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The pandemic struck suddenly. In mere days, my city entered a stage-4 lockdown, my school and dance classes closed, but when my family business shut down, I realized the gravity of the situation, especially how badly it'll affect people who live hand-to-mouth. I had recently started exploring sustainable fashion and I ...
The pandemic struck suddenly. In mere days, my city entered a stage-4 lockdown, my school and dance classes closed, but when my family business shut down, I realized the gravity of the situation, especially how badly it'll affect people who live hand-to-mouth. I had recently started exploring sustainable fashion and I ...
I thought I was playing the best squash I had ever played, I was ranked 4th nationally, training to represent India but everything changed. I tore my ACL for the first time; July 14, 2016. For a few days, I was frustrated, angry, bitter but I was always resolved to get better until July 16th, 2017, a year later. I tore...
I thought I was playing the best squash I had ever played, I was ranked 4th nationally, training to represent India but everything changed. I tore my ACL for the first time; July 14, 2016. For a few days, I was frustrated, angry, bitter, but I was always resolved to get better until July 16th, 2017, a year later. I tor...
For years, expectations forced unto me governed the way I thought about myself. Creating art has allowed me to create a new beauty standard. Through art, I have regained control of my self-image, without the influence of others. I grew up in an ethnically mixed household. My father was born in Egypt and my mother in Po...
For years, expectations forced unto me governed the way I thought about myself. Creating art has allowed me to create a new beauty standard. Through art, I have regained control of my self-image, without the influence of others. I grew up in an ethnically mixed household. My father was born in Egypt and my mother in Po...
A picture of 12 women in bodysuits with toned arms and athlete bodies cheering after receiving awards has made me fall in love with Wellesley. Walking along the Sai Gon Riverbank, I imagine the fierceness and unison that the boat-mates in Blue Crew would bring to me in every practice before the NCCA National Championsh...
A picture of 12 women in bodysuits with toned arms and athlete bodies cheering after receiving awards has made me fall in love with Wellesley. Walking along the SAI On Riverbank, I imagine the fierceness and unison that the boat-mates in Blue Crew would bring to me in every practice before the NCAA National Championshi...
Famed philosopher Nietzsche (or Kelly Clarkson, depending on who you ask) once wrote the famous words: "That which does not kill us makes us stronger." This quote has become rather cliché in recent history but still holds its significance nonetheless. The idea that one should take failure as an opportunity to build str...
Famed philosopher Nietzsche (or Kelly Clarkson, depending on who you ask) once wrote the famous words: "That which does not kill us makes us stronger." This quote has become rather cliché in recent history but still holds its significance nonetheless. The idea that one should take failure as an opportunity to build str...
I was born in Vietnam and move to Canada at the age of 14. Growing up and going to school in Canada was a great challenge for me due to cultural and language differences. I was having difficulty adapting to the new environment and open myself up to others. Over the years, I was able to overcome these struggles and it h...
I was born in Vietnam and move to Canada at the age of 14. Growing up and going to school in Canada was a great challenge for me due to cultural and language differences. I was having difficulty adapting to the new environment and open myself up to others. Over the years, I was able to overcome these struggles, and it ...
I sat in the backseat of a car, sandwiched between two girls from a private school, on our way to Ontake-jinja shrine near Osaka, Japan. Moments after our homestay mother briefed us on the historical significance of the site, the vehicle unexpectedly halted. We piled out, then registered the situation at hand: the hood...
I sat in the backseat of a car, sandwiched between two girls from a private school, on our way to Ontake-jinja shrine near Osaka, Japan. Moments after our homestay mother briefed us on the historical significance of the site, the vehicle unexpectedly halted. We piled out, then registered the situation at hand: the hood...
I have written about how my family situations taught me to become the person I am now. It is exactly 650 words. It was raining cats and dogs as I stared outside from the veranda. It seemed as if the weather, too, was as worried as I am. "Knock!! Knock!!" A woman in her 30s with an umbrella, standing in front of our hou...
I have written about how my family situations taught me to become the person I am now. It is exactly 650 words. It was raining cats and dogs as I stared outside from the veranda. Furthermore, it seemed as if the weather, too, was as worried as I am. "Knock!! Knock!!" A woman in her 30s with an umbrella, standing in fro...
My mother, sister, and friends would describe me as an individual who is calm, dedicated, and focused on achieving goals through hard-work and persistency. The descriptions of myself can be illustrated through my graduation of the Kinesiology program at Langara College. I am proud of myself for completing the program b...
My mother, sister, and friends would describe me as an individual who is calm, dedicated, and focused on achieving goals through hard-work and persistency. The descriptions of myself can be illustrated through my graduation of the Kinesiology program at Angara College. I am proud of myself for completing the program be...
During the coronavirus pandemic, our lives have changed dramatically. For some of us, this has meant significant changes to our personal, family, and community lives. You might have spent time caring for people around you. You might have spent more time on academic work than usual. You might have been able to use this ...
During the coronavirus pandemic, our lives have changed dramatically. For some of us, this has meant significant changes to our personal, family, and community lives. You might have spent time caring for people around you. You might have spent more time on academic work than usual. Furthermore, you might have been able...
I am most proud of the fact that I am an intelligent student and a good time manager. I am always stand in the top 3 of my math classes and also achieve a few prizes when I was in secondary school. I passed into a gifted high school in my country, Vietnam, and trained here for 1 year after studying abroad in Canada. Wi...
I am most proud of the fact that I am an intelligent student and a good time manager. I am always stood in the top 3 of my math classes and also achieve a few prizes when I was in secondary school. Furthermore, I passed into a gifted high school in my country, Vietnam, and trained here for 1 year after studying abroad ...
The mental picture I took of that 1250 feet above the ground-view is still so fresh in my mind that if I close my eyes right now I can still see it in front of me and I feel like I am being the 11 year old girl who is mesmerized by the spectacular view of the city with a gorgeous sunset with the sky painted with smoky ...
The mental picture I took of that 1250 feet above the ground-view is still so fresh in my mind that if I close my eyes right now I can still see it in front of me and I feel like I am being the 11-year-old girl who is mesmerized by the spectacular view of the city with a gorgeous sunset with the sky painted with smoky ...
