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5603b2805f0f | 73F69FA2E0E3 | We should not rely on technology for childrens' education due to the fact that it may be psychologically damaging for the youth. | Claim | Effective |
672b5f4a147a | 73F69FA2E0E3 | I've said how school has helped me develop long lasting relationship by putting my in a space where being social was somewhat mandatory. | Evidence | Adequate |
f79637adc115 | 73F69FA2E0E3 | Some people on the side of distance learning would argue that having relationships like that are monogamist and not a necessary need, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
c1459eb6d0fd | 73F69FA2E0E3 | however that is completely false. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
5ab062c584f2 | 73F69FA2E0E3 | We as a species are very passionate and thrive off of compassion. Studies have shown that this current generation is statistically the most depressed it has ever been. Connecting studies show that this is due to majority of millennials feeling lonely due to the inability to communicate properly with others. This is due... | Evidence | Effective |
b6a1a74a58ad | 73F69FA2E0E3 | While in concept the idea of distance learning is great, through execution is where it fails. Distance learning causes much more harm than it does good by creating lost, socially inept individuals, along with furthering the growth of a future filled with depression. Schools simply offer more, allowing kids to find them... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
cca92ee8dc07 | 7443D525E32D | Would students benefit from being able to attend classes from home?
The American Education System has grown a lot since it was originally curated. While I do believe there have been positives to have come from today's educational system, I also believe there are improvements that can be made. One important improvement... | Lead | Effective |
15359fd51e32 | 7443D525E32D | I believe students would benefit very well from attending classes from home, | Position | Adequate |
33c8f8333ef2 | 7443D525E32D | the style of today's stress-inducing form of schooling. | Claim | Adequate |
30597e019857 | 7443D525E32D | First of all, this would be very beneficial because attending classes from home would help relieve stress from students with social anxieties or anxieties involving the typical school format. | Claim | Effective |
0c6a1db8de6f | 7443D525E32D | The stress levels of students has grown exponentially in the passed couple of decades, and I've seen it first hand. Students are growing more and more anxious as the expectations to get good grades, get into a good school, and follow a career in STEM become higher. How are we to expect our students handle these sort of... | Evidence | Effective |
8b8d0f236e0a | 7443D525E32D | Second of all, attending classes from home would allow for more flexibility when it comes to the scheduling of classes, and potentially assignment deadlines. | Claim | Effective |
43b594d0d0e7 | 7443D525E32D | If a student struggles to balance school, extra-curricular activities, and a job, they would probably find online classes to be very beneficial. When taking classes online, students are usually allowed for more freedom and flexibility. They can sleep in until noon, and then work on a class in the evening. Or if they wo... | Evidence | Effective |
5af7ba097cac | 7443D525E32D | Lastly, attending classes from home would allow for more involvement of the parent in the students education. | Claim | Adequate |
444336a11eb9 | 7443D525E32D | Some parents do not get a full scope of what is going on in a students school day, and it can sometimes be hard for kids to communicate this to their parents. Some parents tend to job the gun when they take a look at their grades and are seeing their kid isn't doing too well, but what they aren't always considering is ... | Evidence | Effective |
76fd4bd6dfeb | 7443D525E32D | Now while I do believe others would combat my claim with statements such as, "today's educational system has done amazing and has left many students with successful careers in medicine and engineering". | Counterclaim | Effective |
6206bd41e2e1 | 7443D525E32D | But to that I would say; there have also been many successful people in history such as scientist, Albert Einstein and entrepreneur, Gary Vee, who either dropped out of high school or didn't find themselves doing so great until university. | Rebuttal | Effective |
498813ae4e61 | 7443D525E32D | That is why I believe students would benefit very well from attending classes from home, to help relieve the stress of today's school system. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
