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Interacting with people face to face is essential for maintaining not only a proper education, but mental health and social life as well. Interacting with teachers is crucial when students have trouble understanding a topic or lesson.
Claim
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In a classroom environment, teachers can easily explain the questions that students may have through visual demonstration. Take for example, my math class at school; when I have trouble understanding a topic in math, I ask the teacher. She then proceeds to demonstrate an example on the Promethean board, showing all the...
Evidence
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Another way distance learning isn't beneficial to students is that it provides no hands-on-learning activities.
Claim
Effective
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Hands-on-learning is an effective way of learning which makes lessons and concepts a lot more memorable. It's also necessary for science labs and projects. Last year in my AP Biology class, we frequently did labs, which helped me learn the material a lot better than the lectures did. An example would be when we dissect...
Evidence
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Aside from distance learning's lack of ability to provide face to face interactions and hands-on-learning, it also fails to allow students to experience an ideal college classroom setting.
Claim
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A majority of high school students plan to pursue higher levels of study in the future and attend college. Universities often have classroom settings for their lectures, and students will not be used to it if they have been studying from home for their high school years. A classroom setting and a household setting are ...
Evidence
Effective
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Although the idea of not attending school and staying at home all day is a dream for many students, it fails to serve the same benefits to students that regular classrooms do. When comparing distance learning to classroom settings, it can be seen that learning in classrooms is a much more beneficial option. Students wo...
Concluding Statement
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Sometimes when asking for advice, people talk to more than one person because it is difficult to get proper reassurance with only one person's opinion
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a person may favor somebody else's opinion, rather than the first person they asked,
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sometimes, others simply lack honesty.
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Many people like to see what others think about them, rather it be a new look, or needing guidance in a difficult situation.
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It is easier to be reassured by multiple people, rather than one, because a group of people is more likely to think of more different ideas, than an individual person. One person may tell somebody that they look good, or they did well at something, just because they wouldn't want to hurt that person's feelings. In cont...
Evidence
Adequate
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If somebody needs a quick response to their concern, they may ask a person near them, whether they deeply know the person, or don't know the person at all. Sometimes, in the moment, people need fast advice, although the advice may not necessarily be the best. This "fast advice" can make people feel better in the moment...
Evidence
Effective
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Trust is a big factor in terms of feeling safe. If a person doesn't trust somebody, they're not going to value or put much meaning to what that person tells them.
Evidence
Adequate
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Many people have been asked for their opinion, yet, they may not tell the truth. People have trouble telling the truth to people at times, simply because they worry that they may hurt that person's feelings. A lot of times, the thought process of the people that are lying is more along the lines of trying to be kind an...
Evidence
Effective
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If somebody asked only one person their opinion, it would be impossible to get a group's majority. As mentioned in the second paragraph, a majority of people can bring far more reassurance than one person. This can help somebody make better decisions, since there are other people that have examined the situation as the...
Concluding Statement
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Therefore, seeking advice from multiple people is a better way of guidance, and can lead people to make more effective decisions.        
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School provide Teaching to those Students that can not assist to School, How? , well so many students have many problems to arrive to School. One of them is that They do not count with Transportation and they live far away, or some students that have special cases
Lead
Adequate
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So Today some School give you the option to teach you from School.
Position
Ineffective
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You must have a computer or device that allow you communicate with schools, if not, you won't be able, The only way that you can learn from home it's internet, but at the same time there are people that can buy those resources.
Evidence
Adequate
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Study from home have pros and at the same time cons, pros are those can help you to learn the same themes that students learn at school,
Claim
Adequate
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also you get you degree and can Apply to colleges, but, there is the case that they won't have a healthy and normal life at college.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Learn from Home is that you can finish it in the time that you want it, you can spent your time as much you want and finish it ,
Claim
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but, what are you going to do after finish it?.
Evidence
Ineffective
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People that learn from home do not know what is converse with people around them,
Counterclaim
Adequate
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That is a big problem that can affect their life in future, They won't know where they at, or how talk with another person. That can be so stress, often they will feel exclude from their milieu.
Evidence
Adequate
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Learned from home could help you to skipped school and you won't have to wake up early but, is not going to be the same that a regular student got in a normal school, why?,
Counterclaim
Adequate
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because a normal student can talk and ask his doubts in issue of time. They have many resources that School can give you. If you are learning from home, you won't be able to ask and resolve your doubts, you will have to search by yourself and figure it out.
Evidence
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We can not forget that people that have special cases, well, that people have at the same time special programs that school offers,
Claim
Adequate
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some Schools are able to receive them and work with them at school, and other Schools can give you an option to work from your home, Those programs were designed only for people that born sick or have problems since born.
Evidence
Adequate
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If you don't want to go to School, you must have a reasonable excuse,
Claim
Ineffective
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because you have to apply for it, you can not decided that you're not going to School because you don't wan't it, and you want to learn from home. Specially from public school that request a letter and proofs that you can not assist to school, and then They will analyze your case.
