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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent times, it's very important to recycle things like a plastic and glass and reduce the waste of it by teaching children. However, It's a highly debated topic, Some believe that it should be taught by schools and others think that it might be more effective if learn at home by parents. This essay will discuss both points of views further. I firmly believe that, Children should be aware and learn about this at the institution.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, some group of people agrees that like other learnings, the value of recycled material and rubbish should teach at the house. In light of the fact that, Child always learns anything first at home to other places. For instance, one research held by the World Health Organisation in 1998 resulted, babies are adopting habits such as eating, drinking, walking, etc. From their parents and guardians while spending time with them. Therefore, they argue that home is a good place to learn about recycling things and waste.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I would stand by the former view that an institution is a more effective place for aware children to grasp habits of reuse the things. Firstly, It's well established fact that, students more listen to their teachers to parents. Secondly, They can learn from other peers by watching them. Last but not the least, If schools provide learning through practical examples, then children can more retain information for a long time. For example, One recent European study demonstrates that, Learning at school is far more impactful than home.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, People may vary in their opinion, I strongly believe that learning about reducing a waste and recycling a rubbish to children in schools are a more efficient way to home.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nobody know how the face got on mars because we never been their. This face could of been their from the jump and ya'll said it was a human face i never seen a face of a human shaped like that a day in my life. You see how the earth changed dont you think ohther plantes form in other shapes like i said people we have no evidence that an alien shaped this face on mars. How we know NASA didnt do this? they can do every thing eles like having a little car drive around on mars and see whats all their and bring littel rocks back from mras. People we got to understand that they is just trying to get our MONEY out of us why you think strang things come out of no were and then they put it on the web. Thats why they make us think stuff is out their like this how you know they didnt just make something that can carve this face on mars an now they trying to say it was aliens that did this. You got to think outside the box people dont let these people trick you for your money because the more attention you give them the more money you give them so please people open your eyes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus can be a worthy pursiut despite the dangers. Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky and the nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a planet. It is also the second plant from our sun. '' Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.''\n\nStudying Venus may despite the dangers it presents but it also is a worthy pursuit because scientists are still discussing futher visits to its surface even if it is inhospitable. In the text it states'' Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.'' This shows that it is worthy because of the reputatation and is great to study for. The text also states'' Astronomers are fascinated by Venus becuase it mat well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.'' This shows that the planet surface is a good planetary visit and its mission is safe and scientifically productive.\n\nThe dangers of Venus may include the surface temperature, its high pressure and heat, the erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes. In the text it states'' researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.'' It will be a challenge but the researchers are working on innovaitons that would allow the machine to last long enough to contribute to there knowlegde of Venus.\n\nEven though Venus had its dangers it still strives to meet the challenge becuae it has its value and it also will human curiosity will likely lead us into mant equallt intimidating endeavors. This is why scientists are still willing to study Venus because it is worthy even though it has its dangers and is inhospitable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many choose to believe that studying and attaining several degrees benefit one's future the most, while the others rest their belief on the fact that professional experience is of utmost importance. When students complete their schooling, they must make up their mind on whether they would like to study further or work. I strongly agree with the latter and believe that attaining a job and gaining knowledge of how the market works is important in deciding the career growth. In this essay both sides would be discussed.\n\nHaving a job enhances many skills like managing time and money, how to be a responsible citizen, how to be independent and so on. When students who have just finished their education, by getting a job they provide a financial backup to their parents as they start taking up their own expenses. For instance, a job holder would take up basic expenses like food, shelter, and clothing.\n\nHolding many degree's does bring with it a sense of pride and accomplishment and climbing up the educational ladder would ensure one get high end jobs. Knowledge is never ending, and it is always good to learn more. For instance, for those to aspire to become scientists and scholars, college and university education would ensure they perform the best.\n\nTo conclude, while education is of high importance, I strongly believe experience in the workplace would be more beneficial. A job right after schooling is completed should do the trick rather than studying endlessly and not learning any of the essential life skills which would be of use in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I nt think certin matrials removed library shelvs People option get choose shelvs lirarians nt force choose item It free country think people choose wa nt If people nt like read back movie book choose", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think you should sign up for the Seagoing Cowboys program. Here are some reasons why I think you should sign up for the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nI think you should sign up for the program because it is tons of fun. You can travel to many countries, while also helping the people in need.\n\nThere is tons of fun stuff to do. You can play table tennis, fencing, boxing, and you can even read and whittle if you'd like. You can do so much on your freetime.\n\nTraveling. That sounds like alot of fun, but you're not traveling just for fun. While you're traveling, you're crossing the dangerous seas and helping the people that need help. While you are traveling, you can get the chance to see some pretty amazing things on the way.\n\nHelping people is the most important part of the program. Helping the ones in need is fun and exciting. You can make new friends and meet new people. Helping others that need it the most can, lead to giving them happiness and can even make you crack a smile.\n\nThosse are the reasons why I think you should sign up for the Seagoing Cowboys program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on mars, many people believe that it was created by aliens but how could that even be possible if there is no such thing as aliens? The natural landform on the face of mars does have many human characteristics but so do many other things, why is this one a bigger deal then others?\n\nSeeing this \"Face\" on mars what would you think? In paragraph three of \" Unmasking the Face on Mars\" it says \" huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shaows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" It says formed by shadows giving the illusion of these human characteristics meaning it does not truly look like that but seeing the way you look at it forms an illusion seeing a human face \"created by aliens\". Not many scientists were convinced that it was an alien artifact but still took a picture showing the \"face\" on mars.\n\nIn paragraph eight it says \" not everyone was satisfied. The Face on Mars is loctaed at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April `98 a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet.\" Scientists looked on the Red Planet to see not much there but clouds at this time of year. Mission controllers say that it's not particularly easy to target Cydonia. Since many people are in awe about the face on mars scientists got better cameras to take better pictures of the mysterious face on the planet with higher resolution cameras for when days are foggy and you can't see the big Red Planet very well.\n\nIn paragraphs 11 and 12 the scientists who were observing the face on mars finally took pictures with\n\npixels 3 times bigger then it was before. The images they took were so clear if there were objects such as planes or anything else, they would be able to see it without them even being relatively close to the planet, in there discovery the images actually show the equivalent of a butte or a messa landform common around the American West. Garvin a scientists said \" It reminds me most of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\"\n\nEven if there was alien lifeform on Mars how would we know much about it? After all of the research the scientists that worked on this some people still believe that it was an alien artifact and others wouldn't have believed it if the smartest scientists in the world said it was an alien artifact. What do you think it is just an odd natural occurence that created a face in planet mars, or something more out of this world? This kind of thing doesn't happen all of the time but it did this one time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From prior knowledge or just by reading \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" some may argue that the Face on Mars was created by aliens, when in all reality it is a natural landform.\n\nOne claim would be, NASA wouldn't hide life on Mars they'd honor it . In a passage from the story the narrorator says, \"... defenders of the NASA budget wishes there was an ancient civilazation on Mars.\" Another support from the article is, \"Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a prioritry for NASA...\" Both passages from the article support the claim that NASA wouldn't hide life on Mars they'd honor it.\n\nAnother claim is, the Face actually is a butte. In the article the narrorator says \"What the picture actually show is the Martian equivalent of a mesa/butte-landforms common around the American West.\" Also in the passage it reads,'\"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using th cameras absolute maximum resolution.\"...you can discern things in a digital image 3 time s bigger than the pixel size,\"...\"So if there were objects inthis picture like airplains on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\"\" Both examples from the article support the idea that the face is actually a mesa/butte or natural landform.\n\nTo sum it all up, according to the artice the Face is an oddly shape natural landformed mesa/butte; it was not created by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a modern era, everyone has the awareness about sports. Participating in games with a team will help to improve the cooperate skills in the children. I completely agree with this statement. In this essay i will explain with the reasons and examples.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, first reason behind it is that, apart from the team sports not only assist cooperation but also learn socialization. In other words, in this modern era , younger generation do not have time to mingle with others and share their problems. as a result, the communication skills are reduced. and morover, team games assist how to cooperate eachother when the problem occurs. For instance, in 2012 cricket wordcup kapildev got injured then the captain immediately replace him with another batsman for the match and won the match. Therefore, everyone give support him to win.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Learning about your residence's history is becoming widespread to many people these days. This essay will examine the causes of this phenomenon as well as suggest ways for people to accomplish this objective.\r\n\r\nThere are a variety of different causes for this matter. One such reason is that by gaining a deeper understanding of the origins of their homes, people can feel a certain emotional connection to where they are living. This is especially apparent in people with long family lines, where the heirs of the family would usually inherit properties owned by the family. To them, discovering secrets relating to their place's past uncovers more about their lineage, of the people who have lived here before, establishing a sense of belonging as they continue the next generation. For example, an anonymous survey conducted on wealthy heirs indicated that over 80% of participants believed that becoming aware of their family's home history makes them feel proud of what their bloodline has accomplished, bringing them motivation to continue that trend.\r\n\r\nThere are several ways to research the history of a home. The easiest way to do this is to ask the surrounding neighbours what they know from their time living in the area. This is an effective method as these people are the ones who have personally witnessed the changes occurring surrounding the house, thus being able to give you detailed info based on their own unfiltered experience. In fact, as an example, the New York Times have actually compared the information on a certain property from two different sources, people in the surrounding area and local governing body records. The outcome of the experiment shows how info provided by neighbours is generally more detailed and accurate to government records.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the driven interest in researching homes' history has been fueled by a desire to reconnect with one's past, and understand the historical values of these buildings. To do this, people can implement many ways, the most notable of which is to examine the house from a neighbour's point of view, as they generally give more personalised information, which the government or the internet cannot provide.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While it is true that watching TV affects children, it is difficult to determine whether it is the content of the programs or the length of time spent watching them that has a more significant impact on children. It seems to me that although the amount of time does affect youngsters, it is the content of the programs that has a more marked influence on them. On the one hand, the consequences of watching TV for long periods of time can be deleterious. Firstly, the longer children are exposed to TV programs, the more likely it is for them to become addicted to watching television. When children become over-reliant on television for entertainment, they might neglect engagement in outdoor activities. This may result in a sedentary lifestyle that is highly detrimental to their physical health. More importantly, excessive TV watching impairs children’s communication abilities, so they find it hard to play or live in harmony with others. As a result, children would feel discouraged from having real interactions with people around them if they spent a huge amount of time in front of the screen, which may hinder their development of social skills. On the other hand, it is the broadcasted images that have the most direct effects on young viewers. Firstly, in most countries the majority of TV shows present glamorized depictions of inappropriate materials such as violence, drug abuse or casual sex, thus youngsters may adopt unhealthy habits and improper behavior. For example, they might fall under the impression that the use of alcoholic drinks is fashionable without being aware of the health risks they carry and later end up consuming these substances. Besides, in our modern consumer society, commercials also affect how children behave. Unwary young viewers could be easily swayed by captivating advertisements for junk food or video games, products whose target audience includes children, and so may pester their parents to buy these goods impulsively. In conclusion, although both factors have their own implications, I believe the element with more considerable impacts on children is the content. Hence, parental involvement is essential in controlling children’s TV viewing habits and in shaping a child’s values to help them enter adult life with a healthy mind.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Google cofounder Sergey Brin thinks that the genius idea of driverless cars will be around by the year of 2020. This would mean there would be less accidents if it is put out into the world when it working properly.\n\nDriverless cars would cause less wrecks and be safer to pedestrians. If you were drinking you could put the driverless part of the car on so there wouldn't be a problem getting you home. Many accidents are caused by people that are tired, drunk, or under the influence of something. \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" This quote shows that alert drivers would be the best for our safety, but the drivers not alert or under the influence of something could cause serious damage to someone or something which is why the car should have a setting for the human to drive and one setting for the car to drive.\n\nDriverless cars is a great idea and have some flaws at the moment buy in a couple of years it will run perfectly or close to perfect so it can keep people safe. This would cause less accidents in car related things.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Helpful But Not Needed\n\nHow far is too far? Sometime we as a human try to improve our ways of living for society, while some are good there are also some that go too far. Like the one Prof. Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe try to create, they are making this a new software that they think will be an step toward the future. What they don't know is that they are also giving away some of our rights. We will be giving up some things Facial Action Coding System into the school system.\n\nThere are some unintentional consequences that will be caused by the the new software. The Facial Action Coding System will be ignoring our privacy as stated in the 1st paragraph. The machine knew exactly what the painting was feeling, it even know what percent of that feeling she was feeling. There are somethings that we want to keep for ourself, but how do we do that when a machine scans us and know exactly how and what we are feeling. There are things that some of us want to be kept hidden. You can't just change someone's emotion that easy, there are also somethings that you let a person go through on their own. We feel this way because we want to. When someone tells a bad joke, people might still laugh at it. If the software were expose us, the person who told the joke would lose confience and could be hurt. Lets say that someone was feeling disgusted but not because of something but because of someone, he/she(the person who is not feeling disgusted) will feel really sad and hurt. This software might have some bad to it but there are also some good side to it.\n\nSome of the good things this software would be good for was stated in paragraph 6. This software could help shopers and companies to sell their products. A good example would be for small companies that are not that popular or known, this new software would help them out a lot. This is all sunshine and rainbows but what about our privacy? This would mean that the software would constanly be scanning us for our emotions every single second we are on a device. It is stated that our PC can't handle this comples algorithms in paragraph 7, but that they would stil have simple instructions. This is even worse as it might only be able to tell one emtions unlike the Facial Action Coding System, and we would still be risking our privacy.\n\nIf the Facial Action Coding System was acepted into the school system this could be bad news. Imagine a classroom with this software in it, it could show if the students are bored or confused like what this article said in paragraph 6. Lets say the students were bored. What if the teacher is trying his best to make it intresting but also make the students learn at the same time, or what if this was how the teacher was taught to teach and was teaching like this for as long as he was teaching? What now? Won't this crush the teacher? The teacher tried his best, but the students are still bored, this will also make him want to try his best less and less. So what if the software can shows emotions? The Facial Action Coding System can be put in school, but it will just be a waste of money and it also have the potention of hurting more that it does of being benefitial.