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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this era of equality and conservative gender roles, females are stepping out to do all types of jobs that were previously assigned to males only. Inflation and awareness are the two prominent factors behind this tremendous transition, and personally believe that it is the cornerstone in the development of any nation.\r\n\r\nIt is irrefutable that inflation is at its peak these days, and both genders need to work to afford the luxurious lifestyle of their dreams. Due to this, women are ready to take taking participation in all kinds of jobs, from office to heavy lifting to financially support their families. For example, agriculture occupation was only for males in ancient India; however, modern Indian women are doing farming and generating dramatic revenue.\r\n\r\nBesides this, people are significantly aware in recent times compared to the past because of the acceleration recorded in the literacy rate. So, education plays an indispensable part in breaking the tradition of sex-oriented jobs. Consequently, aspirants are aware of equality and human rights. Thus, women do not show reluctance in joining jobs that were meant for men only.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, this scenario not only brings a sense of equality but also helps in vanishing discrimination based on gender. Moreover, the trend of working women in all sectors contributes to the revenue of a country without any negative impact. Therefore, it is a positive trend which is lucrative in the long term.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, undoubtedly modern women do not hesitate to do any task such as heavy lifting or general labour because of awareness and inflation, they are ready to give financial support to their families. I believe that it has several beneficial impacts including generating revenue for their countries.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the text the author suggests that Venus is worth the pursuit despite the dangers it presents. He supports the fact that Venus is the sister planet to us and that it could have once been another earth and had all kinds of life and water on it. He proves in the text that he supports it strongly because the way things are they arn't able to conduct a thorough study and mission. They need to have a closer look and intake on the plannet to do the right amount of work needed to be done.\n\nIn the text the author plainly state's that what they are doing and how hey are studying Venus isn't effective. It would be if they where to go and despite the danger's get a closer look. He thinks strongly that the way things are they are unable to get samples and find out actuall good data on the sister planet. As it states in the text \"More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance\" (Paragraph,6). This shows that the author believes that it is important to get closer in on the the planets survice to conduct the proper evaluation and tests.\n\nThe author feels as though it is worth the while to try and work around these dangers. He feels this planet has alot to offer them on as far as information goes. That their is a good possibility that this planet could have been another earth. As it shows in the text \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\" (Paragraph, 4).This goes to show that because of the planet possibly being an old earth It makes the research more valuable.\n\nThe authore suggests that Venus is worth the dangers to get a good look at what really lays along the surfice. He supports this strongly believing that Venus is a sister planet and could have once even been another earth. He shows in the text that he supports this strongly because the way things are they arnt able to get a good read on things their that they arn't close enough. To him getting closer means getting more in tell and samples. They need to have a closer look on the planet to get better evidence and facts support behind if this planet really used to be a earth once. That is why he strongly supports it and thinks it's worth the risk it could help better earth since its our sister planet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From prior knowledge or just by reading \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" some may argue that the Face on Mars was created by aliens, when in all reality it is a natural landform.\n\nOne claim would be, NASA wouldn't hide life on Mars they'd honor it . In a passage from the story the narrorator says, \"... defenders of the NASA budget wishes there was an ancient civilazation on Mars.\" Another support from the article is, \"Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a prioritry for NASA...\" Both passages from the article support the claim that NASA wouldn't hide life on Mars they'd honor it.\n\nAnother claim is, the Face actually is a butte. In the article the narrorator says \"What the picture actually show is the Martian equivalent of a mesa/butte-landforms common around the American West.\" Also in the passage it reads,'\"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using th cameras absolute maximum resolution.\"...you can discern things in a digital image 3 time s bigger than the pixel size,\"...\"So if there were objects inthis picture like airplains on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\"\" Both examples from the article support the idea that the face is actually a mesa/butte or natural landform.\n\nTo sum it all up, according to the artice the Face is an oddly shape natural landformed mesa/butte; it was not created by aliens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Marco Rubio and etc., I think that we should not keep the Electoral College and change to election by popular vote for the sake of the people. With the Electoral College, your voice isn't really heard. Votes should be counted individually and America will get the president that they really want.\n\nFor starters, there was a situation back in 2000 where Al Gore won the popular vote but didn't become president. That my friend, is unfair. The Electoral College doesn't really prove who actually won. Although, the incident happens back in 1880, I don't think it should happen again. Most of America wouldn't really think of the president as the president. I must admit, the Electoral College is a quick way to send in the votes on election day but it isn't efficient.\n\nLike stated in paragraph 10, voters don't vote for the president, but for the state of electors. The electors are basically anyone who isn't holding office. State conventions, state party's central and presidential candidates can pick the electors. Votes can't always control whom their electors vote for which why you should get rid of the Electoral College. Plus it's a dumb name.\n\nAnother reason why is because the people of this country will be pissed if another Gore vs Bush situation happens again. Electors are really in control, therefor if they dislike who's running against their political party they have a shot at voting for whomever they want. That's unjust, and frankly unfair. Especially if a huge state is at risk.\n\nOne counterclaim might be that the Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recieves the majority of votes cast.\n\nI don't want to vote and wonder if my voice will be heard. I want it to be guarunteed because that's what the United States is all about. It's all about us being able to choose the president. The Electoral College is unjust and is a waste of time. If you guys decide decide on letting us elect the president by popular vote, more young adults will start voting and we'll know out voices are heard.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wonder the things that are in Venus that would be cool to discover? What it is like to be at Venuse? Well in \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" it taks about Venus being worth being studyed dispite the dangerous it presents.\n\nThe article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author effectively informs by using facts. Facts are being used to give a better understanding about whats going on in the world. According to the article, \"Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun.\" The author is giving facts about Venus to demonstrate that studing about that plante is worth it.\n\nThe author of the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" also gives the opinion, not only his but also what the NASA. The text states, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" The text also states, \" NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\" This shows how the opinion of the author and of the NASA towards it being worth studing Venus.\n\nIn the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" does give evidence of it being worth studing it despite the dangers as stested in the text, \" Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as challenging planet for humans to study,\n\ndespite it's proximity to us.\" Its agrees as well with the NASA to it being possible and worth studing Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Who here thinks the face appearing on mars is created by aliens? Well if you think it is and you go and visit it they felt that it was important to taxpayers.If the face would have been made by aliens it would have the whole face not blurred out and been able to see it fully since day one, but it wasn't it took twenty five years and more to see the face like you see a human face. They then found that there was no alien mounting in Mars. People argued and argued that there was a alien mounting in Mars. They thought this because The Face on Mars is located at forty one degrees north martain lattitude where it was winter in April'98. It is normally a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. Now they can see the Face of Mars at 43 meters per pixel. They say that you can discern things in a digetal image to 3times bigger than the pixel size. So things like airplnes and small shacks become bigger in a picture. The airplane might be 576 centimeters and be up to 1728 centimeters. Now the picture actually shows a Martain equivelent of a butte or mesa. These are common around the american west.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There books shelves library make people wonder People stand stare book ask CAPS world book many people know every book world reason Books published world teach history manners literature could made take advantage Of course come across book offensive someone maybe even reason I read book I found school library slavery It first person novel boy taken away family sold different plantation owner Now people would offended book calling names like called But book helps people realize much pain slavery put people People go library one elementary school public library always find least one book Just everyone would get offended one books nobody liked like history People take books offends many people That would like taking history happen If happened happened people know Whether people admit ran least one book offended That happen almost natural happen But would also offend people took books shelf Those people know books teach us need books know possible happened might happen Books reason need staySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of social media nowadays is widespread around the world. As the use of new techonology grows, people concern about what will be impact of this change. Some people argue the use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among people, which will lead to negative impacts on the society. Whereas, Others claim that the benefits from the use of social media outweigh the negative impacts. Which one is true? I will compare these two perspectives and state my opinion in this essay.\nThere is no denying that the use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction to some extent. People use social media to connect with other people. This kind of behaviors decrease the aspiration of real life interaction. However, using social media can not give the same feeling as a face-to-face interation. There is lack of intimacy and empathy. For this reason, it is easy to fall in lonelyness while occupied in social media.\nHowever, sometimes the use of social media assists the interactions in real life. For example, friends who are far away from each other can interact in social medias. This helps to keep their relationship which can lead to a face-to-face interaction in the future. Moreover, some people even find out their lover through social medias.\nIn my opinion, the argument that the use of social media will replace face-to-face interaction is a little bit exaggerated. After all, most people use social media to assist their real life relationship, not to completely replace their face-to-face interactions with online chattings. The use of social media might replace some portion of face-to-face interaction, but in most cases, it will help us to connect with other people, and promote our real life interactions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear The use advanced computers increased You nt see kids outside often On news hear obesity And hear crime rates go This benefit socierty Computers negative effect people Does neighborhood seem locking children It s dead They always inside computer I know thirteen year old named She even admits computer better outside friends Meeting people technology especially miners huge risk You nt know person Soon would friends comes social life You d outsider For family nt even know anymore Do want child outsider Being computer time like fastfood restaurant You nt exercise eat andt talk eat computer I met obese child He weighs threehundred pounds age fourteen An eight grader believe He tells laptop lap surrounder junk food He never exercises take break His report card unbelievable He used A student Now s dump listen mom mom says locks room goes straight laptop starts eating You even hear munching junkfood And wonder kids getting obese days It used jobs s meet computer Myspace facebook twitter name crime rates increasing The people behind pictures profiles think Especially miners lie age They re ones fall perverted old men That one way sex offenders get way around They use someone s name underover They tell young girls meet places s young girls boys gets kidnapped rapped endup killed A computer holds millions ways criminals commit crime Do want child next Computers days used wrong ways wrong people Kids never outside They getting obese And s way get kidnapped Do nt allow Get child ren away laptops Go family vacation somewhere fun And nt let sickminded people get kids Take actionSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial Action Coding Software, or FACS, is an impressive software. It has the ability to to scan someone's face, and then analyze it to come up with calculatedpercentages of said person's emotion. I believe, however, a computer with this capability has little to no value in a classroom.\n\nFirst, the article does specifically state \"Your home PC cannot handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile.\" Most schools do not have anything stronger than a home PC because they cannot afford it. Next, Dr. Huang predicts \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This prediction could come true, assuming that all classrooms are devoid of any teachers.\n\nThe article also states many other jobs this program could do without replacing humans in workplaces. For instance, FACS could be used by news organizations to tell if politicians are lying or not. Another example stated in the article is using this software to select ads on the web that you will like. And finally, in paragraph 9, it says according to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, that smiling may not only express emotions, but create them. The author asks ,\"Did making a happy face in this experiment also make you feel slightly happier?\" On the other hand, wouldn't seeing another human make the expression cause the emotion to be a little bit more powerful, rather than having a robot tell you to?\n\nIn conclusion, because the computers needed to run the facial software are not cost effective, there are other jobs it can do without replacing teachers, and it is better to smile because you see something that makes you smile, I believe a computer software capable of reading human emotion through facial expressions has no place in a classroom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is Facial Action Coding System, a program desgined to accurately predict a persons emotions from their face, valuable to use on students?\n\nBeing able to know what students are feeling could be important. A computer that is able to actively track your emotions and edit the lessons accordingly is a good thing. This technology is the next step in helping students learn and understand more, and become better at skills they once struggled with.\n\nStudents that struggle often don't speak up during class, and consequetly suffer on test and homework that follows. If a computer can identify a confused student and reteach the subject or concept, it can make a world of difference. Many students who doesn't learn a concept early in school and never learn it will struggle later on. The principle of learning is that a student is taught one level at time, each time building off of the previous level. The basic principles of level one are often reapplied in a more complex form in the next level or levels. If a student never understands the first concept they will fail at understanding the more complex versions of it. If this can be identified from level one, the student can be very much more successful and happy later on.\n\nFacial Action Coding System is a brilliant solution to helping out students and improving the learning enviroment. If introduced to schools it can raise standarized test scores, improve the emotional enviroment. This technology will allow students to lead more successful and happy lives.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper society computers teaches things school job never teach allows contact friends family nt see lot I would like appreciate concern society computers First computers teaches us things might taught I say wan na know school job nt teach much wan na know look internet theres chance gon na find people would rather computers look things instead knowing much something Next computers society could contact people online heve nt spoke My opinion nt friend family member talk online Also nt phone s long distance ca nt talk long distance phone tlak email etc Sample say phone nt working thing s working computer contact somebody All got ta talk online Would rather talk phone computer In conclusion society computers could learn things could chat people I would like aprreciate concern computers societySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The FACS\n\ncould be valuable or untrustworthy. The system may be used to recognize facial emotions, but if the perosn is making a false facial expression the system might not be able to recognize the expression. Also some people show their emotions differently from one another. Some may smile when they're angry or frown when they're nervous.\n\nAnother problem is the system may not be able to detect the individuals expression do to their degree of expression. Some people only broadly smile when they're happy or only half grin.