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52b7b3c5c1bc | 4A292725EE82 | different solutions, | Claim | Effective |
65d49cba0acf | 4A292725EE82 | a chance to ask someone who has experience with the problem for advice. | Claim | Effective |
d693cab0c7aa | 4A292725EE82 | This can come in a few forms, depending on what the problem is and what is needed. It can be hands-on help with the issue, guidance to another person that can help more, or even as simple as some encouraging words, any of those can help solve a problem. For example, person one goes to person two and says, "Can you give... | Evidence | Effective |
4d6620485e3b | 4A292725EE82 | If someone were to ask one hundred different people what their favorite food is, they would probably get 100 different answers. This can be applied to advice because, if someone were to ask several different people for advice, they could get completely different advice from different people, and, chances are, some of t... | Evidence | Effective |
a3fc20b8c909 | 4A292725EE82 | This is beneficial because, of course, past experience with the problem can lead to better advice than advice from someone that has never faced the problem. For example, person one, once again, is having trouble with the cursed car, so person one goes to person two, person three, person four, person five, person six, a... | Evidence | Effective |
b5e6c50e2fa8 | 4A292725EE82 | seeking advice from multiple people can be extremely useful for a multitude of problems. From fixing a car that can't seem to stay fixed to not knowing who to vote for, multiple people giving advice can help a lot. The President of the United States has the cabinet, which is a group of people dedicated to giving the pr... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
82b33eb7435a | 4B201D2C2152 | Talking to three people will help anybody with something they cant decide on. If somebody says one thing and then you say another. The only solution is to only get help from one other person. So that you could have three including yourself. | Lead | Adequate |
e94f37e0411e | 4B201D2C2152 | Their is no reason to have only ask one person something because when anyone ask three people something, its bound to have a answer because its three people and there is an odd number of people. | Position | Adequate |
4446cab30009 | 4B201D2C2152 | Studies have shown, when anybody ask more than one person a for advice then it gets solved quickly. | Claim | Adequate |
d796205602b9 | 4B201D2C2152 | Whenever there is two people and they gives you advice that you disagree with. All everyone should do is just ask one more person for advice. After that then you will finally know just side with the person that likes your idea. The next time you you want advice from one person remember this.
One person is greater than... | Evidence | Adequate |
e426ef2140f9 | 4B201D2C2152 | Okay when you talk to one person then it could be helpful to take advice from them. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
61c0df10f85a | 4B201D2C2152 | But its a better idea to ask two because now there is another side to just that one earlier. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
6b7b0c0700f8 | 4B201D2C2152 | If your friend were to get in a fight. And you were right there. The principle isn't just going to take you side. They will see if the other kid could tell there side, so that they will have more than one side of the story | Evidence | Adequate |
61b5d1d12741 | 4B201D2C2152 | The next time you ever take advice from one person remember to just ask one more. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
d0d920671f7a | 4B47096239FB | Attending school practically takes up our entire day, and our entire lives. By the time we get up, get ready, travel to school, attend class, then come home to do additional homework, or entire day is gone. Additionally, we also spend five of the seven days of the week attending class, and those other two days of the w... | Lead | Effective |
e680d5198baa | 4B47096239FB | Students would benefit to a great extent if they could take classes online | Position | Adequate |
9f2bbf0a13b5 | 4B47096239FB | it would cut out commute time, allowing them to work more | Claim | Effective |
09a1824cff1c | 4B47096239FB | would permit more time to do other activities like spending time with family, | Claim | Effective |
99fb27576a22 | 4B47096239FB | would also benefit those who have chronic mental illnesses as these individuals struggle to spend eight hours a day physically at school. | Claim | Effective |
b4e6ff379528 | 4B47096239FB | For those who live a great distance away from a school, online classes would benefit them to a great extent. | Claim | Effective |
