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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do I believe certain materials books movies magazines etc removed shelves found offensive I understand parents would nt want kids reading book drugs watching movie gangs libraries nt remove shelves There one movie book magazine everyone approve Just couple people find offensive nt mean power determine materials libraries nt shelves One reason I believe certain items nt removed library couple people find offensive Katherine Paterson said quote She saying book couple parents nt want kids see complain right remove libraries shelf Then sooner later parents coming complaining different book movie magazine every day Soon would nt books movies magazines library Another reason I believe say items libraries hold As know many different cultural familes living Some people say bibles allowed libraries Half population agrees statement half thinks ridiculous re thinking would even suggest thing How would library handle situation If gave people right decide held libraries There would group people walking saying nt believe must take bibles shelf children read Then soon believers hear They would come library complain actually taking shelves There would way pleasing everyone libraries able put whatever want shelves My third final reason I think public say matter libraries forced take items shelves couple people complain certain books movies Then could nt people restaurants movie rental business outlet stores clothes nt approve If happen one business happen every business perspective The person say storelibrary person paying owner It s responsibility know s far concerning movies books etc The public accept choices You look view Would want come business start complaining forced get rid item It s right way handle things After reading opinions mine I would hope see I m coming see would nt humane It s never way never way Obviously parents nt want kids see things inappropiate But s say face fact s waySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The short story Winter Hibiscus girl moved mother The story tells girls transition different culture During story author makes references daughter pass test At end story author wrote In spring I take test again In text girl says itsits real one referring winter hibiscus plant bought The reader could infer quote means girl memories home real thing Also author wrote much preferred Big Mac This quote shows misses culture adapt one lives In conclusion girls test needs able handle change also able recall memories homeland happiness instead sadnessSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist making dehydrated hot He deserts bicycle water support running low rough road plenty hills make hard bike come kept going though heat outrageous dehydration beginning overcomeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Features cyclist affected cyclist many ways One heat For example paragraph says I travelling high deserts California June California called the sunshine state I infer hot Another feature affected cyclist thought could get water hot tasted like battery acid This said This said paragraph This features setting affected cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying venus is a worthy persuit despite its dangers. The author has a few reasons of why he thinks this. Some of them are to find out what it is made up of. Another one is to try and find out why there is no life on mars. Also even though he thinks they should explore it he talks about the dangers and how really dangerous it is. There are a lot of risks to exploring venus but it would be worth it.\n\nOne thing that the authro does well to support his idea is he gives a lot of compelling resons of why he thiks venus is worth exploring. One of the reasons why he things its worth exploring is because they can find out what venus is made up of by taking rock samples. I think this is a good reason becuase it explains how the author wants to explore venus despite its dangers. Another reason why he thinks it should be explored despite its dangers is becuase they can figure out why there is no life on venus. I also think this is a good reason becuase it proves why venus should be explored even though it is dangerous according to the author.\n\nIn conclusion the author has a good point of why venus should be explored despite the dangers. One of his reasons is to find out why there is no life on venus. Another reason is to find out what venus is made up of. I think these are good supporting reasons because they prove why venus should be explored even though it has dangers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ends story like comparing adapting changing everything example The geese fly away gets cold always come back giving home another chance The Hibiscus another fine example buds always doesnt die winter It always returns Saeng obviously realized vowed try drivers test might work time The author trying get message spread dont give upSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist hills made hard ride bike afraid grass becase tall scary lookingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often suggested that the primary goal of institutions should be to prioritize educational achievements and progress exams. It is not necessary to teach extracurricular activities like cooking, designing, and carpentry in schools, as it is more beneficial to learn them from acquaintances and family members. While expressing my disagreement with this notion, I believe that there are several benefits of alma maters teaching such competencies instead of relying solely on learning from parents and friends. The upcoming article will discuss my perspective before formulating a final verdict.\r\n\r\nPrimarily, teaching skills such as cookery, dressmaking, and woodwork at school can provide numerous benefits to students. Firstly, faculty can provide a standardized curriculum that ensures all students receive a consistent level of instruction. This helps students gain a foundation of knowledge that can be built upon as they progress in their learning. Furthermore, learning a new skill at school can provide opportunities for students to work collaboratively and develop their social skills. For example, in a woodwork class, students may need to work together to complete a project, which can help them learn how to communicate effectively and work as part of a team.\r\n\r\nMoreover, school-skilled children have very good exposure to new and innovative ideas. In other words, institutions can expose students to new techniques that they may not have otherwise encountered. For example, a student may learn a new recipe or a new method of dressmaking that they can then share with their family and friends. In addition, schools provide structured learning environments that offer organized educational settings which are favourable for gaining skills. Thus, with extra-curricular classes, students are given the opportunity to learn and practice these skills in a safe and controlled environment.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, having discussed the topic at length, while academic success and passing examinations are important, schools should focus on providing a comprehensive education that includes life skills such as cooking, dressmaking, and woodworking.