\n\nBut the system can be very valuable in the tracking of facial emotions/expressions. It can track mixed emotions on an individuals face. But even so you can never be a hundred percent certain of someone's exact emotions or feelings.\n\nSometimes people can detect feelings better than any software or system. A person can talk to someone with a happy facial expression but talk with an angry attitude. There can also be instinces where someone may be happy a lot and sad once in a while and are bad expressing it because they're always happy.\n\nOverall, the system can be useful in measuring most facial expressions. But some just can't be deciphered because nobody can know exactly what an individual is feeling. There is no software available today to tell exactly what one is felling.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some parents or teachers believe that the most effective way for their children to learn how to cooperate with another person is to engage them in team sports at school or attend more team sports activities. In my opinion, I completely agree with the idea and will outline several reasons following in this essay.\r\n\r\nFirstly, participating in team sports at school helps children to improve their communication skills, which is essential for effective cooperation. When children attend team sports, whether it be basketball, football, or volleyball require communication with each other players, that occasion let them aware of how communication skills important because it is the only way to success in the match, they will learn more and more different features that can be used in their conversation through verbal communication, hand signals, body language, or other forms of communication, and by regularly practicing the many forms of communication involved in playing team sports, children are improving their communication skills steadily and they will feel more confident and simply when they need to cooperate with another one in class.\r\n\r\nSecondly, when children take part in team sports at school, they will have more opportunities to exactly know what cooperation means, to learn and explore more effective methods to reach the common goal, which is basic and defined as cooperation. Playing team sports, children are forced to learn how to work together politically and kindly, take me as an example, I am in my school's basketball team, and our coach is extremely focused on drills that train us how to execute certain strategies that require us to cooperate with another member, and by doing so, that let me have recognition and experience the benefits of working together firsthand, which make me a desire and enthusiasm to cooperate with others because by doing so, we will be better and have a sense of belonging.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, team sports help students improve their ability to communicate skills and allow them to experience the benefits of cooperating for the first time, which will inspire them and motivate them to cooperate better with others in the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" it talks about a computer software that can detect the emotions of a person's face down to the pertage of each emotion shown.\n\nThis software is called the Facial Action Coding System and the algorithms that it uses is called the \"Da Vinci Code.\"\n\nThe computer that analyses these faces is very useful and is wanting to be put into place in the classroom.\n\nThis could be a useful tool but in a way it could aslo be used against the student.\n\nHowever, this software could be proven to have a valuable purpose in the classroom.\n\nThe article states that it can be used in the classroom to know if a person is bored or confused on a subject in class.\n\nThe computer could then go on to make the lesson more active for the bored student or more understanding for the confused student.\n\nThis would be a great tool for teachers but, in a way it takes away from their job.\n\nAlong with taking away from their job, the teacher should be able to reconize how a student is behaving.\n\nThis computer software may be better used in a more populated area where there are school with more people attending than a smaller school.\n\nSo in a way the software may be a better tool to have because the teacher may not be able to keep up with all of their student's behaviors.\n\nThe classroom might be more fun and interative but this might mean the removal or downgrade of teachers.\n\nThis computer may also be uses against the student or might not be able to identify how a student is reacting to a lesson.\n\nIn the article it talks about how the muscles tell the emotions of a person.\n\nIt also talks about how the software is used to know when a politician or celebrity is being truthful or not.\n\nSince the software should be on at all times to notice a student's emotions, then what would stop someone from using it as a lie dector.\n\nIf a student were to be telling a lie then the software would be used against them and not used to help them.\n\nThe computer could also be wrong sometimes.\n\nIf a student is actually motiated and understanding the topic and the software analysis them to be the opposite, then the student might not understand or be motivated with the lesson anymore.\n\nThe computer may be useful and valuable with the student in a way it could also be used against them.\n\nThe aticle showed many examples and resons of why this computer should be put into place in the classroom but it didnt' show how it could be malipulated.\n\nThis computer is useful in many ways but probably won't always be used for the student but rather by the administrative staff.\n\nThe software would be proven to be useful in all ways however.\n\nIf a student is being untrustworthy then the computer would know and the student would be caught.\n\nAlong with this the computer would also help them in the classroom if they are being behaved.\n\nThe computer would be a useful tool and a vaulable tool in the classroom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the current world of mechanisation, robotics play a pivotal role.Although the introduction of artificially intelligent robots aided in several industries as well as commercial operations, illustrating speed and accuracy,in my opinion jobs demanding cognitive touch will still need to be done by humans.In addition to this the cost of operating and maintaining robots is extremely high which again make human workers indispensable in the labour market.On this account, I would like to emphasise that, notwithstanding its predominant functionalities,there are several job sectors where robots cannot be entrusted with.\n Conversely, jobs that require compassion along with empathy will continue to be done by humans. For instance a patient's diagnosis can only be considered accurate by a medical practitioner post face to face consultation. Hence many tasks that necessitate human judgement cannot be replaced by machines though artificially intelligent.\n Robots are costly due to the initial cost of equipment, installation price, repair and maintenance and need for programming. Calibration is needed to ensure consistent robot operations, which requires human intervention, again claiming to increase the operational expenditure.\n To sum up, robots are suitable for certain jobs, however, they have plenty of limitations too.In my opinion they will never completely replace humans in the workplace.Even though robots have grown smarter, they are found to be futile in areas where human intuition and intelligence is required.Robots can only perform what they are programmed for and cannot evolve through experience unlike humans. Although automation is essential for industrial development, it is burdensome for small scale industries and start ups to deal with the research and development of artificial intelligence or in other word robotics.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What I know is that this \"Face on Mars\" is no real face. This is what I am going to prove to you. These are the facts.\n\nI know for a fact that this \"Face on Mars\" is not an alien. We've even researched it. We have pictures to prove it. We only think it is an alien because of the pictures that were taken all the way back in 1976. Back then our cameras weren't as sophisticated as they are today. As for another fact we had clouds on Mars that blocked the view from this so called \"Face\". The only thing that this \"Face\" is, is a giant rock formation on Mars. It may appear as a face but in reality it is only just a hill of rocks. Scientist Jim Garvin has even said that the rock formation reminds him of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain in Idaho. As we can see in the picture in 2001 it doesn't appear to be a face at all. It appears as a part of the planet bulging outward.\n\nThis concludes why the so called \"Face on Mars\" is not actually a face. It isn't the right shape of a face. It would not have feautures as if it were a face if it was on Mars and in space. It also would not be a rock on the planet Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"face on Mars\" is a natural landform. There was not enough evidence to prove it was a face, but there was enough valid evidence to prove it wasn't. First it had shadows. The shadows made an illusion giving it a mouth and a nose. The text says shadows made it look like an Egyptian Pharoh. The text says Martian mesas are common around Cydonia. If mesas are common couldn't this just be another one.\n\nMars Global Surveyor flew over and MOC took a picture showing it was a natural landform. Still, people weren't pleased. People said alien markings were hidden by haze. The MOC went back and took more than one picture still showing a natural landform. The landform showed the equivalence of a buttle.\n\nSome would say it's all part of a government plan. Then why would they waste time, energy, and resources to take multiple pictures. Garvin even said \"It's not easy to target Cydonia.\" He said, \"In fact, it's hard work.\" The text compared it to the Middle Buttle in the Snake River. The face did in fact gain popularity.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggests studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nStudying Venus can be dangerous but NASA thinks it will be a compelling idea. In \"The challenge of Exploring Venus,\" it says \"Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" (8) Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Venus has the hottest surfaces and rocky sediment but can be our nearst option for a planetary visit.\n\nVenus can be a hard place to go because of how dangerous. Humans have sent many spacecrafts and each mission was unmanned because the spacecraft didnt survive the landing. In \"The challenge of Exploring Venus\" in the text it says \"Scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understant Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risk.\" (6). Venus conditons are not easy, but survivable for humans. Venus is a challenge but humans are trying to go and explore even with the dangers they might face.\n\nVenus has a thick atmosphere of 97 percent carbon that covers venus. The planets temperature is over 800 degrees. In the text it says \"Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\"(1) Venus is dangerous place to visit but scientists want to risk going to gather up information and explore. Doesn't sound like a good and safe idea but the author and NASA think it's a good oppurtunity.\n\nIn conclusion in \"The challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests \"studying venus is a worthy pursuit depite the dangers it presents.\" There are many reason Venus is a dangerous planet to visit. The authors and scientists think it is a good idea, it says \"what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive,\" (4).SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe that immature students should work for the community without being paid in their free time is convincing. I think in a reverse manner and disagree with the given statement. My inclination is justified in the ensuing paragraphs.\r\n\r\nOut of all the arguments of teenage community work without salary, the strongest one to prove my opinion is everyone in this world would like to be a part of something only when there is some output of doing something. This is to say if a person doing something and does not get paid he would definitely not thinking to give his 100% to the team. For example, Trainee engineer in the compies in only their to learn some basic skills and he would not think about the group future, if he gets paid than he only not think about his own but also he would participate to raise company profits. Besides this, it is also true that in their free time teenagers have their own hobbies to pursue which would help them to relax. By ,this I mean working for something is always have stress on the mind and physical toughness whereas enjoying something would help them to a better person in future.\r\n\r\nThe other reason to prove my point is in small age they not that much developed that they can improve the efficiency of the workplace because they not yet experienced this kind of stuff. In addition, the fact that under 18 pupils always want to have fun rather than working for a company is also logical.\r\n\r\nHowever, I would not overlook the other side too. To begin with, working in free time would help someone to achieve his goal as he would not be able to achieve it independently. Also, children get some exposure to the real world.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, it can be said that despite pros of helping hand , my resond that teenager needs to be relaxed in their free time as well as try to find new ways for future are logically acceptable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is debated by some people that in school the most vital subject is art while in others’ think it is a waste of time. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and give my opinion below.\nLet’s begin by looking at the benefits, in recent years the arts are being taught in educational locations because pupils need to be knowledgeable about our past life of ancestors, their ancient findings and own things. For example, the historical observatory and museum with findings of Mirza Ulugbek as a result of, this would be best for them. Secondly, these days school children are not educated because, teachers are overlooking them therefore they should be instructed a history of pottery and carpentry. Finally, in my point of aspect pupils must be learned more exact and humanitarian subjects because with those sciences they can enter the university.\nOn the other hand, others think that children must not be educated with art subjects because it is not saving time. Nevertheless, nowadays school children are not interesting to art because they solving mathematical and physical examples at their leisure time. Following this, they are desiring to take English certificates such as ielts and cefr because they want to study in foreign countries with those certificates. At least, in my opinion as I said above that which is pupil want to learn, parents must not oppose to their idea.\nOverall, I personally trust that if parents hear their children it would be best. As our ancestors said that if you will do beneficial work, you will be rewarded.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. You can change your life. You will get a chance to travel all across the country. They will give you a chance to do things you would've never thought of going before. Here are some reasons to to join the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nYou will travel all across the country. In the pasage it states that, when Don Reist invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke couldnt resist. It was a opportunity of his life time. Once they left Europe they recived their orders to report to New Orleans. They boerded the SS Charles W. Wooster, that was headed for Greece.\n\nThey will give you a chance to do things you would've never thought of going before. In the passage it states, Luke had made 9 trips. When they saw the Acropolis in Greece that was speical to them. They also took a gondola ride in Veince, Italy, A city with streets of water. Luke was excited to get a chance to ride in a cattle boat. Luke states in the passage, \"the cattle boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small town boy, besides helping people, he had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China.\n\nYou will get a chance to change your life. In the passage it states that, luke graduated high school and was working two part-time jobs ina grocery store and a bank. Now instead of working two-part time jobs Luke is now on a cattle boat traveling to China, Greece and Europe. From helping out his aunt Katie's farm as a boy had prepared him for hard work for what ever hed did. Being a Seagoing Cowbow was much more than an advantage for luke Bomberger.\n\nFor all these reasons this is why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. You will change your life by travling the world. They will travel all across the country. You'll get an adventure and learn new things. You will do things you would've never thought of doing before on your daily bases. This is why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Here's why the author thinks Venus is a worthy pursuit because Venus could of once been a Earth like planet. Venus is same size in density, and size as Earth. The planet had rocky sediments, craters, valleys, and mountains. But nobody can visit or get a up close look to venus because it has a thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide, highly corrosive clouds of sulfuric acid in its atmosphere. The weather is extremely hot the average temperature is about 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than we are experiencing right now on earth this is stronger than any sea level on earth. If we were to have another pursuit to Venus it would not be efficient because we dont have the right equipment to survive on that kind of journey. No, the author did not evaluate his idea good enough there wasn't enough supporting details to support his claim \"Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents\".SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars was not created by aliens. NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft spotted a shadowy likeness of a face. Scientists figured it was another Martian mesa.\n\nMGS flew over Cydonia for the first time on April 5, 1998. Michael Malin and his MOC captured a photo ten times sharper than the orginial photo. The image appeared on a JPL website which revealed it was just a natural landform. That meaning there was no alien monument. The pictre shows the Martian equivalent to a butte or mesa which are landforms common around the American West. It reminds Garvin of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nIt is a lava dome which takes place of an isolated mesa, the lava dome is about the same height of the Face on Mars\n\nIn conclusion the Face on Mars was not created by aliens or any other life form. It was a natural occurance on the surface and the shadows from the sunlight created spots on the \"Face\" to look like an egyptian pharoah. Therefore the Face on Mars was not created by aliens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story cyclist explains road goes good bad An example Rough road ahead Do exceed Posted Speed limit Also drySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The empire State Building builders faced different obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock The builders first learn mooring lines They consulted experts taking tours equipment mooring operations learn first hand The builders also worry frame Empire State Building The frame would modified strengthened accomodate new situation This meant builders would go back work frame Attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building caused builders face different obstaclesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would argue that participating in the Seagoing Cowboys program is educational and it is an incredible experience that will help you learn though life.