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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The new Facial Action Coding System, which can now detect the emotions of people, can be very valuable to a classroom. This technology can help teachers know if students are paying attention, how the kids react to a specific lesson, and if the emotions are more different than the way they act. But the use of the system can also get students in trouble now. There are both advantages with this new technology and also disadvantages.\n\nTeachers will now be able to tell if the students are paying attention, which can also get the student in trouble now. They can detect if the student does not want to do the lesson and will cause the teacher to get mad. Advantage for the teacher but a disadvanatge for the student. It can be easier to tell if a student is being truthful now.\n\nTo see how the students react to a lesson can help the teacher determine if they should continue with that specific lesson or not.The author states that the software can determine mixed emotions. If most students are detected with positive and happy emotions, the teacher knows they are doing good. Knowing how a student actually feels about a class can also make a teacher feel very let down if they think differently.\n\nA student's emotion can be very different than what that student shows. They could be going through something traumatic and might not even show it.\n\n\"Most of us would have trouble describing each facial trait\" is very true for most teachers. Someone could be distracted and not paying attention, and now the teacher will know why without having to just yell at them for not listening. But also, will that even change the way teachers feel? If you're having a bad day, maybe a teacher will finally understand.\n\nHaving a new teachnology system to detect emotions of people can be very useful for a classroom. Useful for teachers, principals, and the school system. Some students may not feel the same way but most teachers would feel the same way. There can be more reasons out there that we just don't know about this technology yet. Hopefully more information is soon to come!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood I think author created memoir loveThe reason I say love cares family also stayed family tradition care follows He also loved family For example paragraph article say I never forget house s gracious neighborhood many things I learned LOVE I never forget parents turned simple house home shows Love thats I think author created Love mood memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars is not what everyone thinks it is. Hollywood shows, magazines, and radio talk shows can exaggerate to make the landform sound like more than what it truly is. As a NASA scientist, I believe that you should know exactly what this historic landmark is, so you know the correct story for years to come.\n\nFirst, you never know what publicity will do with the next big story. Media usually talks up the whole situation, to display the story bigger than it is. In this case, many people are under the impression that the landform is a face created by aliens, because of the media. Once a story is out in the public eye, people have different view points as well. \"Some people think the Face is bond fide evidence of life on Mars-evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists.\" This excerpt from the article states that many people believe that NASA is hiding something from the public, something that they don't want everyone to know about. However, NASA scientists, like myself, know that this is no extraterrestrial impression on the face of Mars, but rather a small mountain or hill that seems to resemble a face.\n\nTo back up what NASA has already said, you could easily have a prediction of what may have caused this mound to form. \"....landforms common around the American West. 'It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,' says Garvin.\" Garvin clearly gives us a connection that we can relate to. We don't all have the privilege to go into space, however we can understand what a landform like the Face may look like, if it is similar to a landform on Earth. Mountains, canyons, hills, or valleys are all form by different forces. The Face may have been formed by the winds on Mars, eroding away the rocks around it until there was a small hill left. Water could have possibly carved around the mound, leaving this landform. There are various, reasonable explanations for how this landform could have been formed.\n\nIn conclusion, the Face may be seen as multiple things to the public eye, but the experts at NASA know this landform is nothing more than a coincidence. This landform could have been formed by various causes, but it is merely a lucky chance that this mound would have the features resembling a human face. Although much talk may lead you to believe the Face is an alien creation, trust the expert scientists. The Face is nothing more than a normal landform on the face of Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Advanced Science division at the University of Illinois has come up with a new and inventive way to read peoples emotions. This new way to read peoples emotions is via computer and is proclaimed to be the future of technology. This technology is very fascinating to read peoples emotion would be very cool to be able to do. This facial emotional recognition software can even recognize the mona lisa's emotions. Is this technology what we really need at the momoment though?\n\nThey say the computer software runs on scanning the 44 muscles in the human face. They also proclaim that they also calssify the wmotions into six catagories to help teh program run. \" Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happines, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness\". They associate these emotins with characteristics and movements. The advanced science division certainly has the technology to seem accurate ,but I still just dont know if this is the technology we need to put on the market at this point in time.\n\nAccording to Dr. Huang \" the facial recognition systems are accurate\". If all of this is is true and this accurate then maybe this can be used in the world in some way. This could be used for political reasons to know if a leader is in a meeting with the president the facial recognintion emotion software can reed the emotion of the enemy leader. That situation for that to be used is highly unlikely. I still just do not see a way that this could be used in the real world.\n\nThe machinery for this product is not even ready to hit the maket in a few ways, this still needs to be accesible to everyone. \" Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode the Mona lisa's face\". If this is not provided in a way so that at least everyone will have a chance to own it then how do you expect it to help in reading peoples emotions in a big way, you just wouldn't have enough sample space. I think that I have made my stance clear as day now it is up to you to decide to back this expierement to read others emotion or to let this whither.\n\nThe Advanced Science division at the University of Illinoise has come up with a new and inventive way to read peoples emotions. Is this technology what we really need at the moment though? That is up to oyu to decide, do you want to be a part of this and expan the horizen so everbody can know anybody's emotion at any time ,or should we just let people have ther privacy..", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Be a Seagoing Cowboy!\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboy Program is a great cause. You get to hang out with animals, and help people. There are extra perks, such as seeing the world. We are a great cause because we help people that were hit hard by World War II.So the Seagoing Cowboys Program is a great idea!\n\nIn the Seagoing Cowboys Program, you get to take care of animals. Animals such as horses, cows, and mules.\n\nThere is some hard work but it is really worth it to help so many people. And the animals are truly fun! Animals are a great part of being a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nI was a Seagoing\n\nCowboy. I loved it. Once I almost fell off the ship, though, so it is dangerous. But Being a Seagoing Cowboy is really fun! I helped many people, all across the world. I loved being a Seagoing Cowboy!\n\nYou can see the world in the Seagoing Cowboys program! Once I saw the Acropolis in Greece! But there are so many other places to help people in. And I saw a lot of them. I saw many things being a Seagoing Cowboy!\n\nSo you should join! We really need new people. You get to hang out with animals, help people, and see the world! Even though there are troubles, Seagoing Ciwboys might have the best job in the world. That's why you should be a Seagoing Cowboy!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using technology to read a persons facial emotional expressions is really not a bad idea, just think about a computer being able to tell if your happy,sad,mad ect .In paragraph 1 it states all the emotions that the mona lisa had in the panting when most of the world had thought of her having one emotion,now to think that she acually had almost 5 different things going on in her face in the panting.\n\n\"most human communtion is nonverbal including emotional communcaton \" this is really cool becasue people in this time don't do a lot of talking,they most likeing have there face in a screen someone and if Dr. Hang decides to be more open with other companies like apple of samsang that i would be easier to tell what someone means though text or picture,becasue it really hard to decifier what someone truely means mean there not pyhsical there with you. Paragraph 8 says that this computer can tell if your putting on a true or false smile in other words if your telling a lie or not.\n\nIn conclusion Dr. hang has a truely great thing going on right now this could be a future in the next couple of years if technology it's any better that in is right now, small things like Dr. hang idea or invention can lead this world bigger and better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology is changing at a startling pace. Individuals prefer to communicate with others by gadgets and to know about general events happening in the world by using them. I believe that this trend has more merits than demerits.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, the advancement in technology the older people ,who are unaware of the usage of new gadgets and ways to communicate with people at distant places, feel weaken bonds with their near and dear ones. As these gadgets are new to them they are unable to use that so it leads to a lack of awareness about events that are happening in the world.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are a plethora of advantages that younger people have with these new techniques to communicate as this way is time-saving for them.\r\n\r\nWith this person do not have to commute to different places to meet each other. Moreover, it is fruitful for those who are far from each other. To exemplify, due to urbanization individuals move from their native places to cities and talk to their close ones by connecting ways with the help of technical gadgets.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, the knowledge provided by the new technology saves the environment. Most people use gadgets oftenly and receive all the information about the world or events with a single click which leads to less purchase of newspaper that will save the environment from cutting trees.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, Technology advancement is a boon to people who are unaware of this trend on contrary bless for others who use this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face you see that is shown yu may think it has something to do wit an alien but the face is just a natural landform , that has be there for many years , and prolly decades.It has been shown over the world .Many people have been on the face of mars like the Vikings in 1976 to take pictures for their sisters ships .And like on April 5,1998 when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, the man Michael Malin and his Mars orbiter camera , and they team moc team took 10 picture better than than the original Viking pics .Got put on websites ,and then thats when people found out it wasnt no alien monument. Thats why it has nothing to do with aliens.Its just a natural landform. But people still believe that it was an Alien there because ,where the face is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98 . A clouds time of the year on the red planet . so my people look in each 2001 photo spans 1.56 meters , compared it to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 viking photos , to find out wat the pic actually shows is the martian equivalent of a butte or mesa -lamdform common around the american west. The face on the mars is a landform not an alien monument after all .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe driverless cars can become a step foward in a brighter future. They can create healthier environments, safer roads, and give people the opportunity to be more productive instead of focusing on the task at hand, driving.\n\n\"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis...\" If that envision comes true, air pollution would decrease resulting in lower global temperatures and the problem of rising sea levels could be solved. If not, atleast it would be a massive leap toward helping the planet.\n\nSafety has always been a concern when it comes to driving. At the pace technology is moving, I believe the people working on driverless cars can create safer cars thus making safer roads compared to actual human automated driving. \"-something not availabe to drivers trying to text with a cell phone. In this way, the in-car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern.\"\n\nMany hours are put into driving everyday, my dad drives three hours every Thursday and Sunday to visit the family from Chicago. He drives so much, his right shoe has become dented inwardley due to many hours on the road. That is a true story. All those hours wasted on focusing on the road. With driverless cars, work could have been accomplished, information could have been absorbed, knowledge could have been gained. Driverless cars would open up much more free time for humans to spend more productivly. \"Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays.\"\n\nDriverless cars bring many pros, better environment, safer roads, and more hours. In time, we should trust technology the way we trust the medicine we take everyday. I have no doubts the people working on this task will succeed and properly make a world where driverless cars are used everywhere.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir family important Family important example paragraph author writes Growing enviorment instilled great sence family nothing blood relatives The second way shows family important paragraph author writes I always grateful parents love sacrificeThe third final example paragraph author writes I never forget parents turned simple house home three examples show family important thing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator\n\nI think you should keep the electoral colleges. The elctoral colleges are not a vote for presidency but its the vote for slate of electors who in turn elect the president. This is a great way to find a good president because if the people voted they might not know much about the president that they are voting for but if the slate of electers are the ones who pick the president they might know what the man running for president is not telling us. If their is a tie in the electoral votes than the election would be thrown to the house of representatives, where state deligates vote on the president. The electoral college should stay.\n\nThe electoral colleges has been an american tradition for hundred of years why would you end such a long and strong condition. The only bad thing about the electoral colleges in my opinion is that it is unfair to voters because of the winner take all system in each state. ( According to the article the electoral college: why even the best laid defenses of the system are wrong) \"during the 200 campaign, seventeen states didnt see the candidates at all, including road island and south carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didnt get to see a single campaign ad.\" Bobe dole thinks they should abolish the electoral college he thinks its unfair, outdated, and irrational.\n\nIt is the electers who vote for presiden not the people it is possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the nations popular vote. It happened in 200 when gore had more popular votes than bush but bush had more electoral votes and bush still won the race and became president. You should keep the electoral college throughout history it has helped us in many ways. Lots of people say you should abolish it but give it a few more years and see what happens. The electoral college also stops run off electios this means no candidate recieves a majority of the vote cast. If their is a run off election the people might think the election was rigged or unfair. So please leave the electoral college alone it benefits us in a lot of ways.\n\nfrom: PROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building obstacles way There Dirigibles one thousand feet long obstacle much space New York land Al Smith decided good idea let dirigibles anchor top building hours refueling service let passengers But dirigibles docked electric winch tied ship mast The dirigibles would swing people would still get safely Architects engineers Empire State Building workedtalked experts got equipment mooring operations oat US Naval Air Station navy leader development dirigibles US knew everything The Navy offered dirigibles used testing mast Also architect met president airship transport company offered dirigibles service across Pacific ocean builders many obstacles attempts allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Saeng distrout knowing didnt passed test test felt though let disappointment This sentence shows ambition determination Saeng able pass test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The ozone layer is dissolving, there is no scientific question about it. The world is covered in pollution and in a million years the sun is supposed to swallow most of the planets in the solar system. If we need to flee our planet we need to find our best options and venus might be one of the best.\n\nVenus is often referred to as ¨Earth´s twin¨ , it is about the same size and density, and contains many geographical features that are found on Earth. Many of the gases on this planet can be found on Earth or even be breathed out of your own body (CO2). Venus has many similarities to the Earth we love, learning as much as possible about Venus can help us in the long term. In the text the author talks of how Venus is right around the corner from us and how scientists are trying to build a spacecraft that will be able to withstand the tempretures of the hostile planet. If we humans can acsess information of the planet, when our ozone layer is completly perferated we may be able to switch planets for better living conditions.