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018532bfc4f8 | 6060D28C05B6 | If they get classes at home they don't learning. | Position | Adequate |
feb7b1f1c4e7 | 6060D28C05B6 | Some Schools offter distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. | Evidence | Ineffective |
ce79f6940c3e | 6060D28C05B6 | students get distract at home. | Claim | Adequate |
973ba0bfc54e | 6060D28C05B6 | Students get fall in environment learning. | Claim | Adequate |
f8be32cce58e | 6060D28C05B6 | Students feel more pressure at home. But students can get relaxing at home. | Evidence | Ineffective |
9bb7af23ee90 | 6060D28C05B6 | Students can get distract at home because they have easy to use phones. | Claim | Adequate |
0100deb4dc54 | 6060D28C05B6 | They feel more bored at home because they need stay at home more time. Also students don't do anything at home because if they stay at home is esay to get more distract. If students sleep in class they want to sleep at home too. Many students work and they would tired and they don't want to learn.
Students don't pay a... | Evidence | Adequate |
3e22be6ff3c7 | 6060D28C05B6 | Students fall in environment learning because they learn at class when the teacher explain if students attend classes from home by online is hard they learn. | Claim | Adequate |
72fa3f155858 | 6060D28C05B6 | Students can ncreased to learn at home. Also is more hard to students understand by online. Also many students have hard time in class to understand that teacher explain in more hard they learn at home. | Evidence | Adequate |
9eceae011a3e | 6060D28C05B6 | Some schools affter classes from home because they think is good option to students. Also students can stay more relaxing from home. Students have more time to do homework. Also they feel more comfortable at home. Also they feel safe at home with their family. Also student sleep more and stay with more energy to receiv... | Counterclaim | Adequate |
8edc8865d746 | 6060D28C05B6 | But students get more distract stay near the family and they don't want to pay attention. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
80656e85752f | 6060D28C05B6 | Conclude if students get classes from home by online they don't want to pay attention because is more easy they get distract. Also they don't want to learn by online. Students can get fall in environment learning and is hard they learn at home. Also they want to play or use phone and not is good option to students get ... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
b7edc825407e | 6183574CA5FC | When you need advice who do you go to? Do you go to your mom, dad, family, friend or do you got to more than one? | Lead | Adequate |
5d917f66974e | 6183574CA5FC | Most people when they need advice they ask more than one person. | Position | Adequate |
11bc8afadfaa | 6183574CA5FC | get more opinions | Claim | Ineffective |
0a7e3bd7d3d0 | 6183574CA5FC | makes then think about what they are doing | Claim | Ineffective |
a5325845fbff | 6183574CA5FC | helps decide what to do. | Claim | Ineffective |
94f90fe95923 | 6183574CA5FC | Getting more than one opinion is very helpful | Claim | Adequate |
caa970ed4f34 | 6183574CA5FC | Someone may say something and the other another may say something way different. It shows different things to do in situations. With more than one opinion it shows the pros and cons about what your asking. Asking a lot of people for advice it very helpful so you can get more ideas and choices about what your going to d... | Evidence | Adequate |
79b31a9ed511 | 6183574CA5FC | It also makes you think | Claim | Adequate |
eca81b9f5b09 | 6183574CA5FC | Lets say you need to choice what career you wanted to do and you wanted to be either a nurse or a doctor. One person may say you should be a doctor because you will earn more money but another may say the opposite. They may say to become a nurse because later if you wanted to become a doctor you could go back to school... | Evidence | Adequate |
25fa94464b34 | 6183574CA5FC | it helps you decide what to do in situations | Claim | Adequate |
c3d4a7e025cb | 6183574CA5FC | Since you person can say one someone else another. Lets take the career choice example since one person said to become a doctor and the other a nurse. With those opinion it helps you decide what to do. You could become a nurse then see if you like the job or if not then you could go back to school and get your educatio... | Evidence | Adequate |
837115d38a65 | 6183574CA5FC | When asking for advice it is helpful to ask more than one person. Getting more than one opinion, thinking about it, and what to do are very helpful when you ask for advice from people. It makes things easier if you get more advice. The more people you ask the better because it will open up to choices you have may not r... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
6273f508a079 | 62FC97D29846 | Would students benefit from taking online classes from home?