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a software that makes humanity closer to the future but at a price. It seem like a great idea but it bring unintentional consequences. This can hurt our peers feelings, and will cause the people around us and even us to have lower self esteem. It is invasive to our privacy and it might not as effective when it is used in PC, which is where it would be most effective. If it was put in the schools it won't be benefitial to the student or the teachers as it will just have negative impact on the classroom. The Facial Action Coding System might sound like a new amazing invention that is out of this world, but the impact it have will not be good.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Making a trip to Venus is very dangerous because of the conditions that the planet presents. Venus is a dangerous planet to observe but has many qualities that can be explored by scientists and that are simply amazing. As it is known Venus is called the \"Evening Star\" which can be spotted in the night sky due to the reason that it is one of the brightest points in the sky. Venus is very easy to see from a distance but when it comes to exploring up close and personal it is rather difficult. Venus is very similar to Earth in its size and density. Venus is one of Earth's neighbor which every once in a while puts the planet rather close to Earth. Many risks are involved with making a trip to Venus but great knowledge can be gained from it.\n\nThe conditions in Venus are not the best due to its physical and environmental features. In Venus volcanoes and earthquakes can be found. It is extremely hard for probes to land on the surface because lightning strikes them before they can reach land. The atmosphere is 97% carbon dioxide and the weather averages about 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Pressure on Venus is also 90 times greater than that on Earth. Even though there are many risks present humans continue to find fascination in the planet because it is the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. It is believed that Venus could've once been covered in oceans and provided many forms of life. Another reason as to why Venus is worth exploring because it is simply our nearest option for a planetary visit. Scientists are working hard to find a way to make the planet safe for exploration. It is thought that a vehicle hovering 30 miles about Venus can provide survivable conditions for humans. Temperature at this distance would drop down to 170 degrees Fahrenheit but the pressure would be the same as of that on Earth. These conditions aren't the safest or most comfortable but are safe enough for humans. One fact is that scientists have been looking new ways to improve their devices. One of those options is to use mechanical parts as these parts are more resistant to heat and pressure. Our technology nowadays is very advanced but also extremely delicate. Danger will be present with any mission that involves exploring other planets. Intelect of planets can be gained. So much information could be obtained from an exploration of the planet.\n\nSomething can be lost from an exploration to Venus but also something could be gained. Curiosity is human nature and it can lead to great discoveries. Nothing will be easy but it is also not impossible. This exploration will most likely not be the most dangerous one yet. Time is infinite and that means there is an endless amount of opportunites for more dangerous endeavors to pop up. Humans cannot stop exploring just because of certain risks that may be present. If that was done then no new knowledge would be gained. As time is passing technology is also growing and chances are that in the future a way to be able to travel to Venus without as many risks will be found. So to be said even though the trip is dangerous and posses extreme conditions for whoever is traveling the trip can be very successful. This exploration could definetely be worth the dangers if everything is done correctly and new information is gained from this trip.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the recent past, the gap between the rich and the poor countries has widened. While some believe that assisting the poor till they are financially stable has positive consequences, others contradict. I think world organisations should continue their support to these nations until these zones are removed from this category.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, there are many developing countries that lack proper infrastructure for basic amenities. Thus the space between them is increasing. The major factor for lending support is to build good governance and rules within the zone, which help them become independent later. For instance, a few regions do not have sufficient food, good shelter, schools, organizations and enough resources for everyone, though they form an essential part of everyday lives. Apart from them, catastrophes, for example, droughts, floods and tsunamis, which take away many people's lives, cause the damage. Additionally, they deserve the assistance, for all of them need to be on par with each other, or else they would be in a vulnerable situation of being invaded.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, many argue that the world organizations such as World Health Organization, UNESCO, and UNDP form a bias towards the poor ones and tend to have an inclination towards only their betterment. However, these states too delegate their responsibilities to these organisations by depending on them too much. The more international aid is provided, the more the countries rely on it. In addition, more funds are directed toward them. To illustrate, today, a lot of funds are provided to Syria as it is one of the under-developed ones, therefore it leads to a reduction in the funds towards the global causes.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, there are more benefits if international institutes lend a helping hand to them than the disadvantages. So I opine that the aid should not be stopped till they prosper to a considerable extent.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI think that the Electoral College should be disposed of and the president should be elected through citizens' votes. I think this because Congress is biased. They don't have the same ideas as the citizens and can sometimes be difficult. It could be hard to compile the votes from the citizens and the votes from Congress because Congress could have a completely different view on the candidates than the citizens because they work for the government. I think it would be easier to just count up the citizens' votes and majority wins. Apparently Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all agree with me.\n\nHow it works is they add up all the citizens' votes and say who has the most, then add up Congress's votes and tell the winner. What happens sometimes is there is a winner of the citizens' votes, so who the citizens think should be the new president, then they add Congress's votes up and the president is the other person, not who the citizens want the president to be. How is that fair to the citizens? That would be a big problem because then they wouldn't like their president, there would be rebels, etc. It would not be pretty.\n\nFor instance, in Texas, if you wanted to vote for one person, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors that would be pledged to that person. If the electors won the statewide election, they would go to congress and that person would get 34 electoral votes, but who are the electors? The citizens have no idea. They don't know who picks the electors or who the electors are, it depends on the state. The voters can't always control who their electors vote for. It's not their decision.\n\nI don't think that is fair to the citizens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most people might want to get rid of the Electoral College and change to popoular vote, because of how unfair, voters have no say so in who gets pick president.\n\nOne reason you might want to change to popular vote is because of how unfair they can be all because of the winner-takes-all system and this this system is in easch state, and because of that candidates dont spend time in states they know that wont vote for them. Just like you can't pick who you want your president to be.\n\nVoters can't pick who they want their president to be its all the Electoral college. Voters don't even get to vote for the president thay vote for a slate of electors. just like if you live in Texas and you voted for Kerry you didnt vote for him you voted for 34 demcartic electors.\n\nThe only argument against the Electoral college is what we call the disaster factor. Americans should feel lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest problem election in a century.\n\nGiven that most voters vote one party for president and another for congress they do this becaus ethis think a tie or deadlock will happen but, consider this. In 1968 a shift of just 41,971 voters would of dead locked the election yet in 1976 a tie would of happen but 5,559 voters in Ohio and 3,687 voter in Hawaii voted the other way.\n\nThis right here is the most basic level the electoral college is unfair and should let the voters have their voice when voting.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine having to worry less about being to tired while driving, not having to take your kids everywhere, not having to wake up really early to go to work for a really long drive, or not having to worry about your child being endanger when they get there liscense. Well guess what driveless cars are coming and they are a lot safer then what most people think.\n\nDriveless cars can be helpful to evryone in there everyday life. You wouldn't have to worry about wasting so much money on gas. Gas prices arent always gonna keep getting lower and lowere like they now are they are gonna shoot up i the future once again. Imagine how many people's lifes can be saved from all the wrecks that happen annually around the world and you wouldnt have to worry about people driving under the influence anymore. If driveless cars are in our near future more lifes will be saved you wouldn't have to put your kids who are new at driving at a risk of getting hurt. You also wouldn't have to wake up so early and drive while your half asleep that can stop people from being in an accident. You also probably wouldn't have to worry about any traffic stops or any speeding tickets, so those cops can finially leave you alone.\n\nWheather you like it or not driverless cars are coming. They can save so many lifes and you wouldnt have to worry about so many things when you are driving, there would be a lot less more accidents and a lot less drunk driving and texting and driving incidents. They also save a lot of gas, so why dont you come aboard onto the driverless cars train.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This article is about the unmasking the face on Mars. So the people went to Mars were Garvin and his other friend that went. They took pictures and they seen a face.\n\nNow Garvins' friend said it was a alien that had done this. But there were no proof that aliens did this. They saw no movement on planet Mars. So they called it Martian mesa. On the red planet name as Cydonia. That's where it happened. The face looked like an Egytain Pharaoh. Something funny happened to Mars around/about 25 years ago. Now if I was up there I would start researching this object. Knowing what this was. Where it came from and other things that are important to the shape figure.\n\nSo now we know that the people up in space looking at this object are saying it was something that has been there for 25 years, they don't know who done this. All the NASA knows is that they probably know where it came from and things they aren't just saying the full information. So this was about unmasking face on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea of Venus being a worthy pursuit in paragraph 6. They talked about how scientists wanted to have a mission for Venus and would have to get closer. Scientists were also working on machines would allow them to know more about Venus. They wouldn't want to risk anyones life to explore the planet when the atmosphere is already dangerous.\n\nOn paragraph 7 the author talks about on how NASA is lookig back on old technology to help them with more research on Venus. They were going to use the technology for objects that would be more resilient against the harsh atmosphere of Venus. They're to find a better ways to find more about Venus with old technology that would be very valuable to scientists.\n\nIn conclusion to this is that Scientists are looing for many ways to explore our solar system. They're trying to find ways that will explain more about the things around our planet. Venus is a planet that we can't send anything on to know more about it's mysteries. If scientists want to accomplish their mission to Venus, then they woukd have to go deeper.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My aspect on driveless car is that they can be good in many ways and bad in many ways.Ways they can be good :the driver can relax and be cofortable, it helps out an lot of elderly people who cant drive. Reason that they are not a good idea: the car can lose control while the driever is relaxed,the car may take them to the wrong place,or the car could simplely crash.\n\nThe driveless car is a good idea in so many ways such as the driver can relax while driving. we all know that driveing can cause irriation and craps and it take a long time.Another way why driveless car are great is that it help a lot of the elderly out. Some of the old men and women cant drive cause of a medincal problem, but how can these men and women go to the grocrey store to get their food and other things they need or get their medicine.\n\nThe driverless car is a bad idea because:the car can lose control while the driver is relax then there wil be a crash and many people will get hurt.Other ways the car can be a bad idea is that the car may take that person to the wrong place and that person will be lost,or the car can simplely crash and every one will end up hurt.\n\nThere is my idea on the driverless car some may think that im wrong and some may think that this couldnt happen but we have to think of it in a bad way and a good way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Tracing the history of houses has become progressively popular in recent years. The reasons for this appear to be focused on four areas, and the number of solutions also appear. \r\n\r\nPerhaps the major reason here is the renovation of old or new houses. Many older residences have been displaced from their prime worth by previous owners and modernized to the elegance of the point. However, the research will reveal architectural earliest characteristics return home's exclusive integrity and design back. Another factor is the increasing number of people who insure and evaluate their properties, especially - they need the information of its age or built date. As a result, surged the demand for asset valuation and brokerage job positions. The last reason is curiosity and not wanting a living with a mysterious past or negative energy. Furthermore, it seems that new owners face some problems, such as personal issues related to the previous owners.\r\n\r\nRegarding potential solutions, an obvious step would be to visit a local library and the state registration office, which retain census records, street maps, or other imperative information. They also preserve other documents related to a property, such as dwelling licenses, inspections, appraisals, and tax assessments. For example, it might be possible to compare the current map to older maps through research on the built date of the house. Another suggestion may be searching for information from the internet database. Identifying the style of their mansion or architectural features is the first stage. Then it will be possible to find, based on this, what generation of buildings had been commonly constructed at that time. Finally, the communicating methods, which meet neighbours who have lived there for a long time, are suitable.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the main reasons seem to be renovation and growing of house evaluating. The key solution would be using various searching methods.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a new computer progam software that tell you how are you feeling. The subject of Leonardo da Vinci's Renaissance painting. It tell you if are happy, mad, or sad. This computer progarm software also tell you what percent of each emotion do you have. The software was invented by the Prof. Thomas Huang he is of the Beckman Institude. This institude is for Advanced Sciense at the University of Illionois. He didn't make this computer program alone this was a collaboration with Prof. Nicu Sebe. He is from Amsterdam University. Thomas Huang and his colleague are experts developing ways for humans and computer to communicate.\n\nThis all begins when a computer constructs a 3D computer model of the face. As an example that this work they used a picture of Mona Lisa. In the picture she was 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. I think this is a really good program because this way you know how are people felling and you could undrestand a little bit more thier emotion. This program according to the Facial Feedback not only expresses your emotion but also may even help produce them. Overall I think this a really good program because even with a picture you camn know how people are feeling and it tells you the exact percent.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is not fair and should be abolished. Did you know that 60 percent of voters would prefer a more direct way to vote then what we have now. That is a lot of people who just want a more trustworthy and direct voting process. The Electoral College should be abolished because you can't trust the people you elect, and many states do not even see any electors at all.\n\nHaving your trust in people who you only see campaigns for on television is pretty hard to do. Honestly that is quite ridiculous for them to ask of us. In source 2, paragraph 11, Plumer tells us about how sometimes \"faithless\" electors disregard their party's candidate and vote for whomever they please. So is it really worth going through the trouble of electing poeple who might not even do as they said they would. Posner on the other hand explains that the trust in the elector is rarely betrayed (source 3, paragraph 16). But is it really worth risking four, maybe eight years of our lives to trust poeple we really do not know. Not to mention how it could affect our jobs and lives at home if this does happen.\n\nDid you know seventeen states didn't see any candidates at all in the 2000 campaign. In source 2, paragraoh 13, Plumer talks about how candidates do not visit states they know the can't win or states that they know they will definintly win. This leaves many states who do not get to see any candidates at all. This makes those states feel like their votes do not count and worry if they their new president willl have any regards for their interest. In source 3, paragraph 19, Posner says that this is a good thing that candidates do not visit states they know the can't win or states that they know they will definintly win because then that candidate can focus on the states that may be undecided or swing states. He believes this is a good thing because a candidate with appeal in only a few states is unlikely to be a good president. But you are leaving out a big proportion of the United States population who would love the expiernce of hearing a cadidate give a passionate speech about why he\\she should be elected.\n\nWe can come to the conclusion that the Electoral College should be abolished because you really can't trust the people you elect, and many states do not even see any electors at all, which then makes them feel worthless. Furthermore, we can say that the new way to elect the president should be more direct and fair.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine being in a driverless car and the car turing against you and crashing. That is the exact reason why I am aganist driverless cars. I feel like driverless cars are dangerous, unreliable, and not affordable. This article made me feel like it is even more unsafe than I orginally thought. I feel like it is unsafe for people to be in a car that does not have a driver, because of it's limited abilities and how little technology there is for it.\n\nI think that having a driverless car is dangerous because of its limited abilities. The article said that driverless cars can not navigate through work zones and around accidents or pull in and out the driveway. If the person in the driver seat were to fall asleep at the wheel or be completely distracted how would vibrating their chair and flashing light get their attention. The technology could malfunction and that is extremely dangerous. Imagine being in the passenger seat going 60 MPH on a highway and you have a gaming device or are watching TV in your car, and then out of no where you wrecked into something else. You had no warning or no advisery that you were in a dangerous situation because that technology failed you and just caused a crash. The only solution that could possibly work is for manufactures to have cameras in the car watching the driver that is a positive. It could also be a negative based off of how it is a invasion of privacy. The smart roads would help in these situations but would cost to much money so it's practially eliminated.