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support from your classmates
Claim
Adequate
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and it prepares you for the introduction of your future job.
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Hands on learning is the number one factor that differs online classes from regular classes
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Having a professional in subjects like math in your vicinity at all times is the best way for a student to get a good grasp on information. Whether it be a professor or a student; The help and guidance of another mind will always have a more significant stretch over trying to learn a subject or topic by yourself.
Evidence
Adequate
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Taking online classes will have some guidance
Counterclaim
Adequate
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However, if you're stuck on your work and your not in a video call with your professor, then how are you supposed to get the answer, and looking on the internet for the answer is not the most trustworthy thing to do.
Rebuttal
Adequate
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Classmates have such a huge impact because they'll be the next best thing to a professor when it comes to helping you learn
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You might not understand the information, but chances are that one of your classmates fully understands it, and they will help you understand the concept most of the time.
Evidence
Adequate
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In certain situations; One might take online courses because their income cannot support them
Counterclaim
Adequate
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which is totally understandable, but the circumstances of the benefits from taking online or traditional classes still apply.
Rebuttal
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Being in a classroom when taking classes for your career are vital.
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Most businesses don't allow you to take online classes. They require you to have a certain number of hours in a certain class, and an internship on top of that.
Evidence
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There will always be the few that counterclaim that online classes are so much better than regular classes, and they might even go as far as claiming that they're a blessing in disguise
Counterclaim
Ineffective
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However, those individuals tend to throw off the potential downfalls and only look at the few benefits that exist.
Rebuttal
Adequate
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I agree with most of the benefits like the independent work environment, the accessibility of class from home, and the exception of taking these classes because of financial reasons, but online class students are yet and still cheating themselves out of the large mass of benefits that regular classes offer. To get the ...
Concluding Statement
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Everyone has found themselves in that sticky situation where you just don't know what to do. There are so many problems running through your mind and so many ways to solve them. Your head is jumbled up, and you can't think straight anymore. You start stressing out and sweating and you just have absolutely no idea what ...
Lead
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Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice
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by exposing them to many different ways to interpret and solve problems
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, helping them think about their choices thoroughly without getting stressed out or anxious,
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opening their mind to all the possible choices and outcomes of the situation.
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Studies show that when given the same situation, almost 80% of people choose different ways to solve them. This is beneficial because it shows that everyone has their own ways of solving problems, so when you ask people around you which choice they would make in a certain situation you will get many different ways. Thi...
Evidence
Adequate
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There are many people that have a hard time making decisions on their own. They go back and forth between all the choices that they could possibly make, and all it does is make them anxious. I know this from personal experience because I'm a very indecisive person, and making big decisions stress me out a lot. But when...
Evidence
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Sometimes when people have to make a decision, they think that there is only a couple options to choose from. They don't stretch their mind to think outside the box and think of other choices they can make. But when they ask multiple people of their intake on the situation, they will realize that there are so many more...
Evidence
Adequate
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In conclusion, seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice by exposing them to many different ways to interpret and solve problems, helping them think about their choices thoroughly without getting stressed out or anxious, and opening their mind to all the possible choices and outcomes of the situat...
Concluding Statement
Effective
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So would you rather be a person that only ask one person for an opinion or ask multiple people, but seeking multiple people opinions is better because seeking multiple opinions can help
Position
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when u ask different people for their opinion it probably makes them feel good about that someone cares about their opinion
Claim
Adequate
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the fact that u can make more friends by just asking a question
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seeking more help can also improve your ability to talk to someone without being nervous.
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it can help people feel good about theirselvs
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what i mean by that is most of the time no one cares about your opinion or theres and asking them for their opinion can really impact their life a lot because you probably brighten their day by putting a smile on their face.
Evidence
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Another way it help is that it improves your ability to talk to other people
Claim
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say if your shy and dont talk to nobody try going around asking people for their opinion on something and you ask how that can improve your ability to talk to people well it improves your ability to talk to people without being scared it really works because the more you do it the less afraid you are to talk to people....
Evidence
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asking for other people opinions can help you make friends
Claim
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when you ask for their opinion they probably want to ask you a question or they probably was thinking about the same question you asked but didnt have anyone to ask because they dont have friends either and now yall are friends and more friends are better than one.
Evidence
Ineffective
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so thats why i think asking multiple people for their opinion is better than just asking one person because it can help you get friends, improve your ability to talk to people,and it makes them fool good about themselves.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Schools all over the world are making education more accessible each and every year. Most schools have online websites where school based information is published, and schools have interactive classrooms where students may turn in their assignments. Although technological advancements are providing learning opportuniti...
