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"content": "Facial Action Coding System is where you can identify human emotions. This device could help drawings or paintings in so many ways and one of those ways is so the artist knows exactly what kind of mood the person they are drawing are in. Mona Lisa is in a pretty good mood but shes not just happy. She has some other emotions that a lot of people have no clue about. If more people was to know it would make this painting more interesting than it alreaty is. More people need to start using Facial Action Coding System.\n\nPaintings could mean a lot more if people knew about the Facial Action Coding System process. If you dont know how to exactly tell what kind of mood someone is in then the facial system would work. Also, if you are trying to explain the mood your painting is in then you was most likly in the same mood when you started it. More painters paintings could explain its self with this system. The mood of your work is important because if the painting is sad or upset then your paintings gonna be really dark in color but if the painting is happy then the colors are most likly gonna be bright colors.\n\nHave you ever seen one of your friends faces when they were mad but didnt wanna tell anyone or talk to anyone? Im sure you knew exactally what mood they was in when you first saw them. You can tell what kind of mood someone is in when you look at them its not that hard. If someone has a straight face and not really paying attention to anyone then there not in the best mood but if they are smiling, talking, and making jokes then usually they are in a pretty good mood. But not always some people are really good at hiding there emotions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Due to the development of society, there are many opportunities to have a high-paid job but do not need qualifications that become a problem makes the majority of people concerned nowadays. It is argued that students should enter the workforce right after high school instead of attending higher education. While I claimed that this issue is somewhat justifiable, I support the latter idea and explain both views.\n\nOn the one hand, knowledge is an important key that leads to people’s success. It is the best way to improve ourselves, gain academic knowledge and stand a greater chance of landing a well-earned job. Most jobs are likely to require bachelor's degree holders or other specific degrees, so going to university will help us find jobs easier than others. Moreover, it is not only creating conditions for us to make new friends, and expand our relationships but also for understanding the job we want to do. Besides, continuing to improve the world, robots will do heavy jobs for people, while knowledge is the one which does not replace.\n\nOn the other hand, getting a job right after high school also brings a lot of benefits. For example, while peers need to spend 3 or more years to learn higher education, they can earn money by themselves, not be dependent on family and save time. Furthermore, nowadays the development of society also makes opportunities for people who do not have qualifications in networks such as Youtube, Tiktok, Facebook, and Instagram. \n\nIn conclusion, we cannot deny the advantages and disadvantages of both ideas, but in my point of view, the latter idea is more efficient and easier than the former.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the modern era, most of the people who live in apartments or houses are willing to know about the history of that construction. This tendency can be attributed to some reasons, and there are several measures that could be taken to reach this information.\r\n\r\nAs some countries have an ancient civilization, they are more likely to have prominent sources of ancient items which are embedded under the ground. Also, some areas may be famous as dangerous sites in the past, for instance ghost areas that have many dead bodies in there. Also, over the last periods, people were in the habit of burying bodies with their valuable goods, such as their jewellery or hand-made pots which are valuable in the present. Nowadays, several buildings perhaps are built on these grounds, which have a variety of old age things, including the skeleton of the ancient empire or solder bodies. In addition, those countries have nurtured a wide variety of writers, and philosophers because of their history of civilization. Therefore, people who live in those houses could apply it as a historical or monumental museum and attract several people's attention to them through social media, which is a suitable way to earn money.\r\n\r\nThere are several methods that folks to conceive the age of their living area. Firstly, they could register the local library, which provides old rural maps to their members. Secondly, as several constructions are devised by intended municipals, They have to apply primary assessments in order to ensure all the environments are safe before they start their operations. So, people could access their investigations. Finally, in the technology era, people just need to get online and access the Internet and employ social media or search the web to obtain more information about their living places.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, some countries have historical stories, and because of their ancient history they have many priceless items which are expensive or old age monuments, this situation encourages citizens to find out the history of their living places in order to find out precious items. This action could be done by searching on the Internet or local library and municipality.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The terrain Do exeed posted speed limit Joe Kurmaskie cyclist cope many difficulties He already lacking water anduous journey enviroment turned The narration states I noticed terrain changing flat road replaced short rolling hills Kurmaskie This means cyclist going put forth energy make hills Energy barely This drain almost energy cyclist Another example At point tumbleweeds crossed path Kurmaskie This means cyclist middle nowhere barely water energy causing even problems In conclusion setting Do exceed posted speed limit Joe Kurmaskie caused many problems cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "With world wide variation cultures languages beliefs races doubt different subjects offensive others Books songs magazines movies purposes created This entertain inform persuade People use libraries source see works Many people use libraries every day research simply gain knowledge fun My opinion type material matter contains able found library shelf A library place one able find book cd video magazine subject interests If libraries took every item offensive someone would simply library Any item read listen word sentence meaning offend person way This many items find way biased The way author tries entertain offend use certain language certain tone Persuasion also biased towards one side agree side author chooses The goes informing You think author needed address certain point All purposes writing offensive someone I library read magazine talking bad teenage drivers The article obviously biased teen sources prove teen drivers bad This article deeply offended I glad I read saw different point view Not everyone wants see different points story happen run across one items offend simply put back shelf You required read listen item want see hear However going someone needs use item personal knowledge research This items need available public If someone find item offensive though able request label put item warn readers Likewise item rated CAPS needs age limit set protect young readers listeners With changes set libraries could make everyone happy With libraries found communities going discussion contents items carry While like book I find offensive Even though I problem item still needs able accessed people The point library carry items benefit public It right human able go library able read subject wants Any item whether biased able found shelves library Those agree want read item simply stay away section choose different item interests We need able go library find need want see hear This library serves communitySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There are many dangers on venus. The atmosphere of venus is 97 percent carbon dioxide, which mean there isnt alot of oxygen and we need oxygen. the clouds on venus are made up of sulfuric acid. So if it were to rain we wouldnt be able to live becuase it would be raining acid. The planet earth is a nice comfortable temperature the we are used to. The planet venus has a surface temp of 800 degress fahrenheit which would make the planet inhabitable. The temperature of venus would melt metals. The pressure there could crush whole submariens. We do need to figure out a way of getting on that planet because our planet earth is slowly diteriating and we treat it wrong\n\nThe planet earth is a very comfortable planet. The ground on earth is a temperature that wouldent melt us to pieces instantly. Their is water, food, etc that can be here at earth so we can live here. their are jet planes that can fly low to the ground with no hazard but in venus you have to fly 30 miles above the ground because its to hot. Either way our curiosidy will het the best of js and start risking lives of many people to go and try to get someone on that planet. But that doesnt matter we need to make something that is heat resistant enough to be able to land on venus for exploration.\n\nThis is the reason why i think that venus is a worthy but dangerous pursuit. venus is a inhabitable planet at this moment. Earth is all we have right now. We are not treating this planet right and at the rate we are doing it weill make us have to migrate to a new planet mosy likely. This is my reasoningSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit features setting affect author feels In beginning essay author confident happy setting a reservoir camp ground outside Lodi California Kurmaskie This sounds like good place refreshed feel confident Later bike ride author affected negatively barren area comes says This sight troubling Kurmaskie Finally reaches modern store relieved due modern facility states Then easily rounding bend troubles thirst fear behind me Kurmaskie The area author goes effectSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article Driverless Cars Are Coming the narrator is trying lo let us imagine that in the future there will be nomore cars. First, I have to disagree with that because there will always be cars. In the article they are saying that there will be no cars but if you keep reading it is talikng about a taxi and that is a car.\n\nNext, my postion on driverless cars is that it would take or even make it hard for people to get places because what if the taxi's run late and you have someplace to be at a certain time, but when you have your own car it would be easier because you wouldn't have to depend on somebody to give you a ride when you have your own ride.\n\nHowever, here are some apprioate ideas for the reason that I say that. They say that they had good conditioning cars since 2009 but let's just say in 2015 they have some tools and machines that will turn good conditionong cars into amazing or wonderful condition cars.\n\nThen, if you look at what they are telling us then it would not even make any since to take cars out of the would and everyone waiting on a taxi. What if something would have to happen to the taxi's what would everyone do then? You see people may come up with postive ideas but then people may not look at\n\nthe negative side of the equation. That is why it is always good to look at the postive and negative side so you can know what to fix and know what to proceed.\n\nIn conclusion, the article Driverless Cars Are Coming should not be relased becuase it will cause dnager to the ones who like to be places on time and now would have to wait to get a ride. Last but not lease, i would not agree to the article Drvierless Cars Are Coming becuase people would be waiting for a taxi when they could already have a car of there own.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The idea docking dirigables top The Empire State Building grand one It seems though dream dirigable transportation s way however architects blinded excitement Al competitive nature pushed building unprecedented ft also combined transportation new fashionable And effective ways This made public architects excited also put lot expectations building Al Smith see obstacles ahead would halt dirigible plans One obstacles swaying dirigible would add stress frame building though necessary precautions made obstacle foreshadowing others come When dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire due hydrogen gas people became skepticle What blowup crowded New York city street Also existing law aircrafts flying low urban areas prohibited dirigable plans The obstacles proved much plan go Though plans merely postponed late s idea dirigables top Empire State Building disappearedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "One opinion is that news is not associated with most people's lives, and it is no use reading newspapers and watching news programs. In my view, I completely disagree with this statement.\r\n\r\nFirstly, news can help people see what is happening in their region and in the world. Take, for instance, a piece of info on the world where people are under the influence of a new pandemic called COVID 19. Undoubtedly, if people are constantly announced of this kind of information, they will know how to avoid being infected by this virus. Therefore, by reporting any other news like this, newspapers and news programs can help the general public avoid countless problems in their life. \r\n\r\nIn addition, it is undeniable that news also helps people improve their understanding. This is because it contains a lot of knowledge about economics, politics, and history. For example, a business person who watches news programs regularly can easily observe the market to make a profit. Thus, the news industry should continue broadcasting news like this.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the analyses mentioned above make me conclude that news brings many benefits to people. I highly recommend that people watch news programs and read newspapers regularly.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "One of the most conspicuous trends of today's globalized world is the Internet. Few citizens use social platforms to keep in connecting with other citizens and new events. There are both benefits and drawbacks to this notion. Howbeit, I am of the opinion that the advantages/disadvantages of social news outweigh the disadvantages.I will delineate the rationales in the ensuing paragraphs.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, let me commence by stating, the most preponderant aspect associated with that, there are compelling reasons, why population are favouring that, it is very useful to keep in contact with family members, relatives and friends. Firstly, Nowadays, the community are going out of the country for their higher education so it is very advantageous to keep in feeling with family through social news. For instance, now my cousin is studying in Canada for further education so he always calls me every Sunday through WhatsApp. It is very helpful for him because in Canada no one our family member is living there therefore, we can touch by the videocall. It is possible because of social media. Secondly, If parents go for their work or job then through social media parents can talks with their children in worktimes. Parents can work with the relaxation. \r\n\r\nAnother pivotal aspect associated with this argument is that, At presents days, people use social media in the wrong way. From the ,internet society can stalk anybody and it is very dangerous for their personal life. For illustrate, On Instagram ,apps people can see any photos and any biodata of that person, If any person hacks that account and all this is possible because of social media. Moreover, when family keep in touch through social media those people can not interact with others in real soul and the emotion with that crowd is no more. In reality,life emotion is very strong and better than social media emotion. In-Network media, mostly news events or news can be fake because in social media any people write anything and it's wrongs news.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, all in, all to amalgamate all the points discussed above, it can be recapitulated that, social media is very useful in everyone life. some people can use it in a wrong way and its disadvantages to their life. I think that it is boon social media allows people to update and connect with their relatives and surrounding people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Venus is one of the brightest light as a planet, but dangerous. Venus is dangerous to explore for humans. The machines they use for Venus is kept being destroyed by how strong the heat is. NASA is working on other things so they can make machines last longer in Venus. The author did a good job to convince me that it was a worthy pursuit despite from the dangers it is from Venus.\n\nVenus is hard to explore for humans. The heat is strong at Venus, it can kill a astronaut in minutes. It will be dangerous if humans explore Venus close. \"It has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\" If a human gets on Venus or close to it, it is basically suicidal.\n\nThe machines they use for Venus last for hours when it lands. Each mission they use the machines for Venus, it never survived. \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" The machines are too weak for the heat on Venus so it breaks faster. I think they should wait later until our machines are more stronger and better so we can know more about Venus.\n\nRight now NASA is studying things to approach at Venus. NASA is making the machines more resistant from things in Venus. \"By comparison, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\" This is a good thing for our future so we can get more prepared of what's going to happen later on. If they successfully make a machine that can last longer on Venus, we can put powerful machines on other planets too.\n\nVenus is one of the brightest light at the solar system, but it is dangerous. Venus is dangerous for humans to explore at or getting close to it. The machines they use for Venus are weak and gets destroyed by how strong the heat is. NASA is working on other things so that the machine can be stronger from the heat and presurre on Venus. So after reading this essay, the author did convinced me that it was worthy pursuit despite the dangers from Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Being patience good thing rough time life Patience people bringing something They could three hours herd There people cant three hours There people cant ten minets These people get made give But people cant people cant quit People one hour blow And people cant So find anything cantSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There are millions of wrecks in the U.S. every year, some due to their own cars not being very reliable. Cars and their manufacurers must be very reliable when it comes to bringing up new models of vehicles. Imagine if you could cut the number of car wrecks in half. Technology is fast pacing and is advancing every day. What if we could have driverless cars, cars that could not only make the world a better place, but also prove how amazing our technology is. Driverless cars are the next, new future.\n\nDriverless cars have an abundant amount of pros and maybe a little bit of cons, but overall these cars can do great things. A driverless car could possibly stop different aspects of accidents happening. They could even get someone where they need to go. These cars can also help people who barely passed their driver's tests. The car could perform even the most basic stuff, such as, driving through the city, making turns, driving the steering wheel itself, and watching for dangerous things a new or inexperienced driver could not do. Being a new driver can be very challening at first and may even bring a traumatic experience. Coming off as a new driver and only having my license for three months, I know what the pressure can feel like when you feel like you havent learned soemthing and you are already on your own.\n\nThere are some cons when it comes to new driverless cars; Let's say someone is in a wreck and later come to find the car had failed them, who is responsible now? The manufacturer. The car could fail out of nowhere with no warning signs and even cost someone their life. Though there have been studies, a driverless car could have a potential downfall affect on drivers. Some could feel like they can be lazy and not have to worry about their surroundings and cause an accident that way; A person could even fall asleep at the wheel and do more damage than good. Some states make it illegal to even drive computer-type cars because of a law they have.