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[WP] A tiny tree has just sprouted next to an Enormous and Ancient Oak, what advice or stories does the Oak have to tell?
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[WP] A tiny tree has just sprouted next to an Enormous and Ancient Oak, what advice or stories does the Oak have to tell?
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[WP] A tiny tree has just sprouted next to an Enormous and Ancient Oak, what advice or stories does the Oak have to tell?
The young sapling felt the vibrations of the boots on the ground, but did not know what they were. He could feel the light on his leaves, and the water in the soil, but did not know what they were. The world was bright and new and beautiful, but he did not know what it was. It had been like this for days now, as he had...
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[CC] The Big One. (1297 Words)
I don't have an in-depth critique for you. Nothing to say, except *well done.* That was a fantastic read. > Their lake was The Bridge, a walkway built over I-62 made infamous once every troublesome kid in the city realized it was one of the few left without tall safety fences built onto its sides. There was just a ...
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[CC] The Big One. (1297 Words)
working with at least three characters - succeeded. Each character was unique, a different voice in my head telling the story from the point of view of someone who is not in their typical state of mind, - you hit this out the ballpark. Both dialogue choice and descriptions of action were excellent and using dialo...
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
His age? The wait staff... His date... The brand of cheese or color of the plates... Prices .. On and on and on.
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
**Part 1** The waitress leaves and he stares at his plate in silence as if in prayer. But Liron is not praying, his mind is processing the scene at a rapid rate, something was wrong but he isn't sure what. As the steam arose from his Schweinsbraten he leaned into it to smell the familiar aroma of roast pork, gravy an...
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
"And I'll have the pork chops." The young man glanced briefly at the waiter, but his eyes never really left his date. She held his gaze, then reached out and put her hand on his. "I'll have the pork chops". They sat in their usual booth, talking of William's grades, of Rhiannon's smoking, of where to go on holiday ...
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
The jerk chicken here sounds good. But I get that so often. Should try something different. The tuna? Not really in the mood. God, the steaks are $50! No wonder I never get them. $50 for those little things! "Ma'am, is that the 12 oz?" "No honey, this here's the 6." Well, that wasn't so bad. Ah fuck it, th...
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
It was the happiest moment of Tom's life. Across the table sat the most beautiful woman he had ever laid eyes on. He had already become completely smitten by her. The way she giggled when he made silly jokes. The way she had looked at him, when he had helped her putting on her coat, when the left the cinema. The way sh...
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
He was new in town.He came by bus with just a suit case and little bit of money and he was hungry.The good thing was he dropped off and stopped near a restaurant.He then realized that the restaurant was newly opened and discount was all around.He entered the restaurant and was awestruck by the amount of people inside.E...
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
Glenn smiled sadly at his empty plate, enjoying the warmth and mild discomfort that his fullness brought him. He looked out at the full restaurant, watching as a young waitress fluttered from table to table of families, couples, and businessmen. He laughed bitterly to himself as he thought of his predictability. Every ...
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
It was pouring heavily the first time Jason had been to the Seven Star's Cafe. He and his friends had been on their way to the University when they had rushed in there to escape the rain. Resigned to wait the storm out, they ordered fish and chips, along with coffee. They sat near the window watching the traffic move ...
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
The first time, I was twenty-one years old. Back in my home town from college, I went out with my high school friends because it was my twenty-first birthday and we wanted to catch up. I ordered the chicken parmesan. It came with a caesar salad. It was good. We were talking about how much fun we were having at college ...
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
Fudged on the "man" part. Otherwise as per the prompt. "I'll have what he's having." She was nervous. She was giddy. She was positively awestruck. Here's she was, out at the nicest diner in town with Joe. Joe, of chemistry class. Joe, of the football and soccer teams. Joe, of perfect blonde hair, eyes like sap...
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
The diner was almost exactly half way on the four hour journey between our suburban, land-locked home and the sea-side cottage we escaped to in the summer months. The first time we stopped there the children tumbled over one another to be free from the sticky back seat, Jessie giddily slamming the hot metal doors wit...