Evidence
Ineffective
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Today you have the resource to learn from home, you should think about it, don not make mistakes that can affect your life in future. At least you have a special case. There are many solutions that can help you and you can triumph.   
Concluding Statement
Ineffective
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Seeking advice from multiple people will give you a sense of what other people think about the topic.
Claim
Effective
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Seeking answers from multiple people will give you more of an understanding about what is going on and what you should decide to do in order to produce a better outcome for you and for others. In order to make the right decision you need to be aware of how the majority of the people you ask view the topic. Asking quest...
Evidence
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There are many possible outcomes that could lead to bad things if you don't ask others' point of view on the topic.
Claim
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For example, a classmate named Generic_Name and I are having problems between ourselves. I do not know whether to apologize or to let the freindship die off. I ask ten people in my class about their opinion on Generic_Name. Nine out of the ten people think that Generic_Name has a very self loathing and snippy personali...
Evidence
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Asking multiple people's opinions can also be a great stradegy for the work environment.
Claim
Effective
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Getting advice from others at work can lead to multiple benefits. For example, I am working on a presentation for a new product, I ask my bosses whether or not they think it would be a good idea to implement a free fifty day trial. Eighty percent of my bosses deem it necessary to include a free fifty day trial. In the ...
Evidence
Effective
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you will always arrive at the best decision if you ask multiple people's opinions.
Position
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The best way to understand how the world works is to ask questions. Without questions we would still be living in caves with no electricity and wearing no clothes. "Two heads are always better than one", said the great Albert Einstein. Asking multiple opinions will produce a better outcome than just using you're knowle...
Concluding Statement
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all of us need some advise at some point in our life. We ask for advise to get through rough times, bad situations, and even life itself.
Position
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we all have fights in friendships,
Claim
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get into bad relationships,
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struggle in school.
Claim
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They can happen because both of you could like the same handsome and popular boy in school. Fights with your friends can even happen with liitle things like a disagreement and start to fight over that. It happens it's part of life. Another example is you not going to their birthday party last year and you both stop tal...
Evidence
Ineffective
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To all of the girls out there we all get into bad relationships. I can tell you I have had many of them in my life. We all fall for that cute,pretty, and sinister smile on their face. I have seen it so many times it's unreal to belive that once we say yes we fall into their plan to take our hearts and just tear them to...
Evidence
Ineffective
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It's like you try and it's not enough to power through the year you are there. I have been there so many times that I can't count. I struggled in math so much I wasn't passing in that class. It was so hard for me to where I had melt downs and called me stupid and dumb. I was at the point to where I wanted to just give ...
Evidence
Adequate
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all of us have our bad and good days and that's okay. We all find away to push forward and get through it together. As I said in the beginning we all ask for advise because we all have fights in friendships,get into bad relationships,and even struggle in school.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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This is about if i suport students atending class online at home?
Lead
Adequate
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i think that yes if they put their mind to it.
Position
Adequate
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And i think if they want to pass all their grades if they are doing school at home and they really want to do it then yes If they do the all their sentens well and all their paragh well.
Evidence
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Aslo i think that if they are home schooled that they might do the work when they want to do it
Claim
Adequate
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some of them will not care about it and some might just forgetand outher will say they will do it latter.
Evidence
Adequate
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Sometime the mom/dad dose not help the student
Claim
Adequate
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most of the time the student want to do home school and want to pass then yes it depends on the student. when any student dose school at home they will often not do the work they aslo dont learn all the things the the school teaches they learn what the mom/dad knows.
Evidence
Adequate
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I will say i suport it but i also dont suport becuas like i said most kids dont do the work but also some do the work.
Claim
Ineffective
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most kids when they are home schooled the mom/dad send them to school becuas they dont know what elas to teach them some just do it just to get school over with and when the mom/dad send them to school they some times llike but they aslo end up droping out of school.
Evidence
Adequate
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Most student do benift from atending class at home but if they put their mind to it and do the work some time they learn like that becuas theirs no one that bothers them they do the work at their own speed on what they know. most student come to school when they are home school they dont know most of the things that t...
Evidence
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im sure that students benefitfrom home school
Claim
Adequate
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some take colleg class at home some start their corears but taking online class at home or some just do the things/follow the step their perent.
Evidence
Adequate
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sometime when they are home schooled they have to go to school
Claim
Adequate
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they have family problems or beacuas they just dont like being home scholled no more beacuas they want to do more things they wan tot learn more beacuas they feel like they are not learing the thing that they are learnig at home.
Evidence
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The things they learn some times aint right if they are learnig it frome their mom/dad if they are not doing the class online. But i think if they are doing the online class doing what they have to do to know what they want to be in life get thru all the the online class.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Due to the rise in technology, schools around the globe have started to switch to a new style of learning through online and digital classes. These classes allow students to stay at home and still have the ability to get lessons and teachings from school. These online classes also have the capability to conference with...