\n\nDriverless cars come with baggage on both sides of good and bad, but with a little more knowledge and research it could change someone's opinion overtime. They could potentially save someone's life and other people surrounding them. They could save a new driver's life and could even help them learn all of the skills of the road. With the new techonology we have in this new future, we could cut the wreck numbers in half to seventy five percent. Driverless cars are not a bad idea and they could possibly save this world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Luck Bomberger was working two part-time jobs in a grocery store and a bank. Don Reist his friend invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat.\n\nHe said yes right then he knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime.\n\nUNRRA hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\n\nLuke signed up with his friend Don.\n\nBefore arriving in Greece, Luke turned 18 years old, which meant he could be drafted for military service.\n\nWhen his draft board learned he was on a cattle-boat trip, they told him to keep doing that for his service.\n\nBy the time he was discharged in 1947, he had made 9 trips the most of any Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nThe cattle boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for Luke.\n\nBesides helping people, he had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China.\n\nBut seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special.\n\nLuke toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.\n\nIt took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China.\n\nCaring for the animals during the crossings kept him busy.\n\nThey had to be fed and watered two or three times a day.\n\nBales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship.\n\nStalls had to be cleaned.\n\nHelping out on his aunt Katie's farm as a boy had prepared him for hard work, but not for dangers at sea.\n\nHe couldn't work for a couple of days because of cracked ribs.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke.\n\nIt opened the world up to him.\n\nHe is grateful for the opportunity.\n\nIt made him more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\n\nThe awarness stayed with him, leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Without a doubt,technological development is roaring in the present time.Some part of the society believes that this available variety of modern equipment is leading to an increase in differentiation in the case of wealthy and impoverished people while the rest of the individuals oppose this opinion.I also support the latter view and this essay will impart information regarding the above-stated viewpoints.\r\n\r\nAdvancements in the variety of available machinery are causing a drastic change in the lives of people of different economic statuses.This is making the poor poorer and providing the rich with excessive benefits. For instance, low-income earners are losing their jobs because of the introduction of advanced gadgets while the rich owners of various firms are investing in these making it a one-time investment in contrast to paying the workers every month which makes them earn a substantial amount of benefit.Thus,with the inclusion of automated ,gadgets the economical difference between human beings is becoming much larger.\r\n\r\n On the other hand , the availability of such a wide range of online platforms aid each category of individuals to approach a vast amount of information in an easy manner and they are also able to seize various opportunities. For example,a 17-year-old boy named Ranvijay who came from a poor family developed a mobile game called Rope Dash using data from the internet and gained income from that to buy books and stationery now he is not only earning money for himself moreover,he is generating fund using this app to help other poor children . Hence, this development in technology is proving to be bountiful for beings that are not enough wealthy to afford every basic necessity.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion , the vast number of options available in technology is expanding the gap according to some minds due to loss to poor beings nevertheless, it can be a deal of profit for low-income groups to attain an outstanding position .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think teaching how to do this to students is a very good idea. Because if we teach this to students we can tell if a person is having a dad day and you can help them out or not. You could also tell if someone is happy or sad. You could tell if they are havin g a dad day and you could try and make them have a good day. You could tell if someone was having suicidle thoughts or is just joking. If you see someone that is happy you could try and keep them happy all day. The author also tells you could not do this with your home PC because it coundn't handle the complex algorithms that you would need for this to work. He tells you what muscles to look for that are bieng used if you try this on a lab partner. He tells you what muscles that are needed for a genuine smile and what muscles to look for on a forced smile. Like in a real smile the person would be using Zygomatic major(muscles that begin at your cheek bones) lift the corners of your mouth. But in a false smile the person would be using the muscles called the Zygomatic muscle and the risorius muscle also.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Improving technology is the tendency of the era right now. Information technology is one type that has already changed a lot from the past. Information technology influences our daily life in many areas, such as home, leisure, and work activities. It positively affects human life, but it also has its disadvantage. I will give my opinion about how information technology influences our lives and the information technology has more benefit or cause more detriment.\nInformation technology improves human life in many different areas. First, it reduces the difficulty of communication. The technology we have right now gives us a faster and easier way to communicate with other who is far from us. Right now, whether we use social media or email, we can contact the people who are far from us immediately. The second part is information gathering; right now, we can get news everywhere, just on electronics, such as cell phones and TV. Also, information technology helps humans in information storage and process. This is the advantage of information technology.\nInformation technology significantly improves human life, but it also has some disadvantages. The first thing is to reduce the time people commute together face by face. Nowadays, classes, meetings, and work can all go online. As a result, we have less chance to meet and communicate; this reduces the ability to watch others' behavior and expression to speculate their feeling and emotion. The second disadvantage is that convenient technology lets people rely on it too much and reduces our ability to finish jobs without technology.\nIn my opinion, the advantage of information technology has way more influence on human life than the disadvantages. First, it helps us solve our problems with more accessible and faster information. This meets the fast rhythm of life in this era. Also, information technology may let people rely on it, but this is very general for humans because we always use anything we can use to solve problems quicker and more efficiently. This is how information technology influences our life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Technological advancements has made it possible for jobs handled by humans to be carried out by computers with artificial intelligence. This has benefits and drawbacks, but due to the speed and precision robots offer, the advantages far outweighs the disadvantages.\nThe first great advantage progress in technology has granted is speed. Robots can perform tasks at a hundred times faster than humans, yet can never get tired. Humans however get exhausted and slow down after a short while of performing the same operation. For example, this can be seen in manufacturing plants where vehicles, aircrafts and electronic gadgets are produced in the millions everyday by machines. This speed was very impossible when humans perviousness all the tasks.\nIn addition to this, improved technology has made it possible to achieve a high degree of accuracy and precision. Men are prone to mistakes,. These errors can lead to disasters or accident which can be fatal. Furthermore, there is a limit to how accurate humans can be in manufacturing without machines. For instance, the human eye cannot see or measure to the micro scale, which causes a lot of errors down the line in the manufactured product. Products Such as health equipment, aviation eqipment and and military instrument require atomic level accuracy to serve their purposes, and this cannot be achieved by humans beings. Hence, with the advent of computers and advance technologies such as 3D printing and CNC machining, accuracy can be achieved to any level.\nTherefore in conclusion, , considering that robots and computers guarantee speed, reliability, and accuracy, these immense benefits of improved technology overshadows the drawbacks it has.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Internet has recently become the most widely spread means of communication and knowledge sharing. It is argued by many if any restrictions should be imposed on it. This essay will discuss both views and explain why the Internet should be free from regulations.\nOne group of people consider that the Internet was developed to overcome a government censure, thus any restrictions will destroy its purpose. Despite the fact that there were independent media, it was practically difficult to share news internally and internationally because of low speed of communication methods such as telegraph or post, which lead to the fact that the most common source of information was government authorities who selected the information they wanted to share. Thus, general citizens’ opinion, views and problems were often unheard. This essay agrees that the ability of sharing information freely between people all over the world makes the government to be transparent as everyone’s opinion and problem may be heard. For example, the problems with extinction of wild animals in Baikal region of Russia due to forest cuts was heard only after a massive attack by the media and local citizens and bloggers that would be impossible without the Internet.\nThe others insist that the Internet allows to people share not only useful knowledge, problems and new, but also violent content. The supporters of the view believe that having an easy access to such content, for example assault, production of bombs, people become prompt to criminal behaviour. Although, the Internet makes the violent information more available, the essay suggests that if an individual want to find violent information, he would do it even in the absence of the Internet. Moreover, recent researches conducted by criminalists uncovered that the increase in the number of criminal offenses is not directly correlated with Internet coverage.\nIn conclusion, although the Internet contains violent content, if needed it may be accessed by interested people from other sources of informations, meanwhile independent flow of information allows individuals to attract attention to their local and even global problems which may be hidden by governments without free Internet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Empire State Building incredible building without idea attempting allow dirigibles dock But idea mooring mast braught many obstacles like safety public Lsted states Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flamable CAPS This statement proves dirigible catch fire like accident Lakehurst New Jersey citizens New York s lives would stake This safety hazard one builder s problems These archatets faced many challenges mooring mast idea Including dangerous factor nature Lsted states The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents This extremely dangerous dirigibles start move around building docked causing hazardous menuvers putting pedestrian s lives risk For mooring idea dangerous public city New YorkSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think that the auther did a good job writtening this artivcle because he use good detail to catch the reader and to think a little more about planet venus the auther is sau that ( In space term- human have seat numerous of spacecraft to land on this clound-draped world. Each pervies mission was unmanned, and for good reason, sice no spacraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. May that is the issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three deacades) say the auther in the artivcle.\n\nThe auther also say in the artivcle (that the atmospher of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. Even more challenging are in the clouds of the highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venis atmosphere. He said the on the planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degerees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than what we experience on our own planet.) Also the conditions are far more extree than anything humans encounter on the earth; such as environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deppest parts of our ocean and would liquefy many metals. Also notable, venus has the hottest surface temperature of any plantes in our solar system even though mercury is closer to ur sun.\n\nBeyond high pressure and heat, venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like eruping volcanoes powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. Astronmers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth-like planet in our solar system. Still today venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth. The planet venus hasa surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains and craters. Furthermore , recall that venus can sometime be our nerest option for a planetary visit, a crucal consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\n\nI like this article because it was fun to learn somthing new and that the article and the author was good at laying out his article and also putting in detail and fact what he new about venus it was super easly to do the question. I think that the auther supports the idea vey good in the article because he lay it out for you and that he/she give out fact to supports the reader and to help out a little.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "That is not a Face.\n\nThe photograph clearly looks like a face. But how is this possible? Though it has not been proven, there is no life found on any other planets besides Earth. I believe the picture simply shows a landform that has been deformed to make shapes in the landform. As you know NASA is a serious space studying program, filled with only the best scientists in the United States.\n\nThe first reason I have to believe this is just a landform is this has been looked into many times over the last three decades. If there was something there we would not kept this as a seret. Sure, NASA doesn't tell the people everything that happens on these missions. But we tell people if there is something that they need to know or if it is just nothing. The picture could have also been taken out of context and the \"eyes\" in the pictures could just be shadows.\n\nMy second reason to believe that this is just a landform is that after the second picture was taken it is shown there is not any alien monument at all. If there was any alien Structures or life in this picture you would be able to see. The picture was taken three times bigger than the pixel size, if there was anything changed about the landform we would have seen it in the photograph. The picture looks exactly like the Egyptian Pharaoh because of the unusual shadows.\n\nMy third and final reason for having the reason to believe that the landform in the picture is that they are equivalent of a butte or a mesa-landforms common around American West. \"Thats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same size height as the Face on Mars,\" said Garvin. These are my three resons to believe that the landform in the picture is just a landform.\n\nNow that i have told you some key resourses about the picture, I hope i have changed you minds about this being a face. As you can see the picture shows a landform not a face. Now you can tell people that believe this is a face in the photo that they are wrong, it is just a landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Environmental issues have long been one of the hottest topics that receive attention from all stages of life in the society. In order to reduce the impact of daily activities on the environment, some people come up with the idea of posing a raise in the gasoline & fuel. From my point of view, I do not think this measure will do a significant change to the growing problem of environment, instead, we have more powerful tools to deal with it. \nIt’s a matter of fact that the gas and fuel are indispensable goods for each country, and the rise in their prices will not blocking people from consume them. For countries where private transport means are used on a daily basis, people will not cut down on the frequency of travelling due to the pricey gases and fuel. On the other hand, its impact on other commodities’ prices will be more remarkable, everything will be less affordable and it could lead to inflation in the near future. For all the reasons mentioned, this measure is not a recommended way to tackle the environmental issues. \nThere are a well of other measures we could take in handling the issue of environment, especially on air pollution. To reduce the emissions from transportation, the government should spend more money on improving the public transport’s quality, and as a result, it will encourage people to reduce the number of cars on the road. In addition, the investment on non-exhaust means of transport is highly recommended, since riding a bike or walking is proved to have a good effect on our health. \nIn conclusion, I am opposed to the opinion of raising the gas and fuel prices in order to reduce the emergence of pollution as there will be many side-effects come along. Other than that, we have a myriad of measures which will bring proper effects on the growing issues of environment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Overall the cycle of life of the honey bee can be divided in 6 steps which can be grouped in 2 main stages: hatching and reaching for maturity. This process lasts around 34 to 36 days and it repeats itself over again.\nThe cycle starts when female bees lay their eggs. They lay their eggs rapidly but surely at around 1 or 2 eggs every 3 days. Subsequently the hatching of the eggs happens after 9 to 10 days.\nAfterwards the nymph molts begin to come out of the eggs and keep on gradually growing up until the 7th day of the cycle. During their 9th day, the bees grow 3 times their initial size. Following this, the young adult emerges. The final step occurs after 4 days when the bee reaches its maturity and females are ready to lay eggs again. Making the cycle begin again from the laying of the eggs.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Presently families relocate to oversea countries for work. Some people argue that it has a negative impact on children, while others think it hasn't. Although, moving to work abroad, where salaries are often higher and career ladder is availeable, is good for increasing life quality, I think children's life would worsen due to new unfamiliar environment.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, when people relocate to different \r\n\r\ncountries in order to change job they increase their life quality. In other words, people are likely to have a job offer from abroad because salary and life standarts in new country. Moreover, they rely on career ladder. For example, in CIS countries almost every citizen dream about working abroad because they live in poor conditions. Despite these improvements, I believe that children would be impacted negatively by moving.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, changin country might make children suffer from unknown environment. It means, children obligated to left their friend in motherland and go for example in new school or kindergarden where they can be bulled by classmates. It also means that they able to not have friend there, hence they would feel loneliness. As an example, my cousin who changed country because his parents had recieved an offer was bullied by new classmates and felt loneliness and it has reflected on his mental health. I believe, that relocating may \r\n\r\nhas harmfull impact on children.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while moving can increase the quality of life, it may have impact for children.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars in our society. People might thunk they are cool or they might help us out alot. Have you ever thought of the negative side of having a driverless car. Why we should not have driverless cars in\n\nour society. They are not completly safe.