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ae6a492a979b | 45AE96545D1A | Before making a decision, if you are given bad advice you have the opportunity to hear other opinions and correct the mistake. It can also help if you are given a bad opinion and have other input to help you realize which is the best option. Plus, when given multiple opinions you will allways have other advice to fall ... | Evidence | Effective |
acc4f11230b2 | 45AE96545D1A | seeking multiple opinions on an issue can help you find the best choice in someones situation. It can confirm the best option or even help rule out the bad ones. Any way you put it, asking multiple people's opinions is way more likely to help someone make a better choice than just one person's opinion. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
c634c5bbfc96 | 45D156498F73 | Have you ever needed advice? I know I have needed advice many times in my life. Everyone needs advice to make better choices. There is no one who can always make the right choice | Lead | Adequate |
2f621cc55013 | 45D156498F73 | Seeking multiple opinions will help you make better choices | Position | Adequate |
f4f20de693bf | 45D156498F73 | everyone has a different opinion | Claim | Adequate |
d17b3a876b95 | 45D156498F73 | you can compare different opinions | Claim | Adequate |
e6e3b673fd0a | 45D156498F73 | some people have more experience than you. | Claim | Adequate |
23d3782a3360 | 45D156498F73 | Everyone has a different opinion. | Claim | Adequate |
d077ca55fdf8 | 45D156498F73 | That is one of the reasons why you should seek multiple opinions when making a choice. This is very important if you want to make the best decision. If you don't seek other opinions, you'll only consider your point of view. Your point of view may not always be the best point of view. | Evidence | Adequate |
e9bda7eabca3 | 45D156498F73 | After considering multiple opinions, you have different point of views or opinions. Now, you can compare those opinions to each other. | Claim | Adequate |
1d4c626cc2b5 | 45D156498F73 | Out of those opinions, you should narrow those opinions down to just a few. Then, you should compare the other opinions to yours. After that, you can make a better decision. | Evidence | Ineffective |
7e4d817da682 | 45D156498F73 | some people have more experience than you in certain areas. | Claim | Adequate |
8489535ebf47 | 45D156498F73 | Some people probably had to make the same choice you are currently about to make. They may have made a bad decision and can give you suggestions on the best choice for you. You will then have more than enough knowledge before you make your decision. This will help you make the best choice. | Evidence | Adequate |
3edcdeb8ff7e | 45D156498F73 | there are many important decisions you have to make in life. In order to make the best choice, you should consider many opinions. I say this because some people have more experience than you, everyone has a different opinion, and you can compare those opinions. Your point of view is not always going to be the best poin... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
2035d42d45fa | 46B92194BDB8 | Knowledge is power. Without it there can be no inventors, innovators, leaders, or progression of society as a whole. This concept is the purpose of education, the transmission of knowledge. Educating the younger generations is a major aspect of modern society. It is crucial for the progression of the human race. Howeve... | Lead | Effective |
56d3b07d9bce | 46B92194BDB8 | Online education will benefit students much less than in class sessions by decreasing learning quality through ineffective education methods. | Position | Effective |
1716ba8d48a9 | 46B92194BDB8 | Lack of structure that comes with attending class from home will lead to an increase in procrastination among students which in turn will decrease their quality of learning. | Claim | Effective |
5da3b4be8bf8 | 46B92194BDB8 | Five day school weeks with consistent schedules provide students with some sort of structure to their education. Without a schedule assisting students with time management, they become accountable for their own learning. This is an issue because most adolescents don't have a passion for knowledge or simply do not know ... | Evidence | Effective |
c57041e3159c | 46B92194BDB8 | For the students who find some importance in education, it will be difficult to engage in effective communication without physical interaction with the educator which may increase confusion and lower learning quality. | Claim | Effective |
8e89010d19ae | 46B92194BDB8 | Student and teacher interactions in person can develop connections and a sense of trust that will help students better understand the concepts that specific teacher is teaching them. Online classrooms put a physical barrier between teachers and students which prevent any of these interactions. For example, my chemistry... | Evidence | Effective |
46b2619bc0fd | 46B92194BDB8 | Social interactions and collaboration with peers is a beneficial learning aspect that cannot be accessed at home. | Claim | Effective |
