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e678c22ef64f | F53C55BBD326 | When you are asking for advice, it is smart for you to ask for multiple opinions on the subject. | Claim | Effective |
b1954976d763 | F53C55BBD326 | For example, if you wanted to know what you should wear to a social gathering, it would be best to ask more than one person for advice. By asking multiple peoples opinions, you are be able to see what people of various ages and style standpoints have to say about certain clothing. | Evidence | Adequate |
0ec7ca34c9b0 | F53C55BBD326 | Asking for more than one persons advice and opinions on a subject is a great way to make the best choice about something. | Position | Effective |
d7f41cfba4f1 | F53C55BBD326 | seeking multiple opinions on something is a great way to make important decisions is because if you dont't, you could end up being offensive towards somebody. | Claim | Effective |
b17822733547 | F53C55BBD326 | An example would be if you are going to a costume party and you want to wear something inspired by a certain culture, you should ask multiple people. This is the best way to go about making this choice, because if you just ask one persons opinion, that one person might lead you in the wrong direction. If you ask multip... | Evidence | Adequate |
dc54b4a5cb4e | F53C55BBD326 | Not only does seeking more than one opinion on something help you make the best choices and be respectful of others, but it can also help you in the future. | Claim | Effective |
c14e15f85a63 | F53C55BBD326 | Your actions are never really forgotten. They can be forgiven, or almost forgotten, but they will always be tucked in your mind or somebody else's mind. Sometimes people aren't very cautious about what they say or do, and they don't think about how others might get affected by their actions. Asking multiple people for ... | Evidence | Effective |
112b6bd6cb13 | F53C55BBD326 | knowing and asking for multiple opinions is the best way to make your choices in life. If you don't seek for more than one persons advice, you could end up in a bad situation. People of different cultures, ages, and moral views will come up with different advice. Asking multiple people for advice is a great way to corr... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
ea10a50daf4a | F54BD89B665A | Advancements in how we are providing education continue to grow in the number of options for how one is receiving their education, Attending classes in school is a way that a majority of people receive their education, although some students are provided the opportunity and option to receive education outside of the ty... | Lead | Effective |
286d878c5978 | F54BD89B665A | Students would not benefit from an education outside of the school environment as much as they would attending school | Position | Effective |
a4343fb8e7ea | F54BD89B665A | being separated from a learning environment makes it more difficult to complete work and focus, | Claim | Effective |
c8ddcbe3b18e | F54BD89B665A | participating in an online course allows for a lack of communication and ideas from other peers, | Claim | Effective |
2e7d298d33d3 | F54BD89B665A | receiving help from a teacher or an instructor would be more limited and restricted if one were to take an online course.
| Claim | Effective |
9218d0408234 | F54BD89B665A | When working in an environment other than school, in this case at home, there is a removed focus of the student due to the setting they are in, and it may make learning more difficult in terms of concentration. | Claim | Effective |
be6204bb4f4c | F54BD89B665A | Take for example, completing an online course. When students are at home taking the online course, they are placed in a more comfortable environment that lacks a working ambiance. Consequently, there is a greater chance that the student could focus their attention away from the work because of distractions that may inc... | Evidence | Effective |
6af13203cb15 | F54BD89B665A | Provided a student takes a course outside of a school, they are not always given the opportunity to have other peers around that are earning the same education. | Claim | Effective |
7de812b6fea0 | F54BD89B665A | Some may claim that independent work is a better option | Counterclaim | Adequate |
927b9bee8a85 | F54BD89B665A | but what is so beneficial from attending a school is that students are exposed to other ideas developed by other students, and can participate in engaging discussions to make further achievements. | Rebuttal | Effective |
4e9757deb4db | F54BD89B665A | Through these shared concepts, students can learn and comprehend more information off of one another, and make connections through certain ideas that are shared in class. This is demonstrated not only through group assignments, but through the participation of students during a class lesson. When a student is called on... | Evidence | Effective |
8322aaa6cd38 | F54BD89B665A | Students knowledge is generated through in person help from instructors, given that students struggle to make a connection and perceive the topic. | Claim | Effective |
