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"content": "Bad For the Future?\n\nHave you ever seen \"Terminator\" or \"Wall-E?\" These movies incorporate how we get too comfortable with tehnology and give them use to our every day life. And, when we are not looking, they rise and turn against us. This is what these so called \"driverless cars\" remind me about. I believe driverless cars will not be a good thing, but reek havoc on our lives.\n\n\"In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless\"(Driverless 7). When these manufacturers like Google and BMW are acting like they are \"totally driverless,\" they are just flat out lying to you. We do not enhance the technology to make driverless cars, and I am not too sure I want to have the technology to have driverless cars. \"The Google Car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over\"(Driverless 7). There are many ways this could create a problem for us. What would happen if they have impaired hearing like me? We would often not hear this warning then be in an accident that a car with a driver could have easily avoided.\n\n\"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\"(Driverless 8). Imagine being a sixteen year old like me. I have waited nearly my entire short life wanting to drive and feel even just the slightest bit more independent and responsible. I was content with first just getting a permit, but now I have my license and I was exasperated! With school work and awkward social interactions, this is one of the few things us teenagers can look forward to. Why would any teen give that up for an emotionless robot?\n\n\"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lwamakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers\"(Driverless 7). The manufacturers say it is a safe alternative. But the difference between us and the machine is that we can actually see farther, and, for example, a deer runs acroos the road. The driverless car does not see it in time and hits the deer. But, the man saw the deer whilst driving down the same road.\n\nTechnology is a luxury we take for granted now in the modern world. But, there is such thing as too much technology that could get in the way. Technology are taking our jobs and taking up space. We are too dependent on these luxuries and some could probably not survive without them. If you think about it, Google sounds a lot like becoming SkyNet in \"Terminator\". That is one thing I would like to never know. Would you?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The diagram illustrates how carbonated drinks can be produced starting from raw water.\nOverall, five steps are part of the process. The first three stage involve filtering, carbonating and mixing the water with other flavourish products. Then, the final drinks are bottled and packaged for consumption.\nTo start, raw water is filtered and softener and chemicals are added. The purified water is pumped into an electrical heater where evaporates so that it can flow through a cooling pipe in the following container. During this stage, carbon dioxide is added. The carbonated water, in a liquid form, is transfered in a mixing tank. Multiple substance are located in various tab at the bottom of the mixing tank, such as colouring, syrup and flavour. Ultimately, these liquids are mixed with the carbonated water.\nIt is evident that before selling the product to supermarkets, it needs to be filtered and bottled in cans or bottles. Then, it is packaged and delivered to grocer shops.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are starting to become the newest piece of technology in the world. From advanced cell phones to cars not needing drivers. I believe that their should not be driverless cars because the amount of danger that is put in the way. Cars without drivers propose a threat to everyone in a vehicle\n\nSensors are not the newest thing. The sensors now days can detect things that could save someones life and are so advanced to detect skids and rollovers. But the thing is that sensors are not the most reliable things. Having driverless cars can cause a lot of confusions. You cannot rely on technology to drive you place to place when without you knowing that the sensors could fail or get interferred with by other cars that have sensors. The whole safety cautions are not overblown and should be considered that what happens if the technology isnt the most reliable thing and going old school is the right thing to do where the driver controls the vehicle and has to be awake at all times to operate it. Companies should also look at what if the driver is sleeping and something dangerous happens, who is to blame and are the cars even reliable for the safety precautions?\n\nAs technology keeps improving in our eyes day by day sometimes the best is past us and we rely on things that may not be the most dependent or reliable thing in the world. Having driverless cars has more danger than it has help because of the dangers of technology failing and companies being blamed for accidents and mishappenings.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is new technology to analyze the structure of people's face to automatically read emotional expressions by using computer modeling and inputted knowledge about the correlation between facial muscles and certain emotions. However, using this technology to read students' emotional expressions in a classroom would invaluable because of cost, ethics, and emotional connection with students.\n\nThe cost of integrating this into classroom might be extremely high, especially if it is in multiple classrooms. Bringing technology like this to classroom, would be unneccesary especially if such high performance technology had a high cost and inaccurate analysis. The author states that \"For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow\". This example actually shows how dangerous it could be to let your face be analyzed like that, to be manipulated by companies. The process of buying this product could be taxing on privacy of students face and emotions which would be a legal struggle. The privacy of what people decide to be analyzed by a computer should be a variable because in an age of evolving technology, it is important to still preserve our human values while everything becomes more technological. Things like emotional expressions should be privy to the people-people interaction because it will be better analyzed that way. If there is technology that stores this data, it could make people uncomfortable of what emotional information whoever mans the technology holds. A question of ethics and privacy would completely defeat the purpose of what the technology does in the first place. It would be invaluable to implement this technology into classrooms to read students' emotional expressions because of compromsing costs and ethics needed to implement it.\n\nImplementing this into a classroom to collect data for a certain curriculum would be inaccurate and invaluable because every student is diverse in their own way of interpreting and absorbing information. Not only is the student diverse, but the teachers using different teaching methods to teach the same curriculum would then have to be analyzed too. This would be extremely inefficient because there would be so many variables to consider that would make it hard to find a solution or improvement. Another part of this technology that is inefficient is the testing itself. When not in a natural learning environment, the emotions might not be the same in a testing environment. The fact they are conscious of being tested might influence their true emotions, leading to inaccurate results. Regardless of the accuracy of the software, it's results would not reap benefits because there so many emotions and variables to factor such has different curriculums, teaching methods, student mindsets, socioeconomic well-being, etc. Then after considering these several factors, scientists would have to work with the state-mandated curriculum to enforce changes for when students get bored and stressed. Dr. Huang states that,\"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\". The value of recognizing emotions with a computer, when a teacher should be able to interpret the emotions of her students accordingly, is invaluable. Instead of making software for computers to inefficiently read student's emotional expressions, teachers and school administrators should be trained to better read student's emotional expressions because they will be the ones to create solutions and enact any change. It would be invaluable to implement this technology into classrooms to read students' emotional expressions because of lack of efficiency and benefits to the classroom.\n\nTaking into account the numerous interpersonal variables and inefficiency of the product, it would be inaccurate and invaluable to use this technology to read student's emotional expressions in a classroom. While the research is substantial to analyze, it fall short of a created solution to enact.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "People are wanting to create \"Driveless Cars\". Driveless Cars are a car that you could drive without steering it or doing anything with driving like you do today, that is just making humans even more lazy. Humans are already lazy today but society wants to make us even more lazy by not doing things on our own now. Farmers already have tractors that are like this, the tell them when they need to turn around and that is it, other thant that the computer tractor does everything for you.\n\nI think that Driveless Cars are pointless because we already have all this technolgy that we don't need but yet soem poeple are big on technolgy but there is also somw technolgy that we don't need. Why do we need Driveless Cars when we could drive the car ourself, do other thigns by ourself, and not be lazy? See the Google Car is programed to do everything that we should know about driving but the Google Car does all of the thinking for us.\n\nThe cars that you have to plug in instead of putting gas in are somewhat a good idea because then you wouldn't have to pay fo rgas but on the other hand you have to charge your car up every night, replace the charger when it is out of charging the car, and you would worry abotu if your car would make it through the dya or not. So the charging your car in a good idea but there is also some cons about it too.\n\nMy personal thought is that we shoudl not have these Driveless Cars because it woudl make us humans think that we can do whatever we want adn just be lazy all the time when in reality we can do everything on our ow, we just choose not to. There are some good ideas with it, like the BMW has vibrating seats if the seat is dozing off and it keeps the driver alert. The Google car is watchign teh driver for the most part, when the car shoudl be watching the road to, notjust the driver.\n\nSo me personally, I think that we shoudl not get Driveless Cars. They will make humans thingk they can do anything they want to, make us lazy, and make us not do our own work. People that work are the hard workers because they make the effort to do things.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do you know what a Seagoing Cowboy is, After world war two was over many countries were left in ruin, so the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration UNRRA sent the ruined countries cows,horses and mules. The Seagoing Cowboys job was to take care of the animals that were shipped overseas. Luke Bomberger was a seagoing Cowboy who made eighteen trips as a seagoing Cowboy. I think that Luke Bomberg would want others to join the seagoing cowboys because, It could make you more aware of other countries, it is also fun and you get to experience other cultures.\n\nI think that Luke Bomberg would want you to join the Seagoing Cowboys because you get the oppertunity to go to other countries and experience them. In the text it says \"Besides helping I had the benefit of seeing Europe and China.\" the text says that because of the Seagoing Cowboy job he had he was able to experience other cultures and countries.\n\nAnother reason I think that Luk Bomberg would want you to join the Seagoing Cowboys is because it makes you more aware of other countries. In the text it says \" It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\" If Luke Bomberg had not become a Seagoing Cowboy he would not have realized the needs of other countries and their people.\n\nI also think that Luke Bomberg would want you to become a Seagoing Cowboy is because it can be fun. in the text it says \" The cowboys played baseball and volley ball in the empty holds where animals had been.\" Once the animals were taken off of the boat the cowboys were able to play games and have fun.\n\nWhat would you do, would you become a Seagoing Cowboy? Think of all the benefits like the sightseeing, the fun and the growth of your awareness of all the other people in the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "With excessive consumption of fast food, a host of people are turning into alarming overweight. While a few people believe that increasing the cost of such food will address this problem, others take a contrary stand. I completely agree with the former statement as it will encourage people to cook a meal at home and reduce excessive consumption by children.\nOne of the main reasons why people are becoming excessively overweight is due to frequent consumption of pre prepared food. If the government imposes a hefty tax on food firms such as Dominos, McDonald and Pizza Hut, people will prefer to prepare meals at home. This provides adequate nutrition that helps to maintain a good physique. For instance, many Wipro employees, the famous IT Company in the USA, start binging lunch from home after their company fast food corner increased the Pizzas price from $2.5 to $5. This eventually, decreased excessive calories intake and thus helps to reduce weight. \nMoreover, children are more tempted towards junk food ranging from hand burgers and French fries to Pizzas. As these foods are readily available and affordable, they can buy from their pocket money. If increase the pricing of such items, this will curtail them from having it. This not only develops a healthy lifestyle in the future but also prevents childhood obesity. \nIn conclusion, with increasing the cost of fast food, we can curb their excessive eating and adopting the practice to prepare food at home. This trend aids in maintaining body weight.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Since the industial revolution the demand for cars has grown. Cars have been needed for transport to go to work, school, or just plain traveling. But recently the demand has decreasing. All around the world \"no car suburbs\" popped up and people are dying to move. In source one a German city named Vauban only have 70 percent of families owning cars while 57 percent sold their cars to move to Vauban. This new trend of no automobiles is said to lessen stress, reduce smog/ greenhouse emissions, and make cities more accessible. \"America's love affair with its vehicles seem to be cooling\" says source four.\n\nGreenhouse edmissions wither away with the less cars that ride up and down streets. In Paris, the typical smog reaches to about \"147 microgram of particulate matter per cubic meter\" stated by source two. This makes it harder for traffic to see and causes an unsafe enviornment for walking. Paris was said to have banned half of cars one day and another half the other and the smog was cleared enough to rescind the no car rule. Greenhouse edmissions, like carbon, can cause acid rain, raises the temperature, and can clog up breathing pathways making it unsafe to go outside when the smog is strong. Carbon can be admitted through the fuel of cars. In France, over 50 percent of cars use diesel fuel which causes a greater amount of greenhouse gas edmission. If society can walk or ride bikes to work or school then the amount of automobiles needed will decrease. The lessening number of automobiles can help create a safer and healthier enviornment.\n\nNot only is the 'no car' trend happening in Europe and developed countries but it is happening all around the world. Source three talks about Bogota, Colombia using a no car program. Once a year Colombia participates in a no car day. \"Million of Colombians hiked, bikes, skates, or took busses to work\". The ones that did not were given a 25 dollar fine. This day in Bogota has gotten so popular that people from other countries have traveled just to witness. The idea of no cars can improve city dynamics. Bogota alone has built 118 miles of bycicle paths. The open area away from cars has created room to build parks and sport areas, restaurants, and shopping centers. While the revenue of cars are decreasing these new areas are increasing in revenue. If using no cars for a day can have this large of an impact in a developing country than it must create a big impact for developed countries.\n\nEven though a no car program can be a huge benefit there are still people disagreeing. A growing crime rate can make it not be safe enough to walk or ride a bycicle to work. For some, work may be to far away to create a short enough walk or ride. Some places, like here in Florida, does not have a transit station close by. But even the idea of car-pooling can lessen the the use of cars. Picking up just a couple of friends on the way to work or school can lessen the amount of cars on the road. This can create less traffic and carbon emissions and is safer than walking or riding a bike alone. While some argue that the demand for cars has shrunk due the recession it can also be said that cars may not be the top priority. Source four states that between 2001 and 2009 the amount of young adults driving had decreased by 23 percent.\n\nWether your on your way to work, school, or practice it would be smart to find another way of transportation. If your new years resolution was to get fit and go to the gym, ride your bike or run to work. Bicycling and walking can create a healthier you. Cars have done more harm that good to the enviornment but it is not too late to change that. We can use places like France, Germany, and Colombia as a great example of a new way to change life. Lets do ourselves a favor and maybe pick up a buddy on the way to work, or ride a bike, take the train, or walk. Lets take part in the new trend of no automobiles.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays the environmental issues such as air and water pollutions are associated with the high level of fuel discharge. Some individuals believe that the best way to solve this problem is to increase the fuel cost for vehicles. I think that it is reasonable to say that the higher cost might help to deal with waste emissions and this essay will discuss some of the reasons.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, over recent years the environmental situation is becoming even worse than before and the main cause probably would be increasing usage of cars and fuel working vehicles. Many people prefer using personal cars, finding this kind of transport more convenient than public transport, which causes increased traffic congestion and accordingly to more exhaust gases in the atmosphere. The additional taxes could help to reduce the number of vehicles on the road or lead people to use alternative “environmental-friendly” transport, such as bicycles or electro cars.\r\n\r\nMoreover, it is certainly true that a fairly large earth area and territory of the ocean is already polluted, and financial resources are needed to clean up and free territories from waste products. Another benefit is that government can spend the money received through these taxes to purify the contaminated areas and even develop alternative energy production which can prevent future negative changes in the environment.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, as discussed in this essay, there can be plenty of advantages in the decision of higher price for fuel and how this solution can give assistance to global environmental problems.I strongly believe that the benefits outweigh possible disadvantages.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "To state senator : from :anonymous ....