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Though it is called the Fire Mouse Pokémon, Cyndaquil bears a closer relationship to the egg-laying mammal (monotreme) echidna than the mouse. Like all members of its family line, Cyndaquil is covered in flame-resistant fur, however the red 'spots' have special qualities about them. When Cyndaquil becomes angry or scared, it can focus its internal energy, causing flames to erupt from the special bright red vent fur. | Though it is called the Fire Mouse Pokémon, Cyndaquil bears a closer resemblance to the echidna, [porcupine or hedgehog than the mouse. Although it is not covered in physical spines like these animals, when Cyndaquil is frightened or angry, it can focus its internal energy to produce "spines" of flame from the red vent spots on its back. Cyndaquil's fur is flame-resistant, as is that of the other Pokemon in its evolutionary line. | rephrase most of the prose | wiki |
As such, Anything Goes Martial Arts is not confined to a single way of thinking or philosophy when it comes to martial arts combat. This gives the practitioner of Anything Goes Martial Arts the advantage of adaptability and unpredictability in a fight since he or she would ideally know moves and techniques from many different schools that complement each other, minimising perceptible weaknesses. It is interesting to note that the philosophy of Anything Goes Martial Arts is similar to that of many martial arts used by many real-life mixed martial artists, most of whom cross-train in many different disciplines to create a balanced, well-rounded fighting style. In this respect, it is probably the closer of the two systems to the original school of Happosai, since the latter also prefers to go to the air when fighting. The Saotome school is also host to a number of offbeat, diversionary techniques named after animals, such as the "Crouch of the Wild Tiger", which are a hallmark of the Saotome school. The school also has two sealed martial arts developed by Genma Saotome, the Yamasenken and Umisenken. | As such, it is not confined to a single way of thinking or philosophy when it comes to combat. This gives the practitioner the advantage of adaptability and unpredictability in a fight since he or she would ideally know moves and techniques from many different schools that complement each other, minimizing perceptible weaknesses. This philosophy is similar to that of real-life mixed martial artists, most of whom cross-train in many different disciplines to create a balanced, well-rounded fighting style. Anything Goes Martial Arts also has several subsets, separately developed by Soun, Genma, and Happosai. In general, the Saotome School is the more aerial of the two branches, with practitioners capable of performing feats of acrobatics during their fights. In this respect, it is probably the closer of the two systems to the original version created by Happosai, who prefers to go to the air when fighting. The Saotome School is also host to several offbeat, diversionary techniques named after animals, such as the "Crouch of the Wild Tiger." It also contains two sealed martial arts developed by Genma, the Yamasenken, and Umisenken. | Copy edit the article for grammar and punctuation. Elaborate on the differences between the schools. | wiki |
Synaptic plasticity, refers to a chemical synapse's ability to undergo changes that will ultimately strengthen or weaken connections between neurons. Heterosynaptic Plasticity, is also known as modulatory input-dependent plasticity. Modulatory interneurons distinguish heterosynaptic plasticity mechanisms from homosynaptic. These interneurons can affect many post synaptic targets so when they are inducted in the heterosynaptic plasticity, the change in synaptic strength may not be restricted to one synapse. | Synaptic plasticity, refers to a chemical synapse's ability to undergo changes in strength. However, in the case of heterosynaptic plasticity, the activity of a particular neuron leads to changes in the strength of synaptic connections between another pair of neurons A number of distinct forms of heterosynaptic plasticity have been found in a variety of brain regions and organisms. These different forms of heterosynaptic plasticity contributes to a variety of neural processes including associative learning, the development of neural circuits, and homeostasis of synaptic input. Interneurons can affect many post synaptic targets so when they are inducted in the heterosynaptic plasticity, the change in synaptic strength may not be restricted to one synapse. | Provide additional information in the introduction | wiki |
Dr. Al-Suwaiyel was the President of King Abdulaziz City for Science and Technology (KACST) from July 2007 till January 2015. The Governor of Communications and Information Technology Commission (CITC) from March 2003 till June 2007. Vice President for Research Institutes at King Abdulaziz City for Science and Technology (KACST) from 1990 to 2003. A Professor and Dean of Computer Science and Engineering College at King Fahd University of Petroleum & Minerals (KFUPM) from 1972 to 1990. | Dr. Al-Suwaiyel was a Professor and Dean of Computer Science and Engineering College at King Fahd University of Petroleum & Minerals (KFUPM) from 1972 to 1990. He was the Vice President for Research Institutes at King Abdulaziz City for Science and Technology (KACST) from 1990 to 2003. From March 2003 until June 2007 he was the Governor of Communications and Information Technology Commission (CITC). From July 2007 till January 2015 Dr. Al-Suwaiyel was the President of King Abdulaziz City for Science and Technology (KACST). | Rearrange the order of information. | wiki |
Polymorphism is important in the development of pharmaceutical ingredients. Many drugs receive regulatory approval for only a single crystal form or polymorph. In a classic patent case the pharmaceutical company GlaxoSmithKline defended its patent for the polymorph type II of the active ingredient in Zantac against competitors while that of the polymorph type I had already expired. Polymorphism in drugs can also have direct medical implications. Medicine is often administered orally as a crystalline solid and dissolution rates depend on the exact crystal form of a polymorph. Even a speck of the lower energy polymorph could convert large stockpiles of ritonavir into the medically useless inactive polymorph, and this caused major issues with production which ultimately were only solved by reformulating the medicine into gelcaps and tablets, rather than the original capsules. | Drugs receive regulatory approval for only a single polymorph. In a classic patent dispute, the GlaxoSmithKline defended its patent for the polymorph type II of the active ingredient in Zantac against competitors while that of the polymorph type I had already expired. Polymorphism in drugs can also have direct medical implications sincce dissolution rates depend on the polymorph. The antiviral drug ritonavir exists as two polymorphs, which differ greatly in efficacy. Such issues were solved by reformulating the medicine into gelcaps and tablets, rather than the original capsules. | Rewrite the section on ritonavir | wiki |
That's one of the reasons why keyboard macros are preferred over the mouse ones. However, there are some recorders that do attempt to analyze user actions, trying to record mouse activity in window-related, not screen-related coordinates, for instance. Or to detect, exactly what widget was clicked or pressed by a user. | That's one of the reasons for preferring keyboard macros over the mouse-oriented ones. However, some recorders do attempt to analyze user actions, trying to record mouse activity in window-related, not screen-related coordinates, for instance, or to detect exactly what widget a user selected. One such macro recorder which records the screenshot of the window is available from "Mouse Recorder;" it can be really helpful to edit / analyze the recorded macro. | Improve the wording. | wiki |
: As of December 2020, Google searches for "current caliph of Islam" or similar phrases may display "Mirza Masroor Ahmad". This is because Google incorrectly interprets Wikipedia's article on the Ahmadiyya Caliphate. This issue is caused by Google, not Wikipedia. We cannot fix this; only Google can. Please do not post on Wikipedia pages about this. How can we fix this?: You can report this to Google by using the "Feedback" button on the Google search results. The Wikipedia articles do not contain this claim. | As of December 2020, Google searches for "current caliph of Islam" or similar phrases may incorrectly display "Mirza Masroor Ahmad". This issue is caused by Google incorrectly interpreting Wikipedia's article on the Ahmadiyya Caliphate. This issue is caused by Google's search algorithm. It is not caused by Wikipedia, nor is it something that we have the ability to fix. Please do not post on Wikipedia pages about this issue. There is nothing that we can do, and such posts will only waste your time and go ignored. How can this be resolved? You can report this issue to Google directly by using the "Feedback" button on the Google search results page. The Wikipedia articles that google displays as a result do not contain the information claimed there. This is an issue that Google must work on in order for it to be resolved. | Rewrite and expand the text to be more clear and readable. | wiki |
Bae Youn Joo (born October 26, 1990) is an internationally elite badminton player from South Korea. Bae Youn Joo grew up in Masan, South Gyeongsang Province, South Korea. She joined the South Korea national team in 2007 and won her first national title in 2009. | Bae Youn-joo (Hangul: 배연주) (born October 26, 1990 in Masan, Gyeongsangnam-do) is an internationally elite badminton player from South Korea. Bae first gained international attention in 2006 when she reached the semifinals in the women's singles and won the gold medal as a member of the South Korean mixed team at the BWF World Junior Championships. Bae joined the South Korea national team in 2007 and won her first national title in 2009. | Add "Early life and career" section | wiki |
The project started in October 2017 and is based on intensive training in Java, Javascript and OutSystems programming technologies. The bootcamps are the responsibility of two of the companies based in Praia da Vitória (Academia de Código and ITUp) and the students are financed 100% by the Regional Government of the Azores. Taking advantage of the competitive advantages that the island and the Region can offer in the development of information technologies, 22 companies have been hosted there so far. | The project started in October 2017, and is based on intensive training in Java, Javascript, and OutSystems programming technologies. The bootcamps are of the responsibility of two of the companies based in Praia da Vitória (Academia de Código and ITUp) and the students are financed 100% by the Regional Government of the Azores, which aims to create 420 jobs, using local talent, with this initiative. The courses have attracted mainly young people from all areas and levels of education but are open to all of those who have an interest in their professional reorientation. Taking advantage of the competitive and business-friendly environment that the island and the region can offer in the development of information technologies, 22 companies have made a base there so far. | Copyedit for grammar and punctuation | wiki |
The purpose of the test is to distinguish between a DNA sequence evolving randomly versus one evolving under directional selection. A randomly evolving DNA sequence contains mutations with no effect on the fitness and survival of an organism, while a mutation under selection does. The randomly evolving mutations are called "neutral", while the mutations under selection are "non-neutral". | The purpose of the test is to distinguish between a DNA sequence evolving randomly versus one evolving under a non-random process, including directional selection or balancing selection, demographic expansion or contraction, genetic hitchhiking, or introgression. A randomly evolving DNA sequence contains mutations with no effect on the fitness and survival of an organism. The randomly evolving mutations are called "neutral", while mutations under selection are "non-neutral". | Include more examples of DNA sequences that evolve under a non-random process. | wiki |
Bruno Nagler started with helicopter design with wind tunnel experiments in 1926. Nagler developed the first practical use of a swash plate. The Nagler NH-120 was developed to test the concept of counter-acting rotor torque with a small separate rotor. The engine was mounter above the main rotor on a shaft, and the counter-torque rotor was mounted above it. The NH-160 changed the configuration with a conventional helicopter engine and rotor layout, with the exception of the smaller counter-torque rotor mounted under the fuselage between the landing skids. A series of disc brakes controlled differential speeds between the two rotors, allowing yaw control. A small tail surface stabilizes the aircraft in forward flight. The NH-160 proved to be much more stable in tests then the NH-120 with a higher center of gravity. The smaller lower rotor spins at a higher rpm, with about 60 percent of the load. The upper rotor is adjustable for lift control. | Bruno Nagler began wind tunnel experiments into helicopter design in 1926 and developed the first practical swash plate. The Nagler NH-120 was developed to test the idea of counteracting rotor torque with a small separate rotor. The engine was mounted above the main rotor on a shaft, and the anti-torque rotor was mounted above both. The NH-160 had a conventional helicopter engine and rotor layout, with the exception of the smaller anti-torque rotor mounted under the fuselage between the landing skids. Yaw control on both was effected through changing the difference in rotational speed between the two rotors, using a series of disc brakes. A small tail surface provided directional stability in forward flight. The smaller rotor spins at a higher rpm, with about 60 percent of the load. The main rotor is adjustable for lift control. The NH-160 proved to be much more stable in tests than the NH-120 which had a higher center of gravity. | Copyedit for cohesion and flow; change the order of a few paragraphs and/or sections. | wiki |
One day, while Hana is playing the piano, two British soldiers enter the villa. One of the soldiers is Kip, an Indian Sikh who has been trained as a sapper or combat engineer, specializing in bomb and ordnance disposal. Kip explains that the Germans often booby-trapped musical instruments with bombs, and that he will stay in the villa to rid it of its dangers. | Two British soldiers enter the scene at the villa when Hana plays a piano. Kip, an Indian Sikh trained as a sapper or combat engineer that specializes in bomb and ordnance disposal, explains that pianos were often booby-trapped by the Germans. So he decides to stay in the villa to rid it of its dangers. | Make the plot more concise. | wiki |
Mega-splay fault refers to a large scale out-of-sequence thrust. It was originally a frontal thrust and functioned as an imbricate thrust system (i.e. a thrust system that consists of several closely spaced thrust faults). It usually branches into several thrust faults in the shallower part of the transition zone between the trench and the stable continent. Compared to normal thrust faults, the mega-splay fault tend to have higher continuity. | Mega-splay faults are large scale out-of-sequence thrusts. They were originally frontal thrusts and functioned as imbricate thrust systems (i.e. thrust systems that consist of several closely spaced thrust faults). Compared to normal thrust faults, the mega-splay faults tend to have higher continuity. | Change "Mega-splay fault refers to" to "Mega-splay faults are" | wiki |
