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93b1fa73b367 | 500F35F18E1F | The only way that this could be an alien artifact is if the martians are inside of it or underneath it. | Claim | Ineffective |
c3b297bff3bf | 500F35F18E1F | That would explain how the camera can not see any other buildings around the object because they are all inside of it so no one is outside. They also could be inside of the butte because the planet is deadly for some paticular reason and they have shelter inside safely away. And another reason is because inside of the ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
131b686c9a6b | 500F35F18E1F | In the end it is not possible that the mesa is an alien artifact and is instead just a butte or a mesa that happens to like a face. Because the clearer picture shows that it now looks nothing like a face, water stopped flowing on the red planet a long time ago, and Earth also has these land forms all over the place. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
1a173caf3df4 | 50122C17BAD4 | Today I'm writing about The Challenge of Exploring Venus. | Lead | Ineffective |
3fba466a3c68 | 50122C17BAD4 | Venus is sometimes called the "Evening Star". Its one of the brightest points of light in the sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from the sun. While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of earth, it has proved a very cha... | Evidence | Ineffective |
f90afea870a2 | 50122C17BAD4 | Finally, I'm talking about all the things i talked about in my paragraphs. I talked about Venus and it's nickname, the amosphere percent, orbiting and hovering and then the NASA. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
2cb20f131349 | 505E8295E792 | The selctions I just read contain one common subject:people drive less cars now in the first and second selection both talk about how some neighborhoods ban the use of cars on certian or all days. In the first selection In german suburb, life goes on without cars the author Elisabeth Rosenthal states " 70 percent of Va... | Evidence | Adequate |
6cdbc3dc9dc6 | 505E8295E792 | I think we shoud do whatever we think is right. | Position | Ineffective |
b28d3db178eb | 507CBD8E9670 | Studying planets is often hard because of the conditions in space, and also on the planet Venus there are also very harsh conditions that humans cannot survive. Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus | Lead | Adequate |
d037f16412ae | 507CBD8E9670 | Exploring Venus can be a very risky planet for us to expore until we get better technology. | Position | Adequate |
745e637a8c63 | 507CBD8E9670 | Venus is often reffered to as Earth's twin because it is the closest planet to be like Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Venus would be hard to expore becuase of the planet's suface reaching up to 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater tha... | Evidence | Ineffective |
1bbf91b198e4 | 508DB90F68C7 | I think using this technology in a classroom would be a huge breakthrough. | Position | Adequate |
29c43bad378d | 508DB90F68C7 | Teachers wouldn't have to work as hard to figure out what he or she needs to do to help a student learn what they need to learn. This technology can tell what their emotional state is when in the classroom. If they are bored they might not like the way their teacher is teaching them. | Evidence | Adequate |
04e14ff96055 | 508DB90F68C7 | So the teacher can modify the way she teaches that specific lesson, so that the student has a better attitude toward that subject.