\n\nHaving a driverless car is plain out unreliable. If everyone has a driverless car the roads would be filled with computers and technology controlling every move and turn on the roads. Just one thing could go wrong and there could be a serveral car accidet or someones life could just have been taken. What if the steering starts acting up and it can stay in the right lane and another car has a driver who isn't paying attention then they collide. All that happened just because a car steering started messing up. Something even worse could happen for example the brakes stop working. Imagine going the speed limit down the street but someone was speeding and just got in a accident right in front of you. The seats start vibrating so you wake up and see the situation in time and try to hit the brakes and it didn't work. That would've caused another accident based off of it's unreliability with its technology. The coordination system could mess up and you end up somewhere completely off target then what you were expecting to be. All the unpredictable factors that make driverless cars unpredictable just overweight the postives of a car driving you because you don't feel like driving.\n\nIt could be to expensive for everyone to get a self driving car. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have self driving cars by 2020. The question is will be able to afford the car or be able to pay the insurance. Most cars are expensive but afforadble over a course of years because you pay a monthly payment. Imagine buying this brand new self driving car and then crashing it even though it wasn't your fault and you already went broke trying to pay for it. How would you even be able to pay for it to get fix, the thing is you would not be able too. It might be to expensive for the average person.\n\nI think it just is not smart to have self driving cars on the roads. It is to hazardest for people to mainly rely off of it when anything could go wrong. They are trying to make it more safe by putting in cameras, or vibrating seats, and entertainment to keep you away. That's all positive stuff but that doesn't mean it is realistic. There is no promise that any of that could do what it is expected to do. I think we should just stick to people driving cars for a better and safer driving experience on the road. It's to dangerous, and unreliable, and potenially to expensive for the average person. Let's let humans do the driving and stop having technology run our lifes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Throughout Narciso Rodriguez s memoir potrays happy uplifting positive mood explains close family family means It also describes grateful toward parents proud Cuban cultureFirst Narciso believes family nt blood related person In paragraph says All cultures came together great solidarity friendship It close knit community This quote explains much valued friends neighbors family members three categories formed house called homeSecondly mood memoir centered around family friends Narciso also showed much gratitude toward parents In paragraph states They parents came selflessly many immigrants give children better life And later paragraph says I always grateful love sacrifice These two quotes explain much admires parents feeling admiration thanks played large part mood Narciso s memoirFinally Cuban pride another large contributor mood excerpt In paragraph describes adores Cuban music day parents created traditional Cuban home paragraph says Cuban feast always filled air scent music life love This quote describes much cares culture family fromIn conclusion Narciso Rodriguez s memoir full closely knit family gratitude pride culture And three things helped make house home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is irrefutable that humans are eventually replaced by the machines in the world. Some people believe that it is beneficial to the future generation while others argue that it is not completely possible. I personally agree with the latter view. In this essay, I intend to discuss my opinion towards artificially intelligent with the examples. \n\n\nOn the positive side, it's necessary that some jobs required robots because complex jobs cannot be doable by the mankind. What I mean by this, there are few jobs which require robots intervention to accomplish such as building gigantic towers, heavy lifting weight and redundancy process. Automation process machines have replaced human labour. The computer manages our banks and tickets at the airport are issued by the robots. In addition, robots have entered into the houses to help with household chores. These computer certainly replace a few of the human jobs. Moreover, robotic surgery is being done to overcome the limitation of human beings. Microscopic surgeries and eye operations can be better done with the help of robotic surgeons.\n\n\nOn the downside, if robots replace human being's work them, they will be a plethora of employers lose the job. It certainly increases the unemployment and causes more damage to individuals. What is more, people would rely on the computer and become lethargic which would lead to problems like obesity. Finally, robots may dominate our world just like what is shown in fiction movie today.\n\n\nTo put it in a nutshell, I pen down, saying that robots might benefit to fasten the work of certain stream but ultimately its create more harm to people. Considering the above points, it is not advisable to choose the robot technology and use where it is vital.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason author wrote conclusion paragraph show Saeng looking forward brighter future Saeng hoping see geese remind homeland see wants pass driving In story I feel though Saeng sentimental person I think reason author wrote conclusion paragraph", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The humidity of the region impacts it in many ways. The climate faces several major issues such as snowfall, heavy rain, fog, and smog. The climate has been dominating the nation in many ways. People believe there are two major ways in which the community can be affected. Firstly, the group belong to the thought of its impact on daily routine. Secondly, it also leaves an impression on the economy. \r\n\r\nFor the first cluster of people, regular activities such as washing and drying clothes may highly be suffered from the conditions with snow and heavy precipitation. Moreover, this could also create problems with the availability of food items. In addition, individuals can also feel difficulty in travelling from one place to another. In addition, traffic disturbance could also be noted as a result of the worst climatic situations. \r\n\r\nIn contrast, the second school of thought is associated with the effect of a poor atmosphere on the economy of the country. Furthermore, the seasonal outcome of Gross Domestic Product is mapped to the availability of the livestock, the products for import and exports, and the travel business may slow down for a limited time period. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, the major problem of climate change has seen a big impact on different avenues. Not only does it affects the living style but it could also be bad for the business and growth of the country. Both the groups are valid to some extent, for the first ,group the living standards are more valuable than the sustainability of the region. On the contrary, the second portion of individuals is focused towards the evolution of work and the currency of their country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood story happy The author thinking good times growing He talking good life house How parents came immigrants made life Another reason happy mood talks family coming He talks parents taught cook He thanked parents happy created family home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At beginning ride cyclist feeling good strong day well journey beginning The sun begins beat cyclist remains upbeat still feeling good barely noticing heat When arrives old rusty water pump feels disappointed tastes liquid resembles battery acid The terrain begins feel like hill makes struggle even worse The cyclist drinking water becoming tired He comesto rough road says sometimes life feel cruel lets reader know feeling negative affects presumed nice bike ride snake blocks path becomes dehydrated The cyclist feels refreshment relief sign fish camp thirst replenished takes satisfying gulp water restroom The water feature setting refreshes cyclist hot sun rough terrain unknown area features make cyclist feel lost tired", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\", it leaves two questions unanswered. Is it natural or not? Is there other life or just things happening to be that way? My vote goes to natural non-life forms.\n\nThere is no acurate way to say that there is life forms but if there were other life forms and the government isn't just hidding things, then we would have found out about it by now. When the picture was taken it could have just been cloudy and maybe the rock formation has been there for awhile. \"'As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger than the pixel size.'\"\n\nThis face or figure that we say we see isn't really that at all. For instance a car doesn't have a face but yet you could easily imagine it having one. If we see two slits and a larger one below it, to us, this resembles a face. This figure juts from it's frame because over time things change. The mars dust or sand could just as easily have been blown by wind and formed this \"creation\".\n\nIn this article,\"'It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.'\" The plain in Idaho could be natural and so why can't this \"face\" be natural. There is nothing wrong with nature's beauty giving us questions and allowing us to make accusations.\n\nSo therefore, there is no other life forms. There is no \"face\" on mars. This is all just a mixup and it shows up one way our minds work. One way we can see nature's beauty. Instead of trying to argue, why not trust science?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a great investment and idea for our country to encourage. Not only do the cut down on fuel usage, but also reduce the number of accidents. The futuristic automobiles could revolutionize the country. Drivereless cars are a fantastic idea, and could create several benifits for the country.\n\nDriverless cars have the potentiol to drastically reduce fuel usage. In the opening paragraph of the article, the author states, \"the cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis.\" Less fuel used for automobiles would empower the United States to spend less money on oil and natural gas imports. Additionally, less fuel polution released by cars would help make the enviroment a safer place for current and future generations.\n\nIn the article, the author talks about the use of GPS and sensors used in the cars. Relying on computers to transport us is a much safer alternative compared to the current option. The driverless cars, that are largely computer powered, leave very little room for human error, which would drastically reduce the number of automobile accidents.\n\nOppontens of driverless cars may argue that these cars are not safe in the event of unforseen circumstances, such as accidents or road problems. However, driverless cars, as stated in the article, \"are designed to to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skill.\" Thus, in an emergancy situation, the driver can take over the car can advance past the situation and continue to move along without any issue.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars could be the best thing to happen to automobiles since automobiles were invented. They could reduce the amount of pollution, and save the United States millions on oil imports. Furthermore, self driving cars can make the roads a safer place to be. Although it may seem scary to some, and there may be a few bumps along the road, driverless cars could make the world a better place to be.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often recommended by world health organization individuals should take atleast five type of fruit and vegitables daily.To illustrate this, the bar chart indicates the males and females percentagewise in age group for the year of 22006 in United Kingdom\nOverall, It was observed that the 55-64 age group took most significant rate of fruit and vegetables. Neverthelsee, the fimale dominate the process.\nIt is the fact that, Females were the most fruit and vegitable takers.The rate of taking these kind of food incresed as age increases toup to 55-56 age group where the rate started to fall uniformily.\nIn the other hand, the rate of taking fruit and vegetables for males taken the same trend as females,though the changes from one group of age to the proceeding one was not significant.However a\nat the age of 75, it was observed that ,both Male and Females took the same rate of fruit and vegitalbes that was about 25%", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the second planet from our sun, it is also called the Evening Star. The author uses many pieces of ecidence that states that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The first piece of evidence is that well us as humans have this thing in our DNA that wants to survive longer. We want to explore whats mysterious, we want more, we want it all. Venus is a way of \"if we can find a way to make it survivable for humans, extinction for our species will be nearly zero.\" This paragraph is more of my piece of evidence but the author was inching towards it at the last paragraph of the passage.\n\nThe passage stated that long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life. Which sounds a lot like Earth. So if long ago, this place was sustainable, then that just gives us motivation that we might be able to actually do this. The second piece of evidence that the author uses to state Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents is NASA might be working on a project that involves a blimp-like vehicle hovering around 30 above Venus. This project if suceesful can possibly be the first big step for actually landing on Venus even with its harsh conditions.\n\nThe last piece of evidence is that solar energy or power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. These may not be the easiest conditions but it is survivable for humans. We still cannot take samples of rocks, gas or anything on the surface of Venus. This is just another challenge that we will overcome sooner or later. When we solve this problem, then the real fun begins.\n\nIn conclusion the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by using good information, and having multiple pieces of evidence to back up his or her statement. In paragraph 8 the author states \" Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" Human curiosity to travel, to explore to get more will always be in our DNA.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinon, I think driverless cars are not worth the wait. I do not think it is necessary to have a driverless car when there is an operater such as a human driver that can drive. Some reasons why I don't think Driverless cars are needed is because they are not reliable, not fully automatic, and ruins the whole purpose of driving a car. Some might argue they are more efficient, smarter than an average car, and help people with disablitlies but here are reasons why I don't support the all so driverless cars.\n\nFirst of all, driverless cars are mostly manufactured out of computers and technology imbeded in them. Everyone knows computers arn't always reliable and there are safety hazards that comes with it. For example, a computer can be hacked by hackers all around the world making it harder for the user of the computer to use it or be in control. Knowing on paragraph 10, Tesla is about to release a car that is 90 percent driverless which probably tells us the car is most likely going to be an electric car like all driverless cars. Being an electric car, I feel hackers will try and hijack the car system which may lead to the danger of the driver.\n\nAnother example of why driverless cars are not on my bucket list is because it is not fully automatic. If a driver is mostly dependent on their car to drive for them, it is highly likely they will collide in an accident. On paragraph 2, Google even stated that their cars aren't fully driverless and that they will still need to alert the driver. And if one day driverless cars do become fully driverless, imagine people of all ages using the car without legal permission and how much danger it is going to cause.\n\nLast but not least, driverless cars ruins the whole point of driving a car. Humans have been driving cars for the last century or so and why stop? As stated in my last paragraph, if driverless cars were fully automatic imagine the number of people without permits or liscenes taking advantage of them. It would be chaos. As stated in paragraph 8, \" Why would anyone want a driverless car the still needs a driver?\" Without being bias, it does make sense. If a company is manufacturing driverless cars then the driverless cars should be fully driverless. With human assists needed in the so-called driverless cars, it is worthless. Why not buy a regular car instead of spending so much more on a useless car that will only drive itself a little bit?\n\nIn conclusion, my opinions on driverless cars remains. Until the day driverless cars are fully driverless, fully protected from viruses, and new laws on who can drive the cars my opinions will remain the same. As of right now driverless cars are still unreliable, not fully automatic and ruins the whole purpose of driving a car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author thinks that exploring Venus is a worthy idea because it is a lot like our planet Earth. There are however some dangers to exploring Venus.\n\nAstonomers were fascinated with Venus because its alot like earth. The text states \"...it may once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" This shows why the author thinks its a worthy idea to explore more of Venus. The text also states \" Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes famililar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" This show another reason why exploring Venus is worthy and is a lot like Earth.\n\nHere are some examples of why exploring Venus is too dangerous for humans and even our technology. The text states \"On the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\" Humans cannot stand the heat on Venus and there are many more concernes of exploring Venus. The text also states \"...the atmospheric persure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our planet.\" The evidence shown is the dangers of exporing Venus.\n\nThe author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger Venus has to explore it. I've shown text evidence of why Venus is very difficult to explore and why it is very dangerous aswell. The author is striving to meet the callenge Venus has presented to explore it. The author thinks it is worthy to make techonology to with stand the danger of Venus. The author wants to know much more about Venus and see if it is humanly possible to do more with it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The main mood entire excerpt Home The Blueprints Our Lives one thanks Through excerpt explains parents struggled US children In house said paragraph My young parents created traditional cuban home loved everything home Also family Not blood relatives family His family made entire community time discribed paragraph When overt racism norm segregation prevailed thankful parents In paragraph discribes They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life They struggled bothe personally financially My parents accept might able find kind jobs deserved His parents gave everything current life Narciso forever greatful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars\n\nYou may think that driverless cars are good but I think that driverless cars are senseless I wouldnt want that I would want to drive my car myself. I waited a long time to get my driving license and drive my own car but no they had to come up with the diverless car and make all the other cars seem useless. Im going to figure out what makes this car so good, and see if would come in handy because its alot of people are craveing this car.\n\nThis car seem so crazy because what if my car startes to act all crazy and catch on fire what am i going to do im waisted my money and time on that car and it would be hard to buy a new one . I think we should all this stick with the cars we are use to. Because when you get this car you wont know what to do, and most people dont read manual to cars they just say they figure it out on their own. Once they try that they end up messing something up and having to spend more money on getting it fixed.