfactory and may cause serious issues with confidence. It is certain that this pressure makes sport less fun and means teenagers do not want to take part. Although being part of a team can be enjoyable, some people cannot perform as well as others and they may feel isolated from other team members. This can be a serious concern for teenagers who want to fit in with others around them.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, there are good arguments on both sides. While competitive sports can play a useful role in developing a teenager, it is important that sports are monitored to ensure individuals do not feel pressured or stressed when playing. It is important that young people understand the value of competition and that even if they fail, they feel that they have achieved something", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days recycling turned into a crucial parameter in favor of keeping the environment out of any harm, so, we should start to teach this lifestyle to our children from the very beginning.\r\n\r\nWhilst some people claim that this should be part of the school’s program, I have an opposite opinion with them and I believe that this should be part of the child upbringing process in the home.\r\n\r\nWith regard to the Educational programs in school and how important or efficient are they, some people put this argument forward that we should teach recycling to our children in schools. Firstly, they believe \r\n\r\nchildren should be trained under the supervision of specialists and definitely, the most qualified teachers could found in the schools more than any place. Along with, it believed by some that the best outcome will have occupied in Educational environment. As result, when these two elements get along with each other; the best education will come to our sons and daughters.\r\n\r\nHowever, I don’t believe these arguments stand up to scrutiny.\r\n\r\nTo begin, it has been shown in many cases and experiments that the schools haven’t that much Effectiveness that we thought, despite, we should put this in mind that children may have not the same understanding about recycling and environmental threats as we do, so, it is a better idea to teach this concept to them in a safer place like home and with hands of parents; the most trusted persons for children. Hence, they will learn about this unfamiliar concept and accept it more easily.\r\n\r\nAll in all, although some people think children should learn about these staff in schools, conversely, I strongly believe that is better for them to get taught at home as a part of the upbringing process.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concluded paragraph winter turns spring take driving test one main reason The girl says like plant coming back life starting start In essay Saeng young girl says When come back spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again Saeng failed test first time She going wait spring fresh start In essay winter hibiscus reminds Saeng grandmother home This first makes sad realizes wonderful memories helps get tough time Her memories going give strength carry life try drivers test spring", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you really trust a car to take you from point A to point B safely? There are many possible things that can go wrong while a person is not controlling their car. I think that there is not a safe way for a car to drive a person all by itself. If you don't know the next action that your car is going to take, how can you stop anything bad from happening? Will the car be able to determine where to stop if it is approaching a stop sign? There are too many \"what ifs\" with a driverless car for me to feel safe to ride in one, or to even have one driving on the street around me.\n\nTo me, there are a variety of things that can go wrong when you are allowing the car drive all by itself. There are too many questions that need to be answerd about these new cars. For example, how will the car react to a sudden change in the environment? If another car gets to close will it swerve out of the way potentionally causing an accident? Even if the car notifies the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, what will happen if the driver isn't notified in time? Also, if one of the sensors on the car were to be broken or damaged, then how could the car continue to drive on its own? Would it notify the driver that a new part is needed? If the car were to get into an accident, who would be to blame, the driver or the company that created the car? Would it depend if it was on manual control or automatic? These questions are the main reasons why the driverless cars need to be improved before I will even think about ridding in one. I know that I would rather know exactly what I am doing and how it will be done instead of having a car try to do it for me.\n\nI think that driverless cars are a terrible idea. There are too many problems that can occur during the driving process, and I don't want my life in the hands of a car that can't see or think the way that a human does. If during some parts of the drive it requires a human to take the wheel, why have it automatically drive you? Wouldn't it get tiring waiting for your turn to drive, especially when you aren't sure when the car is going to have you take over? You must stay focused on the road and have both hands on the wheel, so you could very easliy just drive the car yourself without the worry. This way you can control the situations that you get into, and not having a car get you into trouble that you might not be able to get out of. I think that it is much more safe to have a human that can respond quickly to change and can manuver through obsticals than to have a car, that might not see everything in its environment, drive automatically through it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir combonation calm nice happy It could also described heavenlyNarciso reffers childhood like one happy dream Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed form backdrop life warm home He also mentions greatful parents I always greatful parents love sacrifice One last fact contributes mood memoir Narciso s view family Growing environment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative In neighborhood despite customs elsewhere cultures came together great solidarity friendship From excerpt clear author cherish time would love go back", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While a faction of people holds the notion that authorities should invest on controlling pollution and providing houses to protect public health, others argue that more measures are necessary to prevent illness. I totally agree with the latter view as ample reasons are present to substantiate it. This essay wiill explain my view points with relevant illustrations.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, lifestyle diseases such as diabetic mellitus and hypertension are the most prevalant dieseases in the present world. Expert claimed that pollution and infrastructure issues have no relation with lifestyle diseases. For example, poor diet and lack of exercise are the major reasons for lifestyle diseases. Besides, microorganisms are the primary causes of communicable illness. To illustrate, COVID 19 diesease is spread by virus which is transmitted through air by contacting with infected patients. This is no role for poor housing or pollution to spred this disease", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of FACS technology to read student's emotional expressions are valuable. FACS, made by Prof. Thomas Huang and his collague, was made to detect emotions in paintings or in humans. According to Dr.Huang, \" facial expressions for each emotion are univesal,\" which is why the new technology is used to find out what these expressions mean. FACS can detect facial expressions in paintings such as Mona Lisa. The computer can recognize what kind of emotions are expressed in the painting when most people can't. Humans can also perform this action when we look at a family or a friend's face, it is easy to tell how they're feeling by looking at their face. The computer also makes emotions look more realistic in video games. According to Dr. Eckman, the computer has six emotions; happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness.\n\nFurthermore, when students are in a classroom learning for hours or even minutes, they get bored, confused, or even annoyed. Teachers can sometimes realize that and sometimes they can't which is how the computer can help. Simply by looking at sudents, it reads their emotions and when it realizes learning is not fun for them anymore, it changes things. Accoring to the text, a classroom computer will detect that the students are feeling bored. How the computer helps is by changing how the teacher is teaching the students. It modifies the teaching area to create a new way to teach students.\n\nTo end it all, FACS is resourceful for anyone. With the emotions it has, it can easily read people's face and recognize what type of emotions they have. It also helps students and teachers a lot by creating new amusing ways for students to learn. People can't always know what other people are feeling by looking at their face but the computer can. It's an upgrade made by professors and doctors to help society and people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the month of May, 2001 something strange and quite funny happened on the red planet, Mars. As NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the red planet, they snapped a picture of something that had the \"likeness of a human face.\" Some people think the \"Face on Mars\" was created by aliens, but research has been showing, the face is only a natural landform.\n\nOn April 5, 1998, the Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time to see if they could get another shot of the \"Face\". Sure enough one man snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original photos from the Vikings. When the image appeared on a JPL website many were shocked to find it was only a natural landform, there was no alien monument after all.\n\nAfter all the searching for more information on the \"Face on Mars\" scientists yet again in April of the year of 2001 drew close enough for another look! Michael Malin and his team captured an amazing, unbelievable photo using a camera with maximum resolution. When examining the photo, they found that the picture actually shows it is \"the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms common around the American West.\"\n\nIn conclusion, the \"Face on Mars\" is only a natural landform and most certainly did not come from aliens. Thanks to the new and improved technology today, scientists were able to find out that the \"Face\" was only a landform which is even common on Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author memoir created mood family They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved quote tells mood created author makes reader realize hard pareents work give children better life education It I learned real definition family also makes reader feel like lot family seem That family gives one life teaches love I never forget parents turned simple house home quote tells home place one live relationships created These moods created author memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A section of University degree holders fails to receive their dream jobs. The foremost reason behind this, to me, is the casual behaviour of most of the higher secondary school students while selecting the subjects. To handle this problem, pupils should analyze their career prospects prior to selecting the subjects.\r\n\r\n As far as underlying factors are concerned, most importantly, It might be due to unawareness about their natural aptitude for subjects and associated job opportunities in the market. Apart from this, most of the school graduates are teenagers and this is the stage when children are the most adamant. This fact leads to several confusions in their minds. For instance, taking physics and chemistry just because of peer pressure, will not allow one to compete with his counterparts. So, as a result of which many graduates face frustration when they are forced to do work that they do not appreciate. \r\n\r\nWith regard to solutions, It is extremely essential that school authorities organize counselling sessions for higher secondary students to make them aware of further career prospects, and also assist them to understand their strong areas. These types of programs provide individuals to opt for appropriate subjects for their tertiary studies. This further helps them to excel in their performances in university. Finally, dedicated university graduates succeed in achieving their chosen profession.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, I would subscribe to the view that an unguided and unassisted way of learning is a major factor towards job frustration, and one of the effective ways out is to avoid this situation is to assist school graduates in setting a clear and achievable goal.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although it is well known that smoking causes severe damage to our bodies, many people cannot reduce the bad habit. This is a big problem because many people die of lung cancer every year, and social welfare expenditures are expensive. The point is why so many people continue to smoke and how we can let them stop smoking. In this essay, I will provide two reasons and related examples to solve the questions.\nFirst of all, once people are addicted to smoking, they cannot stop smoking without help. In my experience, my father was a heavy smoker. He wanted to quit smoking but could not do that by himself. Thus, he went to a hospital and met a well-experienced counselor. After my father got advice and medicine, he could cut the bad habit. Therefore, a counselor's help is definitely necessary.\nSecondly, cigarettes are still relatively cheap compared to alcohol. For instance, tobacco was very reasonable in Japan, my home country, several decades ago. Thus, so many people had the habit of smoking rather than drinking alcohol. Then the Japanese government raised the tax rate on cigarettes from 20 percent to 50 percent in order to strongly discourage people from smoking. Consequently, the smoking rate dropped dramatically. As Japan's case shows, the rise in the tax rate is quite effective in reducing smoking in a country.\nThere are probably many people who have different opinions and disagree with my way of thinking. However, considering the two specific reasons and related examples indicated above, I personally believe that addiction and low price are the two main factors of smoking and that the remedies for them are a counselor's advice and raise of tax.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How well did the author support the idea? Well, the author supports the idea by describing the facts about Venus. It has says that Venus is a similar-like planet to Earth. Venus is the slosest plante to Earth in terms of density and size.\n\nVenus is the second planet form our sun. While Venus is simple to see form thedistant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. In this article it has said that Venus has similar stuff in Earth such as, surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nVenus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets. It's challenging that there is clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On Venus, the temperature average is over 800 degrees, it seems pretty dangerous, for astronauts or scientists, to be there.\n\nIt's challenging and dangerous in Venus because since the high pressure and heat, the weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightening. Researchers cannot take samples of rock,gas,or anything else, from a distance. Electronics can nerver be in Venus because it can melt.\n\nAll that I have read, is that Venus is not a really good thing to explore. People can get into trouble, deceased. It is dangerous, even though it kind of similar to Earth like the features, looks can be decieving.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I nt think certain books anything taken away people like different stuff Someone might wanted get book I nt think would right take away When I sixth grade I foster home I hated They would let listen music I liked They thought bad kids listen All wanted listen christian music I like My old foster parents used try take stuff thought devil They would make read bible everynight They tried shove religion throat I think maybe one reason I religious They would even let listen one band song girls husband affair Everyone opinion able choose like listen watch When parents strict usually makes kids want whatever tell If nt let someone watch listen read want might easy express They would able show really like They would something nt even like That right Everyone able express like", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In short story Winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho I think author ends paragraph shows determined pass When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melts geese return hibiscus budding I take test again This shows determined geese migrate every year flowers always bud every year She keep coming back like geese hibiscus She determined pass test fit sooner later If determined might never pass fit new society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With new technological advances everyday, it is no suprise that there will eventually be driverless cars out on the road. But technology is supposed to get the task at hand done more efficiently, and safer. And weighing the pros and cons of a driverless car, the cons win. With a driverless car, the driver would still have to pay attention to the road, creates conflict when a crash arouses (who is to blame, the driver or the car?) and the law doesn't agree with it either.\n\nDriving is a skill that requires full attention to the road. Even with cars coming out with new assistant features, no car has yet to be fully driverless, as mentioned in paragraph 7. Even with actions such as steering, accelerating, and braking, the driver still must pay attenion to the road and would have to be notified by the car if a situation occured, also mentioned in paragraph 7.\n\nIt is rare that it is the manufacturers fault for when a car is involved in an accident. But this could change if driverless cars start appearing on roads.