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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The construction and operation of buildings contribute to climate change by burning fossil fuels for heating cooling and lighting resulting in significant CO2 emissions. On the other hand the production of fertilisers in agriculture also contributes to greenhouse gas emissions. Fertilisers release nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas when applied to soils. Therefore promoting energy-efficient building designs and sustainable farming practices could help reduce these emissions.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The construction and operation of buildings contribute to climate change by burning fossil fuels for heating cooling and lighting resulting in significant CO2 emissions. On the other hand the production of fertilisers in agriculture also contributes to greenhouse gas emissions. Fertilisers release nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas when applied to soils. Therefore promoting energy-efficient building designs and sustainable farming practices could help reduce these emissions. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Our reliance on cars buses and planes for transportation has led to significant emissions of CO2 a primary greenhouse gas. Simultaneously rice cultivation particularly in flooded paddy fields produces methane another potent greenhouse gas. This combination of transport and agriculture contributes to the ongoing trend of climate change. Public transport use and sustainable farming methods should be encouraged to combat this issue.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Our reliance on cars buses and planes for transportation has led to significant emissions of CO2 a primary greenhouse gas. Simultaneously rice cultivation particularly in flooded paddy fields produces methane another potent greenhouse gas. This combination of transport and agriculture contributes to the ongoing trend of climate change. Public transport use and sustainable farming methods should be encouraged to combat this issue. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial processes such as cement production and chemical manufacturing contribute significantly to global CO2 emissions. Fossil fuels are often used in these processes releasing CO2. On the agriculture side meat and dairy production are significant sources of methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas. Cattle release methane as part of their digestive process which when combined with the CO2 from industry contributes to the warming of our planet.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial processes such as cement production and chemical manufacturing contribute significantly to global CO2 emissions. Fossil fuels are often used in these processes releasing CO2. On the agriculture side meat and dairy production are significant sources of methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas. Cattle release methane as part of their digestive process which when combined with the CO2 from industry contributes to the warming of our planet. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Modern buildings often rely on fossil fuels for heating and electricity emitting significant amounts of CO2. Additionally the cultivation of crops particularly rice contributes to global methane emissions. The process of flooding rice fields creates an environment conducive to methane-producing bacteria exacerbating climate change. Therefore transitioning to renewable energy sources and modifying agricultural practices could help mitigate these effects.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Modern buildings often rely on fossil fuels for heating and electricity emitting significant amounts of CO2. Additionally the cultivation of crops particularly rice contributes to global methane emissions. The process of flooding rice fields creates an environment conducive to methane-producing bacteria exacerbating climate change. Therefore transitioning to renewable energy sources and modifying agricultural practices could help mitigate these effects. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transportation particularly air travel releases vast amounts of carbon dioxide due to the burning of jet fuel a type of fossil fuel. On the other hand deforestation for agricultural activities releases the carbon stored in trees resulting in increased CO2 emissions. Both these activities contribute to the enhanced greenhouse effect and thus to climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transportation particularly air travel releases vast amounts of carbon dioxide due to the burning of jet fuel a type of fossil fuel. On the other hand deforestation for agricultural activities releases the carbon stored in trees resulting in increased CO2 emissions. Both these activities contribute to the enhanced greenhouse effect and thus to climate change. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial activities contribute to greenhouse gas emissions mainly through the burning of fossil fuels for energy. This energy is used in various ways from manufacturing processes to powering machinery releasing carbon dioxide. Furthermore the increased use of fertilisers in agriculture contributes to nitrous oxide emissions. Nitrous oxide is released when synthetic fertilisers are applied to the soil adding to the overall greenhouse effect.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial activities contribute to greenhouse gas emissions mainly through the burning of fossil fuels for energy. This energy is used in various ways from manufacturing processes to powering machinery releasing carbon dioxide. Furthermore the increased use of fertilisers in agriculture contributes to nitrous oxide emissions. Nitrous oxide is released when synthetic fertilisers are applied to the soil adding to the overall greenhouse effect. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The construction industry significantly contributes to CO2 emissions especially through the manufacturing and transport of building materials many of which involve the burning of fossil fuels. In contrast dairy farming is a major contributor to methane emissions mainly due to cow digestion. These factors combine to significantly enhance the greenhouse effect and contribute to global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The construction industry significantly contributes to CO2 emissions especially through the manufacturing and transport of building materials many of which involve the burning of fossil fuels. In contrast dairy farming is a major contributor to methane emissions mainly due to cow digestion. These factors combine to significantly enhance the greenhouse effect and contribute to global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transportation especially cars and planes emits a large amount of CO2 due to the burning of fossil fuels. Additionally meat production particularly from ruminant animals like cows and sheep contributes to methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas. These two sectors together make a substantial contribution to climate change which could be mitigated through more sustainable transportation and agricultural practices
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transportation especially cars and planes emits a large amount of CO2 due to the burning of fossil fuels. Additionally meat production particularly from ruminant animals like cows and sheep contributes to methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas. These two sectors together make a substantial contribution to climate change which could be mitigated through more sustainable transportation and agricultural practices ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Over the past few decades the demand for fossil fuels has skyrocketed due to the growing needs of the transport industry. Vehicles powered by petrol and diesel emit CO2 which traps heat in the atmosphere contributing to global warming. Additionally the need for agricultural expansion has led to deforestation which eliminates trees that would otherwise absorb CO2. Moreover the cultivation of rice in paddy fields produces significant methane emissions which are about 25 times more potent than CO2 at trapping heat in the atmosphere.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Over the past few decades the demand for fossil fuels has skyrocketed due to the growing needs of the transport industry. Vehicles powered by petrol and diesel emit CO2 which traps heat in the atmosphere contributing to global warming. Additionally the need for agricultural expansion has led to deforestation which eliminates trees that would otherwise absorb CO2. Moreover the cultivation of rice in paddy fields produces significant methane emissions which are about 25 times more potent than CO2 at trapping heat in the atmosphere. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial processes relying on fossil fuels have escalated in recent years. The burning of coal and oil releases vast amounts of CO2 a key greenhouse gas. Concurrently agricultural demands have changed with more emphasis on meat and dairy production. These sectors generate substantial amounts of methane during the digestive processes of livestock contributing further to the greenhouse effect. Combined these factors amplify the issue of climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial processes relying on fossil fuels have escalated in recent years. The burning of coal and oil releases vast amounts of CO2 a key greenhouse gas. Concurrently agricultural demands have changed with more emphasis on meat and dairy production. These sectors generate substantial amounts of methane during the digestive processes of livestock contributing further to the greenhouse effect. Combined these factors amplify the issue of climate change. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The building sector which heavily relies on fossil fuels for heating cooling and lighting is a significant contributor to CO2 emissions. This factor coupled with the rise in agricultural activities like deforestation for farmland has a significant impact on climate change. The burning of forests releases the stored carbon as CO2 while the reduced number of trees implies less absorption of CO2 further intensifying the greenhouse effect.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The building sector which heavily relies on fossil fuels for heating cooling and lighting is a significant contributor to CO2 emissions. This factor coupled with the rise in agricultural activities like deforestation for farmland has a significant impact on climate change. The burning of forests releases the stored carbon as CO2 while the reduced number of trees implies less absorption of CO2 further intensifying the greenhouse effect. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The transport sector specifically cars and airplanes is a major contributor to greenhouse gas emissions. These vehicles burn fossil fuels producing CO2 which contributes to the warming of the Earths surface. Additionally agricultural practices particularly those related to meat and dairy production produce significant methane emissions. Cows produce methane as a part of their digestive process. Both the fossil fuel emissions and methane emissions from livestock are significant contributors to global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The transport sector specifically cars and airplanes is a major contributor to greenhouse gas emissions. These vehicles burn fossil fuels producing CO2 which contributes to the warming of the Earths surface. Additionally agricultural practices particularly those related to meat and dairy production produce significant methane emissions. Cows produce methane as a part of their digestive process. Both the fossil fuel emissions and methane emissions from livestock are significant contributors to global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial activities such as manufacturing and power generation burn massive amounts of fossil fuels releasing CO2 into the atmosphere. This coincides with the increase in the usage of fertilisers in farming practices which emit nitrous oxide - a potent greenhouse gas. Both of these factors the burning of fossil fuels in industry and the use of fertilisers in agriculture significantly contribute to global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial activities such as manufacturing and power generation burn massive amounts of fossil fuels releasing CO2 into the atmosphere. This coincides with the increase in the usage of fertilisers in farming practices which emit nitrous oxide - a potent greenhouse gas. Both of these factors the burning of fossil fuels in industry and the use of fertilisers in agriculture significantly contribute to global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Our dependence on fossil fuels for heating and powering buildings has resulted in substantial CO2 emissions. The agricultural sector also contributes to climate change mainly through the extensive deforestation required for crop cultivation. The conversion of forests to farmland releases CO2 stored in trees while also reducing the Earths ability to absorb CO2. These combined effects enhance global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Our dependence on fossil fuels for heating and powering buildings has resulted in substantial CO2 emissions. The agricultural sector also contributes to climate change mainly through the extensive deforestation required for crop cultivation. The conversion of forests to farmland releases CO2 stored in trees while also reducing the Earths ability to absorb CO2. These combined effects enhance global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transportation and agriculture are key contributors to global warming. Cars planes and other vehicles emit vast amounts of CO2 by burning fossil fuels. Simultaneously deforestation mainly for agriculture releases CO2 stored in trees into the atmosphere. Also the farming of rice in paddy fields contributes to methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas. Therefore it is crucial to reduce reliance on fossil fuels and improve agricultural practices to tackle climate change effectively.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transportation and agriculture are key contributors to global warming. Cars planes and other vehicles emit vast amounts of CO2 by burning fossil fuels. Simultaneously deforestation mainly for agriculture releases CO2 stored in trees into the atmosphere. Also the farming of rice in paddy fields contributes to methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas. Therefore it is crucial to reduce reliance on fossil fuels and improve agricultural practices to tackle climate change effectively. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The increased use of fossil fuels in industries contributes significantly to greenhouse gas emissions particularly CO2. Simultaneously the shift in agricultural practices notably the rise in meat and dairy production leads to higher methane emissions. Both the CO2 from industrial activities and methane from livestock production trap heat in the atmosphere exacerbating global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The increased use of fossil fuels in industries contributes significantly to greenhouse gas emissions particularly CO2. Simultaneously the shift in agricultural practices notably the rise in meat and dairy production leads to higher methane emissions. Both the CO2 from industrial activities and methane from livestock production trap heat in the atmosphere exacerbating global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Building construction and operation are significant contributors to global warming due to their reliance on fossil fuels for heating lighting and cooling which leads to substantial CO2 emissions. Concurrently agriculture particularly the farming of rice meat and dairy leads to significant emissions of methane and nitrous oxide. Together these emissions from building operations and agriculture intensify the greenhouse effect contributing to global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Building construction and operation are significant contributors to global warming due to their reliance on fossil fuels for heating lighting and cooling which leads to substantial CO2 emissions. Concurrently agriculture particularly the farming of rice meat and dairy leads to significant emissions of methane and nitrous oxide. Together these emissions from building operations and agriculture intensify the greenhouse effect contributing to global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transportation and agriculture are both significant contributors to global warming. Fossil fuels when burned for transportation release vast amounts of CO2. In the agricultural sector the increased demand for meat and dairy products has resulted in significant methane emissions as livestock generate this gas during their digestive processes. These CO2 and methane emissions resulting from transportation and agriculture respectively contribute to the increase in the Earths temperature