\n\nWe should not have driverless cars in our society because they can malfunction at any moment. The passage states, \" Even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\" The artical also includes that, \" If the technology fails and someone gets injured, who is at fault the driver or the manufacturer?\" They still are not safe because they still needed human control. So the question i have for you what road blocks are still instore for the driverless cars of todays technology.\n\nThere are the reasons why driverless cars are not good for our society. They still have many problems not completly safe. Still need humans handeling when things get rough. The driver of that car still needs to alert at all times like if they were driving a regular car. So what do driverless cars still hold that we do not know about.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the risks and dangers. In paragraph 8 the author said \" Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination ad innovation.\" Which he is stating no matter the risks we should travel so we can expanded to meet the edges of imagination.\n\nBut he didn't really support his idea until the last paragraph. All the other paragraphs are talking about how Venus is so inhospitable and how Venus has the hottest surface temperature in any planet in our solar system even though Mercury is closer to the sun. The author also stated that \"Venusian geology and wether prsent additional impediments like erupting volcanoes. powerful earthquakes and frequent lightning strikes.\"\n\nIn conclusion the author didn't really support what his suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. All he talked about was how Venus is so inhospitable and how impossible it would be to get to send someone and get to the surface alive.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "These days a lot of people have tended to know the history of their living place – house or even building for the different matters. There are many reasons for this and I am going to find them in this essay.\r\n\r\nThere are different situations when people wish or need to understand the history of their current or future accommodation. First of all, in case of the deals with real estate buyers want to be ensure that the flat or house has a “white history” and will not give and problems or dangers after the deal. In Russia, for instance, the sheet with details about the previous owners and their actions with the object is one of the most important documents for buyers to make their final decision. Another reason is a possibility to make any renovation in the house or flat. In this situation it is sufficient to know about some others redecorations in the past.\r\n\r\nThere are some different ways how to find information about some object and this is not as difficult as many years ago. For example, most countries have a registry with records about any changes of all objects in the county. Additionally, information about the accommodation easy is taken from the talking with neighbours who could live near a long time and know the full history of the building and its owners.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there is no doubt that knowledge of the accommodation history is a very helpful and important part of our life. Moreover, nowadays everybody can find numerous ways to research needed information from open resources.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Somewhere along road guy said laugh day keeps doctor away hell talking I nt really know understand importance either Until found first hand important words could right unknown genius It years ago traumatic event happened meDo remember first girl guy thought loved If u recall feeling heartbreak utter distraught Well u u might understand I felt sometimes feel If learn something importance might realize re single Before certain event I would end fighting d end making jokes get We d sometimes intentionally go see romantic movies laugh girl guy would break crying In one sobbing weeping obnoxious sounding cries The kind pisses making feel sympathetic Back later key point horrible situation occurred together years two half specific yeah long time I know The day ended happened middle math class believe middle freaking class convinced go sit back corner room It d us interruptions We everyday nt anything unusual I thinking yeah get work alone amazing girlfriend I idiot I fondly remember glancing sitting wearing white bleached jeans black band tshirt skin white unblemished porcelain doll would jealous To top dirty blond hair rose petal lips believe one unending curves I dressed similar I tshirt black jeans signature burgundy beanie I natural tan glowing skin dark brown curly hair covered dark green eyes When I sat I m exactly sure I felt like something bad going happen Almost like oncoming thunder storm paranoid feeling watched The dreadful words fell mouth like water coming faucet We break heart seized chest words blurred one becoming inaudible I remained moving completely silent like stone gargoyle I could nt help laugh silently inside head I nt ever say anything back I nt trust voice enough steady unwavering Even words nt body I could nt control shaking body one big muscle spasm I quietly quickly walked room making sure bag hand I nt want reason come back The hallways along tiles eventually grass along pouring rain blurred one I kept walking walking wear mind Until finally tired stop My cheeks tear streaked jawline eyes red bloodshot The wonderful thing world life ended As look back I s relationship laughter survived got lot It however enough No amount trying laugh would help like petty arguments I sometimes though look back I reacted make laugh I better people movies Unlike however I weep bawl obnoxiouslySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays , people have different opinions on whether government authorities use the amount of tax payable by the public spending on museums and on art galleries. However, others point of view that utilise this money on healthcare and education centres. Although this essay considers both sides of this contention notion, I tend to believe that spending tax amount on developing health centres and the education sector is more beneficial because of the development of the nation besides the improvement in the economy.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, some people including me support the argument that this money is wisely utilised for the development of academic institutions. This is because myriads of countryside areas where not only lack schools but also children become illiterate. Hence, the country does not develop and remains in the backward step as compared to other nations. Tim Cooper, from Sheffield Hallam ,University points out that according to his research developed countries conduct new experiments on a daily basis and achieve a higher position as compared to developing ones.\r\n\r\nMoving on, another worth mentioning point is that if government construct healthcare centres in each area with amelioration technology. As the result, people do not have to go to foreign nations for the treatment of their diseases. This is because their own country fulfils their requirements and they pay high taxes for using the services. To epitomise, The Times of India, conduct a survey and found that 37% of the public go to other countries for the treatments like cancer and pay huge charges for procedures. As a consequence, making other nations wealthier while their own countries become poor.\r\n\r\nShifting to other aspects, another school of thought opposes the idea of the advancement of hospitals and educational institutions. As they may think spending money on Museums and art galleries is a favourable concept because these enhance knowledge of tradition and culture since independence and children generate interest and are always connected with their roots. Furthermore, this is the factor which strengthens their viewpoint and cannot be ignored.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the community have found it hard to reach a consensus on where to spend money on museums or on clinics and the education systems. Despite a few individuals saying that tradition is important, In my viewpoint facilities like treatment and educating people has more weightage because boost the income of the government and educate people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Today final day tryouts The deciding day Tryouts I patiently waited hand envelopes girls I didnt know could handle CAPS youve left building open envelope said CAPSs fair If everyone opens people dont make team sad bummed girls would jumping joy would make girls didnt make feel even bummed left Be patient leave building called name I came grabbed envelope She dismissed us some girls opened envelopes right away But didnt make karma I waited I got outside I could barely I needed know I Patience isnt lovely thing always l opened envelope I made team I excited I glad I patience surprisedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The setting affect cyclist many ways How posted speed limit cause cyclist went right throw goin faster supporedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There has been a controversy about whether students should judge their teachers. I think the advantages of judging their teachers outweigh its disadvantages, my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs. \r\n\r\nFirst, the teaching quality can be improved by making comments about their teachers. It's commonplace that not all teachers are good at teaching; they may know the concept, but they can't present that knowledge in an attractive way. As a result, some students might feel bored and start sleeping. At this point, if students can tell their teachers about the drawbacks of their lessons, the teaching quality can be promoted. \r\n\r\nSecond, making comments about teachers can protect students to a large extent. Take China as an example. I grew up in China; hence, I know how the Chinese school system works. In the past, it was quite universal that teachers constantly punished their students, such as beating students, so as a further control students' thoughts. At this point, although students had higher grades, they were at the expense of their souls. On the contrary, if students were allowed to criticize their students, it was advantageous to the growth of children because they dared to challenge the authority. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it has some setbacks as well. For example, it can negatively affect students' grades. As we know, although a strict teacher can be tiresome sometimes, he can indeed help students in their studies. Should students are taught by a rigorous teacher, their grades can increase dramatically. Nevertheless, if students have the right to mark their students, this kind of teacher is bound to be market very low. As a result, all the \"good\" teachers are gone, and students' grades will certainly decrease in a relaxing environment. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are some merits and demerits of making comments about teachers, but I still believe its advantages outstrip its disadvantages.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In Narciso Rodriguez s memoir Home The Blueprints Our Lives heshe incorporated love passion mood You tell fondly strongly Narciso talks things Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm houses In one sentence alone could feel Narciso s passion love home s Narciso puts great deal love thankfulness paragraph talking hisher parents It I learned real definition family I never forget parents turned simple house home These two sentences likely strongest Narciso s memoir two also ones filled passion meaning As see Narciso Rodriguez s memoir Home The Blueprints Our Lives mood Narciso puts love passionSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Almost everyone uses computers one point life Computers way teach hand eye coordination programs games typing The internet used researching different far away cultures well someone s lifestyle This compact well made piece technology belaming intricate Realizing much help computers everyday life people fall support computer technology moving forward One basic evident result using computer handeye coordination Since time children grade school learn typing keyboard Special programs help kids learn necesary skill enjoying practice When I small mere fight years old I remember typing I always excited mom I went barnes noble pick new typing program I especially enjoyed type learn typing lessons well teaching children type general teaches handeye coordination high school college job world Young adults adults expected type papers resemes applications In day age technology era begin typing necessity Another way teach handeye coordination computer games A simple challenge like solitaire bejewled car racing teach skill much advanced games example world war craft need perfect coordination typing games computer Though experts conserned people spending much time computer less timeenjoying nature able learn geography travel nature One amazing computer world wide web This consists millions websites pages search engines information arte upcoming geography uses Are planning trip need find definition word cognitive pertain legitamite website house need search Instead travel learn special wonders travel prices expensive simply click type amazing searching computer learn long ago cultures rituals Information would find museum years ago complex simple use technological world pictures simple art history right fingertipsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Heat dessert humidity things affect cyclist journey First heat heat making thirsty water running row For example narrator describes water bottles tantalizing sips This means day hot running water Second dessert narrator one around deserts usually diserted For example narrator exclaims There one sight building car structure kind clearly states could dessert one wants Lastly humidity hot humidity comes plan makes sky dry seen hotter usually This heat dessert humidity things affect cyclist journeySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this argument, the author writes to recommend The Mozart School of Music to all parents wishing their children to participate in music lessons. However, this presumably profit-driven argument is flawed in several ways.\r\nFirstly, the author stated that this music school welcomes all children, regardless of their age, skill levels and their planned area of study, and such a wide range of offerings must be beneficial to every youngster. However, this is quite often not the case, since most children would be more inclined to interact and socialize with people of their own age and with similar abilities. Trying to integrate too many different aspects of music into one facility is difficult at the very least, and such a hodgepodge approach might confuse or alienate children. Small is beautiful, as the saying goes.\r\nSecondly, the author purports that the many distinguished musicians in the faculty will surely increase the ability of this institution to teach music. This is a baseless assumption, since it depends on the fact that these musicians are not only intimately involved in the actual teaching of all pupils, which is unlikely, and also such exceptional expertise will put the children further ahead on the path to success. Most beginners would usually not need to interact with the best in the field to learn and improve their skills- careful mentoring and well-judged encouragements are often much more important.\r\nLast but not least, the author claims the many successful musicians graduating from the school must be a proof of its success. But this more likely points to the fact that this is a sprawling facility with many students, as the first two arguments have shown. Anyway, most people will not reach the expert level no matter how hard they practised, and they know this. Some may just be trying to find a hobby.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "To me I like the idea of having driverless cars, because if someone goes on a long vacation and they did not want to fly they would have to drive. When you are driving for a long period of time your legs will eventually get tired and you will have to stop at rest station. With the driverless cars they will drive themselves and you can just sit back and relax while of course still paying attention to the road ahead of you. This will get you to your destination in less time because you will make less stops.\n\nIn the article is states, \"In 2013, BMW announced the development of Traffic Jam Assistant. The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" This is a good thing for these types of cars because you do not want your car to just go straight through a construction zone and not be able to stop it. Or you do not want your car to go the wrong way if there is a detour. I like the idea on how if the driver needed to he can take over the wheel and get going the correct way.\n\nI agree that these cars could be a good thing for us in the future because of the things that I have said above. These cars may not have sounded like a good thing in the beginning but as of right now they are an up and coming thing for us. Even if you like to drive this does not mean you have to get one of these types of cars. It is just a good idea for people whose legs can get tires really quick or if you are going on a long car trip. This car is the way to go.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You may think the Face is created by aliens, but it simply is not. You see, we here at NASA have been studying and researching other planets for years. Don't you think that with our intelligence, we would know if something that looks like alien evidence actually is alien evidence? We would not only let everyone know, but we would make a very big deal out of it. This is just a natural landform.\n\nI know it is silly that there is literally a face on Mars, but it's not as big of a deal as you think. Have you ever looked at the leaves in a tree or the coulds in the sky and seen something put together that resembles an animal or shape? This is kind of like that. It's cool, but it doesn't exactly mean the universe is trying to give you a sign of life. When we released these photos to the public, people thought for sure we were hiding something like we had an agenda to have an alien takeover. They said it was \"bona fide evidence of life on Mars\". Trust me, we wish there was life on Mars! That would be ground-breaking news! We are not hiding a single secret, and we are speaking the truth.\n\nPerhaps, of course, we will find life on the red planet someday. This landform is not evidence to support that moment. On a bright and clear day on April 8, 2001, we took a very high-detailed photo of the face. If there were any outstanding undeniable resemblinces to a human face, we would've seen it. It is much like any other landform from the American West, like a certain one in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. Truly any other butte or mesa, just this time its on a different planet.\n\nSo, afterall, it's settled. This face-like landform on Mars is not a sign of any martians or aliens, sadly. Conspiracy theorists will go on with their unreasonable theories and we will stick to the cold hard facts, thank you very much. I hope you have realized just how wrong everyone has been and just how much more logical you should be thinking. Don't get me wrong, I and most workers at NASA certainly belive in aliens. This just isn't anything to get to excited about. Keep in touch, though, you never know when the next big discover will come about.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this aricle , the author its trying to you take you to Venus with all the danger. For explain, in paragaph 1 it say that \"Venus is simple to see from distant but safe vanage point of earth, it has proves a very challenging place to examine more closely \" its is ever challenging visting, trying to do go and rescreach on a plant where you dont know anything about it.\n\nVenus is the twin of earth, right around the corner. In the pharagh 2, it say, \"humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud draped world.\" Every previous mission was unmanned. You may be asking yourself why , because no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours . They belived thats why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus. Its a really challeng for plant for human to study.\n\nOne of the challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acis in Venus atmosphere. On planets surface, temperatures avarage over 800 degrees , and the atompheric average 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar systems.\n\nLet me tell you this , long ago Venus was probably covered largely with and COULD\n\nhave supported various froms of life, just like Earth.\n\nVenus can be save to resreach but what person would want to do at ?\n\nNOT EASY CONDITIONS , FOR HUMANS!