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8a349f48d0ee | BA881F8A8909 | Although some believe that students should only have the option of traditional schooling because they are less likely to learn social skills at home, students should be given the opportunity to participate in online schooling | Position | Effective |
c456916ba821 | BA881F8A8909 | it allows them to work at their own pace | Claim | Effective |
af1a9ffe9533 | BA881F8A8909 | lower their stress levels | Claim | Adequate |
a39f74715c49 | BA881F8A8909 | take multiple classes at once. | Claim | Effective |
83ec16be13f8 | BA881F8A8909 | To begin with, students will be able to work at their own pace.
| Claim | Effective |
edd70b9035c3 | BA881F8A8909 | When taking a test in a traditional classroom, some students finish in ten minutes and others take the entire class.
Either way, students should not feel the need to slow down or speed up in order to finish in a certain time.
Forcing kids to work at the pace of their peers will produce lower test scores.
With the op... | Evidence | Adequate |
7522462fb4cb | BA881F8A8909 | In addition, stress levels in students will significantly decrease. | Claim | Effective |
c0940825c24c | BA881F8A8909 | Stress and anxiety among students is extremely high.
Many kids have test anxiety and are not able to perform well in testing environments.
Testing anxiety can be caused by numerous factors but one factor that stands out the most is feeling comfortable in an environment.
If the student does not feel comfortable in th... | Evidence | Effective |
4c66c7ed558f | BA881F8A8909 | Furthermore, the ability to take extra classes is given to students. | Claim | Effective |
52d071075488 | BA881F8A8909 | In order to graduate at many public and private schools, students must meet graduation requirements.
There are multiple classes a student must take to graduate that are electives.
These classes take up space in kid's schedules restricting the amount of core classes a student can take.
If schools allow these kids to ... | Evidence | Effective |
9d6027cc0543 | BA881F8A8909 | In conclusion, students should be given the opportunity to participate in online school because they will have the ability to work at a their own speed, reduce their stress levels, and participate in more classes.
If students are unable to take online courses, they are more likely to get off track in their learning.
... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
d4f771ed0895 | BB4A53A0A9E0 | Every child leads a different life and is born into a different environment
- but the one thing that every child deserves is the chance to receive a quality education. People across the globe have fought for this vital opportunity for decades, advocating for those whose path to knowledge is obscured by circumstance | Lead | Effective |
e6d713fbfbf2 | BB4A53A0A9E0 | Students who have obstacles such as mental health issues or the lack of local education would greatly benefit and be better accommodated from the opportunity to take classes online and from their home. | Position | Effective |
f8f94b01f9fd | BB4A53A0A9E0 | A system of at-home classwork would greatly help any student with a learning disability or intellectual setback | Claim | Adequate |
95e616303790 | BB4A53A0A9E0 | Many children struggle with slight disabilities such as dyslexia or ADHD - small occurrences that hinder the learning process. However, these minuscule variations can have major effects on the way a student absorbs information and needs to be accommodated in the classroom, a setback that many public schools aren't equi... | Evidence | Effective |
b925e82aa329 | BB4A53A0A9E0 | Students that don't have access to public education in the areas in which they live would highly benefit from the ability to take online classes. | Claim | Adequate |
e081c94b32bf | BB4A53A0A9E0 | While a rarity, there are some areas of the globe where young people are denied the chance to receive an education. This is nearly never the fault of the student - where they live, the government of the country that they live in, and their gender or physical appearance are all traits that they cannot control. When the ... | Evidence | Effective |
450ab6cb3295 | BB4A53A0A9E0 | Anxiety can severely stunt the educational career of a budding child, but would be lessened through the attendance of classes from home. | Claim | Adequate |
99e9b515174c | BB4A53A0A9E0 | Anxiety can infiltrate every corner of a student's thought process, and whether the stress is academically related or not, it affects the way that a child learns and grows. Participation grades, group projects, popularity expectations, and the rumor mill of regular public school can take a more severe toll on children ... | Evidence | Effective |
adf43cdde1f8 | BB4A53A0A9E0 | The opportunity to receive at-home education and attend classes through an online program would provide important accommodations to students that otherwise feel out-of-place in the regular public school system, namely those with mental setbacks or difficult geographical circumstances. While it is a privilege and would ... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
70ab0634efde | BBBC74680147 | I think some students with benefit from distance learning and some wont.
