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cbc81f96de63 | DD1D41CC5388 | you have more options to choose from, | Claim | Effective |
43ad05d78316 | DD1D41CC5388 | someone may have trouble answering your question, | Claim | Effective |
f19c0aa975cf | DD1D41CC5388 | you may end up finding someone who has more knowledge about your question. | Claim | Effective |
5e6fa71702af | DD1D41CC5388 | When I asked my mom for advice, she gave me an answer I wasn't quite comfortable doing. Also, if it wasn't my sister and grandma, I would have been stuck flirting, which is uncomfortable for me. At the end of the day, I had a lot of opinions from different people, and it was my choice to choose the one I feel is better... | Evidence | Effective |
fdcdc52a31cb | DD1D41CC5388 | When I asked my mom for help, she looked at me with a confused face and paused for a long time. I think it was because she never thought of me asking that question before. As a result, she couldn't think of an answer on the spot. She still gave me good advice, but it did seem as if she had trouble answering me. If you ... | Evidence | Effective |
3bfdc0277411 | DD1D41CC5388 | my sister is in college, and she is taking a social development class. Believe it or not, she learned about the difficulties of confrontation with the opposite gender. In that class, she learned about what not to do when you are talking to a male or female. Which means she knows a lot more about my question then my gra... | Evidence | Effective |
6316f50ea709 | DD1D41CC5388 | getting advice from more than one person has its rewards. My reasoning is because you have more options to choose from, one person may trouble answering your question, and another person may have more knowledge about your question. Ask someone who has more experience with what you want to know. Also, go to someone you ... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
6031e5d188c3 | DE2A70D1284E | Imagine yourself in a stressful situation causing you to be confused and frustrated because you cannot form a legitimate solution. In this situation your problem may be dire, but the usage of advice from others can help you. Through everyday life, we are constantly finding ourselves in troubling circumstances. Gaining ... | Lead | Effective |
bc5c9ee564f7 | DE2A70D1284E | Asking multiple sources for advice can influence you to make better decisions | Position | Effective |
8803a40467d7 | DE2A70D1284E | you learn different perspectives, | Claim | Effective |
a170d72b6652 | DE2A70D1284E | gain knowledge from others who have dealt with similar circumstances, | Claim | Effective |
bd95da4d5561 | DE2A70D1284E | realize the multiple ways to solve the problem.
| Claim | Effective |
f81a993e3298 | DE2A70D1284E | When seeking advice from others, we likely already have a favored position on the topic. Sometimes, we search for reassurance and not advice. However, questioning others about our situations is better for the outcome of the experience because it brings us new perspectives. Perspective can be key to finding the solution... | Evidence | Effective |
3d99164b3e18 | DE2A70D1284E | Specifically, it is more beneficial when you ask others who have dealt with similar experiences for help. When we do this, we find ourselves relating to others and taking their advice into greater consideration. Through this method, we gain knowledge on possible outcomes for our conflict and how it can be resolved. Whi... | Evidence | Effective |
a3669d4d18c3 | DE2A70D1284E | It is inevitable that the more people you ask, the more likely you are to hear different opinions and opposing responses. This is a natural occurrence considering that as humans, we all have unique experiences that effect how we look at situations. Through asking others for possible solutions, we can find one that corr... | Evidence | Effective |
cfa08602380c | DE2A70D1284E | As a result of us collectively having different experiences in life, we get to provide one another with new thoughts and ideas through giving advice. The process of seeking multiple opinions can provide you with a guaranteed and better outcome for handling a pressing conflict. You can also recognize the many ways one c... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
d949c1851097 | DF9580284892 | Asking more than one person is better than asking just one person. | Position | Effective |
5fc256b48e5f | DF9580284892 | If you ask one person for advice its not the best because you are only getting one idea. | Evidence | Effective |
f931664dae60 | DF9580284892 | If you ask more than one person like 10 people than thats better because you have lots of different ideas and opinions. | Claim | Effective |
e0a210be17b9 | DF9580284892 | In my opinion asking more people is better because i get multiple opinions to help[ me make a better choice. If you feel comfortable asking just one person then do it, but having multiple opinions will help you make a better choice. So lets say you want to get advice on how to get a girlfriend. You go to your best frie... | Evidence | Adequate |
