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b8457458398d | 54351180CD4F | As stated before, many people, including scientists, believe that the Face on Mars is an alien artifact and here are their reasons why | Counterclaim | Adequate |
225c00892841 | 54351180CD4F | As the photo of the Face on Mars was being taken, it was claimed that the "camera on board MGS had to peer through the wispy clouds to see the Face," and according to skeptics, "alien markings were hidden by haze." | Evidence | Adequate |
ab80e784e465 | 54351180CD4F | This did not stop mission controllers, and they prepared to look again. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
581e8229ab28 | 54351180CD4F | Garvin states that " It's not easy to target Cydonia," and that its hardwork. | Evidence | Ineffective |
a96eb1652493 | 54351180CD4F | Conspiracy theorists believe that the Face is "bona-fide evidence of life on Mars- evidence that NASA would rather hide." | Counterclaim | Adequate |
126c30beb69c | 54351180CD4F | Now this may all sound convincing, but it was also added that you can discern things in digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size, causing false illusions. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
47059511725d | 54351180CD4F | In conlusion, after analyizing the data and research given, I believe that the Face on Mars is just a natural landform. Others may disagree, but it is all about your interprutation on the topic, and hopefully the evidence used to support my claims did just that. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
a416c367ebc3 | 547C43CF3291 | to bein with the passage mainly states or really talk bout the things that make up the percent of cair pollution in the airlike 70 pecent of and 57 percent of the cars moved car are better then bike because bike your pedaling cars your just pushing the gas and it makes you goes faster 12 pecent of the grenhouse gas em... | Evidence | Ineffective |
f96c6137e095 | 5484CC372842 | Summer break is that time of the year where most students look forward to. Many are eager to sit back and relax, or enjoy their time with friends and family. Whatever it is, school is the last thing on their mind. It's the last thing on my mind too. Although that isn't always the case, there is always that one teacher ... | Lead | Effective |
dee0e5d5af3b | 5484CC372842 | To make it more enjoyable, I believe that these summer projects should at least be student-designed for various reasons. | Position | Effective |
cbb14c5a9cbd | 5484CC372842 | Summer break is the time where most students proceed to pursue hobbies, enjoy lifes moments, spend time with people that are cared about, and make memorial memories. Over break, students tend to discover their true passions and focus on what drives their interest. With projects being assigned, that can be tough and bui... | Evidence | Effective |
d6c8a1639842 | 5484CC372842 | Engaging learning with enjoyable hobbies can be beneficial for the teachers' satisfactory and the students.
| Claim | Effective |
4d62981f3d2d | 5484CC372842 | For most people, finding hobbies that are interesting can be challenging. Knowing myself, I need a sense of direction to know what my interests. It takes a bit of courage to try something new and actually enjoy it. | Evidence | Effective |
8089fe4d82f1 | 5484CC372842 | Student designed school projects can really help a student find his/her passions and learn something new along the way. | Claim | Effective |
a4783c679d28 | 5484CC372842 | Although students might think making school projects student-designed is a good idea, teachers might not agree. Some students could take this their advantage, by making the project as simple and pointless as they want. This could necessarily not reach the teachers standards and question if the student even learned anyt... | Counterclaim | Effective |
7c8feba2854b | 5484CC372842 | Although this could be case, summer projects are indeed just summer projects and should not be taken seriously. Summer should be the time where students can have the choice of doing what they want. If projects are mandatory for teachers, then it can be arranged, but it shouldn't put unnecessary stress on students. Espe... | Rebuttal | Effective |
f179ab9ec5cb | 5484CC372842 | Having being said, student designed projects are better for both the student and the teacher. It allows students to have more freedom and personalize their studies with their occupation. Teachers will also have the chance to determine the students personality and see what the student is like. It shows how bright a stud... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
eb032ff75929 | 54B7666CDA35 | Hello my name is luke and im am in the Seagoing cowboys program. My friend Don Reist invited me to go to Europe on a cattle boat. I work two part time jobs in a grocery store. It was 1945, World War 2 ended in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins.
