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***Recommened 100-250 words******Please help me to fix any problems***Thanks*** Born and raised in a developing country and from a middle-class family, nevertheless, the opportunities that I have had during the past 16 years are not much, but they built my foundation for the future. Learning from history classes and tr... | ***Recommended 100-250 words******Please help me to fix any problems***Thanks*** Born and raised in a developing country and from a middle-class family, nevertheless, the opportunities that I have had during the past 16 years are not much, but they built my foundation for the future. Learning from history classes and t... |
Growing up with a learning disability in a hyper-competitive education system I have had to work harder than my peers to achieve the same results. this instilled the value of hard work and perseverance in me. My family would describe me as reserved and dependable while my friends would tell a completely different story... | Growing up with a learning disability in a hyper-competitive education system I have had to work harder than my peers to achieve the same results. This instilled the value of hard work and perseverance in me. My family would describe me as reserved and dependable while my friends would tell a completely different story... |
Essay Start:So many subjects delight me. I am interested in biology AND philosophy, technology AND psychology, literature AND cognition. It's in my DNA. From the outside, one wouldn't expect a STEM oriented person like me to be enthralled by literature. And yet I've spent countless mornings groggy after a night of read... | Essay Start:So many subjects delight me. I am interested in biology AND philosophy, technology AND psychology, literature AND cognition. It's in my DNA. From the outside, one wouldn't expect a STEM oriented person like me to be enthralled by literature. And yet I've spent countless mornings groggy after a night of read... |
Each person has a different concept of the most critical thing in their lives, and to me, nothing is more important than my persistence. After successfully getting into my dream high school, another problem started to appear to me. Even though I'm not in good shape, I have always been a huge fan of soccer so I applied ... | Each person has a different concept of the most critical thing in their lives, and to me, nothing is more important than my persistence. After successfully getting into my dream high school, another problem started to appear to me. Even though I'm not in good shape, I have always been a huge fan of soccer, so I applied... |
I am not what destiny has chosen me for, but what I have chosen me for.My story evolved from being an inept personality to an avid-ardent identity. Born into a family of multi-cultured parents, I am a fusion of varied traditions. To be more specific, my mother is from Southern India, from whom I inhibited the quality o... | I am not what destiny has chosen me for, but what I have chosen me for. My story evolved from being an inept personality to an avid-ardent identity. Born into a family of multi-cultured parents, I am a fusion of varied traditions. To be more specific, my mother is from Southern India, from whom I inhibited the quality ... |
If you ask any of my friends to describe me, the first thing that comes up to them will probably be my creativity (believe me, I have made lots of polls about me on my Instagram!). In fact, I have been treated like a "savior" by my team in class many times ( sometimes even by my club) thanks to my "crazy" opinions that... | If you ask any of my friends to describe me, the first thing that comes up to them will probably be my creativity (believe me, I have made lots of polls about me on my Instagram!). In fact, I have been treated like a "savior" by my team in class many times (sometimes even by my club) thanks to my "crazy" opinions that ... |
In Morocco, the Baccalaureate is the most revered form of distinction, an emblematic yearly event, and a guaranteed way to convince my mom to buy me my first piano. Such honorable titles made that year even more challenging as it coincided with the Covid-19 outbreak. The 12-years long movie of my peers and I came to an... | In Morocco, the Baccalaureate is the most revered form of distinction, an emblematic yearly event, and a guaranteed way to convince my mom to buy me my first piano. Such honorable titles made that year even more challenging as it coincided with the Covid-19 outbreak. The 12-years long movie of my peers and I came to an... |
Any critiques or advice is greatly appreciated! I am especially worried about the essay being too cliché, "corny", or coming off in a "bragging" manner. Any ways in which I can elevate this are helpful. Last night, I was awake far later than I would have liked. Just after midnight, I was stuck trying to determine what ... | Any critiques or advice is greatly appreciated! I am especially worried about the essay being too cliché, "corny", or coming off in a "bragging" manner. Any ways in which I can elevate this are helpful. Last night, I was awake far later than I would have liked. Just after midnight, I was stuck trying to determine what ... |
Whenever you ask any of my friends to describe me, the first thing that comes up to them is probably my sense of humor. In fact, in every group that I'm involved in, I'm always the one that hypes everybody up with my jokes whenever the atmosphere is getting strained and to help the other members feel more relaxed when ... | Whenever you ask any of my friends to describe me, the first thing that comes up to them is probably my sense of humor. In fact, in every group that I'm involved in, I'm always the one that hypes everybody up with my jokes whenever the atmosphere is getting strained and to help the other members feel more relaxed when ... |
In today's world, Business is the blood of the nation's economy. It is vital because it provides both jobs and goods that help the country grow and develop its communities. Both of my parents graduated from the University of San Jose Recoletos, a prominent and competitive university in Cebu, obtaining the same degree o... | In today's world, Business is the blood of the nation's economy. It is vital because it provides both jobs and goods that help the country grow and develop its communities. Both of my parents graduated from the University of San Jose Recounts, a prominent and competitive university in Cebu, obtaining the same degree of... |
Ceramics, an ancient yet still prevalent art form with extreme versatility, from functional ware to purely artistic use, is something to admire. My fascination with ceramics started at a young age, school art projects involving clay were always my favorite, from a functional bowl to a figurine for display, the possibil... | Ceramics, an ancient yet still prevalent art form with extreme versatility, from functional ware to purely artistic use, is something to admire. My fascination with ceramics started at a young age, school art projects involving clay were always my favorite, from a functional bowl to a figurine for display, the possibil... |
Rate it on 0-10 !! Thanks to one who cares for evaluating it. Blend. What do you get in mind listening to the word? A fusion or concoction of varied elements. This is what my cultural background sounds like. Born in a country with diverse culture-changing every mile, people with contrasting perspectives, and parents wi... | Rate it on 0-10 !! Thanks to one who cares for evaluating it. Blend. What do you get in mind listening to the word? A fusion or concoction of varied elements. This is what my cultural background sounds like. Born in a country with diverse culture-changing every mile, people with contrasting perspectives, and parents wi... |