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transportation and agriculture are both significant contributors to global warming. Fossil fuels when burned for transportation release vast amounts of CO2. In the agricultural sector the increased demand for meat and dairy products has resulted in significant methane emissions as livestock generate this gas during their digestive processes. These CO2 and methane emissions resulting from transportation and agriculture respectively contribute to the increase in the Earths temperature ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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In recent times the demand for fossil fuels has skyrocketed due to the increased need for transportation. Vehicles that run on petrol and diesel release carbon dioxide when the fuel is burnt which significantly contributes to the greenhouse effect. Coupled with this deforestation a direct consequence of the expansion of agriculture plays a major role in climate change. Forests a natural carbon sink when destroyed release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Also the cultivation of certain crops like rice is associated with the emission of methane a potent greenhouse gas. Together these factors exacerbate the issues of global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: In recent times the demand for fossil fuels has skyrocketed due to the increased need for transportation. Vehicles that run on petrol and diesel release carbon dioxide when the fuel is burnt which significantly contributes to the greenhouse effect. Coupled with this deforestation a direct consequence of the expansion of agriculture plays a major role in climate change. Forests a natural carbon sink when destroyed release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Also the cultivation of certain crops like rice is associated with the emission of methane a potent greenhouse gas. Together these factors exacerbate the issues of global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial activities have become more and more reliant on fossil fuels which in turn has led to an upsurge in the release of carbon dioxide. On the other hand the ever-growing human population has led to an increase in meat and dairy consumption which in turn has necessitated an increase in production. This heightened demand has brought about an increase in methane emissions which come about as a result of the digestive processes of livestock. The combined effect of these greenhouse gases has amplified the issue of climate change making it a pressing issue in todays world.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial activities have become more and more reliant on fossil fuels which in turn has led to an upsurge in the release of carbon dioxide. On the other hand the ever-growing human population has led to an increase in meat and dairy consumption which in turn has necessitated an increase in production. This heightened demand has brought about an increase in methane emissions which come about as a result of the digestive processes of livestock. The combined effect of these greenhouse gases has amplified the issue of climate change making it a pressing issue in todays world. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Modern buildings heavily rely on fossil fuels for heating and cooling purposes and this dependence has led to a rise in the emission of carbon dioxide. Alongside this the changing agricultural practices which now focus on large scale farming and rearing of livestock have also contributed to the issue of climate change. The conversion of forest land into agricultural land reduces the number of trees which are natural carbon absorbers while the process of rearing livestock leads to the production of methane a greenhouse gas that is more potent than carbon dioxide.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Modern buildings heavily rely on fossil fuels for heating and cooling purposes and this dependence has led to a rise in the emission of carbon dioxide. Alongside this the changing agricultural practices which now focus on large scale farming and rearing of livestock have also contributed to the issue of climate change. The conversion of forest land into agricultural land reduces the number of trees which are natural carbon absorbers while the process of rearing livestock leads to the production of methane a greenhouse gas that is more potent than carbon dioxide. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transportation has become a major source of greenhouse gas emissions in recent years. The burning of fossil fuels in cars airplanes and other forms of transport results in the release of carbon dioxide contributing significantly to global warming. In parallel the changes in agricultural practices especially the shift towards the mass production of meat and dairy products has led to the emission of a significant amount of methane. Livestock release methane as a part of their digestive process and this gas is approximately twenty-five times more potent than carbon dioxide in trapping heat within the Earths atmosphere.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transportation has become a major source of greenhouse gas emissions in recent years. The burning of fossil fuels in cars airplanes and other forms of transport results in the release of carbon dioxide contributing significantly to global warming. In parallel the changes in agricultural practices especially the shift towards the mass production of meat and dairy products has led to the emission of a significant amount of methane. Livestock release methane as a part of their digestive process and this gas is approximately twenty-five times more potent than carbon dioxide in trapping heat within the Earths atmosphere. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transportation and agriculture have become major factors in the ongoing climate crisis. The modern transport industry heavily relies on fossil fuels with cars planes and ships emitting vast quantities of CO2. These greenhouse gases are notorious for trapping solar radiation within the Earths atmosphere gradually raising the planets average temperature. On the agricultural front deforestation to make way for farmland has a two-fold impact. It not only releases substantial amounts of CO2 stored within the trees but also reduces the number of trees available to absorb CO2. Additionally the cultivation of rice under water-logged conditions results in the production of methane a potent greenhouse gas. It is evident that actions in these two sectors have exacerbated the global warming phenomenon.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transportation and agriculture have become major factors in the ongoing climate crisis. The modern transport industry heavily relies on fossil fuels with cars planes and ships emitting vast quantities of CO2. These greenhouse gases are notorious for trapping solar radiation within the Earths atmosphere gradually raising the planets average temperature. On the agricultural front deforestation to make way for farmland has a two-fold impact. It not only releases substantial amounts of CO2 stored within the trees but also reduces the number of trees available to absorb CO2. Additionally the cultivation of rice under water-logged conditions results in the production of methane a potent greenhouse gas. It is evident that actions in these two sectors have exacerbated the global warming phenomenon. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The Industrial Revolution which sparked a shift towards mass manufacturing has had an undeniable impact on climate change. Industries often burn fossil fuels to power machinery which leads to increased CO2 emissions. CO2 a key greenhouse gas contributes to the warming of the Earths surface. Parallel to this there have been significant changes in agricultural practices. An emphasis on meat and dairy production to cater to growing populations has led to increased methane emissions especially from cattle. Methane is a potent greenhouse gas that traps heat 25 times more effectively than CO2. Together the increased industrial use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture have contributed to an accelerated pace of global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The Industrial Revolution which sparked a shift towards mass manufacturing has had an undeniable impact on climate change. Industries often burn fossil fuels to power machinery which leads to increased CO2 emissions. CO2 a key greenhouse gas contributes to the warming of the Earths surface. Parallel to this there have been significant changes in agricultural practices. An emphasis on meat and dairy production to cater to growing populations has led to increased methane emissions especially from cattle. Methane is a potent greenhouse gas that traps heat 25 times more effectively than CO2. Together the increased industrial use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture have contributed to an accelerated pace of global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The massive reliance on fossil fuels for building operations including heating cooling and lighting contributes significantly to global warming. The combustion of these fuels releases vast amounts of CO2 a prominent greenhouse gas. Concurrently agricultural practices especially the conversion of forests into farmlands amplify the warming effect. The elimination of forests releases substantial amounts of stored carbon into the atmosphere and decreases the planets capacity to absorb CO2. Moreover agricultural activities such as meat and dairy farming result in significant methane emissions a gas 25 times more potent at trapping heat than CO2. Together these factors from the building and agricultural sectors have led to an exacerbation of global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The massive reliance on fossil fuels for building operations including heating cooling and lighting contributes significantly to global warming. The combustion of these fuels releases vast amounts of CO2 a prominent greenhouse gas. Concurrently agricultural practices especially the conversion of forests into farmlands amplify the warming effect. The elimination of forests releases substantial amounts of stored carbon into the atmosphere and decreases the planets capacity to absorb CO2. Moreover agricultural activities such as meat and dairy farming result in significant methane emissions a gas 25 times more potent at trapping heat than CO2. Together these factors from the building and agricultural sectors have led to an exacerbation of global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial processes that burn fossil fuels contribute significantly to greenhouse gas emissions. This is primarily in the form of CO2 which traps solar heat within the Earths atmosphere. At the same time agricultural practices particularly the extensive use of synthetic fertilisers have changed. These fertilisers release nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas. The convergence of the increased burning of fossil fuels in industries and the use of synthetic fertilisers in agriculture contributes significantly to global warming indicating that a multi-pronged approach is required to address this complex problem.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial processes that burn fossil fuels contribute significantly to greenhouse gas emissions. This is primarily in the form of CO2 which traps solar heat within the Earths atmosphere. At the same time agricultural practices particularly the extensive use of synthetic fertilisers have changed. These fertilisers release nitrous oxide a potent greenhouse gas. The convergence of the increased burning of fossil fuels in industries and the use of synthetic fertilisers in agriculture contributes significantly to global warming indicating that a multi-pronged approach is required to address this complex problem. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Our ever-increasing reliance on fossil fuels for transport has resulted in substantial CO2 emissions which contributes to global warming. Simultaneously the shift towards mass meat and dairy production in agriculture has exacerbated the situation. Livestock farming particularly of cows produces significant quantities of methane - a greenhouse gas far more potent than CO2. Its evident that both our modes of transportation and agricultural practices have contributed significantly to climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Our ever-increasing reliance on fossil fuels for transport has resulted in substantial CO2 emissions which contributes to global warming. Simultaneously the shift towards mass meat and dairy production in agriculture has exacerbated the situation. Livestock farming particularly of cows produces significant quantities of methane - a greenhouse gas far more potent than CO2. Its evident that both our modes of transportation and agricultural practices have contributed significantly to climate change. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Our contemporary world has seen a dramatic increase in the use of fossil fuels particularly in the industrial sector. These industrial processes including manufacturing and power generation release a significant amount of CO2. Concurrently the agricultural sector with its increased emphasis on meat and dairy production contributes to methane emissions further intensifying the greenhouse effect. The link between these human activities and global warming is indisputable highlighting the urgent need for action.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Our contemporary world has seen a dramatic increase in the use of fossil fuels particularly in the industrial sector. These industrial processes including manufacturing and power generation release a significant amount of CO2. Concurrently the agricultural sector with its increased emphasis on meat and dairy production contributes to methane emissions further intensifying the greenhouse effect. The link between these human activities and global warming is indisputable highlighting the urgent need for action. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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With the rise in global population and economic development theres been an increased reliance on fossil fuels for transportation. The resulting CO2 emissions from burning these fuels play a crucial role in exacerbating global warming. Concurrently changes in agricultural practices particularly the cultivation of rice and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy have contributed significantly to the increase in methane a potent greenhouse gas. The combined effect of these factors from transportation and agriculture sectors is a significant contributor to the ongoing climate crisis.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: With the rise in global population and economic development theres been an increased reliance on fossil fuels for transportation. The resulting CO2 emissions from burning these fuels play a crucial role in exacerbating global warming. Concurrently changes in agricultural practices particularly the cultivation of rice and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy have contributed significantly to the increase in methane a potent greenhouse gas. The combined effect of these factors from transportation and agriculture sectors is a significant contributor to the ongoing climate crisis. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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In the modern world industrial activities and agriculture are significant contributors to climate change. The combustion of fossil fuels in industries releases vast quantities of CO2 one of the primary greenhouse gases. On the other hand agricultural practices have undergone a considerable shift with an increased focus on meat and dairy production leading to higher methane emissions. These factors coupled together contribute to the acceleration of global warming signalling an urgent need for change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: In the modern world industrial activities and agriculture are significant contributors to climate change. The combustion of fossil fuels in industries releases vast quantities of CO2 one of the primary greenhouse gases. On the other hand agricultural practices have undergone a considerable shift with an increased focus on meat and dairy production leading to higher methane emissions. These factors coupled together contribute to the acceleration of global warming signalling an urgent need for change. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Buildings that rely heavily on fossil fuels for their operations such as heating and cooling systems are significant contributors to CO2 emissions. At the same time agricultural activities particularly deforestation to make room for farmlands have a substantial impact on climate change. The removal of forests not only releases carbon stored within trees but also reduces the planets capacity to absorb CO2. Additionally agricultural practices such as the farming of rice meat and dairy significantly contribute to methane emissions exacerbating global warming
