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They shed have your best intros in mind.
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What dies that mean? It means that they wont gave you bad advice. they will tell you what to do bast on their own experts.
Evidence
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Instead of just getting one way to what ever you need you will get multiple ways to do it.
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For example I was layering to throw a cove ball in baseball. I had two people helping me one of them had one way to throw it and the under one had a defeat way. I lest to both of them and I had to throw the first way that the first person told me. You would see what they would do. everyone has their own ape an just...
Evidence
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In closer I thing that asking for multiple opinions is good become. You would see what they would do, if they are all good pople they will have your best in mind,and You will get multiple ways to do what you need to do
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Students can benefit by taking online classes or by video conference
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Students will be able to take online courses from their computers.
Evidence
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Now, students can't pretend to be sick because they will still have to do their work from their classes.
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Students can take notes, do homework, and take tests online. Students will make sure they do their work and send it to their teachers online.
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Students will pay attention and the teachers will tell that student what day they will have a test. Students will get notified by their teachers when they have work to turn in. Students can't lie and say they didn't have homework because the teacher notified them when the homework was due.
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Students take will take their work very seriously and the teachers will check their work to see if they did it correctly. Students were offered this opportunity to take online classes so they shouldn't ruin their chances.
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Students will always have time to work online because there's no time limit.
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There is always a time limit in school but, when you take online classes you don't have to worry about completing you work because you have all day. Every school has a time limit but online classes don't. Students stress about not finishing classwork while online students don't have to stress. Students taking online cl...
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Taking information down tot study helps you because you can save those notes you wrote down online.
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Students can take notes on paper but, they can lose their notes easily. You can also send your notes to yourself if they ever get deleted. Students prefer online notes than paper notes because they are easier to find online. Students taking online classes will think it was a good idea choosing online classes.
Evidence
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Students made a good choice. But some students can cheat by using their phone by turning their face cam off. Students can copy other peoples work online. Students computers could have a virus on their computers. Students always find a way to not do their work easily.
Concluding Statement
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Sometimes having to make a decision is pretty hard thats why we ask for advice from some people.
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Seeking multiple opinions can help with making a better choice
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seeing other viewpoints on the topic may help ,
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having other viewpoints can also help with making a decision
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it can help with having the feeling of assurance that you went with the right decision.
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Making a better choice may sometimes always need the advice of other people, this is because people that need to make a decision want to see other viewpoints on the topic.
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When having to make a decision its better to see other viewpoints because some people speak from experience to help the person making the choice. Some people give their opinions based off of what they think would be better for yourself and your future. Lastly, some people may give pros and cons of each choice to help t...
Evidence
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Seeking multiple opinions can help make a better choice by helping you make a decision
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Other opinions can help you choose because if multiple people give the same type of advice on what you should choose you should go with it. Although, you may think what if they're lying or what they say may not be accurate, the most important thing is to go with your gut feeling and if you do have the same opinion or i...
Evidence
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When getting advice from multiple people its important to keep in mind when decision making because it can influence the decision you want to make.
Evidence
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The reason as to why people want multiple opinions on a topic is because they want to have an assurance that whatever advice one person gave you is good and can agree with what someone else was thinking or even yourself.
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When seeking for multiple opinions we always keep in mind what would be beneficial from making a certain choice.
Evidence
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Seeing viewpoints from others, having assurance that advice you are given is good and beneficial, and lastly can help make a decision are all reasons why people seek advice and opinions from multiple people. These reasons are main reasons why most people seek multiple opinions and use to make a choice. 
Concluding Statement
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Asking for advice is a crucial part of making a big decision. Many people ask for second opinions when they don't know what they should do, or can't decide on their own.
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it benefits you by giving you a chance to learn from the experience of others,
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view your situation in a different perspective,
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learn more about your choices.
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All of these are valuable assets that will help you later in life, and maybe even help others if they come to you for advice.
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People who have had to make your decision before will have experience with what happened to them when they made the decision. This will help you try to find the result that will best benefit you. My friend Generic_Name always asks for the opinion of others when trying to make a decision. A great example of this is when...
Evidence
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Different perspectives help others understand your problem so they can help you, and also you can now rearrange the pieces of your situation to find a solution. It's always better to look at your choices in a new perspective, because you might find it easier to choose the best one for you from that angle. When I was tr...