9c0d045a6de1 | E018497ED277 | Many schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Sometime,the attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing is advantage and disadvantage. | Lead | Adequate |
62c06eb03379 | E018497ED277 | In my own thinking, I disagree students wouldn't benefit from being able to attend classes from home | Position | Adequate |
ba589fefe3ab | E018497ED277 | they will difficult to interchange, | Claim | Adequate |
fc80beab495d | E018497ED277 | low experience | Claim | Ineffective |
5db66047d029 | E018497ED277 | less communicate | Claim | Adequate |
71d69054dc5e | E018497ED277 | to affect deployment or presentation in their program. | Claim | Adequate |
a265f10e25ed | E018497ED277 | To begin with, students should have low grade if they didn't face to face interaction with teachers. | Claim | Adequate |
56ed7bac0397 | E018497ED277 | If you earn a degree from a school with no accreditation, you can find yourself with a worthless degree that will leave you in debt and no better prepared for the workforce. For instance, my friends being to attend classes and he studies online or video conferencing. Some question, he doesn't understand and he has no i... | Evidence | Adequate |
b510a5c795cb | E018497ED277 | Furthermore, students can slow evolution and more work. | Claim | Adequate |
ed2d6698d207 | E018497ED277 | Program in general are improving the quality of their online courses, and this means that students will have to do more to prove that they've mastered the material. For example, we need to research and find the information in internet. That's make us work for more time and sometime teachers gave them the homework but s... | Evidence | Adequate |
61ed8bca8fc7 | E018497ED277 | Moreover, students need more intense requirement for self-direction because you have to know study online is good or bad for you. | Claim | Effective |
d0fc9681fae1 | E018497ED277 | However, if you are pursing an entire degree online, you will need to be proactive in finding the information you need to ensure that you are taking the right classes for your degree plan. Students also pass the concentrate when teachers teach them. Beside that,some students destitute responsibilities in their knowledg... | Evidence | Adequate |
75df6870615a | E018497ED277 | Base on this argument, students shouldn't being able to attend classes from home and study in online or video conferencing. I think study in online or video are very bad for you because you will low experience, knowledge, and low contact with your teachers. You have to contact with your teachers because It will help yo... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
4c4f9baf0ea8 | E0B1630FB93C | Gathering multiple opinions helps people make better choices by giving them multiple viewpoints. These new viewpoints can give them various new way to approach the decision. By having multiple ways to approach the problem, you can choose the best one and make the best decision. | Position | Effective |
775422f1cb6a | E0B1630FB93C | Asking someone for advice can make you realize an option that you haven't thought of yet. | Claim | Effective |
ca6ac18fa9cb | E0B1630FB93C | Sometimes you think that you can only choose one of two or three options. However, when you ask someone else for advice, they might notice an option that you hadn't noticed that's even better. One time I had a track meet on my friends birthday. I wanted to go to his birthday party and celebrate with him, but my team re... | Evidence | Effective |
b1c407e493d2 | E0B1630FB93C | By gaining a different viewpoint of the decision, you could notice new pros and cons that you hadn't thought of for each option. At the beginning of this year I was deciding whether or not I wanted to apply for Generic_School. When I was deciding if I wanted to apply, I was mostly thinking about how hard to application... | Evidence | Effective |
95bd66efcb68 | E0B1630FB93C | Other people can sometime give you advice because have gone through a similar choice. | Claim | Effective |
23349ff835db | E0B1630FB93C | If you ask someone for advice, they may be able to take something they learned from a choice they had to make. You can apply that to the decision that you need to make. When I was in fifth grade, I was in my last year of Cub Scouts and I was getting ready to cross over into Boy Scouts. I had to choose what Boy Scout tr... | Evidence | Effective |
ae6721edb4c7 | E0B1630FB93C | Asking people for advice is very important, because hearing other viewpoints can give us a new way of thinking about the decision we have to make. The next time you have to make an important choice, try asking people you trust for advice. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
20580645a714 | E1571FAF496E | Imagine never going to school again! instead you could take all your classes online from home. | Lead | Adequate |
