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KOR | B1_2 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 70 | 70 | 70 | Good overall command of language and free of misspellings. | A couple of incorrect use of words and grammar mistakes. | 11,005 | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time once their school or other become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially . They are no , and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure their . They have to understand how hard thus, they can save and never ... | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time job once their school grade or other condition become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially dependent. They are no more kids, and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure from their parent. They have to unde... |
KOR | B2_0 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 47 | 47 | 47 | Sound composition of content with convincing real-life experiences. Accurate spellings. | Could not understand some phrases in the essay due to improper use of words. Need to work on grammar. | 11,024 | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time once their school or other become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially . They are no , and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure their . They have to understand how hard thus, they can save and never ... | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time job once their school grade or other condition become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially dependent. They are no more kids, and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure from their parent. They have to unde... |
CHN | B2_0 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 51 | 49 | 50 | Effective use of transition words to guide the readers through the context. | Need to work on grammar. Sentence structure was a bit way too simple. | 10,964 | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time once their school or other become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially . They are no , and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure their . They have to understand how hard thus, they can save and never ... | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time job once their school grade or other condition become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially dependent. They are no more kids, and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure from their parent. They have to unde... |
THA | B1_1 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 52 | 50 | 51 | Good command of language. Free of grammatical errors through the essay. | Sentence structure was way too simple. Context was weak in terms of logical flow. | 10,936 | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time once their school or other become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially . They are no , and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure their . They have to understand how hard thus, they can save and never ... | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time job once their school grade or other condition become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially dependent. They are no more kids, and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure from their parent. They have to unde... |
JPN | A2_0 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 55 | 57 | 56 | The argument was clear and coherent. Relatively good command of language. | Need to work on grammar, proper word choice and phraseology. | 11,043 | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time once their school or other become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially . They are no , and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure their . They have to understand how hard thus, they can save and never ... | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time job once their school grade or other condition become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially dependent. They are no more kids, and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure from their parent. They have to unde... |
KOR | B2_0 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 10 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 95 | 94 | 94.5 | Operational command of language with semantically complex words. Sophisticated arguments. | Some phrases may sound unnatural. Could have refined the sentences further to make them look more sophisticated. | 10,956 | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time once their school or other become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially . They are no , and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure their . They have to understand how hard thus, they can save and never ... | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time job once their school grade or other condition become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially dependent. They are no more kids, and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure from their parent. They have to unde... |
TWN | B2_0 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 68 | 65 | 66.5 | Good command of language. Provided convincing reasons to back up the argument. | Several obvious grammatical mistakes could be seen. Could refine the overall language to make it more sophisticated. | 10,983 | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time once their school or other become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially . They are no , and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure their . They have to understand how hard thus, they can save and never ... | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time job once their school grade or other condition become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially dependent. They are no more kids, and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure from their parent. They have to unde... |
KOR | B1_2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 11 | 16 | 13.5 | Sound structure of context that comprises of several good reasoning. | Should pay attention to phraseology and sentence fragmentation. Could not fully understand the context. | 11,030 | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time once their school or other become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially . They are no , and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure their . They have to understand how hard thus, they can save and never ... | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time job once their school grade or other condition become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially dependent. They are no more kids, and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure from their parent. They have to unde... |
KOR | B1_2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 5 | 11 | 8 | Good overall context structure with proper use of transition words. | Several critical errors in grammar. Some phrases did not make sense. Had a hard time understanding the context. | 10,943 | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time once their school or other become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially . They are no , and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure their . They have to understand how hard thus, they can save and never ... | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time job once their school grade or other condition become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially dependent. They are no more kids, and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure from their parent. They have to unde... |
IDN | A2_0 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 63 | 60 | 61.5 | Spellings were accurate. Good arguments to support the student's opinion. | Difficult to understand the context at the first glance. Need to work on grammar and word choice. | 10,958 | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time once their school or other become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially . They are no , and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure their . They have to understand how hard thus, they can save and never ... | In my opinion, it is necessary for college students to have part-time job once their school grade or other condition become steady. Why? First, college students are old enough to be financially dependent. They are no more kids, and they have the responsibility to lessen the pressure from their parent. They have to unde... |
THA | B1_1 | 6 | 4 | 5 | 7 | 3 | 2 | 4 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 31 | 38 | 34.5 | English is understandable. Used some complex words. | Same words are repeated several times. Seems that the first half is all introduction. | 11,156 | Actually, student have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, must learn basic theory. have only years to learn level knowledge and job do whole . If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. to the job, so can't avoid with others, many decide who they want who more level knowledge. Maybe there al... | Actually, student doesn't have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, you must have to learn the basic theory. So you just have only 7 years to learn the pro level knowledge, and choice your job which you maybe will do your whole life. If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. Everyone wants to do th... |