82642a69995a | 46B92194BDB8 | The classroom provides a social setting for students to work with each other, ask each other questions, and create connections that one otherwise could not at home. Class with friends makes education just a little more enjoyable. It is the slightest incentive for students to come to school with a smile on their face. I... | Evidence | Effective |
b8fe5170ad58 | 46B92194BDB8 |
The school system provides the adolescent generations with a structured path to developing knowledge as well as connections with fellow students and teachers that will greatly benefit them on their journey. Introducing online classrooms into education breaks the structure and neglects these important aspects to develo... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
f6460cba240b | 4790D181C8D5 | From the time we were young children, like around the age of five, we were brought up that school was a necessity and that we had to go. Me, being a black girl and all,my parents always reminded me that my assessors fought for us to go to school: "And you have no right not to go". Up until 2017 all we ever knew was tha... | Lead | Effective |
e94147d1189f | 4790D181C8D5 | Allowing students to attend classes from home is a big mistake | Position | Adequate |
b64609affb36 | 4790D181C8D5 | because it'll make cheating more frequent, | Claim | Adequate |
973766e05e74 | 4790D181C8D5 | it deprives students of a teacher forcing them to teach themselves, | Claim | Adequate |
56bf356d32f1 | 4790D181C8D5 | it prevents them from obtaining social skills. | Claim | Adequate |
1ddf640e3dc6 | 4790D181C8D5 | School is about educating yourself, so you can take on the great big world. When students decide to do distance learning, they take on the decision to learn everything themselves. Yes there are plenty of online videos and teachers you can watch in order to learn the information needed for testing, but who's to say that... | Evidence | Effective |
a40ffb22414c | 4790D181C8D5 | Without teachers life is hard, and educating yourself will deprive you of the learning experiences like the ones that I encountered. | Claim | Effective |
cc696fd37493 | 4790D181C8D5 | Having children to complete all assignments at home is very dangerous. Especially when they're left to test on their own. When left to test during distance learning there's nobody around to check whether you're actually learning the information or not. You could easily cheat on an at home test and not even know what yo... | Evidence | Effective |
fbe96ce292bc | 4790D181C8D5 | the students partaking in this at home learning are depriving themselves of their learning abilities, this time by cheating. | Claim | Adequate |
0792130902c1 | 4790D181C8D5 | Cheating is never good, we learned that in school, and it gets you nowhere in life. At home distance learning opens the idea that it's fine to cheat when no one is watching. Do we really want the people that will soon lead this country to think that it isn't a big deal to cheat? | Evidence | Effective |
d8dc22c38edd | 4790D181C8D5 | Adult figures, parents more than likely, had always made it clear that school is for work and not to socialize with friends. Well, I know mine did. My mom used to always get upset when she'd get an email home stating that I, Generic_Name, was being very talkative in class today. Besides the point, school made me become... | Evidence | Effective |
604e09c99fe1 | 4790D181C8D5 | Without socializing and interacting with other students at school I would've still been lost or undecided in what I would like to do for my future. | Claim | Effective |
6c2203d46083 | 4790D181C8D5 | At first I was a shy little girl, but very talkative with only the people I knew personally. School taught me social skills at a very young age which allowed me to be comfortable around others, and it opened me up to be inviting to people I don't even know. See, children benefit off of public schools, but at home dista... | Evidence | Effective |
3cf4b9ad0c40 | 4790D181C8D5 | Some may say that distance learning is way more beneficial than public schools because you can learn at your own pace, you dont have to deal with any distractions, and it keeps you safe. While that may be true | Counterclaim | Effective |
826905e6b685 | 4790D181C8D5 | distance learning can still cause major problems when you actually look at it. Home schooling, distance learning or whatever you want to call it is really allowing are kids to be lazy when it comes to learning. We are literally giving our kids a crutch right before our eyes and we don't even see it. | Rebuttal | Effective |
7ba9e1ff82cf | 4790D181C8D5 | Children need to stay in public schools and not participate in the at home distance learning. It isn't helping, nor benefiting the children of today's time. These we'll soon become the leaders of society. We need them woke an able to stand on their own two feet without this crutch that we're giving them, and to do that... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