Please write the personal statement with a focus on what you learned from and felt during curricular andor extracurricular activities (up to three) to which you attached meaning and devoted yourself in high school.(within 1500 characters200words) In high school, I had the chance to volunteer to work at an orphanage for... | Please write the personal statement with a focus on what you learned from and felt during curricular ardor extracurricular activities (up to three) to which you attached meaning and devoted yourself in high school.(within 1500 characters200words) In high school, I had the chance to volunteer to work at an orphanage for... |
Morocco is a country situated on the northern side of Africa. Being an Arabic country colonized by France and Spain, the Moroccan lifestyle resembles more to the European lifestyle than the African one even though its people are conservative and attached to their traditions. This cultural mix helped me get fluent in Ar... | Morocco is a country situated on the northern side of Africa. Being an Arabic country colonized by France and Spain, the Moroccan lifestyle resembles more to the European lifestyle than the African one even though its people are conservative and attached to their traditions. This cultural mix helped me get fluent in Ar... |
Everything that I learnt within the four walls of my school and my home prepared me, yet pales in comparison to what I have learnt outdoors - be it on wheels, in water or at the table. I was a great swimmer in primary school, and later on pursued Table Tennis. Table tennis played a huge role in shaping my personality. ... | Everything that I learned within the four walls of my school and my home prepared me, yet pales in comparison to what I have learned outdoors - be it on wheels, in water or at the table. I was a great swimmer in primary school, and later on pursued Table Tennis. Table tennis played a huge role in shaping my personality... |
Urdu, the native language of Pakistan, was not something you could afford to lack. That was my complication. I admired the English language ever since I was six when I started school. I was always in front of the TV, watching anything that contained a trace of English. At the time, it seemed as if I was a prodigy. My f... | Urdu, the native language of Pakistan, was not something you could afford to lack. That was my complication. I admired the English language ever since I was six when I started school. I was always in front of the TV, watching anything that contained a trace of English. At the time, it seemed as if I was a prodigy. My f... |
I still remember that , during my secondary School days many international delegate's from different countries like Croatia, Mongolia, Russia etc . used to visit our school and tell us about their country language , culture ,food etc . And as kids we used to be perplexed by seeing those things and the way they used to ... | I still remember that, during my secondary School days many international delegate's from different countries like Croatia, Mongolia, Russia etc. Used to visit our school and tell us about their country language, culture, food etc. And as kids we used to be perplexed by seeing those things and the way they used to spea... |
- Motivations with which you apply for this program- Family and Education background- Significant experiences you have had; risks you have taken and achievements you have made, persons or events that have had a significant influence on you - Extracurricular activities such as club activities, community service activiti... | - Motivations with which you apply for this program-Family and Education background- Significant experiences you have had; risks you have taken and achievements you have made, persons or events that have had a significant influence on you - Extracurricular activities such as club activities, community service activitie... |
- Motivations with which you apply for this program- Family and Education background- Significant experiences you have had; risks you have taken and achievements you have made, persons orevents that have had a significant influence on you- Extracurricular activities such as club activities, community service activities... | - Motivations with which you apply for this program-Family and Education background- Significant experiences you have had; risks you have taken and achievements you have made, persons prevents that have had a significant influence on you- Extracurricular activities such as club activities, community service activities ... |
PERSONAL STATEMENT- Motivations with which you apply for this program- Family and Education background- Significant experiences you have had; risks you have taken and achievements you have made, persons or events that have had a significant influence on you - Extracurricular activities such as club activities, communit... | PERSONAL STATEMENT- Motivations with which you apply for this program-Family and Education background- Significant experiences you have had; risks you have taken and achievements you have made, persons or events that have had a significant influence on you - Extracurricular activities such as club activities, community... |
- Extracurricular activities such as club activities, community service activities or work experiences- If applicable, describe awards you have received, publications you have made, or skills you have acquired, etc. It is not complete My best friend always told me that I would still conquer the world, and when I entere... | - Extracurricular activities such as club activities, community service activities or work experiences- If applicable, describe awards you have received, publications you have made, or skills you have acquired, etc. It is not complete My best friend always told me that I would still conquer the world, and when I entere... |
Hi this is my personal statement, i believe it's very average so please let me know if you've got any suggestions to improve it. Thank you for reading this <3 My interest in Business first sparked when I saw my grandfather's workshop he worked so hard at. His side business was manufacturing automated electronic pack... | Hi this is my personal statement, I believe it's very average, so please let me know if you've got any suggestions to improve it. Thank you for reading this Lt;3 My interest in Business first sparked when I saw my grandfather's workshop he worked so hard at. His side business was manufacturing automated electronic pack... |
I realized that the past twenty one years I have been passing through perfectly depict the outstanding personal statement I am writing now. I was inspired to learn Korean language and culture ever since I was introduced to the experience of studying in South Korea by my senior from high school who studied digital media... | I realized that the past twenty-one years I have been passing through perfectly depict the outstanding personal statement I am writing now. I was inspired to learn Korean language and culture ever since I was introduced to the experience of studying in South Korea by my senior from high school who studied digital media... |
As a woman who was born and raised in Vietnam, a country with conventional rigid gender notions of men's and women's values and roles, I've long been worried about the issue of gender discrimination. I've always admired my mother, a successful, strong, and independent entrepreneur who manages two businesses while still... | As a woman who was born and raised in Vietnam, a country with conventional rigid gender notions of men's and women's values and roles, I've long been worried about the issue of gender discrimination. I've always admired my mother, a successful, strong, and independent entrepreneur who manages two businesses while still... |
- Significant experiences you have had; risks you have taken and achievements you have made, persons or events that have had a significant influence on you - Extracurricular activities such as club activities, community service activities or work experiences The process of coming up with new ideas gives me an inexplica... | - Significant experiences you have had; risks you have taken and achievements you have made, persons or events that have had a significant influence on you - Extracurricular activities such as club activities, community service activities or work experiences The process of coming up with new ideas gives me an inexplica... |