TWN | B1_2 | 3 | 6 | 3 | 4 | 2 | 2 | 5 | 8 | 4 | 2 | 41 | 39 | 40 | Good introduction and conclusion with complex words. | Could not understand the general idea. Maybe needed to discuss the idea in deeper level. | 11,158 | Actually, student have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, must learn basic theory. have only years to learn level knowledge and job do whole . If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. to the job, so can't avoid with others, many decide who they want who more level knowledge. Maybe there al... | Actually, student doesn't have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, you must have to learn the basic theory. So you just have only 7 years to learn the pro level knowledge, and choice your job which you maybe will do your whole life. If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. Everyone wants to do th... |
JPN | B1_1 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 3 | 3 | 66 | 60 | 63 | Very neat essay. Summarized three ideas well. grammar is not perfect but understandable. | Maybe conclusion can be improved by not repeating similar sentences and by using appropriate conjunction. | 11,180 | Actually, student have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, must learn basic theory. have only years to learn level knowledge and job do whole . If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. to the job, so can't avoid with others, many decide who they want who more level knowledge. Maybe there al... | Actually, student doesn't have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, you must have to learn the basic theory. So you just have only 7 years to learn the pro level knowledge, and choice your job which you maybe will do your whole life. If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. Everyone wants to do th... |
THA | B1_1 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 4 | 2 | 3 | 8 | 22 | 15 | Seems that the writer considers about the advantages and disadvantages. | Very difficult to understand due to English. The writer has to improve both grammar and vocabulary. | 11,177 | Actually, student have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, must learn basic theory. have only years to learn level knowledge and job do whole . If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. to the job, so can't avoid with others, many decide who they want who more level knowledge. Maybe there al... | Actually, student doesn't have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, you must have to learn the basic theory. So you just have only 7 years to learn the pro level knowledge, and choice your job which you maybe will do your whole life. If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. Everyone wants to do th... |
KOR | B1_2 | 7 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 4 | 65 | 61 | 63 | Unique opinion about the work in vacations. Good use of adverbs helps to follow the logic flow even easier. | Pity that the writer is weak in grammars. Also, some important prepositions are missing. | 11,070 | Actually, student have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, must learn basic theory. have only years to learn level knowledge and job do whole . If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. to the job, so can't avoid with others, many decide who they want who more level knowledge. Maybe there al... | Actually, student doesn't have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, you must have to learn the basic theory. So you just have only 7 years to learn the pro level knowledge, and choice your job which you maybe will do your whole life. If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. Everyone wants to do th... |
KOR | B1_1 | 3 | 5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 3 | 42 | 39 | 40.5 | Despite poor English, the writer managed to write an easy-to-understand essay. | Teenagers may not be college students or vice versa. Could not understand some of the logics. | 11,196 | Actually, student have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, must learn basic theory. have only years to learn level knowledge and job do whole . If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. to the job, so can't avoid with others, many decide who they want who more level knowledge. Maybe there al... | Actually, student doesn't have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, you must have to learn the basic theory. So you just have only 7 years to learn the pro level knowledge, and choice your job which you maybe will do your whole life. If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. Everyone wants to do th... |
THA | B1_2 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 55 | 54 | 54.5 | The well constructed discussion is easy to understand, which support the limited English of the writer. | The beginning and the end say differently. Maybe needed to check before submitting the essay. | 11,150 | Actually, student have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, must learn basic theory. have only years to learn level knowledge and job do whole . If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. to the job, so can't avoid with others, many decide who they want who more level knowledge. Maybe there al... | Actually, student doesn't have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, you must have to learn the basic theory. So you just have only 7 years to learn the pro level knowledge, and choice your job which you maybe will do your whole life. If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. Everyone wants to do th... |
CHN | B1_1 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 77 | 70 | 73.5 | Easy to follow the discussion flow. Explanations skillfully support the ideas. | As the writer stated the main reason is money, this aspect should have been discussed in deeper level. | 11,182 | Actually, student have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, must learn basic theory. have only years to learn level knowledge and job do whole . If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. to the job, so can't avoid with others, many decide who they want who more level knowledge. Maybe there al... | Actually, student doesn't have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, you must have to learn the basic theory. So you just have only 7 years to learn the pro level knowledge, and choice your job which you maybe will do your whole life. If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. Everyone wants to do th... |
JPN | A2_0 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 73 | 67 | 70 | Well organized logic flow. Short but adequate examples were provided. | Maybe considering how to interest readers would make the essay even better. | 11,089 | Actually, student have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, must learn basic theory. have only years to learn level knowledge and job do whole . If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. to the job, so can't avoid with others, many decide who they want who more level knowledge. Maybe there al... | Actually, student doesn't have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, you must have to learn the basic theory. So you just have only 7 years to learn the pro level knowledge, and choice your job which you maybe will do your whole life. If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. Everyone wants to do th... |
THA | A2_0 | 3 | 3 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 1 | 23 | 25 | 24 | Seems that the writer concentrated on one topic, experience, and deep analyzed it. | Could not understand many sentences because they were too short. Need to learn how to use commas and verbs. | 11,134 | Actually, student have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, must learn basic theory. have only years to learn level knowledge and job do whole . If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. to the job, so can't avoid with others, many decide who they want who more level knowledge. Maybe there al... | Actually, student doesn't have a lot of time to waste. Before senior high, you must have to learn the basic theory. So you just have only 7 years to learn the pro level knowledge, and choice your job which you maybe will do your whole life. If you don't study hard, you may lose the job you want. Everyone wants to do th... |
CHN | B2_0 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 90 | 92 | 91 | Your message and reasons are quite clear, and each reason is mentioned in order with good writing skills. | No big weak point to be mentioned. Does it mean that the students who do not have part time job, cannot enjoy their college life? | 11,230 | Nowadays, a number of college students are taking part-time jobs is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer , depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience provides youths with the chance to get society gain more practical skills. In the process, t... | Nowadays, quite a number of college students are taking part-time jobs. But is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer can be various, depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience which provides youths with the chance to get close to society as well... |
THA | B1_2 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 48 | 47 | 47.5 | Unique and good perspective that needed to check job whether it is safe and appropriate for students and ask parents’ opinion in advance. | Needed clearer explanation: “you work in restaurant, if you have bad friends, there are terrible things waiting for you too”. Terrible things happen only in restaurant? | 11,313 | Nowadays, a number of college students are taking part-time jobs is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer , depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience provides youths with the chance to get society gain more practical skills. In the process, t... | Nowadays, quite a number of college students are taking part-time jobs. But is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer can be various, depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience which provides youths with the chance to get close to society as well... |
