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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Library past instead sitting home nothing I decided get volunteer job library Some say library funny place best friend I full numerous humerous adventures There time creepy stalker guy like call time decided super spies different people decided loud nt nice telling us We worked hard library says ca nt laugh little job definition means one likes guy funny One day I got done working waiting grandma pick us strange guy sits starts staring like knew He preceded ask us countless questions like CAPS names CAPS guys boyfriends Being I nt say word let talk whole time He also kept telling us beautiful made us laugh even harder situation kept getting weirder weirder Since nickname guess asked us next Oh yes asked us wanted start line middle library Thankfully grandma showed time save us saw twice moved away shortly encounter Being spy one hardest funniest things I ever library It started noticed cute guy sitting table could clearly see book shelves far away Being adventurous type I talked letting use iPhone take pictures guy without knowing Now people would think kind like stalker I saw chance brush spy skills After successfully getting couple pictures undetected I decided get one went back side library see I take picture I locked eyes guy supposed see We abort mission crawl way side library nt able see us could nt confront us taking pictures The funny thing pictures good shows bad spy actually Normally libraries quiet right Well I little problem people wanting library quiet On one occasion nice looking middle aged women homework table far away form sitting We watching videos iPhone speakers low lady told us rudely wanted move somewhere else going volume needed get work done Not one please thank said walked away On similar occasion elderly lady sitting book shelves away form us also asked us quiet could finish book time elderly lady used manners rude tone voice On occasions I started laughing shortly afterward goes show nice people want get something done All one funniest summers I ever Whether getting talked guy wanted start line getting caught trying spy cute guy even getting reprimanded nice people could always find somewhere Not many people could say library ever place laughed much nearly peed pants I", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars\n\nHave you ever seen the face on Mars? If so do you think it was a natural landform or alien made? So let's assume you think it is made by aliens and i think it wasnt. I think it wasnt because there have been things like this on earth but obviously not as big of a dent on earth. I personally think it was a natural thing like when clouds look like faces or random objects. People dont say clouds like that are made by aliens.\n\nThe reason I think it isnt alien made is because there are things on Earth comparable to the face on Mars. We don't think those are alien made. We also see clouds everday that look like faces or random objects so therefore there isnt a diffrence between the two. The only difference being clouds are in the sky and the face on Mars is on Mars.\n\nAnother thing you could also compare is the face on Mars to it the easter island heads. They are gigantic statues that kinda look like the face on Mars. A lot of people also say that those are alien made but other people could also argue they arent because they have an opinion. Most likely they will express there opinion too but it is a matter of opinion and no facts because there isnt way to tell if the face on Mars was made by aliens or not.\n\nYou could belive that it was or not but evidence from paragraph 7 stating that on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfures were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web stie, revealing... a natural landform. There ended up being no monument after all. So that is my reason to believe that it was a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars may seem like the solution to many traffic and tranportaion problems--but are they really?\n\nIf these cars continue to be developed, more and more money is going to go into the project.\n\nDriverless cars is a project that simply does not need to be addressed today in time.\n\nI am completely against driverless cars.\n\nIn paragraph nine, the statement was made that lawmakes know exactly how to accomplish street saftey, and that it is achieved the best with alert drivers. I'm against the developing of the care because why should corporations spend huge amounts of money on a driverless car?\n\nThink about it.\n\nWith all the money that is being spent to \"fix\" something that doesn't need to fix, the corporations or United States of America, could use it to open up more homeless people shelter and help our own economy.\n\nHaving cars that drive themselfves is not an issue that should even be focused on.\n\nDriverless cars are a fanstasy that does not need to be fullfilled.\n\nThe cars still need tremendous amounts of work in almost every way possible. For example, in paragraph seven and eight, it talks about how the driver would still need to be alert.\n\nWhat if the driver gets bored or tired or falls asleep?\n\nWell, apparently some of the options are to install cameras to watch that the drivers are focused on the road, and there's the consideration of flashing lights on the windsheild.\n\nThese options most definetely not work on every driver.\n\nIn the daytime, the flash might even be noticable to the driver (especially if the driver fell asleep).\n\nAs for the camera, that is just creepy becasue there are so many hackers and updates on technology that someone may figure out a way to hack into that camera to watch and track you.\n\nAlso in paragraph seven, it talks about how important it is to get the driver's attention when manual, but what if the person is completely disconcentrated.\n\nFor example, what if the driver got out of the seat to go check on his fighting kids in the back?\n\nThe driver gives the car an extremely large amount of trust because it's \"driverless.\"\n\nSo many things about the driverless car need to be fixed and touched up and reinvented. With the invention of a car like this, very large amounts of rearranging, remaking, and organizing would have to made.\n\nThe United States of America ABSOLUTELY DOES NOT NEED TO BE WORRYING ABOUT REINVENTING LAWS FOR A \"DRIVERLESS\" CAR.\n\nSo many accidents may occur because of the amounts of trust that the driver would give the car.\n\nAs talked about in paragraph nine, so many liabilites would have to covered and cleared in an accident.\n\nThere is also the question of who would be at fault in case of an accident--\"the driver or the manufacturer?\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars should not be developing in this point of history.\n\nThe United States of America has other bigger and more important problems that should be focused on.\n\nThere is absolutely no need to waste money on \"driverless\" cars that still need a driver--ironic huh?\n\nDriverless cars only bring more problems into socitey than solutions and that is why I am against driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The evening star is the brightest points of light in the night sky however this nickname is misleading since venus is actually a planet it is close to the earth sometimes and mars also but people that have tried to go visit venus and tried to study about it have not made it back in about 3 decades so its really hard to study venus no spacecraft has survived landing up there more than a few hours because there is a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets and is even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid and on the planets surface the temperature is average over 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet these are dangerouse positions for the astronaunts because they will not come back and venus is closer to our planet but how is it so hot there and its not even close to the sun but NASA is trying to send some of its people up there so they can study more about it and hoverboard around it and venus is almost the same like earth they have a bunch of similarities they both have mountains and valleys and the canot even sample rocks or anything it could be a rick by putting something from another planet that. NASA on the other hand sent something really smart that they thought would last a while but only lasted three days in venus.They bult a mechanical part that was stong for gas, pressure, heat and other forces.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are going out of style. In Vauban, Germany, cars are not owned, save the occasional one that can be afforded; Paris,France banned certain cars from driving certain days; Bogota, Columbia has a car-free day; and America is seeing a decrease in their car sales. The reason behind it: smog and greenhouse gas emmissions. The reduction of car use has helped these things immensely in more ways than one.\n\n\"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emmissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States,\" says experts in Elisabeth Rosenthal's\n\n\"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars.\"\n\nEurope, the United States and other places are starting a movement called \"smart planning.\" It is a plan to seperate suburban life from auto useage. There has been efforts these past two decades to make cities better suited for walking. In Vauban, 70 percent of families do not even own cars, they walk everywhere. It is similar in Bogota, where the people ride bikes and hike to work whether it is in the shining sun or in the downpour of rain. Even here in America, driving has decreased. In 2013, studies show that the numbers of miles driven was nearly equal to the numbers from 1995. The percentage of people under the age of 40 getting their license has dropped 23 percent between the years 2001 and 2009 according to Rosenthal's article\n\n\"The End of Car Culture.\"\n\nLast year, Paris had to enforce a ban to clear the smog from the city; many people got fined for ignoring it. Five days after enacting the ban, congestion went down 60 percent. In Bogota, less streets were being built while more and more sidewalks and bicycle paths (118 miles worth) were under construction. President Barak Obama has made plans to cease the greenhouse emmissions and, with the recent changes in transportation use, his plans could work. As stated in Rosenthal's first article \"The Environmental Protection Agency is promoting 'car reduced' communities and legislators are starting to act.\" It is predicted that public transportation will become much more popular in the next few years.\n\nCars have polluted so many areas of our world and at this point of time, our world is changing. Less car useage means more money that is not being spent on gas and less pollution to our environment. The executive chairman of Ford Motor Company has a business plan to create cities where \"pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.\" It is beneficial to our new world that it stays intact for the future generations to come.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine people felt back nt great technology What nt see best friend years lived long distance Well advance machine called computer Its great well hands activity helps eye cornation However going tell somethings device affects humuns daily life Moreover catogories great relationship online cources best local websites Did know successful life onlinedating There s tons people struggle relationships For example one day mom dad got series arguments She felt relationship nt good enough needed meet better man On hand decided live better life find dates computer live new life These fantastic things computer better relationship Your highschool dropout cant keep class You dont turn homework fail every test Also feel nothing fix Well fast son Now take online cources boost grade make feel comfortable Imagine sitting computer completing every assignment every homework Watching teacher teach webcam There s nothing like fact get homework faxed Someone world living life could There s new websites around world today However better website friends For example myspace facebook twitter All websites stay contact best friends Another even intrested webcam It s live home fotage face face computer How cool seeing friend together Third communication makes world go around people meet new friends In sum see s lot fun things computer It affects humans lives people intrested device", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's perpetually transforming epoch , television has become an inevitable part of a person's life. As a consequence, it is opined by a few people that the number of TV programs is increasing in day to day life and it gives to masses more choices ,while are others anti the former's view and believed that it has significant effect the quality of the programs. I have discussed both views along with my opinion on the forthcoming subdivisions.\r\n\r\nTaking into account the former's view, the number of TV schedules gives us more options.,Additionally we have become a part of a global village .As a part of it, if TV programs will increase ,we will get more choices and varieties of programs for different cultures, traditions and regions. Moreover ,we can get more information about not only countries but also the globe. For example , due to the number of tv programs, we can see different sports programs, daily shows ,discoveries and whatnot.\r\n\r\nTo commence with the flip side of the coin , an increasing number of schedule lead to boredom .What is more , nowadays when shaw becomes famous and gets TRP another producer produces a similar type of telecast for getting a higher TRP .As a result , similar reality shows cannot find some extra and unique interest in viewing. So , people will feel boredom and stop to watch TV plan. it deteriorates the quality of the TV schedule.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion , because of an increasing number of TV programs ,someone gets an opportunity to make a career and also it reveals the identity of civilization. To exemplify ,at present , in ' dance India dance' programs - small children are giving their performances.By watching these schedules,kids will learn it and also dance will get a chance to show their talent and they will make a career in future so it will win-win situation for both.\r\n\r\nTo conclude,As every garden has its weed , similarly, similarly an inclining figure of schedule gives more alternative and career opportunities.On the other hand , some people think it leads towards boredom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think\n\nthe Facial Action Coding System should be used for student ? I think the Facial Action System should be used for students because the computer can recognize when\n\na student is becoming confused\n\nbored ,\n\nHelps the computer undersatnd you , and students pay more attention totechogy.\n\nIf the students can use the Faical Action Coding System if can tell if the student is bored or confused . The computer can modify the lesson to help the student understand the lesson . If the\n\nstudent is confused he/she wont learn\n\nanything from the lesson.\n\nThe computer can modity if the student is bored and the computer can give the student an more fun or undertanding lesson.\n\nIf an student is bored . If an student is bored with the lesson he/she will not learn anything .\n\nIf the students use this technology the computer will be able to understand the stundent.\n\nSay a student is having a hard time with the lesson\n\nthe\n\ncomputer can help the stundent . It states in the passage that \" Most humans communication is nonverbal , including emotioanls communication , \" notes Dr. Huang. It also states \"if you smile when a web appears on your screen , a simlar ad might follow . But if you frown ,the next will be different .\n\nAnother reason\n\nwhy computer need to understand you.\n\nFacial Action System should be used for alot of students because most students pay more attention to technolgy. Why not help\n\nthe student learn with this new technology it will help the learn more . Student can learn more and have help\n\nif they dont understand the computer can try to show the lesson in different ways for the student. The computer can teach the student like an effective human instrutor. Student can and will learn more with this new techology.\n\nThis is why I thing this techology should be used to help\n\nstudents learn\n\nbecause it helps the student understand more, pay attiention more , and learn more with the Facial Action System.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many problems prevented dirigibles landing It dangerous tether dirigibles mast building four main reasons The first dirigible moored mast building would add stress building s frame This problem soon solved however steel frame changed became strong enough endure added stress Another reason dirigibles could attached Empire State building dirigibles highly flammable use hydrogen gas It became apparent dirigible catch fire downtown New York would terrible risk Dirigibles also could nt attached mast winds top building would cause back ship swivel around around mooring mast would safe Finally dirigibles could moored Empire State building sharp spires buildings area could puncture dirigible s shell The dirigibles could fly low without posing risk people Dirigibles could land Empire State Building many dangers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people belive that aliens live on mars and how the unuasl things on mars are because of aliens, like this face and im sorry to tell you this,but im not one of those people.\n\nThis his face was not created by aliens' I can say your ideas are not as reasonable as the way land is form. See over hundreds and thousads of years land is formed and thats all this face is, a landform.\n\nMany people are on your side about the exstings of aliens which many people beleive in but the only reason most people beleive in ailens are because there are so many movies and television shows on aliens it seems real. There are so many land forms that look unusal that are here on earth, but you can't say aliens made them, we except the fact that it's a land form and not that some unknown creatrue did it. There can be a thousand people saying aliens made the face but no one is going to belive them if they have absoluty no proof at all. See for many years now people have been caling in to say how they saw a flying sawser, we need proof we can't just go off of what someone says and then over half the world belives in somthing thats that NASA as no proof of. At the end of the day there is all ways those three groups out in the world the ones who believe and care, the ones who don't care about any side and the ones who just don't beleive and", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people across the country would believe that having an Electoral College is good idea. Well, I belive thst it is not a good idea to continue having an Electoral College to chose our president because the people deserve to have their votes count. In the prcocess of having an Electoral College the poular votes do not count, only the slate of electors can vote for the canidate. That's not even the worst part to begin with.\n\nIn source 2, it says that 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. That is more than half the amount of voters in the country! It even states \"In the same vein, faithless electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's canidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please.\" meaning that sometimes the electors would not always have the same idea in mind as the people have. To me that is a real bummer especially for the people in the state with those kinds of electors.\n\nFurthermore, the Electoral college may have a few benefits as it states in source 3. Fore example, it says \"The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no canidate receives a majority of the votes cast.\" meaning that barely anyone would vote in the state. But that is usually a rare ocasion and is easily avoided in every state. As individuals we would usually not avoid coming to vote in an election for certain positions especially when it comes to a president.\n\nSometimes people would even let the Electoral College vote for them without the people knowing who they voted for. The Electoral College is supposed to represent their state towards a canidate but what if the state rarely has any electors to be represeted or doesn't have any at all? That is why it is up to the people to make their own decision in who they want to vote for and hopefully their vote counts. The Electorial College may be recomended to represent their state but they can never represent every individual's vote because not all people have the same canidate in mind and the Electorial College can only vote for one canidate.\n\nOverall, I think the Electoral College should be abolished in every way. It is the people's vote that should count not the electors. Some people may disagree but I still believe the Electorial College is not good for us. It is not truely fair to have the majority of popular votes on one canidate and still that canidate does not win due the Electoral College. So I can most certainly agree with what previous people and groups have said before such as Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S Chamber of Commerance, and the AFL-CIO.... To get rid of the Electoral College.