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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sizzle sizzle sizzle! That's the sound of human skin burning up in only 90 degree weather. Well Venus has almost 10x that, so imagine trying to withstand that. Scientists are trying to learn more about Venus because long ago it was nearly identical to the earth. Now the acidic and humid atomosphere make it inhabitable for humans. Despite these challenges, scientists still think that trying to make Venus habitable will be the best option because its closer to us and also still has hope of being a planet to soon to be Colonized.\n\nVenus use to be a planet relative to Earth. Venus and Earth had shared many simalirities with each other, but unlike Earth now; Venus has many challenges that scientists still consider facing, so that Venus may be habitable. In the article the author says,\"Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us (Paragraph 2)\". From the start of paragraph 3 to the end the author explains all the challenges that Venus presents for us and it's dangers. From paragraph 4-5 the authors states how Venus can still be a habitable palnet and lists the steps scientists are taking to study it futhermore, even knowing that the odds will be against them.\n\nThe author wants to expand his knowledge of Venus, even with the challenges that scientists and explorers will be facing. Venus started off as a planet that could be called \"Earths Twin\", but now cannot because of the adaption and terraformation it has took. What once exist can always exist again; That's what these scientist, explorers, and author believes. Don't look at Venus for what it has become, look at Venus for what it once was and can become again with the help of guidance and knowledge. Taking the risk and challenges Venus has to offer to expand human civilization will be worth it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Features setling affected cyclist harsh hot climate terrain The author clearly wrote the sun beating almost died dehydration", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator,\n\nToday in class, we were discussing if we should keep the process of the Electoral College. Now this got me thinking,why should we keep the Electoral College? Well,since there are more pros than cons i'll go with the cons. Firstly,the Electoral College is unfair and secondly it is a non democratic way of selecting a president.\n\nWell,where do i start! The winner take all system is definetly unfair. Because of this system, most canididates won't spend any time at all in a state that they know they have no chance at winning in. People in South Carolina said that they never even saw a capaign ad for the canididates;or for that matter the canididates themselves.\n\nThe Electoral College is by far a democratic way of selecting a president. For example,when you go to the assigned palce to vote in your area,you vote for a slate of electors. See, its the electors who vote for the president not the people. How in any way is that democratic? And, have you ever brought to thought the possibility that the winner of the electoral vote will not achieve the national popular vote. It happened in 2000 what's stopping it from happening now?\n\nWe should not keep the process of the Electoral College. The winner take all approach is just a crumb from this totally unfair and biased system. And,this system is galaxies away from being democratic in any way. So,how about we give the people what they deserve by terminating the Electoral College.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, newspaper and television are considered to be traditional information source. Unfortunately, these days they lack their popularity for youths, who are less interested in these types of media. In this essay, I will explain the reasons behind this problem as well as some solutions that can be taken to solve it.\r\n\r\nAs it’s widely known from ancient ages, you’re there where your attention is. So, a lot of young people chose to avoid traditional sources of information and attached their points of interest to computer screens and mobile devices. You do not need to wait for every-hour news on TV anymore, but now you can get this news any time and from different points of view. This way news are not so interesting any more, because you’re not waiting for it with some attention, and your people are selecting more thematic materials related to their hobbies, art, music or even computer games.\r\n\r\nThe only way, I can imagine in attracting young people back into the world's news flow, is making news available via Internet in a very nice format without advertisement ads but with quality content. Older generations also can try to share benefits of traditional newspapers versus the electronic format of news, but there is few only available, like you can read it offline without electricity and make your eyes more relaxed. In other words, we can conclude that electronic mass media already won the battle for young brains and new generation is definitely choosing Internet versus TV.\r\n\r\nAnyway, it's still quite common to exchange info regarding main news via any available channels. This way the electronic version of a newspaper may be used as a proven source of information and shared by teenagers to their friends easily. If news agencies will keep working hard on providing actual information and create high attractive news brand for youngsters then they will follow it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez creates heartwarming comforting mood readers First see comforting mood established setting Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home CAPS This creatively loving setting gives reader sense comfort reading piece Next see sense heartwarming coming Rodriguez s word choice way express gratitude spirit generosity impressed upon early age CAPS This rich vivid word choice sets caring mood piece Lastly family s background started somewhat bitter depressing Rodriguez explains financial instability later see family moving finding comfort new home My parents always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would us CAPS This sense family contributes heart warming mood created Narciso Rodriguez memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Books movies magazines music etc make huge part entertainment system lives today Whether informational purely entertainment many forms entertainment found local library today whereas past libraries contained books Although entertainment today much different back much different future In today s society books magazines music movies found local library contain many different types material Some material could informational solar system human body Other material could fiction story filled action horror love Some material could also filled true life changing inspritaional storries Which ever types things come offensive people others apporpriate younger ages Certain books movies magaizines music ect containing offensive inappropriate rude material nt banned libraries younger adults read becuase dislike material believe material belong library Generally libraries quite large organized various sections throughout building One area might fiction books another nonfiction books another area could childrens books another magazines movies music ect based different types genres Simply materials read adults children teens Take books contain offensive material inappropriate younger adults place divided section library When book section checked merely ask person checking book make sure age This also apply movies magazines music placed section Some materials found libraries offensive one person offensive others Taking offensive materials library wo nt benefit everyone disappoint people nt find material offensive Placing certain materials section best way go benefit everyone As see one person find certain material magazines books music movies ect offensive rude inappropriate nt mean everyone else It also nt mean completely take get rid materials found contain offensive innapropraite material Dividing specific materials section regulating check really best way go It benefits everyone best want read material still go library check book magazine wish anything certain material nt worry finding material offensive inappropriate divided section", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is it not a driveless car severily a lot dangerous than a regular car. I believe that a person might or will lose control of the car. My point is that Google cars might cause more deaths, injuries and crashes.\n\nWhen i say there will be more imjuries is that a person might lose control of his/her car. If there is an accident involving the companies car. It's obvious that the driver will be at fault. My point here is that its actually the companies fault because they didnt constructed a more safer car. Plus, when people smoke or use his/her phone it might cause and accident.\n\nIt will also, be dangerous when a teenager drivers. Those kids will drive while they are drunk and wont even notice that the car stopped driving. When teenagers or probably even adults don't like to listen to nobody. What if they dont put their sit-belt on and they don't have any idea that the car stopped driving what will happen to them. Google cars are the same as regular cars only because Google cars are smarter does not mean they wont cause accidents.\n\nImagine a Google car actually causing more deaths than we already have. We can't have that happening. Many family wouldn't want their kid or grandson dead. Maybe im over exagerating or maybe i'm not. We all want the car accidents to stop, but in reality we are not.\n\nIn conclusion, the company should re-work on the car and make it ten times better than it is now. We want to feel like our kids from the future will not die on a car accident or cause someone else's death.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "with social media becoming more popular, the public focus on the money and social status of celebrities rather than their achievements. it is widely believed that it would set a bad model for teenagers. I am inclined with this statement.\n\nto begin with, one of the main arguments in its favour is that it makes bad behaviour for teenagers only empathizing with the success of superstars. there is a growing tendency that some superstars nowadays either show off their belongings such as taking photos with their supercars or showing how vast their houses are, which is known as Shaq O'neal. however, young adults seldom realize the fact that how can these well-known people become successful. most teenagers possibly ignored the struggle period of these people before they are successful. they spent their time and spirits on their businesses to get these achievements. for instance, one of my friends, Kevin, always tells me how rich those superstars are and he is keen on being as wealthy as them. by contrast, he doesn't do anything to pursue his dream, he just lives in sedentary lifestyle and plays computer for a whole day. these indicate that people's focus on the wealth of celebrities indeed brings some negative effects.\n\napart from this, there are some actresses which become wealthy by married businessmen. some young adults would imitate terrible behaviours to get a better social status. it is extensively convinced that these kinds of behaviours could set a bad model for youngsters.\n\nto sum up, young adults empathising with celebrities' social status truly brings a detrimental impact on them, while they can learn about their spirits of hard-working.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience important house My mother always says able patient succed anything One time I home computer I surfing web enjoying My mom yelled across house come see I got chair Walked kitchen hallway bedroom She said go get groceries She wondering I wanted go I said asked would make sanawich She replied yes left While gone I cleared room Folder laundry watched television It still wasnt home I hungry beginning become worried I tempted call I remembered always says patient succed About half hour got home She bought lunch meat I could make sandwich While I eating told proud patient I gone I think patience important I also think everyone could use little", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Young individuals working on a volunteer basis is thought to benefit both themselves and the community as a whole. Although I strongly approve of the former statement, I disagree that every teenager should be forced to do unpaid work.\r\n\r\nMost young volunteers can benefit from doing community work without pay in their spare time, as this work can help them take control of their free time and do exercise after strenuous hours of studying. Teenagers can utilize the time to make improvement to their society as well as relax by doing physical work, instead of just staying at home watching TV or playing video games. Moreover, the local community can take advantage of the free labour force and use the wage budget for better purposes, for example, equipping new facilities for the area.\r\n\r\nHowever, I believe it is up to the teenagers themselves to decide what to do in their leisure time, without any enforcement from adults. Despite the clear benefit of this arrangement, doing this would likely cause resentment among teenagers as they would feel they are being used. From a moral perspective, other people have no rights to obligate and use teenager’s time and effort against their will and consent, and no one should be compelled to do volunteer work. It would be more meaningful if teenagers are willing to take up the work, not by anyone’s telling them to do.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others in their community, but in my opinion, we should not make this compulsory.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Young people in some countries are encouraged to take one gap year to work or travel abroad between their high school and university studies. This essay will discuss both of the benefits and drawbacks of the experiences of one year adventure in foreign countries for young people.\nTo start with, there are several advantages to this adventure abroad. Firstly, young people can meet people from different cultures, beliefs, and ages, and broaden their thoughts and experiences of the world. For instance, they may have cultural shock and reflect their own views and values about life and the world. In this way, they may become more open-minded and tolerant of different people and cultures. Secondly, they can make friends with people in other countries and broaden their social networks. This can become long-term friendships and they can gain a global perspective of the world. This is not only beneficial for themselves, but it can also benefit their societies and countries in long run as well.\nHowever, there are also potential drawbacks to this journey. First and foremost, they can encounter some dangerous situations, such as being scammed, robbed, and even physically harmed. Numerous reports in the media about unfortunate cases that young people in foreign countries being kidnapped, forced to consume or sell drugs, and even being killed. It could be dangerous for them if they meet local gangster bands and have no one to rescue them. Therefore, it is essential that young people take precautions to keep their safety while abroad.\nTo sum up, although there are potential risks in the one-year journey, the advantages of broadening their horizons of thoughts, becoming open-minded, and experiences of forming new friendships with people in other countries could outweigh the disadvantages if the young people take measures for their safety while abroad.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Marcia Amidon lusted theres alot problems trying add dock dirigibles top One problem obstacle safety dirigible dirigibles outside United States use hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly inflammable NUM Another obstacle nature The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents NUM The last problem existing law aganist airships flying low cities urban areas This law would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach area NUM These three reasons excerpt The mooring marcia Amidon lusted alot problems trying add dock drigibles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author chose conclude story like shes saying isnt shes going take test In story Saeng says I I failed test shes determined go back flower blooms get things right", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a widely held perception in many parts of the world nowadays that children should watch TV set. Although some people strongly agree with this trend because of negative effects, I still believe that television is a tool that helps them to learn and relax on a daily basis.\r\nThere are a myriad of reasons why people might argue that TV set is harmful for children. Firstly, since it could affect their health seriously. In fact, TV set contains a range of amusing shows, movies and music at disposal that attract to them and make them being glued to the screen. As a result, their vision would be decreased and cause some eye diseases. Additionally, if they excessively watch, it will lead to bad studying results. For example, one child addicts to watch TV set, he does not have enough time to learn, or even he does not finish his homework. Thus, he might give bad results from school and he could not keep up with his friends while he focuses on watching TV day-to-day.\r\nBy contrast, besides some negative effects that mentioned above, TV set is the wonderful equipment for young people. It is clear that the first positive effect could be educated. By containing a widely of educational shows, namely who is the millionaire, Olympia that helps them widen their knowledge about many domains in life. Myself, for example, when I was a student at secondary school, I watched Olympia a lot and I could learn some practical knowledge about literature and history, which gave me the chance to understand about all subjects at school. Another advantage of watching video is relaxing. Through watching it, children could be chilled out after a long studying and working day. This means that they have ability to enjoy some films, music that make them relieve stress and feel better.\r\nIn conclusion, many argue that video has lots of disadvantages, whereas I still think that it contains a myriad of benefits. However, it is not unnecessary for them to realize the pros and cons of watching videos and control their actions to achieve their goals in life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that this technology has no value to it. There is nothing that this techlology could help us in any way. I feel like this technology would be a good way to enjoy oneself rather than help us with more greater problems.\n\nIn the article, it says the way the face recognition would work would be to scan your face and it would be able to tell if your sad or happy. For instance, an example from the article says if your watching an ad and you make a sad expression, the technology would recognize your emotion and change the ad to something that would suit you. This technology could be used more as an entertainment purpose than a learning tool. This would not help us in any way of learning and it will not help us benifit anything from it.\n\nIn conclusion, this technology has no purpose in helping people. Its purpose is to recognize human emotions and help by atempting to change the emotion of a person or leave it the same. I believe that this technology is useless and will not be helpful to anyone.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have various views about whether attending to universities or colleges is the best way to get a successful job, while I do believe that people would be less likely to live a better quality of life without receiving a higher education.\n\nI believe that the young people could tend to find a successful career, if they study at universities or colleges. A variety of jobs might require applicants with specific qualifications, and only at the higher education institutions can students learn these knowledge and gain valuable skills. For example, if people choose to become a doctor, they would have to equip themselves with medical knowledge and skills. They could only aquire these relative skills from a medical school. Students could benefit from the higher education, and they might also find a easier way to get successed through it.