\n\nThe car may come in handy because they have senseors even though sensors are nothing new they help stop the car like when the person driving the car hits the brake the brake sensors each wheel to ruduce speed so the human can gain controll over his or her car again. It can help older people to like when they arent suppose to be driving. This car is like having a driving assistant. They dont wont need to drive the car would drive by its self that would be good for some old people that like to get out a lot.\n\nMost drivers focus on keeping the riders saft but it this car is a smart car so if they had a accident the car can prevent it from happening. In some staes this car is not saft for people to drive so the car comapany must prove that the car is saft.\n\nif some one gets injured in that car should it be the manufacturer fault or should it be the drivers fault i think that it should be the manufacturer fault because they built they car and i should feel saft I it.\n\nOverall i dont that this car is smart to build because i wouldnt feel saft in it.\n\nI think they should come up with another idea for a car because if a lot of people get hurt it that car they might end up bankrupt and sewd so bad that they would have to close down there shop and just start their retirement. This car seem very senseless and I wouldnt buy it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With development we encountered in industrial sector which have accompained with cities enlargement in some countries , the transportation became a serious issue we are facing lately . The following essay will illuminate the problems of people relying on private cars and possible solutios to deal with that .\nNowadays , people have to drive hours to arrive their works , schools and shops they determined . However , in order to arrive quickly and comfortably ,people tend to drive their own cars ,even though if they have to drive long distances . As a result of that , many issues are considered like, traffic congestion and pollution of environment. Furhtermore, buying cars are expensive and cost alot of saving money ,which can add more financial burden over mid class families. Moreover , having more cars on the road ,increase the risk for accidents which could be fatal in many conditions.\nHowever , having such problems had pushed governments to put plans to resolve them .For instance ,in some countires in Europe ,alot of money spent by governments to improve public tranport , also these countries encourage their people to use public transport by having low price tickets .In fact , today many people in France and Spain have decided to use subways , trains and buses as ulternative way to tranport . Likewise , in Canada , USA and Australia , as a result of having big lands ,big hospitals have offered to transfer some patients with critical medical conditions by heliocopters .\nIn summary . Although , disadvantages of driving long distances beside economic aspect of buying expensive cars , some people would rather to drive their personal cars in pursue their destinations. Nevertheless , if imporvement took place in public transport in term of quality in service and pricing of tickets ,then many individuals will get more benefits from public transport . Eventually people will be less dependant on cars and replace expensive vehicle with more economic way to travel .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The new FACS technology is groundbreaking and something that could be very useful in the future. Although this may be the case it will not be valuable to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom because the students have a mind of their own and it would cause distractions.\n\nThe first reason why FACS would not be valuable in a classroom is because the students have a mind of their own. Meaning that if they are confused, as they say in paragraph six, they can just raise their hand and tell the teacher that they are confused. Another way of solving the problem of a confused student is by the teacher going around the classroom to see which students are confused and which are not. There isn't any point in using technology to replace a teacher when it is not needed.\n\nThe other reason FACS would not be valuable in a classroom because it would cause many distractions. Although in paragraph six it says that the teacher could modify the lesson if FACS scanned a student's face and found that they are bored, the student would just go from bored to distracted. Not only would that student be distracted, but the whole class would and that would ruin the teacher's teaching altogether. The lesson would go from whatever the teacher was teaching to learning about emotions. To sum it up, FACS would cause a distraction in the classroom.\n\nAlthough FACS is grounbreaking technology it would not be valuable in a classroom. It will not be valuble because the students have minds of their own and it would cause distarctions in the class.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, people in some countries show increasing interest in digging up about the history of the house or building they live in. I believe that seeking for their origin and the historical values of buildings are two main reasons and there are plenty of ways can help people do their researches.\r\n\r\nFirstly, part of people, who are engrossed in finding out the history of their home,could want to know what used to happen in the buildings just out of pure curiosity. However, most individuals, who pay heed to the history of their homes, are living in houses which passed down by generations. Therefore, they are eager to find out the family history of worshipping one of a family member who passed away or why their ancestors chose this place to settle down. Moreover, people lived in old pre-history house tend to seek for whether there are any precious but forgotten items in their home by searching for the history ,maybe for better preservation.\r\n\r\nThere are loads of methods to help people find out the history of their home. First of all, the most effective way is by talking to the seniors in the family. Since they are living treasures who are able to tell their offspring plenty of history of the family. Secondly, if the old do not have a clear memory about the past, it is quite likely that people hold several written records like diaries and account book can be useful. Moreover, people can look up documents and newspapers in the local library to seek out history. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are a couple of reasons why people have growing interests in the search for the history of their homes. And some effective methods are available for those kinds.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So the author is trying to say that NASA is planning to go to Venus and in the story its saids that some people agree that NASA should go to Venus and some dont agree that NASA shouldnt go to Venus because it is too dangerous besides it is the hottest planet in the solar system even though its the second planet close to Earth. But NASA is studying Venus and they say its possible to live in that planet besides Mars but Astronomers are so fascinated with Venus because they say that it may once have been the most Earth-like in our solar system.The surface of the planet is literally over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the planet has a thick atmosphere of a 97 percent carbon dioxide covering Venus but NASA said that the planet can be our next home but they our temperature of venus would be the sea level temperature at Earth and it could be a not easy condition but survivable for humans. Another terms during World War ll there was computers on that time now that was shocking in my opinion I never knew there was computers in the time of 1940. Also modern computer are enormously powerful,flexible,and quick. For some reason that I could imagine that cell phones and tablets can be exposed to acids and heat capable of melting tin. NASA thinks that they know everything and I also believe that their next door neighbors think that Mars and Venus is comparble to Earth but the surface of Venus is more comparable to Earth more than Mars. So I have a feeling that Venus will be our next planet and today NASA is still studying Venus and Earth has twin planets which is Venus and Mars because their the closest planets to the Earth and each of them has a different time speeds and those differences in speed mean that sometime we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus. But how come Venus? that is my question because Venus is the second planet closest to the Sun in our Solar System and Venus is smaller than Mars and how are going to live on a planet that really over 800 degrees Fahrenheit that is no possible way that we humans cant survive that much of heat unless they plan on something to do a somesort of heat resistance but that is going to be a challenge that is going to take for years to figure out the heat resist on the planet.Not even the spacecrafts couldnt survived the landing for more than a touched down on Venus in more than three decades.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nThe robust political system of the American government is greatly hindered by the Electoral College. The Electoral College isn't completely representative of what citizens really want. History will prove such logic with just a simple recollection of past events. \"Back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new elector who would oppose John F. Kennedy. (So that a popular vote for Kennedy would not have actually gone to Kennedy.) In the same vein, \"faithless\" electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and case a deciding vote for whomever they please.\"\n\n(Paragraph 11)\n\nAmericans are not getting the representation we deserve. In fact, in a democracy, we should be representing our own beliefs, ourselves. The Electoral College must be totally abolished and the popular vote should become the new standard for political voting.\n\nTime and time again, we have been shown that the Electoral College is nothing but a gimmick and \"a compromise between election of President by a vote in congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\"\n\n(Paragraph 1)\n\nby the founding fathers. Maybe that had worked in the past, when the population was statistically low compared to today, and citizens were less informed because of the lack of media avaliable, like the internet and television. But, it is not working today. The 2000 election serves as an example of a faulty system. \"According to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore--thanks to the quirks of the electoral college--won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\"\n\n(Paragraph 9)\n\nTherefore, this is an obvious majority of citizens who agree with me. The Electoral College is almost universally despised, and not considered the most effective way to elect a President.\n\n\"At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the swing states. During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad.\"\n\n(Paragraph 13)\n\nThis is ridiculous and not at all fair to voters. In this sense, it is absolutely true that every vote doesn't count. Unless you're in a swing state, your vote may mean very little in the grand scheme of things. Every legal American deserves the right to a balanced and fair election with a true, meaningful vote.\n\nClaims by supporters of the Electoral College are not effective. In fact, one writer finds Swing States to be a good thing! Yes, \"Voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign--to really listen to the competing candidates--knowing they are going to decide the election. They are likely to be the most thoughtful voters, on average...and the most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election.\"\n\n(Paragraph 20)\n\nSeriously, that is absurd. Every voter should have the right to know they are going to decide the election. This writer is implying that the small state votes are useless, and that the voters in them don't even pay attention to campaigns or research before they vote! As a former resident of a politically smaller-impact state, I know very well that citizens there research thoroughly before they do any voting. Putting thought into a vote isn't just a thing people do in large states.\n\nMaybe it will be that way in the future, because due to the Electoral College, votes there don't even matter anymore. Citizens are losing faith in their expressions of freedom and ability to vote and uphold justice. The Electoral College needs to go, because it makes for an unfair political system that only benefits politicians running, not the average joe.\"It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality.\"\n\n(Paragraph 14)\n\nRegards,\n\nA concerned citizen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because,One,it can help the teachers keep track of what the emotions of their students are,Two,it could benefit not only a classroom,but a whole school to know what each student is feeling and what their reaction might be and,Three to see how students express how they feel about a certain thing in school without showing emotion on the outside of their faces,in other words to see what kind of bad emotions they hold on the inside, and prevent something bad from happening.\n\nFirst this technology can be very useful for teachers to help their students out,by being able to see how their students are feeling. Sometimes students in schools don't get to much attention from teachers,but with the help of this technology,all teachers have to do maybe in the morning,when students arive to a classroom,check a computer that will help them know what their students are feeling. According to this article it states,\"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" which means not only does the teacher have to look at a computer everyday,but if the teacher tells the students to each get on a computer,The teacher doesn't do anything because the computer will let them know.\n\nNext,the benefit could be for schools with this new technology beacause it can help them keep track of students who maybe are not having a god day,or who are very excited and happy. Another benefit to the school is that they can put this technology in each of their classrooms and it works as if it was another proffessor in the class. In this article it also states,\"then it could modify the lesson,like an effective human instructure\",which clarifies that this could be a help for teachers and that way schools wouldn't have to worry much about their students having issues with their emotions or tough days they have.\n\nFinally, this technology can also help teachers and staff, not only see the emotions students have on the outside,but on the inside. Students will never tell a teacher when they are feeling very mad or angry or what actions they want to take,therefore if a teacher notices those expressions on a students face, they will know how to deal with their situation. In the text it also states,\"most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\",which means this technology can read what emotion a student might be feeling inside.\n\nThis new technology can be very useful in schools and in classrooms, so I would say that since it can read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom,its very valuable. These were some of the reasons why this new technology can be very valuable and very helpfull as well so this technology has a big impact for a classroom with students in it who have emotional expressions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Not driving cars sounds like a crazy idea; How will soccer moms get their kids to soccer practice; How will commuting executives get to their offices? Although driving a car is an easier way of getting around, the amount of pollution a car throws out into the atmosphere just isn't worth it. When people stop driving cars, they start to drastically reduce the amount of greenhouse gas emissions that's being sent out through a car's tailpipes, reduces traffic congestion, and is satisfying a lot of people world wide.\n\nEurope alone is responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions, following the United States' 50 percent of greenhouse gas emissions, in some car-intensive areas. Paris, the capital of France that champions the use of diesel fuels typically has more smog than other European capitals, having 147 micrograms of particulate matter per cubic meter compared to 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London. Although the bans on cars may receive complaints for delivery companies, there are exceptions such as; Plug-in cars, hybrids, and cars carrying three or more people.\n\nAs a result of Paris's partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city, almost 4,000 drivers were fined, and some even had their cars impounded. This partial ban led 60% decrease in traffic congestion. In Bogota, Colombia, millions of Colombians hiked,biked,skated, or took buses to work during a car-free day, leaving the streets of the capital city devoid of traffic jams. Rush-hour restrictions in Bogota have also dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have sprung up.\n\nThe reactions towards the idea of limiting car usage has been taken with great satisfaction and support. In the city of Bogota,Colombia, a city of 7 million people, millions of colombians participated in a car-free day by either skating,biking, or even hiking to work. Althought it rained, Mayor Antanas Mockus of Bogota explains, \"The rain hasn't stopped people from participating\". Mayor Antanas's quote just shows what people are willing to do, rather than taking the easier, and lazier way of simply taking their cars to work; In a sense, it shows dedication to the event. Even a high-society man like Carlos Arturo Plaza, a business man from Bogota describes this event as a, \"Good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\". This idea; the idea of limiting the usage of cars can be excersized by any class of society, be it poor, middle class, upper class, even rich, can participate, anyone can participate.\n\nIn the end, the advantages of limiting car usage includes, reducing the amount of greenhouse gases, reducing traffic congestion, and satisfaction.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Author Nick D'Alto, writes an article called, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\". The article is about facial recognition and how emotions are portrayed in pictures or paintings. A software called, \"Facial Action Coding\". Over the course of numerous decades, the technology has been advanced in so many ways. Some innovations are good for specific purposes. The real question is, can a software really know what emotions are being expressed?\n\nAs an experiment, the system \"Facial Action Coding\", uses Mona Lisa painted by the great Leonardo da Vinci, to show what kind of emotions she portrays. There were few emotions with their percentages, \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry\"(D'Alto 1). This smart and advance innovation is by Professor Thomas Huang, from the Advanced Science at the University of Illinois. Not only people have to thank Huang for it, they also have to thank Professor Nicu Sebe from the University of Amsterdam. Both professors have teamed up to design an innovation that can know what emotions are being expressed in paintings or pictures! Cool right?\n\nNick D'Alto, uses great reasoning to point out that \"facial Action Coding\" is a valuable innovation. The argument is the new software innovation useful? Some many think so, but not everyone agrees with everything. When people are on vacation, they want to have a great time and taking pictures is one pf the ways to remember their life time experience. Most of the time, those people are happy, so why would anyone want to use a software update that can tell what emotions are being portrayed in pictures and such? Using a system to tell what emotions are expressed, while being on vacation, is clearly pointless. Mostly everyone on vacation is having the greatest time of their lives!\n\n\"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored'\", says Dr. Huang. Huang predicts what the new software will do, but is it liable? With lots of research, maybe one day it will be able to know if kids are confuzzled. What would be the price of this new software system? Would schools actually find it useful? Some students may be confused at first, but that doesn't mean they can't bounce back and understand the material later on. Therefore, the \"Facial Action Coding\" is not valueable. It might be cool to use and all but is it really necessary? Surely, schools will be funding and buying more useful equitment such as new TV's for the library, or new books, computers, but a new software? No. As a prediction, this software will probably run about $25,000 or maybe even more. The cost of this new system is surely not worth it. Within certain reasons, it is noted on why the \"Facial Action Coding\" is not valuable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not think that this technology found and used today to figure out a person's emotions is valuable in the everyday classroom. It is not valuable becuase in today's society we are always on our phones, which yes what we are doing probably connects us to the rest of the world, but it makes us numb to other things around us and we start losing interest in the things that are happening in the moment. We get so in depth with whatever is happening on our phone that we may lose an hour or even more without even realizing.