438514626075 | 4B47096239FB | The commute time takes up hours of there day, especially if they ride the bus. School is only eight hours a day, but including travel time, the act of going to school can take up ten or more hours of an individual's 24 hour time period. This permits them from being able to get all there homework done, and can also make... | Evidence | Effective |
300dd65a3f09 | 4B47096239FB | When your entire day is centered around school- the traveling, class, and homework- students have little time to participate in activities they enjoy and spend time with family, which is crucial for mental stability. Teachers preach of having good grades, extracurriculars, and family time, but school is eliminating the... | Evidence | Effective |
abd24d7efe72 | 4B47096239FB | With online courses, students can take their time working on school, but would also have time to spend with family and do extracurriculars. | Claim | Effective |
bab6df2aa7a7 | 4B47096239FB | This would result in a balanced lifestyle; a lifestyle that isn't overwhelmed with work. The balanced lifestyle would reflect in the student's learning ability, as they would now be more calm and focused to do their work. | Evidence | Effective |
8aa5814590ba | 4B47096239FB | For those who have a disabling mental illness, online classes would benefit them greatly. | Claim | Adequate |
2a63eb54d71f | 4B47096239FB | When a student has depression, anxiety etc., they often find themselves unable to attend school for a full day, or even at all. Likewise, if they are present, they cannot focus and by the end of the school day, they are so mentally and physically exhausted that they cannot get their homework done. Their grades suffer a... | Evidence | Effective |
c5ec11723f52 | 4B47096239FB | The act of physically going to school does not benefit everyone, therefore, online learning would be a beneficial option. Distance learning would still allow for those to achieve an education, but in a more peaceful environment. It would allow students to spend more time on their work since travel time is cut out, and ... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
cd561f17a005 | 4B47096239FB | Some may argue that school is necessary for social interactions. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
e32eb39e5520 | 4B47096239FB | This argument can be rebutted, as those who choose online courses would actually have more time to be social | Rebuttal | Adequate |
e7c21abf4dd2 | 4BB688100D15 | Imagine you receiving advice from someone, but you go ask other people because you're not sure if it's considerable. What I would do in this situation is to not ask one person for advice, I would go to other people and listen to their opinions. | Lead | Adequate |
58e66feec117 | 4BB688100D15 | Just by listening to different people's perspective you gain more information to help you find a reliable solution. For me, that is the correct choice because it makes more sense to absorb others advice to find a better choice | Position | Effective |
f03c38dde314 | 4BB688100D15 | I believe everyone has the opportunity to seek others opinions to make a better choice by involving others, | Claim | Adequate |
de0e7d8a758e | 4BB688100D15 | being curious | Claim | Ineffective |
070ad130da63 | 4BB688100D15 | relying on your peers. | Claim | Ineffective |
36f3600c95fc | 4BB688100D15 | By involving others, you can learn a lot of new things just by including multiple opinions. | Claim | Adequate |
648a2ce572d0 | 4BB688100D15 | To involve other people you can start off by asking for their point of view, so they can end up changing your mind about your situation for something better. You could also involve others by using their opinion, and ask different people about that person's perspective, and see which one would lead you to make a final c... | Evidence | Adequate |
2eebd0748a83 | 4BB688100D15 | Being curious helps you find a better belief about a situation you are not sure of. | Claim | Adequate |
cf82e1f1a00d | 4BB688100D15 | To be curious you could go up to people for advice, and possibly give them options to see which one has a better meaning. On the other hand, you could be curious by listening to what is important or not, and by asking for examples if you don't quite understand. Asking multiple questions of the person's advice and findi... | Evidence | Adequate |
0d6fd2ec8869 | 4BB688100D15 | Relying on your peers can help you find a better understanding of their advice | Claim | Adequate |
96ff5d6b5077 | 4BB688100D15 | An example of relying on others is to build trust with a variety of people to make sure you know that person will give you a positive result. Another way to rely on your peers is to make sure you know them well enough to ask them for advice, and so that you don't go the opposite way of making a consistent choice. Howev... | Evidence | Adequate |