e6613c2ffde8 | F54BD89B665A | Online courses do not give the opportunity for students to ask engaging and purposeful questions to help them make achievements. If students who are participating in taking an online course at home begin to struggle in a course, the lack of communication from someone who is experienced may further complicate that situa... | Evidence | Effective |
872b8bbe7dc2 | F54BD89B665A | It is crucial for a person who wants a full and purposeful learning experience to attend an actual school. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
60bc7751362d | F54BD89B665A | Although some may make claim that taking a course at home provides for more personal time to complete other necessary tasks, and can learn the same information as those who are attending an actual school, | Counterclaim | Effective |
64f3031a1c46 | F54BD89B665A | those that are not educated in a school aren't receiving the same fulfillment and educational opportunities as those who are educated in a school environment. | Rebuttal | Effective |
f17486199fcb | F54BD89B665A | Some may also believe that at home courses aren't as complex and are more flexible, | Counterclaim | Effective |
76eb2b38c3aa | F54BD89B665A | but they allow for more mistakes, and less knowledge gained through them. | Rebuttal | Effective |
cfcab842d155 | F54BD89B665A | Schools are not only beneficial but are crucial success not only in the courses they are taking, but in future roles, whether that be, for example, in a career, or becoming financially stable. Secondary options to attending a school, like courses at home, are not the same and do not hold the same roles or positions as ... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
06fafd562bea | F6CA5589DCDA | Money. Technology. Opportunity | Lead | Ineffective |
73cdf43f6bdc | F6CA5589DCDA | students to attend classes from home by way of online more benefit and against for students. | Position | Ineffective |
431343d0dfca | F6CA5589DCDA | Students to attend classes from by of online is good to save time. | Claim | Adequate |
20677a648db7 | F6CA5589DCDA | However, It cost a lot of money. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
5c09441f64a5 | F6CA5589DCDA | In today's world , most of students can accesses education at home according to
The Washington post | Evidence | Ineffective |
90e70802c117 | F6CA5589DCDA | . Although, some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing,nevertheless, students can not get a chance to make a new friend because their are not allowed to go school | Counterclaim | Adequate |
0327a45a8473 | F6CA5589DCDA | If they attend classes from online and no more opportunity to meet new people. spending time with friend helps student to be a confident person and gives more experiences.
| Evidence | Adequate |
fee440a4eeee | F6CA5589DCDA | To begin, a lot of students work on weekend also some students work after school too. For example, most of students are working forty five hours in a week. This shows that more students can get tried so they do not like to go school. They just like to focus on their education by an online | Evidence | Adequate |
9a3e10d990e3 | F6CA5589DCDA | Clearly, It is important to use a technology at home because we do not need to spend our time and students might can not get a ride on time. Technology is the best to makes a life easier. | Claim | Adequate |
c6440d530e95 | F6CA5589DCDA | Besides, the technology make us a lazy and affect on our body. For example,when we use our smart phone it so bad on our an eyes. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
f8723a899744 | F6CA5589DCDA | Furthermore, students to attend classes from home by way of online might expensive to start a class,because students can not get enough money for online class | Counterclaim | Adequate |
8c5947973d6f | F6CA5589DCDA | Actually, it cost a lot of money so students going to ask their parents to cover the paid. For example, parents can not allowed for their children to attend on an online because public school is free for all students. They just do not like to pay on an online for student and they think student can not understand on an ... | Evidence | Adequate |
8fb751a0cb3d | F6CA5589DCDA | Students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. This shows that how students should learn more stuff by way of online. | Evidence | Ineffective |
7abacad86b68 | F6CA5589DCDA | Obviously, learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online more interesting thing. | Claim | Ineffective |
e9bf73522c5d | F6CA5589DCDA | Overall, attend classes from by way of online make students confused | Counterclaim | Adequate |
e81a3a7af9ed | F6CA5589DCDA | If the student do not get it something in the class then students always have a chance to ask the teacher what going on that stuff, but an online some students even more difficult to understand what the teacher talking about. Sometimes it is better to look the people how they focusing on their action, because we do wha... | Evidence | Adequate |
abd17a0af1cc | F6CA5589DCDA | Attend classes an online more useful on this time; to learn how to use different apps, get learn more option. and it is necessary.
