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f1fb627cbc18 | 0BA5EF441ADD | say my friend is in a situation and she wanted to let someone down easily so she asked for advice I would say she should follow her heart and do was is best for her because say if one of her friends gave her advice and it was not so good she would feel bad and not want to get advice from that person any more. But if i ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
22e1631789e3 | 0BA5EF441ADD | this prompt is trying to say like you should hear some of peoples advice because he would lead you to a good or a bad path because it dependents on the situation and what you are going through if you are going through something and its bad | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
97150e978b3e | 0BA5EF441ADD | i recommend you to keep it to your self and not let others give through your head because it might lead you to a bad path because some people want to others get hurt and not do so good while they are doing their best to get out of trouble | Counterclaim | Adequate |
22c48675f806 | 0BDADA3AFF77 | When someone is confused like a problem or a situation in life. They're going to want a lot of advices so they could solve that problem | Position | Ineffective |
28ef8d611e02 | 0BDADA3AFF77 | for example: i was struggling on math. I needed help so i asked a friend. They told me some advices but i was still confused so i decide to ask another friend. If the advices were not helping out so much then i would just ask the teacher and the teacher should give you a lot of helpful advices because there the ones th... | Evidence | Adequate |
a7072239ed6e | 0BDADA3AFF77 | Also the reason why people ask multiple persons for advice is because. if you ask one person for advice that person may not give you a lot of advices than asking multiple people for advices because the advices that other people are giving you can help you out more than that one advice that the one person gave you. | Claim | Adequate |
158675b24e2c | 0BDADA3AFF77 | Asking multiple people for advice can teach you new things that you didnt know of. | Claim | Adequate |
654224acaf1b | 0BDADA3AFF77 | Asking multiple people for advice can help you in so many ways. | Claim | Ineffective |
0d2b30e2fc05 | 0BDADA3AFF77 | Asking multiple people for advice make you help someone one day that needs advices in problems. | Claim | Adequate |
842870eb8e56 | 0BDADA3AFF77 | I feel like asking multiple people for advice can be important to you in so many ways like doing your homework, doing school work, driving a car, taking care of a baby, and so many other stuff that could help you in life for asking multiple people for advices. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
1495323ea9d8 | 0C06B988433C | Education is one of the fundamental pillars of a successful democracy and harmonious society. As such, it is of the utmost importance that America's education system be of the highest quality in order to foster the development of intelligent citizens. With the rapid advancement of new technology has come opportunities ... | Lead | Effective |
b934a1ec7ab9 | 0C06B988433C | In theory, being able to learn from the comfort of one's own home would benefit students greatly, but in practice, it gives way to lower academic achievement | Position | Effective |
b0b7255e561c | 0C06B988433C | many students benefit from the classroom environment, | Claim | Adequate |
0a19efec7ca5 | 0C06B988433C | not all students can be entrusted to work honestly from their homes. | Claim | Adequate |
ec767490b043 | 0C06B988433C | It would be a lie to say that online learning does not have its benefits: it can cater to the needs of students who don't have the means or time to go to class full-time. | Counterclaim | Effective |
03a731e9e83c | 0C06B988433C | These cases, however, are few and far between. The vast majority of students are perfectly capable of attending all of their classes, and allowing them to do otherwise only detracts from their learning experiences. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
a62560429c8d | 0C06B988433C | Research shows that there are three main types of learners: people who learn visually, audibly, and from experience and movement. At best, online learning caters to the former two, and at worst, it caters to none. | Evidence | Effective |
edbc964906db | 0C06B988433C | Classroom environments are successful because they are flexible in that teachers can alter their teaching styles to best suit the needs of their students. | Claim | Effective |
55da4642ac67 | 0C06B988433C | Online classes or video conferences are far less effective because their curriculum is rigid. There is no teacher to allow social interaction and connection with students, but instead a computer with no mind, no heart, and no ability to judge student performance and change its techniques for teaching accordingly. Onlin... | Evidence | Effective |
0fdb5349b08e | 0C06B988433C | The lack of a classroom setting or teacher can take away students' motivation to learn and can lead to habits that rely on cheating as a means of passing a class. | Claim | Effective |
d47c0a5bb066 | 0C06B988433C | The lack of a teacher's presence removes the student's feeling of accountability and students often do not put in the effort to learn the class material. Online courses enable students to take tests and quizzes from home, but many cheat or plagiarize material from the internet rather than doing their work honestly. In ... | Evidence | Effective |
a0cd3e2a4aab | 0C06B988433C | Enabling the use of online classes detracts from students' learning experiences and academic success. A class taken online is one not fully engaged in by students. It is educators' responsibility, however, rather than students, to ensure that dishonest conduct does not take place and that students are engaged in their ... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
80832a6dfb0f | 0C82FD59BA0B | Humans now live in a world where technology is accessed from all parts of the world. They are at a point where one does not need to be at the same place, or even country, to communicate. In some countries, a small number of businesses have even used technology to their advantage, and allow their workers to have the cho... | Lead | Effective |
bfbc8626ba25 | 0C82FD59BA0B | I believe students would not benefit attending classes from home | Position | Adequate |
2102bbbf008e | 0C82FD59BA0B | there would be a lack of adult supervision | Claim | Effective |
55047fe4d9fe | 0C82FD59BA0B | there won't be a hands on experience.
