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[WP] A man hires five hundred butlers. Why? (Inspired by /u/girloclock and /u/Captainsuperdawg) | One of my first stories on this sub, CC welcome
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They woke up at 7.00 am. 500 men, in 500 different apartments across the city.
Some fat, some slim, some tall, some short. All different men, but all waking at the same time, showering, shaving, put... | 3 | 0 | 10 | 21,100 |
[WP] A man hires five hundred butlers. Why? (Inspired by /u/girloclock and /u/Captainsuperdawg) | As he returned home, Lord Cransley hurried to the library, opened the secret safe and peeked inside. The papers were as he left them, the red seal untouched. Lord Cransley relaxed.
"I am afraid I would have to take those, sir" a voice said. Lord jumped and quickly tuned around, fumbling for his gun. A perfectly dresse... | 4 | 0 | 10 | 21,101 |
[WP] You're a straight male starting his senior year in high school at a new school. After a few months, however, your classmates start doing strange things around you and you slowly realize that everyone attending the school (except you) is gay. | "Hey, Derek, I just found out that Chad's gay, did you know?"
"Yeah, Mike, I'm gay too. All of the guys at this high school are. Girls too."
"Huh, that explains a lot, I guess. Those are some pretty crazy odds, right?"
"Yeah, I guess. Is that a problem?"
"Nah, I love you guys, you're my friends. I'm glad that nobod... | 8 | 0 | 31 | 21,102 |
[WP] You're a straight male starting his senior year in high school at a new school. After a few months, however, your classmates start doing strange things around you and you slowly realize that everyone attending the school (except you) is gay. | [deleted] | 0 | 0 | 31 | 21,103 |
[WP] You're a straight male starting his senior year in high school at a new school. After a few months, however, your classmates start doing strange things around you and you slowly realize that everyone attending the school (except you) is gay. | [deleted] | 0 | 0 | 31 | 21,104 |
[WP] An ingame NPC's reaction to Red from TwitchPlaysPokemon | We've seen a lot of trainers come through our glorious vessel on their way to the Indigo Plateau but none of them have been like this guy. He has a pretty normal name, Red I think. Hell he isn't even the first trainer named Red to come aboard, barge into patrons' rooms demanding to battle Pokemon, harrass the staff, an... | 29 | 0 | 38 | 21,105 |
[WP] An ingame NPC's reaction to Red from TwitchPlaysPokemon | [deleted] | 3 | 0 | 38 | 21,106 |
[WP] An ingame NPC's reaction to Red from TwitchPlaysPokemon | What is he doing?
He just moves around, rummaging through his bag and whispering to that... *that rock*. What does he want from me?
What is he mumbling? Democracy? Hail who?
I'm starting to fear for my life. He can have my money, and my pokemon too, if it comes to that.
I just hope he doesn't smash my face in ... | 7 | 0 | 38 | 21,107 |
[WP] An ingame NPC's reaction to Red from TwitchPlaysPokemon | "Hey Tom, come get a load of this."
I leaned back against the gate of my house as my neighbor walked by, taking his Vulpix for a walk. Nodding over at the kid in the red hat, I waved my friend over and handed him a Lemonade, idly tossing my pokeball in the air and catching it. He gave me a questioning look, but slow... | 18 | 0 | 38 | 21,108 |
[WP] An ingame NPC's reaction to Red from TwitchPlaysPokemon | Joe and I have been fishing on this island for 18 years now. We never really needed any other work. We can live here, catch our own food, and it's not nearly as isolated as you might think.
Every once in a while a young trainer will come along, evolved starter and team of uniques, on their way to collect gym badges as... | 3 | 0 | 38 | 21,109 |
[WP] An evil scientist is selling gender-flipping formula as penis enhancement pills. You were unfortunate enough to get one... | "Hey, Jim!"
"Dave! How's it going?"
"Good, good. I, uh, thought you were a woman now. You took those pills that flip people's genders."
"Yeah. Doctor Switcheroo got me real good. I was a chick for a month."
"How did you become a man again?"
