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9ddfc8fee01a | EBBA36F7459C | When a person asks the people around them for an opinion, they are often bombarded with a plethora of different reasons. However, when they talk with one person in particular it is enough to allow them to finally make a decision. For me, this person was my uncle. My uncle helped me formulate the best course of action, ... | Evidence | Effective |
a839ddc7247b | EBBA36F7459C |
Seeking a multitude of opinions when making a complex decision is crucial to making the right decision. This is because seeking different opinions exposes people to new ways of reasoning and outlooks, lowers the amount of bias, and can allow people to make a decision quicker with the aid of another person. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
f61eb9ebc63a | EBBA36F7459C | many people say that seeking multiple opinions can confuse the person who is asking, and will result in more problems. | Counterclaim | Effective |
52938bf9a683 | EBBA36F7459C | This way of thinking is flawed. In most cases, the person will actually gain a sense of understanding about the topic and acquire new knowledge, allowing them to make an informed and thoughtful decision. | Rebuttal | Effective |
5e9c5ef077b8 | ECE0D33B9B85 | Should students gonna be benefit from being able to attend classes from home? | Lead | Ineffective |
96ff40a94d07 | ECE0D33B9B85 | students are gonna be benefit from being able to take classes in their house | Position | Adequate |
224f59308374 | ECE0D33B9B85 | students can sleep more time during the morning so, they can concentrate better, | Claim | Adequate |
cf03d495bfb7 | ECE0D33B9B85 | students are not gonna be distracted by their classmates | Claim | Adequate |
46cf47c67e29 | ECE0D33B9B85 | and students can do their work when do they have tome to do it. | Claim | Adequate |
00450660add5 | ECE0D33B9B85 | Students can sleep more time during the morning so, this let's to students to have more energy and learn new stuff in a better way. | Claim | Adequate |
648858fa0dd9 | ECE0D33B9B85 | It is already proof that most students who sleep better during night have a better output scholarship. Also they can have some snacks in their house, so they are not gonna be hungry and their brain it is not gonna be thinking in food. If students start getting stressed they can a take a break or take a nap, as long the... | Evidence | Adequate |
4b2226b2f2cd | ECE0D33B9B85 | Students are not gonna be distracted by their classmates, so they can concentrate in a better way. | Claim | Adequate |
4f25f75652c1 | ECE0D33B9B85 | Also students can learn more fast and have their own way lo learn new stuff, because all students have different ways to learn. Most of the students work better when they are alone in a place without voices. Also many students get a better concentration when they are listening to music, and many teachers do not aloud s... | Evidence | Adequate |
987f36979543 | ECE0D33B9B85 | Students can do their assignments when they want and have time to do it. | Claim | Adequate |
348488db41e3 | ECE0D33B9B85 | Students can use as much time as they need so, this let's student to do a better work and time to add some creativity. Most of the student do a better work when they want to do it and not when someone is forcing them to do it or have just one class to finish it; for example, when teachers gave a due date to finish a as... | Evidence | Adequate |
190f3fcd6fd7 | ECE0D33B9B85 | But what about if students have any question; how are they going to ask to their teacher?
