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Like Sunny, before she was a minor character with regularly changing hair color until it was revealed in a story that the character was played by several girls. Currently, she has appeared in stories with a more fixed look having brown hair with pigtails and a purple dress. In the first appearances during the 90s she h... | Like Sunny, before she was a minor character but with an inconsistent design that often changes every story, until be revealed in a story that the character was played by several girls. Currently, she has appeared in stories with a fixed look having brown hair with pigtails and a purple dress. Originally in the first a... | Make this more concise | wiki |
She had been conducting abortions at her home, "Cumberland House", 4 George Street, Norwood, for many years, was convicted of manslaughter by Mr. Justice Cleland following the death of Edith Millburn, aged 20. She had died of blood loss following an "illegal operation". She refused food and drink and died at the Royal ... | Marval participated in procuring abortions at her home, "Cumberland House," 4 George Street, Norwood, for many years. She had been involved in the death from septicaemia of Ellen Phyland, but no charges had been laid due to lack of evidence. Finally, she was convicted of manslaughter by Mr. Justice Cleland following th... | Reword and put events in chronological order. | wiki |
Jacobson attended Gunn High School, where he was named 2003 Central Coast Section Player of the Year and attended UC Berkeley from 2003-2006, where he was named to the all Pac-10 team three times. Jacobson chose to sign a contract with FC Lorient of France’s Ligue 1, however injuries limited his playing time. Jacobson ... | Jacobson attended Gunn High School, where he was named 2003 Central Coast Section Player of the Year, and played college soccer at UC Berkeley from 2003 to 2006, where he was named to the all Pac-10 team three times. However, instead of playing in MLS, Jacobson chose to sign a contract with Lorient of France’s Ligue 1.... | Expand the text and reorganize the information. | wiki |
The municipality comprises the towns of Beigem, Grimbergen, Humbeek and Strombeek-Bever. On January 1, 2006 Grimbergen had a total population of 33,965. The total area is 38.61 & nbsp; km2 which gives a population density of 880 inhabitants per km2. Grimbergen is located in the Flemish (Dutch) language area of Belgium.... | It comprises the towns of Beigem, Grimbergen, Humbeek and Strombeek-Bever. Grimbergen is in the Dutch language area of Belgium. The French-speaking minority is represented by four members on the 30-seat local council. Grimbergen is mostly known for its Norbertine abbey and the beer once brewed there. | Remove any mention of the are being a municipality | wiki |
Geographically S. plagiostomus spread in different rivers, and tributaries throughout Himalaya extending to confines of China, Afghanistan, Pakistan, Turkistan, Nepal, Ladkah, Tibet, Bhutan and North east India Day (1958). (Day, 1958) and also plays an important role in commercial fish production (Bahuguna, 2002). Acco... | Geographically S. plagiostomus spread in different rivers, and tributaries throughout Himalaya extending to confines of China, Afghanistan, Pakistan, Turkistan, Nepal, Ladkah, Tibet, Bhutan and north-eastern India (Day, 1958). In India, S. plagiostomus is the most important food fish of the Himalayan region, including ... | Rephrase and shorten the information | wiki |
A primary reason for the creation of the unit, according to army leaders, was because of inadequate or inaccurate close air support provided by the United States Air Force. By September 2007, the Warrior-Alpha had flown more than 6,000 hours and had contributed to the killing of 3,000 insurgents in Iraq during the year... | Army leaders said they created the unit because the United States Air Force provided inadequate or inaccurate close air support. Built by General Atomics Aeronautical Systems, the extended-range multi-purpose hybrid UAV has an electro-optical / infrared sensors, synthetic aperture radar, laser rangefinder and designato... | Include information regarding the technology behind the UAV. | wiki |
In the West Balkhash region in Kazakhstan, lies the Burubaital Formation that is home to the oldest known abyssal biogenic deposits. This area is composed mostly of chert that was formed over a timespan of 15 million years (late Cambrian-middle Ordovician) .The Burubaital Formation is dated back to before the evolution... | The Burubatial Formation, located in th West Balkhash region of Kazakhstan, is the oldest known abyssal biogenic deposit. The Burubaital Formation is primarily composed of chert which was formed over a timespan of 15 million years (late Cambrian-middle Ordovician). It is likely that these deposits were formed in an oce... | Remove information on shell secretion, and the Furongian. Copyedit. | wiki |
From 15 April 2014, Hike was offering users with unlimited free short messaging service (SMS) called Hike Offline through message credits which can be earned from regular chatting with other users. The more a user chats on Hike, the more credits earned that can be converted to SMS for offline use to get a seamless chat... | From 15 April 2014, Hike is offering unlimited free SMS called Hike Offline through credits, earned by users from regular chatting for offline use to get a seamless experience as connectivity is still a major issue in many parts of India. To engage 80 percent of its audience who are under 25 years age group, Hike intro... | Edit it to make it more concise | wiki |
The aberration of light (also referred to as astronomical aberration or stellar aberration) is a relativistic phenomenon important in astronomy, which causes an apparent motion of celestial objects dependent on the velocity of the observer. Historically, it motivated development of the theories of heliocentrism, light,... | Historically, it motivated many important developments in the theories of heliocentrism, light, luminiferous aether, electromagnetism and Special Relativity. In general aberration causes objects to appear to a moving observer to be displaced towards the direction of the observer's motion, compared to when the observer ... | Rewrite the introduction to make it easier to understand. | wiki |
A siege then took place where an attempted relief to recapture the town and punish the mutineers by a Spanish relieving force under Frederick Van den Berg ended in defeat at the hands of an Anglo-Dutch army under of Maurice of Nassau. After a time of nearly three years the mutineers were able either to join Maurice's a... | Frederick Van den Berg's attempt to end the mutiny by force, with a siege to recapture the town, ended in defeat at the hands of an Anglo-Dutch army under of Maurice of Nassau. After a period of nearly three years the mutineers were able either to join Maurice's army or rejoin the Spanish army after a pardon had been r... | Expand on the topic. | wiki |
There is a distinct difference between a person having three, separate dependence issues and having Polysubstance dependence. To clarify if a person is addicted to three separate narcotics such as cocaine, meth and alcohol and is dependent on all three then they would be diagnosed with three separate dependence disorde... | There is a distinct difference between a people having three, separate dependence issues and having Polysubstance dependence the main difference is polysubstance dependence means that they are not specifically addicted to one particular substance. This is often confused with multiple specific dependences present at the... | Make this more concise | wiki |
The exploration would involve travel over uncharted terrain in which König's alpine experiences might be a valuable asset. The expedition ship, Deutschland, entered the Weddell Sea in January 1912, and penetrated to at 77 ° 44'S. The frustrations following this setback highlighted what had been a troublesome feature of... | The expedition would involve travel over uncharted terrain, in which König's alpine experiences might be a valuable asset. The expedition ship, Deutschland, entered the Weddell Sea in January 1912, and penetrated to 77 ° 44'S. The question as to whether overall control of the expedition lay with Filchner, or with the m... | Rewrite for clarity and conciseness. | wiki |