"Well, they were gender switching pills, right? So, I just took another do... | 5 | 0 | 1 | 21,110 |
[PI] Forest Barbarian - FEB CONTEST | I read the first chapter. A little into the second chapter as well. I must say that you really should edit it before you submit. I could see a lot of things that needs work, a lot of work. I read your submission after having a chat with Midknight. He and I agreed that you really need to work on it. For example.
"Niux ... | 1 | 0 | 9 | 21,111 |
[PI] Forest Barbarian - FEB CONTEST | Hi! I am assuming this story is for a YA audience. It wasn't personally that appealing to me (as an old) but I think it's good YA. My younger siblings would like it. And it's very on-trend with the categorization of people into the Bronze/Silver/Gold/Diamond castes.
If it's not, you might want to consider how to make ... | 2 | 0 | 9 | 21,112 |
[PI] Forest Barbarian - FEB CONTEST | I read this story all the way through and found it generally enjoyable. The universe has a lot of potential.
I think a few things could make this story stronger:
* Avoid colloquial speech. Someone mentioned earlier that they talk like 16 year olds. I think this is wrong, they speak like modern humans.
* Since this en... | 2 | 0 | 9 | 21,113 |
[PI] Forest Barbarian - FEB CONTEST | After reading this story I'm confused and taken aback by a lot of the critique in the comments. This story was enjoyable.
There were a lot of good things to this story. I know it's been mentioned that people have been confused about the world, but I feel like everything was fairly clear. I understand the differences b... | 2 | 0 | 9 | 21,114 |
[WP] An astronaut from Apollo 17 (the final moon landing) exits the ship to discover that due to a serious miscalculation, all of the previous Apollo missions never returned home. | CDR: "Houston, we're going comms down in a few moments, dark side approaches Bob, over."
MCC: "Roger, Challenger. We'll see you on the other side. Out."
Eugene "Gene" Cernan sighed. It was his third spaceflight, and having Robert Parker on the other end of comms always made him feel at ease. Bob was a member ... | 24 | 0 | 18 | 21,115 |
[CW] Write a story which begins and ends with a palindrome | Ah, Satan sees Natasha. He sees her short skirts and her shaven womanhood. He sees her worn roots and her broken ties. He sees the words the red lips form are just for show. They mean absolutely nothing to those who know her best, and ah, Satan does know her best. The demons all converge around a pit of hellfire and sc... | 2 | 0 | 7 | 21,116 |
[CW] Write a story which begins and ends with a palindrome | Can the palindrome be of length 1? | 1 | 0 | 7 | 21,117 |
Make me cry [WP] | The people around me seem to have a bad habit of disappearing.
First it was my father who - when I was no older than 7 - went out to by some cigarettes and never came back. It was funny, my mother broke down crying but I didn't see anything wrong with it. He used to throw his shoe at me when I asked him questions. Mom... | 2 | 0 | 4 | 21,118 |
Make me cry [WP] | One day, the person you love most will leave you. In all of the turmoil, they will convince you that it was your doing, and you, in fear of loss, may very well agree. It's in those moments when you are unable to fill the gap of mind that you will wonder if it was, in fact, something you *had* done. Silently in the back... | 1 | 0 | 4 | 21,119 |
Make me cry [WP] | I've always loved riding in the car with my best friend. Even if I have to wait in the parking lot while they go into other buildings, it's so much better than waiting at home. Of course, it's getting hard to walk out to the car now. Hard to stand really, but my best friend helps me. I know she loves me as much as I lo... | 3 | 0 | 4 | 21,120 |
[WP] Red roses grow on graveyards because they're hungry for blood | This doesn't even make sense. Most graveyards embalm their corpses, which involves draining their blood beforehand. You'd be a lot more likely to find roses on industrial farms, mass graves, concentration camps, and basically any place there's a lot of wild death.
Roses grow on graveyards because they're hungry for su... | 3 | 0 | 8 | 21,121 |
[WP] Red roses grow on graveyards because they're hungry for blood | “Mommy, mommy, can we go see grandma?”
