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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke didn't know what was gonna happen after he graduates from highschool. He had two part time jobs a grocery store and a bank. Then his friend Don invited him to go on a cattle boat.\n\nHe accepted the invatation to go on the cattle boat. A reason to go on the cattle boat was it was a once in a life time experiance. The majority of people never get to ride a boat. Also had amsazing viws on the way.\n\nThe ride had views that most peope never even see. To be invited for a ride is even more rare to happen. They are also having a ride and also tske care of animalson the way. The animals were being taken to differnt areas. They are bringing animals because of World of War II.\n\nIn conclusion it was a great ride and a long ride it was for a good cause. Then they have arrived and delivered the animals. Maybe next time you could help out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Fresh graduate could be worker with not salary where they were first time a work.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the system regulation have different every country so that the government needs control to avoid problem working for teenagers. In addition, many students are working at the company for training and getting knowledge, because some times the university and school have regulation every a person getting experience before they will reality of working so that we will not unpaid for that.\r\n\r\nSecondly, training of place have a system if they graduate certainly they will be not a paid so that the impact many company take advantage with working teenagers without paid. Further more, fresh graduate will have not good communication and interaction with the staff of working, because they have not experience and good attitude, so the reason why they do not to pay.\r\n\r\nFinally, the company have standard every person to work such training before they are working and responsible, so it is consideration for fresh graduate not to pay", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I writing talk effect computers people Since I two computers one laptop I agree every person likes look stuff computer Everyone computers look different things play games like checkers computer somebody else last reason chat people different states even countries I know everybody likes talk one another Everyone computers search different things You search places people Basically search anything internet right website One time I wanted go web look see I went askcom typed CAPS It said yes showed information It told address phone number name manager Looking places sometimes Everyone play types game You could play internet game checkers solitaire even freecall nt types games always go gaming games Since I use computer everyday onto When I six years old driving game Since I website I got play checkers computers one day logged onto played first driving computer game Everyone computer chat people Instead always using phone calling texting people raising phone bill use computer chat want without wasting minutes cell phone I know everybody likes talk text cell phone Instead go internet find chatcom start chatting bloging friends One time I ran minutes phone I nt internet I asked dad I could use computer He said yeah I went local chatroom internet My friend acount would easy us talk wanted I joined chatted In conclusion I think everyone likes look places play games chat computer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I'm agaisn't the Driverless Cars Are Coming because I feel that it is not safe at all.You don't know what the driveless car is really accapable of, other then what they tell you. Driveless cars won't be able to tell when an accident is occuring? How could our technology is that devloped or advanced? It's not. It would take over a billion of years to be very advanced enough to be on the road.\n\nI don't even think sensors would even help for this car to be safe. What if they sensors are not picking up something important than your suck? Maybe even in the middle of a train track because they senes to stop right away. Not all technology is good technology. I don't believe that sensors are advancing to where it makes it safer to drive or handle driving tasks of their own. If a car was to charge the driveless car, would it pick up those senes that it's about to be hit? No, because I don't believe its ready for things like that.\n\nYes, I do think that the driveless car was a good idea, but i don't think it was good to try and let it control a lot of things, such as the antilock breaks. I feel the breaks are going to only stop when it senses something is wrong, not when something is actually wrong. Steering by its own? NO! What it you hit a pot whole and the car starts to move in a different direction on its own and you have no control what so ever. How would it even know which way to steer or turn? It wouldn't be a safer feature, i think it would be an unsafe feature.\n\nI disagree with the driveless car. I feel it is not safe and advanced for our people. New laws would have to be made due to this driveless car and I don't believe people would be to happy with the new rules having to follow.\n\nIt should also be illegal here to even test such a dangeruos computerised car. If someone where to get hurt, i would blame they manufactuer or making for the false addvertasing they were do, when they told me they driveless would be safe. I don't approve of this car.No car that has its own mind should be on the road.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever library thought hey book looks pretty good But read deamed innoproprate younger people I unlike people I nt blame libraries I blame picking first place Some people want take responsibility actions blame library carrying certain author s books band s songs magazine s articles This brings say books music magazines newspapers etc taken shelves libraries Just people like content hold nt mean ca nt helpful entertaining others I think matter choice like choosing outfit want wear There many options like comes books movies music magazines If something strikes innoproprate simply take back exchange something better One experience I think good example I years old My mother took library I found book A I showed like time gone library Only time want check She saw harsh book read time wanted wait untill I older abuse saw innoproprate book age time But nt blame libraries asking would carry books children could reach Other mothers fathers way I found My best friend s parents way Only instead book music cd wanted listen They thought listen lyrics songs sad hear They agreed little older could borrowed They blame library If someone else wanted listen childen listen personal choice I belive libraries censorships They different sections adult children young adult But I believe take books music magazines etc shelves certain people person s personal choice If like item picked take responsibility actions blame others mistakes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock One obstacle trying moor dirigible top without stressing building much It says The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way buildings foundation This means planned deal problem spreading stress way foundation building Another obstacle faced trying keep dirigibles moving swaying much moored It says The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents It impossible keep dirigibles moving wind violent The last problem even could get dirigible moor building illegal fly airships low urban area This law would make illegal ship ever tie building In conclusion obstacles builders faced led final result unsuccessful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\"\n\nbelives that exploring Venus is a worthy challenge despite its challenges. Based on how they have written this article I can say the that the author succeeded at laying out his claim and evidence.\n\nThe author starts off by stating facts about the star in our sloar planet from nicknames, temperature, as well as atmoshpere. The text states \" Venus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star\" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky\". the author also states \" on the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosheric pressure is 90 times greater that what we experience on our own planet\".\n\nLater on in the passage the author starts to ask the reader a\n\nquestions and provides answers to them. The text sates\" If our sister planet is so inhospitable, then why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?\". and answers with \" Astronomers are facinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, moutains, and craters\". This body paragraph is another eason why I believe that the author provided a good claim.\n\nThe author then continues to NASA's ideas on further exploring the harsh surfaces of Venus. The suthor states \" NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray\". Then gives more detail about the process. The text states\" imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape\".\n\nThe author then discusses the problems about the idea that NASA has come up with and the other possible solutions for exploring Venus's harsh surface. The passage states\" peering at Venus from a ship or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limit insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffectve. More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance\". The author also states\" NASA is working on other aproaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have laster for three weeks in such conditons. another project is looking back to an old technolgy called mechanical computers\".\n\nBased on the information that i have presented from the author's claim and passage, shows that this claim and evidence is correct and is a valid statement to be made by the author.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The claim the author gave about going to venus and researching it from a safe distance is good,Because it will give great information about venus and how it works.\"striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has high value not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself\". This is saying that going to venus will help us understand how the planet works.\n\nVenus is worth researching even though the casualties could be high and the risks could be.\"Weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes,powerfull earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface\". This is saying that there is alot of risk in going to go research venus.\n\nIn conclusion i think that we should go to venus becasue it will get us more closer to landing on venus. Researching venus will get us more closer to landing on it because the research will tell us when the temperatures will be lower and when everything is good.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether competitive sport is important for a child's education or it has a negative impact. In this essay, I will discuss both views and present my opinion. \r\n\r\nFirstly, competitive sport can help improve your courage and solve a lot of issues. For example, If you have problems with your confidence or struggles with mental health, in competitive sport you can learn to get over it, because when a person takes part in different competitions, his confidence levels increase and a person learns how to cope with stress. As a result, a person becomes versatile and resistant to difficulties.\r\n\r\nSecondly, participating in competitive sports could have a positive impact on your future. For instance, a successful career in basketball can lead you to top universities or open the doors to your dream job. Consequently, your efforts now could ensure your future. \r\n\r\nHowever, competitive sport can cause a lot of different traumas both mental and physical. For example, in martial arts a lot of sportsmen suffer from psychological traumas and they cannot live normal lives. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, competitive sport has both sides, but I believe, tj", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Twenty five years ago the was a face like figure on Mars ,but a lot of other people thought it was aliens. The Face on Mars has no evidence that the face was put there by aliens. All that evidence shows that it was created by nautral landform. They looked into making new and better cameras.They also would use the cameras to see if there were any ojlects such as small shacks, airplanes on the grouynd,or Egyptain-style pyramids.Even defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civization on mars but they new there wasn't.\n\nMars Global Surveyor was mapping a spacecraft the would normally straight down and scans the planet like a fax machine in narrow 2.5km-wide strips.They had to roll the sapacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view. The team captured an extrodinary picture using the cameras absolute maximum resolution. Each pixel in thr 2001 image spans 1.56meters,compared to 43 meters per pixel in tyhe best 1976 Viking picture. Now on the camera you can make a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size.After they made new editions to the camera they were looking for small shacks and other things to prove the people who thoughjt that aliens made, The Face, wrong.Especially after ythe people thoght it was an alien saw the pictures some people got ride of the idea of aliens ,but somne people still thoughtit was an alien .\n\nIn conclusion The Face is not an alien. The Face is just a nautral landform that is the Martian equivalent to a butte-mesa- landform common around the American West.All the evidence that in have explained to you show sthat it isn't an alien.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The build up of greenhouse gases and carbon emissions over the past hundred years since the car was first invented have started a decline in the usage of a private car. People are moving back into cities and are suing their cars signifigantly less with places such as Bogota Columbia having a day dedicated to no driving. Bikes and other forms of public transportation have become much more appealing than using a car and this trend looks like it will continue\n\nIn source one , in Vauban , Germany they are no longer using cars and instead are using alternative forms of transportation in this suburb. Heidrun walter a resident of this city talked about how he was \"always tense\" when owning a car which is true. It can be very stressful having to drive around and in the case of crowded areas have to sit in traffic for two hours a day. Another reason to get rid of your cars is the effects on the environment with 50% of carbon emissions in some parts of the US being blamed on cars. New laws in the US are also promoting the use of public transportation in the United States own suburbs giving suburban residents more of a reason to rid themselves of a car. In cities public transportation has been already implemented and can be much more efficent than driving around yourself.\n\nThe pollution in many cities such as Bejing is very intense and makes living conditions awful. Paris , one of the more polluted cites in Europe experienced a partial driving ban after a build up of smog in the city. This shows that if you rid yourself of a car you wont have to worry as much about contributing to this costly pollution to our environment. During the driving ban congestion was down 60% shwoing how this contribute to less traffic as well. In source 3 it discusses the no car day in Bogota Columbia showing how worldside people are starting to avoid overusing their cars and want to promote a healthy planet for us all. Parks and biking paths have emerged in this emerging latin american city and its shifting towards the right direction , of no cars.\n\nThe car culture in America has begun to die down a bit in the United States with car usage peaking 2005(Source 4). Car ownership rates are going down and more people are begining to just not get their lisences at all , and this trend will continue showing that you too should hop on this trend of lower to no car usage at all. Car companies such as Ford are changing their marketing by being more of a mobility than a car company to allow them to stay around in this decline of cars in the modern world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to own a car that does your driving for you? Well now you have that chance to own one. Now you may be thinking the same way I am thinking. How will the car sence a pedestrian? Or how will the car know that theere is a stop light or a top sign ahead? These are some things you might want to focusing on and focus less on, WOW a car can actually drive it's self?\n\nNow I on the other hand am against driverless cars because I don't think that it would be a good idea. What would be the point in being in the drivers seat if no one was actually driving the car? How more expessive is the driverless car than the original regular car? How is the driverless car exactly safer than regular cars? I personally think that there would be the same amout of aciedents happening than what there is today in society maybe for vary of reasons but there most likely would still be plenty of accidents.\n\nAnother reason on why I do not think driverless cars would be a good idea would be because what if one of the cars has a misfunction or a error and doesn't stop while someone is crossing the street? What if the car doesn't stop at a stop light and you have a three car pile up because of it? Having a driverless car would make people that it would be okay to drink and drive because technically they are not the one doing the driving the car is doing the driving. There will probably a lot of people who try and sue the driverless car company because their car had a misfunction and caused them to wreck and now they have a hospital bill on their hands because they got ito that accident that was not their fault. Or maybe the car hit a pidestrian and now the car owner has someone elses hospital bill to pay for but don't have insurence or the finances to pay the bill even though it was not his/her fault.\n\nAgain there are multiple reasons to rethink this driverless car reanactment. There are to much things to be worrying about if you owned one. You would be waisting your money buying something you absolutly do not need. You would be waisting money on a case you would most likely lose. These are just a few reasons on why I am against the \"Driverless Cars Are Coming.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I think computers positive affect society gives lot information lots fun games music informs issues world communities The first reason I think computers positive affect society gives lots information If need projects research better way computer You search kinds people like presidents celebrities people made change world You also look study different kinds plants animals find fasmating experiments The second reason I think computers positive affect society lots fun games music You go channel website play lots diffrent games favorite tv shows They also learning games test prep fun play games help well comprehension clinic The computer also lots music listen You listen album I You buying songs The fina reason I think computers positive effect society gives information issues world You go computer search natrual disasters like earthquake earthquake information tsunami hit You search get information You search favorite artist see albums gon na like search issues community That I think computers positive affect society gives information lots games music talks important issues", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship libraries librarian right remove certain materials books movies music magazines etc shelves library item inapropiate I believe libraries censorship I personally think library could power If library s always smaller children I think could power censorship In conclusion parents smaller children s responsibility make sure child s book appropiate son daughter Now say normal library mixture grownups children I would say still need censorship First choice item think offensive simply read watch listen Second would nt fair people library liked certain item could longer use item one person thought offensive Also people would start saying thought item suited library like period Last members library would right librarians So many members different feelings items many different items would taken shelf end would books left In conclusion personally I think censorship necessary libraries It would needed smaller children s parents responsible enough check child s items also would much conflict items taken shelf many items taken shelf There I believe cencorship need libraries", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph provides closure Saeng story Saeng upset fact failed test towards end story realizes things happen sometimes control happens youve also got pick happens knocks When seeing geese hibiscus realizes everyone everything adapt something new time Saeng might failed driving test drive differently Vietnam adopt way drive along rule laws This author concludes paragraph way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine future cars flying and zipping in the air, as if there were floating roads directing them where they needed to go. These flying cars need human drivers projecting them where they go. Driverless cars can be used for all sorts of things. Some stand for good and others are plots for bad. What makes driverless cars better? Nothing. They require a lot of hard work and dedication to build for what? Lazy people to use them. People who don't want to do work. That seems counter productive to logical thinkers. Driverless cars are not the future we need.