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im more on the side of the cars driving for us. With that theirs more of a chance of less happening. Also can reduce accedents that can kill or severly harm the person operating the vehical. With this, The future is comming slowly but surly with outstanding things. But, Theirs going to be problems with it. Which will be listed below in the next few paragraphs.\n\nWith the driver not operating the vehical can save lifes. Like if your under the influence, the car can get you home, or if your hurt the car can take you to help. Another reason is that the car can help you get place to place safely by following the law and watching everything.\n\nThe bad side is that the cars cost is going to be Out of the world. Not many people are going to buy a 400 thousand dollar car for a daily driver. Including that if damages were taken when vehical is in operation, will be out standing. Not all insurance companies can replace it or parts for a lower in sum.\n\nSo what leads to my Point that the car is Basically just a plan, nothing to seroius yet but will have a small or large change in the world. Help multiple ways or devistate.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragph says when come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test author wants convey Saeng isnt going quit She determined take pass test It also meas saeng wait right moment take test She wait till things get better The situation improves says The snow melt geese return hibiscus budding", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A life without Cars. A life without cars would be a completely different than what most Americans expeirence today. We use Cars for basically everything. Shopping, Recreation, and socialization are all based upon the automobile. As Americans, its the general idea that you go get your license and a car, and its a normal part of life. Not many Cities are based upon the ideals of not needing a vehicle. Places where people can walk to the place they want to eat, or efficent public transportation so they can arrive at the movies on time. Everything they need as components of their lives in in reach.\n\nA smart town is compact, meaning everything you need for a town smushed together. With everything being compacted, resources can be better managed, meaning more resources can be used in a general thing, or just not used at all. Not needing to use enourmous amounts of resources is better for the enviroment, and the tax payer. Tax payer not having the burden of all those taxes, means a happier tax payer. All the money thats not used on on taxes can be used to spend at the local stores, leading to a strong economic outlook. All because we compacted our cities, and limited car use. That's an ideal city to me. Making a compact city might not be in America's future though. We like our wide open spaces, and our huge backyards. So maybe what we need to do is invest in a reliable and smooth public transportation complex. Something that can take the population around the area. Transportation that can get me from my place of residence; to a place where I can get a bite, or have a good time. A intertwined suburban existence. Where there are no engine pollution or loud car commotion.\n\nWithout all the engine pollution or noise pollution that comes out of these ideal suburbs; people will be less stressed. Meaning their lives will also be happier and healthier. Imagine it. All because we changed the way we do things, we can be happy, and eliminate pollution. I could see myself waking up in the morning in a nice little home, and getting ready. Then going down the street to where I can take a bus, or taxi wherever I wanted. I would do what I want, and not need a car for it. I can focus on what's really important.\n\nLike how much pollution we were really letting off from our cars. Different settings had different levels of pollution, but it all leads up to be a ridiculous amount. If we limited our car use; we could make a big difference in the amount of greenhouse gases we throw up into our air. Meaning we'll have cleaner air. Can you smell that? Thats the smell of crisp clean air. There's nothing like taking a breath of air out in the wilderness. Where the trees absorbs the contaminated air; only leaving the crisp refreshing air behind. That could be everywhere if we limited car use!\n\nA life where it's normal to not have a vehicle in Amerian Society sounds like it would be pretty nice. I would love being able to take a bus or even walk to something interesting. Maybe it's in our future. It may even be right now. Are you willing to try to give up your car? Are you willing to try to have a social revolution and change the way Americans live their lives? I thought so.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "On the histories of\n\nVenus they thought t it was a star,And gave it a neakname \"Evening star\".Ten people got creouse and start studing it,and when they learned that it was the secound planet on our solar system they wanted to land on it.\n\nBut it was different than any planet .The surface of the planet was hot even thou venus was the second planet it was hotter than the first plant mercury. it was over eight hundred dgrees fahrenhieit,But even thou it was that hot scientes did'say it was imposeble,insted they they said it was a challenge that is stoping them to not land on venus.\n\neven thou they could not land on the planet they are trying to make some machines that's\n\nstrong to land on the planet.Like the item that made the 1800s computers it was strong metal,And they said that maybe that will help them\n\nmake it to thier goal.\n\nAnd espesioly because it's the twin of the Earth they have to study about it. what if we found any criture that live deap in side that unic planet.And like they said \"human curiosity will likly lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\".\n\nAnd yes it is worthy pursiut despite the dangers it presents.if one day they landed. it would be easyer to study the planet more and learn about it's spesial place,and if it was like Earth it will tell us more about our planet and learn more our home Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My claim to do studying on Venus is saying no I think spending so much time and money on something that has been tempted to do multiple times and failed is wasteful. Because we have tried on numerous accaions and have got just a few hours with a little bit of information it is not worth it. Researchers know that they only get a super small time to only see a little bit of a huge planet.\n\nKnowing that Venus is a whole planet the size of earth and only getting to see just a tiny bit of it is like starting at one side of the United States and then driving only a few hours to see how far you get, If you are trying to go all the way around the world to get back to the same spot but only have a few hours to do so, you don't cover much of anything to have any real say of how the world looks in different areas if you haven't seen it all yet.\n\nIn conclusion to the challenge of Venus I say it is a time waster and we will not be able to see the whole planet of Venus with only a few hours once every few decades.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist many ways One way its hot riding long way need lot water dont dehydrated Also affect vision cause looking sun Another way cyclist get affected setting road bumpy good shape affect way ride bike", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I personaly don't think this is a good idea just yet. I think it may be to early to have someone just not have to pay attention to the road and trust a robot to get you where we need to go. I know that most people use a GPS and I guess that is considered a way of robots taking you where you need to go, I just think there is too much conflict in having the robot actually controling your vehicle because whose fault would it really be?\n\nI think paragraph 9 has good examples of why it could lead to something bad, because in some states there are already laws against this kind of technology which I don't think we should necasarily push towards. There is also the safety isue into whose fault is it really if you get into a wreck, becuase what happens if you wreck with another car? There are usually three questions: was it my fault, was it their fault, or was it this robots fault? There is no telling what these cars can do if something in the system fails, and how exactly hard are these things to hack? Overall I just don't think that any of us are ready for this kind've risk, but I do see this kind've thing happening in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My name is clint i am a sciencetist at NASA the face of mars is like nothing we have ever seen befor we have been doing some research on mars and we are to beleave that there is aleion life formes on this planit we have goten picturs of mars over the years and have pictures of what appers to be faces in the cirfice of mars we have been trying to learn more about it bit it is hard to do with just pictures we need somone to go up there and evaluate it that way but we can't get anyone to volinteer because we dont know what is out there so people are scaird to go sometimes i just want to go my sealf because i am varry cureious about what is going on on mars that we cant see with a picture i want to explor it all and find out new things about mars i think there would be a lot of interesting things going on on mars and i want to find them out NASA wants to know what is going on there but not as much as i do so help me find out what is going on on mars", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Information is presented in two tables which compare the number of students exchanging between universities in Europe and Australia in two different years (2007 and 2009).\nOverall, it can be clearly seen that the popularity of exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia is more than that of exchange students from Australia universities to universities in Europe in both years.\nTurning to the first main feature in the first table, a modest 27 students in Germany joined the exchange program to universities in Australia in 2007. The figure for exchange students from Germany to Australia then soared to a precise 62 in 2009. On the other hand, there was a decrease of an exact 5 people in the figure for exchange students from universities in the United Kingdom to universities in Australia, from 31 people in 2007 to 26 people in 2009. Nevertheless, the number of exchange students in Netherland remained unchanged at an exact 36 in both 2007 and 2009.\nFocusing further on another main feature in the second table, each of 32 students from universities in the United Kingdom and Netherland exchanged to universities in Australia in 2007. In 2009 the number of exchange students from the United Kingdom and Netherland fell to a modest 23 and 18 respectively. On the contrary, there was a substantial rise of a massive 21 people in the figure for exchange students from France to Australia, from an exact 37 people in 2007 to a precise 58 people in 2009.\nThe last key point to note is the total number of exchange students in both tables. There were 189 and 226 exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia universities in 2007 and 2009 respectively. On the other hand, the figure for students exchanging from Australia to Europe was remained stable at a modest 152 in both years.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Businesses are always want to make good revenue, but it is common nowadays that peoples are expecting them to contribute to society. I strongly agree with the idea that businesses pay back to society than solely aim to make profits.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, companies need to make money to continue their businesses in this competitive era. To clarify, they need to make enough income to cover the expenses of employee salaries, rentals and utilities. Moreover, businesses also require to invest in research and innovations to improve the value of their products/services. If the organization is losing and struggling to cover the costs they may face difficulty participating in social activities or giving a helping hand to the community.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, businesses should not mainly care about making money; they should also try to take responsibility to help society. To illustrate, the company to donate a certain amount of money from their profits back to the community and participate in social activities such as fundraising to support the needs in the local community. In addition, paying the right amount of tax to the government is a way to give back to the community as this budget may use to build the improvement on healthcare systems, educations and infrastructure of the country. Furthermore, the businesses should also care about their staff well beings and helping them to have the standard quality of life by supports. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I completely agree with the idea that companies put the same efforts to make money and take the social responsibilities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Human expression and emotion is something you see in everyday life. You see people smile and you can tell when someone is in distress. But what about the emotions you can't seem to read? Technology over the years have become more and more advanced.There is a new tachnology called the Facial Action Coding System; which enables computers to identify more emotions of humans. This technology to read the emotional expressions of school students is valuable.\n\nDr. Huang reveals reliable information in how the process of the technology works.The computer conducts a 3-D model that has mimics the entirety of a human face. The model has 44 major muscles that look like human muscles. Phychologis, such as Dr. Paul Echman,and the creater of the Facial Action Coding System(FACS), classified six emotions.\n\nThose emtions are happines, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. He then associated each of them with movements of facial muscles. Examples would be how the musscle above your eye, called the frontalis paras lateralis, raises when you're surprised and the muscle around your mouth, called the obicularis oris, tightens your lips when you are angry.\n\nYou can easily tell when someone you are close to is acting different. Whether it may be that they are happy that they got a good grade on a test they didn't study for or they are sad that they didn't get the job they wanted. Teachers can also easily tell the emotions of students who are loud and expressive in their words. Even so, it is harder to tell the emotions of someone you aren't close to, and it is harder for teachers to tell the emotions of students who are more quiet and conceited. This technlogy can teachers learn more about students who are truly struggling in their class who are too afraid to speak up, and it can help students learn more about classmates who could need a friend and who want to reach out but can't.\n\nThe first demostration of the technology was how it could read Mona Lisa's face. This machine could not only be used for others in school to read emotions, but could also teach students. Human interaction and phychology is used everyday, but rarely do students learn about it. Knowing that it could read a famous painting's emotion, it can read a lot more. It could read the expressions of the presidens and could read the emotions of people in the renassance paintings, to convey how they felt during that time.\n\nThis new technology is valuable and can be used in so many good ways. It can go from simply reading the expressions of paintings to knowing the signs of certain feelings in students and learning more about technology and how the brain works in cerrtain situations. This shows how far technology has come and how it could give us better understandings of human interaction and emotion.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My oppinon on driverless cars is that i dont like it. It just makes it more easier for people to not do anything. Even drunk drivers wont get pulled over anymore because they would have that to drive them. Cops cant do their job of pulling people over anymore after they do this so cops might loose jobs cause they would have driverless cars. No one would be buyong cars anymore because of it fuel would be used half as much for it. Televison and movies have been fasinated by cars that could drive their selves. Under specific occasions google has had cars driving since 2009. Their cars have been driven more half a million miles without a crash. They arnt truely driverless yet they alert the driver when they need to take over the wheel when traffic is really badd or going through road work. Futurists believed the key to developing self-driving cars someday isnt just the smart cars its smarter roads. How much smarter did the cars ned to be? in the 1980s automakers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes. within a decade those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out of control skids or rollovers. The information from the sensors could make the car apply brakes. In 2013 BMW anounced the development of traffic Jam Assitant the car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph,But speacial touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. They can steer in traffic and other road construction. This necisates the car being ready to quickly get the drivers attention whenever a problem has occured. Why would anyone want to drive driverless cars,because its easy on you and you dont do anything anymore since they did this. Displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over something not to the drivers trying to text with a cell phone. In this way the In car system is actually a safety feature, and saftey is a big concern. Most driving laws focus on getting the passengers,drivers,and pedestrians safe and let know the law makers that in these cars are safety. Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Mercedes benz,audi,and nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020. The road to the truly autonomous car streches on ahead of us, but we grow closer to the destination.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is widely known that immense vehicles on the roadway, particularly in huge and prominent cities, causing various problems afterwards such as air pollution, disturbing noise to households, and accidents on the streets have become a serious issue these days. There are abundant factors why these phenomena happen. Therefore, in this essay, I will explain the causes as well as the possible solutions for this issue.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, as traffics congestions mostly occur downtown, one of the reasons for this occurrence is lacking entertainment facilities especially in the countryside and suburbs such as department stores, theatres, and amusement parks. For instance, it is undeniable that some countries only have these entertainment facilities in eminent cities. That means whenever people in other provinces desire to go to a site like that they have to go to that famous towns also causing heavy traffic there later. In addition, some cities have poor public transportations making citizens in that cities select to drive private automobiles or motorbikes because of the convenience rather than using inferior public transports. As a result, there will be numerous vehicles on the roadway.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, this phenomenon can be resolved with the assist of the national government. The first sensible solution is the government must improve public transportations in order to subside the amount of the car on the roadway. If these public transports are easily available, extensive to various places, and low price, most populations will choose to use them more than cars or motorbikes. Furthermore, the government should generate new media centres in the different regions except for downtowns. Thus, citizens do not have to go downtown; instead, they are able to find entertainment facilities in their own cities.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the massive amount of automobiles on the avenue has many causes such as poor transportations as well as lacking facilities. However, this occurrence can be corrigible by the aiding of the national administration to improve public transports and construct more new entertainment facilities in other zones.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Challenge of Exploring Venus,is that how evening star,which is aslo the name for venus,it is that venus is a plant of the solar system,venus is our second plant from the sun. Each mission they have done was unmanned,and for a good reason why.\"Since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\"There might be an issue of why it explains\"why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three decades.\n\nThe thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide. The more challenging is that there for,the clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid. The temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit,aslo the atmospheric pressure is about 90 times greater than what we experience in our own plant. It is nothing like we humans have encounter on earth. venus has the hossest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system.\n\n\"Venus may well once of have been the most-earth like planet in our solar system.\"Venus might or probably have been covered largely with oceans and maybe just maybe have life just like earth has have.