\n\nI have an arguement in between keeping the Electoral college process or changing to election by popular vote for the U.S president. I debate on the behalf of Electoral college because,I think with the popular voting process way the only people who vote for you takes favor in you,which means if more people like you then the more votes you'll recieve,therefore you'll have a better shot of winning.....The reason I wrote this letter is to show you whether or not to keep the electoral process or dump it out and use the popular vote. Me personally think it's fine just the way it is,why because \"I think the electoral process is a better solution because,the voting would not be based on just popularity but also on who's going to be better at what they do,or the person who's going to make the positive choices[desicions].There are so many positive things on why to keep the electoral process and I also make room for the errors of it so dont think im on a one man train,because im not. The electoral college consists of 538 electors which means a majority of 270 electoral votes are required to elect the president. Which ever state's entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its congressional delegation:which also means one for each member in the\n\nH.O.R plus two for your senators...Most state's just have a winner take all...theres also some things thats wrong with the electoral college...1 : is that under the electoral college system,voters vote not for the president,but for a slate of electors, [Example]if you lived right in texas,and wanted to vote for (John) kerry,you'd vote for a slate of 34 Domocratic electors pledged to kerry. How ever the also are some great things on why we should keep the electoral college one is because,its is not liberal or conservative.\n\nThe electoral college requires a presidential candidate to have a transregional appeal.\n\nWith the popular vote system,theres not much consisderation tooken in on what should really be done. No matter on how it goes,I say we keep the electoral college system.....\n\nsincerly>meSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "why should we participate in being a Seagoing Cowboy? Some people ask but barley anyone knows. This might help us some times. But I think this will tough. We should do this, because it might help us, you sometimes get free time, and it is easy.\n\nThis job might help us alot. We can earn money and get a new house. You are shipping things. Things like milk dairy and other things. You could get a new house or a new car it might be able to be big small or whatever size you want it to be.\n\nOn this job you sometimes get freetime. You get freetime if you work hard on your job. The games we can play are like Poker, Cards, and more. If we don't want to play games we dont have to play any games. Therefore it is your choice if you want to play games or not.\n\nLastly this job is very easy. Mostly because all you have to do is ship crates with animals in them. The story says Luke also found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The job is probaly the easiest job you can find. So if you want this job for any reason it is a great job.\n\nThe job is great for all of these reasons. if you frogot what they were the reasons are that it might help us, you sometimes get free time, and it is easy. I think this job would be great for any of us. So if you want this job and if I were you then I would take it. Therefore I think this is a great job.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The entertainment industry has pumped out many famous products and franchises, most of which are “violent content” rated. Some people argue that the bloor-and-gore contents on the market could have a bad effect on mental health and shouldn’t be displayed, while others think that it is normal and enjoyable. While action movies and games do display violent contents, I believe these creative products are for entertainment purposes and could help consumer to have a good time.\r\n\r\nThere is a belief hold by a number of people that popular movies and video games with violent contents are giving out negative effects on the mental and social health of the consumers. There are many famous action/horror movie titles such as Wrong Turn, The Cabin Fever, Zombieland. These contents are publicly distributed and the gruesome scenes could reach out to many audiences. This kind of entertainment industry that profits from violent contents could have a bad consequence on society because people who bought this would think to themselves that violent is normal. A friend of mine is a gang member and he told me he got his motivation to join from watching movies about cocain mafia gangster like Tony Montana.\r\n\r\nOn other hand, some people argue that movies and games containing violence are there for entertainment purposes mostly. The violence itself is the reminder of what could happen have we acted uncivilized. We are exposed to the gruesome parts and see it for what it is so we don’t ask to seek it in our real life. Take some well-known video games for example - Battlefield, Left 4 Dead, Counter Strike - these action/shooting games are here for us to releast our anger and stress and it has been working well for many decades. Me and my friends all play games, we shoot in video games but we never need to own guns in real life. We don’t have a need for guns because video games is enough to satisfy us in this regard. Not forget to mention that every movies and games in the market right now are labeled, viewers are warned and they have the option to not proceed further with the content. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, a lot of the famous movies and video games are adult rated. Some people see these violent contents as bad for the society and calling for censorship, while others see action and horror movie/game titles as a way to escape reality, to be entertained in a different world. I think that it is harmless as it is mainly used to ease stress from our mind and provide us with an entertainment service.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author ended paragraph example everything gets fresh start spring example geese return home winter start new family also winter hibiscus leaves die spring new start I think author uses paragraph last its metaphor everything get fresh start also Saeng get new chance take driving test like plant geese get new chance lifeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is believed by some that our lives have become more perplex with technologic items and we can simplify these situations without technology. I mostly disagree with this statement because the main aim technological developments are for people to facilitate their lives and the absence of technologic items, our burden would have more heavy against duties and nature.\r\n\r\nFirstly, opposite the view of statement, technology has been developing for weakening and reducing people’s responsibility in life. Although, adaptation to new innovations is a compulsive process for some, these developments have been made for assisting to solve individuals’ issues in every part of their lives. To illustrate that, smart phones have become a considerable assistance of our duties such as communication, calculation and exploration for information. People can figure out their many transitions easily by these items. Apart from this, vehicles such as cars, buses and trucks have taken an important role to ease transportation and civilization. Thus, these improvements are relieving our standards rather than being complex.\r\n\r\nSecondly, without these technologies, people’s circumstances would not be better than the recent because individuals’ workload would increase. In case of closing some systems and items, people should do their automated works. For example, refrigerators are not work for freezing and people maintain their foods in conventional ways. In addition, people may deprive from communication such as watching television and calling their relatives. In short, without technologies, people would be in trouble in terms of dealing out their work and communication.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied with this statement. Although some technologies create bewildering problems in their first times, in my opinion, they facilitate our lives in their each advancement and without them, our lives would become more complex. 45 dk.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In today's time, awareness regarding history is experiencing a comeback. That is, citizens in few countries are intrigued to find about the historical importance of houses or buildings they live in. This trend can be the outcome of various reasons which will be discussed in depth in the forthcoming paragraphs along with few research techniques to achieve it.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are number of reasons of rising interest over history. People are becoming aware about the significance of such historical treasure. Furthermore, there could be some selfish desire like people might be curious to know if they could get some good price of their materialistic possessions which could be possible if it has some unique historical roots. For instance, a house can be the work of some great artist and if that is true then the owner can get huge sum of money for it. Another reason could be the interest of people in art, they might be tempted to know about the methods, procedures, design and so on, which can be a medium to learn about the historical art of older days.\r\n\r\nThere are a wide range techniques to carry out the notion into action. Firstly, if an individual is really interested, they can join courses regarding the related topic. In other words, they will learn modern and scientific ways to carry out their research and they will be quicker, efficient and skilled enough to carry out research. Secondly, they might contact a person who is already in the field. That is, a professional will be a better option to carry out research on speculated areas. In addition, world wide web could be of great help to know more about such topics.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, there are different reasons such as getting capital in return for the historical importance and for those interested seriously in art. To which, various research methods can be applied like studying it formally by ownself or hiring a professional to get job done.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author feels that the pursuit to explore Venus is worthy despite the danger it comes with, he/she supported themselves by making a plan that could overcome the dangers of traveling to Venus.\n\nNASA´s plan to send humans to Venus safely could very well work but also the way they would be thirty miles above the planett floating will not reallu give them a good look at what they are trying to study. ¨ More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock,gas,or anything else, from a distance.¨, which was stated in the article. The planet Venus has such harsh conditons that humans could not withhold and survive, an example would be that ¨The temperatures average out at over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.¨ which was stated in the article. In my own opinion it would not be smart to even begin to plan a trip to Venus,especially when scientists and NASA know the risks and dangers, it would as if you are setting up their own death if even a spacecraft cannot survive the landing for more than a few hours.\n\nMy conclusion is that the author stated his point very well and had some good arguments as to why we could send humans to Venus, but I do not agree with the authors point of view on this topic.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Face on the Red Planet\n\nMany people are convinced that the \"face\" on Mars is from a living species. This is a myth. Yes, this does look like a face but there are many explanations for this. They named this form was located in Cydonia. I will explain to you what this \"face\" realy is.\n\nWhen Viking 1 first took this picture in 1976 it really did look like a face. After that in 1998, when another picture was taken it started to fade a little bit and not look so much like a face. It started to look more like a formation with a couple of bumps in it. Then, when the lasy picture was taken in 2001 it looked just as a natural formation on a planet with a few cracks in it, nothing special.\n\nNASA has made trips to fly over the formation. On April 5, 1998 thats when the Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia. The Mars Orbiter took a photograph ten times sharper than the original pictures. When the picture was first let out on a JPL web site, all that was revealed was a natural landform. Skeptics had tried saying that alien marking were hidden by clouds in the picture.\n\nFinally then on April 8, 2001 on a perfect cloudless day in Cydonia Mars Global Surveyor came close enough for their second look. They took a picture that expanded 1.56 meters compared to the 43 meter per pixel in the 1976 original picture. These pictures really just show the equivalent of a butte or mesa. All these landforms are common by the American West. Scientists have all the information they need to prove that is is just a landform. There is no form of life living on Mars.\n\nIn conclusion this landform was sketchy. It did trick people into thinking that there was life on Mars when there wasn't. The original photo did have people thinking that there was life on Mars. The second photo had people thinkin 50/50 on wheather there was or wasn't life on Mars. But, the last picture taken on a perfect cloudless day in the summer of 2001 showed that is really was just a landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When building empire state Building workers faced problems One make architect building chrysler building raised total height making largest building world Al Smith former governor new york said going beat putting mooring mast dirigibles Another obstacle mast top frame It could dropped sixty thousand dollars worth maintenance done frame A third problem tying dirigibles violent winds could turn Blimp around possibly puncturing After Hindenburg atrocity people charge would let blimps dock Building fear endangering Public Thus mast never usedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There mood created author memoirOne way mood created explaining warm life narrator s house created Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed form backdrop life warm home CAPS This helps create mood memoir explaining narrator grew upAnother way mood created showing caring selfless narrator s parents I never forget parents turned simple house home CAPS This gave memoir light happy moodA third way mood created showing friendly everyone In neighborhood despite customs everywhere cultures came together great solidarity friendship The narrator explained friendly open everybody neighborhood one anotherAs see author memoir created late mood memoirSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Luke wants to convince you to become a seagoing cowboy. I am here to tell you that no one has to listen to him but im going to write an argument about luke trying to convince you.\n\nSo luke is trying to tell you to become a seagoing cowboy but luke qutoes that he had experenced being a cowboy but some of you might not of had that experince like he did so when your working you might get hurt really bad. Also if you are sea sick which means that you really cant go on trips like luke does because you might get sick. Luke tries to convince you by telling all these great things you would see but the captian might have you a different job on then you will be missing out plus i would rather go with my family how about you?\n\nIn this paragraph ill be talking about the dangers of becomeing a seagoing cowboy. In this story luke claims that he got hurt on night watch. On night watch you might get hurt because it was to dark out and the the floor was slppery and you fall and get hurt. Another danger is crashing say everyone is sleeping in their cabins and your boat gets drifted and crashes right into a iceberg. There is also another possibility is that your boat gets drifted into the middle of nowwhere and no one knows where there at so you just get stranded at sea. Another possibility is that if your crew is on a long long journey you might run out of food for the the humans and the animals which will lead to starvation and some humans might die but most of the animals probably will die.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The investment of government’s fund to artists or other aspects is a matter for debate. When supporters suppose authorities ought to offer support to people who engage in industries that are based on art. However, opponents reckon that money should be poured into other fields. Personally, there are several reasons and instance as follows supporting my view.\r\n\r\nSupporters of providing assistance to art field argue that an increasing number of artworks need protecting and developing. Providing help to art will attract more people and create many job opportunities. What’s more, this would give the people a sense of happiness.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, other people believe that other domains, such as medical system and educational, are vital than using money in art because residents cannot bear the pressure of education and medical due to lower salaries and without medical insurance in some developing nations. If the government financial them, they no longer worry about the fees when they are ill. \r\n\r\nIn my opinion, whether a country should provide assistance access to all sorts of artists depends on its financial and nation’s culture. Developed nations typically have accumulated substantial funds, technologies, and experience, allowing them to provide expertise for them without stress. On the flip side, the developing world, struggling with limited resources, may have no substitute but to priorities other areas such as infrastructure development and job creation instead.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while publicly funded access to healthcare and education can have many benefits, it may not be suitable for all countries. Ultimately, the decision should be made based on the unique priorities and available resources of each nation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Face is just a natural landform. As the old photographs of it might have looked like as if it was made by aliens. The new photograph of the Face just shows a regular landform due to the higher resolution. The media is just trying to make you believe that it is an alien monument. At that time, they didn't' really what know what it was exactly. I am here to prove you that the Face is just a natural landform.\n\nIf the Face is an alien monument, there could have been mysterious looking structures on the monument. The Face is just a butte or a mesa as it was said by scientist Garvin that it reminded him of a butte in Idaho. The 2001 image of the Face doesn't show anything phenomonal, it is just a simple landform. According to NASA, the shadows just give the landform a face. As for my last evidence, Michael Malin and his team took a sharp photo of the Face explicitly revealing that it is just a landform.\n\nAs the old photographs suggests that it is something made by the aliens, it is not. It is just a landform based on the newer photograph. A scientist claimed that the Face is either a mesa or a butte which reminded him of a butte he saw before. As it is popular within the media, no one knows what it is. Later on, a group of scientists took a sharper photograph of the Face and confirmed that it is just a landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In attempts try build platform dirigibles dock builders Empire State Building failed note difficulties One would way passengers got one dirigibles While anchoring refuel allowing passengers get rear blimp would constantly swivel could endanger passengers could possibly cause dirigible get damaged destroyed Another difficulty way mast built It design similar rocket possible dirigibles completely land If platformlike design instead hovering dirigibles could land allowed stabilitySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Face from Mars is just a natural landform and not something an alien created because there's is no life in Mars that we know of. NASA also used a camera's absolute maximum resolution to see if it was created by someone or something.\n\nIn the article, in paragraph 10, says \"On April 8, 2001- a cloudless summer day in Cydonia- Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look.\" That is when they used the camera's absolute maximum resolution to capture photographs of the Face. The camera could see airplanes on the ground or even pyramids made my Egyptian from Earth.\n\nAlso, On April 5, 1998 when MGS flew over Cydonia for the first time, ten pictures were taken.\n\nThese ten pictures showed no signs of alien activity. They were just landforms.