She is extremely kind, calm, and polite, but is also very shy and fearful of almost anything. However, she occasionally becomes assertive and forceful when her friends are in danger or mistreated. She represents the Element of Kindness through her compassion for other ponies and creatures. As a pegasus, Fluttershy is a very weak flier and prefers to live closer to the ground in her cottage near Ponyville, as opposed to other pegasi who live in the floating city of Cloudsdale. | Bearing the Element of Kindness, she is extremely compassionate, calm, and polite, but is also very timid and fearful of almost anything. However, she occasionally demonstrates a more authoritative personality whenever her friends are mistreated. As a pegasus, Fluttershy is a very weak flier and lives on the ground in a cottage near Ponyville, as opposed to other pegasi who live in the floating city of Cloudsdale. | Rephrase the character description. | wiki |
One of the most interesting points about modern street theatre is its unique sociopolitical place. People who might not have ever been to, or been able to afford to go to, the "legitimate" theatre can watch a street show. By virtue of where the shows take place, their audience is made up of anyone and everyone who wants to watch. If an audience member can not afford it, then it is free. | Street theatre allows people who might not have ever been to, or been able to afford to go to, traditional theatre. The audience is made up of anyone and everyone who wants to watch and for most performances is free entertainment. | Rewrite from a more neutral point of view. Copyedit for brevity. | wiki |
In the early stage of hydroelectric development on the Fraser’s tributaries, little focus was paid to the impact on surrounding ecosystems and salmon habitats of the river and its tributaries. Even when construction was underway, there was little realization of the extent the Kenny dam and smelter plant would have on the Nechako River region. Such impacts included deforestation, disruption of existing ecosystems during the construction of the transmission line to BC’s coast, and habitat loss during the flooding land for the dam’s reservoir. In the BC fisheries industry’s efforts to protect the livelihood of sockeye salmon populations to protect the economic sector of the province, little attention was paid to the environmental effects separate from fishery concerns. The construction of a dam had broader implications for the natural health of the region that were not adequately assessed during the proposal process. | In the early stage of hydroelectric development on the Fraser’s tributaries, little was known about the impact the dam's construction would have on surrounding ecosystems and salmon habitats. Apart from salmon habitat loss, the dam impacted surrounding agricultural land, caused deforestation, disrupted existing ecosystems during the construction of the transmission line to BC’s coast, and caused habitat loss in the flooding of the dam reservoir. The construction of the dam had broader implications for the natural health of the region that were not adequately assessed during the proposal process. Before the construction of the dam, there was an abundance of migratory salmon in the Nechako River. However, the Kenney dam had effects on the water levels of the river, causing negative effects for salmon migration and the health of the BC fisheries industry. | rewrite for neutral point of view | wiki |
Acquisition' is based on actual communicative experience with the language in the 'real world'. 'Learning' occurs through formal training and cannot be used to communicate 'meaning'. 'Learning' is useful, however, because it monitors the proper grammatical use of 'aquired' language knowledge. | Acquisition' occurs in communicative situations in the 'real world'. 'Acquired' knowledge is readily available to communicate meaning. 'Learning' occurs through formal training (the classroom); it cannot be used to communicate 'meaning'. Instead, it monitors the proper grammatical use of 'aquired' language knowledge. | Provide more of a definition for "Acquisition." | wiki |
The general theme is a family history which highlights the differences between father and son, duty to the public over family, and the trials and tribulations of women, particularly of courtesans. Author Ashis Nandy noted that, apart from the conflict between Akbar and his son, there is also an "unwritten alliance" between Akbar and Bahar that compounds the problem for Anarkali. He also said that it highlighted the "idea of justice and the notion of unconditional love" to uphold tradition. The song "Pyar Kiya To Darna Kya" rendered by Anarkali is an indication of her defiance of societal norms. A notable change in the theme is that while the earlier films made on Anarakali on the basis on Imtiaz Ali Taj’s story ended as tragedies, K.Asif gave a happy ending to the film. Akbar gives amnesty to Anarkali (meaning the "pomegranate blossom") by allowing her to escape through a secret route of tunnel below a false bottom of the wall. Film scholar Stephen Teo posits that Mughal-e-Azam is one of the exemplary of what he calls "monumental style", a way of appropriating history and heritage to emphasize the national identity. | The general themes within "Mughal-e-Azam" are a family history that highlights the differences between father and son, duty to the public over family, and the trials and tribulations of women, particularly of courtesans. He is shown pulling a string to rock a swing with an idol of Krishna on it; this is set to the song sequence of "Mohe Pangat Pe." Throughout the film, there is a distinct depiction of Muslims as the ruling class who not only dressed differently but also spoke in complex Persianized dialogue. Film scholar Stephen Teo posits that "Mughal-e-Azam" is an example of what he calls "monumental style" - a way of appropriating history and heritage to emphasize the national identity. | Correct grammar and spelling, improve style, cohesion, and tone. | wiki |
Trenchard, Thomas Whitaker was born on December 13, 1863 in Centreton, New Jersey, United States. Son of William B. and Marie G. Trenchard. He graduated South Jersey Institute in 1882. Practiced at Bridgeton, New Jersey. Married Harriet M. Manning, November 17, 1891. Appointed law judge of Cumberland Company by Governor Voorhees, 1899, reappointed by Governor Murphy, 1904. Appointed justice of Supreme Court to fill vacancy, June 8, 1906. Appointed for full term, January 15, ’1907. | Trenchard, Thomas Whitaker was born on December 13, 1863, in Centreton Pittsgrove Township in Salem County, New Jersey, the son of William B. and Marie G. Trenchard. He graduated from South Jersey Institute in 1882 and was admitted to the bar in 1886, becoming a counselor in 1893. Trenchard practiced at Bridgeton, New Jersey, where he acted as City Solicitor from 1892-1899. He married his wife Harriet M. Manning on November 17, 1891. Trenchard was appointed law judge of Cumberland Company by Governor Voorhees in 1899 and reappointed by Governor Murphy in 1904; he was appointed Justice of the Supreme Court on June 8, 1906, to fill a vacancy, and for a full term on January 15, 1907. | Add more details re education and career. | wiki |
Chemical solvents also present the problem of being an explosion hazard. :: Soxhlet extraction is an extraction method that uses chemical solvents. Oils from the algae are extracted through repeated washing, or percolation, with an organic solvent such as hexane or petroleum ether, under reflux in a special glassware. The costs of this extraction process are estimated to be much greater than hexane extraction. The enzymatic extraction can be supported by ultrasonication. The combination "sonoenzymatic treatment" causes faster extraction and higher oil yields. Many commercial manufacturers of vegetable oil use a combination of mechanical pressing and chemical solvents in extracting oil. | Chemical solvents also present an explosion hazard. Oil from the algae is extracted through repeated washing, or percolation, with an organic solvent such as hexane or petroleum ether, under reflux. The value of this technique is that the solvent is reused for each cycle. Enzymatic extraction uses enzymes to degrade cell walls using water as the eventual solvent. This makes fractionation of the oil much easier. Costs are estimated to be much greater than hexane extraction. Osmotic shock is a sudden reduction in osmotic pressure. This can cause cells in the solution to rupture. | Solvents are separated from methods. | wiki |
Crowded, unsanitary, and terrible, the institution appears awful to Petey. When nurses care for him, they do it lazily and improperly, some even abusing him. A male nurse named Esteban begins to work at the institution and quickly befriends Petey. | The nurses in the crowded and unsanitary institution care for him lazily and improperly, some even abusing him. A new male nurse named Esteban quickly befriends Petey. | Rewrite this to be more concise. | wiki |
The New York Hospital had been founded in 1771 by a Royal Charter granted by King George III of England. It had been the second oldest hospital in the United States. It was long associated with Weill Cornell Medical College. | The New York Hospital was founded in 1771 by a Royal Charter granted by King George III of England and was associated with Weill Cornell Medical College. It was the second oldest hospital in the United States. | change tenses and reordered sentences for clarity | wiki |
Miller and Whitehead had felt that Atari undervalued its coding team, leading them to leave the company to start Activision in 1979. Activision was the first company to operate independent the game console companies, and one of a few companies to survive the video game crash of 1983, though they still posted $ 18 million dollars in losses the following year. The duo was unable to attract investment in the disastrous video game climate, and ultimately self-funded their new venture. | Miller and Whitehead believed that Atari undervalued its coding team, leading them to leave the company to start Activision in 1979. Activision was the first company to operate independent game console companies, and one of a few companies to survive the video game crash of 1983, though they still posted $ 18 million dollars in losses the following year. The duo was unable to attract investment in the video game climate of the time and ultimately self-funded their new venture. The pair hired CEO Tom Frisina to handle managerial duties and began to each work on their own launch titles. They also hired Mimi Doggett, a veteran visual artist from Atari, to compete with other developers on graphical detail. | Add information about employees hired. | wiki |
This relative change, from a lower gear to a higher gear, is normally expressed as a percentage. This measure is independent of what system is used to measure the gears. Cycling tends to feel more comfortable if nearly all gear changes have more or less the same percentage difference; a larger percentage difference may be acceptable for lower gears where the absolute difference is not too large. Modern derailers can handle such combinations. Racing cyclists often have close-range gears with a difference of around 7%. Many general-purpose gears have a difference of around 15%. Differences of 25% or more require a very substantial change in cadence and often feel excessive. | This relative change, from a lower gear to a higher gear, is normally expressed as a percentage and is independent of what system is used to measure the gears. Cycling tends to feel more comfortable if nearly all gear changes have more or less the same percentage difference. For example, a change from a 13-tooth sprocket to a 15-tooth sprocket (15.4%) feels very similar to a change from a 20-tooth sprocket to a 23-tooth sprocket (15%), even though the latter has a larger absolute difference. To achieve such consistent relative differences the absolute gear ratios should be in logarithmic progression. Because sprockets must have a whole number of teeth it is impossible to achieve a perfect progression; for example, the seven sprockets 14-16-18-21-24-28-32 have an average step size of around 15% but with actual steps varying between 12.5% and 16.7%. Racing cyclists often have gears with a difference of around 7%; this allows fine adjustment of pedaling speed to suit the conditions. | Provide additional information. | wiki |
At the same time, nearby, Mr. Shūsaku Matsuno, catches Ms. Misuzu Wakatsuki wearing a student's uniform and mistakes her for a student. However, as she explains to him the compliments the uniform gets her, Mr. Matsuno makes her wear a lab coat to make her easy to tell apart from the students. He is then approached by the tardy Ms. Yamashita who tells him that their school has a lot of weird teachers. | At the same time, Mr. Shūsaku Matsuno mistakes Ms. Misuzu Wakatsuki for a student since she is wearing a student's uniform. She tries to justify the uniform and Mr. Matsuno compromises by making her wear a teacher's lab coat over the uniform. Mr. Matsuno is then approached by the tardy Ms. Yamashita who teases their school's weird teachers. | Edit the episode's details to make it more readable. | wiki |
To these he joined other territories and the whole region incorporated under Bohemian Kingdom in 1355. The center of this area was in Sulzbach-Rosenberg and Charles intensively supported the area through tax reliefs for craftsmen and traders, as well as other privileges for settlements and markets. On the way connecting Prague and Nuremberg he also built the Lauf Castle, inside survived 112 coats of arms of the Czech Kingdom. It is the most precious collection of Czech and Moravian heraldry. In 1373 Charles ceded the greater part of area back to Wittelsbachs in exchange for Brandenburg. | To these he joined other territories and the whole region incorporated into the Crown of Bohemia in 1355. Administrative center of this area was in town Sulzbach-Rosenberg, while for representational purposes Charles built the Lauf Castle. The king intensively supported the area through tax reliefs for craftsmen and traders, as well as other privileges for settlements and markets. In 1373 Charles ceded the greater part of area back to Wittelsbachs in exchange for the Electorate of Brandenburg. | Make the article more concise | wiki |
During his short stint with the company, he recorded Sabroso, composed by salsa and merengue songs. He offered 49 concerts in 9 days, including a major one in front of more than one hundred thousand people in the touristic hotspot Mar del Plata. Due to the fame of the venue for hosting mainly boxing matches, the concerts where conceptualized with boxing elements. Bueno performed dressed in boxing trunks and made his entrance to the stage wearing a rob and walking through a hall in the crowd to the ring-themed stage, emulating a boxing match. With an estimated length of two-and-a-half hours, the show was composed by the original repertoire of Bueno, as well as songs classic to the cuarteto genre, as a tribute to his early influence Cuarteto Leo. | During his short stint with the company, he recorded Sabroso, composed of salsa and merengue songs. He performed 49 concerts in 9 days, including one in front of more than 100 thousand people in the tourist hotspot of Mar del Plata. Due to the venue's fame for hosting boxing matches, the concerts were conceptualized with boxing elements. Bueno performed dressed in boxing trunks and made his entrance to the stage wearing a robe and walking through a hall in the crowd to the ring-themed stage, emulating a boxing match. | Clean up some of the translation | wiki |