\"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features shuch as mountains and craters.\"\n\nNASA solution would be to the hostille conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. They want to hover over many stroms and travel at higher altitude to fly landscape,aslo so they can aviod unfriendly ground condtitons staying out of the way.\n\nHowever,venus from a ship obriting or hovering above the plant safely can only provied limited insight on ground conditions. Most light froms cannot penetrate the dense of the atmosphere,rendering standard form phitigraphy and videography is ineffective. Resachers want to take a sample of rocky,gas or anything esle they could get on to it form a distance. Therefore scientists would take the risk to get up close to it .\n\n\"NASA is working on other approaches to study venus. For example,some simplified electronics is made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus surface and lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\"They are looking at the past by telling us of how they require elections.\n\nBut at the end they are still expanded to meet in the edged of imagination and innovtion.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever seen \"The Face\" that is on Mars? Many have, but there are many accusations on how it came to be. You may be wondering, which accusation is the correct answer? There is one answer to this question, we don't entirely know. Some say it were aliens, but couldn't it be many other reasons too? It seems preposterous to say that aliens live on Mars and suddenly desided to make a face out of rock. There could be so many other reasons!\n\nThe main reason is that \"The Face\" could just be a natural landmark. Many landmarks on our planet look like objects, and this could be just another one of these landmarks. Plus, every picture on the JPL web site reveals that is is just a regular, natural landmark. There also is not one fact that \"The Face\" was really created by the aliens. NASA is just on a budget list and would probably jump on a sliver of a study to prove that the Martians built it.\n\nFurthermore, in 2001 NASA took another one of their camera's and took a picture that could zoom in 3 times bigger than it's pixel size. They confirmed that if there was any objects on the ground, we would be able to see it as clear as day.\n\nThis concludes that there are no aliens on Mars, and the only supernatural thing on that planet is it's red sand. So, the big mystery on if there really are aliens is a faux. Aliens are not real, and will never be.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient beginning year seventh grade It fourth hour principle made announcement saying sixth graders took long lunch sayed delay So rest class complained I sat calm patient It nt really fun sit bored hungry though I kept cool Then eventually grade called downs lunch That time I patient something", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars, buses, planes, and yes even motorcycles are all ways we use everyday to get from place to place.  You ever thought about how much air pollution and greenhouse gas affects happen each and everday just because we have to get to a destination.? Just like you, I wouldn't have thought that.  But hey, we all got to get around some way, whether it's healthy for our earth or not.\n\nFor starters, The world as we know it isn't the most healtiest place ever, for instance, take a look outside.  Is it clean ? You would probably answer no because  mainly because there's pollution, and debris everywhere you lay your eyes on.  Typically you see plastic bags, bottles, containers etc. To some it all up, FLITH.  What I'm trying to say here is that the world already isn't healthy so why continue and do something that is horribly harming the place we live in.  Statistics have shown that there making efforts in the past and future, two decades to make the cities denser, and better for walking. From my prior knowledge, in other cities such as Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.  Driving cars has become so inbeniefical that it's drastically changing the world slowly but surely.  Other places such as the capital of France, Beijing, and China are all well known for their most polluted cities in the world.  Causing many of people's lives to be tragically taken. Something needs to happen fast if we want our world to be a healthy enviornment for us and next generations to come .\n\nFuthermore, Something that I think could really benieft us would have to be Hybrid cars.\n\nResearchers have said that The Honda, and Toyota cars is what everyone needs to get in order to take a further step into positively changing the  Earth.  Mind you the car is low  on gas and is extremely eco friendly.  There's nothing that the climate can do to help us and make this a lot easier. So the  next step would have to be to create something that has many different beniefts to help uplift this world.  Limiting car usage will automatically reduce any air pollution and greenhouse effects.  Another thing that I found interesting would have to be that Delivery companies complained of lost revenue, while expectations were made for plug-in cars, ( hybrids ). In my personal opinion, the world be a lot better off with these cars.  Their inexpensive, low pollution waste, and not to mention, they don't rely on gasoline.  There's no way to go wrong with these cars.\n\nAll in all, Transportation period is not healthy for the earth.  With tha being said, we need to take cautious as to what we do each and everyday.  I'm not saying don't drive in your cars anymore.  I'm just suggesting the whole world to take a break from all this mayhap and give the earth a rest.  Like in Bogota, Colombia .  Millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated,or took buses to work during a car- free day . Just to leave the chaos and the devoid of traffic jams would be awesome. The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce green house effect, air pollution,and smog. It's in our best interest to take a stand and change the enviornment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient I going raptor cedar point There two hour line friend getting bored There music didnt really amuse us But I never raptor I really thrilled go One hour dragged Then finally ten minutes wait till I got go raptor best ride ever", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Lives author creates mood story First mood This author uses family members struggles find definition family Also author shares specific information family like Also mood seems thankful The author continueously thanks parents recalls past time wonderful family friends The author also makes mood thankful Narciso Rodriguez saying I never forget parents turned simple house home Narciso never forget parents turned simple old house home In memoir Narciso Rodriguez author creates mood story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censoring type media books magazines movies music library right A library huge amount information put common places people seek knowledgeWhen something found offensive hide away though never If media offensive person looking information choose heshe wants use itWhen someone example child something offensive first thought take away library televisionInstead explain looking eventually understand reason offensive someone know offensive Just something found offensive one two people make right take away It talked discused groups people subject decided whether taken shelves offensiveIf book magazine shelve might offensive decision made people surrounding type information take shelve hidden away", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am strongly against having the technology of driveless cars just for the reasonable fact that it is very hazardous and you will not learn the skill to have fun and driving on your own. Also it isn't a good aspect upon life because we as people want to feel 100% safe, and to trust technology is not a good idea. What will happen if the car disfunctions and dosen't stop on time in an accident?\n\nAs it states in the article, \"why would anyone want a driveless car and still need a driver,\" because the manufactures of this driveless car company knows that it is not a 100% guarantee that the car will stop on time or keep you save from accidents. Even though it wouldn't be one as of driving on your own, because you can't help the faults of other drivers on the road, there still would be more accidents with a driveless car than it would be on our own, because you have full control of what you want to do with it. And this where the big question falls in, \"If technology fails and someone is injured who fault is it the driver or the manufactuer?\" It would be the maunfactuers because they say even with a driveless car the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation rquires for them to get into an accident.\n\nEven if the google car announces for them to be prepared and when to take action, don't you think instead it should prepare itself to disregard getting into an accident. Before they even though about selling these cars and having people ride in them, they should've did a better investment and more use of technological differences to actually help citizens out. They could've even had the installation for the car to teach student learners how to drive with a person to test them in the car, because this technology of a driveless car is just not good enough. The manufactures also didn't even have a thought to actually care for other citizens out there driving the car because if they did they would've had to car do everything needed to precaution itself from hazardous situations.\n\nIn conclusion, this is why i strongly disagree for the manufacturing of driveless cars because it could tend to be very hazardous and it's not good to belive in technology will save you. Also if it's a driveless car why should you still have to have somebody in the car and have them still steer and take over in dangerous situations? Just think, who are you to blame for getting into that one accident, will the company pay for your damages and utilities you have to handle on the car? It's not worth spending thousands of dollars on a unreliable investment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What think taking books music movies magazines offensive Everyone different look It important thing think Just stop think want child looking around Many would say young know stuff shows much reasons alsoTaking ones found offensive shelves would best idea case young teens childern I believe taking shelves older buy many reason The biggest reason I think kids age want look cool like older teenagers really nt need see With young teenager think need things like stuff music movies cool think look cool Young teenager nt think think ok older ones see With magazines movies music need age buy One big reason believe taking shelves lot kids young teens thinks go anywhere look things found offensive There lot different types age go placesWith believing take shelves gives fill free child look things without think offensive ones I hope reading persuasive essay I hope relate someone books music movies magazines offensive relize m talking young teens around ages take child see something like With stuff I gave helps see look stuff offensive shelves", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \" Making Mona Lisa Smile, \" the author describes how a new technology called Facail Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. I believe the Facail Action Coding System can greatly help a classroom. This type of technology can really improve the students' education. It can also help the teacher in some certain ways. This technology could also change our future in teaching.\n\nFirst, this Facail Action Coding System can greatly help a students' education by knowing their emotions. As the article said, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". This is helpful, becasue the teacher now knows what student is confused or bored. By the teacher knowing, he or she would be able to asist the student. This would benefit the student.\n\nSecond of all, the Facail Action Coding System can really benefit a teacher. It can benefit a teacher, becasue the teacher would be able to know who is bored or confused. For example, if the teacher knows that most of the class is bored. Then the teacher can modify the lesson, to make it more effective. This is why I think it can greatly help the teacher.\n\nFinally, I really believe this kind of technology can change the way the schools teach. If people start puting Facail Action Codying Systems in schools, and they see improvment in grades for students. It will spark other ideas for these types of technogy. Like what the article siad for the Facail Action Coding System,\"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This is how schools could change in the future and help the students' education improve by a lot.\n\nI really believe that the Facail Action Coding System can greatly help the students. This could also be helpful for students who are to shy to rasie their hand when they are confused. That's why I believe that the Facail Action Coding System can really help students. What do you think? Do you think the Facail Action Coding System is valuable in a classroom?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus, sometimes called \"Evening Star\", is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from our sun. Lots of people often referred to as Earth's \"twin\" because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel. But numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\n\nOne of the challengings is that the coulds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our planet. Another challenging is Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Those are the reasons why we said that Venus has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\n\nToday, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe books music movies magazines removed really offensive Just s offensive one person nt mean would another person Any movie watch could offensive one person two everyone So I would say taking offensive things shelfs really going offened really offened matter aspect Also I believe people might lie offened take self Maybe movie example lot bad words I could see able take self lot people nt like words used thats understandable If taking self tho one little thing I nt think aloud I think person getting offened book said movie said nt read nt watch No body forcing watch read book nt want Reading watching certain movie others say I believe really go persons beliefs Maybe go church every day means probably nt going watching movie They going pick movie suitiable life style use Maybe friend suggested watch movie might taking offensivness also choice nt watch If case take book movie music someone offened would nothing left Are saying would listen everyone came get book came back said book offened I want take self I m sorry I m hard time believing going listen every single person comes says Also know offensive going show problem book My guess nt want deal many people one two maybe even five books I m saying people nt get offened somethings books movies say going lot one person come say one book movie would books left What someone come request certain movie say I m sorry take movie self offened someone I feeling person going happy explaining Also person comes asks something tell take say nice movie going listen also listen one person nt think fair listen person also likes movie I person believes theres two parts every story So therefore I think listen sides keep person wants take self someone asks specific one I would let nt going hurt person got offened book movie Therefore I think keep books movies music seleves unless one person complains would different story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The library meant place filled materials different genres types Many us go library looking something particular rather browsing Although materials people need research library considered inapproproate certain audiences still serves useful resource others This include getting information research paper renting movie needs watched school looking certain type book read By taking certain books music movies magazines shelves limiting amount materials people borrow At many schools students asked write research papers What considered valid subject high school research paper include information suitable groups people A student write research paper effects certain drug individual Just student chooses topic mean supports Some adults say information drugs shelves library include material consider graphic student looks material resource educational purpose My freshman year read We also watched movie get better understanding differences time periods There death violence movie along brief flash nudity Many would consider even great literary work movie inappropriate The movie helped us get real life picture things back We mature enough look past graphic scences see movie really If move taken shelf people would nt fully understood story could nt picture Sometimes want good book read Many teens gravitate young adult section includes agerelated material Many books section include works dark graphic theme subjects inappropriate younger children If eliminated books section censored end even less teens read Certain books provide escape teens even help confront deal problems lives If libraries start censoring books end less less readers years go Instead censoring books censor people reading books If parent nt want younger child read certain topic keep away material Libraries put age approval marks certain books permit certain age groups read Authors books punished choose write taking books library No matter person s purpose reading choice kind material book contains", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboys because you get to take care of a bunch of different animals and it is a lot of fun. If you don't think so then hopefully I can help change your mind about if you should join or not.\n\nIt was a lot of fun because I got to, \"tour an evacuated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China\". I liked doing that, but there is more than me seeing and doing this stuff I got a benifit of seeing Europe and China.\" If you have never been there, then you might want to become a Seagoing Cowboy to know the expirence.\n\nAnother reason that you should go is becasue of how long you get to sepnd time with the animals and if you get bored then we had, \" the coboys play baseball and volleball games in the empty holds where animas had been housed. Table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittleing, and games also helped passed the time.\"\n\nLastly one other reason you should join is because no matter where you live you can sitll do this. It helped me because after, \"helping out on my aunt Katie's farm as a boy, had prepared me for this hard work.\"\n\nI hope that I have taught or told you everything you need to know about this trip. And if you think you can stay on for a long time try beating how long I stayed on. I stayed on for 9 trips in 1947, that is the longest any Seagoing Cowboy had stayed on.\n\nI might visit again and I hope that I will see you at work as I did at work. It is fun and, you might want to be careful because, \"One rainy night, after making my hourly report to the captin, I slid down a slippery ladder on my backside. My heart raced as my hot feet first toward an opening on the side of the ship. A small strip of metal along the edge stopped my slide,keeping me fom flying overboard into the dark Atlantic. I was happy to be alive. But I couldn't work for\n\na couple of days because of cracked ribs.\"\n\nEven thought that that was a devastaing thing it still didn't stop me from living on with my dreams and pasion. I still fell like I'm on that boat an it is the most amazing thing I've ever done.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This technology could be the next big thing.\n\nIn the article they tell us how \"using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition sofware tracks these facial movments-In a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa.\n\nBy weighing the different units, the sofware can even identify mixed emotions.\"\n\nIt also gives examples of the what the pros are, such as \"a classroom computer coud recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" this was predicted by Dr.\n\nHuang.\n\nthis would help many teachers figure out were exactly thier students are in thier classes and were they are confused just as the quote states.\n\nIt even gives insight onto just how powrful the program is with \"They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\"\n\nWith all the teen suicides and pressure from work and such this could be really benaficial twards getting to the scource and asking if thry are alright.\n\nAgain this code could be really great for students, giving us more insight into what they need and dont understand and then developing farthur into that.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Climate is a long-term pattern of weather phenomenon in one particular geographical region. Several individuals deem that one’s lifestyle has been affected by climate; whereas other mindsets reckon, it has a significant influence on a country’s economical conditions. In my opinion, both notions have valid points to support. Various reasons behind accepting these perspectives are explained explicitly in the following paragraph.