Having never had a profound sense of how life should function until I read Stephen R. Covey's book "An effective life", which raised me a question "What is an effective life?". According to some experts, having effective life is to live productively, to be happy in what we are doing, and to obtain what we desire. In a ... | Having never had a profound sense of how life should function until I read Stephen R. Covey's book "An effective life", which raised me a question "What is an effective life?". According to some experts, having effective life is to live productively, to be happy in what we are doing, and to obtain what we desire. In a ... |
Essay prompts- Motivations with which you apply for this program- Family and Education background- Significant experiences you have had; risks you have taken and achievements you have made, persons or events that have had a significant influence on you - Extracurricular activities such as club activities, community ser... | Essay prompts- Motivations with which you apply for this program-Family and Education background- Significant experiences you have had; risks you have taken and achievements you have made, persons or events that have had a significant influence on you - Extracurricular activities such as club activities, community serv... |
"You should've better education, at least, than me." said my mom when I'm still in the middle school. I didn't come from a privileged family. My mom and dad are just a vocational high school graduate, but my parents always want their children to receive higher education than them. This is what motivates me to study har... | "You should've better education, at least, than me." said my mom when I'm still in the middle school. I didn't come from a privileged family. My mom and dad are just a vocational high school graduate, but my parents always want their children to receive higher education than them. This is what motivates me to study har... |
- Motivations with which you apply for this program- Family and Education background- Significant experiences you have had; risks you have taken and achievements you have made, persons or events that have had a significant influence on you - Extracurricular activities such as club activities, community service activiti... | - Motivations with which you apply for this program-Family and Education background- Significant experiences you have had; risks you have taken and achievements you have made, persons or events that have had a significant influence on you - Extracurricular activities such as club activities, community service activitie... |
Hi,I am applying for GKS- Undergraduate 2022. I really want to hear your comment, where I should addordelete information, and did I write in accordance with the main idea that I wanted to convey. Thank you so much for spending your valuable time reading my PS. Have a good day! Essay lists: limited 2 A4 page- Motivation... | Hi, I am applying for GKS- Undergraduate 2022. I really want to hear your comment, where I should addordelete information, and did I write in accordance with the main idea that I wanted to convey. Thank you so much for spending your valuable time reading my PS. Have a good day! Essay lists: limited 2 A4 page- Motivatio... |
I saw a brownie and thought of Brown, or rather, thought of the way Brown "probably" sees brownies. I remembered how Brown challenges its students to be intellectually curious and think creatively so that their brownies can be more than the product of a Betty Crocker mix. Similar to how Brown believes in the power of a... | I saw a brownie and thought of Brown, or rather, thought of the way Brown "probably" sees brownies. I remembered how Brown challenges its students to be intellectually curious and think creatively so that their brownies can be more than the product of a Betty Crocker mix. Similar to how Brown believes in the power of a... |
Growing up in a developing country, my ambition growing up was to help in the development of my country. In order to supplement this decision, I decided that I would take up engineering since that would allow me to take part in the development of cities in my country. To achieve this goal, I require knowledge in many a... | Growing up in a developing country, my ambition growing up was to help in the development of my country. In order to supplement this decision, I decided that I would take up engineering since that would allow me to take part in the development of cities in my country. To achieve this goal, I require knowledge in many a... |
Instructions: please write no more than 2 pages on an A4 size format, one-sided only. The essay should include the following things and must be clearly typed or printed in black ink. Please remove the instructions after reading it. > - Motivations with which you apply for this program- Family and Education backgroun... | Instructions: please write no more than 2 pages on an A4 size format, one-sided only. The essay should include the following things and must be clearly typed or printed in black ink. Please remove the instructions after reading it. Sgt; - Motivations with which you apply for this program-Family and Education background... |
After spending 17 years of my life in poverty, I realized that how much important is the money to protect myself, to build myself, and give my family a better life, and to give back to my community. After graduation from high school and analyzing the facts that have decided to choose Business and Administration as my m... | After spending 17 years of my life in poverty, I realized that how much important is the money to protect myself, to build myself, and give my family a better life, and to give back to my community. After graduation from high school and analyzing the facts that have decided to choose Business and Administration as my m... |
Critical thinking is the practice that involves formulating and create main questions about the text you read and the circumstances you experience in life. For instance, It is a busy Friday afternoon, at a rental car agency that has no store manager, there were two employees name Monica and Jill. there was an unexpecte... | Critical thinking is the practice that involves formulating and create main questions about the text you read and the circumstances you experience in life. For instance, It is a busy Friday afternoon, at a rental car agency that has no store manager, there were two employees name Monica and Jill. There was an unexpecte... |
Going out of the contest room, I was excited but still unconfident of my result. This is my third time participating in national competitions on behalf of my school. The previous two attempts were in junior high school, where I took Mathematics subject. Although I am passionate about mathematics and have studied extens... | Going out of the contest room, I was excited but still unconfident of my result. This is my third time participating in national competitions on behalf of my school. The previous two attempts were in junior high school, where I took Mathematics subject. Although I am passionate about mathematics and have studied extens... |
I'm the daughter of nature. A farm girl right out of a Disney movie. After a day full of schoolwork, house-chores, and Keeping Up With The Kardashians, I return to the lighter experiences of being by spending my afternoons in watering eggplants, cucumbers, berries, mangoes, and what not, and herding our farm chickens a... | I'm the daughter of nature. A farm girl right out of a Disney movie. After a day full of schoolwork, house-chores, and Keeping Up With The Kardashians, I return to the lighter experiences of being by spending my afternoons in watering eggplants, cucumbers, berries, mangoes, and what not, and herding our farm chickens a... |
