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"content": "The majority of people are becoming interested in discovering the reputation of their houses or buildings in some countries. But what are the main reasons and how they can collect this information\r\n\r\nFrom the psychological point of view, it is far more significant for many of people to have enough datas of their living area. Moreover, one the main reasons why they like to find out historical data of a house is, to make sure that there were no murdering have been done in the house or they need to make sure that, no committing suicide has happened before. Hence, these crimes are also affecting the price too. Additionally, in many cases , due to lack of history of a house , owners are vary regrate by their own decision, hence if they had had enough information of the house they would not have bought that flat.\r\n\r\nWith the improvement of technologies , nowadays, are very easy to track background of some building .Also communicating with neighbors and asking them some questions can be another alternative for researchers. Hence although they might not find all the truth ,at least they can find some key points to help them to estimate the past.\r\n\r\nTo sum up it is very usual action to look back for the history of place which we are going to buy, in order to not take a chance and avoid future problems while there are different ways available to do this.",
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"content": "In excerpt mooring Mast builders faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State building First risk dirigibles places outside US cause fire states Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable CAPS This would become big issue run risk dirigibles pass highly densed air cause fire inadvertently By building loading dock potentially harming area downtown New York Second another obstacle would get way building dock nature Builders say The wind top building constantly shifting due violent air currents CAPS Even attempt tie dirigibles chance back move around idea winds would much handle brought alternatives like lead weights become hazard pedestrians Finally law prevented airships fly low The article reads This law would make ilegal ship ever tie building even approach area CAPS law made extremely hard builders The overall idea make airship land building obstacle made bigger problem The idea dock vanished much risk Nevertheless excerpt The Mooring Mast describes challenges put upon builders build dock",
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"content": "NUM poms coach says practice dance I love poms times gets tiring We practice We also six girls including My coach loves make us dance one time On first game practice right left first performance All us excited wanted go perform day But game pm didnt even start pm way later expected So poms team coach family wait patiently bleachers actually finally got perform Finally clock bit three ment went track stretch We happy still little sad didnt get perform earlier We minute clock walked side Getting formation clock quickley started drop fifty seconds quickely seconds went I couldnt believe seconds first performance The thrill rushed head man announced CAPS performing pom pon team names speakers The crowed roared entered field We quickley reminded self smile Then music came danced hearts honoring thanking coach parents After finished automatically huttled around friends family And waiting patient wasnt bad anymore It worth wait",
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"content": "It is often argued whether studying painting, drawing and music is useless or important for school children and if it should be encouraged or not. The paragraphs below will outline both sides of this trend and, further, I will give my own point of view.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, some individuals claim that studying art subjects in school is positive, because it can boost creativity and help juvelines in problem-solving issues. It is well known that painting and drawed pictures usually have more than one interpretation, which forces people to look from different point of views and, yet, cause disturbance to not ensure them of the right meaning. Therefore, as in puzzles, it is needed to find different visions of the same problem, to reach to right path.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some parents depart from this idea, as they consider having theoretical knowledge rather than subjective ones a better investment in the long term to engage on a course and, consequently, find a job. For instance, in Brazil, Universities tests are based on regular subjects knowledge, such as mathematics and history. Therefore, to enroll in a course, being a hard skilled person is necessary.\r\n\r\nAlthough, in my opinion, I strongly deem art a positive subject to be maintained in school curriculum. Nowadays companies expect proactivity from employees, thus, estimulating kids' soft skills can help them to deal with problematic situations, which is fundamental to build a career.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, both arguments have their merits. Although, I consider studying artistic movements essential for children development as it can be a positive add to be a proactive person and a problem-solver.",
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"content": "Laughter indeed important part anyone s day For whatever reason humans like laugh like make others laugh well But reminds funny story There time I take writing test In fact test much like one In fact one I write one four topics Unfortunately four vague could possibly made picking one rather challenging After staring screen good fifteen minutes I began silently laugh situation I write one four things single one even remotely interesting For reason I found problematic situation amusing I kind weird way But hit one four topics laughter write laughing irony situation Yes I tell true story time I laughed I used delightful vagueness advantage The topic state laugh actually audible one state kind laugh I figured silent laugh irony would well audible laugh something silly So I topic To make things even amusing I wrote laughing fact I write laughing I began laugh silly task I carrying However I began worry whoever grading things find amusing I would perhaps hurt grade But possibility served make situation even ironic consequently amusing You think I easily amused I must say well yeah I kind I find almost anything amusing I find beauty laughter It abstract every person experiences differently Some people find simple things considerably amusing others easily amused These differences part interacting people enjoyable As I said humans like laugh like make people laugh us And regardless way interpret laughter s abstract form ve got admit s kind funny",
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"content": "When using technology usually work related A computer used work write essays make power points research people use facebook myspace chat live oovoo websites pleasure I go facebook I checking schedule hockey kids use talk Then oovoo online video chat used talking friends callemup When I think facebook oovoo even myspace makes think inapropriate pictures kids adults post I think unhumane dangerous post ot s ll never get back For instance I always outsided hanginaround s warm winter I understand going facebook need go outside fun Kids wonder gain weight ll youde get computer quit eating twinkies ll notice active kids parents nt really give flying faldoodle kids day They nt care kid lbs age They nt care kids sitting computer eating allday If could tell must feel like couch potato I would I never go computer unless homework I used computer I typed homework except math I nt play one game I nt check email go internet anything I worked hardest got done I conclude fact using computer bad thing using repeatedly exercising A computer nt need used pleasure s created s created keep life simpler People pay money buy expensive computer motem expensive technological accesories make lives much simpler anywhere thes essay I say play games s Playing games done outside nt inside definately nt computer To make everyones life easier kids get lazy butts get twinkies stop playing computer",
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"content": "There has been new computer software called Facial Action Coding System (FACS) that can scan your face and read your moods. It can scan to see if you are happy, sad, angry, suprised, disgusted, or scared. They also say that it would help schools to tell if a kid is confused or bored. I dont think it will help schools. Computers cant tell what your mood is.\n\nA computer is made to help humans do hard tasks. They can run complicated math problems, drive cars, and scan the depths of the oceans. Computers are very helpful in very many ways but they cant read your emotions. One thing that computers go through is the TuringTest. That is to test if a computer can pass as a human to an actual human. Not many computers can do that. They would have to be able to understand what emotions are. They dont understand human emotion because they dont have it.Since computers cant understand human emotion, They cant tell when humans are sad, happy, or angry unless we tell them.\n\nPeople have been alive for many years. We know how to make people believe that we are happy when we are sad.\n\nWe can make people believe we are mad when we are scared. We can use our face to look like we are in any mood. I bet you have even done it today! Computers cant tell if people are really mad if we look happy.\n\nLets say that we use this software in schools. They use the software to see if people are confused or bored. Teachers can tell when kids are bored already. Teachers can also tell when kids are confused because our teachers can read facial exprestions. They teach kids everyday and get used to seeing those kids emotions. You dont need a computer software to tell what teachers can already do.\n\nComputers cant read facial exprestions without someone telling them. They cant understand emotions so they cant scan it. People can tell other peoples emotions better than any comuter ever will. It wont help school by telling teachers if the kids are bored because it cant tell peoples facial exprestions and teachers already can. This software cant help schools.",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir greatful greatul many reasons Some things greatful parents home culture family I say mentioned topics alot memoir One reason greatful parents culinary skills As said memoir parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today I eternally grateful Another reason greatful love parents give without parents love sacrifice would nt courage I know memoir said I always grateful parents love sacrifice I ve often told much courageous thing I could ever done The next reason greatful family always reason parents always keeps door open family greatful life love It learned real definition family would never forget place called home",
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"content": "\"Technology can be a good thingbor a bad thing depending how one uses it.\" Technology is made to facilitate life for us.\n\nIt would be a good idea to have driverless cars beause it could benifit us with so many things. For example,we wouldn't have to worry about a phsyco taxi driver abducting us in a busy and noisy city because,like the article says , we would have drivless cars who take us where we wish. Nevertheless,having a drivless car would really benifit us with money. The cars Sergin Brin forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer more flexablity than the bus. \"Yes,it will save us money but i would rather pay for my fuel than to risk my life with technology safty we're uncertain of.\"\n\nPeople may be worried about the safety to,of course. The driveless cars will use sensors. Sensores are nothing new since automakers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes. Within those 10 years sensors themself have became much more advanced. Further improvments in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving on their own.\n\nTelsla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time ,mercedes-benz,audi and nissan plan to have cars that can drive themsekves by 2020. The road to the truly autonomous car stretches on ahead of us,but we grow closer to the destination every day.",
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"content": "In this passage the author has more cons than pros on why studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite all the danger it that comes with it, I can say the few pros the author presents are fairly well but not good enough to make someone and even themselves believe that various forms of life can survie on the planet of Venus.\n\nAt the beginning of the article the author starts to compare Venus to Earth. They start off by saying that Venus is often referred as the Earth's twin because, Venus is the closest planet to Earth in the terms of density, size, and occasionally distance. After comparing the two planets the author jumps right into the facts and cons about the planet Venus. The author states \"Since Venus is right around the corner (in space terms) humans have sent several spacecrafts to land on the cloud-draped world.\" then he follows with saying \"The previous missions were unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survied the landing for more than a few hours.\" These two statements wave big red flags. It has been three decades since the last mission.\n\nVenus has a thick atmosphere of 97 percent of carborn dioxide, and that's not even the most challenging parts, the clouds contain highly corrosive sulfuric acid. Venus temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, with the atmospheric pressure over 90 times greater than what the people living on earth experience. The conditions on Venus are entirely far more extreme than the living conditions on Earth.\n\nIf the passage states all the facts about the extreme living conditons on Venus and how it is pretty much impossible for any human to live there, why are scientists steady disscusing and planning more vists to the planet Venus? The article states that the astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may have been the most Earth-like planet in the solar system. The author brings up the history of the planet Venus and how long ago, the planet waas covered with large oceans and could have supported different forms of life just like Earth does. The passage also states that still to this day the planet Venus has the features of valleys and mountains.\n\nAs of right now and maybe over the next several decades Venus will not be survivable nor a place to call home. If it is some way the NASA workers and astronomers to figure out how to remove the sulfuric acid, lower the extremely high temperatures and the atmospheric pressure then maybe you could say it was some hope. After they made the changes to the atmosphere they would then have to go Venus test things out to see if it is 100 percent safe for human life, after all the test are ran they would have to man make everything from the sources of water, to places to sleep, and things to eat.\n\nIn conclusion, if NASA workers could make these major changes to Venus, then possibly there would be some hope to have human life available there but as of right now there is no way that any human could live there and be healthy and satisfied under the conditions that Venus has now.",
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"content": "However venus orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide onl limted insight on ground conditions because most forms\n\nof light can't penetrate the dense of the atmosphere.Also researchers can not take samples of rocks or other sources from that far of a distance so there for they need to get a close up of the planet to figure it out.Despite all the risks they are going to have to take like fist off they tested samples of silcon carbide in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus surface.Also lasted three weeks in the experment then they tried a differnt idea that would also work for a amount of time such as mechanical computers wo played a big role in this situation.By comparison the systeams that used mechanical parts the researchers hade to make it look more resistant then what it already was before to heat,pressure,other types of sources.Another fact would be that the conditions of just exposing a cell or even a device could be turned ito acod or heat on venus because of the tempture that is so hot there also I think that should not be our limits I think we could still do alot more proggrese with this types of ideas and planets.",
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"content": "Many things caneffect cyclist ride essay many things effected setting story One problems setting stores even people another important thing lack water around many things effect cyclist They riding inculding suriondings",
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"content": "Driverless cars are coming, but are they a positive thing or a negative thing. Although cars been there for over years there's a person who controls them. Now there are cars that can drive by themselves but also need the assistance of a person if needed, so how is that any useful? Although these new cars can be something new these can cause a negative outcome.\n\nCars are well selled and yet they keep on developing new techniques into cars, for example one of them would be the video camera on the mirror, another one would be motion sensor. Even after cars been out, they still want to devlope even something even more outstanding that is a driverless car, a driverless car would be a car that can drive by its self. Won't need someone to keep the wheel on it, but is it all good and outgoing? Although the car does not need for someone took take over the wheel it does indeed require assistance, but how is that if the car is a \"driverless car\" well it does indeed drive by its self but it also9 requires personal help, one of them would be\n\nthey will nodify the driver if it's in danger, such as \"navigation through work zones and around accidents\" in oder words when the car feels danger it will alert the driver where then the driver will take control and prevent it to stop or so. Even though the car will drive on its own and alert the driver if any trouble how can any of this be safe? It can't, it is not. A car can drive on its own and alert the driver if any danger comes around but do they know that this will prevent less accidents or even cause more?\n\nStudies have shown that they indeed have tested the car out for example one of them is by google,\" Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far Google cars aren't truly driverless or dealing with complicated traffic issues.. such as navigation through roadwork or accidents\" as Google says they have had a car that does drive over a million miles without a crash but they don't know for a fact that this could happen or that the car can handle accidents, they tested it out but they have not had the complete and best results. Even if the cars caused less damaged, less accidents what would happen if the car boke down or somehting happen with the car that they did not expected something coming out wrong, how will this affect not only the company but the people? This would caused a lot of damages towards its people, companies invested money and it will all go away, people purchased the car not knowing something was wrong this will effects its product and price. Causing a lot of damages.\n\nAnother affect this will bring uponf people, accidents if any accidents do accour who will be responsible for this? The company of the person in charge? If the person owned the car and got in a terrible accident the person should be responsible for exactly what? The person wasn't driving the car the person was only out there for the look out to see if there wasn't any danger. Now what if the alert did not came as in quick to alert the driver there's danger ahead what if the system broke down or just lacked and didn't alert as soon, this will not be the drivers fault but the companies, although the car owned the car the car onwed the wheel and it had a sense of lack alerting the driver, whose fault would that be? The companies, \" If technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault...\" They can not be 100% that this new car will prevent accidents, if anything the accidents could increased. Another thing would be drivers, some drivers have a car for a reason, to entertain themselves to drive around, that is why most purchased a car for the fun of them driving not sitting down bored might as well get a taxi and not enjoy driving, even if they do bring car entertainment they might be too focused on that entertainment and forget they also have a part in driving to look out for the danger.\n\nThe law states that they will not allow this, therefor why take a risk to change the law for this new vechile, for the money. Companies will try to get a new product to keep their money rising, a car that can drive on its own this new product will have thousands of people in line and what will companies get out of it Money that's what every company wants, even if studies show that it will be a new car and will be safe for drivers they don't know that for sure, why risk people into this.\n\nIn other words cars should stay the way they are with no other inventions nor a Driverless car, because even if this can be the new generation to a new world studies do not show the exact percentage of the danger this car might bring. People who will purchase this new vechile do not know the outcome all they are inform is that its a car that can drive on its own and if needs assistance it will alert the passenger. People will get bored, accidents might either increased, there's a chance of something being wrong with a car that will caused the companies with depts and charges.",