Fold. Crease. Turn. Unfold. Edge to the edge, as precisely as possible. I analyze the ends for flaws.As the myth goes, one who creates 1000 origami cranes would be granted a wish. I took this as a challenge. To my parents' confusion, junk mail and money would often transform into these little creatures. This was a dist...
Fold. Crease. Turn. Unfold. Edge to the edge, as precisely as possible. I analyze the ends for flaws. As the myth goes, one who creates 1000 origami cranes would be granted a wish. I took this as a challenge. To my parents' confusion, junk mail and money would often transform into these little creatures. This was a dis...
This is an admissions prompt for the University of Waterloo's Computing and Financial Management program. I also applied to CS and AFM but CFM is my first choice. I'm not sure if my answer is very concise and if I answered everything that was asked. I also think I repeated a few words too many times but I don't know wh...
This is an admission prompt for the University of Waterloo's Computing and Financial Management program. I also applied to CS and AFM, but CFM is my first choice. I'm not sure if my answer is very concise and if I answered everything that was asked. Furthermore, I also think I repeated a few words too many times, but I...
In my quantum computing course, the most fascinating topic I have learned about so far is the Pauli computing gates. It is for that reason, I would be delighted to meet the famous physicist Wolfgang Ernest Pauli. Wolfgang Pauli not only has one of the coolest names in history but his achievements in the field of quantu...
In my quantum computing course, the most fascinating topic I have learned about so far is the Pauli computing gates. It is for that reason, I would be delighted to meet the famous physicist Wolfgang Ernest Pauli. Wolfgang Pauli not only has one of the coolest names in history but his achievements in the field of quantu...
A bittersweet ambience filled the air. The field of the school campus was scattered with students in black and white gowns. Parents and relatives crying tears of joy. I stood beside my family as my brother received congratulations from others. Had it already been a year since Tim graduated? Now Phil? It was an odd feel...
A bittersweet ambience filled the air. The field of the school campus was scattered with students in black and white gowns. Parents and relatives crying tears of joy. I stood beside my family as my brother received congratulations from others. Had it already been a year since Tim graduated? Now Phil? It was an odd feel...
This is my common app essay for the fall 2022 freshman year. I know its early, but I'm an international and likely won't have time to write long essays during my senior year. Also I'm somewhat unfamiliar with writing essays in general since its not something taught here in depth so I'm open to super-critical feedback a...
This is my common app essay for the fall 2022 freshman year. I know it's early, but I'm an international and likely won't have time to write long essays during my senior year. Also, I'm somewhat unfamiliar with writing essays in general since it's not something taught here in depth, so I'm open to super-critical feedba...
Every Eid, I would awaken to the chants coming from the Mosque and to the pungent but aromatic scent of Usban emanating from the kitchen. There she1 was in her signature kaftan delicately suturing tripe pieces filled with a mixture of rice and lamb, all the while our cat was weaving through her legs, anticipating -much...
Every EID, I would awaken to the chants coming from the Mosque and to the pungent but aromatic scent of Urban emanating from the kitchen. There she1 was in her signature caftan delicately suturing tripe pieces filled with a mixture of rice and lamb, all the while our cat was weaving through her legs, anticipating -much...
Cre·scen·do: a gradual increase in the volume of music.There it was. Glistening from what seemed a mile away, my feet subconsciously began to move. In the music store filled with countless other instruments, I immediately fell in love with the flute. From learning Hot Cross Buns on the flute to singing in my high schoo...
CRE·seen·do: a gradual increase in the volume of music. There it was. Glistening from what seemed a mile away, my feet subconsciously began to move. In the music store filled with countless other instruments, I immediately fell in love with the flute. From learning Hot Cross Buns on the flute to singing in my high scho...
"I want to kill myself." The sweaty, young man had just rushed in through the entrance of the hospital where I was volunteering. Visibly distraught, he stood before me at the front desk stammering out the same phrase. Quickly overcoming my shock, I carefully asked him what was wrong while dialing the telephone operator...
"I want to kill myself." The sweaty, young man had just rushed in through the entrance of the hospital where I was volunteering. Visibly distraught, he stood before me at the front desk stammering out the same phrase. Quickly overcoming my shock, I carefully asked him what was wrong while dialing the telephone operator...
As a naturally inquisitive teenager, I crave new experiences. I became the youngest Indonesian representative in Asia Youth Leader by AEON 1% club. On the topic of healthy diet, our group considered technological trends to attract people's interest and practicality, so we settled on a virtual assistant that could ident...
As a naturally inquisitive teenager, I crave new experiences. I became the youngest Indonesian representative in Asia Youth Leader by Eon 1% club. On the topic of healthy diet, our group considered technological trends to attract people's interest and practicality, so we settled on a virtual assistant that could identi...
I'll appreciate if someone help me with grammatical errors and other things This pandemic has made me realize the importance of having family around when dealing with unexpected situations. Across the globe, we all had to go through tough times during this pandemic including myself, when I lost my grandmother earlier i...
I'll appreciate if someone help me with grammatical errors and other things This pandemic has made me realize the importance of having family around when dealing with unexpected situations. Across the globe, we all had to go through tough times during this pandemic including myself, when I lost my grandmother earlier i...
"The Happy Little Cow", that's how my family began to call me when I was four years old because, it didn't matter what, smiling was my profession. Few years ago, we went through hard times. My father got cancer, and we didn't have enough money to buy food and pay the bills; mom had four jobs, she was exhausted and depr...
"The Happy Little Cow", that's how my family began to call me when I was four years old because, it didn't matter what, smiling was my profession. Few years ago, we went through hard times. My father got cancer, and we didn't have enough money to buy food and pay the bills; mom had four jobs, she was exhausted and depr...
I asked my best friend to help me answer this question by briefly describing me, and she said, "When it comes to being a friend to someone, you are the most empathetic person I know, but when it comes to helping yourself, you are turning into the strictest parent I could imagine". After a while, I realized that she is ...