I must tell you, my keen interest towards business is as the result of my involvement in helping my father in farming. I am proud of myself belonging to a contended agricultural family and I have been my father's right hand for 12 years or even more, from working in the fields to selling goods in market i've learned ve... | I must tell you, my keen interest towards business is as the result of my involvement in helping my father in farming. I am proud of myself belonging to a contended agricultural family and I have been my father's right hand for 12 years or even more, from working in the fields to selling goods in market I've learned ve... |
Speaking to a gym full of mostly clock-watching parents was not what I expected to be doing on this school night. I had other plans, but fate seemed to lead me here. Beads of sweat rolled down my forehead that humid evening as I stood in the dimly lit backstage bathroom, quickly rehearsing my lines. I paced back and fo... | Speaking to a gym full of mostly clock-watching parents was not what I expected to be doing on this school night. I had other plans, but fate seemed to lead me here. Beads of sweat rolled down my forehead that humid evening as I stood in the dimly lit backstage bathroom, quickly rehearsing my lines. I paced back and fo... |
Please comment on whether or not the essay fulfills the requirement of the prompt and suggest potential changes that can be made to make the essay better. A discussion that has meant the most to me: Thanks to science fiction, almost all of us knew that the first thing that A.I will do is take-over the defense grid and ... | Please comment on whether the essay fulfills the requirement of the prompt and suggest potential changes that can be made to make the essay better. A discussion that has meant the most to me: Thanks to science fiction, almost all of us knew that the first thing that A.I. will do is take-over the defense grid and nuke u... |
After spending 18 years of my life in poverty,I came to know about the fact that how much important money is to protect myself, to build myself, and give my family better life, and to give back to my community.After graduating from high school, I decided to choose a major that would greatly benefit me in the future. My... | After spending 18 years of my life in poverty, I came to know about the fact that how much important money is to protect myself, to build myself, and give my family better life, and to give back to my community. After graduating from high school, I decided to choose a major that would greatly benefit me in the future. ... |
I like talking to people. And I like to thrift-shop.Through my blog, I have been able to intertwine my two passions to create blog posts to raise awareness regarding the destruction that fast-fashion is causing to our environment and to advocate for thrift-shopping as a means to reduce our carbon footprint. My blog is ... | I like talking to people. And I like to thrift-shop. Through my blog, I have been able to intertwine my two passions to create blog posts to raise awareness regarding the destruction that fast-fashion is causing to our environment and to advocate for thrift-shopping as a means to reduce our carbon footprint. My blog is... |
This essay is basically supposed to highlight what I do in my free time (these are not my extracurricular activities listed on the common app). Please critique this essay and suggest the changes I can make to it. Section 1: As mysteries unfold on a dusky day in 1940s Paris, a new fine line can be spotted encroaching on... | This essay is basically supposed to highlight what I do in my free time (these are not my extracurricular activities listed on the common app). Please critique this essay and suggest the changes I can make to it. Section 1: As mysteries unfold on a dusky day in the 1940s Paris, a new fine line can be spotted encroachin... |
Instead of inheriting from my parents a couple inches to add to my height, I inherited an itch: the itch to understand.As a kid my playground used to be a jumble of old circuit boards, spare electric wires, and an assortment of broken appliances. I spent hours disassembling and tinkering with the amazing treasures I fo... | Instead of inheriting from my parents a couple inches to add to my height, I inherited an itch: the itch to understand. As a kid my playground used to be a jumble of old circuit boards, spare electric wires, and an assortment of broken appliances. I spent hours disassembling and tinkering with the amazing treasures I f... |
A newly emancipated minor, at 17, I left my home and family for up north, equipped with only a suitcase, a couple hundred dollars, and a renewed approach to living. After years of dealing with my father's abuse, I decided I desperately needed to seek stability and seize control of my life. Growing up in the West, seven... | A newly emancipated minor, at 17, I left my home and family for up north, equipped with only a suitcase, a couple of hundred dollars, and a renewed approach to living. After years of dealing with my father's abuse, I decided I desperately needed to seek stability and seize control of my life. Growing up in the West, se... |
I'd be really grateful if you review this essay of mine. Please point out any grammatical errors and areas of improvements. Thanks! The results of a midnight research binge on the fundamental particles took me through quantum physics and somehow deposited me at a Quora post explaining the nature of reality. Now I have ... | I'd be really grateful if you review this essay of mine. Please point out any grammatical errors and areas of improvements. Thanks! The results of a midnight research binge on the fundamental particles took me through quantum physics and somehow deposited me at a Quora post explaining the nature of reality. Now I have ... |
I just turned to 16 years old last April, it means that I've been living for 16 years. Honestly, there were many unforgettable experiences throughout, I suppose one of them, which popped into my mind initially when i first saw this topic, was the first time, i had ever struck up with my dj controlle. To me It was an in... | I just turned to 16 years old last April, it means that I've been living for 16 years. Honestly, there were many unforgettable experiences throughout, I suppose one of them, which popped into my mind initially when I first saw this topic, was the first time, I had ever struck up with my DJ controlled. To me, It was an ... |
Please describe your past academic experiences and your reasons for wishing to enroll to Maryland at this point in your academic career. Students who have been out of school for several years, or who have a personal circumstance that affected performance, may wish to address that situation in their essay. Your essay sh... | Please describe your past academic experiences and your reasons for wishing to enroll to Maryland at this point in your academic career. Students who have been out of school for several years, or who have a personal circumstance that affected performance, may wish to address that situation in their essay. Your essay sh... |
I have chosen Canada because of its comprehensive and competitive education system. Canadian universities offer advanced technological facilities and it is also a multicultural country. I have chosen the program of software engineering because I am obsessed with technology and computers. My interest in computer softwar... | I have chosen Canada because of its comprehensive and competitive education system. Canadian universities offer advanced technological facilities, and it is also a multicultural country. I have chosen the program of software engineering because I am obsessed with technology and computers. My interest in computer softwa... |
"I need to believe that extraordinary is possible." This quote from the movie "A Beautiful Mind 2001" altered my perspective. This movie has had an impact on my recognized intellect, and I've always kept myself involved in new work, even after failing over and over again. During high school, I managed to spend a consid... | "I need to believe that extraordinary is possible." This quote from the movie "A Beautiful Mind 2001" altered my perspective. This movie has had an impact on my recognized intellect, and I've always kept myself involved in new work, even after failing over and over again. During high school, I managed to spend a consid... |