| Claim | Adequate |
6b91db48f022 | 508DB90F68C7 | This technology can also help councelers talk to the students that might be having personal problems like bullies, or family issues at home. | Claim | Adequate |
11b9cb8e00d7 | 508DB90F68C7 | Kids wouldn't be able to hide their emotions as well with this techlology being in every classrom. For example with a false smile the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major, and another muscle called the risorius. You cant download the software on a normal computer, so schools would have to pay for the d... | Evidence | Adequate |
17b9115bc961 | 508DB90F68C7 | Humans perform this type of calculation every day, for instance when you ask a friend if they are ok, because they look depressed or angry. We can perform this calculation as accurately as the current technology we have now. | Claim | Adequate |
fdc8565564b6 | 508DB90F68C7 | For example Leonardo da Vinci used this type of calculation and knew exactly how her face needed to look in order to get the emotions he was looking for. | Evidence | Ineffective |
f757105165a1 | 508DB90F68C7 |
In conclusion this technology has many benefits for students and children that need counceling for personal problems, and or family problems at home. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
eba80d7bde99 | 509A6BA813C0 | Cars good or bad. | Lead | Ineffective |
f3bc269abe4a | 509A6BA813C0 | Some citys and some subrbs say yes | Position | Ineffective |
cd83cd72596e | 509A6BA813C0 | In France or in Vauban a suburban area in germany. such as in Paris frances the somg became to thike so for a few days they made moterd vehicles illegile and with doing that the somg cleard up pulotion went down and paris beasy streets wear feild with the silent sounds of bikes, scate boards and scaters. In Vauban a su... | Evidence | Ineffective |
708837af2c55 | 509A6BA813C0 | So will cars become a thing of the past or will they just go green lets see what the future brings ous. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
42c4342e4a16 | 50ABF43C3323 | In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" a writer states that scientists are trying to study the planet Venus. In his article, he claims that while it is very risky, it may be worth it in the end. he also gives details about how dangerous it really is, and what the planet might have been at one point in time. | Lead | Adequate |
796577325860 | 50ABF43C3323 | The writer claims that Venus is referred to as Earth's "twin''. But the only evidence he gives to back up this claim is that "Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of desnity and size." | Claim | Effective |
5b95675885d8 | 50ABF43C3323 | but in reality, Earth and Venus are very differnet. Earth is much safer in terms of temperature, pressure, and gas compaired to Venus. Venus has a blanket of gas that covers it that is, "almost 97 percent carbon dioxide." Plus, on its surface, "temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit." with the level of carbon... | Evidence | Effective |
f29048d3a5e1 | 50ABF43C3323 | Not only is high temperatures and extreme pressures an issue, he also states that there are volcanoes and major earthquakes that happen, plus lightning is constant as well | Evidence | Adequate |
5f7085e230b8 | 50ABF43C3323 | there is no context to whether or not scientists are trying to figure out what causes the the powerful earthquakes to happen, or why lightning strikes frequently happen | Claim | Adequate |
5eeb147091c7 | 50ABF43C3323 | He also states that, "Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life." But there is nothing that follows it that claims what happened or could have happened to cause high pressures, high temperatures, and a high level of carbon dioxide to form. | Claim | Effective |
7fa994c2e144 | 50ABF43C3323 | While scientists believe that Venus was at one point like earth, there are some facts that show that it has the looks of earth in some ways. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
f2cb0675e88b | 50ABF43C3323 | the writer says that Venus, "has a surface of rocky sediments and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters." These features are exactly what earth has as well. | Evidence | Adequate |
74126c229717 | 50ABF43C3323 | But there could be more than what meets the eye. In parapgraph six, the writer says that," peering a Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions becuase most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere." | Rebuttal | Effective |
5613eee2c9a9 | 50ABF43C3323 | This issue puts a damper on scientists ability to study the planet. But thats just it, what are scientists trying to study. | Evidence | Adequate |
5867f9872557 | 50ABF43C3323 | The article says,"Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.'' Which is great they are working on that, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
e1506958d3e3 | 50ABF43C3323 | but what are they trying to collect, find, or explore.
| Rebuttal | Ineffective |
5f536c98f1fe | 50ABF43C3323 | Overall, the article is good, but there needs to be more detail in what is happening. they need information on what scientists are specifically trying to study, what they are looking for, and more detail on how they are progressing in studying Venus. | Position | Adequate |
4ca2811e380a | 50ABF43C3323 | With more details about what they are trying to find, it would be easier to evaluate whether or not the scientist efforts are really worth it, or just a waste of time. A planet that is inhabitable by humans or anything living is already a risk as is. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
fac489cada1b | 50F1D8786126 | In the article ¨Making Mona Lisa Smile,¨ the author tells us that with technology that we have today they can see her have a full smile. The way she looks tell people that she not to comforable about something. With the special work of Computers they can change they ways she feels and look. | Lead | Ineffective |
864bc6104152 | 50F1D8786126 | The three reasons about how to ¨Make Mona Lisa Smile¨ is facial expressions | Claim | Adequate |
8ced2bb31129 | 50F1D8786126 | emotions | Claim | Adequate |
dd9f27df32d6 | 50F1D8786126 | 3-D computers. | Claim | Adequate |
af564217f2bb | 50F1D8786126 | What so wonder well know about Mona Lisa is her face. | Claim | Adequate |
09946bae5e93 | 50F1D8786126 | That is, hiding how she feels by putting on a fake smile. She shows tons of facial expressions to show people how she feels. Most of it is happines by 83 percent, 9 percent disgusted,6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. Seeing the different characteristics that she has of facial muscle. While often shows vary of expr... | Evidence | Adequate |
c0c0bcb41936 | 50F1D8786126 | Seeing that their are six basic emotions like happines, surprised, anger, disgust, fear and sadness | Claim | Adequate |
12d074275837 | 50F1D8786126 | Using those to associated every characteristic of the facial muscles and using them on Mona Lisa. With new software it can recongize Mona Lisa emotions. Which can actually calculate emotions of others. | Evidence | Ineffective |
89db43bd55a3 | 50F1D8786126 | An by now, knowing that we have new techonlogy like 3-D printers they can give Mona Lisa emotions.