\n\nKnowing what thrives around us and our planet is not particulary a bad thing. We may have to make adjustiments to our work ethic but it will eventually pay off in the scheme of things. What if there is more life out there? What if the movies you grew up watching are more nonfictional then first thought? Precious metals that can be used to fight wars on Earth are plentiful in surrounding planets and astroids, we just need to find them. Regardless the ozone layer of our planet will not hold forever, we need to know our options for our future progeny.\n\nIn conclusion the risks m ay be high but the reward is much higher, we need to explore our options as homosapiens and decide what the risks are worth. The stakes are set pretty high for us, and Venus just may be the answer we've been searching for.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on mars is a natural landform. First the reason why I think the face is natural landform and supporting details. Second reasons why I dont think the face wasn't made by aliens and supporting detals. Lastly the conclusion\n\nFirst the reason why I think the face is a natural landform and supporting details.\n\nI think the face is a natural landform because in the artical it says \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalant of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West.\"\n\nthe picture shows comman landforms.\n\nSecond reason why I think the face wasn't made by aliensand supporting details. I think isn't made by aliens because in the artical it says \"It remminds me most of Middle Butte i the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" says Jim Garvin, chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exporation Progam, the pictures remind him of landforms.\n\nIn conclusion I think the face is a natural landform. I dont think it was made by aliens because a scietist from NASA said it reminded him of a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In modern day society, money is a driving force for nearly everyone. Most people aspire to be financially secure and to have the ability to live the life they want. However, not everyone is able to find paid employment, and for that reason in some countries around the world, governments have initiated a system where the unemployed receive a regular payment to enable them to survive. Some people believe it is an excellent idea, whilst others believe that it is exhausting a country’s financial resources.When looking at the positive aspects of this system, it can be said that it prevents individuals from having a private bankruptcy. When somebody becomes unemployed, he or she will have on-going costs such as rent for a dwelling, bills for water, telephone and electricity as well as the cost of food and several other things. Without a salary, this person will fall into debt, because they will be unable to cover these expenses. A national unemployment payment system will therefore prevent this person from losing nearly everything over time. Without such system, many people would become homeless and would potentially engage in criminal activities to survive. Therefore, one can say that this system is positive. Although stories are heard of people exploiting the system, usually the newly unemployed want to find a job fast in order to become financially independent again, meaning that the government does not have to support them for long.Although there are positive aspects of this system, one can also say that if the payment made by the government is too high, it will prevent people from looking for work actively. Occasionally, the payment people receive is higher than their potential salaries, deterring them from working and creating an on-going cost for the government. A potential solution for this could be providing free training and employment support to open up new career opportunities with higher income, which would motivate this group to re-enter the workforce.In conclusion, the unemployment benefits system has positive and negative aspects. Personally, I believe that the positive effects of the system outweigh the negative. The payment must remain on a level that helps people survive without regular salaries, but does not seem attractive to exploit over a longer period of time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you heard of the the viking 1 photo from 1976? Well if you havent im going to tell you about it and that its a lie what\n\nthe skeptics were saying.\n\nThe viking 1 photo was a so called a\n\n\"human face.\" But really it was a mesa on the planet Mars. The reason skeptics were calling this real was because there were unusual shadows. Those shadows made it look like a human face or even a Egyptian Pharaoh. The shadows gave the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth.\n\nThen, on April 5, 1998 Michael Malin and the Mars orbiter camera snapped a picture ten times sharper than the viking photos. The photos reveald a natural landform. This natural landform was called a mesa. The skeptics still didnt beleive that it was a mesa. They said this because the camera had to peer through whispy clouds.\n\nFinally, again on\n\nApril 8, 2001 a cloudless day on Mars the Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a closer look. Malin's team had captured an extraordinary photo. they did this by using the camera's maxium resolution. Also the camera's pixels were better in 2001 compared to 1976. In 2001 the pixels image span was 1.56 meters compared to 1976 viking photo. The viking photo had a pixel image span of 43 meters.\n\nFinally, now if you think the images are real still then I dont know what to tell you. But beleive what you want the images taken in 2001 proved that the \"human face\" on Mars is fake.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At night time, when you look at the evening star, you're also looking at a planet called Venus. Venus is also known as Earth's \"twin,\" which is a very incredible planet, one that is almost similar to Earth itself. However, we don't know much about the planet itself. For astronomers and scientists, exploring venus had lead to nothing but failure one drone after another. The author from the article explains in great detail on why these group of scientists shouldn't give up but instead should push themselves harder to reach that goal.\n\nVenus is a complicated planet for scientists to explore. \"humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours,\" (Paragraph 2). With the temperatures being an average of 800 degrees Fahrenheit on the planet's surface, the thick layer of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide in its atmosphere, and the surface having a pressure that is 90 times greater than our ocean floors, it's very difficult almost impossible for scientists to even understand the basic's of the planet. The author also explains \"why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?\" (Paragraph 4). Well, in (Paragraph 4) the author also tells us that \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.\" After hearing that fact, who wouldn't want to learn more about Venus and, with the advancements of technology and discovring new materials, the goal for exploring Venus may come true one day.\n\nWith the issue of trying to explore Venus means scientists needs to come up with a new approach which in (Paragraph 7) explains perfectly well, \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbine have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II. The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick, but tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions. Just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin. By comparison, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\" Even with the advancements of technology today, we still need help from technology back then too.\n\nWith our thirst for knowledge and understanding a force we don't understand yet, pushes us to do wonderous things. The author of this article helped show us if we managed to successfully make it to Venus and study the forces within it. We may have a second Earth in our solar system and our journey to the stars will have finally begun.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Narciso Rodriguez mood created author respectful First Narciso s parents courages When Narciso talks parents says My mother father come country courage without knowledge language culture Rodriguez paragraph Narciso gives parents respect deserve describing actions courage Narciso s parents wanted kids better life When Narciso explains parents came United States says They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behing families friends careers country loved Rodriguez paragraph When says They came give children better life shows Narciso s parents love kids much could give kids better future deserves great respect Finally Narciso greatful parents When Narciso describes feels towards parents says I always grateful parents love sacrifice Rodriguez paragraph When author says I always grateful shows author thankful parents therefore shows respect All memoir Narciso Rodriguez mood created author respectful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves\" Luke was a young seventeen-year-old boy who couldn't turn down the opportunity of a lifetime to go to Europe and help with the horses.\n\nSome of the reasons to join the seagoing cowboys is that they get to see tons of awesome landmarks. If you love horses and cattle then is most likely the job for you. You get to enteract with them and feed them care for them like they were your own. Even if you just want to help out your world out then this could be the job for you.\n\nIt's amazing how much stuff you can do there to when the jobs done you might be able to look at the pretty things there. Sometimes if your lucky you have to go right through town so you get to see the pretty things on the way there. When it's time to go back home you play games where the horses were cared for. If seagoing cowboys were still around I would love to be one so badly. It would be so cool if I could be one too.\n\nIn conclusion, all i'm saying is that the seagoing cowboys would be something worth doing and worth while. You can go so many places and you rarely go to the same place ever. It sounds so cool and you never know where you'll go, hey you might just go to Egypt and see the pyrimids you just never know.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Possibility of Exploration on Venus\n\nIn the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author explains the research done about Venus, and possible exploration to this neighboring planet of ours. Throughout the entirety of this article, the author gives thorough reasoning in explaining why the risks are worth this exploration to Venus.\n\nVenus is one of our neighboring planets along with Mars. Venus is closer to the sun. We have had the chance to send many spacecrafts to some parts of our solar system; the moon, mars, in Earth's atmosphere. We have attempted to send some in the direction of Venus. But because of the extreme weather on the planet, no spacecraft has lasted more than a few hours on the planet. This planet has harsher storms, burning heat, and lightning has struck the space craft some times now, it seems like the planet just does't want to be explored.\n\nVenus's climate is very harsh compared to the climate here on Earth. With the planet's surface tempurature at an average of 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the pressure is 90 times greater. It could crush a submarine, even one that could sustain the pressure of going all the way to the bottom of the ocean. If the sub was strong enough to sustain the pressure, it would still most likely be melted by the heat. Besides the climate and pressure, there is also the thick atmosphere containing almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide. Plus the clouds of highly currosive sulfuric acid.\n\nAstronomers are really pushing this exploration because it is believed that Venus was once an Earth, filled with large oceans and has sustained life. It seems there have been signs of rocky sediments in the surface, along with valleys, mountain ranges, and craters. This is quite a motivation for astronomers to find out if there was once a planet out there, just like us, that once sustained life, and could still be a possibility of life remaining.\n\nNot only are astronomers striving to gain more knowledge, but also to because this could be the next step into further exploration out there. \"Human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth should not be limited by danegrs and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagingation and innovation.\" The author explicitely gives reason as to why this exploration is so important, not just for knowledge, but for the possibility to learn from this and move forward with research. We could gain new technology, make more discoveries, and even find a planet out there where our life could be sustained.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir appreciative The author reflects upon experiences home positive manner expresses fact thankful My parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today I eternally grateful paragraph This quote shows Narciso s appreciation culinary skills parents passed The extra information parentheses also provide grateful tone piece writing Also paragraph says I always grateful parents love sacrifice The language used grateful shows intence thankfulness feels Throughout entire reading word grateful used repeadtly The use repetition provides reader knowledge word important So grateful appears keyword Also later paragraph says But reality way express gratitude spirit generosity impressed young age There much passion phrase There way express gratitude shows s thankful way even express The author really shows reader appreicative family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In todays world students often get board in a classroom. Therefor students dont pay atention when the teather is teaching. The result of them not paying atention leads to them getting bad grades. It would make a great diffrence if schools would use the FACS. There are many reasons why schools should be useing FACS but here are some of the main reason.\n\nOne of the reasons schools should be using FACS is because it would be able to tell if someone was getting frusterated and were to imbarest to ask for help. If teacher knew that one of their students were getting upset with something they would be able to help them to complet there assiment and not just sit there and not do it. If they did not use this they could not tell if the student was getting upset and didnt know how to do somthing and didnt fell comfortable asking for help in front of the class.\n\nAnother reason is they could tell if the students were liking the subjust that they were on. The teacher would be able to see if the students were likeing the way that the teacher was teaching thing so the teacher would know for the next years. This would improve the students grades by the teacher knowing how the students like to be tought.\n\nLast but not least the teacher could tell if something was going on either outside of schools or in school. The teacher would be able to tell if they were upset and they could ask them what was wrong and they could try to help solve the problem. This could improve grades as well by helping the student foces more and help them not be upset.\n\nIf the schools were to use FCAS they should would become a better place for students to learn. The schools would become higher in rank because the studente would get better grades. there for FACS should be used in schools.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local I deligted write letter It come attention people support advances tecnology believe computers positive efffect people I agree people I agree one communicate family friends via email via via ets Number two use computer research number three tell directions give info resteraunt place want go I get detail three topics You communicate family friends via computer For example friend amor best freinds third grade move I cried first day moved next week I got email keep touch He comes every hangout Maybe one day I like go visit In becasue moved I research first With computer research alot things like year language class read book called brother dead true story Se research book I found without computers would I able research anything website shared everything description thing get diretions Directions important The show get certain destination You get directions computer I remember one year I go friends birthday party nt know get So I went online got directions printed found place minutes Without computer would able find house easily You disagree computer bad websites also became addicting people I think I right Thank reading letter computers good study", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opinion on driverless cars is that i dont think they should be legal, because they are driverless and they don't have control from other drivers, such as a instructor or someone that can control it, Another resason i dont think they should be allowed is that they might cause a lot of accidents. Some accidents could be harful others might be just a dent or\n\nsomething like that.\n\nIn the passage it was talking about how the law keeps focus on the drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. If they focus so hard on that, the driverless cares wouldn't be okay, because the people safe they would need someone to pay attention to the road and not the distracting suff. If people were distracted while in a driverless car... How would they know when something is coming or their about to crash (besides the seat vibration)?\n\nIn my opionion driverless vehicles shouldn't be allowed due to the fact that no one is driving them, and that they could be a harm on other people. I think when driving these vehicles someone should still pay attention to the road even if they are working on something bad, such as a report for a job or anything like that. some people might think differently, but some might not. Some people might think that they need to have someone watching the roads. Some other people may think they don't need anyone watching the road, and etc. Finally I think they should be allowed if they have someone at least paying attention to the road, and etc.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I agree concerned experts im sure many others agree also I bet keep reading would understandable I agree First many people spend much time talking friends online I think start talking online finish conversation face face telephone Talking online great way connect friends people nt seen long time much start problems For example rumors In opinion friends get excited online decide start rumors people ends sent almost everybody Another example online arguing lead many problems like fighting get back school How would feel turned computer find someone talking someone trying start fight I m positive would enjoy feeling might hurt Next reason computer much effect peoples grades Many people going home turning computer instead homework studying There many people go school grades declined online usage Pretty soon many people held back failed school year For example picture parent getting child s report card find mostly You would nt like either Lastly computers cause another problem called bullying Too many children bullied online hurt Those children bullies enjoying children getting bullied sad Thinking nobody cares Bullying caused death many problems Imagine someone getting bullied feelings really hurt dont talk adult parent end killing Picture many parents upset would find child bullied death really hurts And m sure one parents wont happy In conclusion online much effect everybody", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir happiness love family He writes parents immigrants moved better life children He writes way could make reader feel extremely happy He also talks parents taught cook talked Cuban culture He extremely proud grateful parents teach The author writes small simple home special home also much meant Also house special spending childhood also got love parents house This house able learn word family really meant also made happy would never life able forget family These love happiness moods created author memoir dedicated family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you rather walk or drive a car going to work?