| Claim | Effective |
db6cc56c6f2c | 0C82FD59BA0B | If students chose the option to attend classes online, then there would be no adult or teacher to supervise them at home, allowing the chance for students to not get work done and cheat | Claim | Effective |
f3eff1f808b7 | 0C82FD59BA0B | Without a teacher, students can be easily distracted and may use the computer for innapropiate reasons instead of school work; consequently, students would not get any work done or gain any knowledge from the lesson | Evidence | Effective |
4b1202dbde8a | 0C82FD59BA0B | Another reason why teacher supervision is crucial for students is because of false integrity. Some students are responsible with their work, and can be trusted to not cheat; however, not all teens are the same when it comes to free will. Since there is no teacher to watch them, these students have the chance to cheat i... | Evidence | Effective |
eb40ff6a9ad6 | 0C82FD59BA0B | Students benefit a lot from participation and a hands on environment in the classroom, but online, you don't get the same experience | Claim | Effective |
276fa8382b2a | 0C82FD59BA0B | At home, a student has limited resources and won't be able to receive support and feedback from teachers and classmates. If a student takes a class online, there won't be any teacher to tell him or her what and how to do the work. And so if a student is stuck on what they're supposed to do, or if they did something inc... | Evidence | Effective |
204ce7e3ac8f | 0C82FD59BA0B | Another reason why students need to be hands on and physically present in a classroom is because teachers create activities such as group projects, to make learning easier to understand. At home, a student won't be able to participate in class activities, making them not as socially or mentally compatible with peers. S... | Evidence | Effective |
8c6f046b59a4 | 0C82FD59BA0B | Although some may argue that when a student takes classes online, parents can guide them through their child's lessons. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
c3e8ebdadb62 | 0C82FD59BA0B | They are wrong because parents aren't professionally trained, like teachers, to know what material their child needs to learn for one class, let alone seven classes. | Rebuttal | Effective |
a3d954fe5d46 | 0C82FD59BA0B | It would take time for parents to be taught how to properly teach to their children, and even if they can, they may not have the time to. Further more, most parents work at the same time school is in session; parents should not be depended on to home school every day and every week. Even if a parent can stay at home, t... | Evidence | Effective |
e5edd256140d | 0C82FD59BA0B | Due to the lack of a teacher presence and of participation in a classroom, I believe that teens would not benefit from receiving education from home. Without a teacher, who has been trained for years, a student cannot focus on his or her work, and can fall behind other teens who are the same age. And without a personal... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
603d45a73898 | 0C9DF15EB6EA | As a kid in school I do not think distance learning will benefit students, | Position | Adequate |
699dd0157ddd | 0C9DF15EB6EA | they will get off of task very easily, | Claim | Adequate |
bc1ef96d850e | 0C9DF15EB6EA | they won't have as many responsibility's, | Claim | Adequate |
fd61c6b6c90a | 0C9DF15EB6EA | their minds will not be on school work. | Claim | Adequate |
5ed4a3d161f0 | 0C9DF15EB6EA | Distance learning has some pros with it but it has more cons. In the end i do not believe it will benefit the students. | Evidence | Adequate |
1a1bd4144ad1 | 0C9DF15EB6EA | When I am in school and a teacher starts to lecture, I start to thinking or even go to sleep. | Evidence | Ineffective |
83db547dae32 | 0C9DF15EB6EA | By doing distance learning you as a student will not get to handle hands on stuff or go with then anywhere they go. | Claim | Adequate |
8fb44f0bf89d | 0C9DF15EB6EA | It would have to be hard to sit around and look at computer screen | Evidence | Adequate |
83c569b65f07 | 0C9DF15EB6EA | I know school can be not so fun and boring | Counterclaim | Adequate |
3a37c731897f | 0C9DF15EB6EA | I would rather be around friends, than by myself. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
6da4f26fc2c0 | 0C9DF15EB6EA | When you are going to school you have responsibility's. | Claim | Adequate |
b63aec91a153 | 0C9DF15EB6EA | Having taken distance learning you could get up when ever you would like, you could loose all your responsibilities.