163e15ecb290 | E1571FAF496E | Online classes are very beneficial towards students who are unable to attend their classes at school. | Position | Adequate |
fe5068a0b9af | E1571FAF496E | They could take their core classes online so they have more time to work towards their goals and their chosen electives during the school day. | Claim | Adequate |
898056ea1ecf | E1571FAF496E | For some students, they might not have space in their schedule for the classes they want to take during the school day, so online courses would resolve this issue | Evidence | Adequate |
e0c5349bf8f1 | E1571FAF496E | Also, some students may not learn well in a physical classroom because they feel anxious and timid | Claim | Adequate |
dd2626193fd6 | E1571FAF496E | In an online classroom they wouldn't face those obstacles, rather they're able to learn freely. Why choose to take your classes in school, when you can take them from the comfort of your own home | Evidence | Adequate |
211fa6d7c4ed | E1571FAF496E | How an online class works is that it's held at a certain time every week. During this hour long session the teacher turns on her video cam and goes through a power point teaching us what we need to know for the week. | Claim | Ineffective |
24afad0e0118 | E1571FAF496E | Afterwards, there are several assignments that are posted in Google Classroom that we must complete before our next class. This is done so you have the same workload as the students who take it in school. To be able to excel in your online course you need to manage your time very well. You should be able to balance you... | Evidence | Adequate |
c61977e9c1e1 | E1571FAF496E | There are many reasons why someone might take an online course. The main reasons are either push or pull. A push factor would be something that forced you to take an online class. A pull factor would be something that attracted you to take an online course | Claim | Adequate |
73d4c531de36 | E1571FAF496E | An example of a push factor would be if your school shut down and you would need to complete your courses online. For example, the threat of corona virus has caused some schools to shut down to keep everybody healthy and continue their courses online from home instead of coming to school. An example of a pull factor wo... | Evidence | Adequate |
0aeb74a36537 | E1571FAF496E | Another great reason that online classes are beneficial are that the class you want may not be offered at your school so you can take it online from your home | Claim | Adequate |
98fe85c92ec4 | E1571FAF496E | You might also live far from the nearest school and do not have a form of transportation to go to and back from school. Online classes would allow you the same education that is given to someone who physically shows up to school physically. This would be a push factor. | Evidence | Adequate |
c6b094d59913 | E1571FAF496E | A counter argument could be that some families might be not having a laptop to use for your online courses | Counterclaim | Adequate |
b7792fb6901f | E1571FAF496E | I think many schools are starting to give out issued laptops to their students. If that is not the case or they dont have WIFI, they could always go to the nearest library and make use of the resources there. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
7961945fce08 | E1571FAF496E | Overall, it doesnt matter if you were a push factor or a pull factor, online courses are beneficial to students no matter what circumstance you are in. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
3e53831cca3c | E157A46F6620 | Everybody faces obstacles throughout their lives whether it is as simple as getting up from bed to something as complex as purchasing a new house. During these times, people may choose to seek advice from others thinking that they could help them make a better decision. However, some people may choose to not seek advic... | Lead | Effective |
7042d7b9d91c | E157A46F6620 | I think that seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice. | Position | Effective |
bf70060f36dd | E157A46F6620 | others can share their ideas, | Claim | Effective |
1e38576988f8 | E157A46F6620 | they can ensure that the research and information is all accurate, | Claim | Effective |
4e18a344da0a | E157A46F6620 | it creates a unbiased choice. | Claim | Effective |
2fb073c4b4c2 | E157A46F6620 | For example, if a teacher was buying a new car, they would want to spend as much time as possible researching for the best car they could buy. However, even if they spent that much time, they could still end up buying a car that they end up not liking. Although if they asked others for advice, others may be able to sha... | Evidence | Effective |
9d6291d9ef17 | E157A46F6620 | If the person researches and ends up compiling a ton of inaccurate information, that won't help them at all. This is very likely as many sources online can be inaccurate. Although | Evidence | Effective |