2416d9d02b3d | 4BB688100D15 | Overall, I think listening to other people's point of view is the key to help you make a better choice. Using your peers and your surroundings will get you to the right path. To make better choices, and using the opportunity to seek opinions is to involve others, be curious, and rely on your peers to find your solution... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
ad3f1819de89 | 4C3D01DA2767 | Have you ever asked someone for advice? If so you might have asked multiple people. Some people say that it is good to ask more than one person for advice for different things. When you ask your friends they might tell you something different from what a family member might say. | Lead | Adequate |
351db7ced913 | 4C3D01DA2767 | you ask different people. You might need advice for many different things | Position | Adequate |
466c9be96818 | 4C3D01DA2767 | relationship advice, | Claim | Effective |
4bea7de7f7a6 | 4C3D01DA2767 | how to take care of a pet, | Claim | Effective |
f3e118b056b7 | 4C3D01DA2767 | what to do when you and your best friend get in a fight and you want to fix the problem but you do not know how. | Claim | Effective |
c9ece3aa31ee | 4C3D01DA2767 | you and your friend got in a really bad fight over the littlest thing like having the same dress. Now your friend will not talk to you because she had the dress first and then you got it. You may ask yourself what to do to fix this problem so you and your friend can be best friends. In your head you might want to get r... | Evidence | Effective |
3ce33ce0dcf2 | 4C3D01DA2767 | Have you asked your mom or dad for advice with a relationship or with someone you like? You might think it is weird to talk about someone you like with your parents and that is okay. Since you think it is weird to talk to your parents you go ask your friends. Your best friend said to write a note and leave it on your c... | Evidence | Effective |
21bf154f5e1c | 4C3D01DA2767 | when your parents said that you could never have a pet when you were a kid and now that you moved out you decide to get a puppy. You have planned this moment forever but you do not know what kind of dog you want to get. Say you were living in an apartment and the only breed of dog you cannot have is a Pit Bull but that... | Evidence | Effective |
0d35da9a2a2a | 4C3D01DA2767 | Getting advice from different people is helpful most of the time except when they all say the same thing but you do not agree with it. Asking multiple people gives you choices and I do not know about you but I like to have many different choices. Some people might give you bad advice and other people might give you goo... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
42b1dc969c5a | 4C471936CD75 | In ancient times, and also still today in some places, leaders of countries, such as presidents, prime ministers, kings, queens, and even the pharaohs of achient Egypt have all had advisers that they would consult to be sure they were making the best decision for their people. But these leaders would almost never have ... | Lead | Effective |
6d5a1749b283 | 4C471936CD75 | seeking multiple opinions can help you feel better about your decision to know that other people agree with you, | Claim | Effective |
25962b3d9447 | 4C471936CD75 | getting multiple opinions will increase the probability of one of those opinions being right. | Claim | Effective |
0ae99d7c0b57 | 4C471936CD75 | if the President thinks that this is the best time for their country to go to war, but they don't know if any of the people they rule over, or even the rest of the government, thinks the same way, it would almost certainly make the president feel less confident in their decision than if they knew what people thought ab... | Evidence | Effective |
c9ad8f71a02e | 4C471936CD75 | if I'm not sure what college I want to attend, and I ask one friend where I should go, they might say "George Mason" as a suggestion. But if George Mason is not in fact the best college for me, even though the person I asked was trying to help, that one opinion could sway me to go there anyway and not have the best exp... | Evidence | Effective |
e5fcaf3a377f | 4C471936CD75 | seeking multiple opinions before making a hard decision can be beneficial because of the reasons stated above. When I was in second grade, I passed the test to be admitted into the AAP (Advanced Academics Program) in my school. My best friend was also accepted, and wanted me to go to AAP with her, but I didnt really wa... | Evidence | Effective |
876a9ac4230b | 4C471936CD75 | it is better to seek multiple opinions instead of just one. | Position | Effective |
674d54998226 | 4C471936CD75 | The impact of asking people to help you make a decision can be big, like a country deciding to go to war, or small, like a third grader choosing if they want to go into the advanced program in school, but nonetheless, asking for other people's opinions instead of just one person's opinion can make a difference in someo... | Evidence | Effective |