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"content": "I patient present It almost I kept asking presents mom kept saying getting closer closer I kept asking mom said patient get nt worry course I hard time patient Final I could nt wait I I went bed I asked said The come I went school I happy today I got present s I got home mom waiting cake present said That tryed patient",
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"content": "The face on Mars is just a natural landform and not created by aliens. In paragraph one it says nasa Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet snapping photos of possible landing sistes for its sister ship Viking 2 when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face.In paragraph three it says it had a mouth;nose;eyes;and a resembles of a human head.\n\nSecond: Aliens did not create the face. When the Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time they was snapping pictures they said there was no aliens monument after all. How would aliens make a humand face on mars. Thats crazy because aliens do not exsist.\n\nInconclusion: the face was ca landform because as you can tell by the pictures it was a landform.It shows the face it showes how the face is getting coved up as the years pass by then it just show how the face is gone. Thats how i know the face was just a landform.",
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"content": "Many companies are beginning to design, produce, and test driverless cars. However, many of these cars are not completely driverless and dangerous. Driverless cars should not become legal on the road because they are dangerous and unnecessary.\n\nThe majority of driverless cars are not completely driverless. Most require a driver to take control over the car in more \"difficult\" or \"complicated\" road conditions as stated in the article. \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" Cars that are capable of moving themselves but still need help from a driver at times are not driverless cars. Truly driverless cars would not need assistance and would be able to move itself in any scenario which would be much more dangerous than the current cars and dirvers we have today. Funding research that will ultimately make our roads less safe is not an investment that many people would like to take part in. Instead of funding research to develop these dangerous, self driving cars, money should be going toward repairing our current roads, making our current cars safer, and helping our drivers learn to drive more safely.\n\nTo sum up, driverless cars are unnecessary and dangerous and should therefore not be on our roads. We also should not continue funding the research of driverless cars and instead spend the money to bettering the current system we already have in place.",
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"content": "The final paragraph winter hibiscus by Ho reads When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melts geese return hibiscus budding I take test againThis paragraph compares flowers shows resilient like flower strong determined take test next year pass She would also take test comforting reminds home",
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"content": "Cars are one of the most important reason why global warming exists and there will be alot of more benefits if thye limited the car usage. Global warming is affecting everyone and is getting worst every single day and we have to do something now before is to late. Cars in cities like Los Angeles they are a problem becuase they are alot more cars then people. Citizens should limit the usage of cars because people will survive without cars and driving causes pollution to Earth.\n\nGermany uses suburb to reduce the car usage and make more people walk or use bicycles to go where they want to go. Vauban's streets are completely car free except the main thoroughfare, where the tram to downtown Freibrug runs, and a few streets on one edge of the community. As a result, 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here. I'm much happier this way, said Heidrum walter, as she walked verdant streets. Vauban, completed in 2006, is an example of a growing trend in Europe, the United States and elsewhere to separate suburban life from auto use. Passengers cars ar e responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up to 50 percent in some car intensive areas in the United States. In the Unite States, the Environmental Protection Agency is promoting car reduced communities, and legislators are starting to act. People can do just as good without cars.\n\nParis bans car drivers due to the smog an pollution that the cars cause. On monday motorists with even numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22 euro fine ($31). THe same would apply to odd numbered plates the following day. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined and 27 people had their cars impouded for their reaction to the fine. Congestion wasa down 60 percent in the capital of france, after five days of intensifying smog. The smog cleared enough Monday for ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd numbered plates on tuesday. President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States greenhouse gas emissions, recent studies suggest thta Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as year goe by.\n\nIn conclusion, people can live their normal life without cars and this will help the ecosystem that is getting affected every single day. Alot of places are banning cars to help reduce the green house problem. Government should build more car free communities because citizens like the idea and its helping Earth. Citizens should limit the car usage to help the Earth.",
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"content": "I would like the\n\nEletoral college to change, to let the people vote not the congress pick any president he wants. I get that theres going to be fights and drama but still the people has to have the rigth to vote for who they want. I would like to vote too but not for someone to get to pick whatever president he wants. Think of the people, what if you were the people and you wanted to pick your self as president but the congress picks another president just because hes close to winning like you. Were in the United States a place of freedom so let the people vote and let them be free.\n\nI think that the\n\nElectoral college should omly have one elector. Why? because there will be less fights and arguments it will be all up to one elector to pick a president plus all the people that voted. I think it should be a llitle diffrent the elector should vote like a regular person but hes vote costs 500 votes so it will be half fair and helps the president he wants a little. The bad things are that people wouldn't think it's fair and the elector will have alot of pressure. The good things is that there wont be arguments or fights and thats what its all about.",
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"content": "Histories of some buildings and houses could attract many . The main reason might be they live in a historic city so their house may have a unique history. Hence, they can seek in many ways like asking from people who have lived there for a long time.\r\n\r\nSome old cities could stimulate people to be interested in their house's history and also they may want to be aware of materials used in construction steps. Some cities around the world are historically rich, so it could be lots of narratives about the building and houses in which located those cities; it could influence people to be willing to be aware of the city's history and place where they live. Moreover, many people have decided to reconstruct their house, so they should know how it is built or the material used to build the house. I believe it is imperative everyone know at least some information about the past of their houses.\r\n\r\nOne of the easy ways to find out this information is by searching the internet or asking the neighborhood's people. Some districts in a city may be so famous that people can find about the past of their neighborhood in detail on the internet; in consequence, it could be a beneficial way to get some data about the buildings. Furthermore, some people who have never changed their neighborhood since childhood or elderly people, in particular, could be an effective source to ask them. However, history could lose in the mists of time, so everyone should spend a considerable time discovering history.\r\n\r\n From my vantage point, it mostly depends on the personal character to be intrigued about the history of the place where they live so they would properly find ways to know about them.",
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"content": "In the article many positive and negative aspects are shown about driverless cars. From the details in the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" I am for the development of driverless cars. Although, people say these cars arn't the safest they are safe. Having these types of cars can also create a world that has less stress. I'm also for this because it's a new fun way for cars.\n\nMany people can argue that these cars arn't the safest. These cars have sensors in them that make them safer then a normal car. These sensors notify the driver if they are ever needed.\n\nThe sensors also help you stay out out of danger. They will allow the driver to take over whenever its needed. If the drivers don't see the lights flashing it also vibrates the seat. The vibration of the seats will also help keep the driver awake and aware. This car can also prevent many car crashes that care caused by texting while driving. The car drives most of the time so the driver will have time to look down at there phone every once and a while. Texting and driving is still a bad thing to do but having these types of cars will prevent many crashes.\n\nHaving these types of cars can create less stress for the driver. The driver still has to remain aware of the road conditions, but doesn't have to be as alert. If your in a rush the car creates a route for you. Finding routes in croweded highways can be a difficult thing for people to do. Since the car drives for you most of the time you can awnser important calls or texts easily. If your stressed about driving this solves some of that problem. The cars have been driven more than half a million miles without a crash. Also if you are stressed about making it to the place on time you can take control of the car. Many of these ways can help make the driver less stressed.\n\nThis driverless car is also a new fun way a car functions. This car has a futuristic look that are appealing to a wide audience. Many people are fascinated by things that arn't the usual thing you would buy. If in the future everyone has these cars noone will feel bad about the type of car they have. Everyone will have the same car. Pyschologist say that many people would enjoy this car because it's new. If you ask many people they would say they like trying new things, this would be the car for them.\n\nThis article contains many positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. From reading this article I am for the development of these cars. They are safer then an average car in todays world. using these cars can make people less stresses. Also these cars are a new and different from the cars we see today.",
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"content": "Luke bomberger wants to become a seagoing cowboy. He really wants to become one. He crossed the Atlantic ocean 16 times and the pacific ocean twice to help people by World War 2. I got that off in the beginning of the story. In paragraph 4 it says that he had made nine trips-the most of any seagoing cowboy. In paragraph 5 it says luke also toured an excavted castle in crete. So far he is going good and he also became a seagoing cowboy and he is doing great. Helping out his aunt katie's farm as a boy had prepared luke for hard work nut not for dangers at sea. On luke's second trip luke served as night watchman. Luke had a little accident and he could not work for a couple of days because of cracked ribs but he was glad he made it out alive. Luke had wonderful time's and then bad one's but he always worked hard to become and seaboy cowboy and so far he is doing pretty bad right now because he broke his ribs. Luke also found time to have fun on board. Being a seagoing cowboy was being more than an adventure for luke. It opened up the world to him. Luke bomberger said \"I'm grateful for them opportunity\". He wanted to be a seagoing cowboy it was his dream it was all he has wanted to be and his dream came true he was the most wonderful seagoing cowboy he was hard working and he made it look fun. He worked hard for his dream and he has made it come true. He has done wonderful things.\n\nHe has helped the people that needed help.In all these paragraph there is a short pharagraph about what he done or what he was about to do. So this story was basicly about luke and how he wanted to be a seagoing cowboy. In pharagraph 1 it tells about how is life was about to change after his high school gradution. At first he was working two part-time at the grocery store. That is were he was and used to be and that is were he was working. But now he has an even better life. So this was about Luke bomberger and his wonderful life and how he helped and how he used to be after he became a seagoing cowboy. What made luke love seagoing so much how did he get into it what made him love it so much what made him want that and not other things. I mean he started out at a grocery store the he land in begin a seagoing cowboym I guess he enjoyed that the most because he reallly done a lot of great things in his life he has gone done places he has basilly wanted to do. He has gone places he has wanted to go he has done things he has never done before. I mean if I was luke I would be so happy for myself and what I have done to have such great gift.\n\nNow that his dreams came true in begin a seagoing cowboy. Well he has a good path on his way he still has a wonderful jorney to go on.\n\nHe has earned great stuff and he also deservet because out of his old life he has a whole life up a head no that he has got what he wanted he is going to try and keep it. He is going to work hard and be the best he can at everything. Luke omberger got what he has always wanted now he has a great life on his way. Hope you have a good one Luck Bomberger.",
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"content": "The system of Electoral College is being always used in Presidental elections every first Thursday in November, hapenning in a space of fours years each electio. According with the text: ''What Is the Ellectoral College?'', the Office of the Federal Register explain that on this system, there's a ''selection of electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress'', this group has 538 electors.\n\nThe biggest problem with this system is that you do not vote directly to your president, you are voting for a candidate's electors. The real decision is not made by the people of the society themselves, but made by a group of people who whave the freedom to choose the candidate that they feel pleased with. Another point is that some of this electors don't even vote for their paty's candidates.\n\nIf it doesn't look like a big deal, first it's important no analyze the profile of the electors, the ones who decide the future of our country and the authorty of our nation. Do they have something special? Something that differenciate them for the other voters? Actually no! There's no criterion, according with Bradford Plumer in '' The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong'', the selection of the electors ''depends on the state. Sometimes state conventions, sometimes the state party's central comitee, sometimes the presidental candidates themselves''.\n\nThe last point is that the few electors can't represent the will of a whole state, in ''The Indefensible Electoral College'', shows that just 55 representatives from California, represent 35 million voters, it's impossible to attend the rights of each one of these people.\n\nAfter all, we need to realize that it's a unfair system for regular voters, for the population in general that has the expection of changing something, but actually are being controled for a group. Sometimes, a candidate won the popular vote but lost the presidency during the electors decision. Democracy should look at the opinion of everybody else right? But in this case what is happening goes against the definition of democracy.",
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"content": "Limiting car usuage around the world will cause a beneficial improvement across our nation and other countries around the world. Transportation is the second largest source of America's emmisions, just behind power plants, if citizens reduce the amount of car usage then air pollution would slowly decrease across America. Countries around the world are participating in limiting car usage within a day.\n\nParis is banning driving due to the increase in smog within the city. \"Congestion was down sixty percen tin the capital of France, after five days of intensifying smog...The smog rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world.\" Paris smog has increased to the point where typically the capital has more smog than any other European capital. Compared to Brussels adn Londin, Reuters found the micrograms of particulate matter increasinly high. Diesel fuel was the main problem, since France has a tax policy which favors diesel over gasoline.\n\nIn Bogota, Columbia millions of Columbians hiked, biked, or took buses to work or any destination during a car-free day. Thus, leaving the capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams. This program is set to spread in other countries. The goal is to promote alternative transportation and to reduce smog. (Violators could face around $25 fines.)\n\nCarlos Arturo says, \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\"\n\nTwo other columbian cities, Cali amd Valledupar, joined the event. Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven sideways were replace with smoothed down sidewalks, and rush-hour restrictions dramatically cut traffic.\n\nPresident Obama had a goal to curbs the United States' greenhouse gas emissions. recent studies show that Americans are buying fewer cars throughout the years passing by. Also the amount of licenses are reducing by the years. If the pattern persists (many sociologists believe it will) it will have beneficial implications for carbon emmisions and the enviroment.\n\nThe reduction on car usage will create a beneficial impact across America and other countries around the world. Citizens should participate in the car-free day programs to improve the Earth's atmosphere and reduce air pollution, such as smog. This is also a healthier program for citizens, with the reduction of cars that day, citizens could walk, hike, or bike around improving body health. So not only does limiting car usuage improve the environment, it also improves you.",