\n\nIf high school students get a job straight after schools, they could be less competitive than those with college certifications. They could only apply for the job limited to less qualified, like cleaning jobs. Comparing with the salary of high qualified jobs, the salary of less qualified jobs are relatively lower. It would be difficult to live a better quality of life with a lower salary in the society of high consumption. \n\nIn conclusion, some people believe that to get a better job might require higher education and, higher educated people would be easier to get a better job, and I do agree with this point of view.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author created memoir united caring loving The authour combining moods together memories write memoir memoir memories family etc A reason author created moods home family live s together hold memories together shows loving For example memoir Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home Which obviously mood loving loving family together A second reason author created mood place author lived many different people different places Even though werent acted family united For example neighborhood despite customs elsewhere cultures came together great solidarity friendship means even though different going one another united A third reason author created moods author s parent s werent caring others also like children For example They come selflessly many immagrants give children better life Which means parent werent caring abalt future son The whole story based home family thing home family always share love caring unity one another", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While it is incredible that Prof. Thomas Huang has developed this mechanism to read anyone's emotions, it should not be implemented in the classroom. As humans, we have the basic right to freedom of speech which allows us to speak our opinions, but it also allows us to keep some things to ourself, and that includes our emotions.\n\nSome peole are better at reading emotions and body language than others, and nobody can do anything about that. But sometimes students conceal emotions from teachers for reasons, and sometimes kids just want to figure out how to perform tasks on their own. If a student is taking an online course and appears confused, it's best to let them decide whether or not they need to be taught more about the subject or it they are jsut struggling with a certain aspect of it. Also, if a student's face is 45% concentrated and 55% confused, they may not want the computer to bombard them with a lesson and break their concentration, which would end up frustrating the student. In paragraph 6, the author says, \"Imagine a computer that knows when you’re happy or sad.\" While it could be beneficial for a computer to know what emotions the students in the lesson are feeling, what would it do if the student was overwhelmed by emotions that weren't related to the lesson at hand? Woult the computer be able to decipher what emotions were related to the lesson and which were just carried over from their home life or other things?\n\nIn paragaph 6, the author says, \"Imagine a computer that knows when you’re happy or sad. For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" there are already many people who are against the idea of personalized ads, and think they are an invasion of privacy. Imagine a computer almost reading your mind to get ads best for you, I personally can't remember the last time I smiled at an advertisement, even if it was for something I wanted. I've always seen ads as an interuption of the task at hand, and the last thing I want is for an ad to break my concentration with something that I want while I am doing something productive.\n\nIn paragraph 7, the author explains that while this technology is out there, it will likely not be available anytime in the near future, \"Your home PC can’t handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa’s smile.\" Even though this technology will likely not be implemented into classrooms for a while, it is still worth discussing whether it ever should.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many Libraries today limits put shelves Yes offensive material world artists triing make name If start controlling others thoughts feelings artist ability get culture rapidly expanding Libraries right censor material One way appeal everyones demands would divide library two major sections childrens adults could contiue dividing sections Doing would costeffective adding age limit adult section noisy children could get would nice It would help making finding book easier finding right book Censorship defined taking paticular item thats either offensive certain group banned If someone took statue peices work wouldnt get would today If take material never know could go lead someone Censorship holds back many artists true potential Limiting someones knowledge could hurt persons chance becoming something world I read many books offensive ways books knowledge intelligence difference Many things interest different people The author Katherine Paterson s quote explains well someone right remove book shelf everyone right remove material shelve would books left Censoring something hurts person created hurts everyone else Libraries censorship material Censoring material hurts everyones yearn open mind better understanding something As Katherine Paterson s quote goes All us think book hope none children children taken shelf But I right remove book shelf that work I abhor also exactly right everyone else And books left shelf us explains one person right take material shelf everyone else right Censorship shouldnt libraries", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For years, space has fascinated humans. The idea that there could be life on other planets, as well as the challenge of exploring as much of the universe as possible, has been one that has excited everyone from top physicists, to the youngest child playing with her space ship toys. But is the money spent on exploration of the universe justified or should it rather be allocated to helping those on this planet? I believe that space exploration is justified. In this essay, the motivation for space exploration will be explored.\nPlanet Earth is ill. Humans have polluted the planet and destroying natural resources. Some might argue that the damage is irreparable. Global warming is causing the Earth's temperature to steadily rise. There is a possibility that in the next few centuries, the planet may become inhabitable. Scientists like Elon Musk have recognised the dire situation that the Earth is in, and have started looking for an alternative new home planet. It is possible that in the coming years, there will be no other option than to move to a planet like Mars. Therefore, the costs involved in exploring this planet are justified, if it is to house the entire human race.\nSpace exploration also allows for new discoveries. New minerals or compounds could be discovered on distant planets. These could possibly be used on Earth in various new technologies, or even in medical science to treat illness or disease. This could be invaluable to humankind.\nSince the dawn of the human race, a characteristic that separates us from our animal relatives, is our ability to tinker with existing knowledge, as well as learn new things. It has lead to humans becoming the dominant force on the planet. New ideas prevent us from becoming stagnant, thus driving progress. If we continue to learn new things from space exploration, we prevent stagnation.\nLastly, the idea that there could be life on other planets is one that has merit, in my opinion. Humans cannot be so arrogant to think that there is no other life in the universe.\nIn conclusion, it can be argued that space exploration does not hold merit and should be discontinued. But the benefits that it offers outweigh the shortcomings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College was a compromise made by our founding fathers. It was made as a compromise between the election of a president through a vote from Congress and election through popular vote. The downside to this way of election is that the voters are not voting for one of the candidates but for their state electors, who then vote for the president. The votes from each of the states electors then count as votes for the candidate. This way of election for a president is unfair and confusing and should be changed.\n\nFirst off, the Electoral College is unfair in the way that a vote from an individual does not really count because the only votes that really count are the ones from the Electoral College. It is also unfair that the voters cannot always choose who they want thier electors to be. There are also voters who have no hope just because of the state they live in, such as Democrars in Texas or Republicans in California. Since they know that thier vote doesnt matter in a state whose majority of the population goes fot the opposing party. Thsi is one reason why individual votes are more reasonable and fair.\n\nSecondly, the Electoral College is very confusing for a voter who doesnt know how it works.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What opinion reading materials Should people able read want limit read Every library different choices They say ca nt get without adult let check take home I read many different things lifetime far I read books people told appropriate nothing bad Most books even say one two choice words turns adult book I think reader handle book Everyone reacts things differently Let s take people age group example boys still immature think funny act Those kind people handle call adult material books Most girls stage maturing still immature working way scale They would able handle something adult material category The reader smart enough know handle If take peoples choice away going You would make feel like babysat take parents library say hey mommy daddy pick book I eighteen pick one I would like Being one reads lot I know family pretty busy would able find time ride pick book Therefore would able read much I mean think Which side would choose Everything personal opinion It reader comfortable Do want decide one every step way Some people busy even try fit schdule go library Others want freedom read want read Why stop one getting smarter A child learn challenging Why let challenge good book got pick What think", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke bomberger was a seagoing cowboy in the story- A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves. Luke had some amazing adventures a a seagoing cowboy, he saw and did many things. I am going to show you how neat seagoing can be. The things that are fun about seagoing cowboy activites are the sightseeing, the places you can visit, and serving your country.\n\nAs a seagoing cowboy, you can see many different things. You can see buildings like the statue of liberty. You can see different oceans and landscapes like the Atlantic ocean and the rocky mountains. You can see and meet different people like the president of the United States.\n\nYou can also visit different places as a seagoing cowboy. You could stop at different restraunts like an Ihop on the edge of the ocean. You could walk in a cand store and walk out with a package of m&m's. Or you can visit some national monuments like Mount Rushmore.\n\nAs a seagoing cowboy you can serve your own country. You can tend to different animals like pigs and cows. You can carry supplies like artillery or food. You can transport people and soldiers to where they need to go.\n\nHelping your country, sightseeing, and the places you can visit are all good reasons why you can concider being a seagoing cowboy. You have seen how fun it can be. Think it over, it might just be the job for you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt builders many obstacles could dock dirigibles top Empire State Building The first problem high winds The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents NUM This problem winds could cause dirigibles crash building releasing s gases The second obstacle faced making building structure strong enough tie dirigibles The steel frame Empire State Building would modifyed strengthened accommodate new situation NUM This problem strengthen steel dirigibles would weaken building s structure Those main two obstacles builders faced building Empire State Building could dock dirigibles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It would be a good thing to be able to read people emotions because you never know how someone feels. But what if you have no emotion to a topic? Can it read your emotions then?\n\nThe Facial Coding System detect what your emotions are. The FCS can determine if you are happy, sad, angry, etc.. The ways it can tell is by your 44 major muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an \"action unit.\" Dr. Paul Eckman, a psychologist creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System). Classify six basic emotions which is associated with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. Even though people show vary degrees of expression such as not smiling it gets compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion) your emotions can still get detected. It's all about the \"action units.\"\n\nSo my questions have been answered. You can still see even with no emotion (a still face) that emotions still get detected. All because of one computer software.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nWe should abolish the electoral college. It nakes voting unfair and is dangerous to the American society. It corrupts the soul of all Americans and makes people unhappy. If we want our society to live, we should end the electoral college.\n\nThe electoral college is extremely biased on the canditates and the voters have only a miniscule chance to elect the right voter. The chance is so miniscule that even an atom couldn't fit through it. On the counterclaim that it could be a tie, which has a higher percentage rate to tie, all of America, or 0.00000001% of the population of America? The canditates dont even focus on the states that aren't swing states, such as Wyoming or Alaska. If a president is from California, he/she already has 20% of the vote in his/her pocket. To make things worse, half of the states are not even into the campaign, voting canditates \"they\" think is best, not voting the canditates their state thinks is best.\n\nTo top it off, people are just so wooed by the canditate's ad, or their wealth, or their eyes, that they don't stop to think what the canditate could do for them. Just two years ago, I found myself talking to a women who needed Obamacare for her ill son, yet she was going to vote for Romney. People are just too dazzled by how things may seem, when it's just a huge marketing scam.\n\nA large state gets more attention than a smaller state does... Is that what we really want in our country? After all these years of black equality and women's rights, we have decided to just completely ruin our entire form of government by being prejuice to other states. Yes, they may have a lesser population, but that doesn't mean anything. It just means that we are not giving people the right of suffrage.\n\nApparently, the electoral college elects a \"clear winner\", when the popular vote coiuld do that just fine on its own. Why do you think we have voting day for? I'm sure its so that the president that they didn't vote for was chosen by the elctoral college. Here's some logic, lets choose a selected number of people to vote for president instead of all of America. Isn't that a great idea.\n\n\"Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election....\" Really, is that why people vote? So you are saying that people vote just because they prefer, or like, the person other another candidate. So going back to my earlier point, people are just so amazed at their \"something\", that they just decide to take the effort to vote for them. No, people, that's not why, it's because they think they can make a change in the everyday world.\n\nLadies and gentlemen, it's all a game of cruel manipulation, Republicans manipulating the government so they get less taxes, Democrats manipulating the government to achieve free healthcare. It's a dangerous game, but the puppeteer who pulls the strings better than the last is the one who always wins.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph show readers knocked going get back take test This also good way end story shows determined pass test wont give anything pass", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "ORGANIZATION people types genres books music movies etc like well nt like Meaning like forces read listen anything nt want Books music entertaining things dont like nt deal I feel neccessary books removed shelves someone gotten offended You told must read book nt company author s fault rented book felt insulted Most likely directing story towards get worked something happen take media You chose Why make company lose investment something could easily taken care simply taking back got I read books listened songs seen lots movies nt best interest I nt make stop saling m pretty sure someone likes Why stop someone elses enjoyment uninterest It s really neccesary And s problem world today people take little situations big catastraphy reason If nt like nt get People need put feet company s shoes realize would understand Books magazines music movies etc made everyone world make entertainment interested Taking shelves would unnessecary person nt like People different opinions life s makes every indiviual different one another So ruin people s fun get want As I stated neccessary remove item shelves someone taken offense something It s company s fault simply nt buy take back Things would much better Get items best fits leave others nt shelves", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"Face on Mars\", has caused a lot of conspiracy between people and their opinions. The \"Face\" is a huge mass on the planet Mars and was shown to the public through pictures on the internet. Many people believe that the mass is just a natural lanform and has been there forever. Others believe that the mass was created by aliens a long time ago. But the only evidence to prove the theories are the pictures taken in space by the Viking 1 and MGS. Here are some reasons that the mass on Mars is just a natural landfrom.\n\nThe first reason that the mass on Mars is just a natural lanform is because the mass was found in a region on Mars called Cydonia. Cydonia is region known for landforms. The ariticle states there have already been many findings of large land masses near the same spot in Cydonia, so why would this be something different. Also, many scientist believed that it was just another landformation, and very few thought it was from aliens.\n\nThe second reason the mass on Mars is just a natural landform is becuase the second picture taken of the mass still showed that the mass was a landform. The article states that the picture taken by the MGS in 1998 was ten times sharper than the one taken by the Vinking 1 in 1976 and still showed just a natural lanform. Also, in the frist and second picure taken, you can almost make out markings from a face, but in the last photo taken there were no facial markings at all.\n\nThe third reason that the mass on Mars is just a natural lanform is that the imaging tools they used to get the picture, are not made for close up picture taking. The article states that the MGS is a mapping spacecraft that normally looks straight down and scans the planet and it takes awhile to pass over the Face.\n\nLastly, the third picture taken acually shows that the \"Face on Mars\" was just a natural landform. The article states that the picture showed a \"Martian equivalent of a buttle or messa in the American West.\"\n\nSo as you can see, the \"Face on Mars\" is just a natural landform and was not created by aliens. It was found in Cydonia, the second picture results, and the mapping spacecraft are all supportive reasons to prove this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Will this technology be of any value in the classroom? This technology seems cool and all but will it really help? If this technology can read facial expressions then it could be a good thing but this is why it would not help.