This was and opportunity for me to be drafted in the military ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
ae5f1d7d34c9 | 54F17F5A8C3C | Obvously the aurthor must be a fan of scientific and that's great because I am to! The aurthor feels as if, there is multiple things you can do in life and thats means if going out your comfort zone to do it then so be it. In the story and as I was reading it, he really wants to find out more about earth and its "neigh... | Lead | Adequate |
b6b5180f5b04 | 54F17F5A8C3C | In the text, it says that we as humas, we have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on this cloud-draped world and the reason being is because we and he also, wanted to find out more about venus and how it works and many diffrent features | Position | Ineffective |
8e91b4cbc27f | 54F17F5A8C3C | Venus has a thick type of surface to it. It has a thick atmosphere of 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets. In the atmosphere of venus, there is a type of acid called "Sulfuric Acid" and this acid is basically the determination of the temperture for this planet. The average temperture for venus is 800 degrees Fahrenhi... | Evidence | Ineffective |
4e54b653e2b7 | 54F17F5A8C3C | The reason people and scientist are so fasinated with venus and how it works is because it was one of the closest to being more like earth and it has some features like it to | Claim | Adequate |
c598797e962f | 54F17F5A8C3C | This planet has more like valleys, mountains, and craters and as a author he wants to find out about more of the festure and how this will benifit him more in life if he were to continue searching about venus and earth and how they are diffrent and similar to each other | Evidence | Adequate |
13e1ed5a94db | 54F17F5A8C3C | By the 1800's the" mechanical computer" that was made for visual insight of venus and other planets around and near earth. These devices made caculations by using gears, and tool like things that hepled scientist in the 1800's up and somewhat past the 1940's. | Evidence | Ineffective |
c28db02d5c45 | 54F17F5A8C3C | So in this passage, the author gave me some information about the earth, venus, mars, life, merchury, and etc. The author basically is saying at the end of the passage, that if you were to go out your comfort zone to go explore things like earth and scientific material things, that it would'nt hurt and now that I know ... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
19a019264c79 | 550102B59704 | Why I think that Luke should join the program. | Position | Adequate |
6eb21660c0fe | 550102B59704 | I think he should join the program beacause he is a good person in the story. Also I think should because he really does anything bad in the story he just things that won't get him in trouble. But also he is a good child in the story he deserves to be in that program because their is no actual reson he can't be part of... | Evidence | Ineffective |
3e4102ba88bc | 551D2A846180 | so today i will be talking about my opion and how i feel about his whole little computre experssing reader and how do it will it worki and i feel that affects people | Lead | Ineffective |
68cdacfaca4d | 551D2A846180 | hosnlty i feel like thats a bad isea because dont nobody want noody all in they bussuins iyou should let people feel how they wanna feel | Position | Adequate |
71e92f5e9772 | 551D2A846180 | According to the packge i just read the computre is a 3d modle that tells reather you sad or happy or any other mixed emotions someone can have if you sad this ad will pop up if you make a angery face anorther will pop up to make sure they read it rigth honstly | Evidence | Ineffective |
d27d16f8f9f6 | 551D2A846180 | i feel like this the dunbst idea every because it seem like technolgy is just taking over the world as it all ready . | Claim | Ineffective |
854fdcaedd81 | 551D2A846180 | I feel liek you should just leave people alone | Claim | Ineffective |
6b81c963eb62 | 551D2A846180 | becauseif they feeling some type of way let them be stop always trying to be nosiey be and somebody bussins its not right stop trying to be caption save o let people be let them leave they life then if people find out you sad gthry going to be all up in your face like just leave people alone and let them be
| Evidence | Ineffective |
bb084b45c89e | 551D2A846180 | In Conclusion i think the idea is stupid ion think you should do it yall just letting tecnolgy take all the way over i feel yall shoukd just let people be if somebody want someone to they moody they will tell them maybe talking about it make them madder then what they is you never know thsts why its important to mind y... | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
fe2daefbd461 | 5534E738B129 | i disagree that all students should have at least one extracurricular activity | Position | Adequate |