71865127bbe8 | 487739AC4B1E | In 2002, a study showed that only 23% of Americans asked more than one person when seeking advice. However, asking more than one person for advice may get you different answers because people have gone through different experiences. They most likely had different outcomes, some good and others bad. | Lead | Adequate |
b1378a73e35d | 487739AC4B1E | Asking multiple people for their opinions can improve your knowledge | Position | Effective |
0eee87a07fc7 | 487739AC4B1E | people have gone through different experiences, | Claim | Effective |
5e65e078dd3c | 487739AC4B1E | the elderly has lived through history, | Claim | Effective |
1dee082b1c97 | 487739AC4B1E | even if people aren't there your peers post blogs and websites online. | Claim | Effective |
f6711317b7ca | 487739AC4B1E | When I was little, my mother told me a story her parents told her when she was my age. It started out with my grandma, Generic_Name, being about twelve years old and not knowing what to do. She needed advice. My grandmother decided her best option was to ask multiple people and see what they had to say. Initially, she ... | Evidence | Effective |
dfbf075b00d2 | 487739AC4B1E | an author once said, "Treat your elders with respect as they are older and wiser." The elderly has gone through going to school but while that happened and they were growing up they also lived through wars, poverty, some may have kids or even grandkids, and over the past about twenty or so years new ages/generations, a... | Evidence | Adequate |
0c40d406aa4c | 487739AC4B1E | About two years ago my best friend, Generic_Name, called me and told me to come over as soon as I could. Not knowing what any of this was about, I rushed over there and she said she needed to talk. I listened while she told me this sad story about Generic_Name, her sixteen year old cousin, who was now pregnant. She con... | Evidence | Effective |
fc5dc68f761a | 487739AC4B1E | when you ask more than one person for advice it can better your understanding because people have had different outcomes with similar experiences, your elders are wiser and can be another option for giving advice, and if you do not have people to support you and give you advice, people in your community and around the ... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
faba010dfa5b | 488DEE769EEF | Why is the world the way it is? Is it this way because one person had one idea that the rest of the world followed or is it this way because multiple people have collaborated and asked for advice overtime? Throughout history many people have come together and shared ideas that have changed the world. For example, many ... | Lead | Effective |
f3577f221f18 | 488DEE769EEF | Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better decision or plan | Position | Effective |
3b7f31193dc9 | 488DEE769EEF | more points of view will be provided | Claim | Effective |
f835c4bd886e | 488DEE769EEF | less mistakes will be made. | Claim | Effective |
5bb9ed81f0c8 | 488DEE769EEF | when a student is choosing electives for school they might ask their parents if they are making the right decisions. Children and adults have very different perspectives, so the student's parents would most likely give different ideas then the student had thought of. | Evidence | Adequate |
eb149ac6950d | 488DEE769EEF | Although people sharing ideas from different perspectives can sometimes lead to disputes and arguments, | Counterclaim | Effective |
71ccc5fa869a | 488DEE769EEF | most people asking for advice have open minds and are willing to listen to different thoughts. | Rebuttal | Effective |
230a1930b3cc | 488DEE769EEF | People often overlook important details while creating an idea or making a choice, but when they ask for advice the people they ask can help them identify their flaw. For example, when people are planning a party they might forget to choose the kind of cake they are going to buy. When they ask a peer for advice their p... | Evidence | Effective |
f236de5c0035 | 488DEE769EEF | In order to make the best decisions possible, mankind must learn to ask for advice from others. Asking for advice can help change the world in a positive way because the decisions people make will most likely have a good outcome for the community around them. Seeking advice before making choices and plans is very impor... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
d98c2b49f116 | 48B6B42AF44E | Schools provide students with an interactive and effective institution to learn and develop social skills. And while, as an individual becomes older and the material being taught becomes more complex, school can be difficult to keep up with, an increased workload and higher stress levels are an unavoidable part of life... | Lead | Adequate |
94ea0de84d3c | 48B6B42AF44E | Students benefit from the face to face interactions they receive from teachers and peers in school, as well as the guidance it provides them with as they slowly move into their adult lives. | Position | Effective |
960a73e02309 | 48B6B42AF44E | Many students dislike school because of the unnecessary and excessive stress they say it creates, | Counterclaim | Effective |
5660f5babdba | 48B6B42AF44E | however, whether it be online or in person, stress is something you cannot escape. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