\n\nSome proof from this article would be that earlier I said,\" The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy.\" I told this to the reader, because I got to help people that were left in ruins after World War II (paragraph 2). Plus, my team helped recover all this equiptment that the\n\npeople needed, and we were one of the 44 nations to form UNRRA, an orginization that hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" (paragragh 2). Also, I said it was an incredible experience being a Seagoing Cowboy because of all the sights I got to see during my daring explorations. I mean, going to Europe and China is awe-strucking enough, but gazing at the Acropolis in Greece, streaming down the roads (or should I say water-filled roads) of Venice Italy, and marveling at the Panama Canal close to China is an experience no human should ever forget (paragraph 5).\n\nYes, being a Seagoing Cowboy is challenging, not to mention dangerous, with work like being a watchmen in the treacherous night, or having the constant thoughts of going overboard. I should know, because I endured the pain of slipping onto my backside, almost sure I wasn't going to survive the night. If it wasn't for that small strip of metal along the side of the ship, I would not have been here today (paragraph 7).\n\nOn the bright side, It can benifet you because the long-days-work can help you not think of those left behind at home because of the work that has to be done. Keeping the animals watered and fed two to three times a day, keeps the day busy (paragraph 6). Just make sure you are being safe while doing these things. You do not want to do the same mistake I made.\n\nStill think being an Seagoing exporer is not good enough; well, think again. Once the animals are off board, we get to play baseball, volleyball, table-tennis, and fencing games with crewmates. Or just to spend the day quietly, reading and writting can be done too (paragraph 8).\n\nPlus, going on this adventure opened up a new world to me. It made me more aware of other countries and their needs. It also helped me through life (paragraph 9).\n\nSo in return for all you bravery and courage in going on this daring adventure, you are rewarded with an educational benifet, and an incredible experience that will help you through life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. He supports this idea by sharing that Venus once has been the most Earth-like planet in the solar system. It expands human knowledge about the planet and enhances technology to be more capable of traveling to Venus.\n\nLong ago, Venus may have been an Earth-like planet. The planet brings danger but this won't stop scientist from disccusing how it may have been a sister planet to Earth. In the text it states \" Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth.\" This indicates that there were very common features about Venus long ago and even now that can relate to earth. The scientist are fascinated by these findings and are willing venture off to Venus and find out more.\n\nGoing to Venus is a tough job and can be quite dangerous. So technology is going to need to be upgraded to be able to fit Venus' harsh temperatures and atmosphere. Enhancing technology is whats going to keep people learning and wanting to improve. With these improvements travel to harsher planet will be easier. The text states \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out the way.\" This indicates technology is being enhanced to be able to withstand the harsh conditions of Venus. Imagination and innovation is being used to expand this knowledge.\n\nHuman knowledge is being expanded when preparing and learning about Venus. Its conditions, what it was like long ago, and technology being improved make people learn and be more fascinated about Venus. When visiting Venus, scientist have found that \"Venus' atmosphere is made up of almost 97 persent carbon dioxide blankets\". That is more knowledge found when going to Venus. Exploring planets besides earth like Venus help people learn about from the dangers they go through to get there which makes it worth it.\n\nAs stated in the claim the author does support the idea that studying Venus is a wothy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. By explaining that Venus and earth were once sister planets and today still do share common characteristics. Human knowledge is expanded when visiting the planet and finding its dangers. Then learning how to overcome with enhacing technology. Which leads them to being able to explore the Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The story concludes paragraph number reasons First spring warm sunny helped end story happy note Next shows Saeng adapt new home hibiscus winter Finally shows Saeng determined wo nt let mother That story concludes paragraphSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think cencorship libraries defenetly relevant Such think someone wants check adult book required show id desk Many children take advantage rent books games know parents would never allow A cencory system quit simple arrangment fot public library systems Private libraries choose state law On hand public libraries state city law able show adult things children For example many libraries around books called manga anime books alot show partial nudity graphic things suitable younger children rated I think could many changes library systems choice want changeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted builder Empire State Building faced obstacles attempting allow dirigible dock For example stress dirigibles load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation nearly eleven hundred feet describes problem builders would face applied mast load dirigible wind pressure would mess foundation building So builders needed find way ruin foundation Empire State Building Another example The steal frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened This evidence explains mast place builders would strengthen entire building would problems mastSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having the Facial Action Coding System (FACS) can be useful in the classroom to read students emotions for multiple reasons. The FACS can help on both sides of the classroom. Teachers do not always know what their class is thinking, and some students need help figuring out what to study. Although in some people's opinions the FACS can seem of little value, the system can ease stress and better prepare the classroom for the future.\n\nIn class, teachers always wonder if their students understood and comprehended the lecture or lesson, so the teacher will ask the class if the students are good with the material. Even though the teacher is trying to be helpful, some students have too much pride or are too shy to speak up and say if they need to hear the teacher explain one more time. The Facial Action Coding System can \"recognize emotions\" and give the teacher feedback based on what emotions the students were expressing in different muscles on their the face that the teacher might not have noticed. This will help the students recieve better grades and the teacher feel more confident that he or she is educating the students properly.\n\nThe FACS can also greatly help students study when they have a quiz or test. Some students do not know what they do not know in class, this causes stress and problems in school, leading to the eventual downfall of grades, The system \"could regonize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" during classtime. The system could then give them an accurate report on what points in the lesson they had been confused, so the student would know what to ask questions about or study for.\n\nAlthough the Facial Action Coding System may be deemed unneccesary because computers should not have to tell what others around are thinking or feeling, the system is useful. Dr. Huang had said \"Most human communication is nonverbal, incuding emotional communication. So computers need to understand that, too.\" Technology is changing and becoming more elaborate, so allowing it to understand humans better can ease trouble that can come with using technology for past and future generations in and out of the classroom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Newspapers have a huge impact on people's beliefs and the way they perceive things. In my opinion, this phenomenon is a positive one because it enlightens individuals with happenings around and the globe and at the same time educates the public with authentic information and opportunities.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the newspaper is a medium through which people can get acquainted with adequate knowledge of what goes around. Similar to televsion, radio, and the internet, the newspaper is another effective media platform that carries informative news about current happenings locally and internationally, which can broaden readers' visions and open their minds. In addition, the newspaper is beneficial to people who do not have access to other media platforms and can make them equally informed as others. Specifically, people from underdeveloped countries or rural areas where there is a constant interrupting power or internet supply can rely on newspapers as a source of information of ongoing pandemic.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, people can be educated and benefit through newspapers since the material is very reliable. Different from all kinds of posts, videos, and advertisements that pop up on the screen, information from newspapers are more authentic and appropriate since it can be sourced from a specific writer. It is unnecessary to worry about children being misdirected by inappropriate content or elders being deceived by fake posts from newspapers since the authorized publishers are more trustworthy. Moreover, great jobs and scholarships advertised in newspapers can provide people with better career prospects and education opportunities, which can greatly improve readers' lives.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there is doubt that newspapers can bring enormous positive impacts on humans, as they can widen people's perspectives and spread great opportunities with credible materials.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In The Mooring Mast many obstacles builders Empire State building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock There obstacles fact dirigible tied building single tether would add stress building s frame To fix problem sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made building Another problem dirigibles used hydrogen rather helium Hydrogen highly flammable would dangerous densely populated area The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature By Lsted means many violent air currents top building meaning ship would swivel around around To make sure would happen lead wieghts would used would practical safe dangling high pedestrians In end people realized far many problems involved use mooring mast top Empire State buildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph many reasons Saeng dissapointed failing driving test She found comfort nature went bought plant Saeng must feel geese leave hibiscus started bud take drivers test She feels comforted return geese budding hibiscus This implies nature comforts The author ended like shows Saeng disappointed failing anymore She knows another chance next year geese returns hibiscus starts bud With comfort nature feels pass test next yearSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should particpate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. It is a great way to get out and help people. You also can have fun with it. Helping people and have fun doing is so great. It would be a blast.\n\nYou could help people by getting them food,water, animals,and more. They lost thing in the war,so cloths on them can be good. They will be so thankful for your help. That will be alsome to do.\n\nYou could have fun. You could bring your friends and family and you could work together. You could make someone day shine with a smile. You could look around the ocean and look for animals. That what would be fun.\n\nAnother reason you should join the Seagoing Cowboys is we need more people to take care of are plant, and go do things that can help it. This could help it so much. We could change people's lives by doing this. This is a important job for people, because it could keep people from dieing.\n\nYou should join the Seagoing Cowboys. It is fun and you can help people. It also can change lives in a good way and keep people from starvation. I hope you join, becaues we need you too.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Complex A building complex structure easily tampered still considered safe That major problem builders It nt easy could simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof CAPS They strengthen structure took sixty thousand dollars worth modifications Plus builders design nice plan mast make look nice They even use glass harder material work Although greatest obstacle builders allowing dirigible dock One filled hydrogen highly flammable ever blew would killed lot people city However greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature NUM This mentioned main reason idea failed The winds always constantly shifting caused back swivel become unsafe Weights back would made even dangerous could fall Lastly laws prevented flight close ground But even many blimps tried like Columbia Los Angeles found hard fly close building dock well The idea many holesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I, personally, am for the \"driverless\" cars. Cars can already practically drive themselves. I see no reason why limiting car collisions and using less gasoline is something people would be against. I, also, believe humans are the main problem when it comes to mishaps like car crashes/collisions and enironmental issues such as Global Warming.\n\nOf course, with any machine it is going to come to a point where it is going to need to be told what actions to take to get around an obstacle. Humans are the main problem when it comes down to car collisions. Whether the person just couldn't see the other car coming or thought they could make it across the intersection. Humans are very proud when it comes to things like driving and that's the reason people who claim to be very good drivers have the most accidents. They feel as though they are so good at driving they don't need to pay attention to the road and tend to be less careful because of their pride.\n\nLessening the use of gasoline would also be very useful for the environment. Global Warming is supposedly one of the biggest issues the Earth is currently facing. No one seems to be taking in to count that cars make A LOT of green house gases. Lessening the use of gasoline could and, most likely, would help keep Global Warming at bay. Atleast, until scientists can find even more efficent ways to help the Earth.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story line show like hibiscus adapting strgging survive fit its nonnatve land Saeng She give fight pass test become part new country This supported story mother connents hibiscus late She says Its strong enough make cold month winter hibiscus Thats matter Ho Here author shows comparison hibiscus struggle hard times foreign land similarly felt Saengs life Both must strong fight hard imes one not even class mates frends Mrs Lambert Ho understood alone place felt So vows take test shes promising fight hard times grow strong winter hibiscusSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The public confronts a phenomenon in which looking younger than your actual age is considered a significant trend in modern society. In order to keep a young look, the community pay a lot of money for these kinds of services and products. The factors on it would be speculated as active promotion of the beauty industry and rapid development of technology in this sector. According to my view, drawing greater attention to our appearance and spending much value is likely to demonstrate the detrimental aspects no matter how beneficial it is. Now, I will try my utmost to jot down the phenomenon below for arriving at the conclusion in the end. \r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, the beauty industry gives much attention to its promotion and advertisement in order to increase its demand in the market. In doing so, they cooperate strongly with celebrities or famous figures. The companies in the sector would earn more income if their partnered model will be in the eye of the public on account of people considering them as models or influencers. Having seen the status quo in Mongolia, beauty products from Korea are still in high demand due to the greater distribution of Korean drama since the year 2000. In turn, people, especially women's beauty standards and norms have changed little by little, women like Korean figures are considered beautiful due to the influence of Korean soap operas. To reach that beauty standard, Mongolians who have different facial shapes spend so much money, time and effort, it will increase our living cost, but worthless. \r\n\r\nAs far as another potential factor is proposed with the high development of editing programs, software and applications. An artificial and unrealistic appearance is disseminated to the public and it also affects public preferences thanks to the usage of these programs. Case in point, a virtual model who has a perfect figure and outlook made by the computer has drawn public attention in the latest years. These non-realistic figures lead to setting the beauty norm in society and affect to community's behaviour. From my point of view, an artificial beauty norm brings us more pressure and tension. In order to reach a high beauty standard, people spend their time, effort and wealth unconsciously. \r\n\r\nOnce and for all, I would leap to a logical conclusion that the active promotion of the beauty sector increases its demand in the market while the high development of technology related to beauty leads to setting the impractical beauty standard in the community. Therefore, I strongly consider that spending too much money on our appearance has more and more adverse effects on society.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people claim due to development of technology, rising the differencies among the rich and the poor. However, others believe that the gap is declining. This essay will discuss both points of view.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, one evidence reason why differencies between the rich and the poor going upwards is the tendency of using technology such as smartphones or laptops are increasing. Therefore, a large number of people buying technology is not accessably, that is social differencies are still existing. Moreover, in our world the popularity of bullying among teenagers are increasing for some reasons the one of the problems of shaming someone is not having the smartphone of popular brand. Also, it can be affected on studying too. For instance, Nowadays, online studying is popular, because of worldwide pandemic situation. if you have no cell phone or awful quality of phone, you will not possible to do homework or participate on lessons.