| Position | Ineffective |
2ba2efc2e8be | BBBC74680147 | Some student wont have any devices to set up a video confrence with.
| Counterclaim | Adequate |
f6533186be0c | BBBC74680147 | Some students might now have internet at home or other places.
| Evidence | Adequate |
e48735c7109e | BBBC74680147 | Distance learning is also good because it gives students a chance to catch up on school work at home and they wont have to sit in a classroom all day.
| Claim | Adequate |
8bdae40c1148 | BBBC74680147 | Distance learning is also very helpful because some students might not be able to attende schools but with distance learning they wont have to go to a school to learn with other kids they can be in there own space to concentrate. | Evidence | Adequate |
bfd7365f10ea | BBBC74680147 | Distance learning also has some benefits like parents wont have to get up so early to make sure there kids get on the bus and some parents might not have cars to get there children to school. | Claim | Adequate |
a37ff0b05d45 | BBBC74680147 | Students wont get in to fights our get in trouble at school if there home they can have 1 on 1 with the teachers there having a video confrence with there so many great things about distance learning. | Evidence | Adequate |
3441afcffa2f | BBBC74680147 | Distance learning has some flaws to because sometimes it might not always work there could be bugs in the software or the quality of the video might not be great | Counterclaim | Adequate |
1dce80c31c17 | BBBC74680147 | also distance learning is something that not alot people might be able to attende. Some people might not even have access to devices or internet they can go to a public library but thats will be only temporary and students wont be able to do distance learning aftoen because the software might be to expensive. | Evidence | Adequate |
fff1909367a9 | BBBC74680147 | Some people might think distance learning is a waste of time because students who dont pay attention in school wont pay attention if there in distance learning. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
e81a76082e55 | BBBC74680147 | But it is also good because students who have bad grades or cant focus in a classroom setting can take the oppertunity to use distance learning to pass there classes with ease. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
c6bd789b6bdf | BBBC74680147 | Distance learning is also good for students looking to be home schooled | Claim | Adequate |
fc84e90247bb | BBBC74680147 | they have this program to get them threw there high school/middle schools classes. | Evidence | Adequate |
22abe16bac42 | BBBC74680147 | In conclusion i am with and against distance learning. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
15fdb8e64457 | BBDA39C84AF7 | Having different opinions for advice is a good thing. If someone asks multiple people advice on a problem then the outcome would be their is different answers for different people. | Lead | Adequate |
17a16d5eb95d | BBDA39C84AF7 | When they get different answers from different people then they can narrow the most logical answer from the different people. | Claim | Adequate |
3fbe959ca082 | BBDA39C84AF7 | Finding multiple opinions is the best way to correct or enforce your idea or create an idea. | Claim | Adequate |
f6f053f286ac | BBDA39C84AF7 | That is why having multiple opinions on a subject is a good thing. | Position | Adequate |
6e73d8d894da | BBDA39C84AF7 | If you go up to one of your friends and ask for some advice. Then, you ask someone else about that same advice. After you will probably get a difference in opinions. | Evidence | Adequate |
1f295c0295d9 | BBDA39C84AF7 | Although it is good to have multiple opinions your not always going to get a straight answer. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
b2236c4793bf | BBDA39C84AF7 | Like if someone has 5 candidacies and they ask each person separately a majority of the candidates will have different answers. So, if someone has both of the same answers then the person who is asking will probably lean more to the similar answers. Just because the people go towards that answer doesn't mean that it is... | Evidence | Ineffective |
710c18a7fd88 | BBDA39C84AF7 | If a person has an idea or needs an idea about something they are going to want to get advice about something. If they have an idea then they can either change the idea or enforce there idea from the different opinions. If they don't have an idea then they can get ideas from the peoples advice. | Evidence | Adequate |
e0a0ccbde6a2 | BBDA39C84AF7 | That is why having multiple perspective of an opinion is good. | Claim | Adequate |
55a208393c95 | BBDA39C84AF7 | Having a difference in opinion, to find a way to decide on different opinions, giving advice, and deciding on changing or enforcing ideas. It all has to do with how having multiple people giving advice is a good thing. though sometimes having a difference in opinion it is not perfect it is not all that bad to have diff... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
