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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I understand idea advances technology benefiting society controversal topic However I support advances technology I believe computers positive effect people They allow friends family live far away communicate stay touch Computers allow easy access news online textbooks provides enourmous amount benifits today s society In long run things computer instead paper save billions trees computers teach us handeye coordination tremenciously important skill These advances technology extremely benefitial society taken advantage CAPS computer wails I recieve video call cousin The advantage technology provided many new ways family I communicate cousins I rarely see one another computers make possible us stay connected Four five teenagers would agree without computers technological advances longdistance relationships family friends would nt possible For example I go oovoo week video chat cousin I see holidays Teen says Technology computers cell phones great teens monitored used excessively Computers great keeping touch family friends distance Next computers allow easy access news online textbooks people took advantage could sace millions trees healthier environment Environmentalist says CAPS schools switched online textbooks would end saving thousands dollars put elsewhere I agree friend says CAPS didnt take home many textbooks everyday I might scoliousis computers allow quick access news find accidents right away instead waiting newspaper come computers help children develop handeye coordination important skill Computer activities keep brain excercising even help us hit accurately next baseball season Three five kids say nt computer growing would nt good sport Computers extremely useful recource many things need take advantages", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can think book hope none children children taken shelf But right remove book would I believe I found book magazine type music movie offensive I would remove everyone right opinion even offensive Also instead removing materials completely remake suitable manner less offensive First noone right remove materials find offensive Because people allowed world would music books movies magazines anything intertain Also would start big fight alot people find certain things offensive like people people find materials offensive start removing things people dont find offensive big riot start secondly would start removing materials could remade suitable manner maybe instead removing everything find publisher see could make less vaulger Same music movies magazines So conclusion everyone right opinion matter offensive I think came across something offended I wouldnt anything Because maybe person wrote book movie expressing feel tell someone feel express So instead removing materials shelves consider someone expressing feel right opinion like", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "fills air around us happiness joy brings warm memory s loved ones close us adds splash hope need Laughter key solving life s problems CAPS way adding something special life comes many different areas life Laughter could come pitiful joke someone could told CAPS could brought show could also come joy get near loved one returning home long journey Imagine seeing something comical like person falling crashing pole moment right happens hear self laughing hard practically cant breath person standing right next joining laugh Although might seem rude disrespectful made bond person right next found similarity friendships brought made one little thing made laugh connection trigger brand new friendship people could either last minute last life time In case I met one closest friend ever seen student class trying show class cool climbing flag pole replace state flag personal home made flag got show heading pole almost half way must gotten scared minutes later started yelling help minute later faculty members finally heard cry s yells tried get ware took almost half hour get moment ware I made one greatest friendship I ve ever life Many friendships made class people go work great friendship brought simple laugh two people share God laugh s last name son In story claimed surprised blessed child people would laugh surprised way hear news Being surprised shocked also bring one laugh either happened surroundings self s I remembered time ware I laughed something took surprise lost keys house inside car looked every ware luck finding hour pass called dad would bring key house called wait half hour dad get soon father parked driveway found key lost inside pocket CAPS typical cartoon moment When heard news started laughing happen shocked little dumbfounded happened As see surprise also bring smile laugh onto someones face Picture staring eyes one close blank face trying let slightest bit giggle smile find laughing nonstop reason That basically every day thing sister My sister I ca nt stare even minute eventually start laughing first five seconds end laughing hole hour without stop soon stop laughing note s laughing apparent reason would make us laugh another hour moreThat kind laughter two people close get kind nt need reason laugh end laughing reason CAPS shows connection two people type ware know person thinking Laughter come old memory s family gatherings holidays friendships made school memory s childhood thing thought style cool k thing look back laugh little surprise also The fact know someone heart", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "there are many advantages of limiting car use the most important is for our health. by limiting car use we decrease the gas emissions ,also make the stores closer to you than across a huge highway,another reason is that it reducies smog build up many places are doing this for the health or maybe they just cant afford it .\n\nmany places in the world are starting to ban cars places like paris,colombia, and germany. in some places its be couse of the cost in vauban, germany it cost up to 40,000 for a car space and a house so many people just have a house not a carman y peolpe like it like this they say it takes stress away. this also helps with gas emissons in europe. in europe up to 12 percent of gas emissions are resposeable by cars and up to 50 in gas emissons.\n\nmany peole also like this becuase it makes the stores closer to the poeple since not many people have cars they cant travle far so stores start setting up close and nearby. this also makes more space fore sidewalks and houses insted of stores. this aslo helps with your health beause it incuages iyou to wal kmor insted of taking a car every where.\n\nin places like paris car have really effected the population there are so many peolple that it creates smog so what the peole did was they gave fines out to people that were driving on days they couldnt this brought 4,000 drivers to get fines 31$ and 27 to get ther car impounded. by stoping and lowering the amount of drivers they brouht congestion down by 60 percent and made the smog subside in bogota colombia they have got three straight years without cars there goal was to promote other means of transpotation. by doing this peole have made up to 118 miles of bike pathe and many parks for the public.\n\nthese are some but not all the ways that puttin limitations on cars could benifit us by redising smog and the green house gases bing released in to the air and by making stores more accesibale to peole with out cars and making a impact on our health.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There have only been a few spacecrafts sent to Venus but none of them lasted long scientist are trying to figure out how to get a spacecraft to hover over the surface. The reason is to collect samples from there and then be able to make it back or have enough time to send the information the spacecraft got, back to NASA.\n\nFor example \" Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcaneos, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface\". We are having trouble getting the data back because the spacecraft it is getting destroyed.\n\nIt may be very expensive to attempt to get to Venus but it could give us some good insight on what we can research and study back at Earth. The stuff we find on Venus could be benefical to us going to different planets and exploring different parts of the Solar System.\n\nIn conclusion we shouldn't let money be a factor on if we get a spacecraft to Venus we just have to figure out how to safely get there and be able to gather the data from the spacecraft. If we do find something we will most likely go back and try to find more of it or more helpful resources.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "New software has been developed that improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others. This new software, the Facail Action Coding System, has promising applications for a variety of industries. Whether the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable.\n\n\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts.\"then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instuctor.\". Empathy(feeling someone elses emotional state) may happen because we unconsciously imitate another persons facial expressions.\n\nDo you think we should put this new software into are community schools. When you are having a bad day do you want anyone trying to make your day better by making class a more exciting day. Say you think a lesson in you class is boring would you want a program that can tell your bored and that can spice it up a bit so you can enjoy learning. I think having a software like this wouldnt work in some areas because say you are a person that has a straight face but you are really happy in the inside but you dont show your emotions on the out side. This would help alot if it could detect depression sooner in teens and young adults before it gets to far and could help the would in lowering the sucide rare.\n\nWe should start using the Facial Action Coding systems because they would help teacher with making lessions more exciting. It could possibly help lower the sucide rate by detecting depression early. For example \"The facial expression for each emotion are universal,\" observes Dr. Huang,\"even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression\"(like not smiling as broadly). using video imagery, the new emotion- recognition software tracks these facial movements- in a real face of Mona Lisa.\n\nNew software has been developed that improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts.\"then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instuctor.\".Do you think we should put this new software into are community schools. We should start using the Facial Action Coding systems because they would help teacher with making lessions more exciting.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "in source one they talk about banning driving in germany and how does it affect them but in the U.S.A if u took that baway we would probaly freak out unlike a small town in germany completly has no cars in there small town. In Levitton and Scarsdale new york some cars rare overpopulating us and causing emission smoke throughout the air and litereally choking us with fumes. The United States Of America is starting to reduce car control in some citys it is said that 80% of appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20% to other transport.\n\nIn source two it talks about paris france and its trouble with cars stsrting with the pollution or smog it has gotten so bad that the french party made a rule that people with even number plates can drive on monday,wendsday,friday and sunday while people with the odd plates drive on tuesday'thursday, and saturday. Even though china is the most polluted place paris is more polluted than any other european capital. It says in source two that paris had 147micrograms of smog per cubic meter last week wich is a lot of pollutoin to get rid of.\n\nin source three we talk about bogota wich is the site of a program that began in mid 1990s it has also seen the construction of 118 bike miles,the most by any latin america city. I am talking about car free day wich is celebrated to promote a pollution free world in bogota there are no cars only taxis and buses. If u ride a car on this day you will have to pay a $25 fine the turn out is always large despite the rain. \"The rain hasnt stopped us before\" says Bogota mayor Antanas Mockus.\n\nin source four we talk about the decrease of car usage in the U.S.A in 2005 is when the we peaked in driving but from there we dropped by 9% to 2013 this was equal to the country in 1995. if this keeps up it can have a negative impact on car companys because the eill be loosin money but a positive impact on the enviorment becasue car emission is the second most cause of poolution,no cars no poluttion. In the ages between 16-39 has dropped in obtaing a license while older people are more likly to get ther license. A study shows that driving by young people decreased by 23% between the year 2001 and 2009", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author portrays a very detailed report regarding the progress, application, and future of driverless cars, of which I personally would like to see implemented into society. I believe that driverless cars would alter society's way of life dramatically, and some people might want to resist that change because they're scared, but regardless of their decision; change is inevitable and this wave of revolution will spark the next step of technological innovation.\n\nThe progress regarding these driverless cars since the beginning of their production is immeasurable. Google, one of the leading companies in the development of driverless cars, already has manufactured cars that have driven more than half a million miles without a single crash! Although those cars are really just semi-driverless, this is one huge step in the next major revolution. In 2013, BMW released information regarding the development of a new program that will assist the driver in the ever so frustrating traffic jam situations named \"Traffic Jam Assistant.\" BMW is essentially advertising the future of driverless cars by announcing the path they have chosen for the future of automobiles.\n\nAlthough this progress is already enticing enough, there are more reasons to consider using driverless cars.\n\nThere are a myriad of real-world applications for driverless cars. Safety being the number one priority, these driverless cars can assess a hazardous situation, and react to it better than a human could by applying breaks to specific tires and reducing power from the engine by manipulating the data from past experiments that meet the conditions of the current one and applying the best outcome to that situation. These applications all seem so surreal, but are actually incredibly near.\n\nThe approaching future seems very appetizing as very popular automobile companies are entering the race to manufacture the world's first totally driverless car. Tesla has announced a release of a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time in 2016. And lastly; Mercedes, Audi, and Nissan all plan to have cars that can drive themselves by the year 2020. These companies all play a major role in what's in store for the future of automobiles.\n\nThe pros of using driverless cars effortlessly overcome the few cons as innovators from around the globe are conducting thousands of experiments everyday to compile and eventually apply all their data to construct the world's first driverless car. After stating just several reasons as to why the future of automobiles involve driverless cars, one can easily see the positive effects it would have on society as a whole.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Twenty-five years ago the JPL took the first photograph of the Face on Mars. The face on Mars is actually a naturally occuring land formation. Several photographs of the face have been taken over the last 27 years. The photographs were all taken by Nasa's Jet Propulsion Labratory (JPL).\n\nThe face on Mars was not created by aliens. Although it may look that way, the face is actually the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. The same landforms are common around the American West. In Cydonia, the area where the photographs were taken, butte's and mesa's are common. The Martian mesa has wierd shadowing on the top which, caused it to look like a face. If the Face on Mars was created by aliens it would be easy to tell, because \"Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters.\"The refore making the image incredibly clear and making it easier for analyst to identify what the face actually is.\n\nEven if it was created by aien lifeforms hundreds of years ago, Nasa would not keep this a secret from the world. Because it would benefit them. And also if it was created by alien lifeforms and Nasa wanted to keep it a secret, why would they release the image in the first place. Therefore the Face on Mars is a naturally occuring land formation", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the first story it is talking about how cars aren't really drivin near the French and Swiss. Though theyallow the cars they just allow them to be parked in only two places: the car-owner buys a space or it to, $40,000 along with the home, or large garages at the edge of the development.\n\nDavid Goldberg said \" All of our development since World War ll has been centered on the car, and that will have to change.\"\n\nParis, France has enforeced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the gobal city. Diesel fuel was blamed, since diesels make up 67 percent of vehicles in France, compared to a 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the Western Europe.\n\nIn Bogota, Colombia they ban cars altogether. they go rid of the roads and made them into sidwalks. Now that people have to walk to get to their final destination a lot of people now go to the parks and to the sports centers that they have there.\n\nPresident Obama's goals are to curb the United States ' greenhouse gas emissions will get a fortuitous assit from the incipient shift in American behavior. Obama said that if we Americans buy less cars then there would be less drivers lisenes each year and fewer driving altoether.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars should be limited due to the polution of the air that the car brings. Most cars run on gas so they will have a engine and the smoke that comes out of the exhuast pipe polutes the air and makes it bad for peoples health.\n\nIn Germany its many people that dont have cars and some have given up their cars. Parking places have been took away from the peple with vehicles, and the Vauban's streets are completely car free. Many people are now walking on side walks other than driving cars. Some homes dont have driveways or even street parkings. Cars are not something that you would see when you go to Germany. You would see many people walking on a sidewalk before you see a vehicle. Many families there dont even own a car. Many people sold their cars just to move to Germany.\n\nIt has been a record of pullotion from motor vehicles. Their are days were you have to leave your cars at home. If you were to drive on that day then you would have to pay a fine and even get your car took or impounded. There were about 4000 people that were fined and twenty seven got their cars impounded. Even numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home and if not they would suffer a 31 dollar fine and the same would apply to odd numbered plates the next day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Constructing building hard attempting build world s tallest building intense The mast top Empire State Building caused many obstacles builders strengthen frame work whole building A thousandfoot dirigible moored top Empire State building held single cable tether would add stress building s framework The architects also wanted make mooring mast ornamental decorative Rather building utilitarian mast without ornamentation architects design shiny glass chromenickel stainless steel tower would illuminated inside building two extra floors added one open observation platform boarding area dirigidle passengers Even though mast doomed never fulfill purpose building still hailed world s tallest building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on mars the found is just a natrual landform in my case. A lot of people might think different.\n\nIn the artical it say \" The face on mars was located at 41 degresss north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98 a cloudy time of the year. The camera on the board MGS had to peer through\n\nwispy clouds to see the face.\" It would be hard to geta clear picture of Something that might even be covered in snow and for the people taking the picture it would have been hard to get that clear of a picture.\n\nIn the book it had also been said that \"What the picture is actually showing Martian equivalent of a butteor mesa=landforms common around american West.