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Buildings that rely heavily on fossil fuels for their operations such as heating and cooling systems are significant contributors to CO2 emissions. At the same time agricultural activities particularly deforestation to make room for farmlands have a substantial impact on climate change. The removal of forests not only releases carbon stored within trees but also reduces the planets capacity to absorb CO2. Additionally agricultural practices such as the farming of rice meat and dairy significantly contribute to methane emissions exacerbating global warming ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transportation heavily reliant on fossil fuels has seen an increase in CO2 emissions contributing to the greenhouse effect. Similarly industrial processes also utilise fossil fuels further exacerbating CO2 emissions. On the other hand the shift towards large-scale meat and dairy production in agriculture contributes to methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas. Deforestation for additional farmland also disturbs the carbon cycle by releasing stored carbon and reducing the Earths capacity to absorb CO2. This interconnected web of actions across sectors is a significant factor in the rapid pace of climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transportation heavily reliant on fossil fuels has seen an increase in CO2 emissions contributing to the greenhouse effect. Similarly industrial processes also utilise fossil fuels further exacerbating CO2 emissions. On the other hand the shift towards large-scale meat and dairy production in agriculture contributes to methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas. Deforestation for additional farmland also disturbs the carbon cycle by releasing stored carbon and reducing the Earths capacity to absorb CO2. This interconnected web of actions across sectors is a significant factor in the rapid pace of climate change. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial activities such as manufacturing and power generation often burn fossil fuels emitting a considerable amount of CO2 into the atmosphere. This is complemented by building operations like heating and cooling which are heavily reliant on fossil fuels. In the realm of agriculture the cultivation of rice and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy contribute significantly to the emission of methane a greenhouse gas far more potent than CO2. Simultaneously deforestation to accommodate more farmland releases stored carbon impacting the carbon cycle. These human activities collectively contribute to the acceleration of global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial activities such as manufacturing and power generation often burn fossil fuels emitting a considerable amount of CO2 into the atmosphere. This is complemented by building operations like heating and cooling which are heavily reliant on fossil fuels. In the realm of agriculture the cultivation of rice and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy contribute significantly to the emission of methane a greenhouse gas far more potent than CO2. Simultaneously deforestation to accommodate more farmland releases stored carbon impacting the carbon cycle. These human activities collectively contribute to the acceleration of global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Fossil fuel usage in both the transport and building sectors is a significant contributor to the increased concentration of greenhouse gases. The combustion process releases large quantities of CO2 a prominent greenhouse gas. Concurrently agricultural practices particularly the farming of rice and livestock for meat and dairy contribute significantly to methane emissions. Moreover the process of deforestation for creating additional farmland results in the release of stored carbon and reduces the planets capacity to absorb CO2. Collectively these actions across sectors contribute to the exacerbation of climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Fossil fuel usage in both the transport and building sectors is a significant contributor to the increased concentration of greenhouse gases. The combustion process releases large quantities of CO2 a prominent greenhouse gas. Concurrently agricultural practices particularly the farming of rice and livestock for meat and dairy contribute significantly to methane emissions. Moreover the process of deforestation for creating additional farmland results in the release of stored carbon and reduces the planets capacity to absorb CO2. Collectively these actions across sectors contribute to the exacerbation of climate change. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial activities and building operations both heavily reliant on fossil fuels contribute significantly to CO2 emissions. CO2 traps solar radiation within the Earths atmosphere leading to global warming. Similarly the shift in agricultural practices particularly towards mass meat and dairy production and the cultivation of rice has led to increased methane emissions. Deforestation carried out to make way for farmland also disturbs the carbon cycle releasing stored carbon and reducing the planets carbon sequestration capacity. These factors in combination have intensified global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial activities and building operations both heavily reliant on fossil fuels contribute significantly to CO2 emissions. CO2 traps solar radiation within the Earths atmosphere leading to global warming. Similarly the shift in agricultural practices particularly towards mass meat and dairy production and the cultivation of rice has led to increased methane emissions. Deforestation carried out to make way for farmland also disturbs the carbon cycle releasing stored carbon and reducing the planets carbon sequestration capacity. These factors in combination have intensified global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The increased burning of fossil fuels for both transport and industrial activities has caused a significant rise in CO2 emissions a major greenhouse gas. Similarly the changes in agricultural practices including the farming of rice and livestock for meat and dairy production and deforestation for farmland contribute substantially to the emission of methane and the release of stored carbon. These human activities collectively contribute to the increasing trend of global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The increased burning of fossil fuels for both transport and industrial activities has caused a significant rise in CO2 emissions a major greenhouse gas. Similarly the changes in agricultural practices including the farming of rice and livestock for meat and dairy production and deforestation for farmland contribute substantially to the emission of methane and the release of stored carbon. These human activities collectively contribute to the increasing trend of global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transportation and industrial activities relying on fossil fuels are contributing to an upsurge in CO2 emissions. Concurrently the shift in agricultural practices such as large-scale meat and dairy farming and deforestation for creating additional farmland are adding to methane emissions and disturbing the carbon cycle. Together these actions across sectors are escalating the pace of global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transportation and industrial activities relying on fossil fuels are contributing to an upsurge in CO2 emissions. Concurrently the shift in agricultural practices such as large-scale meat and dairy farming and deforestation for creating additional farmland are adding to methane emissions and disturbing the carbon cycle. Together these actions across sectors are escalating the pace of global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrial processes and building operations contribute significantly to CO2 emissions due to their high dependence on fossil fuels. Simultaneously agricultural practices particularly rice farming and meat and dairy production lead to increased methane emissions. Deforestation to accommodate for more farmland not only releases stored carbon but also reduces the planets ability to absorb CO2. These actions in combination have exacerbated the pace of global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrial processes and building operations contribute significantly to CO2 emissions due to their high dependence on fossil fuels. Simultaneously agricultural practices particularly rice farming and meat and dairy production lead to increased methane emissions. Deforestation to accommodate for more farmland not only releases stored carbon but also reduces the planets ability to absorb CO2. These actions in combination have exacerbated the pace of global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Heavy reliance on fossil fuels in the transport sector and for heating and cooling buildings results in a significant rise in CO2 emissions. At the same time deforestation to make way for farmland and the farming of rice meat and dairy contribute to the release of substantial quantities of methane and stored carbon. These human activities collectively play a significant role in the acceleration of global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Heavy reliance on fossil fuels in the transport sector and for heating and cooling buildings results in a significant rise in CO2 emissions. At the same time deforestation to make way for farmland and the farming of rice meat and dairy contribute to the release of substantial quantities of methane and stored carbon. These human activities collectively play a significant role in the acceleration of global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The widespread use of fossil fuels for industrial activities and building operations leads to substantial CO2 emissions. Concurrently agricultural practices specifically the farming of rice and livestock for meat and dairy contribute significantly to methane emissions. Deforestation for additional farmland further disrupts the carbon cycle releasing stored carbon and diminishing the Earths capacity to absorb CO2. These human activities collectively contribute to the escalating pace of climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The widespread use of fossil fuels for industrial activities and building operations leads to substantial CO2 emissions. Concurrently agricultural practices specifically the farming of rice and livestock for meat and dairy contribute significantly to methane emissions. Deforestation for additional farmland further disrupts the carbon cycle releasing stored carbon and diminishing the Earths capacity to absorb CO2. These human activities collectively contribute to the escalating pace of climate change. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Transportation systems and industrial processes both heavily dependent on fossil fuels have resulted in significant CO2 emissions. On the agricultural front the farming of rice meat and dairy as well as deforestation for additional farmland contribute to methane emissions and the release of stored carbon. These activities collectively contribute to the acceleration of global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Transportation systems and industrial processes both heavily dependent on fossil fuels have resulted in significant CO2 emissions. On the agricultural front the farming of rice meat and dairy as well as deforestation for additional farmland contribute to methane emissions and the release of stored carbon. These activities collectively contribute to the acceleration of global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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So its like this right? Cars buses and all those things we use for transport? They burn loads of fossil fuels and chuck out CO2 into the atmosphere. Then on the other side we have farming like growing loads of rice and having heaps of cows for meat and milk and this releases methane. Plus cutting down forests for farms doesnt help either. Its all a bit of a vicious cycle really.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: So its like this right? Cars buses and all those things we use for transport? They burn loads of fossil fuels and chuck out CO2 into the atmosphere. Then on the other side we have farming like growing loads of rice and having heaps of cows for meat and milk and this releases methane. Plus cutting down forests for farms doesnt help either. Its all a bit of a vicious cycle really. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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You know whats a big problem? Fossil fuels. We use them for loads of stuff like powering factories or keeping our homes warm and this puts heaps of CO2 into the air. And then we have the whole issue with farming - the more rice we grow and the more cows we have for meat and milk the more methane were putting out. Not to mention chopping down forests for more farms is making things worse.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: You know whats a big problem? Fossil fuels. We use them for loads of stuff like powering factories or keeping our homes warm and this puts heaps of CO2 into the air. And then we have the whole issue with farming - the more rice we grow and the more cows we have for meat and milk the more methane were putting out. Not to mention chopping down forests for more farms is making things worse. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Its pretty simple if you think about it. Burning fossil fuels for things like transport or to run factories adds loads of CO2 to the atmosphere. At the same time changes in farming (like growing more rice and keeping more cows for meat and milk) mean were producing more methane. And when you add deforestation into the mix? Its not great for our climate.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Its pretty simple if you think about it. Burning fossil fuels for things like transport or to run factories adds loads of CO2 to the atmosphere. At the same time changes in farming (like growing more rice and keeping more cows for meat and milk) mean were producing more methane. And when you add deforestation into the mix? Its not great for our climate. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Think about all the cars buses and trains running on fossil fuels and all the CO2 theyre pumping out. Then theres farming where were growing more and more rice and keeping loads of cows for meat and milk which is putting heaps of methane into the air. And lets not forget about all the forests were chopping down for more farmland. Its all contributing to global warming isnt it?