Modern technology has made tremendous leaps of growth in the past two decades, regarding accessibility to class work and instruction over the Internet. Within school systems, controversy has emerged over whether students would benefit from being able to atte... | Lead | Effective |
0b6203683a7e | 62FC97D29846 | Although some view online classes as a source of increased procrastination and growth of anti-social tendencies | Counterclaim | Adequate |
eb230125f1aa | 62FC97D29846 | online classes would effectively help students | Position | Adequate |
53a42b6f45aa | 62FC97D29846 | to reduce stress, | Claim | Adequate |
28afbd8f3add | 62FC97D29846 | allow them to also prioritize hobbies and passions | Claim | Adequate |
705666408d7b | 62FC97D29846 | as well as compel the students to develop skills and traits to succeed.
| Claim | Effective |
8cb9108f4abf | 62FC97D29846 | Ability for students to take online courses would firstly, help students reduce their stress and academic burdens. | Claim | Adequate |
c9441c833591 | 62FC97D29846 | High school students must wake up quite early in the morning (typically before dawn), prepare for school, and drive through several minutes of traffic to arrive early: just to sit in various classrooms for ninety minutes at a time, completing classwork and receiving additional homework. How much more convenient it woul... | Evidence | Effective |
fba1e3cd0477 | 62FC97D29846 | Additionally, students would benefit form being able to attend school classes from home because it allows them to also prioritize their hobbies, passions and fulfill duties for the family. | Claim | Effective |
93fa7d0df644 | 62FC97D29846 | In the novel,
Educated, by Tara Westover, Tara's family did not allow her to go to public schools that were endorsed by the government. Instead, Tara was home schooled, inconsistently, by her mother, through her middle school years; but she primarily worked with her brothers and father in a junkyard. Westover and her ... | Evidence | Effective |
e234761c35d1 | 62FC97D29846 | Lastly, online schooling would compel students to develop valuable traits and skills. | Claim | Effective |
9f70ec3269f0 | 62FC97D29846 | Taking online courses is different from physically going into school buildings because in the buildings, students sit at a desk and are instructed by a teacher, versus, online classes require communication via email or conference call. As a result of this, online students must develop initiative and independence. They ... | Evidence | Effective |
5da670d33c77 | 62FC97D29846 | In conclusion, there are many benefits from being able to attend school classes from home through online school or video conference calls. Some examples include: reduced stress, ability to fulfill other responsibilities and prioritize hobbies, and finally, develop valuable skills that will assist with success in the on... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
fa989d35fd2a | 6348F3FAB2F4 | Needing help with a issue is a common problem that people often come across. Whether it is needing help with a relationship or just advice on what book to check out at the library, people often come to their peers and colleges for advice. Usually, people just come to one person for advice. Most this so that they can re... | Lead | Effective |
e24a81e66892 | 6348F3FAB2F4 | Asking multiple people for advice on the same problem can result in a better made choice | Position | Adequate |
ae75b3cc16d5 | 6348F3FAB2F4 | they will be more informed on the possible solutions to their issue, | Claim | Adequate |
1238fcf2d75e | 6348F3FAB2F4 | they are more likely to receive an unbiased opinion on the subject if they ask multiple people.
| Claim | Adequate |
83878b8ae31b | 6348F3FAB2F4 | When making a decision, having more information on all the possible solutions can allow for a more logical and precise solution. | Claim | Effective |
c9401a331adf | 6348F3FAB2F4 | The way most people collect this information is through other people. However, it is very common for people to listen to only one persons solution. They believe that you can get a more concise solution by doing this. Although this may be true, getting multiple solutions from multiple people gives you more information o... | Evidence | Effective |
ef26fa10d3f4 | 6348F3FAB2F4 | When asking for advice, unbiased opinions can result in a much better solutions. | Claim | Effective |
df4f2a89a05f | 6348F3FAB2F4 | This is because when you receive biased opinions and advice, the information you are receiving is often not as factual and more from the heart of what the person you are asking believes. This is why when asking only one person, you are more likely to find someone who is very biased. On the other hand, when you ask more... | Evidence | Effective |
5053b630a08f | 6348F3FAB2F4 |
Asking multiple people for advice allows for better made choices because they will have most of the information needed to make a decision, and asking multiple people will result in a higher probability to find someone that is unbiased. When trying to get the best choice for a solution asking multiple people can allow ... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
fa220ce7e57e | 63AFEF7824B1 | When people look to others for advice, it is because they cannot think of what to do themselves or they don't trust themselves enough to make good decisions on their own. | Claim | Effective |
9e4daea0643e | 63AFEF7824B1 | Some people find it good to have an outsider's perspective, so they can see the situation from a different viewpoint | Claim | Effective |
3dcde6cc9627 | 63AFEF7824B1 | They also like to ask others what they would do in that situation, because everyone handles things differently | Claim | Effective |
8c9b698fa34b | 63AFEF7824B1 | Occasionally people have gone through a similar situation, which often makes them knowledgeable on what to do. | Claim | Effective |
994159f29d3d | 63AFEF7824B1 | There are many ways to handle situations, but when in need of help you should confide in others for the best advice on how to make a better decision. | Position | Effective |