So it all started on the day I graduated to 9th grade.One of my friends Tanvir, showed me a science-related magazine named 'BigganChinta' I was turning pages and suddenly my eyes just stucked on a title which was like 'Einstein's theory suggests that time travel is possible? '. So one of the reasons for my that much ex... | So it all started on the day I graduated to 9th grade. One of my friends Tanker, showed me a science-related magazine named 'BigganChinta' I was turning pages and suddenly my eyes just stacked on a title which was like 'Einstein's theory suggests that time travel is possible? '. So one of the reasons for my that much e... |
Dear Visa Officer, I am Waleed Ahsan Sarfraz, a legal citizen of Pakistan applying for a Canadian study permit from the Philippines. The purpose of this letter is to explain my study plan for my post-secondary education. It has always been a goal of mine to acquire a bachelor's degree from a well-recognized foreign uni... | Dear Visa Officer, I am Walked Than Array, a legal citizen of Pakistan applying for a Canadian study permit from the Philippines. The purpose of this letter is to explain my study plan for my post-secondary education. It has always been a goal of mine to acquire a bachelor's degree from a well-recognized foreign univer... |
My parents have been divorced since I was a child and to date I have no idea of my father's whereabouts. My mother used to be a private teacher, but now my mother is more focused on being a food trader. As a food trader, my mother's income be contigent only on orders. With a meager revenue, it is actually very arduous ... | My parents have been divorced since I was a child and to date I have no idea of my father's whereabouts. My mother used to be a private teacher, but now my mother is more focused on being a food trader. As a food trader, my mother's income be continent only on orders. With a meager revenue, it is actually very arduous ... |
Living in today's world is like existing in a rat race where everyone is competing with one another to be the best, this as a result can put immense pressure on one's mental health. Mental illnesses do not target one specific demographic. It can affect adults struggling with maintaining their work-life balance or adole... | Living in today's world is like existing in a rat race where everyone is competing with one another to be the best, this as a result can put immense pressure on one's mental health. Mental illnesses do not target one specific demographic. It can affect adults struggling with maintaining their work-life balance or adole... |
I have always been enthralled by the fields of Biology and Chemistry. I first realised how I could teach others about biological processes when I created a clay model of the coronary artery and demonstrated coronary thrombosis in our school science exhibition. My study of Biology and biological weapons in the Vietnam W... | I have always been enthralled by the fields of Biology and Chemistry. I first realized how I could teach others about biological processes when I created a clay model of the coronary artery and demonstrated coronary thrombosis in our school science exhibition. My study of Biology and biological weapons in the Vietnam W... |
My world collapsed the first time I wrote an essay for high school English. It was returned to me with a failing grade. Ever since elementary school my class work was used as an example, my standardized test scores were to be admired, and over the years this became my identity. I may never have been the most popular or... | My world collapsed the first time I wrote an essay for high school English. It was returned to me with a failing grade. Ever since elementary school my class work was used as an example, my standardized test scores were to be admired, and over the years this became my identity. I may never have been the most popular or... |
Please comment if you think I need to add any more information, the limit is maximum 3 pages. STATEMENT OF PURPOSESince I was in primary school, I have been promoted to be the leader of a particular team, vice-monitor, or monitor almost every year. Those opportunities played an important role in my leadership time. I h... | Please comment if you think I need to add any more information, the limit is maximum 3 pages. STATEMENT OF PURPOSESince I was in primary school, I have been promoted to be the leader of a particular team, vice-monitor, or monitor almost every year. Those opportunities played an important role in my leadership time. I h... |
I live in Ukraine, a country where the IT industry is gaining momentum. But in comparison with other countries, this area is less developed in our country. This condition prompted me to do more to improve my community. Therefore, I regularly took part in free courses in programming and design, where I motivated and tau... | I live in Ukraine, a country where the IT industry is gaining momentum. But in comparison with other countries, this area is less developed in our country. This condition prompted me to do more to improve my community. Therefore, I regularly took part in free courses in programming and design, where I motivated and tau... |
It was more than six years ago that I managed to climb the highest mountain in my country. He was too young at the time to understand how much difficulty that feat had been. But thanks to this, I have been able to understand how far I can go and the effort that it requires. One of the things that has always been a chal... | It was more than six years ago that I managed to climb the highest mountain in my country. He was too young at the time to understand how much difficulty that feat had been. But thanks to this, I have been able to understand how far I can go and the effort that it requires. One of the things that has always been a chal... |
I wasn't always interested in what went on in our bodies, all the different chemical reactions, and its general complexities. I only recently started questioning it and wanted to dive deeper into it. Around 8th grade is when I started to notice how much I consistently looked forward to our biology and math classes. Lea... | I wasn't always interested in what went on in our bodies, all the different chemical reactions, and its general complexities. I only recently started questioning it and wanted to dive deeper into it. Around 8th grade is when I started to notice how much I consistently looked forward to our biology and math classes. Lea... |
When I was fourteen years old, I discovered my thirst for knowledge and how my eyes shine, and my heart swells with happiness when I understand something that may seem complicated for those at this young age. At this time, I decided to enroll in STEM school to start my journey in the scientific path, and here I am choo... | When I was fourteen years old, I discovered my thirst for knowledge and how my eyes shine, and my heart swells with happiness when I understand something that may seem complicated for those at this young age. At this time, I decided to enroll in STEM school to start my journey in the scientific path, and here I am choo... |
My home country, Georgia, is still a developing state. It suffered under the Soviet regime for over 70 years and experienced brain drain in the early 80s upon civil war. In other words, it calls for a knowledgeable and open-minded generation to contribute to further development and battle poverty.UGRAD is a program tha... | My home country, Georgia, is still a developing state. It suffered under the Soviet regime for over 70 years and experienced brain drain in the early 80s upon civil war. In other words, it calls for a knowledgeable and open-minded generation to contribute to further development and battle poverty.GRAD is a program that... |
Achieving something good is always a pleasant memory. As an enthusiast, I never miss a chance to achieve something to make myself worthy of anything. Whatever I do, I try to be self-centered as it helps me do my best and achieve something great. Whenever I evolved in an activity, I started to learn something new and ga... | Achieving something good is always a pleasant memory. As an enthusiast, I never miss a chance to achieve something to make myself worthy of anything. Whatever I do, I try to be self-centered as it helps me do my best and achieve something great. Whenever I evolved in an activity, I started to learn something new and ga... |
