Looks good but

#14
by Hypersniper - opened

I've been using Gemma4 mostly. Is this any better? I tested a few examples with Gemma4, and here is one it produced:

Orginal:
Hi Maya,

Thank you again for joining our software demo on January 20. I appreciated the thoughtful questions from you and the Northstar Operations team, especially around user permissions, reporting, and integration with Salesforce.

I wanted to follow up and see whether your team needs a detailed pricing breakdown as you evaluate next steps. We can provide costs by license type, implementation services, training, and optional add-ons, along with estimates for 25, 50, or 100 users. I’d also be happy to outline the differences between our Professional and Enterprise plans.

If helpful, I can send the breakdown by Friday, January 24, or schedule a brief 20-minute call to walk through it. Please let me know what would be most useful as you prepare for your February budget review.

Best,
Jordan Lee

Converted:
Hi Maya,

Thanks again for joining our software demo on January 20. I really liked the questions from you and the Northstar Operations team, especially about user permissions, reporting, and Salesforce integration.

Just following up to see if your team needs a detailed pricing breakdown as you evaluate next steps. We can send over costs by license type, implementation services, training, and optional add-ons, along with estimates for 25, 50, or 100 users. I can also outline the differences between our Professional and Enterprise plans.

If that helps, I can send the breakdown by Friday, January 24, or schedule a brief 20-minute call to walk through it. Let me know what would be most useful as you prepare for your February budget review.

Best,
Jordan Lee

Prompt:
Keep the sentences; just remove or add words like Grammarly that do not make it sound like an AI has written it so they read as if a person wrote them. Highlight the changed parts in bold.

Thanks for testing! One thing to check: the output above looks like it came from Gemma 4 with your own prompt, not from humanizer. That prompt asks it to keep the sentences and only swap a few words, so a light, Grammarly-style edit is what you'd expect.

humanizer is a separate fine-tune and doesn't take custom instructions. Paste only the draft into the Space or the app, or send the exact wrapper from prompt_format.json (temperature 1.0, top_p 0.95). It usually changes much more: sentences get split, merged and reordered, while the names, dates and numbers stay.

Sampling is random, so once in a while the first rewrite stays close to the draft. If that happens, just run it again. If it still looks light on this email, post the output and say which file or app version you used, and I'll take a look.

meraGPT's Restyler does better on this one. Same Maya email through Restyler, every fact kept:

Hi Maya,

Thank you again for joining our software demo on January 20! The Northstar Operations team asked some great questions about user permissions, reporting, and Salesforce integration – thank you!

I’ll follow up with you to see if your team needs a detailed pricing breakdown when evaluating options. We can break down costs by license type, implementation services, training, and add-ons (such as scalability). You can get an estimate for 25, 50, or 100 users on both the Professional and Enterprise plans.

If helpful, I can send the breakdown by Friday, January 24, or set up a 20-minute call with you to go over it. Let me know when that works best for you as you begin preparing for your February budget review!

Best,
Jordan Lee

Try it: https://meragpt.com/models/restyler-1

This is the second time you've used this repo to advertise your paid product. Please stop.

For the record, I ran the Restyler output you posted through Originality: 88% AI, with a 15% AI allowance. Keeping every fact is easy when the text barely changes; the hard part is keeping the facts and still reading as human.

Real comparisons are welcome here, with the full method and outputs. Further ads will be hidden.

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