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IDN | B1_1 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 6 | 2 | 5 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 20 | 36 | 28 | Demonstrates good degree of involvement as it directly addressed the readers. | Content feels confused and arguments are opposing. There is a conflict in the idea expressed. | 13,832 | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have parttime job, they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many choice which we like or want to in school. in college, we choose many to learnven are not major department, also can choose the class of other departments. In college, y... | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have a part time job, besides they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many vary choice to choose which one we like or want to touch in school. Only in college, we choose many way to learn, even you are not major the department, you al... |
KOR | B2_0 | 5 | 3 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 2 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 50 | 47 | 48.5 | Utilized real experiences to convey the message with a certain degree of clarity. | Can benefit from more complex vocabulary, sophisticated manner of expression and higher involvement of readers. | 13,824 | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have parttime job, they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many choice which we like or want to in school. in college, we choose many to learnven are not major department, also can choose the class of other departments. In college, y... | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have a part time job, besides they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many vary choice to choose which one we like or want to touch in school. Only in college, we choose many way to learn, even you are not major the department, you al... |
KOR | B1_2 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 3 | 5 | 7 | 5 | 4 | 65 | 54 | 59.5 | Essay has an idea of its stand and what it hopes to express. | Can benefit from a more logical arrangement of thoughts and explanation. | 13,805 | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have parttime job, they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many choice which we like or want to in school. in college, we choose many to learnven are not major department, also can choose the class of other departments. In college, y... | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have a part time job, besides they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many vary choice to choose which one we like or want to touch in school. Only in college, we choose many way to learn, even you are not major the department, you al... |
TWN | B1_2 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 8 | 10 | 10 | 10 | 95 | 92 | 93.5 | Language and grammar used are conversational but well-versed and properly explained in a relatable manner with high involvement. | Can benefit from more complex vocabulary and sophisticated manner of expression. | 13,733 | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have parttime job, they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many choice which we like or want to in school. in college, we choose many to learnven are not major department, also can choose the class of other departments. In college, y... | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have a part time job, besides they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many vary choice to choose which one we like or want to touch in school. Only in college, we choose many way to learn, even you are not major the department, you al... |
THA | B1_1 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 3 | 35 | 46 | 40.5 | Essay exhibits good fluency and willingness to communicate thoughts in writing. | Has lapses in grammar and sentence structure along with logical order that impede comprehensibility. | 13,837 | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have parttime job, they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many choice which we like or want to in school. in college, we choose many to learnven are not major department, also can choose the class of other departments. In college, y... | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have a part time job, besides they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many vary choice to choose which one we like or want to touch in school. Only in college, we choose many way to learn, even you are not major the department, you al... |
TWN | B1_2 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 60 | 70 | 65 | Demonstrates high involvement as it directly addressed the readers. | Has lapses in grammar and sentence structure that somehow impede comprehensibility. | 13,812 | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have parttime job, they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many choice which we like or want to in school. in college, we choose many to learnven are not major department, also can choose the class of other departments. In college, y... | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have a part time job, besides they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many vary choice to choose which one we like or want to touch in school. Only in college, we choose many way to learn, even you are not major the department, you al... |
TWN | B1_1 | 4 | 1 | 6 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 2 | 7 | 6 | 2 | 40 | 44 | 42 | Essay exhibits good fluency and willingness to communicate thoughts in writing. | Can benefit from higher involvement to fully engage the readers and contains minor lapses in grammar. | 13,850 | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have parttime job, they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many choice which we like or want to in school. in college, we choose many to learnven are not major department, also can choose the class of other departments. In college, y... | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have a part time job, besides they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many vary choice to choose which one we like or want to touch in school. Only in college, we choose many way to learn, even you are not major the department, you al... |
IDN | B1_1 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 4 | 2 | 6 | 1 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 30 | 33 | 31.5 | Essay has a logical order of sentences and key points. | Can benefit from more complex vocabulary, sophisticated manner of expression and higher involvement of readers. | 13,825 | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have parttime job, they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many choice which we like or want to in school. in college, we choose many to learnven are not major department, also can choose the class of other departments. In college, y... | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have a part time job, besides they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many vary choice to choose which one we like or want to touch in school. Only in college, we choose many way to learn, even you are not major the department, you al... |
TWN | B2_0 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 65 | 63 | 64 | Fully exhausted words in expression and demonstrated high fluency. | Has minor lapses in grammar and punctuation that somehow interfere with comprehensibility. | 13,766 | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have parttime job, they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many choice which we like or want to in school. in college, we choose many to learnven are not major department, also can choose the class of other departments. In college, y... | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have a part time job, besides they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many vary choice to choose which one we like or want to touch in school. Only in college, we choose many way to learn, even you are not major the department, you al... |
CHN | B1_2 | 5 | 4 | 7 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 40 | 49 | 44.5 | Message of the essay was somehow conveyed with clarity. | Has minor lapses in grammar and punctuation but does not impede comprehensibility. | 13,742 | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have parttime job, they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many choice which we like or want to in school. in college, we choose many to learnven are not major department, also can choose the class of other departments. In college, y... | I don't agree that it's important for college students to have a part time job, besides they must. Taiwan's education is not similar to U. S; we don't have many vary choice to choose which one we like or want to touch in school. Only in college, we choose many way to learn, even you are not major the department, you al... |
THA | A2_0 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 68 | 65 | 66.5 | The writer had many supporting samples to support his idea. | Some run-on error and error-free in vocabulary | 13,875 | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what the purpose? Is it for the money, or is it the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lure you to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus life we are used ... | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what are the purposes? Is it for the money, or is it for the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lures your to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into the society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus li... |