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"content": "People do not need cars that can drive themselves. If people were to 'drive' a\n\ncar that has the capability to drive by itself.If that same car got in an accident then taht\n\nwould mean that the driver is releaing more in the car.\n\nThat would also mean that the dirver is not paying attention to the most important thing when driving; the road. Driving laws focus on people safety when people around them are 'driving' and give justice to those who need it; but how can people do that when other would not know who to blame-- the driver or the manucfacturer of that car.\n\nTraffic law was something long ago and it was invented, for human purposes. Majority of people are always careless when driving. Those drivers think that driving is a game and those people don't release their mistake until they have to pay the price. For the actions of those people and for the security and safety of other law where made, specifically driving laws. \" Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe......As a result, in most states it is illgal even to test computer-driven cars\" The author of the article even implies about cars not driving themselves being a concern and even a threat to others. When people make laws they do not do it just for fun. Most states that value their citizens make laws as harsh as they may be to keep people safe. Something everyone mostly people who are parents want for their kids. Parents may not be very happy to see many or even a few drivers distrated because they have a car that drives itself. thay would mostly see it as a threat for their family safety.\n\nLaws change all the time, but just because they change does not mean it always for the best cause or that verything will turn out as people were hoping they would. \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover........-the driver or the manufacturer?\"\n\nIn this detail the author is implying that if they could change the laws as many time as peoplecould.\n\nThe question people should be asking is that will that change anything in the way people would rely on the car. Will the laws decrease the numbers of careless drivers and the amount of accidents cause by those careless drivers. Driving laws would be much harder to control with all of those thing in hand. For example if a person that had a car that could 'drive by itself', which cause the driver to not pay attention to the road. Then the car would start malfunction and cause a huge accident in which cause a life of another. Who would be at fault and the careless driver or the mechanic of the car that malfunction.\n\nMany Television show and movies have invision the future with car that can drive and do other amaxing stuff. Those are pretty cool stuff to do. \"television and movies have long fascinated with cars that could drive themselves.\" Now that something to wish for, right? Whrong if you are fascinated with car that could drive themselves that okay, but have theyv stop and look the negative side of this. \"Automakers are .......car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time.\" Would sane peron really rely on that 90 percent when there is a 10 percent chance that something could go wrong. If a person values their life when it comes to a surgery which could save their life. Woudn't it be reasonable that person would think twice about putting risk to themselves and even there family. When that a 90 percent chance of not living.\n\nIn conclusion people should have fun with things that enginners bring. Though just because it is fun and many peopldo it and look at the consequences that could cause does not mean anyone should rely on it. Remeber that when a person see's a positive that perosn who ever it may be MUST look at the negatives and see if it really worth everything. Is 90 percent really capable of car driving itself. Are traffic laws really going to stop all people and would changing the laws really protect others that are careful and value their lifes? That would be up to the audience.",
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"content": "The feature effect cyclist wants go somewhere spectaculiar amazing like Like example said thriving one spot forever finally got ghost town chuckeled roud away wasnt looking I belive guy judging every place goes way looks haves offer like nt believe getting direction old mat yet still took I believe wants get wants go let anybody get way matter s like looking perfect spot think want finds filled story",
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"content": "When you live in the United States, you use cars everyday, so you wouldnt understand the positive impacts of limiting car usage has on everyday life. Some small towns in Germany, Paris, and Colombia are car-free citys. In the passage\n\nIn German Susburb, Life Goes On Without Cars , writen by Elisabeth Rosental, She tells her readers that a suburb in Germany, Vauban, has street parking, driveways, and home garages generally forbidden. Rosenthal states that not having a car can actually bring happiness. \"'When I had a car I was always tence. I'm much happier this way,' said Heidrun Walker.\"\n\nIn the second article,\n\nParis bans dring do to smog , by Robert duffer, he tells the reader about the struggles Paris faced with polution in the air. He states that they made a system where one day they would have even licence plate number stay home one day and the odds would stay home the next. After trial and error, They came up with a solution, And it helped the smog go away. If cars were banned completly the air we breathe would be so much cleaner, and less foggy. \"The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to rescrind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday.\"\n\nIn the third passage\n\nCar-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota , by Andrew Selsky, It talks about a car free day that takes place once a year in the town on Bogota. The passage also states that people hiked, biked, skated, and took buses to work during the car free day. Selsky states that the goal of the day is to promote alternative transportation and reduse smog, Which brings back the fact that not using cars reduses polution in the ait. The other reson banning cars is a good idea is because it redused stess, because you dont have to deal with traffic, find a parking spot, or worry about being late to work because you have to stop to fill up your tank in the morning. \"'It's a good oppotunity to take away stress...' said buisnessman Carlos Arturo Plaza\"\n\nThe last article the End of Care Culture , written by Elisabeth Rosenthal, talks about how \"americans are buying fewer cars, driving less, and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by\". i beleive people are finally coming to the state of mind where public transportation is the faster, easier, and more afisiant way. Another reason it is better than having your own cars is that it is safer. \"'...public transpotation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resousrces, lower emissions and improve safety.\"\n\nThe main advantages of limiting car usages are happiness, lower in polution, lower in stress, and increase in safety.",
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"content": "Have ever imagine goin libary getting magazine shelve find offensive cant anything Well say ever want Katherine Paterson libary together pick magazine shelve alot offensive stuffs like We went lady infront dint even knew magazines She got really mad back shelve alot magazines offensive ritting pictures even comments We got magazined anf threw away In opin think kind things thar offensive like movies music magazines remove They remove bad influence younth gives picture head later maybe say plubic even homes They remove getting alot people trouble making see getting kids becoming violent school friends even moms We remove offensive stuffs becasue see every easy find like movies getting piont see naked girls every movie The parents something one buying leaving every house easy children find We care full read find offensive kids read would think another thing So next time buy go find thing offensive talk manager supervacer taking That think remove",
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"content": "The development of consumer products leads to the consequences of destroying the natural environment. This essay will outline the highlighted reasons related to this problem, then suggest suitable measures.\n\nTo begin with, there are several reasons resulting in damage to the natural ecosystem due to the rise of consumer products. First of all, most people tend to use one only stuff on a daily basis because of their convenience function, especially products made of plastic such as bags or cans. These types of habits completely harm the environment including indirect and direct ways. That means consumers who contribute to manufacturing large-scale products have a seriously long life-span. However, these are often used in the short term and thrown away in the environment that might not only waste, but also be eaten by wild animals. Addition, these goods are usually hard to biodegradable. A variety of reasons has been listed that could prove the cause of this issue is extremely huge and have serious outcomes in the future.\n\nHowever, it is possible to solve the problem of damaging the ecosystem resulting from the production of shopper goods. Firstly, the solution is appealing to consumers cutting down their products daily instead of applying the items that are environmentally-friendly. For example, in the modern age, there are favourite green goods, not only recycled things such as tote, bottles, glass or clothes, but also the appliance made from nature could be named baboo straw, banana leaf box. Beside that, the fevertly measure should be applied is the policies which can impose heavy tax for the goods being harmful for the natural environment, by contrast; tax-breaker for the items manufactured from eco-friendlier materials. Therefore, it can be said that the solutions provided should affect the consumers and the firm or business to create living conditions can demand not have negative impacts on the environment.\n\nIn conclusion, the production of consumer goods can completely harm the natural environment such as the large number of these kinds of products that have been manufactured. To solve this issue, the measures not only impact on the consumer’ perspective about the goods they use in daily life, but also on the business making the products to encourage them to create more items that are friendly with the environment.",
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"content": "In the article \"Driveless Cars Are Coming,\" the author presents both the postive and the negatives aspects of driveless cars. Some of these positives are using sensors to help the driver control his or her car and the way these driveless cars will help the drivers drive safe. The negatives of these cars is the amount the money these driveless cars need in order to be made, and that the driver still has to be in control of the car. But these are the aspects of the author. I am going toward the development of driveless cars, for one they make our lives a little easier,and they keep us more safe.\n\nThe development of driveless cars will make our lives much easier in the future. That's one reason why i'm going for the development of these cars. In the aricle the author saids \" the information from the senors can causse the car to apply brakes on idividual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" When the author saids \"allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone\" saying that the car it self can control it self, than having a human control it's own car,therefore meaning the driveless cars control all functions of the car and we don't do anything but just follow what it does and be the driver. The author states that with \"further improments in senors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\" The author saids that these senors thar are coming out on these cars will help the car itself and the driver have better control of the vechile. These senors that are put into the driveless cars will make ours lives easier as drivers.\n\nAnother reson why my aurgument is going for the development of these cars is the safety the drveless car provides it's drivers. The author states that \"the car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" The \"special touch sensors make sure the driver keep hold of the wheel\", will help the drivers be in better safe condition. Allowing these sensors to control the car will make our driving lives safer, by making \"sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel\", so no accients happen. Another way to help keep the driver protected from any accients occuring is adding other equiments to help us park and be aware of the road. \"Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remainign focused on the road. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\" The cameras that instuled, will help driver be safer on the road at all times.\n\nIn conclusion, the development of the driveless cars wiil help help imapct the lives of the drivers. They will make our lives a lot easier and handle our protection on the road, therefore my augrement goes for the development of these cars. They must continue this jounrey of these cars. We need them espicallly in th furture. We can have less car accients with the help of the car even though there must be a driver, and who doesn't want a more safer environment. Don't we all.",
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"content": "The Challege of Exploring Venus\n\nintroduction: \"The challenge of Exploring Venus\" is a history of this nickname is misleandig since Venus is actully a planet . In our solar system, it tiene ptoved a very callenging place to examine more closely, comes to extreme physucal conditions and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\n\nIt is article is of Venus, sometimes colled the eveniig Star, is ano of the brightest points of lightin the nightsky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spor. oferred to as Earth's twin venus is the closest in distance too. Earth, venus and mars, our\n\nother planetary neighbor orbit the sun at different speeds\n\nA thick atmosphere of almots 97 percent cabono dioxide blankets venus. even more challening are the clouds of nighly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atomosphere on the planet's surface, temperature average over 800 degree fahrenheit' and the atmospheric pressure is 90times grater than what we experience on our own planet\n\nlong ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus con sometimes be our nearest option for\n\na planetary visit\n\nConclusion: venus has value, not only because of the insight to be geained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating enverdeavors",
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"content": "The bar chart compares the number of visitors to a community website in the first two years of use.\nIt is noticeable that the website attracted more visitors in the second years of use. Also, the number of users dropped both years from Dcember to Febuary.\nSpecifically, more people visited the website in the second year, except for August, during which the website was visited more in the first year. Among all the months listed, the biggest gap took place in May, with roughly 20000 people browsed the website in the second year, which was about 12500 more than the figure for the first year. Over the period, the amont of visitors in the second year was 10000 more than that of the first year, whereas as in Augusr, September and October, the interval dropped to less than 1000.\nThe figure saw an increase in both years from September to November, and then dropped in the following months. In the first year, the number of visitors rose from roughly 1000 in September to 10000 in November, and then dropped to less than 1000 in Feburary. It was the same story in the second year, with the figure peaked to roughly 18000 in November and plummeted to 10000 in Feburary. In both years, the figure witnessed an increase for the rest of the period, with the highest figure of 23000 in the second year",
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"content": "The story was about this boy name Luke Bomberger he hand no idea for his life change soon after high school Graduation\n\nhe was working two part time job in a grocery store and a bank then Luke turned 18 before arriving in greece which meant he could be drafted for military service\n\nwhen he was draft on board he learned that he was on cattle-boat trip Luke also toured an excavated castle in crete and marveled it took about two week to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of united states and it took a month to get to china luke was busy they had to be fed two or three times a day then luke started helping his aunt Katie's farm as the boy prepared luke for hard work but not for the dangers at the sea\n\nLuke job was to check all the animals every hour so the text state that how luke became a Seagoing Cowboy",
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"content": "In the story \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" it explains the struggles of wanting to discover what is on the planet Venus. Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from our sun. While Venus is easy to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\n\nHumans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours then they thought it was too risky to send a human and possibly lose them to Venus's environment.\n\nA thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide covers Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\n\nLong ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are similar to Earth's. Researcher's cannot take samples of rocks, gas, or anything else from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.\n\nVenus has proven to be a difficult planet to explore but that does not stop us from our curiosity. These challenges are difficult to overcome but NASA is determined to get to Venus. Venus may be a tough planet to explore but the scientists and astronomers are ready to fight the challenges and explore.\n\nStriving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will lead to us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and many other planets should not be limited by doubt and dangers but should be expected to meet the edges of imagination and innovation.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are coming! my opinion on the driverless cars is i agree with them. I think that it would be a good idea for them to make them work rather than us drivering around the car could be driving instead of us. I think that it is a good idea because some peopole do not evne know how to drive and what if they have an emergeny. They wont be able to drive no where because they dont know how to drive but if they had the car to drive them around we wouldnt have this problem with them.\n\nThier could be less crashes if they do have a car that drives by it self i thinik that it would be a great idea for doing this. Acoording to the article it says that cars have been driven more han half a million miles with out a crash but so far Google cars are not truly driverless they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with compliacted traffic issues such as nagivating through roadwork or accidents. Thier are differnet types of cars and companys that have a different way of doinjg stuff. Like General Motors created a concept car that could run on a special test track. If they was a car just like this i think that thir would be more people out in the streets driveing around and go out more than it useed to be but things could be different if they wouldnt let it be.\n\nWe would porbably have more popluation than it used to be because of how much it would change the fact that people could go out with more even though they dont have to walk anywere now. i agree with this because of how accurate it is to be walking around and be in a car and not risk our lifes being worried of gettin ran over or in a different accident.",
