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"content": "In memoir Narciso talks life As talk always creates creates mood talking environment In paragraph say family nothing blood relative created good mood cause knows lot friendsSecondly Narciso creates mood talking first friend In paragraph says Alegria lived us Alegria graced kitchen tables meals often Good mood friend thats creates mood talking parents In paragraph says My mother fathe come courage without knowledge language culture good mood parents alot courageClearly Narciso creates mood memoir",
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"content": "With so much technology already being developed for the analysis of human tendencies, what could one more hurt? Nowadays, manufacturers and creators of products are using technologies and algorithims to analyze everything from shopping preferances, to the economic strengths and weaknesses that characterize a specific a consumer. Not to mention, with facial recognition, and widespread survelliance, complex human interactions are beginnning to be broken down into code. While some may argue against this simply because the idea of being \"watched\" does not appeal to them, these advancements have real-world applications that could actually be quite beneficial to society as a whole. The concept of the FACS program being implemented in classrooms is a concept that really should be taken into heavy consideration. The practical applications of something such as an emotional analysis program within schools, have no end. For this reason, it is concievable that the FACS program should be introduced into the fabric of the modern schooling system.\n\nImagine if a computer was able to comprehensively custom-tailor lessons for struggling students, based solely on their unconscious reactions to other lessons. Often times this is exactly what a student needs, and what many student activist groups have been proposing for years. The notion that a student could have a lesson that was customized to fit his or her personality, might be exactly what some parents of stuggling (and academically adept) students have been craving. In the article, Making Mona Lisa Smile, by Nick D'Alto, it is stated that, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored... Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This is a compelling argument for a fairly simple reason; most students that do not do well in school, claim that it is because they do not enjoy it, or that they do not appreciate the way that information is conveyed to them. However, this can be remedied. The implementation of the FACS program within schools would provide an alternitave to traditional teaching, and could improve the overall experience of students. Besides that, the FACS program could also be used to analyze the general student reaction to a specific topic or concept. This would provide teachers with more insight into the lives and emotions of their students, and allow them to better prepare lectures, and their coverage of that topic. The article also states that, \" Most human communictation is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\" Not only would the gathered information be beneficial to other parties for the betterment of schooling, but it would also allow school systems to pick up on particular emotional cues that may only be visible to someone who is emotionally close to a particular student.\n\nThis program, without a doubt, offers many helpful options when it comes to its use within school systems. The FACS system should be implemented into the fabric of modern schooling. With so many applications, It would be foolish not to at least experiment with it in a school setting. While it is true that privacy and reliability are great concerns for many people, convenience and better academics are also great concerns in today's modern society. In a culture that is beginning to value knowledge over all else, it is important for schools to employ every method available to them, to better prepare students for the life ahead of them. Technology should not be viewed as an enemy in an academic world. Rather, it should be percieved as a tool. A tool that gives humanity the ability to accomplish whatever can be dreamed, and gives it the resources necessary to lead its people into a golden era of knowledge and education.",
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"content": "Is the face on mars a natural landform? I see that the face is just a natural landform. The face is just a natural landform to some others think its artificial. There are many reasons why it is just natural.\n\nIn 1976 a photo that was taken on mars was perceived as a face. Since it was 1976 the photo wasnt that great, but then again in 1998 and 2001 more photos were taken and they showed that it didnt resemble a face anymore due to better cameras. From the pictures in the article it looked like a face at first but then the next pictures add a bit more detail and removed some of the shadows, thus it did not look like a face. NASA also put in the caption of the image \" huge rock formation . . . which resembles a human head . . . formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" ,this means it was just an illusion given by shadows. NASA also showed the people just to bring attention to mars and they have scientific research on the face being natural.\n\nIn conclusion the face is just a natural lanform. when you compare the photos you can see the difference in shape and detail. Some research in the article states the picture shows a martian equivalent of a butte or mesa---landforms common around the American west. Scientist state all it really is is a martian mesa.",
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"content": "The mood Narciso Rodriguez loving caring warm inviting The loving atmosphere created much family really love The family also loved Cuban culture The mood also caring friendly The familes different countries cared one another I felt people warm inviting Everyone felt could trust dinner The Rodriguez family really brought culture new home Narciso mentioned last paragraph found definition family living neighborhood The mood created clearly author memoir",
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"content": "Some people consider that leadership a skill inherited from ancestors. Conversely, others claim that coaching can be formed through experiences in life. Therefore, from my point of view, captaincy is a balance between gifted abilities and developed capacities.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, to be a chief demands some skills given by nature. First, a successful head is a person who can attract people. It means that their tone of voice is strong, fully powerful, and reliable. In addition, a leader needs sharp characteristics, a business mindset, and a far-seeing ability. Therefore, they can make decisions that benefit their business or country. Take Donald Trumps as an example. He is a businessman, according that his personality is extremely sharp. When he became the American President, he helped the United States back to the number one country in the economy, compared with China.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are a few comments that leadership can be learned and trained. Because, nowadays, the programs to change an ordinary person to a leader are very popular. They can access the Internet and find an appropriate course such as communication skills in front of a crowd, people management, etc ... Through these studies, future managers will shape the skills that talented people possess. However, to become an expert, they need to practice persistently.\r\n\r\nTo sum up everything that has been stated above, in my opinion, if a modest person wants to be a leader without having any innate skills, they could also achieve their goals through hard learning and training.",
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"content": "Pride determination relief things cyclist felt long bike ride First cyclist started rideing fresh legs good directions road started dought old men a diary last entry place old men wisdom sense direction I made mental move change it After feeling direction might rough rode pride get destination Next rider great determination get destination many things I gathered pebbles stock mouth take mind thirst This quote shows would almost anything keep going Finally cyclist fatigue arrived shop knew old men right would reach destination As I stumbled rather modern bathroom drank deeply sink quote shows polite naturally get water know men right",
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"content": "Have you ever wanted to join the Seagoing Cowboys Program? Well let me tell you why you should. We have lots of fun things fo you do to, and more for you to explore.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys Program is a fun club were you go on long trips across the ocean to deliver things to the army. In this program, we have lots of fun things to do, and lots of things to explore. In my past years of being in this program, I have traveled across many oceans and have been able to see China and more. This Program allows you to travel the seas and see things across the world that you though you would have never seen before.\n\nThis program has many fun things to do. While you are on the sea, you can play many games including dodgeball, basebal, tennis, boxing, and many more. Me and my friend always played these games in the empty pens that held all the animals that we brought to the army. Going on these trips allows you to have some free time to yourself, and travel around the world. Spending time with your crew mates can teach you things you never knew about them, and become closer friends.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys Program will allow you to travel around the world and explore places that you have always dreamed of seeing. These trips include, Italy, China, Florida, and much more. I have been working here for 9 years and each year I get to see new places. During these trips, you get to care for horses and much more animals. Although traveling on sea can lead to many pros and cons, it's a very fun expirememnt that I think you need to try.\n\nJoing this program was one of the best things that I have ever done. It has allowed me to meet new people, and explore places that I thought I would have never seen before. Why don't you try it? I promise it will be the best thing you have ever done. Trust me, I though I was going to have this job until I found a better one, but no. I hope you can trust me, and be sure to think about it.\n\nThis is why you should joing the Seagoing Cowboys program. We have lots of fun things to do, and much more for you to explore. I hope to see you here next year.",
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"content": "To concern I informed idea people use computers everyone agrees benefits society I strongly disagree I think computers positive effect people Having computers teach handeye coordination give people ability learn faraway places even allow people talk online friends family Do nt want children grow great handeye coordinatio More parents voted yes As shown many statistics adults children use computer hour day better handeye coordination normal adult child uses week By using computer one hour day typing becomes quicker reactions increase Not typing quicker effect computer techniques also helps outside home like sports For exsample play sport baseball speed pitch increase use computer hour day If batter racation pitch also increase Just using computer Is time running project Without computers would nt get information need quick enough Dr state You get information people countries computer By using computer get book easy In addition buy books get information unlike computers dont look expensive dont settle less get best Over old friends family state would still like keep touch By computer chat webcam Instead calling sending email could chat still see flesh Several computer owners say CAPS like actually hanging takes days least recieve letter back email live faraway computers instant Would nt like talk friends family every day instead waiting around call email letter I think yes All computers great investment I would also like point without computers would nt beable talk friendsfamily online get better handeye cordination even ability learn click button Is nt want",
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"content": "Have you even seen the Grand Canyon, even if it was just on television you know that without a doubt, its real, its not camera magic or computer generated terrain. This \"face\" on mars is nothing more that a natural landform, no alien monument, no NASA hiding something its just a natural landform, just like the Grand Canyon.\n\nSo, why is this so important? Well lets say this is an \"alien monument\" so if it is why wouldnt there be dead bodies on mars or more faces like this one, because this is not an alien monument, its not a corpes its a Mesa just like the ones that we have on earth.\n\nThis really can not be anything more than just a natural landform due to the fact that in 2001 NASA took a picture of it and now it doesnt look anything like a face now it just looks like a little hill on the ground. Honestly the seventies were a really superstitious time. So I could see where they saw a face in it, but that doesnt change the fact that in 1976 their camera quality was bad. Even the 1998 picture was starting to reveal that it was just nothing more than a mesa that is certian conditions looks like a face.\n\nToday there have been studies that prove the human brain sometimes has a tendency to make inanimate objects look like a face, in fact today I say a face in the bumper of a car, but I still know that all that was, was a bumper of a car. I honestly understand some theories but this is just downright non sense.\n\nIf it was an alien monument NASA would release it because then they would get really popular. So with all of these reasons combined it proves that this is just natural landform. It always will be.",
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"content": "The face on Mars is nothing but a Martian equivalent of a butte or a mesa. Martian mesas are common enough around Cydonia. So it wouldnt have been surprising if it was just an ordinary mesa. In1976, Viking 1 saw the mesa and thought it looked like a face. But scientists found out that it was just a martian mesa.\n\nOn April 5, 1998 a Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time. Michael Malin and his Orbiter Camera took a picture of the Mesa that looked like face. The picture was ten times better than the picture that the Viking 1 took. They found out that it was just a natural landform and that it wasnt an alien monument at all. Yet with all the proof some people did not believe that it wasnt just a regular Mars mesa due to that it was a cloudy year on Mars. So on April 8, 2001 it was a cloudless summer day in Cydonia and the Global Mars Surveyor got a second chance to look at the butte. The surveyor took a photo using its cameras absolute maximum resolution. The picture showed that it was just a Martian equivalent of a butte or a messa.\n\nNevertheless we found out that it was an ordinary martian mesa that looked like a face due to shadows. It was never an alien monument but was an ordinary mesa. So the the face on mars was never an alien monument but a nutural landform.",
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"content": "I participated at a Seagoing Cowboys Progam and changed a lot of lives and you should to. On the job you will have to take care of animals. You will get to take care of horses, young cows, and mules that are shipped overseas. You will get to help other people in their countries and their needs. You can also help countries recover if you participate.\n\nYou should also participate because it can change your life as it did to Luke Bomberger. In 1947 I had made nine trips and was the most trips of any Seagoing Cowboy. Caring for animals during the crossing keeps you busy depending how far your destination is and how much time it will take to get you there. It helps make you more aware of the other peoples countires and their needs.\n\nIn your spare time there you can do some fun stuff. Such as playing baseball, volleyball games, boxing, and more. You can also sight see on your spare time. It was one in a lifetime opportunity for me to be a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nIn conclusion you should be a Seagoing Cowboy because it not only changes others lives but also yours. It made me more aware of other people in their countries and their needs. It took me through a lot of adventures. It opened up the world to me.",
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"content": "The discussion of driverless cars, is a big one. Some people believe that they will be safer, more fun, and easier to use. And then there are some people who believe that autonomous cars are not a very good idea. I believe that autonomous cars shouldn't be used until they can do everything that a human can behind the wheel.\n\nI do not think that autonomous cars should be used in public until they are perfected. There are quite a few reasons why they should not be used yet. First, they can only drive in specific weather conditions. Secondly, They are not completely driverless. To me, a driveless car means that there doesn't even have to be another person in the car for it to perform like a regular vehicle. Thirdly, the cars will be very expensive with alot of technology on them. The cars with have sensors all over the car, 3-D mapping technology, and cameras. And i do not trust car munufacturers with video footage of random people.\n\nFinally, i don't believe that driverless cars should be used yet because they can only go 25 mph by themselves. Which means they can only be driven on side streets mainly. You can't drive them on open roads and on the interstate because those speed limits range from 30 mph to 70 mph. I believe that driverless cars can be useful when they are perfected, but until then i'll stick with manually driven trucks.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are coming there are both pros and cons about these new cars. Theres many saftey rules we should worry about which make it a con. On the other hand some pros are that the cars woudl more advanced and luxurious. For example they can be driven on there own, they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. With new driverless cars would have to be a change of laws and to alert drivers with there very new system.\n\nMy positon on driverless cars is that people should not trust technology to much. A technology error could happen that could even\n\ncause someones death just for these cars. As a result it's illegal to even test computer driven cars in many states. There would be a massive change in are drivng industry it would be like having robots all over are nation. There should more precution about the driverless cars and to think about the cons that can happen even though since 2009 they've had something similiar to a driverless car.\n\nMany people seem to be facinated by television and movies with cars that could drive themselfes. Entertainment is an easy way to fullfill people about getting or even thinking that they can make driverless cars. Whenever people see this on TV they don't think about all the risks there putting them selfs in. Everything isnt sured that it will work which my opinion that driverless cars should not take it farther then what it has been.\n\nTesla has projected that Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Niassan plan to have cars that can drive themselvles by 2020. This companies are taking things to fast this should be thouht over and over a millions times. I think with the driverless cars pepople are getting to excited about it and that not taking precaution. Everyone of the buyers should be more open minded about all the troubles that could go on to buying such an expensive car.\n\nOverall I think that the manafacturer should be more cautious in what there exposing to people. If the technology fails and someones get injured who's fault would it be the driver or manufactor? Yes exactly manufactures make it seem like driverless cars are going to be fully well safe. Manufactuers even believe that moer states will follow as soon as cars are proves more reliably safe. Which i think is outrages because a human should not trust computer technologized cars for all the many things that could go wrong.",