\n\nit would be much more easier to drive a car, right? In today's generation people use their car for transportation going to work or just driving around. All their going to do is pay more gas and spend more,but gas today is more expensive than years ago. Many people need to realize that their are to wasting gas and it can create more traffic jams because many people need to get to their destination on time or not on time. The fellow citizens needs to have an advantage of limiting car usage.\n\nTo begin with, Car can create more gas usage because many people just go to shorter destination or longer destination. But the things is that people just waste gas because they dont realized how they are spending a lot of money. For example, a girl is going to the store closer to home, she is thinking if she going to drive her car or walk and she is thinking to drive her car, why? because she would rather not walk or she is to lazy. The girl is wasting her gas. In today's society many people need to open their eyes and realized thing on how much they are spending on car usage.\n\nAccording to this source 3: \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in\n\nBagota\", \" Bogota, Columbia-In a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of Colombians hiked, bikes, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jam (paragraph 20)\". This quote states that many of the Colombians are supporting their country car usage. They would rather hiked, bikes, skated or took buses to work. Also, it cannot lead to traffic jams. The fellow citizens need to look over what many people are trying to do to limit their car usage because other people cannot afford buying a car. For example, many years ago only people who are wealthy can only afford cars and those who cannot afford it, they would make an effort to make things as possible to get in their destination and enjoy walking rather than riding car.\n\nFurthermore, walking and riding a bike could make things possible for everyone. People need to notice that driving a car could make things much harder. According to this source 1: \" In German Suburb, Life Goes on Without Cars\", \" In the United States, the Environmental Protection Agency is promoting \"car reduced\" communities, and legislators are to act, if cautiously\". This quote states that the United States are planning to reduce car usage because it looks like many people today are having a lot of car accidents. For example, driving while texting. This can create less accidents.\n\nIn conclusion, Fellow citizens need to set their limits on car usage.\n\nthey need to realized on how it can create a mess in the world full of car transportation. Also, knowing on how much they pay for gas and also it can lead to massive traffic jams. They need to have advantage of using car usage. They could ride a bike or walk to go reach their destination.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because you can explore places see how other people live. The program lets you sightsee the Atlantic Ocean and you can see certain animals that live in the ocean. The program teaches you about hardwork.\n\nI was working at a bank when my friend asked me if I wanted to join him in the Seagoing Cowboys program I accepted. It was the opportunity of a lifetime. I heard the program taught you about other countries what they had been through. Some countries helped out in World War two then Europe bomed them. I went to help pick up ruins of the citys left.\n\nI crossed the Atlantic Ocean four times already I helped over 2000 people. I was glad to join the program because I got to meet people that I became friends with and they joined the program. I got more and more people joining the program soon we had 15000 people helping us. I crossed the Atlantic Ocean eight times already more than any other Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nSome people didn't join I didn't pressure them to join I became friends with them,but sometimes they would ask me if they could join i always said ''there's always room for one more.'' I let other people join the program they became friends with everyone. I would sometimes have people that i didn't know join the program.\n\nThat's why I would join the program so you could make friends and have more people join the program. You could also beat my record of fourteen trips back and fourth. You could also see the animals in the Atlantic Ocean that's why you should join.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In article The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted apparent builders Empire State Building faced many challenges attempt trying dock dirigibles The dirigibles could hazard Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable In likes happened German airship Hindenburg officials nt want similar disaster occur downtown New York Also dirigibles light mass would make target high forceful winds The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currets This reality caused fear zeppelin could potentially blown spire sort another building causing suffer hole fragile lining The law also caused obstacles docking dirigibles Empire State Building dirigibles could Empire State Building existing law airships flying low urban areas This law thwarted many wouldbe attempts mooring Mooring dirigibles dream talked The Mooring Mast however soon never chance come true", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is important to consider how teenagers contemplate between free and busy hours. While some people contend that teenagers should involve in free social works during those free hours, other deem that it is trivial. I tend to partially agree with the former argument, and in this essay I will support my view with argument examples.\nTo begin, teenagers should involve in community service because it makes them social. This is because social works are usually gratifying and enlivening; also, teenagers could build rapport in the society. For instance, they can utilize their spare time and embark on a new relation, which is integral for safety and companionship need. However, if teenagers do not involve in social service, they may lack support during emotional turmoil. This happens because there is no one to support them during such ordeal.\nTo put in a nutshell, since there are some obvious merits of teenager’s involvement in social work such as it is exhilarating and invigorating, teens should engage in community work without financial motivation. Personally, I would involve in social service during free times.\nTo put in a nutshell, although there are obvious merits of teenager’s involvement in social work such as it is exhilarating and invigorating, we must take in consideration their need for refreshment and involvement in other sectors. Personally, I tend to partially support the argument that teens should engage in community work; I would involve in social service during free times.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Should certain books removed people think inappropriate children see read No I think removed I honestly think put different sections library age Like children books magizenes one section The younge adult teen books magizenes section self Then adult books magizenes section Even autobiographys documentories section It would make things easier find book wanting read For example teenage girl looking book high school girl crush boy d likely section younge adults So yes parents concerned children s viewing certain books able say something But one teenager looking book famous person s autobiography school project Even though includes used drugs teenager That person nt fail ca nt find library concerned parent nt think appropriate Like I said best thing put books subcatagories age It would make things easier faster find book selection", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do u believe thatis was really made by alen or is this just a normal landform? This is just a normal landform because when the picture was on web surfer it was reavling as a natural landform. The 3 reason is because malins team got a closer look and got absolute resolutions, what the picture actually shows, and it has become a pop icon.\n\nFirst reason is because when malin and his team got a close snapshot of the face they got absulute results. First, in the story it says that amlins team got a better photo of the face than the vikings. This explains that when vikings took the picture and let people or scientist assume wat they wanted to. Another example is when they got the image and it was revealing as a natural landform proving there was no allien monument. This explains that they were provin that it wasnt a monument made by the aliens. Third,\n\nit was compared to the image span taken by the vikings in 1976. This explains that they were trying to compare the diffrence between the pictures to prove it was a landform. The vikings may have got a picture but malins team got a better picture to prove it.\n\nSecond reason is becuase what th picture actually shows. First, it says that it is equivalent of a butte or mesa. This explains landforms common around the american west. Second, it reminds him of most middle butte, or snake river plain of idaho. This shows that he know wat else it looks like comparing to an earth formation. Third, the lava dome formed an isolated mesa around the same height as the face on mars. This explains that he is comparing it to wat it looks like from landforms to the face on mars. Could this picture actually help prove wat it is.\n\nThird reason is becuase it also has become a pop icon. First it has become a pop icon in movies, books magazines, and\n\nradio talk shows. They might of did this to get peoples opinion on what they think it was a landform or created by alliens. It also had people thinking that NASA would rather hide the conspiracy theorists. This explains maybe why they should of keep it as a research and left it out of magazines and movies and stuff. Third NASA wished there was a budget and ancient civilization on mars. This explains that NASA is trying to defend their budget and wished that ancient civilization on mars. Should they have left it as a reasearch or it was a good idea to put it in movies and stuff.\n\nI believe that it is just a landform that was made as stuff went by it. The 3 reasons are malins team got a closer look at it, what the picture really shows, and it has become a pop icon. This is just a normal landform because when malins team got a closer picture and got absulute results.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Author supposrts the idea of Venus being worthy of exploring dispite the challanges by stating in Paragraph 8 \"Striving to meet the challanges presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likey lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\". This leads me to belive that if us as humans dont proceed to learn more about this planet we are not going to gain any knowladge and we will never know about the new dicovories we could have made. The Author also continues on about how Venus was belived to be filled with oceans and supported various forms of life and is reffered to as the Earths \"twin\". So this leads me to think that there is more out there than dangerous carbon dioxide blankets, clouds of corrosive acid and above boiling point tempatures. There possibley couldve been life.\n\nThis makes me agree with the Author's statemet even dispite the dangers Venus has. With it being so close to Earth and once possibly having living life forms on it. It makes me belive that we should be leanring more about it and building machines to study the materials of this planet. Us Humans make discoveries everyday and we build extrordinary things that you would only see in movies. I definitly think that one day we could build a machine to substand the harsh tempatures and dangerous chemicals Venus has. WIth listening to the Author points i belive that this could open new doors for us and maybe even one day visit the planet. In Paragraph 6 the author states that \" Many reaserchers are working on innovations that woud allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaninfuly to our knowladge of Venus\"\n\nThis shows me that NASA and other astrologers have already began to try making machines to one day travel to Venus.\n\nSoon one day we will have discoverd the planet of Venus and have learned many new things. This could possibly lead to new discoveries about tecnology and maybe even one day about human life. But we have to use our natural human instict of wanting to know more to find these amazing things. Thats why I agree with the authors statment that we should continue studying Venus despite the dangers it presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine being a top scientist at NASA and Viking 1 spacecraft \"spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face.\" A lot of people thought of alien life possibility, but others thought it to be just a natural landform. What would your thoughts be about the image? The face of Mars is a natural landform. There's similar landforms on Earth, high pixel photos taken, and not enough reliable information to support the alien life theory.\n\nTo begin, there are similar landforms on Earth to the one on Mars. As stated in the text, \"what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West.\" Also stated in the text is Garvin giving his opinion, \"it reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\"\n\nAnother issue with the alien life theory is the fact that NASA has high quality cameras. Quoting the text, \"each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\" In the result of having high quality pictures you could see small details clearly. As stated in the article Garvin said, \" 'so, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!' \" Concluding that statement nothing other than the landform that had resembled a face was seen on Mars.\n\nFinally, there wasn't enough evidence to support the claim of alien life on Mars. The first pictures were blurry and had haze or cloud coverage. This theory was more popular on the online world than in the science world. As stated in the text, \"the 'Face on Mars' has since become a pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows-even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years!\" This proves that this might be just for publicity and attention. There has been many conspiracy theorists.\n\nUltimately, the face on Mars is just a natural landform. There's similar landforms on Earth, high pixel photos taken, and not enough reliable information to support the alien life theory.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patience time I mom decided lets make cookes got cookes ready They looked good eaven thow werent cooked My mom go oven minets I want wait long cookies As started take shape big dark brown round soft mougnt wasted I wanted The timer buzed grabed hot pad almost oven Right I get one mom snarped they need cool on She set timer minets I think I could wait long My magnt waterd small I dying I wanted bad I thought smell could kill Every minet semed like houre Then timer buzed I sprinted ther grabed plate tossed bigest cookes plate I burned hand But I care I took bite cooke water My patieates payed end I word cookes I got", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Emotions and being able to recognize them when they occur have a lot to do with our human ability to learn and pick up information. if perhaps, one is feeling confused, it would be much harder for them to be able to retain information being thrown at them. we see this a lot in the educational environment. At school, students must be attentive and ready to learn before they are actually able to start the process of learning. This goes hand-in-hand with the idea that schools, as well as the education system shoud pay more attention to students' emotions towards subjects, contrasting enthusiasm to pick up a new idea with boredom followed by inability to focus. This being said, the new software being used to detect emotion from facial expressions could be a rather helpful tool in the everyday classroom for years to come.\n\nEvery student has a different set of feelings, all are complex creatures with opinions on subjects that could differentiate them from one another. Some are better at learning subjects they are more interested in while others have the ability to devote time into learning any subject that school has to throw at them. The point remaining is that none are the same and so, teaching methods for students should become more indivualized to fit each students unique learning style and ability. It is possible that the computerized Facial Action Coding System could aid in the process of making these learning styles more fit for each student rather than just having them for the masses. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts, 'then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Having a computer monitor to read emotions from facial expressions could display to teachers how each student reacts to the information that they are learning, allowing teachers to make adjustmants in their teaching styles where they see fit. This could give students the ability to learn more effectively for their feelings towards subjects as they are personalized based on reaction as they continue.\n\nThe Facial Acting Coding System is a very complex process consisting not only of computer scientists but also of a team of psychologists using expertise to read peoples' emotions through their faces, using scientific evidence along the way. This could mean that, while it is a newer system, it is a well-proven one, making the classroom a good place to continue perfecting it. \"The facial expression for each emotion are universal,' observes Dr. Huang, 'even though individuals ofren show varying degrees of expression' (like not smiling as broadly). Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements- in a real face or in the painted face of Monda Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions (as in Davinci's masterpiece). Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion).\" This line from the informative piece displays the process of determining emotions through computer technologies. It shows that it is well-tested and understood by its administrators as well as those in support of it, gaining it credibility as a method tested and used. this means that, while it is a newer technology, it could be used in the classrooms to continue to perfect the software by gaining more facial expressions from students, making it even more effective for its participants.