\n\nThen, the day had finally came. The day of true, so the true was that the Face was just a landform. This landform looked like landforms from the American West. In the last paragraph it states \"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\"\n\nThis is why the Face in Mars can't be something created by aliens. It was just a landform created by nature. There is no doubt about it NASA as prove it by supporting their cliam. Thier no life in Mars that we know of so till then. The face is just a landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "To limit car usage, can bring some positive impacts to our world. Many countries such as Germany or France are adopting this act to better their community. Some benefits are the reduction of traffic, a smaller chance of car crashes and injuries, reduction of polution and appreciating whats around you already instead of being couped up in a car. People now are replacing driving with riding bikes, hiking or walking to where they want to get to or just car pooling with a friend.\n\nIn Germany, Heidrun Walter (media trainer and mother of two) says \"When i had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" She walks the verdant streets where you can here the passing of bicycles and chatter of the children hanging around and roaming the streets. To ensure that there is a reduction in car usage in the Vauban streets of Germany, drivways and home garages are considered forbidden. If you wish to own a car you'd need to by a large garage and the edge of the development where you buy a space for $40,000, along with a home.\n\nIn Paris, France, they enforced a partial driving ban to cleanse the air of the city. Motorist with an even numbered licenced plate were told to laeve their cars at home or they'd have to pay a $31 fine, also with even numbered plates. After this was done, the congestion went down 60 percent, after 5 days of smog in the air. The reasons why France did this was because they blamed the amount of gasoline coming from the cars. The smog got out of control so they decided to limit car usage.\n\nIn America, the reduction of car usage is also going down. People are depending more on biking, or walking to their designation or catching a ride with a friend. New york has a new bike sharing program along with bridge and tunnel tolls which refelct those new priorities. In source 4, the author and another citizen have similar traits with their children and cars. Mr. Sivak's son owns a car but prefers to take the Bay Area Rapid Transit. The authors chidlren didnt bother getting a drivers license even though they live in places where they should have one. They dont think having a car is a necesity. They'd rather stick with their jobs, take public transportaions and just walk or car pool to where ever they please to have their social life. Limiting car usage has many more beneficial ways to communities, and it is being adopted in numerous places.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood author creates memoir gratefulness The basis authors life lessons parents shown lives The author eternaly grateful parents passing love cooking rich culinary skills Narciso Rodriguez admires parents strength courage The mood author portrayed memoir gratefullness towards parentsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear local Newspaper Some people say computers negative affects family friend others say computers important aspect society I would agree second group people Computers help students research information need school People talk friends things like facebook write rough draft computer save go back make final changes draft final I elaborate following three paragraphs Computers quick easy way look information school project paper I understand people thinking computers take away family time would book A book would probably take time get less information For example book could multiple people read entire thing get two sentences information Another reason computer reasearch quicker go one page get information gotten information page still need click another link If people nt computers would go library spend time looking Is worth use time People talk friends facebook Some people say computers distract friends really help talk friends What vacation tired seeing talking family ve non stop week miss friends All id turn computer intent link Chat rooms also help meet people age next town enywhere country They even became new best friend When write paper want write go back write times Theres much simpler way s called computer You write first draft inordre get final copy reread make changes nessecary Computers also help kids spell better All hit buttonSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "While it is widely claimed that global warming is the most urgent environmental issue, some argue that deforestation has a more negative effect. Both points of view and the reason why I believe that people should pay their most attention to global warming will be elaborated on in this essay.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, it might seem sensible for some to believe that global warming has affected most of the environmental problems, seeing that it has contributed to the increase of extreme weather events such as heavy storms, drought and flash floods. Studies carried out by Harvard University, for example, revealed that hurricanes and other storms are likely to become more intense and more frequent by 90% and it might eventually result in a dramatic transformation of the planet in the long run.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, opponents of this idea might propose that deforestation should be taken into a consideration as the most pressing environmental matter these days. This is because the usage of wood and other forest products has increased considerably, resulting in soil erosion that reduces the yields of staple food crops. From this perspective, it is understandable why some would prefer deforestation to be the major environmental problem.\r\n\r\nPersonally, I would argue that in favour of global warming crucially impacting on the sustainability in the environment, since people tend to increasingly influence the earth’s temperature by burning fossil fuels, farming livestock and manufacturing industries. For instance, given that individuals incessantly release carbon dioxide and other pollutants from their actions, this could cause detrimental effects on the environment and put the earth at extinction risk.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although it is undeniable that deforestation is an important environmental problem, I am of the opinion that global warming should be considered as the most pressing concern in order to mitigate the pessimistic effects of its environmental damages.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "25 years ago, around Mars, a spacecraft from NASA was circling the planet.\n\nIt was taking pictures, until something strange happened. An enormous head appeared and seemed to be staring back at the camera.\n\nA few scientists believed the Face, was made by an \"alien.\" NASA has been discussing of what have may cause to make a face on Mars. We had millions of answers but didn't know which one was right.\n\nAliens did it. They are the ones who created the face! \"Scientists believe the Face was an alien artifact.\" First of all, no one knows for sure what have may of caused it. It could've been the atmosphere, or it could've been an \"alien.\" Scientists thought it was probably a \"Martian mesa\", only this one almost looked like an \"Egyptian Pharoh.\" You see, the shadow gave an \"illusion of eyes, nose and mouth.\"\n\nIt was a good way to attract the public to the attention of Mars. \"There was no alien monument after all.\"\n\nThousand of people wondered and were curious about the Face on Mars. \"On April 8, 2001 , Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look.\" Close enough, they could predict what the image appeared. \"So, if there were objects in this picyure like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" The pictured showed landforms most common , and you could relate to Earth. \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" said Garvin.\n\nIn conclusion, from 1976 to 2001, no one knows exactly what does the Face mean. The sensation was short.\n\nNASA says it could've been a \"huge rock formation...\" It became a popular icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazine, radio talk shows.\" Some people think the Fcae is \"bona fide\" evidence life on Mars. BUt what do you think? Do you think it was made by an alien?\n\nDo you believe that aliens do exisit? Well, were not sure . You see it coul be anything.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Hi name I writing article today talk things nt library There many many things nt exposed children sexcism racism rarted pornography So today tell things First books racist comments exposed young childrenWhy Because setting bad example might think say things thats book Another thing sex books I know read stories talks sex sorts things So sum nt allowed public libraries The second thing nt allowed public libraries movies Things horror movies porn many So young children exposed things damages mind young age It teaches things nt know get little bit older The last reason I feel many things nt libraries magazines Those magazines show everything type naked photos These really need exposed young children Our little girls think ok take naked photos post books internet So things banded libraries many different reasons So think I saying Just think children exposed innappropiate thingsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The builders Empire State Building faced obsticales attempting allow dirigibles dock One problem height alltitude Zeppelin Even docked back would moving around everywhere wind Another reason May Hindenburg burned ground takeoff witch means flamable using hydrogen instead helium All raised safty issues needed soughtSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Senator,\n\nThe topic of the Electoral college is a hot one, and the idea of whether of not to adjust it is contravercial. Many citizen disagree with the process while many are in favor. What should we do? We should change the Electoral College. The voting is based more on quantity instead of quality, and the voting is not coming from the citizen's directly, making the risk of an unfaithful candidate too high and the actual voting less popular and more electoral. When one state-or even one person- could change the whole ball game that is the Presidential Election, then what does that mean for our democracy?\n\nWhile many will argue that it is a fair way to vote, the Electoral College has many flaws. First off, the candidates are focusing on more power and higher tallying states to get them through the election than everyone as a whole. For example, if you were a presidential candidate would you spend more time trying to sway California, with its whopping 55 electoral votes, or Montanna, with a teeny tiny 3 electoral votes? The candidates are not being considerate of ALL the American citizens, but instead the ones that they think will lead them to victory. This is not what the election is all about. The election is more focused on the popular vote of few states with many inhabitants than it is on many states with few citizens.\n\n\"Under the Electoral College system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" (As stated in\n\n\"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses are wrong\"\n\n). Being that this true, why do we call it the \"Presidential Election\" instead of the \"Electors Election?\" Electors claim to be faithful to their candidates but sometimes this is not the case. If a member of the group is unfaithful to their candidate, it could unsettle the whole election, meaning that the United States as a whole would have to pay for the electors actions. This is not how voting was meant to be. Our slogan is \"We the People,\" not \"We the Electors.\"\n\nNow, I know what you're thinking, \"Why would we change this system? It is already established and has worked for many years.\" In order to move forward as a nation we as a whole need to make changes sometimes. Just think what it would be like today if segregation-an established rule and law- was not questioned. Or even if the settlers of the United States had not questioned our former mother country and broke away. We would not even be the establishment we are today if we did not question established rules or traditions. The Electoral College is nothing more than a system that needs to be reevaluated, putting the popularity if the candidate in clearer perspective.\n\nTo recap, The Electoral College does not include the popularity of the candidates over official influences. The states are not being counted equally and electors control the electon overall. In order to have a more successful government and a more included population, the Electoral College simply needs to be reevaluated and changed to meet the popularity standards of our country if we are to ever advance.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Libraries across world facing obstacle censorship Censorship become bigger deal day age effect books music movies magazines many This posts question censorship good thing bad Censorship allows certain books removed shelves library certain person finds book offensive Everyone opinion things effect allowed learn What one person finds offensive could perfectly fine everyone else Plus forced something want If find ofensive one solution easy Censorship effects learner effects writer Censorship takes away one thing writer freedom speech Writers create books music magazine articles voice thoughts topics show others see world show might happened life Because writers makes connection reader understand relate Writers choice want convey world given privalge Even able put censorship books music library CAPS censor internet The internet become place anyone around world find websites like books music magazines even shopping stores A library public library like internet public Anyone able acess enjoy like Putting censorship things almost equivilent letting teacher teach nationality letting president give speech Censorship based opinion someone CAPS effect learners writers Censorship holds back voice society thoughts everyday people Censorship even existSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am in a strong favour that in today's scenario, the glamour and wealth has made super stars more famed than their acheivements. This leads to the settlement of bad examples for young people. So in below paragraphs will discuss the fascination and attraction towards money is getting lead over work acheivement.\n\nBollywood industry is giving more importance to fame and wealth of a superstar, then their work acheivements. The role of work of attainment is quite suppressive. For example : Kids of superstars are been given a much more publicity on the basis of surname attached with thier names, no matter what kind of work has been acheived by them. Now we shall discuss, how this is creating bad example in the mind of young people. \n\nAdolescent people are not generally able to think on broader perspectives. These gentry gets attracted towards what is easily shown to them and hence gets diverted from their path of success. And furthermore, this sets a bad example for youngsters. For example: A popular star getting fame for his/her strong family ground. Now this would not be the same case with any other general person. Hence, to get successfull, work is equally liable. \n\nI conquer that, in this bollwoods industry , star gets popular with their name and fame, instead of their acheivements and hence leads to wrong example to young generation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author supports his idea really well. As he explains his idea he goes further in detail as to why Venus is a worthy pursuit even though there are many dangers that it presents. He goes further into detail by using things he researched out about Venus. In the 4th paragraph in the text it says, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" This shows that it would be worth it to see in person. It also says, \" Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like earth.\" If we were to go to Venus we could prove if that is true or not. Even though the author states reasons why it is a worthy pursuit there are still dangers to it. Such as temperatures and what a thick atmosphere it has. In the third paragraph it states, \" a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. \" If we were to inhale that much carbon dioxide we wouldn't be able to breathe well.\n\nIt also states that on the planet the averaging temperatures can go up to 800 degrees farenheit and that the pressure on the atmosphere is up to 90 times greater than what we expericence. We as humans wouldn't be able to handle going to Venus because we're not sutiable for that type of environment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story ways reasons One reason experience new country She left homeland months six months knowledgable ways new country This make capable passing Ed test Also spring flower beautiful give newfound strength cause pass The months time allow author time mentally physically prepare exam Mentally able study learn needs know And physically age also teach new thingsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author decides conclude story wants moral story burnt head She believes always chance try flower restarts cycle gets another chance bud symbolizes start try like girl going test She test starts flower flower budding support give hopeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are a great innovation in the car industry. The new driverless cars will make driving more enjoyable, more fuel efficient, and make driving safer.\n\nOne main advantage about a driverless car is the stress of driving will go away. No more will people have to deal with other people riding their tail, speeding, and not abiding by the laws of the road.\n\nAnother reason is fuel consumption. The future looks good for mother earth, when driverless cars are invented they are thought to use only half the fuel the normal everyday car would guzzle up. This is a major positive with the prices of fuel rising and in more demand than ever.\n\nThey will also make driving safer by eliminated humans from the equation. People are amazing at a lot of things but driving isn't always one of them. By letting the person sit back and relacks while their car does the driving, this automatically eliminates the human factors of: being tired, undecisive on what to do, or not very good at driving. Eliminating this will make car crash rates go way down.\n\nSome people think driverless car are to dangerous and raise questions like,\" if the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer? \" This is an example of one of the many questions being raised but the technoloy failing and someone getting hurt, is no different than the brakes failing and someone getting hurt. And most all driveless car have the ability to let the human take the wheel if the car is in trouble.\n\nDriverless cars are a great innovation in the car industry. The new driverless cars will make driving safer, more fuel efficient, and more enjoyable for driver but until they officially release one no one can says if they are a magnificent idea or down right terrible idea.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some opine people that have own transportation vehicles have more responsibility to paying taxes for oils and this opinion might push individuals have dropped their desire for having unnecessary for buying cars for tackling climate change, however, it seems an extremely radical view to correct human behaviour, due to the fact, suppression and attack dreams and desires of people is not a real solution for avoiding unwanted harmful footprint us, so, I am going to explore a topic and give my solution for that.\r\n\r\nIn a beginning, it is a fact that our nature is a shared precious wealth for all creatures, so there is a sense that we must protect it, consequently, each person must pay their own duty to preserve and build a flourished environment, due to this reason, tax is designated for residents who can be able to have an active role in their lands, regarding this, public and private transportation are critical factors which changing our earth, consequently, everyone that has a personal vehicle would pay taxes on oil, furthermore, policymakers would prefer to increase the amount of taxes for preventing unwanted impacts by private transportation, however, they should know radical rules will cause dissatisfaction for a long time.