\n\nWho would be to blame if the car were to wreck, the previously assured driver who believed their car was funtioning properly, or the car that promised to alert the driver if a problem were to arise? This idea is brought up in paragraph 9.\n\nLastly, driver laws are in place for the safety of the people and it is believed that it is best achieved with alert drivers. Many states have made it illegal to even test these driverless cars, according to paragraph 9. These illegal laws could change in the future, however, if driverless cars prove to meet safety standards maybe as that of a regular car.\n\nManufacturers are constantly trying to improve the quality and advances of their cars, but the question is are they taking a step in the right direction with driverless cars? As mentioned earlier, drivers would still have to be alert while driving these supposedly \"driverless\" cars, they would have to worry about whether it was their fault or the cars fault for an accident, and lawmakers would have to determine if these cars are safe enough to be driven on public roads. WIthout a doubt there will be driverless cars in the twenty-first century, but hopefully by that time, the pros will outweigh the cons.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No book taken shelves reason Books important part peoples daily lives Whether used school entertainment used good purpose always helpful People different likes interests everyone wants able read want without worry whether books still shelves tomorrow For people books great past time They help learn even help hard life situations Books world people without people would know lives No one aloud take something away important people even offensive All books purpose message want get else authors would taken time lives write published The author writes tell people story whether good bad wanted get story inform people The stories obviously important author important readers enjoy books The authors punished someone offended wrote If people offended stay away books certain author writes There plenty books many different authors person choose They take certain authors enjoy people might There many books odds always going book offends someone If get rid every single book offends people going many books left without books nothing Books key point education peoples daily lives We learn new ideas authors put us people keep getting offended taking shelves Books need stay shelves They important everyone whether want admit Without books people would today", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that the government should take care of old people and provide financial support after they retire. Others say individuals should save during their working years to fund their own retirement. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.\n\nIt is true that when people advance into their golden years, they require more help and attention. For that reason, a significant number of people hold the opinion that the government should provide financial assistance to the elderly. However, I tend to agree with those who argue that workers should be saving a portion of their income to have a nest egg in their retirement.\n\nTo begin with, a culture of saving rather than depending on the government may foster the overall economic development of a country. In other words, if people were to accumulate their own savings for their pension age, it would lessen the financial burden on the government. As a result, the government would be able to release more funds to more productive purposes, such as development of infrastructure, industries, hospitals, and so on, which may expedite the overall progression of a country.\n\nIn addition to economic factors, putting money aside has some personal benefits. Since savings-oriented people are not dependent on the state for their living expenses, this may instill a sense of self-respect and pride in them. On the other hand, those who are reliant on financial assistance very often face the negative societal stigma, as many people consider them to be inferior and unworthy members of society. Hence, to live a life with dignity and pride, taking responsibility for funding one’s own retirement is evidently a better option from individual perspective.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based memoir Narciso Rodriguez specific mood created First author tells love cooking kitchen family meaningful Cuban dishes prepared This creates atmosphere passion Rodriguez describes passionate Cuban music I adored day filled air mixing aromas kitchen paragraph This quote shows passion author culture traditions Second author talks relationship neighborhood A mood passion created based authors loving emotions towards unofficial family The author writes My parents always kept arms doors open many people considered family paragraph Finally author shares gratitude towards parents done His passion strength perseverance teachings create passionate atmosphere The author says I always greatful parents love sacrafice paragraph Throughout Narciso Rodriguez s memoir passionate mood displayed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advantages of limiting car use can help the environment and people. Some advantages include reduced smog in the air from the exhaust pipe of a car. More people will be healthy because instead of driving everywhere people would begin to start walking. Also when no one is driving cars there are no traffic jams so everyone usually will get to where they need to go on time without delay. Also when people arent driving their cars everywhere they have time to just enjoy the scenery in which they live in and are not constantly worried about where they need to go and how fast they need to do it.\n\nTo introduce my statement i believe that that one of the many great advantages to limiting car usage is that there will be less pollution. Based on source two Paris typically has more smog than any other European capital. Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter. Since everyone in paris stopped driving for a week the smog cleared enough to rescind the ban for odd numbered plates because they were fining people that had odd numbered plates. Many blamed diesel fuel but it couldve been a matter of different things but it was mostly from exhaust pipes and diesel fuel.\n\nThe next advantage of limiting car usage is that people become healthier because there not just sitting in there car seat. They actually have too walk around to get to where they need to go and walking is very healthy for your body and maintaining a good healthy body. Based on source 3 in Colombia there was a program where there was one car free day. One man said that it was a good opportunity to take away stress. That is very important. Stress does very harmful things to our body the more we can take away the better so if your walking around instead of in a car you have less stress so theres less problems with your body. Also because of this car free day bicycle paths have also been made so people can bike along paths and enjoy the beautiful nature this Earth gives to us.\n\nThe last advantage of limiting car usage is that there is no traffic jams so there is no major delay in where you need to go. Based on source one street parking is generally forbidden so if theres no cars then you also dont have to get fined. Hypothetically say that your on your way to work and theres a traffic jam. You have one extreamly important meeting to go to and if you miss it that could cost you your job. All because of a stupid traffic jam that you obvioulsy didnt mean to get in or you didnt cause. So if you limit car usage and everyone just wakes up a little earlier you can get to where you need to go on time and not get caught in a delay.\n\nThat is why fellow citizens that is a great idea to limit car usage. There are too many traffic jams. People need to get to where they need to go on time. Its a lot healthier for our bodies to walk places and when your healthier your happier and who doesnt love being happy. Last limiting car usage is a great idea because we dont want to pollute our great mother Earth that we were given for free to live on. We might as well take care of it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the \"Facial Action Coding System\" is valuable in classrooms. If the instructors know how the students are feeling emotionally, they would be able to critique their teaching in a way to make students more active.\n\nIf an instructor could tell how a student feels emotionally, if he or she is tired, or bored, the instructor would be able to change some of they ways he or she is teaching to make the students more active. If the student feels sad or angry the teacher could confront the student and try to solve the problem the student is having. In the story it says the computer can detect if a student is becoming bore or confused and it can modify the lesson so that the student may be able to understand it better. Although knowing that somebody knows how you feel at all times could be quite uncomfortable it could be an effective tool used in the classroom to help students understand the material better.\n\nI think that \"Facial Action Coding Systems\"could be a positive thing to have in classrooms. it could help teachers understand how their students are feeling in the classroom and what they should change in the wayway they teachthe material.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In article I going talk way libraries sensor books I going hit points I think subject But also give point view I feel books shelves Also way libraries handle matter presensoring books shelves I try give details taken shelf I think certain materials problem librarians keep closer eye reading But stopped looking review seeing good enough book child read This problem ways kids exposed material reading But children take stuff wrong way reading mature type book But get books watch reading Some ways handle problem get little extreme If take book shelf older person going read You ca nt another persons wants book But make special section types books young children get books This I think help problem I feel could also presensor books This help explain things way understand Plus improve way people feel books But also print two copies one mature audiance one younger one If would make improvement younger kids take information lke mature person say real life In conclusion I feel like I nuatral subject I think bad thing shelf library But I feell prevented way libraries run Just keep closer eye younger audiance Also try presensor make friendly younger audiance", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As time goes on the use of cars have greatly decreased. The car use in some places are actually limited. There's communities where stores and parks are built close enough to walk or bike to. Other places there's actually days where the use of cars are restricted and only buses or transits become the only transportation allowed on the road.\n\n\"Street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in this experiment new district...\" (Rosenthal,paragraph 2). This community even forbids anything involving cars, making streets less crowded and never having to look both ways to cross the street. This is only an experiment to take this all away, to some it's punishment. As a result, 70 percent of families in this community do not own cars.\n\nThis idea of no cars has spread all over the world. \"Paris enfoced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city\".(Duffer, paragraph 10). This city in France is banning the use of cars to reduce the amount of smog in the air. \"Diesel fuel was blamed..\"(Duffer, paragraph 16). Because this city prefers diesel over gasoline, there's more pollution in the air. Therefore needing to reduce the amount of car usage.\n\n\"In a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of Columbians hiked, biked, skated, took the buses to work during a car-free day...\" (Selsky, paragraph 20). There's even a day for this idea just to reduce the use of cars. \"These people are generating a revolutionary change..\"(Enrique Riera, Selsky, paragraph 26). Any participant of these places are supporting this idea as a positive revolution.\n\n\"recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by\".(Rosenthal, pargagraph 29). Fewer cars are being purchased so not many people are driving. Because not a large amount of people make their legal license a priority they choose to walk or take the bus. \"it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment...\"(Rosenthal, paragraph 34). Limiting the use of cars is positive physically, financially, culturally, and better for the enviornment.\n\nAs time goes on the use of cars have greatly decreased. Limiting the car use is becoming a revolution taking place all over the world. Think of using a bike or a new way of transporting to work one day. This is a whole new idea of life so get ready!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When new technology comes out it can always be a positive thing. That its better to have something than not to have it. having a computer that can determine if we are sad, happy, bored, etc. is pretty crazy. without this technology we probably wouldnt be able to determine that the Mona Lisa is prodomitly happy. That a computer can do something that humans do everyday when we look at someone.\n\nThat having the ability of computers that can read students faces, in my opinion is valuable and can be used in many ways.\n\nThere are many ways that the computer can be used, if someone were to put the computer in a everyday public school classroom. They can detect and figure out what learning style kids like. this can be implimented and put to use in classrooms around the world and help get kids more into school and want to try to get an education. This can make school more fun and more intresting for kids today. differetn classrooms can have different styles and you have a variety of kids per classroom and test to see what style the kids like. when the results come back teachers and staff can go over them and the more majority of kids that like a certian teaching style can be the style that is implimeanted in the schools today This is all done by seeing what facial emotions are used by the kids.\n\nAnother way that the ability of reading students emotions can help, is to have the ability detect how students are feeling and even when they are trying to hide how they are feeling. When you are a teenager you have lots of crazy and mixed feelings. Sometimes a student might go into a deep depression and his or her friends might not be able to detect the the fact of what they are feeling and they might do something to themselves that might not be a good thing. If you use this device and cna detect how they are feeling you could stop that student from harming his or her self from doing this. This can save lots of lives and stop death rates all around the world and help that student to get help and stop this from happening. This is all done from a technology that can read facial emotions and can be very useful and even save ones life.\n\nHaving this technology can be nice, but sometimes it cant always be right. If we use this technology it doesnt always mean that it can be helpful or can detect what really kids are thinking. Sometimes you can put on a brave face and show the world what really inside thats not what you are thinking. The computer migh pick up the brave face you are showing and say that you are happy but really you are having a bad day and you really arent happy. When you use this technology for schools and the computer detects the faces wrong then you have spent all of this money to have the computers detect how the faces of the kids are showing and the results really arent true then you have just wasted lots of time and that is not necessary to have. We dont really know what people are feeling. Mona lisa may not be 83 percent happy and 9 percent disgusted, etc. She may be 10 percent happy and 90 percent digusted, etc. there no good way to determine what she was really feeling at that time and in that picture.\n\nHaving the technology to read students emotional expressions can be helpful, but it determines how you use it and how you correct the results are. But having this technology isnt a bad thing. Its a way to determine what people are thinking without asking the person or being in that persons head. But with having technology that is able to read students faces and emotional expressions can be used and if used carefuly can help schools and other people today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that Facial Action Coding System is not useful, because humans have been able to do it since the dawn of man, why do computers need to as well? Sure, it can sense when a student is getting bored or confused, but a human could do the exact same thing. Dr. Huang says, \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is become confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor\", when an effective instructor would avoid making the students bored or confused entirely. \"If you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the nex ad will be different\", but if it were used in advertising to see if people likes the ad or not, it would intrude on peoples personal privacy by using their computers webcam to scan their faces. I don't know a single person that smiles when an ad appears anyway. This entire system of detecting peoples emotions is either not useful, or intruding upon a persons privacy, and we do not need it in our lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home Our Lives created mood calming author passionate said made happy mood parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today I eternally grateful Passionate Cuban music I adore day This quote shows mood cheerful calm The mood author created friendliness family friendship family people would join family house The author made mood like instilled enviroement like growing environment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a new and unique thing that has been dreamed about since the inception of the automobile itself, no longer is there the human error in driving. I for one, strongly support driverless cars. There are many reasons why there should be an allowance for driveless cars, but there are also some disadvantages.