906ef7d9f84a | 7450531F9573 | When asking for advice it is beneficial to ask multiple people. Each person is different and can have different opinions and view points. When you get multiple opinions you get a variety of different answers and ideas that you can use. | Lead | Adequate |
4b5829fdc403 | 7450531F9573 | Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better decision | Position | Adequate |
ecbdcbc1a18a | 7450531F9573 | all people have different backgrounds, | Claim | Effective |
7ea08874ca41 | 7450531F9573 | different experiences, | Claim | Effective |
b50a7de6f558 | 7450531F9573 | can provide new ways to think about something. | Claim | Effective |
35ba0ea50e94 | 7450531F9573 | Many people grew up different ways, in different places, and with different people around them. This can impact the way people think about things. According to a study, 90% of people who grew up in poverty know how important getting a job and being able to provide for others is. They know the importance of this because... | Evidence | Effective |
e1519bedc90e | 7450531F9573 | Everyone's experiences are different even if they did the same thing. This can influence what they tell you. A study has shown that people who have had fun doing something are more likely to give positive advice, and those who have not had a good experience are more likely to give negative advice. When someone has had ... | Evidence | Effective |
895ca4c2cbe9 | 7450531F9573 | Each person interprets everything you say differently and think about things differently. for example I was wondering if I should start writing an essay now or wait a little bit and brain storm. I asked my mom and dad what I should do and my mom said that I should think and do a little bit of it now, then later go back... | Evidence | Effective |
687db3121c78 | 7450531F9573 | getting advice from multiple people is beneficial because all people have different backgrounds, different experiences, and have different ways to think about things. Multiple opinions help you make a better choice because you can see what other people think about a certain thing. Getting multiple opinion can also help... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
68f06f00672e | 749E1B13022A | Have you ever had to make a hard decision so you asked multiple people for they're opinion on that situation? | Lead | Adequate |
7537ef5598b0 | 749E1B13022A | Having multiple opinions on a situation is better than having one opinion | Position | Adequate |
6f9600284f57 | 749E1B13022A | people can offer different point of views to the situation | Claim | Adequate |
430b8ee034d8 | 749E1B13022A | some people may have experience in the decision you are trying to decide | Claim | Adequate |
86f3a5154266 | 749E1B13022A | when you are making a hard decision all by yourself it can stress you out but when you ask other people for help and get their opinion it can relieve stress from yourself. | Claim | Adequate |
b76c613ead34 | 749E1B13022A | People can offer many different point of views on the situation and can provide different opinions about the situation. | Claim | Adequate |
6ccd3d32fbe4 | 749E1B13022A | Many people have very good decision making skills and help from those people can help you evaluate your decision and help you make a final decision. | Evidence | Ineffective |
1f7a1387aad6 | 749E1B13022A | people who can relate about your dilemma will be the best help to someone who is struggling to make a decision on their own. | Evidence | Adequate |
5c79ccdcae4f | 749E1B13022A | when making a hard decision all by yourself it can stress you a lot. | Claim | Adequate |
aa04fa1c04bb | 749E1B13022A | research shows that putting a lot of stress on the body when you are trying to make a decision can often make you choose the wrong solution. Asking other people for advice can help you relieve your stress and can help you make the right decision without stressing your body. | Evidence | Adequate |
a743dcc974da | 749E1B13022A | Having many opinions on a situation is better than having one opinion, because people can give you a different point of view on the situation than you had before. some people may have experience in the decision you are trying to decide, and when you are making a hard decision all by yourself it can stress you out but w... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
5e2e3bddb1d6 | 7614540E8571 | "Hey Generic_Name what do you think about this new video game?" Generic_Name asked. "Dont ask just me because then you might be getting a bad opinion from me!" Generic_Name replied. "Okay, I'll make sure to ask someone else as well to get their opinion, thanks Generic_Name!" Generic_Name said | Lead | Effective |