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"content": "First of all the author claims it's worth try to get to venus . To explore it and research it .To explain they say that we just explore it because of human curiosity. I say it could be the fear of not knowing what's there . That's why we don't explore becaus eof the dark and unknowning about. Back on track the value of venus being explore is like climbing the hightest mountion for the first time. We just do it for recontion and repution in history on the long run.\n\nIf we find a way to stay their we could he a supply of new elment or more types of resouces for earth to plan for more space travel. If we lose a few men he to their they're sacrafices just brings us close to finding a soultion. Like the amercan revoltion lost a few people here and their. Some dying at the bostion massacer . All for the skae of progress and freedom.With their names forver embeded in history . As a start to get to venus we stop using delicate computer for the good old steam punk or mechanical machines. Which will have longer duration on the plant\n\n.\n\nWell in the end , all that matters it we tried it and we did it . We the human race can find value in anything nowadays. So finding\n\nvalue of a plant isn't hard . It's the motvation of trying to do the impossbile against odd . It be a thrill ride advenure for a person willing to go any length for it. The only reson we have been every where it's becasue the law of nature keeps bringing the life boundry higher . Each time we get closer to it . In history anything bigger or stronger than us isn't impossible it's just a challnge . waiting to be finish and what else do we have to do on earth since every thing has been claim . Then why not go to the stars and clam them . We have the time our sun will explode in a billtion years to it a bit of\n\nrace in time .To\n\nclaim every thing and leave the earth or face utter demise .",
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"content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" it describes technology called the Facial Action Coding System, which enables computers to identify human emotions. I personally claim being all for the value of using this type of technology to read students' emotional expressions. I feel like this would be a real neat thing for people to have.\n\nI feel like the Facial Action Coding System would be spectacular to have. I think this because imagine if somebody was having a bad day, the person's computer could help lift their spirits more. FACS could maybe help lower the statistics on depression. FACS would be pretty helpful during school too, maybe the computer will tell that a student is confused, or bored what if the computer could reprogram the lesson to make it seem more like an instructor there really trying to help you!\n\nFACS could be a highly liked type of system. FACS could help kids that are constantly having a hard time in class whether it be paying attention or having a mediocre grab on the lesson. Maybe FACS could decrease the percentage of failing students. FACS could truly be something amazing, helpful, and maybe even fun in some cases!",
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"content": "Artificially intelligent robots are predominantly replacing humans in considerable areas. Although it is possible that robots will be imparted in major activities in the near future but there are still some tasks where humans can outperform. This essay will discuss jobs where humans cannot be replaced.\nRobots can execute those jobs only that does not require innovative skills or in other words repetitive tasks consistently. Many companies choose artificial intelligence over humans in order to reduce the cost and effort that is required for hiring and training of people. To illustrate, construction companies need a lot of labour to perform tiresome tasks like mixing of concrete, lifting of heavy objects and transportation, such tasks are easily and efficiently carried out by machines effectively. The tasks require efforts but not thought and productivity increase by uninterrupted sequence hence can replace humans.\nConversely, there are a number of jobs that can be done only by humans with no replacement. It is well said that machine can perform but feel plays a role, humans can think where machines work in specific program fed. In the medical science field, nurses play an important role in taking care of patients, consoling them in difficult times. This service can never be done by the robots as they lack sentiments and emotions. In short, the facility industry needs human-oriented jobs for the best customer satisfaction that couldn’t be performed by machines.\nNevertheless, the notion remains debatable that robots will take up all human employment and cone side is dominant. Unskilled labour will eventually be taken up by robots sophisticated jobs that require human intervention will always exist. In my opinion, very few jobs will be secured for humans in this artificially intelligent workforce.",
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"content": "I feel as if having emotional reconization in a classroom would be a great idea. Everyday children are sitting in the classroom worried, confused, or struggling and don't say anything because they are to nervous to do so. If the teacher could walk to the front of their class and see how every single person is feeling they will have a better understanding on how the class is feels, as not only a whole, but as individuals too. Sometimes you just aren't having a good day and would like to be left alone and not called on in front of the whole class. Well I feel as if this technology would help benifit teachers in knowing who doesn't want to be called on just because and who is just simply having a bad day. In my opinion, this will help with the level of respect given to teachers because half the time students are just stressed out and don't mean to take it out on other people. I also think it will help with the mental health issues going on in society today. Many people everyday pretend to be happy and okay, it's like the world has put into our heads that we have to be okay all the time. Possibly with this new technology being able to read all 44 muscles in your face, it will help people become more open about how they are feeling and what is going on.",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir positive I believe mood positive paragraph says I always grateful parents love sacrifice Also I ve often told admiration strength perseverance I ve thanked repeatedly whole memoir lot positiveness That mood memoir",
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"content": "How would it feel to actually know that cars can drive themselves?Just crewing down the street, with no one in it ? As we know from previse tv shows cars are able to drive with alot a person physically in it. Transformers for example, it a movie full of cars in action. If there not driving around alone, there physically fighting mone another like real people. As it said in the passage \"Sergey Brin envisions a future with a public transportation system,\" and so forth. It could My arguement is best on how smart cars already are, the dangerousness of this situation, and lastly how easily this can turn into a big situation.\n\nFor starters, cars are already smart as it is. It said in the passage \" the combination of all this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of human at the wheel.\" Why do\n\nall that just so it can drive by itself. The purpose of getting your license and permient is to be able to drive a car. It wouldn't really a purpose of none of this if the car could drive on it own.\n\nSecond, this can become a dangerous situation. One glitch and some masive can happen. It might even be the smallest thing and the car can destruck. Or maybe event he car is going to fast and",
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"content": "Anyone ever rode bike knows relaxing truly forced ride miles miles terrain without water relaxation feels like oasis beatup roads dryness around really puts domper experience extends need thirst enhancing amount dryness air amount energy The ability block trying focus something easier handle exactly want situations terrain really build character cyclist adding fact amount water dryness around sounds like torture I hope I ever become cyclist I never endure kind situation",
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"content": "I believe scientist should keep studing Venus. We should keep studing and learning about Venus is becuase what happends if somthing bad happend to earth and we need a new plant to start a new cilvlationzion. But also the bad part about Venus is that the article says On Venus planet's surface tempeatures average over 800 degrees Fahernheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our plant. Also the article says that conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such as environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. Also Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. The waether conditons are also really bad on Venus like erupting Valcanoes, powerful earthquales and freguent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on it.\n\nwe need a back up plain to becuase one day earth would end and so we need a plant just as close to earth and thats Venus. The article says astronomers are fascinated by venus becuase it may well once have been the most Earth-like plant in our solar system. Venus was proably coverd largly with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like Earth. The plant has a surface of rocky sediment and incluse familisr features such as valleys, mountains, and carters. But the value of returnint to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission both safty and scientifically productive. But also there are solar power would be plentiful and radiation\n\nwould not exeed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. And their are a lot like between earth and Venus so i think we could find ways where humans can be safe on venus.",
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"content": "My position on driverless cars is that I am against it. Autonomous cars still need the driver to be focused on the road. The driver must always be ready to take control of the car in any situation. I feel like autonomous cars give a false sense of safety when it comes to driving one of these autonomous cars. The cars arent fully autonomous they still require the driver to have his hands on the wheel in case he has to overtake the controls.\n\nOne reason I am against it is because no road that we drive on is fully predictable, so the cars wont know what to do when some situations arise. Most people who buy autonomous cars think they dont have to focus on the road and just leave it all to the car. Thats false, thats what makes these cars dangerous in a sense. \" The can steer, accelerate, and break themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skill,\" this is the reason I am against it. There may be a time that the driver needs to take over and steer the car out of danger, but since the driver had a false sense of security, he/she wont have time to react. They wouldnt have time to react because they might've been doing something else in the driver seat thinking that the car will steer itself. This is why drivers should always be in full control of the car at all times, because no road is predictable and it requires fast human skills if any situation arises.\n\nThere might be safety precautions that can try to prevent you from falling asleep at the wheel. This wont help at all in my opinion. Since the driver isnt doing anything, they will feel tired and bored and close their eyes and sleep. If they're really tired they wont hear the warning signs about work zones or any other warning in that matter. Everyone is different, some people are light sleepers and others are heavy. \"GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.\" This will fail in some occasions. Say you're a heavy sleeper, and you dont feel the vibrations, and you crash into an object. Will that be your fault or the manufactorers fault for giving you a false sense of safety? Does the vibration have a setting to make it vibrate violently to wake the driver up? Does the vibration start happening at different distances depending on the speed of the car? Also how does one know the reaction time of a driver? These are the test they need to do to know how to make these cars safer. The reaction time of a person woken up from sleep is really slow compared to someone who is fully awake. Also how does the car recognize that a danger is going to happen.\n\nIn conclusion this is why I think autonomous cars is not good for the people. Its not safe for the driver who is moving at high speeds down the highway with a false sense of safety. Its not safe for pedestrians who cross streets not knowing if a human is controlling the car or not. Streets will never be predictable and the computers on the car will go off of predictability. Yes there will always be a traffic hazard everywhere you go, and the car might not know what to do and its up to you to get yourself and the car out of harms way. This wont happen if you're asleep at the wheel thinking the car will do it itself and you wont have to do a thing. I feel like if a person is wanting to buy a autonomous car, they will have to take courses on how to correctly use the controls and also what to do when theres an emergency ahead. They will have to know the fundimental things like dont fall asleep on the wheel, always be focused and looking for potentional hazards ahead. Always put your hands on the wheel whenever the car tells you to. Also the main thing they should focus on is to never trust the car to get you from one place to another without your assistance along the way. Thats why in think autonomous cars a negative thing.",
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"content": "I think that they should do voting by the popular vote because it should be what the people feel most comfortable choosing and they shouldnt have the electoral college. It can be argued that the electoral college method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state. Democrats in texas for example or republicans in california knowing their vote will have no effect they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign that they would have if the president were picked by popular but of course no voters vote swings a national election and in spite of that about one half the elgible american population did vote in 2012 election. Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election.\n\nA dispute over the outcome of an electoral college vote is possible it happened in 2000 but its less likely than a dispute over the popular vote the reason is that the winning candidates share of the electoral college invairably exceeds his share of the popular vote in 2012's election for example Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney . . . . because almost all states award electoral votes on a winner take all basis even a very slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral vote victory in that state A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible because the total number of votes 538 is an even number but it is higly unlikely .....\n\nI think those two paragraphs from this passage explains why i would like for people to just do popular voting because it makes the people comfortable and who they feel will make a america as best as it can be. That person who is being elected should feel proud and make america safe is what i stronlgy agree and i think others should to because it is a great choice. The elctoral college consist of the selection of the electors the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president and the counting of the electoral votes by congress and i feel like thats a little too much when people can just vote instead of getting someone as a president who their not comfortable with or familiar with and dont know anything about the person so everyone just vote by the people for the people.",
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"content": "The advantages of limiting car is great because it helps the environment. Also you don't need a car because there's public transportation. Some would disagree but I belive it's good. This essay will be informing you the advantages of limiting your car usage. Also how walking, bicycling, and talking public transportation is better for you and others. Also how it is bad for enviroment and there will be less traffic for those people that hate traffic.\n\nThe number one advantage of limiting our car usage is because cars are really bad for the enviroment. While your driving your car you don't notice how bad it is for the enviroment. The gas that comes out your car causes smog; which is bad if you comsume it. \"...[The smog] rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world.\" (Source 2). China for example has a big popullation; so many people uses cars. The smoke that comes out makes the air so polluted it's bad for your health.\n\nThe second advantage is how walking and bicycling is better for you. \"'It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air popllution,' said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicyle with his wife.\" (Source 3). It would give people the time to take a break from everything else and enjoy life more. People would enjoy more the outdoors too. \"Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughtout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by board, smooth sidewwalks;...\" (Source 3).\n\nThe third advantage is it would be less traffic. Traffic is very annoying especially when your trying to get somewhere quickly. By limiting your car usage there's less traffic. \"...rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic;...\" (Source 3). \" Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took busues to wok during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams.\" (Source 3). Limitimg your car usage it would let people get to where their going faster than waiting in traffic.\n\nIn conculsion limiting your car usage will make Mother Nature happy, time to enjoy life, and reduce traffic jams. We're so comsumed by electronics we don't enjoy the life outside. BY limiting your usage it will make you enjoy the enviroment more than we enjoy it now.",
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"content": "\"Driverless Cars\" has alot of postive things about it but also negative as well. Thier cars have driven half a million miles without a crash, but so far, Google cars aren't all so driveless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as nevigating through roadwork or accidents. But my thing about this is that its not always safe to have just your car do the work i mean yeah it will prevent car accidents but its not normal. Further improvements in senors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more on their own. I just think it would be weird if my car would drive on it's own I mean yeah its cool but who would want that its just going to make this world more and more lazyier. I think that the world is adding a little to much to our lives like seriously I think we should stay the way we are wat next are they go start making floating cars and doors u can jus walk up to and say open and it will. Driverless cars is doing nothing but helping this world get even more lazyier.",
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"content": "venus is dangerous because,it's'' haves alot of sun and venus is the closest plant to earth. when you are in space you will see the stars all round the other plants. and venus is the most challenging plant for humans to study. venus can have power earthquakes the lighting wil strikes seeking to the land on teh surface because the other plants are cold,warm,hot. and, the high pressure is the heat it's the hottest surface temperature of any other plant in the solar system. and mercury is the closer to our sun. sloar power would be plentiful and radiation wouldn't exceed earth levelsthe researchers can't take samples of rock,gas, your anything else from a distance because if they do it will do something will dangerous to them if they go close up to they other thing that their not to touch it and for the other searchers it can get risks. the heat is capable of melting tin. other travels on earth and they shouldn't go because it's really dangerous to one of your people go into our solar system what i think it is bad to see someone getting help with they have somebody there with them on it. not easy conditions but survivable for the humans to go to get what the need and go back home.",