\n\nWhile the software detecting facial expressions is a good idea for countless reasons, it also has a few downfalls. One disadvantage of this technology could be its lack of other uses besides reading emotions of students as far as classrooms go. Some may argue that installation of this likely pricey software would not be worth the pay or the hassle of overall installation. To this, one could argue that allowing students to have a more personalized appraoch to learning should be enough to convince those against it that it is worthwhile. Students being able to learn in an environment as well as manner specifically tailored to their indivual learning abilities and styles will benefit us as a society not only in the future, as today's current students become tomorrow's important business officials and doctors, but also currently, as these students will have less stress devoted to worrying about trying to learn something they are disinterested in or simply don't understand. Altogether, the good outweigh the bad in this current argument.\n\nComputerized sytems used to understand and display human emotions do belong in today's classroom. The benefits of this approach are numerous for both teachers and students being effected as well as for the future when these students are more outspoken, functioning members of society. This can be displayed that, not only would these systems help students to become more able and excited to learn in their own way, but it would also allow teachers to more effectively complete their jobs by editing approaches to learning to fit each student's individual syle and ability. It is also a well-understood and well backed-up process with scientific study allowing direct research to show its credibiltiy. Having students using this technologuy could also allow for the technology to become more credible as more emotions of individuals are entered into the technology. Finally, the price of these systems would not matter in the long-run as this would be money invested into the future of society as these students grow with a solid, quality education. Altogether, the good outweigh all the downfalls in this experiment and it should be introduced into classrooms in the following years to improve the quality of education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The unmasking face on Mars appeared on May 24,2001. Some say that it was just\n\na natural landform. Some say that alien markings was on there. In the article it states \"Thousands of anxious surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPl web site revealing... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" The article also states \" The camera on board MGS had peer through wispy clouds to see the face perhaps, said skeptic, alien markings were hidden by haze. The article says \"The caption noted a \"huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" Some say that it was just a good way to engage the public and attract more attention to mars. Malin's team captured a photograph in maximum resolutio nso if aliens were to make the face then the would be able to see if any objects was around like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks. you could see what ever was there.\n\nOn the other hand in paragraph 6 it states ' Although few scientist believed the face was an alien aircraft, photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when mars Global surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in Sept. 1997, eighteen long years after the viking mission ended.\"\n\nThere for not everyone believed that alien's markings was hadden or that alien's even made the face.In the paragraph 12 it says\"what the picture actually shows is the martian equiavalent of a butte or mesa- landforms...\". So there for the photograph that that had tcapyured does not show evidence that there was any alien markings on the planet Mar's.\n\nThere could have been alien markings and there could've not have been any markings on Mar's.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, people argue that the one way to ameliorate our traffic conditions' safety is to impose higher money than current fees for aggressive drivers. Although some drivers do not agree with this trend, the government should implement strong social restraints. \r\n\r\n When it comes to traffic conditions in South Korea, a lot of vehicles and drivers are driving, however, some of them frequently break the rule while they drive. To put it simply, restrictions do not affect to reduce offensive driving. This is because offensive drivers might know if they speed on the highway or common roads, they end up paying only a small penalty. Meanwhile, some restrictions have been strengthened a bit more by paying, however, its effect is not able to prohibit the driver from aggressive driving. Therefore, some people want to make new policies rather than restraints. For instance, an incentive system will be able to dilute criminal acts such as overspeed or signal violation.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the imposition of fines for out of driver's senses is a vital role in a constitutional state, especially related to people's lives. If they have to pay a dozen of money, they make an effort to follow the rule. For example, when people drive on highways, they tend to adhere to guidelines because they do not want to pay fines for slowing down if there is a speeding camera. Additionally, if significant laws exist like cancellation of a driving license, they will keep in mind several regulations.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, for the aforementioned reasons, I agree with this opinion as people must have impartial rules and restrictions to protect people from aggressive drivers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ends story paragraph wants reader feel like going accomplish something hibiscus geese An example accomplishing something hibiscus author mentions grandmother use spend time together things together grandmother would hair put hibiscus flower Also geese sing accomplishment sees sky flying south survive cold winter months warm place", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people forsee that driverless cars are the future of public transporation. Companies such as Google, have already make driverless cars fitted with various sensors to help them guide themselves around cities and navigate through traffic. Since 2009, various improvements have been make to make these driverless cars more efficient and safe. I believe that there should be continued development for driverless cars because of what they can do to change way we see public transportation today.\n\nDriverless cars have been improving since the 1950s, ever since General Motors created track car that could drive itself around using radio signals and electrical cables. In the 1980s, various sensors were added to automobiles in the aid of the creation of antilock brakes. Driverless cars also know when to give the wheel to the driver when situation calls for the need. And now, Google has make multiple advancements to driverless cars to make them more efficient and safer around cities and pedestrians. Tesla has predicted that if there is continued development for driverless cars, automobile companies such as Mercedes-Benz, Audi and Nissan will have self-driving cars by 2020. This shows that with the continued development of driverless cars will surely change the future in years time.\n\nDriverless cars have shown that they could potentially change the future of driving. Through continued development from the 1950s all the way to today, driverless cars have shown that they are capable of driving through cities and populated areas and are smart enough to evade danger until the driver needs to take over. I believe that if there is continued development for driverless cars, they will develop enough to completely take over public transportation and allow more people to be safe when on the road.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Gym clothes People say laughter bring together anyone I know true I know bring together two unlikely Me best friend complete opposite yet became best simple joke locker room It happened going great It I go school I woken late missed walked way school already dropped lunch hallway three times I walked straight soon best friend CAPS going said catty voice stuck pointed glare Me shy ducked head kept walking one prettiest girls school hung In clique I well I nt Most time I hung self Her going well mine Her broken best friend time also stayed night hospital brother car accident So mood I wasWhat even worse next class I got locker room soon I walked I realized I forgotten gym clothes entered behind sigh let I knew forgotten We going use bucket The bucket lost unwanted items ended cool stuff like sweat shirts neat tee shirts could never sure clean Today though looked like guy clothes I walked bucket came next We began dig bucket Finding nothing sized sweat pants extra large shirts ones thought best We changed soon eyes met started cracking We looked like two little kids playing dads clothes She could let go pants else would drop around ankles shirt I wearing hung past knees Neither us stopped laughing sides ached tears running faces When teacher banged door walked locker room whole gym stared us found confidence friendship nt care Sense day I glued others sides best We many fights every time I think day locker room I ca nt help laugh That laughter brought I best", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist depends located In story feeling nothing desert around heat gave hope It depends cycling It didnt really matter I going die This quote states feelings going head dieing thirst He felt nothing sure going die found sign civilization near became better hope raised", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Immigrating to other nations for business purposes has been a popular tendency for many families recently. Therefore, it has been debated that whether this trend would obtain positive influence on offsprings of one family who resolves to establish their life due to profession's requirements in another country or not. My essay will analyse both of the perspectives and demonstrate my views at the end of the paragraph.\nAltering to a new foreign neighbourhood is believed to deal pessimistic effects to a child, and in fact, this is true in some cases. A survey on several teenagers whose parents moved to a completely unfamiliar place just to maintain their financial status when they were younger suffer from many mental sickness like depression, autism, or anxiety disorders. Numerous children who suffer from this case feel lost when they live in the new environment. This is because the ability to adapt to elsewhere new limits for a child, and therefore, they are unable to communicate, or have new relationships. This consequently directly affects their education, state of mind, and physical development.\nHowever, it does not mean that changing new living surroundings is bad due to certain reasons. Once the children are used to the conditions of their new home, which means that they have already overcome their problems they endured initially. Furthermore, these young individuals virtually become successful in their future carried because the ability to handle pressure tasks was laying a solid foundation already. For instance, in the USA, most children who have already experienced such a change in his life find himself more resilient in making crucial decisions which involve in their career.\nIn conclusion, the advantages and disadvantages of switching living places for busy parents are even. In my opinion, it creates the opportunity for their children to harden themselves in terms of patience as they adapt to that unaccustomed place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator, voting on a president is a big deal. it decides who has power over the U.S. Now the way we elect our president to me is a very efficient process, this is as you know is electoral college, (EC). For the past 200 some odd years, when the founding fathers created this system, it has worked everytime. yes, there have been recounts but those were human mistakes, not a break in the system. when electing a president, I think we need to keep electoral college\n\nPresident Obama, in his state of the union adress, said, \"If it isn't broken, dont fix it\". This is true for EC. it still works so why in the world would we want to change it. Would you fix a car if it ran to it's maximum capacity? Some on the opposite side may say that their is a chance for a tie, isn't that fair though? In any fair competition there is always a chance of a tie.\n\nEC is also the most fair in the sense of political party, (liberals and conservitives). It dosnt favor any one party. It does this by giving equal amount of vote for the size of state and for each to win the greater number of electoral college. \"The EC requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. No region (South, Northeast, etc.) has enough electoral votes to elect a president.\"(source 3) This, in basic terms, means that if the southern region is more conservitive (which it is in most cases) doesn't have enough electoral votes to elect a president. The other regions have as equel of a vote as the south does, thus keeping a nice fair election.\n\nIn colclusion, EC is, in my opinion, the best and most fair way to elect our leader. other ways may be more efficient but EC is the most far and it has worked since it was created. So these are the reasons that it should remain in use.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With agreeable to the order of the day, it is inevitable to find ways to improve education quality. Consequently, whereas some individuals claim that adolescents of secondary schools should evaluate their instructors so as to develop the standard of teaching, others contend that this might create indiscipline in classrooms and might be regarded as a way of disrespect. I, too, wholeheartedly feel that children do not have the proper ability to evaluate their respected supervisors.\r\n\r\nInasmuch as students have to spend time with their teachers for a long time, they can easily figure out the strengths and weaknesses of those tutors, facilitating them to judge a teacher’s capability smoothly. In other words, high school children help their institutes to improve the quality of education provided that they notified the school management about different aspects of a tutor, such as cooperativeness, punctuality, understanding, to name but a few. For example, Singapore has improved its education standard remarkably by assessing tutors from high school students’ evaluation sheets. Therefore, pupils of high school should be inspired to criticize their professors effectively in order to increase their education quality.\r\n\r\nPlausible though pupils of secondary schools have the ability to understand right and wrong, and to judge other people, it is worth arguing that they should not evaluate their supervisors' performance. This is because it is a way to show disrespect and angriness to professors. As well as that down to having an opportunity to stay about schoolteachers, juveniles will be divided into many groups, causing many indisciplines in schools. For instance, in India, one student is killed brutally in the washroom because he said negative things about a favourite teacher of many. Thus, it would not be a good idea to take comments from pupils about educators.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, admittedly, high school students can evaluate their teachers but biased opinions can create problems. Hence, I unequivocally buttress the stand of not evaluating teachers by students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days recreational areas have a harmful impact on flora and fauna on the Earth. Some individuals claim that it is late to take measures to prevent this issue, while others still believe that it is possible to tackle this challenge. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss both sides and suggest my opinion. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, humankind created many activities which led to the extinction of species. Firstly, urbanisation and selling pigeon meat is one of the reasons for becoming animals and plants extinct. Secondly, hunting has become a major problem nowadays. For example, it is established that almost a hundred species are endangered from being vanished in Uzbekistan every year as a result of hunters and poachers, who kill animals and use their skin or bones to make money and careless attitude toward plants. \r\n\r\nThereby, the disappearance of animals and spacious plants leads to a disbalance in the environment. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are can be taken several measures to prevent nature and animals from extinction. Government, can stop or at least minimize deforestation in cities. Moreover, banning hunting activities is not a less important action to prevent extermination. A bright example of this can be white tigers which are a limited number nowadays. There is a strict rule which forbids hunting animals in most countries around the world, because they are the most main animals in the food chain. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, indeed, we have seriously damaged this planet and other species that had lived or are living with us, there are still plenty of measures we need to take to prevent further harm and possibly renovate what has been done", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To keep or not to keep the electoral college , that is the question . Everbodys ansewer is different but my ansewer is to abolish it . This system did work in the 17th to about the late 19th centrrey but now now in this day and age the old system is like the gamecube , it had a good run and serived it's purpose but now its time to move on to better and more up to date system . Now thats out of the way lets see what should the new system could possably be .\n\nFirst up , by the people of the U.S.A. . What I mean by that is the poplare vote . With this system everyone's vote matter . Lets say that to win the vote you have to have ten thusand ore votes than your oppint or something like that . I really don't know the best way to do the voting system but this could should be solved by the gonverment and not the high school student that is writing this . Other than that lets move on .\n\nNext one up , Repesitives . I know there is something like this but do this base on population . Like for every 10,000 there is one repesitive or something like that . This could be a cleaner and faster system than the one in the first paragraph . Both of the system mainly focus on the people so you can't do wrong with ether of this systems . Thatsall I have to say about this system .\n\nNow the moment you been waiting for , update the old system . Sometimes all you have to do is update the old system . The system is out datted but if you update it you could make it better . It may or may not work work but you do this right this system could last the U.S.A. a nother 300 years .\n\nIn conclusion , this is what you could do to replace the system . There are many more but to me this are the three best systems I can think of so I hope you agree with me . Other than that I wish you farlwell .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has an opinion among commentators that the writers who work in freight transport have to check and examined different aspects annually in order to have a safe roads. I am strongly agreed with this standpoint and I will justify my reason in the paragraphs below.\r\n\r\nTo commence, cargo vehicles usually are bigger and heavier than normal cars and these types of cars accidents are a nightmare because they accidents will be made multitudinous decease and injuries compared to normal cars. For instance, the collision of a trailer which transported oil ended with an explosion in some cases.