New Game + can also be used as an unlock trigger for replaying the game at a higher difficulty, such as in the various Mega Man Battle Network games. Some games include New Game + features where you go through the entire game as a different character such as in Viewtiful Joe and '. Although this type of play is usually found in role playing games, there are non-RPGs with this feature. The Ratchet and Clank series for example allows subsequent playthroughs at an increased difficulty, but also allows Weapons to be further upgraded, and the ability to gain more currency than what is allowed in the initial playthrough. Also, upon completion of some Ratchet and Clank games, the choice to play the game in First-Person is unlocked. This feature when implemented comletely changes the genre of the series from Platformer / Third-Person shooter to FPS. In a variant of New Game Plus, some games, such as Resident Evil 4, Parasite Eve 2, and the Metal Gear Solid series contains items that are unlocked at the end of a play-through and can accessed in a subsequent play-through. Parasite Eve and Vagrant Story, among others, contain maps and areas within the game that can only be accessed after completing the game once and starting a subsequent game. In a twist on the formula, in Dead Rising, if a player dies, they can start a new game with the same stats and abilities they had before death. | This feature can also be used as an unlock trigger for replaying the game at a higher difficulty, such as in the various Mega Man Battle Network games and '. Some New Game + variations feature twists on the original game's campaign. In Viewtiful Joe and ', completion of the game unlocks a new character on each difficulty and the player has the option to either start a new game as a new character or to use the original protagonist. Parasite Eve and Vagrant Story, among others, contain areas of the game that can only be accessed after completing the game. Additionally, completing some games such as Resident Evil 4, and the Metal Gear Solid series can unlock items that can be accessed in a subsequent play-through. Although this type of play is usually found in role-playing games, other genres also use this feature. The Ratchet and Clank series allows subsequent play-throughs at an increased difficulty and the ability to further upgrade weaponry. Also, upon completion of some Ratchet and Clank games, the choice to play the game in a first-person perspective is unlocked. | Edit for organization and structure in the New Game Plus section. Edit for conciseness. | wiki |
Although she is kind, cheerful, and energetic, she has a sad backstory. Her father was a human fisherman, but her mother was a merrow. She disappeared into the sea before Isma could even remember her, although she left a magical charm on the house to protect her daughter. Isma's father raised her by himself, but four years before the arrival of the Seahorse his boat was capsized by a storm and he died, telling Isma on his deathbed that her mother would come back for her someday. The Island's inhabitants believed that Isma was a merrow and feared that they would attract the wrath of the Sea God by having a merrow among them, so the children bullied Isma and the adults shunned her and talked about her behind her back. Despite her strange parentage she seems to be completely human and has no special powers, making her wonder whether magical creatures such as merrows really exist. Because of this she is immediately excited to meet Isidro, Schierke, Puck, and Ivalera because they are living proof for her that magic is real. When the Sea God begins attacking the remaining humans on the Island, Isma takes part in the ensuing battle, during which she learns her true name and gains the ability to take the form of a merrow, and is reunited with her mother. After the sea God is defeated, she decides to accompany her new friends aboard the Seahorse on the voyage to Elfhelm. | Although she is kind, cheerful, and energetic, she was a pariah on her island home. Her father was a human fisherman who fell in love with a merrow woman who returned to the sea just after Isma's birth, though she left a magical charm on the house to protect her daughter. Though Isma's father raised her by himself before he died when his boat capsized during a storm on sea, Isma was ostracized by the people who feared her status as the child of a merrow would invoke the Sea God's wrath. But this made Isma, who appeared human, curious of her maternal heritage and if merrows do exist. Because of this, protected from the Sea God by her mother's magic, Isma was glad to have confirmation when she meets Guts's group when they came to the island. When Isma attempts to help Guts and his group against the Sea God as it begins attacking the remaining humans on the Island, Isma learns her true name and gains the ability to assume merrow form while reunited with her mother. Once the Sea God is killed, her home destroyed In the process, Isma joins Guts's group aboard the Seahorse on their voyage to Elfhelm. | Make this more concise | wiki |
Sharon Green Jackson aka MC Sha-Rock began her career as a b-girl in the 1970’s. She later became an MC / rapper and was coined as The First Female MC of Hip Hop Culture. She is also a founder and ambassador of Hip Hop Culture from the groundbreaking era of Hip Hop Culture and it’s inception. She is the First Female MC / rap artist to record on wax in 1979. In the 1970’s MC Sha-Rock was the First Female MC to be apart of an all male Hip Hop group. This inspired many other Hip Hop groups to Format their groups as such. She is also the First Female MC / rap artist to appear on national television. | Sharon Green Jackson aka MC Sha-Rock is the first female MC/emcee and rapper of hip hop culture. She began her career as a b-girl in the 1970s. She serves as a founder and an ambassador from the inception and groundbreaking era of hip hop culture in the 1970s. She was an original member of the legendary hip hop group, coined the Funky 4 MCs, who later went on to record as the Funky 4 + 1. Sha / Rock hails as the first female rap artist to record a hip hop song on wax. She is also the first female MC/emcee and rapper to appear on national television. | Correct grammatical errors and include more information. | wiki |
From Rock Boys, due to some changes, come the Rebels, complex, as well as accompany Celentano and other singers such as Ricky Clem Sacco and Gianco, start a solo career and in a few years Santercole became the guitarist. Together with other artists such as Don Backy, Pylades and Giancarlo joins in the birth of Clan Celentano Celentano. The first success came with 'Silver Star', published in December 1964, which got good airplay and chart success in early 1965, and then with 'This Old Crazy World'. | The Rock Boys evolved into the Rebels, who backed up Celentano and other singers such as Ricky Clem Sacco and Gianco. Celentano began a solo career, and soon Santercole became the lead guitarist. That was followed by their first success, "Silver Star," published in December 1964, which got good airplay and chart success in early 1965, and then by "This Old Crazy World." | Rewrite the translation for clarity and conciseness. | wiki |
Ranchview has a site which is located between Valley Ranch Parkway South, Valley Ranch Parkway East and Ranchview Drive. Ranchview opened in 2002 starting with 8th and 9th grades only, although high schools in CFB-ISD do not traditionally include 8th grade. The following year, the 8th grade class became the freshman class (the 8th grade class was moved back to Barbara Bush Middle School), and the school continued with the 9th and 10th grades. The school added a grade each year thereafter until reaching full high school status (9–12th grades) in the 2005/2006 school year. Established in 2002, Ranchview High School is the newest of the district’s high schools and serves students in the Irving (including portions of Las Colinas and Valley Ranch), Coppell, and Farmers Branch areas of the school district. The school includes 780 students and 79 professional staff with an average class size of 22 students. | The campus has a site located between Valley Ranch Parkway South, Valley Ranch Parkway East and Ranchview Drive. Ranchview started with 8th and 9th grades only when it opened in 2002. High schools in CFB-ISD do not traditionally include 8th grade, so the following year the 8th grade class became the freshman class, and 8th grade classes were moved back to Barbara Bush Middle School. The school continued its second year with 9th and 10th grades, and added a grade each year thereafter until reaching full high school status (9–12th grades) in the 2005-2006 school year. Ranchview has an average class size of 22 students, and an approximate student-to-staff ratio of 10-to-1. | Reorganize and clean up the article. | wiki |
Carwin is evidently different from his family in that he strives to have an education, especially through means of reading books. His father does nothing but discourages this desire, and expects Carwin to settle for a simple life on the farm. As a way to break away from his father's repression, Carwin continuously sneaks out into the woods at night with books to read by the moonlight. It is on one of these experiences that Carwin hears the echo of his own voice in the valley, giving him the inspiration to learn how to manipulate his voice. | Carwin is different from his family because he wants to have an education, especially through means of reading books. His father, however, discourages this and wishes for Carwin to have a simple agrarian life. In rebellion, Carwin continuously sneaks out into the woods at night with books to read in the moonlight. During one of these escapes, Carwin is inspired to become a biloquist after hearing his echo. | Make it more to the point. | wiki |
Singorgarh fort is located in Damoh district of Madhya Pradesh state in Central India. It is a hill-fort of Garha Kingdom which is spread over hills in a forested area. Singorgarh fort is about 45 & nbsp; km from Jabalpur city, on the way to Damoh town. It was a magnificent fort and residence of Rajgond rulers of Central India. They spend some times of a year in Singorgarh fort. At present, fort is in a ruined condition with no caretaker. It is located inside forest area and there is no proper road to reach the site. By looking at current ruined site, one can realize that during its peak days, thousands of people were living here and fort was spread over large area and many watch towers are still visible in this area. There is pond also in hill-top which was basically for water arrangement. During last war of Garha Kingdom dynasty, under rule of Rani Durgavati, fort received major blow of first attack in June-1564. During those days, Rani Durgavati was staying in same Singorgarh Fort and later shifted to Chouragarh fort of Narsinghpur. | Singorgarh Fort, in the Damoh district of Madhya Pradesh state in Central India, is a hill-fort of Garha Kingdom, spreading over the hills of a forested area. It is about 45 & nbsp; km from Jabalpur city, on the way to Damoh town. It was a magnificent fort and a residence of Rajgond rulers of Central India who spent part of each year there. It is presently in a ruined condition with no caretaker. The site must be accessed by foot, as there is no proper road to it. In its peak years, thousands of people lived at the fort, which was spread over large area. Many of its former watch towers are still visible. There is a pond on the hilltop that provided water. The fort was attacked in June, 1564 during the last war of the Garha Kingdom dynasty, under the rule of Rani Durgavati. At that time, Rani Durgavati, the ruling Queen of Gondwana, resided there; she later moved to Chouragarh Fort in Narsinghpur. | Remove any grammtical errors and stylistic errors. | wiki |
Neumann stated that part of the inspiration on creating the game was from flight instructors in desperate amid the pilot crisis (an era wherein the amount of pilots are decreasing), stating that the franchise is important on the future of aviation. In a CNN interview, Neumann stated: "First and foremost we're making a product for simmers. When you meet pilots a lot of them that say 'you know what? | Neumann also credited flight instructors in desperate amid the pilot crisis (an era wherein the amount of pilots are decreasing) as inspiration for the game, stating that the franchise is important on the future of aviation. Via CNN, he stated: "When you meet pilots a lot of them that say 'you know what? | Rewrite the text for better readability. | wiki |
The 2008 play Socrates on Trial by Andrew Irvine takes a different point of view. Irvine argues that it was because of his loyalty to Athenian democracy that Socrates was willing to accept the verdict of his fellow citizens. As Irvine puts it, “During a time of war and great social and intellectual upheaval, Socrates felt compelled to express his views openly, regardless of the consequences. Waterfield, too, argues that Socrates’ death was a voluntary action motivated by a greater purpose. He argues that Socrates, with his unconventional methods, attempted to resolve the political confusion in Athens. Therefore, he was willing to serve as a “scapegoat,” so that Athens could set aside old disputes and move forward in a new, more harmonious direction. | The play, "Socrates on Trial" (2008), by Andrew Irvine, proposes that for loyalty to Athenian democracy, Socrates was willing to accept the verdict of the citizens of Athens. “During a time of war, and great social and intellectual upheaval, Socrates felt compelled to express his views openly, regardless of the consequences. That Socrates, with his unconventional, intellectual methods, attempted to resolve the political confusion then occurring in the city-state of Athens. Therefore, Socrates willingly was the scapegoat, so that Athens could set aside old disputes and progress towards political harmony and peace. | Rewrite to make the text concise. | wiki |
Berwick and East Lothian was a constituency of the House of Commons of the Parliament of the United Kingdom, until it was replaced by East Lothian and part of Roxburgh and Berwickshire for the 1983 general election. It largely replaced Berwick and Haddington in the 1950 general election. The constituency elected one Member of Parliament (MP), using the first-past-the-post voting system, and covered the counties of Berwickshire and East Lothian. | Berwick and East Lothian was a constituency of the House of Commons of the Parliament of the United Kingdom. It elected one Member of Parliament (MP), using the first past the post system. The constituency was created in 1950 and abolished in 1983. Berwick and East Lothian covered the counties of Berwickshire and East Lothian. It was largely created from Berwick and Haddington and was replaced by East Lothian and part of Roxburgh and Berwickshire for the 1983 general election. | Reorganize the information and expand the text. | wiki |