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"content": "The builders Empire State building grand idea including mooring mast dirigibles also known zeppelins blimps could dock Though idea good provided builders many obstacles For example framework built mast going added top The mast could nt dropped however dirigibles moored would put much stress building s framework This revelation caused modify entire framework make stronger expensiveAnother difficulty builder s faced construction completed allowing dirigibles dock nature The building feet tall winds top constantly changing dangerous making difficult dirigible remain stationary moored Also something builders nt foresee laws blimps flying low urban areas These two challenges ended making use mooring mast impossible",
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"content": "I believe that Facial Action Coding System is a very valuable technology to have in our society because we could use it for many things such as people who are depressed, Humans may be able to improve this technology enough to where they can help people who are not happy with their life to get them the help they need. I also believe this can be something that can go wrong because not everyone has the same emotions and everyone is different for an example someone can still be happy and not smile. Another reason I believe this technology can be very helpful is because a computer is doing it and computers have a lot of potential and are very powerful. When the article states \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" Is evidence of how we can use this new technology, Another example from the text that shows this technology is useful is when the article says \"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile\" we can use this technology to analyze pictures from past history and see the emotions that people where going through at the time. Those are just a few examples of evidence of how we can use this technology to our advantage.",
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"content": "In the contemporary epoch, there is a rising number of people who are still more and more focused on searching for data regarding the history of houses or buildings they live in. This essay is going to identify possible causes of this including curiosity and reliability of investment. Furthermore, to suggest sources of this information for instance neighbourhoods or authorities.\r\n\r\nFirstly, it cannot be denied that nowadays individuals are more curious than our ancestors, which means that one possible reason for this behaviour is a simple human feature, curiosity. Nowadays people are always searching for all kind of information on the internet and the history of their houses are becoming an inevitable part of this process. Secondly, another possible reason for this is the durability of the structures of the houses for instance due to massive weather changes as a result of climate changes or the necessity of reconstruction. To elaborate this further, data regarding the age of the building may help owners to prepare for future possible expenses. \r\n\r\nThere are various methods to discover it. To begin , ask the older neighbours if they remember something crucial regarding their building. Secondly, to contact local communities and thirdly the internet has become a noteworthy opportunity for searching for various data. Finally, if none of these self-searching techniques would help, the authorities should have all the necessary information about each building.\r\n\r\n To conclude, from the aforementioned examples, there are various reasons why people try to find the past of their houses including human features and attempts to protect their future investments. Besides that, there are different options for how to discover it, for ,instance self- searching techniques or authorities.",
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"content": "There Many ways I explain created author way I explain created author That greatfull Parents care want get good edicationThe second way always happy home always cuban spirit house perents cook cuban food There Family togetherThe third way Loved house perents Made confortible perents made many birthdays great time house I never forget parents turned simple house home This ways I explained created",
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"content": "Builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles construction especially regards allowing dirigibles blimps dock From beginning builders faced obstacles high expectations Expectations including desired title world s Tallest Building With desired title came many underlying obstacles like frame support Another obstacle also arose equipped age transportation said John TauranacWith desire dock known time transportation future came even greater obstacles These obstacles included responsibility getting passengers safely dirigibles One biggest obstacles constantly shifting winds violent air currents This problem normally solved open fields using dangling weight belts nearly impossible fix populated The final obstacle really led operation s demise law airships flying low urban areas",
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"content": "Sound someone hears something funny said person begins laugh funny thing heard someone else laughing whole room begins engage laughter This happened many times one time I remember I began making strange noises I normally make sound I m bored want start conversation I never laughed made sounds like That moment changed way I laugh today The date birthday I decided party I invited two best friends tag along We love laugh fun So inviting nobrainer Immediately decided favorite water slide park grand slightly sized It large funnel flashing red lights inside We went The adrenaline pumping veins ride would end d leaped inter tube rush stairs waiting line held We talked chatted sang yelled likely annoyed every person line Then finally got top stairs became awe lifeguard But gorgeous He looked wee little leprechaun We stifled small laugh got ride asked turn inter tube around could go ride backwards He began talk could nt help smirk He began flirting us saying manly voice CAPS want ride ladies said first break Then Then We could nt hold anymore He awkwardly cackled pushed inter tube slide We laughing hard nt even paying attention ride Then hit That dude looks like I screamed ride ended thought second Then undoubtedly went Truth told look like We began laughing throughout ride I made strangely abnormal sound I made noise sounded pig s tail yanked It almost shriek squeal happened I seriously CAPS Note A best friend always especially something embarrassing It s job poke fun one s strangeness So course first say CAPS heck followed expression CAPS That s began laugh I started making even unusual noises I started squealing snorting hiccuping We still laughing crazy squel got inter tube Later fill decided go wave pool Of course I agreed The speaker system area started blaring song CAPS gotogal comes breaking song She began singing joined But got chorus I throw hands air sometimes said I throw banana air sometimes CAPS totally make song said We began thinking different lyrics could say song At first knew exactly say fill chorus decided song needed lyrics That harder think But decided make song food way eat We much fun Eventually came entire song people staring us screamed world Then terible noise arrived began laugh I joined harmony rude interruption continued laugh sound I joined laughing That night went bed humming tune new song CAPS loud Now whenever hang begin sing song sometimes even dance People still look us strange start laughing I start making sound",
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"content": "In Narciso Rodriguez The Blueprints Our Lives author creates mood family love memoir boy lived parents threeroom apartment The heart house kitchen parents taught cook showed passionate Cuban music In house innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home NUM Then realized family nothing blood relative NUM showed neighborhood made Spanish Cuban Italian immigrants could get along Many people lived Rodriguez house even nt blood related Some people landlord daughter lived upstairs grandparents lived basement Anyone neighborhood welcome stay would usually stay house economicmoney problem Rodriguez family let people stay could get back feet My parents always kept arms door open many people consider family knowing would us NUM It simple house I learned real definition family And I never forget house gracious neighborhood many things I learned love I never forget parents turned simple house home NUM",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist many ways In beginning essay happy getting shortcut I followed device launched first light along shortcut slice away hours ride Yosemite National Park He thought knew going I chuckled checked water supply moved When entered first town this sight troubling I got hands knees working handle rusted water pump strength she beginning get worried run water next town only eighteen miles road He dehightrated state The water bottles contained tantalizing sips Then saw building longer open got back bike thoughts changed upset expecting die He saw store Gary wilbers fish camp He went drank cool water used map rather old guys",
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"content": "Education is the fundamental building block for children’s development. With the growth of technology, people have adopted different types of ways to educate their children. Some people prefer to teach their kids at home . However,others think that attending students to the school department is a better choice. I believe that the merits of schooling outweigh the drawbacks.\r\n\r\n On the one hand, Home-schooling can teach children with free time. Parents could adjust the speed of learning progress through their children performance. For example, when kids are good at certain subjects, their parents could consider that they can accelerate this schedule of the subjects or put less time into this area in order to learn weaker points. Therefore, they would spend time effectively and get an average excellent score. In addition, home-teaching is more suitable for the kids who are not mentally strong, thus this way could protect them far away from bullying at school.\r\n\r\n On the other hand, schooling is an important element for the growth of students. These kinds of educational systems teach children how to cooperate with others and communicate with their classmates. This is because communication and managerial skills are essential at work in the future. Moreover, there are a variety of students in the institutions and every class is a collectivity. Therefore, children would know that they should help each other and share items with their classmates and friends. Finally, education institutions could provide advanced resources and well-trained teachers. So they could have a better education at the academy.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, it can be seen that both viewpoints have their own merits. But I think sending offspring to university is more beneficial than home-schooling. This is because school can help socialise children.",
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"content": "It is clear that, across the world, food wastage is a common phenomenon. There are multiple causes for this problem; and this is not something that can be solved in a single day. A collective effort is required, both from government and citizens to compact this issue. In this essay, I will explore some of the causes for food wastage and propose possible solutions. \n\nFirstly, In a country like India we do not have proper storage facilities and distribution channels for storing perishable items. As a result, vegetables like onions and tomatoes, which have very low shelf life is being wasted or thrown away. To illustrate this point, it has been estimated that every year close to Rs. 100 million worth of vegetable and fruits are rotting away, due to the lack of proper storage infrastructure. It is important for the government to do a thorough study of the distribution channels for these perishable items and come up with a plan to build facilities to store such items at proper locations across the country.\n\nFurthermore, every citizen in our country should take responsibility to prevent food wastage at his/her home. For instance, in India, lavish weddings and parties contribute close to 15% of the food wasted every day. It is important that, when we are planning for a function, we should also consider, means by which we can distribute the excess leftover food. Nowadays, they are many organizations which can help with this.\n\nTo sum up, food wastage is a major concern in today's society and in my view, both government and individuals should take responsibility to address this issue and start with solutions proposed above.",
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"content": "\"'All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change,'said David Goldberg, an official of Transportation for America..\"(para.7).There's so many advantages if we limit care usage. For instence, more money saved,more space,pollution, and no traffic.\n\nTo start off, in the article\"In German suburb, life goes on without cars\", by Elisabeth Rosenthal,it states \"car ownership is allowed but there are only two places to park-large garages at the edge of development, where a car-owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home.\" (para2) in other words its expensive. Then it goes on and says, \"'when I had a car I was always tense. I'm much more happier this way,' said Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two, as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles ...\" (para3).Ms. Walter is more calm now that she doesnt have a car. In paragraph 5 more reasons come up. \"...is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes....Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" One of many causes of greeenhouse gas is cars. Next, \"in previous bills, 80 percent of appropriations have by law gone to highays and only 20 percent to other transport.\"(para9)which means that its expensive and most of this things money is wasted on is things that cars need.\n\nTo continue, the author, Robert Duffer, of \"Paris bans driving due to smog\", he states \"after days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\"(para. 10) this tells us that cars are dameging the air we breath. Smog gets around fast,\"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France,after five-days of intensifying smog...[The smog] rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world.\"(para 14)\n\nTo add on, Andrew Selsky which wrote,\"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\", says \"...leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams\"(para20) basically theres traffic. In paragraph 24, \"' It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,' said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife\". The Selsky states, \"parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have be replaced by broad, smoth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic;and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up\" now you can get to your places faster with no traffic and its a smoth trip and good for business.\n\nFurthermore, Elisabeth Rosenthal writes in her article, \"the end of car culture\" some advantages. \"president Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions, unveiled last week, will get fortuitour assist from an incipient shift in American behavior: recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars,driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.\"(para29) In other words not many people are driving anymore its not \"cool\" anymore ,if you dont drive you'll fit in more.\n\nTo summarize,there are so many advantages if you limit car use, such as money saved,more space in the streets,and help keep our air clean.",
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"content": "I think that driverless cars are coming in at a very good time. It can help but the driver also still has to be paying attention to everything around them because the car may need their help in being able to naviate around the bad situations like a work zone or a car accident that they do not really know how to navigate that greatly around yet.\n\nIf the people who are working on the driverless cars keep working at it, they might just be able to get it to where the car can drive through car accidents and work zones and then you would be able to go where ever you want and you wouldn't even really have to drive yourself that much because the car would do it for you.\n\nIf you do not thin that the people would be very safe in these then you do not have to get one but they are going to be trending and very useful. This is your choice but the better choice would be to atleast try to use the driverless car and see how you would like it.",
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"content": "I argue in favor of keeping the electoral college because of the fact that if the popular vote and the vote in congress were to fail, there would be a backup way of casting, counting and recording votes by a qualified group of citizens, as stated in the first paragraph of the prompt. I believe the Electoral College should not be abolished also, for the reason that each candidate for president has an amount of electors chosen, varying on the state laws in effect in the given state he or she is being elected from. Also, an advantage of the Electoral College is also that the winning presidential candidate is awarded all of the electors in most states, except Maine and Nebraska, stated in the seventh paragraph.\n\nThe College also identifies which electors will represent your state at the meeting of electors, as well as the presidential candidate. Just like almost anything, the Electoral College has flaws, such as electors can be any person not holding public office, and, dependng on the state, whoever selects electors may vary. Plus, not everyone can control who their electors vote for, but the Electoral College has been in effect for over 200 years, established by the founding fathers themselves in the Constitution, so why not trust that they knew what they were doing? Besides, when each party selects a slate of electors, they put their trust, which, might I add, is rarely betrayed. But there is the problem that not all winners of electoral votes will not win the national vote; such an instance happened in 2000, when Al Gore had more popular votes than George Bush, yet fewer electoral votes. Even so, that was the first time since 1888, as said in paragraph 16.\n\nThere are a few practical reasons the Electoral College, even though it lacks a democratic pedigree, should be retained. Reason one is a certainty of outcome. An example is in the 2012 election, when Obama recieved 61.7 percent of electoral votes, while Romney recieved 51.3 percent of popular votes. A tie, is also possible, seeing as the total number of votes, (538,) is even. Another example is how the electoral college restores some of the weight in political balance, in which large states, population-wise, lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution. The subject of the Electoral Coolege's method of selecting a president is controversial in the sense that it may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state, such as Democrats in Texas, or Republicans in California,when they know their vote will have no effect, their incentive is much less than if it were picked by popular vote.",