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
"Mr. Beamen? Mr. Beamen." She hurried across the street to meet her newest client. "Do I know you . . . young lady." He wheezed. "No. I'm sorry. I'm Gertrude. Your new in home care giver. United Hospice sent me. I'll be the one cleaning your house, doing your laundry, preparing your meals, and doling out your medicat...
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
"Mom, I want ice cream!" I wass tugging her through central park, beelining towards the Mr. Softie truck parked on the periphery of central park. It was a bright, shining, effervescent day of blown bubbles, hills tumbled down, and smashed-together Bionicles with my best friend, Nik (spelled with one k, because what ki...
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
The last nut on the back wheel of a motorcycle grinds against the inside of a socket wrench and gives with a squeal. It pops off into an oily puddle. Copper-colored rain and the sun are coming down in streaks through thirsty-looking, wrinkly clouds. A young man rolls a spare out of the back of a pickup truck. He is gr...
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
The first time the man came into Don’s he was with his wife and son. They were the typical redneck family that comes in often, but they looked even worse than most. When I came to the table, his wife was glaring at him and his son was looking back and forth between his two parents with big, scared eyes. He ordered for ...
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[WP] A man has the same meal at a restaurant at three different times in his life. What is different?
Part one (too long to post in a comment) can be found [here](https://www.dropbox.com/s/mdn88dmhy08y41x/Jack.docx). I haven't written parts two or three yet, but I have solid plans for them. This is the first creative piece that I've written in quite a while. Any feedback is appreciated. Edit: changed link after a q...
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[EU] Tackle the difficult social issues exclusively present in your fictional universe of choice.
**Harry Potter Spoilers like Whoa.** "Yes, we've all heard your moral protests, Aberforth." Alia Bishop sneered at the old man while she had her back turned to their audience of robed magistrates. Aberforth made no indication of having seen the face, and sat calmly in the wooden chair where his colorful robes spil...
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
After a moment, silence settled back over the room. The white wall and the closed curtains on the window over it showed no sign of having noticed the voice. But there was something else in the darkness, crawling through the shadows cast by the blue light of the laptop monitor. It was almost like a whistle. Rhythmic ...
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
I rubbed my eyes. It was getting late, and I had that audition in the morning, but Reddit was on good form this evening, and was doing a better job than usual of holding my attention. I clicked the next blue link, an r/GetMotivated post about not wasting time. I reflected on it briefly, feeling that familiar spark of c...
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
Tom laughed heartily at the cute cat picture. "Oh kittens, you do sits if you fit!" As he hovered over the next image, he could still hear his laughter. "Getting late," he thought "I'm starting to crack up." Quickly he forgot about the residual mirth in the room and continued to browse. Images of war, degloved...
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
*"Not again.."* I thought to myself. Sure it was terrifying the first time. The second time as well. However now we were on number 47. 47 nights in a row. It was getting a bit tiring. *"I understand you don't have internet..."* He cut me off. *"It's not about the internet, IDIOT. I can't fucking TYPE!"* He walked ...
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
WARNING: Violence Cats. Cats doing things. Cats doing funny things. Those were all that composed my night, and those made me laugh. I laughed at the cats playing the piano. After that I laughed at the cats chasing dots. After that, I laughed more. I laughed, and then I was tired of laughing, so I stopped. Or so I thin...
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
"Hahahahahahahaha." The laughter kept going after I stopped. Humorous for the moment, a beautiful distraction from my work, but now a god damn annoyance since everyone started. Fuck that laughing baby. Fuck it and its horse cackle straight to hell
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
Being home alone during holidays always led me to bad habits, like staying up very late, watching tv, playing on my pc or lurking reddit. I usually kept lights on, but not that night. Everything except the area behind my 24" monitor was dark. It was 4.50 in the morning, and after some creepy videos that i gave no much ...
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
You browse reddit, searching for funny pictures in your living room. As the clock strikes midnight, you find a peculiar picture of a small bedside cupboard in an abandoned warehouse. You don't laugh, but something does. Being so tired, you probably think its you and go back to browsing the internet. But it continues....
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
I'm bored (should be revising, but...), let's try to do something "Maupaussian" here: EDIT: I might correct that later, there must be mistakes. "It was only for a second, but this second is still resounding in my head today. I immediately stood up, looked around but I could see nothing. I could hear nothing, nor could...