\n\nIn the article the author says \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" this is a big problem to me because it is just another way that technology can take over our lives. We need human interaction. If there is something wrong with another person, we as human beings, should be able to detect that and try to help them out. I think that this technology is just another way to make life easier, which is not a bad thing in most cases, but at some point we have to stop. We have to have some challenges in our everyday lives or we will not learn to appreciate what we have or appreciate the people that surround us.\n\nI think that it is wonderful that technology has come this far and I think that this invention is a breakthrough. I mean imagine if we can do this with humans, we could possibly do it with animals in the future to find out what they are thinking or what they need. Now that invention would be so helpful I can not even imagine! I do believe that there is a place for this invention in our lives at some point, but I do not think that the \"Facial Action Coding System\" has a place in our school system.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "NASA recently discovered an unusal landmark, on Mars. According to the text NASA discovered the landmark in 1976, and they weren't sure why the landmark was shaped how it was, a face. This shows that many people had many questions and disbelief of what NASA had been telling the public. This proves that many people where arguing that NASA was not being truthful about what they have discovered. Therefore, people where getting angry with NASA.\n\nNASA was telling the truth, it was just an landmark. Many citizens thought it was a sign of intellignece life, and didn't believe what NASA was telling them. NASA was excited about this discovery, and wanted everyone to know. They didn't hide anything, there still was not any prove of intelligence life on Mars. NASA was saying, that if they found intelligence life, they would tell the whole world. They wouldn't try to hide such a mind blowing discovery.\n\nEven though NASA was telling the truth about everything they have discovered, and told the public that if they found life on Mars, they would tell the whole world, that isn't something they would hide. The public still wasn't convinced. NASA would love to discover life on Mars. They sent more robots over to Mars to get better images, with better pixels, so they could get closer and see if there were huts and any other landmarks. NASA said they would never hide something so big, and important from the public or the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Mooring Mast describes obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock The Empire State Building competing Chrysler Building tallest building Al Smith governor time nt want beat Being governor New York Smith added floors building developing dirigible dockAs time went building ran problems Tying thousandfoot dirigable building would add stress frame The steal frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accomadate new situation The frame around building nt durable enough hold blimp The building would collapse taking buildings sixtythousand dollars went refining frame end building still failedAfter frame stable enough problems ocured The greatest reason one safety Dirigibles used hydrogen meaning flammable Not reason safety people went aganist Building law The practical reason dirigibles could Empire State Building existing law airships flying low urban areas Al Smith realized even law forbidded plans rose action stoped Empire State Building remained", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time hard wait I patient end One time family I going world The morning I woke I excited I really wanted get air port go world packed car drove airport In car brother I talking excited Once got airport got supper excited When got area wait plane workers told every one waiting plane us plane gon na around one hour late My whole family I really wanted get world soon could would wait walked around air port got something eat Then wait twenty minutes My family I set talked knew getting plane Being patient really help soutition", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper editor computer home use facebook type social networking site Well like majority respectable caring country probably answered yes questions likely also believe computer great tool teach handeye coordination well awesome way talk people online Not notice great potential computer showing us distant faraway lands cultures What would able without hand eye cooridination Nothing could Without hand eye cooridination computers video games help develop would nt even able go outside enjoy peaceful game tennis baseball even basketball without hand eye coordination clumbsy depth perception If nt handeye cordination would nt even able pick things hands would nt go eyes looking Even though computer nt way learn hand eye coordination still important stragedy takes effort perform If social butterfly love converse people simply must computer Computers cell phones pda s s form computer When think country would without spectacular devices These computers helped industrialize grow great superpower country Can imagine drive people s houses talk These machines get messages vices people way across world seconds They great inovation technolegy Imagine paper college assignment work due tommorrow messy handwriting There way get done time legible worse ll fired expelled s done But savior arrived The computer improves peoples hand writing speed research click buttons With computers need long tedious hours handwriting seaching books library What would happen us wonderful invention The time come decide like time saving teaching invention socialize would rather go back stone age", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the past few years, smarter cars have come about and have gained popularity as word has spread. Many feel that smarter cars bring a new perspective to the automobile industry; however, others feel that they are a hazard and could injure drivers on the road. I believe that the development of smarter cars should be stopped and that focus should be turned on improving regular, fully drivible cars.\n\nThe development of driverless cars should be stopped because if not, they would cause new traffic laws to be created. As a reult, all drivers to change their ways on the roads. Many states do not allow computer-driven cars to be drove being that that are looking out for the safety of their residents. Some people would have to abide to the rules if they chose to drive a smarter car; however, those who drive regular car may believe that learning new regulations is a waste of time and could further injury themselves or others. Lastly, new laws for driverless cars would take many years inorder for everyone to adapt do, being that there are many people around the world.\n\nDriverless cars are not safe being that they are ran on computers that can often have technical difficulties or failure. An important topic discussed by producers is how is a passenger's safety ensured? Some feel that they can trust the technology because of the importance it plays in our life everyday; a driveless car would just be another thing added. In opposition to this, some feel that their use of technology has allowed them to feel that computers/ technolgy can result in failure. If driverless cars were allowed on the road addition accidents could be caused if the technolgy or computers were to fail while being driven.\n\nLastly, the development of driverless cars should be haulted because issues can arise between drivers and consumers. As stated in the article \"Driverless Care Are Coming\", the idea of fault has come about. This is due to the fact that if an accident were to occur, then who is to blame, the driver or the car or the manufacturer. Drivers would feel that it is the manufacturers fault because they are ones creating the cars and aquipping them with technology. At the same time, manufaturues would believe it is a drivers fault because they put themselves behind the wheel and were aware of the cars capabilities.\n\nIn conclusion, I am against the development of driverless cars. Driverless cars would create new traffic laws that would take time inorder for everyone to abide and adapt to. Driverless cars are run on the power of computers which can fail or have difficulties. Lastly, driverless cars lead to the topic of fault when an accident occurs. Driverless cars can be beneficial, but they need to be fully scrutinized before they are place on the roads full of drivers and passengers, ensuring the safety of all.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "it is argued that there must be another method such as written tests, group discussions and so on rather than taking interviews. I disagree to a large extent.\n\nThere is one reason why I believe that other methods should be there because by taking other exams such as written tests and group discussions we get to know the ability of candidates to handle the capacity of work and situations. When a candidate appears for group discussion he/she evolved in all sorts of situations because the company gives many kinds of situations in which they have to give their opinion, but it is a written test they got problem-solving questions which give a few stressful to their mind but it is not the appropriate method because candidate talk help from other to solve these tests. \n\nHowever, I also believe that by taking an interview the HR of the company get to know more about the candidate by interacting with him/ her. In , an interview there is face-to-face interaction with the employees from which personality traits can be judged. Also by asking some case study-type questions, employees can judge traits like the ability to handle pressure, confidence and the ability to think outside of the box.\n\nTo conclude, I agree that other methods have their own pros and cons, I strongly believe that by taking interviews we get to know more about the employee.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Travel congestion is a serious issue for urban metropolises around the World. This essay will explain how overconsumption of roads and poor conditions of public transportation can cause the problem and find possible ideas to tackle them.\r\n\r\nNowadays wild range number of people are having their own private car due to it has become more affordable for average consumers and they are no longer a luxury item. \r\n\r\nThe first step is to understand why traffic has increased in towns and cities. Broadly speaking, there are three main reasons for this. One is that cars have become more affordable for the average consumers and they are no longer a luxury item, but something that most families expect to own. A second reason is that public transport has become increasingly unreliable in recent years, not least because many bus and train services have been reduced because of the difficulty in funding them. The third reason is that society has, in general, become more mobile and this means more people are prepared to commute to work by car than they were before.\r\n\r\nThe biggest causes of traffic jam lack of proper road and bridges in cities. If there is an additional way for buses and large trucks in cities, traffic jams reduce in cities.\r\n\r\nThere is almost certainly no one solution to this problem given the complexity of its causes. However, one option has to be to improve the reliability of public transport to encourage people to take the bus or the train rather than get in the car. It would also be possible to discourage people from driving to work by introducing special tariffs for using the roads, especially during peak periods.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are a variety of different factors that have led to rising levels of traffic in urban areas. While it may not be possible to find a complete solution but actions should probably involve encouraging more use of public transports.Furtherm", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having a comuter recongize your emotion is pretty high-tech. As far as it telling if your lying could be used in a variety of ways. I would generally like that. We could use them for video games, counseling/school and for painting/drawing. We have a lot to explore about us and the technology, its unlimitless.\n\nFirst off Video Games, a whole large portion of people play games. The fact that if you use this new coding could help put more emotion, or show more emotion in a character. We see ourselves and other peoples emotion everyday, so you could actually tell what the character is feeling. In chapter 6 of the passage the author said, \" Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotion communication.\" Then he said that computers need to understand it to. Which i believe they do, like i said before it could help in the video games industry.\n\nSecond Counceling/school, say you have gone throughout your day hiding your emotion or that you get bored in class. Sure yes, you dont suspect people to see cause your force a smile. But this high tech can notice if you force or not. Its not like you studied the human body for years on years. In chapter 7 of the passage it explains to do something to force a smile, you do so. You use those muscles to make a smile. Say your in class and you are super bored because the teacher is tecahing tiredly, the computer can pick it up.\n\nLast to not least, Painting/and drawing, a lot of people di it everyday. Yea so you cant draw a cat but i bet if the cat was big you would see way more emotion. In paragraph 5 how leonardo sudied the humsn body judt so he could paint it out. He watched the vrins regurly.\n\nHi my names is STUDENT_NAME.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear many debated whether computers good bad I believe computers nt good many people think Ever since computers invented people nt exercising Also less kids reading Lastly computers taking away family time When last time saw kid outside something active running playing sport If nt s probably inside eyes glued computer screen Exercise big part staying healthy fit More kids becoming weight everyday Computer another reason I friend used spend time computer She became lazy She never wanted exercise anything active Little little started gaining weight This happening around world need What s reading level students grade grade reading level Part reason rather use free time computer instead picking book Schools program called This program designed help students improve reading levels I believe students would turn computers long enough would nt need program My mom makes sure I least mins everyday Every student I remember saying family time golden time days one spends time family Once computers played part It s kids droped family time computer time It s adults I think last time I spent time family weeks ago grandparents came visit After everyone went right back staring computer screens In conclusion computers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The positive and negative polarity as a messages in binary code.\n\nWithout the option of smarter roads,manufacturers turned to smarter cars.\n\nThier cars have driven more then half of a million miles without a crash,\n\nsuch as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\n\nThe people block the roads to make a smoother roads\n\nfor people can drive,\n\nsafley to thier house and traveling and moving so the roads wont be slippery.\n\nThe track was embedded with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to a receiver on the front end of the car.Within 10 years,those sensors had became more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on thier own. The goverment changing the laws by little by little to the point for students or parpents dont have no assecents", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What I think keep everything library Some people like stay read newspaper listen music library If think s offensive nt read pick another book Everybody ideas library want voices heard let speak What I think stuff library days good kids learn faster lot look forward get older My experiences library I see lot people library lot instead reading books time You read magazines newspapers pass time one home hang get boring reading books try something different little go back reading book start wanted take break Then people voice say something nt want library Some observations I seen really good I ve seen protesters front libraries I seen close But people sometime take far sometimes burn ground I seen people cry makes really upset I want something help I really ca nt nothing The valueable thing kids young children read books What someone burn home kids feel close safe place They biggest voice everybody put together That something make feel better would really good That done anything deserve kind mess put It difficult somewhere go read nowhere go If nt want quiet let voice heard aroud world freedom let come You three diffenent voices people nt agree children So one going listen When choice make hope make right one", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article it talks a lot about emotional expressions and how the new software can tell if you mad or upset or happy or not. Technology can not read the emotional expessions of students in a classroom is valuable.\n\nIn the Making Mona Lisa Smile story they talk a lot about how the new software technology called the Facial Action Coding System. Tthey talk about how when somebody is upset or bored the new software technology would realize that you would be upset. In the Making Mona Lisa Smile story they also talked about how your facail expression. Your facial expressions would tell a lot more then what you would say like if your were to be mad or anything and you say that your not your face would say different. In the text it states that \"then it could modify the lesson , like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nIn the Making Mona Lisa Smile", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "State senator.....Keeping the Electoral College would greatly benifit our country. The electoral process is a very important process that is needed. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. With majority of 270 votes are needed so there is a good chance of getting a fair shot to win. Each candidate running for president in a state has to have there own group of electors which eguals out the odds. The electors are chosen by the candidates political party. In most states they have a winner takes all system but Maine and Nebraska each have a variation of proportion.\n\nThe certificate of ascertainment also declares the winning presidental candidate in the state and shows which electors will be representing your state at the metting of the electors which helps us to know who had won the presidental election. Voting for a state election of who will turn elected for president. When voting you would have to vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors to pledge for Kerry.\n\nVoting for a president is like voting for a state elector. Even though a dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible it has only happened in 2000 but its less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. The reason is that the winning candidate shares the Electoral College invariably exceeds his shares of the popular vote. The Electoral college requires an apresidental candidate to have transregional appeal.\n\nThe residents of the other religions are likely to feel disenfranchised and that their votes does not count and that the new president will have know regard for their interests. That he is not really there president. The winner of all methods of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates like as seen in the election of 2012. They are likely to be the most thoughtful voters on average and that they will have received the most information and attention from the candidate as the most thoughful voter should be the one to decide the election.\n\nThe Electoral College restores some weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the senate decreed in the constituion. Having the electoral College avoids the problem of electiong in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. It can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potental voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state, Democrats in Texas for example or Republicans in California.\n\nEach party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the partys nominee and is rarely betrayed, however it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote than Bush yet fewer electoral votes. As some would say the Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are most likely assertions without much basis in reality.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many authors write about how we should do certain things even if they don't apppeal to us or seem possible. Authors are supposed to support their claims. The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy puruit despite the dangers well.