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The line graph illustrates the number of overseas tourists to three different areas in a European country (coast, mountains, lakes) from 1987 to 2007\nOverall, it can be seen that the number of visitors has increased for the three categories of areas over the period given. Furthermore, in 2007 the highest number of visitors was reported on the coast at approximately 85 thousand. The second most popular areas were the lakes and last were the mountains.\nIn regard to the coast, we can see that the number of visitors from 1987 to 1992 decreased. However, from 1992 to 2007 there was a consistently increased number of tourists climbing to over 70 thousand visitors in the final year of analysis.\nAbout the mountains, the number of overseas tourists begat at 20 thousand and has increased to reach over 30 thousand by 2007.\nFinally, the lakes were visited by 10 thousand tourists in 1987 and rose significantly to reach over 70 thousand in 2002 and then decreased to 50 thousand by 2007.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The obstacles The Empire State building faced law That airships flying low urban areas The problems Empire state building faced The US Navy driigble los Angeles approached The mooring mast could get close enough tie force ful winds The first obstacle faced attempting allow drigibles dock existing law airships flying low urban areas This law would make illegal ship ever fly building The second Reason builder faced ob stacles attempting allow dirigible dock US Navy drigible Los Angeles approached mooring mast could get close enough tie forceful winds They wind would blow dirigible sharp spires These obstacles Empire State building faced allow dockinSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" there was an arguement about how it's safe invention to be put out of the road and test drive it and how it's not really a smart idea and people can get hurt while in operations of the driverless car. Even though it may seem like a really cool invention there is a lot of things that can go wrong while in operation of the car. So no, I don't think that driverless cars are a good idea because it may cause accident, we don't know how the technology will react in extreem measures, and the driver may be distracted by everything that is going on behind the weel.\n\nMany, many things can go wrong for example wihle driving the technology in the driverless car can malfunction and cause an accident, or while in operation the driver may not be able to stop the driverless car and also cause an acciedent. Theres a whole bunch of things that can go wrong while uding a diverless car. For example the driver might get distracted in times where the car alrets the driver to take over. The driver may not know how that senerio will play out. More so when the driver isn't paying any attention to the road and what the driverless car is doing. Another example would be that the technolgy might fail under extreem measure like when it's at a 4-qay intersection it may not stop, the car may not relize that it was to stop untill it's too late and an accident is cause, just because the car didn't see what was going on or there may have been a glitch that caused an accident. All of these things that can happne need to be taken into account. Because in all honesty we can't always depend on the new and cool technology that comes out of the years, have of the new technology that come outs, all the the technolgy may have many glitches and maybe no one will notice on time untill it's too late, untill an accident is caused. In the text it stated that \"In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelarate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navagating throughwrok zones and around accidents.\"\n\ni understand that most drivers are alert and ready when it comes to these types of situations, but what about the ones that don't pay a whole lot of attention to the road while they're driving? How are they going to deal with the driverless car malfuntioning or notifying them that they need to take acion when it's needed? I feel that diverless cars will propose a lot more accidents when the car itself get more popular.\n\nIn conclution, i think that driverless cars are a bad idea because it may cause accidents, we don't know how the technology will react in extreem measures, and the driver may be distracted by everything that is going on behind the weel. There is a lot of factors that are involed than it just being a cool invention or a cool thing to be able to drive. There is a lot that goes into making sure that the car is safe for human use and making sure that it won't cause a lot more accidents that are needed. I just feel that it would be a bad idea since the project/invention isn't devleoped all the way. Since they're still unsure of what the outcome is on making this invention become a possiblity for others to experiance.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In 1976, NASA discovered a land formation that looks like a face and since then it has become a national icon. Conspiracy theorists think that we at NASA are hiding something. They think it was created by aliens. We know that it wasn't though because after all we're the experts here. If we were hiding something, why wouldn't we release it to make more money? We have technology and the smarts to prove people wrong that think it was created by an alien. The conspiracy theorists are wrong.\n\nAs better technology is developed and our images take on a higher resolution we have proof that the \"Face on Mars\" is just a land formation with an odd shadow. In 1976, we first discovered the \"Face on Mars\" using the Viking 1, but we couldnt really tell what it was because the resolution wasn't that good. Then in 1998, the technology developed over the span of 22 years, the resolution became better, and we could sort of tell what it was. Then in 2001, we really discovered what it was because the technology was way bettter and we could see a 3D image of it. As technology developed we could really start to tell that it was in fact a mesa. Proving that the people were wrong and that they don't have as advanced technology as we do.\n\nThe conspiracy theorists were once again wrong. They just look off of the images NASA puts out and think of the most bizzare theory and release it. When we had the MGS fly over Cydonia (where the \"Face on Mars\" is located) on April 5, 1998, he snapped pictures and really discovered it wasn't an alien formation. Then, many people disagreed with our logic again and said that since it was a cloudy time in April '98 on mars, that the alien markings were hidden by haze. We then went for a second run on April 8, 2001, \"a cloudless summer day\" and captured the photo using the the camera's maximum resolution, and still didn't see any alien markings. They were yet again wrong and this proves that it isn't an alien formation.\n\nIn the end, the picture really shows a Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. These landforms are much like the ones we see on Earth. They're common on almost every planet. What Garvin says is completely true, \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. These formations are just another land formation. The people who thought they were alien markings are just trying to get attention.\n\nAfter all, we at NASA have always had the best technology to look into space and at other planets. People have tried to prove us wrong and we always come out on top of things. We've proven them wrong with images, other formations on Earth that are equivalent to formations on Mars, and the knowledge that we have. The people shouldn't question it because if it really was an alien marking we'd share it with the public. These theories that it's an alien marking are wrong and we've proven this.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars have been a wildly debated innovation since the late 1950s.\n\nI am against the idea of driverless cars.\n\nMy reasoning for being against it is that it is less safe and the computers will not always work.\n\nThe idea of computers and sensors running cars is not as safe as a human mind running the car.\n\nTo start, computers cannot react to situations that are about to happen the way the human mind can.\n\nFor example, at say a four way intersection with stop signs, the human can know to wait for other cars to go and go themselves when it's their turn.\n\nWhereas a computer controlled car may go at the same time as another car and cause a crash.\n\nSecondly, a computer controlled car will give the same amount of attention to easy and difficult situations.\n\nThe computer may not find the situations difficult enough to give a human control of the car.\n\nIn the end of that event there will most likely be a crash.\n\nIn the article it states that computers are set up to send directions and controls the brain of the driverless car.\n\nThose computers may not always work.\n\nFor example, say a storm knocks out power lines and those lines can't work again until manually fixed.\n\nThe facility will have back-up generators, but those will only last for so long.\n\nIn the instance of no power working the computers, the main navigation systems will be cut off and there will be no way of controlling the car or sending a signal to alert the driver.\n\nAnother example is that internet connection can only work for so long.\n\nThe internet could easily weaken or fall and it would be very probable for the car to be given wrong directions, thus sending the passengers to severe injuries or possible death.\n\nSince the 1950s, the innovation of driverless cars has been a huge debate.\n\nIn my personal opinion, I am entirely against it.\n\nFor those few reasons, the innovation and testing of driverless cars should be ditched and cars should continue being controlled by humans.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "People get hurt easily. They break their bones, burn and cut their skin and sometimes the muscle or bone. They can get bumps and bruises galor. They can even die. Now, tell me, how many of those injuries could be caused by a car? Every single one of them. A car is made from a large metal skeleton that can put a hole in a brick or cement building, so imagine the damage it can do to people. Of course it's not always the car itself at fault. It's normally a driver in the car mishandling the vehicle. However, these numbers of injuries could be drastically reduced.\n\nThe amount of people injured or killed by a car could be reduced by a car that can drive itself. A car that can detect potential collisions with animals, people, or other vehicles in front of or behind it. A car that can save so many lives. These driverless cars should be allowed because they can prevent several accidents, they allow work to be done in the car as well as entertain, and they are a revolution of technology that can provide more jobs for the future.\n\nThe detection of something in front of or behind the vehicle could prevent things big and small from being run over. There have been several cases of toddlers and small children or small animals being behind a vehicle that was backing out of a drive way. The driver couldn't see them because they were in a blind spot, and often times, whatever is behind the vehicle is dead. With a self driving car that can detect such things, they wouldn't be killed or crushed. They could instead have a stern reprimand for playing behind the vehicle and a hug rather than a coffin or a hospital bed.\n\nThere is also the ability to complete work while in the cars. These systems were initially made for entertainment, but several people forget to do things like homework, or complete some small thing for work. These people liek myself would benefit greatly from being able to do their work in the car. It wouldn't be reckless because if the owner is needed to drive in a dangerous situation the car can not help itself in, all screens turn off and can save or simply pause the work. The car would also turn off the screen to keep the driver at the time from being distracted. This would\n\nprevent innumerable other complications while providing something else later on.\n\nOddly enough this self driving car could also lead to the production of jobs as there would need to be highly specialized mechanics of a certain field to fix the new, more delicate technology included in the vehicle. These technologies could be extra sensitive and require specific knowledge, which could also produce more engineers. The production of these engineers and these jobs would greatly influence the economy and make it better.\n\nDriverless cars should be allowed because they can prevent people from being run over as well as other things, they can produce more jobs and more college students, and they can also allow more work to be done. All of these would cause life to go much more smoothly, I believe. They can also prevent a good number of driving disasters and save lives. This proves that driverless cars should be allowed and produced.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Venus is the second Planet closet to the sun. In the article, \"The Challenge Of Exploring Venus,\" The author gives a brief description about the planet Venus and why scientists are so fascinated to actually explore the planet. The author explains, it is the closest distance, more Earth-like than any other planet, and producing a safer way to explore venus closer to back up his statement that it is a worthy pursuit.\n\nFirst, the author describes that venus is closer to Earth, despite mars. The author suggest that it would be easier to travel a shorter distance and they can find out a lot more about Venus. The author states, \"Because Venus is sometimes right around the corner-in space terms- humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world.\" In other words, scientist can easily send there technology to venus, since venus is Earth's neighbor and can find information very quickly. A second example from the article, states that even though venus and Earth are neighbors, Venus is a challenging planet to study.\n\nVenus is the closest planet to Earth and prove that exploring Venus is a worthy pursuit, However Venus is known as Earth twin which boost scientists curiousity.\n\nSecond, Venus is more like Earth than any other planet in the solar system. Scientist suggest than Venus shows some identical characteristic with Earth based off there information. The author states, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have suppoted various forms of life, just like Earth.\" In other words, scientist and astronomers believe that Venus is more suitable for humans to explore based off the common characteristcs it shares with Earth. A second example in the article, says that Venus has mountians and rocky surfaces that resemble the ones on Earth. Scientist have found common characteristcs with Earth and reasonable ways to explore venus, However actually appraoching venus will provide a lot a safey due to it's condition.\n\nFinally, NASA has ideas to send humans to land on venus safely and return safely. NASA provided solutions to maintian on Venus through hostile conditions, such as the temperture. The author states, \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\" In other words, they could provide a vehicle like spaceship could protect explores from Venus's atomsphere. A second example says that staying high up while in venus, could avoid danger on the ground or surface. NASA has boosted up the possibly rate to safely explore Venus, Which only leaves astronomers and scientists determined.\n\nDue to the dsitance, common characterists, and Safe conditions, this shows why studying Venus is a worthy pursuit. You can conclude that this only leaves scientist hungry and determine to explore another planet. These ideas prove that it is possible to explore, despite it's dangers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do you think that the FACE was created by aliens ? Well i think the face is just a land form but thats how i feel about it , I don't believe that aliens are real . On the other hand you might think they are real and i don't blame you because when i was little i thought they was real to ... by all of the movies i was watching about aliens taking over ect .\n\nAlthough , few scientists believed the face was an alien artifact photographing . So they photographed the face as soon as they could get a good shot at it . On April 8, 2001 a cloudless summer day in cydonia Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look . When they had did they a pixel in the 2001 image spams 1.56 meters , they image was not a face anymore it was really Martain equivalent of a butte or masa . It reminds me of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" says Garvin. \"\n\nFinally, now you see that there were no aliens on mars and they aliens are not real . It was just the Martian equivalent of butte or mesa landforms . so now with all this information i just gave you, you should believe me now .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Across classrooms throughout the country, students often struggle to stay focused while learning. Lectures, homework, and the stress that is caused by school is often enough to overwhelm students. Certain students may do great in this type of\n\nenvironment, but we should strive for every child to be able to recieve an education in the way they see fit. The introduction of the Facial Action Coding System could very well be the solution to helping children recieve the education they deserve.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System, or FACS for short, is a new software that is able to read expressions on a person's face and determine that person's emotions based off of the expression. If this technology were equipped in webcams in schools throughout the country, students would have a much better learning experience. The software would be able to sense how a student is reacting to a lesson and would be able to modify it accordingly for the student if needed, as Dr. Huang of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois mentioned. This software could help students stay engaged in their education and increase the overall effectiveness of teaching.\n\nOne may argue that students' expressions would not always be read with accuracy, but that is false. The Facial Action Coding System works by tracking all 44 major muscles in the face. The movements of these muscles are closely related to six basic emotions: happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. By tracking 44 different muscles, the FACS ensures that it's results are accurate. Dr. Huang previously stated, \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal, even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression.\" As Dr. Huang explained, even if an individual's expression is not as prominent as another's, it will still be able to be read by the software.\n\nOverall, FACS can be used for many purposes, including school. As aforementioned, FACS would work by changing lessons to better fit a student, based off of their reactions to a lesson. If used in school, FACS will most likely increase the effort put forth by students, the effectiveness of a lesson, and the overall attitude of a community. If a student enjoys the content and the manner in which it is being taught, the effort given by that student will increase. In addition, if students are content with their grades and classes, this feeling of happiness and positivity will most likely pass off onto parents and teachers. To conclude, it is clear that FACS should be utilized in classrooms due to the immense effect it can have on students, teachers, parents, and education as a whole.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Venus is Earth's neighbor its right around the corner from us. No spacecraft has been able to land on it in more than three decades and they only survived for a few hours. We have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud draped world and each mission was unmanned and for a good reason. Venus has been a hard planet for humans to study. A thick atmosphere of 97 percent carbon dioxide covers Venus. Venus is also surrounded by clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid it is also in Venus's atmosphere. The planets surface temperatures can reach over 800 degrees fahrenheit. Also the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we have here on Earth. Venus also has the hottest surface temperature than any other planet in our solar system. Astronomers are very very interested in Venus because it may have been one of the most Earth like planets in our solar system. Venus has a surface that could of once had a rocky sediments and includes familiar features such as vallyes, mountains, and possibly at one point and time craters. NASA is going to create a vehicle that can float above the dangerous parts of Venus and that can provide humans to get some insight on the planet so that we can see if we can learn more about it . This will provide only limited but little insight on the planet. Researches will not be able to leave the spacecraft to get samples of rock because of the dangers of the planet wich makes there job a lot more difficult. Scientist today are trying to build a peace of spacecraft that can last longer on Venus's surface so that scientists can get samples of what they need to learn more about the planet. One day scientists will for sure figure out how to build machines to get better insight on Venus and see everything this buetiful but extreamly dangerous planet is all about.