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Another reason why asking multiple people for advice is good is that some people might give you more advice then others.
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Adequate
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A reason someone might not ask for advice might not want to get advice beacuse they might think it will make them look weak for asking for advice. A second reason someone might not ask for advice might be beacuse their nervous to ask. A third reason might be because they might won't have that much people they can ask f...
Counterclaim
Adequate
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When poeple ask for advice they might sometimes ask multiple people for advice. Thats good beacuse one person might have more advice then someone alse. Also someone might have better advice then the first person you asked or the second person you asked. Also asking more then one person for advice is good because some i...
Concluding Statement
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Distance Learning can be very beneficial in some aspects, but in others it can be very detrimental to kids and their families. If kids started taking more online classes it could ruin their high school experience. It can also cause them to become very anti-social with them being at home all of the time and not being at...
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Kids need to go to school
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have a good experience of high school before college,
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stay connected with friends so they do not feel left out when they try to speak with people in public
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succeed in getting a job for them to make money
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Kids can lose their high school experience if taking online classes.
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There will be no dances that are held for the students that take online classes and they will not be able to participate in regular after school activities. They won't have a homecoming or prom that they can get a date to because of this. This is one of the biggest parts of high school; being able to go to prom and hav...
Evidence
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This can also hurt students because of them not being in a classroom with other students; they can very easily become very anti-social, and not know how to communicate very well to others.
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They will not constantly have to talk to teachers or other classmates about work, or have to work on a project in a group, which can help them tremendously with people skills. They generally will not make friends or see any of their friends because of them being at home while their friends are at school, which can caus...
Evidence
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This is also just an important thing you need in life cause everything you do will require human interaction when you become an adult and try to get a job.
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If they can not speak and be comfortable how are they going to do an interview for someone they are trying to work for and probably have never seen before.
Evidence
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Although this can open many doors for students and their families
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They will be able to learn at their own pace and not have to try and keep up with the teachers while taking notes or doing work. They might learn better through taking an online course because of them being able to go slower than a teacher would. This can help students from being bullied because they are safe at home a...
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In conclusion, this can be very beneficial to kids because of not having to travel or walk anywhere to go to school, but it also can hurt the students futures, which they need because what they experience now; bad or good, will affect how they act and conduct themselves later. Online classes is something that can be ve...
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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When you are seeking for help, what do you do? You probably ask people. When I ask people for help I get lots of good answers.
Lead
Effective
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Asking for questions is better than staying quiet and not knowing.
Position
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hen you ask mulitiple people for help, you can get a wide variety of answers that will help answer your question.
Claim
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For example: When I had difficulty learning a unit in math, I asked multiple friends and got multiple answers that helped me learn it. Asking one person alone can get you answers but asking more people is better because maybe if you ask one, they could be wrong and all the others could be right. For example: I asked my...
Evidence
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Do you think it is important to seek out advice from more than one person?
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When found in a situation, many people ask others for their advice during the situation to very the outcome.
Evidence
Adequate
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If you ask more than one person for their advise or opinion on how to handle something, you will get multiple different answers.
Claim
Adequate
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That should make the situation easier to handle, because you can see how it might end if you choose a certain way to deal with it. Someone you ask for advice from might have been in the same situation you are in, and can help you handle it. But you won't know if they have been in the same situation if you don't ask mul...
Evidence
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Asking multiple people for advice can, help you with a delimia, get you different opinions from different standpoints on a situation, and can make sure you are making a wise decision instead of an impulsive one.
Position
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You have a job at a retail marketing company as the social media manager, making 13 dollars and hour, have only been working for them for 4 months, and is only a 15 minute drive from your house. But there is another job offer, it is also a retail market company, but you would handle finances, and get paid 22 dollars an...
Concluding Statement
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Have you ever wanted to get advice on something? So you went and asked some people for some advice, and you got various answers.
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Adequate
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When ever someone gets the same answer they know what to do, but when you get various answers you still know what to do
Claim
Adequate
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Getting multiple opinions could help someone
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get different ideas for something so they know if it's good advice or not.
Claim
Adequate
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When ever someone gets the same answer they know what to do, but when they get various answers they still know what to do
Claim
Adequate
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What that means is if you're looking for advice and you get various answers most of the answers may all be the same so you know what to do. Another reason is all of the answers in some way may link to form the same type of advice.
Evidence
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Getting multiple opinions could help someone get different ideas for something so they know if it's good advice or not.
Claim
Adequate
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If someone is looking for advice and they get multiple answers on what type of advice to take, they'll ask other people if it's good advice or not so they can narrow down if they want to take that advice or ask for better advice. Another way getting multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice is if they ar...
Evidence
Adequate
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getting multiple opinions can help people in many ways like when ever someone gets the same answer they know what to do, but when you get various answers you still know what to do. Getting multiple opinions could help someone get different ideas for something so they know if it's good advice or not.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Not all students are the same and their varied conditions may affect their opportunity to obtain an education. Distance learning is a new innovative technique that some schools implement to offer online education at home. This technique can be offered in many ways such as: online video, conferencing, and online courses...