b4c26022eb64 | 7614540E8571 | Asking for two opinions is good | Position | Adequate |
e2ea5a312d8f | 7614540E8571 | because you see the bigger picture | Claim | Effective |
5e3817fec412 | 7614540E8571 | eliminate bias, | Claim | Effective |
b0f0c6e5f6a9 | 7614540E8571 | and you can make a better choice. | Claim | Effective |
21fc3b6a21bb | 7614540E8571 | Firstly, asking for two opinions is good because you can see the bigger picture. | Claim | Effective |
a14f2f75774f | 7614540E8571 | "Hey Generic_Name should i get Space Defenders 4 or Battle for the Netherlands 2?" Generic_Name asked. "Is that even a question?" Generic_Name replied, "Get Space Defenders 4 man, the company for Battle for the Netherlands 2 is corrupted, they keep making the game more and more expensive!" "Whoa whoa whoa stop right th... | Evidence | Effective |
698e4cb40fbd | 7614540E8571 | Secondly, asking for two opinions is good because it helps you eliminate bias. | Claim | Effective |
1f2c457c82f1 | 7614540E8571 | "Hey Generic_Name do you think Fortnite or Minecraft is better?" Generic_Name asked. "Fortnite is way better than Minecraft dude," Generic_Name replied. "Well I'm still going to ask Generic_Name what he thinks because you might have a biased opinion and you don't know it!" Generic_Name answered. Biased opinions can ser... | Evidence | Effective |
f7b646513e48 | 7614540E8571 | Thirdly, asking for two opinions is good because you can make a better choice. | Claim | Effective |
44b2d1a5c642 | 7614540E8571 | "Generic_Name what do you think about Sauce Mixer 3? It has 200 reviews and they're all positive," Generic_Name asked. "I think you should get it if its got mostly positive reviews" Generic_Name replied, "What do you think Generic_Name?" "Well I think you should get Cheese Factory Simulator, its got the same amount of ... | Evidence | Effective |
a741445ea85b | 7614540E8571 | "Hey Generic_Name?" Generic_Name asked. "Yeah Generic_Name?" Generic_Name replied. "Did you ever get that game?" Generic_Name asked. "Actually no I didn't, I was too afraid I was gonna make a bad choice!" Generic_Name said. "Well you're in luck! I just got an e-mail that the game is on sale for 20% off!" Generic_Name a... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
e116ad2c849f | 763EF698F56B | Well In this part I think is good and bad idea. | Lead | Adequate |
5ba9b461e4c4 | 763EF698F56B | I think is good because if they have any emergency in home they do not going to dismiss any classes | Counterclaim | Adequate |
70273f2ac483 | 763EF698F56B | they can take classes from home they have already tools do not needed to go outside they have everything in home, and the teacher they do not need to wake up early everyday, and also some family they are going to agree because now they do not are going to think every time how is my daughter or my son if they are safe o... | Evidence | Adequate |
953fa9b1d9f1 | 763EF698F56B | the bad things that if they going to give to all the students to take classes from only or video confederation some students they not going to do their work. | Claim | Adequate |
b83b41ed324d | 763EF698F56B | in some others parts they do not have any internet or money to buy a computer they do not have opportunity that the others person have, also the teacher do not have any jobs they are going to need they works back, and some family they do not need to send to school to their sons because they do not have many or they wan... | Evidence | Adequate |
2092b4c21865 | 763EF698F56B | if they are old they can choose what they want, they have to think very careful | Claim | Ineffective |
89dff46dfa1c | 763EF698F56B | if they said yes they want to take class form online , is going to be more easy from them because they do not have a job or they do not have to take care, they can do it they have a lot of time in the world if they do not have any computer thats is going to be a really good problem form them because they do not have sc... | Evidence | Ineffective |
d6d5e2b745ab | 763EF698F56B | If you are going to say no because we need to learn something, we do not have any money to pay to go to school theirs so many ways to go to school their have school that are free you do not need to pay anything, just you need is go to school everyday, and do not get in trouble. | Evidence | Adequate |
0e3a17ff3480 | 763EF698F56B | Is good idea if they do this in college for students they work they know, they have more responsibility.
| Claim | Ineffective |
6a21be88ae32 | 763EF698F56B | If you put a child with computer is going to be more concentrated in computer and maybe they going to have problems with their eyes or any problem when their grow up.