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"content": "It is in my belief that I am against driverless cars. To me driverless cars are harmful to those on the streets walking, and also to those behind the wheel.\n\nDriverless cars would mean that laws would have to change. As stated in the article, traffic laws were written at the assumption that human drivers would be in control at all times. If the driverless cars were to take over, than that would mean that traffic laws would be rearranged to adjust to the new vehicules on the road.\n\nI believe that these vehicles would be a problem because, their technology could fail. If their technology were to fail and an accident were to occure, the driver would be put at fault, but truly as the article states is the driver or the manufacture at fault? Would there be a way to determine who is at fault or would the driver be blamed?\n\nIf these vehicles were to be on the road, drivers would get bored. Dr. Werner, admited that the psychological aspects of automation are really a challenge. Who would want to sit still in a car that doesn't need a driver? Dr. Werner also makes a statement in the reading that we have to interpret driving in a new way, but how? It is in my belief that no one wants to sit in a car doing nothing, while it steers itself.\n\nThese are just a few reasons as to why I believe that cars should remain how they are. These are some of the reasons why these driverless vehicles are a danger. As well as the changes that would have to be made if these cars were to be on the road freely as a normal vehicle.",
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"content": "A number of people give their opinion that marketing brings positive economic influences, at the same time, another group of people think it exerts negative social impacts because not everyone is happy with their position and what they have. In this case, I think, it has some good effects on economical growth because advertisment helps to grab customers attention that can be a good reason of making a good profit and on the other hand, people may get depressed to see the product because they do not have it. Moreover, this essay explores the both sides of advertisment.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, in terms of attracting customers interest, advertisements play a significant role. Furthermore, if a person gets to know about a product, she will buy it to try and that assists a company to make a good income. For example, I use skincare products. If I get in touch with a new one through advertisment, I will definitely buy it.\r\n\r\nSecondly, if we discuss about the bad effects, people's depression is one of them. after seeing a advertisment, an individual may have desire to have the thing that they are showing. It make them feel insufficient and that lead them to depression. For instance, my cousin had a cycle but after knowing the updated one is arrived, it ignites his ambition. as a result, he ended up getting sad and depressed due to his lack of money to buy it.\r\n\r\nTherefore, from my perspective, I think, it mostly offers a positive effect since people are being able to know about the new goods in the market, and also they are purchasing them that contributes to make a very good profit. Additionally, it also enhances the economical condition of a country.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, as I mentioned, both facts are true in a sense such as advertisment is a great way to get buyers which is good and the bad effect is people feel incomplete with what they have. In my opinion, the positive effect is more stronger as it expands the economical growth.",
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"content": "In the story A Cowboy Who Rode Waves there is a boy named Luke Bomberger and hes friend Don Reist. Don invited Luke on a cattle boat and Luke could not say no . Luke and Ron went on the trip and got to be a Seagoing Cowboys. Both of them love to be a Seagoing Cowboys. Both of them think every body should do it. It was free to do what they loved and got pade for it.\n\nIn the story A Cowboy Who Rode Waves Luke and Don loved Being Seagoing\n\nCowboys because they got to sea the world. Both of them got to see Europ and China. In side of Europ and China they got to see the Acropolis in Greece. They also got to ride in a gondola in Venice Italy a city that has water for streats. They also got to ture a excavated castle in Crete. they got to look at and explor and to wonder at the\n\nPanama Canal.\n\nIn the story A Cowboy Who Rode Waves Luke and Don got to work with Cows ,Horses, Muls, and Donkys. They got to work with the ainmals over seas . They had to feed them two or three time's a day. When they headed for Greece they had 335 horses and enough hay and oats to feed them. Both of them got to work with the animals for weeks at a time .\n\nIn the story A Cowboy Who Rode Waves Luke and Don got to be on a boat and got to have fun and work with ainmals. They loved that job because Luke got to live and work on a farm and now the thing he is doing is taking care of animals and gets to do it on a boat in the ocean. After they drop the ainmals off on the way to the next stop the get to play things such as\n\nTable tennis, fencing,boxing,reading ,and games whould help pass time till they got to land .\n\nIn the story A Cowboy Who Rode Waves you should do the job because insted of working on a regular farm with animals you get to do it on a boat in the sea and you get to play games when you are going to pick up a nother load of animals. Most of the time when you go on a boat it cost mony but if you love animals and boat's then it is free to do what you like to do.",
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"content": "Have you ever been in a car accident? For those who have, they will tell you that it is a very scary situation. In my opinion, I believe that we shouldn't use driveless cars because there are too many variables that come along with driving. So many people get into car accidents every year and if we start using driverless cars, then i think that it will increase the amounts of car accidents every year.\n\nWhile being able to focus on other tasks while driving does sound useful, it would be better for everyone involved to just stick to normal driving. With so many different things that can cause accidents, why put your life in the hands of a computor. For example, in paragraph 7 they mention that the driverless cars that have been made so far are not completely driverless because whenever there is a situation that requires human skill, the driver must take over. So what happens when a deer runs in front of your car? Does it just stop?\n\nMany people have a hard time learning to drive as it is. And while this does help us make it easier, what happens when no one knows how to drive because we let the cars do the driving? With all the advances in technology that we have made, I think this is one we can keep simple. Do you really wanna risk your life in a car that will stop driving itself when a squirrel jumps in front of it? I didn't think so, keep it simple and keep it safe.",
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"content": "It is an irrefutable fact that the trend of following celebrities among youngster rapidly increasing. Some people assert that most of the famous folks are known by their style and money as compared to their achievements and this would be a bad impact on teenagers.\nIn my opinion, I totally disagree with the statement, youngsters influence by their bad habits. In this essay, I intend to support my views before reasonable conclusion can be drawn.\n\nThere are several reasons why it does not influence badly on teens. Firstly, the person who becomes a celebrity, it means they have talent and best skills that’s why they are famous. Furthermore, if they have a beautiful face, that’s the main logic because nobody has glamour by nature. Moreover, if they struggle a-lot in his past life for that he is wealthy. For an example, there are many popular people who struggle in their life, after that they have all this things such as drake and so on. \n\nOn the contrary side, most of the people attract by atrocious activities such as abusing in public and abuse drugs. In addition. This type of things could bad impact on the young generation. For an instance, the famous singer honey Singh lost his career because of using drugs and using bad language in songs.\n\nTo put in a nutshell, I pen down and say that we don’t judge people by their glamour and richness. There are lots of struggle behind those people. It depends on people, which things they are followed bad or good things.",
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"content": "Driverless cars. They sounds unheard of, right? Well in recent years, the development of these automated automobiles has made this futuristic sounding idea even closer to becoming our reality. The text tells us that \"Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009.\" That is 7 years ago! A world of driverless cars is much closer than the world may think.\n\nDriverless cars need to be developed because once perfected, the oh-so-common car crash will be a thing of the past. Never again will you hear someone talk about losing a loved one in an automobile accident, simply because they will not occur! One example from the text says \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far, Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" Even though these cars are not completely driverless yet, the models in the works are pushing the development in the right direction to create these safe and affective driverless cars.\n\nFurthermore, the development of autonomous cars will not only create safer roads, but they will help solve enviornmental problems by reducing the ammount of fuel that cars of today use. \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flecibility than a bus. He beliebes such cars would findamentally change the world.\" The development of these cars will make the world a much safer place.\n\nThose who oppose the idea of developing these cars argue that problems will occur between the opporators and the manufacturers. They believe that if\n\na human driver must be ready to take over the car when alerted, they will be more distracted and accidents will happen much more often than predicted. But once laws and regulations are set into place and driverless cars are fully developed,\n\nproblems like this will be few and far between.\n\nMany big-name car manufacturers are in the works on developing driverless cars. When all the technology is finally here, a person driving a car themselves will be a thing of the past. development of autonomous cars must continue. Perfecting these cars will launch our world into the future, creating a more safe and conservative place for everyone.",
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"content": "Some perspectives suggest that conducting group exercises on campuses is crucial to cultivate young individuals with the capacity for cooperation. In my perspective, I could only partially agree with opinions as such, since there are other ways to achieve the same goals.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, it is inevitable that playing group sports could train young individuals to work together, such as playing volleyball and baseball. To win a game, youth need to learn how to support others instead of focusing on personal performance. It is similar to working in companies as part of teams, where employees will have better results by supporting each other.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are other means of teaching to facilitate the capacity of cooperation, including group presentations, or throwing big events on campuses. It provides more opportunities for students to discuss detail, or brainstorm with group members to come up with solutions and ideas to address problems. Group members with different backgrounds and interesting could teach students to embrace different inputs and explore different possibilities. For example, some universities ask students to hold final exhibitions before graduating which requires the participants of the whole class. It forces students to step out of their small social circle and learn how to work in a diverse environment, preparing them for real societies. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is true that playing group sports could enhance the capacity for cooperation, since they need to work together to win games. However, I believe that assignments from educators could provide more diversity in a group, allowing young individuals to learn how to work with people who have different perspectives.",
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"content": "We discovered the face on mars twenty-five years ago and since then we have not uncovered anything that tells us there are alien life forms living on the planet. Is it still possible for there to be aliens on the planet, maybe. We could go back to the planet and see if there is any evidence of alien life forms now.\n\nThe face on Mars is formed from wind blowing dirt and sand around, pileing it up and packing it together. Now it just so happened that it managed to form a face with eyes, a nose, and a mouth. Now is this a strnge thing to have happen, yes it is indeed but it still happened all on its own. If we were to go and look at the photots you would see that there are no footprints or anything aroun the face, there is just the face.\n\nUnless the alien life forms are living beneath the planet there are no aliens. Is it possible for aliens to be living underneath the ground of the planet, yes it is possible. For all we know there could be aliens living underneath the crust of our planet. We do have yet to discover everything but for now we will assume that there are no alien life forms living in this galaxy, maybe in another galaxy but not this one.",
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"content": "Having offensive books movies library nt allowed If library saw book anything took offensive likely someone else find offensive So eliminating problem anyone else sees reduce problems even happen Now ever find offensive things libraries More people get offended lesser things One reason censorship libraries child would want going library seeing derrogitory writings movies I would upset child see It s teaching different values s teaching since s library must okay community For example library book movie drugs anything sexual re going look likely things could end harming others If goverment provides taxes libraries nt show goverment nt care offensive items shelves It gives bad name If look goverment support answers How would feel judgement offensive things libraries It would seem like nt care might cause panic throughout countryWhich would cause many problems needed It would easier thing censor libraries If libraries nt consumed negative offensive literature would lot room things greater value We could books movies educational actually teach person something Rather lead making bad decisions There plenty sites places could get book really wanted Not library books You could find one quite easily tried If library offensive things I think would nt large variety would better decision look elsewhere could find larger quantity subject looking When I go library I go educational books books teach kids fill bong different sex postitions I highly disagree I think s negative outlook society putting things future generation s hands read So putting censorship libraries calm problems reoccuring communities might eliminate problem completely",
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"content": "Have you ever thought so far into the future you think about automatic cars?\n\nSome old cartoons even involve a driverless, flying car.\n\nIf a cartoon can do it, why can't we?\n\nBut then again cartoons aren't realistic.\n\nMaybe driverless cars are.\n\nThere are many benefits and doubts about driverless cars and I will state some in this essay.\n\nFirst, one benefit would be you could multitask in your car if you're running late, drinking your morning coffee, etc.\n\nYou could now text while driving now too without it being a safety hazzard.\n\nIf this car were created you would still be able to control it if you were getting into an accident.\n\nThe car would also alarm the driver in case of an accident were to occur.\n\nIt would also give you a heads-up display, which would help the \"driver\" be prepared to take over.\n\nSome companies actually have something similar to a driverless car such as Google.\n\nThe Google car isn't exactly driverless because you still have to control the car, but so would an actual driverless car if needed.\n\nBut this would be very beneficial for some people.\n\nAlthough some people would love this idea there are some doubts and cons about this driverless car.\n\nTherefore, the driverless car seems like a great idea, right? To some it might be, but others may have some concerns.\n\nOne might be the video camera a company may want to include to watch the driver, but that would be an invasion of privacy.\n\nMany may agree with this.\n\nAnother would be what if the weather conditions outside were outrageous? Then there might be some technical problems with the car and could cause danger to the passengers in the vehicle.\n\nThe car could have many malfunctions because of the high usage.\n\nThe car doesn't only have some concerns about the people inside, but the people out of it.\n\nSome states even have a law against cars like these.\n\nSafety is a big concern for everyone for this driverless car.\n\nSo there you have it, pros and cons of this driverless car.\n\nI may not drive now, but one day I will be and I wouldn't want to be on the roads with a concerned driverless car.\n\nBut everyone is entitled to their own opinion.\n\nYou may agree to disagree on these statements, but only the future knows what will be in store for us and we'll just have to wait and see.",
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"content": "Should these Driverless car's be on the road ? I have a hard way of picking if they should be or not. because what if everything their saying about this car is right? What if the car does warn you like they say in the story. But then gain what if doesn't theres a lot of things that cold happen so. I would say yes and I would say no.\n\nI don't think these cars should be able to be on the road. why? I just feel like these cars are not safe. In should not be fully trusted with our lifes. What if something mess's up in the car. And it doesn't warn you that something is ahead of you and that you need to take over?\n\nIn the story is say's \" GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.\" Okay now let's say the car is driver in is need to take control of the wheel. But the seat does not vibrate? what if something goes wrong with the car. Because every smart thing doesn't always work correctly! so i have to say that would be one of my reason this car does not be long on the roads yet.\n\nI would say most people will buy this car because \" The cars foresees would use half of the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more than flexibility than a bus.\"\n\nIt says that they can drive for a long time in still have a lot of gas in it. you know buses and taxis drive a long time in need a lot of gas. But to be driving a car that makes you save more money not having to spend all your money on gas. Is great everyone would love that cause what oerson doesn't love to save money? That's\n\nleaving you with more money in your pockets. In I know everyone will love that. So yes that is a reason I would let this car on the roads.",
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"content": "I believe something someone offends right take stand You nt deal If something offensive library right A library supposed helpfull place Who would want sit back watch raciest movie Who would want little kid watching something sexual movie Magazines even develope lot problems Muisc straight offensive If young adult child reads watches movie raciest teaches bad things Racism hurtful thing What see read really affect You realise wrong It could saying hurtful things differant race If person nt raciest see something could offend They feel like cool They go say raciest things It makes feel good Later feel guilty All movie book If movie making fun race hurts Being made fun hurts It technicly bullying Bullying lead suicide Who cares someone black white We deep inside Movies like banned public libraries Movies today pretty much anything want Sex drugs cursing etc Kids get watching without anyone saying anything The librarian swipes card movieThey know right wrong If see someone drugs sex might think cool They go We need movies like public library We make lot harder kids try get movies like These moives also offend us Make us feel uncool Make us feel like go try In magizines today make everyone look perfect These people offend Young teenage girls even boys ones mostly looking magizines If see magizine begin want look like You see skinny She tan She perfect skin Its normal someone jeleous We human Sometimes images get us We starve try skinny That dangerous health These girls knock confidence Into today s society people stive popularity They want look perfect They want guys stair We use girls magizine helps us know want look like You love look like You unique No one skinny pretty Magizines offensive In today s society music horrible Rap country rock music Some lyrics really offend people The words get head everytime hear song If really take time look lyrics song realise let say anything I ca nt name many songs I know beeing teenager make fun something For example song band It called I must emo It makes fun people unique way Some lines song CAPS I get depressed I cut wrists every direction How make fun someone self harm Depression self harm big thing today s society Their nothing funny If someone hurts hears think could happen It would really offend They could go cut theirselves even They could try suicide In song also makes fun gay people It makes fun way emo people look I look like I dead dress like homo another line song I nt know would terribly offensive We need get types songs libraries We say public library The library ment good place Anyone go We unique ways If something offensive right stand We need make offensive books movies magazines etc harder get hold",