89351b4b3b0f | 4C471936CD75 | there are many other reasons one might want to seek multiple opinions and pieces of advice instead of just one, but these are the two main ones that I think really make it worthwhile to ask for advice from multiple people instead of making decisions with only one piece of advice from one person. The key thing that all ... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
8fbdcdc0d38a | 4C6B05BD5A81 | Over ten precent of the students say that they would rather go to school instead of staying home. It would benefit the students learning abilites because some teachers will teach differently then other teachers | Lead | Adequate |
7f195b3194c3 | 4C6B05BD5A81 | It is so much easier learning at school | Position | Adequate |
b251b253b7a0 | 4C6B05BD5A81 | because the teachers at school know what the students needs to learn | Claim | Adequate |
412cbae10a13 | 4C6B05BD5A81 | The students needs someone who knows how to teach and has been teaching for a while. | Claim | Adequate |
6b6d7df9cd37 | 4C6B05BD5A81 | If the students pick online learnig the teachers can be fake a pretend to teach the kids when they do not know anything. | Claim | Adequate |
3065ce2d804a | 4C6B05BD5A81 | The video conferencing can get messed up by the internet because some people might have slow connection or no connection at all. | Claim | Adequate |
0a290baf18fa | 4C6B05BD5A81 | It would be easier for students because they will learn more at school then the video chat, or from online | Claim | Adequate |
714ae42d8d54 | 4C6B05BD5A81 | Some students have a slower learning abilities then others. The students are learning by one teacher from the video chat some students will be done much quicker then the other students. At school th teachers wait for the other students finish then they let the rest of class to do other work. It will not help the studen... | Evidence | Adequate |
9c7f1e96a522 | 4C6B05BD5A81 | Students needs someone who has a degree in teaching. It will be easier for the teachers because they will know what things they have to teach to the certain type of students. They would know how to teach it to them and it will be easier for them to learn the topic | Evidence | Ineffective |
ebabf71566a2 | 4C6B05BD5A81 | It is easier to go to school becuase we will learn the topic with other students and students can ask for help from their friends or the the teachers in class. | Claim | Adequate |
5c0522a0f39d | 4C6B05BD5A81 | The teachers on video chat can be a random person off the streets and teach the student the wrong infomation | Claim | Ineffective |
80bd144330e8 | 4C6B05BD5A81 | Also it will cost a lot of money for the students learn from a video chat. | Claim | Adequate |
d03c8c395f4d | 4C6B05BD5A81 | Schools are free, so the students can go there and get education for free, nor the students, or parents have to pay. Some parents, nor students can afford online classes because it costs like over one hundred dollars. | Evidence | Adequate |
a8f8734d87ff | 4C6B05BD5A81 | Staying home and doing online classes is fun because we are able to stay in our night clothes and do school work. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
51044593dbde | 4C6B05BD5A81 | Students can get their blankets and anything they want and do work while being comfortable. The students do not have to get up and go to school. They can get up at anytime and do class work | Evidence | Adequate |
252cc5e66b81 | 4C6B05BD5A81 | As fun as that sounds some students will not be able to meet their friends because their friends might have a different sechdules then their other friends. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
8ade9e548ba7 | 4C6B05BD5A81 | They will have to do work wilhile they want to meet up. | Evidence | Adequate |
640ed9cfef8c | 4C6B05BD5A81 | Students should not do online classes because it will intefere with their other stuff like hanging out with friends and going to work. They will miss out on parties that their friends will host for them. It help the students and the teachers because not everyone has a good ability like the other students. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
acb819f58cac | 4DC0660FD777 | People often get stuck in serious situations, where they have to make important decisions. They usually get advice from more than one person. | Lead | Effective |
558c55ece89d | 4DC0660FD777 | People may ask for advice from more than one person because, you can get more help | Position | Effective |
f98eaa5e8325 | 4DC0660FD777 | finding the best outcome, | Claim | Adequate |
773c6f4e1a23 | 4DC0660FD777 | you get to look at at the situation from another point of view.