\r\n\r\nMoreover, good transport drivers drive along time in road and it is a kind of living for them. as a result of this condition, they try to engage the living activities to their jobs such as drinking alcohol or having a partner while driving. making these behaviours and accustomed to them could make an immense consequences. Therefore, they have to undergo several tests and retraining courses in order to update their knowledge and comprehension of their crucial task in the transportation system.\r\n\r\nIn addition, driving for a long time on the road is monotonous. Especially for whom do it as the only way to make money for their family. An increasing number of them struggling with mental illness for a long time.by regular driving ,test government will be able to find drivers with chronic illnesses and take the right action which is proper for both system and individuals. such as voluntary redundancy\r\n\r\nFinally testing good transport driver is vital for having a safe transport system and this action has to repeat regularly under government supervision.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting exhuberate cyclist The June weather added water depletion beginning summer cyclist arrived first town deserted water disgusting water The author uses verbal irony calling town town really town anymore The large snake presented air danger another abandoned Grape Juice Factory added hopeless lost tone", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that it is a good idea for driverless cars to be coming soon. I say this because, even though I'm not driving yet but I will be soon, as I get older or also anyone around the world, if someone is driving and maybe if the person receives a text or a call, it could be something very important.\n\nI can imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore. When I was younger I started to play with toy cars with my cousin Johnathan. Once I started to play more and more with him, I started to like them a lot, of course I didn't realize when I was younger there were thousands of cars out there, I thought maybe the cars that were in Bremen, Indiana were the only ones.\n\nI'm going to be sixteen very soon, and going to be able drive and can't wait to own a car of my own and I'm also very excited. I know that I also have to be very careful when it comes to situations like this, because you start to drive as a teenager and it might be scary and you have to be extremely careful and pay full attention whatever what's coming at you. As I read the passage it said that they plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020. By the time 2020 will come, I will be 20 years old and would have already graduated by then. I know when I'll be 20, I'll be much more mature on things and can't wait to see the driverless car.\n\nIt would be pretty nice to own a car, where you don't even have to bother watching the road and can text or call anyone whenever you need to, but just because it drives by itself, doesn't mean you don't have to be aware on watching the road or paying any attention, a person has to take full responsibility to own any type of car, whether its an ordinary or driverless. If an accident happens, you would have to blame the person because they put it on theirselves and wasn't paying attention.\n\nThen again, there might be some positive and negative things about a driverless car, but it doesn't matter. It's the person decision if they want to own a car like that. Everyone is different and have their own thoughts on any type of car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that boys should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. Because during this trip you get to go place that you have never been before, take care of animals, and not only work but you get to play games and sports.\n\nOne thing that I did on my aventure was I went and saw Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special. So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. I also toured an excavated castle in Crete and Marvled at the Panama Canal on my way to China.\n\nSeagoing Cowboys half to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped over seas. Once I had to get on the SS Charles W. Wooster, headed for Greece- with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.\n\nPlus in the spare time the cowboys (us) played baseball and vollyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and the other games also helped pass the time.\n\nBut being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an aventure.\n\nBut it opened up the world to me.\n\nI'm so grateful for the opportunit, it made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs. The awareness stayed with me, leading my family to host a number of international students and exchange vistors for many years.\n\nAll of the things that I got to see, do, and play you could to. But the most important thing is that if you join the program then you get to help with things that are important. So what do you say will you join? Or will you stay at home and not help and see the world like I did? But just so you know this is a once and a life time experience. I enjoied, now it's your turn now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In process building dock dirigibles builders faced obstacles The first obstacle builders faced lack suitable landing area If nt area land reason way build Also builders would remodel whole building After building framed th floor could nt build mast roof done took even longerThe greatest obstacle mast dealt nature winds tops buildings constantly shifting way dirigible land stay place without crashing The final obstacle builders faced law airships flying low urban areas made illegal ship ever tie even approach buildingAs see many obstacles mast nt useful It great idea But opinion waste time money", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is dangerous and scientist cant get close enough to study it . Scientist are to just study Venus but cause of its crushing atmosphere and hot temperatures and wether. Scientist cant get close enough to the planet to study it so they are trying to create a solution on how to. The scientist already know if they get to close to the planet the planet will crush them and if it is possible to land it is way to hot. So scientist have came up with a solution thinking if they can hover over the planet will they be able to study it.\n\nScientist believe that Venus once use to thrive with life. Scientist believe that Venus many years ago Venus had oceans with life like earth. And also that Venus is close to the same size as Earth along with Mars. And thats why they may believe it had some life on the planet. They have made some electronics to go along with Venus harsh conditions but it is said that it only lasted 3 weeks. So they are trying something old called mechanical computers.\n\nThese mechanical computers and stand harsh conditions such as pressure,heat, and other forces. The mechanical computers are more powerful flexible and quick they played a important role in 1940s of world war 2. Since electronics cannot stand harsh conditions of Venus they are using something that does not require it. The mechanical computer only uses gears and levers which makes it good for the job. As the scientist work on it they are taking it on as a challenge to see the surface of Venus .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting affects cyclist negative way due lack buildings people cars shortcut great doubt survival I going die birds would pick clean He thought wouldnt get water nothing around thought would die dehydration heatstroke And growing realization I would die heatstroke", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "well i think Driverless cars would be reckless and could be dangerous rather than helpful as it says in paragraph 2 it still alerts the driver to take contol of the car when backing up or pulling into places like garages and other things. Also As it Says In Paragraph 3 It reads binary code well in my opinion what if the car cant read the binary code one day what if it just malfunctions and in paragraph 4 it says it needs alot of sensors and a couple of video cameras. after reading this article i still think the who driverless car thing is a reckless invention and not a very good investment with our tax payers money so i really think driverless cars should not be invented and googe shouldnt waste their time on it.In Paragraph 6 it says something about antilock brakes well what if that just dont work and someone gets in a brutal car crash over that malfunctioning.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is often reffered to as the \"Evening Star\". It is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. However this might be hard to undertsand because Venus is a planet. Venus is referred to as Earths twin, it is the closest planet to earth in density and size. A thick atmosphere of ninety seven percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.\n\nEven though there are some amazing things about Venus, it still has its dangers. Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land\n\non Venus. Each previous mission was unmanned of course, but not one spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Clouds in Venus are highly corrosive sulfuric acid. On this planet, tempatures average over eight hundred degrees farenheit and the pressure is ninety times greater than earth.\n\nAs you can tell Venus has some incredible features but also has its dangers. NASA is still working today to try and figure out how to send humans to Venus without death or injury. By this short story I agree with the author and say that do not be limited by dangers and doubts and expand to meet edges of imagination and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you like not being in control? Have you ever felt powerless? These are the feelings you would have if you own a driverless car. Sure, the car will make things easier at times, but what if it acts up. What could you do?\n\nDriverless cars could be a great danger to society! I know that driverless cars can catch the eyes of our society, since we've become technology filled. We can't let that get to us though. Like everything else that requires a computer, there is always a flaw. We can't put our lives in the hands of these cars. In the article it mentions that these cars will not always know how to deal with traffic, accidents, driveways and construction. We could get in a accident or even get murdered from these cars.\n\nAlthough there are many flaws with this model, there are also some postitves too. Instead of driving and struggling with your phone, you can easily put the car in control. You can call, talk to passangers, do work and even eat while it drives. I know it's hard for most drivers to put there complete attention on the road but it's not for a computer. There would be less accidents, no drunk driving and no sleeping at the wheel. It may be a good contribution to our society.\n\nEven though driverless cars bring great contributions, what happens when it acts up? Sure you can take control of the car but what if you're not paying attention? You could create a serious accident. The article says that these cars can not respond to accidents. If you create a sudden accident would'nt that create the other driverless cars to spin out of control? I think we need to stick with our original cars. These driverless cars are ticking time bombs waiting to go off. Lets keep this place safe!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time patience time patience run time I You never time family self like tell Im eat slow going where If food go tried All way take time learn patience easy take time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist story rough road ahead Do exeed posted speed limit Joe kurmashie heavily affected features setting story First shorecay suggested get naturally ends separating people putting middle nowhere limited supply water His water shortage second thing affects makes despair feel collapse die In story says It really didnt matter I going die lards would pick clean This shows features setting made feel hopeless", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"It is essential for the global community to monitor whether each country cuts down the use of fossil fuels such as gas and oil as soon as possible. In my opinion, the international community is undoubtedly responsible for taking instant actions regarding worldwide fossil fuels consumption.\r\n\r\nIt is my view that climate change, which is the current main issue around the world, is especially caused by excessive fossil fuels consumption. Burning fossil fuels emits carbon dioxide which is a potent greenhouse gas and can easily result in a rising temperature. Therefore, extreme weather events and heat waves become inevitable. For instance, with a rising temperature, there would be a loss of biodiversity, destruction of food resources and risks to human well-being and health. This problematic issue needs to be taken into consideration immediately and globally to be overcome.\r\n\r\nIn contrast, some people claim that cutting down fossil fuels can lead to several financial problems. \r\n\r\nThey firmly insist that there are countless workers that have been working in industrial sections related to fuel and if there was less fossil fuel to be consumed in factories, there would be an increasing number of unemployed. I do not find this argument as convincing as it appears to overlook the fact that reducing fossil fuels consumption not only cuts down carbon emissions but also creates greater job opportunities. For example, there would be an increasing demand for workforces in nuclear power plants construction as well as vacancies in factories that manufacture solar panels.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I completely agree that the international community needs to take action instantly because all species from humans to plants and animals are seriously at risk.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable.\n\nAs stated on paragraph number six towards the end, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". We can always detect on the way a perdon is feeling just by looking at their facil expression that they are giving .This new computer technology thing would turn out to be somehting very succesful to a way that the teachers would now be concerned to where exactly it is that the students might just need help. This proves that we can not always prove how a person is feeling to help them out because they don't speak up even though it just might be because them may be feeling scared to ask a simple question.\n\nTeachers would feel a relief on even aswering a simple question that would turn out to help out and improve on something for as simple as it may be.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers Computers Computers hear today New websites chatrooms games much I agree experts think spend time outdoors friends family Computers take peoples lives nt know looking facebook know almost anything Lunch CAPS CAPS CAPS Computers taking lives Believe people bring computers everywhere go get chances wo nt getting keep clicking keep finding new stuff I say computers cool device limit We looking said You got come back earth spend time family The might cool device meen safe post stuff Facebook probably two dangerous sites Anybody could type get maches find eventhough nt know People always say People could say taht year old Just leaving college s really year old getting ready enter senior center Do nt trust anybody Now days nt even leave house You shop talk taxes bills vurtual life Pretty soon kind human become together Some computers probally smarter system humans What I saying limit time thats spending Know know I think computers need seen less throughout human day Also taking lives dargerous nt even leave house make living I hope take thoughts consideration Thank", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First of all,we don't need these cars because they seem dangerous and not safe to the our envirnment,and now knowing that there going to build these car are going to take a lot more money from our government and they will cost way to much just for a car that can drive itself, like why would we need these cars? See in paragraph 9 it states that the driveless cars are illegal in California,Nevada,Florida,and the District of Columbia.\n\nSecond of all, I wouldn't buy this car because of the new technology that it has and what if the wires start glitching and you crash and you die? Who's fault would it be if that had happened? The driverless car sounds cool and all but you really got to think about the defects in the car and how it effects the car runs and how it will cost to get its oil changes and how much the check ups will cost. See Toyota is a good car company but in the past some of there cars killed a lot of people and the airbags didn't work. The same ccompany is going to make more,more new car to get more money.\n\nThird, see in paragraph 9 it states,\" If the technology fails and someone is injured,who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer? Thats the number 1 reason why I wouldn't buy this car is because of that question \"Who's fault is it\"? Whos fault is..... who fault it is, is the person who bought the car ans the person whol designed and built it, thats who fault it is.\n\nIn conclusion, the reason I wouldn't buy this car is because of the self driver and that doesn't seem to safe and it will cost way to much for that person and because of the that question \"whos at fault\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on Mars was not made by aliens, and it only looked like a face because of the shadows. Michael Malin even took a better picture twenty two years later that showed it wasn't a face, but some people weren't satisfied. Three years later they took an even better one, showing that it wasn't a face at all.\n\nThis is not a face becasue the author says in paragraph two, \"Scientist figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows\" Some people didn't agree because \"it was winter in April '98--a cloudy time of the year\" and to disprove this they took a better picture in the summer. In paragraph ten, it says \"Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001--a cloudless summer day in Cydonia\"\n\nthe picture that he took was even clearer and it can be seen that nothing alien related is in the photo. It is all just a mesa.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is recommended by the world health organization to eat at least five portions of vegetables and fruit each day. The graph illustrates the percentage of people from UK who consuming these portions in 2006.\nOverall, it can be seen that data are reported by age group and gender. Female from 55 to 64 years old achieved the highest percentage on the chart. However, the lowest one is represented by young males from 19 to 24 years old, at 15%.\nOne of the main features is that male adults from 35 to 44 and between 45 to 54 years old accounting both for slightly more than 20%. Another main features is that the percentages of female increased to 15% to 35% until they are 64, then decrease to 25%. The consuming by males are quite similar and it is clear if we look to the fist four groups of bars which, in order accounting for 15%, 20% and almost 25% for the last two.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" is about how Google developed a car that can drive on its own. Google's cofounder Sergey Brin envisioned a future with driverless cars. Driverless cars can't really drive completely on their own. I am for the development of these cars.