Rapp founded Rapp-Motorenwerke GmbH on the site of Flugwerke Deutschland after the company went into liquidation. Karl Rapp and Julius Auspitzer founded with an capital stock of RM 200.000 the "Karl Rapp Motorenwerke GmbH" on 28 October 1913. General Consul Auspitzer was the company's sole shareholder. The operational side of the company was managed by Karl Rapp. | Karl Rapp and Julius Auspitzer founded Karl Rapp Motorenwerke GmbH with a capital stock of RM 200.000 on 28 October 1913 on the site of Flugwerke Deutschland (after the company went into liquidation). General Consul Auspitzer was the company's sole shareholder, with the operational side of the company managed by Karl Rapp. | Merge two paragraphs on the founding of the company and edit for grammatical errors. | wiki |
The patient starts to experience shortness of breath, chest tightness or wheezing. When this unexpected symptom occurs, the skill of taking daily medicines and the medicine that is taken may change. Rather than taking an oral medicine daily, a different medication is needed for quick rescue and relief of symptoms. The rescue medication works quickly with an inhaler. | When unexpected symptoms such as wheezing occur, the skill of taking daily medicines and the medicine that is taken may change. Rather than taking an oral medicine daily, an inhaler is needed for quick rescue and relief of symptoms. | Rewrite to make the text concise. | wiki |
Rajiv Gandhi Proudyogiki Vishwavidyalaya, also known by the English name Rajiv Gandhi Technical University and by the name State Technological University of Madhya Pradesh, is an Indian multi-campus affiliating university in Madhya Pradesh. Rajiv Gandhi University (RGU) earlier known as Arunachal University, established in 1984, is the oldest university in the Indian state of Arunachal Pradesh. The foundation stone for the university was laid by the then Prime Minister of India Late Smt. | Rajiv Gandhi Proudyogiki Vishwavidyalaya, also known as Rajiv Gandhi Technical University and State Technological University of Madhya Pradesh, is an Indian multi-campus-affiliated university in Madhya Pradesh. Inaugurated on 18 November 2002, Rajiv Gandhi Centre for Biotechnology (RGCB) is a premier research institute in India, exclusively devoted to research in Molecular Biology and Biotechnology. Rajiv Gandhi Institute of Petroleum Technology, Rae Bareli, Uttar Pradesh. Rajiv Gandhi University (RGU) earlier known as Arunachal University and established in 1984, is the oldest university in the Indian state of Arunachal Pradesh. The foundation stone for the university was laid by Indira Gandhi. | Include information about he Raiv Gandhi Centre for Biotechnology | wiki |
In the nineteenth century, the various railway concessions ordered locomotives to their own specification, usually from British manufacturers. This multiplicity of similar, but different designs, increased manufacturers' costs and slowed production. During the 1890s, British manufacturers had full order books, so Indian railway companies looked to Germany and the United States for locomotives. Largest locomotive to run in India. Highest capacity to hold water as compared to any Garratt in the world. Ten built in 1931 by Beyer Peacock. Four built by Beyer Peacock in 1939. | Nineteenth-century railway companies ordered custom-built locomotives, usually from British manufacturers. The multiplicity of similar-but-not-identical designs increased manufacturing cost and slowed production. During the 1890s, British manufacturers were busy and Indian railway companies looked to Germany and the United States for locomotives. During the early 1970s, they were at the Bhilai (BIA) shed before being withdrawn. | Remove the last two sentences, and mention where and when the locomotives were withdrawn. | wiki |
In addition to who was eating Haute cuisine and what exactly it consisted of, the term can also be defined by the process it took to make and eat it. The French chefs behind the cuisine were educated and trained professionals in the kitchen, further building on the connection between wealth and status and Haute cuisine. In serving the dishes too, the theme of wealth and elitism is enforced. Haute cuisine was served at large social gatherings, something that only wealthy people of high status could hold and participate in. The foods at such gatherings were always presented with attention to detail and in a way that made them look extravagant. | In addition to who was eating Haute cuisine and what exactly it consisted of, the term can also be defined by who was making it and how they were doing so. Professionally trained chefs were quintessential to the birth of Haute cuisine in France. The extravagant presentations and complex techniques that these chefs were known for required ingredients, time, equipment, and therefore money. For this reason, early Haute cuisine was accessible to a small demographic of rich and powerful individuals. Professional French chefs were not only responsible for building and shaping Haute cuisine, but their roles in the cuisine were what differentiated it from regular French cuisine. | Add more to the history section and express the importance of French chefs to the origination of Haute cuisine and its connectiosn to the rich and powerful. | wiki |
However, the original score for Acts 2 and 3 have fortunately survived and therefore only some of the music from Act 1 is now lost. The opera's style is closer to that of Italian baroque opera than pre-classical in nature. However, Arne's orchestration is quite progressive for its day, utilizing strings, bassoons, oboes, trumpets, horns, and drums, with obbligato parts for piccolo, flute, descant recorder and cello. The overture from the work is written in a Handelian style and is one of Arne’s best. Two popular arias from the work are Britannia’s pastoral ballad, "My fond shepherds of late", which is accompanied by muted strings, and the Genius of England’s aria "When all the Attic fire was fled". | However, the original score for Acts 2 and 3 has survived with only some of the music from Act 1 being lost. Stylistically, the opera is closer to that of Italian baroque opera than the pre-classical works being written around the same time; additionally, it has some relationship to the masque or allegory. Arne's orchestration is quite progressive for its day, using strings, bassoons, oboes, trumpets, horns, and drums; it also includes obbligato parts for piccolo, flute, descant recorder and cello. The overture suggests the style of Handel. | Remove any errors and remove the last sentence. | wiki |
This station is served by the Toei Ōedo Line and Tokyo Metro Namboku Line. The Station number is E-22 for the Ōedo Line and N-04 for the Namboku Line. The station opened on September 26, 2000 as part of the Namboku Line, with the Ōedo Line platforms opening on December 12 of the same year. The Namboku Line platform is an island platform with two tracks. The ticket gate is on the first floor underground and the platform on the third floor underground. The Toei Ōedo Line platform is also an island platform with two tracks. The ticket gate is on the fourth floor underground and the platform on the sixth floor underground. | This station is served by the Tokyo Metro Namboku Line and Toei Ōedo Line. The station number is N-04 for the Namboku Line and E-22 for the Ōedo Line. The Namboku Line station consists of an island platform serving two tracks. The ticket gates are on the first basement floor and the platforms are on the third basement floor. The Toei Ōedo Line station also consists of an island platform serving two tracks. The ticket gates are on the fourth basement floor and the platforms are on the sixth basement floor. The Namboku Line station opened on September 26, 2000, and the Ōedo Line platforms opened on December 12 of the same year. | Rephrase the text and tidy it up. | wiki |
Monoculture predominates, but interplanting of several tuber species, mashua and olluco, in one field is common in Andean production. In many instances Andean farmers allow a mixture containing two or three tuber crops to be planted in one field. Often this mixture consists of several different varieties of each species. | Monoculture predominates, but interplanting with several tuber species, mashua and olluco, in one field is common in Andean production. Often this intercoppng consists of several different varieties of each species. | Rewrite for conciseness and change "mixture" to "interplanting". | wiki |
The three teams from UEFA that progress the furthest in the 2015 FIFA Women's World Cup (other than ineligible England) will qualify for the 2016 Summer Olympics women's football tournament, to be held in Brazil. If teams in contention for the Olympic spots are eliminated in the same round, ties are not broken by their overall tournament record, and play-offs or a mini-tournament to decide the spots will be held provisionally in February / March 2016. As England is not an Olympic nation, its team is ineligible for the Olympics. | Three places 2016 Summer Olympics women's football tournament, to be held in Brazil, are reserved for teams from UEFA. These will be filled by the UEFA teams that progress the furthest in the 2015 FIFA Women's World Cup, other than ineligible England. Two places went to France and Germany, the only UEFA quarter-finalists besides England. The third-best finish was a tie between four teams eliminated in the round of 16: Netherlands, Norway, Sweden, and Switzerland. No tiebreaker criteria based on World Cup Finals performances were used: instead a play-off tournament in February / March 2016 will determine UEFA's third Olympic qualifier. England is ineligible for the Olympics. | Expand and break up sentences. | wiki |
They sought to create artworks to interact with the spectator and make the spectator more aware of his or her physical body and metaphysical existence. They utilized 3-dimensional moveable figures so that the spectator, in essence, becomes the artist. One example of this kind of artwork is Clark’s Bicho, a movable golden metal object with hinges. Viewer participation was essential for the artwork to be complete. Clark described this exchange between viewer and Bicho as a dialogue between two living organisms. | They soon began making artworks the spectator could interact with physically, like Clark's "Bichos" ("Critters"), 1960-63, which are ingenious arrangements of hinged metal plates that can fold flat or be unfolded into three dimensions and manipulated into many different configurations. By interacting with these works, the spectator was meant to become more aware of his or her physical body and metaphysical existence. Clark described the exchange between the viewer and "Bicho" artwork as a dialogue between two living organisms. | Add information about Clark's "Bichos" artwork. | wiki |
: The main protagonist of the series. At the start of the series, he is the new transfer student of Seidōkan Academy and uses the Amagiri Shinmei Style. On his first day, he is challenged to a duel by Julis because of the embarrassing events that happened between them when they first meet. During the duel, Julis is attacked by an unknown attacker by an arrow and saved by Ayato but they end up in a very embarrassing position. However, the duel was stopped by Claudia. He meets his childhood friend Saya at school after not seeing each other for five years due to Saya moving to overseas with her father. Julis shows him and Saya around the school and the next day around the city with only the two of them as to thank him for saving her during the duel. He is claimed to be powerful and his opponents never live to tell the tale by Saya which Julis does not believe. He came to Seidōkan Academy to investigate his sister's disappearance and to find what he is supposed to do (later claimed that is to protect Julis). | He is the main protagonist of the series who uses the Amagiri Shinmei Style. He transfers to Seidōkan Academy to investigate his sister's disappearance and to figure out what he is supposed to do (he later says that it is to protect Julis). On his first day, he is challenged to a duel by Julis because of the embarrassing events that happen between them. During the duel, an unknown attacker shoots an arrow at Julis, but she is saved by Ayato. Before they can continue, the duel is stopped by Claudia, the student council president. Ayato also meets his childhood friend, Saya, whom he has not seen for five years. While Julis is showing Ayato and Saya around the city the next day as thanks for him saving her during the duel, Saya claims that Ayato is a powerful opponent whose opponents never live to tell the tale, which Julis does not believe. | Clean up Ayato's description | wiki |
| Sinéad O'Connor causes controversy when she rips up a picture of Pope John Paul II on the program Saturday Night Live. | Kristy McNichol's last episode of the series Empty Nest, entitled The Boomerang Affair, is broadcast. | Texas billionaire Ross Perot buys blocks of U.S. television time for his Presidential campaign. | NBC's Seinfeld broadcasts its episode, "The Contest", in which the four friends agree to abstain from all sexually related activity and see who could go without "it" the longest. It is never said who won the contest, however it is assumed to be a tie between Jerry Seinfeld's character, Jerry, and Jason Alexander's character, George. | The Saved by the Bell TV movie 'is broadcast by NBC. | The series The Young and the Restless broadcasts its 5,000th episode. In celebration of this promotion, The Price is Right features a Y & R-themed Showcase. | | Sinéad O'Connor caused controversy when she rips up a picture of Pope John Paul II on Saturday Night Live. | Kristy McNichol's last episode of Empty Nest, entitled The Boomerang Affair, was broadcast. | Texas billionaire Ross Perot bought blocks of TV time for his presidential campaign. | The Seinfeld episode "The Contest" was broadcast. | The TV movie 'was broadcast by NBC. | The Young and the Restless broadcasted its 5,000th episode. In celebration of this promotion, The Price is Right featured a Y & R-themed Showcase. | Write in the past tense. Do not go into the plot of the Seinfeld episode. | wiki |
Most of New England, for example, remained Congregational, except for Rhode Island which never had an established church. Pennsylvania, Delaware, New Jersey did not have official churches, nor did New York except in the 5 southern most Counties where the Church of England was established. Five of the southern colonies from Maryland south were Anglican. | In 4 New England colonies (Maine was part of Massachusetts until 1820), for example, the Congregational Church was established by law. Rhode Island never had an established church, and neither did Pennsylvania, Delaware, or New Jersey. In the 5 southernmost counties in New York, the Church of England was the established church, as well as in the five southern colonies from Maryland south. | New England section rewritten for clarity. | wiki |
