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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The energy used in the construction industry often comes from burning fossil fuels. This results in the release of carbon dioxide a greenhouse gas that warms the Earth.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The energy used in the construction industry often comes from burning fossil fuels. This results in the release of carbon dioxide a greenhouse gas that warms the Earth. ### Response: 2
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Vehicles that burn fossil fuels are a major source of carbon dioxide. This gas contributes to the greenhouse effect which is causing the Earth to warm up.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Vehicles that burn fossil fuels are a major source of carbon dioxide. This gas contributes to the greenhouse effect which is causing the Earth to warm up. ### Response: 2
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The use of nitrogen-rich fertilisers in farming can lead to the release of nitrous oxide. This gas is a potent greenhouse gas contributing to global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The use of nitrogen-rich fertilisers in farming can lead to the release of nitrous oxide. This gas is a potent greenhouse gas contributing to global warming. ### Response: 2
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Livestock farming particularly for meat and dairy products results in the release of methane. This gas is a powerful greenhouse gas contributing to climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Livestock farming particularly for meat and dairy products results in the release of methane. This gas is a powerful greenhouse gas contributing to climate change. ### Response: 2
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Deforestation results in the release of stored carbon dioxide and reduces the planets ability to absorb this gas. This contributes to global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Deforestation results in the release of stored carbon dioxide and reduces the planets ability to absorb this gas. This contributes to global warming. ### Response: 2
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial processes often involve burning fossil fuels which releases carbon dioxide. This gas is a major contributor to the greenhouse effect and global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial processes often involve burning fossil fuels which releases carbon dioxide. This gas is a major contributor to the greenhouse effect and global warming. ### Response: 2
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The construction industry often uses energy from burning fossil fuels. This results in the release of carbon dioxide contributing to global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The construction industry often uses energy from burning fossil fuels. This results in the release of carbon dioxide contributing to global warming. ### Response: 2
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The burning of fossil fuels by vehicles releases carbon dioxide. This gas contributes to the greenhouse effect and global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The burning of fossil fuels by vehicles releases carbon dioxide. This gas contributes to the greenhouse effect and global warming. ### Response: 2
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The use of nitrogen-rich fertilisers in farming leads to the release of nitrous oxide. This gas is a potent greenhouse gas contributing to global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The use of nitrogen-rich fertilisers in farming leads to the release of nitrous oxide. This gas is a potent greenhouse gas contributing to global warming. ### Response: 2
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The use of fossil fuels in industrial processes releases carbon dioxide. This gas is a major contributor to the greenhouse effect and global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The use of fossil fuels in industrial processes releases carbon dioxide. This gas is a major contributor to the greenhouse effect and global warming. ### Response: 2
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The burning of fossil fuels in the transport sector particularly in cars and lorries has been a significant contributor to climate change. It results in massive emissions of carbon dioxide a greenhouse gas that enhances the greenhouse effect and leads to global warming. In tandem deforestation for agricultural purposes like the farming of meat exacerbates this issue. When forests are cleared to create space for livestock the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere increases because trees which absorb carbon dioxide are lost. This double-whammy of increased carbon dioxide emissions from transport and decreased absorption from deforestation is a significant driver of climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The burning of fossil fuels in the transport sector particularly in cars and lorries has been a significant contributor to climate change. It results in massive emissions of carbon dioxide a greenhouse gas that enhances the greenhouse effect and leads to global warming. In tandem deforestation for agricultural purposes like the farming of meat exacerbates this issue. When forests are cleared to create space for livestock the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere increases because trees which absorb carbon dioxide are lost. This double-whammy of increased carbon dioxide emissions from transport and decreased absorption from deforestation is a significant driver of climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial activities heavily rely on fossil fuels resulting in large quantities of carbon dioxide being released into the atmosphere. This greenhouse gas is largely responsible for global warming and the overall trend of climate change. On the other hand the meat and dairy industry significantly contribute to the issue as well. Livestock farming results in substantial amounts of methane being emitted into the atmosphere. Methane is a more potent greenhouse gas than carbon dioxide and its release exacerbates the greenhouse effect further heating the planet.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial activities heavily rely on fossil fuels resulting in large quantities of carbon dioxide being released into the atmosphere. This greenhouse gas is largely responsible for global warming and the overall trend of climate change. On the other hand the meat and dairy industry significantly contribute to the issue as well. Livestock farming results in substantial amounts of methane being emitted into the atmosphere. Methane is a more potent greenhouse gas than carbon dioxide and its release exacerbates the greenhouse effect further heating the planet. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The construction industrys heavy reliance on fossil fuels for activities like material production and transport results in a high level of carbon dioxide emissions contributing to climate change. Simultaneously the application of nitrogen-rich fertilisers in agriculture leads to the release of nitrous oxide. This potent greenhouse gas is about 300 times more effective at trapping heat in the atmosphere than carbon dioxide thereby accelerating global warming. Thus both these sectors play crucial roles in escalating climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The construction industrys heavy reliance on fossil fuels for activities like material production and transport results in a high level of carbon dioxide emissions contributing to climate change. Simultaneously the application of nitrogen-rich fertilisers in agriculture leads to the release of nitrous oxide. This potent greenhouse gas is about 300 times more effective at trapping heat in the atmosphere than carbon dioxide thereby accelerating global warming. Thus both these sectors play crucial roles in escalating climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Deforestation particularly for the farming of meat and dairy products has been significantly contributing to recent climate change. Trees absorb carbon dioxide and when they are cut down the absorption of this greenhouse gas is reduced leading to an increase in the atmospheric carbon dioxide concentration. Additionally the transport sector heavily reliant on fossil fuels releases large amounts of carbon dioxide when these fuels are burnt. These two factors combined are accelerating the rate of global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Deforestation particularly for the farming of meat and dairy products has been significantly contributing to recent climate change. Trees absorb carbon dioxide and when they are cut down the absorption of this greenhouse gas is reduced leading to an increase in the atmospheric carbon dioxide concentration. Additionally the transport sector heavily reliant on fossil fuels releases large amounts of carbon dioxide when these fuels are burnt. These two factors combined are accelerating the rate of global warming. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The extensive use of fertilisers in agriculture has resulted in increased nitrous oxide emissions. Nitrous oxide is a potent greenhouse gas contributing to global warming. Moreover industrial processes that burn fossil fuels for energy release significant amounts of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Both these practices increase the concentration of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere enhancing the greenhouse effect and driving climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The extensive use of fertilisers in agriculture has resulted in increased nitrous oxide emissions. Nitrous oxide is a potent greenhouse gas contributing to global warming. Moreover industrial processes that burn fossil fuels for energy release significant amounts of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Both these practices increase the concentration of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere enhancing the greenhouse effect and driving climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The construction industry contributes to climate change through its high-energy processes often powered by the combustion of fossil fuels. This burning process results in the release of vast amounts of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. On the agricultural side the farming of rice in particular emits significant quantities of methane - another potent greenhouse gas. The release of these gases from both sectors intensifies the greenhouse effect leading to an increase in global temperatures.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The construction industry contributes to climate change through its high-energy processes often powered by the combustion of fossil fuels. This burning process results in the release of vast amounts of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. On the agricultural side the farming of rice in particular emits significant quantities of methane - another potent greenhouse gas. The release of these gases from both sectors intensifies the greenhouse effect leading to an increase in global temperatures. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial activities that involve the burning of fossil fuels result in the emission of large amounts of carbon dioxide. This greenhouse gas traps heat in the atmosphere contributing significantly to global warming. Simultaneously deforestation which often occurs to create space for agricultural activities reduces the number of trees that absorb carbon dioxide. This results in a higher concentration of the gas in the atmosphere exacerbating the issue of climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial activities that involve the burning of fossil fuels result in the emission of large amounts of carbon dioxide. This greenhouse gas traps heat in the atmosphere contributing significantly to global warming. Simultaneously deforestation which often occurs to create space for agricultural activities reduces the number of trees that absorb carbon dioxide. This results in a higher concentration of the gas in the atmosphere exacerbating the issue of climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The reliance on fossil fuels in the building sector leads to large emissions of carbon dioxide which exacerbates global warming. This is coupled with the fact that farming especially of meat and dairy leads to the release of significant amounts of methane a potent greenhouse gas. The combined impact of these two sectors significantly contributes to recent climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The reliance on fossil fuels in the building sector leads to large emissions of carbon dioxide which exacerbates global warming. This is coupled with the fact that farming especially of meat and dairy leads to the release of significant amounts of methane a potent greenhouse gas. The combined impact of these two sectors significantly contributes to recent climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transport-related emissions particularly from cars and lorries contribute significantly to global warming due to their reliance on fossil fuels. Additionally the overuse of nitrogen-rich fertilisers in agriculture releases nitrous oxide a greenhouse gas 300 times more potent than carbon dioxide. The convergence of these two factors significantly exacerbates the ongoing climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transport-related emissions particularly from cars and lorries contribute significantly to global warming due to their reliance on fossil fuels. Additionally the overuse of nitrogen-rich fertilisers in agriculture releases nitrous oxide a greenhouse gas 300 times more potent than carbon dioxide. The convergence of these two factors significantly exacerbates the ongoing climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The burning of fossil fuels in industrial processes releases significant amounts of carbon dioxide a primary driver of global warming. Concurrently deforestation for the farming of meat dairy and other agricultural products reduces the number of trees absorbing this carbon dioxide further amplifying the greenhouse effect and accelerating climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The burning of fossil fuels in industrial processes releases significant amounts of carbon dioxide a primary driver of global warming. Concurrently deforestation for the farming of meat dairy and other agricultural products reduces the number of trees absorbing this carbon dioxide further amplifying the greenhouse effect and accelerating climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transport is heavily reliant on fossil fuels leading to substantial carbon dioxide emissions that intensify the greenhouse effect and drive global warming. Similarly rice farming which often involves flooded fields generates substantial methane emissions. Methane is a potent greenhouse gas with a global warming potential far greater than that of carbon dioxide thus further accelerating climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transport is heavily reliant on fossil fuels leading to substantial carbon dioxide emissions that intensify the greenhouse effect and drive global warming. Similarly rice farming which often involves flooded fields generates substantial methane emissions. Methane is a potent greenhouse gas with a global warming potential far greater than that of carbon dioxide thus further accelerating climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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In the industrial sector the combustion of fossil fuels for energy contributes significantly to carbon dioxide emissions. Simultaneously in the realm of agriculture the widespread use of fertilisers leads to the release of nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas. The cumulative effect of these activities intensifies the greenhouse effect causing global warming and climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: In the industrial sector the combustion of fossil fuels for energy contributes significantly to carbon dioxide emissions. Simultaneously in the realm of agriculture the widespread use of fertilisers leads to the release of nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas. The cumulative effect of these activities intensifies the greenhouse effect causing global warming and climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial emissions from the burning of fossil fuels are a major contributor to the increasing concentration of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere a key driver of global warming. Additionally deforestation especially for agricultural purposes such as meat and dairy farming reduces the Earths capacity to absorb carbon dioxide leading to an increase in its atmospheric concentration. The combined effect of these activities exacerbates climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial emissions from the burning of fossil fuels are a major contributor to the increasing concentration of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere a key driver of global warming. Additionally deforestation especially for agricultural purposes such as meat and dairy farming reduces the Earths capacity to absorb carbon dioxide leading to an increase in its atmospheric concentration. The combined effect of these activities exacerbates climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Buildings through their construction and operation often consume large amounts of energy predominantly derived from the combustion of fossil fuels. This results in substantial carbon dioxide emissions a leading cause of global warming. Concurrently in agriculture the farming of meat and dairy results in methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas that has a much higher warming potential than carbon dioxide thereby intensifying climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Buildings through their construction and operation often consume large amounts of energy predominantly derived from the combustion of fossil fuels. This results in substantial carbon dioxide emissions a leading cause of global warming. Concurrently in agriculture the farming of meat and dairy results in methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas that has a much higher warming potential than carbon dioxide thereby intensifying climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The reliance on fossil fuels in the transport sector is a significant source of carbon dioxide emissions contributing to global warming. Additionally the use of fertilisers in agriculture leads to nitrous oxide emissions another potent greenhouse gas. These activities both from the transport and agricultural sectors increase the concentration of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere intensifying the greenhouse effect and contributing to climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The reliance on fossil fuels in the transport sector is a significant source of carbon dioxide emissions contributing to global warming. Additionally the use of fertilisers in agriculture leads to nitrous oxide emissions another potent greenhouse gas. These activities both from the transport and agricultural sectors increase the concentration of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere intensifying the greenhouse effect and contributing to climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial activities often involve burning fossil fuels for energy which releases carbon dioxide a major contributor to global warming. At the same time deforestation to make way for agricultural activities such as rice farming reduces the Earths carbon-absorbing capacity. This in combination with the methane emissions from flooded rice fields intensifies the greenhouse effect and accelerates climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial activities often involve burning fossil fuels for energy which releases carbon dioxide a major contributor to global warming. At the same time deforestation to make way for agricultural activities such as rice farming reduces the Earths carbon-absorbing capacity. This in combination with the methane emissions from flooded rice fields intensifies the greenhouse effect and accelerates climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Buildings require substantial amounts of energy for their construction operation and maintenance often derived from burning fossil fuels leading to substantial carbon dioxide emissions. On the agricultural front the farming of meat and dairy animals leads to considerable methane emissions. Both these sectors through their greenhouse gas emissions contribute significantly to the intensification of the greenhouse effect and the acceleration of global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Buildings require substantial amounts of energy for their construction operation and maintenance often derived from burning fossil fuels leading to substantial carbon dioxide emissions. On the agricultural front the farming of meat and dairy animals leads to considerable methane emissions. Both these sectors through their greenhouse gas emissions contribute significantly to the intensification of the greenhouse effect and the acceleration of global warming. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The burning of fossil fuels in the transport sector generates substantial carbon dioxide emissions. Simultaneously deforestation for agricultural purposes such as the farming of rice meat and dairy not only reduces carbon sequestration but also results in significant methane emissions. Both these activities contribute to the rising levels of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere thereby driving climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The burning of fossil fuels in the transport sector generates substantial carbon dioxide emissions. Simultaneously deforestation for agricultural purposes such as the farming of rice meat and dairy not only reduces carbon sequestration but also results in significant methane emissions. Both these activities contribute to the rising levels of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere thereby driving climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The use of fossil fuels for energy in industrial processes leads to significant emissions of carbon dioxide a major greenhouse gas contributing to global warming. Meanwhile the overuse of fertilisers in agriculture leads to the release of nitrous oxide another potent greenhouse gas. Both these activities exacerbate the greenhouse effect and contribute to climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The use of fossil fuels for energy in industrial processes leads to significant emissions of carbon dioxide a major greenhouse gas contributing to global warming. Meanwhile the overuse of fertilisers in agriculture leads to the release of nitrous oxide another potent greenhouse gas. Both these activities exacerbate the greenhouse effect and contribute to climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The construction and operation of buildings often rely heavily on energy derived from the combustion of fossil fuels leading to substantial carbon dioxide emissions. Concurrently the farming of meat and dairy contributes to methane emissions as ruminants produce this potent greenhouse gas during digestion. Together these activities from the building and agricultural sectors enhance the greenhouse effect and contribute to the ongoing climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The construction and operation of buildings often rely heavily on energy derived from the combustion of fossil fuels leading to substantial carbon dioxide emissions. Concurrently the farming of meat and dairy contributes to methane emissions as ruminants produce this potent greenhouse gas during digestion. Together these activities from the building and agricultural sectors enhance the greenhouse effect and contribute to the ongoing climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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In the transport sector the burning of fossil fuels leads to considerable carbon dioxide emissions contributing significantly to the greenhouse effect and global warming. In parallel the practice of deforestation to make way for agricultural activities including meat and dairy farming leads to the loss of carbon sinks and the release of carbon stored in trees. The combined impact of these activities exacerbates climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: In the transport sector the burning of fossil fuels leads to considerable carbon dioxide emissions contributing significantly to the greenhouse effect and global warming. In parallel the practice of deforestation to make way for agricultural activities including meat and dairy farming leads to the loss of carbon sinks and the release of carbon stored in trees. The combined impact of these activities exacerbates climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial activities particularly those reliant on fossil fuels for energy contribute to significant carbon dioxide emissions. This is compounded by the use of nitrogen-rich fertilisers in agriculture which lead to the release of nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas. The combined effect of these activities is an enhancement of the greenhouse effect leading to global warming and climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial activities particularly those reliant on fossil fuels for energy contribute to significant carbon dioxide emissions. This is compounded by the use of nitrogen-rich fertilisers in agriculture which lead to the release of nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas. The combined effect of these activities is an enhancement of the greenhouse effect leading to global warming and climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Construction and building operations significantly contribute to carbon dioxide emissions primarily due to their reliance on fossil fuels for energy. In tandem the farming of rice in flooded fields contributes to methane emissions. These two sectors with their substantial greenhouse gas emissions play crucial roles in accelerating global warming and climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Construction and building operations significantly contribute to carbon dioxide emissions primarily due to their reliance on fossil fuels for energy. In tandem the farming of rice in flooded fields contributes to methane emissions. These two sectors with their substantial greenhouse gas emissions play crucial roles in accelerating global warming and climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The burning of fossil fuels in the transport sector results in large carbon dioxide emissions contributing significantly to global warming. Simultaneously deforestation often carried out to make way for agriculture results in a decrease in the number of trees that can absorb carbon dioxide leading to an increased concentration of this greenhouse gas in the atmosphere. These activities collectively contribute to climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The burning of fossil fuels in the transport sector results in large carbon dioxide emissions contributing significantly to global warming. Simultaneously deforestation often carried out to make way for agriculture results in a decrease in the number of trees that can absorb carbon dioxide leading to an increased concentration of this greenhouse gas in the atmosphere. These activities collectively contribute to climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial processes often involve the combustion of fossil fuels leading to significant carbon dioxide emissions. On the other hand the use of fertilisers in agriculture leads to nitrous oxide emissions another potent greenhouse gas. These activities both contributing to greenhouse gas emissions exacerbate the greenhouse effect and contribute significantly to climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial processes often involve the combustion of fossil fuels leading to significant carbon dioxide emissions. On the other hand the use of fertilisers in agriculture leads to nitrous oxide emissions another potent greenhouse gas. These activities both contributing to greenhouse gas emissions exacerbate the greenhouse effect and contribute significantly to climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The construction and operation of buildings contribute to carbon dioxide emissions due to their reliance on fossil fuels for energy. Simultaneously meat and dairy farming contributes to methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas. Together these activities from the building and agricultural sectors contribute to the exacerbation of the greenhouse effect and global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The construction and operation of buildings contribute to carbon dioxide emissions due to their reliance on fossil fuels for energy. Simultaneously meat and dairy farming contributes to methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas. Together these activities from the building and agricultural sectors contribute to the exacerbation of the greenhouse effect and global warming. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The burning of fossil fuels for transportation results in large amounts of carbon dioxide emissions contributing significantly to global warming. Additionally the practice of deforestation for agricultural purposes such as meat and dairy farming leads to a decrease in the number of trees that can absorb carbon dioxide leading to increased concentrations of this greenhouse gas in the atmosphere. Both of these activities significantly contribute to climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The burning of fossil fuels for transportation results in large amounts of carbon dioxide emissions contributing significantly to global warming. Additionally the practice of deforestation for agricultural purposes such as meat and dairy farming leads to a decrease in the number of trees that can absorb carbon dioxide leading to increased concentrations of this greenhouse gas in the atmosphere. Both of these activities significantly contribute to climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial activities often involve the combustion of fossil fuels leading to significant carbon dioxide emissions. Concurrently the application of fertilisers in agriculture leads to the release of nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas. Both these activities contribute to the rise of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere intensifying the greenhouse effect and driving climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial activities often involve the combustion of fossil fuels leading to significant carbon dioxide emissions. Concurrently the application of fertilisers in agriculture leads to the release of nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas. Both these activities contribute to the rise of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere intensifying the greenhouse effect and driving climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Building construction and maintenance require substantial amounts of energy often derived from burning fossil fuels leading to carbon dioxide emissions. Simultaneously rice farming contributes to methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas. Both these sectors through their emissions contribute significantly to the intensification of the greenhouse effect and global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Building construction and maintenance require substantial amounts of energy often derived from burning fossil fuels leading to carbon dioxide emissions. Simultaneously rice farming contributes to methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas. Both these sectors through their emissions contribute significantly to the intensification of the greenhouse effect and global warming. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transport-related emissions particularly from vehicles that burn fossil fuels contribute significantly to global warming. Simultaneously the application of nitrogen-rich fertilisers in agriculture leads to the release of nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas. These two factors both contributing to the increase in greenhouse gas concentration significantly exacerbate the ongoing climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transport-related emissions particularly from vehicles that burn fossil fuels contribute significantly to global warming. Simultaneously the application of nitrogen-rich fertilisers in agriculture leads to the release of nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas. These two factors both contributing to the increase in greenhouse gas concentration significantly exacerbate the ongoing climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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When we consider transport were mainly looking at vehicles that run on petrol and diesel both of which are fossil fuels. The burning of these fuels releases a lot of CO2 into the atmosphere which is a major factor in climate change. At the same time deforestation to make way for stuff like cattle farming also contributes to this problem. You see trees absorb CO2 so fewer trees mean less CO2 is removed from the atmosphere leading to an increase in the greenhouse effect.