ac8b3ee29229 | 5534E738B129 | most of the students spend most of their time outside running, playing different sports and more they could get stressed by having to play sports each time of day and as a result the students could lose interest of playing sports. | Claim | Adequate |
fb0242d7adf8 | 5534E738B129 | i think that students might not need an extracurricular activity because each student has a gym class | Claim | Adequate |
070b115e1cb7 | 5534E738B129 | in gym class each students does many different activitys including excerise, paser, sit in reach, jumping jacks and other different activitys. | Evidence | Adequate |
60569b5137cc | 5534E738B129 | the students could get tired | Claim | Adequate |
eaf1e15c5700 | 5534E738B129 | causing them to not pay attention to the teacher and they could miss important information that the teacher is teaching them and that will cause the student to get a bad grade in class and fail the class. | Evidence | Adequate |
3fe6fa60beb3 | 5534E738B129 | Finally students shouldn't have an extracurricular activity because it could make the students very stressed and tired at school | Claim | Adequate |
8b1bc5e0e392 | 5534E738B129 | they spend their time outside to play sports also students have gym classes where they do many different activitys. | Evidence | Ineffective |
d47123facfb1 | 55B4B2BFF231 | In this passage I personally think that he did an good job with this artical. | Position | Adequate |
e35cf13cb7da | 55B4B2BFF231 | He mad sure that he included everythings that he needed to put in the artical. | Evidence | Adequate |
b0b8b7e52930 | 55B4B2BFF231 | venus is earth sister | Claim | Adequate |
bfe40e3ba6ac | 55B4B2BFF231 | NASA going to check out other planets | Claim | Adequate |
ba01f4c89e0a | 55B4B2BFF231 | explain the planet to. | Claim | Adequate |
c0c54e71d0f6 | 55B4B2BFF231 | Venus is the sister ouf the plantet earth because its to closes to earth. | Claim | Adequate |
985226d47d9e | 55B4B2BFF231 | What i mean to the closes is Venus could possible be another earth because it has the same features and it may well once have been the most earth - like plantet in our solar system, and in terms of density and size and occasionally the closest in distance too.
Earth is closes to venus and mars but orbit the sun at dif... | Evidence | Adequate |
a4f3f435ea46 | 55B4B2BFF231 | The NASA has talked about idea like sending humans to study venus. | Claim | Adequate |
16e64eef1799 | 55B4B2BFF231 | They talk about what they going to bring and how far it is and what they are going to be doing. in the passage he talked about what happen in the war and how did it affect . and maybe having electronics up there too. | Evidence | Ineffective |
b82b268e0613 | 55B4B2BFF231 | This passage describe venus | Claim | Ineffective |
bf834bbffa00 | 55B4B2BFF231 | he say that the atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanets venus. The temperature in venus could averagr over 800 degrees fahrenheit. he dec=scrive the atnospheric pressure as 90 times greater than what we experience on earth. | Evidence | Adequate |
94b1660c3925 | 55B4B2BFF231 | In this passage I learned alot that i did not know about. I personally think he did good in this passage because he made me learn and i enjoyed reading this passage . I learn about venus and learn about NASA and what they might going to do. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
92111ff91066 | 561798F1DC3D | Well it's getting close to that time of year again, summer time! Warm air, bright shinning sun, and many activities that are only available during the summer season. But if you are like some students who go to certain schools maybe not so much. Some schools across the country require students to preform school based le... | Lead | Effective |
7fe2c71a632f | 561798F1DC3D | What many teachers don't realize is that teenagers are slowly being thrown into adulthood. Every year we have seen more and more teenagers be pushed into adult responsibility even when they are so young. Many students have to get jobs in the summer to support their families and help them. Some students work on farms wh... | Evidence | Effective |
6c541f3d945d | 561798F1DC3D | While the idea of the over the summer projects are neat they really should be student run. | Position | Adequate |
33049f90a540 | 561798F1DC3D | These students want the power this time and the choice to choose what they want to do. They want to be able to pick the subject that they are interested in and pursue it, this time with nothing and no one in their way. | Claim | Effective |
4506597003e4 | 561798F1DC3D | Many students in the United States have been diagnosed with a learning disability. Whether is be reading, understand, or they just generally struggle to grasp a concept, these student have it hard. They are already given a disadvantage when they enter into the learning ring. Many of the students attend summer programs ... | Evidence | Effective |