| Counterclaim | Adequate |
6f86a0ca95f2 | ECE0D33B9B85 | Students would love to have all day and night to finish their assigments at home. Students are going to have a better education and learn in a better way. Students can decide how much time they wants to spend on each assignment. Students are going to improve their grades. Many students are gonna be benefit to attend cl... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
17caac6c4545 | ED8C3FA6FC82 | Advice. Advice can be important to many people, and most of the time they ask multiple people for it. | Lead | Effective |
70cf8995df6a | ED8C3FA6FC82 | Seeking advice can sometimes be hard and asking multiple people can help you reach your final decision. Asking multiple people of their opinion helps someone make a better choice | Position | Effective |
636821533127 | ED8C3FA6FC82 | they have more options, | Claim | Effective |
31685f1709ad | ED8C3FA6FC82 | quicker and easier to get a final decision, | Claim | Effective |
58f8273e4cf6 | ED8C3FA6FC82 | make an overall smarter choice. | Claim | Effective |
f14dfb5eec2f | ED8C3FA6FC82 | A lot of people are going to say a lot of different things about your situation. This gives you more options to make a better choice in the end. The more options you have, the more possibilities there are and then choose the one you think is best. It also gives you the opportunity to use the process of elimination for ... | Evidence | Effective |
781d0727973f | ED8C3FA6FC82 | The reason it would be easier is that the people you ask, have probably been in the same situation you are in. It is also a quicker process because other people can help you through it instead of going in alone. This is really helpful for most people because some situations are nearly impossible to do alone. It takes n... | Evidence | Effective |
dda574003f9b | ED8C3FA6FC82 | Sometimes, other people have the best answers to your problems. You can make a smarter choice by asking multiple people because most of the time, they have the answers. It is easier to make a smarter choice by getting help when you need it. All of the other advice leads into this one. I feel you can use all of these st... | Evidence | Adequate |
486a33fff2fd | ED8C3FA6FC82 | asking multiple people for advice can be really helpful to most, if not, all people. It is never easy approaching a problem by yourself which is why you should always ask for help. Asking others for advice can sometimes be the best option because you have more options to choose from while in the decision making process... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
cf04abba9e4f | EDACE717C302 | In the age of computers and instantaneous communication, society has an incredible amount knowledge available to them. That said, instead of learning with just pen and paper, why can we not also incorporate online learning into our school systems | Lead | Adequate |
a15a3777a19f | EDACE717C302 | I believe that students would benefit significantly from being able to attend classes from home | Position | Adequate |
8c20059dda78 | EDACE717C302 | it better accommodates students | Claim | Effective |
b418d21bbf83 | EDACE717C302 | helps supplement learning for home schooled students | Claim | Effective |
bc7c288fcd11 | EDACE717C302 | giving students the option to take more of their desired classes online.
| Claim | Effective |
5f69f1fc5f71 | EDACE717C302 | Online learning accommodates students with disabilities as well as students with injuries that may prevent them from easily leaving their homes. It is unfair that our education system would require that they come to school when they can learn the same, or potentially more information from home. Recently, it has become ... | Evidence | Effective |
7c4610720451 | EDACE717C302 | Offering this alternative option to these students will undoubtedly benefit in them being more productive as well as allowing more time for these individuals to seek professional help or therapy then they would normally be able to, potentially decreasing the amount of teenagers with mental illnesses in the United State... | Claim | Effective |
0875677d37f3 | EDACE717C302 | A unique aspect of American public education is the fact that a large number of families choose the home school their children rather than send them to a public or private school. Of course, the success and effectiveness varies drastically from household to household but most generally follow a simple, bare bones publi... | Evidence | Effective |
c7a089a12cdb | EDACE717C302 | If online learning or video conferencing was made available to home schooled students and be used as a supplement to a child's learning, then it will benefit the student's education. | Claim | Effective |
7e1935ebb489 | EDACE717C302 | Also, many school districts already offer online classes that are supervised by school staff that focus mostly on students learning the course material at their own pace. Take Generic_School's VISION program for example. VISION offers LCPS as well as non-LCPS students many different courses from English and math, to ec... | Evidence | Effective |