\n\nFirst, Google has already proven that they are safe. For example in 2009 has already had cars that could do that. There has been no problems since the car started driving. The article states. \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash. Another example is that they aren't really driveless the driver can take over on small things. The driver really doesn't have to worry about much. The author says. \" they still alert the driver to take over when puling in and out of drive ways.\" Driveless cars are safe and the driver can take over anytime.\n\nSecond, The cars are made with sensors. For example they put in a sensor called LIDAR to help the car with where it is. It helps by showing where it is. The article says \"It uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the cars surroundings.\" Another example is that they also a different kind of sensor to sense problems. If the driver isn't paying attention it can alert him/her. The author states. \"...Those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond ti the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.\" These sensors can help the car and against dangerous things.\n\nI am for driveless cars. Google has proven that they are safe since the car can go half a million miles without crashing. The cars have sensors to help the car and to detect dangers.The driver can also take over with small things.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No I cetazine feel materials removed There many reason I feel way I hope people read agree THere three main points supporting opinion plan list First fact suposed land free home brave least thats national anthem tells So one removes book movie library becasue find offencive trying take away one right cetacine The right messing right freedom I free able walk library grab book wish I free go movie store find rent movie choose shelf If put movie book away make ca nt get messing freedom somthing ca nt stand I free read watch ever choose Which brings next point This point simple logical one My second point people choice read watch movie Just meen read watch If someone nt like book good nt read If someone nt like movie good nt watch It rather quit simple opinion someone nt like said book movie leave alone nt mess They nt right ruin everone else Just one two even twenty people find book offencive nt mean right remove There five million people love said book ruin everyone make people happy They right say read watch movie nt right say ca nt Finaly people say said book movie removed child might get apropreat children Well I say parents job make sure child readind watching something nt If child gets hold book said bad parents job tell put back People nt right completly remove said book movie kid might get So opinion little matter I nt feel libraries censored I feel right make decisions right read watch ever choose It fair get ride book people nt like Hundreds othes might love like I said someone nt like certain movie book nt read watch Do nt ruin everyone else though", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The story unmasking the face is telling us how they should believe that this face was made by so maney aliens but it was a scientist . As the story goes on the story say this face was made in1976 to 2001 .I think this story is trying to tell us that this story is real because of how it's sounding .I think that this story is really make believe because they said this was made by aliens . April 5,198 when mars global surveyor flew over cydonia for the first time , michael malin and his orbiter camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than original viking photos . Thousands of anxious web sufers were waitimg when the image first appeared on a JPL web sitr , revealing .... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all .\n\nbut not everyone was satisfied . The face on mars is located at 41 degrees north martain latitude where it was winter in april '98----- a cloudy tie of year on the red plantes . The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face . Perhaps ,said skeptics aliens markings were hidden by haze .. What the picture actually shows is the martian equivalent of a butte or mesa ---landforms common arounf the american west .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supported well his idea.Starting by saying that \"Venus is sometimes right around the corner in space, humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud\".\n\n\"Each previous mission was unmanned and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours\".\n\n\"Not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades\".Venus is a challenging planet for humans to study because a thick atmosphere is almost 97 percent of carbon diocde.\n\nAnother reason it is challenging is because of the clouds are sulfuric acid in Venus atmosphere.However it's even more challenging in the text it says, thefahrenheit and atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then out planet, the conditions are far more worse then our planet Earth.\n\nAnother reason Venus is dangers to study is because Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, Venus erupting has volcanoes,powerful earthquakes and lighting strikes.Another reason Venus is dangers to study because it has a surface of rocky.\n\nThats why I say that studying Venus is dangers because you do not know what is in there or what would happen when you land there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The world full offensive material almost nothing These books leave behind influence future society These materials removed shelves libraries part large varity knowledge library last place someone look material On logical side person knows power one That nt mean items centain types music movies inapropate age Some partents get really offensive see something slightly inapropate thing remember called little children sooner later see items part growing In last paragraph suggested person large mass imformation choose becasue perfect little soul everyone amounts cruiosity For example somethings like taught school could consided dangerous In learn ways atoms make make perdictions react chemicals When lab students required wear safety material dangerous enviroment The goes one learns live healthy life requires students learn human body reproductive systems In learn better world works around us learn things dangerous With everything postive negative outcomes What I suggesting need find healthy balance really needed materials strickly entertainment items removed If purpose behind holds place magazine talking drama apears useless In large world alway always people material bad influnce Yet matter perception everyone different torances values With going problem shall make judgment best ablities based values", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays people are more respected for the things they have than for who they really are and in my point of view this is a bad example for young people. Nobody is born thinking that material goods are better than values, that is taught. A child loves his parents for whom they represent in his life, and not for the material goods they have.Children will be raised seeing this example and nobody will blame adults for at times unconsciously transferring these values in the future because they will be reaping what they are planting today.\n\n\n\nFirst of all we can look at celebrities, they are more appreciated and respected for their glamor and wealth than for their achievements, and this is extremely sad. They must always be perfect and they can never make mistakes or their fans and the media will crucify them. People today are less valuable than material things. Their values are measured by the things they have, by their money and purchasing power.\n\n\n\nTo conclude, I believe that things can be changed if people try. Parents can teach children values from an early age, schools already do this all the time. If human beings changed their mentality, they changed their way of seeing the world and their way of seeing each other. If society reduced the pressure on famous people in search of perfection that doesn't really exist, the world could be better in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One small step for man, one giant leap for man-kind. Those were the words spoken by Neil Armstrong seconds before he took a giant leap on the moon.\n\nThis is a memorable event in American history because it was the first American to ever set foot on the moon.\n\nBefore Neil made it to the moon, no one thought that it would ever be possible to make it that far.\n\nNow we are planning to explore Venus. The author states that he wants to explore Venus no matter what the percautions are. There are always good and bad effects of each action and the exploration of Venus has a lot of them.\n\nFirst of all, the author states that Venus is the closest planet to the earth when Mars is not; it depends on their orbits around the sun. With Venus a close distance to the earth, it would be easier to explore than any other planet in the galaxy.\n\nThis planet has the most Earth-like features in the Milky Way which makes it attract scientists. There are so many valuable reasons why the exploration of this planet is a good idea.\n\nOn the contrary, the most difficult part of the mission is Venus' atmosphere.\n\nCarbon dioxide takes up 97 percent of the atmoshere; also the clouds have highly corrosive sulfuric acid clouds.\n\nIf that does not damage a spacecraft, the pressure that is 90 times greater than Earth will. The temperatures there way over exceed the temperatures on Earth; the temperature there averages over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. NASA has been working on spacecraft to make it there and they are making progress.\n\nHumans have already sent numerous spacecraft to land on Venus already; however, none of the spacecraft made it on the planet long enough for any human to survive there.\n\nThe author constructed his information very well.\n\nThe author explained why NASA wants to explore Venus.\n\nFacts were provided to let the reader know that this article is not just opionated but also factual.\n\nI really liked how the author explained why Venus will be a hard mission to achieve, it shows that NASA knows their weaknesses and therefore will be able to fix them.\n\nNASA has many backup plans in case one of them fail.\n\nIn conclusion, this was a well written article.\n\nThe author knew what he was talking about which persuaded me to think that studying Venus would benefit science.\n\nI also applied my background knowledge of the moon landing while reading this article; I knew that it once seemed impossible to land on the moon but we achieved it, now we are planning to land on Venus and hopefully will achieve that too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I\"m sure you have heard about diverless cars but do you know how it works? A lot of people think that driverless cars will just drive by themselves, and that's not wrong but they need a driver. Most people don't know that they are not completely driverless. They can be safe in some kind of ways and they also can be dangerous too, but the question is would you like one of those even though you find it dangerous and not safe?\n\nI personally don't think the driverless cars are be safe because they are not completely driverless and plus they are just technology that require your skills when it needed and you might not know when. The reason why I don't like them is that I won't be as\n\ncareful as I am when I drive a normal car. if I am in a driverless car, all I will think about is that this is a driverless car and I don't have to do anything. I might just fall in asleep in the car not knowing what's going on and it could cause a lot of accidents if they passangers or a driver was in a situation like that. In the passage it says \" None of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelerat, and brake themselves. but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills. such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires\". A lot of human drivers won't be able to take over when it needed to, because they will be so calm,relax, and not ready that when it requires human skills they won't know what to do.\n\nI understand that we all have different opinions but in my opinion I don't think driverless cars are safe. The driverless cars still require human driver skills so it still kind of like normal cars. Why drive a driverless car when it still requires your drving skills. Why not just drive a normal car? What if you are drving a driverless care and got in to an accidents, whose fault going to be? Your fault or the company? For me I would prefer a normal car than a driverless car, just because I think they are not safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no denying technology is ubiquitous, omnipresent and touches pretty much every aspect of our life. The original intention of technology is to make our life more comfortable and easier. However, advance technology brings forth negative effects, and the most obvious and detrimental impact are environment and relationship degradation. I can’t find any option other than to argue that the benefits will outweigh the negatives if we omit technology from our daily routine.\n\nTo begin with, technologically advanced urban arearesponsible for more than 90 % of global greenhouse gas emissions and transportation contribute for a large portion of that. This makes the planet’s overall temperature rise, and causes extreme weather events like drought to happen more often. More often than not, whenever the earth gets damaged, the deleterious effects are always irreversible.\n\nSubsequently, with the rise of the internet and social media, we spend too much time isolating ourselves and disconnecting from the real world in order to maintain the perception of being connected. Studies show that people would rather spend hours on social media websites than to join clubs and organisation to make real friends. Technology was supposed to connect us, but we’re more disconnected than ever. \n\nLast of course not least, technology like Artificial Intelligence (AI) has reduced humans need to undertake mundane or laborious, yet machines do not have any emotions or moral values as human does. There is a real danger of AI increases unemployment if machines can do a job more efficient and at less cost. Experts predicted that around 5 millions jobs will be lost to AI over next five years.\n\nBased on the evidence and examples I have presented, I am strongly inclined to conclude that technology brings more harm than good.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The schools should use the computer to read students emotions for a number of reasons. Like to see how they feel, sandess or anger. Or maybe even depresssion. With the computer teachers could see if the student is in depression and could try and help the student, in some way. They could even see why the student is so miserable and has these feelings.\n\nThey could even make sure each student is happy and go lucky instead of dark and just a tad down. If they could tell a student is sad, they could let them go into the hall to calm down and relax back to a good happy little stage. Then if the student is tired and they detect it they could easily make sure to keep the dstudent awake during lessons so they don't miss out and fail. If teachers could stop kids or teens from have horrbile emotions they could proably stop all the suicides and dark thoughts students have.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the making of mona lisa they had cpmputers tthey was using to create it. They haad a emotion calculater to caculate the emotions. Mona lisa was 83 percent happy, 9percent disgusted, 6 percent fearmful and 2 percent angry. The ideaof the emotion coculater was made by drpaul eckman. Dr. Paul decided to name the idea FACS which stanmds for facial actions coding system.\n\nIt al began constructsa 3-D computer model of the face, all the forty-four must work like human muscles. Dr. Paul had classified six basic groups emotions happieness,suprise,anger,digust fear and sadness. in my opinion i think that this is a great invention.\n\nHuman preform the same impressions every day trough emotions. We tell our friends jow we feel or by the expression on our faces they can tell how we feel. sometimes its hard to understand or figure out how people feel. some hide there emotions better than otheres than there are more who show it eaiser.\n\nThe Mona lisa is a demontration is really intended to bring a smile to peoples faces, it also shows how muvh a computer can do. Some ad will make you happy then their are some that will make you frown. I honesthly think that tis is a really amazing idea and think that alot or people would enjoy it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "electoral college is a process not a place. the Electoral college work on the selection of the electors where they vote for president and vice president couting each voter by congress. large populations in states lose by virtue in the mal-apportionment in Senate decreed in the Constitution. popular votes were mostly in florida but in the year 2012 when obama was just beginning to be president, he got 29 eectoral votes it was a success in the same margin in wyoming would net the winner only 3 electoral votes. other things being the same alot of large states get more attention from the presidential candidates in a campaign than some small states do. the electoral college is supossed to be a procces for the electors to vote for president and vice president and every 4 years theres gonna be someone new thats facing the president to be voted for the new president of the united states but when the electors come and vote if the president will still stay the president then he,ll become it for another 4 years but if the guy facing his way to be our new president mr. obama will have to stay as vice president. in columbia the district is allocated 3 electors and something like a state for purposes because of the electoral college. the reason in the following discussion the word \"state\" is also refered as the district of columbia. each person who is running for president your state has his or her own group of electors they are generally chosen to the candidates political party but the state laws vary on how there electors get selected on what there", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports people to study Venus is because Venus is a very intersting planet, and we can larn many great things from learning it.\n\nVenus is the closet planet to Earth when it comes to the density and size, according to paragraph 2. And paragraph 2 also mentioned\n\n\"Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\"\n\nThe dangerous things that happended the Venus is that the atmospheric pressure is way greater than Earth. The tempetrature on Venus is incredibly hot, it's known as the hottest planet in the solar system.\n\nHumans should also understand that Venus is very similar to earth, the 4th paragraph said that \" If our sister planet is so inhospitable\" by that quote it explains how Venus is earth's twin. Back in the days Venus was covered with large portions of oceans. Now the planet still has some very alike features to earth, such as valleys,moutains and craters. Those are features Earth has, in other words our planet. according to paragrph 4.