I am applying for the math program of the university of waterloo, feel free to give any advice, I am a foreign student, so if there are any grammar or wording problems, please point them out, thank you. Reasons for choosing your program and Waterloo (*Required)Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest ... | I am applying for the math program of the university of Waterloo, feel free to give any advice, I am a foreign student, so if there are any grammar or wording problems, please point them out, thank you. Reasons for choosing your program and Waterloo (*Required)Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest ... |
If life gives you both lemon and lemonade, which one would you take? Sure enough, lemonade would be a great choice if you want a refreshing drink ready-made for you. Better yet, if you learn to make lemonade from the lemon, you would be able to have lemonade whenever you want to. Throughout my academic career, I have b... | If life gives you both lemon and lemonade, which one would you take? Sure enough, lemonade would be a great choice if you want a refreshing drink ready-made for you. Better yet, if you learn to make lemonade from the lemon, you would be able to have lemonade whenever you want to. Throughout my academic career, I have b... |
A: Chance. Freedom. Adventure.With my newly found interest in computer security, I was busy planning what and how I will explore during my gap semester. Yet, deep in my heart, I struggled to mute the inner voice that echoed, "You are falling behind." With nothing but a lust for learning, I read handpicked books, traine... | A: Chance. Freedom. Adventure. With my newly found interest in computer security, I was busy planning what and how I will explore during my gap semester. Yet, deep in my heart, I struggled to mute the inner voice that echoed, "You are falling behind." With nothing but a lust for learning, I read handpicked books, train... |
Until there was a time my mom received a call from her deskmate in high school, all of the memory suddenly came to her head and she told her story. My mom was born in 1969 when Vietnam still had been fighting for independence against the U.S. Having been a colonial country for hundreds of years, the economy of the coun... | Until there was a time my mom received a call from her desk mate in high school, all the memory suddenly came to her head and she told her story. My mom was born in 1969 when Vietnam still had been fighting for independence against the U.S. Having been a colonial country for hundreds of years, the economy of the countr... |
Hi, I'm Carla. I will be applying for GKS Undergraduate in this year. This is my first time writing personal statement, kindly share you feedback if any. Thank you Three years ago, I saw someone write that sentence on social media that made me dream of studying abroad. Three years ago, I watched a video on YouTube abou... | Hi, I'm Carla. I will be applying for GKS Undergraduate in this year. This is my first time writing personal statement, kindly share you feed back if any. Thank you Three years ago, I saw someone write that sentence on social media that made me dream of studying abroad. Three years ago, I watched a video on YouTube abo... |
Please help me estimate if this is a decent essay to get a chance of attending a student exchange program, I would appreciate any feedback :) Whenever I think about the pains and sorrows of life, my mind begins to conjure up the images of ancient warriors, their greatest victories and tragic losses, the times when peop... | Please help me estimate if this is a decent essay to get a chance of attending a student exchange program, I would appreciate any feedback :) Whenever I think about the pains and sorrows of life, my mind begins to conjure up the images of ancient warriors, their greatest victories and tragic losses, the times when peop... |
Howdy, I'm hoping to transfer to A&M in the fall and would like to get some opinions and critiques on my transfer essay Rn my word count on the essay is 797 For as long as I can remember I have always been fascinated with the natural world. I've always been drawn to my science courses through out my academic career... | Howdy, I'm hoping to transfer to Camp;M in the fall and would like to get some opinions and critiques on my transfer essay Rn my word count on the essay is 797 For as long as I can remember I have always been fascinated with the natural world. I've always been drawn to my science courses throughout my academic career b... |
My answer: One of the many reasons I applied is because numerous successful Canadian entrepreneurs in leading edge technologies graduated from Waterloo. As a kid, I was fascinated by how things worked and were made. Because of my life-long curiosity in various Automotive related subjects, it inspired me to become a mec... | My answer: One of the many reasons I applied is because numerous successful Canadian entrepreneurs in leading edge technologies graduated from Waterloo. As a kid, I was fascinated by how things worked and were made. Because of my life-long curiosity in various Automotive related subjects, it inspired me to become a mec... |
Question 1:REASONS FOR CHOOSING YOUR PROGRAM AND WATERLOO (*REQUIRED)Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest in your chosen program(s), and your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo. If you have applied to more than one program please discuss your interest in each program. (900 characte... | Question 1:REASONS FOR CHOOSING YOUR PROGRAM AND WATERLOO (*REQUIRED)Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest in your chosen program(s), and your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo. If you have applied to more than one program please discuss your interest in each program. (900-characte... |
I was drawn to SYDE, FARM and Math and BBA double degree because of my genuine interest in science. I have been challenging myself in different problems since I was first introduced to math contests in primary school. Participating in various contests has raised my interest to pursue a career in the science field, more... | I was drawn to SIDE, FARM and Math and BBA double degree because of my genuine interest in science. I have been challenging myself in different problems since I was first introduced to math contests in primary school. Participating in various contests has raised my interest to pursue a career in the science field, more... |
Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest in your chosen program(s), and your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo. If you have applied to more than one program please discuss your interest in each program. (900 character limit) My passion for complex problem solving and breaking boundari... | Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest in your chosen program(s), and your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo. If you have applied to more than one program please discuss your interest in each program. (900-character limit) My passion for complex problem-solving and breaking boundari... |
As a student aspiring to become a pediatric cardiothoracic surgeon, I strive to be a professional healthcare provider. One that breaks medical boundaries, paving the way for future generations to make more discoveries than my own. With this goal in mind, once I complete my undergraduate degree, I plan to further my edu... | As a student aspiring to become a pediatric cardiothoracic surgeon, I strive to be a professional healthcare provider. One that breaks medical boundaries, paving the way for future generations to make more discoveries than my own. With this goal in mind, once I complete my undergraduate degree, I plan to further my edu... |