Lead
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I think that students should be given the opportunity to obtain distance learning
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it can be very convenient for students who suffer from illnesses and can't attend school
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it allows students to work at their own pace
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it allows students to work when it is mostly convenient for them.
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Implementing distance learning can decrease the attendance issue most schools face.
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Students miss school due to many factors; One of the main reasons why students miss schools is due to illnesses. Students who deal with very severe illnesses such as cancer are forced to not attend school for long periods of time. Which can hinder the student's future. Even illnesses that aren't very severe can still n...
Evidence
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Distance learning also allows students to work at their own pace which can be an advantage to students;
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Specially to those who have learning disabilities. Teachers work at the same pace with every student. Which isn't helpful for students as their minds work differently and their comprehension levels vary. Some students learn slower than others and most teachers don't recognize that. With distance learning each student c...
Evidence
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Distance learning is very beneficial for students as they have the option to work when they are motivated and when it is convenient for them
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Most students attend school with less than 5 hours to sleep due to sleeping late because of homework. Students who have the opportunity to work from home don't have to wake up early. Distance learning allows students to do online courses when they are energized, which doesn't have to be in the morning. This can improve...
Evidence
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Overall students' conditions vary from student to student. Each student is unique in that they have different minds and thinking levels. Which is why i believe that distance learning is a very innovative and useful technique that should be provided by all schools as learning option for students. Distance learning provi...
Concluding Statement
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When needing advice due to a problem in life, people often go to someone to ask for advice and they generally go to multiple people to ask advice. For many people this can seem peculiar, going to multiple people for advice might seem point less to some, but when thought about, this method is a helpful way to make a bet...
Lead
Adequate
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By using the method of asking multiple people for advice, this could help someone make a better choice
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Adequate
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the person could see the problem from different perspectives,
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the person could get information that the other person asked didnt know,
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there is the off chance that the person could be getting biased advice from the person without knowing.
Claim
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asking for advice from multiple people is helpful and is recommended to many people when dealing with a problem where they can use some advice with a problem they are struggling with.
Claim
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sometimes a problem can only be solved when you take a step back and try to look at in a new way, and talking to multiple people concerning the topic can help someone do this. For example, say someone got into an argument with a friend after being offended by something the friend said, after they talked to multiple peo...
Evidence
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For example, in a 6rd grade class there was a boy who had trouble in history class, there was a history test on the following Friday, the boy was worried so he asked his best friend, Generic_Name what he should do, Generic_Name told him not to stress and that to study and he'll be fine. He trusted his friend's advice b...
Evidence
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For example, at lunch there was an argument between 4 friends about DC vs Marvel movies and a mutual friend of the 4 was forced to chose a side in the argument, the mutual friend had never seen a DC or Marvel movie and didnt know anything about them, she went to ask advice about which side to choose from one of her fri...
Evidence
Effective
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whether someone has a small problem like which franchise they support or if its a more intricate problem like a miss communication that could destroy a life long friendship, no matter how big or small the problem is asking advice is always something that helps and asking multiple people for advice could help make a bet...
Concluding Statement
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When receiving advice, the response you get will be different from everyone. This is because everyone views things from a different standpoint. Some people think it's best to keep their not so positive opinions to themselves, while other are going to share everything with you. It's important to have both these kinds of...
Lead
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You also might want to hear from multiple people, because everyone has a different style and opinion.
Position
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The examples I listed previously were very simple. Sometimes when you are in need of advice, the scenario is slightly more difficult to deal with. A lot of people deal with drama between peers. When these things occur, it's very helpful to have multiple friends whom you can talk to. It's hard to solve a problem when it...
Evidence
Adequate
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If you have an issue with a friend and you only ask for advice from one person, you're only getting one side of the story. If you ask for advice from multiple people, you are going to get many different sides of the story
Claim
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This is helpful because certain people may know things which you don't know. The way you view a person is probably different from the way your friend views a person and whether it's positive or negative it's important to listen to that opinion because they could effect your decision.
Evidence
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Another important detail is the age group you're talking to.
Claim
Adequate
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If you're talking to your parents they might give you different advice then a friend might give you. Generally, parents will be a little more comforting and give you good advice about not worrying too much about it, while a friend might know more about the person whom you're having issues with and give you more advice ...
Evidence
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seeking multiple opinions on a topic is always a good idea. Whether it's as simple as choosing an outfit, or as complicated as loosing a friend, theres always room for more advice. Receiving advice from many people is helpful in many ways and always works out better then getting advice from just one person. It can be h...
Concluding Statement
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When it comes to seeking advice, it is always good to look for different sources. It is very valuable to have opinions from other people that a person can lean on. It is common for people to ask others for things from simple, to complicated scenarios.
Position
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I believe looking for multiple opinions from different people when a person asks for advice to make a better decision is important because it could lead the person's mind up to more options
Claim
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it could lead the person to very opinionated or buyist thoughts
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could help take stress of the person when needing advice.