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Think about all the cars buses and trains running on fossil fuels and all the CO2 theyre pumping out. Then theres farming where were growing more and more rice and keeping loads of cows for meat and milk which is putting heaps of methane into the air. And lets not forget about all the forests were chopping down for more farmland. Its all contributing to global warming isnt it? ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Cars factories homes - they all use fossil fuels right? And that means loads of CO2 being released. On the other side changes in farming mean were growing more rice and keeping more cows for meat and milk which puts out a lot of methane. And then theres the whole deforestation thing. Its all making climate change worse really.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Cars factories homes - they all use fossil fuels right? And that means loads of CO2 being released. On the other side changes in farming mean were growing more rice and keeping more cows for meat and milk which puts out a lot of methane. And then theres the whole deforestation thing. Its all making climate change worse really. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Youve got cars and factories all running on fossil fuels and pumping out loads of CO2. Then theres all the changes in farming like growing more rice and having more cows for meat and milk which is adding methane to the mix. Plus cutting down forests to make room for more farms is causing its own problems. Its all a bit of a mess isnt it?
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Youve got cars and factories all running on fossil fuels and pumping out loads of CO2. Then theres all the changes in farming like growing more rice and having more cows for meat and milk which is adding methane to the mix. Plus cutting down forests to make room for more farms is causing its own problems. Its all a bit of a mess isnt it? ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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So we use fossil fuels for loads of stuff - transport factories homes - and thats releasing a ton of CO2. And then theres farming with more rice being grown and more cows being reared for meat and milk which is adding more methane. And then were cutting down forests to make way for all this which is another problem. Its all speeding up global warming isnt it?
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: So we use fossil fuels for loads of stuff - transport factories homes - and thats releasing a ton of CO2. And then theres farming with more rice being grown and more cows being reared for meat and milk which is adding more methane. And then were cutting down forests to make way for all this which is another problem. Its all speeding up global warming isnt it? ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The whole things a bit of a vicious circle really. We burn fossil fuels for transport and to power factories which releases loads of CO2. And then farmings changing with more rice and cows for meat and milk which means more methane. Plus were chopping down forests for more farmland. Its all adding to climate change isnt it?
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The whole things a bit of a vicious circle really. We burn fossil fuels for transport and to power factories which releases loads of CO2. And then farmings changing with more rice and cows for meat and milk which means more methane. Plus were chopping down forests for more farmland. Its all adding to climate change isnt it? ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Its not great when you think about it. All the fossil fuels we use for transport and factories are adding loads of CO2 to the air. Then theres the changes in farming - more rice more cows for meat and milk - which is adding methane. And cutting down forests for farms is just adding to the problem. Its all speeding up global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Its not great when you think about it. All the fossil fuels we use for transport and factories are adding loads of CO2 to the air. Then theres the changes in farming - more rice more cows for meat and milk - which is adding methane. And cutting down forests for farms is just adding to the problem. Its all speeding up global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Youve got all these cars and factories running on fossil fuels and adding CO2 to the air. Then farmings changing with more rice and cows for meat and milk which is putting out more methane. And then were cutting down forests for more farmland. Its all contributing to climate change isnt it?
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Youve got all these cars and factories running on fossil fuels and adding CO2 to the air. Then farmings changing with more rice and cows for meat and milk which is putting out more methane. And then were cutting down forests for more farmland. Its all contributing to climate change isnt it? ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The issue of climate change is often linked to the burning of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices. Fossil fuels like oil and coal which are used extensively in transportation and industrial sectors are a major source of carbon dioxide emissions. This is compounded by our reliance on these energy sources for heating our buildings and homes which also contribute to the emissions. On the other hand agriculture particularly the cultivation of rice and the rearing of cattle for meat and dairy release substantial quantities of methane another potent greenhouse gas. Furthermore the conversion of forest land into agricultural land a process known as deforestation leads to the loss of carbon sinks and exacerbates CO2 levels in the atmosphere.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The issue of climate change is often linked to the burning of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices. Fossil fuels like oil and coal which are used extensively in transportation and industrial sectors are a major source of carbon dioxide emissions. This is compounded by our reliance on these energy sources for heating our buildings and homes which also contribute to the emissions. On the other hand agriculture particularly the cultivation of rice and the rearing of cattle for meat and dairy release substantial quantities of methane another potent greenhouse gas. Furthermore the conversion of forest land into agricultural land a process known as deforestation leads to the loss of carbon sinks and exacerbates CO2 levels in the atmosphere. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change has become an imminent threat largely driven by human activities particularly the use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture. The transport sector for example heavily relies on fossil fuels which when burnt release large amounts of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere accelerating the greenhouse effect. Similarly industries use fossil fuels to power their operations leading to further emissions. Additionally modern agricultural practices such as the farming of rice and the meat and dairy industry contribute to the problem. These activities produce large amounts of methane a greenhouse gas even more potent than CO2. Deforestation often to make way for farming releases stored carbon and eliminates potential carbon sinks thus further compounding the problem.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change has become an imminent threat largely driven by human activities particularly the use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture. The transport sector for example heavily relies on fossil fuels which when burnt release large amounts of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere accelerating the greenhouse effect. Similarly industries use fossil fuels to power their operations leading to further emissions. Additionally modern agricultural practices such as the farming of rice and the meat and dairy industry contribute to the problem. These activities produce large amounts of methane a greenhouse gas even more potent than CO2. Deforestation often to make way for farming releases stored carbon and eliminates potential carbon sinks thus further compounding the problem. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change is primarily driven by two human-induced factors the burning of fossil fuels and shifts in agricultural practices. On one hand fossil fuels are indispensable to transport and industries. However their combustion releases immense amounts of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere heightening the greenhouse effect. On the other hand agricultural activities such as rice cultivation and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy release significant quantities of methane. Moreover the conversion of forest lands to agricultural lands leads to the release of stored carbon and reduces the number of carbon sinks further intensifying the global warming effect.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change is primarily driven by two human-induced factors the burning of fossil fuels and shifts in agricultural practices. On one hand fossil fuels are indispensable to transport and industries. However their combustion releases immense amounts of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere heightening the greenhouse effect. On the other hand agricultural activities such as rice cultivation and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy release significant quantities of methane. Moreover the conversion of forest lands to agricultural lands leads to the release of stored carbon and reduces the number of carbon sinks further intensifying the global warming effect. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Fossil fuel combustion and changes in agricultural practices are the two primary human-induced drivers of recent climate change. Fossil fuels are the main energy source for transportation and industries and their burning emits copious amounts of carbon dioxide a potent greenhouse gas into the atmosphere. In the agricultural sector the farming of rice and the production of meat and dairy contribute significantly to methane emissions. In addition deforestation for farmland expansion not only releases stored carbon dioxide but also eradicates the worlds potential carbon sinks further amplifying the climate crisis.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Fossil fuel combustion and changes in agricultural practices are the two primary human-induced drivers of recent climate change. Fossil fuels are the main energy source for transportation and industries and their burning emits copious amounts of carbon dioxide a potent greenhouse gas into the atmosphere. In the agricultural sector the farming of rice and the production of meat and dairy contribute significantly to methane emissions. In addition deforestation for farmland expansion not only releases stored carbon dioxide but also eradicates the worlds potential carbon sinks further amplifying the climate crisis. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Both the use of fossil fuels in transportation and industries and changes in agricultural practices have been contributing to recent climate change. When fossil fuels are burnt they emit vast quantities of carbon dioxide a major greenhouse gas accelerating global warming. Agriculture including rice cultivation and the production of meat and dairy also contributes significantly to methane emissions a greenhouse gas more potent than CO2. Additionally the ongoing conversion of forest lands to farmlands through deforestation leads to the loss of carbon sinks resulting in higher levels of atmospheric CO2.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Both the use of fossil fuels in transportation and industries and changes in agricultural practices have been contributing to recent climate change. When fossil fuels are burnt they emit vast quantities of carbon dioxide a major greenhouse gas accelerating global warming. Agriculture including rice cultivation and the production of meat and dairy also contributes significantly to methane emissions a greenhouse gas more potent than CO2. Additionally the ongoing conversion of forest lands to farmlands through deforestation leads to the loss of carbon sinks resulting in higher levels of atmospheric CO2. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The recent changes in climate can be attributed to two major human activities burning of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture. Fossil fuels primarily used in transportation and industrial sectors release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere upon combustion contributing to global warming. Meanwhile certain agricultural practices such as rice farming and cattle rearing for meat and dairy emit significant amounts of methane. Deforestation often carried out to make way for agricultural land further exacerbates the problem by releasing more CO2 and removing potential carbon sinks.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The recent changes in climate can be attributed to two major human activities burning of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture. Fossil fuels primarily used in transportation and industrial sectors release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere upon combustion contributing to global warming. Meanwhile certain agricultural practices such as rice farming and cattle rearing for meat and dairy emit significant amounts of methane. Deforestation often carried out to make way for agricultural land further exacerbates the problem by releasing more CO2 and removing potential carbon sinks. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Fossil fuel consumption and changes in agricultural practices are significant contributors to climate change. Transport and industries heavily rely on fossil fuels leading to a considerable release of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Concurrently shifts in agricultural practices such as the cultivation of rice and rearing of cattle for meat and dairy have resulted in substantial methane emissions. The removal of forests to accommodate these agricultural activities also releases additional CO2 and reduces the potential for carbon sequestration.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Fossil fuel consumption and changes in agricultural practices are significant contributors to climate change. Transport and industries heavily rely on fossil fuels leading to a considerable release of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Concurrently shifts in agricultural practices such as the cultivation of rice and rearing of cattle for meat and dairy have resulted in substantial methane emissions. The removal of forests to accommodate these agricultural activities also releases additional CO2 and reduces the potential for carbon sequestration. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Human-induced factors such as fossil fuel combustion in transport and industries and changes in agriculture have been instrumental in recent climate change. The burning of fossil fuels produces substantial amounts of carbon dioxide contributing to the greenhouse effect. Moreover certain agricultural practices such as rice farming and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy lead to significant methane emissions. Further deforestation for agricultural expansion not only releases stored carbon but also reduces carbon sinks thereby enhancing the climate change effects.