33bbc1956c43 | E157A46F6620 | Back to the car example, lets say someone told the teacher that the car they wanted to buy was a bad choice. However, the teacher disagreed with him and she told him something that was completely incorrect. Others would be able to point this out and make sure that the information she found was 100% true and that her re... | Evidence | Effective |
cc0fcf75a97b | E157A46F6620 | If the teacher just asked the manager in a Toyota car dealership about what car she should purchase, the manager would most likely recommend a car from Toyota because he would want to advertise his dealership. However this would make her choice extremely biased especially if the manager didn't provide details to back u... | Evidence | Effective |
6615a4a63658 | E157A46F6620 | I believe that seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice. This is because others could share the information and experiences that they have had or been through. They can also make sure that the information they have is accurate. Everyone's opinions could create a choice that is less-biased. By com... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
8e0bfdb6b07a | E24F801F1C4A | Advice is something many people would like to have when making a hard decision. So many people struggle with having to make such a diffcult choice. This can affect your daily actives and interfer with school, school is already so stressful and adding more stress is just so overwhelming. Having others advice can help wi... | Lead | Adequate |
12d89934b019 | E24F801F1C4A | relive the ongoing stress, | Claim | Effective |
3a9495c80d32 | E24F801F1C4A | help you focus on the conquences of others opinions, | Claim | Effective |
17f73da8dca0 | E24F801F1C4A | you can make the decision faster. | Claim | Effective |
0a1de3ad1a90 | E24F801F1C4A | Many people struggle with horrible stress and it can be really hard. Having all this weight on your shoulders can bring you down. You can go into a bad mind set and want to give up. It can be very diffcult to relive your stress sometimes. Asking for other peoples opinions when making a decision, can help you. It will m... | Evidence | Effective |
0e42a0bcc393 | E24F801F1C4A | The first step to make a good decision is to think about your conquences. Some people make a decision and regret it because they did not think about their conquences. For example, when people go to jail, they regret their descision they made because it changed their life in a horrible way. Other peoples opinions can le... | Evidence | Effective |
56ff7baeb28a | E24F801F1C4A | Having the help of others advice, can lead you into making the right decision. | Position | Effective |
482e71e44d37 | E24F801F1C4A | If you ask for help, you might not have so much stress, therefore you might make the decision faster. Making it faster will mean you will have less stress, you wont have to worry about it so much, and you can just move on and enjoy it. When something goes by faster you can just think about the furture and not worry so ... | Evidence | Effective |
52266e8fd00d | E24F801F1C4A | getting advice from other people is a huge benefit to have. You will have way less stress then just having no help and influence, then you did before. Also you will be way more focused at school because you are not so worried about one decision. All this edvidence will help others think before they make a bad decision ... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
e4181bd27a5a | E33ACC2CE4A9 | Seeking multiple opinions on a topic can help somone make a better choice because, the person gets different points of veiw. | Position | Effective |
2408b0583c41 | E33ACC2CE4A9 | Asking for advice by multiple sources can help the person become aware of possible bias or non-bias answers, which they may encounter if they only ask one person. | Claim | Effective |
b5950795a77c | E33ACC2CE4A9 | For example, say you need advice on whether or not to get a dog or a cat as a pet. What would happen if you did seek advice? What would happen if you didn't? What kind of opinions would you become aware of?
You are unsure whether a dog or cat is a right pet for you. You decide to ask the advice from multiple others by... | Evidence | Effective |
966b151c4694 | E33ACC2CE4A9 | asking multiple people for their opinion helps you make a better choice to decied what best suits you, opens your eyes to different points of view, or possibilities. You now know the pros and cons for your question, you may even be able to relate to an opinion more, helping you decide on an option. In the end, you happ... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
14a7f3987ec1 | E3E50332E6FD | Sometimes we need advice, and asking one person for advice just doesn't provide you with the right advice you are in need of. When we ask more than one person it can benefit us, because each answer is so diverse and it is seen from a different perspective. When its one person, you only hear their bit of advice, and som... | Lead | Effective |
f114dcc97e2f | E3E50332E6FD | I can tell you how getting advice from more than one person is better than just one.