\n\nWith driveless cars, the room for human error is completely removed, we are not a precise as a computer with radar, sensors, other digital devices. We as humans can become distracted and unfocused when driving, but driveless cars cannot, greatly reducing the number of accidents.\n\nAlso, Google Car has been on the road since 2009 and has not had a single accident. Whereas there are hundreds of wrecks, accidents, and casulties due to human error. There are of course the posibility of glitches, malfuctions, and other bugs that may affect the system, but when propperly ironed out and taken care of by the manufacturers, it should provide a much safer expierience on the road.\n\nAnother reason is that all \"driverless\" cars still need a drive to some degree. This could be seen either as good or bad. I personally see it as good. You do not have robot cars rolling around the street with no supervision or abillity to override in case of a malfucntion in the computer controlling the vehicle. All the person in the vehicle needs to do is take over the wheel drive how we are currently.\n\nDriveless cars are part of the continuing and growing field of technology where there is rapid progress and advancements. It is part of an everchanging field that is full of constant innovations and changes. If a driveless car is not precise enough to drive through construction zones or the scene of an accident, it will be able to eventually due to how quickly technology evolves and builds upon itself. It will continue to expand in both predicable advancements and those we wouldn't have thought of.\n\nWhile there is some concern over whether we should allow driverless cars, I myself fully support them and their development for a number of reasons, such as the removal of human error, lack of accidents, requirement of a driver, and constant evolution. I believe that it is only a matter of time until what was considered fiction in the past becomes a reality in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using technology that reads emotions in a student classroom is good because its caculates emotion, recognize subtle facial movements, and can mirror a suggested emotion. According to the text, it states by weighing different units the software can identify mixed emotions. Like they use the Mona Lisa picture to measure mixed emotion and she was 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful and 2% angry, well at least thats what the computer software says. The software can also recognize subtle facial movements like if you smile when an ads apears they computer will send similar ads and if you frown then they will change the ad. Then it's good for students because the computer could recognize when a student is becoming bored. That means it would modify the lesson like an effective human instructor. If the computer can act like a human bein that would be good because most human communication is nonverbal. Also the computer can mirror a suggested emotion. The computer knows a face that looks happy. The computer knows the muscular action units of the face. Like the article says \"you tighten your lips to show anger\", that is the same angry face that could be used to a video game. So, yes this type of technology would be great to use in a school because it calculates emotion, recognize facial movements, and could mirror imagery.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Unmasking the face on Mars??\n\nFace on Mars??? The face on mars is just a natural landform. Mars has plenty of landforms and its normal for landforms to creat a shape or face. Just because it makes a face on a planet doesn't mean aliens had anything to do with it. Under paragraph 5 you see a photograph of the face and many landforns surrounding it, so as you can see many landforms stand out on Mars.\n\nIn paragraph 3 it says (shadoes gave the landform eyes,a mouth,and nose) so its a landform with a face but the shadows make up the face. NASA has been studying this for a long time,but for what ?, as you bcan see its just a landform not a face.\n\nIn paragraph 7 it clearly says(thousands of web surfers were waiting when the image on the JPL website but when it appeared it revealed just a natural landform.). There was no momument after all. So in conclusion with this evidence, you can clearly see that its just a landform and not a alien monument.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often argued that young people should participate in voluntary work in their leisure time because this may provide a positive impact on the youth and society . In my opinion , I completely agree with this view and think that there are many useful aspects to this approach .\r\n\r\nFirstly , it is well known that voluntary activities help teenagers to improve rapidly their personalities .In other words , those young people ,who decide to leave their comfort zone and participate in uncomfortable unpaid work, meet different mentalities and stop be timid and introverted people. Moreover , they introduce themselves to novel ideas and new skills and therefore they become more confident and mature . For example, research shows that adolescents ,who are more sociable and communicate with many types of people in their daily life ,develop strong personalities and can achieve their goals in the future . That's why voluntary work makes teenagers able to have a wonderful personality .\r\n\r\nSecondly , I believe that this form of activity can bring economic growth . To put it differently , If every teenager contributes to the unpaid community work in their free time , the numbers of paid workers , who have a mission to do the same tasks that will be done by the youngers , can show a decrease over time . Consequently , this can help the government to save more money and use it in other sectors . Thus , the free activities doing by adolescents present a valuable impact on the community . \r\n\r\nIn conclusion , I strongly believe that voluntary work should be an official activity for teenagers because it offers plenty of merits to them and society .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This technology is nessarily needed in a classroom. It is just unnecessary for the use of scanning emotions in an educational work place. There is just no reason for the use of this technology in a cassroom.\n\nfirst of all, this technology could be a verry expensive project to complete and to have utalised in a classroom. Which can even take years to be perfected. If it is even going to ever be perfected to where it can be used pubicaly in a classroom setting.\n\nSecondly there is simply no uses i can think of now where it can be useful and not just a waste of money. Also this may be an invasion of privacy to many people because of the scanning software scanning the faces of children.\n\nIn conlcusion this invention may be useful but as of now i can not seem to find a real reason to use this an a classroom setting at all. Mabye there will soon be a new wat that this software can be used effefctively but untill then it just seems useless and not needed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people argue that to become prosperous, growing nations are responsible for contaminating the atmosphere and consider it is an unavoidable factor. This essay disagrees that a country cannot grow without creating pollution and affecting its surroundings. Firstly, this essay will discuss about the possibilities of development with the use of eco-friendly system and followed by tree plantation is spite of industrialization at large extent.\nTo begin with, the development can also be possible with the adoption of eco-friendly techniques. There is no doubt that in the race of becoming privileged, most of the nations are adopting cheapest sources like fossil fuels for their convenience.Conversely, they can use renewable sources of energy such as solar systems, wind power plants, et cetera for the generation of energy. Even though the maintenance and implementation of such resources are expensive, but are pollution free. For instance, economically rich nations such as the USA, the UK, Canada, Australia and Dubai adopt advanced methods of technology by prioritizing their environment than latest inventions.\nOn the other hand, despite of industrialization, large number of tree plantation can also help in eliminating the problems related to air pollution. In other words, high demand of technology sometimes leads to ecological disturbances due to emission of toxic chemicals likes nitrous oxide, methane gas, et cetera from the chimneys of industries. To eliminate such harmful effects of technology, heavy mass of trees should be planted to improve the air quality. The survey, conducted by The Times India stated that in the international index of air quality, most of the rich countries are in the top list among those countries which are implementing environmental friendly methods in the research of advanced developments.\nIn conclusion, most people thought that growing nation cannot become wealthy without harming their surroundings. However, to prevent from the dangerous effects of non-renewable resources, people can move towards an environmentally friendly system like solar power plants, to generate power. Additionally, growing a large number of trees is the best way to avoid destruction of environment in modern industrialization era.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar chart illustrates the information on the number of people who are using mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in 7 different countries.\nOverall, the total number of mobile phones per 100 people are higher than land line. Among the countries, Italy is one of the country that uses the highest number of mobile phones per 100 people.\nMore specifically, 90 phones are used per 100 people in Italy, followed by Sweden and the UK at close to 90 and 85 phones respectively. From the figure, mobile phones were least popular in Canada, approximately 40 per cent of the people carry mobile phones which the percentage of mobile phone users are lower than one-half users in Italy.\nOn the other hand, land lines are mostly loved in Denmark at 85 and 90 per cent. However, most other countries remain between 55 to 70 per cent. Interestingly, Italy has the least proportion of users having just over 40 phones per 100 people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I like many people age love sit front computer explore s wonders But mean I spend whole life like others So I see much computer time It made kids age aggressive health problems care even less environment More kids falling traps Too much computer time make even nicest person extremely aggressive I know past experience bother people obsession snap yell even start swearing maybe get violent If someone stays late computer next day could mean re cranky lack sleep This aggression cause others get aggressive response lead verbal physical fight hopefully nobody wants Another issue much computer time cause even health issues Staying inside day keep people getting neccessary amount vitamin need vital nutricious vitamin comes sun Not getting enough vitamin throughout person s childhood result getting illness called later life never truly goes away hinders people things love Too much computer time also means people nt getting enough exercise way eat two things add making person obeie Others want get proper amount exercise eat right time want become obeisce anorexia Neither weight problems good proving point health issues much computer time The issue I read people become even less caring environment Some big technology companies sidestep around environmental protection laws find cheaper ways make products thing one cares No one cares long get newer better piece technology Everyone keep protecting companies get want satisfy craving computers Now I m saying computer time bad I m trying prove much bad That much computer time people become aggresive health issues become even less caring environment Therefore I urge write article newspaper effects much computer time make known everyone city It might help us make better future", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports this idea in the passage with all of the evidence he has put in the passage. the author stated that studying venus is worth it despite the danger.\n\nIn the passage the author stated a lot of intresting facts and statments about NASA and venus. This passage held a lot of information about venus such as \"Venus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star,\" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amature stargazer to spot. this was stated in paragraph 1\n\nIn the passage it is also stated that The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study veus. This is stated in paragraph 5 not only does it state plenty of information about venus and NASA it also stated how going and exploring venus would be worth it in paragraph 6 it is stated that \"However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmasphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\n\nOn top of it stating the facts about NASA and Venus it stated that not only do you have to go in a space ship to see Venus but you have to physically be on the planet to see its full scale potential because as it stated in paragrpah 6 most forms of light cannot penetrate the atmaspghere and most photography is innefective. so you have to be physically be standing on the planet to see all of it fully.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting mid summer California desert It hot humid dry There lack water bag He trip going lost rough rigorous roads", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This article titled \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" makes the claim that humanity should explore Venus despite many of the difficulties that come along with it. Whether or not this is true, the author does not support this claim very well. There are many holes in this argument that are relatively easy to spot.\n\nThe first issue with the article is that it doesn't explain all of the issues that could come with exploring Venus, specifically financial issues. Although the article does a good job of explaining why it may be difficult to explore Venus, it does not explain the financial concerns of exploring Venus. The article should be able to tell the reader how big NASA's budget really is, and also hypothetically how much money it would cost them to explore Venus. Without acknowledging the fiscal concerns of exploring Venus, the author has left a hole in his or her argument. The author likes to point out the different types of technology that NASA can create to explore Venus, but the author doesn't explaing how much of a dent this new technology would put into NASA's budget. A well written article would have laid out how much exploring Venus would cost, and then would have explained why the financial expenses are worth the cost. Instead, by not adressing the fiscal concerns of the exploration of Venus, the reader is left wondering what the true consequences of exploring Venus really are.\n\nThe second problem with this article is that it does not address what NASA would even do if and when they got there. No where in the article does it mention what we could do on Venus even if we were able to study Venus from up close. The article explains that NASA could get a \"blimp-like vehicle\" to hover around 30 miles above Venus and study it from a distance. However, in the very next paragraph the author dismisses this idea and explains why it is not a viable option. Then, in paragraph seven the author explains what we could use to explore Venus, but still fails to explain how exactly this could be acheived. Without presenting a viable option for exploring Venus, the author is left wondering how exactly someone would go about doing this.\n\nThe final issue with this article is that it does not explain what the true benefits of studying Venus really are. The only time the author even remotely mentions the benefits of exploring Venus is in paragraph four. Although the author only really adresses this issue by saying Venus used to be like Earth, and saying that Venus is the closest planet to Earth. Although the second point is true, and the author explains that point well, the first point doesn't really explain the benefits of exploring Venus. The author should address why studying a planet like Earth is beneficial. Instead the reader is left wondering why we should even be exploring Venus in the first place. If there is no viable reason to explore Venus, then there should be no motive to explore Venus. What makes this worse is that at the end of paragraph four the author says \"The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable.\" Instead of strengthening his or her flimsy argument, the author instead tries to simply tell the reader that it is an indisputable fact that there is value in exploring Venus. Without any evidence of exploring Venus being beneficial, the whole article crumbles. The claim that humanity should explore Venus despite the difficulties that come with it falls apart because there is no rational explanation for why exploration would help anyone in the first place.\n\nIn conclusion, the article does not support its claim very well. The author fails to address many points that are crucial to the reader's perception of the issue. The author makes a claim, but fails to support it with substantial evidence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Self driving cars are a step into the future that is vital. For so long we have had to put up with the hassle of driving from place to place that it sometimes gets old. Self driving cars are more than just for acomidation or a fine example of how well off you are, they help with many things such as scientific understanding of computerization, fuel consumption and waste, as well as those who are visually impared or have any other kind of dissability that prevent them from driving. We as a nation must work together to bring notice to the regulaters who will not allow testing of Self atonomous driving cars because without the testing we will not be able to help that pregnant neighbor get to the hispital to deliver her baby in time, or help our grand parents get to a crucial doctors appointment, or simiply enjoy the clean and emmition free enviroment with our very own family. These and many other things are possible if we bring attention to regulaters and let car manufacturers work together to come up with the perfect car. I'm not saying it will be easy or quick because that is simpily not true, but together and with our needs we can make it happen. We really do need self drving cars it is only a process of advancement that should not be taken out of the equation of scientific evolution.