\n\nIn the article it talks about whose fault it is when an accident or incident occurs. The driver? Who wasn't driving the car. Or the manufacturer? This problem would and is solved at this moment. Driving has rules and we follow them. We can not follow them if we do not drive. Every aspect of whose fault it is and whose fault it wasn't seems like more trouble than actually building these cars.\n\nThis article reminds me of a movie iRobot. It shows way in the future of how robots are becoming a more and more popular item. The main character played by Will Smith doesn't trust these robots. In this movie he demonstrates himself taking control of his car. He says \"I can not put my life in the hands of something that truly isn't alive.\" He drives his driverless car and everyone that sees him always gives him looks. Everyone has a mental image of how perfect it would be to have driverless cars but then again why would you need a driverless car?\n\nThousands of dollars or maybe even millions of dollars for something you don't even use? For something that doesn't need you to be in the car. It wouldn't even be neccesary. These will be the most expensive item of it's generation for a lazier way of getting around. This project is the most counter productive idea ever. The only way it could help is handicap personel. If a handicap, who is parapalegic, can use this car for it accelorates and breaks when it needs to. That is the only way it could be of service.\n\nThis also reminds me of Wall-E they live in spcae on their little floaty chairs and do nothing but eat and drink and get fat. This Driverless car idea is going to turn into Wall-E. It will be embarrasing and ridiculous.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is currently a material issue that while the majority of students are eager to learn business or art in university, there are only a few students who want to study science, leading to numerous negative effects on community. With respect to this matter, there are also a wide variety of factors that influence the decision of students to not study science subjects.\nIt is undeniable that there are many reasons why undergraduates avoid studying science. A classic example of this is that science is extremely difficult to understand. In order to fully comprehend a particular scientific phenomenon, students have to learn complex theories that cause the phenomena. Therefore, they tend to choose other subjects that are easier to understand. Another common reason is a small amount of salary for working in scientific fields. When student choose subjects to study at university, they tend to enroll in an area that they could make a lot of money from having that knowledge. Since science career does not offer high remuneration, student possibly prefer to study other subjects such as business which offers higher salary instead.\nIt is true that there are many negative consequences on society of having less undergraduates studying science. One clear impact of this is the decreasing in innovation. This is because scientific comprehension is a mandatory requirement for creating an innovation. Hence, having only a few people who understand science will inevitably hold the creation of modern innovation. Furthermore, the current environmental crisis, such as an increase in global temperature, would perhaps reach a point of no return. Since the crisis relates to environment which is one of scientific aspects, having a small number of attention from students would lead to less social pressure to address this crisis properly.\nIn conclusion, it is the fact that science is complicated and people who have scientific knowledge can make less money than those who are expertise in other areas, resulting in less popularity in learning about science for university students. Moreover, with the rise in this problem, this trend possibly suspends the creation of new innovation and deteriorate the current environmental issues, which are two most crucial matters for society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt Narciso Rodriguez Narciso Rodriguez mood created Narciso happiness I know following three reasons One way I know mood happiness article said often someone staying us temporarily able get back feet My parent always kept arms door open many people considered family This showed Narciso happy parents nice caring Another way mood happiness article said I learned real definition family For I never forget house gracious neighborhood shows happy find better difiniton family stay house last way mood happiness article said mother father come contry courage without knowledge language culture came selflessly Narciso showed happiness parents made They re big change lives This showes mood created happiness His Parents wonderful people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education plays a fundamental role in the growth years of shaping a child during their high school years. While some believe that students should have the liberty to offer criticisms of the teachers and a few debate that such action may give way to discipline and disrespect for teachers. In this essay we will discuss both views however in my opinion being disrespectful to teachers and offering criticisms can affect their moral values and disrupt their personalities.\r\n\r\nHigh school years are building blocks for children where along with education other attributes such as honesty, respect, love & care are taught to children. This helps them to be a better person and citizens in future, incorporating or encouraging children to criticise their teachers in class would contradict the values taught to them. They would replicate the same behaviour elsewhere, enabling them to differentiate when to draw a line. For instance, a child constantly sharing remarks on the teacher would leave the teacher agitated, enabling her to focus on the curriculum for the class, making the rest of the students suffer too.\r\n\r\nTeachers play a very important role in building and shaping a child not only intellectually but also shaping their behaviours too. They look up to their teachers as role models and reach out to them during doubts or any discomforts they have. For example, Children spend a lot of time in school, where discipline and adherence to rules are conveyed by teachers, children will follow rules only if they respect and love teachers.\r\n\r\nTo summarize, the relationship between a teacher and student is very crucial, they act like building blocks for their growth years, allowing children to back answer and criticise them in an open forum can put an adverse effect on their minds hence such behaviour must not be encouraged.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's perceptually transforming epoch , a vast number of recruiters hire those people who have academic and social skills.As a consequence , it is opined by some employers that the employees' social skills play a crucial role compared to their academic qualifications.I agree to a huge extent with the above notion and I have given my reasons along with suitable justifications in the upcoming paragraphs.\n\nCommencing with the agreement side of this phenomenon , first and foremost , teamwork plays an essential role in the workplace.Additionally , nowadays the majority of staff have to be in a team and with the rapport of other staff.And , they have to share ideas and knowledge with each - others during work .If employees do not have collaborating skills, they will create a stressful environment in the workplace.Moreover , they cannot produce work and it leads to detrimental effects on the association's economy.\n\nYet another reason is ,social skills are important for international trade .Nowadays a majority of companies are a multinational associations which are trading with other nations' companies as a part of the Global Village.As a result ,companies hire those employees who can great profits for the company by giving the best performance and presentation in front of other associations.For example , Nowadays English has become a global language by a lot of companies getting higher contracts and increasing their trade with other parts of the world.\n\nTo commence with the disagreement side , academic qualifications are more important.sometimes , labour who has more experience who are working under those who have great qualifications. Thus , without a degree certificates and qualifications person cannot get a high position in the company.\n\nTo conclude , teamwork plays a vital role for companies, and surrounding as well as increases the economy of the association.On the other hand , without academic qualifications , a person cannot get higher positions and promotions in the company.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Individual thinks it is better to set a budget to support of art but in front of it, some people believed that, it must spent on scientific research to improve our scientists and culture knowledge. In my view spending money on scientific area is more neccessary and vital by many reason like lack of knowledge we have to win this competition from all other countries.\n\nFirst of all spending money on art and entertainment is really good to support our asrtists and I believed that even it can be a good encourage to born new masterpeace. For instance, annually money support can be an awesome incentive for painters or singers etc. The fact that helping them in their way, it can improve art industry.\n\nOn the other hand, some groups of people believed that it is much better to spend money on scientific investigation and experiments. For example, if the government organizations spend some budget on climate change, they can find many ways faster and much easier to protect the world in front of many dangerous circumstance. Due to many problems in the world like, lack of food, lack of a place for inhabitats, climate change, increasing prices and many other problems it would better to invest on scentific, we can even save the world and many people's life with these kind of researchs.\n\nTo sum up, investing on scientific reaserch is my cup of tea, in my opinion saving the people life or world future by the hand of scientists are hundred percent important than art. Artists can bring and make incomes and improve their sales by advertising and they can spend money for developments of art but researchers can't spend a lot of money to learn how to save people's life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Electing a new president of the United States of America has been, and always will be, a big deal. One could be a state senator, a member of the legislative branch, or even an average citizen with zero involvement in governmental jobs/issues. The one thing that ties all of these people together - is that they're all citizens. As citizens, these people will care about who is running their country, what plans they have for it, and how those plans are carried out. Therefore, on behalf of the U.S., it is important to elect the correct person to rule a nation and keep it safe. The Electoral College is a flawed system used to elect presidents, and the American voting system should be based on popular vote. A few reasons being that the votes of the Electoral College outweigh the votes of an everyday citizen, and that the Electoral College basically has the final say in who becomes the president of the United States of America.\n\nOne of the things that is wired throughout all three sources, is that electoral votes basicallly overpower the votes of the average citizen. When the average citizen does vote, however, their vote does not go toward the president. Their vote goes to the Electoral College, who then vote for the president. \"[...] it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote\" (Posner 16). According to an article (that supports the Electoral College), the winner of an election can win without owning the popular votes of an entire nation. Basically, all that a candidate even needs is the majority votes of the Electoral College in order to win an election. \"[...] according to a Gallup pole in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore - thanks to the quirks of the electoral college - won the popular vote but lost the presidency[...]\" (Plumer 9). Collecting the votes of the Electoral College is the only concern of a candidate - therefore the only reason that candidates speak to the people is to influence them to cast votes for the Electoral College, which then cast votes for that candidate. \"[...] Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes [...]\" (Posner 18). It's as if the people are just physical steps that electoral voters use to get to the person that the Electoral college wants to be the president of the U.S.\n\n\"Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always\" (Plumer 10). As mentioned in the article by Richard A. Posner, members of the Electoral College are chosen and expected to vote for their party's nominee. However, people don't always deliver what we expect from them. It is completly possible for an elector to change their mind, and cast their finalizing vote toward the opposite candidate. These members cast their votes directly to the candidate, and they can easily change their vote.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It’s been observed that competition in sports is influencing the young of this era. Some people believe that it’s healthy and good for one’s development especially when it comes to their education while others are not true believers in this. They think that it’s leaving a poor effect on teenagers’ education. Although sports are healthy activities for the human body, its effect varies from person to person.\r\n\r\nBecause of the multiple advantages of sports, it’s considered a healthy activity. When it comes to competitions, passion to win contributes towards polishing one’s personality. A part of the population is in favor of such competitions in which teenagers can learn to progress and win. Passion to win can play a vital role in someone’s educational history. So, people believe that if someone is competitive in sports, they will have the same attitude for their education.\r\n\r\nOn the contrary, people also think that when someone fails in any sports competition, they get negative vibes, which causes too many unavoidable situations like politics, jealousy, and so on. One can do anything to win which can harm others. It’s not limited to this only but they can join any extreme which can be disastrous for anyone involving that competition.\r\n\r\nSummarizing the idea, I would say that competitive sports are good if they are conducted with the right terms. Competitions make one more proactive and smart. Rules should be fair enough to accommodate all involved parties. Although some people are not in favor of this, we can educate them by conducting healthy sports competitions in every educational department.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The auther of the text \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" says that studying venus would be good for many reasons. He thinks it is a good and worthy pursuit and a good direction for people to focus on\n\nbut a lot of scientis and astrologis dont think it is. The people who dissagree think that it is a bad to focus on because it is too hot and dense to even land on and they think it is impossable to put people on however, the auther thinks that a lot of this is possable its just not gonna be easy. Venus is a planet close to earth that is also called the \"evening star\" it is one of the britest points of light in the night sky making it easy for many people to spot but people dont know what conditions are like on the evening star and they are not the best it can reach up to 800 degrees fahrenhite.\n\nThe auther believs it is possable to study it but if they did it would not be easy they woud have to have the best technolagy and the best aircrafts it would be hard to find idems that could withstand that kind of tec but nasa also have talked about this expadition before. Nasa is working on other approaches to studying venus they do have electronics that have benn tested in chambers that have survived for up to three weeks in simulated conditions. The people at nasa even have tecnology from back in the 1940s dating back to wwII that could help them with the venus study. The auther was right about it being possable and the technology is definatly coming togeather but their is still work to be done to make this possibility become a reality but that dosent change the fact that it is possable.\n\nThe auther said it is a worthy pursuit and so dose nasa and with time the hard working people will make it happen beacause its not just the auther who wants this to happen. I think so many people want venus to be studied is becaus their is so much we dont know about it and i understand because after reading the article i am also curius about what mysteries and what it has to offer us. their is a lot of\n\nthings to be learned aboult venus and it is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers and human curiosity will most likely be what leads us to studying this planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many believe that pursuing a higher education through university is the best way to have a successful career. However, others think that getting a job right after school is better. With the rising standards of living, people want to earn money quickly to satisfy their needs, all while being successful. So, which of these two paths is able to satisfy people's demands?\nHigher education is the first step towards a better future. Although there are some exceptions that defy this rule like Bill Gates, for instance. It still holds true for the vast majority. College studies enrich your mind and enable you to discover knowledge that you would not uncover alone. Not to mention that there are professionals who can aid you with your studies and career. Furthermore, you do not just gain academic experience you gain so much more, as you get involved in the university life; getting to know people of different backgrounds, nationalities and cultures will open up your mind and give you better adaptation and socializing skills. Whatever you learn or experience during college will aid you in your professional life. It also makes you an expert on what you do, there is a difference between someone who just states their opinion on a matter and between someone who actually have information about that matter.\nNevertheless, some people don't believe much in higher studies. They just want to get a job after they graduate high school and start building a future for themselves. These people tend to invest the years that would be spent in a certain faculty in pursuing a career. Some of these people have their own skills and talents that will allow them to build a future on their own. For example, some artists would start selling their arts at a young age and wouldn't study art, they'd open an art gallery and create their own business.The same could be said about actors and singers, of course they would need to train to improve their talents, but they can still manage without pursuing a higher studies. Others just prefer working than studying. \nIn my opinion, I believe that both sets of paths are right. As much as I believe that studying at university does make a difference and adds to your skills and knowledge, it's not a rule. Some of the greatest leaders in the world didn't get a chance at a higher education, take Mohamed Ali, for instance, he built a great empire, improved Egypt's educational and economic system, all while being illiterate. Now, I am not encouraging illiteracy but I believe hat everyone should do what is best for them. Set a goal and do what it takes to achieve that goal. If you want to be a doctor, you'd have to go to medical school. Thus, you must determine what you want and take the right decisions to attain your desires. \nIn conclusion, it's our goals and dreams that determine what sort of action we'd take. However, one must know that success is a matter of determination and hard work, whether they choose to go to college or open up their own business.