Evidence
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Different people may know certain things about the decision that you need to make. Asking for advice from these people will allow you to gain this information and make a better choice. A study from Harvard University found that when given the choice, 99% of people chose to make a decision with advice from multiple stra...
Evidence
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when making a decision, asking for multiple opinions is extremely beneficial.
Position
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You can learn from the experience of others, choose the right choice more easily when looking at different solutions in a new perspective, and gain new information you can pass on to others, thus helping the whole process come full circle. It will benefit you greatly in the long run as well, as you can use anything you...
Concluding Statement
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I think that you should seek other peoples opinion on something
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it gives more viewpoints
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critisim constructive or not
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it could stop from making a rash mistake that could cost your life.
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Its also not a weakness to ask for help even presidents and powerful world leaders have to get and gie opinoins on how good someone would be at a job or too even run a country. Generals need opinions on what attack method they are going to use.
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One of the reason you need to seek opinions on advice is because it gives you more viewpoints on the matter
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If its about what you want to wear today and you ask someone they have given you their viewpoint and their constructive critisim about it. If you are asking people to give you advice about what type of people you should be around with then your getting more viewpoints on the matter. It could even be a viewpoint that sa...
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The next advice on asking for opinions on your advice is critisism. The reason critisism is good is becuase it tells you (in a kind or not so kind) way of what you need to do better at
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Like if you were going to try out for a safety for football and you havent played safety and you've been a wide reciever your whole life your going to get people that will tell you to stick to what you are good at. That is helpful in some senarios but the true help critisism is constructive critisism. The reason constr...
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Here is the final advantage of asking for opinions on you advice is it could save your life.
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This point is going back to the military part of this essay. Say I want to jump out of airplane and skydive down. Then say you've been my friend for almost 5 years ever since junior year and your like, "Hey man I don't think we should do that I've never known you to be a risk taker like that". Then we could find out th...
Evidence
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Do you have trouble making choices by yourself? Sometimes people aren't sure what to do in certain situations so they ask for advice.
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I believe seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice
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other people may have more experience with the topic,
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you can learn a lot from others,
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getting multiple opinions can help you feel more confident in what you are choosing.
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If you haven't dealt with something much then it will be very useful to get advice and opinions from multiple people who have dealt with your problem before. You should ask numerous people about their past experiences to find out what worked best for them. All of that will help you come to a decision that will hopefull...
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When talking to multiple people they may point out some things you never noticed or thought about, they can also look at your situation from another point of view. This is good because you may be focused on one thing but there could be many other important details that you overlooked. You should always ask more than on...
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If you are making a hard choice, it is important to feel good about what you decide. Knowing that other people agree with you and having a lot of feedback will make you more comfortable with your choice. It can also be less stressful if you know that others believe you are doing the right thing. Many people greatly car...
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listening to others advice can be very beneficial. You should always talk to numerous people about important decisions. I think that getting multiple opinions will help people make the best choice because they will gain more information on their problem, they will be more comfortable with their choice, and others might...
Concluding Statement
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Seeking opinions can help you make better decisions. "Two brains are better than one." See now everyone has heard this quote at least one time in their life. And that's because it's true!
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Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make better choices
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more minds the better,
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different people from different cultures can have other ideas.
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it's good to have conversations about something that you're not sure on.
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You know all those tall buildings built in the city? Yeah, those took many minds to make, over 1,000 engineers worked on the worlds tallest building. What if only one engineer made the design plans? I bet you it wouldn't even get past the drawing board. Everyone has heard the "We're stronger together" or "Team work mak...
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You may think that one word is good, but then your friend from a different country might think that that word is horrible! See now no one person is the same so that's why sometimes if you have and opinion on something then maybe you should ask someone else that has a different cultural background from you. One thing th...
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Everyone that is successful right now has asked at least one person for help, I can guarantee you that. So if you need help just ask! It's one of the best ways you can get help anyways. There are over 1,000 different information data bases that can help you find information on anything. One that I like is Wikipedia it ...
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the best you can do is always seek for more information and keep on learning. That's why more than one person's advice is better only one person's advice. So I challenge you to go out into the world and to keep asking questions and to stay educated!
Concluding Statement
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So many of us like to ask a variety of people for help when we are faced with a dilemma, and by doing so we give ourselves the best chance of picking the best option for us.