Katherine looked down at those ice blue eyes and smiled thinly. “Sweetie, granny’s no longer with us remember? She’s gone to Heaven.”
“I know mom, but I like talking to her.”
Katherine was perplexed. How did her daughter know? Perhaps she had the Gift already? But that was impo... | 2 | 0 | 8 | 21,122 |
[WP] Red roses grow on graveyards because they're hungry for blood | "Before they came..."
"You said something?"
"They weren't always here."
Madeline was looking at the roses outside.
"Burn me. Please burn me."
Ethan was exasperated.
"You know it's illegal. How many times have we had this conversation?"
His grandmother turned her head towards him then. She had that bored look ... | 2 | 0 | 8 | 21,123 |
[WP] A very picky eater has dinner with his girlfriend's parents for the first time. | "No, I don't eat red meat," Horatio pussied out.
Mrs. Sanchez turned her head towards her husband with the speed of somebody who eats red meat and is therefore more muscular and physically capable. Shrugging with all the despondency of someone who finds themselves faced with a worthless shit who refuses to adhere t... | 5 | 0 | 7 | 21,124 |
[PI] THE EDEN STREAM - FEB CONTEST | ARgh why must competition be so fierce in these writing competitions? :( | 3 | 0 | 10 | 21,125 |
[PI] THE EDEN STREAM - FEB CONTEST | I liked this quite a bit. The good stuff: Farsi is a well-developed character, given the space constraints of a novelette, and the fact that he doesn't have dialogue with the other characters to demonstrate his personality. We get all that from his actions, and it's some pretty good showing, not telling.
The setting... | 4 | 0 | 10 | 21,126 |
[PI] THE EDEN STREAM - FEB CONTEST | My story's set in future Toronto, too (although it's quite a different future Toronto). What are the odds?
Being a resident of Toronto, I got a kick out of this (and this world seems pretty good right now, as it's apparently possible to walk outside at length without freezing your arse off). Your writing is very lyric... | 2 | 0 | 10 | 21,127 |
[PI] THE EDEN STREAM - FEB CONTEST | - Very descriptive, I loved it. I had no trouble picturing everything. It gave me a sort of Fallout meets I Am Legend vibe.
- There was a series of sentences starting with: He stopped-, He loosened-, He hefted-, He wet-, He felt-, He braced-, He cocked-. It got a bit repetative, and it stuck out in my mind because it ... | 2 | 0 | 10 | 21,128 |
[PI] THE EDEN STREAM - FEB CONTEST | Great story! I enjoyed reading it even though it's more descriptive than stories I usually read. Here are four pieces of feedback, two positive and two negative.
* The pacing was great. Every event flowed naturally into the next, without seeming forced. Suddenly we were in the thick of action and I was happy that I di... | 2 | 0 | 10 | 21,129 |
[PI] THE EDEN STREAM - FEB CONTEST | I might be biased, because I like anything with elephants in it, but I loved this! Your prose, your characters, and the world you created are all fantastic.
Your writing, as others mentioned, is very descriptive and adjective/adverb heavy. However, I think you do a really good job of only picking descriptive words tha... | 2 | 0 | 10 | 21,130 |
[PI] THE EDEN STREAM - FEB CONTEST | Hello! This was really good and I enjoyed Farsi's character a lot. I could easily see the world and the pacing of this story was excellent. The only thing that threw me off were the specific references to the city - I liked how you intertwined the city and nature, but I found myself trying to guess where the city was t... | 2 | 0 | 10 | 21,131 |
[PI] THE EDEN STREAM - FEB CONTEST | Your prose is beautiful. There's not much else I can say, because I am definitely not at the level of skill you put forward in this piece. You are an inspiration, friend. Keep writing and never stop, the world deserves to read you. | 2 | 0 | 10 | 21,132 |
[PI] Unusual Silence - Feb Contest | Congratulations on finishing! Best of luck in the contest! | 1 | 0 | 9 | 21,133 |
[PI] Unusual Silence - Feb Contest | You took this story to a different ending than I thought and I really enjoyed the concept. I also liked that Kendra realized that the Puritan's initial fears contradicted what was actually happening - I was afraid there would be a plot hole there, but the story addressed it nicely.