\n\nVenus is a very intersting planet to learn about, because it explains the differences and similiarites to Earth. A lot of people probably don't know much about the planet. Venus is the closet planet people can visit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The natural environment is harmed as a result of increased consumer goods manufacturing. The main reason for this is that the products which involve chemical materials are harmful to the environment and a viable solution is to make strict laws to protect the environment. \n\nFirst of all, one of the first problems of that the number of people consuming increases year after year, and some of them consume more than they need. In the other words, when people consume more products, they become product more goods. In addition, all manufacturers want to meet the demands of their consumers. As more goods are produced, toxic wastes are released from factories into nature. For example, more single-use products are introduced, most of which are non-biodegradable. These products can remain as waste for thousands of years, turning our planet into a huge landfill.\n\nA solution that is some measures should be taken by the government. Manufacturers also should be encouraged to use eco-friendlier materials. For example, the WWF which is a famous brand in Turkey has recently replaced nylon and polyester clothes with reusable alternatives made of materials like cotton or wool. Thus, the clothes which are produced by WWF can be recycled. \n\nTo conclude, the major problem of damage to the natural environment caused by the excessive consumption of products can be partly alleviated by making laws. Furthermore, it is predictable that the number of factories which use eco-friendly materials will increase over time. . . . . . . . . . .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the modern era, the business which manufactures durable goods in huge quantities is mainly the reason for harming the natural habitat. However, the usage of wastage is not properly recycled by these organizations which can lead to contamination in the atmosphere. Therefore, some authorities and company workers should take the necessary steps to get rid of this problem. \n\nTo begin with, production is more concerned about the profit margin by producing more goods regardless of thinking about the environment. Moreover, companies used to put waste in the water and also prefer to open their industries in the city which can lead to harm to the life of people, animals and birds. For instance, in hospitals, most people are admitted due to heart issues, lung infections, breathing problems and cancer which can lead to air pollution. Furthermore, industries can lead of releases toxic gases as a result the climate change and catastrophic natural disaster occurs such as earthquakes and floods. For Instance, people used to open small industries in their homes in India which can also be the main reason for the recent flood and consequently, they lost everything in this terrible disaster. \n\nDespite the fact that the government should enact rules and regulations for those industries and individuals who are involved to create pollution in the environment and after that penalties should be imposed on those organizations who break the laws. Apart from that, firms should use alternative technology to reduce the contamination in the air such as most European companies use solar energy in their production operations under the supervision of the European Environment Agency. In this way, Industries can play a positive impact in the development and protection of society. \n\nIn conclusion, the amount of consumer goods is increasing due to the increase in the population so individuals and organizations should take care of the nation by recycling waste as well as using modern techniques which bring a positive effect on the surroundings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is considered that an enormous amount of jobs are going to be taken over by artificial intelligence robots. Although a huge number of jobs will be replaced by bots, there are certain jobs where these will accelerate productivity. This essay discusses the rise in performance at the workplace.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand side, most jobs are at risk because of artificial intelligence. All those jobs where processes are predefined and monotonous in nature are already replaced by bots while others are going to be in the near future. For instance, cashier and accountant roles are already eradicated by auto teller machines and sophisticated software solutions. Moreover, they provide instant services 24 hours a day and seven days a week without any break and extra cost in terms of services. Hence, machines are rapidly capturing the workplace.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand side, humans became more productive after the emergence of cutting-edge generative artificial intelligence technology. Since it provides rapid responses to problems, task execution is much more effective now. To illustrate, gathering ideas for the brainstorming and logic building is no more a hassle. Code can be written and troubleshooted in a short time period. Prototypes would be prepared and evolved effectively. Thus, machines are enhancing the abilities of employees and providing them ease in performing there tasks at the earliest.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, definitely, most jobs will be performed by robots. Obviously not only there will be a huge cut in the workforce, but there will be much improvement in terms of the performance of the personnel. Infact, with the convinience of bots effective productivity is inevitable which could not possible otherwise.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you remember the feeling you got when you recieved your license? It felt like you had another freedom, right? I don't know about you, but i want my kids and my kid's kids to feel that feeling. I'm against the idea of driverless cars. I believe the negatives outway the positive in this case.\n\nPeople today are getting more and more educated about driving. There's classes, videos, or even books on driving. Most kids take a Driver's Education class in high school now. Cost a lot of money, but it educates us more in depth about driving. With this further education there is less accidents, more understanding, and smarter drivers on the road. With driverless cars, that would take away some of that much needed education.\n\nOne thing most people in todays society do not like is, being out of control of things. Driverless cars means your out of control most of the time. That car is in more control than that driver is. That is a problem just waiting to happen. With more education, I think we deserve that control.\n\nSome might say that driveless cars will cause less accidents, save the world on fossil fuels, or save money in general for people. As I stated in my second paragraph, people are more educated drivers now. Less and less accidents are already happening. It would save the world on fossil fuels a little bit. You have to remember that some countries maybe couldn't afford these driverless cars. These types of cars are surely not going to be cheap. It might save the people money, but someone has to pay for them.\n\nI am not for the idea of driverless vehicles. The people are more educated then ever, and with that education we deserve control. The people need to be able to drive, that is why we took classes or courses of some sort to get our license.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article the author talks about the ups and downs of getting to know venus as a planet and having human life live their.\n\nNow, even though their are good parts about exploring venus there are many bad and dangerous parts about venus. Like for example, in the begining of the article the author talks about how, every mission was unmanned because, they couldn't even surive on the planet for no longer than a few hours. Also , they even talk about how Venus has a thick atmosphere of nearly 97 percent carbon dixide and thatn just blankets venus.This tells us that we have a less chances of even surving on venus. Venus weather is also horrible their teamputer averge is over 800 degrees, they have things like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes , and frquent lighting strikes. I know that these are things that happen on earth nearly everyday or every now and then but, with all that plus the heat ; we might not even be able to surive on there. The author does talks about how we and ahve a ship orbiting or hovering over the planet safely but, researchers wouldn't be able to take\n\nsamples of rocks,gas, or anything. So,what would be the point of even going down there if we can't even really explore it.\n\nThe postive things about venus, is one: Venus is already one of our\n\nsister planet and is referred to as Earth's \"Twin.\" It is the closest in distance, size ,destiney, and it even the most Eart-like planet in our solar system. So, we do have many things alike that well help [people feel better about even getting to explore venus. Another, thing is that in the article the author states that \"we havent touched Venus in more than.\" Meaning that we don't know what down there things could have changed drasctically we would never know. The authour also includes, how the planet has a rocky surface of sediment and has many features such as valleys, mountains and craters; plus Venus was proplaby even cover in largely oceans that could have supported many forms of life.The author use these facts to show us what we can benfit form exploring venus.They evne put in how NASA is compeling the idea of sending researchers down to study Venus. The last thing the aouthor states is how we should'nt keep our limits small just becuase were afraid of the dangers that migh happen but we should expand them and think of them as challenges too.\n\nSo,include Venus can be a worthy of studying and exploring. Just with a little more reseacher and better technogly; the authour shows us that we might actually have a chance of living on venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article talks about Google making a car to be completly driverless. Driverless cars were just a thing in the T.V. shows. Now it's somewhat real. Driverless cars needs to be uesed everywhere, they're safer and more convient.\n\nFirst, diverless cars are a lot more convient than cars that aren't. The text states that the cars, \"would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than the bus.\" Insted of riding the bus and going all over town for a person to go somewhere, they can just go right to the place without the troble.\n\nSecond, driveless cars are a lot safer. The text states that, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" No crashes for \"half a million miles\" is really good for a driverless car.\n\nDriverless cars are safer and more convient to people. Google will be working hard to let these to be able to sell. Untill than people will just have to be really careful on their diving.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No! The natural landform was not made by any kind of alien in Mars. It is just a landform that appended to look like a human face. And if im saying if it was made by aliens there is nothing that proves it to be made by aliens. Heck there isnt any at proves or gives an idea that aliens actually exist. But there is a lot of evidence that proves that the face was made naturally and is just a landform that happened to look like one. A few of them are we sent \"Mars Global Suveyor\" and it showed no sign of alien monument, there was a good picture taken of the area of the landform, and lastly if there was any signs of aliens or their artifacts we would want to know and explore it like you would. i will list and prove in the following paragraphs why it is just a landform.\n\nFirst, when we sent the\n\n\" Mars Global Surveyor\" it arrived in eghteen years in September 1997. When the Surveyor was flyiing over Mars it found the face and as soon at it was clear we took pictures of it. On April 1998 the Surveyor flew over and took a nice shot at the face. This shot was ten times better the the first shot taken.\n\nsecont, Thanks to the picture taken by the surveyor we could now look for small details by the face. For each pixel in the 2001 the image spans \"1.56 meters that compared to 43 meters per pixel.\" in the picture you can look three times closer thanks to pixels. That means that if take a picture like that you should be ablie to see big objects for example airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small homes or shacks.\n\nYou might say that we NASA are trying to keep things secret from all of you in the publice and that we just want to keep the discovery of aliens to our selfs. But the truth is we don't we want you to know everything we know and we want to find any sign of alien life like artifacts and shacks and technology, but the fact is that the face in Mars has no prove theres nothing by the face that proves that any type of life built it. there was no left over material or any tools left the simple fact is that the face was made naturally and it is a landform like the ones we have on earth. Just this landform happened to look like us like a human.\n\nIn conlusion the face on\n\nMars will and should be considered a landfom. If it was made by aliens we would have found out thanks to all these studys but all of the studys we have made have proven there to be no life on the planet Mars. But I want to challenge you to conduct you own studys think of new ways and send them to us if this is what it takes to prove that there are or arent aliens on the planet Mars then lets work together and prove one or the other about the Face that could be a land form or could be a artifact.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author gives many reasons why we should study venus despite the dangers it present. He give also a lot of information for why the planet does not have a good environment. He also list so of th dangers that are there for people and how it could effect them if they traveled to this planet. Like how 97% of the planets atomsphere in carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid.\n\nOne reason that the author gives NASA has a possible solution to the hostile conditions. The author says \" Imagine a blimp-like vehical hovering 30 or some miles above the roiling Venusian landscape\". Like the Jet airplanes today it would travel at high altitude to fly over the dangerous air conditions. But every 30 mile above the temperatureis still a toasty 170 degrees Fahrenheit.\n\nAnother reason that the author gives is NASA is working on other way to study Venus. The author says \"Some simlified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions\". Would the machine give workers the time they needed to study the thing the need.\n\nThe last reason that the author gives looking back on old technology called mechanical computers. The authors says \" these devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War 2\". The thought was computers existing in those days may sound shocking, But these devices make calculations by using gears abd levels. Modern computers are powerful quick and flexible but are delicate.\n\nThe idea of traveling to Venus is a very real thing that could be achevied. Though had work and smart thinking what the author has share give us ideas of what the planet is like and the surface and in the air. The the space ship and vehical and devices that will take us there and help us learn.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought why we cant live on a different planet? Why we cant be closer to the sun. Why cant we live on Venus?Studying Venus is worth the pursuit and dangers it presents becasuse the planet has many different things then what earth has, it has a good back story, and it the temperature on the planet is crazy hot.\n\nVenus surface temperature averages about 800 degrees Fahrenheit,and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then here on earth. This conditions are far more extreme then what we have to face here on earth. The pressure could crush a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of the oceans and would liquify and metals it comes across. Venus serface temperature is the hottest temperature in our solar system.\n\nVenus was once almost like how earth is now. Venus was covered largely with oceans, and could have supported various forms of life just like earth toaday. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. If we cannot live on Earh anymore Venus could be are closest option.\n\nNASA wants to send people to Venus to get some research and wants to collect data so we can understand Venus a little bit better then we do right now. They want them to fly about 30miles above Venus so they dont melt because of the heat. Even up there the temperature still would be about 170 degrees, although it wont be good people can still tolerate that type of heat. The air pressure would be close of that to Earths air pressure.\n\nEarth might be the place we live but there are other planets that we have just in case Venus is a good place to look at from Earth. Knowing about it and what it is capable of is even better. If you look up into the sky it is the bright star you see. Studying Venus is worth the pursuit and dangers it presents becasuse the planet has many different things then what earth has, it has a good back story, and it the temperature on the planet is crazy hot.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Regarding education, gender equity is crucial. Some people argue that universities should enrol an equal number of men and women in every field. Personally, I totally agree with that statement because I believe it is fairer and it is better for the society.\nThe main reason male and female students should be equal in number is that it would be more equitable. In fact, numerous studies have stated that their brains are not working the same way. In other words, their cognitive capacities are different, so they should not compete with each other for university admissions. It does not mean that a gender is more intelligent than the other. For example, men are generally known to have a better spacial orientation, while women's ability to memorize is superior. Similarly, their physical capacities are not the same either, and that is why men and women do not compete against each other in sports competitions.\nAnother reason to separate sexes regarding university admissions is because it ensure a better distribution of gender among the labor market. Broadly speaking, it is well known that males work, in their life, more hours that females. This is principally due to the fact that women take more maternity leave than men. Unfortunately, it can consequently create a problem in the society.For example, nowadays, women represent the majority of students in medicine as they have better grades in high school. As a result, there is not enough working staff in hospitals when they quit to take care of their families. The same situation applies to every field with a majority of women such as jobs in health services.\nIn conclusion, I reiterate that there should be an equal number of male and female students enrolled in universities because it would be more equitable and ensure a better repartition of genders among different fields of employment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has been believed that strict rules and regualtions of the nation to follow healthy diets can be a better way to upgrade the health status of people. Whilst, many other people think that it should be base on an individual interest rather than governement. This essay firstly takes a look at the both sides of argument and reach a reasonable conclusion.