I asked my best friend to help me answer this question by briefly describing me, and she said, "When it comes to being a friend to someone, you are the most empathetic person I know, but when it comes to helping yourself, you are turning into the strictest parent I could imagine". After a while, I realized that she is ...
Working in the business environment right after high school brought to me a different perspective of college education. Being in between the colleagues who are older than me, I always wonder: "How can I still be equal to them although I've not attended college?", "What is the difference between me and people who all ha...
Working in the business environment right after high school brought to me a different perspective of college education. Being in between the colleagues who are older than me, I always wonder: "How can I still be equal to them, although I've not attended college?", "What is the difference between me and people who all h...
My friend once told me that I am a person, who easily succeeds in everything. These words sounded nice, but they hurted me because it wasn't the type of person which I want to become. In my mind, someone, who is good at everything, isn't significant in anything. Although, they were fair: the person, who said it, was my...
My friend once told me that I am a person, who easily succeeds in everything. These words sounded nice, but they hurt me because it wasn't the type of person which I want to become. In my mind, someone, who is good at everything, isn't significant in anything. Although, they were fair: the person, who said it, was my c...
I was born in an underprivileged area in Turkey. My father passed away when I was six. I was raised by my brother and my mother. I took an exam for a boarding school (Darussafaka) specifically for orphans, and after I passed the exam started living 1000km away from my family at the age of 10. In my hometown, we lacked ...
I was born in an underprivileged area in Turkey. My father passed away when I was six. I was raised by my brother and my mother. I took an exam for a boarding school (Darussalam) specifically for orphans, and after I passed the exam started living 1000 km away from my family at the age of 10. In my hometown, we lacked ...
My palms were sweaty before I even ventured into the field. I have always been a player, but for the first time, I was going to play in the background with a board in hand as I took the responsibility of a team manager for a sport I have never competed in before- baseball. As the manager for the Varsity Boys Baseball, ...
My palms were sweaty before I even ventured into the field. I have always been a player, but for the first time, I was going to play in the background with a board in hand as I took the responsibility of a team manager for a sport I have never competed in before-baseball. As the manager for the Varsity Boys Baseball, I...
Like every kid I also was inspired by movies to become a hacker and my laptop setup with parental controls was just the reason I needed to seriously consider the possibility. After tons of "research" on the internet and asking every adult I knew , I ended up at a programming course.I put in a ton of effort in my coding...
Like every kid I also was inspired by movies to become a hacker and my laptop setup with parental controls was just the reason I needed to seriously consider the possibility. After tons of "research" on the internet and asking every adult I knew, I ended up at a programming course. I put in a ton of effort in my coding...
I got into computer science because I missed a tournament. It was the year 2012 when I got my first laptop , a hand-me-down from my dad. It was also around the time when my parents discovered parental-controls and my gaming time was reduced to one hour, because of this I ended up missing an "important" gaming tournamen...
I got into computer science because I missed a tournament. It was the year 2012 when I got my first laptop, a hand-me-down from my dad. It was also around the time when my parents discovered parental-controls and my gaming time was reduced to one hour, because of this I ended up missing an "important" gaming tournament...
This essay isn't very "flowery" and is straight to the point. Should I add extra texture and substance to make it read like a much better essay? If so, how? Here is the prompt:Please use the space below to provide details about the change in progression through secondaryhigh school I am currently scheduled to graduate ...
This essay isn't very "flowery" and is straight to the point. Should I add extra texture and substance to make it read like a much better essay? If so, how? Here is the prompt:Please use the space below to provide details about the change in progression through secondary high school I am currently scheduled to graduate...
I am interested in the software engineering and computer science programs at Waterloo due to my love of problem-solving and pushing boundaries. I aspire to define new frontiers of innovation and build a better future for generations to come. The UW Blueprint Organization will allow me to dedicate my skills in creating ...
I am interested in the software engineering and computer science programs at Waterloo due to my love of problem-solving and pushing boundaries. I aspire to define new frontiers of innovation and build a better future for generations to come. The UW Blueprint Organization will allow me to dedicate my skills in creating ...
My first business was when I was 7 years old. You may have heard stories like this before, but mine is a little different. During recess, I would sell Rainbow Loom bracelets to other unsuspecting 7 years olds but I would charge them triple the price I should have. In one day I made 80 dollars off of 10 bracelets, even ...
My first business was when I was 7 years old. You may have heard stories like this before, but mine is a little different. During recess, I would sell Rainbow Loom bracelets to other unsuspecting 7 years olds, but I would charge them triple the price I should have. In one day I made 80 dollars off of 10 bracelets, even...
Q1: Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest in your chosen program(s), and your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo. If you have applied to more than one program, please discuss your interest in each program. (900 characters limit) My intention with Engineering is about learning skills...
Q1: Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest in your chosen program(s), and your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo. If you have applied to more than one program, please discuss your interest in each program. (900 characters limit) My intention with Engineering is about learning skills...
Programs: Mechanical Engineering, Mathematics, Computer Science I want to pursue a career in Mechanical Engineering at Waterloo because I want to bring the Aerospace Industry to Canada. Co-op Engineering at Waterloo is designed to provide experience in large multidisciplinary teams, problem-solving, and innovation, all...
Programs: Mechanical Engineering, Mathematics, Computer Science I want to pursue a career in Mechanical Engineering at Waterloo because I want to bring the Aerospace Industry to Canada. Co-op Engineering at Waterloo is designed to provide experience in large multidisciplinary teams, problem-solving, and innovation, all...
Vietnamese Literature class... I was tired of copying the lecture from the board to my notebook without any discussions about the script or characters. Today some Japanese students would visit my school, so why did I still stuck to this desk and didn't come to see them? Looking at the grief and boredom of my classmates...
Vietnamese Literature class... I was tired of copying the lecture from the board to my notebook without any discussions about the script or characters. Today some Japanese students would visit my school, so why did I still stick to this desk and didn't come to see them? Looking at the grief and boredom of my classmates...
Your statement of purpose should consist of approximately 500 words and should provide an overview of your academic and personal experience, describing preparation for and commitment to further study at SCAD, as well as educational and professional goals and aspirations. My love for art is a magnificent thing. I don't ...