| Claim | Adequate |
533de9dc03a0 | 50F1D8786126 | The computer can construt a 3-D modle with all 44 muscles that must be moved like human muscles. The creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System) is by Dr. Paul Eckman. Which Computers can give the a certain look or emotion. The software stores similar anatomical information called electronic code. But only speacil co... | Evidence | Adequate |
73c1973253c2 | 50F1D8786126 | The way people express their feelings and emotions, can show everyone how you feel about certain things. People who will try to hid their emotions are very fond of themselves for not expressing it. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
8fefb7de5711 | 5145FF65E5BE | Do you know that sometime human will not be living on Earth | Lead | Adequate |
6376de71e9e0 | 5145FF65E5BE | Earth has limit. So we have to think about the future and implement it. | Position | Adequate |
84bc5f2e5152 | 5145FF65E5BE | First, the author says "Venus, sometimes called the "Evening Star." Before Venus is called actually a planet, Venus was not popular. Venus and it was not called anything. But after Venus had called a planet, many things have been discovering bu scientist or other. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of densit... | Evidence | Adequate |
6cb3bda62388 | 5145FF65E5BE | It means we have a possibility to live in there. Veuns still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. Again, we need to find the another place to live for the future. | Claim | Adequate |
6826d36cf223 | 5145FF65E5BE | If we leave this problem as it is, every people will die because Earth is warming up year to year and we are on the crisis. | Evidence | Ineffective |
07d7cea2da53 | 5145FF65E5BE | Secound, we have startedthe project for travel to planet which is not Earth that is easily to go. The problem and NASA have a relationship as traveling planet. NASA had done a lot of project about space. NASA also has one particulaly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus | Evidence | Adequate |
6974aa0a3b18 | 5145FF65E5BE | It is not easy to travel to Venus or another planet, but we have possibility because of them skill. It is survivable for humans.
| Claim | Adequate |
9a0ca2be848b | 5145FF65E5BE | Finally, the auther says,"Venus would need to get up close and parsonal despite the risks. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges. | Claim | Adequate |
efe47f6f5845 | 5145FF65E5BE | We need to think about it. If we could live in Venus, it must be same as Earth, because there is the enviroment like this that we live. We alive. We have ocean for water, sun light, plants, oxygen, houses, foods, or something. We have to think about these problem, too. | Evidence | Ineffective |
7619de9b158f | 5145FF65E5BE | It is not far from right now to travel to Venus and we could it, we could get a chance to live Venus. If we can, we should be more comfortable. We need to study Venus and teach many people. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
61c886834926 | 514ADDA113FD | That Venus is the closest plant to earth,almost has the same density and size to earth but is the second planet away from the sun. It can go up to 800 degress fahrenheit on a average scale has 90 times more atmospheric pressure than earth can crush a submarine that is bulit to wistand the water pressure deep below. Ven... | Evidence | Ineffective |
29637003554b | 51634BBDF223 | the author using specfic details from studies and historical records to create a claim about how exploring venus is hard due to the harsh conditions | Position | Ineffective |
61ba01f9c332 | 51634BBDF223 | kn the planet but he also comes up with idea of exploring venus from the sky in blimp like vechile to avoid the harsh ground enviroment. solution to the hostile conditions " | Claim | Adequate |
ae4a25a28783 | 51634BBDF223 | "on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by... | Evidence | Adequate |
d1b49575d9b1 | 51634BBDF223 | the author also descripes how the the in human condions such as the lack of oxygen, high pressure, extreme heat and erupting volancoes, powerfull earth wuakes and frequent lighting strikes are the reasons why no manned missions to venus had, are , or will ever take place. | Claim | Ineffective |
ea8660323d3e | 51634BBDF223 | " A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venuss atmosphere. On the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on ou... | Evidence | Ineffective |
b78211b3fd64 | 51CCAD86D2F2 | I think that FACS is very useful technology, that could benefit classrooms everywhere. | Position | Adequate |
152c649513ba | 51CCAD86D2F2 | It, as the article talks about, can help students if there getting lost or bored. By just adjusting it's teaching algorythms to better help the student.