It is because of its heritage as a long-term Montenegrin capital that it is today the honorary capital of Montenegro. The founding of Cetinje was conditioned by the historical, political, and economic background in the 15th century. In the field of Cetinje in 1482 his court was built and two years later the monastery w... | Its status as the honorary capital of Montenegro is due to its heritage as the long-serving former capital of Montenegro. Cetinje owes its founding to the historical, political, and economic events of the 15th century. His court was established in the field of Cetinje in 1482 and two years later the monastery was also ... | Clean up the paragraph for grammtical and stylistic errors. | wiki |
The Scandinavian Caledonides is a belt of deformation in the Earth's crust (known as an orogen) that covers the west and north of the Scandinavian Peninsula. The Scandinavian Caledonides formed during the Silurian–Devonian continental collision of Baltica and Laurentia, which is referred to as the Scandian phase (also ... | The Scandinavian Caledonides are the vestiges of an ancient, deeply eroded mountain range that formed during the Silurian–Devonian continental collision of Baltica and Laurentia during the Scandian phase (see also: Scandian orogeny) of the Caledonian orogeny. The Scandinavian Caledonides is under most of the western an... | Reword the definition of the Scandinavian Caledonides | wiki |
In the 2012–2013 season, Radionova made her ISU Junior Grand Prix debut and won her events in France and Austria. She qualified for the JGP Final in Sochi, where she also won the gold medal, more than 11 points ahead of silver medalist Hannah Miller. Radionova competed on the senior level at the 2013 Russian Championsh... | In the 2012–13 season, Radionova made her ISU Junior Grand Prix debut and won her events in France and Austria. She qualified for the JGP Final in Sochi, where she won another gold medal, finishing more than eleven points ahead of silver medalist Hannah Miller. At the 2013 Russian Championships, Radionova won the senio... | Rewrite for readability. | wiki |
For patients who have undergone removal of the uterus before or decided to preserve their uterus, only longitudinal anterior incision can be performed. For patients who are also receiving removal of uterus, Cross-T-shaped incision, which includes an incision around cervix and anterior colpotomy, or a single incision ar... | For patients who have undergone hysterectomy or will be preserving their uterus, only longitudinal anterior incision can be performed. For patients who are also receiving a concomitant hysterectomy, an anterior colpotomy, a Cross-T-shaped incision that cuts around the cervix, or a single incision around the cervix and ... | Go into more detail about the procedure | wiki |
Public data sharing creates a new communication setting that largely contrasts with private exchange of data with research collaborators or partners. For researchers and institutions, scientific data is also "liabilities". The opening of research data creates a new arrangement of costs and benefits. While it makes it p... | The opening of research data creates a new settlement of costs and benefits. Public data sharing introduces a new communication setting that largely contrasts with private exchange of data with research collaborators or partners. Lack of proper documentation means that the burden of recontextualization fall on the pote... | Copyedit for clarity. | wiki |
Apple applied for a US patent for the design of the Dock in 1999 and was granted the patent in October 2008, nine years later. Applications can be added to and removed from the Dock by drag and drop, except for the Finder, which is a permanent fixture as the leftmost item (or topmost if the Dock is configured to be ver... | Apple applied for a US patent for the design of the Dock in 1999 and was granted the patent in October 2008, nearly a decade later. Any application can be dragged and dropped onto the Dock except for Finder and Trash, which are permanent fixtures as the leftmost and rightmost items (or highest and lowest items if the D... | Sentences are rewritten for clarity. | wiki |
The Conservatory authority became interested in the monument no sooner than in the second half of seventies of XX century. Then the detailed inventory was executed, windows walled up, the object symbolically surrounded by fence. Despite all of that devaluation of the chapel continued. | The Conservatory Authority became interested in the monument in the nineteen-seventies. They executed a detailed inventory, walled up windows, and symbolically surrounded the chapel with a fence. Despite those precautions, the deterioriation of the chapel continued. | Copyedit for clarity. | wiki |
The Souvenir Jacques Goddet is a prize on the cyclist race Tour de France since 2001 in a honour of former Tour de France director and French sports journalist Jacques Goddet. It is usually given to the rider who first climbs famous Col du Tourmalet. The prize money the first climber gets is € 5000. No rider has ever w... | The Souvenir Jacques Goddet is a cash prize, since 2001, in the Tour de France cycle race. The Souvenir is named in honour of former Tour de France director and French sports journalist Jacques Goddet. The Souvenir Jacques Goddet is given to the first rider to reach the summit of the highest climb on the Tour, usually ... | Copy edit the opening paragraph. | wiki |
The HoCo, as with the other student government organizations in the Houses, are funded by the UC. There are several aspects of the house that make it unique from the other Harvard houses. Quincy Grille is a student-run grille that is popular among students. They serve the infamous Ronnie Burger and are open Wednesday t... | Like other house organizations, HoCo is funded by the UC. Each Harvard House possesses unique characteristics and Quincy is no different. The Quincy Grille is a student-run restaurant that is popular among students of all Harvard dormitories. It serves the infamous Ronnie Burger and is open Wednesday through Saturday n... | Copyedit and improve readability. | wiki |
The party's right-wing faction, led by Erik Solheim, while the left-wing was led by ageing party politician Finn Gustavsen, both were, according to Aftenposten, likely candidates for the party chairmanship. By August Solheim and Tora Haug were the most likely candidates for the position as Gustavsen had managed to beco... | According to Aftenposten, both Erik Solheim, leader of the party's right wing, and the ageing Finn Gustavsen, leader of its left wing, were likely candidates for the party chairmanship. On August 27, 1986, Koritzinsky announced in Dagbladet that he would step down as party chairman at the 1987 national convention. When... | Copyedit for readability | wiki |
These hill-forts are characterized not only by their size, but also by the presence of some urban features, like paved streets equipped with channels for draining the rain, reservoirs of sweet water, and even some kind of urban planning. Many of them also presents an inner and upper walled space – relatively large and ... | These hill-forts are characterized by their size and by urban features such as paved streets equipped with channels for stormwater runoff, reservoirs of potable water, and evidence of urban planning. Many of them also present an inner and upper walled space – relatively large and scarcely urbanized called acrópole by l... | Rephrase text and add information. | wiki |
We know that children are the future, but what are we going to do to inspire them to know that fact? You have children who are unmotivated. They do not wish to learn in school but they are forced to do so because society has taught them that is their only option in life is to only choose education and nothing else. Soc... | Although we comprehend that our children are the future, what are we going to undertake in order to motivate them to realize that certitude? You have children who dilly-dally. They have no charm in being educated in school, but rather are compelled to do so because society has instilled in them that their only possible... | Write in the style of a 19th century novel | others |
The right to self-determination can be thought of simplistically as two things: consent being required for outsiders coming in to propose projects or activities that affect indigenous people and control over internal affairs and matters, including control over how their traditional lands are occupied and used. | The right to self-determination can be thought of simplistically as two things: consent being required for outsiders coming in to propose projects or activities that affect indigenous people and control over internal affairs and matters, including control over how their traditional lands are occupied and used. This mea... | Elaborate | others |