\"\n\nIn my opinion if ti was so common maybe it was a mistake for the face to be formed like that.Another thing that was being said was \" \"It reminds me most of middle butte in the Smake River plans of Idaho.\" Says Garvin. \" That's a lava dome that takes the forms of an isolated mesa about the same hieght as the face on mars.\" \" So in my case i think it was just a mistake and it didnt mean fpr it to form like a face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You know how in the old cartoons like the jetsons and etc , fantasize the future with flying cars and travel tubes. I think this is the next step to living like the Jetsons. You can drive your car with out really driving; Who wouldnt like to do that? But with everything thats good theirs always a bad side and their have been many concerns about these new self driven cars. I personally dont think that we are ready for this kind of technology.\n\n\" Something not available to drivers trying to text and drive with a cell phone\" (paragraph 8).\n\nWe cant even pay attentions in the cars we have because we are to busy trying to be on our phones 24/7. America alone has had a numerous amount of accidents in the past couple of years and alot of them end in fatality. With a car that you dont have to be focused on 24/7 will probably just make matters worse. America is jsut simply not ready to keep their hand on the steering wheel and off their screens.\n\n\"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\" ( Paragraph 9). This big what if question, what if the technology forgets to remind the driver that its their turn to drive. What if the system over corrects the car and causes an accident. What if the sensors stop sensing. Their are alot of plausable \"what ifs\" with these cars. Personally, a little bit too many what ifs. These producers should just wait till they can assure most of these issues will never happen. Plus, most of these cars will be so expensive so no one will really be able to drive them in the general population. So a waste of money and product for a car to sit some where in a ware house, rusting away.\n\nThe people of America are not ready for these \" Self drivin cars\"\n\nto be out on the street. First we have to make sure we can drive without the cars help safetly then go from their. The development on these cars need to be holted until they can assure most of the problems that might occur. But if they do make a model with none of these concerns im all for the\"Self driven auto mobiles\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From an article, Driverless Cars Are Coming, the author reveals that driverless car could result in positive way or negative way. I am in the position of developing of driverless car because driverless car would change the transportation system. Although the car is still in development, it is getting closer day by day. The technology we have right now and upcoming technology could totally suport driverless car. The driverless cars would not be available to the peoples unless it is 100 percent safe and only if the\n\nlaw approve it. All the driverless car are under developent and other than that there are special features for cars that\n\nare being made\n\nsuch as driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object and flashing on the windshield.\n\nIn order to achieve the driverless, it does require lots of sensors. One of the Google's modified Toyota Prius driverless car uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roff, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor. The most important bit of technology in this system is the spinning sensor on the roof. Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beam to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surrounding. This combination of all this sensors\n\nis necessary for the driverless car to reach the the skill of a human at the wheel. Google's driverless car have been driven more than half a million miles without a crash, which prove that drivecarless are safe. However the driver still need to be alert to take over when pulling in, roadsblock, roadword or accident. It is proven that the driveless car is safe because driveless car itself have lots of advance technology and in the future the technology will be still improving.\n\nThe driverless car could drive more safe than a person. Driverless car has a sensor that read the miles limit and it does not whenever you wish to. Driverless car drive the way the law expected for all car drivers to drive. Most accident were caused by speeding. Peoples speed up the car whenever the cops is not around or when they are drunk. Most car drivers that pulled over by cops are because they broke the law. When people do not obey the law, there are more chance of accident.\n\nOne out of ten people died due to car accident in world wide scale. Drivers that drive the car while they are on drug most likely cause the car accident. If the driveless cars are available, the driver does not have to worry about whether his safety because the driveless car would take care of it. Although cops punished\n\npeople that drive while they are on drugs, which is also know as DUI are most likely to repeat again what they used to do. People's brain is not well function when they are under the drug which led to so many cars accident.\n\nDriveless cars are safe for humans and also they will change the future of transportation. However the driverless cars are under testing and improving the development, they are safe for our transportation system. Each day the technology are helping us to reach our goals to achieve the driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Social media has become a huge part of our lives. Constant evolution has certainly curtailed its drawbacks. Since then we are now able to catch up with our near and dears one's and get current affairs from possibly anywhere across the globe. So, I think the advantages of technology certainly outweigh the disadvantages. Further, this essay will be supporting my views regarding the same. \r\n\r\nMedia has given us the power to know and chat with any person, who may be living far away with just a simple tap. Consequently, this has opened new doors to knowing different kinds of people and understanding their cultures, traditions and many other things about them. This could be beneficial to an individual who is quite reserved to himself, helping overcome fears. For instance, one of my friends, use to chat with this girl, who was living around 500 kilometres away from him. Because of his very nature and hectic work schedule his social group was quite small. So, whenever he had leisure time he spent time chatting with this girl which helped him to become more jolly. \r\n\r\nIn this hustle and bustle work culture, it is really difficult to manage and get the latest news. So, technology finally came to the rescue and now we could get notifications about pretty much anything that's happening in the world. This way we remain in touch with the latest events and trends. For instance, earlier the duration between an event and delivery of the message was nearly 2-3 days, but now this duration is reduced significantly and now we get to have the news almost instantly after the commencement.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, few individuals use media for news events, while others for being in touch with the person. So, the usage of television has certainly proved to be far more fruitful than its disadvantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear newspaper I heard discussing people using computers benefit society I believe negative affect people They get interact people arent safe spend less time exercising get trouble thean Spending time online chat rooms causes people meet preditors Take friend online one day man started talk She thought seemed acceptable said model She flirted day day one day friend logged found man really pervert happened people chat rooms say lied like Website designer say More people everyday falling lies getting sticky situations like getting asked meet person saying CAPS talk strangers Spending time sitting computer means less time outside exercising At triputs girl wasnt shape enough stay players Instead practicing like rest us house talking facebook She wasnt prepared came time show didnt make softball team The next year made captain training everyday big day She s one laziness problem every americans couch potatoes choose go online stay shape Nutritionalist says This generation worse last They complain cant something thats instead going outside re butts watching online breath fresh air loose Kids seem get alot trouble online ever streets They re posting threats dissing sending personal messages pictures worst sometimes hurting someone bad commit suicide one year The neighbor popular lady s daughter created person online neighbor fell The online guy began trashing teenage girl bad ended hanging People including singer caught sexting embarrasing innappropriate law yet still happens These people alone people gotten big trouble Governer says CAPS phones destroying society Theres much real life drama already see something wrong My opinion use computers less start interacting people scare us become couch potatoes get huge trouble really worth damage getting scared hurt lazy taking life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I student middle school recently produced article computers good bad people I write today say computers beneficial people everywhere This true computers help people things hand eye coordination learning advances schools finally helps people communicate ease plase consider following First computers help hand eye coordination greatly long run This true people playing games computers got skillful using ther hands eyes together ullodhers Computers help hand eye coordination putting son daughter football team computer games could help kids get acurate skills sport know computers help people develop better hand eye coordination Secondly Computers help people learn new things Although people might think false indeed true recent study shows schools use computers researchFinally recently paper The scorce I thought wikipedia internet faster searching book understand computer helpful learning tests Finally computer great way communicate online It better faster calling someone talking alot cheper payment amonth unlike phone Where starts add Inract recent study CAPS absolete internet peope chat lignning speed Finally using email facebook much better phone tag facebook know chat thats reasons computer good communicating see computers nessecery develop hand eye coordination help people learn finally great way communicate", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you see the emotions in the Mona Lisa? A latest technology that can recognize emotions was the latest innovation from Prof. This technology claims it has the ability to read every emotion, even in pictures. Is this a reliable technology or is this something that isnt exact?\n\nThe recent technology on seeing emotions talks about how the Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disguested, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. How can we know if this is true because we were not there to tell what her emotions where. Yes you can see some emotion in her painting, because it states that Da Vinci studied the human anatomy so that it would help him with painting facial muslces precisely to show emotion.\n\nThis technology can be good for some purposes. Dr. Huang makes a statement saying, \"A classroom computer could tell when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human structor.\" This is a good factor, because this can help students with school so theyre not falling behind.\n\nOverall this technology may have some pros, and it has some cons. If you put it to good use like for instince helping kids when theyre confused or bored it will show them other ways which is good. Then you have your cons. This technology might not always be precise and at some point this could lead to problems when trying to solve a serious situation. This technology is realiable at some points, theyre are multiple ways it can help and then there can be some disfunctions. Every technology has their flaws though.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke Bomberger, a member of the Seagoing Cowboys program, had a fun time while helping locations in ruins after wars. Luke got to have an amazing time helping people in need. The benefits of joining the Seagoing Cowboys program include helping other countries in need, a lot of free time with amazing experiences, and meeting new people that he worked with and the people that he helped recover. First, I will talk about how becoming a Seagoing Cowboy would not only benefit you but also benefit other people in countries that had been damaged from the wars.\n\nThe main reason Luke had joined the Seagoing Cowboys program was to help other people that lived in countries that had been involved in the wars. Luke joined the program to help them recover and Luke had said \"It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\" Luke had been talking about the Seagoing Cowboys program. Luke's family also hosted many international students and exchange visitors for many years. Luke learned about the current situation in other countries while on the trip while he was helping other people at the same. Secondly, I will talk about how Luke got a lot of free time and got to go to many places such as Greece.\n\nThe rides were not quick because the Seagoing Cowboys had to cross oceans. It took two weeks to a month to get to their desired destination. Luke was often kept busy with the animals to care for but when they were returning, he got a lot of time that he could spend with the other people on board or visit locations. Luke got to see the Acropolis in Greece, ride a gondola in Italy, tour a castle in Crete, and visit the Panama Canal in China. Luke also often did activities with the other men on board such as play sports in the space they had after unloading the animals. Luke was grateful for the opportunity of becoming a Seagoing Cowboy. Next, I will talk about how Luke got to meet new people.\n\nLuke had just been invited by his friend, Don Reist, to go on a cattle ship so he didn't know many people on the ship. Luke got to meet the other Seagoing Cowboys during the acitivities onboard the cattle ship. Luke also got to meet new people in the locations he visited. Luke got to travel the world and meet new people from different places. It exposed Luke to the needs of countries and that was one thing Luke learned while being a Seagoing Cowboy. Finally, I will discuss why it would be a good idea to become a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nBecoming a Seagoing Cowboy had been hard work but it also had many benefits. Luke not only helped others but learned something about other people in other countries. Luke had many benefits from joining the program such as helping other people in different countries, having a fun time with other people, and meeting new people. in conclusion, becoming a Seagoing Cowboy could benefit anybody.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "think libraries generally nt take themusic movies magazines away Because never know goes home want get away relax self library read I think nt take books shelves reason people love going libraryAnd nt things point going theremy thing nt take things away thatthey make profit people go libraryand dont see things going wonder want happeni think nt children fault books gone It owners people work library fault made take booksoff shelvesI also think children goes library going ask parent someoneWhere book want read also book check outBut people would want keep getting books library check outI think people take books shelves specific reason reason people children would go like weekend read dont things homeMy thing nt remove anything going big commotion So removing would sad one place go feeling loney want go library read whole point agbout came books music magzines shelvesBut also think real world Then would terrible crisis peopleI think people love read listen music etc I also think people love going releave stress might jus want go thereI also think might anyways know people love jobs toOne things like go library nice quiet listen ipod player something like thatSome people love go see friends communicate get computer My reason nt lose everything like jobs etc", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are you looking for a fun and awsome opportunity? Well you have come to the right place. Here at the UNRRA, we need help, your help!\n\nHere at the UNRRA you can do lots of things to help different countires. Such as being a Seagoing Cowboy. Retired Seagoing Cowboys have a special message to you.\n\n\"Hi! I'm Luke. I am a retiered Seagoing Cowboy. It all started the day my friend asked me to go to Europe with him. In 1945 my friend Don(also a retiered Seagoing cowboy) signed us up for the journey. I know what you are probably asking, Luke what do Seagoing Cowboys do? We get on ships and help take care of horses and cattle on the way to countries in need. Being a Seagoing Cowboy is amazing, not only because you get to help people and different countries, but you get to see different places and things. For example, I have seen Europe and China form doing this. I have also seen the Acropolis in Greece and taken a godola ride in Venice, Italy. It does take a lot of time to be a Seagoing Cowboy, but it is so worth it. I am filled with gratitude for the opportunity. It made me more aware of people and other counrtries. I now host a number of international students and exchange visitors.\"\n\nI hope you enjoyed that message from Luke. I aslo hope it inspired you to join the UNRRA.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir verry happy tone The reasons happy tone tells Childhood hapily talking unity invirorment happiiness cuban food Cuban music filled home still fills home today injoyes much", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The architects Empire State Building faced many safety practical obstacles allowing dirigibles dock top For example dirigibles outside filled hydrogen rather helium gas Hydrogen gas highly flammable Therefore German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire The architects Empire State Building foresaw could much tragic event taken place densely populated area downtown New York Furthermore anchoring foot dirigible top building single tether would add stress building s frame In order solve problem architects would make modifications building s steel frame Additionally violent unpredictable winds Empire State Building If dirigible tethered mast would swivel around top building wind currents When moored open fields dirigibles anchored weights However dangling weighted anchors heads pedestrians could potentially dangerous In dirigible Los Angeles tried moor Empire State Building could nt get close enough spire tie sharp winds The pilot maneuver around spires well fear puncturing dirigible Clearly practical safety reasons dirigible moor unable completed top Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What do you recommendthat we see? Câu 11: Could you please _______ photos of us? A. go B. takeC. doD. make Câu 12: Where is home to Quang Trung king and the Vietnamese martial art that has been recognized worldwide? A. Da Nang B. Nha Trang C. Binh Dinh D. Phu Yen Câu 13: Ky Co is a beautiful ______ which is located in the heart of the Binh Dinh province in Vietnam A.mountainous resortB. beachC. swimming poolD. theme park Câu 14: Another word for “lectures” is _________ A.informationB. bookingC. talksD. reservation Câu 15: Something that is interesting for tourists. What is it? – It’s a/ an ________ A. tourist attractionB. a return ticket C. a special dishD. a good service PART IV - Choose the underlined words or phrases that are not correct in standard written English.