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders came across many obstacles trying build Empire State building dirigibles dock One obstacle single cable tether went say would add stress building fix They choose modify frame strengthen well Another obstacle get right equipment They go get information air station The last obstacle would dirigibles filled oxygen instead Helium This meant flammable something must consider While trying make work dirigibles came across building problems safety dangerous problems", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you like to live in a world where you don't have to drive youself if and whenever you have to got to somewhere? If it's yes then hear this, the article called \" Driverless Cars Are Coming\" discusses the improvement on progressing towards driverless cars. Though as much as it's excidting, there's still both possitive and negative aspects of the driverless cars.\n\nFist lets talk about the positive side of the aspects. The first paragraph, base on the imagination from Google cofounder Sergey Brin tells us that the cars would use half the fuels that today's taxis are using. One other positive aspects is that the call would be much flexibility than today's bus.\n\nThe negative aspects would be how the people would feels. The people are questioning in paragraph 8. They are saying that driverless cars would get the driver's bored. Not only that Paragraph 9 kind of point out that some of the law would have to be change if we lives in a world where the people uses driverless cars for every day transportation.\n\nIn conclusion, living in such a world would not be a bad idea though even if the country would have to go through some changes. Because this is what human's do, Human moves forward and keep improving, not going back down.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke think you should join the seagoing cowboys program because you can travel all around and see some pretty nice things like Luke it said in the passage that you take nine trips to things like Greece,China,you will past the Atlantic Ocean and also you can make the world a better place and you can be a hero for being nice. Also so if you want to you can help out animals in the passage it said, the animals had to drink two or three times a day also a way you can help you could clean the stalls on the ship and they will give you jobs and other stuff and so you won't think it is boring you can have fun onboard to they got a lot of things like baseball,and volleyball and the house it is table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whittling,and the games make time go fast and that's why I think you should join the seagoing Cowboys program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\" The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is a list of facts, reasons, and statements about Venus. The author believes that exploring Venus would be a good idea. He talks about how \" Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life\". That would be the closest thing to Earth in our solar sytem that we may be able to explore.\n\nNow the challenges of exploring Venus are that there is a constant temperature of around 800 degrees Fahrenheit always on the surface of the planet. There are clouds covering Venus that have high amount of sulfuric acid in them, the planets surface is covered in 97 percent carbon dioxide. If we want to explore this planet we're going to need to find materials that can withstand those horrible conditions. The last recorded spacecraft on Venus only lasted 3 hours. Despite the dangers that come with all of this planet, if we could find a way to explore this planet safely and get gas and rock samples that could tell us a lot about this planets past and if it was similiar to Earth. The technology that we need to explore this planet with we are still yet to find a perfect solution to, we are chipping away at it slowly and finding new ideas that could get us there eventually. This new material that is made out of silicon carbide has been tested in the chamber and has lasted three weeks in conditions like Venus's, That is just getting one step closer to something that could last a long time on the surface of that planet. The harsh temperatures and gases are something that a human can survive through but we need our technology to get through it too. We've used electronic computers in space travel since they would have been able to be used in spacecrafts. The idea is to use a older device that runs off of gears and bearings that can with stand the elements because electronic computers are so delicate they wouldn't last very long in those enviroments. If we are able to find materials that can last long enough to try and get samples that would be our best bet, our first idea is to stay at around 30 miles above the surface of the planet. Temperatures would still be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit but we have materials that can withstand those temps. Since the surface of Venus is so cloudy our photograpy methods won't work to really see the surface of that planet. We need to find all the materials and new technology before trying to do something that we havent been able to do successfully yet.\n\nI think that looking at everything we want to accomplish with Venus as a many many steps so we can accomplish it succesfully and be prepared for anything that were to come at us in a mission. I do believe that with the right amount of thought, time, innovation, and energy put into this that it could be something that would be accomplishable. Having the technology to be able to land on Venus and take gas, rock, and sediment samples we can learn a lot about the planets past and maybe find something new. I do not believe that this idea is farfetched i believe that it is something accomplishable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke should join the Seagoing Cowboys because Luke can help countries that need food and water. Luke can help animals that have to be shiped across the ocean. cattle boat trips can be unbelievable for people that live in a small town and never get to go on trips. Luke can like helping people, and Luke can do differnt jobs for the Seagoing Cowboys, he could be night watchman. Seagoing Cowboys can be more than an adventure.\n\nLuke can help people that are in needed for water,and food,and they need homes. Luke can take animals like cow's and horses. If Luke had got the opportunity to do this. He could take bales of hay to the animals and bags of oats for the poeple. when Luke was child he had work with his aunt on a farm.\n\nSometimes being a Seagoing Cowboys can be bad but luke can handle it. Their could be apossablitty that you could get hurt and break a bone or break a rib. If you need anything to be clean Luke could do it. The only time it would be hard to work is when it is raining. Because if it was raining the ship could possable sink.\n\nLuke would love to have the job it is once in a life opportunity to have the job.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter always answer It freezing dark outside The walk home long handle laughter filling air made walk home little faster shorter The cars kept passing stairing could laugh knew making fools ourselfs didnt care one bit The weird voices kept coming mouths crazy dance moves facial exspressions funniest thing us Stupid things people funniest things Becasue I knew laugh usual build friendship live life fullest As I walking back home dreding walk home It seemed like going take two hours long took get really ten minutes away house even It also felt like making anywhere slow walking thinking long walk would Cars kept passing us nt stairing us yet It silent something popped brain I best idea walk would faster I remebered voice god brother like compared even though younger would always It always put smile everyone entertaining This voice I wanted try I attempted We nt even half way home I started yelling radom words cars dark scary voice I sounded controlling Then I bright idea sing deep creepy voice That bad idea also started dance cars started stare us tall thin girl bestfriend loved piercings nt care others thought I really didnt mind thought us either people knew weird Watching dance voice funniest thing I could ever see I never thought something could get funnier wanted try voice When tried voice slipped lips I started bust laughing fell floor After ten minutes almost house felt like stomachs going bust open long hard laughing While I thinking thought CAPS seemed like two minutes get home I knew I would think something got home time would go faster When walked door house mom asked us CAPS guys dancing waling I looked eachother laughed told nt even know fun Laughter thing brings two people closer I think It nt matter make fools know whats fun All matters build relationship together Does nt matter s friends trying get know eachother boyfriendgirlfriend fun messing around It s always good laugh connection person friendship still", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason why he join the program is because he know's how the people are like. So that's why he is doing the program to help people with there lives. Luke what's to convinc the other Seagoing Cowboy program. To help the other people that need help and can't eford it. The opportunity he made for the Seagoing Cowboy. It made him more aware of people of the other countries and their needs.\n\nLuke what a awarness stayed with him, leading his family to host a number of interatoinal students and exchange visitors for many years. It made him more express and enjoy the world. It made him see the hole world and he said it was a good a opportunity to join the Seagoing Cowboys. Luke found time to have fun on board.\n\nHe want's to help the countries and the world to make it a better world. He whats the Seagoing Cowboys and he want's them to help with the awarness to help the people and the children with there homes and contries.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In vauban,germany car usage is not very popular in fact 70 percent of vaubans familes do not own cars and 57 percent sold there car to move to the area. Heidrun Walter says when she had a car she was always tense and that she feels so much better and relaxed this way. The way people in vauban chose there lifestyle is starting to rub off on places like europe and the united states. they call it smart planning. Vauban lifestlye may br the most advanced experiment in low car suburban life but its basic percepts are being adopted around the world in attempts to make suburbs more compact and more accessible to public transportation. David goldberg an official of transpotation for america says how much you drive is important whether you have a hybrid. In the united states the environmental protection agency is promoting a car reduced community.\n\nIn paris they ban car driving because of the smog , on monday motorist were ordredto leave their cars at home or suffer a 22 euro fine which is 31 dollars. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined and 27 people had their car impounded for their reaction to the fine. cingestion was sown a 60 percent in the capital of france after five days of intensiying smog. Diesel fuel was blamed since france has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline diesel makes up to 67 percent of vehicles in france. Paris has more smog than other european capitals delivery companies complained of lost revenue while exceptions were made for plug-in cars , hybrids, and cars carrying three or more passengers and public transport was free from friday to monday.\n\nin bogota colombia a program thats set to spread to other countries million of colombians hiked,biked,skated or took buses to work during a car free day it was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permited for the day the goal was to reduce smog all violaters faced 25 dollar fines the turn out was great. Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two seat bicyle with his wife. For the first time two other colombian cities joined the event. the day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in bogota in the mid 1990's. the change is big parks ans sports centers also bloomed throughout the city uneven pittd sidewalks have replaced by broad smooth sidewalks rush hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Someone who thinks the Face was created by aliens must be crazy because it was just the landforms that has created such artifiact. We scientist at NASA have research for a really long time and there were no aliens involved from this 'Face'. You may think it was created by aliens because of how the structure of it look's so good, but over the past years we have been taking photos year by year and if it was created by an alien then why wouldn't the alien come back to repair the hidden face? Its just basically natural landform, nothing else.\n\nScientist from all over has been wondering the same thing, is it a face created by the unknown or was it created by the plant itself? Since the Face is hidden, we think it's harder to track it down because of the landforms has covered the Face. It was almost as if it was disappearing over the years. Scientist also have shown that it suppost to really show the equivalent of butte or masa. It just like the American West's landform. Some of the other scientist were thinking that the aliens has covered their trackes so that they wouldn't be found nor would they have anything to do with it.\n\nFor example, scientist had to take a closer look themselves because they didn't think that the landform could create such thing. I think it was hard to track down because if the face has been decreasing its features and you can barely see it anymore than what makes it easy to find if you don't have a map. If you use a camera to capture the Face you could clearly see that it was made by landform. The landforms can create alot of things on Earth and on other planets, like Mars. Just like other scientist have said, It's a natural landform.\n\nI believe that there wasn't any alien monument at all because Mars is a hot planet and the degrees can drop or increase. Mars is just like earth because the change in tempature changes the landforms. We can even compare the Face on Mares to masa. Scientist even say that the Face and masa are the same height. The Face is so clear that if there was a airplane on the ground, that you can see it and there was nothing on the planet to show any differnce on that planet. So if aliens did create this then why aren't there any tracks or clues left behind them to show that they were there?\n\nThe conclusion to the Face is that it wasn't created by aliens. We have professional scientist here and they say that it wasn't created by aliens. There were no tracks, non alien monuments, and no trace of aliens there. People were anxious because they thought that aliens we creating such lanform or a face but they weren't. Everyone wasn't satified because they wanted excitment on wheather there were aliens or no. Now, if aliens did create it then how would they be able to find it if we can barely tell where it is anymore? Our conclusion has left to know that there ar enoe aliens and irt was just landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If I were a scientist at NASA, I would show many resons why the \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" was not created by aliens. First, I would ask them \"why\" do they think aliens are real. With there own proof. Once I would get a response, I would tell them there isn't much proof that aliens exist. Including, that there are also no signs of life on Mars.\n\nAlso, I would also state that the Face was only a natural landform of a mesa, made by natural causes on planet Mars. It was probably most likely made by a sandstorm. But, surely not made by an alien. I would also tell the person who I am arguing with, that aliens are just fictional characters in movies, book, etc. made up by normal people.\n\nAnother important reason thhat you can tell that the Face on Mars is only a landform is that in the pictures show, the face has more features as a normal mesa. And you can tell because of the more advanced technology to improve the photos shown. With that reason you would point out how the face has revalent features of a landform. To prove that statement in the text, it states that the landorm just appears as an Egyptian Pharaoh face because of the shadows on Mars.\n\nWith all of this information I would've proved that aliens didn't form the Face on MArs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "THERE IS AN INCREASING TREND IN KNOWING ABOUT THE PAST OF THE HOME OR BUILDING THE PEOPLE LIVE IN ACROSS THE GLOBE.THIS IS BECAUSE OF THE INFLUENCE OF THE SOCIAL MEDIA PLATFORMS LIKE FACEBOOK AND INSTAGRAM.THE PUBLIC CAN ACCESS THIS INFORMATION BY REFERRING TO THE HISTORY BOOKS OR ONLINE RESOURCES FROM TRUSTED WEBSITES.\r\n\r\nTHE SOCIAL MEDIA IS CREATING A LOT OF TRENDS THESE DAYS, THAT TOO OVER A SHORT PERIOD OF TIME.THIS PARTICULAR TREND CAUGHT A LOT OF ATTENTION WHEN A MUSIC CELEBRITY POSTED A VIDEO ON HIS INSTAGRAM ACCOUNT ABOUT HIS HOME AND ITS HISTORICAL SIGNIFICANCE ALONG WITH AN INTRODUCTORY SONG FOR HIS NEW ALBUM.IN THE SAME POST HE URGED HIS FANS TO TAKE UP THIS CHALLENGE AND SHARE THEIRS WITH HIS MUSIC IN THE BACKGROUND.THAT FIRED UP LIKE ANYTHING. LATER MANY OTHER CELEBRITIES AND BUSINESSMEN BOASTED ABOUT THEIR EXORBITANT LIFE IN THOSE MONUMENTAL PROPERTIES.IT SLOWLY CREPT INTO THE SOCIETY THROUGH DIFFERENT FORMS. IT MADE THE PRICE TAGS OF THESE ASSETS MAGNANIMOUS.\r\n\r\nTHE PEOPLE CAN RESEARCH ABOUT THESE FACTS FROM STANDARD REGIONAL HISTORY TEXTBOOKS OR GENUINE WEB PORTALS.IT IS VERY IMPORTANT TO VERIFY THIS INFORMATION, AS THERE IS A CHANCE TO GET CHEATED OR ENDING UP PAYING AN UNNECESSARY AMOUNT FOR THESE STRUCTURES IN THE REAL ESTATE BUSINESS.A RECENT STUDY HAS CONCLUDED THAT MORE THAN 70 PER CENT OF THE REAL ESTATE ADVERTISEMENTS PROVIDE FAKE INFORMATION TO BOOST THE MARKET PRICE.\r\n\r\nTHE INCREASING INTEREST TO STUDY ABOUT THE HISTORY OF HOMES AND BUILDINGS ARE THE EFFECT OF A RECENT SOCIAL MEDIA TREND . THE PUBLIC CAN LOOK INTO MANY WRITTEN REFERENCES AND THE WEB FOR IN-DEPTH KNOWLEDGE AND FACT VERIFICATION.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, the social responsibilities of companies are a hotly – debated topic. From my perspective, this statement is absolutely true. The enterprises have an obligation to support both government and society.\r\n\r\nSpecifically, during the time to run their business, the organization also still toneed take part in social activities such as: subscribing to charity projects, raising funds to protect children or donating budget for educational scholarships, etc. As a matter of fact, this participation does not only have a part in improving the life quality of the residents, especially the disadvantaged people but it also plays a significant role in brand-building and enhances the prestige of the enterprises. Obviously, the businesses are parts of a country which have the most solid economic foundation. Therefore, without being assisted , philanthropic organizations cannot run effectively because of financial burdens. Moreover, it is evident that this is a win-win solution because a company that joins in a variety of social activities tend to be loved and advocated more by the customers. \r\n\r\nMore exactly, even political or military activities of the nation also always need financial support from these companies. To be more precise, government and businesses have a close-knit connection, and this is a part of social activities that the enterprise can contribute. As an illustration, in Vietnam, during the epidemic of Covid-19, Vingroup donated a large number of medical equipment for hospitals and simultaneously they also helped the government purchase vaccine prophylactic. As a result Vietnam overcame the pandemic fastly and successfully. Then period, Vingroup became a statue in the heart of Vietnamese residents. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the company should have a contribution to helping the nation as soon as to develop and integrate with the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My name is Lennie and I went to Franklin Colleg. In my college we used alot technology, especially computers. Sometimes I don't understand what I read and what are we learn about. Most of the time I got confused. When I got struggle, I was trying to search something to help but I knew that if look at from the google and copying some words I will get expel from my college. I don't know what to do, when I took it wrong all of words come out wrong and I get emotional.\n\nThe next year I've know all of about what we learn and I understand what we learn from the google. Techonology help me about what we learn. I searched about what we've learn and I was trying to not copy from the google. But my first time it was really hard to fix my problem without copy from the google. Most of the time I took a time to study all night, I was really trying hard and study super hard . So it help me to understand my subject. My computer is really helpful for me and I am very thankfull to my computer.\n\nIn the very first page I was talking about how I got confused and how I got emotion when I didn't know what we've learnd. And the second page I littleraly know what we've learn, is because my computer. According to the text the author says technology are Facial Coding System, well it was true because technology can help human, infulence, change appearance and also can change emotion.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affected cyclist made simplist challenges The back water snake path examples", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe computers positive effect people They teach handeye coordination give people ability learn faraway places people even allow people talk online people All things good use computers need computers Do think computers positive effect negative effect After hear might want agree computers positive effect Computers positive effect many ways example school work talk get information From different websites If computers use would probably use books We would get information books much would get computer We probably would know much nt ofr computers The reason computers positive effect work eyes typing exercising hands That proves handeye coordination We learn places nt live like Had earthquake went websites You get learn certain place want go vacation You get learn famous people know go computer look celebrity Computer something people use talk people keep contact Now others We use talk friend family Some family friends live far away places use computer talk If email teachers people work might email handle business You even get work students school way learn different activities You even play games computer You explore nature computer I think computer great way learn talk others Do want child learn Do want child fun So tell think Computers positive effect", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" they introduce new techonology, but it's not like our phones or computres this techonology will be able to detect any emotion you are fealing, rage,love,depression anyhing that has to do with emotion. They are predicting that this technology will be able to tell wheter or not a kid is confused or bored class. This could be good because the teacher might be willing to make up new and improved lessons intsead of the same boring old thing.\n\nThe reason I am against the Facial Action Coding System is becuase not everyone should be able to know what I am feeling. My facial expressions might show that I am upset over something so drastic but, its really i didn't get any pasta for dinner last night. Your expressions can read into to much. Then what, what are you suppose to when you find out everyone in your class either bored or upset you cant talk to everyone about their emotions not most people would want to open up, Which is understandable because you didnt come to school to have your teacher read your facial expression and start to anaylze everything about you.\n\nAlthough I am glad we are able to make so much new technology and such high technology like FACS. It is not right to use the technology on students everytime they come into a classroom. The Facial Action Coding system should not be used in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author does a very good job at explaining and giving details of the passage.They give you the scientific facts and even tells you that NASA has been working on diffrent ways to study Venus.He lets you know that Venus is not an easy planet to study since it has a top degrees of 800 degrees Farenheight. He also gives information about how diffrent metals and other objects melt and liquefy after so long on Venuses surface.\n\nThey give very good information on how NASA plans to get peopel to Venus by building a space craft that will hover 30 miles over the landscape of Venus. He gives muliple good facts about the spaace craft and how it will possible work. The author claims it will work like airplanes and a blimp, However it will still be hot 30 miles up. It will still be 170 degrees up there.They also give you the bad parts of having a hover craft over Venus for example the visibility of the landscapes and terrian. They also explain how you can't take samples from the ground hovering 30 miles over the land.\n\nThe author also gives creat detail of Venuses surface and how NASA has been thinking of diffrent ways to approach it. They give facts about the ground and the atmospherer around Venus and how the Atmosperic pressure is 90 times greatewr then we have experience with.The author also tells us how it's blanketed with 97 percent Carbon diocide and other gasses. We are even told that the conditions are to extream for us and how the presure would crush a submarine.\n\nIn the passage he describes how it's one of the brightest points in the sky. The author even tells us how a amerture could even find it. Venus is also described as our twin planet. It is also wrote in the passgae on how close it resembles our planet even though it could crush and kill anyone. The author also adds on how hard Venus is to examine with all the storms and comotion on its ground.\n\nVenus even has volcanoes that erupt on it's surface. It has Earthquakes and even occasional lightning storms. The author has definetly done a very good job on explaining his point on exploring Venus. He has put the good and the bad facts into the passage. He describes almost every aspect of the planet.The author aslo beleives that it will be good for us to try and explore Venus because we will be able to go one more dangerouse trips in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The FACS\n\nFACS got your attenshion right yeah the FACS is a facial action coding system. The FACS can tell the person how the the person feels just by looking at there face like and exmaple is the Mona Lisa they read irs face withe the FACS. They said it was 83% happy 9% disgusted, 6% fearful and 2% angry. It is useful but i dont think it should be used in classrooms to read students. 3 reasons why I think thats teh FACS should't be allowed in school are sometimes people dont want to talk about ther lifes in school and another reason is that it would go to kids personal lifes and the last reason is it may make kids feel weird knowing that others know how they feel and so will there parents .\n\nGoing back to the first reason that may sometimes people dont want to talk about ther lifes in school. Sometimes people dont want to talk about ther lifes in school kids may think others kids will make of them for being sad or fearful. An exmaple of a kid being scared of what other will think of them for being scared or super kind are bullies. Bullies most of time become the way they are is becaues they feel like others will hate them the way they are or hey have been juged becaues of there feelings.\n\nLets get into another reason that the FACS would be a bad thing to have in schools is that it would go to kids personal lifes and most kids dont like talking about they'r home life. you may say it would take some presser off the kids if they feel bad or sad and we could talk to them. But some kids that don't want to talk about it and the kids that feel ok will feel like the sad kids get more attenshion so will want to be sad. Like when i was younger i used to want attenchion so if kids find a key to get attenshion they will want to be sad.\n\nThe last reason is it may make kids feel weird knowing that others know how they feel. Also it may make the kids parents feel weird or angry becaues they probly dont want people basicly spying on there kids. If i were one of the kids dad i would want the school spying on my kid. If alots of parents feel that way and which schools the school with the FACS will lose lots of money.\n\n3 reasons why I think thats teh FACS should't be allowed in school are sometimes people dont want to talk about ther lifes in school and another reason is that it would go to kids personal lifes and the last reason is it may make kids feel weird knowing that others know how they feel and so will there parents. That is why i dont want the FACS in schools.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "University submission is perhaps time-consuming for people, and some think it will be beneficial if a gap year system is applied between the last year in senior high and the university application period.However, there are parts of the community that think the gap year policy will degrade students' ability to learn. This essay will discuss further two perspectives regarding the one-year gap scheme and illustrate each case.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, gap year regulation gives both parents and students time in preparing the application requirements thoroughly. In fact, kids are enforced to meet the qualification where they have to be straight-A students in class as well as involved actively in the community. Apparently, being a part of society consumes extra time and some children are prioritised to have an extra lesson instead. For instance, some children who are not prepared for an exam tend to take the private lessons outside school time which obviously affects their availability in taking volunteering in their neighbourhood. As a result, their submission process might be affected due to this situation. Therefore, the gap year system will suit high schoolers who want to continue their study.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some might think this system is reckless where children might be affected and loosen their strategy through university. It is understandable that youngsters are unstable especially if they are not encouraged. Giving them a space of time is a bit risky from some perspectives. To illustrate, after graduation, there will be no formal supervision for the kids which means some can lose their motivation and spirit during the period of preparation. Although they are grownups, their instability dominates in decision-making. Instead of being well-prepared, a gap year might impact their enthusiasm to learn.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, gap year regulation impact differently amongst children. It might be a positive decision where students focus on one activity at a time resulting high acceptance rate in university. Nevertheless, it might affect negatively youngsters which impacts their learning processes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars should not be the next big thing. Driverless cars are extremely dangerous. Yes, technology has become a big part of our everyday life: but, with that being said everybody should understand how often the internet crashes, the power goes out, or simply destructes for no good reason. A car that is not driven by a human isn't going to know how to go around a slow moving semi on the highway. If the driverless car is setup to stop when an object gets too close; how would the car react if simply a squirrel runs out in the middle of the car? What if another car operated by a human is trying to move around you and gets 2 inches closer to you than expected, would the driverless car immeditately stop in the middle of the highway? Even if a someone is in the driverless car \"just in case\", how much attention do you think they would be paying to the road? Some people text and drive now as they are in operation of the vehicle, imagine if they aren't operating the vehicle. I could only imagine some people would sleep, be on electronics, or even read a book. In the text it states \"Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" Which is most cases would be true, if people are in the mind state of \"that wouldn't happen to me\" they would probably try doing anything while in a vehicle they won't have to operate. Not driving and waiting for the driverless car to mess up would get boring, and what do people do when they're bored? Some people read, eat, sleep, etc when they are bored. Driverless vehicles are something as humans we will never be ready for, the vehicle would be operating itelf. If the vehicle is operating itself, its relying on technology to do so. How many times have you taken a test online? Or tried to submit a paper online and the internet fails? This could very well happen to a driverless car that we would rely on to keep our children safe on the way to school. If the technology did fail, who would be at fault? If you are in the driverless vehicle while it hits a toddler whom ran out to grab her ball from the road, would it be your fault? Did you murder this young child? That's another arguement you would have having a driverless vehicle. It could be your fault, it could be the manufactures fault. \"If the technology fails and someone is injuried, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer\"? Is that a chance society is willing to take? Is that a chance you are willing to take?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While it is true that watching TV affects children, it is difficult to determine whether it is the content of the programs or the length of time spent watching them that has a more significant impact on children. It seems to me that although the amount of time does affect youngsters, it is the content of the programs that has a more marked influence on them. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the consequences of watching TV for long periods of time can be deleterious. Firstly, the longer children are exposed to TV programs, the more likely it is for them to become addicted to watching television. When children become over-reliant on television for entertainment, they might neglect engagement in outdoor activities. This may result in a sedentary lifestyle that is highly detrimental to their physical health. More importantly, excessive TV watching impairs children’s communication abilities, so they find it hard to play or live in harmony with others. As a result, children would feel discouraged from having real interactions with people around them if they spent a huge amount of time in front of the screen, which may hinder their development of social skills. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is the broadcasted images that have the most direct effects on young viewers. Firstly, in most countries the majority of TV shows present glamorized depictions of inappropriate materials such as violence, drug abuse or casual sex, thus youngsters may adopt unhealthy habits and improper behavior. For example, they might fall under the impression that the use of alcoholic drinks is fashionable without being aware of the health risks they carry and later end up consuming these substances. Besides, in our modern consumer society, commercials also affect how children behave. Unwary young viewers could be easily swayed by captivating advertisements for junk food or video games, products whose target audience includes children, and so may pester their parents to buy these goods impulsively. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although both factors have their own implications, I believe the element with more considerable impacts on children is the content. Hence, parental involvement is essential in controlling children’s TV viewing habits and in shaping a child’s values to help them enter adult life with a healthy mind.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976 something weird was discovered on Mars. Viking 1 spacecraft snapped a picture of something that almost looks like a face on Mars. It could be the sign we need to find out if there is life on Mars. A lot of people are saying it is a face, while others do think it is just a natural landform. There have also been pictures captured from 1998 and 2001. This face has became a pop icon, it has appeared in Hollywood films, magazines, books, and even radio talk shows! Although there has been quite a few reasons to think it is a face I personally think it's just a natural landform. Now yes, I do have many reasons for my thinking. In these next couple paragraphs I will state my reasons.\n\nOne of my firsts reasons for thiking it is a natural landform is that there are many landforms naturally made just like that around Earth. So if they are natural landforms on Earth they would probably be natural landforms on the planet Mars. In the article Garvin says, \" it reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. That is a lava dome that takes form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\n\nMy second reason would be that it sorda resembles a face but not really. Theres a very high chance that could just be a mountain and the shadows resemble the eyes, nose, and mouth. As you can see in the picture from 2001 it almost doesnt even look like a face. It is more like a mountain of some sorts there. If you do look at the 1976 photo from distance it does resemble a face, but as the camera quality improved over time it does not look as much like a face anymore.\n\nAnother reason is that it is very very unlikely that bthere is an imprint of a face on the planet of Mars. Even if it was though it would basicaly always look the same and not change looks like it has. Now a natural landform will change looks over time. It will rott or decompose and stuff. Which in my opinion it has decayed somewhat. It definintaly has not stayed the same, because all 3 pictures have a significant difference to them. That could be rom better camera and technology quality. To me though it seems as if the better quality makes it look less like a face.\n\nNow though I have a few more reasons this will be my final reason. This \"Face of Mars\" is the some of the only proof we have to think that there is life on Mars. So it makes me more and more right. It is just very unlikely or maybe even impossible for that to be a face. It is not unlikely that it is a natural landform though.\n\nI do realize there are many reasons why I am wrong and why it is a face but I think it is a natural landform. So in conclusion It is more likely for this , Face of Mars, to be a natural lanforn than for it to be a face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars sound like a good idea, right? Well not exactly. All though it sounds like a really good idea, is it really? I think that having driverless cars is a really bad idea.\n\nAnd here are some reasons why. The cost would be way too expensive, people would be more likely to text and dive, and it would not be safe.\n\nThe cost of these cars would be way to expensive. Not every one can afford to by these new cars. And if they think this is really a good idea and everyone should buy them, then why not make them afforadable for everyone? What about the people that dont have enough money to buy them? What are they going to do? Lets make it fair for everryone. Another reason is that people would be more likely to text and drive. People would pay more attention to their phones than to the roads. The last reason i have is that, these cars are very dangerous. More wrecks would happen because the people dont have full control over there cars. This idea would increase the number of wrecks on our streets.