79628f3f83c6 | 48B6B42AF44E | Online schooling will not eliminate a students workload which is a main contributor when it comes to stressed out students, and while it may decrease their workload, once they enter college they may then not know how to manage their assignments properly. | Evidence | Effective |
aadbbc9154a8 | 48B6B42AF44E | Society also places high expectations on students to excel in grade school so they can get into top colleges and be set to live successful and fulfilling lives when they enter the work force. These expectations do not change for students who participate in online schooling so the pressure they feel to succeed is not le... | Evidence | Effective |
1e9ff02788ae | 48B6B42AF44E | Although learning from the comfort of their own home may seem appealing to students, being educated through a screen is not as beneficial as the real life interactions that occur inside schools | Claim | Effective |
771b195cb497 | 48B6B42AF44E | When in school, students have the opportunity to socialize and create bonds with other students and teachers, however, when learning online they miss out on an essential part of growing up and developing social skills. Human beings are naturally social creatures and sitting at home in isolation most weekdays is not hea... | Evidence | Effective |
a8098b445626 | 48B6B42AF44E | Students need the structure and interactive environment that public schooling provides, as it is an essential part of their character development and prepares them for their adult lives. Although the stress of grade school can be hard to manage, especially as you become older, switching to online schooling will not eli... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
4a438989548a | 4967076F4E7F | I don't think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. | Position | Adequate |
140961b96a49 | 4967076F4E7F | Because when students coming home, they need to do the homework first. | Claim | Adequate |
76b7fde76375 | 4967076F4E7F | Maybe that's day some people have a lot of homework so they couldn't attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. If they could open some video of online then I think some students can''t watching whole video. Because when I finish my homework, I feeling so tired and I just want go to my bedroom or ... | Evidence | Adequate |
22a71a1ae565 | 4967076F4E7F | Some parent want my son or daughter go to the bedroom early. | Claim | Adequate |
cf148bd7d24b | 4967076F4E7F | Because parent can control them easy, example like some students will say I still do home work on the Laptop, but they playing game with friends. The best way is for students go to sleep early. If your might for students sleep early, It really good for eyes and healthy because one young people can sleeping enough eight... | Evidence | Adequate |
9f8fca5e3ca9 | 4967076F4E7F | I think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home is not good. Because when parents coming home, they need talking, do something or have a dinner with family. | Claim | Adequate |
f5dd24681f5f | 4967076F4E7F | It's will be better you do a lot homework. If you have dinner every night, you will have a lot of conversation with your wife or daughter, Since you will be know what your family want and your sentiment with family will be better and better.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
1391751c279c | 4967076F4E7F | When students learning online or video at home, maybe they don't understand what video say and if they have a question, what teachers they will ask ? | Claim | Adequate |
b49bbea7d390 | 4967076F4E7F | And if everybody have a question to asked teachers, the teachers can't responded the question too much for students. If students waiting for tomorrow go to school, maybe students will be forgot the question they want ask right now. | Evidence | Adequate |
12c240e4a121 | 4967076F4E7F | I think students need learning at school better learning at home. Because one people one idea, that's mean have a lot of answers your guess and you will be know the best the answers from teacher. It'll be helping you how to do work team. Work team so important with students because in your future, labor need you know h... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
465909501652 | 49D702493C91 | There is immense appeal to being able to spend the day at home and learn from the comforts of your living space while the alternative is being inside of a school building for seven long hours. Some schools have started to offer online classes or options for students to learn from the comfort of their homes. While this ... | Lead | Effective |
5e593da1a0c7 | 49D702493C91 | Further implementation of these online classes by schools would benefit students | Position | Effective |
d83670cf94bb | 49D702493C91 | due to the benefits for busy parents | Claim | Effective |
01e68f58194d | 49D702493C91 | an increased ability for students to learn and work at their own pace | Claim | Effective |
cd9b52654f67 | 49D702493C91 | accomodations for students to not fall behind or infect others while sick.