Thanks for sharing! | 1 | 0 | 9 | 21,134 |
[PI] Unusual Silence - Feb Contest | I think the strongest thing that this story has going for it is the universe it is set in. The first four pages do a wonderful job of setting up the universe, and explaining it to the reader through Kendra's eyes, but I felt like it went mostly downhill from there. Peter started out as an interesting and mysterious cha... | 4 | 0 | 9 | 21,135 |
[PI] Unusual Silence - Feb Contest | Hi! You have the coolest cover I've seen so far!
I found Kendra's character interesting. Having a reclusive, Luddite character is unique, and I liked that she wasn't an immediately likeable person and had real, human flaws. It was harder to get a sense of Peter.
The plot moves very quickly. I would have liked to see ... | 1 | 0 | 9 | 21,136 |
[PI] Unusual Silence - Feb Contest | Hi! I enjoyed this very much, the story was interesting and the writing was good. The two things that were jarring to me were: 1. The author's voice coming in once in a while to explain something in the midst of the action and 2. The rushed ending where things were explained so quickly with barely any more from the cha... | 1 | 0 | 9 | 21,137 |
[PI] Unusual Silence - Feb Contest | The first few pages were great, they pulled me right in to this interesting universe. After that I think it fell apart a bit, you start to do an awful lot of telling rather than showing. A lot of conversations are simply quickly summed up in a single sentence when it would've been more interesting to see the actual dia... | 1 | 0 | 9 | 21,138 |
[PI] Unusual Silence - Feb Contest | As /u/TheSlyPig04 mentioned in greater detail, you spend a lot of time from the middle onward telling us what is happening rather than describing it, and it leaves the prose lifeless. I felt the beginning was wonderful, and the action was strong, so I can only assume time got the best of you. It's a good world and good... | 1 | 0 | 9 | 21,139 |
[PI] The Delicate Wasteland of the Brain - FEB CONTEST | Congratulations on finishing! Best of luck! | 2 | 0 | 11 | 21,140 |
[PI] The Delicate Wasteland of the Brain - FEB CONTEST | So, this was pretty awesome. I like a lot of what you've done--telling the same basic sequence of actions over and over again, Groundhog-Day-style, but with Hana's thoughts about and reactions to each small change. It could have gotten stale fast, but you kept it fresh.
My two first-pass criticisms: first, was the D... | 2 | 0 | 11 | 21,141 |
[PI] The Delicate Wasteland of the Brain - FEB CONTEST | Hi! I really liked this one. Thematically it's reminiscent of the ultimate theme of The Dark Tower series.
Hana was an interesting (and to me, appealing) character. I like quiet badasses. I was hooked on it because I started to wonder what was compelling Hana to keep playing the hero, even though she didn't want to. ... | 2 | 0 | 11 | 21,142 |
[PI] The Delicate Wasteland of the Brain - FEB CONTEST | I like the plot. I see someone else mentioned the ending as feeling forced, but I really liked the idea of it. Since you specifically asked for feedback, I'll be more blunt than I probably would otherwise. So, moving on to the stuff I wasn't crazy about...
While I liked the bare bones of the plot, the story itself dra... | 2 | 0 | 11 | 21,143 |
[PI] The Delicate Wasteland of the Brain - FEB CONTEST | "so much more when there was flash to break" - the only typo I found
I loved the concept for this story! You did a seriously amazing job, and I honestly can't even think of criticism to give. This is on my shortlist of ones to re-read before I make my final vote, and I'll leave more feedback then. | 2 | 0 | 11 | 21,144 |
[PI] The Delicate Wasteland of the Brain - FEB CONTEST | I liked the writing style you put into this. One thing I'd suggest is for you to run through with another edit line by line. There are areas where you could use a recheck (like writing "flash" instead of "flesh" and "his" instead of "this").