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"content": "Driverless cars? do I think this is a good idea? No driverless cars is not a good idea.\n\nThe reason why i say it is not a good idea is because the car would have to have extra awareness so that it doesnt cause accidents. Another reason why I say no is because some people dont know how to drive and would get into an accident. Also\n\nthe car wouldnt know when to go if it was at a stop light or a all-way stop sign.\n\nThe car would probaly be helpful for the enviroment bu dangerous for people around it. The reason why I say that is becaus the car would most likely be a eco friendly car which means it would not be ran off of gasoline. The car would have to be small because it doesn't have anybody driving it which means there will not be a driverless truck on the streets.\n\nThats why i think we should not have driverless cars in America. These reasons are the truth to why they should not make a driverless car.",
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"content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. in the fourth paragraph it says venus is the most like our solar system. \"long ago, venus was probably coverd largley with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth\". i believe scientests should go to venus or at least try. if they can get there and study the planet, we will find out new stuff. what if scientists figure out there can be life forms in the planet. that would mean we could have a whole new world. in paragraph 5 it says \"The national aeronautics and space administration (NASA) had sent a human to venus\". when they sent that person he/she survied. \"not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. every day people are studying this planet. i think maybe one day people will be able to live on venus and that venus might be our new planet. this is why i think studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.",
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"content": "You know find book shelf discover content book word oppropity children read Or go copy something notice magazine table find cover magazine image young mind see Or movie music see content shocks makes bleep word I see better offensive items books music movies magazines etc removed shelves words pictures poison minds children children learn world around stuff like make child think s suppose act talk Here two example remove shelves music magazines First deal music children word immate act see words say One good example rap music song cuss words believe I tell I constantly kids school saying cuss words like n fword many seeing boy s underwear think thugs pants sagging low It drives crazy make think parents letting children In next paragraph I talk magazines Second magazine images use covers pages something ment seen children read example I went school library s copying room copy article magazine I found magazine table show three cast members birthday suits I thought world school something like place kids learning environment Why earth send school crying loud What think want bother kids parent I sure would furious I found child something school In conclusion removed shelves children nt see",
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"content": "Now a day, car is one of the best choices that people use\n\nfor travelling. Is it going to be better if the cars that you are using right now can be driving indepently, without the driver. Is it going to be helpful and easier for our mankind.\n\nIn my oppionion,the diverless car can be easier for us to travel.Based on the artical,the google has had cars that could drive independently,their cars have driven more than half a million miles. They also have a GPS which can help the drivers to fond out their location,sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera , four automotive radar sensors and an inertial motion sensor. The developing of\n\nthe cars can improve sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer.\n\nOn the other hand, their were no cars developing\n\ncompletely driverless. The accident can happen every moment, this means that human driver must always be careful and alert when they are driving.",
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"content": "The author did a very good job presenting his point of why we should be trying to study Venus. He gave valid points and tried to captivate the reader with interesting facts like \" Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. As a reader, things like that get my brain turing and I really start to think about it. I start to ask myself questions like 'If Venus was once like Earth, what happend to this planet to make it so inhospitable now?' and 'If we've never been able to get any kind of sample from Venus, what could be on that planet?'. When an author gets a reader to think more deeply about the essay, it means he's doing a pretty good job about explaning his thoughts and desires.\n\n\"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" can be found in the last paragraph of the essay. In this statement the author is saying that this isn't just about studing Venus. He's saying that it would be very interesting to actually see what's happening on Venus or even what Venus has come to now, but that if we, as humans, keep problem solving and coming up with new, successful ideas it could very well help us in the future with other things that we are trying to get a better understanding of. The problems of Venus that are holding us back are as follows; the atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide, the clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid, the planet's surface averages around 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atomosheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on Earth. The author is saying that getting past those obstacles would be evolutionary for humans.\n\nOverall the author did a very good job getting his point across and giving reasons to back up his statements. Not only did the author give an excellent argument on why we shoundn't give up on Venus, he aslo brought up the idea that if we solve these problems, we ourselves will be able to evolve and solve other harder and more complex problems. Which could lead to better future.",
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"content": "In short story cyclist affected setting many ways The author running water throughout whole story The water bottles contained tantalizing sips There limited amount water bottles He travel long distance Not two miles next section He getting tired quick Also terrain good I noticed terrain changing flat road replaced short rolling hills It get harder harder continue ride",
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"content": "Environmental pollution has been a major concern to the society. Some folks argue that increasing the oil price is not the best solution to mitigate the environmental issue. I on the other hand agree with the notion above that increasing the cost of petrol decreases the frequency of its usage thus contributing to environmental advantage. \r\n\r\nFirstly, increasing the costs of fuel is one way to combat pollution. This is because, by inflating fuel prices, people will hesitate to spend their money on gas when they can spend their money elsewhere. For example, in Australia, people will not fill the tank of their vehicles on any other day other than Tuesday as the price of petrol is highly expensive. They need to fill up their vehicle with petrol, but are forced to wait until Tuesday just to fill up their vehicle tank when the petrol price is relatively cheaper. Moreover, they will start exploring other modes of transportation such as buses and trains since the fares are cheaper than their spending on petrol. \r\n\r\nSecondly, increasing the costs of fuel will directly affect the demand for fuel-based cars on the market. As a result of the rise in oil prices, there is less demand on the market for a vehicle that operates on petrol and diesel. It will further encourage people to explore other transportation that uses alternative energy for example electric or hybrid vehicles. For instance, a big brand like Toyota has started to produce more hybrid and electric automobiles as there is more demand for these types of vehicles in the market from consumers. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I completely agree with the statement above as increasing fuel will be beneficial towards the environment since it will encourage the community to be vigilant in their fuel spending and forced to consider alternative options such as using vehicles that source from renewable energy.",
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"content": "Think about walking into your second period class and you have a test. This is a test that you have to pass but you have no clue what the test is going to be over. You sit down and your heart starts pounding so fast that you feel sick to your stomach. You're so scared to take this test because your not sure if you're going to pass it or not. \"You make begin\", your teacher says. Reading a few questions in your head and you dont know any of the answers. Have you ever thought about technology being able to help you? Should technology be able to read students emontional expressions?\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a 3D computer model of the face. It uses your facial muscles to determand how your feeling. For example if you are feeling anger the computer would know because your orbicularis oris tightens your lips to show the anger. This device would be able to be showed by a real face or even a painting like the Mona Lisa. This computer can even show mixed emotions.\n\nTechnology is a valuable resource for students. The new technology called the \"Facial Actions Coding System\" would be great for students. This is something that will be able to read your face and let people know if your bored, tired, happy, sad, and it even shows your fears. If your stuggling on a test or an assignment it will give you help and walk you through some of the problems. This would help many students understand the concept and test scores would be so much higher.\n\nAccording to the article people are able to tell if you are having a bad day. People can not tell what is wrong with you just because you look sad or upset. Vinci studied human anatomy to help paint facial muscles that can convey certain emotions. If you look at the painting of Mona Lisa you would be able to tell from her facial strututres of what type of mood she is trying to show. When looking at the Mona Lisa , it really intended to make you smile and in a happy mood.\n\nHow would you want to feel when taking a test and understanding the concept better? Wouldnt you want to be able to have higher test scores and better grades? Do you think that the Facial Action Coding System is a valuable resource for students?\n\nThe FACS would benfit alot of students in the world. Do you think that technology should be able to read students emotions?",
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"content": "Some advocate the view that the government should not promulgate income tax for its citizens. To the best of my knowledge, I totally disagree with this statement inasmuch as the funding from taxation can be used to contribute to the benefit of individuals and the society as a whole.\n\nTo begin with, the majority of money from tax play a profound role in improving the living quality of the inhabitants. The justification is that the state budget is crucially important to upgrade the public infrasstructure, which lately leading to a convinient and safe area for people to live and travel. An prominent instance is that, with the timely enhancement of the irrigation, a city located near rivers would reduce setbacks of moonsoon tide. Furthermore, it is imperative to allocate money attribute to the facility in the vincinity neibor namely growing green parks, protect the environments, sustainable growth.\n\nOn the other hand, tax is consider as a method of saving in case of unpredictable situation so that the authority may need to get through difficulty time. The main rationale is that, in time of natural disaster or spreading disease, a public fund is the first aid to support vulnurable people. Therefore, if it was not the clever decision from the government to ennact the vaccine campainge for the community, the unprecedented pandamic of covid-19 could not be controled in minized consequences.\n\nInconclusion, tax is set as a catalys to the security of common advantage for people. In that case, a particular proportion of employees' income is encourage to attribute to the state in order that the living quality can thrive.",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus, the author wrote about the conditions of Venus and how it is similar to Earth, but also very different. The author went more in depth about the conditions of Venus compared to Earth and listed better ways of how to explore Venus without spaceships and drones lasting only a few hours without being destroyed. The author only explained how it would be beneficial to humanity at the final paragrpah of the passage. The author was more concerned of how to proceed past the challenges on Venus than to why it's so important to know more about the planet. At the conlusion of the passage the author stated that \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limitated by dangers and doubts but should be expaned to meet the very edges of imaginattion and innovation.\"\n\nThe author explained how that Venus is Earths \"twin,\" just by the size and density, but the coniditions are drastically different. Earth is a more friendly environment while Venus has very hot temperatures that has average temperatures over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and has an atmosphere that consists of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. The atmospheric pressure of Venus is 90 times greater than what we experience on Earth, which can crush a submarine in the deep depths of the ocean. The author also explained how scientists could use old computors that were beneficial to World War II to explore Venus for longer times than the recent technology that was used during the past missions to Venus.\n\nAfter reading the passage, we knew more about the planet Venus than why we should pursuit the planet despite the dangers it presents. The author stated, \"human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" What the author presents in the passage was that if we were to defeat the challenges that Venus presented to us, we will be able to pass other intimidating endeavors. How would Venus be beneficial in other ways exept for knowledge? At the time when the passage was written, scientists were not able to collect samples of Venus, so there is a chance that Venus may have a mineral that would be beneficial to Earth, but the only point the author makes is how it would benefit human curiosity about other endeavors.",
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"content": "Venus being somtimes closer than mars is a way to be able to explore the planet for a short amount of time. \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may have once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" Why do astronomers want to explore? Because they are trying to find some sufficent materials and may discover things that Venus has but Earth does not. The dangers of exploring Venus do not stop the scientists from wanting to see what is in our solar system. In a few years or decades who know what kind of materials and machines can be made to so that the astronomers can survey and survive on that planet longer than what privious things have lasted due to the 800 degrees Fahrenheit, bad weather, and the dense clouds that have \"highly corrosive sulfuric acid\" in them.\n\nVenus has a vast amount of dangerous weather such as; volcanoes, earthquakes, and strong lightning occuring frequently. This planet could have also had large oceans like Earth has, \"the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" Due to those similarities, scientists must believe that this planet is very simlier to Earth and want answers. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) belives that \"sending humans to study Venus\" is benifical to NASA's work and studies on Venus.\n\n\"NASA’s possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape.\" as NASA tries to find a way not the put harm in their men and women traveling is by working towards new and inventive ways to reduce the harm levels. \"At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\" The temurature difference is a major concern for NASA, they are wanting to try and stay above sea level here on earth but traveling to another planet and decifering the sea level and comparing it to Earth may be a challenge.",
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"content": "People referr Venus as the Earth's twin since it is the closest planet to Earth, but this does not mean that it is easy to explore. Venus is easy to spot, but people have sent spacecraft to Venus but not a single one touched Venus in three decades. This makes it hard for people to explore the planet if they can only see it, but can't be on it to see how it really looks and works on the inside.\n\nThe atmospheric pressure it 90 times than that of Earth's. The conditions that occur in Venus make it extreme for any man to even step foot on, due to the envierment of the plantet to crush even a submarine and causing the submarine to liguidfy and no human being could survive.\n\nThe harsh conditons are not stopping scientists from exploring Venus. The reason for this is because a long time ago, Venus might have been surrounded by oceans. And water means life.",
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"content": "Driverless cars should not be developed. The cars still need the help of people to perform some activities. The cars also will have millions of sensors that at any one point if one goes bad the whole car would not be able to function properly. Driving also requires the driver to be alert at all times. Driverless cars are going to have ways to entertain the driver instead of keeping the driver focused on the task at hand. With all of these potential problems driverless cars should not be developed.\n\nThe cars can brake and go on their own to help the person driving. They also vibrate when you are about to back into something or are drifting into another lane, but they can not correct these things. Some cars can drive themselves but can not function properly when coming to a roadwork area or an accident scene. If a car is incapable of dealing with these contingencies we should not develop them.\n\nCars that can drive themselves need millions of censors just to stay on the road let alone the lane. In paragraph 4 the prompt talks about the cars using LIDAR which is a device that projects a laser and spins on top of the car. Every rotation showing the computer the cars surroundings. While on the road however the LIDAR could spin around and before it get around again an object could have found its way to being in the path of the car giving the car, depending on its speed, hardly any or no time to react. Other sensors could go bad or just the slightest miscalculation or glitch in anything could spell disaster for the car and its passenger(s). These cars should not be developed given today's unreliable technology.\n\nIn paragraph 8 the questions, \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\" and, \"Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\", were asked. In the same paragraph the author answers the question by saying, \"We have to interpret the driving fun in new way.\" Manufacturers hope to fix that problem by introducing \"in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays.\"(Paragraph 8) These same ideas contradict the claim in paragraph 9 that says, \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best acieved with alert drivers.\" How can drivers be alert if they are busy \"having fun\" before the car decides to hand over the controls to the driver. Driverless cars are just going to cause more accidents due to the lack of attention the drivers are giving the road.\n\nDriverless cars should not be developed because they still require human assistance, there are too many things that can go wrong with the technology required, and that driving takes alert drivers, the same drivers that are going to be \"entertained\" while they wait for their turn to drive.",