(2 m) Câu 1: A tourism information office promoting travel to the destination country. A.promoting B. country C. tourism D. office Câu 2: Newspapers, magazines, and books are print media who spread information. A.books B. informatio C. who D. and Câu 3: Information offices also give tourists and immigrants helpful informations. A.giveB. informations C. offices D. and Câu 4: Employees in public relations and advertising must be fluent on English A. on B. advertising C. public D. be Câu 5: An tour guide is a person who shows tourists around interesting places. A.interesting B. tourists C. shows D. An Câu 6: Ghenh Rang is one of the most attractive destination in Binh Dinh. A.destination B. the most C. is D. Binh Dinh Câu 7: Marketing is a place where one buys and sells fruit, vegetables and other things A.and B. Marketing C. things D. one Câu 8: Binh Dinh is well-known for its natural beautiful with beaches, isles, etc. A.withB. well-known C. beautiful D. for Câu 9: Nha Trang are also a major scuba diving centre of Vietnam A.Vietnam B. major C. centre D. are Câu 10: Is there a tourist information centers around here? A.centers B. around C. information D. there", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this essay of the Electoral College it is questioning to see if the Electoral College realy works. In my point of view I think that it does because it gives certain reasons to show it does and if it didnt work the would've changed it a long time ago so it shows you that it work and thats why its still around until this day. The Electoral College is a process , not a place. The founding fathers establised it in the consitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in Congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\n\nOne of the reasons i think that the Electoral College actually works is because The Electoral College works is because it process consists of the selection of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. The Electoral College helps pick the president and vice president and if didnt have that then it wouldve been total chaos because with The Electoral College it is way easier and faster and is a better process , The Electoral College consists of many electors and electoral votes this is really important because under the 23rd Amendment of the Constitution, the District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral College. For This Reason, in the discussion the word state also refers to the District of Columbia.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am for driveless cars becuase than you have more time to make sure you child is safe,have have less wercks in the future,and you and your friends can go for a long joy ride. I support driveless cars becuase its more safer than some other cars around the globe.\n\nEveryore wants to get their childern safe to one place to another right. Well now you can with driveless cars. Driveless cars get in to another place without having to drive your car at all. This car also senses things hat might harm or damage your car when ou are not even watching the road. Driveless cars also stops and have good milage rates on them. Getting your kids somewhere can be hard,but if you have a driveless car you have hands on with your kids inside of your car to make sure they get their safe. This car also have a chair that vibrate and let you know that ther is incoming traffic an the car stops by its self. So if you want your child to have a safe ride to andd from home go out and get a driveless car.\n\nAnother thing about driveless car is that it will cause less wrecks in the future. Sometimes when you turn on the news you see people dying in car wrecks. This is why you need this car. Not only will you avoid losing your life,you will also have a good record of your profile. People loving driving around just to have a good time and to see what's new,but some peopple is scared they might be at the wrong place at the wrong time. You don't need to worry about if you might not make it somewhere safe becuase driveless car is on it. Don't wait till someone else gets hur in your family,go buy this car Now.\n\nThe last thing about driveless car is that you an your friends can go for a really long joy ride about almost any where ini the world without driving. Your friends don't need to bring extra stuff just to make sure their life is not at risk of beign lost when they are with you. If your going away and don't feel like driving all the way to get someone or pick them up,than driveless is what you need. This car lets you rest while it does all the work for you to help make your life fun and even easier. For example,your friends is planning a joy ride party arcoss town,you guys can play or do whatever you want inside of the car knowin your life is in good hands with this car.\n\nDrivless car can save so many lives and make your life easier an take all of your stress away just like that. No more worrying about staying home becuase your body hurts and you can't drive drive. Drivelsees ar will take you anywhere and keep you going and make your surrouning earier on you and your loved ones.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author says that after studying Venus it's a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because many people call Venus Earth's \"twin\", it's the closest planet to Earth in the term of density and size, and it's closest in distance also. Many humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on Venus a cloud-draped world. But many spacecrafts that land don't last anything but a few hours. Venus has an atmosphere of 97% of carbon dioxide blankets, the clouds are high of corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere, and the atmosphereic pressure os 90 times grater than Earth. Venus is the hottest surface temperatures in our solar system. A very long time ago many astronomers think that Venus was once covered in oceans that could have have life like Earth today. NASA has on compelling idea to send humans to Venus to study, but they are conersered by floating 30 miles above the planet. Venus's temperatures are 170 degrees Fahrenheit. Since most forms of light cannot be found it effects the standreds forms of phototgraphy and videography. In order for humans to take samples of rock and actually study Venus would have to get close and personal.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator of the state of Florida,\n\nI would like to propose you to keep the electoral college in regards to how elections are made for the presidency and vice presidency. I in my opion as well as in other feel that by keeping the electoral college decisions on votes would be satisfactory for us in due to th e couting of our votes for the elections that we face. It would be a much rather delightfulness for the state of Florida if you would keep on helping sustain the electoral college and its' bases of funtion as well as in the rightchesness that belongs in our votes for the candidates that run for election either for presidency or vice presidency. Further more I wish to ask you to maintain our votes fair in wich i mean don't do an unfairness of our votes that is to say, our votes that get sent to you so that you can put in the final vote. As you may know there are many hateful critcism on how the electoral college functions and I'd like to say that if you could put up with the so many critics and just keep doing your job on electoral college then you could put up a positive ad on how the electoral college really works so that the many people that crtisize and have doubts on how the electoral college will truely know what is happening with their votes for election times. Our nation really needs this even though it is a really old system of governmence towards our voted that fall in you hands. for instance in the article \"The Indefensible Electoral college: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\"(paragraph 14) it states \"...The electoral college is...outdated\" this shows how even an article was written to discuss the faults in the electoral collage and how its sytem works. the electoral collage may recieve many hateful critism on how fair the electoral collage is, but all in all their shouidn't be anything to worry about knowing that what you're doing is right in terms of governance and politics. With all due respect I would like to thank you for helping sustain the the electoral college with your fellow out of state caleeges, its a pleasure having having you as our Senetor and this goes as for everyone that enjoys your supportment to the government and how its electoral elections are based due to this system. I hope this really helps on how our government system on elections are critized, and that for at least there are people that actually hope for the prosper of the electoral college and the benifits that come out of it as also the many unlawful things that could arise in the nation if we didn't have and electoral college. With all due respects I hope that your manegment of our votes in elections be used wisely in the electoral college unlike other places in the world where much is corrupted and is used against the people instead of for the people. Thank you for taking your time in reading this article Senetor of Florida.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What I going tell could change way think computer general People might say computers great fast get need I think computers good become addicting make bills every high computers lead child sending less time family also computers danerous teens children ages I say computers addicting fact students spend time computer Why computers addicting well instant message talk people around world Now I know might sound bad bad pocket works electrion bills says children spend time computer bills house grown almost harder people pay bills Computers say days one main reason children spend less time family This true familys like mine pof computers sisters spend time computer cause argueing fughting familys Statics show people would rather spend time computer talking people listening music spend time children parents Is want children separated tecongly Computers nt always safe teens children ages There many reasons computers sometimes safe children teens I say sometimes worried kids safty child computer idea talking talking Teens mostlikely going met people online stalkers posers people pretending soomeone child one peoples fall lead meeting someone might know kiddnapped rapped anyting happen Children always get hurt verbal abuse threatened others hurt cause emotional damage careful monitor child These things happen These reason computers nt really benefiting society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The image shows two different student rooms at an Australian university, the first one is for two people and the second one is for just one person. The main feture that we can see is that the first room is 1.5 metres larger than the second one.\nLooking in more detail, the first room has more devices than the other one. For example, there are a bookshelf, a cupboard and a table with chairs. These things are useful when a person live with another one, because they allow students to live in a more comfortable way. Obviously, in the room for two people there is a bed more and an additional study desk. Unfortunately, if someone chose the first room, he has to share the bathroom with the other student because there is just one.\nIn conclusion, the cost for each person is more convenient if a student chose the first room, because he could pay less and have more comfortable things to use.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The issue of what students do after graduating school is being topic. Some of school leavers choose to explore and part of them decided to get a job rathe than straight continue to university. This is have two-side view based on advantages and the disadvantages. I will focus on the good side first then moving to look at the opposite.\n\nTo begin, late adolescent who have been just finished their school do travels or works because they want to have real-world experiences. Taking time off to work can gain valuable life experiences such as knowing the culture in office and learn from senior that suitable to implemented in daily life. Furthermore, explore world also beneficial for them to make good connections with others from different background.\n\nDeveloping independence is the reasons young adult prefer to work and travel. People will develop skill from this decision because their life become theirself responsibility. Here learning personal management and can not dependen to others. It helps individual to face real world.\n\nOn the other hand, young people is not directly going to university have disadvantages. They lost of academic momentum and will impact decreasing chance to be accepted in college because it prioritized new students who direct to go university. \n\nMoreover, social disconnect for individuals who take break may feel out connect with peers because the differences of behavior and age. Also, potential to be ignore involve in this situation because of peers feel you are not part of them. For instance, others not ask you to do group work in some subjects.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph shows sees things home living comfort The author seems like needs things homeland help make best things bring back good memories earlier life I think whenever I want good job It helps think good things mean alot I happy want good The author smart want see things retake test sees plant well sees memory geese good luck", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The future is near, and it's bringing what America has been dreaming of since the early cinema, the driverless car. However, what most Americans don't realize is the safety hazards and liability issues that the cars bring.\n\nLet's just say your wife and kids are on your way to Miami, Florida in your new driverless car. The car begins to make a left turn at a green light, but suddenly, a semi drives into the right side of your car and knocks you out cold. Next thing you know, you're in the hospital next to your wife and kids. The random objects that the sensors in your car cannot pick up could cost you your life and/or your emotional well-being. If these cars malfunction, the same situation will happen time and time again.\n\nBack to the previous situation, you decide to take it to court against the car manufacturers, but where does the fault really lie? The manufacturers pay for the best lawyer around and you are left with what you can afford. The problem with these driverless cars is that they are poised to have lawsuits happen and that manufacturers will rarely have to make the financial contributions needed in order pay for these situations. Families will be left in shambles trying to pay for these lawsuits, and the companies will nothing to help. Even if laws were changed and the liability issues were solved like it suggests in the article, the distress that these cars bring will add up.\n\nOthers would argue that driverless cars will prevent more crashes whereas in reality there will be about the same amount. They would also say that manufacturers would this would help in the goal of making life easier. However, these cars would make more negative headlines than positive headlines. In the end, the negatives outweigh the benefits.\n\nAll in all, driverless cars are not the answer in making the world a better place. Driverless cars would still make the same mistakes that people make and have many safety issues. Also, the lawsuits that these cars would create would leave families and people penniless after trying to obtain financial help from the companies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A facial action coding sytem could help students improve in the classroom by knowing when they are confused or they need help with a question, and it could also help students that are being bullied.\n\nThe facial action coding system may help students that do not understand a question, and this could help them recieve a better grade on it once the teacher is notified of their emotions.\n\nEmotion technology could also be used in the classroom to teach medical students what kind of pain a person is in.\n\nIt could also stop the bullying problem, which would benefit students who are having trouble with this issue.\n\nWhile a student is in the classroom they may be confused about what they are learning, and the facial action coding system may be the perfect solution to find out what kind of emotions that person may be feeling.\n\nThe facial action coding system may find out that the student is confused, and once it processes that information it could notify the teacher that the student is having trouble learning the information.\n\nDr. Huang explained that \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\", and this could really help the student's grade if he or she needs help with the subject.\n\nThis technology could also tell whether the student may need special tutoring, or if he or she needs to relearn the subject at a slower pace.\n\nMany students can be bored during the class, and this could help the teacher to know that she needs to make her class more exciting and fun for the students.\n\nThis new technology could be very beneficial to the student as it could show whether the student is confused or bored about the subject he or she is learning.\n\nStudents can be mean to other students, and a facial action coding system would be able to tell how the student is feeling during the school day.\n\nThe computer would calculate the student's emotions, and if the computer thinks that the student is being bullied then the computer could send a counselor an email about the student, so the counselor could meet with the student.\n\nDr. Paul Eckman says that he has found: \"six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness\", and these six basic emotions could help stop bullying.\n\nFacial action coding may be the answer to help students feel welcome at school and at home.\n\nIt could also help students who are feeling bullied to chage their emotions, and they could stick up for themselves and not let a bully pick on them.\n\nFacial action coding could also be used for medical students learning how to become doctors.\n\nIt could help the students know how the patient is feeling by their emotions, and the doctors might be able to diagnose them by their emotions.\n\nDoctors may also learn how to go through procedures better during surgery.\n\nDr. Huang expresses that\" the same technology can make computer-animated face more expressive-for video games or video surgery\", and this technology could help future doctors learn their medical field better.\n\nMedical students may also be able to diagnose an issue with there patient more quickly because the facial action coding system could detect how much pain the patient is in.\n\nThe facial action system could be beneficial in many ways.\n\nThe technology has the potential to change student's lives.\n\nThe facial action system may be one of the most important technologies to arrive in the classroom, and it could make the perfect learning environment for students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is the case that some people fail to see any relevance to their own lives in the news they see on TV or read in newspapers. I strongly disagree with this view and will give some reasons below.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are some people who think that their individual lives have been unaffected by events that have taken place in the world. This may be true if they consider only such new items as the lives of celebrities, the results of football matches, or the latest fashions. They argue that it does not mean they set their lives behind the times. They also say that are able to hear about local events through their colleagues or neighbors which may have a bearing on their own lives. Therefore, life for them can continue perfectly normally without TV or press news. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, this view is dangerously misguided for several reasons. Firstly, it is vital for people to see the big picture of international and national events as relevant to each individual. For example, the new media may carry a story about climate change or very recently the breaking news of a deadly virus that may affect every person on the planet. Secondly, the financial and business sections of newspapers may carry important information on economic matters which influence the lives of everyone. For example, thanks to watching TV, some months ago Vietnamese people knew about the increasing prices of petrol which they may manage to refill the gasoline for their motorbikes or cars at a suitable time. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although much news is trivial, I completely disagree that it is a waste of time to see news on TV or in newspapers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not think that this technology is going to be useful in the classroom. There are a few main reasons why I think this. One, there really is not point to having it in a classroom. Two, it wouldn't really help much with teaching. And three, The whole thing is relativly pointless.\n\nSo to go in to depth about the first reason, I mainly think It's pointless because the fact of what is it going to do in a classroom full of kids. The passage gave one example of it being useful in the class but even that use it still pointless. It says that it can modify the lesson when it sees that students are confused or bored. How is it going to modify the lesson to help the confused ones and another thing, kids are always bored in school so even with this it really wouldn't help with that.\n\nNumber 2 is it won't really with teaching. How is it going to help with teaching, just because it can modify a lesson doesn't mean it is a better teacher than a human. Most people perfer a hands on type of teaching to where they usually get a one on one with a teacher. If you have this all it will do it change up the lesson mid way through to try and help confused kids, while the bored ones are still sitting there bored. I just don't think that the software would be able to appeal to everyone in the class.