Your statement of purpose should consist of approximately 500 words and should provide an overview of your academic and personal experience, describing preparation for and commitment to further study at SCAD, as well as educational and professional goals and aspirations. My love for art is a magnificent thing. I don't ...
Throughout times of depression and adversities, my mother has always shown me her unconditional love and support. The bond I have with my mother is what is important to me. When I was eighteen years old, I was living in Edmonton alone. I had suffered a period of major depression and had no friends or family in the city...
Throughout times of depression and adversities, my mother has always shown me her unconditional love and support. The bond I have with my mother is what is important to me. When I was eighteen years old, I was living in Edmonton alone. I had suffered a period of major depression and had no friends or family in the city...
Since I was in ninth grade, I have known that I want to change the world through robotics. Due that, my biggest goal is to be the type of engineer who together with a team (it is very difficult to change the world alone) can implement solutions to problems of the real world. MIT is known for the good relations between ...
Since I was in ninth grade, I have known that I want to change the world through robotics. Do that, my biggest goal is to be the type of engineer who together with a team (it is very difficult to change the world alone) can implement solutions to problems of the real world. MIT is known for the good relations between t...
"When I keep quiet, stigma wins and, I can't let that happen" -Edwin.I was 14 years old when diagnosed with depression. Depression, a stigmatized topic; I believe the problem itself doesn't but, the struggle and success of defeating depression for three years now truly defines me. Speaking about my experience with depr...
"When I keep quiet, stigma wins and, I can't let that happen" -Edwin. I was 14 years old when diagnosed with depression. Depression, a stigmatized topic; I believe the problem itself doesn't but, the struggle and success of defeating depression for three years now truly defines me. Speaking about my experience with dep...
The people around me have always held top priority in my heart. It is only because of kindness received from my community that I am able to become the person I am today. Due to this, I try to reciprocate as possible, tailoring myself and my personal goals to meet others expectations. I've only recently come to recogniz...
The people around me have always held top priority in my heart. It is only because of kindness received from my community that I am able to become the person I am today. Due to this, I try to reciprocate as possible, tailoring myself and my personal goals to meet others expectations. I've only recently come to recogniz...
- Neuroscience major: I fall in love with Neuroscience after finding the connection between chemical interactions and the function of neurons in regard to the way of my brain thinking. In Chemistry, I love to think about it in form of a historical timeline, like a journey of chemicals in their "lives". With Neuroscienc...
- Neuroscience major: I fall in love with Neuroscience after finding the connection between chemical interactions and the function of neurons in regard to the way of my brain thinking. In Chemistry, I love to think about it in form of a historical timeline, like a journey of chemicals in their "lives". With Neuroscienc...
When I was 4 years old, I lived two lives. In one life I lived with my parents, teachers, and friends. Another life was a secret place where I was blending in the most amazing adventure with my soulmates. I was thrilled in my first time flying up to the blue sky with Sakura the CardCaptor and exploring the black hole i...
When I was 4 years old, I lived two lives. In one life I lived with my parents, teachers, and friends. Another life was a secret place where I was blending in the most amazing adventure with my soulmates. I was thrilled in my first time flying up to the blue sky with Sakura the Adaptor and exploring the black hole in t...
As I walked in the corridors of my school one afternoon during a break after a mock Model UN conference I noticed something odd. At every step, and as I rounded every corner, I found plastic bottles and sheets of paper littered on the floor. As the co-project manager for litter management in my school's environmental c...
As I walked in the corridors of my school one afternoon during a break after a mock Model UN conference I noticed something odd. At every step, and as I rounded every corner, I found plastic bottles and sheets of paper littered on the floor. As the co-project manager for litter management in my school's environmental c...
When does a people is important for people? While I was taking my design course in high school, I recognized the purpose of the architecture as a key element for people's interaction and mobility. However, we can create a building with 30 floors or 250 floors, the most important is its capacity to resolve a determinate...
When does a people is important for people? While I was taking my design course in high school, I recognized the purpose of the architecture as a key element for people's interaction and mobility. However, we can create a building with 30 floors or 250 floors, the most important is its capacity to resolve a determinate...
Activity 1:One thing that makes me reminiscent of high school is my Debate club. Debating has amplified my articulation power and by dint of it, I have procured prizes in competitions. Besides, the college authority elected me as one representative of the college debate team in many competitions, including Television D...
Activity 1:One thing that makes me reminiscent of high school is my Debate club. Debating has amplified my articulation power and by dint of it, I have procured prizes in competitions. Besides, the college authority elected me as one representative of the college debate team in many competitions, including Television D...
I've struggled with self - expression most of my life. A lot of the time, I was projecting my insecurities and misplaced my anger on people, which ultimately ended my friendship with the one person I loved and cared so much about. For months, I didn't leave my bed and isolated myself from everyone, mistaking it for sol...
I've struggled with self-expression most of my life. A lot of the time, I was projecting my insecurities and misplaced my anger on people, which ultimately ended my friendship with the one person I loved and cared so much about. For months, I didn't leave my bed and isolated myself from everyone, mistaking it for solac...
Thanks a lot! When I was 5 years old, I was a timid girl who usually sat in the corner and kept silent. However, I was hiding a big secret in my head. I wanted to be a female Pope. Becoming a female leader was my dream although sometimes it was considered bossy and ambitious. But nobody can deny that those women were v...
Thanks a lot! When I was 5 years old, I was a timid girl who usually sat in the corner and kept silent. However, I was hiding a big secret in my head. I wanted to be a female Pope. Becoming a female leader was my dream, although sometimes it was considered bossy and ambitious. But nobody can deny that those women were ...
Please write the personal statement with a focus on what you learned from and felt during curricular andor extracurricular activities (up to three)to which you attached meaning and devoted yourself in high school. (within 1500 characters200words) I still remember the first time when I walked into the studio and felt th...
Please write the personal statement with a focus on what you learned from and felt during curricular ardor extracurricular activities (up to three)to which you attached meaning and devoted yourself in high school. (within 1500 characters200words) I still remember the first time when I walked into the studio and felt th...