ac2f05895a32 | 63AFEF7824B1 | In an argument people tend to be very blindsided and naive, because they always think they are in the right. However there are always two sides to every story, and other people can help you see both. Many times you don't understand what someone else might be going through and it is always good for someone to humble you... | Evidence | Effective |
fe286f3f6f5c | 63AFEF7824B1 | Most people are either passive aggressive or just aggressive and this can change the way they do things. With my problems I tend to be more passive aggressive, because I don't like arguments or confrontation, but most of my friends are the opposite. In times where I would normally not do anything until it becomes a big... | Evidence | Adequate |
4ffe0e77e570 | 63AFEF7824B1 | For example, when you need that push to do something you're scared of they can help you with that. When they tell you it went well for them, it helps you to follow in their footsteps. If there was a problem in their past experience they can warn you not to do that. One example might be that a girl dated this horrible g... | Evidence | Adequate |
202c8abd1a59 | 63AFEF7824B1 | The saying that other people show the best in you can be used when talking about giving advice, because people can show you new ways to see something or tell you something that you didnt know. Friends can show you the situation you are in from all different angles and not just the one you are stuck in. They can also te... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
0e6cad86c38e | 651CE6F22A06 | Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by online classes or video conferencing. | Lead | Adequate |
41576dddc9f2 | 651CE6F22A06 | Student's can benefit more from an online class. | Position | Adequate |
615377cc124c | 651CE6F22A06 | Online classes are good because you will have a greater chance of learning | Claim | Adequate |
10433c50074c | 651CE6F22A06 | Online classes is a choice for some student's that attend school or an college | Claim | Ineffective |
f39a14edbecd | 651CE6F22A06 | Online classes is a good plan for people who can't pay attention in class. | Claim | Adequate |
5b01856b1223 | 651CE6F22A06 | Some good things about online classes you can get on when you want you can be out of town and still have the option to get on | Claim | Adequate |
adbe45b1ebb8 | 651CE6F22A06 | In an online class students might have a chance of learning faster. Online class are good for student's that are shy or can't speak. There are difference reasons why student's use online classes. If you take an online class you can do difference actives all day. | Evidence | Ineffective |
e79683d32712 | 651CE6F22A06 | Here some reasons why student's will take school over online or video conferencing classes. Student's won't be able to play on one of the school's sports team | Counterclaim | Adequate |
597a935ee0b4 | 651CE6F22A06 | Student's won't be able to do after school clubs or the band. You won't have the big welcome on the first day of school. You won't be able to go to the school games and cheer for your school you won't have fun like the student's that are in school. | Evidence | Adequate |
f067b05a1927 | 651CE6F22A06 | Student's that take an online class I can call them smarter than me | Claim | Ineffective |
5c9a154b0a24 | 651CE6F22A06 | I feel like if you take an online class you have a greater chance of pasting to the next grade than me. I have an good and bad response to online classes. In an online class you have no consequences like student's in school have. Online classes is unique because you do what you want when you want. | Evidence | Ineffective |
c724e6ad4bea | 651CE6F22A06 | In conclusion if your online or in school your still learning and that's all that matter. Online and video conferencing and school are all the same your just learning in a difference manner. Some say that you can learn faster in an online class and some say difference. People say that online class are for college stude... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
3624d39b777c | 669954011A4C | Do you think attending class online from home will benefit you and your studies? My sister took a class online that was required for her to graduate. She rushed through it and it was a huge waste of time. Therefore she didn't gain any knowledge. It would've been more beneficial if she took the class in school with a te... | Lead | Effective |
326ed9c34375 | 669954011A4C | Attending a class online at home can prevent you | Position | Effective |
7ac9370e6b72 | 669954011A4C | learning your social skills | Claim | Effective |
6cda47f2f1e4 | 669954011A4C | participating with hands on work, | Claim | Effective |
42b5f793b8ec | 669954011A4C | learning time management skills. | Claim | Effective |
83b63e7cff85 | 669954011A4C | School is a very important part to peoples life. Not only the learning aspect is important, but also the social aspect. | Claim | Effective |
7b5151fa4b97 | 669954011A4C | You meet new people,not only in the beginning but also at the very end. You form relationships with others and get to make so many memories. I met my best friend in first grade and she is still my best friend. Her name is Generic_Name. She has introduced me to so many other people and has got me out of my comfort zone.... | Evidence | Effective |
5b128b39e244 | 669954011A4C | Some may argue that you can make a best friend with the people you go to church with, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
3e789d6ee8be | 669954011A4C | however you don't necessarily get to see them everyday which can lead to not communicating to them and loosing the bond you have with that person. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
cfa35b7138fd | 669954011A4C | I have made so many other friends through my Abby and we have such a strong bond with all of us its hard to break. I get so exited to wake up early and go to school just see my best friends, which always makes my day better. If I were to attend class online I wouldn't be the person I am today. | Evidence | Effective |