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there is range of different prices and brands tjat provide computer smartphones which have best quality for students for example, individuals can find evirything that they want on the internet or shops, with the available prices In my opinion, the differencies between is decreasing.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, some people argue about the range of the technology is increasing the social differencies But in real life there is more available pricesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Spacious public spaces such as parks and squares are required for all towns and cities to have. I stand with this perspective and from this essay i will explain the reason with supporting opinion.\n\nSquares and parks are necessary to have in every cities and sould in a big size. This place could give several benefits for nature and society. Most of the cities are full of concentrate building, therefore parks or squares is important space for trees or small forest in the middle of the city. The existence of forest is to absorb carbon dioxide that produced by human activity. For instance, smoke from burnt fossil fuel cars can be captured by the trees. Thus the trees could process the photosyntesis to make an oxygen and give a fresh air. \n\nRegarding the benefit for the society, parks and squares could provide spaces for entertaiment or to relax. Living in a city sometimes can be bored and leads to stress, because of the traffic congestion or pressure from work. Hence, parks or squares are needed for citizen to enjoy their time and breath some fresh air. Many activities can be done here, such as yoga, picnic, jogging, or just strolling around to enjoy weekend. As a result, this places could help people to achieve their work-life-balance without should going a long ride to coutryside. To illustrate, many activities are held in parks on the weekend such as aerobic or zumba to encourage healty lifestyle and better health.\n\nIn conclusion, a large park or square brings several benefits to both nature and society. Therefore, I remain convinced that this idea should be maintained.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I don't think that a computer can identify human emotion how about you? In this article it talks about a facial action coding system which allows computers to identify human emotions.\n\nBut my opinon is I don't think that will work because. I feel like in order to know something about soemone or know how they are feeling you must know the. A computer device can not know you in a way that a human can. Computers may know about you from another source but it will never have that human to human chemistry and connnection. It will never workout.\n\nThe author also states that faces dont lie so even if it did work thhat doesn't mean that its correct because it is so easy to fake a smile orfake emotions. But the machine also can identify major muscuular actions and can tell the diffrence between a geniune smile and a fake one just by reading the muscles. I belive that they are trying to say the computer can calculate humans like we do math which is by far not true at all because we are humans and we fake stuff we lie and we do many other things that a computer cannot read.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reduction or limited usage of cars impacts the daily lifes of society and also benefits the enviroment; It could also Change the way you see things.\n\nLimiting the usage of cars can reduce the pollution in the air caused by cars and motorists.\n\nAround the world people have a different way of thinking when it comes to cars, Society has come to realize that car usage is becoming dangerous & unnecessary. \"It was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the day; to promote alternative transportion and reduce smog\". In colombia People have decided to change the routine of driving everywhere in cars because it might be unnecessary since their destinations might be close; instead they reduced the transportation usage and only buses are permitted; it lowers the pollution in the air. This demostrates that a campaign of limiting the car usage should begin in other countries.\n\nIn Germany People have founded other ways to limit the car usage instead of banning cars. Society decided to make the streets more compact less far away from the community itself. \"Make suburbs more compact and more accessible to public transportation with, less space for parking, stores are placed a walk away on a main street\" By doing this action; it takes pressure away for people who use their cars everyday to drive anywhere. It also saves people money by not spending on gas & most importantly it encourages people to walk and exercise by doing simple things like shopping. It also psychologicaly impacts community members. \" When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\".\n\nThere's many others ways of influencing people to not use cars. For example, making a national fine. Like the goverment in France made \" License plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine\".\n\nDriving less could have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the enviroment, It will allow people to feel more free and less stressed and it also allow them to meet new friends, their could health become better ; The economy could rise, traffic will be cut. There would also be less car accidents and crashes due to less traffic.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. Senator,\n\nI would like to argue with your decision of getting rid of the electoral college. I would like to argue with you because the Electoral college is a piece of history, we could some problems if we keep the electoral college, but there are a bit of problems with this voting system. So Senator this is my letter that i want you to read so you can rethink the decision of getting rid of the Electoral college.\n\nThe Electoral college is a voting system that depends on the popular votes to see who gets the electoral votes in the president race. The founding fathers established the electoral college in the constitution, which means this voting system has been with this country since the beginning of the United States. To get rid of the Electoral college is like getting rid of a piece of this country. The founding fathers made the electoral college so the president and vice president could get chosen. There are five hundred and thirty eight electoral votes possible to get. To win presidency you must have two hundred and seventy electoral votes. These votes are one of the most important things. So I want you Senator to imagine getting rid of a piece of the constitution, just imagine ripping a little piece off. Guess what you can't because the constitution is to important to this country to take anything off of it. This is one reason Senator that the electoral college should not be disbanded.\n\nThe Electoral College has the ability to get rid off problems such as avoiding run off elections, which means that no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. The Electoral College also has swing states, which means the people in the state pay close attention to what the candidates say and vote for who they feel should win so that the winner take all method isn't in effect. A good example of a run-off election is the elections of Richard Nixon and Bill clinton. Both of these presidents had forty three percent of the populare votes, but dominated in the electoral votes. A good example of a winner take all method is the election of 2012 where the candidates focused on the voters in the toss up states or the states that listen and vote for who they think is better. Another example of a run-off election is if a candidate does not win a majority of the votes vast than the presidential election would be greatly complicated. The complication is then reduced by the Electoral College, which chooses a winner. The Electoral College can save a lot of things for just a voting system.\n\nAlthough the Electoral College helps a lot there is a couple problems with it. When you vote you vote for who you want to vote for, but when that vote gets put in the Electoral College doesn't have to put there vote to who you voted for. The Electoral College is also unfair to voters because of the winner take all system. During the 2000 campaign some states didn't even get to see their candidates. Some states didn't even get to see a ad on tv for their candidates. The Electoral College is also known as the disaster factor because of the crisis in the election of 2000. The electors are chosen by the legislatures and the electors could always defy the will of the people. The Electoral College can be fixed, so don't take it way that way it can be fixed and arranged.\n\nThe Electoral College is good because it keeps us away from problems, even though it has some, and is a part of our history. This whole letter is to explain why you the senator should not take the electoral college away. I have to say it has problems, but those problems can be fixed by some simple solution.\n\nFrom, PROPER_NAME Student of\n\nSCHOOL_NAMESCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear The opinion computers others different I believe computers help society They give us knowledge whatever subject want helps us connect family far away places even give us better understanding place ca nt see Some people feel computers distract kids re never spending time family But one family members side world cousin lives way I ever talk computer What little kid mom go business trips faraway long time You would use computer talk would nt Not everyone always around someone faraway computer way connect Because computers kids nt exercise What exercise happened hiking In get exercise expose scenery With computer explore anywhere without even leaving doorstep Say young kid re always located see never go What would You would hop computer check You explore place want click button In school learn historic people dead thousands years How would learn re gone A computer information anyone chance You exercising re expanding knowledge nt Yes could go library take book person However book nt information looking You could end reading hours certain information want nt even A computer gives anything need matter seconds Why waste time Now time technology advances Why waste time something ve got need right fingertips So waiting Go learn want right Have nt seen cousin long time Start computer get talking The timeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using a machine for doing daily household chores has many positive effects on people. However, others argue that they have some drawbacks as well.\r\n\r\nAdmittedly, there are numerous benefits of using machines for various household purposes. Firstly, because machines are sophisticated devices which enable enhance performance and productivity, a lot of time can be saved and spent on other useful things such as interacting more often with family and friends. Secondly, despite the fact that machines in most cases use non-renewable energy which is having a devastating effect on the environment, they also enable to lessen the physical burden faced by human beings by doing the work automatically rather than manually. Thirdly, machines empower people to save food of different kinds and other commodities for an extended period of time. Finally, Food can also be genetically modified by the use of different machines, this \r\n\r\nof machines. Nevertheless, the positive aspects outweigh the disadvantages. Machines are necessary in today’s hectic world and must be continued to be used to save time means that people have more time to relax and enjoy everything without worrying about the season of certain fruits and vegetables arrive.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, a few detrimental effects are evident from the use of machines for domestic purposes. Initially, it makes people lethargic by giving them the choice of putting even the most trivial matters to machines. A sedentary lifestyle has become one way of living which leads to obesity and other health-related issues. Moreover, as machines can wash clothes, prepare food conveniently, and assist in cleaning, people are obsessed and they rely heavily on their potential.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I firmly believe that there are some inevitable drawbacks and energy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, males have more prestigious jobs than females. It is always said that women should be a stay-at-home mom whereas men should bring home the bacon, but now the opinion is changed. Well, there are many reasons which will be discussed in this essay why government should give or not give that working places to women.\r\n\r\n On the one hand, the high-level jobs occupied by the male decreases the balances of opportunities and also power between male and female in some companies. Due to the fact that we live in the most developed and supportive century women don’t have to suffer from discrimination. So to establish the equal power of both genders women actually should work in such high-level positions. \r\n\r\n On the other hand, government should not take any actions for reserving positions for females. They can create the comfortable surrounding for them by making sure that women have the access to the education which makes them powerful and fully-prepared for their future. In addition, women don’t have to suffer from sexual harassment, any discrimination and so on. Moreover, government should provide strict law where humans of both genders coexist with ease. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, by analyzing that information both women and men should be viewed as equally capable and the top positions should never be reserved based on gender. Government should ensure that they put enough effort to protect women from complex problems and they should not encourage a certain percentage of any employment places to be reserved for them .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I think computers positive effect people reasons You get contact people question look job computer I think reason positive Many people like computers one My first reason get toch friends family I think good reason grandmother lives dont want drive every time want see live You would use computer live chat wouldent drive doun If wanted could plan day go see You would use computer get touch friends If needed ask question homework could answer That first reason computers positive way people My second reason computer look questions would If needed know thing big report none friends look computer Computers help much need answer If didet hav computer would hard stuff That I think computer answer questions My third reason work computer If stay home mom ya work computer handle finances A lot people work computer save envirment When I grow Ill probaly work computer easer That I think work computer The reason I picked get tuch family friends look question might work computer I hope positive way computers help People might think brain dont help knoledge Many people like one I think positive way computersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered what someone is feeling? With this new technology called the Facial Action Coding System, it is truly possible. You can detect the emotions people are feeling through this technology advancement.\n\nUsing this new technology serves great purpose and value to us as consumers because it is created to help us understand our history and advance in other forms of technology.\n\nTo begin, the facial recognition technology serves great purpose and value because it unlocks new discoveries in our history. With this being said, new beginnings are coming about because we know more about how Mona Lisa was feeling while Da Vinci was painting this famous portrait that is spoken about all across America. It gives insight on the deeper meaning of this painting. For example, we now know that Da Vinci must have studied the human body in order to create such a wonderful piece of artwork. In the text it states,\"Yet Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions.\" Due to his great knowledge of the human body and muscles he was able to paint precise emotions and because he painted such precise emotions, people today were able to unlock how she felt during this time. A new discovery. After all, this advanced tech can now bring this history piece to life. In the text it states,\"Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movementsin a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa.\" This creates a new perspective of how we view our history and it also could unlock mysteries in our histories past.\n\nIn addition,this technology advancement was created only to help people. As consumers, we always think about, what would this do for me? With that being said, the Facial Action Coding System could have a positive affect on our medicines, entertainment, and medical technology. In the text it states,\"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressivefor video games or video surgery.\" The one thing I think about when I hear America is sports, which is a form of entertainment. The new technology could benefit our use of televisions and radios or smartphoneswhich we watch sports on. Another thing I think about it when someone is speaking about this country is medical purposes. Our country has amazing medical advances and technology. The facial coding could help create a better understanding or a better alternative for complicated technology. Then again, as consumers we also spend alot of time on social media or looking at ads. Sometimes there are things we are not interested in at all but they annoyingly still pop up. With the facial coding, our faces can be detected if we like the ad and if we do not like the ad. This benefits us greatly because it shows what we do want to see and what we do not want to see. In the text it states,\"For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown,the next ad will be different.\" Many might say this does not matter but ads are everywhere and our world is only going to rely on computers, or other forms of technology so why not embrace it and try to advance too?\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System serves great purpose and value to us as consumers because it is created to help us understand our history and advance in other technology.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my personal opinion, I think that driverless cars could be a good idea, but only when any problems with the technology behind the driverless aspect are fixed and the cars don't still somewhat rely on the person in the car to take over in certain situations. Driverless cars can be helpful in many situations, but we need to be sure that they are as safe as (if not safer than) the cars we use today and have been using for decades in the past.\n\nThere are many situations in which driverless cars would be a good thing to have. In paragraph 5, it states that \"Within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.