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
I immediately froze in my chair. The laughter continued. A chill went up my spine and out to my ears. I held my breath, wanting to be certain that the noise was not mine. The laughter grew even louder. I strained to hear where the sound was coming from. It wasn't in this room but somewhere further down the hall. **...
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
I froze for a moment in shock then immediately looked around and seen this little old creepy man standing there laughing, he must have been about 3 foot tall. I cleared my throat and he stopped laughing and just looked at me with his little beady sunken eyes. I said "Who are you? What are you doing in my fucking bedroo...
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
As my face froze, the laughter faded away, becoming more like an echo in the darkness behind me. I shook my head, and now I hear something else: the heavy stillness of a waiting silence, yearning to be filled up. It was the sound of a stage between shows, when the air is pregnant with the possibilities of the future a...
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
The chuckling continued, a high-pitched mockery of my own laughter. It almost sounded like a woman. I freeze and look around, my eyebrows knitting together. Something is wrong. The light next to my bed denies my requests to turn on and I feel my eyes getting heavier on their own accord. I jump off of my bed, fumbling ...
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
The gif opened revealing the cutest little puppy dog desperately trying to make it’s way through the snow. After one particularly concerted effort the puppy leapt only to find itself face down in a deep drift. I let out a loud deep belly laugh. When I had finished though the laugh continued. Goosebumps erupted over my ...
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
Damn, that cat's funny. I mean, really, with the fucking... heh. Heh. **HAH!**. *heh. heh. heh. heh.* ... I stopped laughing a while ago, didn't I? *heh. heh. heh. heh.* Shit, there's something out of the corner of my eye. Just going to turn around and... Dammit Frank, the clown suit's getting old. Now go wash th...
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
It was a compilation gif of cats doing people things. It took my P.O.S. craptop about thirty seconds to load, so I knew I was sitting in to a long one. It started with the cliches: Haz cheeseburger, cats standing on two legs. Then, it moved on. Real, intentional cat dancing. Faceswaps. Costumes. The kinds of cheap, c...
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[WP] You're sitting alone in the dark in front of your computer, laughing at something you saw on the internet. You stop laughing, but the laughing continues.
“Dammit, Tillin.” “What?” the voice responded in between attempts at stifling giggles, “you don’t think it’s funny?” “That’s a chuckle at best.” I furrow my brows in exasperation. “I mean come on, it’s just a-” It was no use. Tillin melts into a ball in the hallway, laughter filling the room. “Ehehehe--- Look at th...
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Anyone can be brought back to life ... for a price
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*Hello, and welcome to Reincarnation Services. If you plan on departing for the mortal realm, please get in line. Family and friends may not accompany you past security.* *Hi. I'd like to book a one way ticket.* *Excellent. And where will you be heading?* *It's actually not for me.* *I'm sorry sir, but that's h...
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"I loved your grandmother too, Jenny," explains Mark as he looks down at his feet. One foot aimlessly tapping the leg of the wooden chair his wife is sitting on. "But, we can't afford this. That's our nest egg. That's our kids private school. Our retirement. Our rainy day fund. Its god knows what else," he explains...
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WARNING: Pretty gruesome. Ugly writing. "Tell me how I can get her back, or this little piggy goes to the market." I said, as I pointed to the man's little finger with my rusty pair of scissors. "Alright, alright! I'll tell you! Just get that thing away from me!" The panting old man strapped to the chair said, blood...
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The entire room was packed as He opened his eyes. Slowly, as if He had forgotten how they worked. When everyone saw His kind brown eyes open onto the world, for the first time in thousands of years, they cheered ecstatically. Crying, they hugged each other, dropped to their knees and gave thanks to their God, even lay ...
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"Nonononononononononononono, don't DO this to me baby, STAY WITH ME! You can make it, baby just hang on a little bit longer. The ambulance is almost here, I can hear them!" But it didn't make a difference. Nothing made a difference, in the end. He had still lost her, and Brian felt like a fucking failure standing...