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"content": "In the present circumstance, the innovation of technology as well as artificial intelligence has supported mankind in numerous processes. Although some people claim that automation can lead to unexpected consequences, I believe that the benefits of machines outweigh the disadvantages. This essay will discuss the advantages of technology like the ubiquitous nature of machines in human life as well as their automation function.\r\n\r\nIn modern life, technology has appeared in every aspect of the community. Starting from the smallest dishwashing machine in the kitchen to grand manufacturing robots, it has always made human life easier. In addition, technology has the capability to create more occupations rather than remove them . For example, numerous manufacturing factories require skilled engineers to operate them. As a result, companies will hire more professionals with specialized knowledge to handle gadgets. Furthermore, office works also relate to machines. In the past, fax machines were utilized strongly, and at the present, every organization treat photocopy machines as must-have things.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the machine is defined as a mechanism to function automatically. As it removes people from physically demanding tasks for decades, individuals do not require to do such heavy things. Also, the automation of machines can also increase production efficiency. To illustrate, in the past, it might take many days to produce a car, but now with the support of automated machines, companies are capable of manufacturing thousands of automobiles a day. Therefore, these advancements create sustainable development for society.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the development of automated gizmos is inevitable. As it benefits both the communities and people, I believe that we should consider these machines as our partners in order to innovate further.",
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"content": "I think that scientists should study about Venus because it has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nNASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. Nasa's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float about the fray. Temperatures would be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. Researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despit the risks. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribut meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War ||. My conclusion about scientists studying Venus is that they should be able to because you never know you could find interesting stuff and they can find out if aliens are real.",
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"content": "State Senator I disagree on keeping the Electoral College! For only the electors choose who is going to be the new President, I say we get dispose of it and change the election to most popular vote! That way we also have a say on who is going to be the new President and the new Vice President. For we also have to have a say on this.\n\nThe thing that is wrong with this system is that the voters do not vote for the President, but for the slate of the electors who in turn elect the President! like it says on source 2 paragraph 10 \"If you lived in Texas and wanted to vote for [John] kerry\n\nThe Electoral College does not let us, the people, choose who is going to be the new President it only allows the electors choose who it's going to be by their vote! For an example on the 2000 U.S. Presidental race, Al Gore recieved more of the individual votes than George W. Bush, but Bush only the won election because he recieved 271 electoral votes than Al Gore's 266! It wasn't fair that",
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"content": "Computers computers computers Who nt right They teach hand eye coordination give people learn faraway places people actually believe people say otherwise I think s pure bull Computer s today help us everyday tools cars cellphones everday television Computer s also make work easier interact people I one think computers benefit society today people think otherwise look one move step Cellphones cars telephones want There made mankind bit technology Did know cars computers biult em By press button doors unlocked swith windows go yes computer Now computer s make life easier say Well keep reading find The toothpaste baseball bats pencils made yoou know Machines programed computer chips Oh remember history teacher told took hours make baseball bat human scratch Now takes like minutes help comuters If nt enough tell computers benefit us Experts say people use computers lot nt get outside often interact family s false I say Cellphones everyday tool use talk long distant calls pay Well chat online personal labtop I hope believe computers really benefit us With everday items use make work easier make us interact We use everday hopefully ll around longest",
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"content": "I the first paragraph it says ' Luke Bomberer had no idea his life would change soon after his high school graduation he was working two prat-time jobs in a grocery store and a bank when his friend Don Reist invited him to go to Eurpe on a cattle boat Luke couldn't say no He knew it was an opportunity of a life time.\n\nThat is how it began but. In paragraph 2 says. It was 1945 World War 2 was over in Eurpe and many countries were left in ruins to help these countries recover their food supplies animals and more 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Abministration) UNRRA hired\n\nSeagoing Cowboys to take care of horses young cows and mules that were shipped overseas Luke and Don signed up. That is when Luke become a Seagoing\n\nCowboy. And in paragraph 4 says. Luke turned 18 before arriving in Greece which meant he could be drafted for military service When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip they told me to just keep Doin that for my service By the time he was discharged in 1947 Luke had made nine trips-the most of any Seagoing Cowboys.",
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"content": "I think that driverless cars are positive thing. For one they have automatic breaks.They don't use as much gas a regular cars. This could be big for the world.\n\nA lot of people have fascinated about cars that drive themselves for many years. Amongst those people is Google cofounder Seregey Brin who envisioned a future with driveless cars as transportation for many years now . The cars would use only half the fuel of todays cars which is very good for the environment and for the world. This would be a big step in moving forward.\n\nThe cars have a lot of money invested in them. One good use of the money is putting in the automatic breaking system. If your driving, and something or someone gets in the way of the car it will automatically stop. If it were just a regular car you could possibly hit something. When your driving and you just happen to look away from the road theres nothing to help you stop. So your just going to end up crasing, but if you had the driverless car is would stop on its own.\n\nIn most states it is illegal to test computer- driven cars, but some countries have allowed limited use. Many believe that as soon as the cars are more reliably safe other countries will allow it to be legal. Automakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved",
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"content": "In recent years, the question of whether art should be taught at school has been a matter of debate. Some maintain that art should be an integral part of the study; however, there is another school of thought which dismisses this notion as they deem that it is the dissipation of time. In this essay, I will discuss both assertions and conclude that it is of paramount importance.\r\n\r\nThe most powerful argument in favour of art being on the school curriculum is its profoundly positive impact on the development of children’s cognitive skills. By participating in art activities, children deploy a wide range of accomplishments, like decision-making, thereby enhancing them. Not only can art help children have a fertile imagination, but also promotes lateral thinking in them. It can, therefore, have far-reaching implications, as this expertise are also crucial to learning other subjects; hence it appears logical to suggest that art improve outcomes in all subjects.\r\n\r\nNotwithstanding these substantial benefits, it seems this subject is of no consequence to some. They point out schools should prioritise core subjects, like physics, arguing STEM skills are vital for students’ future lives and art is worthless. Given the fact that not all pupils have the opportunity to pursue their interest in art academies or at home, was art excluded from the school curriculum, they would not be able to understand the value of the arts, nor would those who are artistically inclined hone their skills. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I subscribe to the theory that art should be a part of the curriculum in view of the fact art education is critical to students’ personal and educational development, and it is inextricably linked to other disciplines as it can foster those skills also needed for them.",
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"content": "Recently, the number of people who take nutritious food and do physical activity is increasing. In this essay, I will explain why they are motivated and suggest how to push ahead with this trend. \r\n\r\nOne of the possible reasons for this trend is that accurate health information became easier than ever before. With the development of technology, people can obtain plenty of information, such as the relevance between good health and lifestyle. For example, on the internet, people can find articles about obesity and depression, which are caused by the excessive intake of junk food and a lack of work out. Besides, many articles provide how to cook nutritional meals. Easily access to fitness and cuisine information led people to reconsider their eating and workout habits, thus, more people tend to eat healthier and doing physical activity on daily basis to avoid getting illnesses.\r\n\r\n By adding the opportunity of learning about cooking and exercise, the number of people who follow this trend will more increase and encourage them to continue for a long time. Experts like registered dietitians and sports instructors can teach an effective way and new methods that most people would not know. For instance, the city where I live has well-reputed yoga lessons for its convenience, which do different forms from the past ones. Citizens can join that whenever they want and will never get bored since every lesson varies. Therefore, setting an environment that includes beneficial advice will encourage more people to consume balanced meals and doing work out. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, much health information led people to eat nutritious meals and doing physical activity daily. In my opinion, offering an opportunity which people can learn about cooking and exercising without hesitation will propel them even more.",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Narciso Rodriguez The mood reading could described grateful I sense mood things Narciso Rodriguez mentions The author would constantly say thank parents sacarfies mak suitable living enviroment Narciso It also states way express gratitude spirit generosity impressed upon early age demonstration important family friends Over memoir mood mainly described Grateful towards parents heritage home",
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"content": "Dear Newspaper editor I would like make benifits owning computer For example learn many thing would never able also go chat rooms talk friends people even make teaching esyer Computers many countres standard use learn many things bring one tribes look like alein object know use open eyes ever many people remote ribes areas dont even know theres man meon Another great thing computer pay bills taxes insurance credit cards othe payments good cant get house place closed wont get late fees even help save large amounts money Many people use computer socialize joining online website twitter myspace talk veiw pictures see friends Also message friends Further many people play games computer single player online millions players time also hook gaming system computer play people even yet hints cheats The biggest reasons computers benifit though revolutionized school homework instead work sheet go computer print email teacher Another reason computer amazing makes research projects home work much easyer redrable ean give much broader view topic By far best thing ahead computer fact many teachers use teach show videos Therefore much easier learn stand thing wich help us future successful Also many kids pay less attention teaches giving lecture computer playing video grasp students attention much better These reasons I think computer excellant invention every family school one I hope find persuading puplish",
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"content": "Dear Have ever used computer anything besides buisness Well busy try The effects computers people s lot fun go play helpful mostly anything find anything websites clothing maps store location There three reasons agree reasons people right choose want weather s little bit cold go enjoy nature lastly interact friends familys online website People right choose goverment ca nt choose since re busy important stuff Also constitution states goverment ca nt choose us power think In weather s cold go plus nature much better s hot cold thats sun good thats people enjoy nature With technology todays world s better take advantage technology world also technology helping people like generators old times people nt generators So I hope letter changed opinion thank reading",
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"content": "Dear, Senator of Florida\n\nAfter reading this story/argument i think we should remove the Electoral college, why? Because i think we shoud be able to have the final vote, not the electoral voters. It states in paragraph 15 that \"it is the electors who elect the president, not the people.\" \"when you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors.\" (paragraph 15) the reason why is cause they vote on the more who has the responsibility on taking part as president.\n\nThe electoral college has 538 electors and about 270 electoral vote are required to elect president. There is one member of the house in your state of representatives also 2 for your senate. But in the district of columbia therenis allocated 3 electors that are treated like a state. This election is held every four yearson the Tuesday after the first Monday of November. So when you vote, you dont vote for the whivh presidnt your actualy voting for the candidtes electors.\n\n\"It is possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win national popular vote. But in the year 2000, Gore had more popular votes then Bush,and Bush had less fewer electoral votes. This yet has not happened very rarely, but it was the first time ever since 1888.\" That only happened cause the elctoral votes made it happen. some informstion i put up there is to inform you what they do and how many votes are required to elect president compared to the thousands of people voting for the president.\n\nI say that the electoral college is unfair! why? well there's resons. The first is cause they lost the presidency the year 2000 with Gore and Bush. Second of all people who favored the seperation of race.\n\nWe, people shoud be able to vote on the president to make our vote count! Not on just voting for the electors the elect the president. Let our votes be heard to the people not the just the elctoral college.",
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"content": "Dear State Senator,\n\n\"The American people should consider themselves lucky...\" \"What is the Electoral College?\" by the Office of the Federal Register, \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" by Bradford Plumer, and \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our depised method of choosing the President\" by Richard A. Posher, these 3 passages were compared about electoral votes. Which one to for the people would choose, either in favor of keeping the Electoral College or changing to election by popular votes for the U.S. president? Answer: You should be able to keep the Electoral College so every person has their right in voting and it would be equal equal.\n\nWhether the people don't care about who's gonna get it or not going to, it would still be better off voting and trying to get that person elected. \"..the electoral college is unfair to voters.\" All the people want is to be equal and have their rights and in order for them to have rights. Instead, of Congress going with just the populars, they should be able to count up all the people's voting choices and let it decide like that. \"The election is only a few swing voters away from catastrophe.\" If the higher people in the Presidency don't take charge soon enough every electoral poll booth we have will turn into a big mess with horrible, unexpected things coming.\n\nIf all things were possible, do you really think this world would be having these arguments or 'hard choices'. \"A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible because the total number of votes is an even number.\" Does that mean we should go with the popular votes if it's a tie? Yes, well if it's an even number it happens rarely enough where you don't see it often. \"Voters are the people who want to express rather than people who think a single vote will decide.\" The people eho think one vote will decide more than the other's is wrong because what if that person had expressed their vote and the other choice would've won.\n\n\"The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational.\" Not everything you do will be fair in life. Other words, yes give your opinion and hope that you'll be heard and it will help.",
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"content": "The different settings cyclist affected felt rode bike rode He well excited happy going ride truly felt rode bike real fast short cut And came long crippling hill riding real fast So unfortunately riding fast non stop came whole road relief He felt free came hills tall large But mostly believed could find way end He said always stuck future So hes keeping future wisdom He thought gon na die ask little push But different things affect cyclist impossible bright future",
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"content": "The mood created memoir arrived United States given opportunty many immigrants wanted education His parents still carried cuban culture especially kitchen parent loved making food great culunary skills learned They would cuban music going setting table The tells us parent still Cuba dad worked laboratory mother studied chemical enginerring The says I always grateful parents love sacrifice I ve often told much courageous thing I could ever done",