\" Here, we are provided with an example of how these cars can already help prevent accidents even if they aren't completely driverless. Though these cars are still somewhat dependent on the person or people inside, the manufacturers have made advancements in technology that make somewhat driverless cars safe to a certain extent. Next, if we bring our attention to paragraph 8, we begin to learn about certain displays that can alert the person or people in the\n\ncar when they need to take over. The author helps explain this by saying \"Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over - something not available to drivers trying to text with a cellphone.\" As the reader can see from this paragraph, advancements have been made to alert drivers who may not be paying attention, so that since these cars aren't completely driverless yet, the driver can still avoid accidents by being alerted when there is a potentially dangerous situation at hand.\n\nSo while these cars are not completely driverless, I think that if the manufacturers fix any problems with the technology and make them completely driverless to avoid any problems on the driver's or passengers' part, they could be a really good thing to have, not to mention they could be really good for making more money for the car companies. These cars already have sensors that can help prevent skids and rollovers, and manufacturers are developing systems to alert distracted drivers when they need to take control of the car. While there are still some problems with the technology and the fact that the cars aren't yet 100% driverless, I think that driverless cars are a step in the right direction when it comes to transportation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on mars was first found by the spacecraft called Viking one and was cirling mars when it found the face. alot of people belive it is a real artifact. NASA has took more pictures to prove that it is infact not an artifact. People belive there just covering it up so pople wont know about it. But that is not true it would benifit NASA if it were an true artifact.\n\nThe face on mars is just a lndform because of the pictures we took we could not see and form of building structure. one thing that brings me to this conclusion is the rocks and shadows made it look and seem very real. The text states \"...formed by shadows...\". Tv and other things are what is drawing the attention to the matter andthey are whats broadcasting to the world that it is real. The text states \" It starred in a hollywood film , appeared in books , magazines, radio talk shows...\"\n\nThis brings me to the conclusion that infact it is not real but was made real by televison and other things. People just dontt wanna listen to the since behind it. If it where in fact real it would benifit NASA.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is an increasing concern about the effects of globalization. Some believe that globalization surely benefits most countries in different aspects such as economics, education and politics; others, however, argue that it has negative consequences on national identities. In my view, globalization not only boosts economic development but generally has positive effects on national identities.\nFirst, it is obvious that business contacts around the world contribute a lot to effective development. Entrepreneurs and business owners, from foreign countries, invest a substantial amount of money as well as technology into infrastructure and create many job opportunities for local residents, which consequently improve people's living standards. That is the reason why many countries make laws and policies to encourage international business and investment.\nMoreover, with multicultural communication, national identities are more expressed to the outside world and get respected and appreciated by people from different cultures and social background. For example, water puppet has been introduced and been known in many countries recently. Therefore, Vietnamese identity has been enhanced and has impressed many people through this kind of performance which uniquely belongs to Vietnam.\nThose who harbor the view that international collaboration between countries may threaten national identities may argue that youngsters start following western country trends without understanding their pros and cons. Millennials nowadays eat hamburgers, drink coffee, work in skyscrapers and even speak English often, fueling a lifestyle similar to that in New York. But I think that this just mirrors modern lifestyle and does not mean that we are losing our cultural heritage. To protect our national identities does mean that every Vietnamese people should drink tea every day and use chopsticks at every meal.\nIn sum, globalization do play an important role in a country's development. Meanwhile, a more prosperous economy facilitates the preservation and recognition of national cultures and identities worldwide.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently, online education is a matter of great concern for worldwide tertiary education. Some universities prepare to adapt to this learning form, I also strongly support this study method due to considerable benefits for both students and professors.\r\n\r\nFrom the viewpoint of students, distance learning courses enable qualification seekers to save their expenses and enjoy the convenience of studying. Universally, a massive volume of global students whose hometowns are distant from campus needs to charge highly for renting rooms, transportation, or purchasing essential items. For this reason, it is easier for them to save a huge amount of traveling and accommodation fees if they follow online classes. In addition, online classes allow learners to select any courses related to their favorite fields and flexible time. Obviously, the majority of undergraduate students choose part-time jobs as gaining extra money to enrich their budget and lessen the livelihood pressure of their parents. Therefore, they can arrange their own schemes while studying and gain money due to those pliable schedules. \r\n\r\nFrom the perspective of lecturers, Internet-based courses are attractive options for several reasons regarding educational productivity and time. For the former, there are the semble content lectures among such classes, hence, this enables professors to combine those classes to guide together. Definitely, it minimizes the remarkable lecturers’ weariness rather than teaching on campus with different repetitive classes. For the latter, not spending time traveling to universities to work makes lecturers thrift a considerable amount of time rather than in face-to-face classes. As a result, they can utilize this time on assisting undergraduate people who misunderstand theoretical knowledge. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the above-mentioned merits of online classes support me to believe that this new tool should be encouraged in universities widely. Proper execution for online learning to utilize its advantages should be applied for the benefit of both students and lecturers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often argued that humans are responsible for finding solutions of climate change, but others claim that they have to coexist with this phenomenon. In my opinion, I stand with the former statement because people play an important role in tackling the negative impact of this issue on earth. \r\n\r\nSome would believe that training themselves to live with the changes in climate is the best option to lessen the effect of this environmental problem. This is because it is highly challenging to fix this environmental damage that caused by humans activities, which is considered a waste of resources. This would result in pushing people toward finding new ways that foster their physical adaption to climate changes instead of exerting their efforts on actions that would have marginal impact on this matter. For example, people move to wormer places when their towns have an extreme winter due to the radical alteration in climate. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, humans are accountable for taking additional measures that mitigate the consequences of climate change because their daily and industrial activities are the main cause of this problem. If people stoped exterting more efforts toward protecting the earth from the ramfications of this phenomenon, it would endanger their lives and other organisms to exitinction on this planet. A typical example of this is that there is a great propensity to use electric cars to reduce the gas emissions that deems one of the causes of climate change. This type of action would increase the survival chances on earth in the long run by minimizing the volume of this crises. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, there had been contradictions on whether individuals should work harder to overcome climate change or finding a way to live with this issue. From my prosperctive, I would agree with first point of view because humans actions have contributed significantly to this issue, which made them responsible for protecting themselves and other organsim from the negative outcomes of this issue.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders empire state building faced allow dirigibles dock numerous project The first problem dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen Hydrogen much flammable substance helium dirigibles United States used The owners nt want anything occur similar German dirigible Hindenburg would worse downtown New York instead Lakehurst New Jersey Another practical reason dirigibles faced problems docking Empire State building existing law prevented dirigibles flying low urban areas For example dirigible named Los Angeles could get close enough tie due forceful winds These problems go show owners Empire State building faced numerous obstacles allowing dirigibles dockSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Readers Local Newspaper I almost certain interact daily computer You use computers write play games look pictures print work There dozens practical computers nowadays many people especially children using computers excessively This unnecessary usage computers cause obesity expose children mappropriate things destroy family time Readers hear arguement end paper surely agree computers detrimental society Have ever made lose weight It s uncommon one make goal According adults make get shape exercise nore lose weight We ve seen commercials encourage CAPS lose weight one week There also plenty entrepenuers want convince buy exercise product develop outrageously large muscles time But exercise plans really work According study done largest cause obesity actually computers The students one group people try regular commercial diet plan another group people exactly ve Except computers They found group computer use lost nearly weight average group comercial diet Nothing causing obesity computer A familier day average child goes like go school home bus use computer eat dinner homework go bed Unfotunately happens days week computer time eating none exercise time Readers please try avoiding computers one week forget jet plane Another negative computers affects individual possildy entire family Many children go entire day without sitting talking parents My friend often hope school goes straight use laptop without even saying hello parents Computers become nearly addiction teenagers teens say use computers daily say trouble communication parents There direct connection lack communication home teens computer usage Teens become society lives become computers What nt notize re totally forgetting families I know I ve made mistake becoming attached socia networking remember family luckily I stable family environment Some teens nt luxury Computers ability destroy parentchild relationships nt let happen Your children without doubt ones technical revolution From time children probably keyboard fingertips Do parents ever realize re getting children teach use computer though Children young years old exposed profamily vulgar pictures web supposed safe sides Do even realize child s talking computer With emails flying around could talking complete stranger withouteven knowing An enormous part child become values hold product exposed young age Bring computer kindergartrer probably guess ll grow No matter much think believe safety computer argue fact computer expose children adult content early lives look computer differently Faced concerns lack exercise separation families mappriate natural children really want children even matter using computer daily Think head years Will say I wish I used computer I wish I spent time In end choice reallySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D' Algo suggests that we should start using software that can detect your emotions accurately by using Facial Action Coding system. Facial Action Coding System is software that is supposedly to help humans and computer to communicate. It constructs a 3-D computer model of the face with the 44 major face muscles. While Facial Action Coding Systems could be used for something beneficial, most people would probably rather keep some of their emotions to themsevles.\n\nPersonally, the idea of a Facial Action Coding system that detects your emotion is not something the majority of the people would want. Yes, sometimes it is nice for someone to know how you are feeling if you are having a rough day and you want someone to say something to you about it, but most would probably keep to themselves. And sometimes it may be beneficial like in paragraph 6 the author says \"A classroom computer could recongnize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" in this case is beneficial to the student, but overall people would not want other people to know their exact feelings all of the time, and it could be very expensive.\n\nOverall, the concept of the Facial Action Coding System is very smart, but we as humans can also do a good job detecting someone's emotions. Moods and expressions are always changing, so to detect someone's mood at the time could possibly be ineffective. Alto presents good points as to why Facial Action Coding system could be beneficial to humans, but I think that we are better off doing the emotional detecting ourselves.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "vennus is going to be the closest and most inhabbital planet that we know of right now. venus is a worthy pursuit to gain knowlegae because we could one day step foot on the planet,but there are some challeges that come with this explortion because of the harmful gasses and extreme heat.most of venus is made up of rocks mountains and vallys just like earth but venus also has harmful heat riseing up to over 800 degrees and sulfic acid that lays on venuses surface.venus was once covereed in water with ocens according to sientist and it could of been habitable then but the tempatures and the high presure it would be near to impossible to step foot with our technolgy. but rovers are being produced right now to land and roam the planet that might have been our planet at some time. so my claim is that we have might of lived there at one point or something else lives on the planet of venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article, the author presents us with facts about what makes Venus dangerous, and why we should try to study it despite the danger that comes with it. He provides many examples of the harsh conditions of Venus, but is lacking when it comes to reasons why we should continue to study it. Safety is the number one priority in all scientific research, and I don't think this author provides enough reasons why studying Venus is worth the risk. Furthermore, when he does provide his reasons they are quickly proved wrong by himself in later paragraphs, which lowers his point immensly.\n\nThe author writes a lot about the challenges of going to Venus, and what makes Venus so dangerous. Yet, he barely provides any information on why it is important to go there. In paragraph 3 he writes, \"...such an environment would crush even a submarine accustumed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.\" He also writes about the extreme temperatures, 97% CO2 atmosphere, sulfuric acid clouds, and things like erupting volcanoes, earthquakes, and lightning strikes. All of these challenges and dangers in one paragraph, and not even one reason why we should face these challenges and go there. In the next paragraph he says, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" He also go on to provide more information about how similar Venus is to our own planet, but still, no good reasons why we should spend money researching this planet. When you are talking about visiting a planet as dangerous as Venus, you need a lot of good reasons to go there. However, this author is lacking in his reasons, which makes him sound unprofessional.\n\nWithout providing a lot of research, it is hard to agree with what the author is saying. He does not do a great job of proving his point that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. In paragraph 5 he writes, \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusion landscape.\" At first, this seems like a viable solution to the dangers of Venus, and sounds like a good way to safely research the planet more closely. However, it's quickly shot down and is identified as a less than desireable solution in the next paragraph by the author himself. He states facts about how we wouldn't be able to capture photographs from this distance through Venus's thick atmosphere. He also points out that we would not be able to retreive samples of rock, gas, or anything else from this distance. This is the only good possible solution to the dangers of Venus that the author has presented thus far, and he debunks the idea almost entirely in the very next paragraph. This is a terrible way to convince the readers of his opinion; that, despite the risks Venus presents, it is a worthy pursuit to study it.\n\nIn conclusion, the author presents more ideas that go against his point, than ideas that acually support it. He does a terrible job of supporting his ideas, and when he has a good point, he quickly proves to us himself that it is not a good idea at all. Taking all of these things into account, we can conclude that the author does a very poor job of supporting the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" they describe a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System. This system gives computers the ability to identify human emotions. This uses facial expressions to find out how someone is feeling based on their face. Some people believe that this can be used in the classroom to help students. And I believe they are right.\n\nThis technolgy can be very useful to the students in a classroom. In the article it says, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This could be extremely helpful to kids who struggle understanding some material. It could explain in whatever way it needs to be so the student can understand, always knowing when the student is confused, based off their facial expression. This is great since reading facial expressions is something that teachers, and people in general, tend to struggle with.\n\nAnother reason this is so helpful is because it can make computer-animated faces more expressive in things like video games and video surgery. Computer-animated faces being more expressive is great for people like medical students that use video surgery. This makes it easier for them to tell if their patient is in discomfort.