| Claim | Adequate |
45d02b30c2f4 | 4DC0660FD777 | When you get advice from more than one person, you can find a great outcome in a much easier way. | Claim | Effective |
fbc6c5338b36 | 4DC0660FD777 | For example, " I facetime my best friend and my cousin and say, " I need help with finding something to wear to school tomorrow." My cousin says I should wear a skirt because it's cute and very trendy, but my best friend said I should wear my new overalls because, it's cold outside and and they could be the new 2020 tr... | Evidence | Effective |
e325e370dc9a | 4DC0660FD777 | Another reason why it's good to get advice from more than one person is that you can look at the situation from another point of view. | Claim | Effective |
e01b494afa5f | 4DC0660FD777 | For example, two of my friends see why the choice you're making is right and my other friends can see why it's wrong. I think to myself about how the point of view is different and which one I think can have the best outcome. You'll realize the differences in the outcome and make the best decision | Evidence | Effective |
3e19fd921fee | 4DC0660FD777 | As you can see, when you get advice from multiple people, you're going to get the best option.
Advice from other people can help you get through things that you can't get through alone. As the old saying says "Two heads are always better than one." | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
8a6cd83c2089 | 4E6D9C9F9318 | School from home. Some school offer the option to take online classes at home, | Lead | Adequate |
55b0f9a8621c | 4E6D9C9F9318 | which is a great idea. | Position | Adequate |
6b4f74701302 | 4E6D9C9F9318 | Kids can work on their time to get stuff done. | Claim | Adequate |
ba8096d0d54a | 4E6D9C9F9318 | Kids have less pressure to get work done. | Claim | Adequate |
fbf0a708c673 | 4E6D9C9F9318 | Kids who have a hard time at school getting work done at school can benefit from online classes.
| Claim | Adequate |
a7f53c8ace3b | 4E6D9C9F9318 | Having a deadline is much easier then feeling rushed to do work. | Claim | Adequate |
7206831c0b65 | 4E6D9C9F9318 | In school, one is taught that if you don't turn something in one will fail. Online classes get rid of this thinking. They give kids a certain amount of time to finish and eliminate stress. this can cause better grades for student. Online classes can eliminate the pressure of work getting done. | Evidence | Adequate |
77e7f2ef4f73 | 4E6D9C9F9318 | Kids get pressure from teachers and other kids. | Claim | Adequate |
48a477bd664b | 4E6D9C9F9318 | Teacher pressure kids to finish their work. This cause the kids not to do work. online classes can help eliminate the feeling of being pressured of the feeling of someone looking over you constantly. Online school may not fixes these pressure but may make them worst. | Evidence | Adequate |
6919b5872100 | 4E6D9C9F9318 | Online schools are messing with kids social interaction. When adding in Online school the argument is always that kid wont get the interaction they need. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
d78114ca91df | 4E6D9C9F9318 | This could cause kids to antisocial when older. It can also cause them to have a disadvantage | Evidence | Adequate |
068cb6078aba | 4E6D9C9F9318 | when talking about this stuff you need think logical but in end it all add up to everyone else discussion. | Rebuttal | Ineffective |
1f01a4b194f2 | 4E6D9C9F9318 | school would be better with online classes. Kids can get there work done during their time. The pressure would be eliminated form outside parties . The one factor over this matter is will it work. What really matter is what the kids think and it all comes down to them. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
0c3c1965a8f4 | 4E6E66266A2A | Everyone makes millions of choices in his or her lifetime. While making these choices, it is not uncommon for one to ask others for advice. Often, one will consult multiple people. | Lead | Effective |
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