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author likely concludes story sentence shows dedicated author child gardening I guessing young childs favoriteplant hibiscus I think mother childs favorite thing together would gardening This nice way end story It gives read kind look question faces It leaves suspicious author But opinion I think adds curiosity storySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "After graduating, many people look for a job. Sometimes they want to work in their passion while others do not take passion as an important thing but the experience and how it can support their lives. Admittedly, the work may be difficult to follow in the beginning but over time workers can feel the enjoyment because they get the pattern for their work. Therefore, I completely disagree with that statement.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, these days getting a passion work is not easy since there are plenty of people looking for the job as well. For example, fresh undergraduate students try to get work as same as their excitement but it takes some time. While waiting for their feedback application, undoubtedly, they need funds as well to buy their pieces of stuff. Moreover, if they ignored their tasks when they were already in the work environment, it would jeopardise them since they would not get any promotion or trust from the company.\r\n\r\nAnother point to consider is working in different areas sometimes can expand more experiences as well as networking. At first, staff may be hard to start when they have no intention of carrying out the job. For instance, someone who has an undergraduate in design and has passion in that area surprisingly accepts a job in a different area as public relations. In her new field, she has to take more time to learn but as time goes by she finally enjoys it and scales up the experience in that field. In addition, when people accept a job, they are used to knowing their responsibilities, so it is unacceptable if they do not want to perform just because they do not feel joy in it.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, working with the same passion might be the dream for everyone whereas these days people have to compete with each other to get the job, as a blue-collar or white-collar. I disagree with the statement because employees have to fulfil their tasks which contribute to the company’s goal despite of like or dislike since they already sign the contract with the company. Yet, to boost workers motivation I think the top management has to create a regular meeting with their staff to discuss their performance.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Venus, the planet right next to us, but the planet that can never be settled on. Throughout the article ''The Challenge of Exlporing Venus'' The author expresses the dangers and reasons why humans on earth have not been able to explore our neighboring planet. With that fact, the author still advocates for studying Venus and sites evidence for why this is needed. Overall, the author supports the study of the planet Venus because it's studies could inrich new knowledge about it to Earth. He supports this idea by stating Venus is similar to Earth, The study of Venis may allow fetaure pathways to increase it's study, and items learned form the experiment could lead to human settlement on the planet.\n\nThe author's claim of studying Venis could inrich new knowledge to Earth is supported through the two planets being so similar to each other. This is so because according to the author the two planets at one time shared similar charcterisics ''The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountins and craters.'' (The Challenge of Exploring Venus, Paragrpah 5) This evidence is relevent to the claim because the author proved that Venis and Earth are alike. Just like Venis, Earth has valleys, mountins and craters. The author's goal is to use this information to better know what this planet is, why it's important, gaining better human knowledge about the panet.\n\nFuthermore the study of Venis is useful according to the author is because the planet could help NASA and other space comapnies in discovering the rest of outerspace. The author belives in if comapnies like NASA study space it would lead to better ways of getting more knowledge about the planet, '' Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribue meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.'' (The Challenge of Exploring Venus, Paragraph 6).\n\nThis is meaningful information because it supports inovation in space and what the author invesions of the future. The author's claim is support Venis can be a steepingstone into humans futher knowledge of space. This suports inriching new knowledge to Earth\n\nFinally the author's call for the study of Venus could inrich knowledge to earth because there is a chance that humans could settle on the planet. This can be said because the explorations of Venus could be survivable for humans, ''Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.'' (The Challenge of Exploring Venis, Paragraph 5) This information that the author gives is motivation for humans to discover the planet Venus because humans in the future could settle on the planet. This would support the claim because in the future if earth continues to have issues with climate change and globle warming there might be exploration to other planets. Having more knowledge about Venus could gives humans a chance in the distant future to inhabit a new planet.\n\nOverall the author suppirts inhabbiting Venus because he or she belives that humans on earth can benufit from it. The author sites in the article that the Earth and Venis are similar planets, increases in techonolgy could go along with the exploration and the study could give humans in the distant future to inhabbit Venus. So the aiuthor looks upright.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays in our society, we are facing new problems and social issues such as crimes and poverty. Some people believe that the government should develop new regulations to decline crimes such as the treatment of young people who commit crimes in different ways. Some people have comments about the treatment of young people. They express that young people and youngsters who commit crimes and break the regulations should be treated in the same way as adults who commit crimes. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my thoughts in detail and extend my opinion about this issue in our society.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, in my opinion, prevention is better than cure, so if the government make various policies and regulations against crimes and criminals, finally some people who want to commit crimes will be declined. Therefore, first of all, strong rules will improve the level of social safety. In addition, I disagree with this theory that young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults who commit crimes, because they have a clean soul rather than adults, and they can change their future by improving their good abilities. For example, if a young boy commits a theft, he can change this bad personality to a good personality.\r\n\r\nAdditionally, in developed and developing countries such as the United States of America and European countries, their governments have established special prisons for young people apart from adults who commit crimes. In the long run, they can manage young people's misbehaviours and treat them.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it seems that young people who commit crimes should be treated in different ways as adults who commit crimes, and the governments should provide new facilities to improve the bad habitats of young people in the long term.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Face is a natural landform and not an alien artiact because aliens don't exist. In\n\none of the pictures NASA took, it looks like a face because of the shadows.\n\nIn the first picture, taken in 1976, it looks like a face because of the wierd shadows and\n\nthe frames were not the best back then. The second picture, taken in 1998, it doesn't look much like a face because the frames were better but it still wasn't the best back then. The final picture, taken in 2001, it doesn't even look like a face, it looks like a lump of land and the frames were very high back then when they took the picture.\n\nSo in conclusion, the Face on mars is not an alien artifact and is just a natural landform. The reason it looked like a face is because of the wired shadows. When you look at the most recent picture of the Face it just looks like a lump of land and not a face. That is why the Face on Mars is just a natural landform and isn't an alien artifact.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear state senator.\n\nI think that the electoral collage should be changed because it makes voting unfair, more people would vote,and it would be more effective.\n\nThe electoral voting system is unfair because your vote dosnt really count if the majority of the votes goes to the opposing party. It would be more even if your vote counted directly towards the party rather than voting for your states electors. I also feel that more people would vote because with the state electors your vote wont matter if the majority of is oppiste of who you voted for.\n\nAlso, other people would vote for other parties more rather than just the democratic or republican parties because the majority of the people are just gonna vote for those parties.\n\nIf the votes were not for the state electors and for the president than George W. Bush would not have been elected and the majority of the votes went towards John kerry so that wasnt fair for him.\n\nAlso every states number of electors is different, if they are going to have electors per state I think it should be the same amount for every state because if more of the states voted for the republicans but the democrats could have had the states with the larger amount of electors and won the election. The tinier states wouldnt do much for the election if they only have three electors. Also without electors voting, there would be a less chance of there being a tie in the election. It might make counting the votes easier but voting would be more effective if it was without state electors.\n\nThose are the reasons why I think that the way voting is should be changed and hopfully someday it will be.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are too expensive, trivial, and dangerous to be developed for public use. The development of these cars would require extensive funding, and this money could be much better spent. Some of these cars would only be partially automated and would still require a capable driver at all times, so what would be the point? Finally, driverless cars would be concerning from a safety standpoint - would these cars really be able to safely maneuver out of dangerous situations?\n\nFirst, the development of driverless cars would be expensive. Automated cars require many sensors and cameras that regular cars do not need, and even with these sensors, the cars are not capaple of completely driving themselves. In order to achieve a reliable driverless system, all of our roads would have to have electricity or magnets installed, which even the article admits would be \"too expensive to be practical\". Furthermore, the money spent on developing these cars could be spent to help those who are less fortunate rather than creating new things for ourselves.\n\nAnother issue with driverless cars is the idea of cars that only assist the driver. These cars would drive most of the time, but they would, \"notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents\". These cars would certainly be helpful, but what would be the point of having a self-driving car if you still have to watch the road as if you were driving yourself? Some manufacturers talk of adding, \"in-car entertainment and information systems,\" but if the driver were focused on these systems, would they be able to react quickly enough if the car approached a dangerous situation?\n\nThis question leads to what is probably the biggest issue with these cars: many developers of driverless cars claim that these vehicles would improve public transportation and, \"use half the fuel of today's taxis,\" but what about the safety of the passengers? A truly driverless car would leave its passengers helpless in the face of an impending accident, and the addition of entertainment systems for part-time drivers would likely not give the drivers enough of a warning to react in the case of an emergency situation.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars should not be developed on a large scale. The huge amount of money that would have to be spent to make these cars safe would be much better spent helping those in need. Furthermore, cars that only partially drive themselves seem to defeat the intended purpose of the driverless car, as well as raising some safety concerns. It would be extremely difficult for the car alone to avoid dangerous situations, and the addition of entertainment systems would limit how much time a driver would have to assess and respond to danger. In all, driverless cars are far too expensive, needless, and dangerous to be developed or produced on a large scale.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Libraries public reason interest people different types entertainment I know people opinions things variaties every single person different In opinion I think certian materials banned becuase mature content others think appropiate Disagree alright ever stopped think issues like Im going list reasons explainations opinion becuase I think point good concepts I believe banned First present society everybody different views opinions things discussed The public right entertain themself way would like choose material subject matter would like Taking away entertainment would telling wear clothes would like drive car want If walk library see subject fit standards interest simply walk away find suitable subject matter Some people look things totally different way like different styles entertainment mean somebody else dose nt Second You would takng jobs away many people love People issue content books movies sometimes based author feeling even life maybe like Others write real life events things happen normal people everyday looked upon people write stories whole world see Criticizing subjects entertainment downgrading different forms art Pretty much people feel like ok mature subject discussed book painting hipocritical Lastly If material pulished today wanted shelfs library would even printed sold people world It people like problem like bothered ever In opinion think form entertianment banned taken away society anyway would taking peoples joySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In excerpt CAPS Rodriguez Home Lives author gives nostalgic mood Throughout excerpt recalls feasts parties guests simple house parents turned home stated This tells author good memories house loved grew The author also gives compassionate mood In says I always grateful parents love sacrifice describes comunnity closeknit honest This tells author similar community loved grateful parents took time make life best could The mood lastly In says community extended hand people clearly need calls parents actions coming courageous takes pride Cuban family immagrants grew around tells knows accomplished big feat lives Those moods set authorSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many high school students take break and start working in any particular field before beginning of their further studies. Some of them travel to places to make themselves feel relaxed and others start working to support their family by financially.What are the advantages or disadvantages of this, which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. \r\n\r\nIn high school, there are many students who belong to different families and financial backgrounds. For those who belongs to rich families do not worry about anything but for those who doesn't sound financially well always willing to work after high school vacation and support their family. By doing this, they start getting matured and make their decision wisely. Apart from that, they gain certain experiences as well which can help them in their future and also gain some information about subjects or fields for their future studies. \r\n\r\nHowever, taking break between studies is not at all a good idea. Because it can affect on studies as well as many students might loose thier interest in study. For instance, people tend to loose their skills by taking break in their daily activities and same goes for students as well because continuity is the only key which can make anyone skilled and composed. Moreover, students leave high school at very early age when they are 15 to 16 years old and that age is the period where students should study well and shape their career in a good way which can lead them to the successful future.\r\n\r\nTo summarise, taking break and work after high school can give life learnig experience but it also can reflect on your future studies which can lead many students in wrong way.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Being patient isnt hard try It I needed help math homework teacher helping someone else So I waited Five minutes past still werent I decided skip problem Ten minutes past yet still werent done I waited waited Then finally done two minutes well I guess I give another try I still dont get Ill ask tomorrow So I trying figure wasnt making sense I waited tomorrow ask So next day class I asked said didnt one I laughed told figure yesterday That example bein patientSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Between 1995 and 2010, a study was conducted representing the percentages of people born in Australia, versus people born outside Australia, living in urban, rural, and town. First, in 1995, cities represented the major percentage of habitat by roughly 50 percent, followed by rural areas and towns came in last, among people born in Australia. On the other hand, people born outside Australia, cities showed the most percentages of 6o percent, followed by rural areas and towns. In 2010, among people born in Australia, cities had an increase more than 20 percent increase in the total representation and a major decrease in towns and rural areas. Conversely, people born outside Australia, cities had the most percentage among both studies, followed by rural areas and towns.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Face on Mars\n\nBy jimmy\n\nNASA`s had send a spacecraft called Viking 1. Many of the people that were working on this were think it was something else. When it came out 1976 many peolpe think it was made by aliens. But on one know that it was. So it be came an icon for the plant mars. Many people think it was aliens that made the face or hills that from the face on mars. 22 years later Mars Global surveyor had a spacecaft that was going aronud mars to the face but when they did they take the image. Many were happy to see other image. But it did not came a clear as they what it to be. But what i think it could be is that a rock may crash into mars and made the face. But over time sand bulid over it gave what it look like in 1976. In the photograph you can see that it maybe face but you can see that it can be a hill. What are the black spot in the photograph that we see here. It could be that is that can be made on mars by wnich it from by.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Imagine boating\n\nthousands of miles accross the Atlantic Ocean!! The scenic change is amazing! What would you think of the scenic change? Would\n\nyou want to make the trip?\n\nI would love to make the trip over the Atlantic! One reason why is because I would love to make a great journey and explor. My other reason would be that I would love to make the travel to help other countries. My last reason would be that I like to care for animals.\n\nDid you know that in 1947 the United States helped build other countries up? We brought over our animals to help other people out!! Isn't that just so helpful?!\n\nSome pros and cons will help you understand what happened on Lukes journey. My first pro would be that \"Luke was working a two-part time jobs in a grocery store and a bank when his friend Don Reist invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke could not say no. He knew it was an opportunity of a liftime.\" The reason why I out this as a pro is because Don is sort of begging Luke to go. More encouraging him of why he should go. My last pro would be that \"It was 1945, WWII was over in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins. To help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form the UNRRA (The United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration).\" The reason why I made this a pro is because to show how the nations joined together to help save other countries. My first con would be of my own. I think that if you were to make this journey, then you would have to face the dangers of the Atlantic Ocean. My last con would be when Luke was doing his night jobint the rain, when it was time to go tell the captain that the cattle was okay. When he made his way half way up the latter, he slipped and fell. The thing is, is that\n\nhe was sliding toward an opening in the boat, but a piece of metal caught hime. He had cracked two ribs after that fall. That tells you that it is very dangerous to do that stuff. Especially when you are climbing\n\na METAL latter during a hard rainfall.\n\nIf I were to go I would have to watch out for all the bad things that can occur in the water. So, what would you go accross the Atlantic ocean?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The setting California isnt really coolest places temperatureSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Everyone knows that art has been being taught for years at schools. Many people say that art is an important subject for pupils at school, however, others say that it is just time-consuming. The aim of this essay is made to compare these views and at the end, I will give my own opinion.\r\n Firstly, the reason why some people definitely argue that the advantages of art subjects outweigh its disadvantages is they think that art is showing imagination of a pupil on paper. So, they believe that children illustrate their emotions directly by art. For example, on parties or birthdays, children can show their love and emotions by creating creative cards for their loved people. I think, for this reason, these people mentioned art as beneficial. \r\n However, some other people think that art is completely unnecessary. The reason for this is very huge numbers of children that give interests for other Academic subjects, so they don’t have time for art apart from these subjects. Additionally, nowadays there are no really good job opportunities for artists or for the lovers of art. For example, If I study subjects like science or math, I can apply many different jobs, such as business, marketing, IT manager and others. But, if I learn art, I can be just an artist. So, in this way people’s mind is correct.\r\n In conclusion, both arguments have their qualities. If children learn art, it will help them in showing their imaginations. However, their job vacancies may decrease because of wasting time on art. So, I am a neutral thinker.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "As we all know cars are a big part of our society today. However cars have a bigger impact than we think. Some people can't live without there car. Some people can go their whole life without a car. We may not think about it however there are multiple advantages to not using a car. When we limit our car use it saves the earth also it i said that it takes away a heap load of stress and it saves people money. Just think about it, one day without the use of cars. How would that be?\n\nWe we think of saving the earth we think of recycling, reusing things, and reducing. Did you know that passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gases and up to 50 percent in some car intensive areas in the United States.(According to \"In German Surburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\" By: Elisabeth Rosenthal). In Paris there pollution was almost record setting and so they ordered that even-numbered license plates leave their cars at home or pay a fine of $31. Almost 4000 drivers were fined that day and 27 got their cars impounded. Most of the cars in Paris are diesel ran so the smog is worse. If they would cut down on their car use it would lower the smog.\n\nYou might not think of it but if we limited the use of cars it relieves stress. According to \"In German Suburb, Life Goes on Without Cars\", In Vauban, Germany they have given up their cars. Vaubans streets are completly car free. 70 percfent of Vauban's families do not own cars ansd 57 percent sold a car to move there. Heidrun Walter said\"When I had a car I was always tense. Im much happierthis way\". According to \"Car-free dat in spinning into a big hit in Bogota\" by Andrew Selsky in Bogota,Columbia they have been without cars for 3 years. Also Carlos Arturo Plaza said \"It's a good opportunit totake awat stresss and lower the air pollution\".\n\nAccording to \"The End of Car Culture\" by: Elisabeth Rosenthal recent studies show that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licences as each year goes by. The number of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily afterwards, according to an analysis by Doug Short of Adivor Perspectives. People who stopped driving there cars as a result of hard times may not find a reason to go back to driving if they are saving money.\n\nSo I believe that they're many reason to have a car. However they're many advantages to limiting your car use. You can think of yourself as doing a good deed to the earth when walking somewhere or riding your bike are catching the bus. You can have a clear mind and seize stressing so much. Also you can save money I think that everybody likes to save money one way or another. Instead of drivng your car to the mall you can save that money and catch the bus to the mall and buy that new purse that you have been dying to get.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some argue that an art class is crucial for youngsters at school, while others neglect its impact. It is a common belief that art is not necessary for primary school as fundamental knowledge is more important. However, I firmly believe that learning about art is more advantageous due to having creativity and mental development. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it can be argued that art is useless when starting higher education. To explain more, subjects, such as mathematics and science, are considered crucial classes to enhance children's academic performance for applying to universities. Thus, spending more time on ordinary subjects to build solid academic backgrounds can be more significant rather than drawing or listening to music. In fact, primary school teachers in South Korea frequently mention that some students are doing maths homework from private institutions during the art classes as they treat the art as not helpful when it comes to tertiary education. Due to this tendency, it might be suggested that art can be replaced with more valuable classes.\r\n\r\nConsidering this factor, I still think art can have many benefits, like enhancing creativity and being emotionally mature. When it comes to creativity, it can be improved when people are younger by conducting art activities. Young individuals can improve their creativity by drawing, which helps them to widely imagine and think childish. Putting their imaginations into the sketch provides confidence that they can create what they mind in their brain. Moreover, drawing and listening to classical music can also grow their psychological maturity. It is often suggested that many professional psychologists claim that it is helpful for children to experience a number of art activities. This causes youngsters to grow their patience and peacefulness. Consequently, art classes should not be avoided in primary schools due to these positive impacts.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, although art might not be prioritised for university enrollment, it is still necessary for young individuals. This is because it can not only develop the ability of creative thinking but also enhance their mindful hearts. Therefore, I persist that art classes should be provided in all schools.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "\" The Challenge of Exploring Venus \"\n\nYou've heard of astronauts visiting the moon and range rovers roaming Mars, but have you ever heard of people or even range rovers exploring Venus? No living or non-living thing has ever experienced Venus in any type of way due to its harsh conditions! For this reason, the author thinks that we should find a way to go onto Venus, and find out any information about it. Venus may be hiding many amazing things but, we'll never know unless we find a way to get there.\n\nThe author believes that although it is difficult to go on Venus, it will be worth it in the end. It is possible that many centuries ago, Venus was very similar to Earth. Scientists believe that long ago, there was even water on Venus. Today, there are many similar features like mountains, valleys, and craters just like Earth.\n\nIn conclusion, I agree with the author. I believe that it will be worth it going to Venus. MAybe one day we will be able to find out the amazing things Venus carries.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this ceaselessly changing world, environment problems have taken up the shape of a hideous monster. Some people support the idea of increasing the fuel prices for cars and other vehicles to curb this issue but pollution from vehicles is not the only reason behind the current environmental conditions. \nWe cannot conclude that the aggravation in fuel prices will help since vehicle pollution is not the major contributor in the egregious pollution level. Instead, various other measures might prove to be more significant. For example, penalizing with hefty amounts can control the reckless burning of farm lands, near Delhi region, making the air quality critical. Educating the individuals and promoting the idea of planting more trees can mitigate the tremendously burgeoning level of pollution. \nConsumption of plastic is also worsening the existing problem. Banning plastic and moving towards cloth and paper products will support in reducing the ruckus. Industries and factories being the major pollution contributors should have a meticulous waste management system. Disposing off everything in oceans is not the appropriate way. Recycling of resources should be given top priority. \nAs it is rightly said, as you sow, so shall you reap. With our existing attitude towards environmental issues we might create a stifled condition for our coming generations. We should understand that there is enough for everyone’s need but not for greed. It is high time that the resources are judiciously consumed, recycled and not wasted.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe that driverless cars would be nothing, but a nuisance at this point in time. With maybe having to replace roads, which would raise taxes to help pay for them, and a plethora of other problems I would not want to purchase a driverless vehicule. So, at this point in time I don't think that driverless cars are advanced enough.\n\nFirst, the text states that these driveless cares would have many limitations in speed and steering. Also, once the car needs to go fast such as on an interstate, or is exposed to steering problems like accidents it needs to call upon the driver to take over to make those decisions. Which is why I think that they shouldn't be put into the market untill they have more advancements.\n\nAnother con the text states is getting states to believe that these cars are safe. Only a handful of states have allowed driveless cars to be used, and even then they've only been allowed to be tested. Another problem the text brings up is who is to blame for accidents, the driver or the manufacturer. It would be hard to determine which, and that is why driverless cars are just a liability.\n\nThese reasons are what swayed me to believe as I do. Driverless cars are a liability at the moment. I also believe that in time, with better technology and upgrades to these cars that they will be a welcome change to the market.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Alonging with the development of society, families' role, structure and the number of members are changing very fast. Some people put forth the argument that we should study about family history, while others believe that we should concentrate on the present and future generations. This essay will examine both perspectives and propose my opinion about this problem.\r\n\r\nIt is cannot deny that history play an important role in the modern life, including family history. Studying about the past help us to learn form our ancestors archivements and mistake, which can improve our life. It also takes part in the family tradition conservation. For instance, several family in Viet Nam keep the tradition of making potery products, or restore some kinds of arts that their family use to perform in the past. Lastly, family history gives us something to pround of, so it can improve our mood and make us more satisfy with our life. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the concentration on the present and future generations is crucial. From my perspective, this is more significant than study about history. Firstly, history is in the past we cannot change what was happended. However, we can improve the future by our care to education, health and emotion of our children. In fact, in Viet Nam, just a little number of family know clearly about their ancestors further than 5 generations. Due to this reality, we can conclude that study about family does not have much impacts on these days life. Moreover, focus on the development of the next generations bring several benefits to our society. To demonstrate, after the improvement of education in Viet Nam after 1945, we defeated France and America to gain our independence, and the life of people and the economy of our country are also increased. Therefore, focus on the next generations has many advantages in several factors such as economy and life satisfiaction.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that learing about family history is important. However, focus on the future generation is more significant, because it improve our comunity in many aspectsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In Winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho ends story show sign hope Saeng going start world starts Spring time animals come winter holes trees blossom snow melts It time renewed Saeng Vowed silently try spring timeSaeng parchases hibiscus remembrance homeland also know ready come back base try The hibiscus actions coming buds blooming Ho ends story hope new beginning Saeng vows Then I take test again In word choice That test again depicts new attitude She wants try testSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe that driverless car's aren't a very suitable idea, for many cautious reasons.\n\nIf we all went through with the idea of having driverless car's the number of accidents occuring would be more prone to happen. The driverless car could incounter some type of miscommunication and not detect how to react to the situation. For instance the driverless car lacks on how to react with \"navigating through work zones and around accidents\", which means the human would have to be extremely cautious on location and being ready to take over, most of us would be better off using cruise control for that matter which is built into most cars today.\n\nAlthough, the driverless car seems like a pretty good idea, It would be more of a challenge than poured out to be. Believing there would be more accidents prone to occur, technology could freeze up or catch a virus anything is liable to happen among having driverless cars and not having enough resourses to fix the problem when or before it occurs.\n\nAgainst the idea, the price of the vehicle or driverless car would be abruptly more than it cost averagely because of the technology that would be used.\n\nAlso, stating it'd save more time and money driving a car yourself causing less stress as to driverless cars the human has to be cautious as to when they think they will have to take over and be alert at all times they are only in control when the driverless car needs them to take over.\n\nFurthermore, driverless cars in opinion aren't as good as they seem.\n\nwhy would we need technology to take over something that we can do ourselves? Concluding I'm against the idea.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "laughter important In opinion laughter important How could laughter affect someones life If Also laughter important Laughter important many reasons In relationship every day life ones life How would world nt laughter world It would dry dull It helps connect people together sense humor Having good sense humor important days A lot people use sarcasm nt laughter people could could feel hurt However people feel hurt nt sense humor way shape form Most people heard saying takes muscles frown smile true factual fact Having glorious relationship best thing significant The affectionate sharing laughter together brings us closer point could nt nt laughter communication Having sense humor important thing relationship people would want someone bores Who make laugh sad I sure would nt want Laughter brings great communication skills laughing someone shows type opinion subject talking In relationship could imagine nt laughter Would feel person nt laughter How would feel knowing person love nt humorous like laugh often I could nt handle I would want love someone funny great sense humor Laughter important many reasons I would rather around ecstatic people someone brings I consider laughter one important things life relationship significant It brings us closer People ask ever get old happy time Of course I would say defense would someone think way Being phenomenal mood time would amazing place I would want life partner In opinion I would think almost everyone would feel close I m saying However people opinions laughter s important titled opinion I know people nt like cheery mood would prefer sad time care Laughter could raiseSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Senator,\n\nThe Presidential Election is one of the most important events that goes on in the United States. At the core of this election is the Electoral College. The only problem is, the college has many flaws. Like in Source 1, it states that our Founding Fathers established the Electoral College as a compromise between the election of the President by a vote in Congress and election by a popular vote from the citizens who qualify. As you know the E.C consists of the selection of electors, meeting of electors where they vote for the President and Vice, and the counting of the votes by Congress. There are 538 electors, 538 votes, and it takes a majority of 270 votes to win the election. This flawed system has been around too long and it needs to be altered. I am in favor of getting rid of the E.C and going to winner by a popular vote.\n\nIf the Presidential candidate is favored by more than 50% of the country then he or she should win. Like in Source 2 history shows that in the past candidates have clearly won the popular vote, but sill lost the presidency race. The problem with the current system we have in place is that the people who are supposed to have a direct voice in the government do not. Instead the people vote for other people who they are supposed to trust vote in favor of their opinion. I can see how some people believe in this system of trust, however some history has shown us otherwise.\n\nHistory has shown that electors can go against the opinion of the public. When you vote for electors most of the time they in turn vote for what the people want. The only thing is you are not ensured that this will occur. In the end it is up to the elector who can decide however they wish. Personally for the U.S. it would be more effective to go to winner by popular vote, not only because of the unsureness of the electors, but also because that is what the people want. Another valid arguement to get rid of the whole Electoral College process is in Source 2, it states that sometimes voters get confused with the electors and vote for the wrong candidate. That could be detrimental to the country if the wrong person for the job was elected. If it was the popular vote sytem the selection of candidates would be clear and easy to understand, which leads to less mistakes when voting.\n\nThe view of getting rid of the Electoral College is actually quite popular. In Source 2 it tells us Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S Chamber of Commerce, and others have all agreed that we should abolish the Electoral College. Going all the way back to the beginning of our country we started off on the base priciple that the people must have a direct voice in the government. That is the reason our country was made a democracy. The Electoral College has bent those principles and hasn't fully allowed the voice of the people to be heard. With the popular vote put in place their are no middle men, it is just the people voicing what they want and who they want to represent them.\n\nLooking over the information that has been presented it is clear that the Electoral College has to go. The system is flawed for many reasons such as the popular candidate not winning, voices not being ensured that they will be heard, and the confusing system of not voting directly for your President. If the change of winner by popular vote in the election is made none of the previous flaws will be present. The popular vote sytem will ensure the people get what they want and the process is completely fair. For these reasons it is in our society's best interest that our government makes this change. Abolish the Electoral College and bring on a new age of simple and fair elections!