This led to rumours that Proença could be forced to end his term, do this proposal, leading Proença to dismiss those rumours Later that month, Benfica left the board of LPFP, because of the controversy. On 14 May, after a meeting of all clubs, five substitutions will be permitted, which has been temporarily allowed by IFAB following a proposal by FIFA to lessen the impact of fixture congestion. On 22 May, the Liga Portuguesa de Futebol Profissional announced that the league would be resumed on 3 June. | This prompted rumours that Proença could be forced to end his term prematurely, rumours Proença later dismissed. Later that month, Benfica left the board of LPFP due to the controversy. On 14 May, after a meeting of all clubs, five substitutions will be permitted, which was temporarily allowed by IFAB following a proposal by FIFA to lessen the impact of fixture congestion. On 22 May, the LPFP announced that the league would be resumed on 3 June. On 30 May, the LPFP approved a plan to resume the league, but during the reunion between all clubs of the league, Marítimo refused to accept the five substitutions rules, leading the rule to be accepted on 8 June by the LPFP despite Marítimo's refusal. | Copyedit and provide additional information. | wiki |
Unlike the gradient and divergence, curl does not generalize as simply to other dimensions; some generalizations are possible, but only in three dimensions is the geometrically defined curl of a vector field again a vector field. This is a phenomenon similar to the 3-dimensional cross product, and the connection is reflected in the notation for the curl. This deficiency is a direct consequence of the limitations of vector calculus; when expressed via the wedge operator of geometric calculus, the curl generalizes to all dimensions. | Unlike the gradient and divergence, curl as formulated in vector calculus does not generalize as simply to other dimensions; some generalizations are possible, but only in three dimensions is the geometrically defined curl of a vector field again a vector field. This deficiency is a direct consequence of the severe limitations of vector calculus; when expressed via the wedge operator of geometric calculus, the curl generalizes to all dimensions. The unfortunate circumstance is similar to that attending the 3-dimensional cross product, and indeed the connection is reflected in the notation for the curl. | Copy edit to clarify vector/geometric definition | wiki |
Vaughan Woods State Park is a state park on the western edge of South Berwick, Maine, USA. It is located on the Salmon Falls River, which forms the border between Maine and New Hampshire. The park's include the restored Hamilton House, stands of old-growth forest, and of hiking trails. | Vaughan Woods State Park is a public recreation area located along the Salmon Falls River on the western edge of South Berwick, Maine, at the New Hampshire border. The state park includes the restored Hamilton House, stands of old-growth forest, and of hiking trails. | Make this more concise | wiki |
This page provides details about the different versions of the Microsoft Windows Phone mobile phone operating system. The version history of the Windows Phone operating system began with the release of Windows Phone 7 in October 2010. It was preceded by Windows Mobile. The major version numbers are parallel to Windows for desktops. | This page provides details for the version history of the Microsoft Windows Phone operating system; from the release of Windows Phone 7 in October 2010, which was preceded by Windows Mobile. The major version numbers are parallel to the Windows Operating System for desktops. | Rewrite to include "version history." | wiki |
Sneijder assisted the first goal which was scored by Yılmaz who scored all 3 goals for Galatasaray in the final. The number 10 is currently the vice captain of Galatasaray. Sneijder started the season by scoring the only goal for his team in the 35th Trofeo Santiago Bernabéu as Galatasaray visited Real Madrid on August 18. | Sneijder assisted the first goal off of striker Burak Yılmaz's hat-trick. During Galatasaray's 2014–15 UEFA Champions League campaign, where they were knocked out at the group stage, Sneijder scored one goal–a late free kick against Arsenal at home–and made one assist. Sneijder is currently the vice captain of Galatasaray. Sneijder began the season scoring the only goal for his team in the 35th Trofeo Santiago Bernabéu, where Galatasaray visited Real Madrid on 18 August. | Rewrite to make the text more readable. | wiki |
It inhibits the transmembrane influx of calcium into the vascular and cardiac smooth muscles resulting in vasodilation and hence a fall in blood pressure. S-amlodipine is novel allosteric modulator, acts on the L-type of calcium channels. Receptor binding studies have shown that the binding of the S form of amlodipine, results in calcium channel inhibition, whereas there is inactive binding of the R isomer with the receptors. | Amlodipine blocks the transmembrane influx of calcium into the vascular and cardiac smooth muscles resulting in vasodilation and, hence, a fall in blood pressure. Receptor binding studies have shown that the S form of amlodipine binds to and blocks L-type calcium channels, whereas the R isomer does not bind to these channels and consequently has no effect on their function. | Specify that the R isomer does not bind to L-type calcium channels. | wiki |
In February 2018 they released benchmarks, sample units are available in Q2 2018 and production is scheduled for Q3 2018. It features two new card formats ("type A", one lane, more compact and "type C", four lanes, bigger and thicker, up to 4 GB / s). Existing cards are labelled "type B". | In February 2018, they released benchmarks, with sample units introduced in the second quarter of 2018, and production scheduled for the third quarter. The CFexpress 2.0 standard was announced on 28 February 2019. It features two new card formats ("type A", one lane, more compact and "type C", four lanes, bigger and thicker, up to 4 GB / s), with the existing cards designated as "type B". | Add a comment regarding when the CFexpress 2.0 was announced. | wiki |
Chhinch is a Town in Banswara District, Rajasthan, India. It is one of the rarest towns in India, where Lord Brahma's temple (12th Century) is situated. The main occupation of the people residing in town is agriculture. It is largest town by means Agriculture Land in Banswara District. The town is also largest contributor in district, in terms of agri produce of wheat, maize and soybean (Glycine max). Chhinch is a large village located in Bagidora of Banswara district, Rajasthan with total 1138 families residing. The Chheench village has population of 5662 of which 2936 are males while 2726 are females as per Population Census 2011. | Chhinch is a village in Banswara District, Rajasthan, India. The village is home to a temple to Lord Brahma, dating from the 12th Century. The main occupation of the people is agriculture including the production of wheat, maize, and soybeans. Chhinch is a large village located in Bagidora of Banswara district, Rajasthan containing 1138 families. The population as of the 2011 census was 5,662 (2936 males, 2726 females). | Copyedit and condense the text for clarity. | wiki |
And following tradition, he is commissioning and updating new stage productions and costume designs. Cutting the lengthy parts in order to keep what is essential; he gives spirit and rhythm to those historical pieces and modernizes them. Born October 22nd, 1977 in Leningrad (now Saint Petersburg). He was graduated from the Vaganova Ballet Academy (class of Prof. Vladilen Semenov). He joined the Mariinsky Theatre (Saint Petersburg) in 1995 and became the principal dancer in 1997. He has performed in the ballets of George Balanchin: Apollo, Ballet Imperial (later referred to as the Tschaikovsky Piano Concerto No. 2), Tschaikovsky Pas de Deux, Jewels, in the ballets of John Neumeier: Spring and Fall and Now and Then. Specially for him John Neumeier has created the main part in the ballet The sounds of the empty pages. In 2011, Andrian Fadeev has been nominated Artistic Director of the Yacobson Ballet, Saint-Petersburg. | And following tradition, he commissioned and updated stage productions and costume designs. He shortened and modernized traditional pieces, keeping their essentials. Fadeev was born October 22, 1977, in Leningrad (now Saint Petersburg). He graduated from Vaganova Ballet Academy (class of Prof. Vladilen Semenov). He joined the Mariinsky Theatre (Saint Petersburg) in 1995 and became its principal dancer in 1997. Andrian performed the main parts in La Sylphide, Giselle, Le Corsaire, La Bayadere, The Sleeping Beauty, Awakening of Flora, Swan Lake, Raymonda, Don Quixote, Le Spectre de la Rose, Petrushka, The Fountain of Bakhchisarai, Romeo and Juliet. He performed in the company of George Balanchine: Apollo, Ballet Imperial (later referred to as Tschaikovsky Piano Concerto No. 2), Tschaikovsky Pas de Deux, Jewels, in the ballets of John Neumeier: Spring and Fall and Now and Then. Specifically for him, Neumeier created the main part of the ballet, The Sounds of the Empty Pages. | Clean up grammatical and spelling errors. | wiki |
A rag from Maura's emergency roadside kit was discovered stuffed into the Saturn's muffler pipe. The EMS and a fire truck arrived just before 8 pm, and quickly cleared the scene. Maura's car was towed to a local auto repair garage by 8:49 pm, and the police officer left to attend another call at about 9:30 pm. A New Hampshire State Police trooper stopped by the scene of the accident, but it is unknown at what time he arrived, if he was dispatched or if he stopped on his own accord. The family reports that they were told there was no radio communication between the officer and his station for approximately two hours upon arrival to the scene. There was no immediate search as it was assumed that Maura had left the scene by herself. Her bank card, credit cards, and cellphone have not been used since. | Later, a rag was discovered stuffed into the Saturn's muffler pipe; it was reportedly from Maura's emergency roadside kit. The EMS and a fire truck arrived just before 8:00 pm and cleared the scene. The car was towed to a local auto repair garage by 8:49 pm, and the responding officer left at about 9:30 pm. At some point, a New Hampshire State Police trooper had been at the scene; the nature and extent of his involvement have not been disclosed. The Murray family has reported that they have discovered that there was no radio communication between the State police officer and his station for approximately two hours after he had arrived at the scene. The Haverhill police department did not search for Maura Murray that night. The department subsequently defended its inaction, explaining that it was initially believed that Maura had chosen to leave the scene. Her debit card, credit cards, and cellphone have never, after the accident, been used. | Include more information about the incident. | wiki |
He has performed on the BBC's Live at the Apollo series. Davies was born in St Asaph, Denbighshire. His parents lived in England at the time, but his Welsh father drove his mother Pauline across the border to make sure he was born in Wales. He grew up in Wem, a small market town in the northern half of Shropshire, the county which he regards as his home. He also has a sister. Davies was educated at Thomas Adams School and Brunel University, where he studied English and Drama. Prior to embarking on a career in comedy, he had taught secondary school Drama and English for thirteen years at Langleywood School in Slough, Orleans Park School in Twickenham, southwest London, and Sandhurst School in Sandhurst. | He has also performed on the BBC's Live at the Apollo series. Gregory Daniel Davies was born on 14 May 1968 in St Asaph, Denbighshire. His parents lived in England at the time, but his Welsh father drove his mother across the border to make sure he was born in Wales. He grew up in Wem, Shropshire, which he regards as his home. His father's origins lie in Porthmadog. Both Davies' paternal grandmother, Edith, and her sister, Rebecca, were illegitimate; his great-grandfather, William Owen, had a second family in Stanleytown. Like many people in North Wales, Davies also claims descent from Owain Gwynedd. Davies was educated at Thomas Adams School in Wem and Brunel University in Uxbridge, London, where he studied English and Drama. Prior to embarking on a career in comedy, he had taught secondary school Drama and English for 13 years at Langleywood School in Slough, Berkshire; Orleans Park School in Twickenham, London; and Sandhurst School in Sandhurst, Berkshire. | Include more detailed family information and history. | wiki |
The scene is directed by Carl Gottlieb features Ed Begley, Jr. in an inn similar to the 1933 film where he only thinks he's invisible. In his 1934 autobiography, Wells only briefly mentioned the film version The Invisible Man, stating that it was "a tale that, thanks largely to the recent film produced by James Whale, is still read as much as ever it was. To many young people nowaways I am just the author of the Invisible Man" In another interview, Wells protested about Whale's film having Griffin insane by means of the monocaine drug, but praised the film overall. | The scene is directed by Carl Gottlieb and features Ed Begley, Jr. in an inn similar to the 1933 film where he only thinks he is invisible. Rains' career benefited greatly from his role in the film, allowing him to become one of Hollywood's most valuable actors. It led him to roles that Newman praised as "everything from The Adventures of Robin Hood (as Bad King John) to Casablanca". In his 1934 autobiography, Wells only mentioned the film version of The Invisible Man briefly, stating that it was "a tale that, thanks largely to the recent film produced by James Whale, is still read as much as ever it was. To many young people nowadays I am just the author of the Invisible Man" In another interview, Wells protested Whale's film having Griffin go insane by means of the monocaine drug, but praised the film overall. | Expand the text and add more information. | wiki |
The British Tenpin Bowling Association (BTBA) is the official governing body of ten-pin bowling in the United Kingdom, of which the sport is sanctioned and governed by. The BTBA also produce the world renowned magazine, Go Tenpin. The BTBA is devoted to the interest of the game itself and is a credit to bowling throughout the world and like the US equivalent it ensures the integrity and protection of the future of the sport, providing programs and services and enhancing the bowling experience. In its role as British governing body, the responsibilities of the BTBA include the Coach, Education and Qualification System. | The British Tenpin Bowling Association (BTBA) is the official governing body of ten-pin bowling in the United Kingdom. It is the official sanctioning body, recognised by FIQ, the sport's world governing body, for all competitions, leagues and tournaments held in the UK, and is the organisation responsible for the protection, integrity and development of the sport. It also oversees coaching for tenpin bowling at all levels, and is the official awarding body for formal coaching qualifications. The BTBA also publishes Go Tenpin, a monthly magazine to keep members up to date with the latest news in the sport. | Go more into the overall functions of BTBA, and do not mention the magazine until the end. | wiki |