Lead
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Students will not benefit from attending online courses instead of normal classroom classes
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due to less concentration
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less peer involvement
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and limited learning variety online.
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Students achieve greater accomplishments when they are fully concentrated, not when they are laying distracted on their beds.
Claim
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Although students commit to attending the online courses, the environment in which they study in sometimes is not a guaranteed adequate learning location. For example, if students have pets or younger siblings in their households; the students will not be fully engaged if the pet or sibling is entertaining the student....
Evidence
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With limited concentration and lack of focus in a non school environment, there is only one factor that hurts the student's learning ability more. This is the lack of student-on-student involvement
Claim
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Without other students, the limit is set extremely low on the personal growth of the learner. When there is peer involvement, there is growth in the character and intelligence of the person. This kind of negative influence on students also adds to the very limited learning experience online. Most of the learning factor...
Evidence
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Students will not benefit from online courses more than they will from attending the classroom. The lack of concentration and peer involvement show how limited a student's learning experience will be when taking online courses. The disturbance in the pace of the student when at home affects the overall results and accu...
Concluding Statement
Effective
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Although the technology that is at the school board's disposal is useful
Counterclaim
Adequate
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in many different and meaningful ways could be a distraction to the learning of the youth.
Rebuttal
Adequate
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In today's world, we are able to say a generous amount of people are being educated around the world everyday thanks to all the technology advances and the develoment of more educated minds lately. Even though not all education systems are optimal, it is believed that education can change anyone's perspective and under...
Lead
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I argue that the advantages and benefits of taking a class online outweight by far the cons
Position
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because it can help those who are unable to attend regularly because of a condition or sickness
Claim
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the comfort of home, or other safe environment can improve the overall performance
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and those wanting to learn more can really take this as an advantage.
Claim
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As of myself, I am a current student in Generic_City in a public high school called Generic_School which offers these courses online to students at no cost during the school year and over the summer with a fee. A few years ago, during my freshmen year, there was a terrible car accident relating to a senior student back...
Evidence
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With a little adjusting and permission with the county, he was able to continue with is education and he was able to eventually graduate from high school and I think this is a fantastic example to show one of the biggest advantages of onlne teaching.
Claim
Effective
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I have mentioned before, I am taking an online class. I decided to take this class for the following reasons: to experience online school and see if it was adequate for me and to get this class done this year so I could focus on more specific subjects my senior year in high school. I started the course through a platfo...
Evidence
Effective
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This prison-like design of most classrooms and the lack of natural light really affect my focus and performance in class. However, when I find myslef in the public library or at home I can focus for longer periods of time and get my work done fater and I actually understand what I'm reading and doing better.
Claim
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One might believe that when students aren't in a classroom environment, they are simply just going to find a way to cheat the system and not actually do the work and tests assigned to them like a famous Youtube creator has told his fans
Counterclaim
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Mark, or as most people know him Markiplier, is a famous Youtuber who has over 10 million subscribers and specializes in gameplays and some acting skits. He has shared his story multiple times about how he almost graduated from his engeinering career in college based on a complex but effective way of cheating the unive...
Evidence
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I agree there is those who choose to do the wrong thing and try to cheat the system, but I have known many dedicated people who have taken online courses who always try to use the resources given to them to make the most out of their education.
Rebuttal
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This can be compared to a well known classic Matilda, a movie about a little girl who has very high cognitive abilities, making her a child genius. She takes the public library as one of her primary resources for learning to read more books than any child of her age; however, Matilda was born into a family where intel...
Evidence
Effective
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If we look back when children were working on farms and factories, we can see how much progress out society has made in the last couple decades since we open education to more and more people ever since. It is without a doubt we're lucky for this. This is why many see online classes as a good resource since it can help...
Concluding Statement
Effective
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Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice. Working together to make decisions has helped not only push humanity through brick walls, but find a better way around them to avoid the disaster. The entire government of the United States of America is based on this belief of multiple opinions being the...
Lead
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In all decisions, there are multiple paths to take, but another influence can help not only to choose the right path, but to find new one (if needed).
Position
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other people have had to make impossible decisions in a similar scenarios as the one the advice-seeker is gong through
Claim
Effective
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People that have been on this planet earth longer have had many more experiences then younger folk, and have gained more knowledge in the ways of life. This is why God gave us our parents. Our wonderful parents are here to help guide us through life, they are here to help us become a better version of themselves. Most ...
Evidence
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People can also be leaning towards one choice for the wrong reasons.
Claim
Adequate
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Many people at my age are like the thirsty sprinting towards poisoned water. It is terrible for them, but they are so in need that they drink it anyway, hoping for a miracle. People tend to have knee-jerk reactions, sometimes leading in the wrong direction. This is caused by the frontal lobe, the part of the brain that...