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are certain communities in society who are concerned that looking into the old times of the residential areas people live in. In this essay, I will discuss the causes and put forward how the population should analyse this.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, the history of structures shows that nation’s past life traditions. The country’s architecture reflects the lives of our ancestors. One of the reasons folk is curious about their old stories. For include, Istanbul has a melting pot of civilizations. When you walk some neighbourhood, you can see some old buildings and remnants of the ancient empire a twist of fate. That's the type of building or house that shows our past lives. This is the reason why people are curious about the structures of the places they live in.\r\n\r\nAs far as I’m concerned, when the public wants to do some research on that content, they can check on the internet otherwise they can go to the library and check that area's building or flats' history. For include, when you are curious about some places, you can check on Google maps. The research shows us, that Google Map users %20 spend half an hour a day examining buildings and structures.\r\n\r\nTaking all into consideration, people are curious about their environment hence they want to learn about their background.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The empire state building s construction workers attempted build dirigible dock top world s tallest building many problems occured process In order dirigible dock top building building would withstand weight The steel frame empire state building would modified strengthened accommodate situation sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made buildings framework CAPS The story floor building predicted success predicted become new age aviation travel Another obsitcle workers faced realizing dirigibles outside highly flammable contain hydrogen It would disastrous one caught fire top building New York City The greatest obsticale successful use mooring mast nature self CAPS There strong violent winds top building blimp could become hazard blown control A blimp hovering hundreds pedestrians city New York definite hazard There also law forbidding aircraft flying low populated areas Having mooring dock good idea never really practicol safe many bad things could happened actually workingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, most people think that children should be punished when they commit crimes, while others believe parents should be punished rather than their kids. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and will favour the latter view. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, people suggest that offspring should be punished due to their bad behaviours. In this way, they don’t repeat their negative actions. For instance, when a child commits a crime such as fighting with peers, parents can give punishment to their kid, including a restriction on video games and meeting with peers. When children get these types of penalties, they can understand that their behaviour was wrong, resulting in them tendency to leave these acts behind them. Also, little ones can learn their every negative action has some consequences. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people believe that parents should get penalties due to being role models for their kids. The children spend most of their time with their family members since they are born, and their parents become the main characters in their life. Therefore, kids tend to imitate their father and mother in terms of their behaviours and moral values. For example, if little one sees that his/her dad screams when arguing with other people, they perceive this act as normal, resulting in copying this behaviour. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although some people claim that children should get penalties because of committing crimes, I believe that parents have a majority of responsibility for their kids’ actions due to be role models in their offspring's life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars would be able to handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph. Driverless cars would be a great advance in technology and would be safe as well. In fact, none of the cars developed are completely driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead rquires human skills. Three ways driverless cars would be much more safe are, the car will notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. The car is quick to get the drivers attention when a problem occurs, and the car can turn off electornics when the driver needs to take the wheel.\n\nIn the passage it states, the car will notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This feature gives the sense that the driver is still in control at all times. The driverless car is in assistance to the driver, and it sees what the driver does not. The driverless car can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves decreasing the chance of accidents greatly. While the driver is focused on watching the road, the car is focused on keeping the driver safe.\n\nThe car is quick to get the attention of the driver in many different ways. The driverless car has limits and there are times when it will need the driver's assistants. The driverless car alerts you in ways you can not ignore. For example, the driver's seat vibrates when the vehicle is in danger and the google car simply annouces when the driver should be prepared. In the passage it says there are other options that are under consideration like flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays.\n\nElectronic use are often a problem while driving. The manufacturers want to make driving fun, or while your waiting you're still able to text and check social media. Manufacturers are hoping to bring in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over-something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone. In this way, the in-car system is actually a safety feature.\n\nThree ways driverless cars would be much more safe are, the car will notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. The car is quick to get the drivers attention when a problem occurs, and the car can turn off electornics when the driver needs to take the wheel. These ways show that the driverless car would be more efficient and safer for the human driver.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this cutting-edge era the improvement of technology has been caused one problem that many jobs take control by robots or computers instead of people. In my opinion, I believe that the technological improvements will lead to more beneficial for human beings. This essay will discuss the advantage and disadvantage of using robots or computers automation in the workplace.