| Claim | Adequate |
908b225e91e7 | 51CCAD86D2F2 | During everyday life, we look at others faces and can most of the time see how they are feeling. If your friend has a frown on their face, then you can try and use comforting tactics and try to help them in anyway. And you use these tactics because you know what they are feeling. And FACS can do the same thing!
If a s... | Evidence | Adequate |
83344545a120 | 51CCAD86D2F2 | FACS can be extremely useful in schools all over the world | Claim | Adequate |
580b99c86598 | 51CCAD86D2F2 | And can make students and their learning enviroments more flexible and effective. Which in turn with help a gargantuan amount in them having a succeful career. | Evidence | Adequate |
3671efd1ced5 | 51CCAD86D2F2 | Because students should come first, they are the worlds future. And anything we can do to assist them or better their education, should be done. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
40e2c29dc922 | 52293439CC0D | The Author supports the idea of studying venus. | Position | Adequate |
1810438d2ed2 | 52293439CC0D | In paragraph 2, "the author says that numerous factors conmtribute to Veunus reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study on". Another reason why from the author that humans should study venus and wothy pursuit. In paragraph 3, sentence 4 "it says that the conditions are far moire extreme than anything humans... | Evidence | Ineffective |
22274355ee2b | 52293439CC0D | in sted of calling it venus they call is Evening star and it is one of the brightest of the light in the night sky | Claim | Ineffective |
2faa18d7ec00 | 52293439CC0D | it proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. But in my own words i think it is a good idea for humans shoukld study venus because it gives you fun facts about it | Claim | Adequate |
f02225929e2a | 52293439CC0D | How i know that is because in paragraph 8, the last sentcene its talking about you get to travle on earth and you it to see whats beyond you should not be limited by dnager or anything else. And another evidence you get to learn about new things in life and it can be a challenge for you in life also | Evidence | Adequate |
1937bb2fd935 | 52293439CC0D | My conclusion to this hole essay is if you can explorie anything in life then you can take a risk and in doing a challenge on exploring venus or another name for it Evening star. Not just because it can give you a fun fact it can give you a differnet experion on other people and you can show other people that there can... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
21c6b6da5339 | 52315F217E9A | If my principal had decided that
ALL
students must participate in at least one extracurricular activity for example students could participate in sports, work on the year book, or serve on the student council. I would strongly disagree | Position | Adequate |
39861bb8d787 | 52315F217E9A | there is people like me that dont want to do sports and would just rather go straight home after along day of school | Claim | Adequate |
53fb61cf967d | 52315F217E9A | some could not physically do sports or stuff like that | Claim | Ineffective |
20b195ff7a0f | 52315F217E9A | lastly i think i will just make students mad so you will have a lot of students yelling and talking back and not doing what they are supposed to do.