\r\n\r\nSecondly, suppressing needs and desires is a way to educate people, so, it would not be extreme on that, because, many men and women are big fans of their own vehicles, in addition, they enjoyed driving a car, so, high taxes on private vehicles might send a message to them that government has been ignored they're wanted and it will become a start point of complication and would grow in depth and wide scale.\r\n\r\nIn my insight, as my recent experiences in Canada, I found some returning shopping stores where you can borrow products like clothes and return them in two months, so, there is a way to release the stress of the population to have different clothes and give them opportunities making flexible decisions, so, it would seem a form of correction behaviour in our society and has not a negative effect.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, paying more money to the government as a tax is not a suitable solution to prevent human interruption in nature, besides, extreme suppression and mandatory rules have harmful effects on the interaction between society and policymakers, so, we must try other routes to tackle this critical situation in peace and wisdom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe that driverless cars should be developed. They would be able to help out in many ways. Some examples would be: less accidents, less confusion, and less deaths. And the cars would still have a driver inside to take charge just in case something goes wrong, so it isn't completley dependant on computer technology.\n\nWith the driverless cars, accidents would occur less frequently. Many accidents that happen are because of one of the drivers, whether it was because one of them was driving while intoxicated or too occupied with a text.The driverless cars wouldn't be distracted like that and would be a safer option. And even an accident in the road, such as a fallen tree, wouldn't be a problem. As stated in the article, the cars would have a lot of sensors to locate the accident and drive around it or avoid it.\n\nHaving a smart car would also be able to help with being lost or confused. If someone was new to a place they were unfamiliar with, they wouldn't have to worry not being able to find where they want to go. The car would be able to drive them there. And if someone were to get lost out away from civilization, the car would be able to get them back, as the sensors all over it would be able to reconize and retrace the steps to get back.\n\nA driverless car would really be able to benefit our ecomony. The article even says that the cars would use less fuel than the taxis we have today, which means less money spent on fuel. With all of these positives, we should at least try out and see how these cars would work, and we may even start using them as our main transportation for getting around in the next 10 or so years.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "People always imagine the future with flying cars, robots as servents, and everything white. Similar to this idea, car manufactring companies are coming up with driverless cars. This is an idea where you dont have to have a driver in the car. The car drives all by itself to your destination. Most people would think that this is an amazing thing to accomplish/build. People are thinking so much about the poitives of this idea, that they are not thinking of the negatives. So many things to think about. Would if you got in an accident? would you blame the driver or the manufacturer?, not to mention that the cost of making these cars would be outrageous!, and if we had these cars , people would be so dependent on them and they would be so independent as a person.\n\nImagine yourself just crusing along in your car and your relaxing because the car is driving itslef. All of a sudden you get in a car crash! someone id badly injured. you get out of the car to talk to the peson about your insurance an everything. Who do you think they would blame for the car crash and the accident? the\n\ndriver or the manufacturer? \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault--the driver or the manufacturer?\" This quote indicates that there are a lot of thing that would need to change if we actually made this car, including car insurance. You never know what could happen with a car like this. Its just safer to driveon your own, than to put your life in the hands of a driveless car that has the potential of hurting not only you, but other people as well. has anone even realized how the car will be built?\n\nPeople think that this car is just going to be made plain and simple. Thats not the case. These cars are going to be expensive to make. Its not like they are only going to make one driverless car, they are going to make hundreds of thouands of them. And they are going to be very very expensive to make.The tax money that we all pay would probably go to making these cars instead of something important like filling potholes, or making better streets. Our hard earned money would go to this instead of something that we are in dire need of. It would be a waste of our money.\n\nWe as people would be so independent if we had this car because we would rely on it to take us to all the places that we need to go. We would be so independent because we wouldnt know the city of country like we did before the driverless car came out. Its almost like we wouldnt know where we live anymore. We would probably forget how to drive and everything.\n\nOverall i think that this is just a bad idea because we have a lot of problems in this world and this does not have to be one of them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When builders Empire State Building attempted construct mooring mast dirigibles faced several obstacles would ultimately defeat The first obvious obstacle danger crashing When Hindenburg crashed New Jersey builders realized much worse horrific crash would downtown New York Another present obstacle wind top tower As said paragraph The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents That coupled lightweight nature dirigibles would make mooring much difficult open field The last obstacle faced builders existing laws made illegal There laws prohibited airships flying low urban areas like New York City though largely ignored All obstacles eventually lead realization mooring mast top Empire State Building practical feasibleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "No doubt, parents play a crucial role in shaping the character of their children. Since children are too young to understand what is right or wrong, it is the responsibility of parents to guide them in the right direction. Hence, I agree with the argument that parents should be held responsible for the actions of their minor children.\r\n\r\nChildren have impressionable minds. They acquire their values and morals from their parents. For instance, kids born in a good family often listen to good words and moral stories from the elderly family members. Therefore, when they find themselves in a difficult or unfavourable situation, they know how to keep their emotions in check and behave politely. This restraint that they learn from their family will prevent them from acting aggressively and getting into trouble.\r\n\r\nBy contrast, a child coming from a bad family may assimilate the bad qualities of their parents. Since they often get exposed to verbal and physical abuse they will assume that violence and aggression are normal and acceptable. It is only a matter of time before they commit crimes outside the home. For example, in India, the mother of a 14 year old boy was penalized for allowing her son to drive a four wheeler. The boy caused an accident and the judge who heard the case held his mother responsible because in his opinion, it was her duty to prevent her underage son from driving. Thus, obviously, parents are responsible for the actions of their children.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, after analysing the situation, it is not hard to see that the role of parents in raising law abiding citizens with social commitment is of utmost importance. Hence, I believe that parents should be held accountable for the wrong acts of their children.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars to me are not such a bad idea; however it is also not the brightest idea as well. Me personally I wouldn't want to drive a driverless car because I would not feel safe. Technology is something big in our generation, and even though I love it, I would not want to be in a car I couldn't control myself.\n\nThe first reason I am against driverless cars is because of mine, and others safety. People these days are very lazy. Technology does almost everything for us nowadays. If driverless cars become very popular I feel there will be more accidents. People will be texting and driving , and not paying attention to the road. Another big issue for me is falling asleep! Not having to put in so much work when driving the car will make it rather difficult to stay awake. \"Traffic laws are written with the assumption that only safe cars has a human driver in control at all times.\" Driving a car where you have to do all the work is already hard to stay awake while doing , so why make the job easier by having your car do it for you ?\n\nSome people may be for the driveless cars but in most states they're illegal. Some states are premitted to using semi-autonomous cars, such as : California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia. Driverless cars are not relaible and if they were good cars and one-hundred precent safe they'd be legalized everywhere. Anything can go wrong with driving a driverless car. What if something goes wrong with the car its self; or when its system shuts down and doesnt notify you for all the things that it would if it were on.\n\nDriverless cars are not the best idea ,it may seem cool but if it doesn't forsure keep everyone safe and is not even legalized in all 50 states , it is a bad idea. This is why I am , and will always be against driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Electoral College is a great way to elect a upcoming President. The Electoral College was created by our founding fathers. The Electoral College has 538 electors. You would need a majority of 270 electoral votes is needed to elect a President. We should not abolish The Electoral College becaude it is a great way to elect our\n\nPresident.\n\nFirst, The Electoral College is the best way to elect your President. There are some drawbacks like it is outdated and irrational, but it has been working in the country since the founding farthers. The reason why we should not abolish The Electoral College is that every state counts as a vote. One example is that Florida has 29 electoral votes, but big states with less people has a lowerer electoral vote.\n\nSecond, \"The Electoral College avoids the problems of elections in which no candidate recives a majority of the votes cast\" said In Defense of the Electoral College: Five Reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president. Another reason why we should keeep the Electoral College is that it doees the vote cast on how many people are in the state not how big the state is.\n\nThird, The Electoral College has each canididate running for president in your stare has his or her own group of electors\" said In Defense of the Electoral College: Five Reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president.\n\nIn conclusion, we should not abolish The Electoral College because it is the best way to vote for our candidate. The popular vote may be good but The Electoral College is the best choose we have in America.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In current days stars are more popular their glamour and money than their achievements and it is poor example for teenagers. I disagree these opinion. For the reason that in modern life have many famous individuals and every these person have your way for achieve this goal. Moreover, every teenagers will be struggle person how these famous individuals. \n\nThe first reason to mention is that nowadays for the famous person majority observe it is young people. Furthermore, have more famous individuals who talk about your achievements and others goals. For example, it is Elon Musk Bill Gates and others famous person. Moreover, in other areas have famous person in music and other zones. About their achievements have in internet and social media.\n\nThe second cause to be pointed out is that for young individuals it will be motivation in their life to succeed how they famous person. Teenagers can search their famous individuals achievements in internet. Moreover, every famous person have achievements. For example, they popular people all rose from the ground up. It is extremely proper motivation for us. Why it famous person rich? Due to the fact that they famous person all your life tried to succeed their goals. In additional, famous person only they work 24 hours a day 365 days a year. \n\nOf course, these examples may not represent all cases. On balance, however, I tend to believe for young people it is motivation. Have more famous person speak about your achievements your hard life and others goals.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Luke bomberger is my name. I am here to provide exaples and state facts to make you want to join the Seagoing Cowboys program. This program is about helping people that got left in ruins not just after World War II. They help people if they need animals they will bring you animals from other countrys and if they need help building there houses and everything will bring you people that can build houses and better things!\n\nSome reasons why you would want to join is because do you want to get drafted to the army? I don't think a lot of people do. So be a Seagoing Cowboy. If your with us you will not get drafted. Do you like animals you can help us by taking care of the animals. Another reason why you would like to join is because we have fun after we are done with everything we play table-tennis,fence,read,box,whittle,vollyball, and we also play baseball now doesn't that sound fun.\"I don't even know what whittling is but i've done it before I think it's fun!\"\n\nThat is why me,Luke Bomberger want you to join the Seagoing Cowboys. Also its not just work and play we also learn and get to vist a lot of cool places around the world. I crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times and the Pacific Ocean twice. It made me more aware of people in other countrys and their needs. Thats why I leaded my family to host a number of international of students and exchange vistors for many years. Thank you and good-bye.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are tools of the future that many inventors and companies have dreamed of creating, and today, we are extremely close to that dream. Companies, such as Google, have already been working on smart, driverless cars that can conduct basic maneuvers, and so far the results have been mostly positive. The development of driverless cars will revolutionize the future and is an important and positive goal that needs to be accomplished because driverless cars can reduce the number of fuel used, have sensors that can allow them to mimic the skill of a human driver, and provides a system that can keep the driver safe.\n\nReducing the amount of gasoline and other fossil fuels used in cars is one positive aspect that shows the necessity of driverless cars. Unlike regular cars that use fuel to move, these driverless cars use special tracks such as electrical cables and magnets with alternating polarity to drive. According to the author of the passage, \"The track was embedded with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to a receiver on the front end of the car. Engineers at Berkeley tried something similar, but they used magnets with alternating polarity. The car read the positive and negative polarity as messages in binary code.\" This shows that not only are driverless cars more green and environment-friendly, but also shows that the driverless cars were so effecient that if it weren't for the expenses for upgrading for the existing roads, the smart-road systems could be implemented and practical.\n\nThe use of sensors that allow driverless cars to move in the same fashion as a human driver would is another positive factor that reveals the importance of building driverless cars. In driverless cars such as Google's modified Toyota Prius, these cars have different sensors that not only allow the car to conduct basic procedures such as moving forward, backward, and turning, but also have sensors that can scan the surrounding area in case of danger and obstructions. This can be shown in the passage where according to the author, \"Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automative radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and inertial motion sensor. The most important bit of technology in this system is the spinning sensor on the roof. Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings. The combination of all this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel.\" This quote reveals that driverless cars have the technology to imitate the skills and instincts of a human driver, allowing tranportation to become much more flexible and convenient.\n\nHaving a system that can guarantee the safety of the driver is the final, positive trait that shows how much driverless cars can revolutionize the future. Although the driverless cars can conduct basic maneuvers such as accelerating, steering, and braking, the vehicles can always alert the driver to take over in case of complex situations such as navigating around work zones and accidents. According the passage, the author states, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires. This necessitates the car being ready to quickly get the driver's attention whenever a problem occurs.\" This quotation reveals that a driver's safety is guaranteed when both the car and the driver work together when getting to a destination. While the car can safely and easily drive the driver to his or her destination under normal condition, the driver can take over in case of unexpected and complicated situations, guaranteeing that both the driver and the car can remain safe.\n\nDespite many states opposing the idea and development of driverless cars due to certain negative aspects, the construction, researching, and testing of these vehicles reveal postive factors that overwhelm the negative ones. Many have envisioned a future where a future where the public transportation system is dominated by driverless cars that offer far more flexibility than a bus or taxi, and despite the long road needed to be taken in order to achieve this goal, it is a road worth taking. The development will be able to change the future forever and is something needed to be accomplished due to the ability to reduce the amount of gasoline and other fossil fuels, provide sensors that can travel in a human-like manner, and establish a cooperation system that can guarantee the safety of the driver and the car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The face on mars is a natural landformation. People beleive it was made by aliens but it was not mars like earth has mesa's and they are huge rock formations like mountain and it was proven thanks to newer images with higher resolution.\n\nIt was first discovered by a ship called viking 1 who was taking pictures of mars to see where it's sister ship viking 2 could land and it captured The Huge Face but due to low resolution they could not make it all the way out and they believed that it was a sculpture of a egyptian pharo.\n\nBut in the last paragraph it says \"What the picture actually shows is the martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms common to earth around the american midwest\". Which may be because The Red Planet once had water and caused the rocks to decay in a wierd way making The Huge Face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In recent years, people from all around the world become more enthusiastic about their history and culture even, some of them are interested in researching their local areas to know how old structures was built and how to develop through the years. Due to this significant trend, people can understand their environment find sophisticated problems in their infrastructure and try to solve them. \r\n\r\nFirstly, throughout history, humans’ nature behaviour was to raise their knowledge about their origins and find out about their old traditions, likewise, in today’s world, people are still passionate about their ancestors. They always tend to find mysteries and secrets in buildings’ architecture. Another reason is real estate Economics, the history of the structures can have an enormous effect on the prices, for instance, In the south of Shiraz, old villas prices are rose remarkably due to the fact, their former owners were from previous royal families contrary to Japanese culture, some individuals believe that some houses are hunted by mysterious creatures so sometimes, real state agents are struggling to sell those properties to the people because no one wants to buy them.