\n\nFirst, the author talks about Venus is almost like Earth's twin. In paragraph 2, he states how Venus is similar to Earth in many ways. One way is how they have similar sizes and desities. He also says Venus is sometimes the closest planet to Earth.\n\nSecond, the author states the challenges and solutions to them. In paragraph 3, he states that, \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 900 degrees Fahrenheit...\" His solution is to fly above the surface where its still pretty hot, but nothing compared to the surface. He also states how the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than Earth's. His solution for that is also flying above it because high enough would be similar to Earths\n\nThird, the author talks about how NASA is working on ways to vist Venus. In paragraph 7, the author states that NASA is testing things in atmospheres similar to Venus's. So far, they've stayed in a few weeks before being destroyed. He talks about how mechanical computers could survive it. Modern computers are destroyed easily with the extreme conditions of Venus, but mechanical ones that use cogs wouldn't be destroyed as easily.\n\nThe author has valid claims and supports them well. It's important that authors support their claims. Authors write about many different topics all the time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When reading \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" i learned about computers reading facial expressions. I believe that putting these devices in computers to see how kids ar ereacting to work would be very smart. It can give data to teachers tp see if the kids are confused, happy, mad etc... Teachers can change what they need to for whats best for the students. It can be a tool that can changed learning for the best.\n\nTeachers can get feedback on how the students are feeling about certain work. Teachers could have the tecnology to make adjustments in learning and work. Giving feedback on how kids feel when doing work might open up to new learning ideas. Humans can read facial expressions but a teacher doesnt have time to read 30 or more kids expressions while doing assignments.\n\nI believe that this new tecnology can better learning, health, and science all around. Facial Action Coding System worked on the Mona Lisa and it claims she was 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry (Line 1). This technology can work on a painting i belive it work very good in real life and give back great feedback. We can use this tool to help learning, help the disabled, on animals, and even health. This can be a breakthrough in the tech world and help better the world overall.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There kinds computers thing Computers help people anything need Such go online chat people buy sell things go college learn anything helps type homework neatly I personally think computers helpful lucky Going online give many opportunities anything From going college online nt time go person talking friends You learn anything computer s much fun The computer people I know greatest invention besides obvious ones Going college online easy There nt alot Alot people country online college For instance parents want go back ca nt go person someone alot work cant fit time actually go college But go online take classes free time Also talking friends online fun When arent friends house chat online Maybe go even email There many ways tha fabulous computer The computer also jampacked loads information helpful anyone world You learn different countries people even recipe apple pic Who knows learn The computer things every person world Since different Some us like buy sell things computer homework Maybe even fun computer game nice Every person world different one thing common The world knows need computers computers smartest thing since calculator Buying selling things computer easier looks All put want sell online look online want buy Then buy sell There process like people bring take away But basics You also homework neatly computer messy handwriting Therefore computer many things benefit world everything offer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many good resones to join tghe Seagoing Cowboy program.\n\nThis essay will give you good resonses to join the Seagoing Cowboy progam. One resone to join is There are wonderfull sights to sea on the way to your next awsome destination.\n\nAnother benifit of Joining the programe is you get to help people and seeing new places like Europe and China. If your are an animal lover you can spend time with animals taking care of them to re locate them to there new home. And at night you can relax when it is your turn And look at the moon and shining on the water and you can meet new people. Those are fun activities but,that is not all. If you like sports you can play baseball,volleyball. Tablel tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,even whittling. Improving vocabulary is fun and usefull to know. If you just need to get away for awille to a relaxing place were you can work. It is all there. Do not miss out. As on coyboy or future coyboy can see there are many great resones to join the Seagoing Cowboy Program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story sentence saying when come back saeng vowed silently spring snow melts geese return hibiscus budding take test again hibiscus good luck charm its things aint right comes back things better Also author concludes good luck charm hibiscus gave confidence say real confident one succeed Last one story lets reader know believes something gives hope make well", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Reducing the Usage of Cars\n\nThousands of Americans use their own car or a vehichle as their main transportation in their every day lives. No one seems to look at how cars are actually destroying the environment ,rather then helping it. Mainly since the fuel that is given off from a vehicles engine is effecting the environment in a negative way. In all reality the reason why we as humans use our own vehicles is because its a faster way of transportation and carries us to our destination. This is why limiting car useage will be benificial money wise and create a healthier environment.\n\nReducing the car usage is beneficial to creating a cleaner and safer environment. Not only will this effect the environment but your life as well. According to source 1 it states,\" Passengers cars are responsible for twelve percent of greenhouse gas emmision in Europe.\" Based on this fact I can acknowledge the fact of how automobiles can effect the greenhouse. The greenhouse is a cycle in which can have a huge impact on our environment. If we destroy that then that may result in even more damages that are caused now. It also states, \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France , after five- days of intesifying smog...\" In result, the smog then continued to places such as Bejing, China. Which I personally would consider to be a horrfic thing, considering China is very congested already and is one of the most pollued cities in the world. Some may argue of the fact that car usage is their main way from going to point A to point B , but there is proof that is effecting the cities around us. Experts have concluded that there is about 50 percent car intensive areas located in the United States. This is why car usage should be reduced to have create a better environment.\n\nThe suburbs are taking action to create denser cities. The purpose of having denser citiies is to have a low- suburban life. In source 1 it states, \" In this new approach , stores are placed a walk away, on main street, rather than in malls along some distant highways.\" This experiment will help to encourage more ways to attempt public transportation. For instance, riding your bicycle once in a blue moon. Not only are you saving money but you are preventing less traffic fgrom occuring in your area. Some may argue having a low- suburban life can be hard to adapt to but it will provide a safer environment. Especially since you are one step closer to making the world less polluted then it already is. I personally would agree on occasionally using a different way to get to my destination. It will not only benefit me in the long run but also cause less chaos on the road. It also states in the text,\" the Environmental Protection Agency is promoting car \"reduced communties\", and legislators are starting to act, if cautiously.\" This means that the Environmental Agency are starting to promote reducing car in certain communities. Some may argue why is there a need to reduce the amount of cars in a community ,but on the other hand that community may be over populated or congested of cars. If this is so, then this will just have another negative impact of the environment. The purpose of the program is to benefit the area you are and to lessen then the issue of car usages. All in all, the suburbs are taking action to create denser cities.\n\nPrograms are also being created to spread the news of Car- Free day. The purpose for Care - Free day in Bogota , Columbia is a day you participate in to prevent traffic jams. For example, In source 3 it states, \"..millions of Colombians hiked, biked, and skated or took buses to work during a car- free day.\" This day isn't ment for people who live in Bogota, Colombia but they are trying to influence this tradition in several other countires. Other may agree of this day being pointless , but I can see this having a huge impact on the world . Sooner or later this day will become a tradition not only in several other countries but also in the United States. it also states in source 3,\" Its a good oppurtunity to take away stress and lower air pulltion, said a bussniessman.\" Especially since it rained on the Car- free day this didnt stop nor discourage anyone from participating in the event. The event turned out to be a huge success and reduced the amount of smog that day. In my perspective we are all come together as one to build our community together. It takes more thenone person to have such a huge impact on the world. The goal if to lessen the useage of car to have a positive effect on the environment. The influence of the Car- free day is just one step closer to reaching that goal. This will is why programs are being creates to spread the news of Car - free day.\n\nAfter looking of the causes and effects of limiting car usage , it all comes down to having a big influence on the world. It takes one area such as Bogota, Columbia to have a huge impact. In our every day lives , our car is our main resource for transportation, but this should change. Not only are you capable of helping to have a postive effect on the environment but so am I. This just shows how if we are all willing to come together as a community, we are capable of creating a healthier environment. This is why the world should influence limiting car useage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Challenfe of Exploring Venus, the author wants us to study Vennus and what is it worth and also whats us to know the dangers of this plante and what it does for us. Here is what this plante is made out of and what it is.'' A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.On the planet's surface , temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressire is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth;such an environment would crush evena submairen accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. ALso notable, Venus has the hottes surface temperture of any plante in our solar system, even though Mercuy is clocer to our sun. Beyoned high pressure and heat, Venusain geology and weather presents additional impediments like eruoting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface''. And therefore those are the things that make venus up and what it does.\n\nSometimes this plante know as Venus gets called \"Evening Star,\" and here is why it gets called that.''Venus, sometimes called the \"Eveing Star\",is one of the brighest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. However, this nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a planet. in our solar system,Venus is the second planet from our sun. While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe ventge point of our of Earth, it has proved a very challening place to exmine more closely.'' Thus being why it is called that. Sometimes people like to call venus earths twin becacsue they are such a like in some ways and this is how.'' Often referred to as Earth's \"twin,\" Venus is the closest planet to Earth on terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.Earth, Venus, and Mars,our\n\nother planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds.These\n\ndifferences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to mars and other time we are closer to Venus. Because Venus is sometimes right around the corner- in tspace terms- humans have sent numerous spacecarfts to land on this cloud-draped world. each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft\n\nsurvived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue expalins why not a single spaceshipe has\n\ntouched down on Venus in more than three decades.Numerous factors contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.'' Therefore that is why that venus kinda looks like our earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because Venus is closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. This planet has many dangers that humans are harm from. Scientists are discusing further visits to its surface because they are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\n\nNASA has one compelling idea for sending humans to study humans. The possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface would allow scientists to float above the fray. This means flying across the planet with a bimb-like vehicle.\n\nNASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted three weeks in such conditions.\n\nStudying Venus is a worthy pursuit because we can have life in a different planet other than just Earth. Studying Venus will help us examine the thier circumstances and find a way to live in a different planet. This is why studying Venus is a worthy pursuit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Even though the people are very busy within their jobs as well as studies, they may experience a longer commute time.some people state that travelling long distance for work or study brings negative effects on them while others holding the opposite idea.In my point of view, it depends on the outcome of one's career commitment.In this essay, both views will be analysed to draw a conclusion.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, most people struggling to make their goals realistic despite of the challenges they face.For example , as good parenthood, people try to attend their children to school in cities rather than in country side in order to provide them a student friendly environment and better facilities for education.Also people immigrate to town area for services like supermarkets, health care, shopping complexes and pubic libraries regardless the time they consume to reach and return.Moreover, individuals who concern their carrier, try to identify more trends than issues in their job field and promotions as well.As a result,though the public spend long duration in travelling,they recieve better outcome for their commitment in return.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand,longer commute time cause more stress in people.For instance, if somone faced a traffic jam on the way to his job, he mentally struggles with the time taken to reach the work place.This cause him an emotional damage.As well, when returning home, everybody wish to arrive early to their destination and women reschedule the rest of the day for house hold dutoes and plans for tomorrow. If it takes much time to travel, people may get tired easily and fedup with household activities.This is an emotional burden.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, apart from the mental disturbances, most of the public manage all those tasks enthusiastically to achieve their goals.Therefore, long commute times do not always negatively impact the community. However, if the distribution of resources takes place with equal strength across society and if globalization positively affects rural areas as well, a better tomorrow will emerge.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "name I writing I want inform benefits computers I think computers great way kids like learn things world Having computer also helps people need also inform people far away places world I beleive nt computers would nt really know much world Computers also help us send emergency messages across world Some people think computers effect onour society I one think computers positive effect people people also think computers make people spend less time exercising I believe actually helps people exercise go gives different exercising techniques In conclusion I think computers positive effect society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This face on Mars can be nothing else but a natural landform. It couldn't possibly be a face that was created by Aleins.The Viking 1 spacecraft could have done something different than it had befpre while it was taking photos of possible landing sites for the Viking 2 space craft.\n\nThe formation of the face was around Cydonia.The unusual shadows that the face had made it look like an Egyptian Pharoh. The \"Face on Mars\" probably had the unusual shadows because of the weird formation it was. When the light from the sun would hit the surface of Mars it would make the shadow of the Egyptian Pharoh because of the formation the face makes.\n\nThe Viking 1 would take snaps of landing sites with a specific camera. With this camera the\" Rule of thumb\" would tell you that \"You could discern things in a digital image three times bigger that the pixel size.\" What that mean is that if there were other items in the picture like airplanes on the ground or other items, you would be able to see what they were.\n\nThe picture of the \"Face on Mars\" just shows landforms. It shows landforms like the common ones we have in the American West. It couldn't be a face created from a alien because of the camera the Viking 1 took photos with. The camera would show anything that would be on the ground near it if something was around it to create it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The increasing prevalence of furious sports has been a great concern. Owning to this, some assume that the Governments should abolish this type of sports while others contend that citizens should have a right to immerse in any activities, regardless of its high-risk characteristics. In my opinion, the policies ought to focus on participants's assurance instead of banning any sports.\nOn the one hand, the propose of prohibiting extreme sports should not be approved because it is against the democratic society. Inevitably, the participating in risky sports is one of residents' rights. As a result, the intervention of the Admistrations in this case will prevent them from their own interests illegally. Moreover, the extreme sports abolishment may extinguish carreers and dreams of numerous professional athletes and trainees. Therefore, banning is not a reasonable approach in this situation.\nOn the other hand, authorizing freedom in playing dangerous sports generates several matters. Understandably, participants mostly risk their health and lives being involved in these activities, from violence and physical injuries, which means the furious characteristics are posing a threat to their own existences. In addition, the prohibition on those sports can orientate hobby development for future generation on healthy sports, requiring less violence and intension. This, therefore, leads to a more tranquil community.\nFinally, according to my perspective, the Administrations should attempt to handle safety assurance and enhance risk education in those players. Under this circumstance, the residents are equipped with protective support and still allowed to enjoy and follow their passion. This then would be the optimal way to meet residents' demand.\nConclusively, I personally believe the solution is not about whether the Governments should forbid furious sports activities, but about providing them protective assurance and risk acknowledgement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology is becoming a bigger part of our lives. As time goes on, we develop new technology for different purposes. One such purpose is to read emotions. This technology will benefit our society in different ways, like in education. The technology to read students emotions is valuable to our schools.\n\nThe first way in which this technology is vaulable to schools is by improving lessons. Often times, many students of different calibers are thrust into the same classroom. While some grow bored others become confused by the content of the lesson. In the article, Dr. Huang is quoted saying, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" and then \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. If we implemented this emotion recognition technology, we could help students of all levels grow and reach their potential.