DEMO_SCRIPT.md

# Hospital Copilot — Demo Video Script
## "The Last Patient"

**Hackathon:** Gemma 4 for Good  
**Video target runtime:** 3 minutes 30 seconds  
**Tone:** Emotional, human, hopeful

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## Logline

> *"In Ghana, one doctor serves an average of 10,000 patients.  
> After seeing 40 patients, the last one should not get less care than the first."*

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## Characters

| Role | Description |
|---|---|
| **Dr. Kwame Mensah** | Young district hospital doctor, mid-30s, visibly exhausted at end of shift |
| **Maame Akosua** | Elderly woman, 68, from a rural village, brought in by her grandson |
| **Kofi** | Grandson, 20s, worried, occasionally translates for his grandmother |

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## Setting

**Location:** Small district hospital consultation room  
**Time of day:** Late afternoon — warm golden light, end of a long day  
**Props needed:**
- Desk with laptop showing Hospital Copilot
- Stethoscope, BP cuff
- Stack of paper files (the visual symbol of burnout)
- Small fan, pen holder, basic clinic decor
- Waiting room shot (even 5 people reads as "busy" on camera)

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## Scene-by-Scene Breakdown

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### SCENE 1 — The Weight
**Duration:** 30 seconds | **No dialogue**

> Camera opens on a wall clock: **4:47 PM**
>
> Dr. Mensah is hunched over his desk, hand-writing notes from a thick stack of paper files.
> His eyes are tired. His hand moves slowly.
>
> A nurse opens the door:
> **Nurse:** *"Doctor, one more patient."*
>
> He pauses. Looks at the unfinished stack. Then nods.
> **Dr. Mensah:** *"Send them in."*

**Director note:** Linger on the paper stack. That stack = the problem Hospital Copilot solves.

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### SCENE 2 — The Patient Arrives
**Duration:** 20 seconds

> Maame Akosua shuffles in slowly, supported by Kofi.
> She looks unwell. A little frightened. Out of place.
>
> Dr. Mensah stands to greet her warmly — despite his exhaustion.
> He quietly opens Hospital Copilot on his laptop.
> He clicks **▶ Start Consultation.**
>
> The mic activates. He turns his full attention to her.
> The laptop screen is visible in the background — words beginning to appear.

**Director note:** The app should be visible but not the focus. The focus is the human connection.

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### SCENE 3 — The Consultation
**Duration:** 90 seconds

> Dr. Mensah and Maame Akosua speak. Kofi occasionally translates.
> The conversation flows naturally — unhurried, warm.

**CONSULTATION SCRIPT:**

> **Doctor:** Good afternoon Maame. How have you been since your last visit?
>
> **Patient (Kofi translating):** She says not too well. She has been having headaches every morning for two weeks. Especially at the back of her head.
>
> **Doctor:** Has she been taking her blood pressure medication?
>
> **Kofi:** She finished her Amlodipine two weeks ago. She could not afford to buy more.
>
> **Doctor:** I understand. Let me check her pressure now.
> *(places BP cuff, reads monitor)*
> It is 162 over 98 — that is quite high. The headaches are from the blood pressure.
> Any dizziness? Blurred vision?
>
> **Kofi:** Sometimes dizzy when she stands up. No problem with vision.
>
> **Doctor:** Any chest pain or shortness of breath?
>
> **Kofi:** No.
>
> **Doctor:** Good. She needs to restart her Amlodipine — five milligrams every morning.
> I am also adding Lisinopril, ten milligrams once a day.
> She must reduce salt, avoid alcohol, walk thirty minutes daily.
> Come back in two weeks. If she gets severe headache or chest pain — come immediately.
>
> **Kofi (to grandmother in Twi):** *...translates...*
>
> **Maame Akosua (nodding slowly):** *"Yoo, medaase."* (Okay, thank you.)