\n\nLastly is just that the whole thing is pointless. What is even the point of this whole software/technology anyway. All that it does is read peoples emotions on their face\n\nlike what we do everyday. I get that it's a big step for tech at advancing but to put it in a classroom would be stupid. there is no point to this tech at all besides to do things that us humans do already.\n\nTo conclude, no this technology is not valuable in a class. There is no point to having in a class. Yes it is a big deal for advancement in technology but as for its vaule anywhere else. It really doesn't matter to anyone else besides the people trying to advance it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Downside to Driverless Cars\n\nDriverless cars are illegal in most states in the Unites States for a very important reason.\n\nThis law was made to ensure the safety and security of the American Citizens.\n\nThere are not enough technology advancements at this point in time to begin to think of the possibility of a driverless car.\n\nA driverless car would not be a good advancement because of the inability of technology, the legal issues, and the safety issues.\n\nAt this point in time, a driverless car would be a horrific advancment in society today.\n\nIn the short story \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the narrator talks of the world wide effort for the advancement in driverless cars.\n\nIn the though, the narrator also includes the downsides of this oncoming advancement.\n\nIn paragraph 7, the narrator states, \"They can all stear, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills...this means the human dricer must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation occurs\".\n\nThis is a safety hazard to all the pedestrians around you in other cars and to the passengers in the car.\n\nIf the passenger is dozing off for even the smallest second and the car is in a situation that it is not equipped to handel and switches to the human driver, that instant second could mean life or death.\n\nThese cars are unreliable.\n\nAside from being able to stear, accelerate, and brake on their own, these cars are not apart of our future.\n\nThey have to many flaws like the inability to makes its way through traffic and construction sites without the help of a human driver.\n\nAccidents happen it is apart of life.\n\nSomething whether it be sooner or later is bound to happen, but if there is an accident and someone gets injured or killed, whose fault is it?\n\nIs it the manufacturer or the drivers fault?\n\nSo many things could go wrong with these beginning advancements.\n\nIn a situation where the car is not able to perform a task and the human driver must take over, but the car malfunctions and will not switch over what do you do?\n\nThese cars are a liability to the safety of everyone that is in or around the high tech cars.\n\nLast but not least these cars are not equipped to handle emergency situations.\n\nIn paragraph 1, the narrator says, \"Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore?\n\nGoogle cofounder Sergey Brin can.\n\nHe envisions a future where...fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system\".\n\nThe reality of this though, is that in the society we live in today, we all need cars.\n\nIt is just a part of life.\n\nWe can not rely on technology to do everything.\n\nThe narrator talks of no one having a car and just having a form of public-transport taxi system, but what happens if there is an emergency?\n\nEmergencies happen all the time and the need of transportation is urgent.\n\nWhat happens if a child was attacked by the neighbors dog when his mother was distracted making dinner?\n\nThere is no time for them to wait on a car to pick them up and take the surprised, fearful mother and her badly injured child to the hospital for medical treatment.\n\nThat delay could mean the life of someone. These cars are not advanced enough to handle the emergencies and other needs that we as citizens have and need.\n\nA driverless car would not be a good advancement because of the inability of technology, the legal issues, and the safety issues. Technology is an amazing thing to have and is very helpful, but sometimes we get to carried away with these advancements and do not look at the possible dangers that they could be causing, and an advancement that was not fully thought out and depicted is a driverless car.\n\nThere are many good thought that were put into this idea but the reality is, we all need cars and we can not rely on technology to take on the task of getting us from one place to another.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that businesses have fundamentally approached to earn money. Whereas, corporations have to concern about social obligation. So I strongly agree with given notion. Therefore, some reasons for my inclinations are articulated in trailed paragraphs.\n\nTo commence with, the company has to make money in order for survival in the competitive world. If a company is profitable, then they meet a company's need and bear company's employees wages. In addition, businesses have to invest to remain as profitable business and higher reputation. A company is unable to pay its bills than any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other word, business can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health.\n\nWhile a company should not solely aim to maximise profits, it has to involve in social problems.Corporations need to contribute in social obligations because it is aided in a company's value. For instance, a high profile company, Hindustan Unilever gives funds to plenty of NGOs and Charity to provide significant facilities for poor children. Businesses help with social issues, then it is helpful for company's market value. Some corporate sector do for marketing. If high profile and successful company concern about social responsibilities after that we can easily cope with poverty, unemployment and so on.\n\nTo sum up, although it is essential to make money to run business, at the same time social obligations also important for the country. And also, a company should contribute to their customers regardless of money.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a general consensus among certain people that working together internationally is for the benefit of the environment as opposed to the belief of others that the primal objective of such a cooperation is to pursue monetary gains in business. Throughout this essay, I will explore both sides of the opinion and provide my viewpoint. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, Many individuals are of the opinion that the environment can be protected with international cooperation. This thought stems from the fact that issues such as the protection of flora and fauna, reducing carbon dioxide levels in the atmosphere, and the persistent issue of global warming cannot be tackled in isolation but requires a global effort.Hence, international collaborations are of paramount importance. For instance, the Paris accord on climate change was signed to limit the usage of fossil fuels and increase the usage of alternative energy sources, such as renewable energy. Furthermore, mutual agreements between countries will not only prevent and slow down the process of damage to our environment but will also lead to an exchange of ideas and technology which will help to tackle the critical issue of climate change. \r\n\r\nHowever, many a time people or countries engage in international deals to pursue their own vested interests. Saving the environment, is no more a priority and is replaced by profiting from business deals. For instance, countries with the pretext of reducing harmful emissions in the atmosphere, push for the adoption of their own technology, produced in their manufacturing centre, providing a boost to their local economy but at the same time increasing import expenditures of other countries. Therefore, the covenants of an agreement must be looked into acutely and whether its real motive is to combat pertaining environmental problems.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, protection of the environment is a worldwide issue and requires efforts globally it cannot be solved by a single country or individual but at the same ,time it is imperative that people do not use it as an opportunity for self-gain and ignore the actual motive of such a collaboration.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Once break family I went While went huge water park My two sisters I convinced parents go A days later went water park We rented locker changed clothing started looking waterslides Right walked huge take sunken ship On zip lines We ran ship realized line Not short line A giant line We must minutes waiting Eventually came turn I grabbed handle kicked ground I almost reached end slowed stop I let go falling pool The wait totally worth", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.In recent years, with the improvement in healthcare sector and better , people are able to live longer and contribute to the economic progress of a nation more, compared to the past. Some see this as an entirely positive development, while others point out the drawbacks of working beyond the retirement age.Delaying retirement enables individuals to actively contribute to the society. On a personal level, working past retirement age provides an avenue for individuals to remain not only physically but also mentally active. Moreover, this option empowers the ageing population to be financially independent and economically self-sustainable past retirement age. In countries with growing ageing population such as Singapore, for instance, citizens are given an option to work beyond their retirement age based on the demands of their job and their capability to handle these tasks. Hence, working beyond retirement age empowers workers, ensures economic progression of the nation, and alleviates the challenges faced by an ageing population.On the flip side, working beyond the retirement age may result in adverse health impacts on workers and a decrease in productivity levels. In Japan, the suicide rates have recently been increasing due to rising stress levels at work faced by the ageing population who are pushed to work beyond their optimal capacity. Escalating stress levels from work to various health complications putting a strain on the healthcare system. Hence, working beyond retirement age may worsen the overall welfare of individuals and adversely impact the economy.To sum up, though working beyond retirement age health hazards leading to reduction in productivity levels, it seems to me that the benefits far outweigh the disadvantages. In my opinion, by assessing the capability of individuals and tailoring their jobs to their health profile, firms and companies should actively involve their workers to be productive beyond their retirement age.This essay is an excellent example of IELTS Band 8 writing. The author presents sound arguments making his/her point of view very clear, examples are being used to support the writer’s points and the organisation of information is handled very well. There are some minor inaccuracies, however, they wouldn’t affect the score much in the real test. Well done!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author does supports his idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. In the article 3 it says that Venus atmoshere is highly corrosive sulfuric acid and the planets surface temperatures avgerage is over 800 dergree Fahrenheit and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than we experince here. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. That's are the dangers of venus.\n\nIn the article 5 it says that NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientistd to float above the fray. NASA is trying to make a vehcile that can stayed venus's 170 degree surface and the air pressure would be close to the sea level on earth.\n\nMy conclusion to my essay is that is the furture i hope that we can space travel to different planets like Venus or Mars if something happens to our planet. If this happens i hope ill be still alive to see it.There are evidence that space travel will happen, but we dont know when it will happen. If NASA founds out how to make a vehclie that can go to venus and survive it people can finally start studying about Venus and maybe start studying other planets like Mars......etc. NASA are working to start sending humans to start visting Venus, but it can be very dangerous right now because they don't have the right suits and equitment to survive Venus' atmoshere and pressure.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Right proportion of population of all age groups is an important aspect for the social, economical and overall growth of a country. However, in many countries the number of younger population who are less than 15 years old has increased significantly and to a certain extent this has a detrimental effect on the society, workforce and the country. This essay delves with the current and future effects of this trend in countries where younger generation predominates the bigger portion of their population.\n\nWith regards to the current effect, an increasing competition in schools is obvious. Since younger generations are mostly school goers, parents would have to suffer to get their children admitted in a good school due to excessive competition. Many poor parents would be forced to send their children to work and earn and this will increase the child labour in many developing and underdeveloped countries. Finally the disproportion of population age distribution in such countries will lead them to the scarcity of skilled labours and other professionals. Finally, since those children are not earning members, that would negatively affect the overall economy of the country. Increasing younger population, though are mainly thought to bring negative effects to the society and country, are not always a burden. They can support their community, become better members of the society through positive competition and can contribute to the family by sharing the workload.\n\nConsidering the future effects of this trend, I believe that it would mostly depend on the economic factors and job facilities of a country. If the country has a great economic stability and can create plenty of job opportunities in the future, the under-aged population now would become the de facto to the economy in the future and that would enable the country to develop rapidly. The country will have a huge workers and professionals in the future and they would be able to increase the GDP of such a country. On the contrary, if the country fails to ensure jobs and business opportunity when those children will become adults, the outcome would be catastrophic. The unemployment and crime rate would surely increase and that would negatively affect the society.\n\nTo conclude, although a right proportion of population age distribution is necessary, this is not the case in many countries. Based on a countries economic condition, education, training, and job facilities, the increasing younger generation can be a great asses or burden.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars wil help a lot. Haveing driverless cars will make driving easier. Also, it will have a result in less accidents. Another reason, is that it is less money. Driverless cars will be a positive cause on the world.\n\nDriveless cars will me easier. When one person is in the car and gets a call, he/she can answer it without puting anyone at risk. When he/she is eatng they can use both hands at once and also not put anyone at risk. People get tired and if you fall asleep at the wheel there is warning signs to wake you back up, so there is no accident caused. \"All cars are designed to notify the driver when diver is asleep.\"\n\nThis transportation can result to less accidents. Hands off is better than hands on. People are always using there hands for picking up objects or using them for simple tasks. When everyone has a driverless car all the sinsors will be alert from both sides ofthe road and this will result to less accidents.\" For starters they needed a whole lot of sensors.\"\n\nWhen driving a driverless car it will have a positive result such as less money. There will be less gas to pay for because it uses less fuel. Then, there is no accidents so your insurence wont go up. You will spend less money of auto shops to fix it because of less accidents and its enviormental friendy.\n\nThis car would be grat for futrue drivers. This car is a positive out look on how to drive and have at the wheel experiences. This car is a positive aspect for driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This article for me is kind of hard to believe. These people have never been up there to see this face on the red planet. Instead of sending a person up there to actually see it they send a machine to Mars to capture pictures of this face.\n\nScientist believe that this face is remains of alien structure but, do they have proof that aliens even exist? If they could get a picture of the face then why could they not get a picture of the aliens that were up there to die and have this face on face of Mars. This photo could just be a regular bump on the surface and the way the lighting is might make it look kind of like a face but, they have not yet to send anyone up there so they do not know for sure. If they really think that this is a face then they should send someone up there to capture a legit photo that is close up to prve that this face is really there. The face does not even look like a deformed creature it looks like a humans face and that is another thing that makes me not believe it. The scientist said that this face is a remain of an alien artifact but, if this is an alien than people might as well just start calling themselves aliens and aliens humans. If you look on the right side of the face you can not see anything but the shadow. This makes me wonder if it is just the lighting and makes me wonder if this bump looks like a face because of the lighting. Because if you think about it the scientist may have done that on purpose so people wouldn't say that they could not completely varify this thing but, really it looks like a bump. Also, if you look towards the bottom of the bump there is a ring around it and I do not think that scientist know exactly what aliens look like because they have never captured a photo of one, so how do they know that this is even an artifact of an alien.\n\nThese scientist probably have some notes taken on why they think this is an alien but, from the stuff that I thought about this looks more like a human than anything and they have no proof that they know what aliens look like. If they are so sure that this is a face of an alien they why did they not put a picture of an alien in the article.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted builders obstacles overcome building dock dirigibles The builders think mast would work It said paragraph nine architects could simply drop morning mast top flat roof A thousandfoot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress buildings frame The buiders modify building As said paragraph ten Rather building utilitarian mast ornamentation architects designed shinny glass chromenickle stainless steel tower would illinated frome inside steppedback design imitated shape building The obstacles builders overcame let use mast efectly", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood exerpt grateful caring hard thats mood ended way created type house living also people Also another mood comfortable example said I born Newark simple house explains mood towards everything", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", it tals about how scientest are working on new technology to overcome the chalanges of Venus and its complications. In the begining of the artical it talks abou how Venus isthe second closest planet from the sun and how it is one of the two most similar planets to Earth. Since it has similarities to Earths' size and density scientest have sentunmanded spacecrafts to Venus to investigate.\n\nUnfortunatlly no space craft has survived acording to the last two sentances of paragraph two. In the beginning of paragraph three it states how a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide engulfs Venus. The clouds on this planet are also highly currosive with sulfuric acid in them. The planets surface averages about 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmospheric presure is 90 times greater than on Earth. This concludes that Venus has the hotest surface tempreature of any planet in our solar system. Venus also has obsticals like erupting valcanos, earthquakes, and frequent lightning stikes on the planets surface.