\n\nAnother reason why technology that can recognize emotions is vaulable in schools is because of fighting and bullying. In paragraphs three and four of the article, it discusses how the technology works and what it can do. It claims that it can dectect mixed emotions and even, in paragraph 8, detect fake smiling. This technology could be used to detect when students are angry and wanting to fight or even sad from being bullied. Teachers cannot always detect these things from students, especially if they are trying to hide them.\n\nIn addition to stopping fights and helping bullied students, this emotion recognition technology could assist in identifying students who have problematic home lives and need help. Although this would not always be 100% accurate, it could help faculty see those students who might be depressed or angry, and need help. This would aid in making schools a happier place. It could also negate problems that they could have later in life. Installing this technology in our schools would be highly beneficial.\n\nSchools need the technology to read students emotions. It would fit in with other technological advancements that have improved our education system. Advances in technology helped to improve not just our education, but our overall lives. Numerous people in our world cannot live without technology. Technology is important to our society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In various places, they encourage the students to have work while studying but others dont. Some people find it helpful for the yoursters to look on other perspective, though on the other side maybe they could not continue to get to school because of the time schedule and tiredness. In my point of view to have a part-time job is better for the young people to have.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, most students want to get what they wanted,", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the world today people tend to give birth and start families at a later stage in their lives. From my own point of perspective, the merits outweigh the demerits because there might be unpalatable consequences resulting from this such as difficulty in conceiving a child.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, Despite these disadvantages, there are certain benefits which can be encapsulated under the umbrella of stability, both: financial and familial. As a couple progresses in life they should have greater financial resources to draw upon to support their children and reduce the negative impact on poverty. In addition to the financial stability, there’s also stability in the family which should increase as the couple matures. As a result, children born at a later stage are less vulnerable to the negative consequences of divorce and family break up which are less common in older pairings.\r\n\r\nAlthough the positive aspects appear to have great strength, there are also significant negative factors to consider. Foremost, as people age, they suffer from a greater amount of genetic degradation which can increase the chances of having a child with a genetic defect such as Down's syndrome. Another factor which can have a detrimental effect on a child’s quality of growth is the fact that older people tend to have less energy which means they are less able to cope with and raise their relatively more energetic young child. Moreso, there is also a generation gap in terms of relatability. As the age gap between the child and the parents increases their ability to relate to each other and share the same ideas about life could be placed under severe pressure. This may have negative consequences on the child’s upbringing and development. For instance, there could be numerous intra-family conflicts between youngsters and their elderly parents.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, given the greater number of negative elements in comparison to the smaller number of positive aspects of giving birth at an older stage in life, it is reasonable to conclude that it is more beneficial to conceive and raise children at a relatively earlier age.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A A time I patience family goes point My family I go point lot Usually lines long sometimes hour Once first time wait hours went anyway We hour technical difficulties After min line moving When I got ride really fun although lasted seconds A couple years later new ride The opened looked fun line didnt I sure long waited go end rode ride amazingI glad I enough patience wait long lines", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph end realizes things seemed strange realized seasons changing plants So author put paragraph end spring goes back school take test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It certainly cannot be denied that men and women are different in terms of their references and capabilities. Therefore, some jobs are better done by men and others by women. I definitely agree with this situation. The reasons for this are twofold. \r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, it is vitally important that nowadays, there are various types of jobs. Some of them are better done by men than construction, and mining. Opposing to this other jobs are well done by women. For instance, taking care of children at kinder gardens or like babysitters. Women cannot do difficult, hard work and men cannot do work that belongs to women. It is my belief that everyone should do work that is suitable for them. \r\n\r\nSecondly and more importantly there are some jobs that cannot be imagined without men or women. One of them is a professional artist. Another kind of job is as a singer. We cannot imagine these occupations without men or ladies. Moreover, the government need both genders of workers. Ladies are necessary to clean and cook as employers. Of course, ladies cannot be butchers or construction workers, however, some women work as skilled-craftsman by force. This is a sorrowful situation in the world. Furthermore, our country tries to multiply our homeland with workers such as businessmen and employers. \r\n\r\nBy way of my conclusion, I believe that this issue is likely to become even more important in the future as borders between countries become increasingly blurred. It, therefore, demands further consideration.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Well so many people are doing research on all planets,stars,and galaxy's.Venus is the first target to focus on and no doubt about it.When people are talking about venus it seems like it's just a regular planet to set foot on.It's really not a safe planet to live on actually it's really hot and because of that it's a little close to the sun that's why it makes it hotter.It could be a chance we might be there some day.\n\nI want to go to venus and explore the things it has there.First I have to wear a special kind of outfit to able to be there.Regular clothes would not work and you need oxygen to breath as well because there is no air at all on venus.Nasa sent probes there to observe the hot planet and the plan went well.Probes gathered researched and brought items back to earth which are rocks and dirt.\n\nKeep in mind that there is so much to know about venus and things that we still don't know.Venus will always be around and later on we might be able to go there.Humans try to make life there if possible or not,we are hoping if we can.We have to use our minds and think straight,hard enough,and to give our answer.We might never know only god knows what.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is currently a debate about whether imposing stricter penalties on inappropriate drivers is the sole solution to promoting road safety. I strongly disagree with this statement because, in my view, road safety depends not only on the severity of punishments but also on effective traffic rule enforcement and heightened public awareness.\r\n\r\nOne compelling reason why I argue that traffic rules play a pivotal role in addressing this issue is that rules form the fundamental framework that shapes societal behavior. Moreover, stringent traffic laws can deter drivers from engaging in dangerous behaviors on the road, thereby fostering a safer driving environment. To illustrate, individuals contemplating driving home after consuming alcoholic beverages, which could lead to accidents, are more likely to reconsider their actions when faced with the consequences outlined in traffic laws. Consequently, rules are instrumental in preventing potentially hazardous situations.\r\n\r\nAnother key factor supporting my stance is the importance of individual awareness and responsibility in ensuring road safety. Despite the existence of stringent penalties in traffic laws, some individuals continue to flout them. By educating drivers about these laws and cultivating a mindset of respect for fellow citizens on the road, we can significantly improve driver behavior. For example, a well-informed driver with a positive attitude toward road safety is more likely to become a responsible and law-abiding motorist, thereby contributing to a safer traffic environment. Therefore, encouraging a collective commitment to safe driving is paramount in enhancing road safety.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I firmly believe that achieving road safety requires more than just imposing harsher penalties on offenders. It necessitates a multifaceted approach that includes effective traffic rule enforcement and the cultivation of public awareness and responsibility. By addressing these aspects comprehensively, we can work towards building a safer and more secure road environment for everyone.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine being able to know how someone is feeling, neat isn't it? Well with a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System, computers are now able to identify human emotions, but it's pointless because it doesn't benefit us.\n\nIf teachers knew how students were feeling and they tried to help the student feel better, it would take away from their classtime. Students are learners and they should be learning how to deal with their emotions because once they start their adult life, and life throws so many problems at them, they should know how to keep going on with life and not letting anything get to them. People always have something hard they're going through and most of the time nobody notices because despite that person going through hard times, they put on a brave face and go on with their day. If a teacher isn't able to tell how students are feeling, themselves, then they shouldn't worry about that person because they're most likely not letting their problem get to them.\n\nIn conclusion, a person will openly express their emotions if they need something but if not, they are dealing with it on their own. People should be able to decide when to ask for help or when to deal with their problem on their own, because that's what makes them, them, how they deal with their emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to get away from home, see the world, and have the amazing opportunity to help others?\n\nIf you have, this is the job for you!\n\nSign up to be a \"Seagoing Cowboy.\"\n\nYou can travel the world, meet all kinds of people, all while helping many people in need.\n\nHave you ever wanted a way to fill your service time, without actually having to fight?\n\nBecoming a Seagoing Cowboy is the best way to do it!\n\nI served two years in service before I was discharged, without ever stepping foot near a weapon, battlefield, or military base.\n\nWhile others risked their lives, I was taking care of horses and cattle, seeing the world, and helping others without ever having to be in dangerous situations.\n\nAnother reason I was happy to have joined the Seagoing Cowboys is, like I've said before, I had the rare and amazing experience of seeing parts of the world I would never get to see.\n\nI saw places such as Europe and China, but what really was special was seeing the Acropolis in Greece.\n\nI was also breath taken when I took a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, as I called it \"a city with streets of water.\"\n\nI also got to tour an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China.\n\nWithout becoming a Seagoing Cowboy I never would have had any of these amazing experiences.\n\nBesides helping out with others, getting to see amazing places, and filling my service time, I had fun on the trip itself!\n\nI enjoyed tending to the animals (and this will be especially fun for people who love or appreciate live stock), we had table-tennis tournaments, we fenced, boxed, whittled, and played many other games.\n\nOf course you could bring books or board games along with you as well!\n\nOn the return trip after we had already unloaded the animals we could play baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where the animals had been housed.\n\nPerhaps the best part about this is that when I signed up, I was a normal boy with a highschool degree and working two part-time jobs.\n\nI didn't have to have any certification, degrees, or even a full time job.\n\nI was completely average until I signed up.\n\nIf you wanted to, you could sign up right now without a degree or training.\n\nLast but not least, this job will make you aware of how lucky you are that you have the opportunites you have, that your country isn't war stricked, that we aren't completely devastated.\n\nJoining this really helped me and my family realise this fact.\n\nTo recap, there are many different reasons to join the Seagoing Cowboys. Get away from home for a time, while visiting places like China or Italy, have lots of fun playing games on deck and tending to the animals, all while filling your service time, plus you don't have to have any special qualification! The whole ordeal really made me happy of my current life; it helped me realise how lucky I am.\n\nFor all these reasons I think joining the Seagoing Cowboys is the quintissetnial thing to do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Interview are mandatory for choosing a new worker in companies. Some people state that interview is not a strong method of selecting a new employ and there are other better methods. I completely disagree with this statement and I will explain my views in the upcoming paragraphs.\n\nTo begin with, there are many reasons of interview is a reliable method of choosing a new employ. The first and the foremost is interview checking the general knowledge of the person. Moreover, interviews provide face to face interaction and this method gives a help to choosing a better staff for companies. In addition to this, with the help of this method companies can easily judge the handle ability of the worker and knowledge of the worker and take a right decision for selecting a new employ in company. For example, interviews gives information about the person personality skills like check knowledge, confidence and other skills\n\nOn the other hand, there are many other selections methods with their advantages. The first and the foremost is writing method is based on theortical knowledge in a particular field. Furthermore, group discussion method is also useful for checking the response of person but it appropriate in some cases such as in sales jobs. Although, these methods is used for selection process in some cases like hire a good staff for companies, choose good teacher for teaching. But, interview is very strong and effective method to choose better employ because this method gives a sufficient details of a person knowledge.\n\nTo conclude, every type of selection methods has their own merits. In some situation interview is more advantageous and in some situation other methods may be more profitable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to join the Seagiong Cowboys Program? If not I'll tell you some thigs about it. I will give you some reasons why you should join, details about it, and tell you what you do in this program.\n\nFirst and Foremost, reasons why you should join the program. It is an amazing experience. It's a huge oppertunity to not go or take. It's very fun to travel with your group of cowboys.\n\nSecoundly,\n\nI will tell you the most important\n\ndetails about it. You can go to help out people and their contries. You travel all types of seas like Pacific ocean, Atlantic ocean and high-seas. You get to see a lot new contries and places.\n\nLast but not Least, I am going to tell you what you would fo in it. You will be bale to cross the land to help others. When you help others in a different contries you'll know more about them and their culture. Not just helping\n\npeople out but, you can benefit from seeing places like Europe and China.\n\nIn conclusion, those are the reasons why you should join, details about the program, and what you do in the program. Hopefully, you will join the ship wreck awesome program!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The development of driverless cars can be good or bad. Depending on the situation driverless cars can go ether way. If you want to stay in the past and drive your car to the full extent, go ahead. If you want to be in the new age of technology, keep reading.\n\nDriverless cars will help the economy increadibly. They will cut the public transportation costs in half! The cars are not fully functional by them selfs so far, they need the help of a driver to navagate through complicated traffic conditions. These cars will take over the wheel when you do not want to drive.\n\nSome say that the driver would get bored waiting for \"their turn to drive\". Also others say it would not be fun sitting watching the car drive. But what they do not know is the developers have allready looked into that problem. The answer is a digital display windsheild, you can watch a movie on your window. You can call or text from your car as it is driving. So when it is your turn to drive the display would turn off and it would tell you that you have to take over.\n\nThe technology for this to happen is here, all the developers need is your help to see if the people would want them. Imagin not having to worry about crashes, speeping drivers, drunk drivers, or taking the wrong way home. This car will eliminate thoes senarios. Less speeding tickets you have to pay, less insurance, and less money to spend on gas.\n\nThese cars will be great for the world. You will love one, just imagin thoes long road trips that you will not have to drive. Maybe you have paperwork due that day on you way to school, or work, you can do it beacuse your car is driving. The development of these cars will be amazing. This is why you, yes you shoud support the development of these cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To name I I agree books music movies magazines removed shelves If something kids learn put shelves Many books children teens adults read cause lot violance threatingThat s major cause days want clam peaceful world Many times see teens childern get fights bad mouth others It s good thing see mostly either watching show negtive things reading book trying act cool If could put important learning books movies ect would less aggression world Having positive day going saying I read wonderful book taught something new life would best thing hear Teaching something kid could remember helpful long run greatest thing Knowing anything educational great feeling Now see kids actually supposed You really dont cause busy wanting find trouble get That s really good always learn good things help life It s tough world kids taught best way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Narciso Rodriguez Home The blueprints Lives shared feelings traditions Love shared family growing upNarciso dad cuban shared cuban traditions eachother warm welcoming eachother people Narciso s family generous people shared everyone kind eachother lived traditional emphasized mood memoir The love meaning family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars could play a big part in the future. There have been quite a few advancements in driverless cars since 2009 when they were first developed. There are also benefits to them that would be helpful to people in the future. They are slowly becoming a necessity.\n\nDriverless cars are useful in many ways and will become more and more helpful as they are developed. As of right now they aren't completely driverless. The cars still need drivers in situations that are too difficult for the car. However, they can do most of the work themselves and don't require the driver to do too much just the occasional complicated traffic or accidents. Driverless cars are still able steer, accelerate, and brake on their own.\n\nDriverless cars also provide some benefits. For example, there could be cars in the future that require much less fuel than is required now in everday cars. That would be very beneficial because it's eco friendly. People have been looking for numerous ways to make thing more eco friendly lately and cars that run on half as much fuel would provide a huge advancement towards making our planet better.