\r\n\r\nTo research antiquity, there is a variety of ways to collect information about the past. Nowadays the best way is to surf the internet, you can find lots of things about the history on famous websites such as Wikipedia, also, you can access map designs of old constructures in the municipality’s database, although, access has been denied for some of the special structures. On the other hand, in some specific areas, there is no information about them, so you should check the libraries. There are a lot of reference books to check and for better viewing, you can ask the local people about the infrastructures.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, obviously, this trend can affect on economy and individuals’ lifestyle, also people can ease their curiosity with lots of methods to search about the history.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driving smart cars that drive by themself has it's pros and cons. People can come up with a great deal of reasons on why we should or shouldn't have them. Every time someone thinks of the furture they think of fyling cars, cars that drive by themself. But is the furture really that far away from having driverless cars? Should people be allowed to drive cars that drive themself? In my argument against the development of these driverless cars you will hear the pros and cons having this and why we should or shouldn't have them.\n\nFirst let's start off with the pros of having driverless cars. One would have to be that it would save a ton of fuel, and protentionly help the earth as the yers go by. Driverless cars could also save a bundle of car wrecks everday. By limiting the careless drivers that are in a hurry to get places or not paying attention. Another pro is that it would help people that would be killed by drunk drivers. It would bring down the numbers of death due to car wrecks. It would save a mass of time on the roads for people who are traveling, because there would not be tons of traffic jams due to the lack of car wrecks becasue they won't be in a hurry and driving wreckless.\n\nNow for the cons of having driverless cars. For starters it would cost a bundle of money to make all these smart cars. What if you don't want to get a smart car that drove itself, would you have to? Also would everyone get rid of there old cars and where would they go? Another thing is as a mass of us know technology does not always work when we want it too and is not always on our side. So the car could stop working on us. In the article it said that they made a road that was smart, but that would cost way to much money to replace all the roads and a ton of time spent doing it. The whole car would relay on sensors that could go out at anytime, whenever they wanted to, and however they wanted too.\n\nIn my personal argument, I would not trust a car that could give out at anytime it wanted to nor would I want to. Another reason it would cost way to much money to make. Although it could save a big deal of car wrecks due to wreckless drivers, the cars could be just a dangerous. As I stated before technology is just something that is unexpected and you can't really relay on it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The use of emtional expression technology is valuable to a classroom setting due to it being able to make learning more enjoyable, help with uncontrolable behavior, and its effectivenss to tell mix emotions of growing teens.\n\nThe use of emtion analysing technology would be good for the classroom setting with its capability to keep students engaged in learning. In paragraph 6 of the article mentions many situations this technology could be used for, on of his scenrios was quoted by Dr. Huang saying \"A classroom computer could reconize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" and followed up by predicting \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" The point Dr. Huang is making is that with the use of this technology students will be used to determine if a lesson is too boring or confusing so it can be changed for better\n\nunderstanding.If this were the case student comprhension of education would be on the increase making the education system as a whole a better place.\n\nAnother way Emotion detecting technology could be used in a classromm enviroment is that it could help behavioral issues seen the classroom be clamed down. in paragraph 6 the author of this article is talking about examples that this technology can potentially do, an example he uses is that depending on your current emtion, the device in use can change what kind of ad you get to make you happy for to calm you down. This can be used in classroom enviroments where conflict can occur, but with the use of this technology a teacher could take a student who might be quite angry or very upset and put them infront of something like the ad changer to make them feel better by calm them or making them happy. benefits from this would be the lesser the amount of write-ups or suspencions seen from a school every year making it a better learning experience.\n\nThe last benefit of having this emotion reading technology in a class romm enviroment would be the use of detecting the emotions of a confused student.A way this could be done is similar to how it was used it da vinci's mona lisa in paragraph 5 where the emotion she betrays is special, or like a precentage as seen in paragraphs 1 introduction line. this could be benefical to students in a educational enviroment in how around the pre-teen and teen years students mental states begin to change and make being focus on education harder, but with the use of emotion reading technology an adult could help the student out with any problems they have. having the mental states of students be in good check is important because it could be the differnce between a succsessful student and one who struggles\n\nIn conclusion the use of emtion technology would be benefical to the classromm setting due to it being able to keep students engaged, help with any acting up, and be able to directly tell the emotions of a student who is confused.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "\"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" is a monument created by aliens, and i do believe that their was a alien life on this planet, says Dr. Chase. \" With no living evidence Dr. Chase i do know that this monument was made naturally by mars, caused by wheathering, says i Dr. Clay.\n\n\"Since we do not have a real answer to how the face was made, if it was made naturally or even made by aliens which we all know do not exist, i suggest to just let the public get over it, says I\" \" But since the media and everyone around the world thinks that the aliens and the Egyptians were envolved in this, i say again to just let the media know that it was just a myth, says I\"\n\n\" We should just let the media know that it was caused by natural causes by mars since thier are many storms their, says I.\" \" the world should not be in panic, and that we have fewer problems and no aliens,says I\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood created author joy The reason I think Narciso s parent s immigrants works hard They could ve stayed country wanted better future Narciso When Narciso realized felt happy filled joy In paragraph says I always grateful parents When re grateful feel happyness This mood I think author createdSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some families have their own houses while some others rent them. However, living somewhere whether it’s a house or an apartment is a vital question and in several countries, the number of people who are keen on finding out about the history of their residence increases because of the aura the houses carry in themselves.\r\n\r\n All places have their unique specifics due to the humans who reside there. Because people who inhabit somewhere always leave their energy and vibes. So it’s very important to find out who lived there before. Besides, discovering the past of the areas will enable us to know what kind of changes had happened to them. This information will help them to understand the creativity of the possessor and what other changes need to be made.\r\n\r\n In terms of families, who built their own houses or inherited them it’s rather easy. They know their ancestors and can find some information connected to them via archives or stories told. When it comes to purchasing a dwelling, studying what kind of family were the owners of the house is possible mostly due to speaking to them and asking some questions.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, we came to the conclusion that nowadays many people pay close attention to the history of the place they live in for folks who were settled there leave their vibes. And the easiest way to find out about the past is by trying to discover by talking to the people to whom the building belonged if possible, and if not, finding appropriate data due to archives.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The created author story couple different types moods One moods happy good One example author states I Learned love I never forget parents turned simple house home That shows good loving Next example happy good story states Countless extended family members came whentand often someone staying us temperally able get back feet This shows happy welcoming people family Another story sad One example says Could afford move moddest three room appartment This sad always want best people poor afford good place sad Also says They struggled personally financially This sad haveing trouble getting There story import I think loving A example loving states thes cultures came together great solidarity friendship That line right showing love That importand know story lovingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph show Saeng Finally comfortable new home After passage mostly reflection Saengs old life ends way signify become accustomed new way life For example says in spring geese return shows used geese nature new world The author also uses paragraph end show sense release Saeng many memories locked inside old life couldnt grasp new ones new home The authors use paragraph good way close story lets reader feel relaxed scene birds flying away Saeng escaping pain becoming real part new worldSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Laughter I believe laughter shortest distance two people When things loved one get fuzzy making laugh always help break ice When I get angry boyfriend knows order happy must make smilelaugh That exactly The first time made angry nt know It I started dating I remember asked I hungry I said I m hungry continued ask Since dating short period time really nt know much nt know I type girl gets annoyed easily I really low temper He continued ask I hungry thirsty bored tired nt realize point I really annoyed hour half passed still asking I going crazy I nt want tell I felt I knew I going make feel bad I thought said know going worst later relationship find I like nt like rather telling I went told every single little detail good bad first listened towards end exploded told nt I straight beginning That made really upset I trying honest anything worse happened guess I stayed quiet longest time kept asking s wrong tell I wrong I told really made upset flipped reason really I trying save us larger argument looked told I something wrong He said already together two months took long show true colors I kind understood coming time I nt agree point already known I mean nt take long know person especially girlfriend In end agreed around He busted saying ouch charlie bit accent made loose I laughed days completely forgot thee whelming discussion The point laughter tool breaking ice things get tough nt necessarily loved one even complete stranger person shy making laugh help construct great friendship You make anybody s day go great little grin put face simple hello hey even make smile I believe person smiles often lives longer This true little world I smiling making people laugh Honestly I hate seeing people walk around angry faces like friends really want someone make smileand would In conclusion nt laughter relationship would still standing point None always arguing always wining never laughing expect relationship last Like I said Laughter shortest distance two peopleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "With in this article, there are many arguments regarding the self-driving cars. Many positions for opposing and agreeing with the cars can be seen. I, for one, am supporting the idea for self-driving cars. I believe with enough work, these cars will be safer for the roads, and for their passengers.\n\n\"Within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids and rollovers.\" [5] This proves that with enough work, this kind of technology can be improved tenfold.\n\n\"In 2013, BMW annonced the developemnt of 'Traffic Jam Assistant.'\" [7] This states that the new technology is being invented all the time. We never really stop inventing, improviong, revising, and publishing new things.\n\nWith that, self-driving cars will hopefully make for a better commute, with better saftey. It would be a nice advantage to see cars with a function that tests for sobriety, leading to a safer roadway. That, and many other functions that can be implimented into everyday life can make our cars better.\n\nSo, would self-driving cars be safer? In my opinion, yes they would. We could possibly have a safer network of roads, and a lesser ammount of accidents, and a lesser amount of fatalities regarding self-driving cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This technology could be the next big thing.\n\nIn the article they tell us how \"using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition sofware tracks these facial movments-In a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa.\n\nBy weighing the different units, the sofware can even identify mixed emotions.\"\n\nIt also gives examples of the what the pros are, such as \"a classroom computer coud recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" this was predicted by Dr.\n\nHuang.\n\nthis would help many teachers figure out were exactly thier students are in thier classes and were they are confused just as the quote states.\n\nIt even gives insight onto just how powrful the program is with \"They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\"\n\nWith all the teen suicides and pressure from work and such this could be really benaficial twards getting to the scource and asking if thry are alright.\n\nAgain this code could be really great for students, giving us more insight into what they need and dont understand and then developing farthur into that.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There are many diffrenet views when it comes to driveless car, but im here to explain why it is a good reason to have driveless cars. ONe of the first reasons why driveless cars are a good idea is first that cars are getting smater, and saferfor the driver and passangers, plus they tend to cost about the same as much as a normal car. For example In 2013 BMW announced the development of \"traffic jam assistant\" and this car could handle drving functionns at sppeds up to 25 mph,but special touch sensors make sure the driver holds onto the wheel. A second reason why driveless cars are a good idea is because it will help people who are drving for long period of time. for example the \"trafic jam assisant comesto play so say a driver happens to fall asleep and lets their feet off the gas the car will keep drving and control the wheel unitl the driver lets go of it and thats when the car lets a alarm off so that the driver can wake up and hopefully pull over safely. One last reason why driveless cars are a good idea is because if we happen to make drvieless cars for people in general then we could do it for people who drive as their work for example truck drivers. usually they have to make it to a certain destionation at a certain time to deliver something. Usually this can be very dangerours not only to the truck driver but to the people is their cars trying to drive around the truck driver. Hopefully i have changed oyour mind about this whole is driveless car good or bad discussionSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph many reasons For example shows sense hope says this hibiscus budding That indicates new beginning starting I think idea author trying get across Obviously difficult author adjust new country For example disappointed hibiscus wasnt one homeland Even though s feeling hostalgic paragraph reassures reader author willing give new country another chanceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear In many ways computers helpful I nt support use The advance technology really taken away peoples lives world examples lack exercise much time inside enough time spent family friends Continue reading towny computers dont benefit society As know use computer usually sit chair correct Well activity one thing keeping healthy inshape I m sure want healthy healthy must get sort exercise day sitting thje computer helping one bit So clearly see far using computers beneficial society continue cons using computers much used Believe using computers unhealthy beneficial one way The reason oo get enough exercise wo nt go outside much wondering outside unhealthy dont recieve needed amount fresh air need sick Could imagine amount people would sick everyone used computer majority day Well lets would nt fun count Now know two ways computers beneficial societyKeep reading one rest way As probably knows hard task keep big family close using computers isnt going anything help So use Trust spending quality time family friends much even fun playing favorite computer games opinion family valuable thing life nt lose computer Now finished reading would like thank time reading letter concerning lack exercise much time inside enough time family beneficial societySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I know this because...the authur said in the story that luke wanted to be a cowboy who rode over the sea and to help ship animals across to frams in need of cows,mules,horeses to people and he had no problem with doing that In the story it says that it took about two weeks to cross atlantic ocean from the eastern coast of the united states and a month to get to china.. Caring for the animals during the crossings kept luke busy and they had to feed and water them two or three times a day luke also found time to have fun on board ,especially on return trips after the animlas have been unloaded\n\nthe cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds.. Where the animals had been housed ,but then being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger ands it opened up a new world for him...SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Once upon time bid named jack Jack little brother named jack since jack lot older brother watch lot Jack lot patients since watch every night parents worked late But still thought brother annoying But see parents knew paid would keep watching But one day jacks little brother would stop complaining get way jack finally got mad said dont stop I watch anymore yea half go day care haited day care stoped right away mad brother never like So wanted say sorry brother gav himI sorry I making mad said CAPSs ok brother said CAPS try let happen again said Then next day jack little brother hanging school everything went well Im happy mad I dont want go daycare said brother yah I dont want go I nothing said TheSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Debates are going on about whether driverless cars should be developed. I support the development of driverless cars because they're safer, more affordable, and will be more effective than today's transportation.