I do my edits the old fashioned way; print it out and mark it up with red ink... | 2 | 0 | 11 | 21,145 |
[PI] The Delicate Wasteland of the Brain - FEB CONTEST | This is crisply written, and with a strong protagonist. The actual chain of narrative events in the first half of the story is confusing--which of course makes sense, since its part of a nonsensical reality that is being shaped by someone's impulses. I thought this was a solid offering and I'll be thinking about it for... | 1 | 0 | 11 | 21,146 |
[PI] The Delicate Wasteland of the Brain - FEB CONTEST | Nice story! It kept me interested until I finished, which is more than I can say for a lot of stories! I have four pieces of feedback (two positive, and two negative):
1. First off, I was happy with how the conclusion tied the story together, though it wasn't as deft as it could have been (others have mentioned the cl... | 2 | 0 | 11 | 21,147 |
[PI] The Delicate Wasteland of the Brain - FEB CONTEST | [deleted] | 1 | 0 | 11 | 21,148 |
[PI] The Delicate Wasteland of the Brain - FEB CONTEST | So I thought this was great. I liked the pacing and tone of the first half especially. From the comments I know there are some suggestions about the dialogue, but I really enjoyed it with the lack of dialogue. For me it set a tone to the story, and Hana's lack of control, that made sense.
My only difficulty with the s... | 2 | 0 | 11 | 21,149 |
[PI] The Delicate Wasteland of the Brain - FEB CONTEST | Really cool concept, and quite gripping throughout. I did feel a little disoriented at times, but I suppose that was kind of the point.
I liked Hana as the protagonist, but sometimes struggled to understand her motivation. For example, I get that she loves Mary, but outside of being told that Mary is very hard not to ... | 2 | 0 | 11 | 21,150 |
[PI] The Delicate Wasteland of the Brain - FEB CONTEST | Woah, this was pretty awesome. Sure, I was confused, but it wasn't the classic "WTF did you write there?" confusion but more of a "WTF is gonna happen next?" confusion. The whole premise and idea of this novelette is simply magnificent, I love it. The characters are interesting and you managed to put great character de... | 2 | 0 | 11 | 21,151 |
[PI] The Delicate Wasteland of the Brain - FEB CONTEST | First of all, thank you for the criticism I received from you. I think you nailed everything on the head and since I have been stewing on improvements.
Second, I appreciated this piece quite a bit. I enjoyed how you took common character ideas and flipped them on end. You gave a Film Noir temple raid quite the upgrad... | 2 | 0 | 11 | 21,152 |
[PI] The Cult -- FEB CONTEST | Congratulations on finishing! | 2 | 0 | 12 | 21,153 |
[PI] The Cult -- FEB CONTEST | Hi! I really liked the reveal of the origin of Chem 1. The idea of it is interesting and I think the story would be strengthened with the addition of some clearer depictions of what Chem 1 does. I understand that some of the characters are users, but I didn't get a clear sense of what taking Chem 1 is like.
Some of y... | 2 | 0 | 12 | 21,154 |
[PI] The Cult -- FEB CONTEST | I think this is an ambitious story--Adam is certainly an interesting character with a unique voice. I understand that his narration of events is supposed to be disjointed, but I'm having trouble with it because it's leading to pronoun confusion. There were quite a few instances where he's talking about two women with... | 3 | 0 | 12 | 21,155 |
[PI] The Cult -- FEB CONTEST | Interesting story, very Philip K Dick tempered with John Kessel. | 2 | 0 | 12 | 21,156 |
[PI] The Cult -- FEB CONTEST | Nice job! I really enjoyed the interlude of the commercial script, that was very clever. | 2 | 0 | 12 | 21,157 |
[PI] The Cult -- FEB CONTEST | You're clearly a highly gifted aesthetic writer, so your biggest problem is going to be not getting in the way of your own story.