Derrida has often been the target of attacks by analytic philosophers; an attack of major significance was their 1992 attempt to stop Cambridge University from granting Derrida an Honorary Doctorate. There were protesters from within Cambridge philosophy faculty, but mostly the letter signatories were from other institutions from the US and UK, a circumstance that some condemned as an attack on the academic freedom of Cambridge scholars. In the end the protesters were outnumbered when Cambridge put the motion to a vote. Derrida suggested in an interview that part of the reason for the violent attacks on his work, was that it questioned and modified "the rules of the dominant discourse, it tries to politicize and democratize education and the university scene". Interviewed in 1995, Derrida rebutted charges that he was guilty of obfuscation. | Derrida has often been the target of attacks by analytic philosophers; an attack of major significance was their 1992 attempt at stopping Cambridge University from granting Derrida an Honorary Doctorate. There were protesters from within Cambridge philosophy faculty, but mostly the letter signatories were from other institutions from the US and UK, a circumstance that some condemned as an attack to the academic freedom of Cambridge scholars. In the end, the protesters were outnumbered when Cambridge put the motion on a vote. | Copyediting completed as well as the removal of quoted dialogue. | wiki |
Later, the JTWC declared the system as a tropical storm, giving the designation of 02S. By 21 December, deep convection had developed, which caused 07U to strengthen into a Category 1 tropical cyclone, with the naming of Yvette. After moving very slowly with wind shear, convection from Yvette had weakened and the storm started to move southeastwards while weakening. By 23 December, the BoM had downgraded Yvette to a tropical low. Later in the same day, both the JTWC and the BoM had issues their final bulletin on Yvette after drier air and shear had taken place. | Soon after, the JTWC declared the system as a tropical storm and designated it as 02S. By 21 December, it strengthened into a Category 1 tropical cyclone as persistent deep convection developed, and the BoM named it Yvette. Remaining quasi-stationary under strong wind shear, convection from Yvette soon weakened; simultaneously, the storm started to move southeastwards. By 23 December, the BoM had downgraded Yvette to a tropical low as dry air began to be wrap into the center. Later the same day, both the JTWC and the BoM issued their final bulletin on Yvette. | Restructure the sentences for ease of flow and readability. | wiki |
Beam was born in Stapleton, Nebraska. He received a B.S. from the University of Nebraska in 1951. He received a J.D. from the University of Nebraska College of Law in 1965. He was in the United States Army Captain from 1951 to 1953. He was in private practice in Lincoln, Nebraska from 1965 to 1982. Beam was a federal judge on the United States District Court for the District of Nebraska. Beam was nominated by President Ronald Reagan on October 14, 1981, to a seat vacated by Robert V. Denney. He was confirmed by the United States Senate on November 18, 1981, and received his commission the same day. He served as chief judge from 1986-1987. Beam's service was terminated on November 9, 1987, due to appointment to another judicial position. Beam was a federal judge on the United States Court of Appeals for the Eighth Circuit. Beam was nominated by Ronald Reagan on July 1, 1987, to a seat vacated by Donald Roe Ross. He was confirmed by the United States Senate on November 6, 1987, and received his commission on November 9, 1987. | Born in Stapleton, Nebraska, Beam received a B.S. from the University of Nebraska in 1951, and was a Captain in the United States Army during the Korean War from 1951 to 1953. He received a J.D. from the University of Nebraska College of Law in 1965, and was thereafter in private practice in Lincoln, Nebraska until 1982. On October 14, 1981, Beam was nominated by President Ronald Reagan to a seat on the United States District Court for the District of Nebraska vacated by Robert V. Denney. Beam was confirmed by the United States Senate on November 18, 1981, and received his commission the same day. He served as chief judge from 1986 to 1987. On July 1, 1987, Reagan nominated Beam for elevation to a seat on the United States Court of Appeals for the Eighth Circuit vacated by Donald Roe Ross. Beam was again confirmed by the Senate on November 6, 1987, and received his commission on November 9, 1987. | Rewrite for clarity. | wiki |
Mohd Hezry Mohd Hafidz (born 7 July 1984) or commercially known as AG Coco is a Malaysian musician, instrumetalist and recording producer from Alor Star, Kedah, living in Kuala Lumpur. He is currently band member of Hujan as lead guitarist and producer. He is also commonly associated in Malaysia music industry national television station and produce music for local musicians such as Yuna, Tomok, Hafiz. | Mohd Hezry Mohd Hafidz (born 7 July 1984) or commercially known as AG Coco is a Malaysian musician from Alor Star, Kedah, living in Kuala Lumpur. He is currently a member of the band Hujan as lead guitarist and also a music producer for both singers (such as Yuna, Tomok, Hafiz) and local television productions. | Rewrite the article by adding more details | wiki |
Plate heat exchangers are mostly used because they are inexpensive and allow for easy changes during production. All three heat exchangers can be used for viscous products however, tubular and scraped-surface are more suitable low-viscous food with particulates or high pulp content. They are able to heat these foods with minimal damage. Equipment and systems used in aseptic processing of food and beverages must be sterilized and remain sterile during processing. In addition to the equipment and systems maintaining a sterile state, they must also meet the same sanitary and regulatory requirements as those for convectional food processing. The systems used for aseptic packaging are generally placed in six categories: fill, erect, form, thermoform, blow mold, and bulk packaging and storage systems. | Plate heat exchangers are mostly used because they are inexpensive and allow for easy changes during production. Tubular and scraped-surface can heat viscous food with particulates or high pulp content with minimal damage. Equipment used in aseptic processing of food and beverages must be sterilized before processing and remain sterile during processing. Aseptic packaging is generally placed in the following categories: fill, erect, form, thermoform, blow mold, and bulk packaging and storage systems. | Edit for clarity, concision, and adherence to WP MoS | wiki |
Irish Eurosceptics criticise the EU for many of the same reasons as other Eurosceptics. These include beliefs that the EU undermines Irish national sovereignty, that it lacks democratic legitimacy, or that it is neoliberal and works for the benefit of the business elite. Several also see the EU as a threat to Irish neutrality. | Irish Eurosceptics claim the EU undermines Irish sovereignty, that it lacks democratic legitimacy, it is neoliberal and works for the benefit of the business elite and it as a threat to Irish neutrality. | Remove weasel words and unsupported claims. | wiki |
Pazzi was famous by his work on the monument, dedicated to the Italian writer Dante. Monument to Dante was erected in 1865. Monument is located in front of the Florentine church of Santa Croce. Proposal off Pazzi was innovation in a Serbian society of that time. Innovation was in displaying ruler on a horse. Work on the monument began in 1874 and continued in 1878 when Serbia gained independence, so the raising of this kind of monument dedicated to victory and liberation became live again. Equestrian statue in Belgrade was done in the spirit of classic Italian representations of ruler on a horse, having model in ancient art. | Pazzi had become famous for his work on a monument of the Italian writer Dante; it was erected in 1865 in front of the Florentine church of Santa Croce. Pazzi's Mihailo Obrenović sculpture was to depict the ruler on his horse—an innovation in Serbian society at that time. Work began in 1874 and was completed in 1878 when Serbia gained independence. The equestrian statue was undertaken in the classic Italian style of a ruler on a horse, having its model in ancient art. | Paragraph reconstruction for comprehension and topic focus. Copyedit for proper punctuation and remove superfluous information. Rewrite in natural, grammatically correct English. | wiki |
Thus, in each step, the liquid-cooled engine has half the temperature difference and so may need as much as twice the cooling area. Properties of the coolant (water, oil, or air) also affect cooling. The thermal conductivity of water is about 4 times that of oil, which can aid heat transfer, and the viscosity of oil can be ten times greater than water, increasing the energy required to perform oil cooling and thus decreasing the power output of oil-cooled engines. Comparing air, oil, and water, air has vastly lower heat capacity per gram or per volume and less than a tenth the conductivity, but also much lower viscosity. Air cooling thus relies on a tornado of air to remove the heat, but getting heat directly to a large surface area for cooling can present its own difficulties and limitations. Water also has the property that it boils from liquid to gas at a useful temperature for cooling engines which have overheated. | In each step, the liquid-cooled engine has half the temperature difference and, so at first appears to need twice the cooling area. However, the properties of the coolant (water, oil, or air) also affect cooling. The thermal conductivity of water is about four times that of oil, which can aid heat transfer. The viscosity of oil can be ten times greater than water, increasing the energy required to pump oil for cooling and taking away from the net power output of the engine. Comparing air and water, air has vastly lower heat capacity per gram and volume and less than a tenth of the conductivity, but also much lower viscosity. Air cooling thus relies on a tornado of air to remove heat. Moving heat from the cylinder to a large surface area for air cooling can present difficulties and limitations. Water boils at about its operating temperature. This has the advantage that it absorbs a great deal of energy with very little temperature rise (heat of vaporization), which is good for keeping things cool. However, once water boils, it is an insulator, leading to a sudden loss of cooling where steam bubbles form (heat transfer). Unfortunately, steam may return to the water as it mixes with other coolants, so the engine temperature gauge can indicate an acceptable temperature even though local damage is being done. | Rewrite the text for clarity, conciseness, and to remove redundancies. Correct punctuation, grammar, and spelling as needed. | wiki |
Paralympic volleyball was first competed at the Summer Paralympic Games in 1976. That first year, the traditional standing form of volleyball was contested. Sitting volleyball was later introduced as a full Paralympic event in 1980. The 2000 was the last time standing volleyball appeared on the Paralympic programme. The women's sitting volleyball event was also introduced in the 2004. | Volleyball at the Summer Paralympics was first held in 1976, when the traditional form of standing volleyball was contested and sitting volleyball was a demonstration sport. From 1980 through 2000, both standing and sitting events were contested. The women's sitting volleyball event was introduced in 2004. | Copyedit for clarity. | wiki |
Moat Mount has a tree trail and picnic area and Moat Mount Outdoor Centre and Campsite is next to the site, with a range of activities for local schools and youth organisations. Entrance to the reserve is from the southbound lane of Barnet Way, a dual carriageway section of the A1, between Stirling Corner and Apex Corner. It has a car park, but this is permanently closed. The London Loop goes through the reserve and the Dollis Valley Greenwalk starts at the car park. | Moat Mount has a tree trail and picnic area and includes Moat Mount Outdoor Centre and Campsite, which has a range of activities for local schools and youth organizations. The main entrance to the reserve is the permanently closed Moat Mount car park on the southbound lane of Barnet Way, a dual carriageway section of the A1, between Stirling Corner and Apex Corner. The Dollis Valley Greenwalk starts at the car park, and the London Loop goes through the reserve. | Clarify the Moat Mount section. | wiki |
Though, in this case, the writers used generation gap between her and Kim (the misunderstandings and differences of perspective that occur because of it) as a source of humor, rather than Ron's normal slapstick style. While on missions, Mrs. Possible wears the same mission clothes as Kim, though her top conceals midriff, while Kim's does not. Mrs. Possible played only a small part in Season 3, and largely returned to her roots as a teen comedy / drama homemaker and mom. Spending much of her screen time advising Kim on various issues, primarily relating to teenage issues and boys (specifically, Ron). When the issue arose, She took the idea that Kim and Ron might be destined for a deeper relationship a lot better than her husband, who suggested that he might receive a one-way trip to deep space if he upset Kim. | In this case, however, the writers used a generation gap between her and Kim (the misunderstandings and differences of perspective that occur because of it) as a source of humor rather than Ron's normal slapstick style. While on missions, Mrs. Possible wears the same clothes as Kim, though her top conceals her midriff, while Kim's does not. When the issue arose, though, she took the idea that Kim and Ron might be destined for a deeper relationship a lot better than her husband, who suggested that he might receive a one-way trip to deep space if he upset Kim. | Clean up the parts about Mrs. Possible. | wiki |
When matched, it explodes itself and the 8 gems next to it (explodes gems in a 3 x 3 square). When 5 gems are matched in a row, the gem turns into a Lightning Gem. The gem appears an electric gem. When matched, it destroys all the gems on its row and column. When 6 gems or more is matched in a straight line, even though it can only be created by a cascade, creates a Supernova Gem. | When matched or detonated, it explodes itself and the 8 gems next to it like a 3 x 3 square. Lightning Gems are created when 5 gems are matched in a row. It appears as a gem full of electricity. When matched or detonated, it destroys all the gems on its row and column. Supernova Gems are created when 6 or more gems are matched in a straight line. This can only be created by a cascade. | Clean up the gem descriptions and correct grammar as necessary. | wiki |
In astrophysics, gravitational redshift or Einstein shift is the process by which electromagnetic waves / electromagnetic radiation originating from a source that is in gravitational field is reduced in frequency, or redshifted, when observed in a region of a weaker gravitational field. This is as a direct result of Gravitational time dilation. If applied to optical wavelengths this manifests itself as a change in the colour of visible light as the wavelength of the light is increased toward the red part of the light spectrum. Since frequency and wavelength are inversely proportional this is equivalent to saying that the frequency of the light is reduced towards the red part of the light spectrum. There is a corresponding reduction in energy when electromagnetic radiation is red shifted, as given by Planck's relation, due to the electromagnetic radiation propogating in opposition to the gravitational gradient. | In astrophysics, gravitational redshift or Einstein shift is the process by which electromagnetic radiation originating from a source that is in gravitational field is reduced in frequency, or redshifted, when observed in a region of a weaker gravitational field. This is as a direct result of Gravitational time dilation, frequency of the electromagnetic radiation is reduced in an area of a lower gravitational potential. There is a corresponding reduction in energy when electromagnetic radiation is red shifted, as given by Planck's relation, due to the electromagnetic radiation propagating in opposition to the gravitational gradient. | Make this more concise | wiki |