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"content": "My side of the story is that we shouldnt have Driverless cars. I think that we shouldnt have driverless cars because they could potentially malfunction, inflicting law, and would cause laziness.\n\nOne reason why i believe that we shouldn't have driverless cars is because they could malfunction. In the passage it states that the cars could malfunction. Thats a clear indicator that the people are not ready for driverless cars. Malfunctions could caust money or a life a human being. the aspect of cars needing money put in to them is not new but I am not going to risk my life with driverless cars.\n\nAnother reason why is that it inflicts the law. In the passage it states that the cars are only legal in 3 states and one city. they want to test them and prove that they work and so other states will legalize autonomous cars. The law is the law these cars may not even pass emission standards or other State and even Federal laws. This is another reason why we shouldnt have autonomous cars.\n\nAnother reason why we shouldnt have autonomous cars is because of laziness. technology already causes diseases to sprout and other bad cases. what will happen to people when we drive just there, eat food, get fat. We shouldnt let our country be the cause of lazy people and known as the lazy country. this is another reason why we shouldnt have autonomous cars.\n\nI do not support the movement of autnomous cars. I dont support it because of malfunctions, inflicting on the law, and pure laziness. if we do this we will be overcome by technology a click of a button by a criminal could cause you to be killed or a malfunction of a car could kill you. This is why i dont support autonomous cars.",
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"content": "Car usage is very popular in this world we have come to know. It used for many means of transportation like going to work, school, social events, or just simply going shopping or hanging out with friends. Those are some up sides to having and using a car. But they are some down sides as well. I will be explaining the down sides of using a car as well as the advantages of limiting car usage.\n\nMy first reason in this topic that i have chosen to tell you about are \"Car-free\" cities. what are Car-free cities? well the name says it all is a new project they are working on in europe of this city who is car free. This new city has no cars, no street parking, no driveways or or home garages. Why do they exist? well the obvious answer is to minimize car pollution that are creating green house gases and are polluting the air and more places can adopt this idea and have more \"car-free\" cities so we can save the planet and ultimately save our selves from extinction because we did not know how to maintain our planet clean. Also a thing a like about this new \"Car-free\" city is that theres a main street where theres all the stores at a walking distance like how great is that? u can just take a ten to twenty minute walk and go shopping for anything like grocerys, shoes, clothe, restaurants instead of driving to a mall along some distant highway and ultimately that is where everybody is so hanging out with your friends and meeting all up in one place is at a walking distance and if you dont have any friends well you make new friends at this main street because that is where everybody is.\n\nAnother great reason for considering less car usage is less traffic. Who does not like less traffic? everybody hates traffic is slow, boring, and annoying. Now if we have less traffic that means we have less commute time when trying to get to work if you have a job that is far from your home and that means you get to work sooner and on time and hopefully get a raise because you feel like you dont get paid anough to do what you do. Also if we have less traffic we have less commute time and what does that mean? well it can mean multiple things like having more time to sleep because you dont have to worry about waking up early to beat the morning traffic like my mom and plenty of other people do. At the end of the day you will be able to get home quicker so you can spend more time with your family and do stuff you usually cant because of the time you spend at traffic.\n\nMy last reason is a very important reason and it is simply \"safety\". Think about it, it is simply just common sense. if they are less cars in the road at one time then the chances of car accidents decreases. Now i dont know about you but that sounds like a win win to me. One theres less accidents so theres less people in the hospital so they dont have hospital bills to worry about and less accidents means less traffic as well. And also if you ban the cars for a day or have one of them \"car-free\" cities you have less drunk drivers; one because they dont have a car so they will probably just drink at home and two if the bar or where ever is that there going to drink is close enough then they can just \"walk\" there sober and \"walk\" back to the house drunk instead of being in a car a causing a fatal accident.\n\nUltimately i feel that the usage of cars should be limmited because of many reasons. This reasons are as follows. Less car pollution. living in a car-free city so you are able to walk everywhere. Less traffic, less commute time, having more time to do stuff. and last but not least the safety of drivers. personally i think we should supervise the usage of automobiles and have more \"car-free\" cities and have days where car usage is baned or restricted by some amount.",
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"content": "At present, the education system has improved a lot due to the involvement of private sector schools. Some people believe that pupils can gain a lot of benefits from the private faculties while, some parents think that private educational centres can cause negative impacts on them. So that this problem has become controversial. This essay will discuss both these points and I strongly believe that even non-state educational institutions can provide quality teaching for children.\r\n\r\nFirstly, there are a lot of plus points of non-government education such as, they offer a range of subjects and they provide lot more facilities such as IT and communicational skills for their pupils. Especially, more theoretical and practical sessions are done in more secondary schools as mandatory subjects. Consequently, students can develop their capabilities and the pedagogy techniques which are used by private schools are totally different from those of government schools and once when they enter the society there will be rewards for them to find their career goals. For instance, I can explain this with my own experiences. Last two years I worked as an international school teacher and during that period I understood the difference in the curriculum which I taught to my students. It was more advanced than the normal government school curriculums.\r\n\r\nSecondly, since children in private sector colleges have more freedom and the academies are run with parents' money. Due to this reason, some children are not obedient to their adults and not responsible for their duties and they have not developed moral values such as dignity and integrity. Thus, youngsters who enter the community with these features can cause great damage to society and this can be a pressurising issue. For instance, one of my pupils who went to a private school with a lot of freedom could not pass exams and he was a problematic child. Furthermore, due to ,this he became a fool in front of his friend and , eventually he became an unsuccessful person in world.\r\n\r\nAll in all, learning is a crucial factor in our lives and there is no difference in public or private sector schooling if correct knowledge and values are being taught. Providing quality education can broaden a student's horizon and ultimately it can make a perfect human being for society.",
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"content": "I do not think driverless cars should be a \"thing of the future\". Many things could go wrong if you let technology take over your driving. Drivers and passengers could get injured, the technology could malfunction, and the cars are not completely driverless. The car would not be completely safe for the drivers or anyone else in the car.\n\nFirst, people in the car could be seriously injured. If there is no way of knowing\n\nwho's responsibilty it is that someone is injured there could be many problems. Someone could be injured in the car because they don't have as much control over the car as a regular car would. A person who is hurt in this car could end up with a lot of problems. People in the driverless car could be injured.\n\nSecond, the car could malfunction. Malfunctions of the car could lead to many problms.The driver could be driving down the road and something happens with the technolgoy and the driver loses control of the car. If the car is about to hit something and it doesnt let the driver know it needs to take over, the car could crash. The driverless car could malfunction and cause wrecks or injuries.\n\nThird, the car is not completely driverless. The driver still has to control the car if needed. The driver may not be paying attention when they need to take over. This could cause the driver to not be fully ready to stop the car. They may not stop fast enough and crash into another car or object. Not being a completely driverless could be a big issue for not only the owner, but the manufacturers as well.\n\nDriverless cars should not be used in the future. They could cause injuries, the car could malfunction, and the car is not completely driverless. It may not be completely safe for the driver or the passengers in the car. Many problems can occur from using the driverless car.",
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"content": "The face found on Mars is just a natural landform. It is considered a natural landform because there is no proof that aliens made it. We also have yet to find any type of life form on Mars. They have investigated this face since 1976 to 2001.\n\nThere is no real evidence or proof that an alien made that face on Mars. It was first noticed in 1976. It could have been there way before then. Its a natural landform because as the planets move around the sun that could make the land make any type of shape that no one has any control over. There is also no proof that aliens are real either so it could really be from anything.\n\nWhen NASA first spotted this face, they didn't have the best cameras back then. Once it got to the media everyone was coming up with there own theories about how the face got there. NASA caption noted it as a \"huge rock formation which resembles a human head formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth.\" Thhe public took it out of hand and said it was created by aliens and didn't have any real evidence.\n\nOn April 5, 1998 when they flew over the planet for the first time and got a sharper picture of the face, the picture revealed that it was a natural landform. There was no evidence or proof that an alien made it.\n\nIn conclusion, the face found on Mars is just a natural landform formed by shadows and gives off illusions. It was most likely formed because of the planets spinning on the axis around the sun. The sun and other weathers, such as rain and snow can cause the land to form into anything from erosion or deposition.",
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"content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" written by Nick D'Alto, he discusses the pros and cons of advancedments in face recognition technology. With the new technology constructed by Prof. Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe, it gives people the ability to use a software to recognize what emotion someone is feeling based off of their facial features. Despite this major advancement there are certain times it should not be used for. Prof. Thomas Huang's software should be utilized for recreational use and safety, however, it should not be introduced to the classroom.\n\nNew technology never fails to amaze people due to its never before seen qualities. This technology is no different, Huang's Facial Action Coding System is revolutionary. The ability to distinguish someones emotions from a photo can be beneficial in so many places. A couple places that this technology would benefit would be for browsing the internet and when interviewing or interrigating someone. If this technology was utilized while people surf the web it could enhance your results dramatically. In the text it mentions how this could be beneficial\n\nwhile shoping online \"For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on you screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different\" (D'Alto 6). This shows how the technology has the potential to revolutionalize the way that you surf the web. Another place this technology would be beneficial would be in interviews or interrogations. While interviewing someone, it is important to know if the canidate is genuinly excited or happy about the job oppurtunity. As for the interrogations, if a criminal does something bad, but refuses to tell the truth. This can be used to find out if they are being truthful or if they are showing an emotion that displays guilt \"these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celevrity isn't being truthful\" (D'Alto 8).\n\nThis technology would be the most useful in these places. However, one place that this should never be seen is in schools.\n\nImagine teaching a class aware of a supernatural technology that is able to nearly read minds. Now imagine a whole class full of students making silly faces and their computers to try and see if the emotional recognition will change something. This technology would come as more as a distraction in a majority of schools. Already, technology is sweeping across the nations educational system and causing havoc for thousands of teachers. This technology would just come as another avoidable distraction caused by technology. Furthermore, introducing this technology into schools might make parents and students feel unsteady. Why would someone want a computer decifferring their emotions, if they are private and held to themselves for a reason. Parents might not like this idea for the same reason. They are aware that emotions are private, unless you decide to set them free.\n\nHowever, the idea of introducing it to schools had all of the right intents. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" (Huang 6). However, being able to recognize if a student is board or dozeing off is not hard to do for teachers. Technology does not need to take over the teachers love for preying on a kid who is not paying attention. Teachers are able to successfully do everything this technology is able to do, and possibly at a more effecient rate due to the novity of this software.\n\nAlthough this technology is revolutionary in various amounts of ways it will only be effective if it is used it the right places, and at the right times. It will be interesting to see the future of the Facial Action Coding System. As technology continues to advance it is important that people recognize what will and will not be valuable in a classroom enviroment. This piece of technology is one of those things that will not enhance learning in the classroom/\\.",
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"content": "The article \"Driveless Cars Are Coming,\" makes a statement about positive and negative results; However, it leaves the reader with their personal opinion. I believe they should make driveless cars, but there could be negative dangers ahead. The driveless cars would make a great impact in history and advancment in technology. Less pollution would occur; Nevertheless, helping global warming decrease to a better green planet.\n\nImagine if there were no more crashes, everyone has a driveless car. More people would be alive, no more deep pain of losing a child in a car crash. The dreams we had of a future being like that is becoming even more posible. If I had the chance to test it for the sake of a better future then why not? More posibilities open each day, if you open one door more doors will open. There are many positives; However, there are also negative's in which if a car accident were to happen who would you blame? The thing is by taking opon the responsibilty of a smart car was your decision to get in it. If it were to be more than a certain amount of car crashes then you can blame the manufactor. Opening new horizons requiers bravery to\n\nbe able to advance. Making a safer planet also needs help; get out of your confort zone you won't know unless you try.\n\nSo yes, I am in total aproval of doing so. Contracts will be needed for testing, if something were to happen to the driver; it will have a backup agreement in which they agreed to. Also precaution is needed but should test with a dummy before doing so. It's all about taking risks or being stuck. This development will help the future; more posibiltys can come out of this.thinking negatively won't get us anywhere in life.",
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"content": "I really don't like this new computer thing at all. i think that it is something private and I wouldn't want to have somebody look at my emotions and see what I am feeling. What about if somebody is sad but they just don't want to talk about it. Somebody might bring it up in class saying \"Kiah is sad\" or \"What's wrong with Kiah\" I would not want to have a teacher ask me what's wrong in front of all of my classmates. I can see it if people might want to use it to see if the students are bored with their class work but other than that I would not like it at all.\n\nFor example, when the author says \"The Mona lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face. while it shows just how much the computer can do.\" i don't agree with that at all it should be your right to say that you don't want to have people ask if you are okay. This new computer would not make me smile it would make me angry. I think that they should only do it on paintings and not on real life people. I also think if they do this new computer thing a lot of people would be angry,\n\nIn conclusion, i do not like the idea of the computer where it can tell what emotions you are feeling. It is an invasion of your pricavy. Like I said before they should only do it on paintings and not on real life people.",
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"content": "Scribe:\n\nWe started on our journey to help the other countries the reasons to join the program help those countries recover their food supply and animals and more.\n\nIt was nice that my friend invited me on this journey i accpted it because\n\nit sounded really nice and interesting.\n\nIt is nice to help the people where im visiting because of what happened and it is fun.\n\nWhen World War 2 was happing it was very scary and made famlies not which it was unable to eat and was very poor.\n\nThe people enjoy when we try to help them.\n\nIt was a long ride in the boat but it was worth it.\n\nLife was hard for them when world war 2 was going on and it was a scary time and some of them left during that time.\n\nsome of the people were in the war and it was more scary for them but they had food that was given to them.\n\nWhen we talk to the people that were in or not in the war they tell us that the stories about when they were in or out of the war and it seems like a scary situration.\n\nI would not like to be in that situration\n\nI think that i would probly move somewhere where there was not a war going on even if I miss my family.\n\nIt is nice that people are willing to take up their time to help the people.\n\nWe have met so many people that are nice and people from our homeland.\n\nSome of the people left this land when there was war. The reasons\n\nwas that they were scared of being hurt,\n\nalso they were not wanting to be poor and not have food.\n\nThe time in Europe was very fun now it is time to go to China.\n\nWhen they were working two part time jobs it was very difuiclt for them because they could not afford for food or spend enough money for a house incerences and home.\n\nwhen they did two part time jobs they were unable to\n\nspend enough on their family.\n\nUNRRA\n\nhelped 44 nations to get them back on food supply.\n\nyoung cows and muels were shiped over sees.\n\nThe sea going cow boys were part of the 44 nations to help\n\nthe horses, cows and muels.\n\nwe are allmost to China,\n\nthe waves are huge and we are tried our best to carry the animals over.\n\nwe think it will take only one more week to get to china althrough\n\nit could take shorter\n\nor\n\nit could take longer it all depends on the weather.\n\nwe see the land and we think we will be less than a day from getting there.\n\nwe will right we are now in china and we are going to get our passport checked\n\nand then we are on our way to helping familes.\n\nit is fun\n\nto help the familes. we needed to learn chinease\n\nbefore we left our house.\n\nwe now are starting to read chinease we have not known lots of chinease but we are starting to learn because some of the familes were in America during the war and know a lot of Eniglish.\n\nThe familes in China are\n\nvery nice and we have learned a lot of food to cook because of visiting the people.\n\nAlthrough\n\nwe have come to an end it is almost time to say goodbye. we have one day left.\n\nWe have said goodbye and the familes said we can come whenever we want.\n\nWe will have fun and we will talk to them from our homeland.\n\nThe boat is ready and we are onboard for our homeland america.\n\nit is time to rest because we have a big day coming up. we got the good rest and we see our home it is time to say goodbye and have a nice trip when you come to help familes in Europe and China.",