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: When we consider transport were mainly looking at vehicles that run on petrol and diesel both of which are fossil fuels. The burning of these fuels releases a lot of CO2 into the atmosphere which is a major factor in climate change. At the same time deforestation to make way for stuff like cattle farming also contributes to this problem. You see trees absorb CO2 so fewer trees mean less CO2 is removed from the atmosphere leading to an increase in the greenhouse effect. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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If you think about the industrial sector it relies heavily on fossil fuels for energy and this produces a tonne of carbon dioxide. This obviously isnt great as its a significant greenhouse gas contributing to global warming. But thats not all when we overuse fertilisers in agriculture this leads to nitrous oxide being released into the atmosphere another harmful greenhouse gas that exacerbates climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: If you think about the industrial sector it relies heavily on fossil fuels for energy and this produces a tonne of carbon dioxide. This obviously isnt great as its a significant greenhouse gas contributing to global warming. But thats not all when we overuse fertilisers in agriculture this leads to nitrous oxide being released into the atmosphere another harmful greenhouse gas that exacerbates climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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From the perspective of building construction and use they consume a lot of energy that often comes from fossil fuels hence they produce quite a bit of CO2. At the same time the farming of meat and dairy animals also contributes to greenhouse gas emissions as cows produce methane during digestion. These two aspects together intensify the greenhouse effect and the rate of global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: From the perspective of building construction and use they consume a lot of energy that often comes from fossil fuels hence they produce quite a bit of CO2. At the same time the farming of meat and dairy animals also contributes to greenhouse gas emissions as cows produce methane during digestion. These two aspects together intensify the greenhouse effect and the rate of global warming. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transport particularly vehicles like cars and lorries use a lot of petrol and diesel. These fuels are fossil fuels and when we burn them they release CO2 into the air. Thats a problem because CO2 is a big contributor to global warming. On the other hand the application of fertilisers in agriculture can lead to nitrous oxide emissions which is another potent greenhouse gas. Both of these things are causing climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transport particularly vehicles like cars and lorries use a lot of petrol and diesel. These fuels are fossil fuels and when we burn them they release CO2 into the air. Thats a problem because CO2 is a big contributor to global warming. On the other hand the application of fertilisers in agriculture can lead to nitrous oxide emissions which is another potent greenhouse gas. Both of these things are causing climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The industrial sector particularly manufacturing processes burn a lot of fossil fuels for energy. This produces loads of carbon dioxide a major greenhouse gas that contributes to global warming. Meanwhile in agriculture clearing forests for farming like for growing crops or grazing livestock gets rid of trees that absorb CO2 and also releases more CO2 from the trees and soil. This double whammy causes even more climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The industrial sector particularly manufacturing processes burn a lot of fossil fuels for energy. This produces loads of carbon dioxide a major greenhouse gas that contributes to global warming. Meanwhile in agriculture clearing forests for farming like for growing crops or grazing livestock gets rid of trees that absorb CO2 and also releases more CO2 from the trees and soil. This double whammy causes even more climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Looking at buildings their construction and operation can be really energy-intensive. A lot of that energy comes from burning fossil fuels which releases a heap of CO2 into the atmosphere. But its not just buildings the farming of rice also produces greenhouse gases. When fields are flooded to grow rice it creates conditions that produce methane a potent greenhouse gas. Both these factors are accelerating climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Looking at buildings their construction and operation can be really energy-intensive. A lot of that energy comes from burning fossil fuels which releases a heap of CO2 into the atmosphere. But its not just buildings the farming of rice also produces greenhouse gases. When fields are flooded to grow rice it creates conditions that produce methane a potent greenhouse gas. Both these factors are accelerating climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transport including cars lorries and airplanes burn a lot of fossil fuels and release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. This is one of the main causes of global warming. But we also have to consider agriculture. The farming of meat and dairy cows is also a big problem as cows produce a lot of methane a potent greenhouse gas during digestion. Both of these things together make climate change worse.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transport including cars lorries and airplanes burn a lot of fossil fuels and release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. This is one of the main causes of global warming. But we also have to consider agriculture. The farming of meat and dairy cows is also a big problem as cows produce a lot of methane a potent greenhouse gas during digestion. Both of these things together make climate change worse. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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When you consider industrial activities theres a lot of burning of fossil fuels. This releases carbon dioxide which is a major cause of global warming. But we cant forget agriculture. Using nitrogen-based fertilisers releases nitrous oxide a greenhouse gas thats even more potent than CO2. Both of these activities are driving climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: When you consider industrial activities theres a lot of burning of fossil fuels. This releases carbon dioxide which is a major cause of global warming. But we cant forget agriculture. Using nitrogen-based fertilisers releases nitrous oxide a greenhouse gas thats even more potent than CO2. Both of these activities are driving climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Building construction and use need a lot of energy. This energy often comes from burning fossil fuels which release CO2 a major greenhouse gas. But theres also an issue with rice farming in agriculture. When fields are flooded to grow rice it creates conditions that produce methane a potent greenhouse gas. Both these activities together contribute to the warming of the planet.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Building construction and use need a lot of energy. This energy often comes from burning fossil fuels which release CO2 a major greenhouse gas. But theres also an issue with rice farming in agriculture. When fields are flooded to grow rice it creates conditions that produce methane a potent greenhouse gas. Both these activities together contribute to the warming of the planet. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Vehicles used in transport burn fossil fuels and that releases carbon dioxide. This is a big contributor to the greenhouse effect and global warming. Then youve got agriculture where deforestation happens to make way for crops or livestock. This not only reduces the amount of CO2 that trees can absorb but also releases the carbon stored in the trees which adds to the greenhouse effect.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Vehicles used in transport burn fossil fuels and that releases carbon dioxide. This is a big contributor to the greenhouse effect and global warming. Then youve got agriculture where deforestation happens to make way for crops or livestock. This not only reduces the amount of CO2 that trees can absorb but also releases the carbon stored in the trees which adds to the greenhouse effect. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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In the transport sector the burning of fossil fuels in vehicles releases carbon dioxide a potent greenhouse gas. Simultaneously the farming of rice in flooded fields creates an environment for methane production a gas that has a higher warming potential than CO2. The combined impact of these two factors contributes to accelerated global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: In the transport sector the burning of fossil fuels in vehicles releases carbon dioxide a potent greenhouse gas. Simultaneously the farming of rice in flooded fields creates an environment for methane production a gas that has a higher warming potential than CO2. The combined impact of these two factors contributes to accelerated global warming. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The industrial sector particularly factories and power plants often rely heavily on fossil fuels. This leads to the release of significant amounts of carbon dioxide contributing to the greenhouse effect. In parallel deforestation often carried out for agricultural purposes destroys trees that could absorb this CO2 thus exacerbating climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The industrial sector particularly factories and power plants often rely heavily on fossil fuels. This leads to the release of significant amounts of carbon dioxide contributing to the greenhouse effect. In parallel deforestation often carried out for agricultural purposes destroys trees that could absorb this CO2 thus exacerbating climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The construction and operation of buildings are significant energy consumers. The energy is often derived from fossil fuels leading to substantial carbon dioxide emissions. On the other side excessive use of fertilisers in agriculture can lead to increased emissions of nitrous oxide another potent greenhouse gas. Both these activities together contribute to climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The construction and operation of buildings are significant energy consumers. The energy is often derived from fossil fuels leading to substantial carbon dioxide emissions. On the other side excessive use of fertilisers in agriculture can lead to increased emissions of nitrous oxide another potent greenhouse gas. Both these activities together contribute to climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Petrol and diesel-powered vehicles in the transport sector emit carbon dioxide when the fuels are combusted. Similarly meat and dairy farming contribute to methane emissions as these gases are by-products of livestock digestion. Both these human activities hence contribute significantly to the greenhouse effect and global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Petrol and diesel-powered vehicles in the transport sector emit carbon dioxide when the fuels are combusted. Similarly meat and dairy farming contribute to methane emissions as these gases are by-products of livestock digestion. Both these human activities hence contribute significantly to the greenhouse effect and global warming. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Heavy industries burn fossil fuels for energy resulting in significant carbon dioxide emissions. Concurrently agriculture particularly the overuse of fertilisers can lead to nitrous oxide release. These combined sources of greenhouse gas emissions contribute to the increased pace of climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Heavy industries burn fossil fuels for energy resulting in significant carbon dioxide emissions. Concurrently agriculture particularly the overuse of fertilisers can lead to nitrous oxide release. These combined sources of greenhouse gas emissions contribute to the increased pace of climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Building activities from construction to daily operation often rely on fossil fuel-derived energy leading to significant CO2 emissions. Additionally deforestation to make way for farmland reduces the number of trees that can absorb CO2 exacerbating the greenhouse effect and hastening global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Building activities from construction to daily operation often rely on fossil fuel-derived energy leading to significant CO2 emissions. Additionally deforestation to make way for farmland reduces the number of trees that can absorb CO2 exacerbating the greenhouse effect and hastening global warming. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Cars trucks and airplanes in the transport sector burn fossil fuels releasing a vast amount of CO2 into the atmosphere. Similarly the use of nitrogen-based fertilisers in agriculture can lead to the release of nitrous oxide. Both these activities have a substantial impact on the enhancement of the greenhouse effect.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Cars trucks and airplanes in the transport sector burn fossil fuels releasing a vast amount of CO2 into the atmosphere. Similarly the use of nitrogen-based fertilisers in agriculture can lead to the release of nitrous oxide. Both these activities have a substantial impact on the enhancement of the greenhouse effect. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The burning of fossil fuels in heavy industries contributes significantly to CO2 emissions. Meanwhile meat and dairy farming result in the release of methane a potent greenhouse gas produced during animal digestion. Both these human-induced factors contribute to global warming and climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The burning of fossil fuels in heavy industries contributes significantly to CO2 emissions. Meanwhile meat and dairy farming result in the release of methane a potent greenhouse gas produced during animal digestion. Both these human-induced factors contribute to global warming and climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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In the building sector the energy consumed for construction and operation often comes from fossil fuels leading to significant CO2 emissions. In contrast rice cultivation in flooded fields can lead to the production of methane a greenhouse gas with a warming potential greater than CO2. These factors combined amplify the impact of climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: In the building sector the energy consumed for construction and operation often comes from fossil fuels leading to significant CO2 emissions. In contrast rice cultivation in flooded fields can lead to the production of methane a greenhouse gas with a warming potential greater than CO2. These factors combined amplify the impact of climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The use of fossil fuel-based vehicles in transport leads to the release of substantial amounts of CO2. Simultaneously deforestation carried out to make way for agriculture besides removing CO2 absorbing trees releases carbon stored within the trees and soil. The combination of these factors enhances the greenhouse effect leading to global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The use of fossil fuel-based vehicles in transport leads to the release of substantial amounts of CO2. Simultaneously deforestation carried out to make way for agriculture besides removing CO2 absorbing trees releases carbon stored within the trees and soil. The combination of these factors enhances the greenhouse effect leading to global warming. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The industrial sector heavily dependent on fossil fuels for energy is a significant contributor to CO2 emissions. Simultaneously overuse of fertilisers in agriculture can lead to increased nitrous oxide emissions. The combined effect of these activities results in an accelerated pace of global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The industrial sector heavily dependent on fossil fuels for energy is a significant contributor to CO2 emissions. Simultaneously overuse of fertilisers in agriculture can lead to increased nitrous oxide emissions. The combined effect of these activities results in an accelerated pace of global warming. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transport especially cars and trucks burns loads of fossil fuels which emit CO2 when burnt. This CO2 is a big contributor to the greenhouse effect. On top of this agriculture specifically the farming of meat and dairy produces methane. Methane is a potent greenhouse gas so this also contributes to global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transport especially cars and trucks burns loads of fossil fuels which emit CO2 when burnt. This CO2 is a big contributor to the greenhouse effect. On top of this agriculture specifically the farming of meat and dairy produces methane. Methane is a potent greenhouse gas so this also contributes to global warming. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The construction and operation of buildings is an energy-hungry process. Much of this energy is derived from fossil fuels which when burnt release CO2 into the atmosphere exacerbating global warming. At the same time deforestation for agricultural purposes removes trees that absorb CO2 and releases more stored carbon into the atmosphere further fuelling climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The construction and operation of buildings is an energy-hungry process. Much of this energy is derived from fossil fuels which when burnt release CO2 into the atmosphere exacerbating global warming. At the same time deforestation for agricultural purposes removes trees that absorb CO2 and releases more stored carbon into the atmosphere further fuelling climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial activities including manufacturing processes often rely on fossil fuels for energy. The burning of these fuels releases CO2 a primary greenhouse gas. Simultaneously the overuse of fertilisers in farming leads to the release of nitrous oxide a lesser-known but still potent greenhouse gas contributing to the climate crisis.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial activities including manufacturing processes often rely on fossil fuels for energy. The burning of these fuels releases CO2 a primary greenhouse gas. Simultaneously the overuse of fertilisers in farming leads to the release of nitrous oxide a lesser-known but still potent greenhouse gas contributing to the climate crisis. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The burning of petrol and diesel in transport particularly in cars and lorries releases CO2 into the atmosphere. This CO2 is a significant contributor to global warming. Simultaneously the farming of rice a staple food crop produces methane under flooded conditions contributing to the increase of this potent greenhouse gas in the atmosphere.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The burning of petrol and diesel in transport particularly in cars and lorries releases CO2 into the atmosphere. This CO2 is a significant contributor to global warming. Simultaneously the farming of rice a staple food crop produces methane under flooded conditions contributing to the increase of this potent greenhouse gas in the atmosphere. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial processes often consume significant amounts of fossil fuels for energy releasing substantial amounts of carbon dioxide a greenhouse gas into the atmosphere. Concurrently the farming of meat particularly beef leads to methane production as cows belch out this potent greenhouse gas exacerbating the problem of climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial processes often consume significant amounts of fossil fuels for energy releasing substantial amounts of carbon dioxide a greenhouse gas into the atmosphere. Concurrently the farming of meat particularly beef leads to methane production as cows belch out this potent greenhouse gas exacerbating the problem of climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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When we look at buildings both their construction and operation require large amounts of energy often sourced from fossil fuels. This results in the release of CO2 which contributes to global warming. Simultaneously the use of fertilisers in agriculture can lead to the release of nitrous oxide another greenhouse gas intensifying climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: When we look at buildings both their construction and operation require large amounts of energy often sourced from fossil fuels. This results in the release of CO2 which contributes to global warming. Simultaneously the use of fertilisers in agriculture can lead to the release of nitrous oxide another greenhouse gas intensifying climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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In the transport sector vehicles particularly those running on petrol and diesel release CO2 when these fossil fuels are burnt. This CO2 is a key factor in the greenhouse effect and climate change. Concurrently in agriculture deforestation to make way for farming land not only removes CO2-absorbing trees but also releases more CO2 stored in the soil and trees.