\n\nSo in conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System would be benefical to students. It could tell if students are bored or confused, and adjust the lesson for them to understand it. Also it could make computer-animated faces more expressive making it easier for medical students using video surgery to tell if their patient is in discomfort.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient I went skate compition registration line almost I stood almost hour I got paid fee worth I got compete best friendsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast I seen builders empire State building ran obstacles trying allow dirigibles dock The empire State building already standing architects decided renovate make dock dirigibles The architects working project strengthen buildings frame They also wenches control machinery dirigible mooring The architects also needed install housed elevators stairs bring passengers base floor back After renovations done empire state building floors After building done owners found could let dirigibles building They would break law airships flying low urban areas So empire state building finished could use dirigible sSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Electing a new president of the United States of America has been, and always will be, a big deal. One could be a state senator, a member of the legislative branch, or even an average citizen with zero involvement in governmental jobs/issues. The one thing that ties all of these people together - is that they're all citizens. As citizens, these people will care about who is running their country, what plans they have for it, and how those plans are carried out. Therefore, on behalf of the U.S., it is important to elect the correct person to rule a nation and keep it safe. The Electoral College is a flawed system used to elect presidents, and the American voting system should be based on popular vote. A few reasons being that the votes of the Electoral College outweigh the votes of an everyday citizen, and that the Electoral College basically has the final say in who becomes the president of the United States of America.\n\nOne of the things that is wired throughout all three sources, is that electoral votes basicallly overpower the votes of the average citizen. When the average citizen does vote, however, their vote does not go toward the president. Their vote goes to the Electoral College, who then vote for the president. \"[...] it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote\" (Posner 16). According to an article (that supports the Electoral College), the winner of an election can win without owning the popular votes of an entire nation. Basically, all that a candidate even needs is the majority votes of the Electoral College in order to win an election. \"[...] according to a Gallup pole in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore - thanks to the quirks of the electoral college - won the popular vote but lost the presidency[...]\" (Plumer 9). Collecting the votes of the Electoral College is the only concern of a candidate - therefore the only reason that candidates speak to the people is to influence them to cast votes for the Electoral College, which then cast votes for that candidate. \"[...] Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes [...]\" (Posner 18). It's as if the people are just physical steps that electoral voters use to get to the person that the Electoral college wants to be the president of the U.S.\n\n\"Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always\" (Plumer 10). As mentioned in the article by Richard A. Posner, members of the Electoral College are chosen and expected to vote for their party's nominee. However, people don't always deliver what we expect from them. It is completly possible for an elector to change their mind, and cast their finalizing vote toward the opposite candidate. These members cast their votes directly to the candidate, and they can easily change their vote.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is widely believed that one solution to address environmental issues would be that governments should impose high costs for private cars and other means of transportation. While I consider that might be a useful short-term measure, I would argue that others might have even greater impact in the long-term period. \r\n\r\nIf national authorities increased the price of petrol, it would solve two crucial environmental problems. Firstly, in terms of private cars, motorists would limit the number and the length of their trip to compensate for the extra expense. Governments could use the money raised to invest more in transport infrastructure and to enhance residents' awareness of public transport and environmental threats. Secondly, from the perspective of freight services, some companies would transport their goods by rails rather than by trucks to save their operation cost. Both these activities could cut down on emissions and reduce the greenhouse effect. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, while the increased cost of fuel could be executed as an interim solution, I think governments should adopt two policies to address environmental problems efficiently in the future. Governments could support the research and development process of electronic cars and other vehicles operated by renewable energy. In Germany, for instance, the local authorities have subsidized 1,000 USD for every person converting from a fuel car to an electronic one and reduced taxation for electrical automakers. Another policy is to quickly and widely develop means of public transport which will apply cutting-edge technologies to attract such users. These policies could bring sustainable benefits such as helping in the effort to combat global warming and improving the quality of air. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although increasing the cost of fuel might be useful in tackling many environmental problems, other measures should be implemented by governments to gain long-term achievements.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Arts is the soul of a country’s heritage. Some people support the government investing in arts, while others prefer it to be in essential areas such as health and education. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and why I believe more funding should be on the latter.\r\n\r\nSome individuals believe there are advantages to using taxpayers' money on arts. Firstly, it can fund more activities, which include supporting museums or art gallery exhibitions such as painting, sculpture, and literature. On top of that, the funding helps develop schools for performing arts and music. For example, there is hardly any art institute in Malaysia to harness young talents into becoming world-renowned artists. In addition, this investment helps retain the local culture and historical identity, for instance, preserving local performing arts such as Ulik Mayang in the Northern Malay Culture, since its tradition is dying with the older generation.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I believe the government should prioritise its budget for pertinent sectors like health and education. For instance, health sector funds are essential to all citizens from infancy to the elderly as they provide the basic needs of medications, vaccines, life-saving procedures or outpatient clinics. Moreover, health education for the public is essential in preventing endemic; if it occurs, it will be costly for the nation. In addition, investing in learning increases peoples’ literacy rate and improves the economy as more intellectuals will populate the country to contribute to the GDP and income tax. This can be seen in Singapore, a country with one of the highest IQs globally, which attains one of the highest GDPs in the world.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, supporting the arts industry financially brings advantages in preserving culture and expanding new talents. However, I believe policymakers must prioritise funding in more critical areas such as health and literacy. After all, survival depends on basic needs, including well-being and literacy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article The Challenge of Exploring Venus the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because it is the hottest planet in our Solar System. Knowing that Venus is a planet Scientists want to study more about it. They are trying to work on innovations that could allow machines to last long.They call our planet,which is Earth the twin to Venus.\n\nIn paragraph 3 Scientists have said that Venus is the hottest planet in our Solar System. Even when Mercury is closests to the Sun, Venus is still hotter. It has a thick atmosphere with 97 perecent of Carbon Dioxide blankets. In paragraph 3 the author says \"On the planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit,and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we expierence on our planet.\" Scientists have also been wanting to study more about it and make more inventions/machines to take to Venus.They would like to make computers that last long on Venus.Otherwise in paragraph 2 it says \" Often referred to as Earth's \"twin,\" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size,and ocasionally the closest in distance too.\"\n\nIn Conclusion, Venus may be dangerous since its the hottest and the most delicate on out of our Solar System. Scientists seem to like to study about Venus, and to make there inventions for it. Venus has alot of heat,gravitity and more pressure than our planet. Venus and our planet have alot in common. Which is Worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The architects problems As said stress Dirigibles Load much The building They would sixty thousand Dollars modifications Other Then That They redesign And makeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on mars. The space craft Viking snapped a photo of what look a human face on mars. The face is two miles long from end to end. Many conspiracy theorists think that the face is alien made. The face is not alien made though.\n\nThe theorists wanted to know proof that it wasn't alien made. So April 5,1998 the Global Surveyor flew over the face and took a picture ten times shaper than the first picture. Thus you could see that the face was formed not by aliens but by natrual formation.\n\nThe theorists where still not happy about the photo take. On the that day mars had a dust strom that day so the picture kinda had a haze to it. So the mission controllers had to prepare to take another picture. So they did and on April 8, 2001 on a cloudless day on mars the picture was took.\n\nOnce agian the picture showed that there were no alien houses or monuments. The picture was taken with absolute maximum resolition. So you could see every little detail on mars. Scientists concluded that the formation was made by lava coming to the surface and making a formation that just happend to look like a face mage by aliens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral collage is a process , not a place. The founding fathers established it in the constitution as comprimise between election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The thing is the president shouldnt be picked on his personality or his or hers past, they should be judged by the changes they can make and how they can make it better for the people on the out side world. they shouldnt be voted by the fancy no good stuck ups in the office 24/7 bc half the time they dont know good, i mean look at the president we have now.\n\nThe process consists of the section of the electors, which they vote president or vice president. under the Electoral collage system voters vote not for president but for a state of elections. They shouldnt have to vote like that , why have the office men and women vote president? When u could have the citizens of state do it. The office men and women dont know what the citizens want or need. There just there to get money and sit on there butts 24/7 and do nothing but make poor decisions as a reference to our president.\n\nThe most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. Then in that case the election would be thrown to The House of Representatives , where state delegations vote on the president. There shouldnt be a tie and having to be thrown in to The House of Represntatives. The president shouldnt be selected by valets and posters. they should be picked based apone what there capable of and how they can change the owrld and make it a better and safer place. The president we have now didnt come with its benifites.\n\nAt all basic levels the Electoral collage is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-takes-all system in each states, candidates dont spend time in each state they know they have no changes of winning or losing , so they focus only on the tight races.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you like to see the world?If you would like to then join the Seagoing Cowboys program.In this program you get to see the world and expirience once in a lifetime things.While I was in this program that's exactly what I did.\n\nAs a Seagoing Cowboy you get to do amazing things that not many others get to.''Besides helping people I had the side benifit of seeing Europe and China,''that is what I said when they asked me what it was like being a part of this amazing program.I also got to ride in a gondola while i was in Venice,Italy.An awesome chance like this is something that I did not think would ever come my way, I was just a normal boy before joining but then turned into someone greater than I could have ever imagined.Yes,there is work involved but there is also fun and amazing opportunities that come with it too.\n\nIn conclusion,you should become a part of this program.When once in a life time opportunities like this come your way take them.I didn't think my life would change so quickly after I joined but it did.Your life could change drastically too and all because of one simple choice you could make right now.So go join the Seagoing Cowboys and take this oppotunity before it's too late,and I promise you won't regret it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar chart shows what are the tendences of men and women in attending evening courses in an adult education centre during 2009 in a scale of 0 to 40 people, while the pie chart shows the percentages of ages of the participants in these courses.\nFist of all, the most striking information is that women were largely more present in languages and painting courses than men, and that the vast majority of the participants in the overall courses were 50 years old or over.\nTo begin with, it is clearly demonstrated that there were more women than men in all courses, except in sculture. In fact, men attended to language and drama courses were twice as less than women. Women were 40 in language courses and 20 in drama. Men were also slightly less in paiting, around 25 people, compared to women who were 30 at this course. However, in sculpture, men tended to be more present, as they were 10, which is roughly the double of the number of women who were present.\nSecondly, there was a marked tendence for people aged from 50 and over to attend a these courses, as they were slighlty more than two fifth. Just over a quarter of the people were between 40 and 49, while those who were 30-39 were just 16%. Finally, the youngest ones were not very present. In fact, the 20-29 years old group represented just 11%, while the under 20 were barely the half, with 5%.\nTo conclude, it can be seen that the vast majority of the people who attended these evening courses were aged from 40 to 50 and over. Moreover, women tended to attend much more at all courses than men except for sculpture.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders empire state building faced attempting allow blimps dock height building For instance paragraph states steel frame building would modified six thousand dollars worth modifications This proves height empire height city pay modification fees Also building tall mast stable main obstacle stated paragraph winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents This demonstrates mast currents stable enough could dangerous downtown New York Lastly even state laws became obstacle dirigibles paragraph states law would make illegal ship ever tie building This justifies also obstacle builders facedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Agreeing to the developments of smart cars has it's advantages but it also has it's disadvantages. Some smart cars can be developed to not have the need for a human to be responsible at anytime. Others disagree with the idea and think this idea should stop. In my opinion I disagree with the development in smart cars.\n\nThe inventors of these smart cars say that they have sensors to know if the human is paying attention but having smarter cars for that reason can be dangerous. Many people have had accidents and many of those accidents have been fatal. All those accidents need is for the person to take his/her eyes off the road for a quick second. At this moment they have cars that can drive themsleves but also need assitance once in a while but anyone can say \"Oh I've got my eyes on the road\" but in reality they are more distracted than a child playing toys. Many people can trust a car at it's job for one second but lose their life the next. Smart car development is not the smart way to go.\n\nIf furtists develop a car that can do its job with no human assistance at all, of course people will start buying but I guarantee more accidents occur. These car companies can't guarantee you that the car may turn off, that the car will stop working out of no where. Anyone can be driving and thinking the car has everything under control they start putting their mind into other things like texting, calling, writing, and even changing in a car because they're late to their destination. You can't always trust technology because there is something that can always make it go wrong. People will be unaware of everything going on around them when their eyes, ears, and mind aren't neccesary on the road. When the time comes on who's fault it was that the accident occured the question will be whose fault was it really the manufacturer orr the drivers? If you would've kept your eyes on the road and tooken responsibilty you'd be able to prevent being in a room where your freedom is to determined all because of one \"smart car.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, my postion on driverless cars is that they need to be more attentive and cautious. Some careless drivers dont pay attention when it comes to driving.It may be a car that we will have that might not let us drive at all even when your in situations. However, we still need to be attentive at all times when it comes to driving. The negative aspects of this article is that there is no point is having a driver in a driverless car. Drivers would still want to drive\n\nDrivers cant sit all day when it comes to riding in those driverless car. It's like they are the passengers inside the car and letting the driverless car take over. In the article it says, \"A human driver in a safe car, is in control at all times\" and always attentive when on the road for their safety. Even if the new traffic law does pass through, it still wouldnt do any good for the drivers in the driverless cars.\n\nPeople still need cars that they can drive. There would be no point in letting a car drive for you. if that happens, people could be just taking the bus to wherever their destination is. People shouldn't want those cars because they are pointless and could be dangerous. You see it on movies and television but people don't know what it really feels like in real life when you let a car take over. It will all just be too weird.