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author has a good reasoning as to why is worth studying Venus, he gives really good points and ideas that only lots of research and maybe someone that really knows about planets would know. The person who wrote this has good ideas and points as to how we could be able to investigate and visit venus in a safe way even though it might seem impossible.\n\nIn the passage we are told how Venus is a very unique planet like for example is sometimes called the \"Evenign Star\" because is one of the first night lights you see, but Venus is not a start, it really is just a planet and can be seen from earth and it can be very challenging to examine more closely. One of the reason why it might be worthy studying Venus is just the fact that it very similar to Earth in the way that they have really similar density as size and even closets in distance, but this doesnt mean that the weather conditions are the same in both planets since Venus is the second planet closest to the sun, but there might be chances that in Venus there had been some form of life like in earth a long time ago.\n\nI think that the main reason that the author thinks its worthy to study Venus is because on its surface it looks like once it was like earth like in the passage says \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" This gives the idea that once there was some form of life in Venus but we would never be able to know if we dont make an effort on studying this planet, we have the resources and we could use them, there might be a way to change the atmosphere and make it a planet that we could visit often to maybe text new things instead of testing them in earth so that disasters caused by men dont happen and maybe even try to fix our planet in some way knowing that there is somewhere where things that are harmful here can be done somewhere else and maybe even more discoveries and things could be made.\n\nThere are ways that we could visit Venus and make it easier for us, there are some challenges presented like 97% of the atmosphere is carbon dioxide and maybe even more challenging would be the clouds of corrosive sulfuric acid in venus atmospehre, there are even more extreme conditions in the planets surface like the temperature that is over 800 degreees Fahrenheit or the fact that the pressure is more than 90 times greater than what we experience on earth, conditions are far mre extreme on Venus than Earth but there are things that can be done and might be helpul to study this planet to some extend even tho we would also have to have in mind some other things that could kame it difficult like weather, erupting volcanoes, earthquakes and even frequent lightining.\n\nIn conclusion I think that the author makes a good point as to why is worthy to visit Venus and try our best to study it, there might be things that might be facinating and we dont know about because we don't dare to study this planet, we could discover things we didn't have idea about and could potentially change our lifes in some way, and maybe could even help with some problems on Earth right now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit Joe Kurmaskie setting affects negatively bicycle hot area water whatsoever like quote I got hands knees working handle rusted water pump strength A tar like substance ozzed out In quote cyclist finally thinks found water pump really gets nothing Also another negative thing thought never going get going end got got water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe, that a high petrol price could decrease air pollution. In my perspective, this could be a good measure for restricting the number of vehicles, furthermore, the number of unneeded trips would be shrunk too. All of this, no doubt, could bring a positive influence to the environment. \r\n\r\nIn the last decades, the figure for cars dramatically increased, which accordingly caused negative influences on nature. According to data, a century ago, when the number of cars was much less than now, ecological disaster was not so obvious. This improves the fact, that the sum of vehicles with gasoline engines and harmful emissions to the atmosphere are directly proportional. If the value of carbon dioxide grew further, the world would face irreparable nature consequences in the near future. Currently, an environmental situation demands to do decisive steps, one of them could be an increase in the cost of fuel. For instance, in Turkey the amount of cars per capita is very low, and, one of the reasons is the price of petrol, which is at a very high level.\r\n\r\nRecently researches show, that in wealthy countries, an average person has done approximately two unnecessary trips during the year. If counted all fuel consumption on that trips, there would be nearly 2 billion gallons of petrol per year. Mentioned approach, with high probability, could contribute to the rise of ticket prices, and, this would be lead to a decrease in travel activity. Even though some sectors could be suffered, like tourism and transport, the positive impact as a whole is more significant. Suffered sectors of economics could receive the authorities' support from the government revenue, collected as a difference between the real and established price of fuel. This could minimize the bad said of that method. \r\n\r\nTaking the above-mentioned into account, despite some negative impacts, this suggested procedure could significantly decrease harmful atmospheric emissions. In my opinion, this method could become one of the main stages in the way of protecting the earth from global warming.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You all should join the Seagoing Cowboys group because in paragraph nine it says that being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke, it opened up the world to him. Paragraph nine also states that Luke said \"It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\" If you were to join the Seagoing Cowboys you would be sure to highly to enjoy it! Here are a few reasons about why you might reconsider your thoughts.\n\nLuke was just an ordinary boy who was working two jobs. In paragraph one it states that Luke's friend Don Reist invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Paragraph one also stated that Luke couldn't pass up the offer becasue it was an opportunity of a lifetime. In paragraph two it states that Luke and Don signed up to be apart of the Seagoing Cowboys. Because of Luke and Don signing up for the Seagoing Cowboys they got many opportunities to cross the seas.\n\nAnother reason why some of you should join the Seagoing Cowboys is because you could be a small-town boy or girl like Luke in paragraph five, and expirience many amazing opportunities if you just take the chance and say yes. If youn think that all you will do is stay on a boat and go somewhere and then leave, then get back on the boat and do the same thing you are wrong. In paragraph five Luke states \"Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China.\" To a lot of people that is really cool because a lot of people woud love to vist China and Europe and have a great time.\n\nLast but not least, you should join the Seagoing Cowboys because you would be surrounded with a ton of great people. In paragraph eight it states that Luke found time to have fun on board. It also states that the cowboys played baseball and volleyball games so it will be sure that you will have fun! But only if you join the Seagoing Cowboys because if you don't you will miss out on a lot of fun things other than just work. Joining the Seagoing Cowboys is something you don't want to miss out on so you better come and sign up now!\n\nThat is why I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys because it is a very big opportunity of a lifetime, something some people wouldn't want to miss out on. The Seagoing Cowboys want you to join and they don't want you to think thatb you are just doing work they want you to also have fun!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the author that evaluates how well the author supports the idea that studying venus is a worth pursuit despite the danger. by saying \" nasa is working on other approaches to studying venus for example some simplified electronis made of silicoin carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating\".\n\nThis evidence support my claim because the people are studying for big things like how well studying venus is a worthy persuit.\n\nAnother claim that evalutes how well the author supports the idea that studying venus is a worth pursuit despite. In paragraph 8 it says\" striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has vaule. Not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself.\n\nwhich exsplain that studying venus is a worth pursuit despite.\n\nThe conclusion I have about \" the challenge of exploring venus \" was . It seem like if u study it its a good thing . because its very important to nasa it says that in the reading . so maybe if u do it you would be succesful.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story like let readers know daughter saeng would come back take test loves Garden sotherefore forget spring", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would like our election to be cast on popular vote. It would make more sense for us to be able to elect our president by what everyone thinks and not the electoral college because many things can go wrong. The votes in electoral college don't make sense big states have more votes then the little ones so the candidates focus on big states and the other ones are left out because they have two or three votes. Thats why I think we need a different system or just cast it on popular vote.\n\nJust like the 2000's election Bush won that by getting the bigger states when Gore should've won it because he had more popular votes. The electoral college makes no sense and should be taken down. Many people disagree with the electoral college and know its a big scam for the presidents to win by losing. Thats why it should be casted on popular so its fair for people and not on the size of your state.\n\nThe electoral college is an outdated, unfair system on voting. It shouldn't be about the state but what all of the country thinks. Popular vote is the best way to caculate who should be president and who not to be. Our nation would be better off with a new system because the electoral college is getting outdated and isn't a good way to vote for who leads our country. We need a new system because in several places they never seen a candidate or ad to vote in 2000 campaign. Those states didn't see anything because of their electoral votes are small compared to those of the bigger states.\n\nAlso you can tie the votes in electoral votes and then we'd have to worry about the vote our House of Representatives would give us. That could be a disaster for us to worry about. Just like Nixon and Clinton had 43 percent of popular vote but winning in the electoral college. Its not fair for most people and it doesn't make sense how he can win but still be losing at the same time. I wouldn't vote until this system is changed because it is completly unfair.\n\nThe electoral college is an unfair system that no one wants anymore. We can change our ways of voting so it'll be more fair and it matters on our country's thoughts not our states. Popular vote seems more reasonable and a better way for us to find a good leader. Thats why i think it should be casted on popular vote instead of the electoral college and the United States of America would be better off with what our whole country thinks instead of our size because we represent freedom and need to prove it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "During construction Empire State Building s dirigible dock three major obstacles wind structure safety The wind obvious flaw landing dock rough wind currents top building Landing perfectly dock one thing staying impossible would whipped around ORGANIZATION dirigible Los Angeles feared wind would blow dirigible sharp spires buildings area would puncture shell paragraph problem structuring mast hold balloon would also become structural obstical could nt simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof paragraph To get structure sound enough land dirigible would sixty thousand dollars worth modifications frameworkLastly landing huge metal balloon ontop largest skyscraper millions citydwellers even knew balloons highly flamable one reasons mooring mast nt work Although two attempts landing neither succeeded mast decoration", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The empire State Building builders faced different obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock The builders first learn mooring lines They consulted experts taking tours equipment mooring operations learn first hand The builders also worry frame Empire State Building The frame would modified strengthened accomodate new situation This meant builders would go back work frame Attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building caused builders face different obstacles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you buy a driverless car? The negative aspect in driving driverless cars is that they need lots of senors, they cant help get througth road work or traffic and the technology can fail.\n\nManufactures are starting to use smart cars. Smart cars that are considered driveless. Theses smart cars needs lots of sensors that makes then able to drive without the company of humans. Google has made a driverless car that has senors on the wheels of the car and on the roof of the car. Even though senors have been around since the 1980's and have advanced since then, the senors that are on the brakes of the car can reduce the power in your engine.the senors reduce the engine because it takes a lot of power on your car. you need the power you can get from your engine just in case you're in a bad sitution. Not only driveless cars need lots of senors they arent able to help through nagativing through road work and heavy traffic.\n\nDriveless cars arent really driverless when you think about it. Driverless cars need the assitanants of humans to pull out of a driveway. They also need help with heavy traffic issues. Driverless cars can not go through roadwork areas without humans navating them through it. Driverless cars arent that much help when it comes to things it should know how to do.Whats the point of having a driverless car if it cant help you through traffic and others thing pretaining to driving? Not only they cant help youin traffic or road work , What if the technology fails?\n\nIn the article the authour talks about how the technology can fail.\n\nIn traffic laws it says nothing about how if your computer in your fails during a crash, it talks about how the driver iss responisble for the car and not being able to control it. In the article it says ,\" Traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. In some states driverless cars are already considered illegal for that reason. Who would be responsible if theres a crash , the driver or the manufacture? Its better to limit the use of driverless cars because cars who be more safe in the control of a human driver.\n\nIts better not to have driverless cars. It will much safer for people to not have driverless cars because it would most likely have a high number of car crashes and injured people if a car didnt have an actul driver behide the wheel.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Artificially intelligent bots are progressively replacing humans in the workforce. While it is possible that all menial jobs will eventually be done by robots, it is unlikely that the tasks that require human contact will be taken over. This essay will discuss why eventually only very few job roles will be carried out by people.\r\n\r\nRobots may eventually replace all human labour that does not require specific and complex human skills. Many companies will turn to artificial intelligence because it is far less expensive than hiring, training and employing a human. In supermarkets in Australia, for example, many cashiers have been replaced by automated stations that cost far less than employees. In addition, these automated stations work around the clock and require no holidays or holiday pay. For these reasons, job positions that can be replaced by robotic intelligence will be replaced.\r\n\r\nConversely, there is some human work that cannot be replaced because robots will never achieve the capacity to do them. Put simply, some professions require a 'human touch.' These tasks include psychology, education, medicine and social work to name but a few. For instance, the way psychiatrists listen and understand one's emotional trauma, it is unlikely for automated bots to feel that way. Artificially intelligent machines will never be able to achieve what has taken social evolution hundreds and thousands of years to achieve.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is increasingly likely that robots will end most human employment. Unskilled labour will eventually be done entirely by robots; however, sophisticated jobs that require human-specific skills will always exist. Therefore, very few jobs will be safe in an increasingly artificially intelligent workforce.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that keeping electoral college would be a great idea for many reasons, we have had the electoral college for many years now and it has been great it has many good benifits to it. but many people are against it they believe there vocies aren't being heard but it is just be revised by that people that know what is best for the country.\n\nOne of the reasons the electoral college must stay is that the will be a certainty of the outcomes, they will know exacty what will be coming out as a result instead of being uncertain for example(source 1) Obama recived 6.1 percent from the electoral vote and 51.3 percent for the poplar votes. It was an uncertain vote because the college don't know what the people would pick as a result. but many people think that it should be like that because they are voting for a slate of elector and not for president.