JPN | A2_0 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 80 | 80 | 80 | The essay was well organized, had logical idea to support writer point of view. | Some run-on sentences. | 13,889 | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what the purpose? Is it for the money, or is it the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lure you to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus life we are used ... | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what are the purposes? Is it for the money, or is it for the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lures your to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into the society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus li... |
IDN | B1_1 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 25 | 31 | 28 | nan | grammar and vocabulary need to be adjusted | 13,909 | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what the purpose? Is it for the money, or is it the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lure you to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus life we are used ... | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what are the purposes? Is it for the money, or is it for the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lures your to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into the society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus li... |
JPN | B1_2 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 42 | 39 | 40.5 | the essay showed idea logically | Grammar and vocabulary need to be adjusted | 13,903 | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what the purpose? Is it for the money, or is it the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lure you to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus life we are used ... | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what are the purposes? Is it for the money, or is it for the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lures your to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into the society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus li... |
TWN | B1_2 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 35 | 37 | 36 | the writer tried to explain his idea with many supportive reasons | the answer was out of the point. | 13,958 | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what the purpose? Is it for the money, or is it the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lure you to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus life we are used ... | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what are the purposes? Is it for the money, or is it for the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lures your to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into the society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus li... |
CHN | B1_2 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 75 | 74 | 74.5 | the essay was well organized with good reason to support the main idea. | some run on sentences. | 13,894 | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what the purpose? Is it for the money, or is it the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lure you to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus life we are used ... | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what are the purposes? Is it for the money, or is it for the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lures your to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into the society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus li... |
TWN | B1_1 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 65 | 63 | 64 | The writer has unique reason to disagree on doing part time job. | The writer could not explain his idea logically enough. The reason he gave in the essay did not strong enough to support his idea. | 13,881 | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what the purpose? Is it for the money, or is it the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lure you to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus life we are used ... | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what are the purposes? Is it for the money, or is it for the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lures your to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into the society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus li... |
IDN | B1_1 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 35 | 34 | 34.5 | nan | the ideas were not well organized | 13,972 | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what the purpose? Is it for the money, or is it the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lure you to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus life we are used ... | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what are the purposes? Is it for the money, or is it for the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lures your to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into the society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus li... |
THA | A2_0 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 30 | 30 | 30 | The writer had good reason for support his idea | grammar and vocabulary need to be improved | 13,934 | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what the purpose? Is it for the money, or is it the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lure you to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus life we are used ... | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what are the purposes? Is it for the money, or is it for the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lures your to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into the society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus li... |
TWN | B1_2 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 62 | 67 | 64.5 | the essay was written to persuade reader to do parttime job | some vocabulary error | 13,952 | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what the purpose? Is it for the money, or is it the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lure you to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus life we are used ... | If you resolve to have a part-time job, what are the purposes? Is it for the money, or is it for the experiences and the learning-in-the-process that lures your to take one?As we know, most of us have to step into the society after graduation, and the society which will confront us is quite different from the campus li... |
KOR | B2_0 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 55 | 55 | 55 | show the strong idea to disagreement and provide reasonable supports / strong of writing and grammar | a bit contrast of the consistency in anaphor, number (i.e. sing vs plural) | 14,036 | I completely agree this statement. I have four that agree this Statement First ariety parttime job serve our experience For- example if I were in convenience store, I learn , good smile and good greet I were work in factory, I learn , how appliances are made by the actory. can receive variety experience by diverse par... | I completely agree this statement. I have totally four reason that agree this statement First Variety part time job is serve our experience For- example if I were work in convenience store, I can learn ability king, good smile and good greet or If I were work in A factory, I learn patient, understand that how appliance... |
KOR | A2_0 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 1 | 1 | 5 | 26 | 26 | 26 | Giving general idea and real happening to be as an introduction. Then showed own idea. | Rarely no example to support each idea/reason. Each view should be explain more. | 14,129 | I completely agree this statement. I have four that agree this Statement First ariety parttime job serve our experience For- example if I were in convenience store, I learn , good smile and good greet I were work in factory, I learn , how appliances are made by the actory. can receive variety experience by diverse par... | I completely agree this statement. I have totally four reason that agree this statement First Variety part time job is serve our experience For- example if I were work in convenience store, I can learn ability king, good smile and good greet or If I were work in A factory, I learn patient, understand that how appliance... |
ENS | ENS | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 72 | 72 | 72 | The writer tried to represent different reason accord to the comments. | Rather unclear in the ideas that the topic asked for. Language was written confusing to realize. Must to improved more about grammar and arranged of the thought into writing. | 14,017 | I completely agree this statement. I have four that agree this Statement First ariety parttime job serve our experience For- example if I were in convenience store, I learn , good smile and good greet I were work in factory, I learn , how appliances are made by the actory. can receive variety experience by diverse par... | I completely agree this statement. I have totally four reason that agree this statement First Variety part time job is serve our experience For- example if I were work in convenience store, I can learn ability king, good smile and good greet or If I were work in A factory, I learn patient, understand that how appliance... |
TWN | A2_0 | 2 | 1 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 26 | 26 | 26 | allow to uses complex and compound sentences | error grammar; 'maybe are..', article 'A example' and the pronoun 'they' used as object | 14,051 | I completely agree this statement. I have four that agree this Statement First ariety parttime job serve our experience For- example if I were in convenience store, I learn , good smile and good greet I were work in factory, I learn , how appliances are made by the actory. can receive variety experience by diverse par... | I completely agree this statement. I have totally four reason that agree this statement First Variety part time job is serve our experience For- example if I were work in convenience store, I can learn ability king, good smile and good greet or If I were work in A factory, I learn patient, understand that how appliance... |