26a497d6a017 | EDACE717C302 | Continuing off of the description of Generic_Schools' VISION program, many students in this area feel that they can do a lot more with their education and choose to take classes online in addition to the classes they already take at school. Instead of being overwhelmed in the school building with all of these extra cla... | Evidence | Effective |
5845e50b648a | EDACE717C302 | Another benefit of online classes is that they are essential for students who wish to take advantage of the fact that all of the courses at public schools are free. | Claim | Effective |
5f011039e69e | EDACE717C302 | Many students take classes pertaining to IT and computer science online in order to gain a complex understanding of these fields and go on to major in these related fields. | Evidence | Adequate |
91aa870b2f26 | EDACE717C302 | On the other hand, critics of online learning may say that there are public academies for students who wish to specialize in STEM careers or pursue the humanities and that it is better for students to learn in a formal classroom setting rather than from at home. | Counterclaim | Effective |
baf08001dd68 | EDACE717C302 | These arguments do not factor in students who are not competitive enough to apply for academies, cannot afford to, or simply do not wish to attend these academies | Rebuttal | Adequate |
6699e18757f6 | EDACE717C302 | It should not be an expectation for students who simply wish to pursue their interests to enter an extremely competitive and difficult environment for the same education that they could receive through less traumatic means. Although institutions like Generic_School of Science and Technology boost a student's resume, th... | Evidence | Effective |
16eb9c28055f | EDACE717C302 |
Although formal classroom education has been -and still remains- the standard of public education, as our society moves more and more towards complete digitization of daily life, our system of education should also keep pace and be made to offer distance learning as an option for all students for better students' acco... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
d688a8f87f44 | EDDFFD34DBD4 | Is it better fro you to ask for more advice or less? | Lead | Adequate |
0d3e649e1175 | EDDFFD34DBD4 | In my opinion I believe that the more advice your gaining from different sources is crucial and here are a few reasons why i believe that. | Position | Adequate |
ef295d40fecc | EDDFFD34DBD4 | the more sources you talk to it's more likely your going to get more advice then just talking to one source. | Claim | Adequate |
b7931e2729d9 | EDDFFD34DBD4 | On top of that if you talk to more sources they will most likely have different opinions from one another. Along with the other reasons the more different opinions those sources have the more advice youre taking in so you can make a smarter decision for yourself.
| Evidence | Adequate |
69e60d5fc8b1 | EDDFFD34DBD4 | the decision the more advice you gain from the sources makes the decision a lot easier for you to make it would also help you make the correct decision. | Claim | Adequate |
17df184bdc8f | EDDFFD34DBD4 | From experience it's a lot better to get more advice than a little amount. I needed some advice about a game to buy so i went to one of my closest friends he told me to get a game that he had and it would be super fun if we both played it together. but i was pretty hesitant of just buying the game because i didn't thin... | Evidence | Adequate |
a54c4c66b7cb | EDDFFD34DBD4 | opinions. | Claim | Ineffective |
9fb6f4d1bb9d | EDDFFD34DBD4 | The source's could have different opinions if you talk a lot different sources you might hear something you didn't even think about and that could change the solution to your problem for the better or for the worse. Like with the video game situation listened to my other friend's game suggestions i would had wasted my ... | Evidence | Adequate |
45f7f2f9e660 | EDDFFD34DBD4 | Those are three reasons why i would talk to multiple different source's and get there advice instead of just talking to only one source and getting a microscopic amount of advice compared to the amount of advice i would get talking to multiple source's. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
ecdf465cbb31 | EE0947EB2C78 | THE chools are offer distancesforms to learnig,the stundents can take online classes athome and this would help to the studens. | Lead | Adequate |
80a7f418f1ff | EE0947EB2C78 | In my opinions take classes athome can be a good idea,fo the future students. | Position | Adequate |
799d7a55faa5 | EE0947EB2C78 | the students that are take classes at home can get time for be preparate | Claim | Ineffective |
5f48921e55ec | EE0947EB2C78 | for example the can work wherever they are ,and in anytime .they can spend their free time in classes and can be in the comfortable at their homes. | Evidence | Adequate |
0e28eaf7f024 | EE0947EB2C78 | when the students get time for do their jobs at home ,I think that the can concentrate more in their jobs,and the students can learn more about their schools classes | Claim | Adequate |
888814a0b436 | EE0947EB2C78 | for example .the online classes are a easy way to learning at home. | Evidence | Ineffective |
90364c239a3f | EE0947EB2C78 | Online classes are a good methods for the furure students ,also the teachers can benefit about because they can spend time out of schools | Claim | Ineffective |