When making sandwiches on the back line, you need to make sure you have all your bread sizes stocked up and in the size orders necessary for the different sandwiches we make. For example, you would need small buns for kids’ meal burgers (cheese, and plain) and other small sandwiches like fish and chicken. Then you hav... | When you are constructing sandwiches on the back line, you need to make sure you have prioritized bread sizes and types because each sandwich we make is different. For example, when you are constructing a kid’s meal burger, both with cheese and plain, will you be using a small bun or a larger bun? Of course, you will b... | rewrite the text explaining importance of prioritization of tasks and how to achieve it. | others |
A key issue is how we actually go about creating web-based content. This comes under two parts: the educational content, and the web/app infrastructure which hosts it. I could comfortably write enough educational content, along with my fellow tutors, to supply a website/app, and we could add to it over time, much like ... | Please, do not take this personally, but one of the main problems is the process involved in creating web-based content. If you would like me to elaborate further, I can, but essentially, there are two branches, which are the educational content, and the web/app infrastructure hosting it. I am of a comfortable mind tha... | Make this more respectful and polite | others |
When asking for dessert, tea or coffee, wait at least five minutes after they’ve finished their main course. People do not like to be rushed. When a table is settling the bill, ask if everything was okay before you put the payment through. If it wasn’t, apologize, and if it’s a serious complaint, then get the manager t... | When inquiring whether the diners would like dessert, tea or coffee, sustain for at least five minutes following them finishing their main course. Generally, individuals do not prefer feeling hurried. When a group of diners are taking care of the payment, inquire whether everything went well prior to you putting the pa... | make this more polite | others |
UAT testing is an area of testing which is about verifying if the business processes the client uses are matched well with the application. Often it is not possible or reasonable for an internal tester to write these for the client. It is very difficult to have an unbiased view of the system as an internal tester, so t... | So, do you know about UAT testing? It's a kind of testing that checks if the business processes used by the client are well matched with the app. Now, it's not always doable or practical for an internal tester to write these use cases for the client. It's very challenging for an internal tester to have a neutral view o... | make this more conversational | others |
If you do these things, people will enjoy their dinner 95% of the time. They may even tip you as well, but obviously it depends on the person. In saying that, sometimes you can be the perfect waitress and people will still not like you. Sometimes they are in a bad mood and they just want to take it out on you. Sometim... | If you adhere to these standards, guests will enjoy their dinner ninety-five percent of the time. Their subsequent action may be to offer a generous tip, though this depends on the client. Despite disclosing this, you can be a waitress who performs her duties without error, and clients will still discover a way to hold... | make the description more sophisticated | others |
There are various types of identity which show how a person fits into different situations. A personal identity is developed from our self-concept, how we perceive ourselves. This can be influenced by any number of things; however, it primarily consists of our current self and our idealised self. There is an observable... | There are many different kinds of identity, and all of them can help determine how people fit into different situations. The concept of personal identity, for instance, basically stems from the idea of self-concept, or how we see ourselves in the world. There are very many different factors that can help determine our ... | Vary the pacing of your blog post to keep the reader engaged. | others |
So there’s another writing about programs that create games to teach them mathematics and logic. The game that I remember reading about was a pirate ship game that a teacher brought into the classroom to help his students. There was a particular student who struggled in math, and then started refusing to learn. When pr... | So there’s another text regarding programs that fabricate interaction and games to educate students on mathematics and logic. The game that I recall reading about was a game involving traveling with a pirate ship that a teacher brought into the classroom to help his students. There was a certain student who struggled i... | make it more informative | others |
The most effective fix to an area that has suffered from a broken windows-esque problem is called problem-oriented policing. Problem-oriented policing, or P.O.P., is used by law enforcement agencies to combat the underlying issue of crime. By going to the source of the problem, and not the effects of the problem, it’s ... | The best method to resolve issues in an area that suffers from a broken windows-esque problem is called problem-oriented policing. Probelm-oriented policing, or P.O.P., is a strategy law enforcement agencies use to reduce crime. It is a more proactive measure to prevent crime because it deals with the root of the issue... | add more examples | others |
One of the most important things to remember is energy and enthusiasm. Topics can span from education to health reform and it is up to our guests to express their emotions, not the hosts. Hosts should read from the teleprompter and always let the guests have the floor. Another good point to remember while on camera is ... | One of the most significant things to keep in mind is vitality and zeal. While topics can range from education to health reform, it is the guests' choice to express their sentiments, not the hosts. Hosts are required to read from the teleprompter and allow the guests to have the floor. Please remember another good poin... | Make this more polite | others |
The number one thing to remember, something that is always drummed into us: always stay true to yourself. If you don’t feel comfortable modelling in underwear or nude, then don’t do it! If you don’t like the style of photos the photographer is trying to achieve, then do not agree to it. Nobody should force you to do an... | The single most important thing for you to remember, the ONE thing that is always drilled into our heads is this: always be true to yourself. If you feel uncomfortable modelling in underwear or nude then you should not do it! Similarly, if the photographer’s style or vision makes you uncomfortable, then you should abso... | make this more dramatic | others |
In addition to storing and cooking, food must also be handled and prepared correctly. If handling food, you should always have clean and sanitized hands. This is to prevent the spread of any possible bacteria you may have had on your hands. After washing your hands, it is best to have all the tools and ingredients you ... | In addition to storing and cooking, it is imperative that food is handled and prepared in a correct manner as well. If you are going to be touching food without gloves, you should always clean and sanitize your hands prior and post handling food. This will prevent the spread of any possible bacteria you may have had on... | make it more technical | others |
The number one thing to remember, something that is always drummed into us: always stay true to yourself. If you don’t feel comfortable modelling in underwear or nude, then don’t do it! If you don’t like the style of photos the photographer is trying to achieve, then do not agree to it. Nobody should force you to do an... | The most important thing to remember, which should always be instilled in us, is to always stay true to yourself. If you are not comfortable with modeling nude or in underwear, then do not agree to do it. If you do not approve of the style of photographs the photographer is attempting to achieve, then do not agree to d... | make the text more polite | others |