| Claim | Adequate |
44272de7b63a | F6CA5589DCDA | In conclusion, students to attend classes from home of online more benefit and against for students. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
a3d8698c7c05 | F93D06BC99D8 | Once, there was a woman named Generic_Name who was tasked with budgeting her family's money and spending it in the best way. She needed to decide whether to stay home during Spring break and spend a little more on food and eating out more often, or she could go on a vacation and use less money on dining out. There is n... | Lead | Effective |
89dad7582a79 | F93D06BC99D8 | Seeking multiple opinions when you are making a decision helps you make a better choice | Position | Adequate |
6a0f352d4797 | F93D06BC99D8 | it allows you more views of a topic | Claim | Effective |
100f7998e9d3 | F93D06BC99D8 | it gives you a higher chance of having correct advice | Claim | Adequate |
a267f0441467 | F93D06BC99D8 | it is mathematically easier to make a decision with multiple opinions. | Claim | Effective |
6aa24b0e5b6d | F93D06BC99D8 | As you seek multiple opinions, you can see different sides of the issue that you maybe didn't know about. While this happens, you can find minor issues in your argument or point of view. These issues can be easily resolved before you make the decision, but after the decision happens, it is final and cannot be changed. ... | Evidence | Adequate |
4cbcc30e00c5 | F93D06BC99D8 | When you are seeking advice you will have a higher chance of finding the correct decision because getting multiple options can make finding the general consensus easier, it can help you in finding poor decisions, and it gives you past decisions to see what happened and what might happen to you | Claim | Effective |
f3f6f26da2a3 | F93D06BC99D8 | When you know several opinions, you have a better understanding of how others feel about the issue and can reach a general consensus, what the majority of people think, about the topic that you are deciding upon, which can make the correct advice easier to find. By seeking multiple opinions, you can find which ones are... | Evidence | Effective |
483742b96681 | F93D06BC99D8 | For many decisions, you don't need advice of your peers, but some do, and it is best for those that you get more than one opinion. Studies have shown, that the more sources you have, the more likely you are to make a correct decision, and likewise, the less sources you have, the weaker your decision will be. When you h... | Evidence | Effective |
b1f96b34280e | F93D06BC99D8 | Generic_Name found out much later that she made the wrong decision about the Spring break vacation. While her family was on vacation, she learned that there was a Martian Flu outbreak at her office and she will not be able to work along with her husband, who was recently fired.
When Generic_Name made the decision, she... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
a4b420e3e878 | FA1CE35CA43F | Hook: Talking to more than one person when seeking advice is a better choice
Bridge: seeking more than one persons advice helps you get ideas | Lead | Adequate |
2a16a9b35d03 | FA1CE35CA43F | Thesis: Talking to more than one person when seeking advice is a better choice | Position | Adequate |
00e40ad46796 | FA1CE35CA43F | you get to hear the different pieces of advice and which piece is most recommended | Claim | Adequate |
c9a92d5862da | FA1CE35CA43F | it gives you many options of pieces of advice you can take. | Claim | Adequate |
522ee7310817 | FA1CE35CA43F | There are multiple opinions of hearing multiple peoples advice. | Claim | Adequate |
ee3903559c94 | FA1CE35CA43F | you get to hear which piece of advice is most said
Supporting detail number 2: you get to choose from all the opinions
Restate thesis: There are multiple opinions from hearing multiple peoples advice because you get to to hear which piece of advice is most said and you get to choose from all the opinions. | Evidence | Ineffective |
1b21100916fa | FA1CE35CA43F | hearing multiple ideas gives you many options of advice you can take.