(sourse 2)\n\nAnother good reason why the elctoral college is a good idea is that it balances the state votes. The states that are larger such as Texas and california have a much larger population so the votes would be larger but the electoral college balances out and the smaller states such as new jersey and main have a small population so the votes wold be smaller. The larger states get more attention from the presidential candidates than the smaller states, so the electoral college balences it out.(sourse 3)\n\nAlso the electoral college avoids run-off elections. The electoral college give more for a cleary response, for example,(sourse 3) nixon in 1968 and clinton both had 43 percent plurlity of popular votes but the electoral votes gave them a more accurate result of 301 nixon and 370 cliton. the electoral college gave a more accurate result of who sould of win the election.\n\nThat's why I think that the electoral college is better it gives certainty of outcome, balances out the big states, and avoids run-off elections. While popular vote does give us the same certainty.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his idea by plans,and facts. At first he mainly talkes about where Venus located in the planet orbit and how Venus is a challenging place to explore. Then he says Venus and Earth are similar to each other by haveing same density, size, and distance. They sent many space ships to Venus, all got destroyed by the enviroment of Venus most they lived was a few hours.\n\nHe decribes how the planet enviroment of the planet is really hot and how its 97% carbon dioxide covers Venus. there alot of natural disaster like eathquakes, and erupting volcanoes, and lighting strikes. They said in paragraph 4 how Venus could of been the most earth like planet. Venus also has many earths land characteristics.\n\nVenus has bad conditions for humans but it is survivable. NASA is working on a silicon carbide technology thats been tested in a chamber thats similar to Vensus enviroment. There looking at useing mechanical thing because it more resistent to pressure, heat and other forces.\n\nIf they can get to Venus succesfully then they will have an idea on the other planets.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to travel the world, and help people? If you join Seagoing Cowboys Program you can do both. This program help the people who have been effected by World War II.We help them by sailing cattle boats across the sea. You should be a Seagoing Cowboy for these reasons in the following.\n\nThe first reason you should be a Seagoing Cowboy is you can travel the world. Luke Bomberger said that \" The cattle boat trips were an unbelievable oportunity for a small town boy\". Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China. He also said that\n\n\"Besides helping people, I had the side benifit of seeing Europe and China. But to see the Acropolis in Greese was special.\"\n\nThe last reason you should join is you can help a lot of people. What if you were one of the people that needed help? They would want you to join too! They would not get help if people did not join. Luke said that \" It made me more aware of people of other countries in need.\" Would you want find that awareness too?\n\nSight seeing and helping people are why you should be in the Seagoing Cowboys Program. Seagoing Cowboys are amazing ar'nt they? It would be really fun to be a Seagoing Cowboy. Would you like to be a Seagoing cowboy? It seems like a lot of fun does is'nt!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am going for driverless cars, I honestly think that this pretty cool. Having cars that can drive themselfs is a really good idea. In this passage the author gave a lot of good reasons why they should have and keep making driverless cars. For one people don't have to drive and some people hate driving. Another thing is that this type of car drove more than half a million miles with out a crash. One last thing is that it's just safer and I'll explain why\n\nFor a fact I know so many people who hate driving or driving for a long period of time. For example my whole family it says here \"woudn't drivers get bored?\" most likely not and if they do if you want to drive you can. \"Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over.' So that being said if you want to drive you can it turns right off. If you get bored then start driving.\n\nAnother reason why I am going for driverless cars is that it has drove so many miles without crashing. Which is really cool, because today we have so many accident and they don't even drive that far and people are driving. If this car can go 500,000 miles without crashing just think about how less the crash percentage will go down. This car is just so much easier to handle and drive that's my opinion.\n\nOne more reason is that it's just safer honestly. I'm going to tell you why, you know that so many people text and drive right? Well if you have to read an important text your not the one who is driving are you no so there for it's just so much safer. You shouldn't have your phone in the first place but just in case. Also if you are on your phone and your not paying attention there are signals in the car if there is danger the seats vibrate or the windows flash so you will know. That's what I like about these cars there always one step ahead of you.\n\nNow that you have read this I hope you agree with me or get my point about these cars. These are just a few reasons why I am for it. I'm not saying you have to agree but I really hope you do. These cars are safer and way easier so drive and to handle. Just think about it, do you like this type of car. If you do it says they will try to have them by 2020 so go ahead and buy one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever seen crazy person walking around saying odd unique theories Everybody different opinion think right It alright different beleifs shouldnt mean people shouldnt seek understand others I beleive censorship libraries important people need seek understand stubborn look different perspectives people get along easier Many different materials found libraries censored others Many times reason books magazines censored portray strong ideas theories People right speech able show others beleive need make sure showing know hurting anyone else Explicit movies music bad seeking understand They good rating systems still ignorant others Many people simply take ideas others wrong way People trouble looking things different perspectives cause trouble If people would seek understand conflicts different beleifs would common When people different perspectives knowledgable various opionions Some people stubborn They choose beleive ideas refuse listen anyone else s Being stubborn opposite seeking understand If people less stubborn could see perspectives become aware others felt When people stubborn hard others deal get along well others In conlusion I think censorship important I think reasons censor things equally important well If people understanding others could censorship things agrivate people We would also less censorship people try spread ideas If people sought understand ooked different perspectives stubborn would get along much better", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Thses driverless cars shouldn't be develop, Because they are driverless and never know what might happen. It is control by computer so something can go wrong and hurt the person that is in the car. Accident happen once in a while but driverless cars isn't really safe for humananity for this generation. Maybe in the future when we gain more tecnology, then we can try to use the driverless cars. Many companies could try to develop the compter driver cars but they should test the cars untill it is 100% sure that the cars are safe for people to ride.\n\nOne good thing about the driverless car is that the person who is riding the car can drive too.When there is so issue with the car and the driver could take over the wheel and start driving, which will make the person riding safer.Sensor are also good, but can the computer really take over the car and keep the passenger safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Adventure Of A Life Time\n\nCome and join. and Be a seagoing cowboy. You can do so many things like see amazing sights,meet new people,and have fun all when being a seagoing cowboy. Come on an adventure with me and the other seagoing cowboys.Its an opportunity of a lifetime.\n\nI saw so many amazing sights and I got to do so many things. I got to take a gondola ride in Venice,Italy. As well as seeing Europe and China. I found time to have fun aboard the ship. The cowboys and I played baseball and vollyball games. Along with table tenis tournaments and many more things. I had more fun than you could\n\never belive.\n\nI met so many nice and caring seacowboys. I was so glad that I accepted my friend,Don, on his offer\n\nto go to Europe. I met people from all over the world. It even led my family to host a number of internatiomnal students and exchange visitors for many years. If you go you could to.\n\nI had so much fun being a seagoing cowboy. Doing all those things made me develope into the man I am today. It opened up the world to me. Im so glad that I got the oppertunity to be a seagoing cowboy. I even made nine trips by the time i was discharged\n\nbecause I had so much fun!\n\nI hope you become a seagoing cowbot because it was an experiance that changed my life and made me understand so much more things\n\nto life.I saw everything that I could possibly see in our world. This is an adventure that\n\nI will neverforget. Come if you would like to experiance the unknown.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays people live in a fast growing environment and society desires equility in every aspect of their life. However, there are some jobs that are more suitable for males whereas others are tend to be done by females.\r\n\r\n Some professions are meant only for man. Due to their physical advantages in comparison with womam, such occupations as builder or charcoal digger cannot be taken by ladies. Moreover, boys are far more stress resistant. For instance, if a lady had gone under the earth to dig a charcoal, the adverse working conditions would have had alarming consequences on her future health. Ladies have to be extremely careful, because any negative influence may possibly make her future birthgiving unreal and they more vulnarable. Even though, at present days girls are free to work wherever they want, it is not easy for them to get such jobs in order of lack of strenght and stamina.\r\n\r\n Without a doubt, there are a number of jobs that are more suitable for women. Due to spesific abilities and psycological differences from males, females are far better in secrutary or personal services. Furthermore, girls have more tender personalities, as a result, that helps them in numerous situations. For example, female host in a restaurant or hotel may attract more customer than male, because she might be more caring. Although a wide range of \"females\" occupations may be done by man such as nails professionalist or underewear cosultant in Victoria's Secret shop, still majority of woman would ask for help a girl because it is more convenient.\r\n\r\n Overall, some physically hard jobs must be done only by man and some, definitely, are better for ladies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to know what your friend really feels when they say their okay, or that they're fine? In this article I have learned that reading facal expressions will actualy be very helpful. This software can be are break through on some criminal investigations, can be use to prove a point with your freinds, and who knows what else.\n\nThe author states that the machine software can't be ran on any normal computer which sucks, but it can tell you in percentage how happy, suprised, angry, sad, fear, and digust just by one picture. Maybe they even have the ablity to read your expressions through a video. People can show a varying degree of expressions but this computer program can decode your face easily. The author also states that human eye can sometimes have trouble picking out each expression. It would be very helpful for teachers, so they can see the expressions on their students face, and be able to tell if, he or she, should change his way of teaching to bring the classroom more joy or intrest. It is also proven that making a emotion can make you feel that emotion. This program can be are out break onto the science of emotions, and finding out what kinds there are, how close a persentage can be, what the average emotion is for people, this could be a world wide help if this takes off.\n\nShould people want this? Do you feel as this as very useful, or even fun to try out? Maybe even try it on your self to see what you can figure out about yourself. Lets make a breka through for emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspars recently brought attendchon people use computers My three arugment tach hand eye coordination give people ability learn far away places people even allow People talk line people tachs people handeye coordination people type kyebord ther type kyebord faster faster Mach people coordinion first get used typeing start typeins fast last type fast give handeye coordinion Useins computers give people ability learn far away Places people could google people places show lot wedsite go one wedsite type person name state show places person Computers give people ability talk people place like aim myspace face book people could play games talk time computer poplure time people mack wedsite I think people use computer far lot like three attenchon people use computer three reson tach hand Coordination give people ability learn abount far away places people even allow people talk online withe people I sajust people use computer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education is continuously changing, as all educators and students know. Though schools think they have done everything they can to make the school experience more beneficial to everyone; such as having ipads so students no longer have to be burdened with excessive books, or putting more electives out that students actually enjoy. Education is in a very revolutionary era right now, but everyone is thinking, what else could they really do? That is when facial expression technology comes into play.\n\nFacial expression recognition technology is still a fairly new idea, so it may be a long time before we see it in any classrooms yet, with that being said, it is a revolutionary idea that helps computers recognize how a human is feeling. Dr. Huang is the creator of this technology along side Prof. Nicu Sebe of the university of Ansterdam. This technology was made so that computers and humans could have better communication, in paragraph 6, the reader is presented with the idea that if you saw a web ad that you disliked your computer could recognize that by the frown on your face and not show something similar to that, and vice versa.\n\nSo what could this technology do for schools? Students would be able to express they needed help without even raising a finger. The author displays in paragraph six that they too have thought about the idea that this could really change schools, for example, if a student is watching a video online for help and isn't understanding still, the computer could recognize the students unhappiness and switch the learning style of the video until the student is satisfied. With that in mind, teachers would also no longer have to worry about embarassing a student by asking if they need extra help, or worrying that a student is too scared to ask for help in fear of its peers, that will be eliminated with this technology by recognizing the smallest sign of discomfort. Technology is the future, and with this invention it shows that the education system will not fail and only get better as time goes on, not only in America, but universally.\n\n\"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal\" Dr. Huang explains in paragraph four, proving that this would be able to be used everywhere. The entire world could use this technology without needing to wait for their countries version to come out because there would be no language barrier,it is working off of nonverbal cues that are universally known and never-changing. technology like this would spread like a wildfire\n\nand schools all over the world would find use for this, if not in the everyday classroom, then the advanced and special needs classrooms. Though it is crazy to think, one day teachers may no longer be needed because of technology like this, making the learning experience more personal and less guarded at all times, which every student wants.