if is a old is more easy from them because they brain is more they can understand and they do not have any issues to work in the computers. | Evidence | Adequate |
cf0120450412 | 763EF698F56B | so is bad idea that they students take class form online they do not have any money or they do not work. | Position | Adequate |
44af7a3e4bf8 | 764CF7C9DF70 | All over the world, attending a school is a vital part of a person's schedule. The person could be a graduate student, under-graduate, or a high school student, but on all levels, it is so essential that daily activities are centered around it. With something as big as this there are bound to be people that, for some r... | Lead | Adequate |
4b1a1e9865f0 | 764CF7C9DF70 | For the people that are unable to attend school, online education should become readily available | Position | Adequate |
3f441477cfd9 | 764CF7C9DF70 | due to mental illnesses preventing a person from attending, | Claim | Effective |
0d8e16142468 | 764CF7C9DF70 | to allow people to have the chance to attend | Claim | Adequate |
699121e11f17 | 764CF7C9DF70 | and to give sick students the experience of attending school, as it is every person's given right to receive an education and nothing should prevent that in the modern world. | Claim | Effective |
102505447130 | 764CF7C9DF70 | In the past, mentioning mental illness was seen as a sort of taboo in society and there was a stigma surrounding the idea of a mental illness and the idea of getting help for one. In today's day and age, however, many people openly suffer from some sort of incapacitating mental illness and are open about getting help f... | Claim | Effective |
7d03e9c9e275 | 764CF7C9DF70 | A lot of these people who suffer are students actively trying to seek an education but cannot because of their condition. If the opportunity were available for these students to receive an education while also catering to their specific condition, they would greatly benefit from it. For example, if a high school studen... | Evidence | Effective |
052fcdfa21a4 | 764CF7C9DF70 | Being able to attend classes online would greatly convenience thousands of students with little to no time | Claim | Effective |
0feddb0dd2cd | 764CF7C9DF70 | For example, college applications now require a multitude of skills and are looking for variety within the application pool which results in students scrambling to participate in a lot of extracurricular activities and taking a heavier course load to stand out. With these new additions come with a much more time consum... | Evidence | Effective |
fc9e45d38a83 | 764CF7C9DF70 | In light of recent events, online school is becoming a very sensible path for many schools in the near future. | Claim | Effective |
cc3682fbaa5f | 764CF7C9DF70 | When pandemics hit, it would be very foolish to continue to send students to school, which can very easily harbor super-spreaders of a virus. With online classes though, the spread of a virus can be halted if everyone were to attend school online which not only protects students but also the staff. For example, the inc... | Evidence | Effective |
e576bc14d834 | 764CF7C9DF70 |
The world is very diverse and filled with many people with stark contrasts in their ways of life, so to deny those suffering from a condition or those that are unable to attend the right to an education would be a serious failure in the education system. There is no reason as to why someone could not receive an educat... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
3a787a39b28c | 76C0FD26B20A | I think sometime is good online | Position | Adequate |
ddd52d1b0cea | 76C0FD26B20A | because any students no have time so many students work part time,then can't go to the school the better option is take a little free time and make online. | Claim | Adequate |
f64ba4d2cc22 | 76C0FD26B20A | First :But is better they go to the school | Counterclaim | Adequate |
b8a8840a25a0 | 76C0FD26B20A | because if you need something you can took with you teacher or partner is past time with amazing friends | Evidence | Adequate |
653f48be1798 | 76C0FD26B20A | and learning more about what do you want in the future ,the things and feelings ,ideas and occurrences ,memories and expectations and possibilities ,fear desires ,delight the smallest and most ordinary issues of our lives as well as the large and mostpowerful ones. | Evidence | Ineffective |
90a70746bbc0 | 76C0FD26B20A | then online web is the tools for study we have that permit us to share with others what is really going on inside our minds and hearts .they are the only intruments that reveal whether speaks and writes | Rebuttal | Ineffective |
3c4b44b238f5 | 76C0FD26B20A | second : some times the students no came at the school | Claim | Adequate |
24c857799655 | 76C0FD26B20A | because they live long them no have money for transportation or when need buy any book ,any students don't have the support of your family ,i think is the way more easy and very well for the people can do it some thing ,we need more people have want learning more the way the best election for our the student speaks , w... | Evidence | Adequate |