\n\nWith all these complications though scientest still are curious about this dangerous planet. In the second sentance of the fourth paragraph it explains that astronomers are curious because it may have been the most Earth like planet in our solar system. The planet resembles a surface with rocky sediment and includes things such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nIn the fifth paragraph it states that NASA is coming up with possible solutions to avoid most of these issues. One of them is inventing is a small vehical that resembles a blimp floating 30 miles above Venus's landscape.\n\nNow this doesn't get the scientest what they want exactly what they want because due to the planets atmospher light doesn't peneatrate very well making it difficult to observe ground conditions. It also limits the amount that you would see in pictures and vidoes of the planet. Many researchers are working on new inventions so macheines will last longer on the harsh planet.\n\nFor example in the seventh paragraph NASA states that it has been working on electronics made of silicon carbon and they have even tested it a chamber concluding that it lasted in the harsh conditions for three weeks. They are also recyclaling old ideas from the 1800's, they are trying to use a computor that does calculations,but theinvention uses gears and levers, meaning that it doesn't require any electricity to work.\n\nScientest are working hard to accheve this goal to explore this harsh mystery planet. They accept the challanges that come with it and they strive to succeed not only to gain insight but to quench their curiosity that all humans have about this planet and the possibilities that it could lead to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why censore something someone worked hard People put money countless amounts time write yet want censore itSee honestly need censore thing library certain sections certain people therefore whole conversation shouldnt going first placePeople like knit pick handle instense like word nigger dont like handle therfore shut mouth suck upSo I feel like critique imature people need read dont go library thats thoughSo stop acting like little children authors want stuff shelves banned raved ranted alsoIn conclusion stop imature dont like dont read Always think decside", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir loving caring gratefulness Throughout memoir author continuosly mentions grateful parents much loves She says I always grateful parents love sacrifice The author means s thankful parents love enough give home jobs friends give better life She also says parents much courageous thing I could ever done Narciso stating takes lot carage go forward unknown futue s greatful parents The quote show loving caring gratefulness expressed memoir author", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you wanna know how people feel about the driverless cars, well here is more information. My argument for this passage is I am against the devolpment of these new driverless cars. Some of the reasons I am against the devolpment is because i feel its a waste of money, still requires a driver, and saftey. If they are not completely driverless and safer than the normal cars would be qhy should we devolp them. These are the reasons of why I am against the development of the driverless cars.\n\nOne of the reason I am against the devolpment of the driverless cars is because it could become a waste of money. The way it could waste money is by the number of production have to be made to supply the world with one which involves a lot of material. Also if the computer fails at some point and people crash then there is a higher chance that the manufacters would get sued. As it states in the reading that if the technology fails and somone is injuired who is at fault-the driver or the manufacter. This is the reasons how its a waste of money follows in line with being against the devolpment of the driverless cars.\n\nAonther reason i am against the devolpment of driverless cars is because they are not all the way driverless. The driver has to take over at some point in time. One reason they would have to is if the car senses danger the driver is suppose to take control. It states that there has to be a driver in the car. This is the reasons how i am against the driverless cars because its not complety driverless.\n\nLast but not least reason of why im against the development of the driverless cars is because of safety. They are not really going to be that safe because of the driver will be entertained so they arent bored which will cause them not be alert so if they have to take over they wont know what to do. Its states this in the reading that BMW stated in paragraph eight or nine. They may be better for enviroment but not for peoples health concerns. This is the reasons where i feel the car lacks safety and this is why im against the devolpment of the driverless cars.\n\nIn conclusion, I have listed some of the main ideas of why im against the devolpment of the driverless cars. I aslo had followed and supported those ideas with details from the articles. I had came up with the reasons im against the devoplment is because of waste of money, not to proper about being totally driverless, and the safety features. This is my arguement of why im against the devolpment of the driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do nt speak laugh I love little brother We re years apart age way act think twins matter close still siblings still fight Usually re petty little fights get matter seconds one one could back I beat tennis warm afternoon brother gotten back school We usually relax little homework challenging playing CAPS cheated said firmly CAPS I nt I snapped back I could tell getting really upset I nt care I nt going let win one CAPS yes always fair CAPS I nt time telling truth There times I cheat distracting game I fair square CAPS re mad lost Get take like man That s I say make throw controller make run upstairs crying CAPS What brother mom yelled CAPS beat game mad I knew would report mom hoping would save get trouble CAPS game ca nt win every time CAPS s fair said slamming door room Sweet sweet victory I love I win makes feel superior course little feeling guilt making little brother cry came I went apologize CAPS I knocked door I m sorry making cry game though win lose Do nt mad I gave heartfelt apology I could think moment CAPS away I nt want talk away I walked way upstairs tell I sorry something I nt even need say sorry tells away Oh After processing happened could come mouth CAPS And I walked The rest day went We passed many times without even acknowledging one another I could nt believe upset probably one longest periods times nt talk choice I started feeling really bad even sad nt talking I decided try talking Only problem downstairs playing I upstairs time I came room started walking stairs could hear coming turned volume CAPS listen Are really going talk game I All sudden I sliding stairs CAPS laughing I landed bottom staircase started laugh We laughing That s needed start conversation Just little laugh", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do I find this valuable? The truth is I find it very weird and creepy as to they know how we feel and by are expression they should already know. I think that it makes it clear how we feel by how we express our emotions, so we dont need scanned to see. I believe that the people that know how I am would know how im feeling by how i act or look, and thats all im worried about not everyone knowing.\n\nThey state when they scanned Mona Lisa that she was 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fear and 2% anger. I think that may be it could be wrong because they way we describe our feelings. They only used the 6 basic feelings such as happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Today we label are feelings a little differently. I would describe sad as like she watched a movie that made her feel upset to were she maybe cried. The scan would have detected she was crying so shes sad, but what they would know was what she was thinking in her brain. Possibly she was depressed which is a deeper sign of sadness and the movie triggered memories which might have have made her so sad she was depressed once again. Incase that were to happen the scan would be wrong, but she would get help. The doctors i think should be able to use this but it should not be in our phones. If you were walking down the street, and saw someone that was happy well atleast you thought they were you wouldnt act different around them which then could bring there sprits up. Therefore if you scanned them and saw they were sad you would act different, more like a sorry feeling instead of happy, which then could makee them even more sad and wouldnt help them at all.\n\nI believe that in some cases the scanner would be a great use, but in some cases i think it wouldnt help at all. Most people in todays society\n\ntake what could be great and use it for the wrong purposes. Once they have better technology for this item i dont think it should be used to help people and made for everyone. Think about the kids on there phones texting and smiling. Then think about the people that would use the scanner for bad examples. Say even a student had the scanner, like a bully to another child. They scanned him or her and saw they were happy, but then they wanted to ruin it. The scanner helped someone make another feel like they didn't belong or sad. I hope that if it was to happen it would only go to certain people and was only used for a good purpose.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As a scientist at NASA and from the research made by other scientists here at NASA I can tell that this here face is nothing more than just a landform. The Face is just a natural landform, it is not created by aliens. Although many people would love to think that the Face wa created by aliens, it is not. The face is widely spred out as far as 2 miles wide. This enomous head has cought a lot of media attention such as being in a Hollywood film, appearing in books, magzines, radio talk shows, and even radio talk shows.\n\nThis landform has become a pop icon, but even with all of this attention it doesn't change the fact that it is nothing more than just another mysterious looking landfrom on Mars. \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, reavling . . . a natural landfrom. There was no alien monument after all.\"\n\nAfter 22 years, from this first 1976 Viking 1 photograph pf the Face of Mars there was a picture that was taken of the same face ten times sharper than the original that blew away scientists and web surfers showing that there was no alien monument after all. This shows that the Face of Mars is nothing more than a natural landform on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Contemporarily, cars and other vehicles are the major contributors to air pollution and society prefers to use their own conveyance to transfer rather than using public transportation. Therefore, it is widely believed that one solution to environmental problems would be for governments to raise the price of petrol. In my opinion, this is the optimal way to deal with polluting issues.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the valuation of fuel increase leads to the result that a number of citizens wonder if it is necessary to spend more money for travel. Because of the authorities, car owners have to make a hard decision between going out or staying at home to save their money for oil so that the auto density on the laneway decreases dramatically. Moreover, the act of national authorities leads all natives to choose some methods which are friendly to the environment. It can be clearly seen that hybrid cars were born to tackle environmental drawbacks. For instance, the report from BBC shows that the percentage of hybrid cars in traffic rose significantly after the government's decision to raise the pay for petrol.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, besides soaring the tariff of fuel, national authorities could apply some other solutions to tackle this problem and invest money in developing eco-friendly means of transport. To be more specific, people should be encouraged to use electric automobiles and motorbikes to prevent air contamination. Furthermore, raising citizen awareness of using public transport would help in the effort to deal with global warming. To clarify, with the increase of vans, the solution is to cut down the emissions from popularized resident transportations. It is an effective way to protect the environment. On the other hand, I agree that pushing the figure of travel material to protect our planet from tainting has more effect than the other ones.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, The government's decision about raising the cost of fuel for individual vehicles certainly solved the environmental problems. I believe that heightening the price of power sources used for travelling will address traffic and atmosphere corruption problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driveless Cars are Coming\" there are many opinions on if we should procced on with the thought and dream of driverless cars. The article supports both sides of the argument and makes vailed points for both sides.\n\nAlthough postive points brought up in the article there are some negative. In the article in paragraph nine, there are many reasonable questions brought up in the article regarding the safety of not only drivers but pedestrians. What is to happen if the technology glithes and someone ends up dying? Who would we blame for these accidents happening? People may argue that we have made many advances in technology but to this day we still have everyday household items blowing up. One other negative feature about having driverless cars is brought up in the article as if there was an emergency on the road what was that car supposed to do.\n\nAlthough there are some negativies to having driverless cars there are also some postivies. Like in paragraph seven the article brings up some postivies to the situtation as the car having more features making driving safer and less diffcult. Another postive thing mentioned in the article about driverless cars is the thought of us using less fuel. With the use of less fuel is that we are saving our enviroment by our pollution rate going down as well. Another postive thing about having driverless cars is the safety of the person driving the car may increase such as if the seat belt is not put or put on correctly the car will not start.\n\nThe article \" Driverless Cars Are Coming\" shows both sides of the argument. Although there are negative aspects of the car. There are also some positive aspects that wil increase the safety of drivers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often said that in order to fight diseases, the government should invest more money in encouraging a healthy lifestyle in lieu of spending money on the treatment of people who are already suffering from illness. In my view, I partially advocate the idea. And through this essay, I aim to analyse my standpoints in order to reach a relevant conclusion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, I agree that a large proportion of the state budget should be allocated to activities or campaigns that promote a healthy lifestyle. This is because a lot of diseases nowadays are actually the direct result of people's unhealthy habits. For example, children who eat fast food on a daily basis commonly can suffer from a range of health issues, namely weight problems and obesity. These diseases can be prevented if people are made more aware of the severe consequences of an unhealthy diet and the benefits of sustaining a good health. In addition, there are a number of incurable diseases, such as HIV, AIDS and many forms of cancer. Of course, there are drugs and treatments that can prolong the life of patients suffering from such diseases, but the better solution in this case is obviously trying to prevent these diseases from occurring, instead of trying to cure them, which can often place a heavy burden on patients' families, and on society as a whole.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the treatment for people who are already ill should also receive adequate funding, due to the fact that some diseases simply cannot be prevented. People living in many tropical or coastal regions, for example, are highly vulnerable to waterborne diseases after a natural disaster such as a tsunami or heavy flooding. Besides, there are also some illnesses and disorders that are inherited. For instance, if a person suffers from asthma, it is highly likely that his children will also contract respiratory diseases, regardless of their diet or lifestyle. These mentioned cases would be almost impossible for people or the government to prevent; therefore, money needs to be spent on the treatment of patients.\r\n\r\nAll things considered, both promoting a healthy lifestyle and spending money on the treatment of people who are already ill are equally important in the fight against diseases, and each country should develop flexible plans to adapt to different situations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years rather than being well-informed about the details of newly launched products, people are bombarded with all kinds of advertisements. I believe the excessive popularity of advertisements has profound influences on customers and there are some measures which can protect them.\n\nThe increasing prevalence of advertising exerts several detrimental effects on consumers. First, commercials might stimulate people to purchase products that they do not really need. In order to approach prospective customers and create brand awareness, many enterprises tend to exaggerate the quality of their products. As a result, unwary consumers who are swayed by glamorous advertisements are easily tempted to impulsively buy goods that are of little use to them. Second, the rising popularity of advertising can also encourage people to form bad habits. For example, as youngsters are not mature enough to distinguish right from wrong or judge what is suitable within society, they might become addicted to playing video games if they are exposed to commercials promoting those products on a frequent basis.\n\nThere are several approaches that should be taken into consideration to protect consumers from the adverse effects of advertising. Governments should impose strict regulation on the advertising industry. Under stringent control, most businesses would be more responsible and truthful in promoting their products whether through online advertisements or commercial advertising on prime-time television. This would enable consumers to choose the most suitable and reliable products with greater trust and confidence. Additionally, consumers should have a thorough plan of what they are going to buy before they shop. By doing this, people will have time to prepare and make a wise decision about what products should be bought, which eventually save a great deal of money spent on unnecessary advertised goods.\n\nIn conclusion, although the excessive prevalence of advertising brings a lot of disadvantages to consumers, there are several effective approaches to protect consumers from the negative influences of advertising.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports this idea by giving ideas about a better future, in paragraph five it says \" NASA's possible solution to hostile conditons on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\" in that sentence he is saying that if they would have more research they can have posability to go to Venus and not suffer the extrem tempertures.\n\nThe author supports the idea that studying Venus is worthy puersuit despite the dangers by saying that need a deeper research so they can understand what is in Venus, how is Venus and how can they survive in Venus, in paragaph six says, \"reseachers cannot take samples of rock,gas or anything else,from a distance.\", he says that with out any real material in his hands no research can truely happen, and with out a real research they can't have good tecnology and with out tecnology nobody can truly know what is in Venus.\n\nthe conclusion is that he has a point how can we be better if we don't take risks.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "volunteering influences teenagers and the community positively. Therefore, some folk thinks that teenagers should volunteer in their free time. I wouldn’t be more agreeable, I believe that the volunteer industry has large-scale impacts on societies. In addition, it helps young people to gain remarkable skills.