| Claim | Adequate |
9db08807d445 | FA1CE35CA43F | you get ideas from other people
Supporting detail number 2: you get multiple opinions
Restate thesis: hearing multiple ideas gives you many options of advice you can take from ideas and multiple opinions. | Evidence | Ineffective |
58c3f6a31682 | FA1CE35CA43F | Talking to more than one person when seeking advice is a better choice than talking to only one person because you hear other peoples ideas and opinions and you get to choose which one fits you best. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
4aa4bb146743 | FAA638E881EB | Why do people ask multiple other people for advice | Lead | Ineffective |
f33a66570956 | FAA638E881EB | People who seek multiple answers is to get a different perspective with each and every answer. | Claim | Adequate |
4435dbd5b7ef | FAA638E881EB | Getting more than one advice can help you make a good choice. | Position | Adequate |
3e3890278efc | FAA638E881EB | It's good when you get advice from people who is going through what your going through and getting their opinion. | Claim | Adequate |
d07a4799980d | FAA638E881EB | Getting advice from multiple people can help you get a different perspective | Claim | Adequate |
96c355eac45a | FAA638E881EB | it is helpful because it will make you see your problem in a different way. It gives you reasons why you should do something and why you shouldn't something. It gives the person who is asking for advice two options. Let's say you broke your moms TV remote and you don't know how to tell your her so you ask a friend what... | Evidence | Adequate |
78f29d764013 | FAA638E881EB | Talking to different people who has went through the same or they are going through what your going through they can give you advice like what not to do and what you should do. | Claim | Adequate |
def4f42fdca9 | FAA638E881EB | By getting that advice it will make think of a solution. If that person that gave you advice because they know what would happen if you do the wrong mistake they would probably want you to do the right thing and they would encourage you to make the right decision. Here an example let's say that you said something rude ... | Evidence | Adequate |
9b10066df532 | FAA638E881EB | Getting multiple different types of advice will help make a better choice by giving you different options to choose from. By getting other peoples advice and have an option you can decide on. You pick the advice that would best benefit you and help you. Seeing what would other people would do if they were in the same b... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
76ab17e68bb1 | FAA9FC1B315B | In my personal opinion when some schools offer distance learning as an option for student to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing I mostly disagree. | Position | Adequate |
7fddfd2a1f9c | FAA9FC1B315B | Its not because I am attending a public high school. | Evidence | Ineffective |
9e44ace4877a | FAA9FC1B315B | One of the reasons why I disagree is because this might hurt the students communication skills. | Claim | Adequate |
51bfcfa31b3a | FAA9FC1B315B | when you have classes online you are not at the school you are home taking this class so you basically don't associate with anyone except your teacher now since i have never took a online class i wouldn't be able to tell if its better to not know no one or to associate with anyone but personally I just dont't thing it'... | Evidence | Adequate |
c351cd6214d7 | FAA9FC1B315B | The second reason why I disagree and I really don't think that online schools is not beneficial is that it hurts your participation skills too. | Claim | Adequate |
b6cb9c9a873c | FAA9FC1B315B | Here in school we do so much activities connected to things we are learning and it helps very much because if you do activities connected to the things we are learning it gets stuck in your mind. Its also better to ask questions and to understand better. There might be some stuff that you didn't understand face to face... | Evidence | Adequate |
2adbc4226dbc | FAA9FC1B315B | My last and final reason is that you might get lazy and miss classes since you take it at your home | Claim | Adequate |
31e16304039d | FAA9FC1B315B | That might affect your grade too which is very risky if you're not a productive and committed person to your education online class is not for you. For example me personally it will not be good for me because I am a very lazy person i am pretty sure I will miss classes either by sleeping in or some other unexeptalbe re... | Evidence | Adequate |
3e42be96d2f6 | FAA9FC1B315B | Those are my good reason why i don't agree with online classes it's a good thing that schools offer distance learning as an option for students if you have a good reason why you don't actually go to the school but personally i dont agree with this situation. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