According to the database of the International Association of Universities, there are 18,400 universities in the world. Seeing this vast list, applicants immediately start to get lost and look for a suitable university for them, spending weeks and months on this. However, I chose the University. It is a unique opportun...
According to the database of the International Association of Universities, there are 18,400 universities in the world. Seeing this vast list, applicants immediately start to get lost and look for a suitable university for them, spending weeks and months on this. However, I chose the University. It is a unique opportun...
In relation to your academic interest and personal experiences, please describe your motivation for your desired course. You may include information related to your preparation for the course and related academic achievements. Please state your goals while studying at Seoul National University as well as your study pla...
In relation to your academic interest and personal experiences, please describe your motivation for your desired course. You may include information related to your preparation for the course and related academic achievements. Please state your goals while studying at Seoul National University as well as your study pla...
To everyone I have ever met, I am outgoing, talkative and amiable, at least for the first thirty seconds. Being a girl in a society whereby the way you look people determine your capabilities, I have learned having those three adjectives being my only descriptor is not enough if I want to achieve my goals in life. As p...
To everyone I have ever met, I am outgoing, talkative and amiable, at least for the first thirty seconds. Being a girl in a society whereby the way you look people determine your capabilities, I have learned to have those three adjectives being my only descriptor is not enough if I want to achieve my goals in life. As ...
· Prompt 4: "Difficulty need not foreshadow despair or defeat. Rather achievement can be all the more satisfying because of obstacles surmounted."Attributed to William Hastie, Amherst Class of 1925, the first African-American to serve as a judge for the United States Court of Appeals All paths to success and ambition a...
· Prompt 4: "Difficulty need not foreshadow despair or defeat. Rather achievement can be all the more satisfying because of obstacles surmounted." Attributed to William Hastie, Amherst Class of 1925, the first African-American to serve as a judge for the United States Court of Appeals All paths to success and ambition ...
I have always found it hard to describe my passion in words. It all started when I came to the Velasquez and Zamora family as the most awaited baby. Both sides made it their mission to mold me into a multifaceted person. Velasquez's taught me the serious stuff -religion, science, politics- and also introduced me to alt...
I have always found it hard to describe my passion in words. It all started when I came to the Velasquez and Zamora family as the most awaited baby. Both sides made it their mission to mold me into a multifaceted person. Velasquez's taught me the serious stuff -religion, science, politics- and also introduced me to alt...
I am Howlader Mohammad Ibrahim, an exuberant boy who hankers after his dreams. I have always dreamt of being a happy person and if I speak candidly; this dream has been achieved by me so far. I believe that the world can be a better place if everyone is happy. I find happiness when the destitute find a place to live or...
I am Holder Mohammad Ibrahim, an exuberant boy who hankers after his dreams. I have always dreamt of being a happy person and if I speak candidly; this dream has been achieved by me so far. Furthermore, I believe that the world can be a better place if everyone is happy. Furthermore, I find happiness when the destitute...
For decades now, the standard of education in Nigeria, my home country has increasingly been dwindling and it does not look like any form of salvage is on the way given the current magnitude of the wreckage done on the educational sector. The emergence of COVID-19 has only fumed the flames as pupils and students have b...
For decades now, the standard of education in Nigeria, my home country has increasingly been dwindling, and it does not look like any form of salvage is on the way given the current magnitude of the wreckage done on the educational sector. The emergence of COVID-19 has only fumed the flames as pupils and students have ...
I think Grade 7th in Junior High was the worst phase of my life. I was a new kid in the school, only had 1 friend whom I had known since elementary school but eventually left me for her new friends. Moreover, a classmate slandered me of cheating the physics test eventhough I didn't even pass the test. As a result, it b...
I think Grade 7th in Junior High was the worst phase of my life. I was a new kid in the school, only had 1 friend whom I had known since elementary school but eventually left me for her new friends. Moreover, a classmate slandered me of cheating the physics test even though I didn't even pass the test. As a result, it ...
My interest in the sciences has only increased throughout high school. Solving competitive problems, going for academic camps, and participating in maths and physics crusades, my classmates always considered me a disciplined learner. Active interaction and guiding with challenging concepts made me a leader figure in th...
My interest in the sciences has only increased throughout high school. Solving competitive problems, going for academic camps, and participating in math and physics crusades, my classmates always considered me a disciplined learner. Active interaction and guiding with challenging concepts made me a leader figure in the...
The word count needed is 300, and this essay already have a just right 300 words. Please give feedback, about anything about the essay (including grammars). Thank you very much. Essay starts after this line. One day when I was still at year 11, my father taught me about getting scholarships overseas. I never seriously ...
The word count needed is 300, and this essay already have a just right 300 words. Please give feedback, about anything about the essay (including grammars). Thank you very much. Essay starts after this line. One day when I was still at year 11, my father taught me about getting scholarships overseas. I never seriously ...
"You're such a mom." says my best friend, Alena as I put her baby sister to sleep. So, I guess my friends would describe me as a big carebear. I think this comes from my ineluctable need to show affection. This is my most evident feature- to have a big heart and tend for people. I come from a background that deems it n...
"You're such a mom." says my best friend, Alena as I put her baby sister to sleep. So, I guess my friends would describe me as a big care bear. I think this comes from my ineluctable need to show affection. This is my most evident feature- to have a big heart and tend for people. I come from a background that deems it ...
Growing up, I crafted mirrors. Wood and canvas looking glasses, small hand mirrors of sketchbook-bound paper: my mirrors always strayed from the typical composition of glass and metal, making it difficult to even perceive them as mirrors in the first place. For years, I simply recognized them to be what they were to th...
Growing up, I crafted mirrors. Wood and canvas looking glasses, small hand mirrors of sketchbook-bound paper: my mirrors always strayed from the typical composition of glass and metal, making it difficult to even perceive them as mirrors in the first place. For years, I simply recognized them to be what they were to th...
Please help me with this and some guidance to perfect this. Thank you so much! There were great gusts of cold air blowing in as I walked under a curtain of darkness that draped the sky, starless. I could not focus. A single soul used to exist inside me. 2017 was a defining year to remember. Upon my optimistic vision ab...