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The halogen lights above buzzed loudly as Mark moved forward in line. He kept his eyes low, occasionally scanning the room around him as stood there waiting. Shaking his head, he tightened his grip on the paper bag in his coat pocket. *“I wonder what they are all here for.”* Silently Mark knew as well as anybody what...
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"Anyone?" The sounds of far off machines dance through the silence left by his question. Their eyes meet and something unsaid is understood. "For a price." The hidden heart of furnaces and mechanical blood strikes hums quietly on. He swallows, his throat dry, and catches a word in his mind before it falls off his t...
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For many days the man walked, a pilgrim guided only by the bearing on his compass, looking for a rumour. Somewhere in the deep berg there was a dwelling where there was said to be an old farmer who went by the name of Primo. It was also said that he spoke in a smooth, colourful voice, polished smooth like the bed of a ...
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Stephen Moffat?
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She could see her blurred reflection as she approached the stainless steel doors. The weight of his lifeless body burning her arms. Her grief kept her muscles locked, her back straight. Her cheeks were cold with the damp remnance of old tears. As she breathed deeply the doors slid open. The room was blue and grey. Sani...
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Why should I bring myself back, huh? It's like I'm being goaded into it. Guilted into it. My finicky friends and family want to prevent me from the one thing I want, my hard-earned rest. Who can say I haven't earned it? A long life in the mines has left me bruised and tarnished, and by god, I want my rest! This initia...
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"Ok, ok, ok..." He wrung his hands as he sat, head bowed deeply and back hunched right over as he bore the weight of my words. He snivelled and his breath came raggedly. His recent loss had left him torn apart as it was, and the truth was not an easy thing to hear. "So what will it ACTUALLY cost?" Or to not hear, as...
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Our blacksmith carried his boy to the center of the town square and stood guard over him for two days and two nights. We gathered at a safe distance, out of respect, but there was not one of us who didn't want to come closer, lean over the boy, and whisper. That small body could so easily stir. After the two days and t...
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This was going to be too easy. Backing away from the junction box, I clipped the taps into my custom console. The air was dry, sharp notes of ozone from the humming transformers lining the vault wall. A faded sign attached to each had "HIGH VOLTAGE" with stylized lightning bolts. I was deep in the infrastructure of th...
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"You mean, he can be brought back?" "Why, of course. If I didn't have the power to bring people back to life, I wouldn't really be all that powerful now would I?" "Well, I suppose so." As she looked down at the floor, Gwen Setzer pulled the sleeves of her sweater to cover her wrists. This was all fucked up. Just th...
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Ok, here goes...first post here and probably not that good. Just figured I'd take a stab and have some fun. The shop was a lot smaller than Josh expected. But there it was, on the corner of Malden Road and Hashburn Street, just like the old man said. Josh had been pretty skeptical of the old man, seeing as the hobo wa...
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I looked at the map once more. They said he'd be here, the miracle man. The man who could bring people back to life. *He should be just a few blocks away,* I thought. I walked forward in the chilly evening autumn night. There was hardly a sound except my footsteps and the leaves stirring in the trees. The leaves were...
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“Anyone?” The man asked, his wavering voice emphasizing his most distinguishing outlier, his IQ of 77. I would compare his IQ to that of a chimpanzee’s, but apparently, you can’t measure the IQs of animals. That being said... he was dumber than a chimp. “Yes, anyone. Jesus christ man, that’s like the 7th time you’ve ...
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“Alright, viewers, it’s time for Mr. Lee to spin the Wheel of Angels. Mr. Lee, just to confirm, you are aware that the spin is irrevocable. The resurrection of your beloved leader must be handled by the angel whose name the wheel lands on.” “I’m aware of that, yes. Having him back is the most important thing.” “Th...
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[WP] You are the non-dominant personality of someone with DID.
He always speaks for me, I hardly ever get to put a word in. The problem is, he never has very much to say. I want to be meeting people, going out, enjoying myself but he just sits, staring at the walls, it’s enough to make me start questioning my sanity. I want to learn, to see things, to see the world even.. but he...
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[WP] You are the non-dominant personality of someone with DID.