For example, you have to get up on time, take a shower, change your clothes and be at school on time. Taken care of your self is a big thing. When it comes time for a job and you have to be at work at 8... | Evidence | Adequate |
17aa9f5bba5e | 0C9DF15EB6EA | If a student was to do the distance learning they will be cut short from after school actives. | Claim | Adequate |
1d4131f15659 | 0C9DF15EB6EA | For example, if you wish to play a sport you have to be at your home school for at least three classes. Taken a sport away from a kid is a bad idea. By taken sports away from kids can lead kids to go down the wrong road. | Evidence | Adequate |
ee0250880a12 | 0C9DF15EB6EA | With all of that being said I do not think the long distance will benefit kids. They will be lost, messed up, and mad. Kids learn people skills in school. Kids learn public speaking skills in school. Kids learn how to deal with responsibilities for them selves. School needs kids as well as kids need school. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
729cb7db2959 | 0D6F5D6E2E77 | How often are you seeking multiple opinions? If you are, is it helpful to you, or is it not? If you don't seek multiple opinions do you sometimes wish you did? Would you have made a better choice? People who tend to seek multiple opinions are more successful on what they are working on. | Lead | Adequate |
dbba6910e5df | 0D6F5D6E2E77 | Seeking multiple opinions can help people make better choices | Position | Adequate |
605a47e82d9f | 0D6F5D6E2E77 | you will get ideas from a different point of view | Claim | Adequate |
b94a4a39a8f5 | 0D6F5D6E2E77 | help you see multiple outcomes | Claim | Adequate |
cfc61c14108c | 0D6F5D6E2E77 | you will think in a more diverse way. | Claim | Adequate |
e58a6f9cce69 | 0D6F5D6E2E77 | seeking multiple ideas will help you make better choices because you will see ideas from a different point of view | Claim | Adequate |
c854903d1425 | 0D6F5D6E2E77 | seeking multiple ideas will help you think differently. For example, most students who don't look for multiple opinions just end up only seeing things one way and not being open minded. That being said, kids would normally just look for one opinion just to get what they are doing out of the way so they don't have to wo... | Evidence | Adequate |
1900144163d5 | 0D6F5D6E2E77 | seeking multiple opinions will help you make better choices by helping you see multiple outcomes | Claim | Adequate |
fa3b68a1076a | 0D6F5D6E2E77 | kids tend to just pick something and go with it and not think about there outcome, which can hurt them in the future. For example, kids who tend to not think about the outcome end up not knowing what they are getting themselves into. That being said, thinking about your outcome will help you become smarter and more str... | Evidence | Adequate |
c0925140b368 | 0D6F5D6E2E77 | seeking multiple opinions will help you make better choices by thinking in a more diverse way. | Claim | Adequate |
da0bdbfd3829 | 0D6F5D6E2E77 | thinking more diversely goes a long way, and will only help you farther on in life and almost never hurt you.