\n\nWhen you are in school do you ever feel bored? We all do sometimes that is just how things work. Now do you think that if our computers could tell if we were bored that it would make the lesson any more exciting. The lessons that we are taugh are mostly given to the teachers or the teachers make it. If our computers think that we are bored of the lesson it wants to change that. How does that happen? The teahcer would have to make more than one lesson to teach the class. There are also things that are just completely boring at school there can not be a way to make them any better.\n\nThen there is also one or two good things about it like if it were able to detecte if someone were not feeling very good about themselves. They might need help but not come out and say it, this technology could help with that. If you put this in a school you would just get a lot of stressed out faces that have to much homework to do while still trying to have a life. But is this taking things to far is this a violation of peoples personal space. Sometimes people want to keep their emotions to themselves. If this technology is used in schools then there goes all privacy that we have.\n\nThis might be a good idea for advancement in technology, but is it the right thing to put in schools? This technology seems pretty cool it could be used in other places but should not be somewhere like a school. This would just be one more thing that makes school not a fun place to be in. There are some lines that do not need to be crossed and this is one of them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus, the second planet closest to the sun; scientists speculate it have once had life just like our planet earth. The author supports the idea to pursuit studying the planet Venus despite all the dangers. If we decide to study Venus we can find out what type of life the planet once had, solar power would be valuable to use and we could even find a way to live on the planet.\n\nVenus, earth's sister planet is currently inhospitable for humans. but in paragraph 6 it says, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" Venus would have at one point in time had life living on it. That is why Astronomers are interested in studying it to learn what type of life lived on Venus and why they are gone. The author is intrigued by his imagination to know what type of creatures or plants that once belonged to this planet but are now gone due to the extreme weather conditions.\n\nThe hot fiery climate on Venus can also be incredibly useful. Using it for solar power could change the way we use energy completly. Venus being the hottest planet in the solar system paragraph 3 it states, \"On the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\" using solar power on venus would be important for Earth since its a renewable source and Earth runs on mostly unrenewable sources which will one day disappear off the face of the earth.\n\nIn paragraph 5, the author states that NASA has an idea for sending humans to study Venus. Using a vehicle similar to a blimp it would hover the planet 30 miles above the surface. With this idea temperatures would drop drastically toa a whopping 170 degrees fahrenheit. Air pressure and radiation levels would be similar to earth conditions making it survivable for humans. The author includes this because he wants to make it clesr that exploration on venus is possible. Innovation is key to exploring new places outside of our reach.\n\nThe author supports his claim on exploring Venus despite the risks it could cause. He does so by stating positive effects of exploration throughout the text. Exploration of our sister planet Venus is vital to human survival. With global warming, extinction, and unrenewable resources we need to find a suitable planet to get materials and maybe even call home.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars should be developed and permited. If more car companies would form and release this idea of driverless cars that would be one less problem people would have to worry about, because everyone would save much more money than they usualy do, and people without cars wouldn't have to worry about getting places. Even though Google has already had cars that could drive by themselves they were not all the way driverless. Human would have to take over when the cars couldn't do what humans can.\n\nThe law specificly says that cars are only safe when a human driver is at full control of the vehicle at all times. The law needs to lighten up and approve of driverless cars because it would help everyone all for the better. It will also make us more advanced by discovering new things with better technology. In a few years of so more and more states will have accepted the idea of autonomous cars, laws are going to be changed, and everything will work out just fine.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggests that studying Venus is worth trying to study despite the dangers it presents. Venus is a planet close to Earth that is still wanted to be studied because imformation is yet to be discovered. Venus damages the technology that is sent there but still has vaulable imformation and is believed that we have the technology to keep the monitors there longer. Studying Venus is still worth the damages it provides to the technology being sent there.\n\nVenus was believed to once be alike to Earth and there is proof on Venus for us to find. In the article it states,\" Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" Scientists say that there was once life on Venus as there was on Earth and that there are still vaulable imformation for us to find. Also in the article it states,\" Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported varius forms of life...\" For us to find out how Venus had forms of life, technology should be launced so that we are able to provide evidence on how Venus provided life.\n\nVenus still has some features alike to Earth. The article states,\" The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" The surface of Venus is said to be alike Earth despite the dangers Venus has. Also in text,\"... Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\" Venus is wanted to be visited so that scientist have more knowlege on how the conditions is like.\n\nThe past two paragraph are about why Venus should be visited despite the dangers. But yet to be said how the technology can survive Venus. The pressure is about 90 times more than what humans experience on Earth, so how will our technology survive? The article states,\" ...some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" Scientist have been preparing and trying to improve the technology so it is able to handle the conditions. Also in the text,\"... looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers...The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all.\" Old technology from the 1800s and 1900s are stronger than the newer technology because newer technology tend to be more delicate when in extreme conditions.\n\nStudying Venus is still worth the damages it provides to technology being sent there. Scientist working on stronger technology may help us discover more on Venus. So, the author supports that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers that is done. The travels beyond Earth should not be limited by dangers that is thrown to human technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Businesses have a huge role they pray in the community such that apart from making a profit,they also have a public responsibility.In my opinion, i fully agree with the statement that business has to attend to social needs in the community and paying of taxes which support the government in building the society.\r\n\r\nFirstly,projects are part-and-parcel of community activity as they help in discovering talents through the involvement of games and show solidarity with the member of the society,Moreover this a way of building confidentiality with the society and strengthening the security of the business where they also utilize that opportunity to advertise for their products which increase their sales .For example,Kenyatta University host the largest Africa games in the year 2022.Therefore,businesses are such an imperative project in the community because society looks up to them for growth apart from making money.\r\n\r\nSecondly,businesses pay taxes hence making a profit is indispensable as the government has a policy for entrepreneurs that they have a cut that is submitted to the government.Moreover,these collected taxes facilitate in bulding the society.For example,infrastructure and water projects have currently been implemented in the villages through a member of parliament.Therefore,institutions must make a profit because they have a role to meet the need of the society and for the purposes of the growth of the projects themself and survival.\r\n\r\nTo sum up,the corporation has a duty toward the society not only to make money but also to help members of the society discover talents through social activities.Notwithstanding, they support the government through collected tax from entrepreneurs which build up the society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this essay I am going to be talking about an article called, \"Making Mona\n\nLisa Smile. So some college professors have come up up with new new technology that can identify human emotions. This new technology is called the facial action coding system, and I am all for this technology.\n\nI believe that this new technology is a great idea going for foward into the future. Tons of people see older paintings or whatever it may be and not know the person's true emotion. Also just in general, something now in modern time, it could be anything or anyone that you can see their emotions. This new technology has answered a question that some people have been wanting to know, what is the expression on Mona Lisa's face and will we ever find out. The facial action coding system has shown and proven that her expression and emotions are accurate, the text says, \"83% happy, 9% distugusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry.\". This is a great new technology and I can't wait until they go into further depth of what this invention can really go and break stuff down all the way.\n\nIn conclusion, this new technology is going to be really big and everyone is going to want it. They should start and be thinking about making more and selling them to the economy. Starting with the Mona Lisa picture is a good start, because that's a picture that nobody really knew what her true emotions were at that time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe computers good effects people Computers allow people stay touch long distance friends family Computers games kids help learn also people learn new things My first reason computers allow people stay touch If someone family live long distance could always use emails talk That way wont lose Also sometimes friends move away always want keep touch Another thing want send photos use email Also thru mail takes forever Please let people stay touch My second reason computers games kids play The games kids play could help learn Sometimes watching tv nt help If acutually play game see got smarter That s want kids right Also kids fun playing games Do really want take learning experience away My third reason computers help people learn new things Like could go computer learn s happening world People learn new words never knew Also pictures computer help For example someone traveling somewhere nt know price They get computer check right So conclusion I believe computers good use They help people stay touch help kids learn playing games help people learn new things world So I m saying please keep computers They waste time Turst", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes school should have technology to read sudetnts emotional expressions. Why? Because if they do they can help with so many problems it may also prevent fights from happening.\n\nNow some people may say that this is a breach in students privec but just imangin all the harm we can prevent from happeing if schools do invole this into thery system. Teachers and faculty members can be able to tell if a student is going throug a hard time and can help them, they can also see if studetns where to fight and be able to keep them apart from one another. Also having this system may eaven stop school shootings. If schools where to have this they can see if studetns are about to hurt a lot of students and faulcaty but will be able to add extra securtity,and police and get the student the help that they need.\n\nSo in conclusion do i think that people shold use this syestom to protect schools and helpl students? Yes because if we do we can stop having to worry about childern going to school with out having to worry about if they will see them again. So these are the main reason why schools should to help protect our futor in our kids and have them live in a better world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The facial action coding system has many promising applications, Mona Lisa has 83% of happiness 9% disgust 6% fearful and 2% ssanger. According to some new computer software that can reconize emotion the sofware is the latest innovation from prof. Thomas Huang, of the beckman institute for advanced science at the unversity of amsterdam. The process begins when the computar constructs a 3-D computar model of the face: All 44 mayjor muscles in the model must move like human muscles movement of one or more muscles in the model is called an \"action unit\" then Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologist, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS. Eckman has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness and then associated each with characteristics movements of the facial muscle. I think i like the new technology that the person invented it can detect your emotins and feelings. And i doubt others can invent something like that", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many different characteristics setting determine outcome event Im story Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit cyclists journey affected weather relouded things The heat extreme thing showed cases detened reading maximum level ability Also time labes place greatly affects cyclist Lastly type road amount ground cover affects performance Overall setting determining factor journey life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As understand benefits laughter realize cant live without Its one things always going us tough times joy life So people say Laughter shortest distance two people well right You think anything want want know best laughter world comes boy fallen It started softball tournament bend Our team drove weekend play tournament stayed inn hotel Which nice way probably nice team end destroying place like bunch football players locker room hence hard practices After practice go ahead swim pool even know big game next day The hotel two big pools one outside one inside sauna We go inside pool way cold outside Then everything little different My friend I go sauna swimming relax talk bit After two boys age enter sauna still They acted nervous shy sat started talking us kind awkward doubt When comes boys I m shy speak mind ask hell sitting pretending mind business know fact s We talk laugh bit got know One extremely adorable hit well It got later time us head back rooms say good bye ever Me shared room parents I know idea gave number guy kind liked sauna About ten minutes later get text saying meet outside walk around So amused got excited snuck room All walk around hotel talk barefooted cute I never laughed hard life He made smile feel like could concore everything came way About forty five minutes past still gazing others eyes feeling like second His friend sees someone walking hotel room realizes mom They bolt saying goodbyes last second kisses cheek farewell Never life experienced something exciting fun understand importance laughter Knowing would never see kills He lives live How could anything possibly happen us Maybe day meet Maybe someday would able talk like maybe fall love All maybe s came true fallowed right waited Now sense happened ponder relate laughter effected life That brought us together I m happy could happen quick young life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The human body has many different emotions ranging from happiness, sadness beng angry and more. Students in school have many mixed emotions that they can cover up to make them look how they don't feel. If teachers knew how they really felt, they could help student's performance in class and in thir lives outside of school. Dr. Huang and other scientists have developed new software to determine peoples emotions by scanning their face even if they have a fake smile. This software would be helpful in classrooms.\n\nThis technology would be great to put into classrooms. Students have many different emotions during the school year that can lead to very bad outcomes. It is often hard to determine how they are feeling because they are good at hiding their emotions. This new software can tell if a student is getting bored during class and losing their focus and it can tell if they are very sad so that the teacher can help that student. If the student are getting bored then the teacher will know what to do to engage teir minds in the lesson that he/she is teaching so that they can retain the imformation that that are given. Also, this software could help techers let parents of the students know if they are being sad all the time so that they can get help for the future of the student.\n\nIn conclusion, students are good at hiding their true emotions and need help so thet they can pay attention in class. Also, when students get bored and start losing their focus, it is good for the teacher to know so that they can engage the class better and keep the students attentative during class. The software would be very helpful in classrooms for the better of students and their grades.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear President of the United States,\n\nI think you should change the whole \"\n\nElectoral Collage\n\n\" and have election by a popular vote instead. It would make much more scence instead of the whole Congress blah, blah, blah, and stuff. I mean I know that this was created by our Founding Fathers and should show respect, but popular voting won't take as long and much faster too. It states that in the article on paragraph 3, the first sentence , \"\n\nThe Electoral College consists on of 538 electors\n\n\". Thats a lot of people. But when people try to vote for you, they are actually voting for the candidate's electors.\n\n\"\n\nUnder the Electoral Collage System, when voters vote not for the president, but for the slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. If you lived in texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for [John] Kerry, you'd vote for the slate of 34 Democratic electores pleged to Kerry\n\n\" (\n\nPar. #10, Sent. #1-2).\n\n\"\n\nThe Electoral College is what we might call a disastor factor. The American people should be lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in the century; the system allows much worse\n\n\" (\n\nPar. #11, Sent. #1-2\n\n). That is why I suggest making a popular vote in stead.\n\nSincerely ,\n\nPROPER_NAME\n\n.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today I am here to argue my point that the Face on Mars is a natural landform.\n\nThe Face was discovered 40 years ago when NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was the circling Mars looking for an area to land its sister ship Viking 2. The region that the Face was found in is called Cydonia.\n\nI, along with many others agree that the Face is just another Martian mesa. This means that the Face isn't actually an alien artifact. This also means that the Face was just a myth or that natural things made this mountain/hill look unnatural. To support my claim, I have a detail from the text, \" Scientists figured it was just another Martian messa, common enough around Cyndonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh\". I believe that the Face on Mars was just a natural landform that some people thought looked different. Evidence to support this belief shows that on April 5, 1998 Micahel Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team took a picture of the Face. This picture was 10 times sharper and clearer than the original photo tooken on the Viking 1 in 1976. This photograh proved that the Face was just a natural landform.