**Camera cuts during this scene:**
- Close-up on Maame Akosua's face — worried but trusting
- Laptop screen in background: words streaming into transcript in real time
- Dr. Mensah's hands on the BP cuff — competent, caring
- The paper stack on the desk — untouched, waiting

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### SCENE 4 — The Wow Moment
**Duration:** 60 seconds

> Consultation ends. Dr. Mensah clicks **⏹ End Consultation.**
>
> He looks at Maame Akosua kindly while the screen processes.
> Then clicks **⚡ Generate Notes.**
>
> **Camera slowly pushes in on the laptop screen:**
>
> — Transcript appears with speaker labels:
>   *"Doctor: Her pressure is 162 over 98..."*
>   *"Patient: Sometimes dizzy when she stands up..."*
>
> — ICD-10 panel populates:
>   *"I10 — Essential (primary) hypertension *(confidence: 0.94)*"*
>
> — Drug reference appears:
>   *"Amlodipine (Calcium Channel Blocker) — 5mg once daily..."*
>   *"Lisinopril (ACE Inhibitor) — 10mg once daily..."*
>
> — SOAP note renders, fully formatted with bold section headers
>
> — Patient Summary appears in plain English
>
> **Dr. Mensah reads the patient summary aloud, slowly, to Kofi:**
> *"Your grandmother has high blood pressure. She needs to take one tablet every morning.
> Reduce salt in her food. Walk a little every day.
> Come back in two weeks. If she gets a very bad headache or chest pain, come immediately."*
>
> Kofi translates quietly into Twi.
>
> Maame Akosua looks up. For the first time — she understands her own diagnosis.
> She nods. A small, relieved smile.
>
> **Kofi (softly, to Dr. Mensah):** *"She says... thank you for explaining. The other doctors never explained."*
>
> Dr. Mensah nods quietly. No words needed.

**Director note:** Hold on Maame Akosua's face when she smiles. This is the emotional peak of the video.

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### SCENE 5 — The Contrast
**Duration:** 20 seconds | **No dialogue**

> Dr. Mensah closes the consultation on his laptop. The notes are saved.
> He looks at the paper stack. Picks up one file — and closes it.
> The work is done.
>
> He looks at the clock: **5:03 PM.**
>
> He stands. Puts on his jacket. Turns off the desk lamp.
> He walks out — on time, for once.
>
> Final shot: the empty chair where Maame Akosua sat.
> The laptop screen still glowing softly.

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### SCENE 6 — Title Card
**Duration:** 10 seconds | **Music swells**

```
Hospital Copilot

Built for doctors who see 40 patients a day.
So the last patient gets the same care as the first.

─────────────────────────────────────────
Powered by Gemma 4  ·  Built for Ghana
Gemma 4 for Good Hackathon 2026
```

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## Why This Lands With Judges

| Story element | What it communicates |
|---|---|
| Clock at 4:47 PM + paper stack | The problem is real, visible, universal |
| Doctor still standing up to greet her | He is a good doctor being let down by a broken system |
| AI invisible while doctor talks | Correct human-AI relationship — AI serves, human cares |
| ICD codes + dosages appearing | Clinical credibility — this is not a chatbot, it's a medical tool |
| Patient finally understanding her diagnosis | The mission of the whole project in one moment |
| "The other doctors never explained" | Indicts the old system without saying a word about AI |
| Doctor going home on time | The promise: better system = better life for everyone |

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## Filming Checklist

- [ ] Clinic room location secured
- [ ] Laptop positioned so screen is visible in background shots
- [ ] Hospital Copilot running and tested before filming
- [ ] BP cuff and stethoscope as props
- [ ] Paper file stack prepared
- [ ] Scene 4 filmed with real app — let notes generate live, do not fake it
- [ ] Maame Akosua's smile — hold for 3 seconds minimum
- [ ] Background music: soft, warm, instrumental — swell on Scene 6

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## Consultation Script (Standalone — for practising)

> Doctor: Good afternoon Maame. How have you been since your last visit?
> Patient: Not too well. I have been having headaches every morning. At the back of my head.
> Doctor: Have you been taking your blood pressure medication?
> Patient: I finished my Amlodipine two weeks ago. I could not afford to buy more.
> Doctor: I see. Let me check your pressure. It is 162 over 98 — quite high. Any dizziness or blurred vision?
> Patient: Sometimes dizzy when I stand up quickly. No problem with vision.
> Doctor: Any chest pain or shortness of breath?
> Patient: No, nothing like that.
> Doctor: Good. You need to restart your Amlodipine — five milligrams every morning. I am also adding Lisinopril, ten milligrams once a day. Reduce salt in your food, avoid alcohol, and walk thirty minutes daily. Come back in two weeks. If you get a severe headache or chest pain — come in immediately.
> Patient: Okay doctor. I will take the medication every day this time.
> Doctor: Good. And please do not stop without telling me first.