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, climatic conditions help to shape people’s lives in one place in many ways. Depending upon it, residents are compelled to put on daily outfits. If the weather remains cold, someone will wear warm clothes and vice versa. To illustrate, inhabitants residing in cold mountainous regions often cover themselves with jackets, woollen sweaters and boots; while, people living in tropical zones require light-tinted cotton or linen fabrics. Moreover, food choices are also determined by precipitation. Where an ample amount of rainfall and sunlight is available, irrigation and cultivation practices can be done. Not only does it assist to cultivate crops but also brings diversity. In extreme climatic situations, these processes are not feasible. The Mediterranean region is known as the “fruit basket” of the world, because winter rain helps to grow a variety of exotic fruits, for instance.\r\n\r\n In addition, the contribution of temperature to a nation’s economy is indispensable. A diverse range of phenomena associated with this has direct dominance on financial progress. If a place receives adequate rainfall and temperature, agricultural practices will flourish. Farming can support the province’s food security as well as that realm will be able to export the extra output, which must boost the economy by generating foreign revenue. Furthermore, when a nation will have subsistence agriculture, then there will be no requirement of importing food items from another land. It can save a massive capital. However, unforeseen calamities or natural disasters can have a detrimental impacts also. For example, the Indian economy greatly depends upon monsoon rain, which aids to strengthen it. \r\n\r\nTo recapitulate, I am a firm believer in the fact that both views are absolutely correct. Each parameter of weather plays a crucial role in everyone’s life. As a consequence, all should try to put individual effort to prevent climate change in order to obtain the goal of developing healthier pursuits.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Not alot of people think that the face on Mars is real because we all know that there cant be life without light, food and oxygen but some people would argue that. Some sceintist would say that the face on mars surface would be proven that there is life on mars, but my opinion is that there is plenty of evdince that says that there cant be any life on any other planets because the space doesnt have an evnviorment like earth does. Why would there be a big face that looks like a rock with shadows of the surface of mars an people say there is life there. I say there wouldnt be life there because there would be no living anything on the planet just like every other planet. If there was living stuff on one planet wouldnt you think that there would be other proven facts that there is life on other planets? Which there isnt. Just like peoples imagination when we see stuff that we dont really see, like when sometimes you are looking at a cloud an you see a object because you think it might look like a animal or a living thing in the cloud but you arent really seeing the thing its just your imigination. I think thats the same thing that happened with the mars face because the poeple who too the pictures had a great imagintion, an it might of only been the obove view that made it look like a face because somtime when we look at something a different way or up close then it looks way different then it dos from the top view. I believ that it was just the peoples imigenation an the way the poeple looked at it from the view they were looking at it. The people who think its a real life thing on the surface of mars are the people who havent really checked into there cant be any living thing without other living resources", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars is that I support the idea. The cars are already equiped with carmeras and sensors to prevent accidents. Google cars have drove half a million miles with a crash. One of the problems is who is going to take the fault, the manufacture or the owner of the car?\n\nFirst, Cars are already getting equipped with cameras and sensors to prevent accidents. Some cars have the ability to stop itself if the driver is to close to another car. This is a big help to prevent accidents due to carelessness. The only time the car will need help is when there is an accident, and then the driver will have to drive. The sensors will be a big help with the driverless cars.\n\nAlso, Google have cars that have driven half a million miles without a crash. Google has done that, and thatnshows that the cars are capable of stopping when needed to. This shows that if google helps, we could come up with a driverless cars without it getting into crashes. With google doing that there is no stopping.\n\nAutomakers are working hard to come up with a driverless car. Tesla has projected a 2016 release date for a car that can drive by itself when going ninety miles a hour. This shows that the industry isn't slowing down at all. They are in progress of making it come true.\n\nNow lets talk about a problem with i this idea. Who's fault is it going to be if the car gets into an accident. The buyer is going to be thinking that the isn't going to cause any trouble, and the manufacturers made the car safe for the public. THat will start a big arguement of who's fault it is. That's one thing that problem with the idea of driverless cars.\n\nThe car industry is coming up with big ideads. This is a big one with many good and bad things. It can benefit many people and buisnesses. It shows no signs of slowing down. Over all I support the idea and am very excited to see the first driverless car", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The year is 2041, and astronaut Jeff Goudard has just landed in the region of Cydonia. He is extremly exited becouse he will be the first human to see the only alien artifact known to man. As soon as he lands, he sees the face. Jeff's jaw drops practically to his feet. He relizes the \"Face on Mars\" is really just a plain old mesa, just like the ones out in the American West. Now just like this astronaut, there are probably hundreds of people that think that the \"Face on Mars\" is some sort of alien monuent, but in reality science and logical thinking has proven that in reality, the \"Face on Mars\" is really just a Mesa almost identical to the ones found out in the American West.\n\nFirst off is the logical thinking portion. In the region of Cydonia mesas are incredibly common.\n\nNow this particular mesas is oddly shapped, I will give it that, but it is just a mesa. What gives it human fetures is just the shadows. Just look at 1976 Viking one photograph. You can clearly see shadows Just look slightly below it, you can see a long shadow protruding from the mesa. Now on the flip side, look at the picture captured on 1998 when it was cloudy out and there were no shadows at all. The image just makes it look like a weird rock, not like a human face at all.\n\nWhile still on the topic of the photographs, the one snapped on 2001 also proves that the so called \"Face on Mars\" is really just a mesa becouse of not the actual formation, but the surronding area. It was taken by a very high quality camera. In fact, it's pixles spanned 1.56 meters whereas the best Viking photograph the pixles spanned 43 meters. That ment that you could zoom in around the area of the mesa to scan if there was any other evidence of alien life. So scienteists and analysts could scan the sourrounding area for pyramids or buildings, but they found absolutly nothing that would sugest that aliens are present in the region.\n\nLastly, lets all say that the so called face really was an ancient alien structure, why would NASA keep it a secret. I mean, NASA is really short on funding, but if it was proven that there was aliens on Mars, then that would mean NASA funding probaly would go through the roof. What better goal could NASA have then to make conatact with extratrestrialls. This must mean that the \"Face on Mars\" is just another mesa. What organization would pass up the opprotunity to get through the roof funding.\n\nSo just face the facts. The \"Face on Mars\" is just a mesa that had well placed shadows that are one in a million. So don't be Jeff the astronaut, and just face the facts early on as oposed to having high hopes and dreams just to have them crushed by even more scientifically proven evidence. If you don't remember anything from this article, remember this: don't be Jeff.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir PERSON Home The Blueprints Our Lives author creates positive greatful mood The author always greatful parents love sacrifice I know writes paragraphs show thankful parents describes great jobs Cuba poor became yet still worked hard give children better life In simple house parents welcomed refugees celebrate arrival country I celebrated first birthdays describes everything positive learning experience shows throughout memoir theme positive greatful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is sometimes argued that offspring should be educated through punishments by their parents in many cases. From my point of view, I believe that punishing children could have good impacts on their behaviour and thinking in the future, as I shall explain in more detail throughout the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, adults could educate their children in terms of thinking and responsibility through punishments. For many parents who have naughty sons or daughters, punishments could be effective methods to teach them to be responsible and the ability to think twice before doing every activity. Thus, they could learn how to be accountable and responsible to deal with some detrimental consequences that they have done. For instance, to teach a child who has broken a flower vase, some Vietnamese parents ask him to apologize for that vase and think about some consequences that would occur if the vase fell down into his head.\r\n\r\nSecondly, punishments could be a possible solution to decline the criminal rate in society. If parents pay more attention and care to their children, they may avoid becoming crimes in the future by virtue of the supportive education from their parents. Moreover, they could raise their awareness to not make friends with the bad, who may lead to misbehaviour of the youngster. If they break the rule one time, they may relapse in the near future. To avoid this, several methods could be used, saying apologies and setting limits for their leisure activities could be practical measures.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I concur that punishing offspring as early as possible could bring some benefits such as learning about thinking, and being responsible and a decrease in the criminal ratio in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The many mood memoir The mood mostly happy greatfull family friends near sad didnt granparents said I would know real grand parents Narciso Elder consuelo allowed leave Cuba happy parents parents left everything better life The strong person lot good bad moods The memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir auther created mood Narciso Rodriguez proud cuban culture heritage family important paragraph growing environment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative acsepted people family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The story ands paragraph Saeng believes next spring new hibiscus born good luck pass driving test It good way end story hibiscus involved life took drivers test Now beleives next driving test connection past experiences ability overcome obstacles comfort time disappointment Which Saeng thinks help pass test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many things affect cyclist But story three main features setting affected cyclist While cyclist riding hot We know looking back text It gives us quote That I could drop heat stroke gorgeous day June Because hot This could make cyclist thirsty Another feature setting multitude hills This would create exhaustion We know many hills text says Flat road replaced short rolling hills Going hills really tire someone A third feature te setting would nature Nature affect us many ways weather terrain case animals In story cyclist comes upon large snake This making dangerous The setting affect anything It would totally different story cyclist summer June", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studdies have shown that passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and 50 percent in the United States alone. Many people see this as and eye opener to life in the suburbs without motor vehicles. There have been actions on car deduced communities in Europe. Also France baned Driving do to smog. Sounds Extream, but it is very effective.\n\nThere have been some countries that have reduced the usage of cars to almost nothing. In Vauban, Germany Residents of this community have given up their cars. This may seem a bit insane, but the way the government did it is varry smart. Street parking, driveways, and home garages are generally forbidden. Their streets are completely \"\n\nCar-Free\n\n\". The government made it that if you still wanted a car you would have to pay an aditional $40,000 for a spot when buying your home. The result is 70 percent of Vauban's Families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move there. In the United States, the EPA (\n\nEnvironmental Protection Agency\n\n) is promoting \"\n\ncar reduced\n\n\" communities. Legislators are starting to act as well. Bogota has a car-free day where the only motor vehicles running are busses and taxis.\n\nSome countries are even going to harsh measures by banning motor vehicles all togather. In France they had so much smog that they baned driveing all togather. France desided that they where going to order even-numbered license plates owners to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). Same for odd-numbered cars the following day. almost 4,000 drivers were fined, and 27 had their cars impounded because of their reaction to the fine. But congestion was down 60 percent in the capital. In Bogota, Colombia they have had three straight years where cars have been banned with only buses and tavis permitted in a capital of 7 million. Their goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Violators faced $25 fines. A businessman Carols Arturo Plaza said, \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\"\n\nBased on all of the previous information givin, we can conclude that driving bans, and car-free campains have helped our environment. These countried have reduces the smog in their air. They have goten people to partisipate in their community. Also They have gotten other countries to get involved in this cause. Diffrent countries have Made their own style of these programs to their advantage. This idea of car-free suburbs is changing the way the population reacts in the community.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no doubt that online education has become a new learning trend. However, while I agree that they also have negative aspects, still I believe that this advanced technology is mainly beneficial to individuals. In this essay, I will support my view with examples.\r\n\r\n During the coronavirus pandemic, offline schooling became more challenging. The universities had to start web-based classes, in order to stop coronavirus from affecting the younger generation's health. In initial studies, it was declared that this virus is more dangerous to the youth. In such a situation, it was difficult to continue the academic system without wasting kids studies and maintaining their health. At that time, virtual tuitions were only the possible option that can save school learner's years and well-being simultaneously. due to this solution, the youngsters can connect with their teachers and faculty. They can learn new concepts and clear their doubts. Moreover, they can even conduct digital examinations.\r\n\r\nAnother major advantage of attending such courses is that it saves time. Nowadays, time plays a crucial role in our life. If a working person wants to pursue a specific program then it may become difficult for him to make a balance between his job and exams, as he also needs to travel to his university to attend the classes. As a consequence, it becomes hard to concentrate on both the tasks and he may lose his focus and leads to mental pressure. While applying for such alternatives, it can save his travelling time and he can also utilize his travelling time in learning. In recent years, there are many applications are available in the market and with their ,help you can select your stream. One such example is the Upgrade application. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite there are few reasons why we should value offline education, I'm inclined to consider that the pros of online education outnumber the cons.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the use of this technology to read emotional expressions of a student in a classrooom could be very valuable. I think it could be a very useful tool to help students learn as long as it is not over used. The uses for the technology to read emotional expressions are almost limitless.\n\nA way that the technology could be very useful is listed in paragraph six. The idea of a computer reading a students emotions and adapting the lesson based on his or her emotions could be incredibly benefitial. The technology has the potential to help a lot of students learn at a pace that is best suited for them. It would be like a professional teacher for each individual student.\n\nAnother way the technology to read emotional expressions could be helpful is also listed paragraph six. The program can construct a 3-D image of a persons facial structure, which could help students learn a little easier about biology and the anatomy of a human's face. The program could help students learn about all of the different kinds of muscles are in the human face. Maybe the program could even lead to a holographic 3-D interface that would let the students interact with that human face.\n\nWe are able to tell if someone is truly smiling or not based on whether or not they produce \"crow's feet\" around your eyes. If we can modify the technology to read emotional expressions into everyday use and use it to scan people's faces while we think they are not being truthful, we can find out if they are or are not easier. Teachers could use it to find out who really did their homework and turned it in on time, and who did not and is lying about it. Parents would definitely want a hand held device that could detect whether or not their child was lying to them about homework.\n\nThe advancements of the technology that could read emotional expressions are almost limitless. They have the potential to adapt individual student lesson plans, help students learn about human anatomy, and detect whether a student is lying or not. I am excited to see what advancements this technology will provide.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Climate change has become an urgent issue for modern societies as its impacts have materialized in many different ways around the world. While some individuals and organizations spend countless resources in hope of reversing its damages, others retire to learning to live with the Earth as it is. Although both sides have their reasons, I think we should try our best to undo the assaults we have done against our planet, for ourselves and the future generations.\r\n\r\nAccepting global warming is most appealing when it comes to economic practices. Poor communities are oftentimes unable to afford environment-friendly methods of production. Moreover, without having to install green technologies, companies can reduce their costs of production and reap more profits which will positively contribute to GPD. Another seeming benefit of embracing negative changes in climates is the continuation of the conveniences and comforts we enjoy every day. There would be no need to avoid using plastic utensils or bike to work instead of driving. Overall, learning to live with climate change provide many instant satisfactions on both the micro and macro levels.\r\n\r\nNonetheless, we should join hands in an attempt to prevent and reverse as many environmental issues as we can, because adopting such defeated attitudes is selfish both to ourselves and our children. The environment significantly influences our physical and mental health. The Covid-19 pandemic has demonstrated this vividly: the virus is able to spread due to our poaching of wild primates and overpopulation. As a result, many countries received detrimental blows to the life quality of their people and their economies. Additionally, if excessive exploitations of the natural world do not stop, future generations will shoulder catastrophic consequences of starvation and ill health. There are, therefore, strong arguments supporting a fight against global warming.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, regardless of the short-term benefits of ignoring climate change, its current and future consequences are undeniable. Instead of passively living comfortable lifestyles, we should actively participate in the conservation efforts happening around the world, so as to be responsible to our communities and our children.