I'm here, again. At the table. The one with all the books. Dr What's-his-face is looking at me from his ridiculous swivel chair, a tall plush leather throne from which he judges me. The quack raises an eyebrow above his thick rimmed glasses. "Ah," Says Doctor Eye-Brows, he flips a page in his notebook with an exaggera...
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[WP] You are the non-dominant personality of someone with DID.
He hurt her again. The tears were taking their familiar path down her cheek. She had been only a moment late from work, but that's all it took to send him into a rage these days. That would be a particularly bad bruise, I wonder what she would tell her co-workers this time, I always wondered what she told them. He ...
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[WP]Write a war story using only dialogue.
*Mine eyes have seen the glory of the coming of the Lord; He is trampling out the vintage where grapes of wrath are stored; He hath loosed the fateful lightning of His terrible swift sword, His truth is* *Duck!* *Cannons!* *Thomas! Stay where you are!* *When the fire stops, we go forward.* *Hold. Steady. Hold s...
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"Let's send Adolf a message. Let's send it *through* his little Nazi bastards!" "Sir, yes sir!" "Steady... Steady... Steady. GO!" ... "...Momma."
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[WP]Write a war story using only dialogue.
"It's pretty cold out here." "We'll be home by Christmas." "Tell me about your family." "Tell me about yours." "Got a girl back home?" ... "Not into girls? Hey, that's okay with me." ... "Pretty cold out here, huh?" "Just keep your head down, okay?" "Ever fought before? I heard they'll ea...
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[WP]Write a war story using only dialogue.
"Should we?" "We shouldn't." "Can we?" "Honestly, I doubt it." "Will we survive, or at least succeed?" "I haven't the faintest idea." "Are we... yes. We're going to aren't we." "We are." "But why?" "Because we must." "Why?" "Because there is no one else." "So?" "Someone has to do it." "Why does it have to...
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"Whiskey is a three dollar fifty. My best offer" said Maximilian Pump, Dealer Extraordinairre. "Were dying here you bastard. Dying here for your lying lazy ass. Two dollars. Two" said John "And I appreciate the effort I truly do, but things are expensive here John. Its dangerous business supplying you fine men wi...
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[WP]Write a war story using only dialogue.
-All quiet over there? Yeah, they stopped firing a few days ago. -Maybe they're dead. No, some nights I hear people laughing. last night I heared guitar music coming from over there. -Funny nobody's going to check it out. They might be planning something. We're low on resources and morale is shit, good luck fi...
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Mom, I'm going to make you proud. Dude, chicks dig a guy in uniform. This MRE tastes like cardboard. Fuck me, why 5 miles and 50 pounds?! This is it, this is it... Pull the chute...Now! Gotta get behind that truck! We made it, Pete! ...Pete?
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[WP]Write a war story using only dialogue.
"I don't want to die in some foxhole in the middle of the night, Waters. I just --" "Listen here, corporal. We're going to hold this position until we get a supply line running through Cherbourg otherwise it'll be all for no-" "...wait do you hear that Jones?" "I...I don't hear anyth-" "I didn't ask you corporal." ...
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"What happened to all the natives?" "Well, Billy, that's a good question. Who knows the answer? Michelle?" "They got sick!" "That's right, and what else? Hilary?" "There was a fight." "Yes! A really big fight. Who knows more about the fight? Alan?" "It's why we celebrate Purity Day." "Very good, Alan. Do you kno...
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*"CHRIST! Where's out medic?"* *"..repeat 12 ACP's inbound"* *"I'm hit! I'm hit!"* *"bzzzz...This is Royal Command, over..."* *"Someone get the comms of Daniels!"* *"It's so fucking painful"* *"What the...where's our medic?"* *"He's been hit se.."* *"I don' wanna die, I don' wanna die"* *"The headset's broken!...
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“You see that man there? In the 3rd floor window? That’s the mark.” “Which one? The one in the red suit?” “Awfully fat bastard ain’t he?” “Fine by me, makes’im a bigger target. Harder to miss.” “Ha! Well aren’t you a cold sunnovabitch.” “You’re rather chatty for a spotter aren’t you?” “Gotta stay sane someh...