\n\nTechnology is the future, it will always be there and will constantly keep evolving. With new inventions such as the facial expression recognizer it shows that technology will continue to make life easier and learning better. In years to come it is hoped that we will have these revolutionary machines in every school universally, anything to make learning better for the students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Green favorite colorLaughter indulging part life variety people enjoy enjoy Humor happens infectious The sound roaring laughter far contagious cough sniffle sneeze When laughter shared upon one another binds people together increases happiness intimacy Having pick one million laughter memories I nearly impossible decide every moment I spend opening mouth bursting hahaha joy excitement I try indulge person I spent exact memory happened It many us one enthusiastic times twelve months year I going hosting pool party friends I needed clean happened awfully disgusting year long seasons weather decided bring I nt think would much deal way I would able host party parents permission know well enough I average typical teenage girl probably texts texts day So since I ca nt keep white somewhat sweaty hands phone already feeling happens next If taught I dropped Your absolutely wrong Not surprisingly cleaning pool one hour I finally finished I texted boyfriend telling pool longer green anymore He replied I questioned I sent wrong message wrong person I checked history turns I wrote poop longer green anymore I literally mortified I nt know emotion feel expect later day I decided pretend nt happen anymore So later day pool party started Everyone showed looked weird way usual I ecstatic pumped favorite song favorite singer As everyone showed present bag hand I wondered brought presents nt anybody s birthday casual pool party welcome everyone s favorite season So I asked question best friend told CAPS know nobody s birthday texted us telling us green poop feeling well went buy I petrified honest actually laughing insanely hard So I stood front guest told really happened laughed historically Without exception kept party going I eventually saw boyfriend coming I walked laugh compassion nt mention one word happened Once party became dawn decided bonfire get cozy loved one us friends bond one another You guess happened next began talk happened earlier I honestly say I nt think I laughed hard fifteen years alive Rapidly curfew almost expired day friends left made nickname CAPS funniest part story I never forget friends left boyfriend decided take get burger local also known best hamburgers town As finished eating mother came along baby boy I take seconds life carry make dummy looking face order make jiggle bit little I know baby eaten So imagine happens next green vomit gets I honestly mad embarrassed I laughed hard I could feel abs working tears eyes coming I believe everyone lives special moment desire worship forever It sad embarrassing even comical quality type moment indulge memory So till day I still known CAPS friends doubt I ever forget memory", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear CAPS killed horrific acident title flashes across screen Then another another What supposed minutes grows hour two take away family I see bring many conflicts computers helpful However I feel often negatively impact general public For one many sites portray false information Plus computers begin consume rest peoples lives When comes technological devices pros cons easily outweigh To start computers loaded viruses scams internet predators So easily someone steal credit information placing offers seem good true listen instincts ll know But many people nt know better fall traps In fact people scammed time life I clearly remember someone I know thought buying pair boots Later That day got call credit card company warning purchase These days careful re computers When friends I learning evaluating websites computer processing class came upon site seemed reliable accurate We shocked learned everything fake Computers put people know better risks I strongly feel sites like many others negative impact public addition computers steal much peoples time point family doing homework exercising limited I understand effects much exposure computers I see everyday younger brother Once begins video interactive games homework pushed side The words mouth CAPS one game I suppose infer turns one game turns two It nt children either Many friends update status pictures three hours every night Is nt point draw line going ten minutes letting computer control life When surveyed majority students said spent least two hours computer every night When games instant messaging starts take away studying exercise huge issue Computers take away peoples free time negatively impact grades fitness So I ask consider benefits computers also look negative effects You realize would believe Support limiting usage computers helping public see dangers technological devices bring Computers harm relationships finances personal life would think", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever dream of a future where cars are driven by themselves? Well that dream will be coming faster than you think. With the advances in technology we are getting closer and closer in achieving a driveless car. Driveless cars could change the world so much. Thus it is a good idea that they should be made possible.\n\nDriveless cars could help make the world better. We would no longer have to worry about how we would get to certain ares. All we would have to do is call in a driveless car, get in it, and it would take us to our destinantion. Another thing that make driveless car great is that it would use half the fuel of what we use today. It would also cause less accidents due to having sensors and thus alearting the driver when an accident might be possible.\n\nThese type of cars might be great but they have a lot of flaws. Some flaws are that they are not 100% driveless yet. They need the passanger to be on alert at all time so that when the soutition rises they can take over control. For example the article states,\"notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigationg through work zones and around accidents.\" Another thing to worry about is that who would be blame if the technology fails and someone is injuried or even killed? Would it be the driver or the manufacture that gets the blame? These are thing that we should be thinking about before we put this invention for sale.\n\nAll those flaws might give the wrong impression about driveless cars, but we can find a soulution to all these constraints. They might not be 100% driveless yet, but we are getting there. The advances in technology that we accomplish every day is growing rapidly. Every year we are creating and making our technology beter. For example, the article stats that.\"Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.\" Companies are also developing driver seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger. Another this is that the sensor might not be as good as we want today, but imagine how much better and advance they might be in about 5-10 years. Improvement in sensors, computer hardware, and software are making driving safer which is leading to driveless cars to be able to handle more and do more driving tasks on their own.\n\nCurrently we might have some contraints that are holding us back, but in time we will be able to get rid of them. With the improvements in our software and senors being made every day; we will be closer in achieving a 100% workable car. The advances in technology will help us create them and in time make them a realitiy. Driveless cars should be made.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever been on a ship with alot of animals?If not, then come join the Seagoing Cowboys program. You can learn how to transport animals to different places. For example, Luke couldn't say no to his friend Don because it was an oppurtunity of a lifetime for him. Luke and Don were both happy that got a chance to go to Europe on a cattle boat.\n\nLuke and Don were on the boat to tranport horses, cows, mules, their food and supplies to ship them overseas. When they signed up they were told to report to New Orleans in August 1945. They arrived on the day that the Pacific War had ended. They boarded a ship with 335 horses some hay and oats to feed them. This would be great evidence to join the Seagoing Cowboys Program.\n\nOn the other hand, most people think that it might be dangerous for kids to join the program. In the text it says that \"Luke slid down the stairs and was stopped by a piece of metal.\" Luke couldn't on the boat because he craked his ribs. In the text it also states that \"But being a Seagoing\n\nwas much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger. It opened up the world to him.\" Luke was also happy to be alive without going overboard.\n\nIn conclusion, I think it would be great if you joined the Seagoing Cowboys Program. It would be a lot of fun for everyone to join the program. You would learn alot of ways to tansport animals and visit different places. You can also play games and have fun on return trips. All of these examples prove that you can be in the Program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear The use computers beneficial society I fear many kids suffer child hood obeasity inactiveness many teenagers age They could enjoying life outdoors staying active choose sit infront screen day everyday Researchers proven inactiveness large due many facebook mysape twitter users These websites nothing trouble unhealthy teenagers cyber bullied verge suicide Many aware several pedifiles creepos sights carry lead abduction rape worse By staying active outdoors friends could save dangers Go outside run little would amazed much little exercise help Also I firmly believe time spent family family activities eating dinner parents By become closer family could help make healthier choices keep exercise I believe following simple steps staying active staying computer spending time family Is much beneficial learning type talking friends Using computer leads cyber bulling dangerous people living healthy way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the last two or three decades, the fashion industry has been improvised as compared to the past. However, some cliam that fashion influences people lives in an adversely, others say that this has more positive effects on our day-to-day lives. This essay discuss the both viewpoints and give my opinion in the subsequent paragraphs. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, fashion industry plays a crucial role in country's economy through import and export cloths and materials. There are massive amount of the public can get earnings from this sector such as wavers, tailors, shopers and etc. Fashion changes in every occassion, every year by the fashion designers, they are the main reason for the innovation in this sector and people also can wear new trendy dress. For example, many boutiques have started by the fashion designer and they attract the population by their new designs with what kind of material they use. Therefore, mankind are able to obtain enormous benefits in their lives. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the negativities of this trend cannot be ignored because it affects folk's day-to-day life differnetly which means humankind spend more money to buy new trendy dresses even they have plenty in their wardrobes. It stimulates more buying capacities, as a result, mankind might be dressaholic. For instance, a recent survey from the Times of India said that, Indian people have spent 40% of their earnings on buying cloths which means they are being dressaholic and addicted, besides, they should save their salary for their future because anything will happen in future like if happens any medical emergency, saving money only will be helped rather than dress and fashion. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, Fashion field is an inevitable in people lives. Although it gives a plenty of advantages to the population such as livlihood and wear new trendy dress like celebrities, the public spends huge amount to buy many dresses and they become addict. In my opinion about this, fashion brings more benefits to the population in their everyday lives and it provides more positive too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello I am a scientist here at NASA and I am going to be dicussing the face on Mars with all of you.\n\nWhat where the things called that took the pictures on mars? How has finding this face changed our aspect on other planets or even other life. Was it really from a alien aircraft of just enviormental effects on Mars?\n\nThe very first photo ever taken was by a Viking 1 that was made in 1976. Then there was another one created named the Mars Global Surveyor known as the MGS which was made to prove it was not fake in 1998. They then made a very brand new MGS in 2001. The reason for this was because to show real 3D effect on the picture to get better effect on the picture.\n\nHow has finding this face on mars changed out aspect on things? It has changed it by us believing that there are more than just humans that roam our solar system. It started to make us believe that there were such things as aliens. Then people started to make conspiracy theories about NASA. They were saying NASA was lying and it was just a cover up to protect that aliens do exist in our solar syster.\n\nIs this a real cause of a Alien aircraft or just a enviormental effect on mars that it had no control of at all? There are two posibilities in this quiestion yes and no\n\n.The reason is because we don't know if it's true or not. In my opinion it is not true. It has even been proven by scientist that it is not made by aliens it is just a enviormental effect. There is no proof also that a alien did it.\n\nThat is what I have to say about the unmasking Face on Mars. Now you know what was used to take the pictures. You also know when it was used. Then I got to explain why finding this face changed the aspect of how people saw Mars diffrently. Then how if it was just a coincidence by enviormental effects or just a alien spacecraft. That is what I think about the article.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A lot of millennial are of the notion that automaon will rule the society in the coming years while others disagree with the aforementioned statement. I believe that robots will play a key role in the future specially at the workplace, however excessive use of bots among the human population will have several side effects too.\r\n\r\nAnalysing the statement, due to advancement in the technology robots have become a major part in the workplace. Various man works are being handled by the machines. Especially the tasks which donot involve much logical and analytical thinking and are repetitive in nature. Engineers are working flat out on this development and soon more than 50 percent of man power will be replaced by the machines. It will increase the productivity as robots can work 24 by 7 without nay breaks.\r\n\r\nExplaining further another school of thought belongs to the side effects that robots will have on the human society. Although, the efficiency and productivity will increase but it will decrease the number of workers working in the factories resulting in loss of jobs. Furthermore, automaton works only on the basis of the built in systems they would not be able to gauge the success rate of the work being done. People usually use artificial intelligence to make their lives easier and excessive use of the same will have detrimental effects onthe human health.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, robots will ease the man work by performing tasks which are simple and recurring while, excessive use may have adverse affects on the human body and over dependency on the machine may also result in unemployment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt written The builders empire State building face obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock There one obstacle expanded use New York City lack suitable landing areas paragraph If Dirigibles ca nt lead could cause destruction could dangerous people In paragraph Al Smith says It s level right kidding were working thing right This shows readers way words things sounds almost unreliable When constructing idea Dirigibles mooring mast added top building allow passengers However This idea unsafe Dirigibles moored open landing fields could weighted back lead weights using Empire State building would dangling high pedestrians street neither practical safe paragraph This unsafe would build something harmful others In excerpt The Mooring Mast written The builders hard time constructing dirigibles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As new ideas resurface- companies and people begin to attack the possibilities of new innovations. In this case, driverless cars have come into question and have increasingly developed over the years to tackle the possibility of removing human error in driving and in result transform the way transportation works. The article argues that with driving out of mans' responsibility there could be less casualties and less consumption of fuel. However, the development of driverless cars would result to be inefficient and do more hurt to mankind.\n\nTo place a manmade vehicle able to operate on its own on a road would be a tedious task that wouldn't offer much in return. Furthermore, to make a driverless vehicle operate is simple and possible, as stated in the article, yet what's difficult is getting the technology advanced enough to actually accommodate to real world situations. The article states how the downfall of the vehicle was how it needed a driver to maneuver through heavy traffic and other road obstacles, yet how in the future would a person be able to maneuver through difficult situations without much experience driving as they'd normally be accustomed to the car doing all the work. Therefore, there could be even more havoc expressed on the road with inexperienced people inconfidently driving in tough situations. More so, what if there were an emergency and the driver needed to get somewhere like the hospital quickly yet couldn't because the car wouldn't be able to operate faster than the alotted speed limit? There could be serious consequences there as the driver wouldn't be able to reach their destination in a short time. Also, the whole idea of having people driving cars is so they may control where they are going. What would happen if the driver wanted to change their destination and thus change routes? Would the car be able to recognize this change in task as efficiently as a driver could? Nonetheless, a car functioning solely on technology can be very impractical, unreliable and have possibly a larger margin of error as a normal driver operating a car would.\n\nTo add, the development in driverless cars would cause further dependability on technology for mankind. There is already much discussion and question as to how advancing technology is affecting society and the way people act today. With the invention of television and cell phones alone created for entertainment and facilitation of communication,the idea of people becoming irresponsible, detached, and more lazy has been brought into the light several times. Imagine how much more television or time not using one's brain would be spent with the new \"in-car entertainment and information systems\". People could become more devoted and rely too much on these entertainment systems to take alert them when extra driving assistance is needed. Furthermore, drivers could overestimate the ability of the driverless cars unassuming the possibility of heavy traffic assistance. Nonetheless, the wandering minds of humans cannot rely of technology to always keep them safe whereas the drivers would have to do so themselves.\n\nThe driverless cars would be a giant leap for man in terms of technological breakthroughs. However, the actual use of these cars in day-to-day life would prove to be impractical and more of a hassel than a facilitator. The margin of error of humans may be overestimated in comparison to these new technologies and thus it's best to trust humans to decide where and how they want to get places.