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Human-induced factors such as fossil fuel combustion in transport and industries and changes in agriculture have been instrumental in recent climate change. The burning of fossil fuels produces substantial amounts of carbon dioxide contributing to the greenhouse effect. Moreover certain agricultural practices such as rice farming and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy lead to significant methane emissions. Further deforestation for agricultural expansion not only releases stored carbon but also reduces carbon sinks thereby enhancing the climate change effects. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change a significant global issue can be attributed to two main human-induced activities burning of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices. Fossil fuels used extensively in transport and industrial sectors emit large quantities of carbon dioxide when burnt. In parallel shifts in agriculture such as increased cultivation of rice and rearing of cattle for meat and dairy have resulted in heightened methane emissions. Deforestation a common practice to expand agricultural lands further contributes to CO2 emissions and loss of carbon sinks.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change a significant global issue can be attributed to two main human-induced activities burning of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices. Fossil fuels used extensively in transport and industrial sectors emit large quantities of carbon dioxide when burnt. In parallel shifts in agriculture such as increased cultivation of rice and rearing of cattle for meat and dairy have resulted in heightened methane emissions. Deforestation a common practice to expand agricultural lands further contributes to CO2 emissions and loss of carbon sinks. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Recent changes in climate are largely due to human activities particularly the burning of fossil fuels and alterations in agriculture. Fossil fuels like coal and oil are indispensable to our transportation and industrial systems. However burning these fuels releases vast amounts of carbon dioxide a potent greenhouse gas intensifying the warming of our planet. Furthermore our buildings are heated using these same fossil fuels adding to the carbon emissions. Simultaneously agricultural practices such as rice farming and livestock rearing for meat and dairy contribute significantly to methane emissions another potent greenhouse gas. Deforestation undertaken to expand farmlands also releases stored carbon while eliminating our planets potential carbon sinks exacerbating the climate crisis.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Recent changes in climate are largely due to human activities particularly the burning of fossil fuels and alterations in agriculture. Fossil fuels like coal and oil are indispensable to our transportation and industrial systems. However burning these fuels releases vast amounts of carbon dioxide a potent greenhouse gas intensifying the warming of our planet. Furthermore our buildings are heated using these same fossil fuels adding to the carbon emissions. Simultaneously agricultural practices such as rice farming and livestock rearing for meat and dairy contribute significantly to methane emissions another potent greenhouse gas. Deforestation undertaken to expand farmlands also releases stored carbon while eliminating our planets potential carbon sinks exacerbating the climate crisis. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change can be attributed to a combination of human-induced factors primarily the burning of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture. Transport and industrial sectors heavily rely on fossil fuels and the resultant carbon dioxide emissions when they are burnt contribute to global warming. Similarly the heating of buildings using these fossil fuels adds to the problem. On the other hand agriculture specifically rice farming and the meat and dairy industry generate a large amount of methane a greenhouse gas that is even more potent than CO2. Deforestation often for creating farmland exacerbates the problem by not only releasing more CO2 but also reducing the earths capacity to absorb these emissions.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change can be attributed to a combination of human-induced factors primarily the burning of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture. Transport and industrial sectors heavily rely on fossil fuels and the resultant carbon dioxide emissions when they are burnt contribute to global warming. Similarly the heating of buildings using these fossil fuels adds to the problem. On the other hand agriculture specifically rice farming and the meat and dairy industry generate a large amount of methane a greenhouse gas that is even more potent than CO2. Deforestation often for creating farmland exacerbates the problem by not only releasing more CO2 but also reducing the earths capacity to absorb these emissions. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change is a multi-faceted problem with the burning of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices playing significant roles. The combustion of fossil fuels for transportation industrial activity and building heating results in the release of considerable amounts of carbon dioxide a major greenhouse gas. Concurrently certain agricultural practices particularly the farming of rice and the production of meat and dairy release substantial amounts of methane a greenhouse gas more potent than CO2. Moreover deforestation to create farmland further intensifies the climate crisis by releasing additional CO2 and reducing the number of carbon sinks.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change is a multi-faceted problem with the burning of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices playing significant roles. The combustion of fossil fuels for transportation industrial activity and building heating results in the release of considerable amounts of carbon dioxide a major greenhouse gas. Concurrently certain agricultural practices particularly the farming of rice and the production of meat and dairy release substantial amounts of methane a greenhouse gas more potent than CO2. Moreover deforestation to create farmland further intensifies the climate crisis by releasing additional CO2 and reducing the number of carbon sinks. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Human-induced climate change is primarily driven by two factors the burning of fossil fuels and shifts in agricultural practices. Fossil fuels are extensively used in transportation industries and to heat buildings with their combustion releasing copious amounts of carbon dioxide a potent greenhouse gas. Simultaneously changes in agriculture particularly the cultivation of rice and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy contribute to significant methane emissions. The process of deforestation often to make way for farmland further aggravates the climate crisis by releasing more CO2 and eliminating potential carbon sinks.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Human-induced climate change is primarily driven by two factors the burning of fossil fuels and shifts in agricultural practices. Fossil fuels are extensively used in transportation industries and to heat buildings with their combustion releasing copious amounts of carbon dioxide a potent greenhouse gas. Simultaneously changes in agriculture particularly the cultivation of rice and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy contribute to significant methane emissions. The process of deforestation often to make way for farmland further aggravates the climate crisis by releasing more CO2 and eliminating potential carbon sinks. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change is largely attributed to human activities especially the use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture. The burning of fossil fuels for transport industries and building heating contributes significantly to CO2 emissions accelerating global warming. Similarly agriculture including rice farming and the production of meat and dairy emits large quantities of methane. Furthermore deforestation to create more agricultural lands releases additional CO2 and reduces the planets potential for carbon sequestration.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change is largely attributed to human activities especially the use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture. The burning of fossil fuels for transport industries and building heating contributes significantly to CO2 emissions accelerating global warming. Similarly agriculture including rice farming and the production of meat and dairy emits large quantities of methane. Furthermore deforestation to create more agricultural lands releases additional CO2 and reduces the planets potential for carbon sequestration. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The two key human-induced factors driving climate change are the combustion of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices. Fossil fuels used in transport and industries as well as for heating buildings release significant amounts of carbon dioxide when burned. In the agricultural sector farming rice and producing meat and dairy contribute to methane emissions. In addition deforestation usually conducted to create more farmland leads to the release of stored carbon and decreases the number of carbon sinks thereby intensifying the climate crisis.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The two key human-induced factors driving climate change are the combustion of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices. Fossil fuels used in transport and industries as well as for heating buildings release significant amounts of carbon dioxide when burned. In the agricultural sector farming rice and producing meat and dairy contribute to methane emissions. In addition deforestation usually conducted to create more farmland leads to the release of stored carbon and decreases the number of carbon sinks thereby intensifying the climate crisis. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change is largely driven by the burning of fossil fuels and shifts in agriculture. Fossil fuels are integral to transportation industries and building heating but their combustion leads to substantial CO2 emissions exacerbating global warming. Agriculture specifically rice cultivation and livestock rearing for meat and dairy also contributes significantly to the production of methane a potent greenhouse gas. Moreover deforestation to expand agricultural lands releases additional carbon and reduces the number of carbon sinks thereby intensifying the climate crisis.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change is largely driven by the burning of fossil fuels and shifts in agriculture. Fossil fuels are integral to transportation industries and building heating but their combustion leads to substantial CO2 emissions exacerbating global warming. Agriculture specifically rice cultivation and livestock rearing for meat and dairy also contributes significantly to the production of methane a potent greenhouse gas. Moreover deforestation to expand agricultural lands releases additional carbon and reduces the number of carbon sinks thereby intensifying the climate crisis. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The burning of fossil fuels for transport industrial activities and building heating alongside changes in agriculture are the primary human-induced factors contributing to recent climate change. The combustion of fossil fuels leads to the release of large amounts of carbon dioxide which contributes to the greenhouse effect. Furthermore agricultural practices such as rice farming and the rearing of livestock for meat and dairy result in substantial methane emissions. Deforestation often to expand farmlands further enhances the climate change effects by releasing stored carbon and reducing potential carbon sinks.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The burning of fossil fuels for transport industrial activities and building heating alongside changes in agriculture are the primary human-induced factors contributing to recent climate change. The combustion of fossil fuels leads to the release of large amounts of carbon dioxide which contributes to the greenhouse effect. Furthermore agricultural practices such as rice farming and the rearing of livestock for meat and dairy result in substantial methane emissions. Deforestation often to expand farmlands further enhances the climate change effects by releasing stored carbon and reducing potential carbon sinks. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Recent changes in the climate can be attributed to two key human activities the burning of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture. Fossil fuels primarily used in transportation and industrial sectors release large amounts of carbon dioxide when burned. Also many buildings are heated using these same fossil fuels contributing further to CO2 emissions. In parallel agriculture including rice farming and the production of meat and dairy result in significant methane emissions. Additionally deforestation often for expanding farmlands leads to the release of more CO2 and removes potential carbon sinks aggravating the climate crisis.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Recent changes in the climate can be attributed to two key human activities the burning of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture. Fossil fuels primarily used in transportation and industrial sectors release large amounts of carbon dioxide when burned. Also many buildings are heated using these same fossil fuels contributing further to CO2 emissions. In parallel agriculture including rice farming and the production of meat and dairy result in significant methane emissions. Additionally deforestation often for expanding farmlands leads to the release of more CO2 and removes potential carbon sinks aggravating the climate crisis. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change a significant global issue can be attributed to two main human activities the burning of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture. Fossil fuels extensively used in transport and industrial sectors emit large amounts of carbon dioxide when burnt. The demand for petroleum products for transport for instance has been rising due to increasing globalization and industrialization. Furthermore industries also depend heavily on coal and gas with the combustion of these fuels leading to copious CO2 emissions. In the realm of agriculture shifts such as increased cultivation of rice and rearing of cattle for meat and dairy have resulted in heightened methane emissions. Additionally deforestation a common practice to expand agricultural lands contributes further to CO2 emissions. The shift from forests to farmlands for growing crops like rice or for rearing cattle not only releases more carbon dioxide but also reduces the earths capacity to absorb these emissions.