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author is very supportive of the idea of exploring Venus even though it's very dangerous. He goes on to explian the dangers of Venus and what NASA is doing to avoid those dangers. He also tells the reader how at one point Venus may have been a lot like Earth. That very statement may be the reson why the author believes that the Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nMany times in this article the author metioned how challenging it would be to study and explore Venus. Some of the challenges were presented in paragraph 2 when the author was expaining how most of missions to Venus were unmanned the spacecrafts could not survive the landing on Venus grounds. He even stated that not a single spacecraft has touched down on Venus in more than 30 years. Also at the end of paragraph 2 the author says \"Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\" This shows that the auhtor truely believes that Venus is very challenging to explore and he even gives evidence to prove it. And yet he is still very supportive of the idea of exploring this planet.\n\nIn 3 paragraph the Author goes into more depth about how difficult it is to explore Venus. He tells the reader how the atmosphere is 97% carbon dioxide. Or how the average temperature is 800 degrees and the atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than it is on Earth. Even a submarine ment to explore the deepest parts of the ocean would be crushed if brought to Venus. After discribing all of these facts the author reveals that even though Venus is far more dangerous for humans than Earth, there is a chance that at one Venus was much like Earth. He discribes how Venus may have been covered in oceans and could've supported various forms of life much like Earth.\n\nWith Venus possibly being much like Earth scientist and NASA wanted to explore it. Another thing that was mentioned in the this article was how Venus is our sister planet and if annything were to happen to Earth then we could just go to Venus. This would make people want to explore Venus even more no matter the dangers.\n\nSo in conclusion the author supports the idea of exploring Venus, even though it would be very challenging and dangerous, because he believes that exploring shouldn't be limited to danger and that at some point if we ever had a problem , farming issues, on Earth then we could go to Venus. On top of all of that the author believes that at one point Venus was much like Earth, but there's no offical way to go there and see for himself. So it's normal that author would support the idea of exploring such a dangerous planet out curiousity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As you may know, the Electoral College consists of 538 electors, which is a even number. As said in \"The defenseof the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing President,\" that even number can be a result of a tie in electoral votes, but is highly unlikely. But even then it is unfair to those who \"like\" the system, where as I oppose the votig system. Like everyone, I have my reasons;1) 'Electoral college is a disaster factor' 2)  Voters don't vote for the President, but the electors instead.\n\nTo begin with my first reason, that electoral college is disaster factor as said in ' The indefensible of the Electorial College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong' the system had a fiasco, as you may call it, back in the 2000 election was the biggest crisis in a centuary. Also in 1960, segregationist in Louisiana legislatures almost succeeded in replacing Democratic Electors whith electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy, so that the popular vote wouldn't have gone to Kennedy. What else has hepened in the 1960s? As you may or may not know, Vice President Richard Nixon, validated only his opponet's electors. With this, the Electoral College has flaws or loopholes making it a disaster factor.\n\nAs for my second reason, that the electorial collge is unfair to voters. Electors may not always be faithful to their party, as said in ' The indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defense of the system are wrong' electors could vote for another canidate if they refused to vote for their party's canidate. Meaning that if a voter votes for a certain elector to vote for a certain President, then their votes probably wouldn't count. Also, because of the winner-takes-all system, candidates do not spend time in states that the are aware that they have no chance of winning them over, but focusing on the 'swing' states. For example, in the 2000 campaign, 17 states didn't see canidates at all and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't see a single campaign ad. Candidates shouldn't just avoid states that they have no chance in, but take that chance.\n\nEven though the Electoral College is unfair and a disaster factor, it also fair in the state department. Smaller states votes area as equal as a bigger states votes, and the electorial college requires a presidental candidate to have a trans-reagional appeal which makes sure that  a candidate doesn't just go to a ragion that he knows he will get votes from, but to others that will allow him to gain more voters.\n\nSo in conclusion to my knowledge, the  Electoral College voting system should be changed for so that the system wouldn't be disfuntional and unfair to voters. Which will make electing a president functional and fair to voters.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A beaker bubbled lab I could smell sulfur smell wafting beaker CAPS whats going I yelped across room CAPS found cure cancer said little jublee dance showed I doctor I wasnt sure I told I patient extreme brain cancer CAPSs go try screamed As I zoomed car waited packed lab equiptment After minutes I pondering could hard time packing I said So I turned radio fell asleep After couple hours I woke shock I sleeping hours I rushed inside find holding ball fur wrapped lab coat I saved kittens life cure cancer said breath I glad I patient kitten would lived Just I thinking nice saved kitten pager dinged lady extreme brain cancer needed help got one vial cancer solution rushed hospital There I saw laying translucent light hitting paper I quickly got heart rate At moment I wasnt sure would live CAPS give mad scientist asked I made risky choice CAPS yet I waited five minutes poured came back life Even though couldnt talk I could tell smile thankful I patient Her daughter walked room said CAPS you I smiled back", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "there are many advantages of limiting car use the most important is for our health. by limiting car use we decrease the gas emissions ,also make the stores closer to you than across a huge highway,another reason is that it reducies smog build up many places are doing this for the health or maybe they just cant afford it .\n\nmany places in the world are starting to ban cars places like paris,colombia, and germany. in some places its be couse of the cost in vauban, germany it cost up to 40,000 for a car space and a house so many people just have a house not a carman y peolpe like it like this they say it takes stress away. this also helps with gas  emissons in europe. in europe up to 12 percent of gas emissions  are resposeable by cars and up to 50 in gas emissons.\n\nmany peole also like this becuase it makes the stores closer to the poeple since not many people have cars they cant travle far so stores start setting up close and nearby. this also makes more space fore sidewalks and houses insted of stores. this aslo helps with your health beause it incuages iyou to wal kmor insted of taking a car every where.\n\nin places like paris car have really effected the population there are so many peolple that it creates smog so what the peole did was they gave fines out to people that were driving on days they couldnt this brought 4,000 drivers to get fines 31$ and 27 to get ther car impounded. by stoping and lowering the amount of drivers they brouht congestion down by 60 percent and made the smog subside in bogota colombia they have got three straight years without cars there goal was to promote other means of transpotation. by doing this peole have made up to 118 miles of bike pathe and many parks for the public.\n\nthese are some but not all the ways that puttin limitations on cars could benifit us by redising smog and the green house gases bing released in to the air and by making stores more accesibale to peole with out cars and making a impact on our health.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Global climate change has posed a considerable threat to life on Earth over the last few years. While many people argue that living with it is inevitable, I believe that this is wrong and that we should devise methods to tackle the problem.\nThere are several measurements humanity can take to mitigate adverse effects on climate change. Firstly, governments and individuals could help to reduce a substantial amount of carbon dioxide emissions that lead to global warming by using public means of transportation such as buses or subway trains instead of personal vehicles. Secondly, to restore the balance of O2 and CO2 proportion in the atmosphere, authorities, along with the help of the citizens, could grow more trees in urban and barren areas. Finally, renewable energy technologies such as solar, wind, or tidal wave energy should be developed and widely implemented in industrial production and daily activities. This measurement would eventually curb carbon dioxide emissions by a significant amount and therefore prevent the greenhouse effect from deteriorating.\nOn the other hand, living with the current problem might lead to some severe consequences. First of all, rising temperatures have already worsened extreme weather events. For example, the recent severe heatwave has caused deaths to thousands of people in countries such as India, and France, which is why we should address this issue urgently to avoid similar incidents shortly. Besides, global climate change has already negatively affected natural habitats of various species on Earth. Typical examples of this problem could be the shrinking territories of polar bears and penguins due to increased ice thawing in regions of both poles of the Earth or deaths of numerous coral reefs due to warmer seawater temperature.\nIn conclusion, I believe that it is unacceptable to live with the current state of climate change; and we should instead come up with solutions for this serious problem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of a driverless car has been an idea only meant for science fiction films. The concept of the whole idea seemed as though people would not see in their life time. Until now, engineers and scientists are closing in on the idea that self driving cars are a thing of today. Top car manufacturers are now developing ideas and ways to bring us closer of this once fascinating dream, into a reality. To wake up some day and simply send a text or call a local business to send a driverless car to give them a ride to where ever they need to go. Also, the amount of time saved for people not having to car for their cars and take them to body shops and pay high prices for problems in the engine.\n\nBut before the idea can pick up even more on its popularity; some people may ask what would its use be?\n\nThere many young adults and teenagers who still have not received their drivers liscense and have to wait on a parent or guardian to come pick them up from school, activity, or sporting event. With the self driving car, those people may some day just call or text a business operating the cars to come and pick them up and drive them home. This method would relieve the stress of the parents having to drive there and wait on their loved ones. This method may also be used to replace the tradtional taxi driving system. The traditional taxi system was said to be unsafe under certain situations. for example the taxi driver can manipulate the customer if the customer is unaware of the streets and driver can then take the longest route to charge a substainally high price for a drive that was not suppose to take as long. With the driverless car, the car will not manipulate the customer and reach its destination at an efficient time and price. Along with the amount of fuel saved from the driverless car, our economy may no longer rely on fossil fuel as a sufficient source of energy for our cars.\n\nAnother reason why the driverless car idea might be successful is the lives it could save for the drivers who are not paying attention. some cars may not be driverless but the ones who can break before the driver can react is amazing. A popular car with the system that the car can break before you can react is Subaru. Subaru has always been popular with its safety features, but now, with the newest models, the car is now capable of stopping itself before an accident can occur. How this works is that this car isn't necessarily driverless, it is still a driver needed car. But what makes this car stand out in safety is its sensors in the front and the back of the car. it is used to detect any situations or actions of other drivers that can start an accident. In one scenerio, a lady is backing up her car from her driveway and is distracted by her child in the back, not realizing she was still backing up the car's sensors detected an oncoming vehicle and immediatly stopping the car. The car saved the lady and her child from injury and the lady will notdeal with insurance for damages and costs of repairs. This is just one of the dozens of scenarios that can happen when a driver is not paying attention and could lead to serious accidents. With smart technology we can save the lives of millions of drivers whose accidents could have been prevented.\n\nin conclusion, the idea of driverless cars is still a thing to be worked on and in need of improvement. But we are not far from seeing cars without drivers driving safer and more efficiently than human drivers. Not to mention the growth the economy will have from people switching from buses and uncomfortable rides with strangers. driverless car will not harm other drivers or harm how we see cars, instead we will see them as a safe, efficient, and well protected vehicle for transportation. Even if we do not succeed in having driverless car, we still have had many advancements from keeping drivers safe and preventing accidents that could be saved.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can one really trust a car? The future of cars has grown to the point where one almost does not have to drive the car at all. In retrospect, it is a logical idea that can be beneficial. In reality, it can turn into a dreadful nightmare. One should agknowledge the safety of it, not the convience.\n\nDriverless cars should not be available.\n\nSmart cars need many sensors to operate. If the sensors malfunction, the car stops working. What would happen if a car stopped working in the middle of the interstate because of the sensors not functioning correctly? The situation would turn chaotastrophic. One must realize that having a car operating by itself is extremely dangerous despite the technology behind it. Having these cars would be a grand benefit to today's society, but what would the cause be if there was a malfunction?\n\nFurthermore, if driverless cars were obtainable, this would mean more and more people would not pay attention to the road because, they would be dependent on the car to do this task. In the current world that we live in, the more technology is growing, the more people are becoming less and less aware of their sourroundings. The driverless cars would only make the people less precautious when driving. This means, the driverless cars would pose a threat to the own safety of the invidual for not paying attention to the road.\n\nTherefore, the question that it will always lead to is, safety. There is not a one hundred percent guarantee that these cars could steer away problems. It will only create new problems if not handled correctly. The major concern for these cars is, if an accident does occur, who exactly will be the one to blame? Would it be the driver or the manufacturer? There is no safe way of knowing whether or not a driverless car is a safe and efficient way of driving.\n\nThere is no stopping what the future will bring. The idea of receiving a driverless car, is not an idea that should be mentioned. Not one single type of technology is perfect, therefore it is implied that any material can result in a malfunction or disaster. These cars should be handled in an appropriate manner that will not damage this society that is already enough damaged. Driverless cars should not be a focus in the near future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars may sound cool and less stressful but sound like they can put your life in alot of danger. Facebook twitter and social medias have troubles everyday so why dont you think your car would mess up and put you in danger from a little problem that its having. Driving on your own may be more safe than trusting technolgy to get you somewhere .Driving one of the driverless cars sounds like you can rest or just sit back and watch where you are going but what if you get in a crash and you didnt do anything the car did that might take alot of money out of your pockets for something you didnt even do. Cars that warn you when things are coming may be a good idea but what if one day they have a problem and dont tell you when something is coming and you run into someone money out of your own pockets once again to get car fixed and to fix the persons car you ran into. Cars that people control on their own may be the safest way to stay over the years until they get technology 100% right.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author does not support his idea well that studiying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. The author talks about people being facinated with Venus, that Venus is the closest planet to Earth in proximity and features, and that it would be cool if humans were able to explore Venus. What he does not talk about well is the why. Why Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.\n\nHere is a part of the artical where the author talks about why it would be cool to study Venus. \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system,\"(paragraph 4). The author mentions humans being facinated with Venus and how the planet was once Earth-like. This information does help us see how it would be cool to visit Venus and it tells us some information about Venus. On the other hand the author doesn't give a solid reason for why studying Venus is worth it and despite the risks. \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors,\"(paragraph 8). The author does not tell us what the insight is that will be gained from exploring the planet. Also what does human curiosity leading us into other endeavors have to do with how studying Venus is a worthy pursuit. Their reason and support for studying Venus is weak. The author trys to use their own opinion to convince the readers that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit. The author aslo doesn't give a sound explanation as to how the danger of heat can be overcome for enabling the trip to be successful. \"Some simplified eclectronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions,\"(paragraph 7). The author explains that there is a material that can survive on Venus for a little while. A problem to this could be that the metal might actually not work on Venus because since no one has ever been ther how would they know exactly what it is going to be like. That is why they are going there in the first place to explore Venus. They could have totally messed up on the calculations of surviving on the planet and it might be a failure. The pros of this mission are far less important than the cons to this mission. If they succed then they can say they know what on Venus and can gain some information. If they fail then people can die, a load of money is gone because of the time, energy, and resorces put into the exploration are gone.\n\nThe author does not support his idea well that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. They only give a few reasons why the trip would be worthy. They use their own opinions as facts trying to pursuade the readers to agree with their ideas. They also don't fully explain how they can by pass the dangers involved with this exploration study on Venus. Since the author has used their opinion as facts and cannot explain without a doubt that this pursuit can be successful despite the dangers I have to say that they did not do well at supporting their idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dose the American citzens vote even count any more in the election for president? American citzens over the age of 17 have a right of having a vote for a president for America. The popularity vote is not having much of effect as the electoral college, the ellector college is also a non-democratic metod of the choosing of a president. these cause the election to be kind of fixed.\n\nThe electoral college consists of 538 electors A larger amount of 270 electoral votes is ruled to elect the president. According to a gallup pollin 2000 Al Gore won the popularity vote but lost the presidency because of the electoral college. More then 60 percent of the voters choose a direct election to the kind we have. The electoral colege has a large advantage over the popularty vote.\n\nThe non- democratic way of choosing a president tha should be changed by the candiate that gets the highest popularty vote the winner of the election. It is not democratic because the electors who elect the president, and not the people. It is as if that when you vote for a candidate you're voting for slate electors. it is possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote.\n\nThe popular vote also has a down side to it the votes coould choose a president fo the wrong reasons. This could cause a disaster and be a very bad thing for the American people. The electoral college pays very close attention to that a looks at both candiates reasons of there decsions. In 1960 , segregationists in Louisana legislature nerly succeeded in replacing the democratic electors with diffrent elecotors thta would oppose John F. Kennedy.\n\nThe popularity vote almost has no effect to the president election and that should change because the people that live here and pay taxes should have a effect on who leads it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", it has driven me to say that I am all for driverless cars. Using details from the article I can tell you exactly why. I think it is very helpful to people who could use it. Driverless cars would have to create new laws, but then again they would be helpful. Technology is coming far in this world, driverless are only the beginning.\n\nMy position on driverless cars are that I'm all for it. I believe that they would come in handy in the future. Even, if they are assisting you , who can't use a little extra assisting? The article says, \" The most important bit of technology in this system is the spinning sensor on the roof. Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings. The combination of all this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel.\" (stated in paragraph 4). Having that there to help you, would be so helpful and useful.\n\nHaving a driverless car would be so helpful in many different and wonderful ways. As I mentioned in the last paragraph it's laser beams surroundings of the car. Not only that but, \"The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" , also, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves.\"(both stated in paragraph 7). Those are two of the many ways that driverless cars are very helpful.\n\nWith new cars come new laws, and with these new laws come safer roads. Some new laws would have to be laws that cover liability in accidenys because who's fault would it really be? In paragraph 9 it states, \" If technology fails and someone is injured who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\", and they have a good point, but it would automatically be the manufacturer because the driver does not have full control over the car. The article also states, \"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times\", which is why they wouldnt know who's fault it would be. Therefore, the laws they crete are only meant to keep people safe.\n\nComing to a conclusion, I still believe that driverless cars are very helpful to people who could use them. Despite creating new laws, they are very helpful to keeping people safer aswell. The driverless cars are very helpful and wonderful in many and different ways. In my opinion, driverless cars could possibly help the world in ways you wouldn't even think they could. Technology is coming far in this world, Driverless cars would only be the beginning.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The concept of driverless cars has been a rather popular idea for decades now. However this concept seems to be getting further from being a concept and closer to becoming a reality in the past decade due to companies such as Google taking the wheel on research. However, as with anything shiny and new like a brand new car, there has to be some sort of counter agrument against it. Why do we need it? Will we be able to afford it? Will it run over the dog trying to back out of the driveway? These are only a few arguments that can be made against this new type of vehicle.\n\nOne of the biggest arguments that can be made against driverless cars would be the overall safety they present. With the cars, they would (obviously) be able to drive themselves. How would they be able to drive on the unpredicatable roads? Would they know to stop for the skunk in the road or the toddler running across the street? Would they know exactly when to brake so they don't ram into the car in front of them? There are so many driving hazards that could come that we aren't exactly sure where to start. After all, no matter how well the cars are put together and how much research goes into making them work as well as possible, even the best technology still has it's bad days.\n\nWhat would the driver's job in this be? To look pretty until the car reaches it's destination? If the car where to need assistance of the driver,would the driver be able to take back control without a moment's notice?\n\nMost every kind of technology uses some sort of software to keep it functioning, and with that software come necessary maintenence and updates. How would the software keeping the car functioning work? Would you buy the car and have to hope and pray that driving laws and regulations don't change from the time you buy the car to the time it's time to buy a new one? Would you be able to connect your car to your home internet and it update itself once it's not being used? If that's the case, what would happen if the update where to disagree with your care and then the car would perform poorly upon the next usage?\n\nThese are only a few of the arguments that I can make at the present time without more information on these cars. Yes, I realize that most of these arguments are hypothetical, but that usually tends to be the case when it comes to technology that doesn't yet have much coverage to the people. If we were to get closer to the reality of driverless cars being commonplace among the public, then I'm sure we could come up with more solid arguments. However, until that day, we'll just have to sit tight and wait for our questionable autoobile future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author memoir Narciso Rodriguez creates caring happy thoughtful mood By mentioning Cuban traditions shared neighborhood close friends cooking kitchen share great meal one another mood happy When Narciso talks great friends made different heritages knowing entire community like family mood thoughtful caring shows people really appreciated s company It also caring story Narciso talks parents devoted lives making sure children people knew good lives When Narciso describes way parents struggled cold winters yet always let others shows caring mood memoir I also think fact small simple apartment lived important Narciso repeats several times I think show thoughtful mood house small creativity bringing culture made seem much bigger", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood I felt I read Narciso Rodriguez feeling togetherness I got mood always talking together family home brought truly brought everyone family together made proud family Cuban Culture His family meant lot another mood could love love family house grew learned love His parents lot Turned simple house home He learned everything could ever think parents loves lot These moods I felt reading Narciso Rodriguez", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars may be safer than cars completely controlled by humans, but it would be boring and would put various people out of a job. Driverless cars made by Google have, according to the information in the passge, driven more than 500,000 miles without a crash. But they still aren't completely driverless, leaving us humans to take care of complicated navigation that would make more risk of crashes. Driverless cars would take the fun of driving away from everyone who enjoys it. As well as take away a certain freedom that driving cars gives from the people who want it.\n\nFirst off, some people may be bad drivers, but that does not mean that we as people are incapable of driving safe enough to not injure ourselves or others on the road. Driverless cars would illeminate the risk of crashes by people, according to the passage. But what if the car were to have a glitch in the system and the 'driverless taxis' all of a sudden needed a driver but they don't even have a wheel for a human to take control of? More crashes and companies getting sued. The risk for a car accident is not very high in general, give or take a few factors based on a persons sleep or wether or not they are under the influence of a substance. Driverless cars are still at risk for crashes, just like human-controlled cars.\n\nMany people, like myself, have fun driving around with friends and having the freedom to do that with a car that I can control. If I were put inside a driverless car with my friends, I wouldn't be able to see how beautiful the world was outside as I was driving. I would be too distracted by my friends and the lack of responsibility to be focused to noticed what a beautiful world we live in. Also, the freedom that having a drivers license gives is just an amazing feeling that should not be taken away just by some 'technological advances.'\n\nOn the aspect of jobs, delivery men/women would be unemployed because the world would not need them to drive supplies around the country for stores or construction because we would have could that can drive themselves as well as the resources to the desired destination without hassle or a human in the front seat, or even the vehichle as a whole.\n\nFinally, driverless cars are not needed in our world. Deaths and accidents will still happen if we develop driverless cars due to malfunctions, creativity and a sense of freedom will be taken away from us as citizens, and various people would be out of a job because they will not be needed to deliver resources to any store or company any longer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The picture demonstrates the implementation process of circuit boards. Overall, the production could be split into three main stages: preliminary stage, where a raw material is retrieved and processed, main stage, where the actual manufactoring is done, and final stage which finishes with delievery of the product.\nThe first stage is designated to the delivery of material and its initial preparations such as cutting, spraying with a fire retardant and cleaning.\nThe second stage is occupied by manufactoring of the end product. It could be seen that this process forms a cycle with the following steps: automated IC attachment and soldering, visual inspection and quality contron testing. The latter step may lead to the board rejection, next iteration of the cycle, or the final testing depending on its result. The final testing either leads to the next iteration as well, or to the last stage.\nThe last stage contains only two steps: packaging and delievery to factories.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Around the world, it is usually decided by parents whether to send their children to single gender school or a mixed gender school. It is understood by many that studying in a single sex school has tremendous negative impact on a young child’s life when they have grown up. I completely agree with this side of the argument. In this essay I will discuss the problems faced by both male and female students.\n\nFirstly, one major drawback faced by the boys having studied in a single gender school is uneasiness while communicating with the opposite gender. They find it difficult to open up and communicate with girls. This often leads to a lot of trouble in their later years. They face severe mental pressure when they enter institutions and colleges as they often feel left out.\n\nGirls from same sex schools also face difficulties. They feel less confident when they pass out from schools and join universities which have people from both the genders. As they have never interacted with males, they often feel dominated by the large number of men in college or workplace. They prefer being isolated or surrounded by the same gender members, which does not contribute to a healthy workplace.\n\nTo sum up, I believe that studying in a single sex school does not prepare students for the real world. Children of such schools encounter a lot of problems in life in the areas of communication and confidence, compared to the ones studying in co-educational schools", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Failure is what nobody wish for, but it could occur secondarily to an unsuccessful attempt towards ones goal, for various reasons. I am in the view that, failure is not a proof of lack of desire, rather it is more to do with improper techniques, less allocation of time and lack of proper attitude.\nIt is the general view that, ultimate success in any field is taught through the failures in life. One can be subjected to multiple failures due to lack of ability to develop essential skill set, also known as techniques, that would be essential to achieve a certain goal. One classic example is Thomas Alwa Eddison, the great inventor of all time, who went through nearly 100 unsucessfull experiments, before inventing the light bulb. He was brave enough to accept the failure experiments had taught him 100 different impossible ways not to discover the light bulb.\nOn the other hand, time plays one of the most crucial factors in obtaining a goal/success. By this I meant, the time that is allocated towards full filling tasks that are directed towards preparing for the goal. The little time is spent during the preparation, the further away the goal felt like. For an instance, one cannot expected to win a marothon with just one day preparation.Similarly, attitude plays by far the most striking part of the success. This is simple as, one cannot dream of becoming a good physician, having shown no interest in paying attention to people and their health related complaints.\nIn a nut shell, failure is not a proof for inadequate desire in fact, failure is due to improper practices of techniques,failure of managing time in preparing and attitudes that fires the drive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The used of this technology in the classroom would benifit the teachers. The teachers could teach and use the technology to see if the students were bored or confused. Another way this technology would help with is teachers could make a video teaching the lesson and use the technology to see how the students reacted.\n\nThe use of this technology would be great for teachers to know if their students are confused or bored. The teacher could teach a different way each day and see how the students reacted. Then which ever way kept the students more interested and made them pay attention more would be the way the teacher could start teaching so that the teacher gets the best results from their students. If the students are confused and don't want to ask a question the teacher could see that the student is confused and then the teacher can talk to the student one on one to help the student best understand the topic that he or she is confused with.\n\nThe technology could be used if the teacher was gone. The teacher could make a video teaching the lesson and the facial action coding system could see the students face and change the way the lesson is being taught to each student making the video lesson more personal towards the student. This would help the student learn the lesson how they like to learn. This would help them absorb all of the information in hope that they can retain the information for the test.\n\nThe technology would be great for classrooms. It helps the students learn the lesson the way they like to learn. It also helps the teachers teach the students to the best of their abilities. It will help the teachers teach the students the best way for the students. The teachers will know if their students are bored and that the teacher need to change up the way that they are presenting the lesson to the students. It will also help the teachers know if a student needs one on one but the student won't ask the teacher for help. With this technology the teacher will be able to go to the student and help the student. These reasons are why the facial action coding system should be implimented into the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinon I don't think that driverless cars should be made or yet even tested. I believe that the car could stop working in the middle of driving people some where. Then those people would get into a car crash because they can't do anything because it is a driverless car. Yes, it sounds great and cool to not have to drive a car and it do it itself, but there are many things that can go wrong with this idea.\n\nWhat happens when something goes wrong with the car? Who is to be blamed? The owner or the person/company who made the car? These are just a few questions I have over this topic. I believe that if something goes wrong with the car and someone gets hurt the owner shouldn't be the one to get blamed. It should be the person/company who made the car because they are suppose to make sure the car is safe for people to even be in, and safe for the road since a computer is driving it.\n\nWhat if someone hacks into the software/data base of the car and makes it drive people and into the middle of nowhere, to an abondon house, or something like that so they could get killed? What do you do then? Has anyone thought about that? I doubt that has crossed any of the companies, who want to makes these cars, mind. I mean you hear on the news all the time about all these people getting hacked. What's going to stop these hacker from not hacking into these driverless cars to harm certain people they have a strong hate to? If they really wanted to hurt someone they will stop at nothing to do that. How are these cars even going to be safe? Its like asking a three year old to drive a car. And I know that I don't want a three year old driving me around from place to place on a daily bases.\n\nSo I am strongly against these driverless cars. If someone can prove me wrong about any of the topics I brought up I would be glad to hear them. I do doubt that anyone can have evidence about some of this stuff not coming true if driverless cars are made. Many things can go wrong with these cars. Here are some questions that I leave you with, what is so good about these cars in the first place? How are these cars going to help us in the long run? there might be some upsides to these cars but not as must as the downsides.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "hamster One day cage playing owners sister hamster got brand new hamster toy bunch tubes climb slide running wheel wished one owner didnt enough money yet Even play still wanted one hard wait especially saw playing This story talking ta I really wish I one hamster toys said owner doesnt enough money CAPSt worry said You play mine I hear hes almost got enough CAPS I guess thats close enough A days later got brand new toy never I guess worth waiting twice big could shore And lived happily ever", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the three stories, What is the electoral college?, The Indefensible Electoral College, and the Defense of Electoral College, each argue wether or not to keep or over throw the electoral Colloge. The Electoral college has been a crutial part of voting who stays or leaves the offic chair of america, But one thing for sure losing this way of voting is very questionable.\n\nIn the story, In defense of Electoral college, it eplains five very detailed reasons to keep the electoral college. The certainty of the outcome of this voting system has been accepted for years. Richard A. Posner explains, \"The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exeeds his share of popular vote.\"This quote given to us shows the certain possibility of who wins the share of the presidents seat. Each vote by the citizens of America is sent to chose the \"qualified citizens\" to represent their state in th election for president.\n\nThe person in the election for president also has to have a appeal to many regions. If the candidate is attempting to gain more votes by stayong in the same region he or she will not gain more electoral votes. When a person runs for president is they go into many regions to pursuade more people to vote on that person for president then they will gain more electoral votes.\n\nThe system does have a few errors in its existence. When people are voting someone to represent them they might make a mistake on wich candidate thier voting on. If people did have a direct vote for who becomes president then they have their exact opinion on who becomes president, but the system of voting still stands because most people in America like this way of voting better.\n\nIt would be better to have people representing each state with electoral votes because having every vote from every citizen of america sent to an individual slot for who should be president is overwhelming. instead, we have a system where each person votes on a candidate to represent their state in the election. It is a better way of using time wisely in voting for America's new president.\n\nTo close, Having the Electoral College system to vote is a fantastic way of showing who should be president for America. The Electoral College  should stay because of the certainty of who will be next president and avoiding the run-off elections to prevent uncertainty of who will be president.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "having a successful career plays a vital role in enhancing an individual's life. While many people believe that studying at university or college is the most effective approach to gaining a successful career, others oppose it and propose school education is sufficient. In this essay, I will examine both views and I will elucidate why I believe both perspectives are correct, however, it depends on the profession.