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the modern world, many people are willing to be isolated from the noise pollution. In this regard, the majority of the urban population are not keen to purchase a property which is located near the bus stations, train services and highways. Accordingly, the authorities are willing to subsidise the companies which are aimed at the solution of this problem. \n\nOn the one hand, it is true that the main cause of this issue is an urban plan, as many city objects are not well-planned. As a result, cities and towns are suffering from the unwanted noises which are produced by the transports and constructions. Furthermore, there is no any agreement between the government and businessmen. Consequently, the owners build their properties wherever they want. To illustrate, many big cities in the developed countries, which are built by the private companies, have a special protection system from noise and sound. In addition, such kind of system is very efficient for the office workers, as they can concentrate on their duties while they work in the buildings.\n\nOn the other hand, it is clear that there are many viable options for these issues.The first solution is reducing the amount of private cars. If there are a limited number of vehicles, the high volume of traffic will be reduced. The second option is encouraging town dwellers to use the public transportation and improving their condition, as many people are not keen to use such kind of bus and train because they are willing to get the point of destination with convenience and comfort. The final option is to motivate the people to commute the work from suburban areas, as because of overcrowding the noise pollution is caused. In addition, such kind of method is very useful for the other infrastructure problems.\n\nIn conclusion, although many people reckon to think that the high volume of traffic is mainly caused by the cars and buses, others feel that the urban plan and construction can also be a challenge for the government, as because of these facilities many people are suffering from the pollution of turbulence and sound. In addition, motivation the city dwellers live in the rural areas can be the solution too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are some advantages of limiting car usage. For exampple, it can cause a lot of pollution, traffic jams in small cities, and thr greenhouse gas emissions.\n\nFirst of all, the advantages of limiting car usage is pollution. The passage states that \"Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" Meaning that, Paris had to ban driving because there was so much polution going on. Pollution is one of the biggest problems in the United States today. And most of the people argue about it when it's actually them causing all of it.\n\nIn addition, the reason why they limit car usage is because in some small countries like, Colombia can cause a lot of traffic jams. The passage states that, \"Bogota, Colombia-In a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams.\" also, in the passage it discussed that, \"The turnout was large, despite gray clouds that dumped occasional rain showers on Bogota. Meaning that cars were causing all of the rain showers and that is why Colombia banned cars for one day only to decrease the traffic jam and to do somthing about the rain showers that is happening daily.\n\nLastly, one of the advantages of limiting car usage is because of the greenhouse gas emissions. The passage states that, \"President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions, unveiled last week.\" Meaning that when a lot of people are using gas.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When child much learn books Books filled great stories faraway lands accounts real events poems powerful meanings All books written author clear point make Those books censored libraries words ideas found offensive Children learn things time life I think earlier learn less trouble cause later life There also freedoms grant us freedom speech Should nt freedom read well Authors brilliant people Without would books anybody read We respect authors put books This means author believes certain word action fits book leave book alone respect chose put When I child I picked everything I inquisive kid age would I remember wandering around public library scanning rows books reading titles There books politics religion sex violence However side library books children escaping world traveling time magical tree house There even stories mice feelings normal conversations amongst The library great plethora knowledge contained unrestricted inventory books As I grew older I began dwelve adult books politics religion I formed personal opinions I gathered books Without books library I would never able research topics There amendment promotes freedom speech This allows anybody say whatever please long nt infringe upon anybody else The definition library place people read check books library return please Libraries allow every book collection every book sort value Taking book library offensive material right books important matter inside Some books material might belong hands children Children need learn things sometime life Why Books taught us Please let keep teaching", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "By ending story idea retaking test spring author sets feeling starting fresh perservering example author says snow melts geese return hibiscus budding she show idea starting fresh new life spring returning home hibiscus starting fresh budding This spring saeng wants start fresh retake test The paragraph also shows saeng like hibiscus perservering The hibiscus perservering making winter blooming saeng perservering retaking test The author ends paragraph show saeng going give", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter Laughter I believe snatch awful crater I hide away It creates bubble joy pit stomach finally bursts joy throughout Laughter feels like day hearing bugs hum warm breeze knowng I able float cotton candy clouds realizing I m laughing everything I Laughter flips gloomy days upside makes realize every reason I happy Sixth grade big mile stone everyone s Getting lockers freedom able around older kids much I always dream laughing old best friend giving boys numbers except changed moved away No one talked hung school old best friend never left side matter uncomfortable walking thruogh crammed hallways huge school air breezing School became unpleasent go everyday eight hours Most sixth graders nt like school homework would rather social classmates I felt alone sixth graders mainly girls made jokes appearence I always got good grades school They would steal projects I made worked really hard They also took books papers supplies like pencils pens I learned new formulas facts never I learn socialize peers Three quarters went sixth grade year I felt alone like suddenly rest world shriveled died moved far far away At night eyes would spew gallons salt water tears face splashing pillows best friend never teased talk behind back stuck people It overwhelmed walking near group girls would put people hid cartain acts around specific people They would tell students rumors innocent people gross weird I nt want telling people rude comments I ignored best I could activities A girl elementary school noticed loneliness school decided talk I shy felt stomach starting flips never good sign All I could I looked like scared kitten smile nod She told next lunch I come hang friends girls girls teased The next lunch I went feeling sweatyhand nervous entire time Once I started talking smiled said I adorable really awesome person made smile cheek cheek It felt good smile first time long time A couple days later girls told sixth graders I goody twoshoes dreadfully boring smile faded quickly I heard rumors spread class like disease left group girls one day lunch talk happened I told I felt girls felt like world always would agree whatever said She confessed truly nt know hanging first place I relieved hear say words agree group saying The girls talked bad behind back left whatever desired filled breezy air side laughter Together laughed everything amused us Sometimes would even laugh boring assemblies ridiculous person attempting act everyone knows When bump road I supported true friend would laughed dumb person make laugh situation In words laughter pulled awful pit I hid away made find true friends Laughing made forget bad times people made realize bring I million reasons laugh I gasp sip air Laughter huge part relationship I enjoyable time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Floridas state senator, I am righting this letter to tell you about why I think that we should ude the popular vote for the president of the United State. I have three main resons i would like to touch up on. It will give the poeple of the United States the chance to say who they want in the congree and say who we wnt to be our presedent. The Electoral College is not a democratic way of handleing it. But on the down side it can make things very unorganized, having us worry about every little person we have to put into congress.\n\nIn the United States we are a eaqual and fair contry, but with the Electoral College it does not us, the people of our fine nation the one to elect our presadent. It does not give us the freedom of making our own choices n who want to run our contry. But if we use the popular vote for the presadent of the united states it lets us, the people choose. It lets us the poeple the right to use our own opion and our own thought on who should run this country. Every person in this cutry has a voivce they do and they should be able to speak with thier voice.\n\nIf we use the Electoral Colledege it is not democratic. It does not let us the people choose. The Electoral Colledge baseecely sees that the citizens of our contrys opions do not matter. They are saying that the Electoral Colledges votes matter the most those are the only once we are worrying about. But thats not true our opion does matter, we are what make up this amazing cuntry not just the Electoral Colledge.\n\nBut you see there is up side to using the Electoral Colledge. It can keep us organized and what i mean by that is it will help the pople know who exactly all comes with the vote of the presedent. It also makes it alot esier to just vote for one group instead of voting for all 34 people. It will keep the people from accsadentaly voting for the wrong group. It will help the poeple make there desion on what they think best and not hat they have been told is the best choice.\n\nThe popoular vote for presadent is the best way to go. It gives the pople a voice and the Ellectoral Colledge isnt democratic. But the Electoral Colledge keep us, the people organized and helps us make the right decition.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This article created different mood I first bored I m grateful parents My parents also moved different country United States They moved children could better life education This article also says close friends also family I think I think s true The author says growing enviroment instilled great sense family nothing blood relatives That s kind mood author created I read memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The memoir joy happiness There also caring selflessness This memoir describes grew meaning family His family genorous people On paragraph says countless extended family members came wentand often someone Staying us temporarily able get back feet His family seemed giving community Because Narciso s culture family values impacted life todayNarciso parents selfless They would give living space friend hard time They always people dinner table always people staying house All events left Narciso Rodriguez sense pride family community", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For the time being, a great amount of money for investing in the health condition of people has never failed to provoke debates. There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over who should be allocated on healthy life’s qualities. In my point of view, I am well convinced that the normal inhabitants and those in ill health should be spent money for their health.\r\n\r\nIndisputably, allocating a sum of money to enhancing the healthy lifestyle of residents is an outstanding investment, especially in the nutrient products to maintain their physical health. Since absorbing a wide range of fundamental nourishments from a wealth of classifications fresh ingredients such as pork meat, juicy fruits and vegetables, can facilitate one’s body and field them to be in a good shape to make sure that all of the inhabitants on global have a decent and well-being function of physical health. For example, youngsters nowadays have a tendency to lead a healthy lifestyle by consuming a lot of nutrient products and taking a gym course to revamp their strength and prevent urgent diseases like diabetes and cancer. Hence, spending a large number of funds on boosting a healthy lifestyle to get away from illness can act as the most significant tactic.\r\n\r\nWhilst the redeeming features of allocating money to residents’ health are widely acknowledged, people who are in a bad condition of physical health also should be invested in. Specifically, those who are already ill really need the help from surroundings associated with medical treatments, which can help them to easily back to work and live as a normal shelter and make them stop thinking that they have already become a serious burden in their own family as well as society. As an illustration, patients who are in a dangerous situation due to the rampant COVID-19, already need some remarkable methods like Pfizer's Inc vaccines which help them to prevent the widespread of this urgent virus. Hence, investing an amount of money in protecting unlucky patients from pressing problems also plays a vital role.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, both ordinary people and those in ill health should be invested in spending funds with a view to improving their health condition. In my opinion, each has its own perks, it is more optimal to combine both mentioned factors.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many different people will have many different feelings about this kind of technology. I personally think that this isn't useful know but could be in the future. It takes babysteps into the next big invention.\n\nI think this could be useful since we already have robots being made that have the same charateristics and brain capacity as humans. I think this technology is to adavanced for right now considering we don't even know what we could use it for or what great purpose it shows or provides.\n\nPersonally I don't think knowing how someone feels is going to help anything or solve any issues. But this could help evolve cartoons, videogames, and many other 3D or 2D things to make them look more real and have more accurate emotons. Honestly that would be the only positive thing I could pull out of this facial action coding system.\n\nIn conclusion I do not think that facial recognition has any value as of right now in 2018. Maybe in the future this could be a bigger thing and have more use. I also do not like the idea of having robots with human fuctions or human emotions. Have you not seen Irobot?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear newspaper I feel though internet computers act advantage sosiety rather problem They help school work like projects email You even take college online People also use internet media simply catch friends One important reasons computer school orenented reasons Like project need get notes making power poin presentation One great reson teachers There computers help teach class way fun easy undersand The new uprizing computer use brought new ways getting college degree Now even simply get bed turn lap top take college classes right computer I dont know guy s I d much rather take college comfort home drive campus time Another great use internet email email makes lives lot easier people use It send us school starts like early dismiste way catch old highschool frends Another great reson internet mention fun relax people computers use media fun reasons like gamelry go youtube Please add article news paper computer put helping add something going make whole world obise thats computers Its people use computers felt dont get exercise computers So put bad way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Value of Students Emotions\n\nI'm going to be talking about the technology that is able to read the emotional expressions on peoples faces. I don't think it's important for them to get that technology in class rooms. I'm going to be listing off ideas on why I think its not important for schools to get this technology. My first topic is going to be about how teachers are really interested in how the students feel about what they are learing. My second topic is going to be about how students usually give there opion on how they feel about there learning. My third topic is going to be about how they could use the money for something else other than that technology.\n\nMy first topic is teachers don't really care about how students feel about what are learning. What I mean by that is teachers don't care if the students like the topic are they just care about if the students are learning and understanding. Sometimes teachers can tell by students faces if they're liking the topic or not. Sometimes teacher will ask the students if they like the topic or not but they don't really care if they do. So then like what's the point in spending money on something like that.\n\nUsually students will give their opion on the topic. I know I give my opion and I know other students to do to. Students don't want their faces to be scanned and told how they are feeling. I know I wouldn't want mine scanned. Everybody knows how they feel at school even teachers know how students feel at school. Sometimes teachers will ask the students how they feel at school and people will tell them the truth.\n\nSchools could use the money for something else other than a face scanner. They could use the money for things that need fixed in the school. Like the roof it's been leeking they could fix that. Buy new things for the P.E. classes like balls or rackets. They could use the money to fix the cafetiera or buy new books with the money. They could spend the money on fixing the bathrooms or the lockers things like that is what they could spend there money on.