69ce3093ef1f | 561798F1DC3D | The project, with them behind the learning wheel, could also assist them with their disability. | Claim | Effective |
07519bad3238 | 561798F1DC3D | They could make it something they understand and can learn at their own pace while also learning about something they enjoy. They can finally be set free and be given the power and choice to learn a pursuing subject, but also have something that conforms to their personal needs. | Evidence | Effective |
c857aac7bcef | 561798F1DC3D | Students as a word is something that a lot of people see as a word used to describe kids and teens who go to school, learn, then return to perfect homes. That might have been the case year ago, but not anymore. In today's society kids and teens are being pushed to take responsibility. They are being pushed to work and ... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
6bdb2bce8695 | 56193E77BB71 | Every living thing on planet earth has emotions. These emotions have been used since the beginning of time to express the feelings of the people around you. However, these emotions can be decieving. Someone could say they are happy, when really they are angry or upset. This is where the Facial Action Coding System come... | Lead | Effective |
bf3306908bc9 | 56193E77BB71 | It may sound far fetched, but actually, FACS may be the best thing to come to schools | Position | Effective |
163b86285c57 | 56193E77BB71 | flexible learning | Claim | Effective |
1ad1a117e4d8 | 56193E77BB71 | the ability to read the students. | Claim | Effective |
8a409375a2fc | 56193E77BB71 | In the education world, teachers are the backbone of the infestructure. Without teachers, the whole system would collapse. However, it may be hard for one teacher to connect with every student individually and make sure they are learning properly or if they are paying attention. This is where FACS comes in. In the arti... | Evidence | Effective |
9f98a8c2d547 | 56193E77BB71 | With FACS, every child could essentially have a customized lesson plan exactly for their needs. This would make children more eager to learn because they begin to enjoy it. | Claim | Effective |
502918097e58 | 56193E77BB71 | Besides the classroom, FACS could also be used in the school elsewhere. | Claim | Adequate |
0ac600d4c6fe | 56193E77BB71 | One of the other important areas this could be used is in counceling.
| Evidence | Adequate |
94c27bb04232 | 56193E77BB71 | It is very hard for anyone to tell someone they are sad. This is especally true when they barely know the person they are talking to. This can be the case for school councelors and the children they are meeting with. FACS may be able to help. | Evidence | Effective |
fe962fb2be21 | 56193E77BB71 | With FACS, the school could see if children are upset or scared. | Claim | Effective |
0e18a9088782 | 56193E77BB71 | The school could also see how often these children feel this way. When a child is unhappy or scared, it is very unlikely that they are going to be doing their work at full capacity. If FACS could find these children that need help, they could be helped faster. This could also be used to find children being bullied. If ... | Evidence | Effective |
b87b3fa925dd | 56193E77BB71 | It may be true that some children might not want people to know about this, that they may want to hide it. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
3c7ed500d7ee | 56193E77BB71 | However, it is never healthy to hide such strong emotions, especally if there are people around you willing to help. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
c1d5e682987c | 56193E77BB71 | With the constant evoultion of the way we learn, its not suprising that something like FACS was created. Emotions have been with everything living since the beginning of time. Before FACS, it was suprisingly difficult to read these emotions in people. Such a crucial part of our everyday lives could be easily hidden awa... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
28049e905d03 | 565B5C8E9B05 | This story is about evaluating The Challenge of Exploring Venus. In the first paragraph it is kinda misleading because it says that venus sometimes called the evening star is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Then it goes on to talk about how venus is also a planet so the name is very misleading. T... | Lead | Ineffective |
5b0ff087dc00 | 565B5C8E9B05 | Venus is the closest planet to earth and yet to there has been a spacecraft to survive the landing. Although it could be a little bit tough seems haw venus's atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets and the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere. On venus surface the temperatues a... | Evidence | Ineffective |