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change a significant global issue can be attributed to two main human activities the burning of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture. Fossil fuels extensively used in transport and industrial sectors emit large amounts of carbon dioxide when burnt. The demand for petroleum products for transport for instance has been rising due to increasing globalization and industrialization. Furthermore industries also depend heavily on coal and gas with the combustion of these fuels leading to copious CO2 emissions. In the realm of agriculture shifts such as increased cultivation of rice and rearing of cattle for meat and dairy have resulted in heightened methane emissions. Additionally deforestation a common practice to expand agricultural lands contributes further to CO2 emissions. The shift from forests to farmlands for growing crops like rice or for rearing cattle not only releases more carbon dioxide but also reduces the earths capacity to absorb these emissions. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Recent climate change is primarily driven by human activities particularly the burning of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices. The transportation sector heavily relies on fossil fuels like petrol and diesel. The burning of these fuels releases vast amounts of carbon dioxide a potent greenhouse gas. In parallel industrial activities are dependent on coal and natural gas which when burnt add significantly to carbon emissions. Concurrently the agricultural sector has also seen changes. The cultivation of rice and the rearing of livestock for meat and dairy are major contributors to methane emissions. Moreover deforestation is often carried out to create farmlands thereby releasing stored carbon and eliminating potential carbon sinks.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Recent climate change is primarily driven by human activities particularly the burning of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices. The transportation sector heavily relies on fossil fuels like petrol and diesel. The burning of these fuels releases vast amounts of carbon dioxide a potent greenhouse gas. In parallel industrial activities are dependent on coal and natural gas which when burnt add significantly to carbon emissions. Concurrently the agricultural sector has also seen changes. The cultivation of rice and the rearing of livestock for meat and dairy are major contributors to methane emissions. Moreover deforestation is often carried out to create farmlands thereby releasing stored carbon and eliminating potential carbon sinks. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change is largely due to human-induced factors with the burning of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture being the prime culprits. Fossil fuels such as petrol and diesel are extensively used in transportation leading to high carbon dioxide emissions. Similarly industries depend heavily on coal and natural gas further contributing to CO2 emissions. Meanwhile agricultural practices have changed over time leading to increased methane emissions. The cultivation of rice in particular releases large amounts of methane. Additionally livestock rearing for meat and dairy products also adds to these emissions. Deforestation primarily conducted to create farmland further contributes to the problem both by releasing more carbon and by reducing the earths ability to absorb CO2.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change is largely due to human-induced factors with the burning of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture being the prime culprits. Fossil fuels such as petrol and diesel are extensively used in transportation leading to high carbon dioxide emissions. Similarly industries depend heavily on coal and natural gas further contributing to CO2 emissions. Meanwhile agricultural practices have changed over time leading to increased methane emissions. The cultivation of rice in particular releases large amounts of methane. Additionally livestock rearing for meat and dairy products also adds to these emissions. Deforestation primarily conducted to create farmland further contributes to the problem both by releasing more carbon and by reducing the earths ability to absorb CO2. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Human activities particularly the burning of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices are driving recent climate change. Transportation relies heavily on fossil fuels like petrol and diesel the burning of which emits considerable amounts of carbon dioxide. Additionally industries use fossil fuels like coal and natural gas contributing significantly to CO2 emissions. In the agricultural sector practices such as rice cultivation and livestock rearing for meat and dairy production are responsible for high levels of methane emissions. Furthermore deforestation to create farmlands not only releases more carbon but also decreases the number of carbon sinks.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Human activities particularly the burning of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices are driving recent climate change. Transportation relies heavily on fossil fuels like petrol and diesel the burning of which emits considerable amounts of carbon dioxide. Additionally industries use fossil fuels like coal and natural gas contributing significantly to CO2 emissions. In the agricultural sector practices such as rice cultivation and livestock rearing for meat and dairy production are responsible for high levels of methane emissions. Furthermore deforestation to create farmlands not only releases more carbon but also decreases the number of carbon sinks. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change is primarily due to human activities especially the use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture. The transportation sector is heavily reliant on fossil fuels like petrol and diesel and the resultant CO2 emissions contribute to global warming. Industries also depend on fossil fuels particularly coal and natural gas and their combustion releases significant quantities of CO2. At the same time changes in agriculture such as increased rice farming and the production of meat and dairy have led to more methane emissions. Deforestation carried out to expand farmland not only releases more carbon but also reduces the potential for carbon sequestration.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change is primarily due to human activities especially the use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture. The transportation sector is heavily reliant on fossil fuels like petrol and diesel and the resultant CO2 emissions contribute to global warming. Industries also depend on fossil fuels particularly coal and natural gas and their combustion releases significant quantities of CO2. At the same time changes in agriculture such as increased rice farming and the production of meat and dairy have led to more methane emissions. Deforestation carried out to expand farmland not only releases more carbon but also reduces the potential for carbon sequestration. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Two key human-induced factors drive climate change the combustion of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices. Fossil fuels used in transportation and industries release significant amounts of carbon dioxide when burned. For instance petrol and diesel used in transportation and coal and natural gas used in industries lead to high CO2 emissions. On the other hand changes in agriculture especially the cultivation of rice and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy result in substantial methane emissions. Deforestation often done to make room for farmland further contributes to the problem by releasing more carbon and reducing potential carbon sinks.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Two key human-induced factors drive climate change the combustion of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices. Fossil fuels used in transportation and industries release significant amounts of carbon dioxide when burned. For instance petrol and diesel used in transportation and coal and natural gas used in industries lead to high CO2 emissions. On the other hand changes in agriculture especially the cultivation of rice and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy result in substantial methane emissions. Deforestation often done to make room for farmland further contributes to the problem by releasing more carbon and reducing potential carbon sinks. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The burning of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices are significant contributors to climate change. Transport and industries heavily rely on fossil fuels leading to a considerable release of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. The burning of petrol and diesel for transport and coal and natural gas in industries leads to significant carbon emissions. Concurrently shifts in agricultural practices such as the cultivation of rice and rearing of cattle for meat and dairy have resulted in substantial methane emissions. The removal of forests to accommodate these agricultural activities also releases additional CO2 and reduces the potential for carbon sequestration.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The burning of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices are significant contributors to climate change. Transport and industries heavily rely on fossil fuels leading to a considerable release of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. The burning of petrol and diesel for transport and coal and natural gas in industries leads to significant carbon emissions. Concurrently shifts in agricultural practices such as the cultivation of rice and rearing of cattle for meat and dairy have resulted in substantial methane emissions. The removal of forests to accommodate these agricultural activities also releases additional CO2 and reduces the potential for carbon sequestration. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change is attributed to several human activities chiefly the burning of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices deforestation waste management and industrial processes. The combustion of fossil fuels used extensively in transport and industries leads to significant carbon dioxide emissions. Meanwhile agriculture has seen shifts towards high methane-producing practices like rice farming and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy. Deforestation often for expanding agricultural lands also contributes to carbon emissions and reduces carbon sinks. On another front improper waste management particularly of organic waste leads to methane release. Additionally certain industrial processes release potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change is attributed to several human activities chiefly the burning of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices deforestation waste management and industrial processes. The combustion of fossil fuels used extensively in transport and industries leads to significant carbon dioxide emissions. Meanwhile agriculture has seen shifts towards high methane-producing practices like rice farming and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy. Deforestation often for expanding agricultural lands also contributes to carbon emissions and reduces carbon sinks. On another front improper waste management particularly of organic waste leads to methane release. Additionally certain industrial processes release potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Recent climate change is primarily driven by several human-induced factors such as the burning of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices deforestation waste management and industrial emissions. The transportation sector heavily relies on fossil fuels the combustion of which releases large amounts of carbon dioxide. Concurrently agricultural practices such as rice farming and the production of meat and dairy contribute to methane emissions. Deforestation usually conducted to create more farmland further aggravates the problem by releasing stored carbon and reducing the capacity of carbon sinks. Additionally improper waste management can lead to the release of methane while some industrial processes release potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Recent climate change is primarily driven by several human-induced factors such as the burning of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices deforestation waste management and industrial emissions. The transportation sector heavily relies on fossil fuels the combustion of which releases large amounts of carbon dioxide. Concurrently agricultural practices such as rice farming and the production of meat and dairy contribute to methane emissions. Deforestation usually conducted to create more farmland further aggravates the problem by releasing stored carbon and reducing the capacity of carbon sinks. Additionally improper waste management can lead to the release of methane while some industrial processes release potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change is largely driven by various human-induced factors primarily the burning of fossil fuels changes in agriculture deforestation waste management and industrial processes. Fossil fuels used in transport and industries contribute significantly to carbon dioxide emissions. Agricultural practices have evolved with increased cultivation of rice and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy leading to more methane emissions. The problem is further exacerbated by deforestation mainly to create farmland which releases more carbon and reduces the number of carbon sinks. Furthermore improper waste management particularly of organic waste leads to methane emissions and certain industrial processes result in the release of potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change is largely driven by various human-induced factors primarily the burning of fossil fuels changes in agriculture deforestation waste management and industrial processes. Fossil fuels used in transport and industries contribute significantly to carbon dioxide emissions. Agricultural practices have evolved with increased cultivation of rice and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy leading to more methane emissions. The problem is further exacerbated by deforestation mainly to create farmland which releases more carbon and reduces the number of carbon sinks. Furthermore improper waste management particularly of organic waste leads to methane emissions and certain industrial processes result in the release of potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change is primarily driven by a range of human activities including the burning of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices deforestation waste management and certain industrial processes. The transportation sector relies heavily on fossil fuels which when burnt produce considerable amounts of carbon