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"content": "The author suggest that studying wenus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents he thinks human curiosity will began.the text states\"striving to meet the challenger presented by venus has value,not only because of the insight to bo gained on the planet itself,but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into equally intimidating endeavors\".the author thinks getting a closer look at venus is a way to look at venus value . the text states\"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edge of imagination and innovation\".this shows how the author suggests that studyng venus is a good idea depite it's risks and dangers it has.\n\nIn the Challenge of Exploring Venus the author states a lot of good reasons they should study Venus and study the value of Venus despite it's dangers.\n\nthe authr states\"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus\".the author belives that although it may be danerous it also maybe worth the danger. the text states \"Solar power would be plentiful,and radiation would not exceed Earth levels\".the authors says these might not be easy conditions but they are survivable for humans. this shows why the author suggest studying Venus.\n\nThe author belives that if the research get a better and up close look at Venus they can study it better.the passage states\"More importantly ,researchers cannot take sample sof rock,gas,or anything else,from a distance\".research most get a closer look to study Venus fully and in the way they need and wnat to.the text states\"Therefore,scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to undestand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risk\".this show that the author and researchers are willing to take risk to get up close and study Venus.\n\nResearchers belive that if they are up close and personal it would be better and give them more evidence for Venus. the text states\"if our sister planet is so inhospitable,why are scientists evendiscussing further visits to it's surface\".the author says from the earth u can see a nice sight but you can't see much from a distance.the passage states\"The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable,but what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive\".this shows how there can be obstacles and risk but researchers and scienctists are willing to take and bypass them anyway.\n\nThe text states\"a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus\".there are alot of risks with Returnint to Venus and getting rocks and samples off of venus.the text states\"Often referred to as Earth twin,Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size,and occasionally the closet in distance too\".the author will find anyway to over look and find new and safer ways to go up close and personal to Venus.this shows how the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents to humans.",
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"content": "I actually like way author concludes story paragraph It basically sumarizises story sums words would want wonder happened next sequel This good story I personally relate many ways",
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"content": "The face that people think it was created by aliens is not made from aliens it is acutally made from dust storms, and sand storms. There is no evidence that aliens made it we don't have any fingerprints that aliens made it nor any life on Mars if that. All we have is the image the Viking 1 created. How is aliens supposed to make it don't have tools to make it because Mars does not have any thing to make it with only rocks that is about it.\n\nIf the people want to belive it was made by aliens let them there is no since arguning about it. It is there belives not ours so let them belive in alines if aliens are real they would probably attack us if that.\n\nBut now it is all over with because ther is no since arguning about it what so ever and that is my essay.",
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"content": "Mass media enabled inviting fame to those who have a commanding presence and dominant influence, best of whom are celebrities. People follow their leads as their graceful lives set bars for glory, far less than their own achievements. As this needs imperative attention, I think it shall take a while for this concern to be addressed.\n\nMarked by their elusive beauties, celebrities hail in all forms of media; thus, people only see their outer sophistication. Nonetheless, their achievements are commonly left unnoticed. This is mainly due to idolatry where beauty is considered an investment. Hence, in today's era, a person need someone to look up to and is perfect enough to stand out among the rest. This notion is even exacerbated by the media, to which they preserve one's outer elements as priorities. For instance, adverts hire celebrities whose commanding influence hypnotises others to follow. This is quite hard to control since creativity is companies' best shot.\n\nNotwithstanding the attention that artists' glamour and richness are getting, this creates a notion to people's mind to achieve something rather than to stay mediocre and plebeian. However, the point of losing one’s sight towards achievements is getting into trouble. This create a bad impact to our society since people no longer feel the hunger to do the best in their own fields instead, they want to become gorgeous, rather than a winner, because it is perceived as a trend way more than the other.\n\nBy and large, I think it has both positive and negative remarks. Albeit the fact that one is given more importance than the other, still, people consider a point of reference for standards. The drawbacks may outweigh the good points, I believe that general trends be acknowledged on their own.",
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"content": "In todays society pollution levels are higher than they have ever been. This is because of cars; every time u start up ur car you are polluting the earth . You may not can see it but it happens. There is a way to stop this though but it will take alot of time and convincing, becasuse who would wanna give up their car it is such a easy source of transportation and some people couldnt go without it.\n\nThere is also a possibility that we wouldnt have to go completely without cars. We could go to electric or just find a totally different resource to run a car. I am sure there has to be something else than just gas that could run a car. It amazes me how we make all these crazy futuristic inventions but we cant make another substance to run a car. I think we should stop worrying about just stopping car usage completely and try to make something else that will run a car.\n\nSome people may say \"you now how difficult it actually is to find something as precise and accurate working as gasoline?\" Well yes i do understand that but if we all got the best brains inn the world together and tr to figure this out i most definitely think we can do it. Maybe we wouldnt have to just get the smartest people to help us, we could get everyone in the world to help us. Some may also ask \"well how do you expect to do that?\" well its simple you have to do the same thing we would to stop smoking SPREAD AWARENESS. Doing this would help a huge amount.\n\nI think alot of people take the whole no car thing the wrong way, cause lets face it there no way we could go without cars.",
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"content": "Have you ever seen something unusual in the ground? If so do you think it was created by humans or just a natural landform of some sort. Many people believe that most landforms on earth are made by humans, The face on mars is a natural landform.\n\nIf the \"face' on mars was created by alliens it would look a lot different. Many people think alliens look weird, Well the \"face\" on mars wastn't so weird looking. It looked almost like a human face. You would think that alliens would make something radical and not just a face in their planet. Many people seem to believe that they would make something simple.\n\nEventhough many people were not satisfied with the theory that NASA gave them, NASA went on to search for more clues as to which \"alliens made the landform.\" From the pictures that they took you would think that they would be able to detect whether alliens even walked/ touched the surface of the landform.\n\nIf you think that alliens made the landform, I would suggest you look at the picture more closely. Just because its on a planet like mars doesnt mean it was made by an allien. I mean how many people actually believe in alliens anyway? If you've never seen them how do you know if they even exist? Take another quick look at the picture tell what you think. Is it even possible for alliens to be alive even if it is on another planet?\n\nThe \"face\" on mars is a natural landform. What leads me to beieve that, is that i dont think alliens are real. Maybe they are real, but why would they make something so simple as a face. Dont you think they wouldve went a little overboard with their creations?",
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"content": "Facial Action Coding System (FACS) is a computer technology that read the emotional expressions of students. The technology show be in classroom because how would we know if something wrong with a students if she does not show it or tell it. Many students do not show there feeling in school because the are afriad. Especially around there frined because the dont want there friends to see there emotional side of them. FACS should be in classroom because we need to know how if you and a good or bad mood, counselor, and if your getting bully and your not happy about it.\n\nClassroms should have the Facial Action Coding System so the teacher can know if you are in a good or bad mood because some people dont show it. Teachers need to know how their students are feeling because they might call on them in class to answer a qusetion not knowing that the student is in a bad to answer the quwstion. In the text it states,\" Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc. Yet Dr. huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions.\" This quote support my answer because its hard to tell if a person upset or need time to be alone so he or she can cool down. Having a FACS computer in classroom will really help teahers know if there something upsetting there students.\n\nHaving a Facial Action Coding System in classrom would help conselor know if you go to there office and your not showing no emotion but your upset about something. The technogly can be helpful to many school because teachers do not know whats going on with there students because they dont show it or try to talk to somebody about it. In the text it states,\"Empathy may happen because we unconsciously imitae another person's facial epressions. Whoever thought that amking faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions!.\" This quote support my answer because it can show how your real feeling behind their smile.\n\nThis technogly could help students that are getting bully and are afriad to speak up and tell a teacher. Students that get bully everyday at school are most likely do not tell nobody that they are getting bully because they are afriad of the person that are doing the mean things to the student. Having the Facial Action Coding System can help the student that getting bully seek out help before it gets worse then it already is. In the text it states,\"But in a false smile, the mout is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius. to an expect, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are something used to spot when a \"smiling\" politcian or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" This quote supports my quote because it can help a teacher know if her or his student is upset about something and he or she can ask the student so it he be stop.\n\nFacial Action Coding System should be in school because it can be helpful for teachers to know if your in a good or bad mood , letting your counsoler if you upset about something, and also if your getting bully. This technolgy is a great way to know if something going on at home. Many student would proabbly ant this kind of computer because they would be scared to tell somebody how they are feeling. Students are not just going to be emotional in front of there classmate because when there friend ask whats wrong with them it make it harder to tell somebody how your feeling. School should have this computer in there school because its a great way to know if a student is upset.",
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"content": "Education plays a very pivotal role in everyone's life and asking questions about the course is common among children. However, some people feel for the betterment of the education system it would be great if students argue with teachers about the topic while others opposed to it and think that it will affect the respect of teachers to a great extent as children will not have that discipline in them. This essay will take into consideration both the points and at last will state a personal opinion on how we can deal with this issue?\r\n\r\nOn one hand, discussions in the classrooms are always beneficial as it helps to maintain a teacher-student bond. In other words, when a child clarifies certain queries with a teacher, it helps them to understand each other well. Moreover, frequent debating makes children confident in their future pursuits. For example, while doing group discussions in the office people feel confident to argue about anything because of their strong foundation. Furthermore, this will leads to criticising teachers when they do not have the knowledge about the context.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, others strongly opposed it. They think that it will lead to misbehavioural issues in the class as children will lose respect for their teachers. For instance, pupils in the United Kingdom mistreat their teachers during class because of fewer rules and regulations. Due to this, teachers will never feel inclined toward the children and will not have an understandable relationship with their students. This will affect their school life as they will never be able to respect others in future.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, it is inevitable to say discussions are an integral part of every classroom as they not only boost children's confidence but also enhance the relationship between teacher and students. Therefore, in my opinion, it would be great if children should know their limits and always maintain the decorum of the classroom by respecting their teachers.",
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"content": "Dear I strong belief children adults spending far away much time computer Please consider following computers negative effect people Furthermore parents agree experts spend way much time computer less time friends I little I rarely ever went computer But parents consult leave computer multiple times Ever since teens joined myspace twitter addicted ca nt stop going friends posting Physcologist states CAPS internet multiple hours day ca nt concentrate school minds ve going get home school get home This daily reutine teenager Secondly going computer constantly cause health problems percent teens nonstop use computer wear glasses contacts overusing computer I use computer without break multiple I get terrible headache eyes ca nt take CAPS stay laye computer fatigue next morning pediatrician middle schoolers much popular users interner mostly tired school People stay late black saggy lines eyr see person like taht overuser internet Most pole also never get outside using internet time Lastly children missing beauty nature nt get enough excersize cant think clearly becasue tehre oxygen brains Obesity begginning tape toll children sit inside junkfood Children rarely outside excersize become overweight obese children instratford almost never outside excersize As I elementary school recess middle school never The chnace outside s warm",
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"content": "Venus is a mystery planet but is also very similar to earth. Why havent we explored it yet? Venus should be explored because it is fairly close to us sometimes in the year. Venus also shares a lot of characteristics with earth. If humans were able to explore Venus then we would possibly be able to make a new planet livable to humans and also give us much more knowledge about space and planets.\n\nSometimes Venus is closer to Earth than Mars. In paragragh 2 it states that,\n\n\"Earth in terms of density and size and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" We are starting to learn about mars and if Venus is close to earth when mars is far then we should have no excuse not to explore Venus.\n\nSince Venus is so close to Earth then we could possibly make a new livable planet and also have a whole new line of information for scientists to study and explore with.",
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"content": "The mood author portraying memoir loving caring emotional mood In paragraph states It I learned real definition family And I never forget house gracious neighborhood many things I learned love I never forget parents turned simple house home",
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"content": "The mood memoir author trying show pretty much happiness gratefullness Narciso Rodriguez cuban Narciso bringing mood happiness memoir learning Cuban background much greatful mom dad The author trying show appriciation gratefulness This whole memoir trying show readers great come different cultures know make different things This memoir representing good moods happiness To always grateful life exspecially family friends life The mood memoir happy gratefull",
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"content": "Limiting the amount of driving allowed and having car-free cities can have several benefits by reducing the amount of air pollution and traffic jams. Some disadvantages of having car-free cities are time management and paying fines to drive. Greenhouse gasses can be reduced by limiting driving in cities and having car free cities. About 50 percent of greenhouse gasses are from passenger cars in some cities in the United States and 12 percent in Europe. There were about 80 micrograms of particulate per cubic meter in London and 114 in Brussels. Paris has the most air pollution with 147 micrograms per cubic meter.\n\nParis has 67 percent of its vehicles run on diesel fuel, which is blamed for most of the air pollution. The rest of Western Europe has an average of 53.3 percent of vehcicles fueled by diesel. Car emissions are traped from the warm air caused by cold nights and warm days. A partial ban was created in Paris for driving to reducce the amount of pollution. Drivers with even number license plates could drive on certain days and odd number plates would drive on other days. After only five days the air pollution was down by 60 percent. In Bogota there are car free days and 118 miles of bicycle paths were constructed and the amount of traffic jams during rush hour were down by almost half.\n\nLimiting driving will lower the amount of traffic and it made several people happier. Most public transportation was free on weekends. When driving was not allowed, people would be walking and riding bikes. Most people in car free cities enjoyed the sound of children instead of hearing the sound of motors all of the time. Public transportation was allowed every day and it reduced the amount of traffic with having fewer cars on the streets and roads.\n\nWhen driving on days then it's not allowed the drivers have to pay fines. In Paris drivers with even number license plates would drive on certain days andodd numbers drive on the other days. If someone is driving on the wrong day there is a fine of 22 euors or 31 dollars for each day that they drive when they can't. In bogota there is a 25 dollar fine for driving on car free days. Time management is another problem when someone can't drive their car. Going to work would take longer when walking, riding a bike or using the public transportation.\n\nhaving car free cities and limitin driving can be good for reducing the amount of air pollution and the amount of traffic out on the roads. Some people feel happier when they live in a car free city because they feel like they have less stress but some people dont like paying fines when they are driving their car on certain days.",