\r\n\r\nVolunteering is a simulation of the real work environment. As Schools don’t educate youngsters about the practical side of work, getting unpaid jobs is capable to teach them about it. For example, Volunteering with Red Cross is considered exposure to the medical field. Hence, if there is any high school student who dreams of working in the health care sector, this will help them to experience the field. \r\n\r\nBesides job experience, adolescence is the most productive human period. Instead of spending it on useless activities, it would rather take advantage of it productively. That’s due to the fact, that making teens busy will protect them from involving in harmful circumstances, for instance, making bad friends or abusing drugs. Accordingly, instead of becoming dependent and harmful individuals, their productiveness will empower the public. As a result, Non-governmental organizations support having their labour from young adults. However, some people doubt the ability of young individuals to manage such responsibilities, these organizations are the most successful among communities’ institutions. \r\n\r\nTo summarize, the community should encourage teenagers’ to volunteer. This will have a positive influence on the community and teenagers. Although some opinions see that having a job at early life stage will interfere with enjoying life before the age of responsibility. I disagree with them, by saying that holding responsibilities at a younger age makes them easier while undertaking them at an older.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no doubt that our future that beholds us is headed into big changes with technology. We have already morphed into a society where technology is such a big hand on how we live now. Driverless cars are coming and they are coming for the better.\n\nDriverless cars could help us in many aspects. Some being as simple as less crashes and others being as big as how to prevent those crashes. Under specific conditions, Google has had cars that could drive independently since 2009. Although not being truly driverless, their cars have driven more then half a million miles without a crash. Googles modified car uses lots of position-estimating sensors that can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine. This would allow far better control than a human driver could manage alone.\n\nIn conclusion, i am in support for driverless cars. Not only do they have a bright spot for the future but even at this point in time they could help us change the world for the better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports their idea that venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because every time the author brings up a reason for Venus being s dangerous planet to go travel to and study they have rebuttle for their own plrome within that paragrahp and not only taling about the dangers but including how. NASA has tried to resolve these problems or go around these problems and also saying why all this research and risk of researching Venus might come in handy down the line. In paragraph 7 it states tha Nasa is working on other approaches to studying Venus land they go on about how they've got some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide and. They've put in the same harsh conditions that Venus's atmosphere has and testing if this material can survive in the harsh conditions of venus because in Venus the atmosphere is very dangerous for humans and they've had expitions of Venus that were unmaned because no spacecraft has survived the landing fore more than a few hours.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face that you see on mars was not something created by aliens. Although it may look like a face its not. What you see in this picture is a butte or a mesa. In the following paragraphs I will state reasons helping you undertstand that the pictures effect everything and that it wasnt created by aliens.\n\nThe pictures that you have seen are very old. Most of the pictures you have seen where taken from 1976-2001. These pictures have really bad graphics. Things that are old are usaually harder to understand and comperhend. Its hard to see old things clear. Advances in technology have helped us see older things a lot more clear. We can fully understand things from the past now.\n\nThe cameras we use today have a lot better grapics. Back then their images could only span 43 meters per pixel. Today our cameras can span 1.56 meters per pixel which is a lot better. This helps us see pictures a lot more clear. We took pictures of the of the face and could see certain things the older cameras couldn't see.\n\nIn the new pictures if there were objects in this picture like airplanes or Egyptian-style pyramids we would easily see them. There wasn't any of these things. What the picture of the face showed was equivalent to a butte or mesa. It looked like landforms found in the American West. It reminds people of the\n\nMiddle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nAll the new pictures we have help us undertstand and see things more clear. We now know that it wasn't created by aliens. Its just a simple butte or mesa thats no very special besides the fact that it kind of looks like a face. It reminds people of a Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. This face has nothing to do with aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this essay I will be talking about the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars.\" The face was not created by aliens it is a natural landform. I have a lot of evidence for my claim.\n\nThey all prove that it is a natural landform.\n\nThe Face on Mars is just a natural landform.\n\nIt was not created by aliens.\n\nHere is some evidence. \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform.\" Another piece of evidence is it was describes as a huge rock formation . . . which resembles a human head . . . formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\n\nLast but not least I have one more piece of evidence \"We just don't pass over the Face very often.\" They thought is was made by aliens because they usually don't see this face. Now that they know it is a natural landform they will always see it.\n\nIn conclusion we can prove that the Face in Mars is just a natural landform.\n\nAt the beginning everyone thought that aliens made this. \"It has been shown in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk showseven haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years!\" All of this evidence proves that it was just a natural landform no one ever noticed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this current day and age, science has advanced drastically with the development of social media apps for interaction among people. Additionally, these apps have been used for various purposes just as dating, job hunt, news. I believe the advantages of this technology certainly outweigh the disadvantages.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, human interaction has been made simpler with the advancement of time. Moreover, social media apps provide a way of distraction in the day to day life stress. Benefits such as communication with friends abroad as well as informing your loved ones about good or bad news have been the highlight. In addition, with the trend of newspapers diminishing, online websites have provided a gateway for easy access to news worldwide within seconds. For example, in Canada, there are 50 different news channels which provide every 15-minute update of international events online. Hence, social media has been the greatest achievement in the last decade.\r\n\r\nOn the contrary, human interactions such as conversations over coffee have been confined to chat groups. Furthermore, various countries had to put a ban on certain websites for promoting hatred among society as well as manipulation of the general public with false facts. For instance, a recent study suggests that 85% of people using these tend to believe everything they see online. Consequently, censorship of these websites is required.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I believe that the pros of social media outweigh the cons. It depends on the individual to use the current technology for the betterment of society. Significant improvements have been made in online shopping, news communication along with easy access to people living far.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What is the face on Mars? The face of Mars is called a mesa which is a type of landform.\n\nMany people believe that this landform wasn't a creation of Mars or mother nature, but others may beileve other wise. This creation has many facts to back up its existence such as a spacecraft watching it at all time, no life has been found, and how could they have created it. So in all alians could'nt have build such a formation only Mars her self could have.\n\nSpacecrafts have help us with so many thing when it come to the topic of outerspace. These technological pieces of art help us find spots to land, help use to see whats the aera is like and so on. But one thing the space craft has proven is that aliens doent exist on mars. The Viking\n\n1 was taking photos at all times of the surface of Mars, so how could have thes so called 'aliens' make it. This question is simple because they couldn't. And based on the information there is no one on Mars so how could it have been.\n\nMars is a planet not suitable to sustain life on his. Mars does not have suitable breathing air so the likely hood of life beeing there is slim. Most people think aliens have created this hugh structer, but even if there was life on mars how could they have created this structer. Building a structure of this size would take a long period of time that the spacecraft would have eventualy picked up. And by not haveing the right equepment the 'aliens' couldnt have done it.\n\nBuilding a big structure like this would take time, but would also take a lot of heavy lifting. This landformation is to big to becreated by hand or by hands. The only real logical way that this structure could have been created is by technology, and the only technology even close to Mars is the spacecraft the Viking 1. So it would be impossible for any thing to build soemthing of that size in that amout of time with little resources.\n\nThere is a possibility that there could have been something else that created this structure. But we cant look over the fact that there was been no finding of life on Mars. This structures is called a mesa and earth as countless of them so to see one on Mars couldnt be that much of a shocker. And the face appears because of indents in the rock that are slowly going away. So in all its very unlikely that aliens created this landform.\n\nAliens couldnt have build such a creation only Mars her self could have. This is proven on the information about the spacecraft, how theres no life on Mars, and the creation of it all disprove the fact that aliens could have build this landform. So now hopefully you know who didnt create these wonderus landform of Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit deprite the dangers it presents. Not only will we learn more from this Earth-like planet, but we can also see what it once was, and what is has become.\n\nVenus has been considered as Earth's \"Twin,\" because Venus is the only planet that is the closest to Earth, not only in density, but size. Every spacecraft that has been sent to Venus, doesn't make it out, because the atmosphere of Venus is too strong of carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid. The temperatures alone average over 800 degrees. Too much for any human to survive. By studying Venus, we have learned the weather consists of errupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to any probes that are seeking land on the surface of Vennus. Another example of what has been found is Venus may have had a form of life, just like Earth, once consisting of large oceans and forms of life. The planet today still consists of a rocky sediment, featuring and consisting of valleys, mountains, and craters. By working with what we know, NASA has been creating prototypes that could soon once carry humans to study Venus, at a long distance to keep it safe. Studying from our first resources, we have learned the safer distance humans can be at to observe Venus. It may not be an easy task, but it is survivable for humans.\n\nFrom gathering information from space probes that have attempted to explore Venus, we can make prototypes to test around the atmosphere, before we send any humans to observe Venus from a distance. We have learned how to make observations from this Earth-like planet possible, and we have an insight of what this planet once was, and what it has become today. The exploration of Venus may hold a few dangers and set-backs, but researchers are doing the best they can to create a safe way to observe Venus from a distance.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I grade I put mible set I went put mible set bruck went park I wate shag went ice making I hart line people got ther pard munem axyer went ice starting day went back house build mible mirne art way went house plade outside inside house", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People make many facial expressions to tell how they are feeling about certain people or situations. There really a need for a software to detect how a students emotional expressions are? Classrooms do not need technology for syudent to tell what their emotional expressions are. Students peers are more than captiable of telling weather the person likes something or not. It's also a waste of techonolgy to be put in a classroom.\n\nOne reason why technology to read students is not benetfical is facial expressions can be seen and dosen'r have to be heard. In the passage pargraph four it states that, \"The facial expressions for each emotion are univeral and individuals often show varying dgrees of expressions.\" Another reason is humans are the detecters of weather another persons like something or not. In paragraph five it states that, \"In fact, we humans perform this same \"calculation\" everyday. For instance you can probably tell hoe a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" Why need technology when people have their ouwn knowledge of whats going on with a person. Last reason is using your muscles called palpabraeus, in paragraph eight it explains that using your muscles you can spot certain faces a person is trying to make. It says, \"To an expert faces dont lie; these muscles clues are used to spot when a smile politician or celebirty isn't being truthful.\"\n\nIn conclusion using technology is not a good use to read student in a classroom. There no reason because there are people when can detect other people's expressions. Students also using their own resouces/knowledge. In the passage it states that, \"moving your facial mucles not only express emotions, but also may help produce them.\" No need technology to tell a person that.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A computer now adays can calculate when you are bored, happy, etc. Scientiest have made a program that can calculate all of the 44 major muscles in your face that make your emotions visible. Prof. Thomas huang, of the Buckingham Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, colaboration with Prof. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam. Dr. Huang and his colleage are evperts at developing better ways fr humans and computer in communicate.\n\nThis process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer ,odel of the face and all 44 major muscles in the madel must move like human muscles. If one or m,ore of the muscles are moving at once then Dr. Huanf calls this \"action unit\". Dr. Huang then relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, createer of the FACS ( Faial Action Coding System). Dr. Eckman has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness then he associates them with characteristic movement of the facial muscloes. For example your muscles above your eyes raise your eyebrows when your surprised and the muscles around your mouth tense up when you are angry.\n\nDr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci (srtist of Mona Lisa) studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. His hew computer software stores similiar anatomical information as elctronic code.For example if you are on your computer and an ad pops up another ad similiar to that will pop up, and vise versa to that if an ad pops up and you don't like it then a differnt ad will pop up instead, and all of this is read through your webcam.\n\nIf you are doing your work on your computer and you are bored or confused it will indicate this and make something able to make it more clear or make if more fun so you can ocus better. This same techonolgy can make computer animated faces more exsprecive for video games or vidoe surgery.\n\nIn conclusion I think that this is a good idea becasue people that have adhd become distracted very easy and with a tool that help them become more consentrated to their work would be helpful to them and to their teachers teaching.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Coming back failing driving test Saeng comforted finding hibiscus flower It brings back cherished Saeng s homeland similar flowers grew old home The author concluded story saying When come back Saeng vowed silently snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test compare Saeng hibiscus Like Saeng hibiscus must try adapt new surroundings The author shows Saeng recognizes connection inspired In Saeng s mind hibiscus survive moved", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I patient flew visit sister I asked school We flew well hill When got stuck four hours hour I got bored little brother us didnt help Then intereem hear go security sit room gift shop hurs When hour left another announcement delayed three hours I listening ipod luckily fell asleep three half hours When finally get leave walk six seater phase us fly small island near When got hurry island school see sister That one time I felt patient waiting airport hours", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, most of the people dispute that children have some of the problems that focus on their subjects in school. Many reasons affect of losing concentration during the lessons and numerous solutions is created in order to control this problem. This essay will illustrate two main reasons and some of the solutions which are going to explain in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, It is undeniable that children alway want to play games so they do not pay attention to their responsibilities related school. Moreover, many subjects are boring and tough thus students do not focus on easily. Unfortunately, most of the schools still continue traditional education methods that reading a book writing essays etc. Furthermore, teenagers and children spend on a long time at school so they feel bored during lesson.It is apperantly seen that Globalization and Development technology have a negative impact on the system of education. Therefore numerous students have tendency to other learning methods that are quick and enjoyable. For instance, if they want to learn new subject, they prefer to watch video or search on the internet. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, plenty of teacher noticed that lessons should be interactive and dynamic. If they create a new technique of teaching, children have some of problems that their cognitive and social developments. It is clear that lecturers should be not only teacher but also friend for students. They should make an itineraries that contain games, activities and events related children pursuits. To exemplify, they will be able to teach lessons in the park so children will be free at the lesson. Similarly, teachers will be able to find new method for teaching as card games.They will be able to get aim for parents in order to creating new games.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, Children lose concentration easily during lessons and they feel bored from their reponsibilities and difficult subjects. Teachers and parents can be co-operate in order to reduce losing concenration levels.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus a. k. a the Evening Star is one of the brightes planets when you look into the night sky. however it sometimes is accidently named wrong and Venus is simply easy to spot from earth but is more safe away from earth. It's sometimes often refered to as earth's \"twin\" because its the closes't planet to earth. some missions were unmanned because most of the spacecrafts never survived the landing for more nan a fiew hours the issue probably eplaines why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus for more than 3 decades numerous factors contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us. even though we are trying to get to Venus and make sure the spacecraft landed and survived it. it's gonna take a long time to get the suplies for that. astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth- like planet in the solar system. Long befor it Venus was probably covered largely with Oceans and clould have supported various forms of life just like earth. today Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, the number of elders has progressively increased in many countries across the world. It becomes debatable whether sons and daughters should take responsibility for looking after their parents when they get older and cannot take care of themselves, or not. In this essay, the reasons to support my agreement with the statement will be elaborated on before my conclusion is reached.