\n\nThis is why i do not agree with the idea of these new cars. Because they are to costly, more people would be likey to text and drive, and it is not safe. I think they should make it illegal in all of our states. People should have full control over there cars. Those are some reasons why we should not have driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face that is on Mars might be because there was atleast human life form on Mars and it couldve been Earth and Earth probably wouldve been Mars. As you can see there is a Human Face created on Mars for some reason and they say its a \"Huge Rock Formation\" which resembles a human head formed by the shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. Its a enormous head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be looking back at the camera on the Big Red Planet caled Cydonia. But the sensation of the Human Looking thing\n\nwas common enough around Cydonia, only this one looked like a Eygptian Pharaoh.\n\nMost Scientists thought is a alien artifact created by aliens and they captured a few good snapped shots of the face. The mission was over after 18 long years and it pretty much just regular formed rock that happened to look like there was some civilization going on Mars. When they put online the JPL site revealed that is was just a natural landform. No alien monument after all these years of resarching.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" i chosed to be on the maunufacturers side becuase the sensor is a good and safe idea for us people that drive. they can ster, accelerate,and break by themselves. There are some sensor that have a vibration in the seat it tells you when your vehicle is in danger backing into a danger.\n\nobject . Also using heads up displays when your driving like some thing are not available like trying to text and call someone on the phone.\n\nThe driverless car is a great idea beacuse the car tells you when you should break. Reason why this is a good ideas it can steer for you what if it really slippery out and you have no controll the sensor will help you keep calm of the car. The sensor tell you when you should go fast and slow down. this may reduce the amount of car crashes.\n\nThe senor that vibrate when you are driving is a well thought process because is your driving of the rode your seat will virbate telling you your off the road. also it tells you when you need to get back in your lane when you are driving. this will reduce car crashes because it helps indacte where you are driving.\n\nlastley the camera and the beeping noise the car will make helps you move out the way. the sensor tells you when you are too close to a dangerous object so you should stop.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, due to technology and science development, the role of computers in our lives is more prominent than ever. Day by day, we see more humans vocational positions that are replaced by robots and computers. However, I believe, while this trend has brought us many benefits, due to inaccuracy and instability of computers, they can cause many negative consequences in our lives.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, even with the enormous advancement in computer sciences, the result can lead to poor performance and critical issues. These modern tools still are not able to perform some delicate jobs as accurate as of the humankind. In recent decades, scientists have done their best to utilize robots in jobs such as performing microsurgeries, but are not always successful. Not only robots failed in many cases, but they also caused unfixable outcomes for the users. For example, one of the most famous computer failure cases occurred in Shiraz Hospital in 2002, which ended up into casualty of a patient. This patient was prepared to undergo a simple appendicitis surgery with the aid of a highly advanced robot. However, because the virtual surgeon performed a wrong action, it cut one of the patient's main arteries and caused death. Examples like this prove that the adverse consequences of using computers for sensible jobs could be disastrous. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, computers are vulnerable to many threats which can disrupt their function. In other words, the more smart they become, the more faulty they can function. As IT scientists discover novel methods of utilizing computers in people's work, malware programmers also publish viruses and spyware which have the potentials to completely shut down the entire global computer systems. A salient example here is the \"CryptoWall\" ransomware made by an unknown team in 2014. The trojan they made, targeted financial institutes by hacking their clients' accounts, and encrypting their information into nonsense codes unreadable by these institutes. This malware caused a significant problem for both clients and corporations and have not been solved unless the large banks were forced to pay a considerable amount of cash, as a ransom to the hackers. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, using computers in our daily lives seems inevitable. However, there are occasions that these machines cause major issues, instead of helping us. Therefore, these failures make them not to be reliable tools in every job.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The world is moving towards consuming electronic media when it comes to entertainment. A few pupils entrust that the hours spent by children playing electronic games can be beneficial to them, while another group believe that it's not worth the child's time. This essay will discuss how a child benefits from gaming electronically of being socially exposed to a larger like-minded fraternity, and also highlight the negative effects such as being scammed and going into depression because of the same.\r\n\r\nThe world of gaming is globally interconnected. Firstly, the gamer has the advantage of interacting and making friends who have the same taste in gaming from different countries. Secondly, the chance of playing them with people across the globe adds to the overall gaming experience. For instance, three out of the top ten players in PUBG hail from India. Moreover, there have been gatherings where all the players get together as a group and travel together as well. Gaming as an activity is no more limited to a TV and a friend.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are a few negatives to the trend of playing online. Individuals get scammed on a daily basis in different parts of the world. Moreover, failing at competition has led people entering severe depression. For example, clicking on links which lead you to compromising your personal details. Furthermore, there have been more than 89 cases of clinical depression because of losing at games in India. One needs to be aware of what they're involving themselves into and to what level.\r\n\r\nTo summarise, the phenomena of digital games are an ever growing industry and has its upsides and downsides. In my opinion, parents of children need to monitor their daily consumption of gaming and need to have specific control over the hours spent to avoid hassles in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Mona Lisa is a very impressive mix of emotions painted by the human artist Leonardo Da Vinci. However, is using a computer program that uses coding to analyze someone's feelings effective? There are two sides to every story, sometimes one may sound good, while the other bad; other times, we may see ourselves approaching both sides and seeing the pros and cons of each. Having a computer read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom can be both effective, and ineffective for several different reasons. Some of these reasons may include: emotional state, lesson planning, facial structure, critical thinking, puberty, and more.\n\nThe emotional state of most kids in school can vary on a day to day basis. Not every kid is always happy, and not every kid is always sad. By having a computer that can read and detect emotions, people might not feel the need to try and read each other's emotion. This would lessen their contact with their peers and lessen their ability to comprehending and understand other people's emotions and situations. Teachers might also worry if they detect that a student is sad, or angry.\n\nOn the other hand, having a machine that can detect emotions may be helpful to some students. As stated in the article, If most, or all, of the class is confused, this machine would help the teacher detect the confusion and help him or her explain in a way that the student's can understand. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" In this quote, we see how this computer could help adapt a better lesson plan for confused or uninterested students. If a student is depressed, anxious, or something of the like; the teacher can pull them off to the side and send them to a counselor to talk about it and help them feel better. However, we may wonder if the student is actually feeling this way.\n\nIf a technology like this is used, it will obviously have loads of coding in it. Sometimes there can be flaws in coding, or someone that can hack into it and change it. To have such a sensitive thing in a classroom may be dangerous for some students. Another point is that not everyone has the same facial structure. Some people even have deformities or problems that make their appearance different than other people's. If this is the case, how would the program know to seperate these people with the facial recognition of everyone else? People express themselves differently, and most have different facial expressions, if people begin to depend on a computer to detect emotions, how will they be able to identify different emotions themselves?\n\nThis leads to the point of critical thinking. As stated previously, students who rely on a program to detect their classmate's feelings may not try to interpret these feelings themselves. These students would go off into the real world without knowing how to identify if someone is feeling angry, sad, annoyed, or more. This lessons their social and critical thinking skills that are needed in day to day life. Perhaps this program could work on kids of certain age groups instead of every classroom.\n\nIn late middleschool and early highschool, most kids are turning into teenagers. This means that they start going through puberty. Puberty is a stage in life where kids start \"growing up\" and maturing. Mood swings are constant, as well as several other feeling and emotions that are caused by hormones in their bodies. In a classroom full of teengers going through hormonal changes all at once, the computer may detect many negative emotions, or mix of several different emotions that are caused by mood swings. Teachers may again become worried if their students are all anxious, sad, annoyed, bored, etc.. There are many other reasons as to why this machine might be useful and why it may not.\n\nThese are some of things that can be positive or negative about a system that can detect emotions in a classroom. There are definitely many more which could be debated back and forth. In my personal opinion, I do not think schools need a machine that detects emotions. I feel that it is creepy, and instead of showing my emotions, I would try to conceal them from everyone. If I feel this way, how would millions of others feel? The emotional state, lesson planning, facial structure, critical thinking, puberty, are all things that are factors of, or may be affected by this machine. Some are positive, some are not so positive. All in all, if this were to ever come to our schools, we would need a long and difficult discussion to put an end to the debate.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author argues the point that exploring Venus is worth the effort and risks exhibited. The author claims that, despite the harsh conditions and deadly atmosphere, this planet is worth travelling to and observing, due to its being the \"nearest option for a planetary visit\". While the author does list a few good reasons for Venus exploration, it is my belief that they also include many reasons not to explore this dangerous planet. This inclusion of the \"cons\" of exploration hurts the thesis more than it helps it, and damages the authors argument.\n\nFrom the beginning of their argument, the author states that \"no spacecraft survived the landing [on Venus] for more than a few hours\" and that \"not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades\". The usage of these statements creates a negative image, which can lead readers to believe that the exploration of Venus is too dangerous to enagage in. Furthermore, the author uses facts intended to continue to convince readers that Venus is dangerous, when this is exactly the opposite of what the author is arguing for. Making statements which invoke fear or apprehension only pushes the reader away from the topic, instead of influencing him or her to gain interest in it. For instance, when the author uses phrases with negative connotations, such as \"thick atmosphere\", \"corosive sulfuric acid\", \"800 degrees Fahrenheit\", and \"extreme\", they influence readers negatively as well.\n\nSimilarly, the author provides little reasoning behind the belief that humanity should explore the planet Venus. Despite claiming that \"Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit\", there is little evidence given that exploring and observing Venus would be of much benefit. In fact, the author seems to have found more evidence against Venus exploration, as the prior paragraph (which listed reasons that Venus was dangerous) was much more explicit and detailed than paragraph 3. The negatives of exploring Venus (such as death and wasted money or time) seem to far outweigh the positives.\n\nAs the author continues with their argument, readers become increasingly aware that Venus is likely not as beneficial as the author intends to make it seem. With an unlivable biome and dangerous atmospheric conditions, Venus is likely far too hazardous to explore at this time in history, and I believe that the author of this article unwittingly proved so. For these reasons, I believe that the author of this article failed to support their thesis with thorough evidence or detail.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article about driverless cars, it talks about how driverless cars can help people. But can they? Driverless cars can be very dangerous in some ways. People can fall asleep just as easily as driving a normal car. They fall asleep in these driverless cars because they think \"Oh it's in control, I can snooze for a bit.\" When no, you can't. You have to be alert at all times. In paragraphs 7-10 it talks about how authorities and the law are getting involved with these driverless cars ideas. If the law doesn't approve of the driverless cars ideas it's beacuse they are aware of the people and children walking across the streets or crossing roads. If the driver in the driverless car isn't paying attention to the pedestrians, the car might not stop in time for the driver to take control.\n\nDriverless cars do have benefits though. It does help alert the driver with any dangers up ahead or construction up ahead and has the driver take the wheel. But like what is said before, there are still some issues. Driverless cars cannot navigate on its own, you have to steer and be in control at all times if you want to get somewhere. The car isn't Knight Rider. We still have to pay attention to the car and its surroundings and one day, it might be too late, and you crash because you couldn't get ahold of the wheel because the car wouldn't shift it to you. In paragraphs 4-6 it talks about sensors in the cars, which is a good thing, but they could malfunction and then you're messed up from then on. The sensors help to alert the driver with anything that is out of its control. But it still can't navigate and that isn't very helpful, now is it? These are reasons the cars can be dangerous.\n\nSo in conclusion, driverless cars aren't all that great. They still have faults and could easily malfunction and then you don't have any control over the car anymore. These cars are not safe for anyone, and a drunk driver could easily take advantage of that. No car is going to be perfect, it'll still have dents and scratches in the long run and just like any other, it willeventually crash. Drivers need to be aware of these cons instead of focussing on the pros. Because no car will be perfect nor will it fully develop to drive on its own. It's not a living thing, its a machine for transport. Try focussing on what could go bad, before you get behind that driverless car and find out in the long run. Are \"Driverless cars\" really driverless? Think about it before you buy one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The girl says going take test Hibiscus blooms shows misses country still wants connected somehow When takes test plant blooms like support country The plant symbolic progress growth like plant When first got wast ready go things still hadnt adapted lutlly environment like hypiscus wast adapted wather wait till bloom", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This will be about my opinions and what I think on the matter of driverless cars.\n\nI will explain why I think like I do too.\n\nI think you will agree with me.\n\nI think driverless cars would be good and nice.\n\nSome computers can detect danger faster than the human eye can catch, or the human mind to comprehend.\n\nFor example if a small animal runs in front of your car you may hit it due to you driving so fast, and the sudden relization that an animal just ran out in front of your car.\n\nAnother plus of driverless cars are you are less likely to get injured due to the computer inside your car.\n\nFor example, say you are driving and you are extremely tired from a long days work.\n\nIf you fall aslepp at the wheel, the car will stop due to your hands no longer on the wheel of the car, resulting in a safe stop.\n\nThis is my opinion on why driverless cars would be safer. There are many dangers as well, but I belive the pros outweigh the cons in this situation.\n\nI hope the reader of this will belive the same way after reading what I just typed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the author should further his study because of the things that they already predicted used to be on Venus and the things that are now there. They've said that Venus is a sister planet to Earth, so I think that it strongly is possible that there was life and lots of other thing on Venus. If there wasn't life there then they could've had the chance of having life there if Earth were to end.\n\nIn the passage it says \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters\". Venus having things like that are the exact reason that Venus should be explored. Getting to Venus might be a tough thing though. This passage also states that \"no spacecraft the landing for more than a few hours.\" So getting to Venus will be one dangeroud yet good trips to take.\n\nWhile traveling to Venus could be very risky and dangerous imagine the experience you'll get. Traveling to Venus wouldn't be like going to Italy, it's a better chance to see something new. Scientist are actually speaking about visits to the planet in the future, because Venus is closer to the sun it'll be really hot there, so hopefully scientist can figure that out. That could possibly be a huge part of why no spacecraft has yet to land there.\n\nSo that people can go and explore Venus, NASA is working on new ways to go and study Venus. They're looking into old technology from World War ll. NASA says that our modern computers are a lot more delicate than computers from back in those times. So basically a mixture of the old technology from the 40's and modern day technology could possibly help us travel to Venus.\n\nI do think that traveling to Venus would be a could be something new for us, we have lots of things to work on of course before setting off to Venus. If there are mountains and valley's and all other things like that, I think that's it's worth giving a shot.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars should not be in our future nor should it even be a choice. I dont think driverless cars should be a thing we start to do because this will only cause problems in the law, letting people think that its okay to drive while texting or talking on the phone. My side of the argument comes with many reasons on why i think we should be allowed to have driverless cars.\n\nDriverless cars are an excuse to be able to be on our phones while in the drivers seat. This will not show teenagers that they need to get off their phones and actully pay attention on what they are doing. In the article it states that the car will need to have a special touch sensor to make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel, this clearly states that driver shouldnt even be allowed to be doing anything but paying attention to the road because while driving anything can happen or even pop up and if you were on the phone it would have been too late.