IDN | B1_1 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 56 | 56 | 56 | The detail and sample were given involving the extend of the topic since starting, middle along to a great ending of statement. | Language structure was made difficult to understand meaning. | 14,009 | I completely agree this statement. I have four that agree this Statement First ariety parttime job serve our experience For- example if I were in convenience store, I learn , good smile and good greet I were work in factory, I learn , how appliances are made by the actory. can receive variety experience by diverse par... | I completely agree this statement. I have totally four reason that agree this statement First Variety part time job is serve our experience For- example if I were work in convenience store, I can learn ability king, good smile and good greet or If I were work in A factory, I learn patient, understand that how appliance... |
IDN | B1_1 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 32 | 32 | 32 | good format organization consist of introductory, body of essay, and own conclusion. | more detail needs for some points/ unclarity sentence | 14,112 | I completely agree this statement. I have four that agree this Statement First ariety parttime job serve our experience For- example if I were in convenience store, I learn , good smile and good greet I were work in factory, I learn , how appliances are made by the actory. can receive variety experience by diverse par... | I completely agree this statement. I have totally four reason that agree this statement First Variety part time job is serve our experience For- example if I were work in convenience store, I can learn ability king, good smile and good greet or If I were work in A factory, I learn patient, understand that how appliance... |
THA | A2_0 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 39 | 39 | 39 | quite used technical term vocabulary about the topic / various vocabulary | without correctness in subject-verb agreement, article and preposition; to , for / and word engagement | 14,088 | I completely agree this statement. I have four that agree this Statement First ariety parttime job serve our experience For- example if I were in convenience store, I learn , good smile and good greet I were work in factory, I learn , how appliances are made by the actory. can receive variety experience by diverse par... | I completely agree this statement. I have totally four reason that agree this statement First Variety part time job is serve our experience For- example if I were work in convenience store, I can learn ability king, good smile and good greet or If I were work in A factory, I learn patient, understand that how appliance... |
TWN | B1_1 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 58 | 58 | 58 | start with an essential introduction about how important to be adult which reveal an important reason. | inaccurate grammar, word choice, and punctuation in sentences / used unappreciated vocabulary | 14,094 | I completely agree this statement. I have four that agree this Statement First ariety parttime job serve our experience For- example if I were in convenience store, I learn , good smile and good greet I were work in factory, I learn , how appliances are made by the actory. can receive variety experience by diverse par... | I completely agree this statement. I have totally four reason that agree this statement First Variety part time job is serve our experience For- example if I were work in convenience store, I can learn ability king, good smile and good greet or If I were work in A factory, I learn patient, understand that how appliance... |
JPN | A2_0 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 91 | 91 | 91 | strongly show agreement and various supported ideas / good logical idea connectors / express distinct idea of working experience | some connectors are unrequired; it sometimes interrupts readers in their connected ideas | 14,029 | I completely agree this statement. I have four that agree this Statement First ariety parttime job serve our experience For- example if I were in convenience store, I learn , good smile and good greet I were work in factory, I learn , how appliances are made by the actory. can receive variety experience by diverse par... | I completely agree this statement. I have totally four reason that agree this statement First Variety part time job is serve our experience For- example if I were work in convenience store, I can learn ability king, good smile and good greet or If I were work in A factory, I learn patient, understand that how appliance... |
TWN | B1_2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 25 | 25 | 25 | explain a specific idea and advantage of part-time jobs, also have a reference information | incorrect spelling and language structure/ no effective format and structure of essay writing | 14,098 | I completely agree this statement. I have four that agree this Statement First ariety parttime job serve our experience For- example if I were in convenience store, I learn , good smile and good greet I were work in factory, I learn , how appliances are made by the actory. can receive variety experience by diverse par... | I completely agree this statement. I have totally four reason that agree this statement First Variety part time job is serve our experience For- example if I were work in convenience store, I can learn ability king, good smile and good greet or If I were work in A factory, I learn patient, understand that how appliance... |
IDN | A2_0 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 5 | 25 | 31 | 28 | The writer can provide new ideas. | The argument is not clear; seems that the writer has not made up her/his mind yet. Some sentences are also incomplete. | 14,178 | In my opinion, important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and could learn many things that in class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different people, and you also could learn how... | In my opinion, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and you could learn many things that don't teach in the class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different peop... |
THA | B1_1 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 62 | 70 | 66 | The argument is strong and consistent. | The writer needs more work on vocabulary and how to make concise sentences. Some parts are repetitive. | 14,156 | In my opinion, important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and could learn many things that in class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different people, and you also could learn how... | In my opinion, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and you could learn many things that don't teach in the class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different peop... |
KOR | A2_0 | 0 | 1 | 0 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 21 | 31 | 26 | The argument is consistent. | Poorly written, most punctuations are missing, and some ideas are confusing. | 14,168 | In my opinion, important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and could learn many things that in class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different people, and you also could learn how... | In my opinion, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and you could learn many things that don't teach in the class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different peop... |
CHN | B1_2 | 7 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 70 | 70 | 70 | The ideas are provocative and thoughtful. | The writer needs more work on punctuations. | 14,162 | In my opinion, important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and could learn many things that in class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different people, and you also could learn how... | In my opinion, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and you could learn many things that don't teach in the class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different peop... |
KOR | B1_2 | 2 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 5 | 7.5 | 25 | 30.5 | 27.75 | The argument is consistent throughout the essay. | The sentences' poor structure and grammar outweigh the value of the argument. | 14,163 | In my opinion, important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and could learn many things that in class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different people, and you also could learn how... | In my opinion, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and you could learn many things that don't teach in the class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different peop... |
IDN | A2_0 | 7 | 0 | 2 | 5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 33 | 38 | 35.5 | The writer considers a balanced view on the question and choose her/his position. | The argument is not convincing and some of the claims are flawed. Some parts are also unclear. | 14,209 | In my opinion, important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and could learn many things that in class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different people, and you also could learn how... | In my opinion, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and you could learn many things that don't teach in the class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different peop... |
ENS | ENS | 7 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 69 | 56 | 62.5 | The writer takes own experience to support the stance. | Some sentences are too long and should have been made into some shorter ones. | 14,261 | In my opinion, important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and could learn many things that in class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different people, and you also could learn how... | In my opinion, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and you could learn many things that don't teach in the class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different peop... |