\n\nOn the one hand, people who support working directly after school graduation. They have point as a person commences his job early, that will provide him with an immense real-life experience rather than wasting years in completing his study, nevertheless, I believe it is correct in some jobs which require no diploma or certificate such as football players or cleaning vacancies. However, that is not the case in jobs where deep knowledge is necessary.\n\nIn such works an individual should have immense theoretical experience which needs years and years of study, in other words, practical experience is not enough at all. Here comes the role of universities and other educational institutions to fulfil the criteria for such vacancies, hence, specialist persons. an example is a Doctor's job, even though some individuals may have the skills to use medical instruments but when it comes to facing a life-threatening situation , instruments are not enough, knowledge only will tackle the issue. \n\nFinally, despite the public argument regarding whether a person should work or continue his learning after school, my belief is both perspectives should be considered, as a final decision should be chosen by a person himself depending on his desirable future job.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are said to be the best thing in the future but, \"Why?\". Is it becuase it's convienet , or becuase you feel like you don't have to put any effort in by driving the car. The whoel idea of a driverless car I believe will never actually be driveless.\n\nI do not agree with the concept of driverless cars becuase as the article stated the driver will be required to be alert while in the car even though they are not in fact driving just in case something happens that the computer can not navigate through requiring human effort. The fact that they expect the people in the cars to be attentive would not work because if a person gets in to a driverless care they are not in fact going to be paying attention at all since the whole concept would be a driverless car. No one can guarantee that a person will be paying attention even with all the vibrating of seats, flashing lights, and other things the car will do to get the drivers attention if the need to take over will work. This in fact could cause accidents and as stated in the article no one knows who is the blame. I feel that we should just stick to cars that require a driver to operate the vehicle so that there is no reason that the driver will not have to pay attention to the road and so that there is no confusion on who is to blame in case of an accident. I also did not read anything in the article talking about age limits on who can use these driverless cars. How do the company's expect a teenager who has never learned to drive becuase they live in a time where regular cars are not used supposed to be able to take over and drive the car.\n\nDriverless cars pose a great danger to a lot of people. The driverless cars are not guaranteed to be reliable at all times and are not safe when it comes to who can get in it by themself. The world should just stick to regular cars with requirenments such as the permit test, learing to drive with a permit, and then when of an appropriate age obtain a driver licence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One person s strong negative opinion effects everyone else That nt seem logical fair A library sanctuary people go read favorite books free containing books types genres There book everyone library s matter finding Therefore finding book offensive unsuitable give one right take privaledge away everyone else Books way putting mind ease whether s s escape measured enjoyable read Books found offensive one person could completely different impact next reader even find books relatable For example scene one reader thought graphic horrific readers someone would find scene enjoyable relate People nt capable relating scene would find inappropriate try remove another s reach One person s opinion importance next person s The book CAPS professionally written fictional novel praised s quality hence numerous awards Although book contains rape scene numerous inappropriate events woman succumbed throughout life Even still list suggested college level reads classes It disappointing think people nowadays focus graphic scenes novel versus exceptional writing style If readers able look past surface amoung scenes less books would contemplated shelf removal One person s negative interpretation novel effects everyone else s right concerning censorship libraries Readers fully warned beforhand maturity contents The books ranked critiqued summarized back cover summary even sorted library If one finds book offensive look different section Books sorted genre reason well different genres apeal different people This applies maturity reader well Books sorted according appeals age If find book offensive instead removed shelf altogether look section younger peoples different genre completely If someone finds book offensive fault book person wrong section The main problem concerning book censorship libraries content interpretations differenciate towards content On issue readers opinions specific books removed significantly overlooked For one complain book s contents automatically give someone else right protect book s contents For libraries remove books order censorship viewed favoritism completely rights stood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Wow , seeing technology that is getting bigger in bigger every year like last year they had made the car called \"Tesla\", On this type of car just use's light for it to drive an no gas at all in it can actually drive by it self in a lot of hell technology is coming soon .\n\nNow that am reading about this passage that is new technology called\n\nFacial Action Coding system that can read emotions from people at are famous , Died, In can evening tell from a picture what kinda emotions they had in there picture i gotta say that awesome becuase now in days people always lie to people, Plugs it can be more easy for the police's in actually see what was going now insect of asking the crime what's going now in i know some of thses people like to lie thing they can run away from lie they won't becuase am pretty sure police would know about this technology coming up in everything would be more easy probabrly be less drama in get the job done!\n\nI gotta say am happy that these technology is awesome in am happy this technology is out here in the reason why is becuase i had a little couisn that pass away in i just wish i could be closed to that technology in show them feedback of my little couisn pitures in explain to me \"What did she felt or what was in her mind what was the last words that she could of say in that piture felling her emotions i wish i can have that moment .\n\nBut about this technology about these students in classroom is varible about there emotions how they feel,sad,happy,bull,any type of emotions,That these student having there type of emotions how they facing there self into other computer in telling each other about there feeling of there piture in isee there going along with it in see the cool techology around in am pretty sure it nice beucase you proabrly your friends feeling towards someting eles in see how they feel .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author described F.A.C.S which is capable of telling someones emotinal expressions and it also hints weather using such technology should be valuable in a classroom or not. The use of F.A.C.S is valuable to the classroom and should be implemented as it can arrange the lessons for a child to fit their needs, activate kids by showing more interesting topics to their wanting, and can open different opprotunities for learning in different carriers.\n\nThe first reason why is F.A.C.S should be implemented and is very valued in classrooms is due to the use of emotions to better help kids who appear to not understand the topic(s) and would need help as it could modify the lesson to fit their need. This is a very helpful and needy technology as it can change the way students learn \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor,\" as Dr. Huang described it in paragraph 6. This gives the a student the ability to not fall behind as some people learn at different speeds and understand different parts better than others, it allows someone to learn one thing in more detail than something else that they might already knew or understood faster than others.\n\nThe second reason why F.A.C.S would be valued at school is due to the fact that they could pinpoint what intrests a student and what keeps them away. This is more of the important reason why as it can help with allowing or guiding a student in the right direction of a carier path and what they could do that would interest them for the rest of their lives. As Dr. Huang said in paragraph 6, \"A classroom computer could recoginze when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" As he said when the classroom computer points out what a student likes they can then focus on what they should learn and possibly even figure out what job they will or should take in the future to satisfy their need. This could also save a school or the student a lot of money as it would point them in what they must learn while not giving too much attention to other subjects which would just cost them money and due them no good.\n\nThe last reason why a F.A.C.S computer would be valuable at school classrooms is because it could be used in colleges or schools to help the student practice in what field they would like to invest their time and money into. As seen in paragraph 6, Dr. Huang compares the machiene to a video game. \"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive-for video games or video surgery,\" this is an example on how the technology that is avaliable to us could help in someones carrier like a psychologist. If they are capable of being able to read te emotions on someones face they can tell if someone needed help or hiding something/lying that leads to the problem which they can then solve. This carrier is just one of they many types to which computer could help in.\n\nArrainging the lessons for a child to fit their needs, opening different opprotunities for learning in different carriers, and activating kids by showing more interesting topics to their wanting are all valued reasons on why an emotional expressions computer is valued and should be implmented in an everyday classroom. If some may be scared or believe that this technology isn't needed or is a waste of time they should look at the regular computers that are now at school. Once thought of as possbily creates the attention to focus away from school and more on technology, it proved wrong to many as it created more opprotunites for students to learn and jobs to be made. Which is just as the F.A.C.S software will do or even achieve better more than personal computers at school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I'm strongly against with have driveless cars,the chance of having car accident are higher,technology has arrived but not fully fuction,and the cost for driverless car.\n\nThe chance of a accidents are higher. \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\"Drivers will have to be alert to any happening.\"Wouldn’t drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\",This lead Drivers most like falling sleep or more like geting distract from the feedom of useing hands lead to texting or active invole using your hands. Drivers will not have enough time to respond to take over car. Which leds to next problem technology.\n\nTechnology has arrived but not fully fuction. Technology has adavance some much in little amount time. What took developers decades to do in the past. will take developers today a matter of months at most. but we still have problems beacuse, technology has adavance some much we have to face new problems.\"Automakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved.\"Although we have driverless cars today it require a human.\n\nThe cost if driverless car. the car will cost a fourtue.\"For starters, they needed a whole lot of sensors.\"it took years to develop and technology in the car. the coverage for driveless cars most be expenisve beacuse of cost car and the danger it brings.\"order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault—the driver or the manufacturer?\"\n\nReasons why i strongly against with have driveless cars,the chance of having car accident are rise,technology has arrived but not fully fuction,and the cost for driverless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Raising the price of petrol for vehicles and other transportation modes is considered by some people as one of the best ways to solve the environmental problem. I believe there are positives and negatives to this approach which I will analyze in this essay.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, I agree that increasing the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles is one of the best ways to solve the environmental problem, because nowadays there are too many cars running on the roads. Almost everyone has a car and do not like to use public transportation because it is difficult to go to work by bus or metro especially from the suburbs. However, if the government raises the price of petrol and make their public transportation systems more enticing, it will make citizens more likely to utilize it.\r\n\r\nThere are multiple methods that the government could implement to persuade people to make more use of public transport and stop using their own cars. For example, if people can get a discount for taking public transportation, they will be willing to do it from time to time. The government could also implement and build infrastructure and systems for people to ride their bicycles. If it is convenient for everyone to rent bikes from one place and return to another, it will become more popular for people to use it and will reduce the amount of time they spend driving their cars which will have a positive effect on the environment.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is not only because of people driving cars and the resultant carbon dioxide emissions that the human-race is having a negative impact on the environment, there are a plethora of other factors which are also contributing to this impact. According to many studies, climate change is caused by many different factors which include(s) making (processing meat) products related to meat, manufacturing factories, agricultural fertilization to grow crops...etc. Therefore, all of these factors and different areas of human activity cause environmental problems which results in climate change.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, though there are many issues which contribute to the environmental problem, I believe increasing the price of fuel will have an overall positive effect by encouraging people to utilize different modes of transport and consequently reduce the negative impact on the environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time two twin chipmunks names always patience AJ much One day sunny cool breeze AJ decided wanted go trip So packed camping gear headed farther woods around dusk reached wanted So tried build fire started gathering firewood tried start fire mom dad taught As l said first part patience kept trying awile stopped would hit rocks together wouldnt start tried minute got started AJ didnt care got acorns started cookin But every time hed leave seconds tried tried finally stopped well minutes really mad went bed When woke morning found cooking breakfast AJ finally learned patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator Don Gates,\n\nThere has been many arguments about whether or not to keep the electoral college or to change the election process by popular vote. The best way to go would be to use popular vote. The Electoral College is \"unfair, outdated, and irrational.\" (Plumer, paragraph 14). There are so many reasons as to why you should change to popular vote, When you vote for your candidate, you're actually voting for your candidates electors, sometimes the state legislatures pick the electors, and also its an unfair process to voters. The Electoral College needs to be booted out!\n\nWhen you go to vote, you think that you are directly voting for your candidates, that is no the case. You are actually voting for your candidates electors. You cannot control who your electors vote for either. They do not always vote for the same person you wnat them to. Voters may sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate. This has happened. If the process were done by popular vote then their wouldnt be these problems taking place.\n\nWho picks the electors? Sometimes it is the State Legislautures. They are responsible. In the article\n\n\"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\"\n\n, it states that in 1960, segregationists almos succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new ones that would then oppose John F. Kennedy. This was so a popular vote would not go to Kennedy. Also it was stated that \"faithless\" electors have refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a vote for whomever they please. This doesnt seem fair to the people.\n\nThe whole process of the Electoral College is \"unfair to voters\". There is a reason behind this accusation. The winner-take-all system to be more precise. Candidates dont spend time in states that they know they have not a slight chance of winning, they tend to focus more on the \"swing\" states. During a campaign in 2000, seventeen states didnt get to see candidates at all. Voters in 25 of the largest media markets didnt get to see a single campaign ad. As it was stated in the article\n\n\"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\",\n\n\"If anyone has a good argument for putting the fate of the presidency in the hands of a few swing voters in Ohio, they have yet to make it...\".\n\nThe Electoral College is not the best way to decide who runs our military, or nation. We need a way to have a fair and equal vote. Popular vote is the way. Though the electoral college is a quick and easier way to get votes in, it isnt very efficient. The process isnt fair to the people at all, you're not directly voting for the candidate of your choice, and state legislatures, who have opinions, pick the elctors. Bob Dole was right: Abolish rhe electoral college!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If u want to see or visit unique places with your family make sure u sigh up for Seagoing Cowboys program .My Personal opinion is that it seems worth it and Fun and exciting .You get to China ,Europe,italy and even more .Tis guy named luke had to help is aunt katie on her farm. As a boy had perpared Luke for hard work but not dangers at sea .As the second night Luke served as a night watchman.\n\nOne day he got on the ship and he had fun especisally coming return trips after animals had been unloading they played baseball volley ball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed .They played Table-tennis tournaments. Fencing .Boxing ,reading whittleing .And games also hepled pass the time .\n\nThese are some activity there while you are on the ship. There might be even stuff for the adults on the ship while people are witing to visit the nice places. This is why u should join the program of seagoing cowboys.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke said he grew up on an farm with his aunt so he wanted to help the animals. After World War 2 Luke wanted to help the countries recover by bringing food supplies and animals. Luke loved animals because when he was younger he had lived on a farm. So when he heard UNRRA is hirring Seagoing Cowboys to take care of Horses,Cows,and Mules he and his friend Don signed up. This to Luke this was an opportunity of a life time.\n\nLuke got on an boat called SS Charles W. Wooster and there were 335 Horses plus hay and oats to feed the Horses. When Luke was 18 he could be drafted to be in the military but when they heard he was on a cattle boat trip they told Luke to stay. In 1947 Luke made nine trips the most out of any Seagoing Cowboy. Luke said \"Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropoils in Greece was special,\"he says.\n\nIf you get to go on this trip you would be busy but you would have so much fun. Also if you like caring for people and animals you would be perfect for this journey. Another reason is if you like travling on a boat and don't get sea sick you should try being a Seagoing Cowboy or girl. Not only that but you could become famous just for helping people. Then again you should always help people. Luke went would you?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars. Mostly everyone has been in a car, had a car or most definetly seen a car. They're part of our culture, so deeply engrained that we buy our homes and plan our lives around the commutes we use to go about our lives but recently, cities around the world have been questioning our dependance and need for cars, especially considering the damage they do to our environment. However, the environment doesn't concern the man or woman that is trying to get to work, so what are the other benefits of not having a car? Well, closer locations, a peaceful life style and a close knit community are also elements that come with a world where cars aren't the norm.