Also remember to do everything in advance! This way you are not scrambling to get stuff done at the last second. When doing this gift giving, I completely forgot about buying packaging to ship the gifts in. Now I know, but I’m telling you because no one was there to tell me. Don’t forget to check the addresses as well.... | Remember to get a jump start by doing it early! That way, you are not setting yourself up for a last-second mad dash. My gift-giving suffered because I needed to remember to purchase packaging to ship gifts in. I have learned from my mistake, but I am telling you because I want you to succeed. Success comes by remember... | make it more motivational for parents of age 50 | others |
Whoever reads this will get a look at how my poor brain works. I wake up in the middle of the night and basically everything you’ve read is flying through my brain, and I cannot get back to sleep. It is sad, I know. It still seems like I’ve written a lot more than I have. So what should I do about Kara? Did she lie to ... | Whomever interprets my writing will get a glance at the inner workings of my incompetence. I arise well past nightfall with everything you have interpreted soaring through my mind, and I am not able to fall back into my slumber once again. It is an unfortunate circumstance, I am aware. Though, It continues to seem as i... | Help me sound more confident | others |
Of course, again, many of these rights are not realized in practice. All over the world, indigenous people face land tenure insecurity. They worry about miners coming onto their lands and doing mining that destroys their land, wildlife habitats, farming areas and sacred lands, and that pollutes the water. In these case... | What we witness throughout the world is these rights for indigenous people are not realized in practice. As we look at the state of indigenous people today, we find them facing land tenure insecurity. They fear that miners will be able to descend on their lands and perform destructive strip mining, whereby their land, ... | rewrite as more sympthatic and persuasive | others |
So you want to work in the fast food industry. There are many different positions and many things to remember. Culver’s will be the example here. There are a few positions in the front of the house. Register, or cashiers, is the crew members who take orders. Runners are crew members who take the orders out to the guest... | Okay gang, so you want to work in the fast food industry? There’s a bunch of positions and a lot different things to remember. The idea is that Culver’s will be our mental exercise through fast food. So you got a couple positions in the front of the house. You got the resister, ok, and the register is where you put the... | Make it sound like Ben Shapiro | others |
Another thing to consider is cable management, much like the wireless mic and the lapel scenario I shared earlier. Don’t make cable management a last minute afterthought. Plan it out beforehand. Where will you place that extension cable? Is it in the way? Can someone trip over it? Can you run cables along walls, or... | One additional problem that would need solving is cable management, similar to the wireless mic and lapel scenario I relayed to you previously. Make attempts to think of how you are going to manage your cables ahead of time. Things to consider may be placement of extension cables so nobody trips over it. If you want a ... | change the tone to be more formal and less blunt | others |
We’ll explore how to put them together. First, you’ll need to grab a fresh tortilla from the kitchen. Second, take a moment to carefully fold it into a curved shell. Third, insert your selection of meat. If you chose slow cooked cow, please leave the room. Next, add cheese— either the fresh grated variety or the cheese... | We’ll explore how to put them together. First, you’ll need to grab a fresh tortilla from the kitchen. Second, take a moment to carefully fold it into a curved shell. Third, insert your selection of meat. If you chose slow cooked cow, please leave the room. Next, add cheese—either the fresh grated variety or the cheese ... | add a new item to the list | others |
For example, if an employee is scheduled to work for six hours, they are entitled to a lunch break. Many managers forget this, and simply send workers home after six hours without giving them the option to take a lunch break. This is illegal. If an employee is scheduled to work for six hours, and that concludes their w... | For instance, if one of my employees is assigned six hours of work, they legally get to break for lunch as close to the middle of their workday as possible. Not including myself, there are a lot of managers that don’t remember this, and just send laborers home after six hours with no option for a lunch break. This is a... | rewrite in perspective of an employer | others |
I am an educator specialist. I teach children from ages three to five. It is an awesome experience to help little children learn their ABCs and their 123s, and helping them learn manners like “please” and “thank you” is a delight as well. I also teach little children at my church every Sunday, and the fact that they ar... | To whom it may concern,
With experience as an educator specialist. I am able to teach children from ages three to five. I work for a preschool called La Petite Academy. My responsibilities include helping children learn their ABCs and their 123s, and teaching manners such as “please” and “thank you.” I am also able... | rewrite it as formal cover letter | others |
Our championship program will start next month. The training groups will meet everyday. Preliminary and Novice groups will train in the afternoons, whereas the Junior and Senior groups will train in the mornings. Schools will need to be notified. Our board needs to issue official letters to the schools no later than th... | Our championship program will begin in the following month. The training teams will gather each day. Preliminary and Novice teams will practice in the afternoons, whereas the Junior and Senior teams will practice after dawn. Institutions are required to be notified. Our board is required to draft formal letters to the ... | add more rules including one about how to handle a skater who is injured | others |
As noted, we will provide you with the manuscript files in a Word document. Sometimes, all the chapters are in one Word document, and other times the chapters are in separate Word documents. It depends on the exact publication. But we do expect you to use Word to edit the files. We are happy to provide you with a hard ... | Please remember these procedures if you are a new copyeditor with us. We will provide you with the manuscript files in a Word document. On occasion, all the chapters are present in one Word document, although on occasions the chapters will be sent in separate Word documents. This variation depends on the exact publicat... | write a set of guidelines for new copyeditors | others |
If there is any money left after this event this will enable us to proceed with summer fair in July 2019. There is a possibility of hiring a big screen to show wimbledon mens final in tennis. This great sporting event is very popular, and has a massive following which is a great start for a successful and well attended... | The club discussed potential options for leftover funds after the upcoming event, including plans for a summer fair in July of 2019. The possibility of renting a big screen to show the Wimbledon men’s tennis final was discussed as part of those plans. It was noted that this sporting event is quite popular, and may brin... | write in style of a club report | others |
Working here is not for the faint of heart. I hope this helps you see that although the hours are long and the pay is not the best, you make lasting relationships with amazing people. They turn into family sooner than you realize. You’ll meet great customers and help them feel more beautiful. It is truly amazing what a... | It is not for the faint of heart to work here. But I hope this helps you to observe that despite the long hours and low pay, you can build long-lasting relationships with wonderful people. They become family faster than you realize. You’ll meet wonderful customers and help them feel more lovely. Honestly, it's great wh... | make it more positive | others |
Active learning is an important pedagogical tool used in higher education today. It is based on the scientific method. Students in an active learning classroom learn more than students in the traditional classroom. The use of groups for project learning throughout the semester is a particularly effective element of act... | Active learning is a vital part of modern learning processes in higher education. The technique is based on the scientific method, and evidence shows that students learn more through active learning than they do in traditional classroom environments. One particularly effective tool in the active learning toolbox is the... | add more supporting evidence | others |