53a29f8edc81 | FB56AA75F65F | When someone needs advice, would it be beneficial for them to ask more than one person? Since people have different beliefs, opinions, and understandings, they do not think the same way all of the time. | Lead | Adequate |
79f60416dc77 | FB56AA75F65F | There are numerous reasons why getting advice from multiple people can be advantageous | Position | Effective |
8577b953196d | FB56AA75F65F | some people could be more educated in the topic than others | Claim | Effective |
7e3bd1695618 | FB56AA75F65F | every person will have a different perspective. | Claim | Effective |
a71bdb1e90d5 | FB56AA75F65F | If someone who does not know much about the topic is asked, they might not give the best, up-to-date answer. However, someone who is knowledgeable in that specific area will probably be able to connect with the subject and give better advice to help. For example, if someone asks what color the sky is, one person could ... | Evidence | Effective |
8e805668f2d9 | FB56AA75F65F | Some people will feel positively about the topic while others feel negatively. People have their own opinions and their opinions are how they form an answer. For instance, if someone asks someone else for advice on where they should go for dinner, the action relies on the answer that the person gives. If they say that ... | Evidence | Effective |
814615dd8452 | FB56AA75F65F | There are many reasons why someone should ask multiple people for advice including getting a more educated answer and receiving different opinions. Asking more than one person would provide someone with better advice and a variety of answers. Whether somebody asks two or five people, all of the answers that are given w... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
479fb02ae14b | FD05FDCEA11B | My footsteps seemed impossibly loud as I walked into the classroom, and it felt as if everyone was watching me. I glanced around, taking in the unfamiliar eyes staring me down.
I'm never going to fit in here.
One of the eyes turned away from me and began to speak. She formed strange sounds with her mouth in a languag... | Lead | Effective |
b897c00291b5 | FD05FDCEA11B | I can't name all the things I've earned through listening to multiple opinions. But, I can name the many benefits of listening to multiple people. | Position | Adequate |
4a68f3b49050 | FD05FDCEA11B | Everyone has gone through unique things. After all, our lives are not the same. What people have experienced shape them as a person, and since we're all different, some people may offer advice that's helpful to you while others may not. You'll never know if you've sought out the best advice if you only listen to one pe... | Evidence | Effective |
9769229c308a | FD05FDCEA11B | If you hear multiple pieces of advice, you can learn new things, | Claim | Effective |
c2541627761b | FD05FDCEA11B | not everyone has gone through the same things. If someone has been through something that you haven't, it can prepare you for the future and teach you a lesson. | Evidence | Effective |
27be2abc803e | FD05FDCEA11B | people have different biases. | Claim | Effective |
ef1b70549c0a | FD05FDCEA11B | If you only hear one side of an argument and not the other, you can't know for sure which side you stand for. Since you don't know anything about the other standpoint, you can't make an accurate conclusion. | Evidence | Adequate |
8aab1be84363 | FD05FDCEA11B | people have blind spots, because we're only human. | Claim | Effective |
84896183867d | FD05FDCEA11B | One person could have partially helpful advice, and another person might have the guidance that the other was missing. If you've heard "incomplete" advice, such as I have, it may not help you as much as it could. If you listen to someone else's opinion, they may correct the blind spot. This would help you to the full p... | Evidence | Effective |
59361f7f7596 | FD05FDCEA11B | Seeking multiple opinions is an important thing to do. When you're stuck in an impasse, these pieces of advice could be the only things to get you unstuck. Multiple opinions can help you know that you've found the best advice possible, teach you something new, and make sure you've received all the guidance you need. So... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
c42e3ed1626b | FD8A9514C8BC | Not too long ago I got into a disagreement with one of my best friends, this made me a little sad. But something that always helped me feel better was talking to trusted people about it. | Lead | Adequate |
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