\n\nThis is why I think they should not buy the scanner. I know it sounds cool and everything but I think it would not be a good idea to buy. It would be very awkward to up to a students face and just scan it during class. People won't like that I know I won't like that. It would also be a waste of time because what if just stopped working you would have to fix it or it stopped working all the time it would take a long time to fix.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many features setting affected cyclist For instance extremely hot dry Also nearly deserted almost places crossed deserted A lost features setting ram shackle shed several rusty pumps corral caldnt hald lamest movean feature give idea haw cyclist feels", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempts allow dirigibles dock One obstacle installing mooring mast architects could nt simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof weight blimp moored top held single cable tether would add stress frame The stress dirigibles load wind pressure would transmit way building s foundation The builders would modify strengthen build accommodate new situation Another obstacle faced cost would take sixty thousand dollar s make proper modifications building s framework Also safety another major obstacle would make people going safe Most dirigible countrie s used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable The area s densely populated accident city would much worse The greatest obstacle nature winds building constantly shifting due violent air currents even dirigible tethered mooring mast back would swivel around Dirigibles moored open landing fields could weighted weights using would dangerous dangling high pedestrians Many obstacles practical reasons could nt moor Empire State Building There existing law airships flying low urban areas make illegal ships tie building So long obstacles faced attempting allow docking", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages of limiting car usage . There are 3 important sources that tell us why people should limit car usage . Source 1 : In german suburb , life goes on without cars. Source 2 : Paris bans driving due to smog . Source 3 : Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota. Last but not least ,Source 4 : The end of car culture .\n\nTo begin with , In sources 1 & 2 you can tie in the two sources to conclude that limiting car usage is going on in Germany and Paris. Most people walk , ride bikes, or catch the train. Car ownership is allowed but there are only 2 places to put them in large garages at the edge of the development , where a car - owner buys a space for 40,000 along with a home ( 1 : In german suburb , life goes on without cars para 2 ). Paris decided to ban driving to clear the air of global cities. ( Source 2 : Paris bans driving due to smog para 10 ). Diesel was blamed , since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline .\n\nAs well in sources 3 & 4 Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota and cars have come to an end with culture. They feel as though when people ride bikes , and trains it can prevent car jams. ( Source 3 : Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota para 20 ).The goal was to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. In ( Source 3 : Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota para 35 ). shows that for example van services can share services to have less cars and less gasoline . They also have a bike sharing company that you can share bikes and dont even need to use a vehicle.\n\nIn Conclusion , There are advantages in limiting the use of cars. With 3 helpful Sources\n\nSource 1 : In german suburb , life goes on without cars. Source 2 : Paris bans driving due to smog . Source 3 : Car - free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota. Last but not least ,Source 4 : The end of car culture prove the advanges of limiting cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that this could be useful because of the fact that it can read student emotions. This could help the computer alter the assignment a little to make it seem more appealing. Doing so could make students actually want to do their assingments, rather than faking it until they make it. Also, it would make the computer program more interactive, giving students the feel of a one on one session with a teacher.\n\nThe same technology can even be used at home. The software will scan your facial emotions and alter ads based on how you react to them. Again, your getting the interactive feel of a one on one situation. This technology could also be used with videogames. Making the animated characters interact with your emotions. Similar tech is already being used in games, letting the character interact with your voice and body movement, but not your human emotions.\n\nSo, in conclusion, I support the use of this technology. Making things more interactive could increase the joy of the user. In doing so, it would make more people want to do differnt activities involving school work, videogames, or even just enjoying the use of the internet. Making everyones internet use a tad more enjoyable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of the facial emotion recognizing things can help when kids are stuck on a problem or don't understand it. It may even help explain to a level they understand. It can help with how to teach someone and to read if they are understanding it, not just saying they do.\n\nThey could even be more helpful outside of the classroom. When police take somene in for questioning they could have to computer read their face to see if they are nervous or lying. Instead of having a human give their opinion on what they think the person is feeling and giving the job to a computer, that was built to understand and read those things.\n\nIt can help a lot with kids who lie and kids who need help and to get their own special level of understanding in thier education. To get things to be understood on a level for them. Not everyone learns the same and doesn't understand things the same way as others. Building this may help kids learn a lot better and give their teachers a better undertanding on how to teach them and what they need. What pace to take it at for that individual childs mind. To help understand better why certain kids are grasping at the subject they struggle in and help them. Maybe they understand it but it doesn't get their attention. The computer could possibly even help on that. It could help so many kids with grades. Could possibly slow the struggle with kids learning. Kids could learn in their own way at their own pace. Maybe not make them feel so scared and confused.\n\nThe article stated that it read basic emotions, even a paintings emotions. They think it could help when kids get confused looks on their faces and give them help when needed instead of having to wait for a teacher who has to take care of more than one kid. Could change the way of explaining it to help them, sometimes they just don't understand the way it's explain as others might. The use of this technology could go far, even then could be able to be better with more work done. It may help a lot, in or out of the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nIn the past years our country has been run by a \"electoral college\" voting system. Has always been the soultion to our (america's) equation. Its been in bussines since 2012 now and so far has seen no problems. Our country has a strong base an voting system for our country period .\n\nanother great reason electoral college has , is that a big problem ,like \"Big States\". even if the state has a huge population than other states . they equal out the vote of thepopulations so that every one could have an equal chance.\n\nLike how every thing is settled majoritry rule , but in this case \"everybodys president\". Every one has part in the election during Electoral College , no one is left out like popular voting ways. From \"source 3: in defense of the electoral college :five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president\" by richard A. Posner.\n\nEven though\" elctoral college may some times be unfair out dated , and irrational.\"(from \"source 2: the indefensible elctoral college: why even the best -laid defenses of the system are wrong\"). The way we are voting now has no problems so far , so by far this is the best efficent ,wide variety of choices an accecible to all in the U.S. It has been updated and fitted toward our government.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter necessary survive crazy beautiful world It something possess us throughout lifetime As humans grow old eventually die laughter never It lives forever Laughter often referred the best medicine nt It brings joy sad relief burdened life depressed The best part laughing completely unchangeably free Never someone pay gain drop laughter On hand laughter also contagious A single smile throw back head gut busting laugh cause entire room become ill glorified epidemic Laughter best release When I younger I neighbor named older man spent time carpentering shop He never talked rest us street attempt strike conversation Day day I would notice little red pickup leave morning return night His life seemed like routine I curious find wife well became vampire rest us This completely fine us monster Countless times soccer balls would kicked yard pure accident would come quiet house yelling waving hands direction She even left note family s front door telling take better care lawn I sympathized live woman Something voice seemed deaf That aspect life always made feel little bad Being different could possible explanation treated people way I never forget day ambulance pulled front perfectly serene house I sat front porch silently watching medics go inside house Not long I heard little red pickup coming road I knew far everyone else part routine After minutes body carried stretcher My heart sank Even though I young I knew significance hovering white sheet secluded wife passed away Nobody could blame He lost love life lost routine My family discussed decided bring meals The food never anything particularly fancy something would keep going I ve never seen anyone appreciative Still knew stay lawn His wife loved must felt like still attached somehow He lonely family wanted Soon brought meals younger sister I started walking small white fluffy dog invited dinner often mom would let us He became like grandfather neighbor One day friends I outside playing soccer small street It sunny warm outside Life good I could feel vivacity youth pulsing veins I ran around As ball rolled yard We hesitated saw door open He looked pestered quite upset slowly bent pick ball I winced knowing I d hear later parents Then unexpected happened started laughing The kind laugh person might considered crazy happy The kind laugh tears run person s face Not knowing friends I started giggling threw us ball went back inside His laugh clear signal grieving unhappy soul relieved From laughter meant great deal Laughing direct straight person s soul It connection people Without laughter life seem dull Once brought life powers heal restart That exactly Through laughter got life back", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The given diagram illustrates the process of the storage area, which is made from a special material, namely concrete canvas. The process can be outlined in eight consecutive steps, beginning with the manufacturing of the concrete canvas and culminating with storing of goods.\nFirstly, the concrete canvas is produced as a three-layers composite. It consists of a fibrous top surface, a layer of dry concrete, and a waterproof layer. The features of each layer play different roles in later usage in terms of ductility and stability. The finished product of the concrete canvas is then packaged in boxes and delivered by truck to the construction site, where the boxes are unwrapped, and the canvas inside is taken out.\nIn the next stage, the concrete canvas is spread by means of a rope drawn by a vehicle. In order to fix the canvas on the ground, pegs are used and hammered every ten meters along each side of the canvas. After that, on one end of the spread canvas, a door is installed as the entrance of the storage. The covered space between the canvas and the underground is then pumped up and expanded with the aid of a blower machine. Following that, water is sprinkled over the surface of the swollen canvas and reacted with dry concrete with the aim of generating a hard shell for storage. Thus, the form of storage is constructed. After a set period of around 20 to 24 hours, the storage can be put into use.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it helps us to define how exactly you are feeling. According to the passage it says \"In a real face or in the painted face of Mona Liza. The software can identify mixed emotions\". This technology was made by Prof. Thomas Huang, \"an expert at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate\" as said in the passage.\n\nIn my opinion i think Prof. Thomas Huang did a great job on making this project for humans and computers to communicate. Lets say if your happy, you smile to the computer this ad will pop-up and they will add another one to keep you smiling and if the next ad frowns you they will do their best to keep you smiling. The project is called Facial Action Coding System, which can detected your expression Human vs technology.\n\nThe computer detected\n\nThe Mona Liza expression, she intended to bring a smile to your face.\n\nIn conclusion these are my reasons why i think the use of this technology (FACS) to read the emotional expression of students in classroom is valuable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the biggest concern for many developing and developed countries is to find ways to reduce or eliminate various pollutions. It is believed that by increasing the cost of fuel for vehicles can solve environmental issues. I moderately agree with this opinion and think that in addition to this there are various other methods to reduce the level of pollutions such as introducing battery operated vehicles, and planting more trees.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, I believed that increasing the fuel cost will limit the usage of cars or other vehicles which in turn reduce the level of pollution to some extent. However, introducing battery operated vehicles can drastically decrease the levels of environmental pollution such as air pollution, as there will be no CO2 emissions. A good example to illustrate this idea is everlasting beauty of Switzerland where government has ban the fuel operated vehicles and make it compulsory for all its citizens to use eco-friendly cars in order to protect the environment they live in. Thus, not only increasing the cost of fuel can reduce the level of pollution, but also introducing eco-friendly cars can help to reduce the level of pollutions in air.\r\n\r\nSecondly, planting more trees is a natural way to clean air, water and soil. In other words, Trees plays an important role during the process of photosynthesis in which trees take in CO2 and produce the oxygen we breathe and thus improve the quality of air. In addition to this, it also help to conserve water, preserve soil and support wildlife. Switzerland is a prime example for such an initiative where planting trees are applauded whereas trading of wood, cutting trees for furniture’s are strictly prohibited and considered serious offence which may even results in life time prison.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I moderately agree that not only increasing the cost of fuel will help reduce the environmental issues but also believes that use of battery as a fuel and planting more trees can drastically improve the quality of environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What is the real benefit of having a automatically operated car? How would you train an everyday person to operate such a brilliant vehicle? Not doubting that it's such terrible idea, i just think there is no way to wrinkle what cant be ironed out in one big shot. What about car enthusiast? If we keep making automated cars, there will not be a car that is going to be worth it later, car shows would die off, car auctions would die off, the idea of car collection would die off. Cars would not go down in history.\n\nThe technology involved is fascinating. It's truely out of this world. As the passage said, there are alot of wireless technologies that go into a automated vehicle. Laser systems. Carmers. Not including the wifi it will need to communicate with other cars. As the wireless systems come online, so do the hacker modified computers that hack your mercedes-benz, or your nissan. If hackers could take over your car, think about the crime rate that would slowely accelerate. Robbery would go up because of all the cars they could just steal. That now incooperates new firewall systems that im sure will add to that total price you want to pay for your car. Plus keeping your car updated, expect to peeling open your wallet.\n\nI know this passage is based more toward the personal car industry, but what about the high class trucking industry we have. Most of everything you have has probably came from a truck at one point in time. You can not let the automation of cars take off without caring about the equipment used to get your car parts to the plant your vehicles are going to be made. That part of the automation has to kick start too. They can not be left behind. There is another problem.\n\nLastly, making this a everyday ritual is not going to be easy. I do not think the roads will be filled with auto operated cars anytime soon. I do indeed think that technology in our cars will keep becoming more advanced surely, but the idea of a fully operated car does not appeal anytime soon. The fun of driving is still too strong. As more and more people are living on this planet, i think it will be neccessary eventually, but for as of right now, its not a issue. As a last question to leave you on, how would you incooperate full proof systems that apply to every financial class and is available to anyone wanting to buy Nissans or mercedes benz vehicles?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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