\n\nOn April 8, 2001, a Mar Global Surveyor took another look at what had been thought of as an alien artifact. Another picture of the Face was taken that day. This picture provided pixels spanning 1.56 meters per pixel compared to the 43 meters per pixel image taken in 1976. With the pixels in the camera being this clear, you would be able to tell if there were objects such as aliens or small houses in the photo. Garvin added this proof to his statement in 2001, \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size. So if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground of Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were\".\n\nSo in conclusion, I believe that the Face on Mars is just a natural landform. With the claims and evidence I have provided here, I believe that it should be very easy to see now that the Face is not an alien artifact and is a regular landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author states that Venus may have been like Earth at one point. Venus may have evidence on the surface about what could have happened to cause it to be inhospitable. Also at some point humans are probably going to run into other challenges like Venus. These claims are some of the reasons the author thinks Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nAccording to some scientists Venus may have been like Earth at one point. If it really was like Earth before there could be much to learn about it. We could find out what the atmosphere was like before it got too extreme. There may be evidence of life that was once on the planet. In paragraph two the suthor states \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size¨ This is a reason many people believe Venus could have been even more of a twin to Earth than it is now.\n\nOn the surface there could be the evidence we need to know if there was life forms on Venus. In paragraph five it is said ¨The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.¨ This statement makes it seem that Venus really was like Earth at one point and may have proof if we could land long something on Venus long enough to study the land.\n\nIn the future humans will continue to explore the solar system and will very likely run into a planet like Venus again. So if humans can learn how to study planets like Venus or land on them then they would have the knowledge needed for the next planet. If we have experince with planets with extreme conditions before finding another planet that also has extreme conditons we could get more information from the plant and at a lot faster rate.\n\nIn conclusion, the author makes multiple points that support their idea of wanting Venus to be studied. Venus possibly being like Earth at one point and giving us experince of planets like that are very important to the author.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Coyboys were having some of the best times of their life! Luke is a Seagoing Cowboy. Doing this job is so much fun! Being a Seagoing Cowboy is exciting because of the unique places, helping other people in need, and it keeps you very busy during the trip.\n\nThe first reason you should be a Seagoing Cowboy is because of the unique places you go. The possible places are Greece, Crete, Panama, and Italy. You could see the acropolis in Greece. Taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy would be magnificent too! You could see the famous Panama Canal or an excavated castle in Crete. Thre are so many different opportunities! You could sign up for this program right now!\n\nA second reason you should be a Seagoing Cowboy is because you could help other people in need. Luke didn't even know of all the people of other countries. That awareness stayed with him for a long time. His family has hosted a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years. Luke helped the countries in ruins that were left after World War II. He helped take care of the animals such as horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\n\nA third reason you should be a Seagoing Cowboy is because it keeps you extremely busy. You will be as busy as a bee! As I said, you take care of the animals they take overseas. The animals have to be fed, given water, and have their stalls cleaned. Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled from the lower holds of the ship. Luke was also a night watchman once. He had to check on the animals every hour. He had to make an hourly report as well. You don't work the entire time either. You have time to play games and do sports as well.\n\nSome people may say you should not be a Seagoing Cowboy. They may say it takes too much time or it does not do you good. I would counter this statement because this job teaches people responsibilty of taking care of animals. Being overseas does take a while, but it does teach people patience. There is also time to sightsee and play games. These reasons show being a Seagoing Cowboy is not a waste of time.\n\nAfter reading this article, I learned a bunch about Seagoing Cowboys. I still don't think this job is a waste of time. This job will teach you many things. Afterwards, people will be as happy as a puppy wagging its tail! All of these reasons lead me to believe that more people should join this program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting hot like desert one around dry Being hot outside affects cyclist sweaty needs water The heat wears Having one around causes get water needs journey These things make week makes harder find place get water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "its The woman asked third time CAPS hall left bathrooms I said fiftieth time I grimaced walked showroom didnt say anything My dad worked small company produced giftshoplike knickknacks like snow globes like offered job sixth grade year helping work Little I know saying meant traveling standing middle hallway huge building telling people showroom When working manufacturing trade industry often dont meet smartest welleducated people You really need patience want get anywhere CAPS dollars hour dollars hour I muttered middleaged man walked read name tag blue and white company logo youngs incorporated CAPS youre youngs asked Do know show room I could tell thinking Why adolescent working cooporation CAPS hall left bathrooms I said robotic voice CAPSt little young kind work asked You expecting maybe intern I thought hastily I instead replied complacent CAPS sir CAPS old asked quizzically CAPS sir I lied I knew I could pass high schooler I knew believe I really wishing would move along I getting pretty edgy I already beginning imagine would happen I grabbed tie yanked hard I could Doing day healthy Are getting paid enough put likes I thought I took deep breath answered yes sir But its lot Its like volunteer work really dont ask questions I thought smiled walked thanks son Youre welcome I said partially clenched teeth I think well agree I patient day And I hope man bought boatload stuff dads shop didnt I put That time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Undoubtedly, these days, it is often argued that people have to find a way either to avoid weather changes or to live in these horrible situations. I fully agree with this fact that although people can adapt themselves to climate changes, it is better to keep weather circumstances constant. In turn, this essay will discuss why preventing climate remodeling is better than finding a way of living in this situation.\n On the one hand, the more climate alters, the harder life becomes. That is to say that people gained the capability to adapt themselves to the present climate within the millions of years, thus they cannot live easily with increased temperature, which happened recently. As a strategy, people can plant trees to decrease global warming, which nowadays is being converted to a serious problem. For instance, in forest countries, several kinds of cancers such as breast, brain, chest and stem cell cancers are extremely rare. In my opinion, enhancement of tree cultivation can secure the survival of planet Earth. \n On the other hand, the more consumption of fossil fuels, the more changing climate. Some people declare that consumption of fossil fuels increase the atmospheric pollutants as well as the weather temperature causing several damages to the environment. Hence, for preventing climate changes, consumption of fossil fuels must be reduced. For example, in the recent decade that the weather temperature of the world became warmer by up to 2 oC, the rate of fires increased by up to 12%. I believe that consumption of fossil fuels must be reduced by humans to decreased atmospheric pollutants happens. \n To summarize, some people are of the opinion that modification of climate change can happen easily, while others are opposed to this view. I am sure that preventing climate changes is better than adopting to this situation and enhancement of trees cultivation and reduction of consuming fossil fuels can help people to avoid the climate changes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every country faces global environmental problems and they are very concerned about how to decrease those problems. Although, it is sometimes thought the best way to solve it to increase the cost of fuel. In my opinion, I considered that environmental issues can be solved in different manners.\r\n\r\nThere are several reasons to decline the matter of global environmental. The first and foremost important thing is that to ban the single-use of plastic. Plastic is a non-biodegradable item and it is very harmful to the environment. For instance, in one survey has conducted in the UK, 50% of environmental causes are happened by plastic. In addition, if government take a strict action against use of plastic such as plastic bottles, straws, carry bags and so on so,it is possible to reduce that problem.\r\n\r\nAnother point to consider to solve the environmental problem is to encourage people for more plantations. In big cities, more people are doing deforestations to build tall buildings and industries and it is also affects weather changes. For example, without trees it is very hard to keep the air clean and neat and people are getting a lack of rain. Hence, palnts and trees are the best way to stop that problems.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, fuel is responsible for getting more issues in environment. nowadays persons prefer their own vehicles for transportations and this trend is booming. In addition, raising the cost of fule could be help to fall down the global warming.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, numerous ways are available to solve the global environmental issues and government should encourage people to use renewable things and try to solve them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, more and more consumer goods are manufactured, more damage has been inflicted to the environment. Although there will be undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, individuals and government can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.\r\n\r\nThere are two main reasons why the growth of the consumer goods industry is related to the environment. Firstly, manufacturing consumer goods need a lot of materials, but after the production is completed, the waste materials will be discharged into the environment. This means it will destroy the natural environment, all living species occupying the habitat will have reduced breeding capacity; thus populations will decline, and extinction becomes more likely. Secondly, the appearance of factories and companies decreases the natural lands, including forests and villages, which means people will lose an amount of oxygen from trees. Moreover, it can cause a greenhouse effect because the exhaust fumes from factories emit too much, the trees are cut down.\r\n\r\nThere are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above. Governments should impose strict laws related to discharge of waste to manufacturers. If the amount of waste and exhaust fumes are higher than the regulatory amount, the factories or companies have to be punished. This leads to governments controlling waste and minimizing pollution. The other solution is that the government can request and encourage factories and citizens to grow trees. As a result, it can be balanced for the number of trees.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the manufacture of consumer goods increases.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think others should join the program because you could help these countries recover their food supplies,animals,and more. Caring for the animals is a big job too they have to be watered and fed two or three times a day. Also many things need to be picked up like bales of hay and bags of oats. This is a really big thing to people to have our help. It is a good idea to try and help out.\n\nI have experienced from my aunt Katies farm as a young boy, I worked very hard so that prepared me,but not for the dangers of the sea. My job is to cheak on the animals every hour,its not all that bad. One night though it was pretty scary i was making my hourly report to the captain and some things happened. It wasnt that bad but im glad im here today. There is also lots of time to have fun on board. Like on return trips when the animals had been unloaded. I also played volleyball and baseball games with the cowboys in empty holds.\n\nThese are the many reassons why i think others should try joining the program. You not only have to work, you get to have fun while working with others. It may sound scary but its not,once are used to it. It feels pretty good to get that kind of offer. Also just to be able to help out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the second planet from our sun. each previous missions was unmanned, and for good reason, Since no space craft survived the landing for more than a few hours. In this problem explains why not a single spaceship has touched doen on venus in more than three decades. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Also the planet is referred to as Earth's twin. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and indcludes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nNumerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study. Even more challening are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what peole experience on earth. Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. A vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\n\nVenus was a dangerous challenging for humans. Before land on the planet scientists had to study and even thought Venus is like earth, But more temperatures on the surface. No one cant even make it by its limited dangers. Systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. Good thing is many researchers made new upgrade machines to last long enough to understand Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think this is a natural landform. I believe this because there is more evidence to support this idea. So in these next two-three paragraphs I am going to tell you why.\n\nThe first fact that clarify's that the face is just a landform comes in the last paragraph in the article. In this paragraph it clearly states that the picture actually shows a Martian equivlant of a butte or mesa - landforms that are common around the American West. \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" says Garvin.\n\nAnother paragraph that supports the evidence is clear and correct is in paragaph eleven. \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,\" he added. \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" This supports me evidence from the paragraph above by telling how much you could see in these pictures.\n\nIn these last few paragraphs I have given you evidence from the article that support that the Face is a natural landform. So I hope I persuaded you to believe that the Face is a natural Landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mysterious face engraved on Mars. Is it natural, or is it created by aliens? believe it is created naturally when Mars was created. It would be very hard to explain it to someone. I believe the face was naturally made because I dont even believe aliens are even real. If they\n\nare than why dont we ever see them anytime and why are they never on earth trying to take over.\n\nBesides, earth was made with mountains and do you think aliens created the mountains. I think it is just like a mountain and created like one too. I think When Mars was made it was formed and it had added to form a weird shape like that. Aliens dont exist to me and are a big farytale. It couldve been pulled when Mars was pulled into the Milky Way. How can aliens know exactly what Mars is made out of and how to get it the exact color.\n\nSecondly, no planed is perfectly flat and will have bumps and hills that looks like stuff that an alien has created. It was naturally made and cannot be made by aliens.\n\nNever the less mountains and cliffs and caves are naturally made and are not created by aliens. There are caves and mountains and even that hill that looks like a face. Maybe it is not supposed to look like a face, maybe it is supposed to look like it is a place that has a wierd bug or something on it. There are things in life to where people cant believe they're eyes that it actually is true.\n\nThe people who say it was created by aliens are wrong. They are wrong because aliens wouldnt just make one thing and be done with it. If aliens create one thing they will create annother one somewhere else and wouldnt they live on Mars too. if aliens really existed then why dont they live anywhere and why havent they been seen or caught before.\n\nThat is what I think about the face on Mars. I think it is all just a natural landform that was always there and nobody has ever seen it before. Aliens arent real and wont be untill there caught. Aliens are make believe, The face could be in history and is there now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued whether or not governments should help senior citizens. Although I acknowledge that we all have the responsibility to save money for retirement, I also have a firm belief that elderly people should receive support from the state. \n\nThere are several reasons behind the situation about old-age individuals should get government support. One is the job market is increasingly becoming competitive. For example, there are hundreds of applications for one position in a company; whereby results in competition between elders and youth. In many cases, these young adults are usually well-prepared for the post with relevant academic qualifications that provide fewer job opportunities for the older generation making it difficult to pay for housing and food. In the end, the elderly people are fragile and they lack the physical capabilities to work; thereby it could be dangerous for their health, especially in some labour works, like in restaurants. \n\nMoreover, some aged citizens may need extra assistance regarding basic living like cooking, cleaning and shopping, but many elders are left out of care by their offspring. This is because of the modern social system where many workers are often pushed to be committed only to their careers. Thus, it is one of the roles of the government to take into consideration of old and physically vulnerable members of society because when they were young and healthy, they engaged themselves in the development of society and paid a lot of tax. As a result, elderly patients need special care from the nation.