\n\nSecondly, these cars are making the law change or add new laws. The cars will only create many problems becasue someone decide to check their phone, and then all of a sudden something okay, not too good, or something really bad. The article about this topic syas that they only want to keep helping the money and use it all for ourselves.\n\nThirdly, the cars are only wasting money on trying to firgure out how to or making it. Driverless cars will redcue jobs for many people, There will be no more taxis or Uber. The processs of the driverless car is that they have to buy new parts somene who they know how cooler or worth the look.\n\nIn conculsion i think that the driverless care is not safe becausee it shows that the teeacher, it will cause my entire life, and it waste money and time on something so dumb and wating money. These reason why i think that its bad is because it bothers you that me and isaav sare really close!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are not safe enough to be out in public traffic. Even if companies such as google and BMW perfect the technology to run these cars, there are still major saftey issues when regarding for the saftey of the public.\n\nDriverless cars aim to be able to drive themselves with little assistance from the owner. While driverless cars alert the driver when it is in a situation it can not handle on its own, it may not be enough to bring the driver to attention. Since the driver may not have to take control for lengthy amounts of time when on roads such as a highway, they are at risk of getting tired and falling asleep. If the driver is asleep when the car needs assistance, the car will not know what to do and possibly do serious damage to another car or even the other driver. While the article states that manufacturers are considering a camera to watch the driver to make sure they are focused on the road, that will not help if it is dark or if the driver has sun glasses on. Computers fail all of the time, and putting more of them in to something with the power to seriously hurt another induvidual is asking for trouble. If something such as the 3D mapping sensors or the speed control unit failed, then it hightens the possibility of an accident. The car may fail to see someone or stop tracking the road, it can hit someone in the behind or in the side. Driverless cars are just too dangerous to be in the public.\n\nDriverless cars have many saftey features such as cameras and sensors. Driverless cars have proximity sensors to detect when it gets to close to something such as a person or another car. If it gets to close to an object, it will engage the breaks and stop the car. Self driving cars can maintain its own speed making sure it does not speed up or slow down when driving itself. Some driverless cars even have 3D mapping systems to get a 360 view of its surroundings to make sure it does not hit another object and keep it in the lines of the road. If the car is in a situation it can not handle on its own, it will alert the driver to take control to continue driving. These features keep the driver and the surrounding population safe.\n\nWhile driverless cars do have many saftey features such as cameras and sensors, these can fail by an electrical disfunction or simply by being covered by mud, water, or dense fog. The 3D mapping system however, makes the driverless car completely safe by maping out its surroundings and tracking road barriers, right? When going at high speeds on roads such as highways, the sensors may not react fast enough if a car cuts the driverless car off or if you just happen to hit a sharp turn. If the car is in a situation such as to fast of a turn, it will alert the driver to take control. If the driver fell asleep during the driver, then there is no physical person to take over. This can lead to wrecks hurting the other car or even the driver.\n\nWith these conflicts, driverless cars are not safe enough to be in the public. Computers fail all of the time and drivers may fall sleep leaving the car to do all of the work. Because of these reasons, driverless cars are not safe enough and delvelpment of such cars should not progress in development.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, a certain segment of individuals think that art is an essential subject for children at school. While others think it is a waste of time. In my opinion, learning something new and exciting for children is a productive approach. This essay will discuss both sides.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, Art is a skill that involves expression and imagination resulting in an amazing product. Many people think it is an essential subject for children at school. First, art was founded million years ago, with many historical references. For example the pyramids in Egypt. This indicatesand represents several skills and expressions. It is an important subject for everyone, adults and young. Second, It has different forms such as drawing, dancing, and filmmaking. Children at school will get motivated to learn about all of these exciting varieties. Third, young people are the new promise generation. The more they are educated, the more they will likely become successful adults with optimum dreams.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people hold their own thoughts, by saying and stating that art is a waste of time. Part of society thinks that instead of studying art they should study proper educational subjects like, science, and math. Therefore, many parents came from different cultures and different beliefs.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, art may be an important subject to some, however, it may not mean anything to others. In my opinion, children must learn about everything that is useful . Sustainable development of education and the variety of subjects will improve the students, beginning with them and continuing throughout society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued by some people that children should be responsible for their offences. However, others believe that the parents of these children should be punished. I tend to be in favour of the latter opinion and in this essay I will explore both views and explain my point of view.\r\n\r\nIt is obvious that everybody should be accountable for their own behaviour and should be penalized in case of their wrongdoing. However, we could be in a dilemma when crimes are made by children. On the one hand, if children commit crimes they should be punished because it is likely to prevent them from the next offences. On the contrary, if children avoid penalties, they would not be able to realize the full severeness of this issue and its consequences. Undoubtedly, the main purpose of punishment is to demonstrate that you will be punished in case of your perpetration. While exemption from punishment would lead to children repeating crimes.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, children are not adults, and perhaps they do not understand the full seriousness of wrong behaviour. I'm sure that parents are completely responsible for their children in terms of their upbringing as well as their behaviour. For example, when a child steals a cellphone from his classmate, it is likely the parents of this child failed to explain to them that theft is extremelly wrong behaviour and this would lead them to prison. Moreover, when parents get out of touch with their children, or even worse, set an example of wrong behaviour, it is clear that they should have carry full responsibility for themselves and for their children.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while children should realize all repercussions of their offences, nonetheless, the ultimate responsibility for kids' wrongdoing lies with their parents, which were not able to teach their children the right behaviour and to prevent crimes committed by them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sometimes in orbit we are closer to Venus instead of Mars, Venus is sometimes called Earths twin. They are similar in size and density but unlike the Earth, Venus is alot harder to study. A thick layer of carbon dioxide covers 97% of Venus, to add to that Venus has clouds that have highly corrosive sulfuric acid. On the surface of Venus the tempature reaches 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times more then our own planet. The pressure would even crush a submarine accoustumed to deep water diving. Venus has the hottest surface tempature even though Mercury is closer to the sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather add addition impediments like volcanos erupting, massive earthquakes, and lightning strikes that strike probes that land on the surface.\n\nWhy do scientists try so hard even though the planet in inhospitable? Astronomers are fascinated by it because\n\nit might have been the most Earth like planet in our solar system. Some time ago, Venus was covered with oceans and could've supported many life forms like Earth today. Venus has many feature that are analogous to Earth, the planet has a sediment filled surface. It includes features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Venus can be our nearest option of planetary visit, the vslue of returning to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the options of making it safe and a scientific discocvery?\n\nThe National Areonautics and Space Administation (NASA) has a compelling idea to send humans to Venus.\n\nNASA's idea is to use a blimp like vehicle to float 30 miles above Venus's surface. As the blimp like vehicle floated above Venus's atmosphere we'd be able to avoid the unfriendly ground conditions. Even 30 miles above the surface the tempature would still be a hot 170 degrees, but the air pressure would be like the Earths oceans. Solar energy would be plentiful and the radiation would not exceed Earth levels, these conditons would not be easy to live in but humans would be able to survive.\n\nPeering at Venus from a ship orbiting or safely hovering above the atmosphere would not have good insight. Most forms of light cannot pierce the thick dense atmosphere of Venus. More importantly the scientists cannot take samples of rocks and gas from a distance, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission and they'd need to get up close and personal despite the risks of the atmosphere and heat. Many researchers are working on innovations that could benefit us the time to look on Venus for a longer time period.\n\nNASA is working on other approaches for studying Venus,\n\nsimplified electronics made from silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating Venus's chaotic atmosphere. They have lasted 3 weeks at a time, they're doing another project with old technology called mechanical computers, these machines make calculations from using gears and levers and use no electronics at all. Modern computers are super powerful, flexible, and quick the only problem is that they tend to be quite delicate than older computers when it comes to extreme conditions. Imagine exposing a phone to acid or heat able to melt tin. Systems that are made from mechanicle parts are more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\n\nThe challenge of Venus has value, it has insight of the planet its self, but human curiousity will lead us into equally intimidating endavours. The travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by danger and doubts, but should be expanded to meet the vary edges of our imagination and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In concluding statement Saeng states when come back In spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again The author concludes story passage using hibiscus example survival The hibiscus isfrom another place like using represent well new place In way saying If hibiscus survives winter I I believe uses conclusion depict unsure nature towards new home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As climate change shows its effect massively in recent years, people starts to argue that we can find a way to live with it. I totally disagree with this opinion, we do have some time to prevent the effect to get worse, but we will not be able to live with it if we still live the same way as we did recently.\n\nThere are numerous steps that we could take to prevent climate change, individually or with the help of the government. First, we indeed should start to change our lifestyle to be green people. If doing 3R (reduce, reuse, recycle) seems complicated, we can contribute by using the “less” formula. For example, use less plastic, buy fewer clothes, or earn less waste. Secondly, government and employers could start their action by introducing a new green movement law. Such as ruling the companies to reduce carbon dioxide emissions to tackle the global warming to get worse. Furthermore, citizens could also contribute by selecting the company that has already started their green movement and choosing them only.\n\nOn another hand, without doing any actions, it will be nearly impossible to live with the effect of climate change. There will be various disasters that may happen in the next 20 years if we do not change our lifestyle. For example, the increased sea level will cause flooding for some cities around the world, and one of them must be Jakarta. I strongly believe that everyone will be struggling to live in the flood for a long period of time. Consequently, the possibility to suffer during the disaster is massive rather than living a new lifestyle sooner. \n\nIn conclusion, it is clear to me that we should start the actions to tackle climate change rather than living with it without doing anything.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, schools have focus on more subjects than the past such as cooking lesson or learning how to make a dress. Some parents might think that these skills could be able to learned outsite of school. In my opinion, I disagree with it as if the students enjoy to learned about cooking more than math, it would be perfect for them to join cooking class.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some feel that the optimal solution to the current environmental crisis is to raise fuel costs for various private vehicles. In my opinion, though this would have a tangible impact, a more holistic approach is advisable.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, increasing the price of fuel would have a clearly identifiable impact. In both developing and developed countries, private vehicles are becoming more common. More expensive fuel costs would discourage individuals from taking long trips and encourage them to seek alternative modes of transport such as walking, riding a bicycle, sharing transportation, and using public transportation. The average family that struggles to pay their bills every month might then decide to stay home rather than take a short trip on weekends if the cost of travel outweighs the potential enjoyment. Governments would be able to clearly chart the effects produced by these taxes and adjust them accordingly.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, a wide variety of measures that do not target less affluent segments of society would have a greater effect. A single remedy is unlikely to produce the desired result as the majority of middle and upper-class citizens would not be deterred by minor taxes. Instead, the ministry should consider all the relevant environmental issues ranging from deforestation and single-use plastics to fossil fuel consumption in industry and the methane released in factory farming. To truly and sustainably counter these issues, authorities will need to employ a variety of tactics that will likely include not only taxes but also regulations and various educational initiatives. The tackling of a single cause, such as the fuel used in private vehicles, will have a marginal impact at best.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite the tangible results that a tax might engender, states should opt for a more comprehensive environmental policy. This is a pressing issue and requires a nuanced, long-term approach.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship contraversal topic Some believe necessary others would disagree My personal opinion would censorship necessary Everyone entitles believe others maturity accept Censorship necessary offended material nt read listen It simple Everyone offended something everything removed found offensive someone would nothing left If things organized sections stated offensive material likely almost everything would offensive section Because censorship contraversal many different thoughts subject It ranges censorship complete censorship view one many Censorship truely matter maturity person goes dealing material The person let offened therefore censorship necessary library people need mature", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, due to the development in science and technology, expolring the remote natural places has become available. Exploring is what scientists and tourists are always like and eager to do because, invariably, unknown keeps an attraction of mystery. However, there are pros and cons in travelling to remote natural environment.\nAs far as we know, the improvement in science and progress in technology always comes from exploring the unknown destinations. Travelling to a remote natural environment, take the South Pole for example, can conduct many research which cannot be done in common places. These kinds of research is helpful in Biology and in finding the origin of human being. The second biggest advantage is that it can improve the tourism in its local area, and tourism means a better condition for local people. In the past, in some remote places of China without torism, the native people there had a poor sanitory condition and after the arrivals of travellers, people there can earn a living and improve their living conditions.\nHowever, everything in the world has its donwside. The activities in scientific research and commerce will cause contalmination to the environment in remote places. For instance, the constructions of the scientific stations have occupied the places where many wild animals there used to call home. There is no doubt that such activities will lead to a decrease in the number of these animals which will also influent the local ecosystem.\nTo sum up, the travel to remote natural environment will not only help to improve the development of science but also help with the local tourism, but the disadvantage is that these activities will cause damages to the local environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In experience music offensive They use words heard certain people especially certain ages Even magazines things way inappropriate people Some movies put days horrifying see The fact put things library shocks greatly One day I babysitting little girl I taken library There shelf put player It making sexual references many curse words I mortified little girl hear words young age As soon I put ear head phones I turned immediately They really watch music put put public I nt might picked words I nt think would want anyone listening kind language age really It disciminates woman gives young children ideas heads sexual activities One thing put libraries nt agree magazines little mature I went library one day friend mine picked magazine I flipping around I saw revealing pictures I thinking CAPS yooung cjild picked magazine one looking That would horrible experience young child I ve read somewhere things children see young age great effect become If true I certainly thing censor public libraries careful take children library We make sure next generation nt see certain things We also monitor movies watch keep close eye things read", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today, we depend on cars for transportation. We never consider walking or taking a bus until we realize it's our only option. As teenagers we use cars as a gateway to independence and freedom. Little do we know that there are many advantages to the limiting of car usage. Advantages to these limitations are it's better for the environmemnt, it provides a safer city, and it helps financially.