KOR | A2_0 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 42 | 40 | 41 | Understand your reasons and conclusion. Nice idea to buy birthday present for your parents. | Not clear why is it important to make friends in part time job. What is the problem for the students who graduate with no experience of part time job? | 11,332 | Nowadays, a number of college students are taking part-time jobs is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer , depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience provides youths with the chance to get society gain more practical skills. In the process, t... | Nowadays, quite a number of college students are taking part-time jobs. But is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer can be various, depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience which provides youths with the chance to get close to society as well... |
TWN | A2_0 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 61 | 61 | 61 | Clearly categorized the students which need to have part time job or do not for reasoning of your conclusion. | Is there any solution for the students having a financial problem, not to be obliged to work? Minor spelling errors and conjugated forms of verbs are needed to be checked. | 11,241 | Nowadays, a number of college students are taking part-time jobs is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer , depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience provides youths with the chance to get society gain more practical skills. In the process, t... | Nowadays, quite a number of college students are taking part-time jobs. But is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer can be various, depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience which provides youths with the chance to get close to society as well... |
TWN | A2_0 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 47 | 46 | 46.5 | Your conclusion and reasons are relatively mentioned clearly. Global perspective related to the need of part time job by students. | What kind of experiences you can get from part time job and they help for what situation or problems? | 11,308 | Nowadays, a number of college students are taking part-time jobs is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer , depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience provides youths with the chance to get society gain more practical skills. In the process, t... | Nowadays, quite a number of college students are taking part-time jobs. But is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer can be various, depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience which provides youths with the chance to get close to society as well... |
JPN | B1_1 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 62 | 70 | 66 | Your message and reasons are clear to understand. Each reason is mentioned in order with your personal experience. | More detailed reasoning for “College students cannot get enough knowledge in their class?” is needed to be more convincing message. | 11,219 | Nowadays, a number of college students are taking part-time jobs is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer , depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience provides youths with the chance to get society gain more practical skills. In the process, t... | Nowadays, quite a number of college students are taking part-time jobs. But is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer can be various, depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience which provides youths with the chance to get close to society as well... |
CHN | B1_2 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 41 | 49 | 45 | Your reasons are simple and clearly mentioned. Well explained advantages of part time job. | Why is it important to learn experience in college, not in working society? To only understand how hard it is to earn money, leads to a good preparation for future? Challenge is to doing part time job? | 11,311 | Nowadays, a number of college students are taking part-time jobs is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer , depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience provides youths with the chance to get society gain more practical skills. In the process, t... | Nowadays, quite a number of college students are taking part-time jobs. But is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer can be various, depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience which provides youths with the chance to get close to society as well... |
CHN | B2_0 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 84 | 82 | 83 | Your conclusion and reasons are logically mentioned in order and advantages and disadvantages are well balanced. | Any idea that stops students spending unreasonably lots of money unreasonably earned by their part time job? | 11,303 | Nowadays, a number of college students are taking part-time jobs is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer , depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience provides youths with the chance to get society gain more practical skills. In the process, t... | Nowadays, quite a number of college students are taking part-time jobs. But is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer can be various, depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience which provides youths with the chance to get close to society as well... |
PHL | B2_0 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 84 | 85 | 84.5 | Your reasons are all logical to your conclusion and good perspective for focusing on student’s health. | Do you agree with part time job not tough which do not occupy their time too much? | 11,289 | Nowadays, a number of college students are taking part-time jobs is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer , depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience provides youths with the chance to get society gain more practical skills. In the process, t... | Nowadays, quite a number of college students are taking part-time jobs. But is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer can be various, depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience which provides youths with the chance to get close to society as well... |
CHN | B1_2 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 58 | 62 | 60 | Interesting perspective identifying the conditions under which a part-time job would be beneficial. | This is a unique way to let have a choice to the reader, but clearly statement of your conclusion is needed. | 11,222 | Nowadays, a number of college students are taking part-time jobs is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer , depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience provides youths with the chance to get society gain more practical skills. In the process, t... | Nowadays, quite a number of college students are taking part-time jobs. But is it necessary for them to do so? In my opinion, the answer can be various, depending on the students themselves. Undoubtedly, taking a part-time job is a special experience which provides youths with the chance to get close to society as well... |
THA | B1_1 | 4 | 1 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 1 | 3 | 2 | 5 | 20 | 32 | 26 | On topic, mix of 1st person pronouns | Very repetitious, long but without much argument. Omitted words | 11,366 | I think get a part job while . If wants to money or more experience I think should be . , when are busy, no time and easily is not better choice. part job has negative and positive . positive : can more money help parent, increase income, experience, friends more independent take care . the negative easily tired,... | I think get a part job while study, is depend on the person. If she/ he wants to gain money or get more experience I think it should be okay. But, when we are really busy, no time and easily tired. It is not better choice. Get part job has a negative and positive opinions. In positive : you can get more money for helpi... |
JPN | B2_0 | 5 | 5 | 3 | 5 | 4 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 60 | 48 | 54 | Organized and with some good expressions | punctuation errors, omitted words, inaccuracies in word choice | 11,375 | I think get a part job while . If wants to money or more experience I think should be . , when are busy, no time and easily is not better choice. part job has negative and positive . positive : can more money help parent, increase income, experience, friends more independent take care . the negative easily tired,... | I think get a part job while study, is depend on the person. If she/ he wants to gain money or get more experience I think it should be okay. But, when we are really busy, no time and easily tired. It is not better choice. Get part job has a negative and positive opinions. In positive : you can get more money for helpi... |
KOR | B2_0 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 35 | 44 | 39.5 | Variety of points | Mostly personal, low fluency | 11,468 | I think get a part job while . If wants to money or more experience I think should be . , when are busy, no time and easily is not better choice. part job has negative and positive . positive : can more money help parent, increase income, experience, friends more independent take care . the negative easily tired,... | I think get a part job while study, is depend on the person. If she/ he wants to gain money or get more experience I think it should be okay. But, when we are really busy, no time and easily tired. It is not better choice. Get part job has a negative and positive opinions. In positive : you can get more money for helpi... |