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"content": "I think the technology called the Facial Action Coding System is valuable because I think it is a very big advantage of using this type of technology and it gets more work done and also less thinking into the drawings or other types of things that could involve using this technology.\n\nAn example from the article is \" we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on there faces\" Another thing why I think this type of technology is going to be useful, Is because maybe in the future all of the work could be handed over to the technology, Letting the technology do the work for us, Which would make it much easier for humans and less stressful to think about.\n\nIn conclusion I think my statement towards this article is reasonable, Because I think many or some people would agree with it, I think many people would love to have a less stressful job, Sometimes it can get stressful in thinking what to do for the painting.",
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"content": "The mood created authar warmthness He toward family moving also cared parents alot done family I know I never forget parents turn simple house home",
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"content": "I think author ends story paragraph reminded homeland going home The reason I say geese returning home wants Also hibiscus budding wild like back home",
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"content": "I think driveless cars are kind of a issue but again i don't think it is becuase it would kinda be difficult or weird for a car to be driving by itself with you in you wouldnt be that used to it as if you were driving it your self. It would be difficult for me because im not used to it at all. I think it would be awkward to drive without steering or driving car yourself. What if you fall asleep while the car is going by itself it would be so weird because you will feel so awkward for it to be going by itself. It would be awesome because its somehting new in the world so everyone will want to test it out around the world. I bet most people are tired of driving by there selves anyway. I would most definetly try it out if it were to happen in Anderson, IN or somewhere near close by. I hope it does happen soon so i can get new car. Whoever get this car in the future please be safe becuase you never know what could happen in this world with a car like that.",
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"content": "The Challenge Of Exploring Venus\n\nMy Claim that\n\nsupport the passage is \" Do Not Judge A Book By It Cover\" despite the facts that venus is one of the brightest points in the night sky, it was simple for amateur stargazer to spot. Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size and closest in distance. The only difference between the venus and earth is the speed because sometimes we are closer to venus because it is always around the corner.\n\nNo spacecraft has ever survived landing on venus. Venus is marked as the challenging planet for human despite the promixity and the similarities they both share. There is 97%\n\ncarbon\n\ndioxide which bblankets venus and it is more challenging due to the highly corrosive sulfuric acid in its atmosphere. The atmospheric pressure in venus is more greater than what we experience on earth and also it has the hottest surface.\n\nAccording to Paragraph 4, the astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth like planet in our solar system. Venus was for once looks like earth which includes different oceans and some rocky sediments which partains to mountains and valley. Eventhough venus is no more condusive for human being it is still consider as one of nearest option for planetary visit for humans. NASA are compelling ideas for sending human to study venus. The possible solution for NASA to study will allow the scientist to fly above the fray. If blimp-like vehicle hovering above the venus was created this would be of help to the astronants to complete their research because the vehicle won't come down to the surface of the venus that low, but there would be a lot of solar power and radiation so that the condition can be survivable for the humans.\n\nIf a ship orbiting safely above the venus is created this wouid\n\nhelp to provide some insight about the ground conditions because most form of light can't penetrate the dense atmosphere so this will render any form of photography in effective and also things cannot be picked from the surface of the venus, so with this scientist is planning to conduct a thorough\n\nmission to understand venus would need to get up close despite the challenges they're going to face. According to\n\nparagraph 7, NASA is working on other approaches to study venus examples are some simplified electronics made of silicon and also using the mechanical computers to study the surface of the venus but using a modern computer can be delicate because of the the risk it entakes.\n\nFinally, for scientist to study the Venus they need to create some powerful equipments that can be of help to them. Venus is large but due to the risk, it is made difficult for scientist to study it.",
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"content": "Technology to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable. Technology to read emotional expressions of students is not valuable because the software is not compatible with all generations of computers. It would cost a lot of money to upgrade all computers for schools around the world. Technology to read expressions is also not valuable because in the passage it explains how the technology can find ones hidden emotion. That is invading privacy because they are hiding their emotions for a reason and maybe they don't want to be bothered and a teacher may try to talk to them about it.\n\nKnowing ones hidden emotional can be invading privacy but it also has benefits. The benefits could be for identifying ones anger that has the mentality to inflict harm to someone or something. It could also alert the teacher because there could be a disturbance. He or she could pull the student aside incase they cannot handle their emotions or have a panic attack. The software could also prevent fights and agruments because the teacher would see the students emotions and help. But that still does not stop the fact at the end of the day that is an invasion to privacy because sometimes emotions are suppose to be kept on the inside. Last but not least the pricing becasue in the article it does not give price but the software might cost and it would still cost money to upgrade school computer to get the software.\n\nAlthough the technology has benefits it should still not be used. Even though it has value it is stll not worth it price wise and the invasion of ones privacy. At the end of the day every school does not have money. It could also be a safety problem becuse student will feel like they're being spyed on. Not just by the teacher but the government becuse the government is attached through many softwares.",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast I seen builders empire State building ran obstacles trying allow dirigibles dock The empire State building already standing architects decided renovate make dock dirigibles The architects working project strengthen buildings frame They also wenches control machinery dirigible mooring The architects also needed install housed elevators stairs bring passengers base floor back After renovations done empire state building floors After building done owners found could let dirigibles building They would break law airships flying low urban areas So empire state building finished could use dirigible s",
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"content": "As a young driver just getting on the road, driving is like a new world to me. Cars today are very different from the cars people used to drive back when the invention of the car released to public. Based on how far they have come building new models of cars every year and advancing each model significantly, brings heaps of intrest toward the driverless car. I believe if the research shows that the driverless car is progessing and is staying safe for people to use, then I think there should not be laws prohibiting cars that drive themselves.\n\nDriverless cars have been tested over and over again for the past generation trying to get a information on what works and what does not. I do not think it is a good idea to have a complete driverless car without anyone in the car assisting the car. If companies like GM and Ford want to create a car that needs assistance when coming up to confusing positions on the road. For example the passage above stated that cars would need assistance if it were to come to a work zone or around accidents. If the car did not know what to do and needed helps getting back on track, there would be no one paying attention if it drove itself. This would cause major legal problems between the victim and the company.\n\nIf a person were to get hurt in a crash and it was because the car did not know what to do in a certain situation and it crashed into a car, there is major controversy with this case because it is not the company's fault for the driver not paying attention to the road when then car needed help monuvering around an obsticle. Big name companies like Ford and GM have expiramented with technology that alerts you when the car needs guidence. In the passage it shows that the companies have used lights on the windshield that lights up when the car does not know what to do. Another example that sparked my attention is that GM made your seat vibrate when there is an object behind your vehical that you do not see. If driverless cars have this sort of equipment in them then I do not see why\n\nOther cars that have been tested also have had an abundance of other tacky inventions in them. Manufacturers have thought of putting video cameras that watch you drive to make sure that your are watching the road and not texting or talking on the phone. Sensors was another strategy that was mentioned toward the beginning of the passage, and I think if the cars have sensors will be the only way that a driverless car will be passed in a majority of the states in the US. Car sensors have been around since the 1980's when companies used them for brakes, but now they have evolved so much I do not know why they cannot make sensors that make sure the car can drive safely and get to the car owner's destination.\n\nIf the driverless car gets passed in all 50 states in the US, it first has to have valid data that shows proof that it can drive safe and will not crash and cause damage. I do not think that a law will ever get passed unless a driver has to watch the road and assist the car when the car needs guidance. I am sure it is possible and with the research that is out in the world today, I would not be suprised if a totally driverless car law gets passed here in the near future.",
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"content": "It is truly said that because mankind has destroyed the environment, environment is now destroying mankind in numerous ways like the global warming, tsunami, black hole and other natural calamities. Some people suggest that one of the optimal ways to solve these problems are by increasing the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. While I agree that this would be helpful to a certain extent, but I strongly disagree that it might be the most appropriate way to protect and conserve the surroundings. The essay evaluates the reasons for disagreement.\n Many people are of the opinion that price rise of fuel for vehicles would refrain majority of the population from using private transport, thereby reducing the poisonous emissions of carbon monoxide and harming the environment. It would encourage the purpose of public transport or bikes for that matter, since it is a cheaper option. However,the above is a form of inflation, by which the rich would become richer and the poor would become poorer.\n Instead of a price hike, wouldn't it be better if communities are educated? If the value of fuels reduces out of realization and not inflation? By enhancing the awareness in the society, people would not only utilise trains and bikes, but can also view the positives of using electric cars. If they are knowledgeable about the poisonous emissions of gases, which not only cause harm to human health in the form of respiratory diseases, but also to the nature due to depletion of the ozone layer, the use of fuel-based vehicles, I believe would greatly reduce. This environmental awareness needs to be raised amongst small villages, as well as huge cities, so that servicing of vehicles happens at regular intervals and the engines are repaired well to not release smoke.\n Therefore I feel that a price raise would just be a temporary solution for the environmental issues caused by fuels. On the other hand the spread of knowledge and literacy would go miles in inculcating a sense of responsibility amongst the people. It would encourage the use of transportation that use minimum or no fuel at all, positively impacting the climate as well as the economy of the nation.",
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"content": "Venus or better known as the \"Evening Star\" is a fascinating planet. Venus is the closest planet to Earth. Even though no human has had the chance to step foot or experience life on Venus, the evidence gathered from spacecraft it much like our Earth we live on today. Despite the dangers Venus brings, the study of this planet is much more interesting,\n\nAs following, like previously stated, Venus is Earth's \"twin brother\". As evidence in paragraph two it states, \"Often referred to as Earth's \"twin\", Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too\". Research proves that Venus maybe used to be just like the way Earth is today. For example in paragraph four the author states, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" Venus is the second planet away from our sun so life on Venus will be much more diffucult than life on Earth.\n\nAlthough these planets have much in common, they also have differences and reasons why life can't be lived on Venus. The reasons behind that , like stated in the third paragraph, \"A thick atmosphere of almost ninety-seven percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus\". That means we are left with three percent of oxygen that will not be able to substain a human's life. In addition, the pressure that the planet Venus hold is not substainable for humans. In pragraph three it states, \"(...) the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. The conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metal.\" This research itself explains that living on Venus is much more diffucult than living on Earth.\n\nEven though Venus is the second plant away from the sun the temparatures are excrustriating. Research proves, \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit (...)\". On Earth temparatures will rise no more than 120 degrees, but an average of 800 degrees Fahrenheit will cook humans like hotdogs on a grill. Besides the heat and Venus atmospheric pressure the weather Venus experiences is devastating. In paragraph three it states, \"Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes probes seeking to land on its surface\". No matter the research or things that NASA try to do to make Venus a liveable plantet, economically it's not possible unless you have a death wish.\n\nFinally, in my opinion I agree with the author that the study of Venus is worth it because from this article I was informed on a lot of interesting facts about Venus. Although no human life can be conducted onto Venus the research done on this planet is worth the time, effort, and dedication. Hopefully in the future we can expand our knowlegde and research on Venus.",
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"content": "\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is beomcing confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective instructor\" Dr. Huang stated. If the software runs effectivly it could possibly help kids learn better in the classroom or simply cheer them up if they are sad. This could be the next big advancement in schools, since it could increase the want for a child to learn.\n\nI stated that the computers could increase the want for the child to learn. I did not say that it will make the child smarter instintly, but it could increase their want. The reason I say this is because you can not put in a software and all sudden every student is a genius. Although, you can put a software in and it change the students attitude.\n\nFor example, there is a student who is having a terrible day, he is: upset, mad, and sad. He/she does not want to do his homework on the computer, he/she just wants to go home. This new computer software realizes that this student is upset, so what does it do. It pulls up an encouraging quote or a funny picture/video. By doing this the computer might change his/her mood and now the student may want to do his/her homework. That is how I see how this new technoogly can be effective in the classroom.\n\nOn the other hand this technology can be dangerous to bring into a classroom. A student may be trying his best to pay attention and learn, then all a sudden the computer changes his lesson or brings up an ad. This could be a big dirstration to students trying to learn. Not only might it be a distraction, but it might bring a lot of frustion to the students becaus they have no control over it.\n\nOverall, my opinion about this new technology is I believe it is a great idea and has a chance to be very successful. Even though I love the idea, I think that the technology needs to be tested at work businesses and other places before it is brought into the education system. Just incase it backfires and does what it is not suppose to do.",
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"content": "The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable,in the article it is stated that \"The new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements\". Also it is stated that \"weighting the different units,the software can even identify mixed emotions\". \"Leornardo Da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscled precisely enough to convey specific emotions\"\n\nAnother reason why the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable,because in the article it is stated that \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". Not only that but the technology could modify the lesson as if it was an human instructor. Another reason why this technology is effective in in the classroom is in the article \"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive\".\n\nThe computer's also need to understand that most human non communication is non verbal there are muscles called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus that makes crow's - feet around your eyes. But when you are not really smiling in a fake smile,the mouth is strecthed sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle,the risorius. These muscles clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity is fake smiling.\n\nIt is also proved that moving your facial muscled not only express emotions, but also may even help produce them Leonardo Da vinci's new software stores similar anatomical information as electronic codes. The computer know's how to detect happiness,surprise,anger,digust,fear and last but not least sadness,Also associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\n\nFrontantalis pars lateralis musles raises your eyebrows when your surprised or shocked about anything while your orbicularis oris the muscles that around your mouth tightens your lips. With all that being said the technology in the classroom is very valuable because of all the things that it recognizes like confusion,boredom,sadness and even fear. Also this technology can even modifty lesson's as if it was an human instructor.",