Another effective way to hire volunteers is by hosting volunteer drives. These are events where you have a stall, and people come to talk to you directly. For this to work, you need to find a location that has a lot of passing footfall in order to generate interest. You also need people who are good at talking to the p... | Another useful way to recruit volunteers was by hosting volunteer drives. These were events where a stall was set up, and people arrived to speak directly. For this, a location was needed that had a lot of footfall in order to create interest. People who were good at talking to the crowd took care of the stalls. Leafle... | change tense to past | others |
Their are clear benefits to the child too. This will help them to sharpen their IT skills in this day and age when IT skills are so crucial and embedded in every aspect of every career. It will help them to stay engaged, as research has shown that children interact more positively with iPads, tablets and electronic med... | There may be quite a few benefits to the children that are worth mentioning as well. For instance, it is not inconceivable that this program change will help sharpen students’ IT skills. Such skills seem to be becoming ever more useful in nearly every line of work today. Research also shows that children interact with ... | make it more objective | others |
When you first start working at Victoria’s Secret, the pink stripes, free underwear, and glamour will blind you. Everything is shiny and the little girl deep down inside of you is going to fall in love. The commercials do a great job of showing you exactly what it means to be “sexy,” and that’s what draws people from a... | When I began my employment at Victoria’s Secret, the pink stripes, free underwear, and all that glamour blinded me. Like, everything is so shiny and that little girl deep down inside is going to absolutely freak and become so in love with it all.”
“Would you say the commercials do a good job at demonstrating what it me... | write in style of pg wodehouse | others |
Of course, in practice, many governments do not respect indigenous rights and do not give indigenous peoples their rights to the land. In very few countries is there even an infrastructure in place by which to grant indigenous peoples the right to land. In countries where indigenous peoples can own land, the government... | Three ways governments do not respect their indigenous community’s rights to land:
(1) In the few countries that allow indigenous people to own land, the government makes the decision to “grant” it to the native people, instead of admitting that the native people have an intrinsic right to that land.
(2) A lot of the ... | Write in style of a blog post | others |
After researching where the problem is, who the culprits are, and what people’s views on them are, we would then move to determining the communications strategy and planning how to implement it. This would be the planning phase. Marlin County must determine how much funding they would like to allocate to this communica... | Communication Strategy Against Littering
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Following research as to where the problem lies, the individual culprits, and how the public understands it, the next step would involve determining the communications strategy and outline implementation.
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This would be the outline phase. Marlin Count... | re-write in style of a technical report | others |
I understand your group is considering chartering the Playfair for a sail training excursion. While we are normally aimed at youth, we do offer adult trips and would be happy to take your group. The benefits of sail training are considerable, giving you a dramatically different environment from normal life. This provid... | It is my understanding that your group is considering chartering the Playfair for a sailing instruction experience. These services are typically directed towards youths, however, we would be most pleased to welcome your group on this occasion. Education in the art of sailing can be extremely rewarding, offering experie... | make it more polite | others |
If one wants to write novels for a living, or even non-fiction books for a living, a lot of it comes down to social networking. (Of course, that’s probably true of basically any job.) For non-fiction writers especially, platform-building is crucial if one wants to sell a book, or even land a contract with potential pub... | If you wanna make a living writing novels, or even non-fiction books, it all boils down to social networking, which, honestly, probably applies to every job. For non-fiction writers especially, it’s so important that you build a platform if you want to sell a book or snag a contract with potential publishers. Non-ficti... | make it sound less formal | others |
This also lets our creative juices flow to come up with those perfect stories and articles to give a brand more life. Such content is featured on our website and in printed publications, and shared around the globe. Our average monthly unique visitors reach 100,000 people, and our content appears in the homes, offices,... | This enables our creativity to flourish. Flawless stories and articles empower us to breathe life into a brand. Our website and printed publications feature such content and are shared globally. Our average monthly unique visitors cap at 100,000 people. Our materials are vested in the homes, offices, and schools of ove... | make sure the text is clear and easy to read | others |
Sheikh Mujibur Rahman became the figurehead for the Bengali people and led his fellow Bengalis in protest, and eventually to war with Pakistan. This later became known as the Bangladesh Liberation War. Thousands (and possibly millions) lost their lives in this war. It was a dangerous time and Punjabi patrols would atta... | Table of Contents
-Sheikh Mujibur Rahman and the birth of the modern Bengali liberation movement
-The Bangladesh Liberation War (BLW)
-The role of other State actors in the BLW
-The culture and religions of modern Bangladesh
-Bengali expats
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Keep things in their place. So much time is wasted looking for things — keys, wallet, purse, cell phone. Make an effort to keep items in specific locations, so you won’t waste minutes, or hours, looking for them. We can all relate to times of ripping the house apart right before rushing out the door because we don’t re... | Put items where they belong. Searching for things like keys, wallets, purses, cell phones, and so on wastes time. Store belongings in specific locations so that minutes or hours are not spent searching for them. We can all relate to ripping the house apart because we don't recall where we placed our keys. Or we removed... | Discuss the importance of ogranization. | others |
Coming to work means looking the part. That means an ensemble of all black, from head to toe. If you wear any color, you will be taken from the floor. There are variations from store to store, but all black is the minimum requirement. You don’t have to dress up, but it will attract more customers to you, and that is al... | When you come to work, please present your best self. Our uniform is all black from head to toe. Unfortunately, you will be asked to leave the floor if you wear any color. There are variations from store to store, but all black is always accepted across all stores. Wearing this uniform will attract more customers to yo... | make it more polite | others |
People who are making a payment will be provided a receipt of transaction. If one is paying a ticket that involves a suspension fee, that fee cannot be separated and it must be paid first. Then, the individual will also receive a clearance with their receipt that can be taken to the Secretary of State to receive their... | According to the recent development, people who make a payment will be given a transaction receipt. If a ticket includes a suspension fee, that fee cannot be separated and must be paid first. Then, the person will also get a clearance with their receipt, which he can take to the Secretary of State to obtain the driver’... | rewrite text as a news post | others |