307038b5c4cb | EE0947EB2C78 | and when the studens work in online calsses learn how work with technology,becasuse they used apps, and differents pages in the internrt. | Claim | Adequate |
76525b80b047 | EE0947EB2C78 | other impotan about take classes online is that if the weather is in bad condicones we no have lose classes because we are at home | Claim | Adequate |
943ea795da69 | EE0947EB2C78 | for example , the schools suspent the classes when is rainy and if you are at home you can keep working. | Evidence | Adequate |
442409b4ee0b | EE0947EB2C78 | The distances methods are a good way to learn ,also is a goog advancen where teh students get benefit to learning and inprobe their studys spend time in online classes is the better and easy way to preparate students for the future. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
cd29f01713b3 | F17A4EF296EB | Every one love school, but not every student want to be in school. Before i go futher i wold like to list few things in my introduction. | Lead | Adequate |
478108c2f24e | F17A4EF296EB | Not all student would be able to take and online classes or a conference talk, because everybody want seat in class and see what the teacher is teaching them | Position | Adequate |
98f924e359be | F17A4EF296EB | Every one love school, but not every student want to be in school. | Claim | Adequate |
bf445e7b2786 | F17A4EF296EB | Before i go futher i wold like to list few things in my introduction. Not all student would be able to take and online classes or a conference talk, because everybody want seat in class and see what the teacher is teaching them. Why is this so matter, not all student would like to distance himself from school. Even if ... | Evidence | Adequate |
e29aa374921a | F17A4EF296EB | Firstly, bot all student woud be able to take online classes i don't see nothing from i as a student would not like it, i woulike to say by taking an online classess is is not worth it. | Claim | Ineffective |
e584cef92f1a | F17A4EF296EB | My Second reason is about me whiles i was growing up. | Claim | Ineffective |
a88c8771a792 | F17A4EF296EB | Since the i was born coming up, my mom said to me the day you start going to school Henry make it your own. Because there was no tecnology, no internet to used for and online classes. Because when ever mom give 1 dollar to go to school i will walk from my house to school which is 4 miles away from my home. | Evidence | Ineffective |
f2a4acaf247e | F359E262A14A | I think attend class from home, is a good idea take at home. Because at home you have all the time you need to finish,and also we can have more benefit at home,some time you need more time to finish it. Attend class is good idea take at schools too, because the teacher need to explain you what you need to do | Lead | Adequate |
db74e29e53ad | F359E262A14A | Both have benfit school and home; At the school you can learn more then the house, | Position | Adequate |
06acd09014cd | F359E262A14A | if you don't undertand simething you can ask to the teacher | Claim | Adequate |
0371a17f2ab1 | F359E262A14A | and sometime your friends or students from others huose talk to allowed you can't consentrate. Thas one reason, another reason is, maybe you don't have all the time you need, couse some time you need think about the question or something you lost a lot time in that, and sometimes the question come a litter bit hard you... | Counterclaim | Adequate |
2fc8655a7dbf | F359E262A14A | Attend class are really important, beacuse is for educatuion and you are in High school you need paid attention all the time. | Claim | Adequate |
7334b350c875 | F359E262A14A | Hawever, some student have a lot problemn from the school, beacuse they don't go to the school and have a lot marked aucent that is a big problem if u don't come to the school every day,When you are sick you can have an excuse, you can bring a card singnature for yours parents or grande. A example I need to come every ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
249b7e6d5442 | F359E262A14A | Also, ettend classes from home for me mean, disipline,education education is for all rest of your life. | Claim | Adequate |
5c7052b1ac08 | F359E262A14A | That is so important for me and my parents and for others stuadents and parents. You can m,ake a video online for attend class, because you need pass all the Esol well you need, for graduate. UIm so aprobe of my brother , because he help me a lot he's really lovely with me,and he have all the information from the schoo... | Evidence | Ineffective |
9182999920e3 | F3C003AF7423 | "Why does everyone think I shouldn't go to the movie with Generic_Name?" confusingly asks Generic_Name. The whole group just sighs and gives Generic_Name a quick glance with a voice backing it all up saying, "She just isn't right for you that's why." Generic_Name looks to the ground with defeat on the outside but rage ... | Lead | Effective |
160eb533c9e8 | F3C003AF7423 | Seeking advice from more than one person is a better choice | Position | Adequate |
e9097ff99e5a | F3C003AF7423 | it gives you different points of view, | Claim | Effective |
af7e239f6454 | F3C003AF7423 | more options to choose from, | Claim | Effective |
396367f96fca | F3C003AF7423 | keeps you closer to the people around you.