I was so impressed by the Cult, that I felt jealousy, so you should probably take whatever I have to say with a grain of salt. One of the most important lessons I ever had to learn, excusin... | 2 | 0 | 12 | 21,158 |
[PI] The Cult -- FEB CONTEST | First off, your technique is great. The tools and devices you use linguistically are certainly most exquisite. Your characters are interesting but sometimes confusing, as is the entire work. Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed reading it, but the whole I time I had a constant feeling of 'WTF is going on here?'-itis. This is ... | 2 | 0 | 12 | 21,159 |
[PI] The Cult -- FEB CONTEST | Hi, congratulations on writing and entering the contest. I found it very hard to get into the writing, it was so incoherent and jumbled. However, it is an interesting topic, and I'd like you to explore the effects of Chem 1, if you decided to create a longer piece. | 2 | 0 | 12 | 21,160 |
[PI] The Cult -- FEB CONTEST | Wow. What a tricky story to critique. I love the world of paranoia and insanity that you've set up. The ending was great. What people are saying about it being akin to Philip K. Dick is true. Really cool to experience.
That being said, it was a fairly frustrating read, not the least of which was because so much was in... | 2 | 0 | 12 | 21,161 |
[PI] The Cult -- FEB CONTEST | Hello. I had a lot more trouble with the start of this story than the second half. A lot of the time a lack of detail about events or the drugs left me grasping at straws. If I'm being honest, I enjoy fairly straightforward things so I'm probably not as appreciative of your writing techniques.
Still, though, this read... | 1 | 0 | 12 | 21,162 |
[PI] Afterlife on Mars - FEB CONTEST | Congratulations on finishing! | 3 | 0 | 10 | 21,163 |
[PI] Afterlife on Mars - FEB CONTEST | Got a cover for this? | 2 | 0 | 10 | 21,164 |
[PI] Afterlife on Mars - FEB CONTEST | [deleted] | 3 | 0 | 10 | 21,165 |
[PI] Afterlife on Mars - FEB CONTEST | The one i'm writing is also about Mars , but it has a slightly different tone. Nice work anyways! | 2 | 0 | 10 | 21,166 |
[PI] Afterlife on Mars - FEB CONTEST | The story is hilariously good. I enjoyed it very much. There were some slight mistakes that's a bit noticeable. They're not too alarming but there is one criticism I figured I might as well tell you so you know for next time!
* Somewhere into the third chapter where Bernie and Lucifer is riding the Sow. They were talk... | 4 | 0 | 10 | 21,167 |
[PI] Afterlife on Mars - FEB CONTEST | Very funny! I'll definitely be reading more of your stuff when I get the time.
I think the Dear>Sir running joke got funnier every time you used it. | 3 | 0 | 10 | 21,168 |
[PI] Afterlife on Mars - FEB CONTEST | Quick cover that I put together.
[Afterlife on Mars](http://i.imgur.com/4HUIteq.png) | 3 | 0 | 10 | 21,169 |
[PI] Afterlife on Mars - FEB CONTEST | Hi! Your story has a fun, zany tone. I liked it a lot, and laughed aloud at some of the elements: Death addicted to Call of Duty, the names of the demons ("Unbearable Stomach Cramps"), stabby shareholders. Death's emo poem, Ambiguous Morals' crush on Satan, the sequence about the carrot and stick.
By way of constructi... | 2 | 0 | 10 | 21,170 |
[PI] Afterlife on Mars - FEB CONTEST | It was hilarious! I laughed out loud five or six different times, it reminded me of David Wong's style of humor, and the treatment of the Devil and Hell reminded me of Chuck Palahniuk's "Damned". It was a really fun read overall.
It does need a spell/grammar check on certain parts, and I would also like the ending a l... | 2 | 0 | 10 | 21,171 |
[PI] Afterlife on Mars - FEB CONTEST | Hilarious. Thanks for the break from post-apocalyptic gloom and doom! I laughed a lot and you kept my attention the whole time - so well done.