Please help me with this and some guidance to perfect this. Thank you so much! There were great gusts of cold air blowing in as I walked under a curtain of darkness that draped the sky, starless. I could not focus. A single soul used to exist inside me. 2017 was a defining year to remember. Upon my optimistic vision ab...
It was my second day on the job, and I was situated in one of the busiest stations throughout the entirety of the PNE fair. As a ticket seller, I knew that the lines could get long, but this line stretched far beyond what I thought was reasonable. As my coworker and I pulled our curtains up, we both realized that to sa...
It was my second day on the job, and I was situated in one of the busiest stations throughout the entirety of the PNE fair. As a ticket seller, I knew that the lines could get long, but this line stretched far beyond what I thought was reasonable. As my coworker and I pulled our curtains up, we both realized that to sa...
In 2013, my mother moved myself and my brother from a small town in Moscow to Vancouver Island, Nanaimo. I was pulled away from my Lyceum, my friends, and my ballet troupe; all things that defined me as a Russian teen. It was incredibly difficult to fit in with Canadian teenagers, especially since I did not speak Engli...
In 2013, my mother moved myself and my brother from a small town in Moscow to Vancouver Island, Nanaimo. I was pulled away from my Lyceum, my friends, and my ballet troupe; all things that defined me as a Russian teen. It was incredibly difficult to fit in with Canadian teenagers, especially since I did not speak Engli...
Panic set in as I stared at the empty zoom waiting room. What if no one showed up? Through weeks of work to create my school's first Black Student Union (BSU), I never considered what I would do if no one came. Then a notification appeared, followed by another. As my screen filled with the beautiful brown faces of my p...
Panic set in as I stared at the empty zoom waiting room. What if no one showed up? Through weeks of work to create my school's first Black Student Union (BSU), I never considered what I would do if no one came. Then a notification appeared, followed by another. As my screen filled with the beautiful brown faces of my p...
Owning to unfortunate incidents happened these years, for instance,the outbreak of COVID-19, lots of people die from unpredictable accidents and so on. I realized that there is nothing important than a living life. Having seen a film talking about a Syrian refugee, who spent all her properties just for getting a ship t...
Owning to unfortunate incidents happened these years, for instance, the outbreak of COVID-19, lots of people die from unpredictable accidents and so on. I realized that there is nothing important than a living life. Having seen a film talking about a Syrian refugee, who spent all her properties just for getting a ship ...
'' Oh my f* god, she's wearing the pink underwear''''You are such a slut'''' Why don't you shave your hair?''''Can you shut your mouth up? '' This is what I called the ''normal'' conversation. Literally, normal, as I heard it every day. In 9th grade, at a new school, I got bullied by a group of boys in my class. That w...
'' Oh my f* god, she's wearing the pink underwear''''You are such a slut'''' Why don't you shave your hair?'''' Can you shut your mouth up? '' This is what I called the ''normal'' conversation. Literally, normal, as I heard it every day. In 9th grade, at a new school, I got bullied by a group of boys in my class. That ...
I have followed Alice down the rabbit hole many times before. The earliest instance was while I was in elementary school. I had grown tired of staying in my room, staring at the ceiling, so instead, I shrunk myself down and walked through a large, rectangular portal. At first, I was temporarily amazed when I landed in ...
I have followed Alice down the rabbit hole many times before. The earliest instance was while I was in elementary school. I had grown tired of staying in my room, staring at the ceiling, so instead, I shrunk myself down and walked through a large, rectangular portal. At first, I was temporarily amazed when I landed in ...
From a young age, I had always been curious, analytical, but also shy. As a child, I would always have questions racing through my mind; however, I would always be too afraid to raise my hand or ask the teacher for help in fear of being reprimanded. This fear worsened to the point that I constantly felt trapped and una...
From a young age, I had always been curious, analytical, but also shy. As a child, I would always have questions racing through my mind; however, I would always be too afraid to raise my hand or ask the teacher for help in fear of being reprimanded. This fear worsened to the point that I constantly felt trapped and una...
I like to consider myself as a multi-faceted individual, demonstrating various aspects of my character to different people, which ultimately ties in all together to define who I am. For instance, my parents would describe me as bold and determined, someone who is not hesitant to speak up their mind and engage in discus...
I like to consider myself as a multi-faceted individual, demonstrating various aspects of my character to different people, which ultimately ties in all together to define who I am. For instance, my parents would describe me as bold and determined, someone who is not hesitant to speak up their mind and engage in discus...
please let me know how i can improve this essay as well as reduce the word count because i am over the limit. Also is my voice heard in the essay I took the initiative to hold the first Black History month event at my school in order to create an environment that encourages diversity and appreciates the differences of ...
Please let me know how I can improve this essay as well as reduce the word count because I am over the limit. Also is my voice heard in the essay I took the initiative to hold the first Black History month event at my school in order to create an environment that encourages diversity and appreciates the differences of ...
I have always fancied becoming an entrepreneur. The mere idea of helping others through my work puts me in a state of sheer excitement. This dream of mine manifested itself in May 2020 when COVID-19 was on the rise and hand-sanitizers were in great demand. Owing to the increased demand, the production of hand-sanitizer...
I have always fancied becoming an entrepreneur. The mere idea of helping others through my work puts me in a state of sheer excitement. This dream of mine manifested itself in May 2020 when COVID-19 was on the rise and hand-sanitizers were in great demand. Owing to the increased demand, the production of hand-sanitizer...
Growing up as a skinny, gay Asian kid, I was bullied. My bullies, like many others, have a way of making me feel as if no one would ever stand up for me. As I matured, however, this feeling led me to grow into a leader that is not afraid to stand up for myself. Perhaps this is why friends compare me to Michelle Obama -...
Growing up as a skinny, gay Asian kid, I was bullied. My bullies, like many others, have a way of making me feel as if no one would ever stand up for me. As I matured, however, this feeling led me to grow into a leader that is not afraid to stand up for myself. Perhaps this is why friends compare me to Michelle Obama -...
The stressful experience of working early morning shifts, dealing with impatient customers, and being unable to find success at my McDonald's job in Port Moody was a challenge that I had to overcome. It was hard adapting to my first job. I felt helpless when customers would yell at me with profanities, throw hot coffee...