\n\nFirst of all, parents are the person who devotes themselves to raising us since we were a baby and advocates financial support for education, living, and many more with their endless love. Without them, all of us will never born on the earth. To illustrate, my mother raised me since I was unable to do anything such as taking a bath, cooking a meal, changing a cloth, or even eating, and standing. Now, I'm 26 years old and mature enough to have a constant job that can generate income. Therefore, it is basically responsible to repay by taking care of them when their physical and mental health as well as financial statement become escalated and do not have the ability to look after themselves.\n\nFurthermore, taking care of our parents by doing is the best lesson for teaching our children to look after us when we get old. Kids will learn and duplicate our behaviour. If we treat our parents very well, in the future kids will be likely to do the same. For example, without any words teaching me about repaying, my father taught me by action as he well took care of my grandparents every day. Eventually, I absorb and imitate his behaviour automatically, and I do the same thing that my father did to my grandparent.\n\nIn conclusion, this essay discussed the two major reasons why we have to look after our elder family members including repaying them for taking care of us since we were young, and being the best reason for the next generation. According to the aforementioned paragraphs, I absolutely agree with the view.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood happy In memior Narciso Rodriguez describes happy fun times living small home New Jersey He describes family consisted mother father turned house cuban home opened doors refugees going difficult times In last Narciso explains home first birthdays happened friends family would gather The message trying get across nt matter big expensive home matters home makes special place The reason I know mood happy wonderful people life Her home nt big fancy described It simple house parents opened refugees In saying home full happiness love Narciso s simple house turned home filled friends family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computer to identify human emotions by letting know people detect exactly how other people are feeling without being tell about it. It had been created a new software to develop the knowledge of the emotions of others. Although, new applications of thisgeneration can calculate math homework. The Monalisa has been used for this discovery,\n\nDr. Paul Eckman is the creator of FACS, also they uses a computer to created 3-D model of the face basics emotions.\n\nFirst, the author describe how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computer to identify human emotions by a computer. This portrays that the technology has been update to let people have more knowledge about this new era. The Monalisa has been used for this discovery. The text says\" She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" This show us that by just looking at their face we can't notice all this emotions on this paint of Leonardo da Vinci's.\n\nSecond, the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computer to identify human emotions just by looking at their normal face. This shows how the technology have been update upon all this year, every year that pass, more discovery are treaten at the world. Dr. Paul Eckman is the creator of the FACS. The text says \" Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happines, suprise, anger, disgust, fear and sadness.\" This means that the new discovery of Dr. Paul Eckman can identify 6 basic emotions.\n\nThird, the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions by showing people thier emotion in only one picture of them. This new technology shows how people can have their knowlegde in this topic withot being an expert. To do this discovery they uses computer to created a 3-D model of the face basics emotions. The text says \" The process begins when the computer construcs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\" This means that all the 6 emotions are associated with each charactheristic movements of the facil muscles.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System is usesfull to know the characteristic movement of the facial muscles.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Mona lisa demostration is relly intended to bring a simile to your face wihile .\n\nPeople are trying to do new ssttuf with new tecnology but some of this peoiple dont know that some times they do need to have or use tecnology they want to just do things as there way but some times they do need to use tecnology and do what they have to do so they can fix the old stuff and new stuff the monalisa just a little simle but they can fixii it withtecnology and try to do some thinh new they have to look for more tecnology and expressions to be sure that they are doing whta they have to do in expression of the wghat they have and maind.\n\nThe doctor said that they dcan fix the or modify the expression or lesson from what they are talking about .\n\nThey are trying to said that they want to invent a computer that knows when are you happy and when you are sad or angry and other caind of emottions.\n\neach they there are trying to have new tecnology and new stuff they have to see whats goin on in that they have to do what they have to do.\n\nOther peopl;e dont like to see other people expressions because they get enoy from seeintg them.\n\nThey are seeing video games and trying to see what can they do to modofy them .\n\nSeeing you in the miriror each they its like you are trying to see something diffirent that you can see becuse alreddy has the face that you have to see even tho they are not in the same expression ecah day becuse some times your actitud your face your simile arte the ones that can change with aout let you know each day you will hav a expressions that will change your face", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The figure shows plans of a museum in 1998 and in 2008, after suffering some changes. The main differences in both plans are the layout of the building and the addition of new facilities.\nIn 1998, once you entered the museum you would first encounter the entrance/ exit and the thickets shop. On the left, there was a temporary exhibition room and on the right, there was a shop, the bathroom and a bags and coat hanger.\nAt that time the museum had three permanent exhibition rooms: one on the left, next to the temporary exhibition room, and two on the right, adjacent to the shop and WC.\nSeparating 2 exhibition rooms, at the top of the plan, there was a cafe. All the spaces mentioned surrounded a central garden.\nSimilar to 1998, in 2008, people would find a ticket shop in the space designated as an entrance and exit. However, on the left, now is a permanent exhibition room, whereas on the right there's a shop and a bags and coat hanger. The museum still possesses three permanent exhibition rooms, all of them on the right side of the building.\nOn the left side, adjacent to the shop and hanger there's a temporary exhibition room and next to it a restaurant. At the top of the plan, there's a cafe and a bathroom next to the restaurant and one of the permanent exhibition rooms, respectively.\nJust like in 1998, there's a central garden. However, this garden now has new components such as fountains and a cafe sitting area close to the cafe.\nIn conclusion, the museum in 2008 is much more modern and developed than in 1998. In fact, the building became a facility that welcomes not only people interested in visiting the many exhibitions but also those that just want to have a meal or a cup of coffee in the garden with friends.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I learned something valuable school I nt learn class room even form book I learned lesson hallway near copy room One prompted ask kind lesson could possibly learn hall All I tell s one I ll forgetting time soon In order completely understand exactly I roaming halls learning lessons re going need little bit background I third period class leadership time Leadership nt really conventional class perspective outsider Kids running school like loose mice give appearance impropriety appearance We nt anything bad s time would leave class room order needed done day Leadership directly preceded myleast favorite class day I simply detested class I classes ever since I kindergarten I sophomore time language bugging past ten years It nt I bad anything really I nt I strong contempt class The teacher always gave hard time probably I big mouth I tended talk lot She type person posture stickler rules The type person could see wielding yard stick deadly weapon In leadership specific class period teacher taking particularly long time explaining supposed day He sometimes famous long winded He could take entire minute class period talking assignment would taken ten minutes That day however nt assignment At least normal person would consider typical assignment Another girl class working special project We retrieve something important car We waited teacher finish talking asked could go said yes We walked double doors classroom main hallway proceeded toward parking lot As walking passed office doors hall library Just walk copy room door I saw Two class year I thought I would say hi I I asked taking year He replied I told CAPS thing sucks I nt know time I would eating words truck load short Not five seconds I said tugging shirt sleeve trying get building I told calm rude interrupt people talking After I said bye hurried door burst laughter I takenaback sudden outburst laughter questioned laughing It right teacher poked head door said thick accent PERSON I hear nt like class I must red tomato I stood dumbest look face The kind look jumps face wish rewind button mouth I looked right shoulder time see gasping air laughing hard I redirected attention standing angry face covering laughter trying break There I ten steps away car I nothing say The lesson I learned day never insult alligator ve crossed river Or least make sure alligator nt next room Especially alligator teaches next class", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, being environmentally friendly has become a popular issue due to global warming, greenhouse gas emissions, carbon emissions and so on. I believe that there are many means to solve these problems, while I disagree with the idea that the government should raise the price of fuel for all kinds of cars.\r\n\r\nThere are some advantages to the government increasing the price of oil. Firstly, this is one of the most direct ways to prevent people from driving their cars everywhere. Because the high price should be afforded, people should try to avoid spending on it. Secondly, the councillors may develop public transportation to encourage residents to take it. This can reduce traffic jams and even narrowed the difference between urban and suburban. Finally, some people may buy an electric car instead of driving the traditional car.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, if councillors increase the price of fuel for vehicles, it will cause some problems for people who are not rich enough to afford the commuting expenditures. The outcome of increasing fuel price not only effects the residents’ life but also bris huge stress for the public. The best way to solve the environmental problems should be raise the environmental awareness of the public. For example, reduce the driving frequencies, Thus, people will pay more green attention to their daily life.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, increasing the price of fuel for all vehicles is a practical way to solve environmental problems, while the most essential way is to promote environmental awareness to the public.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When looking at the face it look baerly looks like a face, it could be literally anything just for the fact on how unfocsed and brod the shape is. When looking at a face you see all the details and diffrences but in this picture its just three smuges in the shape of two eys and a mouth. Also when looking at the photo you cant really see how large it is but its way to big to be the size of a face, its more the size of a building or larger. You can see its a rectangle shape that appers to be some sort of hill natrully created by the enviorment so saying it looks like a face is really dumb because if you saw a really blured picture of a rock with dirt in the formation of eyes and a mouth, would you call it a face?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles allow dirigibles dock For instance paragraph talks Hindenburg bursting flames New Jersey much dangerous would highly populated areas New York", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How many times have you been running late for work or school? You're running out the door with one shoe on, ten bags in your hands, and half a face of makeup. Sound familiar? It sure sounds like every other day for me as I scramble to my car on my way to school. Usually, I have to hurry and collect myself once I get to where I'm going or I just end up being late. However, if we had driverless cars, all of this chaos could be prevented.\n\nPersonally, if I had a driverless car, I'd love it. I could eat my breakfast on the way to school, finish my homework, or even finish up my makeup in the car! That way I wouldn't have to worry about being late to school or have to put myself in harm's way by trying to finish these tasks while driving. A lot of things that might've distracted me while driving I can do without having to worry about what's happening on the road. Not only would driverless cars help me, but other people as well. I assume that once driverless cars become popular and develop more, we will build on to the types of cars we would make. Such as school buses and semi trucks. Sleepy nighttime truck drivers and people traveling will be much safer on the road if the car can drive while they take a nap. It is proven that driving tired is worse than driving drunk. Another thing I'd enjoy about having a driverless car is that I would feel safer on the road.\n\nThe car is 90% in control of everything that is happening on the road. Therefore, I'd feel safer knowing that myself and all the people around me aren't distracted by something else while driving. How many cases of accidents due to someone on their phone have we had? Too many. If the car was driving by itself, we wouldn't have to worry about reckless drivers and careless driving. Not to mention, if we had driverless cars, drunk drivers would have no more accidents. They wouldn't have to worry about being intoxicated while on the road because the car is doing all the work for them. I'm not saying that people should drive drunk, even with driverless cars; however, I'm just saying that if we had driverless cars, a lot of accidents would be prevented.\n\nI think driverless cars would be a great addition to our society and our world. Not only would they be convient for the driver, but also safer for the other people on the\n\nroad. Driverless cars would improve our accident rate and they would help us to make the roads a safer place. Driverless cars are the way to go.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Exploring Venus\n\nVenus is one of the two clostest plantes to Earth, including Mars. We don't know a lot about other planets, because exploring them is to hard. The conditions some planets contain are to tough for human contact.\n\nEven though it would be hard, the author thinks it would benifit us greatly in the long run if we explored Venus. The passage states that Venus could have been closely related to Earth. Scientists say that millions of years ago, Venus could have been covered by forests and oceans, just like Earth. If this statement is true, then there is a slight possibility there is still some form of life, whether it be plants, animals, or even small living cells.\n\nThe article explains, \"The planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\" Since the surface is to hot for human contact, scientists say that if we fly about 30 miles above the surface, then we can study the landscape in conditions that are fit enough for humans to survive. It may not be comforatable, as temperatures will still be about 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but we could still survive. \"The air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth,\" the article explains.\n\nEven though we could still stay 30 miles above surface level, the author says that could only provide limited information on the planet. The author says,\"Most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.\" This means cameras couldn't really capture any detailed pictures of Venus. Also, if we want any rock samples from the planet then we would have to get up close to the planet. The author claims that scientists are developing machines that can last longer through these conditions. That will allow them to get any samples they need. The passage explains that NASA is working on a robot that can lat up to 3 weeks in these conditions. They are also trying to gather an old computer that can make calculations wihtout using any electronics.\n\nIn conclusion, the author supports the idea of traveling to Venus to get information about the planet. Everytime the author makes a statement detering us from studying Venus, he backs it up with a solution. His closing paragraph also says,\"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be exopanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" Here he states that we shouldn't be afraid of the obstacles we face, but that we should face and overcome them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The content todays materials always subtible young children Information distributed media networks harmful young children read surrounded including video games By growing violent enviornment children observe greater chance becoming violent The continuence censorship todays materials necessity well children todays society In video games ratings help explain wat subtible age throughout childhood adolesence Movies also making harder younger children see certain movies Books magazines well protected although Age maturity plays huge role whether child aloud read introduced specific material Violence major trend video games todays world influence brings children unecessary eventually detrimental well The reason ratings changed children obsorb enviornment become see introduced violent behavior greater chance becoming violent children In libraries sections every age group specific genre books fiction non fiction But explicit material books magazines also censored distributed shelves allowed available young teenagers children As part community libraries take apart well children expose information earlier necessary Throughout experience I seen children grow fast exposed certain knowledge Especially todays music radios good job editing content songs puting parental advisory certain cd s still stop buying material In games including etc teens becoming accostumed type behavior safe condusive children By censoring certain material disallows continuence bad behavior amongst youth today", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles facing builders attempting allow dirgibles dock mast Empire State Building One reason attaching humongous blimp peak building would add excessive strain Lusted explains A thousandfoot dirgible moored top building would add stress building s frame much revision structure s frame needed Another obstacle nature Wind currents would push dirigible around would unsafe The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Even dirgible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast This would make unsafe passengers get blimp There also law effect prevented airships flying low urban areas These obstacles prevented builders safely devising way dock dirigibles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If you could have a driverless car would you take the chance? Driverless cars should not be developed. I think this because of the cars not actually being driverless, companies not knowing how to make it enticing, and laws preventing it. If you saw a driverless car on the road, would you feel safe? Would you know if the human inside is or isn't driving?\n\nDriverless cars aren't actually driverless. While they can do many raod behaviors without the help of a driver, they actually are not driverless. When they encounter something such as a traffic jam, or the ever so challenging driveway, they must alert the driver to take over. It even states in the paragraph that, \"Google cars aren't truly driverless.