\n\n To summarize, I believe that the authorities should favour their society, especially the old group of people because of their physical inability to work and lack of job opportunities according to their strength and capabilities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In last paragraph Winter Hibiscus minfong Ho The author concludes saying come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test I think author concludes quote shows determination overcome obstacle For Saeng hibiscus represents comfort ability come Saeng strong believes determination comes past The author concluded shows Saengs determination", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should censorship libraries Some say Cultural books magazines could offensive readers History books sometimes even offensive depending someones lifestyle background Are wrong say want censorship library No wrong many people think books taken shelves local libraries Some reasons parents could young children want expose things young vulnerable Others though say censorship unnecessary people going library looking book risk Meaning someone goes library looking certain book pick one find offensive could good book someone else Do books considered offensive fiction No books fiction offensive This mean nt books like Cultural books magazines countries certain topic sometimes graphic language appropriate certain ages Everywhere matter going things could either interest offensive Everybody opinion matter The cultural library showing people othere countries live act It opinions false claims fact So cultural censored although could section type material History books one really depends opinion raised Religion one thing history books really raise offense people could facts wrong type religion Some people would get upset wrong teaching kids wrong religion Race origin another problem people History books elder s stories always somehow mixed could cause trouble For example veteran told story happened certain area history book could tell completely different story History books censored facts teaching kids happened past people survived My views censorship libraries Maybe library could make section people might think offensive books definately taken shelves though one man s offense another man s great read", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of the technology called the \"Facial Action Coding System\" is valuable in the classroom. It can make the teaching less stressful and more fun. The teacher can know exactly how the student is feeling and how they can change the lesson up.\n\nWith the new technology that Dr. Huang and Dr. Paul Eckman are developing, you can tell how your friend in schools are feeling. In the article, they said, \"you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\" The technology can give you way more details that just saying \"mad\", \"happy\", or \"sad\".\n\nAnother reason why the technology will be good in school is because the students can also tell how the teacher is feeling towards them or the lesson. The student will be able to tell if the teacher is bored or having fun, when they're not showing it. For example, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, inlcuding emotional communication.\" Sometimes the teacher doesn't verbally say how thye are feeling.\n\nIf the new technology does big in school, they might just sell them in the stores for families at home. Families need to always know how each other is feeling. As the kids get older their emotions change and sometimes get better or worse. The author said, \"your frontails pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyeborws when you're surprised; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger.\" Kids at home do that all the time to show how they are feeling.\n\nI think that the use of the \"Facial Action Coding System\" is a excellent technology to use in the school. The technology will help the school a whole lot better then it is now. Nobody will have to struggle to figure out exactly what somebody is feeling.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral college has been around for a long time but, do we really need it? Is it your votes that affecting your next president. Under the electoral college it is not. The electoral college says that voters do no vote for the president but for a slate of the electors, which elect the presidents. We need to kept the voting process we have now so that way we don't arguments throughout the states. In the electoral college yoor vote is sent to someone not holding public office.\n\nWhen you vote you are getting a slate of the vote and to feel that their vote does not matter, that the new president will have no regard for their interest,is he really your president. The way we vote today is not that best we can do in some ways. I think that we need to have all the voters votes count towards the president that they want. We should let the people vote for who they want and not for someone else to vote for you. The constituiton says \"We the people, By the people,For the people.\" So we should vote for who we want to represent us. The electoral college is based of a winner take all method of awarding electoral votes induces the canidates.\n\nAnother factor that is wrong with the electoral college is that bigger states like Californa get more votes than Columbia. So for example, say that Californa gets 45 electoral votes and then Columbia has the same amount of voters vote for the president they want they will only gte about 5 to 8 because of the state size. Once again restating that we need to vote for we want to and have everyone's vote coung not just the votes added up and then shrunk to electoral votes. The electoral college does have some help in some ways like in a run-off election. The electoral college help control that and produces a clear winner.\n\nThe elecoral college does some advantages too, but it still has disadvantges. The electoral college is the president wins by popular vote. The electoral college has a total of 538 electors but, sometimes the electors don't always listen to their voters and vote for who they want not who the state wants. The president has their own group of electors which have been chosen by the canidate's political party, but certain state lwas vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are. The election is every four years on the first Tuesday of November, which gives you time to think who you want to be the next president and cast a vote, but with the electoral college your vote could not really count. Have knowing that your vote may not count will make you upset and rethink about voting.\n\nIn conclusion, the eletoral college has some good things that does help us but, it has bad things too that make is sadband angry. We decide who we want to run our country but, e need to think about how the voting process really works. I am only one person but, one person can make a difference. So just remeber on thing 'We the people, By the people, For the people.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against driverless cars for several reasons. One reason being because driverless cars do not garantee your saftey. For example; what if you are asleep and there is a car reck taking place ahead of you. Driverless cars cannot detect car accidents, so there could be a chance that you would become apart of that reck. There are other things that the driverless car can not point out, such as road blocks. Various issues could come about because of that. Or how about navigation? You need human skills for that too. I also wonder if this car can detect children running across the street. This car requires alot of human assistance.\n\nWhich leads me to my next point; if you have to be awake and alert all of the time incase of danger, why not drive the car yourself? Either way you will still be doing almost the same thing. Who would want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\n\nNot everything has to be automatic. The cars we have today get us from point A to point B. Driverless cars are unesassary. We humans are perfectly capable of driving ourselfs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Florida state senator,\n\nI argue in favor of keeping the Electoral College. The Electoral College is meant to be a compromise between election of the President by a vote in congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. I argue for keeping the Electoral College because of several reasons backed up with information.\n\nFirstly, I'd like to point out that the Electoral College makes it so that larger states don't have larger influence than smaller states. If the Electoral College is removed then larger states shall have much more political power than smaller states. Which means that a small state might not get the same amount of attention from presidential candidates as a larger state would like Florida.\n\nSecondly, the Electoral College avoids Run-off Elections in which no Presidential candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. It avoids that problem because candidates can win Presidency by electoral votes instead of popularity vote. For example, Nixon and Clinton didn't have the majority of the popular votes, but they still won because of electoral votes. If the Electoral College hadn't exist then elections might be more frustrating for everyone, because the Electoral College makes a certainty of outcome.\n\nThirdly, the Electoral College makes sure that a presidential candidate has trans-regional appeal. This is good because a candidate with only regional appeal is probably not going to be a very good president. And besides without the Electoral College there would be many presidents with regional appeal wich would make other states feel left out, and this could be catastrophic to the unity of America.\n\nIn conlcusion, despite the Electoral College isn't exactly of democratic origins, it still equalizes the political power of states, makes sure that candidates have trans-regional appeal and avoids run-off elections. Overall I say that the Electoral College is very important in keeping how we choose our president balanced and smooth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on this smart car idea is that yess it would be cool to have.But i feel like it has quiet a few flaws. Lets talk about some of the flaws. There are maney flws like how is a computer suposed to know speed limit signs how will they know that there is a flooded bridge that they cant get across there are so maney factors. The article also stated that it isnt ready yet and that it cant drive you everywhere that if it is over 25mph you have drive. They also stated that it will alert you when you need to take over. Well what if you feel asleep and you dont know you need to take over.Lets say it can predict when you are asleep and stuff the car cant just stop whare it is at and not move.\n\nI also state the smart car will never be safe until we make the rodes smart to like that is the only way assure everyones safty to me this all makes no since. What happenes in a stuation ware a fuse or something blows will the car just stop.No it cant just stop right away.So what will they do and also how much will something like this cost.Lets say it is safer how will anyone afford this smart car if it is too exspinsive. There are soo many flaws in this i am not saying they cant be worked out all i am saying is that there are to many to fix by 2020 if they rush it. It will not be safe. So my side of this hole thing is that i think they should not have smart cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \" The challenge of exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because it would allow scientists to float above thefray. Its like imagening blimp like vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. At thirty plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fanreheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Venus doesn't have easy condition but humans can survive there. Even though peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions. Mostly limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere rendering standars forms of photography and videography ineffective. Helping NASA reach their goal is a great opportunity for human kind to survive longer. Even the human popularity can grow in size .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is a place. In the passage, they are deciding wether or not to abolish the Electoral College. It was originally made as a compromise in the election process for a new president.\n\nBased on the information given in this passage, the Electoral College should be kept. It makes it easier to decide on a new president. The normal citizens vote for who they want, then those vote go to the electors. Those electors then vote for who they think should be president. If the Electoral College is abolished, then it would become way more diificult to decide on a new president .\n\nAlthough over sixty percent of citizens want a direct vote, it still has its upsides. For example, the Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism. Each state selects a group of their own voters to decide on the next president. Using the Electoral College, this is a certainty of outcome. The winner-take-all method froces candidates to focus on not only the large states, but also the smaller ones. The Electoral College also helps to avoid run-off elections.\n\nIn short, the Electoral College should not be abolished, because it makes the voting process much easier.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is thought that enjoying TV set is an advantage for children by some people, however, there is another opinion that it is a disadvantage to raise children. While watching television to cause a become poor communication with friends, it is an essential option to learn about the rules of society. \n\n\nThere are several opinions of watching television. First, according to TBS company’s survey in Japan about tv programs, how much watching TV is affected to 6 to 10 years old children are compared between A group who are watching tv shows a prolonged period time, and B group who people are not watching television for long time. In fact, there is a wide difference that the former’s communication ability was lacking. Furthermore, their physical strength was less developed than later. This is said to be one of the huge problems that we have to consider it. \n\r\nNevertheless, watching tv shows is believed by some people to be a useful source in order to educate children, since nowadays audio companies create diverse programs, namely learning English and other country’s cultural channels. In addition, currently, tv has been developed so that children can connect and join to tv shows in real time by SNS. In the other words, a kid does not have to feel lonely when he or she is at home alone owing to their parents’ job. \n\r\nIn conclusion, enjoying tv program is a good way to teach them about making friends and building communication skills, but it is believed that it has several negative effects on teenagers in their childhood.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author talks about how dangers Venus could be if humans get there and start of the exploration in Venus. Venus has a lot of carbon dioxide which that could be bad for humans to inhail. In paragraph 3 it says ''almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.'' This means that most of Venus's atomsphere is cover with a carbon diocide which could be bad for humans to inhail it.\n\nAlso the article talks about Venus having clouds have highly corrosive sulfuric acid and its very dangerous for human to make\n\ncontact with that dangerous matterial. In paragraph 3 it says ''Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.'' This means that its very dangerous for humans to go to Venus and tried to explor the whole planet.\n\nThe article also talks about the planet's surface. The planet's surface could reach over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and that would be able to kill a human very quickly. In paragraph 3 it says ''On the planet's surface tempertures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.'' Which this means that it could kill a human in a instant if a person went to Venus and tried to explor Venus.\n\nThe article also talks about the pressure of the planet's atmosphere. On paragraph 3 it says ''The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experence on our own planet.'' What this means it could kill a human in a instant if a person went to Venus and tried to study Venus.\n\nThe article also talks about what would happen if humans took a submarine and metals to Venus. In paragraph 3 it says ''Such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest part of our ocean and would liquefy many metals.'' This means that Venus has a lot pressure that can crush a submarine and also it has a very hot surface that can liguefy metals in instant.\n\nThe article also talks about the Venusian geology and weather in Venus's. In paragraph 3 it says ''Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.'' This means that it has the same kind of weather but its more aggresive and more dangerous then the ones we have on Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people wonder what the Face on the Mars planet really is. New high-resolution images and 3D altimetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft reveal the Face on Mars fro what it really is: A mesa. According to this article's explaination, I believe that it is just a natural landform, not created by aliens. Some of the NASA's Mars scientists share their opinions based on what and how they discovered it.\n\nTo begin with, there are lots of reasons why the Face on Mars is just a natural landform. Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team revealed that it was a landform and no alien monument after all by snapping a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos to be certain and clear. Also by looking at the picture, it looks like a huge rock that pops up and creates different shapes and forms.\n\nIn addition, what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common arounf the American West. It also looks like Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho, which JIm Garvin stated, \" It reminds me most of Middle Butte....\" and \" ..that's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars. This proves that it is not an alien handwork.\n\nSome scientists are not sure of the Face. They think it is created by aliens. They might be right since it is theory and answer is not given. Nevertheless, the caption noted that \" a huge rock formation...which resembles a human head..formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth, \" which means it formed by itself that illustrated a human head.\n\nAll in all, the Face is not created by aliens. It is just a huge rock that formed a human head. Therefore, there is no reasons why it is created by aliens. Also, few scientists prove about it by using their investigations and the photos on Mars planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article of \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" it talks about how a facial recognition software can detect your mood. It is brough up in paragraph six that this software should be introduced into classrooms. Classrooms are already getting technologically advanced and are gaining more expenses from this as well. Adding Facial Action Coding Systems to students' computers will just add unwanted price increases, pointless space takeup, and more complexity to computers in our classrooms.\n\nAdding this Facial Action Coding System (FACS) will just add on to the expenses that schools are already putting into place just to add on to the technology that people are trying to push into schools. If a school of lower income tries pushing this system, taxes and school payments will be greatly increased on parents that might not even want this system at all. Although richer schools may be able to afford this software, it will definitely take money away from sections of the school that actually might need attention such as athletics or even music and art classes. Money saved from not buying a software that is just a want and not a need can fork money over to parts of schools that actually need the money. This software is not a necessity and if bought, can take away money from areas that need attention. Not only is the price not needed to be added to, but this software may not even help students in the classroom.\n\nStudents in schools with enough money to give students their own laptops usually have used a lot of money on these already expensive devices. Laptops in schools are most usually used to help students who are sick at home to stay connected to their teachers to get assignments. Other uses for the laptops range from eliminating paper and also researching. The FACS software just adds another layer of complexity to the laptops. In paragraph six, the author talks about how the software can see your reaction to ads on screens and adjust new ads to this facial expression. Not only can you be frowning for other reasons than your computer, but if you are doing schoolwork, why does it matter if you are mad or happy? Laptops are to get work done and get through school to help you research and understand topics more. Laptops are not for fun but are tools to help you succeed in school by helping you learn topics applied by the teachers. This software could be extremely helpful at home, but at school it just makes the laptops more complex than they need to be.