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"content": "One day I go doctors office get shots When got doctors office I wait uncomfortable chairs dad It first time getting shots I didnt know felt Since I little harder patience I wanted I kept asking dad doctor coming yet dad would always say patience It got point dad frustrated told go play toys I notice But I saw fun toys gleaming sunlight I ran But minutes got boring I went back sat It getting boring I couldnt take anymore I wanted scream But I couldnt take I started get mad wanted get But I didnt let dad know I wanted think I patient I yell loud I could doctor came said CAPS I releved doctor finally came give shots But I didnt know I going getin horrible pain days",
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"content": "I think that we should keep the\n\nElectoral College because changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States can be bad. It can be bad because if majority of the people pick a president and he's not a good president and they are just picking him to pick him then he might not be a good president , he might just be popular aka well known. We should keep the Electoral College because it is fair and it is going by all of the votes , not just the popular votes.\n\n\"The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes, is required to elect the President.\"\n\nWhich means it is a non-democratic method. When you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. The Electoral College has a better chance of having an outcome than the popular votes. \"\n\nIn 2012's election, for example, Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney.\"\n\nWhich means the Electoral College is a much more trustworthy system than the popular vote. Electoral College has something called\n\n\"Swing States''\n\nSwing states are states that often pay close attention to the campaign and they really listen to the competing campaign. They are the most thoughtful voters and the most thoughtful ones should be the ones to decide on everything.\n\n\"At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states\"\n\nThat is incorrect because the electoral college pays close attention to every state to see which ones would be good to pick. The Popular States says that the electoral College system is out of date and lame , The Electoral College avoids run off elections unlike the popular vote system. I am ending my claim by saying we should keep the electoral college because it is a more organized system.",
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"content": "Some people dont like to drive cars and some people do like to drive cars. Do you like to drive cars? There is a new thing called \"Driverless cars\" meaning a driver can be in the car and the car will drive by itself. They are still in production and still being tested to see if they are safe. People are finding new ways to make them more and more safe.\n\nI dont like the idea of driverless cars because I like to drive cars. There are also more reason why I dont like the idea. One reason is they can cause some problems such as reckless driving and if the technology fails then it can wreck into another car or a building. The main reason is what if the technology malfunctions and doesnt let the driver know when to take over the wheel? Technology doesnt always work 100% of the time.\n\nThe car uses sensors which will sensor a 3D surrounding of the car but what if something is blocking the sensor such as rain or heavy snow. How does the technology know the speed limit on certain roads?\n\nThere are also alot of positive ideas to driverless cars also such as it only uses half the fuel it uses today so it wouldnt cost as much fuel. It would be easier to get to places and it wouldnt require much work.\n\nWhat about the cost of this technology, it sounds very expensive. I dont like the idea of this. Some people are going to love this technology because it doesnt require much work. There are some states that might not allow this because of any kind of malfunctions it has.\n\nWhats your opinion on this new technology? What if alot of people dont like it and they dont use it so they spend all that money on somthing people dont like. I dont think this is a good idea but yes there are alot of pros and cons.",
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"content": "Self driving cars are a step into the future that is vital. For so long we have had to put up with the hassle of driving from place to place that it sometimes gets old. Self driving cars are more than just for acomidation or a fine example of how well off you are, they help with many things such as scientific understanding of computerization, fuel consumption and waste, as well as those who are visually impared or have any other kind of dissability that prevent them from driving. We as a nation must work together to bring notice to the regulaters who will not allow testing of Self atonomous driving cars because without the testing we will not be able to help that pregnant neighbor get to the hispital to deliver her baby in time, or help our grand parents get to a crucial doctors appointment, or simiply enjoy the clean and emmition free enviroment with our very own family. These and many other things are possible if we bring attention to regulaters and let car manufacturers work together to come up with the perfect car. I'm not saying it will be easy or quick because that is simpily not true, but together and with our needs we can make it happen. We really do need self drving cars it is only a process of advancement that should not be taken out of the equation of scientific evolution.",
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"content": "You should be in the Seagoing Cowboys because it's fun. It's very simple. You have alot of free time. You get to travel. You get to be with animals.\n\nIf you dont sign uo for it you made a big mistake. You get to play games like baseball, volleyball, and many more. You get to travel to places like Greece, China, and many more. If you like animals than this is the perfect job for you becaise they have plenty of animals. They got so much freetime they can go to places where the streets are filled with water.\n\nNow you know what Seagoing Cowboys are maybe you should join them. I mean it kinda is the best job in the world because you get to do alot. I meam who dosen't like animals and different countries. If you don't sing up you must have a better job. So you should sign up because it is the best job you cold ever have.",
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"content": "Nowadays, the environment in most countries is getting worse because of many factors. In consequence, both manufacturing companies and people must be accountable for environmental protection.\r\n\r\nThere are two principal factors that inflict environmental dilemmas. One of those is industrialisation, in fact, many wastes including oil and chemicals from factories and warehouses are being thrown into the environment. They contaminate the water which causes water pollution and makes lots of aquatic animals lose their habitats. Moreover, the waste is also being thrown into landfills, ruining the fertility of the soil which decreases the productivity of crops and other vegetables. Vehicles are also another factor, the emission from private cars can produce a lot of carbon dioxide which leads to global warming. As a result, by all of that, the precious ecosystems will be in danger. \r\n\r\nTherefore, not only large corporations and governments should take responsibility but also individuals. Firstly, the governments should take action to stop people from destroying the environment by introducing stricter legislation. This can be applied to all citizens, especially companies that prevent them from releasing more waste. Furthermore, if people infringe the law, then heavy fines and punishments will be put into practice. In terms of large corporations and individuals, improving self-awareness is the most important thing. They are able to take courses or read about how bad the environment is so that they can protect the ecosystems; factories are also capable of reducing waste with renewable energy. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the deterioration of the ecosystem is the result of countless human activities, so both governments and each individual have their own part of the duty to make the environment better.",
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"content": "Presently, a commercial has been growing and broadening its influence due to changing technologies and increasing sales that have a positive impact on the income of companies. However, society throughout the years has been noticing degradation among consumers, because more and more often they choose things imposed by advertising and almost lost their own opinion. Overall, I think we could avoid negative effects and get more positive ones for everybody if use advertisement carefully.\r\nThe advertisement was initially developed with the good aims inasmuch as advertising clips should give consumers wide options for to choice. Besides, via such videos companies can make highly competitive conditions among one-type products. Now an advertisement surrounds around us permanently, because it gets access to more tools means such as the internet, billboards, the TV and so on. Therefore, new products and companies get more chances to represent them for higher sales.\r\nHowever, throughout years clip makers have been finding out methods to manipulate the audience by repeatedly rotating the same videos, repeating words, or, even, implementing some technology that impairs on the psychology of consumers. For example, early in the century, much news showed the technology of the twenty-fifth frame that forced people to buy the advertised product, then throughout of the plenty years different sources tried to deny this information. Moreover, many advertisements show standards of beauty via new creams or other products that make women more beautiful or help lose weight that leads to doubt about their appearance. Besides, many companies via advertising have been selling not high quality products, because of a good clip outweigh high quality in our time. Thus, a good start turns into something ambiguous.\r\nTo sum up, I believe advertising as effective as other methods of product promotions. However, IT IS necessary to restrict using such videos and turn them into commercials a style that is more informative than attractive and intrusive.",
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"content": "To me reading people emotion expression of students in a classroom is valuable, because not everyone would tell there probles to their friends or familly therefore the new technology to read people emotion is a good thing, is good for everyone . We need all our emotion for thinking, problems solving, and focused attention. In the other hand by reading other people emotions would help you figure out on how to help them focus more , because every human bein are neurobologically wired, and to learn anything , our minds most be focus and our emotions need to feel balance. In the article it say's \" the process begins when the computer model of the face ; all major muscles in the model must move like human muscles . In the article 6 it say's'' by the way did making a happy face in this experimrnt also make you feel sligtly happy?'' To me putting a happy face just because you fake in it or not trying to let other people figured is not a bad thing however it can also be bad because on the inside you not happy , so therefore i think using technology is better good thing to figure people out.",
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"content": "Why I think added needs time grow like plant takes test Sometimes need time pass test going school teaches stuff need know helps us grow understand life I know tenth grader I understand life I first She still lot growing mentaly past preasnt",
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"content": "Joining the Seagoing Cowboys program would be a great opperatonuty for you. This would let you see the world in a differnt way. You would get to travel the world. See differnt things and go siteseeing. This opperatonuty would let you have fun with work and and with your job by working with animails. There are many reasons why you schould join the Seagoing Cowboy program.\n\nOne reason is this oppertonuty would let you see the world in a differnt way. It would make you aware of people and people of there other contries and there needs. It might evan lead you closer to makeing something good in this world. It led Luke Bombergers family to do amazing things like hosta number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.\n\nAnother reason is this oppertonuty would let you travel the world , see new thing, and meet new people. On return trips after the animails have been unloaded you can paly games like Baseball and Volleyball games where the animails used to be hosted. Boxing, tabeltennis, fencing, whittiling, reading, and playing games also made it fun and let time pass quickley.\n\nSome people might say it would be to boring to be on a ship in the middle of the sea with nothing to do and they would miss friends and families because it a long trip. On the ship you have jobs and on the return trips you can play games in the stalls where the animails where hosted. They might also say they have no point in doing this. This would be a great oppertunity for anyone who loves farming evan if you don't you could learn a great lesson from this Seagoing Cowboy program.\n\nIn conclusion going on this trip would be a great oppertonuty for any one. You could get a great life lesson out of this and you could meet new people and see differnt things. you could also have lots of fun on the return trips and with your jobs. You would get to play lots of games. If you get a good oppertonuty take it because most people don't get chances like this.",
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"content": "Honestly i think it would be a bad idea to have driver less cars, just think about how dangerous it could be?\n\nWell in the article it says that that this car will be just like a computer. Some computers break down or dont work right, if your computer at home acts up, would you be safe enough to drive one?, I wouldnt. The whole idea just seems unsafe to me.\n\nThe article also states that they can steer, accerlerate, and brake for themself, but what if they brake to soon or accerate to fast or to slow. It all depends on how well their product reacts to driving. The article asks what if a human gets bored while waiting for the car to turn, i mean i do admit it might save some accidents but it might cause alot, this artile does not say that is has been tested and it just seems really unsafe.\n\nIt says that it will be a traffic jam assistant but what if it causes more traffic this whole artilce has me asking what if? This product just seems like a problem causer in the near future in my own opinion i dont think this product is worth it i think we should just live with what we have right now.",
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"content": "Artificially intelligent robots are generally perceived to replace humans at the workplace in future. Although many repetitive and laborious tasks can be automated, yet the jobs where a human touch or interference is required are unlikely to be substituted. This essay will discuss the reasons why there will be some jobs that are difficult to be taken over by the machines.\r\n\r\nMost of the tedious jobs that do not require higher acumen or exceptional skills can be replaced by robots eventually. With the help of artificial intelligence, robots can be trained to simulate the tasks performed by humans with less chances of errors. For instance, in Delhi Metro, many stations are well-equipped with the automated ticket vending machines by which commuters can simply buy tickets themselves. This makes some people believe that many jobs at the workplace can be substituted by machines going forward.\r\n\r\nConversely, there are some jobs that are difficult to be replaced by robots. The activities that are required a higher emotional intelligence and carry a human touch are unlikely to be automated. Jobs such as nursing, caring, teaching, etc. would still require human involvement. Moreover, to supervise machines or control them, humans would still be needed at the workplace. Machines will never be able to completely take over and will always work as an enabler to the mankind.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is increasingly likely that the significant developments in artificial intelligence and machine learning space will end most human employments. While unskilled and simple tasks can easily be replicated by robots, the sophisticated jobs requiring human efforts cannot be carried out by machines. Therefore, some jobs will still be done by humans in the future.",
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"content": "There has been a contentious topic about whether it is necessary for managers working for large corporations to be paid much higher wages in comparison with normal employees. In this essay I will first analyze both camps before giving my own opinions. \r\n\r\nSome people hold a firm belief that directors should earn a better salaries than lower-level employees. This is due to the huge amount of work that a manager have to take care of. Not only do they have to maintain the work efficiency of themselves, but also of their employees as well. Consequently, bosses have to put in more effort in comparison with their subordinates. Another factor that should not be ignored is that a lot of big corporations require their candidates to have an outstanding background before applying into the manager position. Therefore, managers would certainly have a huge knowledge and experience on the field that they are working right now; hence, it is fair for them to have a higher salaries than their employees. \r\n\r\nOthers stand their ground on the idea that it is unfair for staffs to be paid less than their managers. Their argument is based on the fact that businesses can not operate without their staff; therefore, ordinary staff should be treated the same as their bosses. Big corporations nowadays can have their number of staffs reaching thousands, and the majority of this are normal employees. Therefore, their importance should not be overlooked by employers, and they should be paid equally as their managers. \r\n\r\nIt is true that the importance of ordinary employees should not be underestimated. However, I strongly agree that directors should be paid more, thanks to the huge effort that they have to put on their work, as well as the enormous effort that they can provide to their firm.",