JPN | B1_1 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 55 | 58 | 56.5 | The essay is well-written grammatically. | Some parts are repetitive and it seems that the writer is running out of new ideas and get distracted in some parts. | 14,212 | In my opinion, important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and could learn many things that in class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different people, and you also could learn how... | In my opinion, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and you could learn many things that don't teach in the class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different peop... |
CHN | A2_0 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 50 | 65 | 57.5 | The writer enumerate the arguments well. | The argument is not convincing and the claims are weak. | 14,200 | In my opinion, important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and could learn many things that in class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different people, and you also could learn how... | In my opinion, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and you could learn many things that don't teach in the class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different peop... |
JPN | B1_1 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 80 | 74 | 77 | Excellent essay! The structure is clear, each idea is well-delivered and responding to the question. Well done! | Minor and optional one. Some parts are a bit repetitive, but it is okay. | 14,207 | In my opinion, important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and could learn many things that in class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different people, and you also could learn how... | In my opinion, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job. Why? I have two reasons. First, a part-time job can increase our experience, and you could learn many things that don't teach in the class. For example, if you work in a restaurant, you could learn how to communicate with different peop... |
JPN | B2_0 | 3 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 32 | 78 | 55 | Ideas were original and were presented in a very logical manner complemented with enough examples. | More complex English words may be used. | 14,315 | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor, cramschool teacher, sales and so on. I really agree a part-time job college life. There are some reasons to explai... | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even got many part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor who teaches sociology, cram school teacher, sales and so on. So I really agree has a part-time job in coll... |
THA | B1_1 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 8 | 5 | 5 | 72 | 60 | 66 | Proper use of transitions in presenting the writer's ideas and claims was observed. Enough details were also provided to justify claims. | More complex words may be used to sound more fluent in essay writing. | 14,376 | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor, cramschool teacher, sales and so on. I really agree a part-time job college life. There are some reasons to explai... | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even got many part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor who teaches sociology, cram school teacher, sales and so on. So I really agree has a part-time job in coll... |
TWN | B1_2 | 3 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 41 | 66 | 53.5 | Ideas were presented in a logical manner. The writer was also able to provide enough examples to justify his answer. | Vocabulary and grammar may be further improved. | 14,304 | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor, cramschool teacher, sales and so on. I really agree a part-time job college life. There are some reasons to explai... | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even got many part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor who teaches sociology, cram school teacher, sales and so on. So I really agree has a part-time job in coll... |
IDN | B1_2 | 4 | 9 | 3 | 9 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 9 | 3 | 3 | 37 | 49 | 43 | The writer was able to present his opinions on two opposing standpoints in a convincing manner. Enough details and examples were also provided to justify his claims. | The writer may utilize use of more complex English grammar and vocabulary. | 14,366 | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor, cramschool teacher, sales and so on. I really agree a part-time job college life. There are some reasons to explai... | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even got many part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor who teaches sociology, cram school teacher, sales and so on. So I really agree has a part-time job in coll... |
CHN | B2_0 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 69 | 83 | 76 | The writer showed much willingness in communicating as he presents his ideas in his essay. | However, ideas from personal experiences may be added to further justify claims and make writing more original. | 14,407 | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor, cramschool teacher, sales and so on. I really agree a part-time job college life. There are some reasons to explai... | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even got many part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor who teaches sociology, cram school teacher, sales and so on. So I really agree has a part-time job in coll... |
ENS | ENS | 9 | 6 | 3 | 6 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 6 | 3 | 3 | 32 | 45 | 38.5 | The writer gave answers in a very precise and logical manner. Examples for justification were enough. | More complex English words may be used by the writer to appear more fluent in using the English language. | 14,297 | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor, cramschool teacher, sales and so on. I really agree a part-time job college life. There are some reasons to explai... | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even got many part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor who teaches sociology, cram school teacher, sales and so on. So I really agree has a part-time job in coll... |
IDN | B1_2 | 5 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 79 | 66 | 72.5 | Ideas were presented in a logical manner. Basic English grammar was observed in the essay. | The writer's vocabulary may be further widened to improve fluency of the English language. | 14,337 | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor, cramschool teacher, sales and so on. I really agree a part-time job college life. There are some reasons to explai... | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even got many part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor who teaches sociology, cram school teacher, sales and so on. So I really agree has a part-time job in coll... |
IDN | B1_1 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 3 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 3 | 5 | 5 | 61 | 43 | 52 | Enough details were provided to support the writer's standpoint. Basic English grammar was also observed. | The writer may utilize more complex English grammar and vocabulary to make writing more fluent. | 14,385 | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor, cramschool teacher, sales and so on. I really agree a part-time job college life. There are some reasons to explai... | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even got many part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor who teaches sociology, cram school teacher, sales and so on. So I really agree has a part-time job in coll... |
THA | A2_0 | 5 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 32 | 74 | 53 | The writer presented ideas in a very straightforward and logical manner. | The writer may improve his grammar and vocabulary to sound more fluent in using the English language. | 14,368 | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor, cramschool teacher, sales and so on. I really agree a part-time job college life. There are some reasons to explai... | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even got many part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor who teaches sociology, cram school teacher, sales and so on. So I really agree has a part-time job in coll... |
THA | B1_1 | 5 | 4 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 86 | 59 | 72.5 | The writer presented ideas with sound reasoning and in a logical manner. | The ideas, however, were too general. Example's from personal experiences will further justify the writer's point. | 14,306 | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor, cramschool teacher, sales and so on. I really agree a part-time job college life. There are some reasons to explai... | It is important for college students to have a part-time job. As everyone knows, lots of college students have a part-time job. I'm no exception. I also even got many part-time jobs at the same time, such as tutor who teaches sociology, cram school teacher, sales and so on. So I really agree has a part-time job in coll... |