Evidence
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some people can get so caught up in a decision that they forget that it is not just affecting themselves
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Our minds have been hard-wired to protect ourselves first since the beginning of time. Decisions are like lights, our own minds can defy us and twist our vision to make them appear brighter or dimmer. They can blind us from everything else going on around it, and make it impossible to see anything else until we turn it...
Evidence
Effective
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, choices are important gifts for us to tackle with the input of others. Other people have often been through a similar scenario and have gained knowledge from past experiences to help guide us in the right direction. People tend to lean towards one choice for the wrong reasons, and people forget that their actions aff...
Concluding Statement
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As a student I have had to ask for advice often to be able to come up with an educated response. When I need advice I found it helpful to go to ask multiple people for their opinions rather than just one.
Lead
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I do this because asking more people gives you a variety of answers
Position
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people have varying opinions,
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a multitude of view points because not every one thinks the same way,
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a plethora of different experiences to go off of.
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You get multiple different viewpoints because you should ask a variety of different people to get the most educated response. This can help you in finding your opinion because you can see both sides of the story and you make an educated decision from there. This way helps you more than just asking one person because if...
Evidence
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This happens because everyone has a different variety of viewpoints, even if they are the same, they might see it a different way or have different facts backing it up. This helps you when you need advice, by letting you have the full view of the opinion and limiting the bias by using other people accounts to find the ...
Evidence
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It is good to have a variety in past experiences because they can help you make an educated decisions for the present but also for the future. When you chose what experiences to go for, you should choose ones that are close to your present experiences but also for the future experiences you will go through. You should ...
Evidence
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To sum up, I have found that when I need advice it's helpful to go to ask multiple people for their opinions rather than just one. It helps you siphon through the bias, decide which viewpoint fits you the best, and learn about the experience you might need for the present and the future. In conclusion, When ever you ne...
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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When a person asks for advice it is most likely they're in a situation that is to confusing or difficult to the point where they don't know what the right solution or choice is. Making choices in life can be hard. Most times they'res never a right choice, but having different people to talk to help you find the best de...
Lead
Effective
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I believe having different opinions when asking for advice can help someone make a better choice
Position
Adequate
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the different perspectives
Claim
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the people the advice is coming from
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the multiple solutions gotten out of it.
Claim
Adequate
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Talking to different people and getting various perspectives in a confusing situation is helpful because it makes a person start thinking deeper because they all don't have the same opinion. Different points of view can be very helpful because of the different experiences the people could have
Claim
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For example, one of the person asked could've had an experience of being on the other side of a similar situation which could help you think what is at risk or what is gained. Another person could've made a bad choice and learned from their mistake which can give a bigger in site of what is at risk and there could be a...
Evidence
Adequate
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When asking for advice the people asked also have an effect on your decision making
Claim
Adequate
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The people asked don't always have a personal experience or know what to say or how to help you. It is most preferred to ask someone who has experienced something similar or someone who loves and cares about you. For example, getting advice from a friend maybe not the best option because friends nowadays aren't always ...
Evidence
Adequate
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Another reason asking for different opinions can help someone make a better choice is the multiple solutions you get out of it
Claim
Adequate
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Talking to different people helps come up with different paths you can take and helps predict the outcomes. This especially is needed in occasions where the situation effect their future. Those decisions need a hard and deep thinking because you're never to sure what could happen that you can regret. That is why findin...
Evidence
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Overall, I believe talking to different people when asking for advice and getting various opinions can make a positive impact on the choice made because of the different points of view given by the people asked that could agree, disagree, or give you in site on the risks or benefits and the multiple options and solutio...
Concluding Statement
Effective
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When you ask multiple people for advice it is good
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they want to help with the situation that you need hep with
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they want you do what is best for you
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that person might not want you to get hurt because they might have been in that situation already.
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So they want to help you out more and they want you to talk your problems out with them so they can know what is going on and what they are going to do. When a friend is helping you out they want to give you good advice so you do not have to worry and the situation again. When you ask multiple people for advice it is g...
Evidence
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they do not want to see you in a bad mood because and they do not wan to be mad at you because you gave them a bad advice and they do not know what to do after. Some people are scared to give their friends advice because their advice might be bad and they do not want you to do what is bad, and they do not wan you to fe...
Evidence
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that person that is giving you advice do not want you to get hurt
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they would want you to follow your heart and do what is best for you to do and what makes you happy. Whatever comes to your mind and it makes you feel happy you should do whatever makes you happy
Evidence
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you do not always have to listen to your friends advice cause they can always be wrong and they might want you to do something bad and make you fall in a wrong path.
Counterclaim
Adequate