| Position | Adequate |
a06f6958f827 | E3E50332E6FD | Advice is a very important thing that everyone needs in their life, at least once even if it's for something good, or something bad. Adivce can change our take on things, because it can change the way we do things, or not. We get the best advice when we ask more than one person, because you can look through someone els... | Evidence | Adequate |
e00d8e20927d | E3E50332E6FD | When you ask more than one person, you can get a lot of good feedback therefore, you could have a lot good advice to use, whcih is another benefit of asking multiple people for advice. | Claim | Effective |
d5db1a4c93fe | E3E50332E6FD | Sometimes to recieve good advice, it is all in who you ask, because maybe asking people your age or younger may not be the right people to ask but older people may be the right ones, and vise versa. Here is a good example of asking one person versus many people for advice. When trasforming from child teen, we need advi... | Evidence | Effective |
cf9b75cdaabd | E3E50332E6FD | You can always ask as many people as you want, because everyone is different, and different people have different answers that can help you out. | Claim | Effective |
ded8a07cdb4e | E3E50332E6FD | If they are a bad influence on people, you should definitely not ask those types of people for advice, because they could lead you in the wrong direction. Look for people you know will be helpful and who will try to point you in the right direction to get you on the right road. Stray away from asking mischeveous people... | Evidence | Effective |
ab60f8cac5c7 | E3E50332E6FD | Asking a lot of good people is better than asking bad ones. | Claim | Adequate |
78f78af87925 | E3E50332E6FD | It is always good start with adults when asking for advice, because they were kids once too, and they may know a lot even if they didn't grow up in the same generation. Many grew up differently, and the different responses can come in handy. | Evidence | Effective |
974fc01a13cb | E3E50332E6FD | In the end we realize asking multiple people for advice even if they are young or old, is the way to go, because it will benefit you the most. Whatever the advice you need may be, asking many is the beneficial thing to do. So next time you are in need of advice remember these key things to look for and follow, then ask... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
877f3c5df51e | E459422C794C | When making decisions people often look to others for advice. Whether the decision be where to go for lunch or something that would alter your life people seek others opinion. Often times going to more than one person to get advice can be a very beneficial thing to do. | Lead | Effective |
1c4f51f5ed30 | E459422C794C | Getting more than one opinion can be very helpful since it gives you more outlook on the question at hand | Position | Effective |
f29156dc3f58 | E459422C794C | By asking more than one person you get multiple sides of your situation | Claim | Adequate |
6064010257a6 | E459422C794C | their past experience in doing something similar | Claim | Adequate |
42588a60ec7d | E459422C794C | in the end you will be more confident in your final choice. | Claim | Adequate |
c32722c14b8f | E459422C794C | Going to other for advice can really open your eyes to all sides of your dilemma. | Claim | Effective |
9780ff4797f3 | E459422C794C | Perhaps you want to apply to a school and are having a hard time deciding whether to apply or not. Asking someone who may have gone to that school or had experience with something like that would be helpful because they know what its like. Then for another opinion talk to someone close to you like a friend or a family ... | Evidence | Effective |
641d2296850c | E459422C794C | Some of the people you would want to talk to probably have more experience than you do. | Claim | Effective |
0701660758d2 | E459422C794C | This would be optimal considering they have already gone through something very similar and know which choices have a bad outcome. A family member, close friend, or anyone you trust really would be a good option for this. If they are older than you its likely they had to make some similar decision and will relate to yo... | Evidence | Effective |
f1def87129a6 | E459422C794C | After asking all these people and taking into consideration all of their opinions there should be a pretty clear final decision. | Claim | Effective |
19e85e641a0b | E459422C794C | Since you've asked all of these people you should be able to confidently make a good choice that will benefit you. Going into something like a job or a try out is optimal for success. All in all more opinions makes a stronger and more sound conclusion to the problem at hand.
An example of this from my past experience ... | Evidence | Effective |
7116b6c18d8f | E459422C794C | asking more than one person for their opinion on a problem is very beneficial. By asking more people you can see all different sides of the question. These people have different experiences which could cause them to see things that you cant. Having all of these different sides should make it so your final decision is s... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
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