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"content": "I the first paragraph it says ' Luke Bomberer had no idea his life would change soon after his high school graduation he was working two prat-time jobs in a grocery store and a bank when his friend Don Reist invited him to go to Eurpe on a cattle boat Luke couldn't say no He knew it was an opportunity of a life time.\n\nThat is how it began but. In paragraph 2 says. It was 1945 World War 2 was over in Eurpe and many countries were left in ruins to help these countries recover their food supplies animals and more 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Abministration) UNRRA hired\n\nSeagoing Cowboys to take care of horses young cows and mules that were shipped overseas Luke and Don signed up. That is when Luke become a Seagoing\n\nCowboy. And in paragraph 4 says. Luke turned 18 before arriving in Greece which meant he could be drafted for military service When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip they told me to just keep Doin that for my service By the time he was discharged in 1947 Luke had made nine trips-the most of any Seagoing Cowboys.",
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"content": "No, this is just a regular landform on Mars. It couldn't have been made by aleins because there is no such thing as aleins. If there was such thing as aleins, NASA would have profited off the discovery after they caught it. Also, cameras and technology have only gotten better over the years, so if there was an alien they would have gotten a picture of it and would have published it everywhere.\n\nRocks form in many different ways too. There have been many different things like that on Earth too. Like the one in the passage \"Middle Buttte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" Plus look at some of the volcanos on Earth. Most people thought they were mountains until they errupted. Like the one that killed that greek city.\n\nIn conclution, there is no such thing as aleins. The face on mars is just a rock formation. Like what the story said it was just a few tall rocks creating shadows making the eyes, nose, and mouth. It was just a random rock formation.",
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"content": "These days, educating kids and teenagers is predominated in a tons of societies but some individuals say that it is further vital to educate citizens who does not have abilities for writing and reading and governments have to support them from financial perspective. I completely agree with this idea and each countries have to settle this issure immidiately before improving the education system for young people.\n\nTo begin with, a life of individual who cannot write and read is tough because methods of communicating with others are limited. Therefore, political entities have to resolve as much as possible. For instance, nowadays, many ocupations are required to have writing and reading skills. Unless people have the abilities, they might be not able to have their ideal jobs.\n\nFurthermore, providing a supporting resouces for individuals who cannot write and read push forward the economy in the county because some of those people who have not worked well or not worked in their ideal work environment will be motivated and enhancing the workload in the country. For example, someone who has worked as blue color job but he also has been willing to have white color job. However, he does not know how to improve those writing and reading skills. That means the political entity is missing a workload for itself.\n\nTo conclude, citizens who do not have abilities for writing and reading have to be protected by governments because they are in harsh lifes. In addition, once those individuals are trained and improve their writing and reading skills, they might improve the economy in the country as the workloads.",
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"content": "Urgency on dealing with the environment pollution was tackled by several methods, one of which,increasing the charge of fuel, will be discussed with a disagreement followed.\r\n\r\nThe proposed policy, raising the price for fuel, can efficiently curb the action on the side in consumption, which can be regarded as the increasing passion for private cars on the road and impulsive purchase for a new car so that it would decrease the exhaust emission from that vehicle at large. Additionally, the profit earned under this policy could be utilized to improve the environmental-friendly techniques on the side in provision. Moreover, the administration, as well, should take accountability to preserve the environment through financial income.\r\n\r\nHowever, uplifting the fuel price would not resolve the pollution issues throughout the production of fuel. Furthermore, the public transport system would be challenged by those who would shift from driving private cars. In short, crude oil pollution still inflict severe damage on the environment despite the fact that the price has been increased to relieve it.\r\n\r\nMy personal view stands for disapproval. No matter how high the fuel price would be, the total consumption definitely maintained on a high level, namely, the pollution level would unlikely be eliminated when the method only relies on the price.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, any kind of measurement for preventing the living condition should base on the fundamental cause of the problem rather than adjusting the price for limited effects, otherwise, our living condition would only be degrading to the worst consequence.",
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"content": "PROPER_NAME\n\nJanuary 21, 2015\n\nDear Senator,\n\nIm PROPER_NAME, writing you to ask if you could change the Electoral Collage, I'm sure I'm beside hundres asking for the same. Instead of voting for our slate of electors, we perfer to vote for the president himself. I have reasons, I will be glad to sure them with you.\n\nIn my opinion, I believe the Electoral collage is not fair. The bigger states get alot more electoral vote, So it's obvious if the president wins all the bigger states their going to win. The way I see it, is that the little states don't matter, or they aren't as important, since they got little electoral votes. For example, If I was running for president my main goal would be to win all the bigger states first, like; California, Texas, Florida. With them three states I already have 122 electrol votes, Thats when I'll start focusing on getting my other 148 votes by winning the little states over.\n\nMy other reason why myself, and hundres would rather vote for the president himself be, because of the mistakes of voting for the wrong canidate. Remember in 1960, Hawwii sent two slates of electors to Condress? What will happen?If you think about it anything and everything could go wrong!\n\nLastly,Voting for the president himself would be easier, You along with others in your range would not have to worry about the electoral votes. Not only that it may also be less stressful, and crazier. Voters like my parents would not get confuse for voting the wrong elector, and giving her vote to the wrong canidate.\n\nIn conclusion, I honestly think not having the electroal votes would be best for our voters. I'm sure the candidates would enjoy us the voters making the mistake and voting for the wrong elector, since at the end of the day the Canidate is the one getting the vote, that wasn't meant for him. Instead of voting for our electors, why won't we vote straight to our president?\n\nSinceraly,\n\nPROPER_NAME",
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"content": "The countries setting effect cyclist deserts hills The author tells us first depleting water supply journeys high deserts California June The hills major effect intensive host desert contains heat limited water fact June Im sure author happy person traveling within intensive journey Another misfortune author explains touring changing That road replaced host rolling hills With experience I know worse kind Tall steep hills difficult climb living house luxurious cool In mind authors Short rolling hills climb gets miserable every hill coast side barely cools bare skin leaving thiving soul continue dep pain Im sure cyclist experiencing burned spirit deadly hills",
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"content": "These three pie charts illustrate how dangerous waste products are disposed of in three countries. Overall, two countries, the Republic of Korea, and Sweden dispose of dangerous waste in three types, while there are five types of disposition in the United Kingdom.\nFirstly, the Republic of Korea and Sweden deal with dangerous waste in recycling, incineration, and underground. The Republic of Korea has 69 percent of recycling\nthem, while Sweden is 25 percent. The Republic of Korea is approximately three times higher than Sweden. In contrast, Sweden mainly relies on dealing with dangerous waste by burying them underground. It is more than half, which means that more than two times higher than Korea. It is 55 percent in Sweden, and 22 percent in Korea respectively.\nInterestingly, there are five types of dealing with dangerous waste in the United Kingdom. Mainly the UK utilizes in incineration. The percentage is 82 percent. The way of disposing type is much higher than Republic of Korea and Sweden.\nIn addition, the UK utilizes in Chemical treatment, and dumping at sea. Each percentage is eight percent respectively.",
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"content": "Imagine you're sitting in your math class after a long day of crying and the computer in front of you reads your emotions. On display is everything you're feeling. Everyone around you starts asking you questions and you quickly become overwhelmed. The use of technology that can read the emotional expressions of any face in the classroom will stir up many issues.\n\nThe use of this type of technology will take away time in the classroom that could be spent learning. If schools were to bring this type of technology into classrooms, the schools would be adding more tasks to do within a class period. Most highschool and middle school classes are about 50 minutes long and during that time frame the teacher and students are expected to teach, learn, and obtain the material being taught. If the computer were to read the student's emotions, it would likely cause commotion in the class. The teacher and other peers would have to approach the student feeling upset or hurt and comfort them. If that wasn't the case and the students dealing with anything emotionally be sent down to the office, they wouldn't be in class learning. Overall, it would potentially put the students and classes behind.\n\nHaving this technology available would distract the students from class as well. With the oppurtunity of having a new toy to play with, the students may not take it seriously. While the teacher is teaching, students wouldn't be obtaining the lesson, but seeing how others are feeling. Students are tested on what they obtain in class and with distractions they wouldn't be learning all they need to know. Tests scores would start to dwindle and it would negatively affect the children's futures.\n\nThis technology could potentially make the students and teachers uncomfortable. People value their privacy and this would be crossing that line. Most people don't want others to be aware of their problems. The questions and judgement that follow often make the situation worse for people. Knowing that anyone could calculate their personal emotions may introduce anxiety in students. This would distract them from the lesson being taught and negatively affect their emotional health. It could introduce bullying as well. All students react differently and there is no way to control everyone's response to it. This new development will take away the students and teacher's privacy and rights.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is an impressive creation that will benefit many people and programs. However, this technology does not belong in the classroom. The cons outweigh the positive effects this would bring schools.",
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"content": "The Face is a natural landform on Cydonia. Speculators doubt NASA, and say that the landform was created by aliens. Both of these claims have evidence to support their side. One side I believe has more evidence to prove their claim.\n\nThe side that disagrees with the thought that the Face was made naturally, are called speculators. NASA has realeased information about the Face, but speculators think NASA is hiding something from them which is called bona fide. Since the very first trip to Cydonia, many people have been intreaged by the topic. As said in paragrapgh 5 , \"The Face has become a pop icon\". The idea that a face was on Cydonia made people think that there had to be a creator. The creators were aliens. The next time the Mars Orbiter Camera went to Cydonia, NASA claimed there were clouds blocking the veiw of the Face. This must have shown that NASA was hiding something. NASA also tried to say that they don't pass over the Face that often. Maybe NASA didn't people to find things out. All these peices of evidence put together must prove that aliens created the Face on Cydonia.\n\nScientist from NASA can help prove the speculators wrong. Speculators assume that the Face couldn't have just been created over time. In paragrapgh 12, it states that there are similar landforms created, called mesa, in America. Next, the speculators say that there were clouds blocking the veiw of alien clues during the Orbit Camera journey. Since the clouds blocked the veiw of the planet, NASA sent another camera on clear day. In paragrapgh 10 and 11 it says the camera took the absolute maximum resolution. If there were any signs of anything strange the camera would have caught it. Speculators say that NASA wants to hide the fact that there were aliens. If there were aliens then that would help NASA's budget in future journeys. The evidence provided proves thay the Face was naturally created.\n\nAfter recieving both sides of the story. I support the NASA and the fact that the Face was naturally created. The speculators had their concerns about the legibillity of NASA. Speculators believed that NASA was hiding things. NASA respnoded to the critics and proved that there were no aliens. Plus, if there were aliens out there then that would help\n\nNASA with many things. Those are the reasons why I thing the Face was naturally created.\n\nThe Face, on Cydonia, will stay a contreversial subject. There will be the speculators and doubters. There will be the supporters of NASA. Both sides have evidence to support their claims. I have picked my side. Now what will you choose?",
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"content": "Dear think computers help society I I strongly belive computers help society used good purposes They help people ages Its easyer kids look information gives kids good facts help build knowlege would help kids help adults Its easy see adults think kids dont read enough however kids get enough reading done computer parent think kids arent going library take book report arent gaining knowlege gaining knowlege things could look library availible computer Computers help kids around world find thing quickly easily Not computer give knowlege things happen past also things happening current times It also give kid information like weather updates help keep safe Over things find library finf computer Some parents think kids arent getting enough exencise never less also skiping lot knowlege important facts also On computer pick lot facts wether updates natural desasters help others need important facts If wast computers kids would make knowlege miss school make miss dosent Computers help people everywhere gain knowlege Not computers helped kid also help adults They work computer look houses cars lots important things Certenly would want take away things knowlege help given hot kids adult computer It helps aldults especialy keep thing going baissy lives It also helps make changes eat act reasons penale disaprove computers help kids give kid important facts help people ages sarely facts could helpchange",
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"content": "Nowadays most people tend to write in a more informal way, adopting a relaxed approach. This essay will cover the reasons why this behavior is so common, starting from the necessity of a more quick way to communicate, and then it will attempt to illustrate if it has advantages and disadvantages.\nHence the necessity to interact in a quicker way, due to the business of life at the present time, many people prefer to cure less the formal aspects of their written pieces. This rapidness has been allowed by the spread of emails as the principal mean of written communication. Likewise, the reader itself, having much less time, is prone to take just a rapid look at the emails, not caring much if the way they are written is formal or not.\nOn the one hand, this can lead to some advantages, such as a more relaxed atmosphere even in workplaces. For example, many workers are relieved to know that their boss is keen on writing informal emails and does not pretend his subordinates to do otherwise. Moreover, it has some positive implications also for strangers, that are often less prepared to write in a formal style.\nOn the other hand, it is often hard to draw a limit. Some readers can think that the person sending the informal email is just being rude, leading to a misunderstanding. This is particularly true when the generation gap is taken into consideration: generally, elder people may be less willing to receive an informal letter.\nIn conclusion, the reasons behind a more relaxed style in written language may be found in the faster means of communication. This has undoubtedly advantages, such as the creation of a more peaceful ambient. Albeit, there are also clear disadvantages, for instance, the misinterpretation of the context.",
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"content": "In the artical \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author describes how a new cumputer program able to identify humans emotions. I think program could be used in the class room. There are many benifets and some downsides to the program. It can tell if your bored with the lession. It could also help with telling if someone is lying. But can't pick up on nonverbal, and emotional communication.\n\nFirst one of the major benifets of using the program in a classroom is seeing how the students feel about a lesson. In paragraph 6 it satates,\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\".This imformation could tell the teacher what to do and no too. Paragraph 6 also states,\"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" With the teacher swiching the lession students may become more active with the lesson infront of them.\n\nSecondly the program could have some improvements. In paragraph 6 it states,\"most humans communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\" This shows that not all emotions can be detected by the program. Also in paragraph 6 it states,\" So comuters need to understand that ,too\" With Dr. Huang stating this he is already aware of this problem. Him being aware can fix that and improve apon it.\n\nFinally the program can help dectect lies with curtain muscles in the face. It states in Pargraph 8,\" But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius.\" This shows that key muscles in your face and give away when you lie. It also states that \"To and expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a ''smiling'' politicain or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" When you can identify those muscles a lie will be easier to spot.\n\nTo conclude i believe this computer program would be useful in the classroom. It could give the teachers direct feed back on the students feeling. Also when someone lies. But can't pick up on nonverbal, and emotional cummunication. The program has more positives than negitives.So I agree this would be vary benifital.",
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"content": "In the story Cowboy who Road the Waves i have to support why people would want to do his job. There are many reasons. Who would like a job that you got to see the world and travel. I would like to see the world. whaty about you?\n\nIn 1947 the world wars finaly ended WW1 and WW2 had a spand of 30 years. There was alot of mess to clean up and you had to be a certain person to do it. The see cowboys where just the right people. Luke said in the story that it was a fun job. But also hard. You got to see the world and do many activitys. You had lots of free time. But it was very dangerous he even broke his ribs doing it.\n\nLuke stated that he got to see many countrys. He had free time to do what he wanted. All whole he did alot of good. But he wasnt at home very often and that ment he had no permanit home. He just traveled.\n\nI think this wound be a great job for someone who wants to travel. Not have a family. Or wants to have a abnormal life. I dont know if i would want to do this job or not. All in all i think it would be a great job.",