Also, thinking diversely will help you think in a different way which is very beneficial. That being said, thinking diversely will give you the best understanding of your task and what you are supposed to be d... | Evidence | Ineffective |
7d51f4e09f75 | 0D6F5D6E2E77 | seeking multiple opinions can help people make the best choices because, you will get thoughts from another point of view, help you see the most outcomes, and you will think in a very diverse way. next time you have something to think about I want you to think about seeking multiple outcomes and see if it helps you out... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
5aa06aec8972 | 0EA59AC549C4 | ADVICE!! | Lead | Ineffective |
7c1dbacfa3ce | 0EA59AC549C4 | People talk to more than one person for advice because they could have better options. The more options a person has a better way they could do something. | Position | Adequate |
2bd9797f95e8 | 0EA59AC549C4 | People from experience should have better advice then people that has not had the experience | Claim | Adequate |
66defd924399 | 0EA59AC549C4 | The more advice you get the better off you are more advice becomes into better ideas. Advice also can give you more ideas and bigger and better ideas.
| Claim | Adequate |
451f7d1fd088 | 0EA59AC549C4 | People from experience should have better advice then people that has not had the experience. The more experience someone has normally can give you good advice about the task.
When I need help with something I personally like to go talk to older people because they are the most likely to know how to do it and make it ... | Evidence | Adequate |
a7f389c03931 | 0EA59AC549C4 | I have asked people for advice for fixing a flat tire and I have asked multiple people for advice. Nobody seemed to know how to fix a flat without just buying a new tire. Then I asked my Grand-Pa for some advice and he said I have a perfect substance for this. He came out of the shed with some of this green stuff and h... | Evidence | Adequate |
7d6d37e2c901 | 0EA59AC549C4 | This is why I think you should ask more than one person for advice.
People from experience should have better advice then people that has not had the experience. The more advice you get the better off you are more advice becomes into better ideas. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
c04137cba19d | 0F13AFF35C0C | Why is it more beneficial to seek multiple opinions when making a decision? When people ask for advice, they are usually conflicted about something, or don't know what to do. The reason that one person asks for advice could be because they don't know what shoes to wear, or it could be because they need advice about som... | Lead | Effective |
0c62a989e42e | 0F13AFF35C0C | You shouldn't base your decision off of just one person's opinion, is because their opinion is very different than someone else's opinion.
| Position | Adequate |
a57b611bacfa | 0F13AFF35C0C | For example, if you were debating between which outfit you should wear, you would most likely ask for other people's opinions | Evidence | Adequate |
c0de8bb97962 | 0F13AFF35C0C | Seeking multiple people's opinion would be much more accurate and beneficial to you, because then you would have more than just one person's thoughts and opinions to base your decision off of. | Claim | Effective |
25187654ecf9 | 0F13AFF35C0C | You could ask one person for their advice on which outfit you should wear, and they would say one answer, and then you could ask for someone else's opinion on what outfit you should wear, and they could say a completely different answer. However, when you ask multiple people for their opinions, you are getting a much m... | Evidence | Effective |
1e9d9926822b | 0F13AFF35C0C | Another example of how seeking multiple people's advice can help you make a better decision is If you were debating whether or not to end a friendship. You would most likely want your other friends advice on what to do. Chances are you would go to multiple different friends and ask them for advice on what to do. If you... | Evidence | Effective |
1b6e0dd00356 | 0F13AFF35C0C | when you ask multiple friends for their opinion, you get to hear all their opinions, and have a reliable source to base your decision off of. | Claim | Adequate |
5b4a71469506 | 0F13AFF35C0C | when you are seeking advice, it is much more beneficial for you to seek multiple people's opinions instead of just one person's opinion. It is more accurate, beneficial, reliable, and shows you what the majority of people think. It also gives you a definite answer, instead of just one person's thoughts. It also stops y... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
163c1db7db32 | 0F62638EB677 | Being sick is a natural part of life, and one of the downsides to this is you miss school and work that needs to be done, but if a student could attend class from home that wouldnt be a worry any more. If a student gets behind in classes that student can become stressed and break down and become even more behind. Being... | Lead | Effective |
474ba8fc3a48 | 0F62638EB677 | Attending class from home is beneficial because | Position | Adequate |
2b86df0ba309 | 0F62638EB677 | it helps students stay caught up on work, | Claim | Adequate |
b58f61a6f5df | 0F62638EB677 | keeps a students grades from dropping too much or at all, | Claim | Adequate |
4bc43ce02ae4 | 0F62638EB677 | and to keep them up to speed with whats happening in class while they are away.