\n\nCreating a better environment starts with the decisions we make. When we decide to take our cars for a 2 mile trip, that could be walked, we are polluting the air in our city. For example, source 2 explains that the air in Paris became highly polluted due to the overuse of automobiles. \"Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city\". One day motorists with even-numbered plates would leave their cars home and the following day people with odd-numbered plates would do the same. This decreased the amount of congestion by sixty percent within five days. Source 1 states that cars are responsible for twelve percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up to fifty percent in the United States. Source 3 states that in Bogota, Colombia, after their Day Without Cars, parks and sports centers flourished throughout the city and uneven sidewalks were repaved to make them more smooth and broad. The avoidance of car usage can improve our environment dramatically.\n\nSafety is a very important factor in our lives. Often times our safety is put at risk when we are in a car and we don't realize it. Without the use of cars, we wouldn't have to worry about car accidents, traffic jams, etc.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I agree with the use of a machine to express emotion. Like how the machine was able to decifer thye face of a famous painting called, \" Mona Lisa.\" This machine might be able to produce some benefits in real life. Reasons why, is not that many people can tell if a person is sad or happy. Like if a person was crying, some would presume it was sadness. When in reality it could be tears of joy,\n\nAnd even the slightest face expression like a light smirk, can be explained by this machine for the use of its comparison to a straight face. It could explain to us how much emotion the person is feeling by percentages, which could give us a better understanding on how they truly feel. Using this type of technology could help the society know more on emotions, and be able to help us have a better understanding on what others may feel. Which makes this thechnology valuable to other students in classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The task trying allow dirigibles dock ft round city New York shockingly posted obstacles builders Empire State BuildingBefore dirigibles could even try dock mast builders modify whole building due stress pressure building dirigibles The modifications cost sixty thousand dollars strengthen building builders finally modifications building done faced whole new set obstacles Most dirigibles united states filled flammable hydrogen The german dirigible destroyed fire New Jersey This accident worried Also faced problems shifting winds air currents made difficult dock dirigibles Another obstacle fact laws existed airships flying low ground Due unforeseen obstacles idea docking top building disappeared", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I personally think books music movies magazines removed shelves found offensive However I believe way protect adolescent stilldeveloping children reading books offend introduce new concepts ideas hinder educational growth Some kids properly educated controvercial topic drugs alcohol make bad decision based something reads book webpage To help solve problem offending children deterring education I propose make book rating system Similar rating movie video game system would rate book readers know age level book apropriate state factors book incorporates rate way As newpaper company obviously know We One freedom speech along freedom press With said I think taking books labeled inappropriate shelves reasonable solution issue I know personal experience someone tries take away I m entitled I get extremely angry Authors editors photographers publishers go lot hard work long hours put books shelves By taking books shelves I believe would repressing I know I author book taken shelf someone found inapppropriate I would upset Taking books shelves could possibly cause author s strike protest books allowed enjoyed anyone wishes read However like I mentioned second paragraph I think making rating system books good idea allows authors express fully also allows readers know controvercial material book without affected information would read without warning I would strongly advise consider proposal potential prevent future confrontations authors public", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In several nations, the amount of citizens who are curious about the history of their accommodations is increasing. One of the reasons for this is that people value the story of objects rather than mere ownership. To know more about the story of their home, they can simply ask their neighbours. \r\n\r\nSince the past, society have loved to know the history behind certain things, including buildings. Therefore, they want to know what exactly happened with the building and its surroundings. In addition, certain beliefs even value such information greater. For example, the Fengshui method from Chinese culture wants to know exactly why such a building and its room were built in that manner. If the result was against their customs, they would'nt hesitate to move out and find a better area to live according to Fengshui. \r\n\r\nIn order to get information about the history of their house, they need to talk with people around them who already lived there earlier. Moreover, it is obvious that the longer they live in a certain place, the more knowledgeable they are on telling what has been changed about the place. For instance, in Indonesia, every living quarter has its own \"leader\" which constantly pass his knowledge about their environment to his descendants. Therefore, this leader knows best the history of certain buildings and their proximities. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is undoubtedly that people in some countries want to know the past story of their living place. This happens because they value storytelling in each aspect of their life, including their building. To get information regarding its story, they can ask their neighbours, especially the elders or their descendants.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In short story Winter Hibiscus young girl named Saeng moves away home This short story girl trying adapt new lifestyle changes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood good happy In artical mood peaceful positive It s secsesful mood also greatfull greatful everything", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Apparently, there are many natural disasters happening around the world as the consequence of climate change. Some people suggest that global warming should be tried to itcombat, whereas others think people should accept the current fact and adapt to changes. In the following paragraphs, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before a conclusion is reached.\r\n\r\nMany activists around the world try to urge people to stop behaviours that cause the greenhouse effect. Many people contribute to find strategies to mitigate climate change; however, this is unable to be successful without governments’ support ; therefore, governments need to deliver effective climate policies such as carbon footprint reduction, clean energy, sustainable lifestyle and so on to all organisations, factories and individuals to be able to follow them in order to prevent the increase of the worse situations.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people think that climate change is acceptable and people should be adaptable to all kinds of situations. In the last few decades, there were different natural disasters happened in different parts of the world such as floods, sea-level rise, the melting of the polar ice sheet, droughts, extreme weather and earthquake which are the effects of global warming that cannot be avoided to encounter in some countries. For example, Japan is a country that earthquakes occur the most, however, Japanese people still live in their country and learn how to live with it. In addition, their houses and buildings have been built with resilient structures to withstand earthquakes.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people should be adaptable to unexpected natural disasters, in a meantime, climate change cannot be ignored and allowed to get worse in the future by human behaviours. Both government and individuals should take actions to tackle this problem and mitigate carbon emissions to order to make our world the best place to live.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the electoral college should stay, because the electoral college is a process that with help our country and future problems. most states have a winner-take-all system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate. After the presidential election, the governor prepares a certificate of ascertainment listing all of the candidates who ran for president in the state along with the names of their respective electors. the state's certificates of ascertainments are sent to the congress and the national archives as part of the official records of the presidential election.\n\nThe electoral college consists of 538 electors. each candidate running for president in the state has his or her own group of electors. the electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their resonsibilities are. The founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by vote for president and vice president, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress.\n\nthe electroal college is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. when you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. Each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee and that trust is rarely betrayed, however it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can anyone really tell what someone is feeling?\n\nAccording to the new software called the Facial Action Coding System, it can.\n\nIn the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author describes a new system that can percieve the emotions of others.\n\nOne of the benefits of this new software was that it could modify a lesson to a specific student if he or she becomes confused or bored.\n\nBut having that software in a classroom is not valuable because life in the future will not adjust to one's emotions that simply and students may take advantage of it.\n\nNot all students are truthful.\n\nAlthough having the Facial Action Coding System has its benefits, students may take advantage of that feature.\n\nStudents could decieve the software by looking confused or bored just to stop doing the lesson or question.\n\nIn the article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author states, \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only express emotions, but may also help produce them.\"\n\nThis is essentially saying that if one smiles when they're not happy, that smile may aid in actually making the person happy.\n\nBut does that not mean that a student could give a false emotion just to get an easier lesson?\n\nIf a student is being lazy and does not wanna do a lesson, he or she could just make a confused or bored face and have it switch to something easier or more fun.\n\nThe student could possibly become more confused or bored also based on the claim from the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion.\n\nThe student may not put as much effort into his or her work knowing that the lesson will change at the look of his or her's face.\n\nSome may say that this technology is perfect for classrooms and that it can adjust to certain student's learning capabilities.\n\nWhile it is quite amazing that a piece of technology could read humans' faces and modify anything taught or played, not everything in this world will modify itself to someone's feelings.\n\nAfter a student finishes school, future jobs or sitiuations will not change to please a person's emotions.\n\nThis could give children a false example of future life after school.\n\nThis specific technology is not perfect for classrooms.\n\nStudents could fool the software with false emotions.\n\nAlso having something adjust to one's own expressions and emotions is not that easy in future situations.\n\nAlthough this system is not at all useless, it is not very valuable in a classrom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For the past 25 years their has been a face that has cause the people here at NASA to go head over hills for, \"The Face of Mars\", thsi was first founded in 1976 when a space shuttle caught in a photograph, then it was retaken in 2001 were the face was still there when our fellow astronauts went to Mars and saw it their self. Us here at NASA were very pleased to go to Mars and find out about this face in this so called \"lifeless planet\" that face gave us a clue that their might be life on the planet. Our question is how did it get there, we here at NASA think it had appered threw alien life form but we nto yet have evidence that this hypothoeis is true.We can investiage this by sending one of the best astronauts in space to Mars so that they can see if any unknown alien life forms may be living on Mars, when we get our results we will inform you all. If we dont find any life on the Red Planet then we will let the news stations know then we have to do more reserch on how this \"face\" on Mars came about which might take a couple of months maybe years but we shall find tou how this face came upon planet Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced obstacles attempt allow dirigible dock In paragraph shows obstacle builders spaced The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature This wind The wind would shift due violent air currents", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In modern times “education” is something unseparable from children’s life. It can be case that children may enjoy their educational activities. However , children used to tired with educational activities and they transfer their attention to other activities for leisure time. It is completely acceptable and reasonable.\n \nFirstly,\n \nNot every child in the world has same habits and hobbies. Children are suppose to enjoy their childhood, in our society education is must nonetheless education can also be stressful for children.\nSecondly,\nFun time is something related to getting rid of stress and regain the energy for work. If children are suppose to do same as they do whole day in their free time. There are possibilities they may lose energy, concentration and capacity. As a result the main purpose of fun activities is destroyed.\n \nIf students do they what they please to do in leisure time, it can reduce burden. Being timepassed it is also possible to transfer their hobby into a successful career. Even though it may not be concerted into career it can have a vast effect in student’s educational profile.\n \nIn this world every kind of talent is needed like we need singer, painter, artist, businessmen and science. If every child in the world will aim to be scientist what we will do with so many “Einstein”?\n \nSo in my opinion let leisure time be meaningful and worthwhile, it is advisable that parents should not interfere in children’s play time until it is harmful and let them enjoy their precious time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"Seagoing Cowboys\" Program.\n\nLuke's participation in the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" program allows him to experience adventures and visit many unique places. I think many of you should join this program. Here are my reasons why you should join this program: you can save someone,you get a nice experience by traveling to different countries, and when your done doing your job you can hangout with the other cowboys.\n\nMy first reason is that you can save someone. You can save a life since the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" program is all about taking care of horses,young cows, and mules ,and shipping them overseas to other countries to help people out. Luke knew if he signed up he can help rescue people in trouble. Think about it for a second. You can also help save someone who has suffered because of the war.\n\nMy second reason is that you can get a unique experience. Have you ever wanted to travel to China or Europe? Well you can if you join this program since the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" program travels to many places to ship animals. Luke got to experience China,Europe, but seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special to him. Luke also taked a gondola ride in Venice,Italy, a city with streets of water. Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China. You can get a one of a kind experience from this.\n\nMy third reason is that when you are done with your job you can just relax. Also you can go play with the other cowboys sports in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Luke had found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. It is not all about doing work there is some fun in it too.\n\nIn conclusion, these are my reasons on why you should join this program. You can get a good experience if you join this program. Bieng a Seagoing Copwboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger. It opened up the world for him. \"I am grateful for the opportunity,\" he says. It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\" he says. That awarness stayed with him, leading his family to host a number of international students, and exchange visitors for many years. I hope my essay has persuaded you to join this program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In short passage discusses architects want build mooring mast Empire State Building state New York This mast would dock dirigibles modern day re called blimps The mooring mast skinny tower top Empire State Building dock Dirigibles Empire State Building stands feet tall without mooring mast peakThe stress dirigible mooring mast feet lot weight high structure They put modifications deal base area buildingAn important downfall dirigibles helium re flammable could cost several millions damage If zeppelin caught flame densely populated land area could take large amount livesI think mooring mast great idea helped building tallest building one time They still use mooring mast today", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This country is built on democracy, the idea that all of its citezens have rights and a say in how the country is run. The Electoral College takes away the peoples vote, because in an election, the eligable citezens vote for a candidate, but in reality they are voting for a group of electors who will then vote for the candidate. I believe this is unfair and that the Electoral College should be removed from the country's government.\n\nThe first flaw with the Electoral College is that voters cannot directly vote for their favorite candidate. In\n\nSource #2 paragraph 10 , it says; \"\n\n... voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\n\n\" If citezens of the United States can't vote for thir own president directly then it takes some of the democracy out of the country. It rarely happens but the electors don't always vote for the candidate with the most popular vote, they can vote for whoever they want, if they really wanted to. This is just one reason I think the Electoral College should be removed, and replaced by a popular vote.\n\nMy next reason for replacing the Electoral College with a popular vote is that a tie in the Electoral College is possible. In\n\nSource #3 paragraph 18 , it says; \"\n\nA tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible because the total number of votes-538-is an even number...\n\n\" If a tie occurs then the vote goes to the House of Representatives, but how will they know the feelings of voters if they vote one party for Congress, and another party for president?\n\nMy final reason to get rid of the Electoral College is that a candidate can win the popular vote, but lose the election. In\n\nSource #2 paragraph 9 , it says; \"...\n\nAl Gore- thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the poular vote but lost the presidency...\n\n\" If the people's favorite candidate wins the popular vote, a vote representing the country's citezens, but loses the election because of the Electoral College then the system is unfair to voters.\n\nPeople supporting the Electoral College may say like in\n\nSource #3 paragraph 19 , \"\n\nThe Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. No region (South, Northeast, etc.) has enough electoral votes to select a president.\n\n\" But this country should be about how the people vote, a popular vote would be the same, no region would have enough eligeable voters to elect a president, so a candidate would have to campaign all over the country.