| Claim | Effective |
81edc69acdaa | 49D702493C91 | Children of certain ages and within certain family situations would benefit greatly from being able to learn from home and help their parents with household duties or other siblings. | Claim | Effective |
20c32262e67f | 49D702493C91 | In lower income households or single parent households with young children, it can be incredibly taxing to work the appropriate hours to support the family while dealing with watching young children, especially if childcare is too expensive. With online schooling options, older siblings would be able to stay at home, g... | Evidence | Effective |
ebb1842ad0fc | 49D702493C91 | However, some children from low income households depend on the school to provide meals for the children, so not physically attending school could have some serious detriment depending on the particular living situation of the child. | Counterclaim | Effective |
f7e15c2bb9d4 | 49D702493C91 | Additionally, the implementation of online classes would enable children to work at their own pace and consequently maximize their own learning. | Claim | Effective |
ce254e30f252 | 49D702493C91 | In a system which would allow for the child to budget their own time from the comfort of their own home on schoolwork would enable the child put in the appropriate time which they need rather than spending too little or too much time on a particular subject or assignment. With the online classes only being an option, t... | Evidence | Effective |
736a7a251837 | 49D702493C91 | Online schooling would certainly work best for some students, but it would be more detrimental for the learning of others due to the diversity in the ways in which we learn.
| Counterclaim | Effective |
4479d7fa0309 | 49D702493C91 | Most significantly, the implementation of online classes would enable children to continue learning while sick and to not fall behind in their classes. | Claim | Effective |
5ff698867739 | 49D702493C91 | Attending school while sick is something which schools attempt to prevent and discourage, but the pressure to do well in school and the great workload make it close to impossible to miss school days without that greatly impacting your grade. In turn, the negative impact upon grades and having an insurmountable quantity... | Evidence | Effective |
f83a887b5663 | 49D702493C91 | In today's modern age with widespread technology use pervading every aspect of our lives, the decision to offer online classes should come as an easy one in order to accomodate students and promote greater learning. By offering online class options, schools would be helping out an important group of parents, allowing s... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
068222fcc938 | 49DA281C7585 | I agree because this can help some student, for example some student have diffulty for to learning, maybe more activity can help the student, i gonna go give to you my example. | Position | Adequate |
e3f02eed7df0 | 49DA281C7585 | im brazilian and i see many videos for to learing more my ingles and this help me so much | Claim | Adequate |
23d4da8723f6 | 49DA281C7585 | i have class in the school but i study in my house, i know many people that learning ingles in the home.
i have a friend from brazil him never go to the school in the america and him work to translator and him to receive 1.000 dolares for week, him to learning ingles study in home, whating videos and practice study th... | Evidence | Adequate |
4cab1611ae2b | 49DA281C7585 | Some people can not like this idea because some people this not help they , maybe they student no leaening online or whating the videos . | Counterclaim | Adequate |
cbf0a53a2280 | 49DA281C7585 | i think this can help they because we need to try new things for make different this in the school, maybe make cool activity.
| Rebuttal | Adequate |
f2be761c5f37 | 49DA281C7585 | my friend its nspire me the want to study in my home because i want being architect but i need to strain. | Evidence | Ineffective |
91950ccc99fc | 49DA281C7585 | some people need to try new things, becase if we no try new things we can not know to leave they try, because the life its feat of new experiment. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
cb8f96ff8142 | 4A292725EE82 | Getting advice from multiple people can be unnecessary or vital depending on how severe the issue is, and not a lot of people see the part where it's important to get advice from several different people. Many people just think that they should get advice from one person, or even just get advice from himself/herself. B... | Lead | Effective |
ac1497ca613d | 4A292725EE82 | Sometimes, you need to have multiple people to help solve the puzzle. | Position | Effective |
58cb1b5655f8 | 4A292725EE82 | there are opportunities to get help in other ways, | Claim | Effective |
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