| Claim | Adequate |
a669bc3ad98f | 0F62638EB677 | Not being at school can hurt your grades but also your work load, and if ones work load gets increasingly bigger then ones stress gets bigger. For example Generic_Name stayed home today because he was not feeling his best, but while he was away his history class announced a huge project thats worth seventy percent of t... | Evidence | Effective |
8f18e0ea01df | 0F62638EB677 | Being able to attend class from home is a great way to help students remain caught up and to keep them from becoming too stressed out on amount of work.
| Claim | Effective |
3f1ca2c972d4 | 0F62638EB677 | If a students grades drop there can be consequences at home and at school, to prevent this a student can attend class online while he is away to make sure he doesnt miss anything important | Claim | Effective |
32fd7bd60c22 | 0F62638EB677 | Generic_Names grades dropped and his parents took away his gaming console and his phone to make sure he pulls his grades back up. Also he missed out on attending a class from home, for his school because he didnt have internet, and failed a test. his parents forced him to do online class to pull up his grades while on ... | Evidence | Effective |
49cf2aaf2978 | 0F62638EB677 | While students are away they can miss out on valuable information and notes, and can be left behind with nothing to look back on. Generic_Name was out sick while his math class took notes but he used the classes from home site to stay tuned with his class and was able to take notes with the rest of the class even when ... | Evidence | Effective |
06530c9e91b2 | 0F62638EB677 | Being proactive can also help in wanting to improve grades and then that person will attend classes at home while away to stay informed about any up and coming events/tests.
| Claim | Effective |
83b873c165bd | 0F62638EB677 | Classes from home can be the better way to go, as they keeps students caught up on the work the class is doing while one is away, it can keep a students grades from dropping too much, and can keep students informed about class while they are away. The class still goes on even when students are away so when a student ha... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
83910eb898c5 | 106394519512 | School is the last place a student wants to be in when they've experienced a couple of rough days or even weeks and home is the first place they think about when they need comfort or rest. Similarly, not all students are carbon copies. Different students require different paces regarding social life and acdemics. So wh... | Lead | Effective |
c0eae01d7cfb | 106394519512 | Students should have access to long distance learning where they will attend classes online and where they will study in a safe, familiar environment that they already perform better in as place they can focus. | Position | Effective |
aea9c9d509d1 | 106394519512 | Firstly, the internet and modern technology's first purpose is to make our lives better. | Claim | Effective |
6aa20479402a | 106394519512 | This is the direction the todays world is headed. Teachers loath the phrase "I forgot it at home." But with the ease of online classes, students will not be able to use the same excuses. Teachers also will not have to worry about misplaced papers when all of the materials will be conveniently saved online. | Evidence | Effective |
af3750705076 | 106394519512 | But some opponents believe students will inevitably take advantage of being online, where they are prone to the temptations of plagarism and where they can find the answer key to every worksheet they've ever been handed. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
a0a234aafdad | 106394519512 | But why would a student take advantage of the World Wide Web at home when they have all the time in the world to complete their assignments and where they already perform better on their homework? Stooping grades will become the first wake up call for students taking advantage of the ease of modern technology. | Rebuttal | Effective |
cef4f4d0fbaa | 106394519512 | Secondly, in favor of many parents and guardians, home is not only more comfortable for students, it is also much safer. | Claim | Effective |
2fc0ec4de8d7 | 106394519512 | Avoiding more traumatizing events of physical and verbal bullying on school grounds will significantly increase the child's chances of performing at their best in acedemic as well as extracurricular activities. Even with some efforts to erradicate the event of school shootings with metal detectors and other techniques,... | Evidence | Effective |
0200e3fabfcd | 106394519512 | Some opponents say a it is inevitable for a students social life to diminish when they do not have face-to-face contact with their teachers or peers. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
77dbb01b2b21 | 106394519512 | However, being at home more often will instinctively encourage students to venture out of their familiar environmnt and seek beneficial relationships with other students. The group video conferences that will be provided by online programs will give students the tools they need to interact with their teachers and have ... | Rebuttal | Effective |
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