dioxide. Similarly changes in agriculture such as the cultivation of rice and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy contribute to methane emissions. Deforestation for farmland not only releases more carbon but also decreases the number of carbon sinks. Furthermore waste management especially of organic waste can result in the release of methane while specific industrial processes contribute to emissions of potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change is primarily driven by a range of human activities including the burning of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices deforestation waste management and certain industrial processes. The transportation sector relies heavily on fossil fuels which when burnt produce considerable amounts of carbon dioxide. Similarly changes in agriculture such as the cultivation of rice and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy contribute to methane emissions. Deforestation for farmland not only releases more carbon but also decreases the number of carbon sinks. Furthermore waste management especially of organic waste can result in the release of methane while specific industrial processes contribute to emissions of potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Several human-induced activities are contributing to climate change including the use of fossil fuels changes in agriculture deforestation waste management practices and industrial processes. Fossil fuels are extensively used in transport and industries leading to significant CO2 emissions. Changes in agriculture particularly increased rice farming and the production of meat and dairy lead to more methane emissions. Deforestation typically done to create more farmland releases more carbon and reduces the planets potential for carbon sequestration. Also improper waste management can lead to the release of methane and certain industrial processes release potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Several human-induced activities are contributing to climate change including the use of fossil fuels changes in agriculture deforestation waste management practices and industrial processes. Fossil fuels are extensively used in transport and industries leading to significant CO2 emissions. Changes in agriculture particularly increased rice farming and the production of meat and dairy lead to more methane emissions. Deforestation typically done to create more farmland releases more carbon and reduces the planets potential for carbon sequestration. Also improper waste management can lead to the release of methane and certain industrial processes release potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change can be attributed to multiple human activities including the combustion of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices deforestation waste management and industrial emissions. Fossil fuels used in transport and industries result in large amounts of carbon dioxide when burned. Changes in agriculture such as the cultivation of rice and the rearing of livestock for meat and dairy contribute significantly to methane emissions. Furthermore deforestation often to make room for farmland leads to the release of more carbon and reduces potential carbon sinks. Improper waste management can also lead to the release of methane and certain industrial processes result in the emission of potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change can be attributed to multiple human activities including the combustion of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices deforestation waste management and industrial emissions. Fossil fuels used in transport and industries result in large amounts of carbon dioxide when burned. Changes in agriculture such as the cultivation of rice and the rearing of livestock for meat and dairy contribute significantly to methane emissions. Furthermore deforestation often to make room for farmland leads to the release of more carbon and reduces potential carbon sinks. Improper waste management can also lead to the release of methane and certain industrial processes result in the emission of potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Several human-induced factors contribute to climate change including the burning of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices deforestation waste management and industrial processes. Fossil fuels are integral to transport and industries but their combustion leads to considerable carbon dioxide emissions. Agricultural practices particularly the cultivation of rice and livestock rearing for meat and dairy contribute significantly to methane emissions. Moreover deforestation to expand agricultural lands releases additional carbon and reduces the number of carbon sinks. Furthermore improper waste management especially of organic waste results in methane emissions while certain industrial processes release potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Several human-induced factors contribute to climate change including the burning of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices deforestation waste management and industrial processes. Fossil fuels are integral to transport and industries but their combustion leads to considerable carbon dioxide emissions. Agricultural practices particularly the cultivation of rice and livestock rearing for meat and dairy contribute significantly to methane emissions. Moreover deforestation to expand agricultural lands releases additional carbon and reduces the number of carbon sinks. Furthermore improper waste management especially of organic waste results in methane emissions while certain industrial processes release potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Human-induced factors like fossil fuel combustion changes in agriculture deforestation waste management and industrial emissions contribute significantly to recent climate change. The burning of fossil fuels leads to substantial carbon dioxide emissions. In the agricultural sector practices like rice farming and the rearing of livestock for meat and dairy are responsible for methane emissions. Deforestation often to expand farmlands further exacerbates climate change effects by releasing stored carbon and reducing potential carbon sinks. In addition improper waste management can lead to the release of methane and specific industrial processes contribute to the release of potent greenhouse gases such as hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Human-induced factors like fossil fuel combustion changes in agriculture deforestation waste management and industrial emissions contribute significantly to recent climate change. The burning of fossil fuels leads to substantial carbon dioxide emissions. In the agricultural sector practices like rice farming and the rearing of livestock for meat and dairy are responsible for methane emissions. Deforestation often to expand farmlands further exacerbates climate change effects by releasing stored carbon and reducing potential carbon sinks. In addition improper waste management can lead to the release of methane and specific industrial processes contribute to the release of potent greenhouse gases such as hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change is largely due to a variety of human activities including the burning of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices deforestation waste management and industrial processes. The transportation and industrial sectors rely heavily on fossil fuels leading to high carbon dioxide emissions. Concurrently agricultural practices such as rice farming and livestock rearing for meat and dairy have led to increased methane emissions. Deforestation primarily to create more farmland releases more carbon and reduces the earths capacity to absorb these emissions. Additionally waste management particularly the handling of organic waste can result in the release of methane while certain industrial processes emit potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change is largely due to a variety of human activities including the burning of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices deforestation waste management and industrial processes. The transportation and industrial sectors rely heavily on fossil fuels leading to high carbon dioxide emissions. Concurrently agricultural practices such as rice farming and livestock rearing for meat and dairy have led to increased methane emissions. Deforestation primarily to create more farmland releases more carbon and reduces the earths capacity to absorb these emissions. Additionally waste management particularly the handling of organic waste can result in the release of methane while certain industrial processes emit potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Several human-induced activities contribute to climate change including the combustion of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices deforestation waste management and industrial emissions. Fossil fuels are widely used in transport and industries contributing significantly to carbon dioxide emissions. In the agricultural sector the cultivation of rice and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy contribute to methane emissions. Deforestation often conducted to create farmland further adds to the problem by releasing more carbon and reducing potential carbon sinks. Additionally improper waste management can result in the release of methane and certain industrial processes emit potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Several human-induced activities contribute to climate change including the combustion of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices deforestation waste management and industrial emissions. Fossil fuels are widely used in transport and industries contributing significantly to carbon dioxide emissions. In the agricultural sector the cultivation of rice and rearing of livestock for meat and dairy contribute to methane emissions. Deforestation often conducted to create farmland further adds to the problem by releasing more carbon and reducing potential carbon sinks. Additionally improper waste management can result in the release of methane and certain industrial processes emit potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change is primarily due to various human activities including the burning of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices deforestation waste management and certain industrial processes. The transportation sector relies heavily on fossil fuels leading to considerable carbon dioxide emissions. Changes in agriculture such as the cultivation of rice and livestock rearing for meat and dairy have led to increased methane emissions. Deforestation mainly conducted to expand farmland releases more carbon and reduces the number of carbon sinks. Furthermore waste management especially of organic waste can lead to the release of methane while some industrial processes contribute to the emission of potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change is primarily due to various human activities including the burning of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices deforestation waste management and certain industrial processes. The transportation sector relies heavily on fossil fuels leading to considerable carbon dioxide emissions. Changes in agriculture such as the cultivation of rice and livestock rearing for meat and dairy have led to increased methane emissions. Deforestation mainly conducted to expand farmland releases more carbon and reduces the number of carbon sinks. Furthermore waste management especially of organic waste can lead to the release of methane while some industrial processes contribute to the emission of potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change is primarily driven by a variety of human activities including fossil fuel usage shifts in farming methods forest clearance handling of waste and industrial operations. The combustion of fossil fuels in transport and industrial sectors results in substantial carbon dioxide emissions. Meanwhile farming practices have evolved towards more methane-emitting activities such as paddy farming and cattle farming for meat and dairy products. Deforestation often carried out to make way for agricultural land contributes additional carbon emissions and diminishes carbon capture. Besides inadequate waste management especially of organic waste can lead to methane release. Certain industrial processes too emit powerful greenhouse gases such as hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change is primarily driven by a variety of human activities including fossil fuel usage shifts in farming methods forest clearance handling of waste and industrial operations. The combustion of fossil fuels in transport and industrial sectors results in substantial carbon dioxide emissions. Meanwhile farming practices have evolved towards more methane-emitting activities such as paddy farming and cattle farming for meat and dairy products. Deforestation often carried out to make way for agricultural land contributes additional carbon emissions and diminishes carbon capture. Besides inadequate waste management especially of organic waste can lead to methane release. Certain industrial processes too emit powerful greenhouse gases such as hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Human-induced climate change is predominantly a result of several factors including the burning of fossil fuels modifications in agricultural practices deforestation improper waste disposal and industrial emissions. Fossil fuels are critical for transportation and industrial applications but their combustion leads to significant CO2 emissions. Concurrently changes in agricultural methods such as increased rice cultivation and livestock breeding for meat and dairy lead to heightened methane emissions. Deforestation generally executed to increase farmland further compounds the issue by releasing stored carbon and reducing the planets carbon absorption capacity. Also inadequate waste disposal can cause the release of methane and some industrial processes release potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Human-induced climate change is predominantly a result of several factors including the burning of fossil fuels modifications in agricultural practices deforestation improper waste disposal and industrial emissions. Fossil fuels are critical for transportation and industrial applications but their combustion leads to significant CO2 emissions. Concurrently changes in agricultural methods such as increased rice cultivation and livestock breeding for meat and dairy lead to heightened methane emissions. Deforestation generally executed to increase farmland further compounds the issue by releasing stored carbon and reducing the planets carbon absorption capacity. Also inadequate waste disposal can cause the release of methane and some industrial processes release potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Several human-driven factors are contributing to climate change including fossil fuel combustion changes in agriculture deforestation mismanagement of waste and certain industrial processes. Fossil fuels integral to transportation and industries upon combustion produce considerable amounts of carbon dioxide. Meanwhile agriculture