The losers of the quarter-final fixtures (4 teams) will feature in a Playoff Round. The two victorious teams in this round will qualify for the 2014 FFA Cup. A total of 4 teams took part in this stage of the competition. All matches in this round were completed by 5 June 2014. | A total of 4 teams (the losers of the quarter-final fixtures) took part in this stage of the competition. The two victorious teams in this round qualified for the 2014 FFA Cup, with the losers progressing to the next round. Matches in this round were played on 5 June 2014. | Replace future tense with past tense. | wiki |
In Autumn 2007 she appeared in the BBC1 costume drama series Cranford playing the role of Miss Augusta Tomkinson and in '. She won an Outer Critics' Circle Award for Outstanding Featured Actress in a Play for "Stanley" in 1997, sharing the award with Allison Janney and Celia Weston. She has also won the Olivier award. Deborah has also won the Olivier award. | In Autumn 2007, she appeared in the BBC1 costume drama series 'Cranford', playing the role of Miss Augusta Tomkinson. In 2008, she starred in the US premiere of 'Vincent River' by Philip Ridley. In 2009, she will appear in a Donmar West End revival of 'Madame de Sade.' She won the 1997 Outer Critics' Circle Award for Outstanding Featured Actress in a Play (sharing the award with Allison Janney and Celia Weston) as well as the Olivier Award for her performance in 'Stanley.' | Vincent River and Madame de Sade were added. | wiki |
Additionally, the physical properties of the nanofibers are well suited for drug delivery system. Due to their cylindrical morphology, they possess a high surface area-to-volume ratio. As a result, the fibers possess high drug-loading capacity and can release therapeutic molecules over a large surface area in the medium. | Due to their cylindrical morphology, nanofibers possess a high surface area-to-volume ratio. As a result, the fibers possess high drug-loading capacity and may release therapeutic molecules over a large surface area. | Condense the text down to the most important details. | wiki |
A coronal mass ejection (CME) is a massive burst of solar wind and magnetic fields rising above the solar corona or being released into space. Near solar maxima, the Sun produces about three CMEs every day, whereas near solar minima, there is about one CME every five days. Coronal mass ejections, along with solar flares of other origin, can disrupt radio transmissions and cause damage to satellites and electrical transmission line facilities, resulting in potentially massive and long-lasting power outages. Before automated monitoring was initiated, CME observations were recorded by visual monitoring. Coronal mass ejections are often associated with other forms of solar activity, most notably solar flares, but a causal relationship has not been established. Most weak flares do not have associated CMEs; most powerful ones do. Most ejections originate from active regions on the Sun's surface, such as groupings of sunspots associated with frequent flares. | A coronal mass ejection (CME) is a massive burst of solar wind and magnetic fields rising above the solar corona. Near solar maxima, the Sun produces about three CMEs every day, whereas solar minima feature about one every five days. Coronal mass ejections often appear with other forms of solar activity, most notably solar flares, but no causal relationship has been established. Most weak flares do not have CMEs; most powerful ones do. Most ejections originate from active regions on the Sun's surface, such as sunspot groupings associated with frequent flares. | Restructure the beginning sentence to improve flow. | wiki |
Salta residents, just like most Argentines, are very enthusiastic about football; the most important local clubs are: Juventud Antoniana, Gimnasia y Tiro de Salta and Central Norte. All three of them are followed by many faithful fans. Juventud Antoniana and Central Norte currently play at third division, while Gimnasia y Tiro plays in the fourth division. Other popular sports are baseball (a game in which Salta players excel nationally), basketball, volleyball, rugby and mountaineering. Salta's main sport venue is the Padre Ernesto Martearena Stadium, followed by the Gimnasia y Tiro Stadium and the Juventud Antoniana stadium. The largest roofed facility is the Ciudad de Salta Stadium, used mainly for basketball, volleyball and boxing. Over the last 20 years Salta has become host to high profile international sport events, such as the 1990 Basketball World Cup, the 1994 Camel Trophy, the 2002 Volleyball World Cup and the 2009 Hockey Champions Challenge. The Pumas, Argentina's national rugby team, have played in Salta against Italy (2005) and England (2009). Top football clubs, including Boca Juniors, River Plate and Racing, have played friendly games in Salta in summer, off-season matches. | Salta residents, like most Argentines, are very enthusiastic about soccer. The most important local clubs are Juventud Antoniana, Gimnasia y Tiro de Salta, and Central Norte; many faithful fans follow each. Juventud Antoniana and Central Norte currently play in the third national division, while Gimnasia y Tiro plays in the fourth. Other locally popular sports include baseball (a game in which Salta players excel nationally), basketball, volleyball, rugby, and mountaineering. The main sporting venue in Salta is the Padre Ernesto Martearena Stadium; the Gimnasia y Tiro and Juventud Antoniana stadiums also see many athletic matches. The largest roofed facility in the city is the Ciudad de Salta Stadium, chiefly used for basketball, volleyball, and boxing. Over the last twenty years, Salta has played host to such high-profile international sporting events as the 1990 Basketball World Cup, the 1994 Camel Trophy, the 2002 Volleyball World Cup, and the 2009 Hockey Champions Challenge. | Copy-edit paragraph; correct and improve text. | wiki |
The series is based on the contrast between a rustic Upper Bavarian small town inspector and a city slicker colleague, who has been transferred to the town for sometimes incomprehensible reasons. The new colleague is always received heartily and gets integrated into the team quickly. Due to their different background the two investigators are portrayed as each others antithesis. | The series' main overall focus lies on the contrasting personalities of a rustic Upper Bavarian small town inspector and his frequently replaced city slicker colleague, who has usually been transferred to the town for mostly incomprehensible reasons. Despite all differences, the new colleague is always warmly received and quickly integrated into the team. | Improve the overall style of the article | wiki |
When Suzuki entered school he became aware that his family was very poor. Suzuki was sensitive and kind but prone to quick bursts of anger. The other boys ridiculed him for his shaved head and for being the son of a priest. He preferred staying in the classroom to playing in the schoolyard, and was always at the top of his class. His teacher told him that he should grow up to be a great man, and to do this he needed to leave Kanagawa Prefecture and study hard. | Suzuki became aware of his family's financial plight when he began school. Suzuki was kind and sensitive, but prone to quick outbursts of anger. He was ridiculed by the other boys because of his shaved head and because he was the son of a priest. He preferred to spend his time in the classroom rather than on the schoolyard and was always at the top of his class. The teacher told him he would become a great man if he left Kanagawa Prefecture and studied hard. | Make it more formal and concise. | wiki |
In the beginning, the marketing was aimed for the creation of the perfect match of filter and tobacco, to drive home the idea that a filter was the perfect addition to a cigarette. This communication was also one of the first to have women as a part of the marketing campaign. The years 1968/69 saw a huge growth in competition with lower-priced filter cigarettes, however, Navy Cut continued to retain its market share. In 1965, ITC Limited introduced the "Made for each other" advertising campaign. | From the beginning, marketing was focused on the concept of the perfect match of filter and tobacco, and the idea that a filter was the perfect addition to a cigarette. The campaign was also one of the first to include women at its heart. In 1965, ITC Limited launched the "Made for each other" advertising campaign. | Rewrite for clarity and brevity | wiki |
Prince Albert was served by King and Diefenbaker; and Quebec East was represented by Laurier and St. Laurent. Calgary West was represented by Bennett during his term, and by Harper prior to his. Similarly, Macdonald served his fourth term as MP for Carleton, a riding represented by Borden as Opposition Leader in the 10th Parliament. | Both King and John Diefenbaker served Prince Albert; and both Wilfrid Laurier and Louis St. Laurent represented Quebec East. Bennett represented Calgary West during his premiership, as did Stephen Harper prior to his. Similarly, John A. Macdonald served his fourth term as MP for Carleton, a riding represented by Robert Borden as Opposition Leader in the 10th Parliament. | Change from passive and include first names. | wiki |
The 100+ seat theater is used to present first run movies and live musical events. The Center is also active in art education. The facility houses summer adult art classes that are taught by both local and visiting artists. The Center works cooperatively with the locals schools by doing one of every performance for school students and by offering free summer arts classes at Maple Lake Pavilion. The Three Lakes Center for the Arts also runs programs around the town including Art on Main, Affair of the Arts, and Oktoberfest. These are annual events held both at the Center and throughout the town and surrounding communities. As part of the Chequamegon-Nicolet National Forest, Three Lakes, Wisconsin offers instant access to the variety of hunting, snowmobiling, biking, birdwatching, camping, and hiking trails that are part of and surrounding this 650,000 acre forest. | The 100-seat theater presents first-run movies and live musical events. The center houses summer adult art classes taught by both local and visiting artists. It works cooperatively with local schools, presenting every performance for school students and offering free summer art classes at Maple Lake Pavilion. The Three Lakes Center for the Arts also runs annual events such as Art on Main, Affair of the Arts, and Oktoberfest. As part of the Chequamegon-Nicolet National Forest, Three Lakes, Wisconsin has access to hunting, snowmobiling, biking, birdwatching, camping, and hiking trails. | Copyedit to a travel brochure style. | wiki |
The Battle Arena, a recquired section to finish the map completion, consists of seventeen rooms. Each room contains a selection of standard enemies, which must be defeated for the player to exit. However, the Dual Set-Up System (DSS) is unavailable in this area, with the player's MP dropping to zero as soon as s / he enters. Each subsequent room contains a tougher selection of enemies than the last. | The Battle Arena, is a special area of the map in which the Dual Set-Up System (DSS) is unavailable, with the player's MP dropping to zero as soon as s / he enters. Each of the seventeen rooms contains a selection of standard enemies, which must be defeated for the player to exit. However, each subsequent room contains a tougher selection of enemies than the last. | Restructure the article for ease of comprehension. | wiki |
The Internet has facilitated new types of C2C although it is important to note that this kind of commerce - in the form of barter, yard sales, flea markets, swap meets, and the like - has existed since time immemorial. Notably, most of the highly successful C2C examples using the Internet actually use some type of corporate intermediary and are thus not strictly "pure play" examples of C2C. An example of consumer-to-consumer electronic commerce would be Ebay. | Consumer-to-consumer electronic commerce (abbreviated C2C) is an internet-facilitated form of commerce that has existed for the span of recorded history in the form of barter, flea markets, swap meets, yard sales, and the like. Notably, most of the highly successful C2C examples using the Internet take advantage of some type of corporate intermediary and are thus not strictly "pure play" examples of C2C. An example of a venue where consumer-to-consumer electronic commerce of this type takes place is eBay. | Add clarification to the text. | wiki |
Manufacturers have noticed that there is a lot of recent consumer interest in café racers. While the original concept of a café racer is that they tend to be "custom build" or customized, in 2004, Triumph was one of the first brands to provide a turn-key vintage looking motorcycle with their Thruxton. Another legendary modern cafe racer is the Ducati SportClassic which only was available from 2006 till 2009. | Manufacturers have exploited the enduring consumer interest in café racers. While the original concept of a café racer was that they were owner-modified or "custom build", manufacturers realized the market appeal of the type, and produced ready-to-ride café racers. In 2004, Triumph produced a turn-key retro motorcycle with their Thruxton. Another notable modern cafe racer is the Ducati SportClassic, made from 2006 till 2009. | Make the text more readable and add information. | wiki |
Electronic waste in the United States is being addressed with regulations at a state and federal level. The term electronic waste (e-waste) refers to electronic products that are near the end of the period of time in which they are able to function. Electronic waste is a growing problem: as the industrial world continues to technologically advance at a pace never seen before, used electronics are becoming the quickest-growing source of waste. | Electronic waste, or e-waste, in the United States, refers to electronic products that have reached the end of their operable lives, and the United States is addressing its waste problems with regulations at a state and federal level. Used electronics are the quickest-growing source of waste. | rewrite first two sentences of lead | wiki |