56de9c2703e2 | 565B5C8E9B05 | In conclusion the story had some great details about what venus was like compared to earth but i also think that it was a little misleading about star planet and i think that could have been fixed up so it didnt have you on your toes trying to find out wether or not it was a star or a planet that was earths twin. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
fbb2ffc9998d | 567D7BBCEF48 | Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and accasionally the closest in distance too. the speed between Mars, Venus, and Earth orbit the sun in different speeds. these difference in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times venus
A thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
9d7d2a5bce04 | 567D7BBCEF48 | this showws how dangerous it s trying to study venus specially with the high percentages that this story has about venus. | Claim | Ineffective |
ab1c1541d1fa | 567D7BBCEF48 | Paragraph 4 the authour asks " if our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientist even discussing further visit to its surface?" he states that astronomers are fasinated by planet in our solor system , long ago, Venus was probably covered large;y with oceans and could have supported varous forms of life, just l... | Evidence | Ineffective |
b2f2ae1d93f4 | 56C208138AC9 | I think people should join the program | Position | Adequate |
096aa4210a63 | 56C208138AC9 | that way they or we can help people or other countries in need of help. | Claim | Adequate |
58f7aa72dae1 | 56C208138AC9 | If other countries need help or something like water or food or something like that like maybe more homes to build for the homeless.
Another good thing about it is that you can travel around the world and the states like if there are more animals do in need because they are in danger and almost extinct!
The best part... | Evidence | Ineffective |
1403da5c2ff3 | 56C6D97AF40B | Hi, I'm Luke Bomberger. I was a Seagoing Cowboy. You might be pondering what that is, and if you are, I will inform you. Seagoing Cowboys help animals, mostly horses, donkeys, cows, and mules, that are being shipped overseas to avoid harm get to their destination. Are you thinking that you maight like being part of thi... | Lead | Effective |
a8d754a056fa | 56C6D97AF40B | you can help animals that are in danger and get to know them | Claim | Adequate |
6319a5bed0d3 | 56C6D97AF40B | This gives you a good feeling of helpfulness and compassion. I love to save lives, especially if they're animals'. I also liked to be freinds with them. Even though there are many other people on the boat with you, the creatures all have their own personalities, and this makes them fun to hang out with. | Evidence | Ineffective |
d068e2c646e8 | 56C6D97AF40B | you get to see the world | Claim | Adequate |
8f032a3e75da | 56C6D97AF40B | I have seen the Acropolis in Greece, the Panama Canal, and an excavated castle in Crete. I have been to Europe, China, and Italy. You can go to all of these places, see these sights, and more if you join their program. | Evidence | Ineffective |
d1159378b384 | 56C6D97AF40B | there are so many people on the boat with you that it is impossible not to make a friend and have fun almost every day | Claim | Adequate |
c6e7892bfd80 | 56C6D97AF40B | I have made ample new companions. There are also many games played on the ship. They include baseball, volleyball, table-tennis, fencing, reading, boxing, and whittling. As you can probably tell, these are all exciting to do with your buddies.
| Evidence | Adequate |
2d5fc09b6746 | 56C6D97AF40B | Although there are a few risks, such as stormy weather, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
ee39a6f12f67 | 56C6D97AF40B | t is worth it to see the animals get safely to their destination. You can join knowing that you will be making big differences in millions of creatures' lives. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
4c2eabf2f146 | 56C6D97AF40B | If you want to have an amazing time with friends, play enjoyable games, see awesome landmarks and buildings, and help and make friends with animals | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
61e554f11dd1 | 56C6D97AF40B | you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. | Position | Adequate |
1a3ec4398995 | 57076BE40C47 | limiting car usage can have many advantages | Position | Adequate |
a61fe96c6e4a | 57076BE40C47 | a big topic would be because of the gas getting in the air creating "smog" or pollution. | Claim | Adequate |
9ad35505255a | 57076BE40C47 | Keeping the earth clean but banning cars can make the enviornment a better place. | Evidence | Adequate |
7b02ab4a14be | 57076BE40C47 | limiting the use of cars can be very good for our enviornment because it would make the air less polluted | Claim | Adequate |
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