\nTo begin with, processes of preparation of food items can be controlled by proper investigation of government workers. Availability of a healthy food in different restaurants can improve individual health status via several ways. Moreover, governmental agencies working for conservation of right and welfare of public should regulary scrutinize the market condition of food, also, proper system of punishment according to policy should be followed. For instance, many organization such as food and diet monitoring agency need to assess the food sectors.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe driverless cars are a good start for a more modern future. Although I don't believe they are such a great idea for us. It could be great to have a car that drives you around but will you really enjoy the fact of not being able to drive anymore? Teenager dream of the day they get their permit just do they are aloud to begin to learn how to drive. That way they don't have to depend on others for rides to school, work, or other activities. I know this because I am a teenager myself and I dream of the day that I will be able to get my drivers license and be able to drive my friends to the movies or to the mall. So what about drivers license will those not be required to be in a driverless car or will you need a special permit to be able to own a driverless car?\n\nIn the case of an accident and someone is injured who will be at fault the driver or the manufacturer? I do believe this will cause alot of conflict between the manufacturer and the individual because if an accident occurs how will anyone know what cause the accident. This could become a million dollar problem. Plus you can never really trust a piece of machinery because sometimes something just goes wrong and taking the fault for something that you did do could become very annoying and frustrating. Its like getting in trouble for something that your sibling did and your sibling is just standing by laughing at you because you got in trouble and they didn't.\n\nI believe that having driveless cars become a new thing in our world is a bad Idea not only are the expensive but the roads will have to be smart to. Updating all the road in the world that is also very expensive. Although it is expected in 2020 to have a completely driverless car, alot of traffic laws will have to change but what about the people who don't have a driverless car will the same rules be applied to them? I personally don't see myself in a driverless car unless my best friend is a rich millionaire. May be instead of driverless cars we can have self conducted trains, subways, buses, or other forms of transportation. Why don't we make our bikes and motorcycles driverless too. What fun will we have when everything is done for us. At first it all these things could be fun to have but later we could feel completly useless.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article I was given is \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\". This article is about how venus is proved to be challenging. Evidence from the article says that you cant take the tocks from venus. That must be challenging if you are trying to explore and know more about Venus.\n\nThere Is a new machine in the making. The purpose of the machine is to last long enough to make enough contribute meaninfullt to the knowledge of the scientist. Things that are needed to be tested are things such as the rocks, maybe anything living in venus and the surface of venus. This could all be a help to scientist to know more about venus than what they already know. This is all a challenge.\n\nThis could be dangerous because what if you dont have enough gas to survive in venus if scientist went there like they do in space with the space helmets. There can be many what if's of trying to figure facts out about Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars could be great for people in the future, but it will definetly take a while. Having a driverless car has positive and negative aspects, but do you want to take the risk\n\nOwning a driverless car could be extremly helpful. Driverless cars will still require a driver who is paying attention to the road at all times. These cars could helpful, of course you would still have to pay attention to the road but you could relax more and not be as stressed out as you would when you are driving. There are negatives to owning a driverless car such as you, a driver or passanger, may not be safe. Technology can always have a fault, what if one of these cars drove you into the other lane causing you to hit a car or you run off into a ditch. What happens when to cars hit eachother, who is at fault. The driver is at fault of course, the drivers need to be in control of the cars. I don't think that the driverless car is the greatest idea because of all the accidents that could occur because maybe the driver falls asleep and the car makes a mistake, what do you do then. I think we should just keep our cars the way they are, I would feel more safe on the road with the car's control in my hands.\n\nWhen I saw the title of this story I thought driverless cars would be amazing but as I continued to read through it, I noticed how bad these cars could be for all of the people. These cars could mess up and get you killed or hurt because you aren't paying attention and you aren't being in full control. I feel like more underage kids would think it would be okay to driver these cars because they don't take as much effort and aren't as difficult to learn about. I also think that some parents would let them too because they think it would be easier, but they are wrong. Driving one of these cars is just as dangerous as driving any other car in the world. It could be dangerous if you make it dangerous.\n\nIn my opinion they should not invest in producing driverless cars, what they should do is invest in making cars run off of things like water, air, or from solar energy. That would be much more effective for earth, it would stop global warming becasue it is reducing all of the fumes that are released into the air. These cars will make people more lazy than they already are. We want to help everyone live, not just make the rich people in the world lazy. I understand that these cars take a lot of technology and they could help some people get places easier but technology could have faults, they could have messed up the coordinates for a place and it take you off into the middle of no where. This is just how I see the whole driverless car situation and I think we should put a stop to it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face can speak more than words. Most communication is nonverbal, its emtional communication. Although we can fake a smile or fake an emotion some people might not catch on, well with new technology computers can now read our emotions. Dr. Huang, has come up with new software allowing computers to read and understand a person's facial expresions. This software allows a new connection to be made with humans and computers; and help each other communicate better. This new technology is a great idea for making our future with technology more enjoyable.\n\nWith technology on the uprise in todays age, it is becoming more of a neccessity in our everyday lives. Most schools teach with electronics, many jobs rely on technology, and the average person spends half their day on their phone. This software can make our experiences more enjoyable on electronics, for example \"if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\". This makes the time spent on computers more enjoyable as we will see more things we like. Not only is it a good idea for consumers, its also a great way for bussinesses to advertise.\n\nIn schools it can be hard for kids to enjoy lessons or subjects if they don't undertsand them. If we have computers that could detect the students emotion, then that would better the students learning experience. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" , understanding the students emotions could help their education. As this computer could read if a student is confused or bored, it can just as esaily make the lesson understanable or interactive. With this type of technology it could change the way education is handled all together.\n\nToday's mainstream media is all about faking it until you make it, but with this new technology it won't be as easy to get away with. This software can tell a real smile from a fake smile, it's all about the muscle movements. If it can tell a fake from a real emotion then the media will really crack down on today's mainstream stars and politicians. \"To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebirty isn't being truthful.\", this could be a turning point for the media.\n\nWith technology becoming more interactive we are going to find new ways to make our everyday life a little easier. Spotting real and fake emotions can be really difficult these days as we have actors and actresses everywhere. It can also be difficult in learning environments, and even our everyday life. This technology can really help us start to understand each other more and make a more personal connection with technology. This great idea can sprout many more technological advances, who knows what else is instore?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I tend always get awkward situations people love s life right When kid tend dramatic every little thing love trying teach something lead right way Or maybe haha I moved dads horrible bang I wanted live life way pushing people needed away I realized little late But s life right Just finally rekindled flame dad It hardest thing considering step mom hates s obviously never going change So s something ll deal My dad still awkward relationship till months ago gone fishing trip together Standing casting away nothing said We consider ourselfves fairily humorous people even jokes wer nt breaking ice We finally started making conversation started tell kid going visiting mom first time coming back grandmas calling bad word wont say one My dad hasnt every really cursed around guess s time away It pretty funny stories telling way explaing That brought pretty happy laughter us really brought us back together", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technology used to scan expressions that was invented by Dr. Huang could help students' learn from and enjoy class work or lectures via computer. This program can read the facial muscles in a 3D model and calcuate the expression the person in the photo is making. This could help out our offspring on a later date learn and understand somewhat confusing lessons. The computer is programed to scan for the six basic emotions: happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Then, it Caucuates in percentage on how mixed the emotion is.\n\nThis technologly can be used to read students' emotions and adjust their leaning plans like an instructor. Dr. Huang notes that most human communication is nonverbal includiing emotional communication. And by having computers understand human body language of the user. Computers can then understand and help the needs of the human that is using the computer. By today's standards most people have a hard time understanding other human emotions.\n\nThe main idea of the information provided is that today's technology is improving and will contunie improving to help us along the line. And if we inprove our comunity through technology then technology will improve with the help of the new comunity. The new software Facial Action Coding System (FACS) has promising applications for a variety of industeries. With the ability to read human facial expressions we could make this world a more sufficent place. Yes this technology could help improve the learning area for students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you know what the Electoral College is? It's a process that the founding fathers established in the Constitution as a compromise between election of President by a vote in Congress and election of President by popular vote of qualified citizens. I think that we should change the way we vote by changing to election by popular vote for the President of the United States. I feel that this is a good idea and a good way to vote, let me tell you why. It's a good idea because it benefits the public, everyone knows exactly what kind of impact they're making and so it doesn't mess up the votes and or voting. Let's continue, shall we?\n\nIt's a good idea because it benefits to the public. The public wants to know exactly who and what they are voting for, they want to know exactly what their vote means to the election. More than half of the time they don't notice what kind of an impact a vote can make or what exactly they are voting for. Also when they do elect a President, the end up getting mad over their finances or taxes because the President trhat they voted for affected it in a negative way. They wanted to elect him because they wanted a better economy, to benefit them, not to restrict them from not having what they want. This is only my first reason, I have two more to go.\n\nAnother reason of why I believe that it's a good idea is because it let's the public know what kind of impact they're exactly making on the election. We all don't want to vote and not know what kind of impact our vote can make. We want to know that we can make a difference on who we're voting for, or who we vote for. They want to know and be sure if they vote for lets say \"Billy Henderson\" that he will lower gas prices and boost the economy, make this world a better place and help all the needy, instead of \"Robert Metinguey\" who will maybe to this and maybe do that. We want to know for sure what we're voting on and how much of a difference it can make. Not to be worried about if it won't happen.\n\nThe last reason I have to give for why this a good idea is so that it does not mess up the voting process. According to the Gallup pole in the 2,000, taken shortly after Al Gore, thanks to the quirks of the electoral college, won the popluar vote but lost the presidency. Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. This is what im talking about people. People are losing their elections due to the electoral college. One of the major reasons of why people are wanting a change, there should be no electoral college, only a popular vote for the election. We all want a better Government. I only there was a better way to vote.\n\nWell, there you have it. My reasons are final. I feel that we should change the voting process because it would benefit the public, so everyone can know exactly what kind of impact they're making and so it does not mess up the voting process. Don't do it for the government. Do it for your own sake. If you wanna make a difference, be on my side, and we can. Together. Now my only question to you is, are you willing to make a difference?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Seagoing Cowboys helped many people, and got to see some pretty cool things along the way. They got to experience things that most people could only dream of. I'm Luke Bomberger, and I was just one of the many Seagoing Cowboys helping other countries get back on their feet again.\n\nWe helped so many people affected by the war. We took animals, food supply, and more to people whose countries were left in ruins from bombings, and other attacks of World War 2. So many people, that would have otherwise not have been able to do very well, got animals, food to feed their animals, and food for themselves. Helping them helped me to be more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy wasn't all that serious though. We would play around on board, usually after all the animals had been unloaded, and we were heading back. We would have baseball and volleyball games in the empty stalls where the animals had been kept. Table-tennis, fencing, and boxing were other sports we found a way to play. There were also things like reading, whittling, and games we used to help pass the time.\n\nAlong with our jobs, sightseeing was something we did everyday. I got a side benifit of seeing Europe and China. In Greece, I got to do something I think is pretty special. See the Acropolis. In Venice, Italy, I got to take a gondola ride on one of the many streets of water. I also got to tour an excavated castle in Crete, and saw the Panama Canal on the way to China.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy helped open up the world to me. Instead of being drafted into the military, I got to help people in need all over the world. When my friend invited me to go to Europe on a cattle boat, I knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime, and it really did turn out to be one!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People for centries have wandered about whats out there in space. Venus is one of the planets in our solor system. NASA has tried to study Venus with no pervail. though many may argue, we should find a better way to study Venus like:\n\nusing older technology that last longer, blimp-like vehicle, and silicon carbide.\n\nIn the 1800's we had a thing called the mechanical computers. The author writes,\" these devices make calculations by using gears and levers...mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces\". This down grade in technology may be the up grade astronauts have been looking for. These computers last longer ,and they will help with the travels to Venus.\n\nIf astronauts cannot reach the ground of venus why not float above the ground. The author writes,\" a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions\". This type of vehicles will be a lot safer for astronauts to use. They will avoid the dangers of the ground of Venus ,and\n\nit will be close enough to study and collect data from the planet.\n\nNASA has been making these strong eletronics made of silicon carbide. The author writes,\" silicon carbide have been tested... lasted three weeks\". This shows that this could help with ground rovers ,or other electronics that can collect data closer to the dangerous planets enviroment. Though they do not last for long ,they will be good enough to get the data astronauts need.\n\nThese methods could one day help us learn more about one of are closest neigbours in are solor system. Older technology, blimp-like vechicles, and silicon carbide have been just some of the things that could help us. Though many may argue, these will overall further us into are future of space exploration.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion the use of using technology to detect exactly how other people feel is a technology that can be very useful. Especially when it covers one of the most important parts of identifying how someone may really feel and not just what they may be able to let out. The article even states this software that can be used from a computure that percisely can add up percentages of the different ways your mood may be at the time. The percentages can go from how happy, suprised, angry, ddisgusted, fearful, or sad you may be. All this comes from a computer that thats puts together a 3-D model of the face and can develop action unit which the article states means the movement of one or more muscles.\n\nNot only from what the article says and covers all the pros of why this idea would be useful, i belive this idea would maybe make this world a bettter place. with one accpetion not just anyone can i dentify your expression only ones whom you may feel confortble with letting out to. More ways this can be helpful is because when people hold things in it may cause them to hurt also the people aroung them close ones and now they wouldnt have to worry anymore.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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