\n\nTo begin, driverless cars will be much safer than normal cars because they don't cause accidents. Paragraph 5 states \"Within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers\". Another reason as to why driverless cars are safer than the ones we have today is because they keep the drivers alert, even when they aren't driving. Paragraph 8 says \"Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. In this way, the in-car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern\".\n\nDriverless cars are also way more affordable than the cars we have today. Sergey Brin, Google cofounder, sees a future where driverless taxis use half the fuels that today's taxis use, as stated in paragraph 1. Since driverless cars are much less likely to get in a car crash, they are more affordable for the customer as well. Paragraph 1 also states that driverless taxis will offer more flexibility than a bus, so owning a driverless car will be more affordable and get you to your destination quicker.\n\nNot only are driverless cars safer and more affordable, but they can also get you to your destination sooner. Paragraph 5 states that sensors have become more advanced and will respond much quicker to danger, such as out-of-control skids or rollovers. Paragraph 2 states \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash\". Also stated in paragraph 1, the author stays that driverless cars are more flexible and efficient than buses or taxis.\n\nEven though driverless cars are proven to be more efficient and safer, people debate about whether they should be developed. I believe that they should be developed because they are cheaper, safer, and more effective than todays transportation methods.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "One day went mall Sharae Reynal Me wanted sharae wanted pac sun patient let store Then reynal wanted sharae wanted patient let Then reynal wanted sharae wanted said ENOUGH WE She said ok ok ok I Please please NO Alright well I gon na ask bathroomSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Limiting car ussage lowers the polution rates. A quote from lisabeth Rosenthal's passge \"\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\n\n\", \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Many people can go without personal cars and making smarter ways for transportation such as a bike, a bus, or carpooling with a friend to get to their destonation. A statment from the passage \"\n\nParis Bans Driving Due To Smog .\" \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifting smog...\" Meaning less cars make the road safer by limiting the number of cars allowed to drive on that certain day.\n\nPlaces are banning cars on the roads on certain days to limit the number of drivers and limiting the amout of polution. From the passage \"\n\nIn German Suburbs, Life Goes On Without Cars .\" it states \"Vauban, completed in 2006, is an example of a growing trend in Europe, the United States and elsewhere to separate suburban life from auto use, as a component of a movement called \"smart planning.\"\" By telling drivers they can only drive on certain days helps the environment and cutes back on smog and accidents.\n\nThe United States is also joining in on the \"smart planning\" movement by cutting back on the number of drivings on the road and number of cars owned by people. More people are taking the bus now rather than wasting and polution their gasoline. More people everywhere are taking bikes, walking, and carpooling with a friend to save money and gas. We now have electric cars where we can charge our cars in an outlet rather than filling up the tank with gasoilne.\n\nIt is better for you to walk or ride a bike to your destionation its smarter too. If you ride your bike, walk, take the bus, or carpool with a friend you are impaction greatly on the environment by reducing accidents and limiting smog. You can also save money on not taking your car everyday to work or school, taking the bus or carpooling can do alot.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concluded come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test tell reader never give keep trying It also tells us family always ca nt It s beautiful plant dok faeng noi finally saidSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I claim that the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because of the many reasons in the text he tells us. He says that it is very simple to see from a safe distance, but harder when you get closer to it, he also presents the idea that each mission was unmanned and for a good reason, and lastly Venus has a very thick atmosphere of a poisonious gas. These are all reasons he supports the idea that it is fun to study, but also dangerous. I will get more in depth with these reasons.\n\nThe first reason that the author supports this idea is when he says this statement in paragraph one, \"While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\" This shows that the author is trying to support the idea because he is saying Venus is easy to see from Earth, and a far distance, but when our space programs have tried to get closer, it has presented more problems that make it very difficult to examine more closely, which shows the author says Venus is worth studying, but dangerous.\n\nThe second reason the author supports the idea is in paragraph two. He says \"Each mission was unmanned, and for a good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" This shows when the author says \"For a good reason\" that he is trying to say he supports the idea of us trying to study more about Venus, but is glad we are approaching it at a safe distance, and unmanned. This is another reason he is telling us that it is good to study, but dangerous.\n\nThe last reason the author supports this idea is in paragraph three when he states, \"Even more challenging are the clouds of the highly corrrosive sulfric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\" This shows that he is stating some of the facts that it is highly dangerous to go on Venus, by saying the words \"Even more challenging\" which presents he agrees with the idea that Venus is worthy to pursue studying, despite the dangers.\n\nIn conclusion, the reasons the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents is because of the highly dangerous atmosphere, the spaceships that never survive landings on Venus for more than a few hours, and safe to see from a good vantage point but challenging when you get closer, all suggest that the author supports this idea. These are all reason as to how well the author does on being able to agree with this topic.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "People have different views about how the governments allocate their expenditure. Many argue that arts should be invested more, while others hold that the the government should spend their budget on health care and education. This essay will discuss both view and show why I favour the latter. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it is understandable why some citizens believe that spending on arts is much more important. The primary reason is that as they are the symbol of culture, the works of art play an crucial role in our life. Generating and reconstructing art works is a practical way to educate youngsters to be proud of their nation. Besides, it is a way for government leaders to take care of mental health of their citizens. However, investing a significant amount of money in arts could be a waste. Nowadays, all kinds of arts can be displayed on the internet,and people can watch them without fee. Therefore, they are more unlikely to pay for a gallery or a concert. \r\n\r\nIn addition, the investment in the healthcare system and education would boost the development of an economy, which undoubtedly improves the living standards of their citizens. In term of education, high quality labour force tend to associated with the improvement of educational outcomes. Because employees who are equipped with knowledge would help businesses increase the productivity and save production cost. Furthermore, it is obviously that an advanced medical care help people extent their life expectancy, which means they would have more time contributing to society. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the government should spend the expenditure on both categories. But health care and education should be the most prioritized sectors.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In today's transforming epoch, the nuclear family is become a trend among word. In ,current more and more masses prefer to have offspring at the late 30 age. I have given some reasons and I have discussed the advantages in the forthcoming paragraph\r\n\r\nTo commence with the reasons, first and foremost, in late hood people do not have the ability to discriminate what a good and wrong for their life .in addition, late adulthood masses have started to earn money and at this, they do not a sufficient to manage their earning in the family also many many kinds preferred to marriage at a late age because they know in the late adolescence age they not to fully mature .furthermore ,having children at an early age limits many constitutions such as mentally stress at the starting age not able to cure the offspring and also they can face financial crisis through having a children at all age because it early age many people are starting to earn money in on that time they do not have enough financially to full field any needs of offspring\r\n\r\nTaking into account the disadvantages of this phenomenon.First every mankind and have maturity and because of this they are able to pure their offspring without any query.In other hands ,at a later age people are sufficient to manage their all family without any crisis . for instance, one person who started earning money to the early age and to the later age they have able to get the sufficient money management which full feel their all family need. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion ,having hair at an early age limits many causes for any couple such as poor care of children financially low on the other hand it has a many benefits for couple who have offering at a literature for example better care of children and high safety for childrenSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Every nation is running a race to develop itself. Therefore, economically developing countries tend to decrease the number of poor citizens is thinking of some people while other opposes by saying that it is somehow, destroying the environment. Analyzing that I opine, economic growth is the critical factor which needs to be monitored as a sudden rise beyond a certain level could lead to a recession.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the gap between rich and poor can be eliminated by financial growth. Taking this into account, prices of daily needs like food and fuel decrease which makes it feasible to be bought by all classes of the society. Certainly, affordability does play a key role in our lives and if daily needs are being fulfilled by every resident it could lead to positive development. Thus, this sort of increase leads to harmony and satisfaction among people. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, developing economies might lead to an adverse effect on Mother Nature as the demand elevates specifically in the case of housing. If people can afford a house then the land will be deforestation for construction which is the major cause of depleting forests around the globe. Consequently, human needs are ever-growing and it is often fulfilled on the verge of degrading the environment. If this pattern keeps succeeding, our upcoming generation will not be able to see trees and wildlife in the near future.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that this sort of growth is necessary however, we do need to watch its speed as many parts of the Earth are already facing recession which is irreversible. As a result, despite the decrease in rates, products are getting more expensive. Nonetheless, the environment is already facing many problems too.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez created certain mood Narciso Rodriguez created gentle mood stayed constant tells parents always kept arms door open many people consider family Which means probably grew life without much violence also says always grateful love sacrifice wants parents know loves much lets know thinking Lastly says never forget parents turned simple house home The sense gentleness stays throughout whole memoir always saying good things life badSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is often a debated topic that artificially intelligent robots will progressively replace human tasks in the workplace. Although, it is evident that most menial jobs will be done by robots: however, it is unlikely that jobs that require human touch will be taken over. This essay will discuss why eventually only very few jobs will be carried out by people. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, it is admittedly true that robots make some jobs easier to complete effectively which does not require specific and complex skills. Simple jobs that are repetitive and conditional in nature can be automated. This is the reason many companies are using robots these days to obviate the cost of manpower and increase their productivity. For instance, an Automated teller machine is used to withdraw and deposit cash in time which in turn tremendously eradicated human interaction and save time. For these reasons, some unskilled work would be replaced by robot automation in the coming future. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are some human jobs that can never be superseded by robots because they will never achieve the capacity to do it. In other words, they require human cognitive touch. For example, jobs associated with education, medication, social work to name a few cannot be done by robots as they require qualities like emotion and intuition. Thus, many complex tasks that need human judgement cannot be replaced by robots and will continue to be done by humans. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, A significant amount of people's job will be conducted by artificial intelligence in the coming future. Unskilled labour work will eventually be replaced entirely by robots; however, it is not possible for them to replace all and jobs require complex skills and human touch will always exist.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Starting with the end of World War II, cars have been a cultural hub all around the world, with businesses and even entire economies relying on the production and sale of cars and car products. However, after over sixty years of a car based global economy, the use of cars is beginning to slowly decline. With the decline of car usage, we see decreases in greenhouse gas pollution, a more relaxed living style, and the dawn of a new era of culture and economy around the globe.\n\nSeveral major cities around the world have attempted to lower car-use through laws or even annual days devoted to reduced car-use. In Vauban, Germany, seventy percent of the population does not own a car, and fifty three percent of that population sold a car to move to Vauban. Vauban has condesed its suburban layout so that everything is within practical walking range for the most part. They have also discouraged car-use by making parking only available in two places, \"Car ownership is allowed, but there are only two places to park-large garages at the edge of the development, where a car-owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home\" (Rosenthal, paragraph 2). Vauban has reported drastic reductions in greenhouse gases. Passenger cars are responsible for twelve percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and up to fifty percent in the United States. The Environmental Protection Agency in the United States is promoting \"car-reduced\" communites in order to cut down greenhouse gas emissions, and legislators are acting on the issue. Experts claim that public transportation is beginning to play a larger role in suburbs, and a larger budget is now being given to public transportation instead of highways. Paris also has reduced driving to reduce smog, but they did it through laws. After suffering record-breaking pollution, Paris enforced a partial ban on driving. On Monday, even-numbered license plates could not drive, or they would be fined twenty two euros, or about thirty one dollars. On Tuesday, the same thing applied to odds. From this driving ban, congestion was lowered up to sixty percent in the French capital. Throughout multiple global cities, these reductions of car-use have had a significant impact on greenhouse gas emissions, and more cities are beginning to join in.\n\nAlong with the benifit of reduced greenhouse gases, car-reduced societies also have a more relaxed living style. In Vauban Germany, citizens have claimed that they are enjoying a more relaxed life with much less stress. Heidrun Walter was quoted in Elisabeth Rosenthal's article \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\" (Rosenthal, paragraph 3). Andrew Selsky's article on car-free days in Bogota, Colombia also states that people enjoy the relief of less stress when they don't use their cars. \"'It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution' said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife\" (Selsky, paragraph 24). If a drop in car-use leads to a happier, healthier life style, this will most likely set off a cyclicle action of car-use reduction to relief of stress and back to car-use reduction. As more people realize this potential benifit of reducing car-use, more people will beginning to join the population of reduced car-use.\n\nThe vast empire of cars that began with the end of World War II has reached its peak and is beginning a steady decline. For nearly seventy years, cars and car products have been a cultural and economical stimulant in both developed and developing countries. From the Model-T to the Buggatti, cars have been percieved as the thing to have over radios, television, and other mass media. Now that they are becoming less used, culture will slowly begin to shift to a different source to hype about. The production of new models of cars and new types of cars will slow and eventually halt all together. As well as culture evolving to a new phase, economy will also undergo major changes. Economy all around the world has been stimulated by auto industries, and international trade has been influenced heavily by it. For example, foreign cars are driven in America more often than domestically-manufactured cars. Now that car-use is declining, the economy will suffer a major crash in stocks in the auto industry. Although this crash will harm the economy, the ever-changing population of Earth will quickly find some new innovation to obssess over and the market will quickly recover and improve on this new product. With a new culture and economy, the world will be in a new era, a new age of living.\n\nWith the decline of car usage, we see decreases in greenhouse gas pollution, a more relaxed living style, and a possibilty of a new era of culture and economy around the globe. As the problems with cars are found, people have and will continue to resolve the problem by reducing car-use. The Earth will become healthier with a nicer atmosphere, the population will lead happier lives, and culture itself will transform with the end of major car-use.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Empire State Building meant great The tallest building world Although achieve goal height true purpose building never usedThe building supposed serve holding dock new air Ships called dirigibles However case There reasons apparent ever builtOne greatest obstacles nature The winds top building strong dirigible safetly secure The back ship would swivel around mooring mast trying weigh bricks impractical Another problem faced law would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach area But two ships try land The US Navy dirigible Los Angeles failed landing dangerous In end Empire State Building never served station dirigiblesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "WOOSH!WOOSH as the waves were slamming into the ship we were falling from how wet the ship was.\n\nIt all started when I was getting into my house and then I heard a knock on my door and then I opened. Don Reist was inviting me to go to Europe on cattle boat. I coulden't say no.\n\nIt was 1945 world war two was going on in Europe many countries were ruined from the war.\n\nHow they needed to recover was to have some suplies and food from me and other people.\n\nFourty-four nations joined together to form the UNRRA.