The stressful experience of working early morning shifts, dealing with impatient customers, and being unable to find success at my McDonald's job in Port Moody was a challenge that I had to overcome. It was hard adapting to my first job. I felt helpless when customers would yell at me with profanities, throw hot coffee...
Taking initiative is important for a meaningful and interesting life. In order to understand society and the world around us, we have to subject ourselves to different experiences and adversities. By always sticking to the familiar and not taking risks, one can become every sheltered and lack valuable social or life sk...
Taking initiative is important for a meaningful and interesting life. In order to understand society and the world around us, we have to subject ourselves to different experiences and adversities. By always sticking to the familiar and not taking risks, one can become every sheltered and lack valuable social or life sk...
Thanks! -------------------Response----------------------Through the pitter-patter of rain battering the canopy, among the joyous laughter of celebrations, I unraveled the mystery of my true calling. In the summer of 2018, I laid at home aimlessly, still unclear of my future after high school graduation. The only clue ...
Thanks! -------------------Response----------------------Through the pitter-patter of rain battering the canopy, among the joyous laughter of celebrations, I unraveled the mystery of my true calling. In the summer of 2018, I laid at home aimlessly, still unclear of my future after high school graduation. The only clue ...
Different people have different portrayals of a person's personality based on their experiences. For instance, my parents would describe me as independent and a critical thinker. As a child, my mom would always tell me to "look at the big picture" and to "approach problems from different angles". Growing up, I have alw...
Different people have different portrayals of a person's personality based on their experiences. For instance, my parents would describe me as independent and a critical thinker. As a child, my mom would always tell me to "look at the big picture" and to "approach problems from different angles". Growing up, I have alw...
As a teenager, being asked to describe yourself can be the easiest question to answer. It can also be the hardest. On several occasions, I have been driven to sit down and decide who I want to be. But I have not given much thought to who I am right now. Not because I do not have a character. But owing to the fact that ...
As a teenager, being asked to describe yourself can be the easiest question to answer. It can also be the hardest. On several occasions, I have been driven to sit down and decide who I want to be. But I have not given much thought to who I am right now. Not because I do not have a character. But owing to the fact that ...
"The most important thing to me is family. This is because family members are the people that a person can trust the most in their life. Just as a tall and mighty building will need a strong foundation, I need my family as a foundation for me to build upon and achieve my goals. I believe that behind every successful pe...
"The most important thing to me is family. This is because family members are the people that a person can trust the most in their life. Just as a tall and mighty building will need a strong foundation, I need my family as a foundation for me to build upon and achieve my goals. I believe that behind every successful pe...
From a very young age I was brought up in a very creative family, my father being in film and my mom running an art school. I learned to value creativity very highly, and I would go on to follow that closely. Growing up I learned that creativity created a safe space for me, somewhere I could go to whenever times got di...
From a very young age I was brought up in a very creative family, my father being in film and my mom running an art school. I learned to value creativity very highly, and I would go on to follow that closely. Growing up I learned that creativity created a safe space for me, somewhere I could go to whenever times got di...
The most important thing to me is freedom. I believe that everyone should have the right to choose from a variety of options but at the same time, we must not jeopardize the freedom of others. To be free means to live and earn a living as a free and honest person. To be free means to express your opinion and build your...
The most important thing to me is freedom. I believe that everyone should have the right to choose from a variety of options but at the same time, we must not jeopardize the freedom of others. To be free means to live and earn a living as a free and honest person. To be free means to express your opinion and build your...
I am most proud of the fact that I was able to lead a life that was both well-balanced and fulfilling. I pride myself on having followed through with the plan that was put in place years ago in my wanting to become a student at UBC. My driven nature has allowed me to pursue an array of various activities, ranging from ...
I am most proud of the fact that I was able to lead a life that was both well-balanced and fulfilling. I pride myself on having followed through with the plan that was put in place years ago in my wanting to become a student at UBC. My driven nature has allowed me to pursue an array of various activities, ranging from ...
Include information about what inspires you, what does your artistic process look like, share why you are interested in and utilize certain materials, exhibitions in which you have participated, or other activities that contribute to the making of your work. If you are applying to the BFA with an Emphasis in Writing, y...
Include information about what inspires you, what does your artistic process look like, share why you are interested in and utilize certain materials, exhibitions in which you have participated, or other activities that contribute to the making of your work. If you are applying to the BFA with an Emphasis in Writing, y...
I say highway, while my dad says motorway. I drink coffee, while my dad drinks tea. Growing up as a dual citizen of the United States and the United Kingdom, I was exposed to a broader view of the world. My sense of curiosity about other cultures opened my eyes to the field of international relations, which I hope to s...
I say highway, while my dad says freeway. I drink coffee, while my dad drinks tea. Growing up as a dual citizen of the United States and the United Kingdom, I was exposed to a broader view of the world. My sense of curiosity about other cultures opened my eyes to the field of international relations, which I hope to st...
I have read multiple articles about how to write a study plan and this is what I got. Can you give it a read and leave an opinion about my essay? Is there something else I can add to make my essay better? And can someone help me correct any grammar errors? I apologize if my english is a little wonky. ------------------...
I have read multiple articles about how to write a study plan and this is what I got. Can you give it a read and leave an opinion about my essay? Is there something else I can add to make my essay better? And can someone help me correct any grammar errors? I apologize if my English is a little wonky. ------------------...
For a kid who has been a maker since five and math-lover since second grade, I'm incredibly indecisive when choosing my major. I have too many interests: mechanical design fascinates me, electromagnetism is electrifying, recursion is mind-blowing, statistics is magic. I'm even interested in screenwriting when I began m...
For a kid who has been a maker since five and math-lover since second grade, I'm incredibly indecisive when choosing my major. I have too many interests: mechanical design fascinates me, electromagnetism is electrifying, recursion is mind-blowing, statistics is magic. I'm even interested in screenwriting when I began m...
I observed as the argument heated up - a cloud of dissatisfaction had settled over my group. Remaining calm and collected, I listened to each person's opinions on the matter and open-mindedly tackled the problem. My friends often liken me to an owl - I carefully observe situations, calmly solve unexpected problems, and...