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Having different options when making a decision is very important because there are open choices that are good and bad. Every day people ask for advice whether it comes from finding what clothes to wear, to asking for advice if you should get married or not. That benefits a whole lot because sometimes all a person need...
Evidence
Adequate
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It can help if you have a friend or family member you can trust that has a strong opinion, because sometimes you need it. There is always going to be a couple or strong people in your life that's going to help you make right decisions either if you are going down the wrong road, or if you are doing the right thing in l...
Evidence
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It is hard at times when you are trying to do your best but you need help in doing the right thing. If a person didn't have someone role models or people to help with choosing the right things to do either growing up or in life, then they wouldn't know how to do anything but using their own way of thinking. A lot of st...
Evidence
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These were my reasons on how having advice and opinions from different people can definitely help a person out. All anyone needs in life is just a group of close people to be right by your side to help in life. I wish you enjoyed reading this and really could really understand how these reasons could help influence a ...
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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When my dad was being educated in the 80s and early 90s, he had only 1 practical option: attend school. Missing school, intentionally or not, meant quickly catching up on late work and, at the same time, keeping up with upcoming work as well; not ideal in the slightest.
Lead
Adequate
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But with almost 30 years of technology being developed since he was last in a classroom, you can theoretically instead do it online and cut out physical school entirely from your educational life. This development has potential to change education for the better of pretty much all of us.
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Recently, a virus known as Covid-19 has been threatening to have schools closed at the first sign of infection, but this is little to no problem with digital education.
Claim
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Teachers simply just post their assignments onto Google classroom and the students can be trusted to go through with said classwork as if they were present in school.
Evidence
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This could be an important step forward into fully online schooling. education of the past has gone through various phases as technology and civilization as a whole becomes more advanced; going from purely parental, to small single room schooling, to where it is now: large scale public schools. The problem now is that ...
Evidence
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The advent of long distance schooling could very well be the middle man to bridge the gap, as it's essentially the current system, but augmented with the digital age.
Claim
Effective
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There is an argument that, in some cases, this could be negating some of the things that public school taught students, being present as much as possible along with just simply not being what some students are able to handle.
Counterclaim
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But this can easily be disputed, as various jobs are also shifting towards being heavily online. Being physically present is being phased out in almost every profession that doesn't need it in 2020. As for comprehension, digital technology is extremely versatile; it can be bent and modified to any extent that a person ...
Rebuttal
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Now this isn't something as easily done in this in-between version we're talking about, but the virtual classroom of the possible future is more than up to the task; which is why it would also be important to have the evolution be steady but swift. Education really should only stick in the shifting phase for as long as...
Evidence
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Essentially, education is about to become exceedingly easier and more efficient than ever before (that's a lot of Es but hang in there). As long as it is made sure that the right steps are taken, schooling will no longer be bound by a location or time and arguably be the way that a new large-scale revolution can take p...
Concluding Statement
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Some people might be scared to ask for advice. They may feel ashamed of doing so.
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Despite this, I strongly believe that asking for advice will help to result in a better decision.
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by giving different points of view,
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allowing one to think about their decision,
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showing others you care .
Claim
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This results in being able to see how others actually feel. Someone else might see something in a totally different way then you see it. They might show something that is completely obvious that you never saw. Better ideology and reasons might be received as well. Doing so opens up new possibilities for different ideas...
Evidence
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This gives the person seeking advice more time to decide how they feel. Time is needed to make a good decision so taking your time is strongly advised. It can also result in more in depth thoughts. The end result will conclude in a better final decision with a better reason behind it.
Evidence
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Whether it is the person your asking or asking about, they will appreciate the thought. Not only will they feel appreciative, but they know that you care. They will feel involved with ones life. They also might ask for your advice one day knowing you asked them. Wanting someones opinion will prove to them that you care...
Evidence
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seeking advice is strongly advised. Asking for opinions is a quality many will never receive. Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice by giving different points of view, allowing one to think about their decision, and by showing others you care.
Concluding Statement
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Hi my name is Generic_Name and i am going to tell you why people ask you for advice and then ask multiple people for advice
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Some people ask for more than one advice to see maybe if they look good. Also they my need more than one person advice for clothes just to see if it is good or not. Also you know when you go to a store you ask some one if this glasses look good on me and then you ask some one elas for advice.
Evidence
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However some times asking multiple people for advice may not good.
Counterclaim
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This may not be good some times because if you ask a friend if you should do something you may not hear what you what and then you ask your other friend for advice and they say the same thing. Also this may be bad because the advice people give you may not be positive a may be negative. And this could bring you down.
Evidence
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However the advice other people give you may be positive and make you happy
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And this could also help because the more people that give you positive advice the more you will fell good about your self. And the more positive you are the more you will give positive advice.
Evidence
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if you ask multiple people for advice it could be good and it could be bad but it is still good to ask for mutiple advice.
Position
Adequate