The story of Altab Ali is a powerful one that brought about a change in the area. Altab Ali was a young male textile worker who was on his way home when he was stabbed by two white men and one mixed-race man. After their arrest, these vicious thugs said that they did not know why they murdered Altab Ali, and that it wa... | The tale of Altab Ali is a moving tale that inspired change in this area. Atlab Ali, a young man who labored in a textile factory, was making his way home after a hard day's work when he was accosted by two white men and one mixed race man. They stabbed and killed him. After they had been apprehended by the authorities... | re-write to make it more engaging | others |
First, be sure you have a copy of the 17th Edition of the Chicago Manual of Style (CMOS). For all our publications, we refer to the CMOS. You will also need the most recent edition of Merriam Webster's Dictionary. | First off, you simply must have a copy of the 17th Edition of the Chicago Manual of Style (CMOS)! We use CMOS on absolutely every single thing we publish, and don’t forget the most recent edition of Merriam Webster’s Dictionary, you’re going to need it! | Make the text more engaging | others |
We will also be getting new computers that are up-to-date and in speed and in fashion that we desire to have in order to meet and exceed all expectations of our guests. Our guests expect quality work and service from us. In order to meet their demands we have to be able to go the extra distance to adapt to our modern e... | We will be getting new up-to-date computes that meet and exceed our guest’s expectations. Since our guests expect quality work and service from us, we will always go the extra distance to ensure we are adapting to the modern environment. It is also important since our competitors will also be upgrading to fit with the ... | make sure the text is clear and easy to follow by writing it in a presentable way that is easy to skim and follow | others |
Next, have a method for dealing with some of the mundane business of the day. Phone calls need to be returned. Emails need replies to be sent. Documents need to be signed. On the home front, you may have dishes that need to be washed before you can work, or you may have to clean up from breakfast or lunch. Have a metho... | Typical office tasks may seem mundane, but they are vitally important to maintaining your business’ efficiency and productivity. Phone calls will have to be made, emails must be sent, and documents will always need to be signed. Finding an efficient way to deal with such tasks will prove crucial to the success of your ... | write in style of a business advice | others |
English majors often entail different concentrations. Two big ones are English literature and creative writing. As might be supposed, English literature concentrations focus on reading works by other authors, and creative writing concentrations focus on creating works of their own. Even here there may be some bias from... | English majors often end up working in vastly different fields from one another. Two of the biggest fields for English majors to focus on are English literature and creative writing. As one can probably guess, English literature concentrations focus more heavily on the reading and analysis of the works of other authors... | Expand on the idea that being a writer is a viable career option | others |
After obviously having designed products, making them, and listing them on my shop website, I decided that I needed to invest more time into marketing. My main business objective is profit maximisation, so obviously I wanted to keep costs as low as possible. After consulting with many fellow small business owners, I de... | After designing products, creating them, and listing them on my shop website, investing more time into marketing was the next step. My main business goal is maximizing profit, so I wanted to keep my costs as low as possible. After consulting with other small business owners, I decided that the most cost-efficient way f... | Rewrite about the experience of marketing a business | others |
When asking for dessert, tea or coffee, wait at least five minutes after they’ve finished their main course. People do not like to be rushed. When a table is settling the bill, ask if everything was okay before you put the payment through. If it wasn’t, apologize, and if it’s a serious complaint, then get the manager t... | Wait at least five minutes after they’ve finished their main course before asking if they want dessert, tea, or coffee. People do not like to be rushed! Do not just push a payment through when a table is settling the bill—ask if everything was okay first! And if something wasn’t, be sure to apologize! If the complaint ... | write in a style that is more engaging | others |
The tone of the coverage describes the client either positively or negatively in the media item. Producing coverage with a focal point of what is "beneficial" is preferable. Tone is defined as either beneficial (where the client's profile is understood in a positive manner by the audience) versus (where the audience wi... | Tone of coverage deals with how positively or negatively the client is portrayed in the media item. In the past the terms “positive”, “negative” and “neutral” were used to describe tone. Best practice now requires us instead to think of how “beneficial” the coverage is. Thus tone is described as either beneficial (wher... | describe the use of tone of media coverage in more detail | others |
I am a waitress at the Cafe Creams dessert bar. I haven’t worked there very long but I have a lot of experience working in hospitality. I have worked in a cafe and a restaurant previously and now at this dessert bar. I have to cook and take orders as well as serve food, clear tables, and wash up occasionally. I have to... | I serve tables at Cafe Creams. It is a dessert bar. I have worked there only a short time. My experience in hospitality is expansive. In the past, I worked at a cafe and restaurant. Now, I spend my time working at this dessert bar. I cook, prepare orders, serve food, clean tables, and wash on occasion. Every day, I spe... | write in the style of ernest hemingway | others |
This project was also meant to replicate the results of the Learning Enrichment Foundation and how they undertook a similar initiative last year to help train clients and help them to get back on their feet. This has been such a successful project and we would like to use this model again to see even better results in ... | This project is meant to recreate the powerful results of the Learning Enrichment Foundation. Last year, they started a project to help train their clients and provide them with the necessary tools to get back on their feet. That project was extremely successful and we believe wholeheartedly that we can use their model... | make it more persuasive and appealing to potential clients | others |
There may be new rules implemented in the court cashiering procedure. These can be implemented by new accounting laws applied to courts, bonds, ticket fees and the like. They may also be implemented as the court administrator sees fit. Employees are welcome to make any suggestions that they may notice that could help ... | New rules are being put into the court cashiering procedure! These new rules can be implemented by the new accounting laws that apply to courts, bonds, ticket fees, and so on and so forth. In addition, they can also be acted upon as the court administrator sees fit! Of course, suggestions from employees are most welco... | re-write to make it more engaging | others |
The first step is to research the problem. We would recommend going through litter reports to find the areas of the county with the most litter problems. Talk to recycling center attendants (who see people driving in to drop off their trash) to determine if the litter is from garbage flying out from the back of trucks ... | The initial step is to research the issue. We recommend going through litter reports to find the areas of the county where litter is the most prevalent. It would be best if you spoke to people in the community to get information about the origin of the litter to determine who is littering and what is being littered. Fo... | expand on the topic | others |
Viscometers allow the measurement of the viscosity of a solution. There are various types of viscometers used in laboratories, but one of the most simple is the Ostwald viscometer. The principle of a viscometer is as follows: the time taken for a sample to flow down a narrow capillary between two marker lines is measur... | Viscometers measure how viscous a solution is. There are many different types of viscometers, but the Ostwald viscometer is one of the simplest. Viscometers work by measuring how long a substance takes to flow down a narrow tube compared to how long it takes water to do the same thing. Relative viscosity can then be fo... | break into smaller sentences with varying lengths and engaging style | others |