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: In the transport sector vehicles particularly those running on petrol and diesel release CO2 when these fossil fuels are burnt. This CO2 is a key factor in the greenhouse effect and climate change. Concurrently in agriculture deforestation to make way for farming land not only removes CO2-absorbing trees but also releases more CO2 stored in the soil and trees. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The industrial sector relies heavily on fossil fuels for power. The combustion of these fuels releases large amounts of CO2 into the atmosphere intensifying global warming. In contrast agriculture contributes to climate change through the farming of dairy which produces methane—a potent greenhouse gas.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The industrial sector relies heavily on fossil fuels for power. The combustion of these fuels releases large amounts of CO2 into the atmosphere intensifying global warming. In contrast agriculture contributes to climate change through the farming of dairy which produces methane—a potent greenhouse gas. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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In the realm of building construction and operation theres a heavy reliance on fossil fuels for energy. This usage releases vast amounts of CO2 a major player in climate change. Additionally in agriculture rice farming generates significant amounts of methane when the fields are flooded—an additional blow to our changing climate.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: In the realm of building construction and operation theres a heavy reliance on fossil fuels for energy. This usage releases vast amounts of CO2 a major player in climate change. Additionally in agriculture rice farming generates significant amounts of methane when the fields are flooded—an additional blow to our changing climate. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Vehicles that run on fossil fuels predominantly in the transport sector emit a significant amount of CO2 contributing to the greenhouse effect. At the same time the overuse of fertilisers in agriculture releases nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas which amplifies the effects of climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Vehicles that run on fossil fuels predominantly in the transport sector emit a significant amount of CO2 contributing to the greenhouse effect. At the same time the overuse of fertilisers in agriculture releases nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas which amplifies the effects of climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial activities especially in manufacturing are heavily dependent on fossil fuels for energy. The burning of these fuels leads to the release of large amounts of CO2. On the other hand deforestation for agricultural purposes such as crop cultivation or livestock farming reduces the earths capacity to absorb CO2 and increases the amount of CO2 in the atmosphere.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial activities especially in manufacturing are heavily dependent on fossil fuels for energy. The burning of these fuels leads to the release of large amounts of CO2. On the other hand deforestation for agricultural purposes such as crop cultivation or livestock farming reduces the earths capacity to absorb CO2 and increases the amount of CO2 in the atmosphere. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Building construction and use involve energy consumption often sourced from burning fossil fuels which emits CO2 contributing to global warming. Simultaneously the farming of meat and dairy in agriculture results in methane production a potent greenhouse gas exacerbating the climate crisis.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Building construction and use involve energy consumption often sourced from burning fossil fuels which emits CO2 contributing to global warming. Simultaneously the farming of meat and dairy in agriculture results in methane production a potent greenhouse gas exacerbating the climate crisis. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transport systems particularly vehicles running on fossil fuels contribute a considerable amount of CO2 to the atmosphere. This is a significant driver of global warming. On the agricultural side rice farming creates conditions for methane production particularly when fields are flooded adding another greenhouse gas to the mix.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transport systems particularly vehicles running on fossil fuels contribute a considerable amount of CO2 to the atmosphere. This is a significant driver of global warming. On the agricultural side rice farming creates conditions for methane production particularly when fields are flooded adding another greenhouse gas to the mix. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The industrial sector is a large consumer of fossil fuels for energy leading to CO2 emissions. This plays a significant role in global warming. At the same time the use of nitrogen-based fertilisers in agriculture releases nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas further driving climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The industrial sector is a large consumer of fossil fuels for energy leading to CO2 emissions. This plays a significant role in global warming. At the same time the use of nitrogen-based fertilisers in agriculture releases nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas further driving climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The construction and operation of buildings require energy which is often sourced from fossil fuels. This process emits CO2 contributing to the greenhouse effect. Simultaneously deforestation for agricultural land reduces the earths capacity to absorb CO2 and increases the carbon content in the atmosphere further exacerbating climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The construction and operation of buildings require energy which is often sourced from fossil fuels. This process emits CO2 contributing to the greenhouse effect. Simultaneously deforestation for agricultural land reduces the earths capacity to absorb CO2 and increases the carbon content in the atmosphere further exacerbating climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transport especially vehicles using fossil fuels contributes to CO2 emissions a key factor in global warming. Concurrently meat and dairy farming in agriculture also contribute to climate change due to methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas from these livestock.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transport especially vehicles using fossil fuels contributes to CO2 emissions a key factor in global warming. Concurrently meat and dairy farming in agriculture also contribute to climate change due to methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas from these livestock. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The industrial sectors reliance on fossil fuels for energy leads to substantial CO2 emissions contributing to the greenhouse effect. Additionally the overuse of fertilisers in agriculture can lead to nitrous oxide emissions another greenhouse gas further intensifying climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The industrial sectors reliance on fossil fuels for energy leads to substantial CO2 emissions contributing to the greenhouse effect. Additionally the overuse of fertilisers in agriculture can lead to nitrous oxide emissions another greenhouse gas further intensifying climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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In the construction and operation of buildings a lot of energy often from fossil fuels is consumed. This contributes to CO2 emissions and thus to global warming. Meanwhile deforestation for agriculture not only reduces CO2 absorption but also releases additional CO2 exacerbating climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: In the construction and operation of buildings a lot of energy often from fossil fuels is consumed. This contributes to CO2 emissions and thus to global warming. Meanwhile deforestation for agriculture not only reduces CO2 absorption but also releases additional CO2 exacerbating climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The burning of fossil fuels in transport particularly in vehicles results in CO2 emissions a significant contributor to global warming. On the agricultural front rice farming can produce methane a potent greenhouse gas further adding to climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The burning of fossil fuels in transport particularly in vehicles results in CO2 emissions a significant contributor to global warming. On the agricultural front rice farming can produce methane a potent greenhouse gas further adding to climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial activities especially those requiring a lot of energy contribute significantly to CO2 emissions through the burning of fossil fuels. At the same time deforestation for agricultural purposes results in a double whammy effect reducing the earths CO2 absorption capacity and releasing stored CO2 both of which exacerbate climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial activities especially those requiring a lot of energy contribute significantly to CO2 emissions through the burning of fossil fuels. At the same time deforestation for agricultural purposes results in a double whammy effect reducing the earths CO2 absorption capacity and releasing stored CO2 both of which exacerbate climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial activities notably in manufacturing rely heavily on fossil fuels. The combustion process releases carbon dioxide a greenhouse gas into the atmosphere exacerbating global warming. This is part of the broader greenhouse effect where gases in our atmosphere trap heat warming the planet. The overuse of nitrogen-based fertilisers in agriculture also contributes to climate change. These fertilisers release nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas when they decompose. The combined impact of industrial emissions and agricultural practices have a compounding effect on global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial activities notably in manufacturing rely heavily on fossil fuels. The combustion process releases carbon dioxide a greenhouse gas into the atmosphere exacerbating global warming. This is part of the broader greenhouse effect where gases in our atmosphere trap heat warming the planet. The overuse of nitrogen-based fertilisers in agriculture also contributes to climate change. These fertilisers release nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas when they decompose. The combined impact of industrial emissions and agricultural practices have a compounding effect on global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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In the realm of transport we know that the majority of vehicles run on fossil fuels like petrol and diesel. When these fuels are burnt they release a significant amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere a key factor contributing to global warming. This is due to the greenhouse effect whereby this CO2 traps heat within our atmosphere gradually warming the planet. On the flip side deforestation for agricultural purposes also contributes to climate change. Trees which naturally absorb CO2 are cut down thereby reducing the Earths capacity to remove this gas from the atmosphere. Simultaneously the process of deforestation releases additional stored carbon into the atmosphere.