KOR | B1_1 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 1 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 58 | 53 | 55.5 | Transitional devices were used in the essay. | There is no clear conclusion, the paper just ends with a restatement of the first part of the essay. | 14,493 | If we part—time job, of course we will experience and income by ourselves. job is a good thing to do free time especially college students because they have more free time and freedom to do anything they want. In my opinion, par time job is a good thing to do and I think it is important for college students because t... | If we do part—time job, of course we will have a good experience and we will get income by ourselves. Part time job is a good thing to do in free time especially in college students group because they have more free time and freedom to do anything that they want. In my opinion, part time job is a good thing to do and I... |
THA | B1_2 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 83 | 78 | 80.5 | The writer gave enumerated examples by using ordinal and cardinal adjectives as transitional devices. | inconsistent tenses, prepositions, and misusage of determiners are often seen in the essay. | 14,425 | If we part—time job, of course we will experience and income by ourselves. job is a good thing to do free time especially college students because they have more free time and freedom to do anything they want. In my opinion, par time job is a good thing to do and I think it is important for college students because t... | If we do part—time job, of course we will have a good experience and we will get income by ourselves. Part time job is a good thing to do in free time especially in college students group because they have more free time and freedom to do anything that they want. In my opinion, part time job is a good thing to do and I... |
HKG | B2_0 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 65 | 65 | 65 | The writer pose some questions and reflects a sophisticated understanding of the main topic. | The writer ignores or superficially evaluates obvious alternative points of view that can support the claims in the text. | 14,521 | If we part—time job, of course we will experience and income by ourselves. job is a good thing to do free time especially college students because they have more free time and freedom to do anything they want. In my opinion, par time job is a good thing to do and I think it is important for college students because t... | If we do part—time job, of course we will have a good experience and we will get income by ourselves. Part time job is a good thing to do in free time especially in college students group because they have more free time and freedom to do anything that they want. In my opinion, part time job is a good thing to do and I... |
CHN | A2_0 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 30 | 30 | 30 | The text's introduction is inviting, it also states significant concepts related to the topic which provides an overview of the essay | Main ideas are clear but are not well supported by detailed information. | 14,480 | If we part—time job, of course we will experience and income by ourselves. job is a good thing to do free time especially college students because they have more free time and freedom to do anything they want. In my opinion, par time job is a good thing to do and I think it is important for college students because t... | If we do part—time job, of course we will have a good experience and we will get income by ourselves. Part time job is a good thing to do in free time especially in college students group because they have more free time and freedom to do anything that they want. In my opinion, part time job is a good thing to do and I... |
THA | A2_0 | 3 | 1 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 28 | 28 | 28 | The writer demonstrated a clear understanding of the relative merits of the main idea | There are instances in the text that are unfocused and in a sense of distracted the readers | 14,527 | If we part—time job, of course we will experience and income by ourselves. job is a good thing to do free time especially college students because they have more free time and freedom to do anything they want. In my opinion, par time job is a good thing to do and I think it is important for college students because t... | If we do part—time job, of course we will have a good experience and we will get income by ourselves. Part time job is a good thing to do in free time especially in college students group because they have more free time and freedom to do anything that they want. In my opinion, part time job is a good thing to do and I... |
JPN | B2_0 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 63 | 63 | 63 | Connections between ideas seemed to be complete and significant for readers impact | Distracting errors in punctuation, spelling, capitalization are often seen in the text | 14,470 | If we part—time job, of course we will experience and income by ourselves. job is a good thing to do free time especially college students because they have more free time and freedom to do anything they want. In my opinion, par time job is a good thing to do and I think it is important for college students because t... | If we do part—time job, of course we will have a good experience and we will get income by ourselves. Part time job is a good thing to do in free time especially in college students group because they have more free time and freedom to do anything that they want. In my opinion, part time job is a good thing to do and I... |
CHN | B1_1 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 50 | 45 | 47.5 | The ideas are consistently, original, insightful, and demonstrate a sophistication and complexity of thought. | The writer overuse short sentences, awkward wording, and sentences weakened by grammar/punctuation errors. | 14,504 | If we part—time job, of course we will experience and income by ourselves. job is a good thing to do free time especially college students because they have more free time and freedom to do anything they want. In my opinion, par time job is a good thing to do and I think it is important for college students because t... | If we do part—time job, of course we will have a good experience and we will get income by ourselves. Part time job is a good thing to do in free time especially in college students group because they have more free time and freedom to do anything that they want. In my opinion, part time job is a good thing to do and I... |
CHN | A2_0 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 6 | 8 | 90 | 79 | 84.5 | The writer balanced out the judgement on the topic. He/she was able to give two different perspective that strengthen the claims of the text | There are statements that need to be clarified in order to be more comprehensible. | 14,431 | If we part—time job, of course we will experience and income by ourselves. job is a good thing to do free time especially college students because they have more free time and freedom to do anything they want. In my opinion, par time job is a good thing to do and I think it is important for college students because t... | If we do part—time job, of course we will have a good experience and we will get income by ourselves. Part time job is a good thing to do in free time especially in college students group because they have more free time and freedom to do anything that they want. In my opinion, part time job is a good thing to do and I... |
KOR | B1_2 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 85 | 79 | 82 | The author have a keen process of analysis strategy that gave depth to the text. | The text arguments sometimes uses fallacious or irrelevant reasons, and unwarranted claims. | 14,522 | If we part—time job, of course we will experience and income by ourselves. job is a good thing to do free time especially college students because they have more free time and freedom to do anything they want. In my opinion, par time job is a good thing to do and I think it is important for college students because t... | If we do part—time job, of course we will have a good experience and we will get income by ourselves. Part time job is a good thing to do in free time especially in college students group because they have more free time and freedom to do anything that they want. In my opinion, part time job is a good thing to do and I... |
KOR | B2_0 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 25 | 30 | 27.5 | The presented ideas are organized and was supported with substantial details to form logical transition of context | the writer could have strengthened the claims if certain word choices are replaced with its alternative | 14,456 | If we part—time job, of course we will experience and income by ourselves. job is a good thing to do free time especially college students because they have more free time and freedom to do anything they want. In my opinion, par time job is a good thing to do and I think it is important for college students because t... | If we do part—time job, of course we will have a good experience and we will get income by ourselves. Part time job is a good thing to do in free time especially in college students group because they have more free time and freedom to do anything that they want. In my opinion, part time job is a good thing to do and I... |
KOR | B1_1 | 2 | 2 | 4 | 2 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 35 | 37 | 36 | The writer presented justifiable points, with regards to the topic. | Grammar, punctuations and sentence structure need improvements. | 14,633 | I think parttime job is very importantare going to experience in parttime and earn money. many students think parttime more important than . Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to parttime . Parttime job experience is meet many people and experience. reason that students have parttime job. First, parttim... | I think part time job is very important. Because we are going to learn experience in part time job and we earn much money. But many students think part time job more important than study. Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to have a part time job. Part time job experience is to be. Because meets many peop... |