34e8cf83c3e6 | 669954011A4C | Participating with hands on work and instructions by a teacher is important to students learning abilities. | Claim | Effective |
ecd4eb20ef46 | 669954011A4C | Their job as a teacher is to inform you about the information your presented with, and be able explain it to you the best way possible. Therefore, you can retain it and be able to apply it when it comes into play. I was in my 7th grade science class on a Monday. The week before I took a test on the biology of a spider.... | Evidence | Effective |
110a9443e1bc | 669954011A4C | Some may argue that, getting instruction by teachers is a waste of time, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
d85c4d4d6f96 | 669954011A4C | however it helps students find clarity in the information they are presented with, which they are required to learn and know it. Its harder to learn over a screen and be able to retain the information that is just presented to you without explanation. | Rebuttal | Effective |
093e282641c7 | 669954011A4C |
Being able to managing your time with school work now is a very important tool you will also need for later in life. | Claim | Effective |
2cbd464e02aa | 669954011A4C | Being on top of your school work means being able to complete it and turning it in on time. My friend attended school online from 1st-8th grade. When she got to high school she didn't know how much time she should give her self to get all her work done. She struggled with it and ended up failing all her classes her fir... | Evidence | Effective |
ae6bd0b62217 | 669954011A4C | Some may argue that you would dont need to manage your time because it won't effect your school life | Counterclaim | Adequate |
8911714615f2 | 669954011A4C | however, managing your time is such a helpful tool that will help you become a successful person not only in your academic life but also your work life when your older. With attending classes online could prevent you from learning how to manage your work and can significantly effect your mental health. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
f66d7cae7024 | 669954011A4C | Its important for you to attend class in a school environment for you to get the best education. It can also help set you up to be successful, become the best person you can be, and to learn tools that can help you later in life. In the past, students haven't obtained much information while attending online class and p... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
a0bf8e555ddd | 6867D67B3444 |
Have you ever wondered what it would be like to experience school from home? So many things have happened over the years in schools that have caused changes from receiving healthier food at school, to getting better technology. But the one thing that has definitely impacted school today is online classes. Online class... | Lead | Adequate |
697af2e0ff5c | 6867D67B3444 | Online Classes would be bad for students | Position | Effective |
39c0e7fa590d | 6867D67B3444 | it provides the student with more distractions, | Claim | Effective |
ea610f826ac1 | 6867D67B3444 | they do not receive much hands-on experience or practice | Claim | Effective |
6924d1f23cc1 | 6867D67B3444 | it prevents them from getting the true school experience. | Claim | Effective |
6cf9b2713142 | 6867D67B3444 | The first reason why students should not take online classes, is that it causes room for distractions. | Claim | Effective |
6977a1bc52db | 6867D67B3444 | In the modern world today, there are many things that could distract students such as electronics, pets, noises, etc. Imagine trying to work on a paper and all of a sudden the cat jumps up on the table and knocks over the diet cola that was sitting in a cup on the table; you would not only have to get up and clean the ... | Evidence | Effective |
71896429041d | 6867D67B3444 | The second reason why students should not take online classes, is they are not receiving hands-on experience and practice. | Claim | Effective |
e8896e82414a | 6867D67B3444 | If a student was answering a question where a picture was shown about dissecting on a test for her anatomy class and it was asking where one of the incisions should be cut she would not have been able to answer it due to the fact that the closest she had gotten to seeing a dissection, was by watching the video provided... | Evidence | Effective |
bc17e2cafb63 | 6867D67B3444 | The final reason that students should not take online classes, is that it prevents the ability to receive the true school experience | Claim | Effective |
1384a4dfef27 | 6867D67B3444 | If a student decides they want to participate in something like the school's 4th annual tricycle race, then they will, but if they decide instead of participating they want to watch then they can do that too. Some people may say that school is all about making memories and trying new things, but that is not always the ... | Evidence | Effective |
55bee792744e | 6867D67B3444 | Online classes according to some people are good because they provide the chance for the student to go out into the real world and get a job, they provide the student less stress, and it provides the chance for the student to be more comfortable with their surroundings. Jobs provide students the opportunity to gain rea... | Counterclaim | Effective |
f2b8ed74688f | 6867D67B3444 | But because students are provided with more distractions, do not receive much hands-on experience or practice, and are prevented from getting the true school experience that they deserve, they should not take online classes from home and instead proceed with taking regular classes at their local school.
| Rebuttal | Effective |
f0e312551106 | 6867D67B3444 | So in conclusion, students will never succeed if online classes are always holding them back. This is why I urge you now to get up, take a stand, and fight for what's right! | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
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