\n\nThe hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the horses and young cows and mules that were shipped oveseas. Don and I had sighned up for this job as a Seagoing.\n\nWe arrived August fourteen the day that the Pacific war had ended.\n\nDon and I got our seaman's papers and boarded the SS Charles W.Wooster headed for Greece. We had cargo of 335 horses and enough food to feed them.\n\nIt was a bad time to bee 18 because they could of sent me to the military service.\n\nBy the time that I was discharged in 1947 I had made nine trips the most of\n\nany Seagoing Cowboy. The cattle trips were unbelievable. It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic ocean from the eastorn coast of the United States pluss caring animals and we fead them three times a day.\n\nHelp my aunt Katie's farm really helps me while all these thing but not as much for all the dangers that you face during this.\n\nI also had a fun time on board with everybody on there.\n\nWe played baseball volly bal and many more activities.\n\nWhile I was there it made me more aware of people and there needs the awareness stayed with me all my life because people from all around the world needed things that I had.\n\nThat it helped them more than it did to me and I had learned a lot from that trip. That trip was mostly about being with my friend because he was the one who had invited me to Europe.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear state senator, i write you a letter to argue for you as the state senator to keep the election just as it is;as ''\n\nElectoral College\n\n''.\n\nTo begin, you as the state senator have to keep the \"\n\nElectoral College\"\n\n(\"The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\")in paragraph tree from the article \"\n\nDoes the Electoral College Work?\n\n\"by the Office of the Federal Register it says \"the Electoral college consists of five hundred thirty eight electors. A majority of two hundred seventy electoral votes is required to elect the President. Your state's entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its congressional delegation: one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your senators. . . .\" it is easier for us to select the electors and the electors pick the President. in paragraph five from the article \"\n\nDoes the Electoral College Work?\n\n\"it clearly explains that they all have their own group so therefore they know whats going on and what they all offer.\"Each candidate running for President in your state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected on what their responsabilities are . . .\".\n\nIn addition,i am not saying that the\n\nElectoral College is right in everything because\n\nElectoral College has its difficulties too,just like choosing the popular vote for the President. for example\n\nElectoral College . . . their difficulties are that \"Under the Electoral college system,voters vote not for the President,but for a slate of electors,who in turn elect the president. If you lived in texas,for instance, and wanted to vote for [John] Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of thirty four Democratic electors pledge to Kerry. On the off-chance that those electors won the statewide election, they would go to congress and Kerry would get thirty four electoral votes. Who are the Electors? They can be anyone not holding public ofice.\" so that is pretty bad but yet choosing you own President would'nt be okey neither because it would be harder and no one can give Presidents the ideas and the presidents would have to come up with the ideas alone.\n\nin conclusion, you as the State Senator have to leave the \"Electoral College\" and not change it to \"selection by popular vote for the president of the united states\".SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In many different countries, driving and the use of motorized vehicles have decreased in the past few years. We have come to learn the cars cause pollution of the atmosphere and the creation and release of greenhouse gases. These deadly gases have led to global warming and the decrease in our atmosphere. We've learned that if we stop using cars and find other, more environmetally friendly ways of transporation, that our contribution to the pollution will decrease ten-fold.\n\nGreenhouse gases consist of CO2 and other chemicals that come from fumes from cars and other forms of exhaust. They are mainly from cars and motorized vehicles. These harmful gases eat away at our atmosphere. We cannot replenish our atmosphere so we have to try and preserve what we have leftover. Therefore, if we cut back on the use of these vehicles, we won't destroy our atmosphere as much as what we have done in the past.\n\nAlong with greenhouse gases, smog is also another problem. Smog is a mixture of the fog and moisture in the air combined with exhaust from cars, smoke from cigarettes, and other toxic fumes. We have to have smog checks on our cars at least once a year to see if our vehicles are protected against the chemicals. Smog can be prevented somewhat by halting the use of vehicles. Also, if we don't use cars, not only will we have less smog, but we won't have to pay for the annual smog checks. We'll be helping our environment and helping our wallets.\n\nDon't you hate it when you're stuck in a traffic jam when you're trying to be somewhere on time? Of course, cars are faster than walking everywhere but if there are people in front of you not being able to move because of the people in front of them and so on and so on, then walking would cut the time of sitting in a car and waiting 10 minutes to move 5 feet in half. Most people hate waiting. Also, if we walk, not only will the pollution decrease, the obesity of our country will to! Think about that the next time you start to munch on a bacon cheeseburger.\n\nIn the United States, people have begun to lose interest in driving. According to Source 4, less and less people are driving, buying cars, and recieving their licenses. That means that come the next century, our carbon footprint will be half made up for. More people want to walk to lose weight and be able to hang out with friends and colleagues. If we don't stop using alot of fuel, we'll have more money for things that are more important. Motorized vehicles are making us and our economy suffer. Maybe, if we cut back on car use, we'd have more money to bring back our electives and music programs in our countries school systems.\n\nSo, overall, if we cut back on vehicles, our lives will be so much better. We wouldn't have to be so paranoid over gas prices. Our air that we breath would be cleaner and our money would be saved. We'd also have less worries about finding a cure for weight-related illnesses. Our country would be perfect without cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the passage the author tells how Venus is \"a very challenging place to examie more closely.\" She also explains the imortance of sending things to explore Venus and learning more about our solar system.\n\nIn the passgae the suther continually talks about how dangerous Venus is and how it is unfit for life and needs to be studied. She tells us how \"no spaceship survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" This is very dangerous of course! Ninty-Seven percent of Venus's atmosphere is layers and layers of carbon dioxide and the average temperature being 800 degrees, which makes it impossible for a human to live and breath. Why would the author want people to go to the planet? A person could only survive a short amout of time, even with an oxogen tank.\n\nAstronemers have been fascinated with Venus for years and say it has the most \"earth-like\" quality of any planet with its low valleys and high mountains. Some even think that it may have been filled with oceans and other life at one point.\n\nIn other words, in the future, Venus may be a new planet for earth to explore and visit. With new technology and new ideas, we may be able to see the beauty of Venus. In the passage it says that NASA is studing to send humans to venus one day to find new wonders and glories.\n\nThe author makes a point that just because somthing is dangerous, doesn't mean we shold not take risks to have more advances in technology and to push our limits and explore new places. One day earth will be so advanced in technology, not only will we be able to explore Venus, but other solar systems as well. In the end, every planet should be studied, not just Venus. Even though Venus may still have mysteris right now, we will have to wait for what the future holds to unlock them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In recent times, couples prefer to have a child lately. I believe that the drawbacks of this trend outweigh the benefits. Moreover, in this essay, I will outline the underlying reasons and two cons of this trend.\r\n\r\nThere are several reasons for people who do not want to have children as early as in the past. To begin with, couples would like to earn enough money to ensure they can afford the high costs of child-rearing. Over the past few decades, living costs have become higher, not to mention costs of child-rearing, including meals, tuition fees and entertainment. Thus, parents prefer to wait until the time when they earn enough money and give their kids a better life. Moreover, some couples prefer having more of their own time to achieve their goals and dreams. It is a precious time to make all efforts to achieve people's own potentials before having a kid.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are two drawbacks to this situation. One possible disadvantage is the fact that children might not have strong bonds with their families because of the significant age gap between them. Older parents may do not know information about fashion trends and the latest new technology. Therefore, lack of common interests that children can chat with their parents. Another drawback is the fact that parents who have children lately may have traditional ideas about child-rearing. Their educational methods might differ from others.\r\n\r\nBy way of conclusion, people who prefer having a kid lately may consider about different causes. For example, they want to earn more money to provide children with a high-quality life or making the best use of time before rearing children to achieve their goals. Furthermore, I believe that the disadvantages outweigh the benefits because of two reasons.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am for the developement of driverless cars. They can make a difference in society and change the whole way we travel. This also can be more efficient than transportation we have today because driverless cars will use less fuel than your average taxi or bus would. I believe that change is good, and maybe driverless cars could change the world. They would change the whold was we do things.\n\nIn the article, the author talks about how driverless cars are seen in movies and on T.V. These movies and shows take place in the future and give the viewer an eye for this new type of car. Iv'e personally heard many people talk about hoe driverless cars are going to be the next big thing and it would'nt surprise me if they were right. To me, cars that drive themselves independently without a malfunctions, is really cool. This type of transportation would be way more efficient just for the simple fact that no one has to put wenergy and time into driving. Also in the article, the author states that the cars alert the driver to navigate if needed through roadwork or accidents. I think that is great just for the simple fact that if there is a malfunction and the car can no longer drive on its own, the care can alert you to step in and take over. basically, to me, this new idea is very smart. If driveless cars keep developing and everything gets figured out, these cars could drive under specific conditions such as: rain, snow, sleet, or even hail. Usually the first thing you think of when you hear of a driveless car is, \"That's dangerous\", but surely if driverless cars advance into today's transpotations system, they will be safe and secure, but of coarse there will be safety precautions and transportation laws made. Even with a regular car, safety is always insured, and if there is a problem, there are people that know how to get the problem fixed and resolved.\n\nSo, in all, i think that driverless cars can be a positive developement in today's world. Driverless cars are a good change and they have just as much speed, agility, and drive, as a regular car. The only difference is that there isn't a driver. The author does a great job of including positive and negative aspects about this new advancement, but i believe that the positive can outweigh the negative. This is why i thing that driverless cars will be a big deal in the future if they ever turn out to exist. They are seen all over television and media, so im sur ehtey will occur in the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is no denying the fact that women has shown their mettle in every sector, including technical world, corporation and political field. However, it is believed that technical jobs are related to men's domain and merely one-fifth of the women engage in technological fields. There are multifarious problems are associated with women such as gender discrimination and family constraint, while every dilemma can be solved by possible measures. This essay will highlight the main problems and bestow suitable remedies in the subsequent paragraphs. \r\n\r\nTo commence with, let shed some light why it is difficult for women to indulge in technical field. First and foremost, gender discrimination is one of the most conspicuous factor that illegally exists in the workplace. In other words, inequality lies in the techie offices where women are not allowed to work independently and employers give preferences to the men as they are more superior than women. To illustrate, around 50 % of females suffer from gender bias attitude from their coworkers where they are unable to concentrate on their work. \r\n\r\nIn addition, scarcity of support and family responsibilities are the next major issue for women. It is certainly true that women have to nurture their family along with the profession. Therefore, it is arduous for them to maintain work-life balance as well as enhance and improve technical skills. For instance, a survey was conducted by the University of Columbia in 2017 that revealed that approximately 45% of women have less heeded towards their technical domain due to their family duties. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, gender-based attitude and organize training for women are the possible remedies to change the circumstances. Primarily, gender inequality should be eradicated in the techie workplaces and treat them equally as same as men along with appreciating their work. Secondly, deliver training programmes not only help to improve the women's qualification and skills, but also update their career status in the technological organizations. To cite an example, a recent article published in the Guardian reveals that there has been increase in the 20% of females opt technical occupation from the last two years.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, females can be attracted towards technical jobs if gender discrimination can be mitigated in the companies and supported by their families. It is predicted that most of the technical companies endeavour to opt equality culture in order to attract them as they are in demand rather than men in the technical sectors.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Having the facial action coding system computer in a class is a good idea and valuable. One reason it is because you can tell how someone is feeling and how you cna help. another reason is because you can tell if the students learning or not. Last reason is it can brighten up the day to make someelse happy who is feeling sad or not. I think it is useful and who do good in a class room.\n\nJust by telling if someone is down or not can really help alot with this computer. If you a teacher you can help your students be great. Having a bad morning can ruin your whole day. not even sleep can and being hungry can also if the teacher can see these things in there students it can make there jobs much easier. To help them not be sad or mad so they can clear there mind and learn .\n\nThis can aslo help for the kids to. They can get help if something is really wrong with them. if there sad or mad or if something going on at home if there not safe and etc. They can also tell there classmates mood. this can prevent things from happening such as fights and agurements ,conflict with anyone. becase everyone know how each other is feeling that day.\n\nThis computer can relly help without. it can help with kids who wanna grow up and create them computers who does that type of technology. maybe if one school get it and try it new schools would to and it can be in every school. maybe just not schools wanna try it , it can be for doctors to. it can be for everyone just to try out and figure each other out and be helpful.\n\nin conclusion this computer the facial action coding system would be very helpful in a claaroom. For kids and adults, it can prevent things from happeing i. this computer can help other kids how needs help. and can see if kids are learning anything. and you can just see how everyone is feeling. so yess i think thr facial coding system is valuable for classrooms.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Although it is considered by some people that the best way to secure a good job is being a university graduate, there are others who think that starting work after school is a better option. From my perspective, deciding to work is beneficial in the field of business, whereas completing university coursework is the most useful in an academic career.\n\nOn the one hand, it is attractive to find work after school, according to some people because they will have the opportunity to gain hands-on experience related to their chosen profession and acquire top soft skills such as time management, leadership and flexibility. This results in promotions and a successful career. For example, not only has the job market been increasingly becoming competitive, but there is also an overwhelming number of applicants for one position in a company. Therefore, it is commonly believed by some people that learning key soft skills can be valuable to a company and having relevant experience in that line of \n\nwork , which can put one ahead of the game when they apply for the position. \n\nOn the other hand , some people think that it is more advantageous to pursue higher education after school. Since obtaining a academy certificate is an indicator of perseverance, passion and commitment needed to study a degree course for three or four years, a university degree is convincing proof of the competence of the applicants. As a result , most employers will be more impressed by candidates who have qualifications from a academy than those with fewer qualifications, which in turn leads educational institution graduates not only to better job opportunities but also to higher incomes.\n\n In conclusion, even though community may vary in their opinions, I think that being a successful career requires a relevant background either in tertiary education or effort experience depending on the type of endeavor and field.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Knowing about the history of the home that they reside in has become increasingly common among many people in some places around the world. This essay will suggest that this is due to the curious nature of the human kind and further states that people can become more aware about the past by simply surfing the web, followed by a reasoned conclusion.\r\n\r\nThe main reason for the raising interest in finding out more about their living place is because of the deeply rooted curiosity. Men, who are well known for their information seeking behaviour are set on a mission to find out more about their past, ancestory , rich heritage , culture and so on. For Instance, according to an article by the Indian Express, 7% of Indians are more indulged in finding out about their living place than before.\r\n\r\nMany can research and learn important facts about their building by the touch of a botton. In other words, the internet serves as a powerful tool in providing such data since the technology has been developed enough to incorporate valuabe information from the past and the present. For example, the landsape of the place before the condo was built, the families who have resided there and any other incidends in particular can be looked up online.