148c5fa1ae26 | 76C0FD26B20A | Third:There are probably very few people would claim online las their favorite book .However all the words are there ,it is the order | Claim | Adequate |
6105422c2973 | 76C0FD26B20A | ,But if you need company whose work it is to prepare materials that advance your learning and show you how to think for yourselves , the online web is the reason the words stand for things and feelings , from outline and notes to the final form of the paper .It tells you how to write paper .how prepare for applying for... | Evidence | Adequate |
d49196f74000 | 76C0FD26B20A | Finally : The online web is very well for everybody because in the web we can find the signification about whatever word, that we dont know and helps for keep going more learning for get good job ,after you can use the online web for look video that you are curious then helps own like better people make our life better... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
a9de0dee11f8 | 7770B90F2FEF | Imagine a lost, confused version of yourself. Perhaps it's an essay, a project, or a personal situation that has you conflicted. You have no idea what to do or what to think of. You are stuck. The first thing that pops into your head is to consult your peers, but not just one. | Lead | Effective |
0bbdd5e07e84 | 7770B90F2FEF | Asking for advice from more than one person has many upsides. | Position | Effective |
20cd02821c1b | 7770B90F2FEF | You can see what others think of your situation, | Claim | Effective |
86503ef8af44 | 7770B90F2FEF | there can be many different thoughts. Someone may suggest a better idea to you than others, | Claim | Effective |
b63946ef6bf2 | 7770B90F2FEF | it is always beneficial for you to consider a different perspective. | Claim | Effective |
69b7a88a4df8 | 7770B90F2FEF | There could be multiple ideas that you didn't even think of before. For example, if you had a ton of homework, there are many different things that people could suggest. Do the hardest things first, do the easiest things first, or just wait until the next day to complete it all. They all have different opinions, but yo... | Evidence | Adequate |
78341bf1b21f | 7770B90F2FEF | Not all advice given is automatically good. Let's say, for example, you are planning to redecorate your bedroom. Someone offers a neon-yellow pillow for your chair. You think to yourself, no way . Someone else tells you to hang up squares cut out from cardboard around the border of the entrance. You think, huh, that's ... | Evidence | Effective |
91b71deb6cd4 | 7770B90F2FEF | Consulting others for advice can help you do that. Perhaps your situation isn't as horrible as you thought, maybe it could be easily fixed and dealt with. People other than yourself can help you see the good things in bad situations. You could have this sense of relief from just consulting someone for their opinion. Si... | Evidence | Adequate |
3bd55d6e4c54 | 7770B90F2FEF | Asking more than one person for advice is critical. You can see what others think, receive many different opinions that are better than the others, and view your dilemma in a new perspective. After all of that, your situation could seem easier to understand and not so terrible as you thought. Asking just one person for... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
22cbb2ee5132 | 793517BB1BB3 | In the life today, education is important for people, and an options of choosing school or places to learn are also make people thinking. From what I heard on the news, some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. But, is it truly hel... | Lead | Adequate |
5256e8e1a5cf | 793517BB1BB3 |
First, when we talking about schools, we are also talking about our future, this is really important more than anything. If we come to school everyday we will get a punch of information and ideas for our self, we could meet other people, contact with them and make friends | Evidence | Adequate |
bda5d720e1b6 | 793517BB1BB3 | In that way, you will never feel stressful or stuck instead of staying home and do your own work. | Claim | Adequate |
cf11ab36196c | 793517BB1BB3 | Second, even though school are welcome you to come, but somehow the weather, the distance or something about personal that make you not able to come to schools, and the better options for you that are stay at home and learning from online or conferencing | Evidence | Ineffective |
3e7c8adaab34 | 793517BB1BB3 | For me, if I have a chance to choose between two options, I will choose to be in class, not attend classes from home | Position | Adequate |
fde4580bede3 | 793517BB1BB3 | even though something will clog me, I will still want to come to schools. For example, if I spend in schools I could know a lot of things than I stay and take classes at home, | Claim | Adequate |
9b137878d8dd | 793517BB1BB3 | I will meet my friends and my teacher everyday, we will discus about stuff at school, joining some club to reduce stressful after schools. And if you decide to take classes online, it is not bad, but for me it is not helpful. You better to go to school, you have to contact with other people, having conversation and dis... | Evidence | Adequate |
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