CHN | B1_1 | 8 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 9 | 70 | 65 | 67.5 | Neat and comprehensible, nice phrases | Some inaccurate word choices and syntax errors | 11,387 | I think get a part job while . If wants to money or more experience I think should be . , when are busy, no time and easily is not better choice. part job has negative and positive . positive : can more money help parent, increase income, experience, friends more independent take care . the negative easily tired,... | I think get a part job while study, is depend on the person. If she/ he wants to gain money or get more experience I think it should be okay. But, when we are really busy, no time and easily tired. It is not better choice. Get part job has a negative and positive opinions. In positive : you can get more money for helpi... |
PAK | B2_0 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 0 | 1 | 3 | 0 | 1 | 2 | 5 | 11 | 8 | Societal context | Takes too long to get to the point, difficult to decipher | 11,392 | I think get a part job while . If wants to money or more experience I think should be . , when are busy, no time and easily is not better choice. part job has negative and positive . positive : can more money help parent, increase income, experience, friends more independent take care . the negative easily tired,... | I think get a part job while study, is depend on the person. If she/ he wants to gain money or get more experience I think it should be okay. But, when we are really busy, no time and easily tired. It is not better choice. Get part job has a negative and positive opinions. In positive : you can get more money for helpi... |
THA | A2_0 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 65 | 60 | 62.5 | Offers well thought counterpoints | hard to understand opening and closing statements | 11,447 | I think get a part job while . If wants to money or more experience I think should be . , when are busy, no time and easily is not better choice. part job has negative and positive . positive : can more money help parent, increase income, experience, friends more independent take care . the negative easily tired,... | I think get a part job while study, is depend on the person. If she/ he wants to gain money or get more experience I think it should be okay. But, when we are really busy, no time and easily tired. It is not better choice. Get part job has a negative and positive opinions. In positive : you can get more money for helpi... |
IDN | A2_0 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 4 | 6 | 15 | 22 | 18.5 | Very interesting start, involvement | Attempting communication a bit beyond their reach. Serious comprehension problems | 11,372 | I think get a part job while . If wants to money or more experience I think should be . , when are busy, no time and easily is not better choice. part job has negative and positive . positive : can more money help parent, increase income, experience, friends more independent take care . the negative easily tired,... | I think get a part job while study, is depend on the person. If she/ he wants to gain money or get more experience I think it should be okay. But, when we are really busy, no time and easily tired. It is not better choice. Get part job has a negative and positive opinions. In positive : you can get more money for helpi... |
PHL | B2_0 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 65 | 58 | 61.5 | Good sentence construction and attempts at higher level vocab | Should more clearly introduce argument then organize essay with more well-defined reasons | 11,396 | I think get a part job while . If wants to money or more experience I think should be . , when are busy, no time and easily is not better choice. part job has negative and positive . positive : can more money help parent, increase income, experience, friends more independent take care . the negative easily tired,... | I think get a part job while study, is depend on the person. If she/ he wants to gain money or get more experience I think it should be okay. But, when we are really busy, no time and easily tired. It is not better choice. Get part job has a negative and positive opinions. In positive : you can get more money for helpi... |
KOR | B1_2 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 3 | 9 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 57 | 52 | 54.5 | I can discern very well what the author wants to say | Inaccuracies affect comprehension, fluency. Some ideas unconnected | 11,363 | I think get a part job while . If wants to money or more experience I think should be . , when are busy, no time and easily is not better choice. part job has negative and positive . positive : can more money help parent, increase income, experience, friends more independent take care . the negative easily tired,... | I think get a part job while study, is depend on the person. If she/ he wants to gain money or get more experience I think it should be okay. But, when we are really busy, no time and easily tired. It is not better choice. Get part job has a negative and positive opinions. In positive : you can get more money for helpi... |
TWN | B2_0 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 5 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 5 | 75 | 67 | 71 | Interesting anecdotes and perspective | Missing articles, and resolution of writer's point if difficult to understand (surveys) | 11,386 | I think get a part job while . If wants to money or more experience I think should be . , when are busy, no time and easily is not better choice. part job has negative and positive . positive : can more money help parent, increase income, experience, friends more independent take care . the negative easily tired,... | I think get a part job while study, is depend on the person. If she/ he wants to gain money or get more experience I think it should be okay. But, when we are really busy, no time and easily tired. It is not better choice. Get part job has a negative and positive opinions. In positive : you can get more money for helpi... |
CHN | A2_0 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 5 | 8 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 55 | 56 | 55.5 | consistent with the proper usage of punctuations, also uses basic cohesive devices | sentence structure repetitions: "some people." impedance with the word: selection. not so much opinion presented | 11,491 | I agree because, first parttime make you spend your free time in the right way. kill time by shopping or traveling all of activity time if you get job in the shop or restaurant hat's earning you money. Second can improve your skill if you only meet small social and have no so the job would help you to meet many kinds ... | I agree because, first part time job make you spend your free time in the right way. Somebody kill their time by go shopping or traveling all of activity lose your time but if you get the job in the shop or restaurant. That's earning your money. Second it can improve your skill if you only meet the small social and hav... |
CHN | A2_0 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 11 | 13 | 12 | The essay stayed true to the topic and gave appropriate reasons | "College students" as a starter of a sentence was used thrice | 11,614 | I agree because, first parttime make you spend your free time in the right way. kill time by shopping or traveling all of activity time if you get job in the shop or restaurant hat's earning you money. Second can improve your skill if you only meet small social and have no so the job would help you to meet many kinds ... | I agree because, first part time job make you spend your free time in the right way. Somebody kill their time by go shopping or traveling all of activity lose your time but if you get the job in the shop or restaurant. That's earning your money. Second it can improve your skill if you only meet the small social and hav... |
KOR | B1_2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 4 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 22 | 21 | 21.5 | The first few sentences are still in control, which are quite understandable | many incomplete sentences and thoughts are quite vague, weak grammatical structures | 11,590 | I agree because, first parttime make you spend your free time in the right way. kill time by shopping or traveling all of activity time if you get job in the shop or restaurant hat's earning you money. Second can improve your skill if you only meet small social and have no so the job would help you to meet many kinds ... | I agree because, first part time job make you spend your free time in the right way. Somebody kill their time by go shopping or traveling all of activity lose your time but if you get the job in the shop or restaurant. That's earning your money. Second it can improve your skill if you only meet the small social and hav... |
SIN | B2_0 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 70 | 68 | 69 | Some good word choices such as financially burdened, monetary reward, etc. | singular plural form problem ex. Students in college is --> students in college are | 11,619 | I agree because, first parttime make you spend your free time in the right way. kill time by shopping or traveling all of activity time if you get job in the shop or restaurant hat's earning you money. Second can improve your skill if you only meet small social and have no so the job would help you to meet many kinds ... | I agree because, first part time job make you spend your free time in the right way. Somebody kill their time by go shopping or traveling all of activity lose your time but if you get the job in the shop or restaurant. That's earning your money. Second it can improve your skill if you only meet the small social and hav... |
JPN | B1_2 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 83 | 75 | 79 | provided many personal examples that makes the claim believable in a readers perspective | some words can be improved. Ex, instead of saying severe working--->difficult working | 11,533 | I agree because, first parttime make you spend your free time in the right way. kill time by shopping or traveling all of activity time if you get job in the shop or restaurant hat's earning you money. Second can improve your skill if you only meet small social and have no so the job would help you to meet many kinds ... | I agree because, first part time job make you spend your free time in the right way. Somebody kill their time by go shopping or traveling all of activity lose your time but if you get the job in the shop or restaurant. That's earning your money. Second it can improve your skill if you only meet the small social and hav... |