\n\nIf a laptop is being used in school, it is being used as a tool to eliminate paper and help teachers connect to students on a higher level. These laptops are already complex enough to have several tabs at once, documents eliminating paper usage, and also have online textbooks. Some students who are not very educated in technology may see some information gathered and used by laptops to seem very confusing and maybe even frightening. Adding this FACS to laptops at schools will just change how students are seeing their laptops and can be switched around by students making faces at it. If a student is very sad and looks at the computer, it may make things happier and more colorful, but what happens when somebody is very happy? Will the computer turn dark and very bland to make them sad? The software will add another layer to these already complex devices that is not needed. The software may be a want in the eyes of people trying to make school more enjoyable, but this software is merely useless in connection to learning experience. Even with all of these negatives, there are some positives in that some genuinely sad individuals using this software can be cheered up and will actually begin to pay attention to their screens. This software has many negatives but at the same time might actually be used for good in schools that can afford it and still have money left over.\n\nAll in all, this software may be helpful to those outside of classrooms, but in reality it may be too expensive for some to implement into these already expensive devices. FACS at its worst will be a price increase, an unneeded software, and a system that will add complexity to these laptops. But, FACS at its best can greatly increase moods of poeple who have acquired this software in hopes of it increasing moods and helping students focus. This software should be relatively unexpensive which will give schools the ability to talk to families about implementing this software into laptops to help students learn. If a school can afford this software and it is approved by families, this definitely can help students focus unless this is too expensive for schools but is added anyways. To conclude, this software is somewhat useless in a way but it is completely up to the school corporation and the families of the school to decided if this should be implemented into our daily lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story theauther deicides end story paragraphe come back saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus buding I willtake test agien wants take test every thing isanters de forexample wants everything likes nuforment flowers geese whether Another reason I say author ends story paragragh wants ua eviorment like one home country forexemple snow like sping time ver around This I say auther ended story paragraph", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Driverless cars are coming\" is an article that informs the reader about cars that can drive themselves; but they also yield warnings about these autonomous cars.\n\nThe thought of driverless cars is fascinating! Since 2009, Google has had cars that could drive by themselves under specific situations. This gives the driver a whole new expirence from what has been expected for years. Yes, drivers still have to stay alert and navigate through various traffic issues, such as driveways, constuction work, accidents, etc., but driving just got a whole lot easier.\n\nAutomobiles are already on their way! In 2013, BMW announced the development of \"Traffic Jam Assistance\".\n\nWith this function, drivers don't have to worry about the stop and go, but they can worry more about their destination. GM has also added to the technology. They developed seats that would vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing in an object. Now drivers wont have to worry about that blind spot that alwys urks them, because GM has their back.\n\nBut don't think that this is all fun and games just because the car is driving for you. Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. Dr. Werner Huber, a BMW project manager driver says this,\" We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\"\n\nVarious manufacturers are hoping to bring in-car entertainment and different information systems that use heads-up displays.\n\nSo, overall driverless cars are becoming our future. I am completely for this idea. Those of us in the technology era have learned to adapt and this is just another way. People are coming up with new ways to make our lives easier and autonomous cars are just the beginning.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think this idea of driverless cars would be mostly positive and would benefit the world extremely. How i see it, is that people are trying to make the best of things while on Earth. This new thing that might possibly be coming out, could be the start of our next big industrial revolution.\n\nThe proof that I have that explains it will be efficient is from Google cofounder Sergey Brin. He says, it will use less gas, be more flexible, and change the world. The driverless vehicles that he envisions use nearly half the gas of a regular taxi and still be as efficient. That would mean less polution in the world and would benefit us and the Earth as a whole.\n\nA second reason he says will be useful is that it will be able to fit more people on rather than a bus let alone a taxi. This would mean more people would be able to fit into one vehicle at a time. If this could really happen, then this could potentially increase the population in America.\n\nThe last benefitting reason for this state of mind would be the vehicles changing the world. It could possibly motivate the world to become more futuristic as you could say and more technological. Meaning this can possibly start an extreme industrial revolution.\n\nWith all of my detailed proof, I think having driverless cars would benefit the world, as we call home, efficiently. Looking to the future is something we do quite a lot, and if these vehivles are the future, then I'd be glad to ride in one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Each and every country is developing day by day,this can happen only with the help of the public contributions to those nations.All countries main revenue have been generated from their people themselves, as they pay a sum of their salary as tax. This is the money that is used for the development of those states infrastructures,health,transport and education.Some folks think that they should take all the income that they get for themselves without giving tax to the state,however,I strongly oppose that.Conspicuously, I go with the notion that everyone has to pay taxes to the government.\n\nTo commence with,some schools of thought argue that no one should pay tax to the government so that they can have all of their money and do their own needs.As we all live in modern society,modernity is wedded with luxury,convenience and comfort.Apparently,they can have an extravaganza of life,as they get more money without tax.They can buy a brand new vehicle,home and have a luxury of life.These people only think about their personal life .But,to achieve these all they need to get a basic education,if the citizens are not willing to pay tax then, the state will not be able to provide good education, health or transport system to their public.Even though, if you have more money for better treatment,better schooling you have to depend on other countries which will definitely cost more than the required tax.\n\nOn the other hand,if we continue how we pay tax to the state, it will give more and more opportunities for all of us as well as the future generation. Admittedly,all people in the same state are not having the same income,as a result of this,low-socioeconomic class people also be able to get benefit from this as the government provide good education,hospital facility and travel systems in rural areas as well.For instance,because of this,a lot of brilliant students get a chance to fulfil their dream from the countryside.There is a measurement to calculate the development of a country, it's called GDP.If we all are able to pay taxes,our country's GDP will rise,ostensibly,it will benefit all of us in our country.\n\nTo sum up,everything that has been stated so far,paying tax is necessary hence,all societies in a nation get advantages from it not only for the present generation but also for the future one.So,all must pay a required contribution to the country for a better quality of life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Diverless cars would be a very bad idea. This could not only cause many accidents, but it could also be a reason for anyone to not drive. Also driverless cars would never be driverless because in the passage, paragraph 2, they talk about how the cars still need drivers for the cars to go in and out of driveways.\n\nWhat will happen to drivers ed? Will the next generation ever learn to drive a normal car? The next generation needs to know how to drive a normal car just in case something happens. Such as, they are not financially stable to buy a driverless car or they simply just want a normal car.\n\nWhen driving you need a seat belt to make sure you dont go flying out of the car in an accident. In paragraph 8 they mention safety. How do you know your children, friends, or family will be safe riding in a driverless car? Many accidents could happen. You could be risking yourself to the car breaking down or taking control on its own. Maybe even catching on fire. They mention putting cameras in the car to make sure are paying attention to the road instead of being on your phone texting or being distracted. If you are buying a driverless car wouldn't your intention of buying that car would be of not driving at all and enjoying the ride?\n\nAlso in paragraph 9, the question is mentioned of who will be responsible, in case of an accident, of the injuries of a person, the driver or the manfucaturer? In case of an accident this would be the real question. Who is responsible? The driver for buying the car? or the manufacturer for making it?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I don't like the idea of diverless cars. Its a horrible idea and it can cause alot of damage. A story entittled \" Diverless cars are coming\" discusses how can smart cars change the future. Smart cars can be good on somthings but not on everything. I am against the development of these cars and Im going to tell you why.\n\nSmart cars, can help you not run in to things behind you. They can park for you, and they can turn on lights for you. In the artical it says \" the Google car simply announcess when the driver should be prepared to take over.\" So let me ask you somthing. What if the driver fell asleep? The car is not going to know that right?\n\nThe smart cars, are just going to give people a better chance of being on their phones at the same time. They wont be paying attention, next thing you know they crashed. If they don't make any of them and make people drive people well pay attention to the road. Its that simple.\n\nLast, cars should be made to be driven by people. Not so people can sit there and watch the car drive on its own. That is what you call lazy. Car lovers are not going to by those cars. Pople like to get the experence of driving a new fast car or a new rare car. Thats why people buy them, because if all the cars are cantrolled. Why would you buy a car that can go up to 200 mph if you can't manually drive it. Its a waste of money to be honest.\n\nIn conclusion, I do not like the idea of driverless cars. They are pointless to people to buy. It worrens the purpose of saving money to buy a dream cars. Who ever thought of that need to think harder because he might not make that much money if thats what he want. I'd rather stick with an old honda civic.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A highly controversial issue today relates to whether any knowledge gained is a waste. A particular population group believes that art is an important course for offspring at school while others think otherwise. In the essay, I will be looking at both points of view and explain why I believe that craft is essential knowledge.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are a number of arguments in support of my stance, the most preponderant is that evidently, what kids learn while growing up sharpens their behaviour and also has an effect on their career choices. For example, in developed countries like the US, someone can find special profession classes to enrol their children like ballet, gymnastics, and many more. As a result, these folks with early training turn out to be future world champions in these areas.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, It can as well be seen as a waste of time for parents who already have plans for their offspring. Clearly, this set of people aspires for their children to end up with professional careers like medical doctors, lawyers, engineers and all what not. For instance, parents who have a course plan mapped out for their folks would see art lessons as a distraction towards the goal and therefore be wary of them getting injured in the process of practising such lessons. However, it is advised that offspring should not be forced to follow a certain career path.\r\n\r\nIn summary, to recapitulate the aforementioned argument, While a certain group of persons believe the introduction of craft in school for kids is time-wasting, others, nevertheless, feel it is essential. I strongly affirm the notion that it should be made available and compulsory for kids to learn art at an early stage to foster growth and help build their career choices.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes, I think the technology will be used to help students and I do think it will be very helpful to some students.\n\nIn schools across the globe today, there is more technology than ever before. Schools are giving their students Apple Macbooks and ipads and all of this other stuff just so the students can do work on them. I think with the FACS, students will get move involved in using a program they have never used before and they will be hooked.\n\nWhen you give a todler a toy, what do they do with it? They play with it. What do you do when you give a student a ipad or any kind of electronical device, they are going to play with it and they are going to figure out how to use it. I think the FACS will really improve all of the highschools attendance rates and improve all things behavorial becasue all of these students will be stuck on the FACS. This in all honesty would be a good decisoin for schools becasue not too many schools offer programs for students to learn how to read facial emotion. If students were able to read facial emotions, I think students would be more nice to each other and people would have respect for each one another. You don't want to mess with someone that is having a bad day because your good day could go bad because of them and now you are both upset and your negativity could bring others down too.\n\nStudents would also like this class if they are big into health and all of the muscle groups. Learning the muscle groups is good to know becasue its extra knowledge to have. Having extra knowledge is good because you never know when you will need it. People always say \"I already knew that\" but the question is did you really? If you were to ask anyone around the whole world right now and you asked that person where is your Zygomatic major is i bet they couldnt tell you.\n\nIn my opinion I think that students should learn this in school because it will help them 100% in the long run. They will be able to figure it out in no time how a person if seeling that day and they will gain some healthy info in their brain about the muscle groups.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports further Venus expiditions because of the insight we would gain from it. However, the author seems to forget that these kind of enviromental hurdels take time and money to jump over. A mechanical computer would have slow the process of gathering intel from Venus's surface. Even though silicon carbide electronics sound more appeasing because they last longer, it costs money to buy the materials and build these devices. Rocket fuel is also a bit pricey as it has to have enough fuel to launch and leave orbit and direct itself to Venus. The engineers and scientists have to be paid as well. The author doesn't have an explaination as to where all the money would come from. Venus will chew through the devices and even people we send there.\n\nThe idea of sending humans to Venus sounds dangerous, especially since Venus is a hostile enviroment. Venus has a ground temperature of more than 800 degrees Fahrenheit, as mentioned, that temperature will melt tin. If tin can't survive in that heat, so can't humans. The author brings up the idea of having the scientist float thirty miles or more above the surface. This idea seems legitiment except for one thing. Earlier in the article, the author mentioned that the clouds are made out of highly corrosive sulferic acid. The author does not mention how to overcome that obstacle. How are we supposed to explore Venus further if we can't get the money and we can't find a safe way for humans to explore it?\n\nThe author does not have many ways as to how to accomplish exploring Venus. Only radical concepts that would only work in a perfect world. They propose these ideas yet they won't elaborate further on them. Maybe this article was meant to inspire some one else to find out a way to explore Venus. However, The author has many ideas, they just need to exlain them. The idea of float in a zeppline above the surface, how do we do that? They need to go into detail as to how we accomplish these things. The author doesn't do a good job of supporting the study of Venus because they don't give an explaination to their ideas.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI will like to talk about changing the way that we vote for elections. I want to make voting for president based on a poular vote and not the Electoral College system. The Electoral College system is a meeting of electors where they vote for President, Vice President, and votes by the Congress. In the Electoral College system, voters do not vote for the president. Instead, they vote for a slate of electors who elects the president.\n\nFor an example of the system, if you were living in Texas and wanted to vote for John Kerry you'd vote for a slate of 34 electors pledged to John Kerry. If the electors won the election Kerry gets 34 electoral votes. The electors can be anyone not holding public office. These electors are picked by the state and can come from different kind of conventions and party's of and by the state. The system can get very confusing, sometimes the electors dont always for who you want to be elected.\n\nI'm asking to change voting to the most popular vote. This kind of voting is based on qualified citizens and they voting for whom ever they please. I like this system because you have a voice to speak and choose the kind of president you like. The Electoral College system is an unfair, outdated, irrational system. This kind of system is not needed in america from me speaking personally.\n\nA word that would descibe the Electoral College system is anachronism. Anachronism is something that belongs to the past and not in the future. I can't see that kind of system being in our lives forever. Elections based on the most popular vote is good system, but us humans take advantage of that too. We have the power in our hands to change the world around us, but don't do it or use it. Either way based on popular vote is a way better system than the Electoral College system and i will like for our country to use that system.\n\nSincerely, Student", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers and technology are the fastest growing industry in today's world. Technology is used in most of Americans' lives. With technology growing and expanding more and more things we do in our everyday lives are becoming obsolete, including driving. Driverless cars are the next big thing. I think this could push us so far into the future.\n\nThe text states, \"The cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis.\" This would benefit everyone in so many ways. One way is pollution. Pollution is such a massive global issue. With only half the fuel needed to power an automatic car, only half of the pollution would occur. With so many people having cars, this would lead to an amazing drop in pollution.\n\nThe text also states, \"The cars he forsees would offer more flexibiltiy than a bus.