5a0431124d16 | BDE08546F7EE | Having Online Classes show positive and negative results in a student. Online Classes are like regular classes, that teaches you the S
tandards of Learning . Like every other class, students listen to what the teacher has to say and answer questions on that objective, of what the teacher taught them. | Lead | Adequate |
da4255f8baa4 | BDE08546F7EE | Students that take online classes do have its benefits. For example, if you don't have enough credits, counselors tell students that are going to graduate if they do or do not have enough credits, they can take online classes. | Claim | Adequate |
9441203201ed | BDE08546F7EE | As long as you sign up with the school your attending, complete the course and earn the credit; they're able to graduate. | Evidence | Ineffective |
0a19d47bfacb | BDE08546F7EE | Another reason are Programs, | Claim | Adequate |
953c55347862 | BDE08546F7EE | if you're in a high school program, you might have to take an "Exit-Test" exam. An example of that is C.I.S.L. (Center of Intelligence Studies of Languages), throughout high school you learn a new language, besides English, at the end of junior or senior year, and you'd take this exam to see how much you learn by takin... | Evidence | Adequate |
a5be59b7ab20 | BDE08546F7EE | Another example is College, | Claim | Adequate |
e0e57c190edf | BDE08546F7EE | some young adults can't afford to leave home or to busy taking care of their family, to even see a sight of college in their future. That's why Online Colleges were made, to help those who can't help themselves nor have the money of affording a tuition. College online classes, are the same as high school you listen to ... | Evidence | Adequate |
35f63f1fbd42 | BDE08546F7EE | Another reason Online classes are beneficial they're different schedule classes. | Claim | Adequate |
44f89b207c72 | BDE08546F7EE | For example you have to work 11:30 A.M. through 8:30 P.M. Then you can schedule a class for 10:00 P.M. You can pick your time of the day class. Different from being in a real school, you have to be at that class at a certain time and day, or you're marked absent or tardy. | Evidence | Adequate |
a4e19802c213 | BDE08546F7EE | But there are also some consequences in Online Classes; online classes, are actually classes and real professors grade you on your work, so if your slacking or getting real low quiz and test scores, you've failed the class, and you don't get any credit from that class. Then you have to redo the whole course, because wi... | Counterclaim | Adequate |
497f79e1d128 | BDE08546F7EE |
However, I believe that online classes are very beneficial for students. | Position | Adequate |
7c9786d7a193 | BDE08546F7EE | To take classes from home or from school, doesnt really matter, as long as you get the class credit and complete your recommencement, you can graduate. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
e3ebba403ae5 | BEE54D4D2B79 | Taking one's own advice may be beneficial when common sense is involved, but seeking multiple opinions helps one make a better choice. | Position | Effective |
4d3cd7337408 | BEE54D4D2B79 | People depend on other's gratification and it feels great when someone likes the outcome of a decision. In order for this to happen, one should ask multiple people for advice and shouldn't only take their's. When I take my own advice, it is often biased towards what I want, and I don't necessarily see all points of vie... | Evidence | Effective |
1baf045a1e94 | BEE54D4D2B79 | With more important decisions that go beyond common sense, seeking multiple opinions avoids bias, leads to multiple perspectives, and opens up new possibilities. | Claim | Effective |
7ba5bcb48614 | BEE54D4D2B79 | When someone seeks advice, they should ask multiple people because it ensures them that their choice will be least biased. People should avoid bias because some opinions may not benefit them and may only benefit the person who is giving the piece of advice. When people ask for advice, each person they ask most likely h... | Evidence | Effective |
8d78a4fe30df | BEE54D4D2B79 | Talking to more than one person when faced with a difficult situation leads to multiple perspectives. | Claim | Effective |
429658ac50e5 | BEE54D4D2B79 | With each person one asks for advice, there is ridiculously small chance that they would all have the same exact opinion. Each person is different and has a new perspective of the dilemma. Seeking advice from my parents would yield different perspectives than if I ask my friends or siblings. For instance, when I talked... | Evidence | Effective |
905022e843e7 | BEE54D4D2B79 | seeking multiple opinions may open up new possibilities that should be considered when making a decision | Claim | Effective |
1e0e3cb41081 | BEE54D4D2B79 | . Each person one talks to may offer a different alternative to the decision at hand. This leads to an array of new and sometimes worse options. When talking to my parents about moving to Generic_City, they told me that moving to Generic_City now would be the most beneficial because if we didn't move before high school... | Evidence | Effective |