\r\n\r\nIn summary, the trend of finding out about house which has become viral in the recent times is beacause of the peculiar phenomenon of people to learn more. Research can be history online since accurate history is mad avaiable on the web. This behavior enriches our knowlege and helps us to understand ourselves better.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be beneficial for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I do not agree that we should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work. Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies, without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare time. School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect their students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending lessons every day. When young people do have some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing sports and other leisure activities. They have many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies. At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from obliging young people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of people to do something against their will. Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst young people, who would feel that they were being used, and parents, who would not want to be told how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is surely the best system. In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in my opinion we should not make this compulsory.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "well from my point of view is that all tho FACS (facial actions coding system sounds like a good plan but i will have to say i agree with the idea becaes if we can read poeple emotions then we can have a better idea on what is there personality is like and to see if some one is hiding there emotions to help them overcome there stress and sovle there problems.\n\nbut i also think to myseld like in he text that what if the face can not\n\nread or see the person true emotion which then the hole point of making the divice is a waste time and money.\n\nin the text it says Dr. huang thugh indivuals\n\nface expression such as smiling as broadly or giving off a fake emotion to someone\n\neach express is compared against a neutral face showing no emotion.\n\nin the text is says that us humans show no emotions to people all the time\n\nfor example if you ask a friend what they are feeling then they will probley\n\nexplain\n\nhow they feel with a bit of fear or on there hurt\n\nit is all typs of emotions us humans can give it would be awsome if a divice can help tell you just which emostion he or she is giveing you.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Sports are the key to physical and mental health. Every school around the world has a dedicated period for physical training. There are two schools of thought, one believes that competing in games is favorable for child learning, while others think that there are negative consequences. I believe that sports competition encourages the child to be strong, and courageous, however, there are some adverse effects.\nCompetitive sports, such as football, baseball, cricket e.t.c. train a child to analyze, plan and execute. They bring out the best in a person. Children tend to perform better and at a higher rate if they are made to compete with one another. Take cricket, for example, players tend to analyze the goal, come up with a strategy, and try to achieve it. Such sports have a positive effect on child education. Physical activity increases the thinking capacity of youngsters that can be take advantage of during studying. \nOn the contrary, others believe that making children compete with one another can have adverse effects. Every player in a game aims to win, this can put a lot of stress on a young mind that can lead to mental trauma. Moreover, sports focus on winning and not being productive, therefore, a young athlete if losing, tries to use false methods to achieve a goal. As a result, this develops a negative perception among the kids. Furthermore, such sports also increase the risk of injuries. \nTo conclude, I think that competitive sports can have a positive outcome on child schooling as it teaches to perform accurately, not be fearful, and make the most. On the other hand, it also has some negative effects, such as stress and a misconception that a goal is to win no matter what.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do you ever wonder what the statue of daivd is felling or how much of the thing he/she is feeling, you can calculate that now with FACS (facial action coding system). the reason that finding what a person in say a painting is feeling is that of which lays behind the shield of the face. a student is stuck on a geometry problem but his face doesnt show it, or you want to try and find out who is doing the project in the groups if it is one person or both.\n\nFirstly it a student is stuck on a problem but he/she doesnt seem confused. in the article dr huang states that a classroom computer could recognize when the student is becoming bored or confused. The software could change the lesson around to make the student more intereged or have a easier problem to get them going. The facs would be helpful because if the teacher see the data then they could change up the way that they teach.\n\nSecondly when students work on a group project not all work on it some make other students do all the work. If the teacher reads the data they can try and see who is doing all the work by their experssions then could get the other student to work on it with the group. If the student feels empathy for why the partner can't work on the project then they might do it for them, the empathy could be created from a lie and detecting the empathy they could solve the problems.\n\nThirdly a teacher could use it on a student who didn't do their home work. the teacher could detect if the student is telling a lie or not. The teacher could give them the next day to finish it if they like. If the student lies they could get a zero on the homework and ot be able to turn it in.\n\nThe statue of david a renaissance great it has a facial expression that we can now calculate. It is important to have a facial reader because they teacher can see if the student isn't happy with the way that the teacher teaches. They could see a lie on homework. It could work in a group setting.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many people wonder about . Some people think that it has negative impact in our life. However, positive effect on this world.? Of Course for several reasons: firstly, it motivates the psychological point in everyone, and women in particular. They will run to buy this advertised product especially if it’s from , just to show their beauty to men, which may lead to negative effects of too much sexual attention. Secondly, you can sit comfortably with your family and suddenly the telephone is ringing, but it’s nothing important, it’s just another company to convince you to buy one of their products. It is a real . Lastly, sometimes you do not have the financial ability to buy something, but with these new methods of advertisement, you run to buy it, which affect your budget.On the other hand, there are some good sides to advertising. For instance, it compares the prices of many companies which the consumer. Besides, it really see more products which we unless the TV or Radio advertised them. , it breaks our daily routine and allows us to see new faces and learn the language better with the help of the daily updates they deliver through .In conclusion, as we can see there are many aspects to this . I feel that we gain no benefits at all from advertisement, it plays buy more things that they do not need it at all.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "whole life I ve child laughter one could find joy existence As I ve grown hunger delight nt ceased I fell metal roof years back joyous obsession remained The woman gave life child stepsiblings s crew never see When I think relatives people never cross mind I actually ca nt even remember That fact makes childhood seem void vacant considering father died I tiny toddler s need feel sympathetic towards I mean sure growing lowincome household single mother two young children hard thing handle I made Have ever best friend considered family way That s mother Unlike savior life closest confidant mother best friends since high school I even thought always us even stood mother s side I born I m sure teenagers babies something outlandish mere two years arrival found giving birth beautiful daughter They ve family ever since aunt cousin For childhood I grew one house Throughout years I resided daughter taken multiple occasions go join us I used share room fought like rivals loved like sisters brother born five years I three years always small us play girls house convenient The served family I never nt always dandy thing I lot cruel fighting time I never thought maybe fights would cause leave us One warm bare day I awoke find people life missing They left A year passed nt see around nt drop nt send letter It fell face heart hurt soon became healed Our landline phone began buzzing hook one evening surprise line We moved You come see new place nothing two adults ever went wrong When arrived visit new adobe took one friend s houses climb shed I nt object I wanted friends though I known store I would nt gone As walked crime scene along mile road could hear direction sobbing A young boy nt seem much older I turned corner facing us When saw mess I laughed CAPS nt funny I cried His expression became serious CAPS I happened face buried hands speak took CAPS fell metal roof The us thinking neither us said thing jerk turned sympathetic offered helping hand I turned away The I paced stretch cement tolerable wounds body became CAPS glancing I smiled CAPS really cute I cradled face embarrassment blushed agreeing opinion sucks I m crying dirty limping huge bloody mess world always works way Of course I d run cute guy looking like cousin laughed full cracked amused I nt quite understand time something stirred situation tickled inner stomach I laughed The two us spent rest distance laughing incident sharing stories similar problem Looking back I d like think young unintelligent naive adolescent brought cousin I back common grounds I d lying In honesty laughter Even scary tense situations world laughing reason makes person feel better Laughing heals feelings arises thoughts brings people togetherSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have ever got detention laughing inordinate amount class If nt re lucky I know teachers absolutely hate students nt pay attention class students randomly start laughing re giving lecture I m student randomly bust laughing preferably jokes class In words I m teachers worst nightmare Ring ring ring time It beautiful afternoon I feeling great When I walked class I automatically noticed teacher nt blessedly self But I ignored went I normally get crank tunes I like listen music relaxes helps focus The downside listening music ca nt exactly hear everything great When I listen music I moments I feel like I m movie everything seems like s slow motion ca nt hear anything It s almost like I m secluded little world one see hear I start laughing Finally class started everyone abnormally loud point I starting see steam come teachers ears He looked like cartoon character bugs bunny The teacher getting indignant impatient class I nt exactly pay much attention I went back listening music After teacher starting get frenzied class even told everyone whoever talks get name written board receive detention About five minutes later friend comes walks starts talking When I listen music I tendency talk loud I feel like ca nt even hear So I start yelling starts giggle I nt looking teacher staring wondering I talking loud He turns around writes name board meant I given warning I turn look teacher oh comes laughter I could nt control When I laugh uncontrollably I laugh like s tomorrow CAPS You owe thirty minutes detention said teacher One biggest problems I I m easily amused I laugh mainly everything anything When teacher yelled facial expression way funny I began laugh even harder When I start laughing friend usually ca nt help start laughing She tells teacher one made laugh thought deserved detention So got wanted detention One week later I arrived good old detention rebels s I call makes feel tough The thing learned never sitting next When sit ca nt stop laughing decided sit anyways What know almost got detention detention imagine CAPS s short live tension regrets laugh That motto I try live everyday I feel like laughing important part really helps forget bothering Even though I get trouble laughing I nt regret one bit Some people serious nt know let things go re always tense Laughing releases tension I feel like brings closer friends I love laughing friends feeling abs hurting laughing awesome Live live laugh much love meanSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I feel u right chouse remove setian books movies music magazines apropreat people children Some people like thim others depends If I go library books I want restricted list library small fee arould depending typ book For instance wanted movie restrected wouls pay something like redbox rental fee That I think restrecting sertion items library PERSONSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "dear state senator, i believe that we should abolish the electoal college and just leave up to populare vote. The electoral college should be abolished because it is unfair, and it poses a threat to the U.S constitution.\n\nThe electoral college is unfair because it takes away the demicratic way of society that our founding fathers set up. In the United States of America we leave it up to the people to vote but if the people of the united states vote someone in an he doesnt get to run the country because the electoral college decided diffrently then we should not be called a democracy. For example in the 2000 election with Al Gore and Gorge W. Bush, the people of the united states voted for Al Gore, but due to the electoral college Bush won the election. in the passage The Indefensible Electoral College it says \"Over 60% of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\" what does that tell you? more then half of the USA would prefer a people vote instead of both!\n\nFurthurmore, I believe we should due away with the electoral college because it poses a threat to the U.S constitution. when i say this i mean it is a threat to the citizens of the USA. the people of the united states were thought to vote our president in? but if the majority of voters vote for someone an the other oponent wins then where is the domocracy in that? also in the artical The Indefensible Electoral College says \"oh what if a state sends two slates of electors to congress? it happened in hawaii in 1960. Luckily, vice president Richard Nixon, who was presiding over the senate, vatlidated only his opponent's electors.\" imagin if that happens again an someone doesnt notice that? then there will be double slaters an there bound to vote for the same canidate so that will be an easy state to win for that canidate. The electoral college is nothing but problems.\n\nIn conclution, The electoral college should be abolished because it is unfair, and it poses a threat to the U.S constitution. You make your conclution based on this Mr. senatorSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "What is the point of driving a car now and days anyways? In VAUBAN, Germany even soccer moms gave up their car. Paris even bans car driving Due the smog. In BOGOTA, Colombia has a program that they wants to go worldwide. Let talk about Vauban, Germany you can't park on the street, in your own driveway nor your home garages are forbidden. Vanban is completely \"Car Free\". At first I really thought that was a joke but its not. Downtown they are allowed to have car ownership. What sense does that make. If the car owner buys a space for $40,000, and plus the new home. 70 precent of Vauban familes do not own cars. But 57 percent sold their car to move to Vauban. Vanban completed in 2006. 5,500 residents in Vauban. Think about it most people in Vauban dont have cars. Now lets get on to Paris... Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. On Monday's motorists with even numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars home or pay a fine of $31 dollars, same thing goes for the odd numbered plates. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined. 27 people had their car inpounded for the reaction to how much the fine was. Car traffic was down too 60% . 5 days after intensifying the smog. Diesel fuel was blammed. Diesel makes 67% of vehicles in France.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "Driverless cars should be developed in the future. Driverless cars could be able to do many things, and could change the world. They would only use half the fuel of today's taxis, offer more flexibity than a bus, and would be much easier for drivers also more enjoyable.\n\nDriverless cars would be much easier for drivers in many ways. Drivers would not have to steer, accelertate, or brake their car, the car would do all of those things on its own. The driver would not have to do any work, unless the car notify the driver when the road requires human skills.\n\nHaving an driverless car would create an fun or more enjoyable time while driving. Even though the driver would stil have to watch the road, the driver would enjoy being able to relax in the car without having to drive.\n\nThe driver would not get bored, and would be often entertained because, the car would have in-car entertainment and information system. The in-car entertainment and information systems would also be safe because it would use heads-up displays that would turn off when the driver needs to take over.\n\nBy having an driverless car, you would not have to spend as much money on fuel because the car would only use half the fuel of todays taxis. I think that is a big improvement because you would not have to worry about having gas because it would not use as much. Also since the car offers more flexibility, you would be able to have more room, and do more things.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars could improve the world. Driverless cars should be developed in the near future. By having driverless cars, people would save money on gas, it would offer more flexibility, and also be more enjoyable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "People have different ideas about whether having academic knowledge or starting a job right after school can lead to a more successful situation. While going to university is very good and helpful, I believe entering the market sooner could be much better.\n\n \n\nOn the one hand, there are myriad reasons why academic courses are useful for everybody’s future career. Going to university has a great deal of effect on our mindset and our social personality. Meanwhile, we learn why we are doing something and it leads us to understand everything scientifically. At the same time, during this process, we use others' experiences and this is the way that makes a mind more creative. As an example, most inventors use other scientists’ knowledge and experiences and modify their mistakes to make something new.\n\n \n\nOn the other hand, it would even more important to prepare yourself for learning everything practically sooner instead of just studying about them. When you get a job straight after school, firstly, you can earn much more money and it means that being independent in lower age, so, you learn how you ought to manage your expenses and it can lead to making you more flexible in your future life. Secondly, behaving in the real market is completely different from what you study in books, therefore, if you enter the market sooner, you can achieve more real experiences. For instance, when I started my career, I realized that I can’t use lots of things that I learned in university.\n\n \n\nIn conclusion, I can understand why most people might think academic courses are a more reliable route to be successful in your future work life, but it seems to me starting a job sooner would be a bit more efficient.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir gratefulness Narciso often explains thankful parents Like When says I always grateful parents love sacrifice Narciso starts memoir talking hardships parents goes well home made He talks good times thanks one timeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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