The Lakers experienced a tremendous run of success in the 1980s, winning five NBA Championships and making the NBA Finals every year but two (1981 and 1986). This level of success raised The Forum's profile greatly across the sporting world, as fans became accustomed to watching playoff games and other important games played there by the Lakers. In 1981, singer Diana Ross filmed the concert portion of her "Diana" television special at The Forum, entering the arena through the audience, performing her 1980 Billboard Top 5 pop hit, "I'm Coming Out". Special guests included Quincy Jones, who conducted a special performance of "Home", from "The Wiz" and Michael Jackson, who joined Ross onstage for a performance of her 1980 No. 1 hit "Upside Down". The special began with footage of Ross in a photo session atop The Forum, dressed in a silver lamé bodysuit, complete with large, extended wings made of the same material. In April 1982, The Forum was the site of the Miracle on Manchester, in which the Kings completed the largest comeback in NHL playoff history, going from being down 5–0 to win the game 6–5 in overtime over the Edmonton Oilers. Combined with upset wins in Games 1 and 5, the Kings eliminated the heavily favored Oilers in a 3–2 series victory to reach the second round. Queen performed two consecutive shows, concluding the U.S. leg of their Hot Space Tour, on September 14–15, 1982, with Billy Squier as their opening act. Fleetwood Mac performed two consecutive shows during their Mirage Tour on October 21–22, 1982, with Dave Mason as their opening act. The shows were originally scheduled for October 4–5th, but were postponed, due to lead vocalist Stevie Nicks suffering from walking pneumonia. The shows were recorded for their tour video, which aired on television in 1983. In 1984, The Forum also found itself in an international spotlight, as it hosted the basketball tournaments and the finals of men's Team Handball of the 1984 Summer Olympics. The Forum played host to Amnesty International's A Conspiracy of Hope Benefit Concert on June 6, 1986. The show was headlined by U2 and Sting and also featured Bryan Adams, Jackson Browne, Peter Gabriel, Lou Reed, Joan Baez and The Neville Brothers. In December 1988, Buss capitalized on all of this success by selling the arena's naming rights to Great Western Savings & Loan. This also coincided with the arrival of Wayne Gretzky in Los Angeles, which greatly increased the profile of the building's other tenant, the Kings. | The Lakers were successful during the 1980s, winning five NBA championships and making the NBA finals every year except 1981 and 1986. In 1981 Diana Ross filmed the concert portion of her Diana television special at the Forum, entering the arena through the audience and singing her 1980 Billboard top-five hit "I'm Coming Out". Guests included Quincy Jones (who conducted a performance of "Home" from The Wiz) and Michael Jackson, who joined Ross onstage for a performance of her 1980 number-one song "Upside Down". The special began with Ross in a photo session atop the Forum in a silver lamé bodysuit with large, silver-lamé wings. In April 1982 the Forum was the site of the "Miracle on Manchester", in which the Kings overcame a 5–0 deficit in a first-round Stanley Cup playoff game against the Edmonton Oilers to win 6–5 in overtime. With additional upset wins in games one and five of the five-game series, the Kings eliminated the heavily-favored Oilers to reach the second round. Queen played two shows at the Forum to conclude the U.S. leg of their Hot Space Tour on September 14–15, 1982, with Billy Squier as the opening act. These were the band's final live performances in the U.S. before the November 24, 1991 death of Freddie Mercury on and the 1997 retirement of John Deacon until their October 16, 2005 show on the Queen + Paul Rodgers Tour. Fleetwood Mac played two shows during their Mirage tour on October 21–22, 1982, with Dave Mason opening. The shows, originally scheduled for October 4–5, were postponed when Stevie Nicks developed walking pneumonia. They were recorded for the band's tour video, which was televised in 1983. In 1984, the Forum hosted the basketball tournaments and the men's handball finals of the 1984 Summer Olympics. The arena hosted Amnesty International's June 6, 1986 A Conspiracy of Hope benefit concert, headlined by U2 and Sting and featuring Bryan Adams, Jackson Browne, Peter Gabriel, Lou Reed, Joan Baez and the Neville Brothers. In December 1988 Jerry Buss sold the arena's naming rights to Great Western Savings & Loan, coinciding with the arrival in Los Angeles of Wayne Gretzky. | Copyedit to improve the text. | wiki |
Phantasy Star III, appears at first to take place in a medieval fantasy setting, in contrast to the "futuristic" science-fiction worlds of previous games. A thousand years prior to the start of the game, the two factions, led by Orakio on one side and Laya on the other, waged bitter and bloody war against each other, until the two leaders met for a parlay and mysteriously vanished. Since that time, the Orakians and Layans have shared an uneasy cohabitation. At the start of the game, players control Rhys, Crown Prince of the Orakian kingdom of Landen, on the day of his wedding to Maia, a mysterious amnesiac who washed up on Landen's shore two months earlier. | Phantasy Star III, appears at first to take place in a medieval fantasy setting, in contrast to the science-fiction settings of previous games. A thousand years prior to the start of the game, two factions, one led by the swordsman Orakio, the other by the sorceress Laya, were engaged in a bitter conflict. An attempt at peace was made when the two leaders met for an armistice, but soon afterwards they both mysteriously vanished. This placed the two factions in a precarious situation, as each blamed the other for their leader's disappearance. All communication between the Orakians and Layans was suspended, travel between their respective worlds was prohibited, and the two groups teetered on the brink of war. Players take control of Rhys, Crown Prince of the Orakian kingdom of Landen, on the day of his wedding to Maia, a mysterious amnesiac who washed up on Landen's shore two months earlier. | Edit to include more details on the conflict between the two factions. | wiki |
Kachchhi Ghodi dance originated from the royal courts of Rajasthan. This dance is related to the story of highway robbers who lived in the 17th century in the Shekhawati region and would rob from the rich to give to the poor. Arts of Rajasthan is mostly related from the tribes of Rajasthan and are reflective of the socio-historical scenario peculiar to the time or race they depict. | The Kachchhi Ghodi dance originated in the royal courts of Rajasthan and is related to the story of 17th century highway robbers living in the Shekhawati region who robbed from the rich to give to the poor. The arts produced by the tribes of Rajasthan reflect the socio-historical situations at that particular time. | Remove grammatical errors and improve sentence structure. | wiki |
The Politics of Experience examines and challenges the idea of normality in modern society, and argues that it is not people who are mad, but the world. It presents psychosis as "a psychedelic voyage of discovery in which the boundaries of perception were widened, and consciousness expanded". It was inspired by Laing’s extensive experimentation with LSD. Although he never considered himself an anti-psychiatrist, Laing has been called "the most influential and iconic of the anti-psychiatrists of the 1960s and 1970s". The Politics of Experience is his best-known book. | The work was inspired by Laing’s extensive experimentation with LSD. Laing examines and challenges the idea of normality in modern society and argues that it is not people who are mad but the world. He presents psychosis as "a psychedelic voyage of discovery in which the boundaries of perception were widened, and consciousness expanded". The Politics of Experience is Laing's best-known book. | Reorganize the lead to put the inspiration for the work first | wiki |
Example's "Say Nothing" debuted at number 2. New entries included Dappy's "Good Intentions" and Jessica Wright's "Dance All Night" at numbers 12 and 36. The biggest climber came from PSY's "Gangnam Style", climbing 34 places to number 3 and the biggest faller came from Gerry & the Pacemakers' "You'll Never Walk Alone", falling 15 places to number 27. In the albums chart, Pink debuted at number 2 with The Truth About Love. New entries included DJ Fresh & RaVaughn's "The Feeling", Paloma Faith's INXS cover "Never Tear Us Apart" from the new John Lewis advert and Taylor Swift's "Begin Again" at numbers 13, 16 & 30. Jason Mraz's "I Won't Give Up", The Fray's "How To Save A Life", Muse's "Madness" and fun.'s "We Are Young" all re-entered the top 40 at numbers 23, 27, 28 and 35. | Example's "Say Nothing" entered the charts at number 2. Other new entries included Dappy's "Good Intentions" and Jessica Wright's "Dance All Night" at numbers 12 and 36. The biggest climber faller was Gerry & the Pacemakers' "You'll Never Walk Alone", falling 15 places to number 27. New entries included DJ Fresh & RaVaughn's "The Feeling", and Paloma Faith's INXS cover "Never Tear Us Apart" from the new John Lewis advert, at numbers 13 and 16. The biggest climbers were Conor Maynard & Ne-Yo's "Turn Around" and Professor Green & Sierra Kusterbeck's "Avalon", both climbing 9 places to numbers 9 & 29. Muse's "Madness" and fun.'s "We Are Young" re-entered the top 40 at number 28. | Condense the information | wiki |
The poem, The Caryatids, and Propylaia are some of the first prototypes that were used to develop the convention. The former references the Erechtheion Temple at the Acropolis and the origins of the Caryatids according to M. Vitruvius Pollio as written in De Architectura. The title and poem, Propylaia, is appropriated from the Propylaia at the Acropolis and Englished from the Greek as an entrance; gateway to. | The poems Propylaia and The Caryatids are some of the prototypes used to develop the convention. The former, Propylaia, is appropriated from the Propylaia at the Acropolis and Englished from the Greek meaning an entrance; gateway to. The latter references the Erechtheion Temple at the Acropolis and the origins of the Caryatids, according to M. Vitruvius Pollio as written in De Architectura. | Switch the order of Propylaia and Caryatids | wiki |
Mahut played alongside Jürgen Melzer, but lost in the second round to Kevin Krawietz and Andreas Mies. Krawietz and Mies went on to win their first Grand Slam title, defeating Jérémy Chardy and Fabrice Martin in the final, 6–2, 7–6 (7–3). For the second time in three years at the French Open, none of the four players in the final had previously played in a Grand Slam men’s doubles final. This was the fourth time in the past seven years that an all-French team featured in the final. | Kevin Krawietz and Andreas Mies wont the Men's Doubles tennis title at the 2019 French Open defeating Jeremy Chardyand Fabrice Martin in the final 6-2, 7-6 (7–3). Chardy and Martin were the fourth all-French team to reach the French Open men's doubles final in seven years, and for the second time in three years none of the four players had previously played in a Grand Slam men's doubles final. Mahut played alongside Jürgen Melzer, but lost in the second round to Krawietz and Mies. | Rewrite for clarity | wiki |
Nazarloo was developed and turned into a large and flourished village during Qajar era. It was of a great importance for Khans (lords and princes before Pahlavi era who owned the farm lands in Iran) and because of its large area and resources, sometimes several lords shared it simultaneously. An old document from Iran's National Library shows that Nazarloo was exchanged for 4 Other villages in Marand, by Haji Hoseinqoli Khan Nezam-o-Doleh Donbali governor of Tabriz city in that time. This was so until a group of Tabrizi people came there in the mid 1330 (Hijri Shamsi) and made Koda a developed and prosperous land by digging wells that provided water supply. After a few years these lands were bought by Nazarloo's people and joined to it. There were also two very old cemeteries in Nazarloo, one in Pir Moosa lands next to today's medical center and another was located at today's Shahid Madani Elementary school. | Nazarlu was developed and turned into a large and flourished village during the Qajar era. A large area and appropriate resources made it of great importance for Khans (lords and princes before the Pahlavi era who owned the farmlands in Iran), and sometimes several lords shared it simultaneously. According to an old document from Iran's National Library, four other villages in Marand were exchanged for Nazarlu by Haji Hoseinqoli Khan Nezam-o-Doleh Donbali, governor of Tabriz city at the time. As is quoted from old residents of Nazarlu, there was a series of old houses and gardens around it during the Qajar era, which had become abandoned and called Kode lands. The old Nazarlu was limited to these lands, today's Motahari St. in the east and Seyedlar Alley in the north. This was so until a group from Tabriz came there in mid-1330 (Hijri Shamsi) and made Koda a prosperous land by digging wells that provided a water supply. After a few years, these lands were bought by Nazarlu's people and joined to it. There were also two ancient cemeteries in Nazarlu, one in Pir Moosa lands next to today's medical center and another in the location of today's Shahid Madani Elementary school. | Edit for grammar, spelling and readability. Include more information about the Kode lands. | wiki |
The neuron doctrine is the now fundamental idea that the nervous system is made up of individual and discrete cells and was formally proposed by Heinrich Wilhelm Gottfried von Waldeyer-Hartz in 1891. The "neuron doctrine" served to describe neurons as special cases under the broader cell theory proposed decades earlier. Waldeyer based his proposal on the observations of Albert von Kölliker, Camillo Golgi, Franz Nissl, Santiago Ramón y Cajal, Auguste Forel, and others rather than upon his own research. | The neuron doctrine is the fundamental idea, formally proposed in 1891 by Heinrich Wilhelm Gottfried von Waldeyer-Hartz, that the nervous system is made up of discrete individual cells. The term neuron (also spelt neurone in English) was itself coined by Waldeyer as a way of identifying the cells in question. The neuron doctrine, as it became known, served to position neurons as special cases under the broader cell theory evolved some decades earlier. He derived the concept not from his own research but from the observations of Albert von Kölliker, Camillo Golgi, Franz Nissl, Santiago Ramón y Cajal, Auguste Forel and others. | Clarify the origin of the term "neuron" | wiki |
Butterflyfish, when properly cared for, can make beautiful and distinctive additions to fish only marine aquariums. Often large and usually not suited for those with smaller aquariums, nor those of the faint of heart. Nevertheless, when fed a varied diet and kept in pristine conditions, Butterflyfish will usually thrive. That is, if you choose the right species. With Butterflyfish, usually a fish is going to survive, or it's not. Many species simply cannot be kept in captivity, and potential keepers must take care to only purchase those species that have a fighting chance. Also, be very picky about which specimen you choose- any sign of mishandling should be taken as a red flag. The following species are relatively hardy and an experienced aquarist should have no trouble with them, so long as they are diligent. | When properly cared for, Butterflyfish can make beautiful and distinctive additions to fish only marine aquariums. Specimens often grow to large sizes and are not well suited to smaller aquariums. Butterflyfish can be fussy and overparticular, but when fed a varied diet and kept in pristine conditions they will usually thrive. Some species in this family simply cannot be kept in captivity, and potential keepers must take care to purchase only those species that have a fighting chance. When selecting Butterflyfish, specimens presenting any sign or signs of mishandling are to be avoided. The following species are relatively hardy and experienced aquarists should have no trouble with them, so long as they are diligent. | Clean up the Aquarium care section | wiki |
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