JPN | A2_0 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 51 | 49 | 50 | The writer presented crucial points and was able to support his/her argument. | Grammar, spelling, and sentence structure need improvements. | 14,589 | I think parttime job is very importantare going to experience in parttime and earn money. many students think parttime more important than . Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to parttime . Parttime job experience is meet many people and experience. reason that students have parttime job. First, parttim... | I think part time job is very important. Because we are going to learn experience in part time job and we earn much money. But many students think part time job more important than study. Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to have a part time job. Part time job experience is to be. Because meets many peop... |
CHN | A2_0 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 5 | 4 | 39 | 40 | 39.5 | The writer was able to present valid arguments about the topic. | Some words are used inappropriately and grammar can be improved | 14,571 | I think parttime job is very importantare going to experience in parttime and earn money. many students think parttime more important than . Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to parttime . Parttime job experience is meet many people and experience. reason that students have parttime job. First, parttim... | I think part time job is very important. Because we are going to learn experience in part time job and we earn much money. But many students think part time job more important than study. Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to have a part time job. Part time job experience is to be. Because meets many peop... |
JPN | B2_0 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 51 | 61 | 56 | The writer conveyed good points to support his claims. | Grammar, spelling, and sentence structure need improvements. | 14,595 | I think parttime job is very importantare going to experience in parttime and earn money. many students think parttime more important than . Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to parttime . Parttime job experience is meet many people and experience. reason that students have parttime job. First, parttim... | I think part time job is very important. Because we are going to learn experience in part time job and we earn much money. But many students think part time job more important than study. Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to have a part time job. Part time job experience is to be. Because meets many peop... |
THA | B1_2 | 3 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 44 | 47 | 45.5 | The writer was able to present valid arguments about the topic. | Grammar, punctuations and sentence structure need improvements. | 14,638 | I think parttime job is very importantare going to experience in parttime and earn money. many students think parttime more important than . Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to parttime . Parttime job experience is meet many people and experience. reason that students have parttime job. First, parttim... | I think part time job is very important. Because we are going to learn experience in part time job and we earn much money. But many students think part time job more important than study. Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to have a part time job. Part time job experience is to be. Because meets many peop... |
JPN | B2_0 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 51 | 51 | 51 | The writer was able to present valid arguments about the topic. | The grammar and choice of words can be improved. | 14,678 | I think parttime job is very importantare going to experience in parttime and earn money. many students think parttime more important than . Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to parttime . Parttime job experience is meet many people and experience. reason that students have parttime job. First, parttim... | I think part time job is very important. Because we are going to learn experience in part time job and we earn much money. But many students think part time job more important than study. Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to have a part time job. Part time job experience is to be. Because meets many peop... |
JPN | A2_0 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 3 | 5 | 41 | 45 | 43 | The writer conveyed good points to support his claims. | Grammar, punctuations and sentence structure need improvements. | 14,621 | I think parttime job is very importantare going to experience in parttime and earn money. many students think parttime more important than . Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to parttime . Parttime job experience is meet many people and experience. reason that students have parttime job. First, parttim... | I think part time job is very important. Because we are going to learn experience in part time job and we earn much money. But many students think part time job more important than study. Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to have a part time job. Part time job experience is to be. Because meets many peop... |
THA | A2_0 | 2 | 2 | 4 | 4 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 21 | 22 | 21.5 | The writer conveyed good points to support his claims. | The sentence structure of the passage can still be improved. | 14,634 | I think parttime job is very importantare going to experience in parttime and earn money. many students think parttime more important than . Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to parttime . Parttime job experience is meet many people and experience. reason that students have parttime job. First, parttim... | I think part time job is very important. Because we are going to learn experience in part time job and we earn much money. But many students think part time job more important than study. Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to have a part time job. Part time job experience is to be. Because meets many peop... |
SIN | B2_0 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 89 | 77 | 83 | The writer presented justifiable points, with regards to the topic. | The grammar and sentence structure can be improved | 14,699 | I think parttime job is very importantare going to experience in parttime and earn money. many students think parttime more important than . Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to parttime . Parttime job experience is meet many people and experience. reason that students have parttime job. First, parttim... | I think part time job is very important. Because we are going to learn experience in part time job and we earn much money. But many students think part time job more important than study. Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to have a part time job. Part time job experience is to be. Because meets many peop... |
CHN | A2_0 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 69 | 65 | 67 | The writer was able to compare and contrast necessary arguments accordingly. | The grammar, punctuations, and sentence structure can be improved | 14,640 | I think parttime job is very importantare going to experience in parttime and earn money. many students think parttime more important than . Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to parttime . Parttime job experience is meet many people and experience. reason that students have parttime job. First, parttim... | I think part time job is very important. Because we are going to learn experience in part time job and we earn much money. But many students think part time job more important than study. Nevertheless, I think that many people are going to have a part time job. Part time job experience is to be. Because meets many peop... |
IDN | A2_0 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 25 | 28 | 26.5 | Basic command of grammar and sentence structure. Point were slightly relevant to the task | Errors in grammar, sentence structure as well as incorrect use of vocabulary made comprehensibility difficult | 14,732 | I agree that college students have parttime job ecause college students parttime job, they improve College students experience social life early improve than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students get a jobcan adapt more easily Also, college students earn money themselves without their parents he... | I agree that college students have a part time job. Because if college students have part time job, they improve sociality College students experience social life early They improve sociality than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students will get a job, they can adapt more easily Also, college stud... |
KOR | B2_0 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 50 | 57 | 53.5 | Good command of grammar and sentence structure. Good use of words. | Writer explain about own experience but did not focus on explaining the important or disadvantages of part time job. | 14,804 | I agree that college students have parttime job ecause college students parttime job, they improve College students experience social life early improve than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students get a jobcan adapt more easily Also, college students earn money themselves without their parents he... | I agree that college students have a part time job. Because if college students have part time job, they improve sociality College students experience social life early They improve sociality than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students will get a job, they can adapt more easily Also, college stud... |