\n\nFrom,\n\nA concerned citizen.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "If you think the face in mars was created by aliens your wrong. Am about to tell you why your wrong. Am also going to convince you that the face is just a natural landform.\n\nFirst of all the first picture was blury but we took new ones and they are better.''Michael malin and his mars orbiter camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the orinal viking photos''.The camera also can see anything if ther was life down ther. Michael malin also said ''as a rule of thumb you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,''he added.''So if ther were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks,you could see what they were!\"\n\nIn the passage it says that the face is nothing but a land scape form\"what the picture actually shows is the martian equivalent of butte or mesa-landforms common around the american west. This also happens on earth sometimes. \"It reminds me most of middle butte in the snake river plain of idaho\"says Garvin.\n\nSo if you still think that the martian land form, as it should be called,was created by aliens, than think twice because thats all the information i need to prove you wrong.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I\"m sure you have heard about diverless cars but do you know how it works? A lot of people think that driverless cars will just drive by themselves, and that's not wrong but they need a driver. Most people don't know that they are not completely driverless. They can be safe in some kind of ways and they also can be dangerous too, but the question is would you like one of those even though you find it dangerous and not safe?\n\nI personally don't think the driverless cars are be safe because they are not completely driverless and plus they are just technology that require your skills when it needed and you might not know when. The reason why I don't like them is that I won't be as\n\ncareful as I am when I drive a normal car. if I am in a driverless car, all I will think about is that this is a driverless car and I don't have to do anything. I might just fall in asleep in the car not knowing what's going on and it could cause a lot of accidents if they passangers or a driver was in a situation like that. In the passage it says \" None of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelerat, and brake themselves. but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills. such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires\". A lot of human drivers won't be able to take over when it needed to, because they will be so calm,relax, and not ready that when it requires human skills they won't know what to do.\n\nI understand that we all have different opinions but in my opinion I don't think driverless cars are safe. The driverless cars still require human driver skills so it still kind of like normal cars. Why drive a driverless car when it still requires your drving skills. Why not just drive a normal car? What if you are drving a driverless care and got in to an accidents, whose fault going to be? Your fault or the company? For me I would prefer a normal car than a driverless car, just because I think they are not safe.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "All of you look at the face on the moon all the time but there is more than just the moon with an face on it. Well, the planet im talking about right now is Mars. Scientist believe that rocks just so happened to form an object that looks like an human face, also they do not think that the alien theory is correct. Others think that alien life on mars is possible. Im going to tell you why the scientist are correct, and why the media is incorrect.\n\nScientist believe that this cannot be alien artwork because they are certian it is an Mesa they say these mesa's where very common alll around Cydonia. Also this was said to be form by multiple shadows giving away illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. Fortunantly NASA got in the news, the paper, magazines, books, talk shows, and TV!\n\nThe media is incorrect becuase they aren't as able to go in a deep as the scientist can the media [people in america] can only use the resoures they as scientist has th right equipment to get the job done. Also if there was some kind of aliens they be very far we would have been able to see the aliens establishment.also there would be evidence baount movement if it was created by aliens they must've been strong to be able to haul all of those rocks. One more thing is education none os these people are just trained every day on how to use these machines it are lots and lots of hardwork and dedication. People have to go to college to get an degree on this very complicated work that is done by these specialy picked scientist.\n\nSo, in the end the scientist were scientificly right because there is lots of Mesa's around Cydonia. Also scientist got a little bit of and bebifit by being noticed in social media. The media were incorrect be cuase there was not alot of resoures the media could use unlike the scientist [or people that research at NASA] withc have all of the equipment they need to get the job done. Also education not every citizen is tought how to use these machines even if they do have them. Even more evidence from the alien establishment and/or tracks to lead to this creation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In several nations, an increasing number of people are concerned about the origin of their places of residence. In this essay, I am going to discuss some relevant reasons for this phenomenon, along with how people could actually research the history of their houses.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, questioning the origin of everything has long been somewhat mankind's instinct. Given this, people are into figuring out their houses' history because it does lure them by stimulating the excitement of finding the answer. Indeed, the more ambiguous something is, the more exciting people will be. Second of all, people will feel safe and secure only if they could know the beginning of their living places. This is because, from the idealistic perspective, people might not want to get involved in such horrible events that did happen in their homes. Therefore, they must investigate to get rid of risky outcomes that they might otherwise suffer.\r\n\r\nTo research the history, there are two ways that are easiest for doing the investigation. First, people could ask their previous houses' owners about the past of their homes; hence, knowing a series of stories that are interesting and mind-blowing. Second, senior neighbours are quite relevant and invaluable in telling the old stories because only they witnessed all things that happened in the past. For example, I usually ask my grandparents to know how my house had been looked like before I was born, and the answers always triggered me to ask even more questions.\r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, it is actually exciting and mysterious to dig into the history of something such as residential places. The main cause of this phenomenon stems from the curious attitude that has long been 'programmed' in our brain. Obviously, only by asking the elderly or the former homeowners can people know the whole series of past events.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" The author suggests that Venus is worth studying despite the dangers it presents. Firstly, The author supports the idea of why we sould go to Venus and explore venus and as stated in the article \"Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of denisty and size\". On paragraph 5 the author sayed that, \"not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\" He said this because on paragraph 5 he explained the conidtions of Venus and came to\n\nconclusion of saying we can survive with rough conditions he said \"thirty plus miles above the surface, tempatures would\n\nstill be toasty at around 170 degrees Farenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level of earth\" we can survive Venus but we will have to be in very rough living conditions this is why it is worth to pursuit Venus ever with these rough conditions. Firstly, NASA for example on paragraph 7, \"Nasa has been working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplfied electronics made out of silicon carbide have been tested inside a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface\". If we can perfect the atomosphere of Venus and perfect the technolgy to explore Venus we can send drones and people to see how Venus truly is on the surface. Secondly, If we can be able to use Solar power on Venus 30 miles above the ground we will be able to survive with those rough conditions. Lastly,\n\nstated on paragraph 6, \"Many other researchers are working on inovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to or knowledge of Venus\". I believe that we are capable to go to Venus and be able to survive the weather and storms that can be caused if we where in Venus if we can just get our technolgy advanced enough we will be able to just move to Venus and live there it will be hard gettig to Venus i know we will be able to acomplish this in the near future and finally be able to colonize outside of earth. This is why I agree with the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The setting effected cyclist bumpy lot hills means work harder Also heat getting dehydrated story cyclist Been rideing long time says I eased past trying keep balance dehydrated state kurmaskie The cyclist little water long tripSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think mood created author gratefulness towards parents Narciso Rodriguez wants tell parents special much thanks In memoir Narciso Rodriguez says I ve often told admiration strength perseverance I ve thanked repeatedly I think memoir Narciso wants reader understand feels family He wants tell us Narciso thanks parents sacrifice I think telling us story mood created gratefulness towards parents made homeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Vauban,Germany where the trees grow ,The suburban pioneers and soccer moms live in but wheres the cars near the city of freiburg just across the french and swiss borders the streets of Vauban are car free . Car free? but wait at the the main throughfare tram downtown is where all the cars park well a few cars park there.\n\nVroom Vroom if your going to buy a car you need a garage and a house dont you you need a house to store all your belongings and your family inside and you need agarage to put your fancy new car in all the cost comes up to about $40,00 thousand dollers. About 70% of the people who live in\n\nVauban,Germany do not own a cars and the other 57% sold there to move here. but once you come here all youll see if bicycles and people having good convosations and children just wondering about the streets of gemany. The city of Vauban finished in 2006 growing a trend in\n\nEurope the suban city of\n\nGermany isnow called smart planning.\n\nOther suburbs in other countrys have to have to pay gas its about 12 percent of the greenhouse gas in\n\nEurope .\n\nWhile in the city the government is trying to make the city denser and for people and kids to walk around in a health enviornment about 5,500 within a mile have a low- car actually live in a low car suburban life. In the new life thats going on now its goinf to be easier for people to walkin in and out of malls they can finally walk in the main street rsther than walk a long distance way to get to their destionation.\n\nAround the world where they have tight spaces like\n\nNew York and maybe\n\nGeorgia are starting to look like these little surban cities in\n\nGermany and\n\nFrance . In the cities that we have talked about about 80% of people have gone to law highways and the other 20% use the transportantion that there to bring them around.\n\nIn\n\nParis they have banned the clear air globe city people who ride on motorcycles were orderd to leave their transportant at home or they wouold have to suffer a 22 euro finr the the united states that means about $31 dollars\n\n(hey thats not bad at all )\n\nabout 4,000 drivers were fined and 27 people had their car impounded.\n\nIn\n\nBogota,Colombia large grey clouds are caused by cars and people not giving a care ( you know what i was about to say) about their country its like they dont even care this is like the third year that the city of\n\nBogota has been banned of cars the only thing they have right now are buses and taxies i guess they dont want cars anymore just tell them (the government of bogota that they dont want it ).SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "For or against the development of these driverless cars? Simply, I am against these cars for multiple reasons. In this response I am going to explain why this is what I chose and my understanding for the others opinions.\n\nMy first example why I am against these cars is because we, as a country, have people who take advantage of the things we have and how they are supposed to be used. For example what if a parent lets the kid sit in the drivers seat and lets them \"drive\" per say because the car can drive on it's own. What if their is an emergancy, you can not move your child quick enough to move out of the way. Theres two lives because we were so self dependant on these cars.\n\nMy second example why I am against these cars is because, us as people get tired and what if someone, say has been driving all night, wanted to take a quick nap. Let's say this nap turns into a good rest and the person is deeply sleeping. What if that person does not wake up in case of an emergancy and the person gets into a crash? That is risking your own life and other lives around you.\n\nMy Last example why I am against these cars is because, what if their is a sortage in the technology? Say the person is texting on their phone and not paying attention and relies on that signal to keep them aware of the road condions and any in coming problems in the way. Well say there is a sortage and the signal is not going off and the person is unaware of what is going on around him. There goes another crash and another life that did not need to be wasted because of a car.\n\nIn conclusion, we should think twice about these cars in our community and how they will affect lives around us. I see why some people may like the ideas of these cars, because it is less fuel used and less money spent but is that really worth the chance of losing your lives? This is what I believe about the driverless cars and why I believe them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood memoir nostalgic happiness He tells readers econimic backgrounds He also explains family meant talks house birthday Those examples create moodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Throughout time, there have been countless sci-fi films and movies of cars that could drive themselves. However, what may once have seemed like fiction is now becoming a reality. Many companies, like Google, General Motors, and BMW have been working on driverless-car technologies since as early as the late 1950's. Although there are many positive sides to these new technologies, many people fail to realize their potentials and feel as if they are dangerous. This, however, is where they are wrong. Driverless cars are a great idea in new technology because they save on feul and money, they provide people more opportunities, and they make driving safer.\n\nDriverless cars can overall save us on an abundance of gas and money. As stated in the \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" article, Google cofounder Sergey Brin believes that his idea of a driverless car public transport system would use half the feul as today's taxis. As our feul is a fossil feul, meaning one day it will run out, using as little of it as possible is much more than just a good thing. Also, using this idea of a driverless car public transport system would save us a lot of money. Not having to drive your own car and fill it up every week would save you quite a bit on gas money. Also, you would not have to pay for repairs or damages to your vehicle.\n\nDriverless car's are not only more efficient and green, they also would provide many more opportunities for people all over the world. Most of the population of the Earth cannot afford the luxury of their own vehicle. Since they do not have their own means of transportation, it is much harder for them to get a job. Of course, in bigger cities, like Chicago or New York, there are taxis, subways, trains, and busses that provide people the means of transportation that they need. However, in smaller cities and poorer countries, there are not any means of public transportation. In my town, for instance, there are not any busses, trains, taxis, Uber Drivers, or Subways. The only way to get from place to place is by your own car, getting a ride from someone else, by bike, or by foot. If we had a driverless car transpotation system in places like this, many people would be provided with many more oppourtunities to be able to travel from place to place.\n\nLastly, Driverless Car's would prevent many accidents, therefor making driving safer for everyone. Technologies are being created in many types of cars that prevent accidents before they happen. For instance, many cars are now being made with breaks that stop themselves when they sense that the vehicle is in danger of hitting something/someone. Some other companies, like GM, have developed Driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing up into an object so that the driver can take control. Many \"heads-up\" displays like this one are being created to prevent tons of accidents and possible deaths and/or injuries related to driving.\n\nOverall, driverless cars are a safe, efficient, and logical choice for the future of transportation. Driverless cars are a great idea in new technology because they save on feul and money, they provide people with more opportunities, and they make driving safer. With these new technologies, we are slowly making our world into a more efficient and safe place in which to live.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Newspaper I think computers good thing people use computers buissness Computers allow interact people far away They also allow research That I think computers good Computers used many different things They used buissness Some people work home computers They also used interact people far away You interact someone nt see daily basis Computers also used research You research school project buissnesses interact Computers good Some people use computers buissness You also interact people far away You even research computer computers goodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Reducing the Usage of Cars\n\nThousands of Americans use their own car or a vehichle as their main transportation in their every day lives. No one seems to look at how cars are actually destroying the environment ,rather then helping it. Mainly since the fuel that is given off from a vehicles engine is effecting the environment in a negative way. In all reality the reason why we as humans use our own vehicles is because its a faster way of transportation and carries us to our destination. This is why limiting car useage will be benificial money wise and create a healthier environment.\n\nReducing the car usage is beneficial to creating a cleaner and safer environment. Not only will this effect the environment but your life as well. According to source 1 it states,\" Passengers cars are responsible for twelve percent of greenhouse gas emmision in Europe.\" Based on this fact I can acknowledge the fact of how automobiles can effect the greenhouse. The greenhouse is a cycle in which can have a huge impact on our environment. If we destroy that then that may result in even more damages that are caused now. It also states, \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France , after five- days of intesifying smog...\" In result, the smog then continued to places such as Bejing, China. Which I personally would consider to be a horrfic thing, considering China is very congested already and is one of the most pollued cities in the world. Some may argue of the fact that car usage is their main way from going to point A to point B , but there is proof that is effecting the cities around us. Experts have concluded that there is about 50 percent car intensive areas located in the United States. This is why car usage should be reduced to have create a better environment.\n\nThe suburbs are taking action to create denser cities. The purpose of having denser citiies is to have a low- suburban life. In source 1 it states, \" In this new approach , stores are placed a walk away, on main street, rather than in malls along some distant highways.