| Claim | Effective |
c11a2e937fdc | F3C003AF7423 | A great example of this is when my friend Generic_Name got in a fight once. He got sent to the office and was claiming he didn't start it and it was self defense, so they called in a few people who saw what had happened and found out Generic_Name was telling the truth. This is important because if you only ask one pers... | Evidence | Effective |
1663bf2d378c | F3C003AF7423 | this happens a lot in the sports world on final plays of the game. What happens is there is not much time left on the clock so they all try to figure out the best play possible to win and try to execute it. This is only useful when there is multiple opinions and plays coming in because with out different options than t... | Evidence | Effective |
6c5e3b088c56 | F3C003AF7423 | when I asked my friends for their opinion on the sport of basketball it not only made me contact them and talk to them but now they know that I am working on a report for school. This helps all of us out because know they know i'm working on my report which means I can't hang out right now and I reminded them about it ... | Evidence | Effective |
d9f5beaea747 | F3C003AF7423 | "Hey guys, what do you think I should do for me and Generic_Name's anniversary?" asks Generic_Name. They all think for a quick second then spit out ideas at Generic_Name like a waterfall. "Necklace, gift, chocolate, and flowers." quickly states the group. While Generic_Name is still processing the information, he says,... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
391e3628a1f5 | F52B9A0882BB | When people ask for advice, they sometimes talk to more than one person. | Lead | Ineffective |
4e948e8211c1 | F52B9A0882BB | Seeking for multiple opinions can help someone make better choices | Position | Adequate |
08916e673f15 | F52B9A0882BB | they can tell you what they did wrong, | Claim | Adequate |
bd6178a40f14 | F52B9A0882BB | see their point of view | Claim | Adequate |
e751b1501bda | F52B9A0882BB | learn what to do. | Claim | Adequate |
56704e32515e | F52B9A0882BB | they can tell you what they did wrong, so you will not do the same thing. | Claim | Adequate |
7d86fe25ffa7 | F52B9A0882BB | If the person wants to do something good they would ask people for advice so they will not do it wrong. They would tell them what they did wrong, so that he or she will do it right. For example, one day Generic_Name went to his friends what not to do at his wedding his friends started telling what not to do, so he did ... | Evidence | Adequate |
8317542daa0f | F52B9A0882BB | you can see their point of view. | Claim | Adequate |
064a91eb6b65 | F52B9A0882BB | When someone is asking more than one person, because some people do it differently than others. Not everyone look at something the same way others do the have different points of view. They ask multiple people, so the can have an idea of what to do and what not to do. For example, Generic_Name went to ask his friends f... | Evidence | Adequate |
6b236dc1db29 | F52B9A0882BB | you will learn what to do. | Claim | Adequate |
2f2ca18ec38f | F52B9A0882BB | When you ask more than one person it can help you make better choice's in life. When someone is seeking for multiple opinion its because they want to make better choices, so when they tell you what not to do and look at their point of view they are helping you make better choices so you don't do something wrong. | Evidence | Adequate |
f4c54cafe040 | F52B9A0882BB | On the contrary, some people think seeking multiple opinions cannot help someone make better choices, because some people can give you bad advice and can get you into big trouble. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
70410b65ac54 | F52B9A0882BB | asking people for advice is a good thing, because it can help you make better choice in life. Seeking for multiple opinions can help someone make better choices, for people can tell you what they did wrong, see their point of view, and know what to do. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
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