IDN | B1_1 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 60 | 66 | 63 | Points were relevant and well elaborated. Good command of grammar and sentence structure. | Some errors in basic grammar and sentence structure as well as incorrect use of words. | 14,812 | I agree that college students have parttime job ecause college students parttime job, they improve College students experience social life early improve than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students get a jobcan adapt more easily Also, college students earn money themselves without their parents he... | I agree that college students have a part time job. Because if college students have part time job, they improve sociality College students experience social life early They improve sociality than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students will get a job, they can adapt more easily Also, college stud... |
IDN | B1_2 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 93 | 93 | 93 | Excellent points and elaborations, which were well organized. Excellent mastery in vocabulary. | Some minor errors in grammar but very minimal and does not hamper understanding. | 14,745 | I agree that college students have parttime job ecause college students parttime job, they improve College students experience social life early improve than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students get a jobcan adapt more easily Also, college students earn money themselves without their parents he... | I agree that college students have a part time job. Because if college students have part time job, they improve sociality College students experience social life early They improve sociality than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students will get a job, they can adapt more easily Also, college stud... |
ENS | ENS | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 82 | 81 | 81.5 | Points we well organized with excellent command of sentence structure and wide usage of vocabulary. | some minor errors in grammar. | 14,717 | I agree that college students have parttime job ecause college students parttime job, they improve College students experience social life early improve than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students get a jobcan adapt more easily Also, college students earn money themselves without their parents he... | I agree that college students have a part time job. Because if college students have part time job, they improve sociality College students experience social life early They improve sociality than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students will get a job, they can adapt more easily Also, college stud... |
IDN | A2_0 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 62 | 68 | 65 | Good points and elaborations with good command of basic grammar. | Some incorrect grammar and vocabulary usage that impedes the comprehensibility of the text. | 14,738 | I agree that college students have parttime job ecause college students parttime job, they improve College students experience social life early improve than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students get a jobcan adapt more easily Also, college students earn money themselves without their parents he... | I agree that college students have a part time job. Because if college students have part time job, they improve sociality College students experience social life early They improve sociality than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students will get a job, they can adapt more easily Also, college stud... |
KOR | A2_0 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 43 | 46 | 44.5 | Satisfactory usage of grammar and sentence structure. | Some incorrect usage of words. Some errors in grammar. | 14,829 | I agree that college students have parttime job ecause college students parttime job, they improve College students experience social life early improve than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students get a jobcan adapt more easily Also, college students earn money themselves without their parents he... | I agree that college students have a part time job. Because if college students have part time job, they improve sociality College students experience social life early They improve sociality than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students will get a job, they can adapt more easily Also, college stud... |
IDN | B2_0 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 80 | 79 | 79.5 | Points were organized well with excellent elaboration to get the point across. Excellent mastery of basic grammar with good sentence structure. | Some grammatical errors with some minor incorrect use of words. | 14,714 | I agree that college students have parttime job ecause college students parttime job, they improve College students experience social life early improve than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students get a jobcan adapt more easily Also, college students earn money themselves without their parents he... | I agree that college students have a part time job. Because if college students have part time job, they improve sociality College students experience social life early They improve sociality than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students will get a job, they can adapt more easily Also, college stud... |
THA | B1_2 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 50 | 59 | 54.5 | Organization of points were good with good usage of sequencing discourse markers. | Sentence structure, vocabulary and punctuation need more improvement. | 14,705 | I agree that college students have parttime job ecause college students parttime job, they improve College students experience social life early improve than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students get a jobcan adapt more easily Also, college students earn money themselves without their parents he... | I agree that college students have a part time job. Because if college students have part time job, they improve sociality College students experience social life early They improve sociality than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students will get a job, they can adapt more easily Also, college stud... |
THA | B1_1 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 40 | 42 | 41 | Points written were relevant with satisfactory grammar and use of words. | Some incorrect sentence structure that made the sentences confusing. Errors in grammar. | 14,817 | I agree that college students have parttime job ecause college students parttime job, they improve College students experience social life early improve than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students get a jobcan adapt more easily Also, college students earn money themselves without their parents he... | I agree that college students have a part time job. Because if college students have part time job, they improve sociality College students experience social life early They improve sociality than students don't have a part time job As a result, the students will get a job, they can adapt more easily Also, college stud... |
THA | B1_1 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 70 | 70 | 70 | the writer is very smart in writing, clear statement, logical and the essay is easy to understand. | there is some sentence repetition and some error of grammars may make confusing and comprehensible but the essay is still good. | 14,856 | I agree college students part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by part-time job, can earning money very . they use their money seriously. college students have time if they want travel abroad, they can money by doing part-time job . Planning how to use money helpful when they begin to w... | I agree that college students have a part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by doing part-time job, they can find earning money very hard. So, they use their money seriously. And the college students have much time. So if they want travel abroad, they can make money by doing part-time job... |
HKG | B2_0 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 82 | 82 | 82 | the writer's perspectives are comprehensible and reasonable, her idea shows clearly and easy to understand. | there were some small error-free vocabulary and some sentences used mistakes wrong connectors. | 14,949 | I agree college students part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by part-time job, can earning money very . they use their money seriously. college students have time if they want travel abroad, they can money by doing part-time job . Planning how to use money helpful when they begin to w... | I agree that college students have a part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by doing part-time job, they can find earning money very hard. So, they use their money seriously. And the college students have much time. So if they want travel abroad, they can make money by doing part-time job... |
CHN | B1_1 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 50 | 50 | 50 | The writer showed strong agreement and gave an example of life experience. | The essay had unnecessary supporting idea and few sentences made it confusing for readers. | 14,887 | I agree college students part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by part-time job, can earning money very . they use their money seriously. college students have time if they want travel abroad, they can money by doing part-time job . Planning how to use money helpful when they begin to w... | I agree that college students have a part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by doing part-time job, they can find earning money very hard. So, they use their money seriously. And the college students have much time. So if they want travel abroad, they can make money by doing part-time job... |
HKG | B2_0 | 7 | 4 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 55 | 55 | 55 | The writer showed many positive points to support his idea and the essay was well organized to express his supportive idea. | The writer sought to articulate his thoughts and provide examples to back up his assertions. | 14,941 | I agree college students part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by part-time job, can earning money very . they use their money seriously. college students have time if they want travel abroad, they can money by doing part-time job . Planning how to use money helpful when they begin to w... | I agree that college students have a part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by doing part-time job, they can find earning money very hard. So, they use their money seriously. And the college students have much time. So if they want travel abroad, they can make money by doing part-time job... |