Side note: With its cast of characters and quirky humor, I think this concept would make a brilliant animated tv comedy. | 3 | 0 | 10 | 21,172 |
[PI] Afterlife on Mars - FEB CONTEST | Really funny, i'd vote for this | 2 | 0 | 10 | 21,173 |
[PI] Afterlife on Mars - FEB CONTEST | Nice job! This was a refreshing read. Very funny and clever. Good luck! | 2 | 0 | 10 | 21,174 |
[PI] Afterlife on Mars - FEB CONTEST | I enjoyed reading your work because it was quick, simple, and humorous. My only teeny critique is that once read, the story is done. I don't wonder about what happens next, I won't daydream about the story or characters, there was no mystery. I'm only saying this because in a contest where I've read so many stories alr... | 2 | 0 | 10 | 21,175 |
[WP] The king suddenly realizes the jester has been the real power behind his throne all along. He’s okay with this. | King Rechard tore through his bookcases. There was one book in particular he was looking for, an old book that had been passed down through the royal family for generation upon generation. There! The *Codex of the Ancients*! It was massive and heavy, but it was the only document describing the people of the land that h... | 3 | 0 | 12 | 21,176 |
[FF] Post your story five minutes after reading the WP in the description. | I've known it since I first looked into your eyes, the mysteries and the secrets of the world were all locked away in there. But I have no need for those answers any more, not as long as I am able to look and drown myself in the memories we've made together.
You merely laying beside me, holds more value than any treas... | 1 | 0 | 6 | 21,177 |
[FF] Post your story five minutes after reading the WP in the description. | Something about the way you laugh at my jokes like no one else will makes me believe that if you pass away before me, I'll follow close behind. | 1 | 0 | 6 | 21,178 |
[FF] Post your story five minutes after reading the WP in the description. | ***baby don't hurt me, don't hurt me, no more, no more***
"I'm going to stop I promise."
He lowers his hand, bunching it into a fist tightly as if it were going to spring right back up if he relaxed.
"I forgive you, no matter how many times you make me do this I forgive you."
He hears her coughing, snivellin... | 1 | 0 | 6 | 21,179 |
[FF] Post your story five minutes after reading the WP in the description. | Your head was resting on my chests as your breaths eased into synchrony with mine. Your eyes are closed, your arms relaxed. 4 AM, I had been watching you sleep for 3 hours, 3 hours of pondering what the rest of our lives would feel together, 3 hours unable to fall asleep because since you said those 2 words, reality ha... | 1 | 0 | 6 | 21,180 |
[FF] Post your story five minutes after reading the WP in the description. | I want to fuck your every orifice, and leave a trail of sticky white goo. | 1 | 0 | 6 | 21,181 |
[FF] Post your story five minutes after reading the WP in the description. | I can see in your eyes that you mean it. I can see in your eyes that it's the same. I can see in your eyes her; remember her white dress and teary smile. I can see in your smile every cup of tea I delivered to her in bed on Sunday for those twenty years. Sometimes I can see in your eyes the pain I saw in my son's eyes ... | 1 | 0 | 6 | 21,182 |
[CW] Write a story that, if read backwards, is a different yet still coherent story. Two in one! | A gun. Dead man. Woman found. Trial on.
(I tried.)
EDIT: Read it forwards, then backwards. | 5 | 0 | 29 | 21,183 |
[CW] Write a story that, if read backwards, is a different yet still coherent story. Two in one! | I was born on July 30th.
Finally, one day, I woke up to life.
Years passed and problems arose.
Heroin became my escape. | 44 | 0 | 29 | 21,184 |
[CW] Write a story that, if read backwards, is a different yet still coherent story. Two in one! | Breathe out
This is the end
No more pain
Freedom
I cry, I cannot stop sobbing; I cannot believe this is real. I slowly stop, compose myself and listen carefully to the doctor.
I walked around today, but I stumbled over many times.
My body is changing.
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[CW] Write a story that, if read backwards, is a different yet still coherent story. Two in one! | I hide under the covers and clutch my teddy bear.
The horrible monster has come again tonight. Why can no one else see him?
My dad turns on my nightlight and runs his hand through my hair, saying "Everything will be okay. Just close your eyes and try to sleep."
I'm so scared.