\" This would also lead to a massive decrease in pollution. If a car is flexable, you can make it bigger. With a car being bigger, while using only half of the fuel we use today, we can fit more people on a single vehicle for cheaper, while being safer, and being better for the environment. This is better for an individual consumer and the global population all together.\n\nThe text also states, \"In reality, Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" In my opinion this is absolutely amazing. These cars, traveling half a million miles, increases everyone's quality of life. This could lead to so many lives being saved. A person driving home from a party would be so much less likely to crash into someone because they will not be controlling the vehicle.\n\nA counter argument to driverless cars to being the future is the law. The text states, \" If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer.\" This does raise some questions about the safety of the driver, manufacturer, and the pedestrian if someone happens to get injured. This would definitely have to be reviewed before we actually sit in our own, personal automated cars.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are upon us. Although we are not sitting in one today, it is only right around the corner. Driverless cars are for the better when dealing with pollution and safety. We need to let the future in because it will drive us to greatness.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As technology advances, humans find themselves wondering whether it is helpful or if it hinders humanity. According to Prof. Thomas Huang of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, computer software is now able to detect emotions in facial expressions. Although the software could help notify teachers when the students feel confused, this software could also make students feel insecure and violated. The Facial Action Coding System should not be used in the classroom.\n\nDr. Huang believes that his new software could inhance the classroom setting. It would \"recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson,\" (paragraph 6). However, it is healthy for students to have human interactions with a teacher. Also, having the initiative to speak up if they do not understand something is part of becoming independent. School prepares kids for life beyond high school by giving them the freedom to speak up and to make their own decisions. Placing a Facial Action Coding System in the class would not help solve the need for students to learn how to live independently.\n\nIn paragraph two Dr. Huang states, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication. So computers need to understand that, too.\" I strongly disagree with this statement. Being able to express ourselves and being able to interpret things in different ways, is in our human nature. If we, as a race, should expect to rely on a computer to detect our emotions, humans would become robotic. The beauty of human nature is being able to see through peoples' emotions and forming different connections. Taking away any room for interpretating peoples' feelings would also take away the mystery and joy in life.\n\nJust as nobody can read thoughts, our feelings should also be kept private. By adding a computer system that detects emotions in every classroom, students would not have the privacy they deserve. They would never learn how to live independently and this system would not prepare the students for life beyond school. Finally, the need for human interaction is constant. Humans need to be able to communicate face-to-face and have the freedom to interpret things differently. This open communication is what creates bonds and friendships between people. Without it, humans would not be able to enjoy life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using cars creates admissions that damages our ozone layer. Communities around the world know this and are doing something to relax the damage being done. They are doing temporary bans on cars along side with other cities, and trying to make cars with much lower emissions.\n\nUsing cars in major cities makes it so noisy but also makes it very bad for the environment, and ourselfs. When you live in a major city like for example New York City, people choose to walk rather than drive cars. Not only is this healthier for us but it is much more healthy for the rest of the environment.\n\nIn suburban Germany there is a town that has banned cars from the street completely and has most people riding bikes and walking. Most of these people dont really car so much about having to walk or ride a bike. In Colombia they had one day where they banned cars and in their city of 7 million people, most people walked or rode bikes. Germany and Paraguay arent the only nationd that are taking a part of this, other nations like France, and other eurpoean countries are joining in. President Obama has also pushed for cars with lower emissions and higher gas mileage. This will help save people money if they dont really have it, and help save the amount of gas used and emissions caused.\n\nWith all this in mind it would be useful to lower gas emissions or even to stop using cars in general. It will be healthy for us and the environent. We dont even have to get rid over cars completly either, we can just switch over to electric. Theses are easy solutions to our problem, and also giving us and advantage in the world we live in.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affected cyclist many ways First heat made cyclist overheated For instance weather sunny June Also hills made cyclist tired For example cyclist losing energy keep pushing Lastly setting places could helped cyclist For instance cyclist trouble finding place water drink In conclusion setting affected biker negative way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper Readers many hours day spend computer In modern world seem hard tear away trusty computer screen face life Nearly everyone computer ruining country With hours wasted virtual world people lacking exercise leading many problems They also avoiding nature outside losing contact family friends I think computers causing way many problems peerhaps consideration evidence could come think Statistically overweight country One reasons Hours sitting computer replaces healthy exercise spending lives computer sitting clicking exercise The great lack exercise causing health problems Not exercising lead abesity damages joints terribly Then diabetes developes taking away quality life Finally heart disease top killer country All spending time computer ask amount time spend computers much damaging Every day beautiful way sometimes beautiful us saying beautiful us comes outdoors clear skys warmtemperature These days come quite often Glance window go back texting laptop Our bodies need get sun without going outside nt get traveling outdoors deprives body important affects health well inside computer keeps us expenence real experience learn things computer virtually What happens forced real world cant really anything Everyone loves friends family nt make sense would rather email trivial things instead talking Instant messaging nt really bond people conversations planned time think person nt know real would say This frays bonds people ca nt work together even family ca nt work together nobody wants Computers take away much spending much time Blatantly bad people Not effectively cause abesity fool us thinking things really virtually make close people come apart ruining A country sick useless isolated time step away computer real life gets demolished effects computers cause", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph s thing opened story To introduce story author tells Saeng failing drivers test seeing familiar plant wants buy The middle story hard time adapting new home So conclude story author puts Saeng take drivers test flowers starts budding geese come The flower geese remind home tells thinking home objects make feel home comfort help overcome obstacles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When you think of a self-driving car, you could automaticaly think science fiction, what if it now becomes science reality? Recently Google has been in development of such a vehicle. There have been multiple tries and have been great improvments in this project. The lawmakers feel this could undermine their rules of driver responsiblity. So the development of a driverless car seems not far off, but there could be unforseen consequnces.\n\nGoogle cofounding member Sergy Brin has been developing a driverless car also known as \"The Google Car\", for quite some time now. This project has been work in progress since 2009, and the success rate for it is exceptional. This car has gone more than half a million miles. Unfortunatly, these cars still due require a driver, it will alert the driver to take the wheel when pulling in and out of driveways.\n\nIn the late 1950's, there were roads outfitted with a electric cable that set out signals, the car was equipped with a reciver to move along the road, but this technology could not be apllied to all roads. Berkeley engineers tried something similar with magnets having alternating polarities that sent out messages via binary code (101010...) which worked rather well, however it was to exspensive.\n\nThe driving laws are mainly focused on the safety and well being of the passengers and driver. Lawmakers believe that these laws are best enforced with alet drivers, fearing the driverless car will cause irresponsible drivers. Most states have banned testing of computer driven cars. States of Nevada, Florida, and California have allowed limited test/ use of semi-automous cars. Self driving manufacturers believe more states will follow, once these cars are fully proven safe.\n\nThere are some consequnces to driverless cars, but I believe that this will benefit the transportation game. Lawmakers seem to be leaning towards the possiblilty of the cars being permitted to be on the road. Advances in the inventing of said cars is developing quite nicely. Google and other manufacturers stated the cars will be ready to use within the next five years. So I'd say I believe this science fition to become a reality.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology has grow so much over the years. There is a new software called the Facial Action Coding System that can be used to calculate how someone is feeling.\n\nThis type of technology should be used in the classrooms of schools to make sure students get the help they need, and to keep them on task when they are at school on the other hand the schools would have to purchase and learn how to use the complex system.\n\nSome students when they go to school are to shy to ask questions if they are confused about a topic. The article says \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,Dr. Huang predicts. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". This piece of text shows that by using the technology the students could get help with what they need and do not have to ask questions to the teacher. This technology would help so many kids that are to shy to ask questions in the classroom get the help they need.\n\nFor some students it is hard for them to stay on task while at school due to all the distractions around them.\n\nThe article says \" For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\". This text from the article connects to the classroom, when a student is getting bored with the topic they are on the technology could change the lesson to make it easier for the student to stay on task. This technolgy could make students stay on task while they are in school by changing the lesson to make it more interesting for the students.\n\nIf this technolgy was used in the classroom it would be hard for every school to use it. This piece from the article says \" Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile.\". This shows that the schools would have to get all new PC's and learn how to use the new technology. Some schools do not have the money or the time to go out and buy and learn a whole new system of technology.\n\nThe technology can be used in schools to make sure students get the help they need, and to keep them on task when they are at school, on the other hand the schools would have to purchase and learn how to use the complex technology. This technology would help so many kids that are to shy to ask questions in the classroom get the help they need. This technolgy could also make students stay on task while they are in school by changing the lesson to make it more interesting. On the other hand some schools do not have the money or the time to go out to buy and learn a whole new system of technology. this technology should be used in all classrooms to help students get the best education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D' Alto is quite an interesting article. As it talks about how technology can detect one's true emotions. At the first glance, this article looked redicilous to me, How can a machine show one's true emotions but as I read more and more the disgust started becoming interest. And, now I am just fasinated by thid article.\n\nIn paragraph 1, the author states \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry\". Which shows how much technology has grown, now the technology can even tell us how and how much of a specific thing we are feeling. Quite amazing, is it not? One can't specifically say that the machine is 100 percent correct but in future maybe the technology goes even beyond this.\n\nWhen reading this article, one may have had a few question about all this calculating emotions but in paragraph 2 many of the question that comes to ones mind are stated \"Hold on! Can we actually 'calculate' emotions---like math homework? And how can a computer recognize the subtle fcial movements we humans use to express how we feel\". After stating these questions the author gave us their answers and not just left us curious. Recognizing one's feelings correctly is quite hard for even an human eye since someone may be trying to hide their true emotions, it's not as impossible as it sounds now due to the technology which is a good thing about the improvement in it.\n\nIn the article the authior states a couple benefits of having technology that can detect your actually feelings, one of them is in paragraph 6 \" 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, Dr. huang predicts. 'Then it could modify lesson, like an effective human instructor\" This one particular benefit of having something that can calculate your expressions, quite got to me. It can help so many students and teachers as it can lesson the burden on teacher to go to the specific person and help them understand and the student also would not have to wait for a turn.\n\nSo for all the reasons that I have listen above and explained I would like the reader to understand the benefits of having such technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Opinions differ on whether or not children’s cooperative spirit is best fostered via team sports at school. Although such a goal can be achieved through team sports in educational institutions, I believe that there are better solutions for children to acquire that quality.\r\n\r\nAdmittedly, team sports are competitive by nature; therefore, players can enhance their communication skills, which is one of the qualities that many people need in their adult lives. Football players, for example, usually raise their teammates’ spirit when losing by using motivational language so that they can actively continue to participate in the match. In addition, a sense of responsibility can also be nurtured in team-involved sports, which means that players have to be responsible for their own roles within a team. A good example is Nguyen Quang Hai, who is one of the Vietnamese football players, he apologized to his fans and teammates for having not listened to others and had a poor performance as a result last year. \r\n\r\nHowever, the student’s involvement in team-playing sports is not the best way for them to improve their cooperation skills, as the time to take part in such activities is usually limited, and there are better long-term options at school, especially examinations and projects. Regarding the former, learners can be taught how to listen to their peers. For instance, the teacher can conduct a debate, which requires students to pay attention to their classmates’ opinions before raising their arguments. With regard to the latter, children are encouraged to develop their time management skills when participating in this form of group work, as they need to cooperate with their group mates to complete their projects before the deadline. \r\n\r\n\tIn conclusion, despite the fact that children can learn communication skills and have a sense of responsibility via team sports, I believe that these benefits are unsustainable due to time constraints in sports participation at school. Meanwhile, other activities can boost their cooperation more effectively, especially testing and project-based learning, in the long run.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mister Florida Senator,\n\nI want you to tell mister president that we should keep the electoral college. Popular vote is not fair. not everyone is popular in all the states that is why people need the electoral votes so they can get a chance.\n\nIn source 2: the indefensible electoral college: why even the besy-laid defenses of the system are wrong states \"because of the winner take all system in each state, candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the 'swing' states.\" This is telling me that democratic presidents dont go to republican states, like california, because they already know the republican president won them over without really doing much. Now, if it was a swing state, like florida, then both candidates want to fly over to the states and make sure they give a good speech to get as many electoral votes as possible.\n\nIn source 3: in defense of the electoral college: five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing a president it states, in reason number 2 \"everyones president\"\n\n, that no region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. If the president knew they would be able to win a region because the region believes in what he chooses, the candidate will not get electoral votes because he knows he will win those states. A candidate with only the regional votes is less likely to become president. If the president tries in the harder regions-regions he might not win or the swing states- he will get more votes.\n\nIn source 3 , it also states, in reason 3 \"swing states\"\n\n, voters in the swing states are more likely to listen to both candidates than other states that already have who they chose. These swing state voters are going to decide the election fairly. They are also recieving the most attention and information from the candidates, so when one of the candidates become president they know what that candidate is goignt to do for the united states. Large states stes get more attention than small states since they are most likely to get more electoral votes and help the candidates win.\n\nAlso the electoral college system makes sure there are no run-off elections. Run-off elections are elections where no candidate wins a majority of votes. This leaves leaves pressure. For example, if there was no electoral college system if Nixon and Clinton were in an election and were running against each other it would lead to a serious problem. Since both men had only 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, it would be hard to choose a winner since they were both tied.\n\nNow you see Mister Senater, why we need the electoral college system. Without it everything willl be really stressful and everythings already stressful. Dont make it worse.