CHN | A2_0 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 4 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 66 | 63 | 64.5 | good usage of hyphen (after-school work), very concise and easy to read | lacks prepositions in some sentences, sometimes its hard to understand the point | 11,560 | I agree because, first parttime make you spend your free time in the right way. kill time by shopping or traveling all of activity time if you get job in the shop or restaurant hat's earning you money. Second can improve your skill if you only meet small social and have no so the job would help you to meet many kinds ... | I agree because, first part time job make you spend your free time in the right way. Somebody kill their time by go shopping or traveling all of activity lose your time but if you get the job in the shop or restaurant. That's earning your money. Second it can improve your skill if you only meet the small social and hav... |
THA | B1_2 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 80 | 78 | 79 | reading is easy and sentence structure is good. The essay is quite well organized. | "I agree with part time job" was used twice in different sentences. | 11,558 | I agree because, first parttime make you spend your free time in the right way. kill time by shopping or traveling all of activity time if you get job in the shop or restaurant hat's earning you money. Second can improve your skill if you only meet small social and have no so the job would help you to meet many kinds ... | I agree because, first part time job make you spend your free time in the right way. Somebody kill their time by go shopping or traveling all of activity lose your time but if you get the job in the shop or restaurant. That's earning your money. Second it can improve your skill if you only meet the small social and hav... |
JPN | A2_0 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 62 | 52 | 57 | sentence structure is organized because of cohesive devices used (firstly, secondly) | strong at the start but struggled towards the middle to continue with the explanation | 11,498 | I agree because, first parttime make you spend your free time in the right way. kill time by shopping or traveling all of activity time if you get job in the shop or restaurant hat's earning you money. Second can improve your skill if you only meet small social and have no so the job would help you to meet many kinds ... | I agree because, first part time job make you spend your free time in the right way. Somebody kill their time by go shopping or traveling all of activity lose your time but if you get the job in the shop or restaurant. That's earning your money. Second it can improve your skill if you only meet the small social and hav... |
CHN | B1_1 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 84 | 82 | 83 | simple essay but was able to use complex sentencing. Well thought of | "social opinion" sounds awkward to me. Commas are sometimes missing in sentences | 11,605 | I agree because, first parttime make you spend your free time in the right way. kill time by shopping or traveling all of activity time if you get job in the shop or restaurant hat's earning you money. Second can improve your skill if you only meet small social and have no so the job would help you to meet many kinds ... | I agree because, first part time job make you spend your free time in the right way. Somebody kill their time by go shopping or traveling all of activity lose your time but if you get the job in the shop or restaurant. That's earning your money. Second it can improve your skill if you only meet the small social and hav... |
JPN | A2_0 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 53 | 51 | 52 | it started well and the word "preceding" makes the paragraph a bit sophisticated | it was not able to support its opinion very much, the explanations are a bit simplistic | 11,541 | I agree because, first parttime make you spend your free time in the right way. kill time by shopping or traveling all of activity time if you get job in the shop or restaurant hat's earning you money. Second can improve your skill if you only meet small social and have no so the job would help you to meet many kinds ... | I agree because, first part time job make you spend your free time in the right way. Somebody kill their time by go shopping or traveling all of activity lose your time but if you get the job in the shop or restaurant. That's earning your money. Second it can improve your skill if you only meet the small social and hav... |
TWN | B2_0 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 10 | 60 | 58 | 59 | The writer tries to communicate with the reader especially at the end of the essay. | But at the same time, the last part of the essay goes off the track. | 11,683 | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have hardly work, they cannot accuratly work. is because they have not enough experience. In the university, no on... | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience before getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have to hardly work, they can not accuratly work. that is because they have not enough experiences. In the ... |
CHN | A2_0 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 2 | 60 | 52 | 56 | An well-thought introduction indicates that the writer is willing to communicate with the readers. | Because of language inaccuracy, some sentences were not understandable. | 11,631 | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have hardly work, they cannot accuratly work. is because they have not enough experience. In the university, no on... | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience before getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have to hardly work, they can not accuratly work. that is because they have not enough experiences. In the ... |
CHN | B1_1 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 10 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 85 | 82 | 83.5 | The writer successfully conveys their opinion with logical and appropriate supporting ideas. | Although it is well-organized, the essay is a little short. | 11,667 | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have hardly work, they cannot accuratly work. is because they have not enough experience. In the university, no on... | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience before getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have to hardly work, they can not accuratly work. that is because they have not enough experiences. In the ... |
IDN | B1_2 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 6 | 7 | 80 | 72 | 76 | The essay strictly sticks to the purpose of the task with an easy-to-understand logical structure. | There are some basic grammatical mistakes spotted, though they rarely hinder understanding. | 11,665 | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have hardly work, they cannot accuratly work. is because they have not enough experience. In the university, no on... | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience before getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have to hardly work, they can not accuratly work. that is because they have not enough experiences. In the ... |
CHN | B1_2 | 8 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 9 | 5 | 10 | 75 | 72 | 73.5 | The essay expresses the writer's opinion and supporting details clearly. | The first half of the essay is essentially an introduction and is not directly related to the writer's opinion. | 11,731 | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have hardly work, they cannot accuratly work. is because they have not enough experience. In the university, no on... | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience before getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have to hardly work, they can not accuratly work. that is because they have not enough experiences. In the ... |
CHN | B1_1 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 90 | 88 | 89 | By using the pronoun "we," the writer successfully get the reader involved in their discourse. | There are several minor grammatical mistakes, although they do not hinder understanding. | 11,742 | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have hardly work, they cannot accuratly work. is because they have not enough experience. In the university, no on... | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience before getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have to hardly work, they can not accuratly work. that is because they have not enough experiences. In the ... |
IDN | B2_0 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 10 | 10 | 10 | 10 | 10 | 10 | 100 | 99 | 99.5 | The writer clearly states their opinion with logical supporting ideas and with almost no grammatical or lexical mistakes. | A very few grammatical mistakes are found, but they are not so noticeable. | 11,634 | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have hardly work, they cannot accuratly work. is because they have not enough experience. In the university, no on... | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience before getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have to hardly work, they can not accuratly work. that is because they have not enough experiences. In the ... |