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: In the realm of transport we know that the majority of vehicles run on fossil fuels like petrol and diesel. When these fuels are burnt they release a significant amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere a key factor contributing to global warming. This is due to the greenhouse effect whereby this CO2 traps heat within our atmosphere gradually warming the planet. On the flip side deforestation for agricultural purposes also contributes to climate change. Trees which naturally absorb CO2 are cut down thereby reducing the Earths capacity to remove this gas from the atmosphere. Simultaneously the process of deforestation releases additional stored carbon into the atmosphere. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The use of fossil fuels in building construction and operation is a primary contributor to the high levels of carbon dioxide emissions we observe today. This is due to the greenhouse effect where CO2 and other gases trap heat in our atmosphere. Simultaneously the agricultural practice of rice farming contributes to the emission of methane a potent greenhouse gas. Flooding rice fields creates an anaerobic environment that favours methane-producing bacteria resulting in significant methane emissions. This combination of factors from both the construction and agricultural sectors contributes heavily to the current climate crisis.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The use of fossil fuels in building construction and operation is a primary contributor to the high levels of carbon dioxide emissions we observe today. This is due to the greenhouse effect where CO2 and other gases trap heat in our atmosphere. Simultaneously the agricultural practice of rice farming contributes to the emission of methane a potent greenhouse gas. Flooding rice fields creates an anaerobic environment that favours methane-producing bacteria resulting in significant methane emissions. This combination of factors from both the construction and agricultural sectors contributes heavily to the current climate crisis. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial processes particularly manufacturing are significant contributors to CO2 emissions due to their heavy reliance on fossil fuels for energy. This contributes to the enhanced greenhouse effect where increased levels of greenhouse gases trap more heat in the Earths atmosphere. Meanwhile in the agricultural sector meat and dairy farming contribute to methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas. Livestock particularly cows produce methane as part of their digestion process. This methane much more effective at trapping heat than CO2 adds to the warming of our planet.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial processes particularly manufacturing are significant contributors to CO2 emissions due to their heavy reliance on fossil fuels for energy. This contributes to the enhanced greenhouse effect where increased levels of greenhouse gases trap more heat in the Earths atmosphere. Meanwhile in the agricultural sector meat and dairy farming contribute to methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas. Livestock particularly cows produce methane as part of their digestion process. This methane much more effective at trapping heat than CO2 adds to the warming of our planet. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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In the transport sector vehicles that run on fossil fuels contribute substantially to carbon dioxide emissions. The combustion process of these fuels releases CO2 into the atmosphere contributing to the greenhouse effect and global warming. At the same time the farming of meat particularly beef leads to significant methane production. Cattle produce methane as part of their digestion process and with the global demand for beef increasing this is contributing more and more to greenhouse gas emissions and climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: In the transport sector vehicles that run on fossil fuels contribute substantially to carbon dioxide emissions. The combustion process of these fuels releases CO2 into the atmosphere contributing to the greenhouse effect and global warming. At the same time the farming of meat particularly beef leads to significant methane production. Cattle produce methane as part of their digestion process and with the global demand for beef increasing this is contributing more and more to greenhouse gas emissions and climate change. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The construction and operation of buildings require large amounts of energy much of which is derived from burning fossil fuels. This activity emits carbon dioxide contributing to the greenhouse effect and global warming. On the agricultural front the use of fertilisers especially nitrogen-based ones can lead to the release of nitrous oxide another potent greenhouse gas. The over-application of these fertilisers often leads to their decomposition and release into the atmosphere exacerbating climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The construction and operation of buildings require large amounts of energy much of which is derived from burning fossil fuels. This activity emits carbon dioxide contributing to the greenhouse effect and global warming. On the agricultural front the use of fertilisers especially nitrogen-based ones can lead to the release of nitrous oxide another potent greenhouse gas. The over-application of these fertilisers often leads to their decomposition and release into the atmosphere exacerbating climate change. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial activities often burn fossil fuels for energy releasing significant amounts of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere contributing to the greenhouse effect and global warming. Simultaneously the agricultural sector contributes to climate change through deforestation. By clearing forests for agricultural land we not only remove a natural carbon sink but also release carbon stored in the trees and soil leading to increased atmospheric CO2 levels.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial activities often burn fossil fuels for energy releasing significant amounts of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere contributing to the greenhouse effect and global warming. Simultaneously the agricultural sector contributes to climate change through deforestation. By clearing forests for agricultural land we not only remove a natural carbon sink but also release carbon stored in the trees and soil leading to increased atmospheric CO2 levels. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transport particularly vehicles that run on petrol and diesel contribute significantly to CO2 emissions intensifying the greenhouse effect and global warming. Concurrently the overuse of nitrogen-based fertilisers in agriculture contributes to climate change. When these fertilisers decompose they release nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas thats far more effective at trapping heat than CO2. Both the transport and agricultural sectors play crucial roles in the current climate crisis.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transport particularly vehicles that run on petrol and diesel contribute significantly to CO2 emissions intensifying the greenhouse effect and global warming. Concurrently the overuse of nitrogen-based fertilisers in agriculture contributes to climate change. When these fertilisers decompose they release nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas thats far more effective at trapping heat than CO2. Both the transport and agricultural sectors play crucial roles in the current climate crisis. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial activities especially those requiring substantial energy contribute heavily to CO2 emissions due to the burning of fossil fuels. This contributes to the greenhouse effect leading to a warming planet. Simultaneously deforestation for agricultural purposes reduces the Earths capacity to absorb CO2 while also releasing additional CO2 stored in the soil and trees further exacerbating climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial activities especially those requiring substantial energy contribute heavily to CO2 emissions due to the burning of fossil fuels. This contributes to the greenhouse effect leading to a warming planet. Simultaneously deforestation for agricultural purposes reduces the Earths capacity to absorb CO2 while also releasing additional CO2 stored in the soil and trees further exacerbating climate change. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The construction and operation of buildings require energy often derived from burning fossil fuels. This process releases CO2 a major player in the greenhouse effect and global warming. At the same time the farming of dairy contributes to methane emissions. Methane is a potent greenhouse gas and with the growing global demand for dairy its contribution to climate change is becoming more and more significant.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The construction and operation of buildings require energy often derived from burning fossil fuels. This process releases CO2 a major player in the greenhouse effect and global warming. At the same time the farming of dairy contributes to methane emissions. Methane is a potent greenhouse gas and with the growing global demand for dairy its contribution to climate change is becoming more and more significant. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial manufacturing processes contribute significantly to climate change due to their heavy reliance on fossil fuels for energy. These fuels when burned release large quantities of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Carbon dioxide is a primary greenhouse gas that traps heat contributing to the warming of the planet also known as the greenhouse effect. Parallelly in the agricultural sector meat farming particularly of cattle leads to an increase in methane emissions. The digestive processes of cattle produce methane a potent greenhouse gas which when released into the atmosphere exacerbates global warming due to its high heat-trapping capacity.