I observed as the argument heated up - a cloud of dissatisfaction had settled over my group. Remaining calm and collected, I listened to each person's opinions on the matter and open-mindedly tackled the problem. My friends often liken me to an owl - I carefully observe situations, calmly solve unexpected problems, and...
Hello, I am currently applying for the USNA and was hoping to receive feedback regarding my personal statement. Thank you! (2) Describe a personal experience you have had which you feel has contributed to your own character development and integrity. Whenever I asked how something worked as a little girl, my family dec...
Hello, I am currently applying for the USA and was hoping to receive feedback regarding my personal statement. Thank you! (2) Describe a personal experience you have had which you feel has contributed to your own character development and integrity. Whenever I asked how something worked as a little girl, my family decl...
I was given the opportunity to lead a team within the Core Youth Team which focused on establishing a sense of community amongst our local youth. I led a team of six people; my responsibilities included finding and booking a venue, planning the evening, delegating tasks, finding volunteers, and arranging for supplies a...
I was given the opportunity to lead a team within the Core Youth Team which focused on establishing a sense of community amongst our local youth. I led a team of six people; my responsibilities included finding and booking a venue, planning the evening, delegating tasks, finding volunteers, and arranging for supplies a...
Throughout my life, I have always enjoyed listening to stories no matter what language they are told in. When I was in first grade my teacher would tell us countless stories about magical worlds, but sadly would never get the chance to finish each story they told us since we were always busy with completing assignments...
Throughout my life, I have always enjoyed listening to stories no matter what language they are told in. When I was in first grade my teacher would tell us countless stories about magical worlds, but sadly would never get the chance to finish each story they told us since we were always busy with completing assignments...
Directions: Tell a story from your life, describing an experience that either demonstrates your character or helped to shape it. There I stood conflicted on whether or not to fight for my own thoughts and beliefs or to continue being the obedient "little girl" people wanted me to be. Throughout my life growing up I was...
Directions: Tell a story from your life, describing an experience that either demonstrates your character or helped to shape it. There I stood conflicted on whether to fight for my own thoughts and beliefs or to continue being the obedient "little girl" people wanted me to be. Throughout my life growing up I was told b...
I'm either responding to prompt 1 or 7 on the common app essay but I can't decide which.1. Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, please share your story. 7. Share an essay on any topic of your ...
I'm either responding to prompt 1 or 7 on the common app essay, but I can't decide which.1. Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, please share your story. 7. Share an essay on any topic of your...
I am the product of the archetype Asian Tiger Mom. She's always had an iron grip on everything I do before, during, and after school. So, at the end of 8th grade, as a soon-to-be high schooler, I wanted to try and switch things up a bit. During the summer before high school, I watched this show called 'Your Lie in Apri...
I am the product of the archetype Asian Tiger Mom. She's always had an iron grip on everything I do before, during, and after school. So, at the end of 8th grade, as a soon-to-be high schooler, I wanted to try and switch things up a bit. During the summer before high school, I watched this show called 'Your Lie in Apri...
The reading I have enjoyed the most in the past year is "Physics of the Future" by "Michio Kaku". With 300 scientists' help, the writer analyzes the information he has collected and writes in simple words what innovations will change our lives, how they will change them, and when it will happen? Unlike many future scie...
The reading I have enjoyed the most in the past year is "Physics of the Future" by "Michel Baku". With 300 scientists' help, the writer analyzes the information he has collected and writes in simple words what innovations will change our lives, how they will change them, and when it will happen? Unlike many future scie...
I am a 16 year old teenager who is never afraid to fail but someone who is afraid not to try. My parents and friends would describe me as a motivated, passionate and hardworking individual who will leave no stone unturned in order to accomplish the standards I have set for myself. In order to exemplify what I have said...
I am a 16-year-old teenager who is never afraid to fail but someone who is afraid not to try. My parents and friends would describe me as a motivated, passionate and hardworking individual who will leave no stone unturned in order to accomplish the standards I have set for myself. In order to exemplify what I have said...
(I also might pick the last prompt of the common app, but not too sure yet.) When I got tired of English novels with their complicated sentence structures and advanced words, I discovered amateur translations of Chinese novels. To be honest, any long term reading of these stories would make English seem like incomprehe...
(I also might pick the last prompt of the common app, but not to sure yet.) When I got tired of English novels with their complicated sentence structures and advanced words, I discovered amateur translations of Chinese novels. To be honest, any long term reading of these stories would make English seem like incomprehen...
Could you please help me with my UBC application?Please help me with honest reviewsThank you.
Could you please help me with my UBC application? Please help me with honest reviewsThank you.
I think there are a lot of things that are important to me. Reading is an important activity for my growth. Reading broadened my knowledge. I become more intelligent more interesting, and appealing by reading books. By reading I improve my knowledge of various topics as well as rhetorical skills. Sports and music are i...
I think there are a lot of things that are important to me. Reading is an important activity for my growth. Reading broadened my knowledge. I become more intelligent more interesting, and appealing by reading books. By reading I improve my knowledge of various topics as well as rhetorical skills. Sports and music are i...
Communication is the most pivotal aspect of my life. Growing up, my family has never openly talked about mental health. As a result, I have struggled with connecting to others because of anxiety and social pressure. However, seeing my parents being affected by transgenerational trauma, I quickly learned to talk about s...
Communication is the most pivotal aspect of my life. Growing up, my family has never openly talked about mental health. As a result, I have struggled with connecting to others because of anxiety and social pressure. However, seeing my parents being affected by transgenerational trauma, I quickly learned to talk about s...
I believe that there is a vast difference between wanting to do something and actually doing it. When I first came across, 'Teach For India' I was in my second year of college. Like all others, I too wanted to make a change but, I did not have clarity about where to start from. So, while oscillating in chaos, I got my ...
I believe that there is a vast difference between wanting to do something and actually doing it. When I first came across, 'Teach For India' I was in my second year of college. Like all others, I too wanted to make a change but, I did not have clarity about where to start from. So, while oscillating in chaos, I got my ...