THA | B1_2 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 9 | 7 | The pronouns "we" and "you" show that the writer wants to communicate with the reader. | Due to inaccuracy and lack of intelligibility, the essay is almost entirely illogical and incomprehensible. | 11,702 | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have hardly work, they cannot accuratly work. is because they have not enough experience. In the university, no on... | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience before getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have to hardly work, they can not accuratly work. that is because they have not enough experiences. In the ... |
TWN | B1_1 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 10 | 10 | 10 | 10 | 10 | 95 | 98 | 96.5 | The writer uses both general and personal ideas to support their opinion on the topic and expresses them quite well in the essay. | There are a few minor grammatical mistakes seen in the essay, though they do not hinder understanding. | 11,711 | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have hardly work, they cannot accuratly work. is because they have not enough experience. In the university, no on... | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience before getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have to hardly work, they can not accuratly work. that is because they have not enough experiences. In the ... |
THA | A2_0 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 4 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 0 | 30 | 34 | 32 | Most sentences are grammatically accurate, and it is not difficult to understand each of them. | The essay is written entirely one-sidedly with the writer's personal experiences being the only supporting idea. | 11,708 | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have hardly work, they cannot accuratly work. is because they have not enough experience. In the university, no on... | I agree with the question. I have four reasons. First of all, I think it is important for university students to experience before getting a job. For example, if students who are finished university get a job and have to hardly work, they can not accuratly work. that is because they have not enough experiences. In the ... |
THA | B1_1 | 5 | 3 | 3 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 3 | 8 | 50 | 51 | 50.5 | The writer's opinion communicates what this essay is all about and provided a topic sentence that is consistent. | The writer needs improvement on grammar, punctuation, word choice and sentence form. | 11,822 | I disagree with th opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have part-time . There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a part-time... | I disagree with that opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have a part-time job. There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a pa... |
IDN | B1_2 | 4 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 55 | 54 | 54.5 | The writer organized an argumentative essay on part time job and allows to logically and convincing support its stand. | The writer needs to learn more on grammar, punctuation, word choice and sentence form. | 11,846 | I disagree with th opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have part-time . There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a part-time... | I disagree with that opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have a part-time job. There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a pa... |
SIN | B2_0 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 80 | 84 | 82 | The writer's response has a clear and effective organizational structure creating unity and structure, it has an effective introduction and conclusion. | The writer needs to sum up each of the specific main points in the conclusion to further strengthen the essay. | 11,884 | I disagree with th opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have part-time . There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a part-time... | I disagree with that opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have a part-time job. There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a pa... |
THA | A2_0 | 5 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 35 | 35 | 35 | The writer's opinion are clear and consistent. Independent thinking is evident. | Grammar, spelling and punctuation need some improvement. | 11,775 | I disagree with th opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have part-time . There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a part-time... | I disagree with that opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have a part-time job. There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a pa... |
KOR | B1_2 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 9 | 8 | 65 | 74 | 69.5 | The writer's organization are purposeful, effective and appropriate. | nan | 11,770 | I disagree with th opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have part-time . There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a part-time... | I disagree with that opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have a part-time job. There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a pa... |
THA | B1_2 | 6 | 6 | 4 | 7 | 5 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 3 | 5 | 55 | 48 | 51.5 | The writer's response clearly and effectively expresses ideas using precise language, domain-specific vocabulary is clearly appropriate. | The writer needs improvement on grammar, punctuation, spelling, punctuation and word choice. | 11,873 | I disagree with th opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have part-time . There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a part-time... | I disagree with that opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have a part-time job. There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a pa... |
JPN | B1_2 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 50 | 55 | 52.5 | The writer's opinion are clearly structured, topic sentences are clear leading to the main idea of the essay. | The writer need improvement on grammar, punctuation, word choice and quantity writing. | 11,836 | I disagree with th opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have part-time . There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a part-time... | I disagree with that opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have a part-time job. There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a pa... |
JPN | B1_1 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 5 | 65 | 63 | 64 | The writer's claims and ideas are supported and consistent, topic sentences are clear. | The writer needs improvement on grammar, punctuation and word choice. | 11,827 | I disagree with th opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have part-time . There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a part-time... | I disagree with that opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have a part-time job. There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a pa... |
TWN | B1_1 | 2 | 5 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 7 | 20 | 33 | 26.5 | The writer's main claim is clear, significant and independent. Claims and ideas are supported and elaborated. | The writer needs to improve more on grammar, punctuation and quantity writing. | 11,781 | I disagree with th opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have part-time . There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a part-time... | I disagree with that opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have a part-time job. There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a pa... |
JPN | B2_0 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 5 | 8 | 4 | 6 | 4 | 9 | 9 | 50 | 65 | 57.5 | The writer clearly communicates what this essay is about and sentences are clear leading to the main idea. | The writer needs to improve on grammar, punctuation and the quantity of writing. | 11,780 | I disagree with th opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have part-time . There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a part-time... | I disagree with that opinion. I think that it is not important for college students to have a part-time job. There are two main reasons. The first reason is that students should study. What students have to do is study, but some students can't study enough because of their part-time job. For example, my friend has a pa... |
HKG | B2_0 | 7 | 6 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 62 | 63 | 62.5 | Reader involvement was quite good as well as good concluding remarks. | Difficult to clearly understand the purpose due to sentence structure. | 11,975 | not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary schoo... | It's not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary ... |
TWN | B2_0 | 3 | 6 | 3 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 60 | 56 | 58 | Some interesting ideas were expressed and supported. | Be careful about the use of plurals, particularly possessive forms. | 11,946 | not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary schoo... | It's not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary ... |
CHN | B1_2 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 65 | 73 | 69 | Concise writing style kept the meaning clear and easy to understand. | A clearer purpose would make understanding easier. | 11,942 | not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary schoo... | It's not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary ... |
KOR | B1_1 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 7 | 6 | 2 | 3 | 6 | 52 | 37 | 44.5 | The level of sophistication was good, this made the purpose easy to grasp. | Lack of prepositions made some sentences unintelligible. | 11,973 | not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary schoo... | It's not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary ... |