cuddle+kind was built on Jen and Derek’s values of putting people before profits. “Ethically produced” means that our artisans are paid a fair trade wage, that their work conditions are safe and clean, and that their hours are reasonable. Our president Jim Chiang makes regular trips to Peru to ensure that all our knitt... | cuddle+kind, built on Jen and Derek’s values of putting people before profits, is a great beacon for other business to implement this more humane style of business. “Ethically produced” means that artisans are paid a fair trade wage, that their work conditions are safe and clean, and that their hours are reasonable. Th... | Sound more optimistic | others |
Touching more on the subject of lighting, try to use the same color light. Lights are rated in color from warm to cool. Warm lights are yellowish red in tint, and cool lights are white or blue colors. They are rated in degrees Kelvin. The lower the degree K the warmer the light. Mixing cool and warm lights might pr... | Regarding lighting, it is imperative to use the same color light. Lights are rated in color on a scale from warm to cool. On a color scale, warm lights are yellowish-red in tint, whereas cool lights are white or blue colors. Lights are rated in degrees Kelvin; the lower the light rates in Kelvin, the warmer the light. ... | rewrite as an academic research paper | others |
The next step to remember is that when you hear a siren, you must press the response buttons. There are two buttons: one on the front and one on the back. They must be pressed and released at the same time to be effective. The patient has approximately forty-five seconds to do so before treatment is administered. A sir... | It is critical that when a patient hears a siren, they respond correctly by pressing the response buttons. There are two buttons: one on the front and one on the back. They must be pressed and released simultaneously to be effective. The patient has approximately forty-five seconds to do so before treatment is administ... | write in style of a medical journal | others |
I teach everyday from 6:00 AM to 10:00 AM, and then I am finished with my work day. That means that I can do whatever I want for the rest of the day. I can add additional classes with my second company, which also focuses on teaching ESL. The second company is open 24/7, so the earning potential is quite amazing. That ... | I instruct each day from 6 to 10 in the morning. After that, my workday is complete. I can do anything I want for the rest of my day. I can add classes with my other company, which also teaches ESL. The other company is open all day, every day, which means the revenue opportunity is astounding. I make good money online... | make this more descriptive | others |
I have learned through different seminars and workshops that when trying to convince someone of something, facts and statistics actually don’t work. This idea confuses many scientists, because their lives are so data-driven and based on evidence that it’s hard for them to empathize with those people they are trying to ... | Several different seminars and workshops have taught me that facts and statistics are not the best way of trying to convince people to change their minds. Many scientists and other data-minded people struggle with this concept since they so often equate statistics to evidence, and evidence to truth. While there is some... | make sure the instructions are clear and easy to follow | others |
Once you have double checked that all of the submitted equipment matches the plans, then you can go on to compile the submittal. You will open a blank Adobe document and pull in all of the submittals from all of the diffferent vendors. On a small job, this will just be a few documents. On a large job, this will be thou... | So, you are going to have to double check that all of the submitted equipment matches the plans. Afterwards, you can move on and compile the submittal. Next, you are going to open a blank Adobe document. Now, you are going to pull in all of the submittals from all the various vendors. For a small job, this will just ta... | expand on the topic | others |
Although the best way to keep negative energy out of the workplace is to keep it from occurring in the first place, it can still easily be removed from the scenario when it does happen. If a problem arises between you and another team member, please try your best to solve it immediately to avoid any unsettled feelings.... | The most successful way to ensure the workplace is void of negative energy is to keep it from occurring. Negative energy can be removed if it does take place, though. If you have a problem between yourself and a peer, try to remedy the issue immediately to avoid negative feelings. If you cannot do so and would like a m... | make it more personal | others |
First and foremost, we need to pinpoint the utmost problems that are occurring in the workplace. I would like everyone to think about this for a moment, write down which areas you think need addressing, and come tell them to me. . This doesn’t have to be a long exhaustive list. One or two points would work just fine. O... | First things first, my friends, we’ve gotta pinpoint where the biggest problems in the workplace are! So, I’d really appreciate it if everyone just stopped to think on this for a minute, write down some thoughts you’re having about some of our hangups, and then bring them on over to me! Now, this doesn’t have to be a l... | make it more cheerful | others |
In order to have a good sample, you should survey your target audience in the specific geographical location where the services and/or product will be available. You should strive to have a healthy enough sample to keep your error range less than five percent. Basically, you don’t only want to survey a handful of peopl... | If you want your sample to be as good as it can be, it is most recommended to survey your target demographic in the specific region the services and/or product will be able to be purchased. It is most recommended to have a large enough sample to keep your range of error lower than 5%. Essentially, it isn’t recommended ... | make this less casual | others |
When writing a paper, it is imperative to have a centralized focus, or thesis statement. Your thesis statement should be only a sentence or two. It should not be any longer than this. The goal of your thesis statement should be to present an argument and support the main point of your paper. The thesis statement should... | When writing a paper, a centralized focus or thesis statement is extremely important. It's not simply a subject, it often involves an opinion judgement a writer has made regarding a text or experience. These statements should be at most two sentences, with the goal being to state a claim and support the theme of your p... | add more evidence | others |
The first and most common product we offer are circuit breakers. Circuit breakers come in many different sizes and ratings. The three most common things you will need to know to be able to pick the correct circuit breaker for the customer’s application are the voltage, amperage, and available fault current. Once you kn... | The first and most common product we offer are circuit breakers. They come in many different sizes and ratings. The three most common things you will need to know to be able to pick the correct one for the customer’s application are voltage, amperage, and available fault current. Once you know those pieces of informati... | remove the repetition | others |
If you have health concerns, you can work from home. This will limit your exposure to more germs. You can teach ESL online, but there is so much more that you can do. The sky’s the limit when it comes to remote working. I would love to help you find your niche, whether it is teaching online or doing something else. I w... | Hey bud, if you’ve got concerns about your health I totally get that, and maybe you should think about working from home? That’ll limit your contact with germs and sick people at least. There’s seriously so many different kinds of work you can do remotely, teaching ESL online is a good gig for instance, but again the s... | make it more personal and friendly and avoid using the "I would" tone | others |