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"Want some?" "What're you four? I haven't had Big League chew in years." "So?" "Fuck it. Give it to me." "Gotta stay hydrated." "Don't tell me what to do. We get enough of that shit here." "Oh? Because you know what's best?" "I sure as hell know when to pull the trigger, if that's what you're asking? Not all...
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[WP]Write a war story using only dialogue.
"We're supposed to take that hill. Top said we have air assets to support our advance" "What's the cover situation look like?" "Pretty scarce, but our mortars have plenty of smoke. It's only a click. Just like boot camp." "What's our plan?" "First and second platoon go up the middle while third flanks left. Weapons...
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“This is controll can you repeat?” “This is Captain Peters now returning I repeat, wounded are now with the 4077th, I have Lt. Colonel Blake onboard and will be home shortly” “I have you Captain, see you soon.” “4077th this is control, I have a requisition order signed by a Major Burns for 3 cases of green olives li...
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“Soldiers of the Heronfelds, by the ancient laws that have governed our lands since the age of Ferric the Second, I claim your lands for King Rohethmiel and our great goddess Anapeth. Surrender your arms now and be welcomed into her holy embrace. Refuse and face fiery wrath. What say you?” “No.” “N… No? No, you do no...
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"Jesus, it never gets any easier does it? Place is a frickin ghost town." "What did you expect?" "Some sort of life experience, I assume." "I guess you'll get all the life experience you can handle here." "I guess so. Hey?" "What?" "Who is that over there?" "I don't know. Hold on a second." "Charlie Alpha, Charl...
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"Lieutenant, I need your men on top of that hill 15 minutes ago, get moving NOW!." "Sir, you can't be serious, what the hell are we going to do on top of that hill? WHAT THE FUCK ARE WE GOING TO DO WITHOUT ANY GODDAMN AMMUNITION?!" "Whatever you have to. . . The package will be here shortly, this is too great of a f...
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"Hey" "Hey yourself" "What's up?" "Just writing" "What about?" "Everything. Sarge. Home. Boredom. I've read so many beautiful goddamn books about teamwork and brotherhoods and warrior's last stands that they're pretty much the only reason I joined the army. Then I get stationed at a base as a backup to a backup for our...
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[WP]Write a war story using only dialogue.
["Hey... Hey... Hey... *Hey Corran!* Wake up you lazy ass."](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qAHFRjZd7fs) "ggzznngnnt.. sorry. Sorry Lieutenant.. What time is it?" "We are 15 minutes to landing.. well, 15 minute until we are supposed to land as long as everything goes okay that is... Hey hey don't worry Private, I ch...
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[WP]Write a war story using only dialogue.
"Uhhh, alright, WRATH Pack Three just hit atmos." "Yup. *Henderson* is five ought kilometers, right on your tail." "Alright. Keep it close. Ten minutes." "Five minutes. Airspace is clear. We're still dark." "Ground reports they put, uh, an infrared flare down, right on target. Well within margin of error." "Right....
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[WP] Of all the species in the universe, none lives on a world as toxic as the human homeworld with an oxygen atmosphere and liquid covering the surface. Equally, no other species creates what the humans call "music"
What do you want us to write?
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[WP] Of all the species in the universe, none lives on a world as toxic as the human homeworld with an oxygen atmosphere and liquid covering the surface. Equally, no other species creates what the humans call "music"
OP might like [Year Zero, by Rob Reid](http://www.amazon.com/Year-Zero-Novel-Rob-Reid/dp/0345534514/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&qid=1389628601&sr=8-2&keywords=year+zero) Well, for the part about music. It's a pretty funny book.
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[WP] Of all the species in the universe, none lives on a world as toxic as the human homeworld with an oxygen atmosphere and liquid covering the surface. Equally, no other species creates what the humans call "music"
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[WP] Of all the species in the universe, none lives on a world as toxic as the human homeworld with an oxygen atmosphere and liquid covering the surface. Equally, no other species creates what the humans call "music"
When derelict mining equipment of unknown origins was discovered deep in a supposedly lifeless part of the galaxy our governing council naturally assumed an illegal incursion had occurred by pirates. Found on hollowed out asteroids and micro planets with no sun to tether them from hurtling through space, the primitive ...
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