EDIT: This one turned out to have sever... | 15 | 0 | 29 | 21,186 |
[CW] Write a story that, if read backwards, is a different yet still coherent story. Two in one! | The noose was placed around the prisoner's neck and tightened. The executioner signaled his readiness.
The judge's expression hardened. "Very well... put him to death."
"Please, don't let this happen!" cried a woman in the crowd.
The crowd shouted their disapproval, and the judge seemed to waver.
The judge sigh... | 37 | 0 | 29 | 21,187 |
[CW] Write a story that, if read backwards, is a different yet still coherent story. Two in one! | She sat at home wondering when she'd see her husband again.
Work had always kept him out late and sleep deprived.
"I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to hurt anyone." He said in between tears.
The blood had gotten everywhere.
There was nothing the doctor could do.
The patient was dead. | 10 | 0 | 29 | 21,188 |
[CW] Write a story that, if read backwards, is a different yet still coherent story. Two in one! | To the people that wrote entries,
Did you just guess and test or was there a method you used? | 3 | 0 | 29 | 21,189 |
[CW] Write a story that, if read backwards, is a different yet still coherent story. Two in one! | I love him.
His touch burns my skin.
His taste lingers in my mouth.
The bruises remind me of how he feels about me.
I hate him. | 1 | 0 | 29 | 21,190 |
[CW] Write a story that, if read backwards, is a different yet still coherent story. Two in one! | Full of emotion, I jumped.
Today was my last day.
The work had been too much.
Although I liked my coworkers
I knew it was time. | 7 | 0 | 29 | 21,191 |
[CW] Write a story that, if read backwards, is a different yet still coherent story. Two in one! | He was the happiest he had ever been, a little doubt set in, but he got over it...
Will they know...? Hopefully, no one will suspect a thing...
He clutched at his trouser pocket. Its contents seemed more important than ever before...
Should he fall to one knee? How would that look? Everything needed to look natural.... | 7 | 0 | 29 | 21,192 |
[WP] Where do all of the r/WritingPrompts prompts come from? | The back of the head, somewhere behind the eyes. | 3 | 0 | 7 | 21,193 |
[WP] Where do all of the r/WritingPrompts prompts come from? | The smell of sweat was overbearing now, though not once had I noticed it before. I stood warily, glancing around the room at the twenty-or-so writers, brows furrowed, clacking away at their keyboards. Who knows how long they had been sitting there? *What time is it?*
A big break is hard to find these days. WP Head... | 8 | 0 | 7 | 21,194 |
[WP] Jupiter is a major intergalactic truck stop, and you are the administrator in charge of preventing the Earthlings from discovering its existence. | [deleted] | 1 | 0 | 11 | 21,195 |
[WP] Jupiter is a major intergalactic truck stop, and you are the administrator in charge of preventing the Earthlings from discovering its existence. | "Well you can tell Captain Falkor that they're not just dealing with me, they're now dealing with the Intergalactic Protection Agency!" I yelled at the screen.
The worn Martian secretary on the other side narrowed her large black eyes at me into narrow slats. She cursed at me in Martionian and disconnected the chat. ... | 3 | 0 | 11 | 21,196 |
[WP] Jupiter is a major intergalactic truck stop, and you are the administrator in charge of preventing the Earthlings from discovering its existence. | Flubja sat at his desk on the ship orbiting Jupiter, flipping several dozen of his hundreds of green tentacles over the consoles. One eye watched Jupiter, which of course did nothing. Another eye kept watch over ship controls, of which nominal status has not changed for the last thirty Zebbian cycles. His third ignored... | 3 | 0 | 11 | 21,197 |
In which we write dramatically about children's games (mine's hangman) |
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In which we write dramatically about children's games (mine's hangman) | The two men sat at their table. They knew what was going to occur. James was on the right, Thomas opposite to him. All the conditions had been met. The targets placed.
Across town, targets had been placed, enemies of the both of them. One of these mafia dons would gain more kills than the other. They laughed. They alw... | 2 | 0 | 10 | 21,199 |
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