\" This is argued however, as it does state in the passage that advancements are being made. These advancements are predicted to creat a real driverless car by 2020. This can also be a problem however, as many companies claiming to have made these cars are wanting to release them before this time, showing that this prediction doesn't matter to them. They could care less if the car is actually driverless, they just want money. If you encountered a driverless car while driving, would you trust that that car is safe?\n\nManufacturers don't know how to make this technology enticing. After all, what fun is there in being in a driverless car. Many people nowadays have their cars for the purpose of driving them, not riding. They enjoy driving, and get the biggest, fastest, or toughest car they can. This is from a love of cars. Introducing driverless cars would ruin this love and passion for cars. You wouldn't see anymore interesting races, as they would be driven by cars that were automated, and already knew which car would win, they just were running a program to make it interesting. This can be argued, however, as supporters of this say that cars that need drivers would never be removed, and races will stay the same as it always has been. They allso can argue, from the passage, that,\"Some manufacturers hope to do that (make driverless cars fun) by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays.\" When you think of a driverless car, do you think of a powerful engine roaring to life, a slick racecar speeding down a track, or do you just see something like an electric car, small motor, and not exciting?\n\nLaws prevent these cars from even being researched. The passage even states that,\"in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars.\" manufacturers only hope is that they, \"believe that more states (other thatn California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Colombia) will follow (allowing cars to be tested) as soon as the cars are proved more reliably safe. However, even if this doesn't happen, there is another problem. The passage states, \"even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\" This shows that the legal and manufacturing worlds are completely unprepared for driverless cars. If you were to want to buy a driverless car, how much would you think about the laws covering it? Would they be in your favor if anything happens, or would they be complicated enough that the manufacturer themselves can just blow you off?\n\nDriverless cars should not be developed. I believe this because, the cars aren't actually driverless, the manufacturers don't know how to make them enticing, and laws prevent them from even happening. When you really think about driverless cars and their existance, doesn't it seem like common sense to not have have something that can cause such troubles for our world?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a worthy because Venus is closer to earth and it's a good planet. Sometime people called Venus is a Evening Star. It's the one of the brightest points of light in the night sky and it's making it simple for the amateur stargazer to spot it. It's on paragraph one and two that saying all the things, how nice is Venus. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioside blankets Venus. When that even more challenging for the clouds for highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. People thought that Venus is a star but it's the planet that by earth.\n\nWhen peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited sight on ground conditions because of the most of forms light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere and rendering standard forms of photography or videopraphy ineffective. The more importantly researchers cannot take like samples thing of rock, gas, or anything else.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We humans have been trying to discover aliens for more than a million years. Why have we not found them yet? We have been up in space multiple times and we have had yet another more multipe times sent space robots that went into orbital. So ask your self this question why have we not found aliens yet?\n\nI think due to evidence that it is a natural landform. I think it is a natural landform because in paragraph one it states that \"...when it spotted the shadowly likeness of a human face.\" When I read this I then concluded that it only really looked like a human because of the shadows that make up the \"eyes, nose and mouth\" in which makes this rock figure looking as if it has a face. I do think that is a natural rock landform because God created the earth so that only people would live on earth. Also God never created aliens as it states in the begining of Genisis in the bible. Another example of why that the \"face\" on Mars is a natural landform is because it states in the text on paragraph seven that \"There was no alien monument after all.\" This is poroving that even scienctists have conculuded that there was no landform on mars. Then on April 8, 2001 the space station found to \"face landform\". Though due to the pixalation i think that it did not look like a face anymore. The scientists should have put each photo in the same pixilation because it would have been an accurate demonstration over the years and how this rock landform has formed.\n\nBased on the evidence from the article and my past knowleadge I have conculded that this rock landform is in fact a natural landform that aliens have not created/ made this face looking landform. So what do you think?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology continues to advance as it becomes more complicated, complex, and innovative in today's society.\n\nJust eleven years ago the iPhone did not exist, and yet now we have access to 3-d printers, life-saving medical advancments, and...the Facial Action Coding System?\n\nThat's right: this new technology, sometimes refered to simply as FACS and developed by Professor Thomas Huang of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, has the incredible ability to read each and every emotion displayed on a person's face.\n\nFor instance, the invention identified da Vinci's \"Mona Lisa\" as being \"83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\"\n\nWhile this demonstration of its ability is certainly impressive, we should instead think about the potential that this machine has to be a useful tool elsewhere: such as in the classroom.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System could be utilized brilliantly to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom, a valuable idea that could change the way a school is run.\n\nFirst of all, teachers could use this tool to test how their students react to certain lessons, topics, and concepts.\n\nBy using the FACS to gauge the class, they could identify how to modify lesson plans for future units and for the years to come.\n\nAs Dr. Huang states, \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.'\"\n\nThe teacher could access and interpret these results, or the computer itself could \"modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nThe emotional information of these students could provide valuable information and instruction that would in turn give a student more confidence and a better undeerstanding of the topic at hand.\n\nSecondly, the Facial Action Coding System could be used to help pupils measure the effectiveness of not only lessons, but homework assignments as well.\n\nFrom a student's perpective, homework is the dreaded and unforgiving punishment that one always has to look forward to when one gets home.\n\nIf the FACS was used to measure the reactions of kids to certain assignments, the new technology could modify these assignments to better fit the needs of each individual student.\n\nThe same topics would still be taught, but not every individual learns the same way, so by using this emotions-reading innovation each student could learn and develop better connections with their current subject material.\n\nLastly, there are some who might say that the FACS would be useless in helping the learning proccess of a child.\n\nNaysayers could claim that this type of instruction would never work in a classroom because a computer can't provide the same type of personal connection that a teacher can develop with a student.\n\nHowever, this is exactly what the purpose of the Facial Action Coding System should be; to personally instruct a student based on that child's specific learning needs.\n\nThe computer technology itself may not be able to directly teach a new topic, but it can certainly help the proccess by identifying what methods work and which ones do not in a classroom.\n\nIn conclusion, the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is an incredibly valuable tool.\n\nThis innovation can pave the way for the future of instruction, setting up a template for teaching for years to come.\n\nNot only could the FACS be used to help teachers modify the way that they present their information in a classroom, the Facial Action Coding System could be used as an additional item to help students with their homework.\n\nWhile some might say it's too impersonal to be effective, this new technology could truly be the most personal and individual type of instruction that the world has at its fingertips.\n\nIn the end, Dr. Huang said it best; \"'Most human connection is nonverbal, including emotional communication...so computers need to understand that, too.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke reason he joined the program was because he had two part time joby and his friends where going and they asked him if he wanted to go. And Luke could not say no so he went. And he would be missing an opportunity in his life time. Lukes 2 part time jobs where working at a store and a bank.\n\nIt was 1945 world war 2 Luke and Don signed up to feed the animals. They has to fees 335 horses. They also had to feed cows, and mules that they had to feed.\n\nIt was August 1945 , The boys just recived their order reports to new Orlans.\n\nLuke is now 18 year sold Luke said that they had a sight seeing of Europe and China. It took 2 weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean. And It took a month to get to China.\n\nLuke surved as a night watch man. He had to feed the animals every hour. So that way they did not have to starve. And cry all night for food and water to eat and drink.\n\nA small strip of metal along the edge stopped his slide, keeping him from flying overboard into the dark Atlantic.\n\nHe was happy to be alive. But he couldnt work for a couple of days because of cracked ribs.\n\nLuke also found time to have fun and he got to play volleyball, table tennis,boxing and fencing but this happend after they unloaded the animals then they got to have fun and enjoy their time.\n\nLuke crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times and he crossed the PAcific Ocean twice to help people affected by World War 2.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To local Newspaper I think using computers negative effect people I believe s advantage use You given technology advantage use They give people chance chat people allow make friends These days people even watch shows computerwebsites allows search anything watch People make emails download music several things Children age even move use computersplay games cousin plays games time even knows search something computer Some people think gives negative effect really nt Those people think comee reality We step life goes Let s say girl nt computer parents think computers spoil children technology spoil children The girl goes school friends asks give email Every time friends asks email makes excuse tries avoid subject time made excuse many times going make excuse Then suppose one day friends finds nt computer embarasses front everyone So I m trying say see around go computer also saves time You type instead writing whole You make writing cursive would like After reeding letter I hope understand point Next time see person thinks computers give negative effects people tell advantages computers benefits society around", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local Newspaper people use computers every one agress benefits society In opinion computers benefit society There websites help find information Computers also allow people work easily A third reason companies able use gain business If project need look information something internet one easiest ways find information Googlecom much information almost topic think If teenager nt drivers license one take library computers allow able hand reportproject time There also websites find direction need go Mapquestcom quick easy way help figure way go Computers allow people easily If family member lives far away nt enough money phone bill computers help loose touch There websites help keep contact old friends nt see anymore Computers one ways people fighting wars talk relatives They able phones sending letter take long time Companies use computers easy access public If new company put little ad sicle screen yahoocom millions people see They use computers make flyers easily quickly Making hundred flyers hand take hours But computers make one print onehundred Using computers helps society easily find looking able talk anyone want Also easy companies attract business Those reasons computers good society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author story Winter Hibiscus concluded story pharagraph author wanted show Saeng finally going start getting used new home She wont spend much time dreaming past And warm moist shelter greenhouse Saeng broke wept I believe thats needed get life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usage can be a good thing some people. There are many advantages for limiting car usage.\n\n\"\n\npresident obama's ambitious goals to curb the united states greenhouse gas emissions, uneiled \"(Rosenthal 29) this may have americans buying few cars and spending less money on gas and that means fewer cars are being sold and less money gas is making. In Bogota there is a day without cars (Selsky 27). This can help people learn how to tranport many different ways thne relying on cars. Their have more options then do just use a car. different cities are joining this event its not us Bogota. If there is limiting car usage then peole wouldnt have to worry about spending all their money on gas and insurnce and worrying about their cars braking dow and getting into a car accdient.\n\n'\"New York's new bike sharing program and its skyrocketing bridge and tunn el tolls reflect those new prioities,as do a proliferation of car-sharing programs found.\" (Rosenthal 37). Getting your driver's license should'nt be a priority. There are many other ways for transportstion. You can walk , take bus,take a train many other ways then you drving .\n\nLimiting car use can be a good thing because people wouldnt have to worry about gas money and oil change and reparing broken parts. people who put cars as their priority uselly spend more money on their cars then do on themselves.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed that the role of a museum is to entertain people whereas others argue that it should have more educational function. In my opinion, the museum can be considered both educational and entertaining for visitors.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, some would think the main function of the museum is to entertain. They claim that visitors may considerably feel bored when a place is full of informative and educational content. This is because the museum has been regarded as one of the significant attraction places, where people enjoy watching spectacular objects related to history. For instance, they use interactive games and exhibitions to create a unique experience for people while others deploy cutting-edge technology to revive critical historical events. This is resulted in attracting more crowd to visit this place. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, advocates of the second perspective claim that museum plays a vital role in teaching people about the different aspects of life, particularly their history.It is a destination where people obtain valuable knowledge behind each object in a museum. If it was used for entertaining purposes, it would negatively affect their learning process. Some museums, for example, employ tourist guides to give visitors educational tours while others provide people headsets so that they can listen to a detailed commentary about the exhibition. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, there has been a contradictory view about whether a museum should be regarded as an entertainment or educational destination. I believe the museum can serve both purposes because people are more likely to learn better when it is blended with enjoyment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Process or Place? This is a question you need to ask yourself. Yes, in my opinion, Electoral College is a good idea.\n\nIn the cases of having an Electoral College there are some up sides of this and some down sides. In an Electoral College it restores some of the weight in political balance. It also required a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal.\n\nWhen an Electoral College restores th balance in some large states its a good thing. It states in this article that, \" The popular vote was very close in Flordia, nevertheless Obama, who won that vote, got 29 electoral votes.\" This is stating that the large states votes becomes one.\n\nAlso, when this talks about how it requirs a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal is also a good thing. it says in this passage,\" No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president.\" Again this is saying that none of our votes get uncounted for, we are all counted as one.\n\nSome might say that they dont know where their votes are going to but when you think about they are all going to the same place in one factor.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Not everyone has the luxury of owning a car. But cars are not the only means that can get us from point A to point B. In fact, having limited usage of cars is an advantage to society, our own good, and also the environment. In the twenty-first centruy, it may seem that possessing a car is a vital aspect of living, however, that is not always the case.\n\nTo began with, having a limited amount of cars on the roads means a less amount of car emission that stays in the air. Carbon emissions from cars are responsible from around 50% of the greenhouse gases in the United States alone (Source 1). If we were to limit our car usage, it is very likely for that percentage to go down. Taking the account that cars are the second most item that pollutes the air, it would be a dramatic change for the environment to be a cleaner and heathier place to live (Source 4).\n\nAdditionally, if we were to use our cars less and relie on public transportation, we would be able to help the economy. Using individual cars does not help anyone economically. In the other had, riding subways, buses, taxis, and other public transportation will allow the public economy to rise, which in turn allows the government to recieve extra money that could benefit the local city. Taking the desicion to not use cars promotes alternative ways to get to the final destination in mind (Source 3). It also lets parks to be used more often than before and sidewalks become wider and safer. Moreover, the less cars that are on the street, the less traffic jams, car crashes, and time that is wasted sitting in a car wishing to be somewhere else (Source 3).\n\nFuthermore, if more people were to walk or bike on the side walks, they would be able to enjoy the natural nature that they cannot fully appreciate when they are zooming pass it in their cars at fifty miles per hour. Also, getting the chance to actaully look at what the local city has to offer helps little businesses to become successful. Not using cars can also be included in our daily excersise that we are all supposed to be doing. Instead of being lazy and using cars to take us to places, we can all use that extra mile or so to help improve our health. Getting out in the open and getting some fresh air will also be beneficial to one's health by allieviating them from bad thoughts and \"it is a good opportunity to take away stress\" (Source 3). Getting away from the busy life that includes cars is extremely advantageous to humans' health and the city they live in.\n\nMuch has changed throughout history. Nothing ever stays the same, so maybe it's the time to change the amount of car usage. This era is a time period where there are many technological inovations that allow humans from all across the world to stay in touch without leaving their couch. There has been a noticeable decrease in the amount of miles that have been driven since 2005 (Source 4). This is a positive step foward to a better future for the generations to come for less cars on the road means there wil be less pollutions entering the atomsphere, more opportunities for businesses, and incouraging individuals to make healthier choices.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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