For the remainder of the trip, the trainees will be doing the on-deck work to sail the ship and cleaning. Meals are prepared by a dedicated cook, and served in watches underway, or in one large group when conditions allow. Duties the trainees take part in under the supervision of the crew include the line handling, fur... | Fer the remainder o' the trip, the trainees will do the on-deck work to sail the ship an' clean. Meals be prepared by a dedicated cook an' served in watches underway or in one large crew when conditions allow. Duties the trainees take part in under the supervision o' the crew include line 'andling, furlin' an' loosin' ... | Say this like a pirate | others |
I work with a few companies, all from my computer, and earn from $20 to $40 per hour. My job is to listen to the students read, teach them new vocabulary words, correct their pronunciation, and help them to have fun while learning English. Students are in a fun, encouraging, and playful environment and build a relation... | If you are looking for rewarding work from home that pays well, consider teaching English as a second language. You can be an independent contractor and work with several companies from your computer. I typically earn between $20 to $40 an hour. The responsibilities of the role include listening to the students read, t... | elaborate on the job requirements and responsiblities and make it attractive to qualified candidates | others |
LifeVests, made by ZOLL, are a type of external defibrillator worn to protect against the risk of sudden cardiac arrest. People who have a low ejection fraction, or decreased heart function, are at risk for arrhythmias that can cause sudden death. While a defibrillator is the most common way to protect yourself if this... | “LifeVest” brand external defibrillators are produced by the biomedical company “ZOLL”. They are a form of external defibrillator worn by users to lessen the risk of a sudden cardiac arrest. Individuals with poor heart health, including low ejection fractions, dangerous arrhythmias, or simply decreased heart function c... | add more technical details | others |
One thing guests might ask you is if they can see the questions in advance and the answer is no. We want guests to genuinely answer from the top of their heads, and not to use pre-scripted answers about their opinions. I cannot stress this point enough. It’s perfectly acceptable to give someone a general idea of what t... | One question guests may have is whether they can see the questions ahead of time, and the answer is a big no. This is because we want guests to respond honestly and spontaneously, without using pre-scripted responses about their opinions. I cannot emphasize this enough. It’s okay to give someone a general idea of the i... | make this more persuasive | others |
John, I’ve finished deploying the new SharePoint 2013 farm and wanted to send you an update about what was done and any issues encountered. The official cleaned-up build document with proper formatting is to be sent later, these are just the rough notes. | Dear John, I have completed the deployment of the latest SharePoint 2013 farm and wanted to offer an update about what was accomplished and problems faced while working on it. The official polished and formatted document will be sent later, and please know that these are merely unpolished notes. | re-write this to be more polite | others |
I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again: you must find a good research partner that allows you to afford this invaluable information. Spend less on the actual development and execution of ads by knowing and understanding the voice of the customer. The best companies in the world focus on understanding who their custo... | I have stated it previously and I will once more: you need to look for a solid research associate that lets you afford this extremely valuable information. Put less funds into the actual creation and execution of ads by being aware and comprehending the voice of the consumer. The top corporations in the world have a go... | add more pros and cons | others |
Of course with marketing, getting the message across is key. We work with Google Ads and social media, and use Buzzfeed-type articles, which work very well for us to create those viral articles that reach millions. It is all about shareability, teaching something new and creating those moments that people remember. Wit... | Effectively communicating your message is vital in marketing. We partner with Google Ads and social media and use BuzzFeed-type articles, which are beneficial for us, who construct viral articles with a readership of millions. The priority when creating this sort of content is shareability. The goal should be to create... | add more tips | others |
In the long term, I’d like to franchise this and get it all over the United States, so I need to know where your head is at. I know that will be a lot of work, but eventually you and I could step back and just manage the original bakery once we’ve hired someone we trust to take care of the franchising. I don’t want a M... | Long term, I think that we can make this into a franchise and take it across the United States, so I wanna know what your thoughts are on that. I know it’s gonna take a lot of work, but eventually we’ll make it to the point where we can just step back and focus on running the original location once we’ve hired people t... | rewrite as self-motivating | others |
The first step is to check for orders of the day. Samples are submitted into the receipt fridge for collection. Check that the customer has filled out the receipt form and cross-check this with the samples in the fridge. Next, we submit the samples to our LIMS system (Laboratory Information Management System). Here we ... | Check for the day's orders as you begin. Samples are collected in the receipt fridge. Verify if the client has completed the receipt form and cross-check with the samples in the fridge. The next step is submitting the samples to our LIMS (Laboratory Information Management System). This is where we compare the samples t... | make sure the instructions are clear and easy to follow | others |
Your first responsibility will be to schedule and lead the monthly meetings. This task involves the creation of an agenda throughout the month to address any issues that are brought up to you or any requests to add an item to the agenda. It should also include any items that have been tabled from a previous meeting. A ... | The creation of a schedule in order to lead monthly meetings will be your primary responsibility. This task pertains to formation of an agenda that extends through the whole month so that any issues that are raised or requests to include an item into the agenda can be addressed. Items that have been tabled from previou... | make this more technical | others |
When an application is designed, the security requirements should be explicit and testable. A requirement that is not testable is just a wish. Any good requirements can be proven to be true or false. Security and penetration testing need to be considered early in the process, because the tools and architecture of the a... | Security requirements for prospective applications need to be explicit and testable. Good requirements can be proven true or false, while requirements that aren't testable are merely desires. Security and penetration need to be considered early, because the tools and architecture everything else is built on will need t... | Make this more concise | others |
As an expert, I would recommend Facebook and Instagram. But I also predict the future growth of YouTube. YouTube and its video content is increasing every day. People prefer to see videos rather than to read. It is easier to do in their daily lives and much more engaging. It allows them to relate to the video and to th... | Though I recommend Facebook and Instagram, YouTube's growth is evident in people's preference to watch videos rather than read. They're more apt to continue their daily activities while relating to the person or product in the video. | Summarize the passage in 1-2 sentences | others |
Bonus tip: know that you will screw up. We all do! It’s normal, as parents and as homeschoolers, to make a bad decision or miss something. You will often feel that you should have done better. It’s okay — just like it is when you are learning how to raise your kids through their various stages of childhood — to make mi... | Here’s some free advice: know that you’re gonna screw up, and when you do, know that it’s because you’re a terrible parent. Just kidding! We all make mistakes, it's completely normal as both parents and homeschoolers to miss something or botch a call every once in a while. You’re going to feel like you should have done... | add a joke | others |
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