\n\nIn conclusion I think the Electoral College should be replaced with a popular vote. Voters cannot directly vote for thier choice candidate, ties can occur in the Electoral College, and a candidate can win the popular vote, but somehow still lose the election. The system is unfair to voters, and this country is based on fairness and rights to all of its citezens, so why should the Electoral College get to take away people's rights?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, certain folks prefer to have babies when they are more advanced in age. This will enable them to plan and have adequate savings and be mentally fit to cater for their youngsters when they eventually arrive. Although, there are some setbacks related to late conceptions, The advent of technology like in vitro fertilization and the use of hormonal therapy to delay menopause has improved the chances of having kids in older age.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, having babies before the age of 35 years is of good advantage for mother. She will be strong and healthy to go through the stress of normal delivery and have enough time to bond with the family. On the contrary, having kids at a younger age with no means of meeting their basic needs and living in poverty is disadvantage,the ability to bond with the family notwithstanding. For instance,a client had all her 3 children before she was forty but could not send them school due to lack of fund. They can hardly have three square meal so education was not a priority.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is important to be financially prepared and have a set mind before adding to your responsibilities. For example,a couple got married but decided to plan their family. They saved for the future. The woman conceived at the age of 40 year with the aid of in vitro fertilization. She travelled abroad and delivered in one of the best hospitals in new York. The son has sice graduated from the University.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,the benefits of having young ones at older age outweighs the demerit. Planning preceeds success.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It's a Saturday morning and the head of NASA has called in to have a meeting on discussing \"The Face on Mars.\" When I entered the meeting room there was only seven people inside. I was hoping there would be more people than just seven, but the seven that are inside the room are very important in the NASA headquarters. I took my seat and waited for Dr. Turner( head of NASA) to speak first. How many people think this face on mars can be an alien?\"asked Dr. Turner\". Every person in the room have raised there hands,but I didn't. I stood up and said to everyone, \"I think this face could've been formed by natural causes\". Everyone was looking at me mysteriously and I still continued speaking. How many times have we seen any form of life on mars? NONE \"I said.\" What possibly can make you guys think this is an alien for sure? We have national places where nature has formed a rock or some sort to look like a face and we don't questoin that because we know it was naturally formed by sand storms for example. If this face would've been an alien i would like to an explanation from all you guys since you think it's anlien. Dr. Turner was looking at me in shock, but at the same time was very impressed ion what I said. Dr. Thomas rose from his chair and started speaking so\n\nI sat down and listened. We may not evrything there is in the universe because its so big. we probably only know 1/1000000, but we might know for sure we are not alone in this universe. The face on mars in maybe just a clue to tell us that we are not alone. We can never know what is out there until we have the right engineering to make better ships. No one from NASA has Actually step foot on mars because we don't have the right equipment. For now we have no clue what mught be on Mars, so what i'm saying is that the face on mars is just another mystery to be solved. \"Said Dr. Thomas.\" Dr. Turner stood up and said he isn't sure what this face is made out of, but his choice was by predicting from natural causes. Everyone else in the room also stood up and agreed with Dr. Turner except Dr. Thomas. The meeting is dismissed. \"said Dr. Turner.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports this idea in the passage with all of the evidence he has put in the passage. the author stated that studying venus is worth it despite the danger.\n\nIn the passage the author stated a lot of intresting facts and statments about NASA and venus. This passage held a lot of information about venus such as \"Venus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star,\" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amature stargazer to spot. this was stated in paragraph 1\n\nIn the passage it is also stated that The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study veus. This is stated in paragraph 5 not only does it state plenty of information about venus and NASA it also stated how going and exploring venus would be worth it in paragraph 6 it is stated that \"However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmasphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\n\nOn top of it stating the facts about NASA and Venus it stated that not only do you have to go in a space ship to see Venus but you have to physically be on the planet to see its full scale potential because as it stated in paragrpah 6 most forms of light cannot penetrate the atmaspghere and most photography is innefective. so you have to be physically be standing on the planet to see all of it fully.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One reason to join the program is because when you gradulate, you can cross the ocean more than one time if you wish to. Another reason is to do fun things for our goverment. Also, because you will travel around the world and meet new people ,and feed animals. You can do more when you gradulate and have the right attiude for the goverment. Another reason the program would be a great idea is because you will change people mind and thinking about things. You will also get a chance to join the United Nations Relief and Rehabilition Administration, and take care of all the horses overseas.And also traveling the highs seas, there is just more than during or going on the adventure you have to do work to. Also you can be able to change vistors and other things once you are done or have to take a vacation somewhere and pick someone take over your spot.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars is a goal that car companies want to make possible. So far, much progress has been made and it seems achievable, but should driverless cars be used? In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. Even though driverless cars are being produced successfully and are something many people would want, they should not be continued to be developed.\n\nThere are more downsides to having driverless cars than there are benefits. In order to use smarter cars, smarter roads may be necessary; however, changing the roads would be cost too much. In paragraph 3, the author states, \"...they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was smiply too expensive to be practical.\" Because a driver is still necessary for a driverless car, another downside is that when an accident occurs, manufacturers will blame the driver, but the driver will shift the blame on the manufacturer. Paragraph 9 states, \"If technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault--the driver or the manufacturer?\" These are reasons why driverless cars should not be continued to be produced.\n\nIn the article, positive points about driverless cars are also given. Google has developed driverless cars that have yet to be in an accident. Paragraph 2 states, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash...\" However, these cars that have not crashed still have the assistance of a human driver.\n\nAlthough driverless cars seem to reduce the amount of accidents, a human driver is still necessary to avoid these crashes. The point of a driverless car is to\n\nlet the former driver not have to drive anymore, hence the word \"driverless.\" Paragraph 8 asks, \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\" If these cars still need a driver to steer the car to avoid accidents, then the driver might as a well be driving the whole time. The number of accidents will not be reduced if a driver is still in control of the wheel because drivers are the reason that accidents occur in the first place. If the possibility of human error is still part of the equation, then the number of accidents will not decrease from having driverless cars.\n\nDriverless cars are not as good as they seem. Smarter roads may have to be created in order to use smarter cars, but that is too expensive. If a driverless car were involved in an accident, drivers and manufacturers would endlessly shift the blame on each other. The number of accidents using driverless cars seem to be reduced, but a driver is still needed to avoid these accidents. This is why driverless cars should not be continued to be produced.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood story happy reflective one Many times story especially paragraph told us parents also almost every sentence parentheses would say much meain For example says parents cooked I eternally grateful This shows much loved parents passing culinary skillsIn one paragraph starts sentence I always grateful parents love sacrifice This shows mood greatfullness happiness reflectiveness story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper name I I go naylor school I writing convince computers positive effect people Please read following reasons Computers positive effect people Your able communicate people world When brother goes computer get s talk family I like use skpye talk family use webcam keep touch family They teach hand eye coordination help pingpong It help wacth ball computer I wreak You lot s access different information mom found job computer Everybody access weather news Some say s lack exercise People get addicted computer Some get obese mess love life These reasons I belive computers good society This people agree advance technology Technology keeps upgrading", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To me driverless cars are just another liability on the road. Although I would support them for people that actually need them, not lazy people that dont need them. What I mean is, if you have physical disabilties, and say you're missing a limb I think that is the only time that driverless cars should be used. I do support car sensors that help the drivers handle harder manuvering situations.\n\nIf you think about it, there's so many varibles of the computers that would be in these cars that you just can't trust. Now I do understand that the whole idea of driverless cars is pretty cool, but is it compatable at this point in our technological standpoint for every day use is something people have to think about. If you look at most electronic devices out now, there is malfunction all the time. So for me to put my life in the hands of people that most likely are in connection to my daily malfunctioning appliances it's just not happening. Now later on down the road when we have better control of our robotitcs systems I might be a little more likely to try them.\n\nI think driverless cars are something that can be utilized for great things down the road, but for on the road use with the next 5 years I do not support. I think companies should stop thinking about money and start thinking about the saftey of people on the road. We just simply dont have the advanced technology to be so arrogant to put these driverless cars on the road now, i think these milestones that we've made are great, but i think that there is a lot more till these automobiles will be ready.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today, technology is developing rapidly and so are we and so are mediums of information. Nowadays, if any, things happen in any part of the world, the news reaches us. The question arises here whether the news we receive is reliable or not? Because of this many people think the news has no evident connection with people life so reading news from a newspaper or watching it on television is a waste of time. Watching or reading news has its own pros and cons in my opinion.\r\n\r\nIn todays world we need to stay updated all the time. News plays an important role in keeping us posted about the day to day events. Watching or reading news can provide around the globe information and it is the biggest exposure one can get. Nevertheless, This can only be possible when information is coming from a trusted source.\r\n\r\n\r\nAs the number of sources of information grows, sources of fake information also grows and no information is way better than fake information. Due to the rise of fake information people are now not interested in knowing the news because it has nothing to do with people's life.\r\n \r\nIn conclusion, news is extremely important part of our lives and we need to follow the news, but the news needs to come from a reliable source a source which is authentic in nature. For that government and news channels has to take responsibility to show authentic and genuine news, otherwise serious action will be taken against them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why should anyone want to have a car drive you anywhere you want to go when you can drive yourself? You should be the one in control of the car not the other way around, there could be a malfunction with the car that might cause a wreak, and they don't need more technology to a car, because at the end of the day your not going to have it all of your life. I'm against having the google car, because who needs a literally has laser beams that comes out of the top of the car to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the cars surroundings.\n\nYou should be the one in control of the car at all times. A person learns how to drive for a reason. They learn how to drive, so that their parents don't have to anymore, to maybe go places by yourself, and just to swee how well you have learned to drive and how much you have improved before you started to drive in the first place. Having a human drive you is better than a robot driving you because you have an advantage of learning and continuing how to learn how.\n\nHaving malfunctions is a big problem. there is alot that can happen to you if you manage to mess something up or if you just crash and wreak your car. You can push a button that can do some serious harm to you or anyone that is in the car at the time, you can break some bones by cracking into another car or a tree, and it can make you have some type of brain damage. Having malfunctions are bad, but dying in the process of your vehicle having a malfunction is horrible.\n\nYour not always going to have that car all of you life. You might sell it, pass it down to one of your kids, or just leave it on the side of the road. I don't know what you would do with it. Not everybody has had a car the they have had all of their life that would be a big problem in having it all your life. Having a google car isn't always going to be there.\n\nI will not agree for having a google car, but if i did i couldn't possibly let it drive for me. i would be the one to drive it at all times.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes, because with Facial Action Coding System we can find out did someone lie to us or not, we can also find in picture person was happy or not, and we can find person's emotion weather he/she is happy or not.\n\nMy first reason Facial Action Coding System we can find out did person front of us lie to us or not. \"To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" According to me it will be helpful because we can find person in front of us is lie to us or not.\n\nMy second reason we can find person in picture is happy or not. In picture Mona Lisa was \"83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" According to me we can express how person is feeling while taking picture.\n\nMy third reason we can find person's emotion weather he/she is happy or not. \"The facial expression for each emotion are universal, observes Dr. Huang, even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression (like not smiling as broadly).\" According to me with Facial Action Coding System we can express others feeling if they were not happy we can help them and make them smile.\n\nThese are my three main reasons why Facial Action Coding System is helpful in our life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the world today many products that companies come out with includes innovative technology that enters the homes of millions world wide. It is technology that in the past, was only imagined on tv shows and movie screens. Driveless cars are one of those technologies that has been imagined time and time again but it has yet to actually become a fully functioning reality. Although, it should be and with companies like google and tesla already at the forefornt of this innovation it dosen't seem too far fetched that in a few years\n\npeople might just see one of those driveerless cars on the road and It would probaly benefit us as a society.\n\nThe idea of a driveless car isn't new\n\nin fact \" In the lat 1950s, general motors created a concept car\" for it. and even though it wasn't really the car that was smarter and more of the roads the idea was still there. The only diffrences between the idea of driverless cars then and now is that the cars weren't nearly as smart as cars now in which many have computers and then they most likely weren't thinking about the idea of climate change which now is a huge consideration. Not only would driverless cars make it easier on the driver, but\n\nit would also make it easier on the enviorment. because the car would most likely need massive amounts of energy they would also most likely be complety electric or a hybrid saving the money of the driver since they aren't spending it on gas and cutting back fuel emmisions.\n\nMany critics of the car would say it is unsafe to have on the road because the computer wouldn't be able to understand the traffic laws however \" Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver\" but If the laws were altered to include driverless cars then the only issue would be faliure of the technology. However, if the cars are designed properly that would most likely be at or below the rate of human error. which means it could prevent major accidents from happening speciffically those occuring due to drunk driving.\n\nThere is still a lot of time before driverless cars are realesed and is considered safe to use in america. But the idea of the future where the driver isn't actually required to do anything is excitiing. It will one less inovation that is only imagined and not reality.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The benefits laughter understand benefits laughter shortest distance two people many people going specifically tell laughter work brotherhood alots good times laughterWell know fact brother best time laughingand jokeing aroundIt seem laughter makes us best relatioship brothers lots fun The next thing going talk power laughter family boy girlfriend relatioshipThe way think works family relatioship familys get together thay talk past laugh things thay thay kidssee power laughter make familys come alot closer togtherIn relatioship like boy girlfriend well see itIf boy ca nt make girl laugh boy never talk girlI know girls thay like laugh good time therefriends man So men mak girl laugh fun show scared talk girls ok well see lets go Well talk brotherhood family boy girlfriend lets talk friend relatioship nowthe way see people like friends make tham laugh good time withThats kined friends people want thats kine friends love muchwell lets go last part ok Well see benefits laughter brotherhood family friend boy girlfriendrelatioship well way see way think work yes thare people think way see way thare life lifeWell hope like way put words story see next time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There mood created author memoir Here points help support parenthesis identify new mood gratefulness view things First parenthesis identify new mood When goes sentence parenthesis new mood appears goes back Here reason story Passionate Cuban music I adore day filled air mixing aromas kitchen gratefulness grateful things turned Here another reason story I always grateful parents love sacrifice view things fortunate times eyes Ultamately reasons mood created author parenthesis gratefulness perspective", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]