PAK | B2_0 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 6 | 15 | 27 | 21 | The writing flowed well, ideas were organized quite well, too. | Lack of transitional phrases made it difficult to read. | 11,952 | not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary schoo... | It's not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary ... |
JPN | B1_2 | 3 | 3 | 6 | 3 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 3 | 6 | 6 | 60 | 46 | 53 | What you wanted to say was well presented, the intent was clear. | Some irregularities in sentence structure made the meaning at times difficult to grasp. | 11,981 | not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary schoo... | It's not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary ... |
IDN | B1_2 | 4 | 2 | 4 | 4 | 2 | 7 | 3 | 3 | 6 | 6 | 50 | 41 | 45.5 | The purpose was clear and backed up with personal experience. | Misuse of “which” and “that” made it confusing at times. | 11,986 | not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary schoo... | It's not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary ... |
TWN | B1_1 | 4 | 3 | 6 | 3 | 3 | 7 | 1 | 7 | 2 | 2 | 70 | 38 | 54 | Good at getting your point across to the reader. | There appeared to be some redundancy in sentence structure due to the overuse of words with a similar meaning. | 11,902 | not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary schoo... | It's not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary ... |
IDN | B1_2 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 70 | 65 | 67.5 | There was a good willingness to get your points across and a clear argument. | There may be some work needed on prepositions. | 11,945 | not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary schoo... | It's not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary ... |
TWN | B1_2 | 5 | 6 | 3 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 80 | 61 | 70.5 | Some interesting ideas were expressed and supported. | Definite and indefinite articles were mixed up a little, but this wasn’t a big problem. | 11,901 | not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary schoo... | It's not important at all in my view. Students have far too much to worry about just trying to pass their exams let alone also trying to hold down a job while they study. Some folks may disagree I know, but the fact still remains that in today's society, students are being taught to perform at high levels from primary ... |
HKG | B2_0 | 7 | 6 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 25 | 41 | 33 | Has potential to be a better piece of academic writing. | Shows no clear nor comprehensive thought pattern. | 12,141 | is true statement. Parttime the job that usually and done by college student For example private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. part time on their they doing after they studied in the university. many for them. A part time job can many useful experience, knowledge, , and the important is money. College student as ... | It is true statement. Part time job is the job that usually choosed and done by the college student. For example as private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. They follow this job on the part time on their day which they don't doing everything after they had studied in the university. It has many benefit for them. A par... |
PAK | B2_0 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 70 | 76 | 73 | A new and interesting perspective. Written with originality. | I just wish the length of the piece was longer to more substantially discuss the views | 12,146 | is true statement. Parttime the job that usually and done by college student For example private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. part time on their they doing after they studied in the university. many for them. A part time job can many useful experience, knowledge, , and the important is money. College student as ... | It is true statement. Part time job is the job that usually choosed and done by the college student. For example as private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. They follow this job on the part time on their day which they don't doing everything after they had studied in the university. It has many benefit for them. A par... |
JPN | B1_1 | 5 | 6 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 6 | 4 | 8 | 30 | 47 | 38.5 | Basic concepts and ideas conveyed as per the expected standard | Not written with much attention to language | 12,160 | is true statement. Parttime the job that usually and done by college student For example private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. part time on their they doing after they studied in the university. many for them. A part time job can many useful experience, knowledge, , and the important is money. College student as ... | It is true statement. Part time job is the job that usually choosed and done by the college student. For example as private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. They follow this job on the part time on their day which they don't doing everything after they had studied in the university. It has many benefit for them. A par... |
IDN | A2_0 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 4 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 75 | 61 | 68 | The background of the country gives perspective to the piece | Written a little casually, and mostly with the pronoun we, it is unclear who we is | 12,117 | is true statement. Parttime the job that usually and done by college student For example private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. part time on their they doing after they studied in the university. many for them. A part time job can many useful experience, knowledge, , and the important is money. College student as ... | It is true statement. Part time job is the job that usually choosed and done by the college student. For example as private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. They follow this job on the part time on their day which they don't doing everything after they had studied in the university. It has many benefit for them. A par... |
THA | A2_0 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 70 | 68 | 69 | Personal examples work best. Fairly well written | Could have given the article more perspective and context | 12,128 | is true statement. Parttime the job that usually and done by college student For example private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. part time on their they doing after they studied in the university. many for them. A part time job can many useful experience, knowledge, , and the important is money. College student as ... | It is true statement. Part time job is the job that usually choosed and done by the college student. For example as private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. They follow this job on the part time on their day which they don't doing everything after they had studied in the university. It has many benefit for them. A par... |
TWN | B1_1 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 80 | 70 | 75 | Written with hope, experience and real life examples | Could have increased the level of involvement in the essay | 12,131 | is true statement. Parttime the job that usually and done by college student For example private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. part time on their they doing after they studied in the university. many for them. A part time job can many useful experience, knowledge, , and the important is money. College student as ... | It is true statement. Part time job is the job that usually choosed and done by the college student. For example as private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. They follow this job on the part time on their day which they don't doing everything after they had studied in the university. It has many benefit for them. A par... |
TWN | B1_1 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 60 | 67 | 63.5 | Another good piece that ties in both the social and personal elements | More concrete examples could have been provided which were otherwise missing | 12,170 | is true statement. Parttime the job that usually and done by college student For example private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. part time on their they doing after they studied in the university. many for them. A part time job can many useful experience, knowledge, , and the important is money. College student as ... | It is true statement. Part time job is the job that usually choosed and done by the college student. For example as private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. They follow this job on the part time on their day which they don't doing everything after they had studied in the university. It has many benefit for them. A par... |
IDN | B1_1 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 35 | 47 | 41 | This was a fairly standard piece of writing demonstrated here | Could have been a stronger essay if more original and focused content was written. | 12,152 | is true statement. Parttime the job that usually and done by college student For example private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. part time on their they doing after they studied in the university. many for them. A part time job can many useful experience, knowledge, , and the important is money. College student as ... | It is true statement. Part time job is the job that usually choosed and done by the college student. For example as private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. They follow this job on the part time on their day which they don't doing everything after they had studied in the university. It has many benefit for them. A par... |