Since my initial interest in computer programming, I have always had a focus on interdisciplinary learning. Recently, through the combination of cryptography and computer science, I conceptualized a messaging app over the summer that utilizes homomorphic encryption based neural networks to allow users to sell their dat... | Since my initial interest in computer programming, I have always had a focus on interdisciplinary learning. Recently, through the combination of cryptography and computer science, I conceptualized a messaging app over the summer that utilizes homomorphic encryption based neural networks to allow users to sell their dat... |
Question: If you would like to provide any additional information about your High School science and mathematics background, you may do so in the space below (maximum of 50 words). My response: My school offers a Science Olympiad program that allows students to compete in different events. The events that I chose were ... | Question: If you would like to provide any additional information about your High School science and mathematics background, you may do so in the space below (maximum of 50 words). My response: My school offers a Science Olympiad program that allows students to compete in different events. The events that I chose were ... |
Prompt: The personal statement should be a comprehensive essay outlining significant aspects of your academic and personal history, particularly those that provide context for your academic achievements and educational choices. Quality of writing and depth of content both contribute toward a meaningful and relevant per... | Prompt: The personal statement should be a comprehensive essay outlining significant aspects of your academic and personal history, particularly those that provide context for your academic achievements and educational choices. Quality of writing and depth of content both contribute toward a meaningful and relevant per... |
Thank you in advance to anyone who helps me with editing this paragraph I wrote for the following prompt: It can be challenging to adopt the complex thought process of a programmer, but the Software Engineering and Computer Science programs at Waterloo can help me navigate toward that goal. I want to gain knowledge bey... | Thank you in advance to anyone who helps me with editing this paragraph I wrote for the following prompt: It can be challenging to adopt the complex thought process of a programmer, but the Software Engineering and Computer Science programs at Waterloo can help me navigate toward that goal. I want to gain knowledge bey... |
Hello everyone, I am applying to a school to become a Sonographers and I do need to submit an essay as to why I would like to enter this field. Surely, I am terrible at writing essays and expressing my true feelings and understandings on paper. Here is what I have so far. Thank you all in advance for your help, I truly... | Hello everyone, I am applying to a school to become a sonographer and I do need to submit an essay as to why I would like to enter this field. Surely, I am terrible at writing essays and expressing my true feelings and understandings on paper. Here is what I have so far. Thank you all in advance for your help, I truly ... |
Ans) I have been interested in programming and building software for quite a while and believe that it is a perfect balance between logical problem solving, as well as creative autonomy. I wish to pursue Computer Science as my undergraduate major, as it will allow me to experience all the different fields it has to off... | Ans) I have been interested in programming and building software for quite a while and believe that it is a perfect balance between logical problem-solving, as well as creative autonomy. I wish to pursue Computer Science as my undergraduate major, as it will allow me to experience all the different fields it has to off... |
While my chance introduction to Linguistics happened late in my first college experience, the subject changed the course of my education and post-graduate life and continues to fascinate me. I would like to deepen my understanding of language, its relationship to culture, how it is preserved and rediscovered, and to ap... | While my chance introduction to Linguistics happened late in my first college experience, the subject changed the course of my education and post-graduate life and continues to fascinate me. I would like to deepen my understanding of language, its relationship to culture, how it is preserved and rediscovered, and to ap... |
The CS and GBDA programs both greatly appeal to me as I hope to display my technical creativity and problem-solving skills. My aspiration is to pursue websoftware development or UIUX design, where I can be a part of a large-scale design project; both fields will allow me to display my design and programming passions. W... | The CS and GBA programs both greatly appeal to me as I hope to display my technical creativity and problem-solving skills. My aspiration is to pursue web software development or UI UX design, where I can be a part of a large-scale design project; both fields will allow me to display my design and programming passions. ... |
Thanks so much in advance! (also mine is only 549 words should write more? the prompt does say "no more than". what do you think?) It's true that I have moved eighteen times before I was eighteen myself-Canadian born, but I have lived in cities all over such as Toronto, New York, Miami, and Vancouver. My father is in C... | Thanks so much in advance! (also mine is only 549 words should write more? The prompt does say "no more than". What do you think?) It's true that I have moved eighteen times before I was eighteen myself-Canadian born, but I have lived in cities all over such as Toronto, New York, Miami, and Vancouver. My father is in C... |
This is my first draft, and I wonder if someone can help me to make improvements - Extracurricular activities such as club activities, community service activities or work experiences- If applicable, describe awards you have received, publications you have made, or skills you have acquired, etc. That was the sentence t... | This is my first draft, and I wonder if someone can help me to make improvements - Extracurricular activities such as club activities, community service activities or work experiences- If applicable, describe awards you have received, publications you have made, or skills you have acquired, etc. That was the sentence t... |
Having grown up in a Sikh family, I have always been preached philanthropic values. That is why, participating in community service has been a significant part of my story. From serving langar at gurudwaras to volunteering at NGOs, the scale of the problem may be small, yet my urge to solve it is always humongous. More... | Having grown up in a Sikh family, I have always been preached philanthropic values. That is why, participating in community service has been a significant part of my story. From serving hangar at gurudwaras to volunteering at NGOs, the scale of the problem may be small, yet my urge to solve it is always humongous. More... |
As a Chemistry student in Singapore Polytechnic, we had to conduct weekly experiments. Most of them had to be done with lab instruments such as Universal Testing Machine, Scanning Electron Microscopy (SEM). Software is essential as it is how we interact with the equipment and it is how we obtain our results. Good softw... | As a Chemistry student in Singapore Polytechnic, we had to conduct weekly experiments. Most of them had to be done with lab instruments such as Universal Testing Machine, Scanning Electron Microscopy (SEM). Software is essential as it is how we interact with the equipment, and it is how we obtain our results. Good soft... |
Education is a poverty chain breaker.I believe that the only thing nobody can't steal from us is education, furthermore, education is the one that can change the quality of life. At a young age, science has taken my heart. I once tried to find interest in another field but science always successfully pull me again and ... | Education is a poverty chain breaker. I believe that the only thing nobody can't steal from us is education, furthermore, education is the one that can change the quality of life. At a young age, science has taken my heart. I once tried to find interest in another field, but science always successfully pull me again an... |