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"content": "Envision the future, the inventions and innovations you will encounter in your life, the wonders and achievements of a modernized world. This is what Google, Tesla, Audi, Nissan, BMW, General Motors, and Prius envision for their world in the future. Technology. The idea to build something virtually impossible: a driverless car. The driverless car would revolutionize the auto industry and our world as a whole. One must factor the hazards associated with these cars before this autonomous invention hits the streets. Should researchers pursue the development of these cars? The clear answer ought to be no, for there are too many dangers associated with it, we don't have the proper technology to do it, and it's unlawful.\n\nWhat exactly makes these cars so....dangerous? After all, as an article states, these cars \"would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus\" (Driverless Cars Are Coming 1). Roads would be safer, and driving while intoxicated or distracted would no longer be an issue. Also, as through now, Google's cars have driven more than 500,000 miles without a crash so far. The thing with these cars is that these cars aren't entirely autonomous. They \"still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues\" (Driverless Cars are Coming 1). The car may be capable enough to \"steer, accelerate, and brake themselves\" (Driverless cars are Coming 1), maybe maneuver itself around a U-turn, but will it be able to navigate itself around sinkholes, avoid black ice, stay in the proper designated lane, drive around traffic cones or accident-sites, or parallel park? Can it detect road signs, signal lights, stay within the speed limit, and stay within other common driving regulations? So far, there has yet to be a car with these features, and although some cars may be able to do some of the above, none have been properly executed without a\n\nhuman-driver's assistance. Riding in a driverless, autonomous car in these conditions would be too dangerous of a risk to take, and if one rode a car with a human driver in it, less safety hazards would be posed. Autonomous cars are simply too dangerous to drive in hazardous road conditions.\n\nTechnology. One word that sparks excitement and creativity within every human being. The question is, though, do we have the techonology to have a driverless car? Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounter near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor (Driverless Cars are Coming). Also, most cars use speed sensors with the creation of antilock breaks. Also, if even one of these systems break, how would it affect the to-ing and fro-ing of the car? With all that, do these cars have enough technology to mimic the consciousness of a human driver? The answer is no, because, as of yet, there have been no successful autonomous driving tests executed without a human driver there to monitor and drive when conditions became hazardous. We don't have the technology to mimic the human brain, it's simply impossible! We don't have the technology to pursue the development of an autonomous car, and therefore we must halt the development of such dangerous cars.\n\nLastly, these cars would be unlawful in many ways. \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers\" (Driverless Cars are Coming 1). As stated in the previous paragraph, would cars be able to detect road signs, maintain speed limits, detect signal lights, etc. without human assistance? Also, what if traffic was directed by a crossing officer, would the car be able to obey and follow the crossing officer's motions? Pull over when a police officer is in pursuit? As of yet, driverless cars are capable of none of the above without human assistance. Also, it's \"illegal in many states to even test computer driven cars\" (Driverless Cars are Coming) because of the safety risks associated with it. Also, if the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the passenger who was in the car or the manufacturer? Too many legal issues arise when it comes to autonomous cars, therefore terminating all development with driverless cars ought to be the proper thing to do.\n\nIn conclusion, autonomous cars are too dangerous, too technologically disadvanced, and not legal to develop. It's wrong to pursue this development, and therefore must be stopped.",
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"content": "Laughter almost always good thing mainly people laugh means happy something funny It beneficial times instance someone feeling happy people always try make laugh make feel better When I faced someone I nt know usually first instinct try laugh laughter always source enjoyment still today We certain advantages one hundred years ago For instance want laugh need pick remote turn even choose want laugh even ability go search something laugh internet Sometimes people go comedy clubs go see stand comedians Comedy laughter go hand hand first time someone laughed comedy born around forever unless happy becomes outlawed I remember ever parents would new friend thing I would hear house sound parents new guest laughing Soon new guest much often Laughing also important part relationship makes person making laugh pleasure around thus makes sometimes like ever noticed men usually try make women laugh order try get member opposite sex like This accompanying physical attraction help start relationship I herd certain laughter also therapeutic sometimes I like laugh I m felling good possibly therapeutic people going therapy many years Sometimes people laugh even subject funny otherwise situation would somewhat awkward one might fell kind place Everyone different laugh louder others type rhythm mother loud high pitched laugh grandpa low scratchy laugh matter laugh like help feel better also help become closer someone laughing one life s greatest pleasures take chance sit laugh",
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"content": "When reading this article I couldn't help but to start thinking about the topic that was brought fourth. I mean when you really think about it driverless cars aren't anything special. My position on all of this is that these driverless cars should not be developed at all. It's just not a very smart move.\n\nDriverless cars should not be manufactured. I think that it would cause to much accidents to occur. And then whose fault would that be, the driver or the makers. As stated in paragraph 9, \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault—the driver or the manufacturer?\" If people can't help getting in car accidents by being reckless and crazy whill they are driving the car- who says it will be any better with these \"driverless cars.\" Even if these cars were some would still need a driver to help navigate them at some point. In paragraph 7 it says that the BMW developed a car that could,and I quote, \" handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" It even sates that, \"In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless.They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" Meaning a person would still have to be in the car and help drive, but this also means that the person would have to stay in touch with their surroundings to make such they are on call when something does occur and the car needs their help. as stated in paragraph 7, \"This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\"\n\nSee the thing is that we humans have always pushed to create the future before it is time for it to come. We see movies and t.v shows with cars that drive on autopilot, and this is something we want, but shouldn't have. With this whole driverless cars this, it just doesn't make sense because there would still need to be a human behinde the wheele at all times. With cars that are like this, when the car is driving it's self do you really think the person behinde the wheele will really be paying attention to the road still. The answer is no, they will be texting, talking on the phone, playing or laughing with friends that are in the car with them and or eating. This is why we have laws against these kinds of things, as stated in paragraph 7, \" Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars,\" and it should stay this way.\n\nSo in conclusion I do not believe we should have driverless cars at all. They do not seem safe or smart. A car is meant to be driven by man not a machine, and it should most certainly stay this way.",
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"content": "In the article, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author tells about what scientists are doing and what they plan to do in order to gather more information about Venus. They are intrigued because Venus is very similar to Earth in terms of size, density, and sometimes even distance. Despite all of the similarities, Venus is also very different and dangerous. From blazing temparatures to heavy atmospheric pressure, Venus has many hazards to offer. Of course, scientists want to find a way to travel to the planet and discover more about it. According to the article, Venus is a worthy pursuit because it will occasionally come extremely close to Earth, it has some Earth-like features, and humans might eventually be able to go safely one day.\n\nOne reason scientists want to explore Venus is that the planet will occasionally be the closest to Earth, even closer than Mars. This is because Mars and Venus \"orbit the sun at different speeds\" (The Challenge of Exploring Venus). This shorter distance will make for quicker travel, and of course, cut costs. Despite those benefits, not a single vessel has survived an expedition due to the unfavorable conditions.\n\nAs technology advances, though, scientists may uncover a way to complete this task. Another reason that scientists believe that exploring Venus will be worthwhile is because of a fascination that they have with its surface. As research continues, there is more evidence that Venus was \"probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life\" (The Challenge of Exploring Venus). Even today, Venus has craters, mountains, and valleys, much like Earth does. This passion for knowledge about the planet is driving astronomers and scientists to find ways to efficiently travel to the planet.\n\nAs previously mentioned, scientists are looking for ways to safely travel to Venus in order to research it further. One idea is to have a \"blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 miles or so\" above the surface to avoid the hazardous conditions below (The Challenge of Exploring Venus). Of course, the temperatures would still be uncomfortable, but all of the other conditions could support humans safely. An expedition like this would prevent scientists from gathering samples, though, so electronics \"made of silicon carbide have been tested\" in Venus-like conditions and survived up to three weeks (The Challenge of Exploring Venus). With more research and inventing like this being done, scientists might eventually find a way to the planet.\n\nAs stated many times in the passage, Venus is a very dangerous planet to be on. Despite its dangers, though, there is much to explore on its surface. It would be a worthy pursuit because the planet will sometimes come closer to Earth than Mars will. This would cut space travel time and costs drastically, which would definitely save everybody in the end. Venus also has features that are similar to Earth's. There is even evidence that it could have supported life in the past. From valleys, to mountains, the fascination about the land formations keeps scientists questioning. All of these factors are driving researchers to create inventions that will allow research to commence about the planet. Ideas about a vehicle that will float above the hazardous conditions have been considered, and small electronic devices have been tested as well. With all of this determination and passion from the scientists, the conditions on Venus will not be enough to stop them.",
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"content": "Today's world contains greater technology than ever before, and it continues to become more advanced. Just one example of this technology is emotion recognition technology in which a computer can identify one's emotions from only his face. For example, Thomas Huang used this Facial Action Coding System to read the emotions of Mona Lisa, a famous painting by Leonardo da Vinci. Experts are beginning to realize that this technology, Facial Action Coding System, could result in great advancements in the classroom. But will it really have great benefits in the classroom? I believe that there could be some tremendous problems with this new technology; but if it is used properly, it could have far greater results. Although there are some dangers involved, the Facial Action Coding System has great potential value for the classroom.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System could become a valuable tool someday in classrooms around the globe. But before looking at the great value that this tool could potentially bring, we must look at the harm that it could cause. One-on-one individual contact is vital to a child's education. Whether at home or in a classroom, a student needs an individual present in order to best teach him the concepts necessary for learning. If the computer begins to replace the teacher, then this Facial Action Coding System is no longer a benefit to the student, but rather a harm. On the bright side, however, the Facial Action Coding System does bring large benefits. Most importantly, it engages the student. Doctor Huang, innovator of this Facial Action Coding System said that, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" It would then recognize that it needed to better explain the topic or rather grab the learner's attention. This could greatly benefit the academic world. Students could be taught individually, at their own pace, and possibly even in their own way. Those more advanced could move on to more advanced subjects, while those struggling could receive the help they need.\n\nFacial Action Coding System, a wonder to us all, could greatly affect today's world, but it must be used with wisdom. It does not replace the teacher, but rather aids the teacher in teaching. Teachers are still tremendously needed for our students, and their personal mentoring is still of priceless value. Yet, along with these great blessings, the Facial Action Coding System could be added to better improve our academic world. The world needs educated men and women, and this Facial Action Coding System, innovated by Professor Thomas Huang, could be the exact element needed better educate our students, and make for a brighter future.",
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"content": "Dear Florida state senator,\n\nIn few words, the United States should keep the Electoral Collage. Although the people may not depend on them, it does not mean that they are dependable either. The United States may have a long process of voting for a president for the country that in which only they can choose rather than the people, but it still is being done for the good of the countries' future.\n\nThe process for gaining a president may be long and not allow the peoples' voices to matter, but the future of the country cannot be placed on their unreliable descisions. Not all of the people are experienced on the ways of the government as the Electoral College or the House of Representatives are. In truth, you may never know that if a certified member of any one of the states is actually on the side for the greater good of the country. An enemy country may pay for any large number of citizens to elect a certain candidate that could be working for them. This could happen with the Electoral Collage. They may be paid by an organization working against the U.S. or by one of the candidates themselves for personal gain. But even if it did happen, as it claims in Source 1, by the Office of the Federal Registar, there would be the House of Representatives to also give the last vote if there were to be a tie. Source 3 states that there is an equal number of electors which gives every state a chance of getting in the matter of equally electing a candidate for president.\n\nMany things could happen while there is a new president to be elected. As I said before: the Electoral College may be paid to pick one candidate for president over the other. Source 2, by Bradford Plumer, states that the Electoral College has its defenses. Some of its members may be replaced in a state for that states' personal gain in the matter. Even so, it would be hard to tell. For the most part, it is the unfairness of not counting the peoples thoughts and opinions. It is their country as well!\n\nAll in all, it is very unreliable to put trust in the people, or anyone, for voting a president. Not many people may like the Electoral College, or their final descision, but even then it is the best way of getting a fair vote on a president. They will be there to select the new future of the country, besides being their job to do so, as opposed to the American people having duties elsewhere. They may want a candidate over the other, but even then by the end of the day, they would be in the same square they were on even before there was to be a new president elected. Even so, if there is a change in their style of living that they frown upon, they can always alert Congress.",
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"content": "It has been argued that towns and cities should have enough area for parks and squares so that local people can utilize it. I certainly agree with the idea of having squares and parks in towns and cities.\r\n\r\nFirstly, having squares and parks around the towns and cities plays a key role for the community. Parks provide enough space for people to perform physical exercises which help them to stay fit. For example, district parks in Delhi have different swings for the different age groups which help people to perform physical activities without getting injured. Also, people visit parks to get their mind fresh from the office work. This allows them to breathe in the fresh air and get some positive energy from the fresh environment.\r\n\r\nSecondly, having squares and parks in cities help to keep the surrounding temperature low. Plants and trees help to maintain the level of temperature in the neighborhood as recently, we have started experiencing heat waves and rise in temperature due to global warming. Furthermore, plants and trees in the park maintain the level of oxygen in the atmosphere by consuming carbon dioxide which emits from different sources. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, towns and cities should have space for large parks and squares as it brings many advantages. I totally agree with this view.",
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"content": "Why do you think aliens created it? Aliens did not create this it is a natural landform. The face breaks and gets more real each couple of years. If aliens created this then they couldn't of had NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft reveal the Face of Mars , it is a mesa. A mesa is natural so therefor it has to be a natural landform. I think it is real because they got a lot of facts about the mesa and if it was fake they couldn't of gotten facts on it. They seen a image and the note said it was a human head. Now if it was created by aliens and then it couldn't be a human head. I think it is real and so should you. Believe what they say becaue it is real and they are not making it up. This mesa was not created by aliens. Aliens are not even real in the real world. So believe what they say because i think it is real. If you dont think it is real then see if you can find facts about maybe even more facts than they found. If you cant find more facts then them it is obviously not true about it be created by aliens.",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
"role": "system"
},
{
"content": "The author concludes paragraph paragraph wants try The author saying hibiscus planted work trying grow hibiscus plant She pass test succeds spring That author concludes paragraph",
"role": "user"
},
{
"content": "Overall Score: 2.0",
"role": "assistant"
}
] |
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