Lead
Adequate
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I believe this type of technology is very useful and will be beneficial to children around the globe
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Effective
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it allows students to have more free time to do what they want,
Claim
Adequate
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lets them have a distraction-less,
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safer environment to work.
Claim
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The ability for children and teens to have online classes would be very beneficial because allows students to be at home, letting them have more time to act on their other interests.
Claim
Effective
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At school students spend a lot of unneeded time either walking around or doing extra things that may be needed for their studies, outside of their main classes. When students have the ability to stay at home this offers a lot of this down time to be spent working on projects of their interest or improving on their abil...
Evidence
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Another reason for online schooling being beneficial for students is that it keeps the student safer.
Claim
Adequate
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The student away from sicknesses that may be spread due to the mass amount of people in a school. Staying at home and learning keeps these students away from any harmful sicknesses that may be caught at school. This may be very helpful for people that are more prone to sickness or have weak immune systems because it ke...
Evidence
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The ability for these people to stay at home also causes them to be less distracted from the thoughts of getting sick and letting them stay focused on learning.
Claim
Effective
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Due to the rise in school shootings around the country, this ability to learn online keeps these students and parents safe from this fear. Students staying at home, allows the distraction of an intruder coming into the school to be exterminated and once again lets them focus on learning. Being safer is one reason why o...
Evidence
Effective
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Although online learning would be a very beneficial to students, people who learn at home will lack some communication skills that would be needed later in life.
Counterclaim
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Students in school are forced to interact and learn how to communicate with one another while in school. Students who learn at home do not get the opportunity to see other people on a daily basis and learn things certain skills like how to talk to certain people and when to talk. This skill will be very important later...
Evidence
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To go along with talking to others, these online learners will not get the same high school experience of that of their peers.
Counterclaim
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From things like pep rallies, high school football games, and dances, online learners will not be able to participate in these things when learning from home. Without this constant lack of communication students get at school, these online learners will also not have the experience to make as many friends.
Evidence
Adequate
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Even though their are many benefits to having online schooling, not being able to associate with people from all walks of life is a major disadvantage to it.
Counterclaim
Effective
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Online schooling is a recent form of schooling which allows students to be at home and learn the same information as students at school. The use of online school is certainly going to increase in size as new ideas and thoughts begin to approach. Even though this online school may change the way the worlds schooling has...
Concluding Statement
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I think that seeking multiple opinions is the best choice for someone to make their own decision.
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They will have more opinions to be influenced by,
Claim
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they could have advantages and disadvantages about thinking of other people's opinions,
Claim
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they could get more opinions from trusted adults who could have the same similarities.
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Seeking multiple opinions will help them decide which opinions they would prefer to help them pick from. This person could have a number of options to decide from so that they will get more ideas for the advice they could recieve. Asking for advice from one person is not a very good way for getting opinions, because th...
Evidence
Effective
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They might not think that a lot of people have the best opinions for them but they can figure out which options they can pick out of a whole bunch. When they ask people for advice, they could get a number of good or bad reasons that they must choose from so that they can decide which ones they approve of the most. It m...
Evidence
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Different people will have different ideas and options from their perspectives on different kinds of things. It is best to decide whether or not they have the same opinions or ideas, to see if they could bond to make new decisions. Everyone that that person picks from to get advice, could have the same opinions as othe...
Evidence
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In conclusion, I think that seeking multiple opinions is the best choice for someone to make their own decision. Asking for advice from multiple people is the best option because you get more opinions to choose from different kinds of people. Seeking multiple opinions can help the person see what other people think of ...
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Have you ever had a hard choice to make and needed a lot of advice? Is it easier to just listen to one person's opinion or many?
Lead
Adequate
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Seeking multiple opinions for advice can help you greatly when you need to make a decision.
Position
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It helps to hear from people who hold different perspectives and beliefs,
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have different experiences,
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many different opinions.
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by listening to just one person, you may only get that one person's opinion about what he or she believes is right. It is important to listen to what many others have to say in order to make the best decision for yourself. Recently, I got a bad grade on a math test. My grade hadn't gone below a 98% in Algebra so far. T...
Evidence
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when preparing to go into 8th grade, I couldn't decide which elective class I should take. I narrowed the decision down to either Art or Tech Ed. I didn't know what to do, so I asked all three of my older sisters who had recently gone through Generic_School, the school that I was currently at. One of my sisters said sh...
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It is important to listen to others opinions so you can form your own. Humans can do so much more when they put their minds together. Getting many perspectives from other people and putting them together to form the best decision is the best way to do it. It is imperative that your choice reflects what many people say,...
Evidence
Adequate
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seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice. There are many different opinions out there. People look at things differently and have different beliefs, and everybody doesn't have the same experiences. Even on just little things like retaking a test or figuring out your courses for the upcoming year....
Concluding Statement
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Do you want to know the best way to get help and make the best choice for yourself? All you need to do is get viewpoints from multiple people, and ask for their differing opinions. Why is this the best thing for you to do?
Lead
Effective
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Getting multiple opinion is a good thing.
Position
Adequate