Lead
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We gain many advantages by doing this, compared to if we relied only on our own knowledge.
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When we ask a variety of people for their opinion on a matter, we get many different solutions to solve a problem
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. We can then compare each of the positive and negative side effects of every option, and find which solution best fits us and our needs. Another advantage to getting numerous inputs on a topic is that we can then refine a majority of the bias out, and make the best choice according to the facts.
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As a quarterback for my football team, I am in constant need of improvement on my skills to further our chances of success. I always ask my coach on what he thinks I need to improve on. He always gives me his feedback, and a way he thinks I could improve on that problem. Sometimes his advice doesn't completely fix the ...
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I ask many people for advise to find the best solution possible, because when I get a group of opinions from everyone, I can use them to build off of each other. By doing this, I can build a stronger opinion that goes more in depth, and fits my needs like a glove.
Concluding Statement
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In a study conducted by Stanford University, scientists found that humans are proven to perform best and make the best decisions when working in a group of people. My mom has always told me that more brains are better than one, and I would have to agree with her. In the past, I have made poor decisions on my own, but w...
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Seeking out multiple opinions helps people make the best choices
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all people have different experiences
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different knowledge
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different perspectives
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Everybody has different experiences that they use to make decisions
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It is helpful to have multiple people's experiences to make the best choice possible. 9 out of 10 people say that they make the most effective decisions when they seek others for advice. They also said that because the people had different experiences than them it helped them choose what would be most efficient under ...
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People have different knowledge of topics that help them throughout the choice making process.
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My mother and I have completely different knowledge bases because she is a physical therapist and I am still in middle school. Once, I had a knee that was inflamed and I thought that the problem was I had twisted it, but my mom observed how I was walking and realized that my shoe was causing the problem; my shoe didn't...
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When you ask somebody else for a second opinion they bring a different perspective based off of their knowledge and experiences
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It is similar to when I went to an art festival in Utah and there was artist who did pavement murals. They looked interesting and beautiful, but to see what the artist wanted you to see you had to stand on footprints that had been painted on the asphalt and look to see what the mural was of. When you have a second pers...
Evidence
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Asking for multiple opinions helps people make the best choices. Getting a second opinion helps you make the best choice because you have another person's opinion based off of their experiences. Every person has different knowledge of topics and they use their knowledge to make decisions. Listening to the opinion of so...
Concluding Statement
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People all around the world go through different things, but it's those who are there with you that help guide the way
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In times of a tough decision, seeking multiple opinions will help in making a better choice
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Everyones opinion gives a different point of view and can help pick out what decision is best
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As well as, some people have gone through similar things and can help talk out the situation
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In my lifetime I have experienced my friend go through a rough path. Because of the people who helped her, she is now happier and living much better.
Evidence
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Many people will have different perspectives.
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They all can influence a decision, because everyone is different. We are raised by our culture and environment. Therefore, no two minds are alike. Situations are seen differently, giving an abundance of different solutions. Imagine a parent and friend helping out the same person, now compare the two. As a parent they w...
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When people are getting someone else's a opinion they are making themselves vulnerable to the fact that different possibilities could happen. People can get strongly judged or rejected on their opinions they've made, as that could heavily impact a choice.
Counterclaim
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However, getting multiple views on a decision is always the best option, because everyone sees things differently.
Rebuttal
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Throughout our life people have been through hardships. Some may be similar situations which include ways it's been dealt with in hopes of others making better choices. With the help of someones past, it can help pave a way for someones decision. Knowing peoples mistakes and consequences can differ what others choose t...
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Talking to people who have dealt with similar problems or people who are professionally trained, can help bring ease to making a decision.
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At one point in life everyone has gone through or knows someone who has been through a tough decision. A couple years ago I had a friend who always gave advice to everyone's problems. She was beautiful, intelligent and fun to be around. However, she did not feel this way about herself. As time went on some situations b...
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To finish off, when seeking multiple opinions it can help someone make a better choice. As said in paragraph one, throughout life people have different views on situations and how to resolve them beneficially. As restated in paragraph two, people in life are faced with many challenges. Knowing others struggle can help ...
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Many students choose to participate in traditional and online schooling. Online schooling can include video conferencing with teacher or enrollment in a class taken on the computer. Giving students the ability to take classes from home is a widely debated topic.
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