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"content": "Some people often go library check books movies magazines etcBut people might realize things library might offensive towards certain people I think everything thats libraries stay Obviously library allowed reason So honestly cant bad I think certain things removed library People realize s life There s going certain things dont like deal If watch tv ll notice s offensive things towards certain people But one really makes huge thing The books might offensive someone else could another book want readWith intentive purpose offending anyone The library learning Everything educational purposes I ve read books I stopped thought second I reading noticed theres pretty harsh things But nt complain I kept reading Alot books based true events matter offensive people think purpose author create book thing movies So people see author say Everyone right opinion And thats magazine articles Expressing think certain topic Even class im read To A Some people might think racist reallu nt The author trying get point Of things use white colored people treated Now still think offensive towards people thats alright That s free country Everyone right say feel get trouble So I hope got point across s alright things offensive towards people As long thats whole point watching reading Which doubt So next time reading watching something offending Think point person wrote made movie trying get across Mybe offending getting point across",
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"content": "Nowadays, with advances in technology, many people believe that kids tend to abuse playing computer games, although it is harmful. Whereas others think that computer games bring lots of advantages to their lives. This essay will discuss both views.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, the game plays a crucial role in the development of youngsters' brain. It is perceived as a type of recreation which helps their brains be more flexible to deal with the situation better. Furthermore, it guides the players to its deep virtual world, and they have to follow the plots that are created. This is the purpose of the game, it wants to challenge and put them in many different circumstances to consider and measure their reflections. To cite an example, Resident Evil is a prevalent game worldwide recently. Gamers who have already played the game said that they had amazing experiences in this game. From its sound to its plot, everything was flawless.\r\n\r\nHowever, like a coin has two sides, computer game also has its own negative effects. There are a lot of toxic games that still exist on the web browsers. They absolutely do not convey any useful and meaningful message to the youth. Additionally, it is a primary cause that leads to game addiction in kids. For example, there are some children in Vietnam are not disciplined themselves and often play their favourite games for too long. As a result, this forms a bad habit in their lives and they cannot balance their lifestyles, as well.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although the game has its negative sides, it is undeniable that if teenagers can raise their own awareness in choosing which game is valuable and helpful to play, they will be able to stay away from trash games.",
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"content": "The author probably conclude story paragraph bc basically relating plants meaning plant bloom taking test reason could bc bc reluctantly realized many things thought strange become quite repetition season upon season almost familiar Basically geese lifting head watching distinctive V etched evening sky slowly facing distance This I believe author conclde story comparing ib geese",
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"content": "Dear Florida senator,\n\nI strongly agree of keeping the Electoral College for the use of the congress' approval for the newly President of 2016. The Electoral College has a lengthy process, but can come in good use of determining the new President. Citizens vote for the electors and the electors decide who's best for the country. Even though, there are claims about the Electoral College not being fair for the people, I still defend it because it has it's good factors, like Run-off Elections,the requirement that a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal for the people, and the resoring weight of the eletoral number by population.\n\nAs so you know, the Electoral College is a process of the selction of the electors, then the gathering of electors to vote for the president and vice president. Finally, the electoral votes by the Congress. When the electors pick the president, they look at their background, such as, what school they attend, what they studied, where they were born, etc. They pick someone they trust to do the job. When there is a Run-off Election, the House Of Representatives picks the president. I personally think this is a good thing because they picked the person who would do best in the job by gathering everyone's vote to decide it. Because no country could have two presidents with two vice presidents. Some may say it's unjustice or not fair because the House Of Representatives decides the whole election. There is also the fact that when determining the winner, they both look at the popular votes and the electoral votes, and they see who got the most electoral votes and they win the election.\n\nThe Electoral College puts it simple, because they choose someone with a region where they most likely get the most electoral votes. For example, Romney was in the South region, and he knows he wouldn't have to do much there because of that was where he was currently from. Now lets compare that to someone that was in the area around North Dakota. He would most likely not win that many votes since it's only three electoral numbers. So the Electoral College gives a chance for the president they chose to win because of where they used to be located in order to get the most popular and electoral votes.\n\nThe Electoral College restores and reduces some of the weight of the electoral by its population. Smalls states aren't widely noticed by the president because they feel like they should concentrated in the big states because of there electoral votes. Still, small states tend to make it easier for them because they look at if the state was either Republican or Democrac during the past years and they take note of that. They know they'll win in those states, even though they are small numbers, every inch of it counts to help them win the title of President.\n\nTherefore, Mister Sentor, I agree in keeping the Electoral Vote because of it's reasonable factors that can help the president win. Popular vote doesn't tell anything because the people would know nothing about the president or what he accomplished. It should be kept because it has been used for many years now and has been useful for every president to win.\n\nTo Whom I Name,\n\nV.",
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"content": "On way back home doctors I getting annoyed I want mom get annoyed So I tryed great pacient Once I would play seat NUM minutes passed I getting patient Buy I still keep roln Once I got home I went bea relaxed",
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"content": "Patience quality people people dont shows character people patient It hard times get For example I resturaunt took forever get food us I patient I sitting table ordered I got really bored I decide color crayons I got After I finished I decided I needed find something else I waiting My mom talking I chose I talked long time Then bread came So I ate got bored The waiter came told us food would soon So I continued talk went bathroom When I came back food So I sat enjoyed delicious meal When I patient I got good reward Good things always come people patient If patient person always try become one Its hard keep occupied",
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"content": "Mingfong Ho closes story paragraph shows far Saeng come determination persevere The narrator says She lifted head watched distinctive V etched evening sky slowly facing distance Ho This Saeng recovering crying even though misses homeland wants adapt succeed The narrator also said she found still shaky say words home lest burst tears again Ho Being away homeland makes Saeng legible",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist cyclist dehydrated nde horrible conditions road snakes hills All features act like obstacle courses makes hard hes trying recieve water Also cyclist hot need water point delinous likely doesnt know whats going In story authors main feature setting road Rough road ahead This explains cyclist go rough road dehydrated dangerous features setting affect cyclist",
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"content": "Imagine being able to detect how your loved ones are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotions. New software has been developed that improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others. This new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising applications for a variety of industries.\n\nThis new technology can help others in so many ways.\n\nOne Reason is a person's emotional state. Suicides are major\n\nproblem in our world today. Victims are usually hiding their emotions to avoid being detected for their feelings. This technology can find out their emotions by using a 3-D model of the human face; all 44 muscles in the model must move like human muscles. FACS(Facial Action Coding System) then can help guardians or anyone get help the victim needs.\n\nAnother reason FACS is useful is the lovely world of education.\n\nStudents go through school lost or angry for not being able to click on to the lesson being teached. This system of technology can tell if a student is confused in a certain or many topics. Many students are builled for saying they need help or they dont understand what is being taught. The teachers can use FACS to look at the students face and see if the student needs to be explained the lesson over in class or privately.\n\nMy final reason I support FACS is in the courtroom. When justice needs to be served it comes down to the jury to decide cases such as murder,rape and other criminal actions. Poylographs (detection tests) are the common tool used to determine if the alleged is innocent or guilty. Polyographs are known to fail,causing the innocent behind bars or the guilty running free. FACS can scan the emotions of the alleged to see if they feel empathy or if they are guilty.",
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"content": "I just graduaded for high school. I got an opportunity of a lifetime. My friend Don Reist to go to Europe on a cattle boat. I couldn'd say no to him. It was 1945 and world war to in Europe was just over and I wanted to help put it back together.\n\nMany of the countries were left in ruins because of the war. I went to help because I wanted to help with them. Together we made UNRRA and hired seagoing cowboys take care of young and old caddle an the farms to get started with work.\n\nIn August 1945 we were sent to New Orleans. We were sent the day the Pacific war ended. I tured 18 before we went to Greece whitch ment I could be drafted to the army. Every one told me just do keep doing my job intil the time comes if it comes.\n\nThe cattle trips were hard and long. I saw China and it was cool. The Acropolis in greece was a sight. Most all the streets in Italy were full of water. but I had a good time were ever you put me.\n\nIn the end we all tryed to help out other people even if they arnt native to use.",
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"content": "The driveless car is a great invention. I perosinally think there should me more driveless cars made through out the years of the coming of age. The car still would be drivable but it would be very dependent on the human to stll pay close attention. In the article it states \" This means the human driere must remain alert and ready to take over when the sitaution requires. This necessitates the car being ready to quickly get the driver's attention whenever a problem occurs.\" It telling us that the car may be able to function on its own but in reality it's really a normal car with special car features. I think driveless cars can make an impact on the world in a postive way.\n\nIt's probably going to be hard trying to win the govemernt approval because there is nothing wrong with the everyday cars be drive them selves. \" As a result in most states it is illegal even to test a computer-driven car I think it's a safety matter but also feel if the location was secrure it should be okay. It going to take time for the driveless cars to actually be invented but overtime I think there is light at the end of the tunnel.",
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"content": "Venus, Earth's \"twin\" sister is a extordinary planet that may have been the most earth like planet in our solar system according to paragraph 4. It is also stated that Venus may have probably been covered largely with oceans that could support all form of life. Due to the dense atmosphere and toasty temperatures around 170 degrees fahrenheit. It has been impossiple to let alone land on venus but even taking samples of Venus's rock, gas, or anything else from a distance. Many drones have been sent there to gather information about Venus according to paragraph 2. Each mission to land on Venus has ben unmanned due to the problem of no spacecraft not being able to survived the landing for more than a few hours. Even with all these issues with venus, stated in paragraph 7. NASA is still working on other approaches to studying Venus because again it is a extordinary planet that is said to have been suitible for all forms of life. Finding out what happend to make Venus be in the state it is right now would help the human race from stopping Earth from becoming like Venus. There has been many ideas to get a view on venus ground conditions such as peering from a orbiting ship but that would only give a limited insight due to the dense atmosphere. On paragraph 6 it is stated \"Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus\". That just goes to show you how landing on Venus or even getting the smallest bit of sample of it is a worthy pursit despite the risks and dangers of it. The curiosity of the human race is a powerful thing, Even though Venus is described as a dangerous planet. One day we will figure out the secrets Venus hold and perhaps even have a human land on the surface as well, until then we will just keep on working on more innovations that will one day allow us to get the insight of Venus.",
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"content": "Based excerpt obstacles builders faced attempting build dirigible dock Empire State Building finding way make building bigger Chrysler Building Designing mast reality Al Smith needed way make building bigger Chrysler building He came idea putting mooring mast building The idea seemed great While designing mast architects realized ca nt place mast right top building They d modify foundation After changing skeleton building construction went planned Two month later mast finished architects forgot dirigibles use hydrogen highly flammable All work architects put nothing mooring mast never used",
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"content": "Movies have been fascinated by the idea of cars that drive themselves. We are now closer to making this dream a reality. Google is working on a self driving car as well as other comanies. Self driving cars have many benefits not only to us but to the environment.\n\nGoogle in 2009 made a car that could drive by itself, but only specific conditions. In the ariticle \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" it says that \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far Google cars aren't truly driverless.\" Although these cars can drive more than half a million miles\n\n; it can't pull in or out of driveways or deal with taffic issues. It alerts the driver when the driver should take control of the car.\n\nThese cars would not only drive themselves and make our safety better, but it also brings benefits for the environment and budget. In paragraph two in the article it says that \" The car he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. He believes such cars would fundamentally change the world.\" If the car uses half the fuel a taxi does then that would be less fuel being burned and damaging our environment. Not only does it help the environment but also our budget. We would not have to pay as much money for fuel as we do for cars we have now.\n\nAlthough these cars sound amazing there are negative aspects to these cars. These cars can't drive through complicated traffic issues. The car would not be able to deal with traffic issues, go through roadwork or accidents. The car would give the person in the car the control of the car and if that person is not paying attencion then an accident could happen. Some states believe that the only save car is the car driven by a human. A driverless car is a new form of technology and like all technology this could have a maufunction.\n\nCars that drive themselves sound great and could be really useful in the future, but we must not forget that not everything is perfect. The car provides many benefits like less fuel or engine power. This new car could be a great inovation but also a danger to out safety.",
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"content": "I tell I patience For long time hope read I going go quisney world It ke forever It toke three days driving We play game like I spy game boy We rare toke break peeing eating I didnt lik trip But finally got worth We fun",
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"content": "I think people should join the program that way they or we can help people or other countries in need of help. If other countries need help or something like water or food or something like that like maybe more homes to build for the homeless.\n\nAnother good thing about it is that you can travel around the world and the states like if there are more animals do in need because they are in danger and almost extinct!\n\nThe best part is that you go out around the world and help out everything and if you are in the news for that and the people see that you were on the news with all of you friends then they might as well congratulat you.\n\nOnce they see that people can do that to world then they might want to join because they to. When you around the world that means you might go to Asia and a lot of places that were very good in need like China,Japan,Mexico,Australia, and the best for helping out animals is probably Antartica.\n\nPeople might say wow that bad because it's really cold there and that Therese really nothing we can do there but there is. You can help the endanger Penguins and sea lions that are there and bring more food for them and ever since the globe warming went up Antartica is slowly melting but then getting more snow but the heat are killing penguins. Maybe go to the polar and save some Narwhals or some other animals like polar bears.\n\nSo go around the world helping Elaphants,Penguns and also rhinos or just a lot of animals and other counterinsurgency that are helping animals and build more thing for them like China and the pandas and make more cities or homes for the homeless.\n\nAnd plus maybe going around in the snow helping animals in the Polar or Antartica Isent so bad and helping out others with water and food and re building things for countries and that means you are doing something good for the world to.\n\nThe End",
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