\n\nFor those who think practically, not having a car is a hassel but the thing is that cities that have already implemented this change. Locations are put closer together so that you may only need a car to get to the next city and even then alternate transportations are put in place to help with that. For example Vauban, Germany has completely given up their cars, except for a few placed in choice parking spaces at the edges of the town. Inside the community people ride their bicycles and there are shops placed at close intervals", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Not two miles next section ride I noticed terrian changing Flat road replaced short rolling hills Kurmaskie When cyclist realized terrain becoming difficulty become ignorant hopeless Wide rings dried sweat circled shirt growing realization I could drop heatstroke gorgeous day June simply I listened gentlemen nt porch decades caused laugh sad hopeless laugh NUM He nt goig die die even though struggling made big deal Unfortunately man lived He would live telling people listen old men Never accept travel advice collection old timerd nt left confines porches since carter office NUM He long hot raod started taking stabs old men I made mental note change paragraph NUM The man forced take direction old man In selfishness cut back thos trip rough terrain heat dehydration caused hopeless angry felt sorry", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The presented bar graphs illustrate the number of people who had access to water and its purity in Australia and SouthEast Asia in 1990 and 2010.\nOverall, what stands out is that in Australia both the quantity of people supplied with water and its cleanliness were higher over the given period in Australia than in South East Asia.\nIf we examine the diagrams in more detail, it can be clearly seen that in 1990 the number of people who had access to clean water in Australia was twice as many as the figures for South East Asia: 80% vs just under 40%. The same could be said about its purity - almost 70% in Australia and just 40% in Asian region.\nTurning to 2010, it is worth mentioning that in Australia we can see a positive growth in both, access to water and its quality. In South East Asia, despite a significant increase in the number of people who got access to water, we can see that there was a slight decline in its cleanliness.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Due to the escalating pollution and huge population, healthy food is a great concern for many. While healthcare budget for the government is increasing each year, the public health condition, on the contrary, is deteriorating. Some opine that the government needs to pass laws regarding food intake to improve the public health, while others oppose this idea as they believe that it is a matter of individual choice. The following paragraphs will shed some light on this debate before drawing a logical conclusion.\n\nTo begin with, healthy lifestyle is a choice and habit of an individual. No matter how many laws are passed and how strictly the government monitors the food quality, if a person does not follow the healthy lifestyle and eating habit, he will surely suffer from health related issues. Thus the choices of individuals greatly affect the overall health condition of a nation. To lead a healthy life citizens do not need expensive food, gym facilities, expert dieticians and so on. For instance, the rich population of a country suffers from obesity, diabetics and many other diseases that are less frequent among the middle-class people. This proves that purchasing ability and budget are not the most important aspect of a healthy life. \n\nOn the other side, use of chemicals, preservatives and adhesives in food items should be totally banned and only the government can ensure that. Even after having proper diet and exercise, if people are forced to eat foods that have unexpected chemicals, they would suffer from dangerous diseases. Using unauthorised chemicals, selling expired and low-quality food should be forbidden. Infrequent market monitoring and the lack of quality control for food items are two reasons our market is full of unhygienic food items. The government's initiative can greatly reduce this unexpected corruption and crime in the food industry and market.\n\nTo conclude, the citizens of a country have to practise a healthy lifestyle while the government should ensure the hygiene in food production and food sells. Both of their combined initiatives and efforts can greatly promote the public health.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am going to try to convince you to become a seagoing cowboy. I belive you should become a seagoing cowboy because this is something that helps out other people. Also, sometimes us people in america can get very selfish and need to do things for other people. And I belive that God would want you to do this.\n\nIn the text it states,\"The cattle boat trip was the experince of a life time for a small town boy.\" In paragraph 5 it also states,\"Besides helping people I had the experince of seeing Europe and China.\" Doing this would keep you busy. But in paragraph 8 it says \"Luke also had time to have fun on board.\" This also would be somthing you could do to serve our country.\n\nDoing this would be a very good experince to have. You would have a lot of time to get to know the other people on board. For those reasons and more it would be very good for you to become a seagoing cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am for the development of these cars. There's lots of reasons why I am. It reduces less injuries or car wrecks. This new development really protects are environment and the way we use cars today. It helps for the habbit of texting and driving. I will explain more in the following paragraphs.\n\nIt reduces less injuries or wrecks. Many of family memeber have died from car accidents. Car accidents could be caused by texting and driving, falling asleep at the wheel, and many other reasons. I will explain more on why this new development protects our environment and the way we use cars today.\n\nThis new development protects our environment and the way we use cars today. With this new development, it sees the accident occuring before we do. It protects us very well from our car crashes and wrecks and us humans being hospitalize. \"Google cofounder Sergery can remember a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore.\"\n\nIn conclusion this new development can protect our enviroment. Prevent lets injuries. It causes a better and safe life. It also sees the accidents before we do. So I am with this new development and the way it works with life and the future of us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some of the advantages of limiting car usage is definitely that it would help not polute the air. With so many people driving cars in small towns that can quickly polute the air, especially in paris in source two where it says \"After days of near-record pollution, paris enforced a partail driving ban to clear the air of the global city\" With all of that pollution it can cause things such as global warming, and unhealthy air for our bodies. With just a small break of not driving the congestion was down to 60 percent in the capital of france, after five days of intensifying smog. Also with cold nights and warm days that also causes air to trap car emissions.\n\nAnother advantage of not driving cars, would be exercise. That would be such a good work out because you would have no other option except to walk/ride your bikes. You would get to socialize with everyone else who is walking to their jobs, or the grocerey store all while getting a little bit of exercise with your family. With everyone walking and having nothing better to do, sports centers and parks activity has bloomed throughough the city, and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up with sales.\n\nMore and more people have stopped getting cars/licenses and instead taking the city bus, walking or riding their bike. A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. If more people would continue to either car pool or find a different way to get where they're going the worlds pollution would definitely begin to go down. Without all of the pollution that comes out of cars and that gets trap into the air, our air would begin to get so much more cleaner and safer for us to breathe.\n\nWith all of the money it takes to repair the roads, and the electricity it takes to run all of the stop lights, that money could go towards other things if people didnt drive as much as they do. Although many people need and use their cars for transportation theres always other ways to getting around town. It would also help save you money that is spent on gas every week, with the gas prices being unpredicatable every day.\n\nWith all of these advantages of not driving cars as much or at all, it would really help protect the worlds air, and could be a great source of exercise! Walking or riding your bike to wherever you need to go, or even just taking the city bus for two dollars. Also saving your money and spendind it on something else rather than wasting it on gas, or getting your car fixed. Or simply even buying a car, which can cost thousands of dollars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, playing computer games is popular among adolescents some people argue that this situation has a detrimental effect on children, whereas others assert that computer games can be beneficial to the development of youth. In my view, some of the games such as puzzles can assist them to enhance their skills.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, technological advancements have revolutionized people’s lives and youngsters have become the most overdependence users ,particularly in playing computer games. Due to the fact that becoming addicted to digital games might cause several mental and physical health issues. To put it another way, when youth spend abundant of their time playing digital games, they lose touch with friends and become isolated. Therefore, this situation can lead to anxiety and depression as well as obesity. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, computer games have an essential role in the growth of youth and teach them valuable skills for their future. Problem-solving can be considered the main element that youth can be learned by playing games. To illustrate more, games teach them how to deal with challenges or learn novel techniques to overcome issues. For instance, brain games can be a great opportunity for them to make decisions rapidly and become faster than normal time. Furthermore, according to research which was released by Cambridge University brain games could improve productivity and multitasking. In my view, games can assist them to boost their soft skills.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, several citizens believe that games have not been a positive impact on youngsters while others argue that computer games have positively affected the cognitive development of children. From my perspective, I am in favour of the latter view.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are not a thing of the past any more. There are many companies that believe that creating a driverless car is a step froward, but it could also be a step back. The driverless cars we hev today require a human to take the wheel when there is something that requires human skills. However the car does alert the driver , it still seems dangerous to have a driverless car when the human's skills are still needed.\n\nThe most important thing under consideration about the driverless car is safety. If safety is the most important thing then why are driverless cars still being improved, when the project should have been shut down. The driverless car isn't really driverless because it still requires human skills. To me that means that the driverless car is not really safe when it requires a human to do the controlling at certain points, such as driving through a construction zone. For example, the driver is not paying attention to the alerts will the car crash injuring the driver and posibbly others around the driver.\n\nIn conclusion, the driverless car is illegal for a reason. It is only able to be tested in a few states. So I hopoe that the idea of having a driverless car seems unsafe because under certain circumstances a driverless car is not always a positive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usuage would help the world In so many ways. First of all, there wouldn't be that much people getting hurt from car crashes. Also cars were affecting France by letting out to much smog. Cold nights and warm days had affected the warmer layer of air to trap emissions. If you limit car usage then you wouldn't have that problem.\n\nAnother advantage would be that you wouldn't be Inhaling as much polluted air If cars were limited. Polluted air Isn't good to Inhale and also will mess with people allergies so that would definitely be a big advantage. If car usage Is limited, more people would be active. That would help with people's health and decrease the number of lazy people we have In this world.\n\nPlus If another advantage would be that beneficial Implications for carbon emissions and the environment. It would definitely help with that since car transportation Is the second largest source of America's emission. Carbon emissions play a pretty big role to so benefiting that would be fantastic. Limiting car usage would also help you save money by not having to repair your car. You won't have to take It to get checked by a mechanic every three months. You would be saving thousands of dollars If you limited car usage.\n\nThe day without cars Is the day that Bogota has seen the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths, the most of any Latin American city, according to Mockus, the city's mayor. Also the parks and sports centers have bloomed through the city. Pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks. Another advantage Is that rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic. New restaurants and upscale shopping districts have Increased.\n\nThere would be many advantages of limiting car usage. People will find a type of way to benefit themselves from it. It would also be way much better air we Inhale If cars are limited. Saves money that people could be using on more Important things. Limiting car usage would be great.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story author concludes story last paragraph showes even hardships Saeng goes keeps trying live normal life move For example says Saeng vowed silently spring I take test again This shows even one failuare never give dont forget past", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, it is universal truth that commercial and cutural interaction has an inseperable relationship with the growth of any aspects of each country. However, whether developing it has always been a topic of general public. While a number of people argue that promoting communication between these regions may carry some potential dangers for identity, others have a contrary-minded that it will significantly create superb results in world's connection. Personally, I contend that the benefits that globalization brings about outweighs the drawbacks.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it is understandable that why some groups of community believe that the interconnection between countries will take a heavy toll on the national recognition. The key rationale is that as foreign influences, especially the Western cultures that permeate other societies, more people will embrace intriguingly external ideas and start to consider that their conventional custom as obsolete, which may probably result in a loss of the national true values. However, this thinking is totally exaggerated. As far as I am concerned, instead of marginalizing the traditional values of every country, the globalization has given a larger range of chance for citizens all over the world to introduce and open their own culture to other friends. Korea perfectly exemplifies this situation. The widespread presence of entertainment companies and TV programmes, specifically the \"Hallyu wave\", has been the key to foster and promote a global appreciation towards this country. This is a testament to positive impacts of world's contact on a country's values.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I am of the opinion that the global development will offer stupendous advantages. In terms of business, many entrepreneurs can expand the foreign markets. As a result, many jobs are created which will directly improve people's living standards. To give a clear example, the contribution of SamSung in VietNam has hostically addressed the unemployment of a plethora of people. In addition to this, in terms of culture, the integration among these areas will mitigate many social problems which occurs on a regualr basis. To exemplify, the thinking of Western's community will gradually turn the gender inequality sentiments on Asia society's head. Therefore, it seems sensible that we can broaden our mind towards a harmonized development. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while the exchange in tradition as well as trading still exist some disadvantages, it is irrefutable that the global changing has created many significant benefits for each and everyone. It is also clear that the traditional values can be separately maintained in tandem with the global integration.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper know two three computer Computers helpful tool benefit everyone society They allow people communicate eachother learn teach handeye coordination good things school Computers useful beneficial part society The advance technology upgraded computers allows people communicate For example new webcams allow people actually see talk computer screen This allows people matter far talk stay touch With webcam I able keep touch cousins Another way communication email Through internet people type messages back forth It fast easy allowing people talk communicate As well webcams email computers grants people access communication websites instant messaging These websites people message back forth quickly easily It difficult like writing letter would people communicate efficiently easily Computers helpful communication along Computers advancement could help people learn anything For instace could learn foreigh plaus All would go internet type would come screen It would allow people learn places world Also people see pictures computer For example someone wanted go vacation faraway could type place see looks like However computer show places People could also see animals people environments anything else want learn Plus new websites created people could actually see earth looks like space They look houses wonders world much computers give people opportunity learn much would help people especially students better education If ask anyone school tell computers useful tool Firstly allows type Students type project paper computer faster easier It also look neater orginized Plus computers teach students handeye coordination By typing even clicking mouse students bettering coordination This due fast screen typing clicking sense direction know hit put hands without even Lastly computers help students need help ask one friends computer Students would better understand content go school would already know Therefore computers would lead students getting better grades Computers play big role society today They way communication allows students better school Overall computers beneficial tool society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Now we have so many school was used the computer ''teacher'' to teach the students. It was pretty cool to see, now in the world we already have this kind new technology. But is we can make sure the computer ''teacher'' they can same with humen teacher, or even they can better than human teacher? Is the computer can like the human to read students' emotional? I think the answer will be: yes, the computer they can read students' emotional.\n\nPeople usully have six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. So for this six basic emotions, people awasy can look the others face to read they are emotion. But is the we can make sure we read was all right? People make the emotions was used face muscles made. Yes, if a person don't want show they realy emotion to peolpe, they can make a emotions by theyslve. So when they do that, is we can still just look they're face to read they are realy emotion? That will be very hard, and was very eazy to read wrong emotion.\n\nPeople was eazy to read wrong emotional, so what about the new technology the ''Facial Action Coding System''. The Facial Action Coding System can help the computers teacher to identify human emotions. They have all 44 major muscles in the computer 3-D model, and when they move the muscles was like human muscles. So they are can just like human to read human emotional. And maybe they will better than human. They read the emotional like doing the math homework. They will check all you muscles to read you emotional, even you try to make a not really emotional. Because the face muscles was do not lie.\n\nSo the computer teacher, will better than human teacher to read the students' emotions. They can find out students emotions and do right things to help the students. The new technology the Facial Action Coding System was very useful and they can more help the teacher find out students emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]