\n\nI also disapprove because the only time the driver will be able to touch the wheel is when there is construction work, pulling out of a driveway, or in complicated traffic. It's a very pointless car to have. Why put in a lot of money in something that isnt even worth it? The article says, \"Google cars aren't truly driverless,\" It might as well be. Drivers will only be able to touch the wheel, so does that mean that they will be in control or will the driverless car still be in control but just having the drivers hands on the wheel?\n\nIn conclusion, I dont agree with these new driverless cars. Especially when a new traffic law passes by, it wont be worth the wait. These cars are pointless and wont be worth your time. Sure they can do a lot of things a normal car can do but, the one main thing that they cant do is have a driver in control.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are going to be great for the future. They will eliminate human error, provide for an easier driving experience, while still allowing for safety and human control. Here is the first example.\n\nHumans are a flawed species. We are not perfect robots that do not do anything wrong. All crashes stem from someone doing something wrong or illegal. Driverless cars eliminate the possibility of a human mistake. By using their sensors, driverless cars can see more than we can while driving. It takes blindspots out of the equation and allows for a further field of view. The text states, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash,\". This is a testament to what is possible with these cars and the safety that they bring. Even though they still alert the driver of risky conditions, most of the time the conditions are not risky and drivers can just relax and stay back which would make crashes very few and far between.\n\nThe second example is providing a better driving experience. One of the worst things for drivers is fatigue during road trips. Imagine letting the car do all of the driving while the driver gets to kick back and watch a movie on the windshield. The article shows the possibilities here when talking about the psychological aspect of being bored when the driver does not have to do anything, \"Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays.\" Not having to be hyper focused on the road allows for less fatigue and a better experince overall. It can also help mothers or fathers that have to deal with young children. Not having to drive allows them to be able to help if their child needs anything. Here is the final example.\n\nThe final example is the room that these cars allow for safety. Technology is not always perfect. Sometimes it can mess up and fail. This is what many opponents bring up while in arguements about these cars. The reality is that the cars give over control to the driver when it either does not know what to do or is failing. The text states that here, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" These cars are capable of doing everything we can do physically, but when they don't know what to do mentally they give up control and alert the driver. This allows for the safety and control that most drivers want, but at a lower cost of fatigue or error as described earlier. The feature is a net that catches the car before it gets into an accident. Why not allow for these cars if at the end of the day the driver can still have control?\n\nOpponents of these cars say that they pose a safety risk and they are not worth the possible hazard just for the cool technology factor. They fail to see the safety features that these cars have in place. They also do not see how much of a benefit they are to the drivers. If they were to see how the cars give up control and allow for the human to take over whenever, they may change their tune and start changing their opinon about these cars.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are a positive thing for our society. The way that they eliminate human error, provide an easier driving experience, and still allow for safety and control make them a reasonable option for the future. Even though some people do not see the benefit, they soon will after seeing what these incredible cars can do.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Wow! What do you think about the ''Face on Mars?'' I think that the ''Face on Mars'' is just a natural landform because in paragraph 1, it talks about how 25 yearts ago something funny happened around Mars. NASA'S Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. An enormous head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia. There was a degree of surprise among mission controllers back at the Jet Propulsion Lab when the face appeared on their moniters. But the sensation was short lived.Scientists figure dit was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia , only this one had unusual shadows tht make it look like an Egyptian Pharpoh. NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The caption noted a ''huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusionof eyes, nose, and mouth.'' The Face on Mars'' has become a pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood filom, appeared in books magazines, radio talk shows- even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years! Some people think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars- evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspircay theorists. Although fewv scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in September. Thousands of Ancient web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. There were no alien monument after all. Not everyone was satisfied. The Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98- a cloudy time of the year on the Red Planet. The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze. As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,'' he added. \" So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!'' In the end what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West.'' It reminds some of us mostly the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,'' says Garvin. ''That's a lava dome thatb takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars. Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001- a cloudless summer day in Cydonia- Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. '' We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view,'' said Garvin.''Malins team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.'' Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. People on Mars don't pass over the Face very often.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The problems faced ships could get blown wind hit buildings Than thought putting weighos shp could fall hit people groundSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The line graph gives us informations about how much tonnes of waste is created by three companies between the year 2000 and 2015. It can be observed that majority of the companies reduced their waste in this period and become more eco-friendly.\nOverall, while company A nd B were reducing their waste, company C provided more waste from 2000 to 2015. Also, company B recorded significant drop from 2005 to 2015.\nTaking a closer look at the graph, it can be seen that company A created the most waste in the beginning. They recorded 12 tonnes of wastes in the year 2000, however, they reduced their waste consistently in the following years and produced less than 9 tonnes in 2015. Unfortunetly, company C increased their waste records in this period. While they produced little over 3 tonnes of waste in 2000, they rose this record regularly to over 9 tonnes in 2015.\nOn the other hand, company B increased their waste from 2000 to 2005 with reaching over 9 tonnes in 2005 from around 8 tonnes in 2000. However, there is a major drop between 2005 and 2015. They decreased their waste from over 9 tonnes in 2005 to 3 tonnes in 2015.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Governments in most countries are promoting and spending a lot of expenditure on Arts rather than on health and education, This has diversified opinions among some individuals. This essay discusses both sides.\r\n\r\n Elevating and funding Art in the country can be helpful in creating various jobs and merchants. It attracts the international market which can directly boost up the economy of the nation.For ,example encouraging someone who's interested in painting or building sculptures and preserving the art in the museum might attract tourists and also promotes our culture. In addition, people might choose this as a profession and create theirs own jobs. Further it decreases unemployement rate in the country. By constructing institutions and acedamies for art will help the children to build some extra curricular activities which might help them in the future.\r\n\r\nHowever, in my view, the foremost important thing is to aid people with good education and health. Providing proper funds for the construction of hospitals in small towns might save a lot of lives. A survey says that almost 70 percent of villages in the world are not having primary clinics near them. On the other education in some countries is been least cared for, most of the communities in many towns are barely educated due to a lack of interest and investment taken by the Government.It should consider giving scholarships to students who comes from the poor families. In addition by spending money on skill centres for children might have a chance to crack a job.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the promotion of art is good but improving the standards of health and education in the country by funding at the proper rate is crucial.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you drive a car? A truck? Or any kind of vehicle? If so, did you know your polluting the air? Why drive when you could car-pool, walk, or even ride a bike? Why risk your life everyday while driving your car into town to go to work?\n\nTo start off with, pollution is a big affect in this world today. China is one of the most polluted cities in the world. As stated in the article \"Paris bans driving due to smog''\n\nstates that diesel fuel was blamed for pollution. Diesel makes up 67 percent of vehicles in France. Have you ever seen someone black smoke? They probably think they are cool, but they aren't. What they are really doing is polluting the air, and it isn't cool.\n\nEver thought about car-pooling? Riding a bike? Or even walking to work, or school, or even to the mall? In my opinion those are some great ways to get around town. I understand if you live far out of town and you cant walk or ride a bike but maybe think about car-pooling. I would love to car-pool with one of my friends to school. You have a friend to sit there and talk to you. Your doing someone a favor. Plus you never know when you'll see them again. You could always organize your life so you could walk or even get someone you could car-pool with.\n\nEveryday you wake up not knowing what could happen. You get in your car not thinking anything bad could happen to you and then\n\nBAM\n\n! Another car as ran the red light or the stop sign and ran into you. And just like that your killed. You see, walking is easier to get around. Your still risking your life but not as bad as you are if your in a car. There is so many stupid out there that is driving drunk, high, or whatever. Their is even people out there that think they are cool when they really aren't. There are a lot of deaths out there that are caused by vehicles. So before you get in the car, think about walking. It's safer.\n\nNow did you think about car-pooling, walking, or even riding a bike. Did you think about pollution or even your life. You might not agree with me but think about it for a little bit. I rather walk and get some exercise then sit in a car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper name I years old I go called I really smart kid In opinion I benefit people using computers You keep reading essay I going tell good reasons I benefit people using computers first reason teach hand eye coordination give people ability learn far away places people For example I always using computer I m research always gives ability learn new places people Another example ever I watch says people learn learn faraway places people internet time second reason allows people talk online people example I computer everyday I visit facebook always gives chance talk friends people online Another example I go computer I search computersorg says lets people time talk others online reason allows students get information re project For example I always use computers allows get information example govina I benefit people using computers Another example ever I check magazine computers tells kids get alot information re projects time In conclusion I benefit people using computers teach hand eye coordination gives people ability learn faraway places people allows people talk online people allows students get information re projects Those reasons I benefit people using computers So please local newspaper please try make believableSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I went on a trip to Europe on a cattle boat with my best friend Don Reist. After World War ll people needed help, so Don and I signed up for a UNRRA( the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration). Our job was to carry cargo of 335 horses including enough hay and oats to feed them.\n\nEven though I have hard work to do about everyday, I still get a little bit of free time. I like my job because I get to help people in need for help and still get to see the most beautiful sites.\n\nEveryone who loves boat rides, can handle hard work, and still wants free time should join the UNRRA program. The text says, \" Luke also found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded.\" This most likley means that other people is happy about their job too, and can have fun while doing their work.\n\nThe text says, \" UNRRA hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\" This means that you are the one who needs to sign up to be apart of the crew. Being apart of this crew can be a once and a life time opportunity, like the text says, \" He knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Art! when I come to think of it, it is the need of the modern world. it is directly connected to one's way of thinking. Few of the ideas in favour of art and some suggesting that it is a waste of time are discussed below.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, I would like to put some light on points supporting art is an important subject for children at school. Talking interest in art is certainly one of the best ways to showcase your skills in front of a competitive world, as it can help you boost your confidence as an artist. for example, even a shy person when he/she becomes confident about his/her artistic skills can bloom like a lotus and illuminate the world. Art is one of the greatest ways to enhance one's creativity. because it helps the person look at a situation from a different perspective. \r\n\r\non the other hand, the children who do not have any talent or don't have any interest in art, in the case of such ,students it will be pointless to teach them art any further. for reference, if you try to teach uninterested person art he will certainly find an excuse to avoid it. Secondly forcing someone who doesn't want to study art might develop a strong sense of hatred towards the subject.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I would like to say that, it is wise to push someone who has a talent or great interest in the subject towards the art. whereas it would be impossible for somebody who doesn't want to go further in arts. so, we shouldn't try to force children into the arts. rather, we should let them choose for their own sake.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not think cattle boating is a good idea.It is very dangerous,and you don't even have to think about why it is.Remember when Luke slid down the ladder,starting to sliding off the boat,but a metal peice caught his pants,and he made it alive with broken ribs?Thats dangerous dont you think?Thats not it eighther<because you sse im justgetting started.What if the metal peice wasn't there,or the metal peice was aiming for his eye or worse?Cattle boating is also dangerous because you can get stranded.For example,what if a giant storm came, and it caused the ship to go off course and you end up in the middle of no where?Also do you remember when Luke said he gets to see a lot of amazing places,well what if you became stranded on the worse places a human can never be?Now what if your food slid off the boat?Or a giant creature attacked the ship.Your life would be over.This is why I think cattle boating is dangerous.Instead of thinking twice about going,you need to think a million times about going,or dont go at all.Thats what I suggest.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When people see something on the internet or on the T.V they instantly assume aliens but i assure you that the face like object on mars in not an alien artifact. Twenty five years ago we took a picture of mars and there appeared to be some soart of face like figur, when the photo hit the media people all over where convinced thet the object was an aliens face.\n\nBut nevertheless even if there was a civilization on mares us in NASA would binifit from it. But studies even show the the object is equivalent to a butte or a mesa-landformes common around the American West. The reason it lookes like a human head was because \" a huge rock formation... wich resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth\"\n\nWe know this because when we took a picture in 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\" So of there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyption-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\"\n\nSo in the end there is really no dibate weather it is a alien or a land form because here at NASA we have the cold hard proof from all of the photos we have taken to all of the research we have done on the object that the object is just a plain old landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Movies have been fascinated by the idea of cars that drive themselves. We are now closer to making this dream a reality. Google is working on a self driving car as well as other comanies. Self driving cars have many benefits not only to us but to the environment.\n\nGoogle in 2009 made a car that could drive by itself, but only specific conditions. In the ariticle \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" it says that \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far Google cars aren't truly driverless.\" Although these cars can drive more than half a million miles\n\n; it can't pull in or out of driveways or deal with taffic issues. It alerts the driver when the driver should take control of the car.\n\nThese cars would not only drive themselves and make our safety better, but it also brings benefits for the environment and budget. In paragraph two in the article it says that \" The car he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. He believes such cars would fundamentally change the world.