CHN | B1_1 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 66 | 66 | 66 | the essay was comprehensible, logical and persuasive because the writer tried to describe idea to support his perspective. | There were some run-on error and wrong punctuation, grammar error. The essay could not well understandable and unclear in some topic. | 14,924 | I agree college students part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by part-time job, can earning money very . they use their money seriously. college students have time if they want travel abroad, they can money by doing part-time job . Planning how to use money helpful when they begin to w... | I agree that college students have a part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by doing part-time job, they can find earning money very hard. So, they use their money seriously. And the college students have much time. So if they want travel abroad, they can make money by doing part-time job... |
KOR | A2_0 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 65 | 65 | 65 | The essay was persuasive with clear points and examples. | The essay could not well comprehensible and made confusing with incorrect punctuation, misspelling and wrong grammars. | 14,868 | I agree college students part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by part-time job, can earning money very . they use their money seriously. college students have time if they want travel abroad, they can money by doing part-time job . Planning how to use money helpful when they begin to w... | I agree that college students have a part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by doing part-time job, they can find earning money very hard. So, they use their money seriously. And the college students have much time. So if they want travel abroad, they can make money by doing part-time job... |
TWN | B1_1 | 3 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 23 | 23 | 23 | The writer tried to explain his feeling thru his opinion. | The essay was difficult to understand because the ideas were not presented logically. The grammar might improved. | 14,931 | I agree college students part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by part-time job, can earning money very . they use their money seriously. college students have time if they want travel abroad, they can money by doing part-time job . Planning how to use money helpful when they begin to w... | I agree that college students have a part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by doing part-time job, they can find earning money very hard. So, they use their money seriously. And the college students have much time. So if they want travel abroad, they can make money by doing part-time job... |
TWN | B1_2 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 88 | 88 | 88 | the writer expressed confident reason to explain his idea with clear examples and key main idea. | some small error-free vocabulary | 14,864 | I agree college students part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by part-time job, can earning money very . they use their money seriously. college students have time if they want travel abroad, they can money by doing part-time job . Planning how to use money helpful when they begin to w... | I agree that college students have a part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by doing part-time job, they can find earning money very hard. So, they use their money seriously. And the college students have much time. So if they want travel abroad, they can make money by doing part-time job... |
THA | A2_0 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 27 | 27 | 27 | The writer's language structure is excellent. There are scenarios that can be envisaged in this manner of thinking. and mention the story's benefits or byproducts | the grammar need to be improved. | 14,954 | I agree college students part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by part-time job, can earning money very . they use their money seriously. college students have time if they want travel abroad, they can money by doing part-time job . Planning how to use money helpful when they begin to w... | I agree that college students have a part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by doing part-time job, they can find earning money very hard. So, they use their money seriously. And the college students have much time. So if they want travel abroad, they can make money by doing part-time job... |
THA | B2_0 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 70 | 70 | 70 | the writer pointed out his idea clearly and describe examples reasonably. | there were redundant sentences and some error in vocabulary and grammar. | 14,923 | I agree college students part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by part-time job, can earning money very . they use their money seriously. college students have time if they want travel abroad, they can money by doing part-time job . Planning how to use money helpful when they begin to w... | I agree that college students have a part-time job. There are five reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, by doing part-time job, they can find earning money very hard. So, they use their money seriously. And the college students have much time. So if they want travel abroad, they can make money by doing part-time job... |
SIN | B2_0 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 85 | 83 | 84 | Explanation is clear and very persuasive. | Maybe possible to use the sentences more economically. | 15,119 | hether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ought... | Whether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ough... |
JPN | A2_0 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 4 | 2 | 2 | 4 | 2 | 2 | 30 | 23 | 26.5 | Written with confidence. Tried to make the opinion explain clearly. | Need to add more examples to support the insistence. | 15,103 | hether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ought... | Whether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ough... |
TWN | B1_1 | 4 | 4 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 6 | 3 | 3 | 35 | 35 | 35 | Having strong concrete examples to support the ideas. | Poor grammar control and wrong usages of words made the essay difficult to be understandable. | 15,110 | hether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ought... | Whether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ough... |
CHN | B1_1 | 6 | 6 | 3 | 3 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 4 | 2 | 1 | 50 | 42 | 46 | Good arrangement to show two opposite opinions. Explanations are easy to understand. | Need to develop each ideas more. | 15,034 | hether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ought... | Whether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ough... |
IDN | B1_2 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 7 | 4 | 4 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 45 | 48 | 46.5 | Tried to think the theme from a few different points of view. | Some wrong usages of words. Need to deepen the ideas. | 15,066 | hether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ought... | Whether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ough... |
KOR | B2_0 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 4 | 5 | 0 | 1 | 0 | 7 | 1 | 0 | 23 | 11.5 | Tried to show own experience and express own feelings. | Few punctuation marks are used. Not written about college students' part-time job. | 15,108 | hether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ought... | Whether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ough... |
IDN | B2_0 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 3 | 3 | 70 | 53 | 61.5 | Few grammatical mistakes and no spelling mistakes. | Too long sentences. Better to organize the ideas more effectively. | 15,050 | hether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ought... | Whether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ough... |
JPN | B1_1 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 7 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 45 | 44 | 44.5 | No major grammatical error and no mistaken choice of words. | Maybe need to use more sophisticated words. Able to make the contents clearer. | 15,096 | hether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ought... | Whether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ough... |
TWN | A2_0 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 2 | 3 | 6 | 5 | 3 | 45 | 36 | 40.5 | No spelling mistakes and tried to use the examples properly. | Many grammatical errors and elusive expressions made the contents difficult to be comprehended. | 15,005 | hether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ought... | Whether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ough... |
JPN | B2_0 | 6 | 2 | 6 | 3 | 7 | 3 | 2 | 7 | 4 | 4 | 40 | 44 | 42 | Ideas are clear and understandable. Paragraph is well organized. | Many basic words are used and sometimes mistaken. Most of the sentences are simple. | 15,000 | hether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ought... | Whether college students should take part-time jobs has aroused great public concern. As far as I'm concerned, part-time job plays an increasing important role in college life and I'm for the idea. Nevertheless, several people argue that it is a waste of time to take a part-time job and obviously, college students ough... |
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