49821b8ae87f | BEE54D4D2B79 | Crucial aspects of making a good choice are avoiding bias, seeing the decision through other people's perspective, and considering all options. Seeking advice from multiple people leads to all of this, making asking people for advice an important task to do when faced with a choice to make. Avoiding bias aids in making... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
66461177034e | BF3CC3305C55 | My phone buzzed with his name appearing at the top. God, I don't wanna talk to you right now, take a hint man. My boyfriend and I had just had a huge fight and I'm texting my friend Generic_Name for advice. After explaining her opinion she says to listen to other peoples advice then decide what to do.
When faced with ... | Lead | Effective |
40e7cb1f7dc9 | BF3CC3305C55 | seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice. | Position | Adequate |
0da6655fde96 | BF3CC3305C55 | getting advice could be a good thing, since many different people have all had vastly different experiences. | Claim | Effective |
31982671ddf9 | BF3CC3305C55 | At the Virginia school of Technology they completed a study on getting advice from just one person compared to reciving advice more more than one person. Both people were given the same issue but only one was able to receive more than one persons advice. One of the conductors of the experiment, Dr. Joy Engstrom, stated... | Evidence | Effective |
05f233807a80 | BF3CC3305C55 | receiving advice from more than one person can also help to build trust with the people you ask. | Claim | Effective |
3f69de53e225 | BF3CC3305C55 | A study done by Jake Miller at the Maryland University of Health shows that when someone comes to another person for advice their trust in them normally increases. Mr. Miller Claims that, " You install a certain level of trust in someone when you ask them for advice, if it be something small or something huge. Asking f... | Evidence | Effective |
57e31a79b4be | BF3CC3305C55 | different sets of advice can also bring you to the best possibly out come. Creating a more logical and better choice to make. | Claim | Effective |
a7fd4edfb99d | BF3CC3305C55 | At the University of Utah a survey went around asking students if they made better choice when they asked more people for advice or if they made a better choice when they asked one person for advice 70.2% said they made a better choice when asking more people compared to the 29.8% that claimed they made a better choice... | Evidence | Effective |
2aca59c11591 | BF3CC3305C55 | asking more people for their opinion can not only help you build trust with the people you ask, but help you learn more about them and their experiences and make the best choice. So in the future it is much recommended that you seek more than just one persons opinion on a situation your not so sure about. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
de0cb139c1cd | BF619ADE9BF4 | One morning, Generic_Name the Pterodactyl hopped outside of his old nest. The nest has been in his family for generations but had started to wear down. The twigs were falling out left and right and they would poke him while he slept. Not to mention that it was located in a dangerous neighborhood. Generic_Name decided i... | Lead | Effective |
51fb8c344a71 | BF619ADE9BF4 | Seeking multiple opinions on something can help | Position | Effective |
a55834724411 | BF619ADE9BF4 | give you clearer and better feedback, | Claim | Effective |
689ee33da258 | BF619ADE9BF4 | can even help you decide for yourself. | Claim | Effective |
8c7e2d7577f3 | BF619ADE9BF4 | The more trials you have in an experiment, the more accurate your results will be. Let's use Generic_Name for an example. If Generic_Name had only listened to Generic_Name, then he would be up to his ankles in empty potato chip bags and energy drinks. It was because he asked multiple pterodactyls, that he was able to g... | Evidence | Effective |
d45b8456f7db | BF619ADE9BF4 | Facts101. com says that your gut is right 85% of the time. I've been in the scenario multiple times where I circled an answer on a quiz, but convinced myself that I was wrong and circle another answer. So I turned in my paper when I was done and my teacher graded them. She gave them back and it turned out that I was ri... | Evidence | Effective |
a85256ea78dc | BF619ADE9BF4 | To sum up, seeking advice from multiple pterodactyls - I mean people, can give you better and more honest feedback, and can help you decide for yourself. So don't be afraid to ask for opinions because in the end it might just help you soar | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
a5a5974edb70 | C0542F9D82BC | Why seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice. | Position | Adequate |
3514d5eb4d83 | C0542F9D82BC | Sometime going to other people for advice can help you with many different situations | Claim | Adequate |
1525f237bd0c | C0542F9D82BC | Some people may have a very good explanation to whats going on,they just maybe more experienced then you, | Claim | Adequate |
70b6f68b97b3 | C0542F9D82BC | can be seen for another point of view.