Many things are important to me, but the one thing that stands out is effort. In my early high school days, I did not put much effort into my work. Despite this, I still ended up receiving decent grades throughout my first two high school years. One day, in my grade 10 math course, I ended up failing a test for the fir... | Many things are important to me, but the one thing that stands out is effort. In my early high school days, I did not put much effort into my work. Despite this, I still ended up receiving decent grades throughout my first two high school years. One day, in my grade 10 math course, I ended up failing a test for the fir... |
At age 14, I developed an app for teenagers to boost their productivity delving into app development; at age 16, I constructed an AI drone for the physically disabled, honing my robotics skills. Being an avid technophile, I am looking forward to building a solid academic foundation as a CS student at the University. My... | At age 14, I developed an app for teenagers to boost their productivity delving into app development; at age 16, I constructed an AI drone for the physically disabled, honing my robotics skills. Being an avid technophile, I am looking forward to building a solid academic foundation as a CS student at the University. My... |
I always want to become a professional healthcare leader and cooperate with colleagues to lead strategizing the optimal human health promotion and development for the healthcare system. Personally, I am interested in problem solving, pushing the comfort zone to limit and creating a great future for following generation... | I always want to become a professional healthcare leader and cooperate with colleagues to lead strategizing the optimal human health promotion and development for the healthcare system. Personally, I am interested in problem-solving, pushing the comfort zone to limit and creating a great future for following generation... |
Growing up, my parents did their best for me. They were there when I needed them, even if they could be distant. Perhaps to the rest of the world my parents may not have been the best, but it is because of them that I am who I am. I would like to consider myself as a very open minded person, and it's largely thanks to ... | Growing up, my parents did their best for me. They were there when I needed them, even if they could be distant. Perhaps to the rest of the world my parents may not have been the best, but it is because of them that I am who I am. I would like to consider myself as a very open-minded person, and it's largely thanks to ... |
Thank you in advance to anyone who may answer this, any feedback would be appreciated! I'd love to attend the University of Waterloo because I admire its approach to my dream program. I want to pursue a career in both of my passions, so when I discovered Science and Business at Waterloo, I knew the university would lea... | Thank you in advance to anyone who may answer this, any feedback would be appreciated! I'd love to attend the University of Waterloo because I admire its approach to my dream program. I want to pursue a career in both of my passions, so when I discovered Science and Business at Waterloo, I knew the university would lea... |
Growing up in a middle class family with many of my needs and wants tended to, I developed a victim mentality, where I blamed my challenges on others around me. It was easier for me to believe my place in the world was a box in which I was contained, subject to my circumstances, instead of accepting responsibility for ... | Growing up in a middle class family with many of my needs and wants to be tended to, I developed a victim mentality, where I blamed my challenges on others around me. It was easier for me to believe my place in the world was a box in which I was contained, subject to my circumstances, instead of accepting responsibilit... |
People around me have always complimented my independence and ability to materialize my goals through endless perseverance. My capabilities became evident during the summer of 10th grade. I entered the summer with two goals in mind, get a job and strengthen my math skills. Fortunately, I landed my first job as a bike i... | People around me have always complimented my independence and ability to materialize my goals through endless perseverance. My capabilities became evident during the summer of 10th grade. I entered the summer with two goals in mind, get a job and strengthen my math skills. Fortunately, I landed my first job as a bike i... |
While applying for college, West Point caught my attention because of my aspirations for leadership. West Point begins every semester with a grueling kit glove inspection of a cadet's uniform. The night before inspection is a Red Bull fueled fever dream of chaos as freshman furiously iron every piece of clothing and me... | While applying for college, West Point caught my attention because of my aspirations for leadership. West Point begins every semester with a grueling kit glove inspection of a cadet's uniform. The night before inspection is a Red Bull fueled fever dream of chaos as freshman furiously iron every piece of clothing and me... |
Since I was little, I have been interested in environmental, social, and economic issues. Born and grow up in an environment that has a low level of education has become my background to take it as a challenge to improve human resources and find new ideas to develop economics and education. I specifically chose to appl... | Since I was little, I have been interested in environmental, social, and economic issues. Born and grow up in an environment that has a low level of education has become my background to take it as a challenge to improve human resources and find new ideas to develop economics and education. I specifically chose to appl... |
Activity 1: I wanted to showcase my Somali heritage through creative means. During the lockdown, I learned how to sew cultural clothing. I began to take requests from the local women in my neighbourhood to create one-of-a-kind pieces for them. As a result, I have built a small clientele. Activity 2: As an older daughte... | Activity 1: I wanted to showcase my Somali heritage through creative means. During the lockdown, I learned how to sew cultural clothing. I began to take requests from the local women in my neighborhood to create one-of-a-kind pieces for them. As a result, I have built a small clientele. Activity 2: As an older daughter... |
Prompt summary: I am expected to demonstrate interest in pursuing Mechanical Engineering as a focus, the sop must communicate understanding and desire to pursue such major and a planned career plan. As a seventeen-year-old boy in El Salvador, close relatives in Houston offered to finance my undergraduate education. Wit... | Prompt summary: I am expected to demonstrate interest in pursuing Mechanical Engineering as a focus, the sop must communicate understanding and desire to pursue such major and a planned career plan. As a seventeen-year-old boy in El Salvador, close relatives in Houston offered to finance my undergraduate education. Wit... |
(I haven't shortened mine to 200 yet, it's 342 as of now) I have been drawn to films for nearly as long as I can remember. As a child, I used to be enamoured by the vibrant colours of Monsters University and the immersive sound effects of The Avengers. As I grew older, ever captivated by cinema, I started fiding a much... | (I haven't shortened mine to 200 yet, it's 342 as of now) I have been drawn to films for nearly as long as I can remember. As a child, I used to be enamored by the vibrant colors of Monsters University and the immersive sound effects of The Avengers. As I grew older, ever captivated by cinema, I started finding a much ... |
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