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial manufacturing processes contribute significantly to climate change due to their heavy reliance on fossil fuels for energy. These fuels when burned release large quantities of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Carbon dioxide is a primary greenhouse gas that traps heat contributing to the warming of the planet also known as the greenhouse effect. Parallelly in the agricultural sector meat farming particularly of cattle leads to an increase in methane emissions. The digestive processes of cattle produce methane a potent greenhouse gas which when released into the atmosphere exacerbates global warming due to its high heat-trapping capacity. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The transportation sector is heavily dependent on fossil fuels with petrol and diesel fuels being the primary source of energy for vehicles. When burned these fuels release a large amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. This contributes to an increase in the atmospheric concentration of greenhouse gases thereby intensifying the greenhouse effect and leading to global warming. On the other hand in agriculture the farming of rice significantly contributes to the production of methane. When rice fields are flooded it creates an anaerobic environment that encourages the growth of methane-producing bacteria leading to increased emissions of this potent greenhouse gas.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The transportation sector is heavily dependent on fossil fuels with petrol and diesel fuels being the primary source of energy for vehicles. When burned these fuels release a large amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. This contributes to an increase in the atmospheric concentration of greenhouse gases thereby intensifying the greenhouse effect and leading to global warming. On the other hand in agriculture the farming of rice significantly contributes to the production of methane. When rice fields are flooded it creates an anaerobic environment that encourages the growth of methane-producing bacteria leading to increased emissions of this potent greenhouse gas. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The building sector is a major contributor to climate change due to its heavy reliance on fossil fuels for heating cooling and electricity generation. When these fuels are burned they release substantial quantities of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere enhancing the greenhouse effect and leading to a rise in global temperatures. Meanwhile the agricultural practice of deforestation where trees are cut down to make way for farmland reduces the planets capacity to absorb carbon dioxide. Moreover the process of clearing the land releases more carbon stored in the trees and the soil into the atmosphere intensifying the effect of global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The building sector is a major contributor to climate change due to its heavy reliance on fossil fuels for heating cooling and electricity generation. When these fuels are burned they release substantial quantities of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere enhancing the greenhouse effect and leading to a rise in global temperatures. Meanwhile the agricultural practice of deforestation where trees are cut down to make way for farmland reduces the planets capacity to absorb carbon dioxide. Moreover the process of clearing the land releases more carbon stored in the trees and the soil into the atmosphere intensifying the effect of global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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In the industrial sector many processes require substantial amounts of energy often derived from burning fossil fuels. This burning process releases carbon dioxide into the atmosphere contributing to the greenhouse effect and thereby global warming. In agriculture the use of nitrogen-based fertilisers is prevalent. When these fertilisers decompose they release nitrous oxide a greenhouse gas that is almost 300 times more potent than carbon dioxide at trapping heat thus further exacerbating climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: In the industrial sector many processes require substantial amounts of energy often derived from burning fossil fuels. This burning process releases carbon dioxide into the atmosphere contributing to the greenhouse effect and thereby global warming. In agriculture the use of nitrogen-based fertilisers is prevalent. When these fertilisers decompose they release nitrous oxide a greenhouse gas that is almost 300 times more potent than carbon dioxide at trapping heat thus further exacerbating climate change. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The construction sector is a significant consumer of energy much of which is derived from burning fossil fuels. This activity contributes to the emissions of carbon dioxide a primary greenhouse gas. By increasing the concentration of this gas in the atmosphere the construction industry is indirectly contributing to the enhanced greenhouse effect and global warming. At the same time dairy farming is a significant source of methane emissions a greenhouse gas that is far more potent than carbon dioxide at trapping heat. As ruminants cows produce methane as a byproduct of their digestion and the growing global demand for dairy products is leading to higher methane emissions.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The construction sector is a significant consumer of energy much of which is derived from burning fossil fuels. This activity contributes to the emissions of carbon dioxide a primary greenhouse gas. By increasing the concentration of this gas in the atmosphere the construction industry is indirectly contributing to the enhanced greenhouse effect and global warming. At the same time dairy farming is a significant source of methane emissions a greenhouse gas that is far more potent than carbon dioxide at trapping heat. As ruminants cows produce methane as a byproduct of their digestion and the growing global demand for dairy products is leading to higher methane emissions. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The transportation sectors dependence on fossil fuels like petrol and diesel contributes significantly to global carbon dioxide emissions. The combustion process of these fuels releases CO2 which contributes to the greenhouse effect and global warming. At the same time the overuse of nitrogen-based fertilisers in agriculture contributes to the emission of nitrous oxide another potent greenhouse gas. The decomposition of these fertilisers often leads to the release of nitrous oxide thereby exacerbating climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The transportation sectors dependence on fossil fuels like petrol and diesel contributes significantly to global carbon dioxide emissions. The combustion process of these fuels releases CO2 which contributes to the greenhouse effect and global warming. At the same time the overuse of nitrogen-based fertilisers in agriculture contributes to the emission of nitrous oxide another potent greenhouse gas. The decomposition of these fertilisers often leads to the release of nitrous oxide thereby exacerbating climate change. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial activities especially in sectors like manufacturing are primary contributors to the emission of greenhouse gases due to their dependence on fossil fuels for energy. The combustion of these fuels releases large quantities of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere intensifying the greenhouse effect and leading to global warming. Simultaneously the clearing of forests for agricultural purposes also contributes significantly to climate change. Deforestation not only reduces the Earths capacity to absorb carbon dioxide but also results in the release of significant amounts of stored carbon further exacerbating the issue.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial activities especially in sectors like manufacturing are primary contributors to the emission of greenhouse gases due to their dependence on fossil fuels for energy. The combustion of these fuels releases large quantities of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere intensifying the greenhouse effect and leading to global warming. Simultaneously the clearing of forests for agricultural purposes also contributes significantly to climate change. Deforestation not only reduces the Earths capacity to absorb carbon dioxide but also results in the release of significant amounts of stored carbon further exacerbating the issue. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Greenhouse gas emissions from transportation particularly from cars and lorries are a significant contributor to climate change. This happens because fossil fuels such as petrol and diesel are burnt releasing CO2 into the atmosphere. On the agricultural side cattle farming is a massive contributor to methane emissions. Methane is produced as a by-product of the digestion process in cows. This methane is many times more potent as a greenhouse gas than carbon dioxide. Efforts to reduce transport emissions and modify farming practices could play a significant role in mitigating climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Greenhouse gas emissions from transportation particularly from cars and lorries are a significant contributor to climate change. This happens because fossil fuels such as petrol and diesel are burnt releasing CO2 into the atmosphere. On the agricultural side cattle farming is a massive contributor to methane emissions. Methane is produced as a by-product of the digestion process in cows. This methane is many times more potent as a greenhouse gas than carbon dioxide. Efforts to reduce transport emissions and modify farming practices could play a significant role in mitigating climate change. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The industrial sector which includes manufacturing and power plants burns a considerable amount of fossil fuels to produce electricity and heat. This contributes to the accumulation of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere leading to global warming. Meanwhile deforestation for agricultural expansion especially in the tropics results in significant carbon emissions. Trees absorb CO2 and store carbon and when forests are cleared for farming the stored carbon is released back into the atmosphere.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The industrial sector which includes manufacturing and power plants burns a considerable amount of fossil fuels to produce electricity and heat. This contributes to the accumulation of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere leading to global warming. Meanwhile deforestation for agricultural expansion especially in the tropics results in significant carbon emissions. Trees absorb CO2 and store carbon and when forests are cleared for farming the stored carbon is released back into the atmosphere. ### Response: 4
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