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It indeed appears true that the frequency with which advertisements for charities appear both on television and the Internet seems to be increasing. There can be various explanations for this and it can be seen in both a positive and negative light.One explanation for the increase in the number of charity advertisements is that the charities themselves are becoming more aggressive in their marketing. This can also be seen in the common strategy nowadays to encourage a monthly donation, rather than a one-off donation. The increased marketing is apparent too in the increased numbers of ‘street salespeople’, who stop passersby and try to get them to commit to this monthly payment.A second reason for the increase could also be that there have been more charities started and the number of advertisements would therefore increase and become more noticeable. If these charities are all legitimate, this would mean that more help will be getting to causes that need it. The increase in charities could also be explained by a possible increase of humanitarian awareness. People might be now adopting different ideologies that take into account people in less advantageous positions.If the number of advertisements for charities has risen due to the fact that there has been a positive shift in people’s compassionate principles, this surely has to be seen as an optimistic development. If it is due to the fact that governments have been cutting back, it could be seen as a pessimistic development. In addition, if there are more charities asking for more money, this will inevitably mean that the amount of money donated will have to be more thinly spread, which would be a negative development.There could be several reasons for why there are more charity advertisements today. Whatever the reasons, as long as any money is helping people in disadvantageous positions, it must be seen as a positive development.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People believe that the \"Face of Mars\" was created by aliens. I say that statement is false. \"The Face of Mars\" was not created by aliens it is a natural landform. I know this because I work with NASA on this very investigation and I'm here to tell you that it is indeed a fact that the \"Face\" is a natural landform.\n\nThis worldwide phonomenon started with just a picture. NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was up on mars roaming around and just with one snap of a picture it got it. This picture was a face that apparently according to the article looked like a \"Egyptian Pharoah.\" NASA thought that the people would love to see this. Indeed they did. Immeditley the picture was on talk shows, radios, newpapers, etc. This picture just became the number one thing in the world. Just by one snap of a camera.\n\nPeopel may say that,\"that's just your opinion,\" or maybe just a rolling-your-eyes look. But, according the the article \"Unmasking the Face of Mars,\" and NASA it a natural landform. When NASA first got he picdture they were stunned but then figured \"it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like a Egyptian Pharoah.\" So, even when they got the picture their first thought was not aliens, it was just a Martian mesa.\n\n\"NASA didn't confirm it was not aliens. They didn't even give out any information about it.\" False again. We (meaning NASA) did give out information about the \"Face of Mars\" but we didn't give out anything saying it was made by aliens. We gave out information about how it wasn't made by aliens. \"What the picture actually shows is the Martain equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms common around the American West. If something from Earth can even be compared to something form a differnet planet, NASA can hardly believe aliens. One person even said \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain in Idaho,\" says Garvin.\n\nIn conclusion to my speech, we here at NASA don't believe the \"Face of Mars\" was not created by aliens. It's just a natural landform like we have been saying since day 1 of out investigation. Hopefully we have convinced some of you to step out of that \"alien phase.\" But, out of all, we hope you enjoyed listening today. Thank you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story show Saeng ready accept new life Once geese hibiscus back feel like s home When feels home ready take test The text states run geese return hibiscus budding I take test again Clearly geese hibiscus remind homeOnce feels home feel ease Thats author concluded pasage", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the current generation, people have the luxury to send their kids to single-sex and co-educational schools. while the majority of the people consider educating their children in a co-educational school as it possesses great benefits. In my opinion, I completely agree with this view.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the institute is supposed to be the microcosm of children's education, where they can interact with their peers, seniors and juniors which will guide them to evolve with people from socio-cultural and other backgrounds. Needless to say, the years spent in university play a crucial role in shaping their life. Juneviles educated in mixed-gender schools are confident and comfortable in the company of members of the opposite sex.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, in single-sex schools, youngsters can interact only with kids of the same sex. Which has negative implications considering the children's future. For instance, youngsters who are educated in single-sex institutions will be diffident when it comes to interacting with the company of members of the opposite gender. In addition to that, when it comes to working in an organisation they will find it more challenging which will make them feel like an introvert and can interrupt their career growth.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, single-sex school affects the confidence of students interacting with their opposite sex, however, by considering the current work trend, where the men and women associate equally in the workplace to compete, co-operate and collaborate with each other, hence the co-educational academy are valued more and better for them by considering the future", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the new era, a growing issue of people becoming dangerously overweight. To solve the above problem, one school of thought holds that some people propose increasing the cost of high-calorie foods. While I accept that their perception is somewhat justifiable, I believe that individuals should also be self-conscious about their own weight status.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the growth of fattening food prices is applied as a public policy in each country that could be beneficial to their society as a whole. This is because payable cost fluctuations affect people's consumption. Consumers tend to choose products based on their budget, so an increase in the payable cost of a product contributes to a decrease in consumer purchasing. However, fatty foods are mostly essential commodities, even if they increase, they are still affordable for families. For instance, according to a survey conducted by the Department of Consumer Protection, KFC fried chicken stores in Vietnam have increased their prices five times in a recent decade. Especially, its sales have not decreased, on the contrary, it has increased eight times since 2014. As a result, it is difficult to say that it helps to limit obesity in the community.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are a host of compelling reasons as to why I am convinced that individuals should also be responsible for their weight status. First, each person must raise their awareness of products that they will buy and use. For example, consumers can look at the amount of fat recorded on the label of packages before purchasing to ensure their nutritional needs are in each meal. Furthermore, a healthy diet should be a considerable choice for every family, such as a combination of fibre, fats, and carbohydrates. We know that fat is also an important nutrient that has been proven necessary for the human body. Therefore, if it is removed from the menu, it is not necessarily a good thing.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, whilst it is irrefutable that increasing the price of fattening foods is a simple solution to the problem of individuals becoming overweight, I would contend that it fails to address the root causes of the issue and some they should put effort into adjusting their diet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author does a poor job of explaining why Venus should be explored, despite risks. First, they introduce Venus' poor, inhabitable conditions. Then, they go on to suggest an idea that isn't anything but a dream. Finally, they admit that the previous \"solution\" won't even work.\n\nThe introduction to Venus in paragraph three, is anything but inviting. The author tells the reader that most of Venus's atmospher is 97% CO2 or carbon dioxide. That is a gas that humans exhale and it's extremely deadly when there is too much. For example, carbon dioxide poisoning. That kills people. It doesn't get better. The author then goes on to explain that the atmospheric pressure is even survivable. The author writes,\n\n\"... And the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\"\n\nThis line basically tells the reader that if an actual human were to even land there, they would most likely die immediately. If not for the suffocation that would happen because of the excessive amount of carbon dioxide. The author even says, in paragraph two, a robot couldn't survive Venus for, \"more than a few hours.\" How well would a human do? This tells the readers of all the dangers, not even offering a benefit, other than to \"meet the challenge.\"\n\nNot only does the the author state all the reasons why we shouldn't go to Venus, the solution they have found isn't really a good one. In paragraph five, the author writes, \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape... Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" The author starts with the word \"imagine,\" telling the reader that this idea most likely isn'y even an option. The word imagine has the connotation of something you would want to happen, not neccesarily something that will. They then go on to say that the conditions weren't easy, but at least people could survive.\n\nThat sounds great, right? Wrong.\n\nThis so-called \"solution\" isn't even a solution.\n\nIn paragraph six, the author admits that looking at the planet safely hovering wasn't going to be enough. \"More importantly, researchers cannot take samples,\" The auhtor explains. \"Of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance.\"\n\nThis line proves that the the vehicle suggested previously is not even going to work. It will put people in \"survivable\" conditions for basically nothing.\n\nSo, the author does a very poor job of supportung the idea that Venus is worthy of studying, despite the dangers. They list reason after reason, of why that is a bad idea and the one solution they find, they admit won't work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People asking CAPS think spend less time computers I say spend less time computer children spend much time online games Second kids adults spend much time myspace facebook msm even aim My third reason children outside playing exercising These three reasons spend less time computers My first reason spend less time computer children play many online games warcraft soilder front ect A problem kids playing games become addicted play hours Children outside getting bigger muscle getting strong bones Kids keep playing games ruining lifes This first reason spend less time computer My second reason spend less time computers children adults spend much time following myspace facebook twitter aim msm ect These online pages causes people go one connect friends Also online pages cause much could lead fight rumors About kids adults go online pages every day time stayed going computer time outside hangout friends My last least reason kids outside playing instead computer Children go outside friend play sport games something nt involve computer This third reason children spending time computers As I said people spend less time computer Kids spend much time online games Adults kids spend much time online pages And last children playing outside Its time put timer computer spend time outside", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are positive and negative aspects of a driverless car. Some people might love the idea on the other hand other people might not. I believe driverless cars are the future, and there going to come up with some very smart cars in the near future.\n\nI believe that driverles cars are a genius idea because you can do anything while the car is driving. Well of course not everything you don't want to be sleeping and the car crashes onto something because it doesn't detect it. Many people run late in the morning on there way to work or school or wherever they might go and maybe didn't have time for breakfest or didn't finish getting ready\n\nI believe that you can do that stuff while the car is in motion. Even though you need a driver there in the car \"Tesla is going to release a car capable of driving on autopilot ninety percent of the time\" which means you'll only be driving that ten percent which isn't alot. Yes I do believe the safety of one another is very important but I think the manufactures wouldn't release a car if they knew it wasn't capable of doing the things that the manufactures promised. I am all for driverless cars but safety is very important to me but just like the article says \" the road to truly autonomous cars stretches ahead of us, we grow to the destination every day\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As see technology days always getting advanced It seems new invention atracts many people buy time One electronic useful many ways people computers Many think much time spent I think much s benefiting Computers tell pretty much anything need know s country solve problem computers advanced talk friends faraway Lastly computers helping us giving specific directions rather figuring map Say re school project country By typing exactly need know find information heartbeat s population density languages foods holidays computers easiest simple way get information Or maybe want know country interested Maybe even plan visiting country re going want know place ll spending time If plan traveling somewhere ve researching order plane tickets right online You figure routes plan taking help oprganize trip Another reason computers benefiting many people feature communicating others s taking faraway friend family re bestfriend couple streets probably still want keep touch Computers advanced webcams visually see person contacting right computer This exciting way talk someone especially s someone nt see often even live another country teenagers like keep touch pretty much every day Usually kids like chatting instant message pleasure talking friends Finally computers benefiting us knowing directions routes Like mentioned computers give straight foward directions This esier handle rather useing map road There websites type exact loocation exact destination tell specific roads turns need take In conclusion worried ones exercising outside enjoying nature learn expand time shortening time online learn computer necessary", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For the saftey of our world driverless cars should not be permitted. Nor should they even be allowed to be tested. Driverless cars will only lead to one thing and that's destruction. Driverless cars are going to be made with sensors and computers. Sensors will be linked to the internet. What happens if the internet fails while the car is in motion? It will cause all types of commotion between the drivers and the manufacturing companies. The use of driverless cars will only effect the human race not help it. It will create all types of saftey concerns. Who will pay for all of the damage it is likely to cause? As far as researchers on the cars' evedience it has presented in the story, the car is not trustable. They can't even fully work without a human.\n\nThe fact that these cars will be able to run off the internet won't quite cut it for me. Many times while surfing the web the internet crashes and you have to start all over. Whose to say that while the driverless car is driving the internet won't crash. While the car has to systematically reboot, how does anyone know it won't speed up and potentially harm someone or create a massive accident? Using the internet based solely for these cars would be a huge mistake.\n\nAs the text states \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-- the driver or the manufaturer?\" With no one knowing who to blame, how will the cost of any damage be payed? I believe that if any damage of property, death, or harm of a person should come from driverless cars that the manufactures should pay for it. Thats only my opinion. But others may think different. It may cause a lot a conflict between companies and civilians. No one could take responsibility of anything that happens with a driverless car.\n\nResearchers say that driverless cars are still not even fully driverless. They need help with certain situations such as parking, traffic issues, and navigating through accidents. If a driverless car can't hadle parking or navigating it way through traffic, how will it manage to drive on expressways, across train tracks, and even on regular streets. The story and researchers themselves have prove that this car will not be able to face driving on its own.\n\nMy opinion still stands as no, driverless cars should not be allowed. Evidence from the text such as the car being based on internet, not knowing who to blame if accidents occur, only proves that it would be very irresponsible to put these cars on our streets. Driverless cars would only add to the problems of our world. If these cars are put on the streets, how long will it be before they kill someone? Driverless cars are a completely bad idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars seem interesting and useful, however, they can be very dangerous. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author presents positive and negative aspects of driverless cars, however, it is a bad idea for driverless cars to be legal because a lot can go wrong. Drivers are bound to text more and accidents are prone to people to text and drive. With a person behind the wheel, not doing anything, they will probably get tired and/or not stay focused on the road. Also, something can go wrong the car and it can break somehow and if the driver does not know, the car can become very dangerous. Overall, driverless cars should not allowed for the safety of drivers around the world.\n\nA person is bound to get bored if they are just watching a road while the machine is doing all of the work. Scientists add, \"'The psychological aspects of automation are really a challenge,' admits Dr.Werner Huber, a BMW project manager driver. 'We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.'\" They explain how people are indeed going to get bored and they cannot really do anything about it. They are going to try and create fun things to go along with these driverless cars, however, if you add fun games and things of the such, driving the car would get dangerous. If you are supposed to be paying attention to the road, but instead you are playing some sort of car game, you are not focusing on the road and if you are notified that you need to take hold of the wheel, you might not get the message and people can get surverely hurt. Also, people are more suspectable to use their phones since technically they are not driving. It is however, addressed in the article as following, \"Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over---something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone.\" Although drivers are not supposed to text and drive, whether the car is driving or they are, people break the law everyday and in this case, people can get seriously injured. The author states, \"Presently traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" Even though this is an assumption, many peope agree with this theory because a driverless car cannot do all the things that a driver can do and it also cannot see all things that a driver can see. The whole idea of driverless cars can get really dangerous and soon out of hand.\n\nDriverless cars should not allowed for the safety of drivers around the world. People can seriously get hurt and some could even die. Although people want to make life in general easier, not everything can be fully modified. The safety of millions are at risk everyday and leaving this car open for anyone is just adding to the problem. Is something seeming cool or interesting really worth someones safety?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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