\" This experiment will help to encourage more ways to attempt public transportation. For instance, riding your bicycle once in a blue moon. Not only are you saving money but you are preventing less traffic fgrom occuring in your area. Some may argue having a low- suburban life can be hard to adapt to but it will provide a safer environment. Especially since you are one step closer to making the world less polluted then it already is. I personally would agree on occasionally using a different way to get to my destination. It will not only benefit me in the long run but also cause less chaos on the road. It also states in the text,\" the Environmental Protection Agency is promoting car \"reduced communties\", and legislators are starting to act, if cautiously.\" This means that the Environmental Agency are starting to promote reducing car in certain communities. Some may argue why is there a need to reduce the amount of cars in a community ,but on the other hand that community may be over populated or congested of cars. If this is so, then this will just have another negative impact of the environment. The purpose of the program is to benefit the area you are and to lessen then the issue of car usages. All in all, the suburbs are taking action to create denser cities.\n\nPrograms are also being created to spread the news of Car- Free day. The purpose for Care - Free day in Bogota , Columbia is a day you participate in to prevent traffic jams. For example, In source 3 it states, \"..millions of Colombians hiked, biked, and skated or took buses to work during a car- free day.\" This day isn't ment for people who live in Bogota, Colombia but they are trying to influence this tradition in several other countires. Other may agree of this day being pointless , but I can see this having a huge impact on the world . Sooner or later this day will become a tradition not only in several other countries but also in the United States. it also states in source 3,\" Its a good oppurtunity to take away stress and lower air pulltion, said a bussniessman.\" Especially since it rained on the Car- free day this didnt stop nor discourage anyone from participating in the event. The event turned out to be a huge success and reduced the amount of smog that day. In my perspective we are all come together as one to build our community together. It takes more thenone person to have such a huge impact on the world. The goal if to lessen the useage of car to have a positive effect on the environment. The influence of the Car- free day is just one step closer to reaching that goal. This will is why programs are being creates to spread the news of Car - free day.\n\nAfter looking of the causes and effects of limiting car usage , it all comes down to having a big influence on the world. It takes one area such as Bogota, Columbia to have a huge impact. In our every day lives , our car is our main resource for transportation, but this should change. Not only are you capable of helping to have a postive effect on the environment but so am I. This just shows how if we are all willing to come together as a community, we are capable of creating a healthier environment. This is why the world should influence limiting car useage.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I never thought that I would end up being a Seagoing Cowboy, but I am and I'm glad. In this writing I'm gonna tell you why you should try to be a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nThe first reason why I think you should join is because you get to help people. Going to those different countries made it so much more clear of their needs. Their country was left in ruins. They need everything that we do or more.\n\nThe second reason why you should join the program is because you get to take care of animals. When I got asigned to that job it kind of reminded me of my aunt Katie's farm. I would go over there when I was a boy and help out.\n\nThe last reason I think you should join the program is because you get to travel! Yeah there are some dangers like when the captain slide down a slippery ladder and cracked his ribs but the sights make up for it. I remeber when I got to see Europe and China, so pretty. I also saw the Acropolis in Greece and that topped it all.\n\nThat's why I think whoever is reading this should join the program and become a Seagoing Cowboy. You get to help people, see the world, and take care of loving animals. Just think maybe you'll see me there.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless Cars Are Coming\n\nIn the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" there are alot of good facts and opinions for the people who are for the project and also against.\n\nIn that case i will have to choose the side that is for the project of making Driverless Cars.\n\nIn my opinion i think that if we had Driverless Cars we wouldnt have to worry about having to pay for tests or classes in order to drive cars because you wouldnt need to drive if there were Driverless cars.\n\nAlso in my opinion Driverless Cars would help the envirement because it would use about half as much as cars would with an individual driving it manually as stated in Paragraph 1, Senctence 4 \" The cars he(Sergey Brin) foresees would use half the fuel of todays taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus\".\n\nAs I said before I am for the project of making Driverless Cars.\n\nI honestly would enjoy not having to drive around everywhere and just be able to relax on my way somewhere or on a trip.\n\nAlso it is kind of like you would have your own personal driver.\n\nI would invest into this project because i think it could really help the community and the people because everyone struggles to get places and it is very hectic.\n\nIn that case if we had Driverless Cars we wouldnt have to worry about it being hectic because it would all be calm and everything would have order.\n\nAlso there would be a sudden decrease in deaths due to car accidents or road rage.\n\nHaving Driverless Cars would decrease deaths because there wouldnt be anymore drunk drivers, or drivers that do drugs or any kind of products that cause hallucinations or cause problems for the drivers to see.\n\nThere wouldnt be anymore deaths or accidents caused by drivers on there phones or texting while driving because they wouldnt have to drive anymore the car would drive to where they need to go for them.\n\nThat way people can use there phones to call or text who ever they need to while keeping everyone safe from accidents because they are not the ones driving the car it is driving itself.\n\nPeople should really consider on being for this project of making Driverless Cars, Instead of being against it.\n\nI mean yeah there is gonna be a few problems in the begining of the making of the Driverless Cars.\n\nSo in that case once they make the cars they can see what is wrong and how they can fix it so it doesnt happen anymore.\n\nThen everything will be fine and all they have got to do is do a little bit of Trial and Error.\n\nPeople dont understand that if we have Driverless cars that things would be so much easier, Because we dont have to worry about any danger coming from people behind the wheel of a car.\n\nSo that means no accidents or death or having to be worried about someone causing a wreck for wreckless driving or failure to controll the vehicle.\n\nYes it might put some people out of jobs but look at how much good it would do for out planets air by using less fuel.\n\nAlso look at how there would be no accidents or deaths from driving.\n\nTherefore there wouldnt be a need for state troopers or having to get unwanted speeding tickets or tickets for driving in general. it would be less money for court systems, the Federal Goverment, also less money for people to have to pay if they recieved a ticket.\n\nAlso it would droop the rates on taxes because the goverment wouldnt need to pay state troopers or cops that watch for laws being broken that apply to driving a vehicle.\n\nSo people would have less things to pay and they could put that money towards their kids education.\n\nThis would allow more kids to goto college and future their education.\n\nmeaning more jobs would be created and alot more people wouldnt be poor or homeless because they wouldnt need to pay as much taxes or have to pay insurance on a vehicle or even have to pay money to own one. Therefore it would drop the rates on people being homeless and poor.\n\nAlso it would put more kids in school\n\nSo this is why i am for the project of making Driverless cars.\n\nIn my opinion i just think it would help out a lot more things than make things worse.\n\nI believe it would help more than anything because we wouldnt have to worry about a lot of stuff with vehicles.\n\nSo this is my argument against the people who believe that we shouldnt have Driverless Cars. I believe it will do more good than harm that is why i am for this project to make Driverless Cars instead of against it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, with the technological and scientific advancements, the Internet has a strong impact on people and young people tend to use it regularly. Therefore, online class are opened a lot via the web instead of going to the traditional classroom. As for me, I believe that with this development, it brings many benefits for education. However, I presume that this trend may give to some downsides.\r\n\r\nSome benefits that people may enjoy this trend. Firstly, Online learning will be more cost-effective than traditional classes. Secondly, distance barriers can be erased thank to online education. International students can join courses in foreign without moving abroad. For example, a Vietnamese student would be learned speaking skill with native teachers living in America to enhance their English skill at home. Moreover, learning on media may have a flexible study schedule and reasonable for everyone. Because there are now families students without economy conditions. so, they have to study and work at the same time to earn extra income help to their parents. Besides, they will be looking for many available learning materials as well as references.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, students attending those courses usually tend to procrastinate doing their tasks. This, consequently, requires students to have intense concentration, self-discipline and time management skill. Besides, distance learning students will without regular face-to-face interaction resulting in a lack of rivalry and motivation. Moreover, they will not develop as many social skills as the ability to work individually and in teamwork.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite some limitations of online courses, but I believe that online courses offered by universities greatly help the students. Online courses help to spread education far and wide instead of restricting it to the confines of the classroom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Currently, it is common to watch or read the reports of crimes and a variety of violent news in media like television or newspapers. Although it is claimed that this type of information can have disadvantageous consequences, it is agreed that the reports should be censored and filtered out similar information. It can be proved by analyzing the reports’ influence on the innocent and officers.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, more innocent people can protect themselves against potential crimes after being alarmed by the reports. To be exact, compared to the few who are likely to commit crimes, the majority of the media’s viewers are kind people. Without being alarmed by violent reports, they probably fail to recognize potential danger in advance when someone wants to hurt them. Therefore, this sort of report shouldn’t be restricted to protect the innocent.\r\n\r\nSecond, more officers can build a sense of crime after viewing various kinds of crimes in the media. Specifically speaking, the types of crimes are usually varied, causing officers to have trouble working against all the types. If the crimes can be widespread by media, officers will update their anti-crime experience from not only their first-hand work but also crimes worthy of attention in some other areas, which is absolutely helpful to anti-crime works. As a consequence, this sort of report shouldn’t be cut to promote anti-crime works.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, reporting crimes leads to more innocent people being protected and the benefit to anti-crime works of officers. Therefore, this kind of information shouldn’t be restricted from being shown in the media.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming'' I viewed both positive and negative aspects of the driverless cars. I think driverless cars are going to become something great for our country. Driverless cars could save a lot of people lives from fatal car accidents. Driver less can steer themselves , brake , and also notifies you if your help is needed. in the article the narrator says\"They can steer,accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notfiy the driver when the road ahead requires human skills. This quote tells all the amazing things driverless cars are able to do.\n\nThe driverless car also gets your attention with some type of alert to let you know danger is ahead. you could be distracted from the road for example, arguing with your husband or wife even your child and the seat will notfiy you when something is wrong ahead on the road. The article says\"This necessitates the car being ready to quicky get the driver's attention whenever a problem occurs. GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger...\" This quote tells us how the car is able to save lives from fatal accidents and when humans aren't alert the car is.\n\nManfacturers are also trying to create some type of entertainment for the driver that can still make sure the driver is alert of that the car is doing.\"Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in car-entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over...\"This quote tells us that the manfacturers are also trying to keep the road in easily site so we wont have to look down and cause a accident.\n\nIn the artice it says \"Most driving laws foucus on keeping drivers safe...and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers...the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control...\" i disagree with is because all drivers aren't alert when driving. The Driverless car is going to help you be alert just in case we miss something we should've seen. The Driverless car will help the rates of fatal car accidents decrease over the years because it is helping us stay alert at all times.\n\nI believe that driverless cars are going to make a huge impact on the world. Many lives will be spared because of the amazing alert system the cars have.\n\nThe driverless car will always come in handy when you need to quickly grab something that will distract you a bit from the road. I believe driverless cars were made to make the world a little bit safer for everyone.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Why Venus well it's simple \"our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\".\n\nThe author believes that Venus should be explored because they may be somthig on venus that leads to new innovations or it may very well just be the part that making it to Venus is the innovation. The author makes sure to list the dangers so that there won't be a basis veiw-point and that talks about ways that could work. Even though in the ways there are also flaws which are also pointed out but the author tries to make a point that evenn though we are right next to Venus we know very little and that Venus could have been like Earth in the past. The author tells the reader about how there features that are simlier to thoses on earth like mountains, valleys, craters and may have even had large oceans and could have supported many types of life forms.\n\nWhile there are many dangers like \" a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide\" even though past that there are coulds that contain highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere of Venus. Then there is the surface which avgerage temperatures are over 800 degrees Fahrenheit mean that even though it is farther from the sun than Mercury it is still hotter. Another thing the \"atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater the what we experience on our own planet\" mean that man can't even reach the surface of Venus. Even so \"our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\".SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do you think its is a good idea to limit car usage? Well i do and the reason for that is because more people now a days just have completely stop caring about the enviornment. I say this because more and more people are getting these big trucks and they are not realizing that when that truck starts it is letting out bad gases that harms our atmosphear.\n\nI read that people are now getting fines in Columbia because of there cars and right now i think that's a good idea. I say this because people are just down right lazy and they need to get up and go exercise, they could just go walk or even ride a bike to where they have to go, it's really not that hard.\n\nNext I read that president Obama has abitious goals to curb the united states greenhouse gas emission. I know that it will work out because I read that peopel think that america is pass the car age or what ever and that more and more people are starting to do whats right and start walking and riding bikes.\n\nNow I have also read that Car compinies are suffering from that one day without cars thing because i think they fear that people might love the day without cars so much,that they just might stop buying them. Car componies are also suffering because I read that more and more people are becoming unemployed or they just cant affored it so they take alternet ways to get to where they have to go and they just dont worry about it.\n\nThese are some of the reasons why i think it is a good idea that we should limit the usage in this world because there are so many pro's and cons on why its a good/bad idea.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, environmental pollution is one of the most devastating impacts of human activities on the Earth. There are four types of pollution, namely, air pollution, water pollution, soil pollution and noise pollution. Some people believe that air pollution is the most pressing problem while others are convinced that soil pollution has an implicit threat. This essay will discuss both statements and give some justifications for why I advocate the former.\r\n\r\n On the one hand, soil pollution consists of damaging long-term effects. Soil fertility will no longer remain if this kind of pollution constantly continues. Inorganic waste and the overuse of chemical fertilizers, which are attributed to the cause of soil deterioration, can affect harmful to local people's health such as cancer from chromium, damages in the nervous system from lead, etc. Soil that has been contaminated should no longer be used to grow food, because the chemicals can leech into the food and harm people who eat it.\r\n\r\n On the other hand, I totally believe that air pollution creates much more detrimental issues. Long-standing impacts on inhabitants' health stemming from air pollution include heart disease, lung cancer, and respiratory diseases such as emphysema. Air pollution can also directly contaminate the surface of bodies of water and soil, which will kill crops or reduce their yield. Air pollution will certainly contribute to the greenhouse effect which can lead to a series of environmental problems such as Increase in average temperatures and temperature extremes, polar ice melting, rise of sea levels, etc.\r\n\r\n By means of conclusion, although some people think that soil pollution contains hazardous impacts, I am firmly convinced that air pollution causes more toxic effects. It is vital that governments should do something from now to prevent the development of environmental pollution.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez certain mood created author makes story interesting It playful tone warm loving mood PERSON mother father immigrated cuba They moved simple house Narciso born Throughout years simple house turned home paragraph The house filled loving family special friends turning something special Narciso s life home How close family friends added relevence home It warmth kitchen humble house cuban feast always filled air scent music life love paragraph This shows special house This feeling also adds mood appreciation shown It I learned real definition family paragraph The memories home make mood loving warmSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "Do believe certain materials books music movies magazines removed shelves offensive My personal opinion removed unless inapropreate children avle see That opinion readers go library find offinsive book us might offinsive himher hisher standards And offensive himher heshe one checking heshe obviously knos heshe getting remove books shelves offinsive offinsive one offinsive well actually opinion goes half half movievs librarys inapropreate aldults ones buy That personal opinion many others different opinions subject think every thing stay shelves And movies sold aldults aldultsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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