| Claim | Adequate |
b13fa01cf598 | C0542F9D82BC | Your having a problem in yous relationship,and you want to work it out but you dont know whats going on. Maybe your not spending enough time with your husband or wife. So you go to a friend you can trust,and yall talk about what to do,then you go back home and work it out. | Evidence | Adequate |
0f5ef8617c23 | C0542F9D82BC | Your've building a car with your dad and you try to start it but it wont turn on. You and your dad are lost on what to do. So you go to a mechanic,and turns out u was missing some key parts to the motor. | Evidence | Adequate |
d1c877bcb5da | C0542F9D82BC | the person you go to see may look at the problem from a different point of view. | Claim | Adequate |
2204e9eaa924 | C0542F9D82BC | Your arguing with a sibling about something and both of you think you right. Your sibling goes to your parents about the situation. Both of you tell your side of the argument. Your sibling is right,but you wasnt completely wrong either. | Evidence | Ineffective |
4c0e6547e57e | C0542F9D82BC | in my opinion going to other people for advice is a great choice if your torn about what to do. Different people mean different results. The more people more results. This will conclude my essay thank you. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
28c0feb0023d | C0611756DF81 | Have you ever needed advise but didn't know who to ask? You think about who to ask do you ask your uncle is it your grandpa teacher who? The answer is all of them | Lead | Effective |
93833b536be7 | C0611756DF81 | it is much better to ask multiple peoples opinions than just one for multiple reasons. | Position | Effective |
b2e2cd2eb10a | C0611756DF81 | not every one thinks the same way. | Claim | Adequate |
9e452bd103f9 | C0611756DF81 | By asking more people you will have a solution that works best for you. Remember that you don't have to take any one persons advise you can use the the advise given to you to form your own solution. Over all you get a more personalized response to your problems or question.
| Evidence | Effective |
a3923f8671cf | C0611756DF81 | not every one has the experience and knowledge on your situation. | Claim | Effective |
6a23e92317d0 | C0611756DF81 | Not everyone knows how to do it or what to do. If you ask your dad and he knows nothing about it you cant just give up. you have to ask multiple people someone will give an answer. However you cant stop there you need something that works for you and some body who might have more experience in that area of life and giv... | Evidence | Effective |
622c671a89e1 | C0611756DF81 | if you have a question and you ask more than person you are going to get a more valid response. | Claim | Effective |
60c87b88395d | C0611756DF81 | I mean if the majority of people give one response it probably the correct answer. You dont to ask one person only to find out that they're wrong. I would also advise you to ask the person why they think what they think. asking more than one person will help you better stand the problem and by doing that we can narrow ... | Evidence | Effective |
e4fcd2b85e0f | C0611756DF81 | Thats why its better to ask multiple people. You will have a valid and personalized response from people of all different backgrounds. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
79cff1293eec | C2A6C69714EC | When you ask someone for advice on something do you try to get a second opinion? Well if you have not I bet not getting multiple opinions is not the best choice to make because its smarter to get multiple. Say even if the other opinions are not something you would want or do it is still smart to get because they could ... | Lead | Effective |
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