| Claim | Adequate |
3abe1ebe1206 | 52315F217E9A | I don't think you should be forced to play a sport or something like | Claim | Adequate |
88ad1e05dbfc | 52315F217E9A | because if you want to do it you will do it so there is no need to be force by principal. After school people just want to go home school is long enough so having an after school activity will just make some people upset and because I will be mad if i get forced to participate in an activity that will take time out of ... | Evidence | Adequate |
15db73fd77e4 | 52315F217E9A | Some students have disabilities so some of them won't be able to do that stuff and they have to go straight home after school. | Claim | Adequate |
19419c639cf6 | 52315F217E9A | i'm just saying if the principal does that there will be a lot of complaints for example why do they have to do it and we have stuff to do this is not fare. If all the students will be forced to do something like that they will all be tired the next day because some people are just not used to it like me for example. | Evidence | Adequate |
d4c888fb90f2 | 52315F217E9A | I dont think it is wrong sports are very good for you for example sports are good exercise and you could try something new, and you could even learn that you like a sport, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
8955c52a0432 | 52315F217E9A | but if some one wants to do an activity or play sports they can do it on there own they dont have to be forced for that stuff if you want to do it you will do it if you dont you shouldn't be forced that just going to make the students mad and aggressive | Rebuttal | Adequate |
1577712056c5 | 52315F217E9A | That should be something you supposed to do on your own. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
2de0e7333367 | 52579F4BBE4E | Most schools require students to complete a variety of projects during their summer break like reading books or completing a math packet. These projects help students continue their learning away from school, except the only difference is that they have all of summer to do it compared to having a due date within a week... | Lead | Effective |
a786c534ecf1 | 52579F4BBE4E | Summer projects should be designed by teachers | Position | Adequate |
2ea5b9c7a0b9 | 52579F4BBE4E | it will help students prepare for the upcoming school year. | Claim | Effective |
f4fc3df1337a | 52579F4BBE4E | Some students may panic because they won't understand the new material or that they will fall behind in the class because they don't remember how solve a simple question, but if teachers design a project based on their class, it gives students an idea of what to expect. For example, a student will be taking Algebra 2 i... | Evidence | Effective |
0ec183fbdb27 | 52579F4BBE4E | I can personally say that teacher-designed summer projects help prepare students for the upcoming school year. Once in middle school, there was a reading project assigned during the summer where students had to pick a book of their choosing that they can connect to and make notes on the side. I decided to choose a book... | Evidence | Effective |
efe8d5f9ef30 | 52579F4BBE4E | Over the summer, students would forget the material they learned from the past school year, which makes it hard for them to pick up once back at school. Students also learn at different rates meaning that some are more advanced than others. These are another few reasons as to why summer projects should be teacher-desig... | Evidence | Effective |
fde6feccab65 | 52579F4BBE4E | Teachers can design a project that helps them see where students are in their learning process and what they remember from past classes. | Claim | Effective |
110e503c3f15 | 52579F4BBE4E | For example, if a student takes a language, like Spanish, teachers can design a project where students must write a story in Spanish based on a given prompt. The project could include requirements that were taught from previous classes with some new concepts added in to see if an individual knows new concepts that will... | Evidence | Effective |
28d904ca0aa7 | 52579F4BBE4E | Although these are valid reasons as to why summer projects should be teacher-designed, others will disagree and believe that summer projects should be student-designed. | Counterclaim | Effective |
5a30ad74cc60 | 52579F4BBE4E | The purpose of summer is so that students can take a break from all the stress that they have experienced during the school year, so a great way to learn and be stress free while doing so is a student-designed project. Students could be assigned a project for a class, but it could be of their choosing. For example, stu... | Evidence | Effective |
683aa225a527 | 52579F4BBE4E | Yes, these are two very different sides with different opinions, but they both have a learning experience. Students still get the continuous learning process throughout their break while teachers can see where a student's learning capability is. Teacher-designed projects are stricter meaning that students would probabl... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
c2b7c629d068 | 527EB3C89F2F | To start this off it would be a great idea to study venus because it's some much different then earth | Position | Adequate |
eeca5c8d8ec6 | 527EB3C89F2F | When looking at it from earth soemthimes it called Evening stars. Which is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky | Evidence | Ineffective |
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