\" If the car uses half the fuel a taxi does then that would be less fuel being burned and damaging our environment. Not only does it help the environment but also our budget. We would not have to pay as much money for fuel as we do for cars we have now.\n\nAlthough these cars sound amazing there are negative aspects to these cars. These cars can't drive through complicated traffic issues. The car would not be able to deal with traffic issues, go through roadwork or accidents. The car would give the person in the car the control of the car and if that person is not paying attencion then an accident could happen. Some states believe that the only save car is the car driven by a human. A driverless car is a new form of technology and like all technology this could have a maufunction.\n\nCars that drive themselves sound great and could be really useful in the future, but we must not forget that not everything is perfect. The car provides many benefits like less fuel or engine power. This new car could be a great inovation but also a danger to out safety.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Firstly I thought that the author did a good job writing this essay. Studying Venus is a worthy and risky thing. Scientist know how dangerous the planet is because of how close the planet is to the sun. The reason that I said the planet is so dangerous is because in paragraph 3 it states that \"Additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on it's surface\". That's a reason of why it's so dangerous to the human studying, like i said it's worthy or risky task to do. Although our planet Earth is be compared to planet Venus in the article, both planets are about the same size and density wise.\n\nSecondly I don't think anybody would survive in such harsh environment planet Venus is in. There are horrible conditions scientist have to think about before exploring it. In paragraph 3 it states that\" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus\". Basically it's saying that there's like a shield covering most of the planet covered in carbon dioxide. The temperature in planet Venus is so horrific that suns hottness could burn an entire submarine even when it's in the deepest part of the oceans.\n\nNasa could be working on other approaches considering to study planet Venus despite the dangers it could bring. Electronics are being made to help such a dangerous exploration. Nasa are making heavy electronics to help guide scientist. They are making them in good heavy armored materials. There are many challenges they have to go through because like I said its a worthy or risky task for Nasa and scientist.\n\nLastly I think that this type of work should involve like the government and military. Theres literally no way someone could survive in such enviornment or such dangerous weather, like come on in paragraph 5 it states that \"At thirty plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Eath\". In my opinion I don't think that going to explore a planet such like Venus it wouldn't really be worth it because of how dangerous it could be. The scientist are onlu fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth like planet in our solar system.\n\nIn conclusion I don't ever think that the scientist will ever go to the planet. Even if Nasa does and try to create something in the future. The planet is too dangerous anyways. We've seen and read and heard of what that planet has in store for us, the best thing to do is to stay away and work on something else rather than trying to pursuit a dangerous exploration to such a dangerous to such a crazy planet such as planet Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why censor things When s always going someone wanting read book magizine others think censored If visious circle would continue would nt books left read Theres lots things people dont like nt give right take self Then taking self didnt think apropriate book Will leave someone nothing read If books magazine would start taken selves would less ways research learn certain things Even though might graphic pictures writing books magazines nt make inaproprieate It needs labled book If see mark dont want look dont We need code books different ages Then parents could happy little boy girl could read certain books old Then parents give permission children could read books ment older kids adults Even though im biggest fan reading sometimes pick book things learn engine I dont think people able restrict anything take selves everyone right read book watch movie etc But children different dont need learn things early age So parents pick read adult able read listen watch whatever wantSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having driverless cars could both be a positive and negative idea. My thought on having driverless cars is that I think it could be a helpful and safe operated vehicle depending on the driver.\n\nFirst, I think one of these cars is a good thing because it is more enviorment friendly and could use half as much gasoline as a normal car does today. The text states \"the cars he foresees would use half the fuel's taxis and offer far more flexability than a bus.\" Therefore, the way I view this, is it could be a better vehicle for the world seeing as Google foresees that it could use half as much gas, and also that it is more flexable than buses.\n\nSecond,\n\nI think this is a good vehicle because it will have many more features than a regular car, but even though it will be a driverless car the person driving the car will still have to be aware of the sourroundings or when a problem occurs such as through work zones, or accidents. The text states \"they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are still designed to notify the driver if a problem has occured.\" This means to me, that safety still could be a concern, but if the driver is aware of everything happening around them, it could be the smartest car out there.\n\nLastly, although I do think this could be a well made, manufactured vehicle, there are still flaws about it, that could change someone's whole point of view on the car. As stated before, it is a driverless car, but the driver still needs to be aware of sourroundings and whats happening on the road. As safe and smart as Google may make this vehicle, anything could happen at anytime wheather it could be that it did not brake itself at the right time, or something were to happen with the computers that was put in to run the vehicle. The text states \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or manufacturer?\" I agree strongly with this question, but I believe that whatever could happen with it, lies upon what caused the damage.\n\nUltimately, Google's driverless car could be a good or bad vehicle, but in my opinion I do think it could be good, although there are many things I would be worried about such as any misfires that could happen.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For those who belive that the landform found on Mars was created by aliens, you are wrong the landform is in fact not created by aliens. From information we get from Earths land marks we can saftly say this is a natural land mark the planet has made. The resons why the landform looks like a face is because of shadows. There are no alieans creating human faces on Mars. It is just like nobody is creating Mountains on Earth. The public is just being advertised by movies, books, and magazines to think that there is an alien creating human faces on Mars. With new found information like the face on Mars we have to think about if a alien did create it, how do they know what we look like?\n\nWe know the that because of are landforms on Earth, Mars could have created the face on its own. A human can create land marks because of pyramids, however they will not last long becase the pyramids are falling apart. There are so many things Earth created like islands, volcanoes, and mountains who is to say Mars cannot create thing to. It is not a bad estimate to say that another face could naturaly appear on Earth or Venuse. Landforms are not always going to have to be blamed on another life form for occuring. This is how Earth helps use come to the conclusion that the face was not created by aliens.\n\nThe public can be tricked into thinking that alines maked the face because they put too much trust into other people like the authors of some magazines articles. We always hear that we souldn't belive everything we hear on the internet, but do we listen. If your favriote celebrate says they belive that the face was made by aliens 85% of there fans would say the face was created by aliens. Most people belive everthing they hear, so if a movie director writes a movie about the face being actualy created by aliens they will belive. It is all because we put way too much faith in other people. Nobody video tapped a alien making a face on Mars.\n\nNobody has seen a alien before, how do aliens know what humans look like. The reason why nobody has ever seen an alien proves that it is most likely that the figure was created by the planet. Just because you deeply belive that it was made by an alien dosen't make it true. Mabe thats how alieans look you never know, what strange things happen on Mars. We don't know what it is but its safe to say that it is not a human face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Lives tells us kid CubaThis memoir positive mood It says keep family friends home untill get back feet It tells us neighborhood live And theres many different types immigrants get along The kid s parents friends family dinner The parents give everything jobs friend families kid could growSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author happy A sense security friends families neighbors His parents sacrificed careers leave behind friends family basically starting life benifit children Where Narciso lived nice twofamily blond brick building There learnd cuban culture cooking music filted house child Narciso tons families Not necessarily blood related neighbors mostly immagrants thoes cultures came together great solidarity friendship She lived close community helping hand always needed Her parents always kept arms door open Alegria land lords daughter came kitchen often Also aunts Bertha Juanita along cousins Arnold Maria Rosemary Often someone would stay temporolly Even hard times parents would sacrifice anything And Narciso greatful Greatful parents makeing simple house homeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Rough Road ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit cyclists effected features setting She first effected old men told shortcut ride Yosemite National Park Then effected ghost towns water give Then almost dehydrated came rickety road tumbleweed huge snake quite difficult get Then end came upon Gary Wilbers fish camp decided make decisions All things setting affected cyclist negative way except Gary Wilbers fish camp saved dehydrationSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are the future for the world. There is a need for driverless cars that is slowly being filled by prominent car manufacturers. Although the government makes assumptions that there is no safe car without a human driver, the steps being taken towards a future with driverless cars are showing a different alternative to human drivers.\n\nMany of these driverless cars still require a form of human drivers to guide vehicles through special situations such as road blocks or work zones however, there are now many driverless vehicles that can transport a passenger without any problems. As these vehicles become more popular, affordable, and practical in everyday life it will cause a change in the driver laws for human controlled and driverless cars. With projected release dates for these modern vehicles approaching so fast it is now time for us to begin thinking about the future. Driverless cars are the future.\n\nThere is a future for driverless cars and that future is now. Driverless cars have the ability to change lives positively and remove many of the dangerous actions we face now in driving. There will be no more fear of texting and driving or an adult not being able to focus on the road while checking their child. No more fear of drunk drivers or operators under the influence. Driverless cars are more important to the safety of our country than many realize.\n\nSo let's begin to take the initiative to bring driverless cars to the forefront of technology and make these technologies accessible to the public. There is a great need for these products that must be filled as soon as possible. Driverless cars are the future and that future is now the present.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that instead of dealing with climate change, we need to find a way to cope with it. I think, that there are no chances to be agree with the second statement. Because human activities is the biggest source of harm to our planet. \n\nFirstly, if we do not think about how to reduce our effect to the climate, we will not be able to predict for what next changes we need to be prepared. The more impact on climate we produce - the more unpredictably can be a reply from our nature. Nevertheless, some people used to blame whoever they want, in stead of themselves. \n\nMoreover, when someone says that we do not need to think about preventing climate change, it seems to me like exuce. To treat our planet that way - it is not fair. Humanity always need to think and evaluate the damage we produce to our nature. Because without our understanding of it, it is not possible to stop and reduce it at all. And capacity of our planet is not endless. \n\nFurthermore, if we do not think about our activities, our general pollution effect will never be lowered. But it needs to be reduced, for sure. All human processes affect more and more things. The climate chance is not only one problem. There are so many different ones, such as water consumption, energy production, deforestation, waste utilisation, etc. \n\nTo summarize, I want to say, that make our world better is not such a complicated thing. Just everyone should start to think and analyze. The greatest changes possible only if all people will cooperate and start to do something more then kill our nature.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "News has been the means of getting information for many decades. However, it is said that reading and watching the news program is useless. In this essay, I will argue why I totally disagree with this statement.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, one of the major reasons why we should keep up with the news is because we can get up-to-date information about what is happening all around the world. For instance, in 2020, there was a sudden COVID-19 outbreak that required civilians to stay at home and wear a mask outside the house. There was no way the citizens could hear the pandemic except by reading information through the newspaper. As a result, many people could quarantine and survive the disaster. Clearly, accessing news is a crucial thing to do these days. \r\n\r\nThe second reason why we should stay informed through news is we can develop critical thinking skills. By following the news, you are exposed to a variety of perspectives and viewpoints on current events. Furthermore, this can help you develop your critical thinking skills, as you learn to evaluate different sources of information and form your own opinions based on evidence and reasoning. As an example, my cousin formed a habit of reading the newspaper every morning. Therefore, he can build informed conversations with others on a variety of topics such as politics, science, health, and technology.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, this essay argues that people need to keep in touch with current events by develop their current routine to watch and read the news. In my opinion, everyone should stay updated with the news.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a section of society that considers it absolutely necessary to teach students art related subjects at school. On the other hand, some are of the view that art related subjects are frivolous, futile and unproductive. So, instead of squandering time on such subjects, time should be spent on other productive subjects so that it could be optimally utilized. Before giving my opinion, I would like to discuss both views. \nOn one hand, there are people who regard art as a redundant subject. Perhaps, such people are of the opinion that by studying art, students would not be able to acquire any practical skill and cannot make a stable career out of it thus rendering it an unrewarding subject. For instance, if someone studies subjects like science, mathematics or computer, these subjects would equip him with the skills required in the job market and he would be able to compete and pursue a successful career by studying aforesaid subjects whereas art may be good for nothing. \nOn the contrary, there are people who believe that it is extremely important to impart art education to students at school. There are various reasons to substantiate this argument. First and foremost is that art plays a vital role in personality development of a student. It helps enhance creativity and hone problem solving skills. There are various research reports published by reputed institutions which corroborate this fact. Moreover, it is a prevalent notion that artists are often not paid well which is not the case. In the modern era, the advancement in technology and explosive growth of the internet has created a plethora of opportunities for digital designers, multimedia artists and animators. Furthermore, students studying diverse subjects can benefit from interdisciplinary studies. They can apply their knowledge from one discipline to solve problems of other subjects, consequently maximizing their learning experience. \nThis has lead me to conclude that art is of paramount significance for a school going child as it helps foster creativity and innovation, creates a diverse learning experience. It can also lead to a successful career. Therefore, significance of art as a subject for school going children cannot be undermined.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ive patent plenty times I ordered new game console I patient My dad I getting game console would porch two weeks For felt like life time I keep patient Not fourteen days I complain niether dad came definitely worth wait That time necessary patience complainSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face Action Coding System would be great for classrooms because it would also help the teachers alot becuase as soon as you walk in the room it would let the teacher know if you are mad, sad, happy,etc. As Dr. Huang said \"even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression\" watching tv that can change your emtions. so imagine that you had a bad day at school and you are just getting out an you are mad about something that happen at school an you want stop being mad, just watch tv that sometimes helps people alot. Then when you turn on the tv use the Facial action coding system.\n\nPeople sometimes dont know what mood there in at school, some people love coming to school, some hate it, but some people dont like to be bothered. Alot of people like to stay to themselves at school, so maybe using the FACS would make thhat student angry, when probably that person was in a happy mood so it works both ways if you ask me but i really do think the FACS would be good for class rooms.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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