ENS | ENS | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 75 | 74 | 74.5 | A strong essay grounded in background, structure and original opinion | higher involvement could have increased the quality | 12,161 | is true statement. Parttime the job that usually and done by college student For example private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. part time on their they doing after they studied in the university. many for them. A part time job can many useful experience, knowledge, , and the important is money. College student as ... | It is true statement. Part time job is the job that usually choosed and done by the college student. For example as private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. They follow this job on the part time on their day which they don't doing everything after they had studied in the university. It has many benefit for them. A par... |
THA | B1_2 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 40 | 52 | 46 | The length of the article is substantial even though nothing concrete is discussed | The way this is written, most often without punctuation or structure reflects the state of the writers mind | 12,122 | is true statement. Parttime the job that usually and done by college student For example private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. part time on their they doing after they studied in the university. many for them. A part time job can many useful experience, knowledge, , and the important is money. College student as ... | It is true statement. Part time job is the job that usually choosed and done by the college student. For example as private teacher, shopkeeper, seller, etc. They follow this job on the part time on their day which they don't doing everything after they had studied in the university. It has many benefit for them. A par... |
JPN | B2_0 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 60 | 60 | 60 | A good punctuation and some strong points toward the overall opinion. | Try to use more concise language and add more content to avoid clunky sentences | 12,200 | I agree. I have many friends who are part-time . They often work around a university. In particular, they go to after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work during school vacation. , , part-time job students importance of money. They w... | I agree. I have many friends who are having a part-time job. They often work around a university. In particular, they go to there after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience which works a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work specially during school vacation. Because, First,... |
TWN | B1_2 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 60 | 69 | 64.5 | A great job trying to involve the reader, and some thoughtful ideas. | Ensure the correct word placement/choices to improve the accuracy and flow of sentences | 12,272 | I agree. I have many friends who are part-time . They often work around a university. In particular, they go to after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work during school vacation. , , part-time job students importance of money. They w... | I agree. I have many friends who are having a part-time job. They often work around a university. In particular, they go to there after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience which works a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work specially during school vacation. Because, First,... |
IDN | A2_0 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 4 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 55 | 63 | 59 | A good structure with some well thought out ideas and arguments | Make sure that each sentence has the appropriate word and see where/if it should be used. | 12,257 | I agree. I have many friends who are part-time . They often work around a university. In particular, they go to after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work during school vacation. , , part-time job students importance of money. They w... | I agree. I have many friends who are having a part-time job. They often work around a university. In particular, they go to there after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience which works a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work specially during school vacation. Because, First,... |
IDN | A2_0 | 5 | 5 | 3 | 2 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 2 | 6 | 8 | 30 | 46 | 38 | A great job at involving the reader and creating interest. Some unique examples. | More time should have been taken to ensure that it makes sense, try to improve the fluency of the article. | 12,212 | I agree. I have many friends who are part-time . They often work around a university. In particular, they go to after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work during school vacation. , , part-time job students importance of money. They w... | I agree. I have many friends who are having a part-time job. They often work around a university. In particular, they go to there after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience which works a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work specially during school vacation. Because, First,... |
THA | B1_1 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 35 | 46 | 40.5 | Individual and thoughtful points and a good understanding of the task. | Think about the fluency and overall structure of sentences to ensure the clarity of the content. | 12,196 | I agree. I have many friends who are part-time . They often work around a university. In particular, they go to after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work during school vacation. , , part-time job students importance of money. They w... | I agree. I have many friends who are having a part-time job. They often work around a university. In particular, they go to there after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience which works a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work specially during school vacation. Because, First,... |
ENS | ENS | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 85 | 87 | 86 | A very clear and unique perspective, an excellent flow and nice to read. | Perhaps you could try to expand your vocabulary to add more depth and variety. | 12,301 | I agree. I have many friends who are part-time . They often work around a university. In particular, they go to after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work during school vacation. , , part-time job students importance of money. They w... | I agree. I have many friends who are having a part-time job. They often work around a university. In particular, they go to there after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience which works a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work specially during school vacation. Because, First,... |
THA | A2_0 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 65 | 75 | 70 | Well thought out ideas and a good grammar, good understanding of the task. | Try to build a structure such as intro/body/conclusion and sentence structure to ensure fluency | 12,254 | I agree. I have many friends who are part-time . They often work around a university. In particular, they go to after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work during school vacation. , , part-time job students importance of money. They w... | I agree. I have many friends who are having a part-time job. They often work around a university. In particular, they go to there after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience which works a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work specially during school vacation. Because, First,... |
IDN | B1_1 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 20 | 18 | 19 | Although the language is not clear, the content and views can still be understood | Find alternative language to use and build a structure to ensure that you are not repetitive. | 12,285 | I agree. I have many friends who are part-time . They often work around a university. In particular, they go to after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work during school vacation. , , part-time job students importance of money. They w... | I agree. I have many friends who are having a part-time job. They often work around a university. In particular, they go to there after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience which works a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work specially during school vacation. Because, First,... |
IDN | B1_2 | 5 | 3 | 5 | 5 | 3 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 50 | 45 | 47.5 | Some good ideas and reference points, a good understanding of the task. | Ensure the correct word placement to improve the accuracy and flow of sentences | 12,245 | I agree. I have many friends who are part-time . They often work around a university. In particular, they go to after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work during school vacation. , , part-time job students importance of money. They w... | I agree. I have many friends who are having a part-time job. They often work around a university. In particular, they go to there after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience which works a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work specially during school vacation. Because, First,... |
PAK | B1_2 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 50 | 55 | 52.5 | An interesting approach, and some thoughtful arguments | Try to build a structure such as intro/body/conclusion and sentence structure to ensure fluency | 12,277 | I agree. I have many friends who are part-time . They often work around a university. In particular, they go to after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work during school vacation. , , part-time job students importance of money. They w... | I agree. I have many friends who are having a part-time job. They often work around a university. In particular, they go to there after finishing the lesson. I do not have experience which works a part-time job. Nevertheless, I believe that college students need to work specially during school vacation. Because, First,... |
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