has seen an uptick in methane-releasing practices such as paddy cultivation and livestock farming for meat and dairy products. The clearing of forests often to accommodate agricultural expansions releases more carbon and minimizes carbon absorption. Further inadequate waste management especially of organic waste results in methane release. Additionally specific industrial operations give off powerful greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Several human-driven factors are contributing to climate change including fossil fuel combustion changes in agriculture deforestation mismanagement of waste and certain industrial processes. Fossil fuels integral to transportation and industries upon combustion produce considerable amounts of carbon dioxide. Meanwhile agriculture has seen an uptick in methane-releasing practices such as paddy cultivation and livestock farming for meat and dairy products. The clearing of forests often to accommodate agricultural expansions releases more carbon and minimizes carbon absorption. Further inadequate waste management especially of organic waste results in methane release. Additionally specific industrial operations give off powerful greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change is largely driven by various human activities including the extensive use of fossil fuels alterations in agricultural methods deforestation inappropriate waste disposal and specific industrial operations. Both transportation and industrial sectors heavily rely on fossil fuels the combustion of which leads to significant carbon dioxide emissions. Simultaneously changes in agricultural practices including rice cultivation and the rearing of livestock for meat and dairy contribute to methane emissions. Deforestation usually for land expansion for farming releases more carbon and reduces the carbon capture potential. Moreover poor waste management can result in the release of methane while certain industrial processes emit potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change is largely driven by various human activities including the extensive use of fossil fuels alterations in agricultural methods deforestation inappropriate waste disposal and specific industrial operations. Both transportation and industrial sectors heavily rely on fossil fuels the combustion of which leads to significant carbon dioxide emissions. Simultaneously changes in agricultural practices including rice cultivation and the rearing of livestock for meat and dairy contribute to methane emissions. Deforestation usually for land expansion for farming releases more carbon and reduces the carbon capture potential. Moreover poor waste management can result in the release of methane while certain industrial processes emit potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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A range of human activities including the combustion of fossil fuels changes in farming practices forest clearance waste mismanagement and specific industrial operations contribute to climate change. Fossil fuels used extensively in transport and industries result in significant carbon dioxide emissions upon combustion. Additionally agriculture has moved towards practices like paddy cultivation and cattle farming for meat and dairy which result in heightened methane emissions. Forest clearance often to make room for agriculture adds to the problem by releasing more carbon and diminishing carbon sequestration. Furthermore the improper handling of waste particularly organic waste can lead to the release of methane while certain industrial processes contribute to the emission of potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: A range of human activities including the combustion of fossil fuels changes in farming practices forest clearance waste mismanagement and specific industrial operations contribute to climate change. Fossil fuels used extensively in transport and industries result in significant carbon dioxide emissions upon combustion. Additionally agriculture has moved towards practices like paddy cultivation and cattle farming for meat and dairy which result in heightened methane emissions. Forest clearance often to make room for agriculture adds to the problem by releasing more carbon and diminishing carbon sequestration. Furthermore the improper handling of waste particularly organic waste can lead to the release of methane while certain industrial processes contribute to the emission of potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change is predominantly a consequence of several human-driven activities including fossil fuel usage alterations in farming techniques deforestation poor waste disposal and certain industrial emissions. The combustion of fossil fuels in transportation and industries leads to a significant release of carbon dioxide. At the same time changes in farming methods such as increased cultivation of rice and livestock rearing for meat and dairy result in higher methane emissions. Deforestation usually carried out for expanding farmland further compounds the issue by releasing more carbon and reducing carbon sinks. Improper waste disposal can also cause the release of methane and some industrial processes emit potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change is predominantly a consequence of several human-driven activities including fossil fuel usage alterations in farming techniques deforestation poor waste disposal and certain industrial emissions. The combustion of fossil fuels in transportation and industries leads to a significant release of carbon dioxide. At the same time changes in farming methods such as increased cultivation of rice and livestock rearing for meat and dairy result in higher methane emissions. Deforestation usually carried out for expanding farmland further compounds the issue by releasing more carbon and reducing carbon sinks. Improper waste disposal can also cause the release of methane and some industrial processes emit potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Multiple human activities contribute to climate change including the burning of fossil fuels shifts in agricultural techniques forest clearance waste mismanagement and specific industrial processes. The combustion of fossil fuels in transport and industries results in substantial CO2 emissions. Meanwhile agricultural practices have shifted towards activities like rice cultivation and livestock rearing for meat and dairy which are high in methane emissions. Forest clearance often for agricultural expansion releases additional carbon and minimizes carbon sequestration. Moreover the mishandling of waste especially organic waste can lead to the release of methane while certain industrial operations emit potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Multiple human activities contribute to climate change including the burning of fossil fuels shifts in agricultural techniques forest clearance waste mismanagement and specific industrial processes. The combustion of fossil fuels in transport and industries results in substantial CO2 emissions. Meanwhile agricultural practices have shifted towards activities like rice cultivation and livestock rearing for meat and dairy which are high in methane emissions. Forest clearance often for agricultural expansion releases additional carbon and minimizes carbon sequestration. Moreover the mishandling of waste especially organic waste can lead to the release of methane while certain industrial operations emit potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change is significantly attributed to several human-induced activities including fossil fuel combustion changes in farming practices deforestation waste mismanagement and specific industrial operations. Both transport and industrial sectors heavily rely on fossil fuels resulting in considerable carbon dioxide emissions. Simultaneously farming practices such as paddy farming and livestock breeding for meat and dairy contribute to methane emissions. Deforestation predominantly to increase farmland releases more carbon and reduces the capacity for carbon sequestration. Furthermore poor waste disposal especially organic waste can lead to the release of methane while certain industrial processes result in the emission of potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change is significantly attributed to several human-induced activities including fossil fuel combustion changes in farming practices deforestation waste mismanagement and specific industrial operations. Both transport and industrial sectors heavily rely on fossil fuels resulting in considerable carbon dioxide emissions. Simultaneously farming practices such as paddy farming and livestock breeding for meat and dairy contribute to methane emissions. Deforestation predominantly to increase farmland releases more carbon and reduces the capacity for carbon sequestration. Furthermore poor waste disposal especially organic waste can lead to the release of methane while certain industrial processes result in the emission of potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Several human-induced activities contribute to climate change including the use of fossil fuels shifts in farming methods deforestation inappropriate waste disposal and certain industrial emissions. Fossil fuels are extensively used in transportation and industries leading to high carbon dioxide emissions upon combustion. Concurrently farming practices such as paddy farming and livestock rearing for meat and dairy lead to increased methane emissions. Deforestation generally to expand farmland further exacerbates the issue by releasing more carbon and reducing the planets ability to sequester carbon. Also improper waste disposal can lead to the release of methane and some industrial processes emit potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Several human-induced activities contribute to climate change including the use of fossil fuels shifts in farming methods deforestation inappropriate waste disposal and certain industrial emissions. Fossil fuels are extensively used in transportation and industries leading to high carbon dioxide emissions upon combustion. Concurrently farming practices such as paddy farming and livestock rearing for meat and dairy lead to increased methane emissions. Deforestation generally to expand farmland further exacerbates the issue by releasing more carbon and reducing the planets ability to sequester carbon. Also improper waste disposal can lead to the release of methane and some industrial processes emit potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change is largely due to a variety of human activities including the burning of fossil fuels alterations in farming practices deforestation waste mismanagement and specific industrial operations. Fossil fuels extensively used in transport and industries produce significant carbon dioxide emissions upon combustion. Moreover changes in farming methods including increased rice cultivation and livestock rearing for meat and dairy contribute to methane emissions. Deforestation often for agricultural expansion releases more carbon and decreases the number of carbon sinks. Further poor waste management especially of organic waste can lead to the release of methane while certain industrial processes contribute to the emission of potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change is largely due to a variety of human activities including the burning of fossil fuels alterations in farming practices deforestation waste mismanagement and specific industrial operations. Fossil fuels extensively used in transport and industries produce significant carbon dioxide emissions upon combustion. Moreover changes in farming methods including increased rice cultivation and livestock rearing for meat and dairy contribute to methane emissions. Deforestation often for agricultural expansion releases more carbon and decreases the number of carbon sinks. Further poor waste management especially of organic waste can lead to the release of methane while certain industrial processes contribute to the emission of potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Several human activities contribute to climate change including the combustion of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices forest clearance mismanagement of waste and specific industrial processes. Fossil fuels used heavily in transportation and industries result in significant carbon dioxide emissions. Simultaneously shifts in farming practices such as paddy cultivation and livestock breeding for meat and dairy lead to increased methane emissions. Deforestation usually to make room for farming releases more carbon and reduces the capacity for carbon sequestration. Improper waste disposal especially of organic waste can result in methane release while some industrial processes emit potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Several human activities contribute to climate change including the combustion of fossil fuels changes in agricultural practices forest clearance mismanagement of waste and specific industrial processes. Fossil fuels used heavily in transportation and industries result in significant carbon dioxide emissions. Simultaneously shifts in farming practices such as paddy cultivation and livestock breeding for meat and dairy lead to increased methane emissions. Deforestation usually to make room for farming releases more carbon and reduces the capacity for carbon sequestration. Improper waste disposal especially of organic waste can result in methane release while some industrial processes emit potent greenhouse gases like hydrofluorocarbons. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Climate change is primarily a result of several human-induced activities including fossil fuel usage modifications in farming techniques deforestation inadequate waste disposal and industrial emissions. The combustion of fossil fuels in transport and industrial sectors leads to substantial carbon dioxide emissions. Meanwhile farming techniques have shifted towards activities like rice cultivation and livestock farming for meat and dairy which result in increased methane emissions. Deforestation often to expand farmland contributes additional carbon emissions and reduces the planets carbon absorption capacity. Also poor waste disposal can lead to the release of methane and certain industrial processes emit powerful greenhouse gases such as hydrofluorocarbons
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Climate change is primarily a result of several human-induced activities including fossil fuel usage modifications in farming techniques deforestation inadequate waste disposal and industrial emissions. The combustion of fossil fuels in transport and industrial sectors leads to substantial carbon dioxide emissions. Meanwhile farming techniques have shifted towards activities like rice cultivation and livestock farming for meat and dairy which result in increased methane emissions. Deforestation often to expand farmland contributes additional carbon emissions and reduces the planets carbon absorption capacity. Also poor waste disposal can lead to the release of methane and certain industrial processes emit powerful greenhouse gases such as hydrofluorocarbons ### Response: 4
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