\n\nNot only are driverless cars more eco friendly but they could also help solve a modern day problem. Numerous people are caught texting or talking on their phones everyday and it is a well known fact that that is one of the leading causes in car accidents. Since driverless cars are becoming advanced enough to need almost no driver they provide a much easier and safer way of life. Instead of trying to text and drive the driver can allow the car to take over while they text away and the streets wil become a much safer place for everyone.\n\nIn this modern day world people need a car that can keep up with them and driverless cars can do just that. Advancements are being made in driverless cars everyday. With every advancement we are one step closer to the future. One day driverless cars will be apart of everday life and the world will be a much better place because of them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Laughter Laughter used many different ways could either laugh something funny rude enjoy people brings smile face Sometimes nt laugh people could hurt even imagine could even affect life grow older When I younger I faced situation affected I grew I always enjoyed singing ever since I could remember one point I could nt bare sing front crowd even family I four years old dark family decided going go fun place called This family friends could get together great time would band playing bright round colorful tables sit drinks game room children play My cousin s band going playing My family I got dressed I wore beautiful white dress mother chose wear I looked like star eyes I satisfied When arrived family I sat bright lime green glow dark round table watched performance I danced parents long time I would play games brother friends My cousin lead singer band calling microphone anyone would like sing crowd I ran parents told chance shine I wanted They smiled said yes sweetheart course I ran cousin standing I pushed bundle children I could front I looked smiled raised hand cousin shouting chose My cousin smiled back picked placed speaker I delighted I could nt even breath biggest dream stand microphone hand I stood big speaker box I looked crowd people took deep breath I began sing I singing favorite I knew memory The crowd smiled clapped soon I sang chorus everyone started laugh I nt know laughing Was I accidentally forgot take gum mouth Because I happen forget Or I sounded really bad I scared gum I chewing mouth started harden voice grew faint I began panic eyes started become watery I noticed tears coming face I could nt even bare front people going laugh So I jumped speaker ran mother began cry lap I cried long hour family tried telling everything fine I magnificent job nt enough believe Over years I always detested singing front people scared thought maybe someone would burst laughing I either bad key After I always began tell I horrible voice I knew reason crowd laughed Every time parents would ask sing I would tell thank I nt like sing anymore nt true I lied parents I still horrible feeling heart soul Now I older I understand I terrified reason people laughed nt I thought My parents told people thought I adorable since I young I could nt really pronounce words right I giggled I keep telling I sing nothing else going bring I trying stay positive still hard sing solo certain period time I strength courage sing anyone", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggest the reader to study Venus isnt directly in the text but he/she gives you the idea that you should look into it. Throughout the article the author talks about Venus and others planets in out solar system. but he mainly talks about Venus and Mars. The author tells us that Venus isn't actaully a Evening star, it just has that name because it is closer to the sun. Venus is also referred to as Earth's \"twin\" because it is the closest planet to us in density and size and sometimes distance. In the text it says \"Venus can be right around the corner in space'. Even though Venus is right around the corner we have still yet to land an actually spaceship on it. There hasn't been any space craft the a has been successfully on Venus for more than a few hours.. Although in paragraph 6 it says ''many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to long enough to contribute meaning to our knowledge of Venus''. This is tell us that there is still stuff to learn about mars and this story isnt complete.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine you are in your same mundane everyday english class. Your eyes are slowly drooping. Your face slowly starts to slip down the palm of your right hand which is holding your head up and the last resort of fooling the teacher with the idea that you are up and interested. And then your teacher spontaniously jumps up and tries to liven the novel that he or she may be reading. The whole class almost jumps out of their socks from the outof the blue outburst of their english teacher; however, now they are all on the edge of their seat listening to the wonderful book that the teacher is reading. How did the teacher know to liven the mood? Why did the teacher emphasize the story to the class at the specific time?\n\nThe answer to those questons is simple. The teacher was using his or her new cutting edge, handy dandy Facial Action Coding System to allow her to know and understand the emotions of her pupils while teaching. However the inginuitive system may have worked, with a sensor or camera at the head of the room examining each of the students' emotions, it got the job done by sending feedback to the teacher.\n\nThe new tech created by Dr. Paul Eckman that was used in the hypothetical story above has recently entered our society. Acording th the article, The process of judging and reading your emotions \"begins when the computer constructs a 3D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles\". \"Movement of one or more muscles is called an 'action unit'\". The computer system uses theseclues of the face to calculate a final emotion product of the person it examines. Imagine the countless benefits of using FACS(Facial Action Coding System) in the classrom at school alone! I certainly believe that FACS has many benefits and should be used in the classroom.\n\nAs it states in the article, Facs can be usedto trackand calculate the emotion of the face it studies. For example, \"Imagine a computer that knows when you are happy or sad. For example, if you smile while a web adapears on your screen, a smilar admight follow\". This same type of idea could be used in schools all around the country. If there was a computer on the wall somewhere in a class room examining students' emotions to the teacher's lesson, it could give feedback and information to the the teacher for her to adapt her teaching ways. If the FACS system is scanning and finds interest and exitement on the students faces, then the teacher know to keep up the good workteaching. On then other end of the spectrum however, in a cas ehre FACS picks up mundane emontions the teacher would then know to try a different strategy to his or her teaching methods. Simple right?\n\nFACS not only can be used in the actual classroom but can be built in the technology that students may use to learn differnt subjects at times. As it states in the article, \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or board,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like a human instructor.'\"\n\nThe posotive possiblities for FACS to be used in the classroom our endless. It could change the way we look at schools for the better. This is why I believe that using Facial Action Coding System should definitly be taken into consideration in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face is just a natural landform because, nobody lives on Mars it's just a empty planet. They NASA says that the face on Mars had became a pop icon but i don't think that just because NASA has images that it's ture. You can't always believe people.\n\nAlthough few scientists believed the Face wan an alien artifact, Some People think the Face is bona fide evidenve og life on Mars. Evidence that NASA would rathr hide, lets say conspiracy theorists. The caption noted that the rock formation resembles a human head, formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth. This would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars.\n\nMany people thought that is was an alien momument, but on April 5, 1998 Mars Globsl Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time. A Man named Micheal Malin and his Mars Oribter Camera team wanted to prove that there were no aliens. Him and his team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. People should have been satisfied with knowing that there wasn't an alien monument after all.\n\nNevertheless, on April 8, 2001 the Mars Global Surveyor drew closer for a second look. They has to rool the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view to get the picture. Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the cameras mamimum resolution. In the 2001 image each pixel span 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the 2976 Viking original.\n\nI think that the researchers shouldn't be having to look seversl times just to prove certain people wrong. If they don't believe then they need to go to Mars for themselves. It'd great that they got the comparsion but they went through trouble to get there. It was not an easy target. In face, it's hard work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are some people who would argue that young people should take legally more responsibility for caring for their old parents who can not look after themselves mentally, physically as well financially. Personally, I believe that there are some drawbacks of the above trend, as will be explained.\r\n\r\n On the one hand, taking care of old people consistently can create some difficulties for young people in daily life. With the acceleration of people's living tempo, young people are quite busy that can not spare enough time for their old parents. Furthermore, they face heavy pressure from their society, work and families. In addition to this, they have to shoulder the responsibility in the face of caring and providing a happy life for old people. However, it is a burden for them that they cannot sit the whole day talking with their parents. They have to concentrate more on their work. Because, the more they devote themselves to work, the better life they can provide for old parents. Secondly, special old-man clubs can offer entertainment facilities and bounteous food. The old people can there make some new companies and friends establishing good relationships with them.\r\n\r\n On the other hand, young people should pay more attention to old parents providing a happy life. Despite the benefits of old man clubs, young people themselves should take off their old parents. There older people may feel lonely that miss their daughters, sons and grandchildren and also, want to celebrate the special holiday events together with all family members at home. They prefer a family atmosphere.\r\n\r\n To sum up, I think younger family members should provide a good living environment by caring for them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Was it aliens or was it a landform? Many people think that the face on Mars was created by aliens but there is a lot of evidence to support the fact that it is just a landform. For example, the fact that the Face looked like a rock formation, the use of a different camera to show every little detail, and the point that the picture actually shows the landform which is a butte or a mesa.\n\nFirst off, when NASA first found the picture they unveiled the image to the public to catch their attention. The caption of the picture read \"huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" This example shows that it looked like a human head but it was a rock formation.\n\nSecond, in paragraph eleven, the author says \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,\" he added. \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" Clearly this example proves that if aliens were the ones that created this face, their would be proof because with this camera you would be able too see any trace of anything that was there or footsteps of aliens.\n\nLastly, paragraph twelve states what the \"image\" was. \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms commond around the American West.\" This example says that what it was in reality was landform.\n\nTo end this arguemnt, right now in your head you might be thinking \"Pheraps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze.\" Well, that is why the NASA used a three times better camera to reassure the public of the landform. In conclusion, there examples, rock formation, camera quality, and the fact that NASA said it was a landform, that aliens were not the ones who created this face but it is a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The dangers it presents of studying Venus are the temperatures are really high, thick atmosphere, and Geology and weather present.\n\nThe author suggests that the temperatures are really high on planet Venus. The text, it says \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\" (Unknown 3). This proves that this can despite the dangers it presents. This is important because it'll be impossible to go to Venus with the highest temperature like that.\n\nThe author suggests that Venus has a thick atmosphere. From the Article, it says \"almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets. Even more challenging are the cloud of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venu's atmosphere\" (Unknown 3). This shows that the atmosphere of Venus can be unsettling to study about. From this we learn that different planets will have different stuff like atmosphere and temperature.\n\nThe author suggests that Venusian geology and weather present can be a danger thing to study Venus. From the text, it says \"erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface\" (Unknown 3). This proves that the weather on Venus can be dangerous to know about going there. This is important because different planets can have different weather which can be dangerous to experience to.\n\nIn Conclusion, The temperatures, thick atmosphere, and Geology and weather present can despites the dangers to humans if they decide to go there and study Venus, \"tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions\" (Unknown 7).", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Emotion reading technology is on the rise in the electronic world. This new software was developed by Prof. Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, with help from Prof. Sebe of the University of Amsterdam. The purpose of this technology is to make computers able to read emotions by the movement of facial muscles. The software is currently able to define six basic emotions; happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness.\n\nI am for having emotion-reading technology in the classroom, as long as it doesn't become a distraction. The article explains that if a student is taking online lessons or is learning from the computer and becomes confused or bored, the computer will be able to sense the students emotion and modify the lesson to catch the students interest or to help the student to not be confused. The article also says how most of human communication is nonverbal, which includes emotional communication. If a computer was able to sense these emotions, the student would be able to learn far more than with a regular lesson.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that having this new technology could benefit students tremendously, as long as students aren't exaggerating emotions to get desired effects of their lesson plans. Since the computer is adapting to the student, the student could also be less intimidated about their intellect, causing them to be more confident overall.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would it not be amazing if a teacher could be able just to look at their student for one second and be able too see that they are mad, sad, happy or fearful? Created by Dr. Huang, it is the FACS ( Face Action Coding System), which is a program that creates a 3D image of a face and compares a human face to a nuetral face on the computer. Then it calculates the emotion of what that person is feeling. To be like an actual face, the creater designed it to act as it has 44 muscles. I believe that this device can help students who have issues in school.\n\nIn the past few years, school has been becoming even more difficuilt becuase of all the standerized testing that the sudents have to take and pressured to recieve at least a decent grade or they may not be able to get the job they want in the future. Especially during high school, students are pressured to have the best grades in their classes and to the some students who are having an issue in the class do not feel comfortable asking for help from their teachers. If the scientist do add this system to schools websites, that it might help the student if they need help or tell if they are feel uneasy about the topic. For example, a sudent could be using one of the schools website to study for a test that is occuring the next day and one of their muscle tightens their lip face becuase they are fustrated they do not understand topic. Then the FACS would pop up and ask the student why was he mad. Then the student would explain his issus to the program and then the FACS would show the student a few links it believes would help the student study.\n\nIn conclusion, I beleve that the FACs invention should be put into schools becuase there are students out that have trouble in school and this program will help student study and should relieve them of some of their stress from school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe that doing team sports is the ideal way to let children learn how to collaborate. I can understand the benefits of team sports. However, other methods are as good as or better than involving in team sports to make children understand how to play a role with other team members.\r\n\r\nPlaying team sports, which has a lot of familiar elements as teamwork, needs children to work together to win the game. For example, during a basketball game, pupils must pass the basketball to their team members so that people with open shots can get the score. In this situation, children must work together to win the game. If anyone wants to be the only hero in team competitions and tries hard to shoot the ball without collaborating with teammates, they may make their team lose the game, making themselves the culprit of losing the game. Also, children need to play different roles in a sports game. When performing various functions within the game, kids can learn to do their jobs well while coordinating with others. Thus, letting children play team sports is a good way for them to understand collaboration.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some activities are more helpful for youngsters to gain knowledge of cooperation. Assigning students to work on team projects, for instance, is a popular and recognized way for schools to facilitate children’s ability to work as a team because when they work on the projects, they need to discuss and arrange each one’s work, thus improving their communication and coordination skills, which are essential elements for cooperation. Furthermore, playing board games or acting in a drama together positively impacts teamwork skills. So, except for sports involving group participation, there are many engagements that benefit children’s sense of teamwork.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while playing team games can help kids learn how to cooperate, I believe various ways can substitute it. Thus, we cannot just say it’s the best approach.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\\\r\n\r\nIn this modern era , robots become very important for many compenies , for several reasons ,That surely have a negative benfites ,In my essay I will try to discuss both views and suggust may opinion .\r\n\r\nRobotics industry has developed every day , we have been seen alot of compnies in different countries replaced the workers with robots , Instance , chaina a good example for used robots in many way ,But that have two saids , one said is that is very good for compenies and that what nummber of people had argue espeailly companies managers for some reasons ,The main reasons is \r\n\r\n fasting a chivement and hight qulaity ,because roborts dont need break for exmple , The second reason is roborts cand works with out any mistakes in short time oppisite of human need alot of time nd some time want vication when he have emergance conditions ,Moreover , manageres find it is easier to contral and applied the rules .\r\n\r\nOn other hand ,There are people whoes cotrast with this opinion , for hard causes , first and most that makes many many jabs disppeared likes , writers and securites and a lot of worke , Aditional that can influnce the society by cuting the realtionships between people and people feeling notcomfortable in some services like doctores , that need human to feel for paitions . \r\n\r\nIN concluison that revolution can harm the community more than benfical them , and I'm totally disagree with roborts replace the human because the main reson for human to be in this life .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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