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, The utilization of robots to change human role in work place will cause many people lose their job. Many kind of jobs have a same pattern that could be replace by robot. For instance, waitress in a restaurant they have one job to serve the costumer, so the owner of restaurant change this role by the robot to efficient the cost they spent. As a result, many people who work as a waitress have lose their job due to the reason that robot is more effective than human.\r\n\r\nIn contrast, The new technologies of using robot in the workplace will bring more beneficial to be more productive. If human have limit energy and time when they do their job; robot could work better with limitless of that. For example, government abolish a rule that people have to work with maximum 8 hours a day, but robot can do more than that. Consequently, company will be more productive and spent less time when they have to finish the job.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, the trend of using robot in a workplace have cause a problem that many people will lose their job. Meanwhile, I think it is truly agree that this phenomenon give more beneficial to the company due to the productivity in workplace.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A recent debate on the subject of trending advancements associates with a picture, where half the population believes that the number of works in future will have rendered through the artificial intelligence. However, this may be partially correct as the understandability for maneuvering precious human resources are now valued copiously, whereas the same may also be partially incorrect because the time whatsoever shall be, would not remain stationary. This essay will discuss about the potential of the opinions mentioned elementarily.\n\nThe characterizations for the human abilities have wasted before, but with the beginning of particular awareness, importance for such has only intrigued more and more. This say has erupted due to those stories, where an individual has manifested a critical sight for creativity, stubborn perception of envisioning newness in life and the care to transform the modest of all ideas into a platform of sustainable livelihood. For example: - we are the pioneers of all these splendid machines, technologies, programming and so to be able to produce even more, we have begun contemplating on the threads, which ought to be the main cause to promote divine happiness. \n\nThe world as we have examined is a place, which has by all means witnessed consecutive vicissitudes. The elucidation behind this say is the repercussion of human tendencies, which has not conceded them to sit ideally even for a second but fostered them to go on imagining. Once the power of that imagination has challenged with a substantial success and satisfaction, we begin following that as a subsequent pursuit. For an illustration:- Mobile phones hit the market 30 years back and in that moment none of us have a bright synthesis about what this could perform. Now, with the post utilization of 3 decades, we have certainly found where we are heading. \n\nIn conclusion if this comprehensiveness continued to increase then artificial intelligence will have forth seen delivering plenty of jobs in future, whereas if the time has its unique definition then there is a healthy chance we may entirely drop the topic and be sent into the hands of different concentration.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock safety nature legislation First would difficult safely allow foreign dirigibles dock In paragraph says Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable This displays fire therefore safety obstacle Next air currents made difficult dirigibles dock safely The air near top building affected air currents difficult pilots land Also using lead weights Empire State Building would dangling high pedestrians street neither practical safe There way work combat uncertainty wind nature obstacle Finally laws aircrafts flying close city In paragraph says There existing law airships flying low urban areas This law would make illegal ship ever tie building The purpose moor would illegal would nearly impossible dirigible ever tie Empire State Building The builders Empire State Building faced many challenges regarding moor opening never successful resultSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this essay we will talk about why in so many countries students do not prefer to choose science as a subject in the universities. There are plenty of reasons for this problem and what effect does this have on society? This essay will suggest many reasons for this problem.\nThe main reason of this problem is lack of trained Math and Science teachers. If students do not get proper foundation and motivation in their school life to persue science, They will develop Science and Math phobia. Due to which they will prefer to choose any other stream than science to pursue their higher education.\nEventually, this will effect society in many ways. If students stopped taking science as their majors, their will be shortage of doctors. Because of that, people will suffer from many health problems. Secondly, if students do not take science as their major there will be no placement of science teachers for the future generation. According to me, Government should take firm steps to stop this from happening. There must be some training or some programs to keep teachers up to date to enhance their teaching.This will enable teachers to make science subjects enjoyable for students, for instance, teachers may incorporate technology in the learning process.\nTo conclude, I belive that government and teachers should take the responsibility to create the environment to learn these subjects in a fun way. This will, eventually, increase the number of students enrolling for Science Subjects in coming future. Otherwise, it may have negative impact on society which will not be a good sign for any country.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is an ongoing debate regarding paying taxes. While some people argue that they should possess all the money they earn without paying taxes to the government, I believe that citizens should pay taxes considering the benefits of society. This essay will discuss my opinion in detail with relevant examples. \n\nTo begin with, income is needed for countries to provide free facilities to people. That is to say that the government is providing free access to amenities such as healthcare and education to their civilians and they indeed need money to pay for the workers in public services in order to maintain the well-being of society. Such services cannot be provided without taxing the income professionals. For instance, developed countries like the United States and Canada are taxing an average of 18% to 20% of their citizen's salaries as it is reasonable because the policymakers cannot always rely on the support of other countries. \n\nAdditionally, if the masses are not paying taxes, it would contribute a huge burden to the state budget. In other words, authorities do not have a significant source of income to manage their budget while providing such free facilities to their countrymen. Therefore, they are pushed into a situation to continuously seek financial aid from wealthy nations which leads to a financial crisis. For example, India introduced a taxation policy in 1890 after they were impacted by a huge economic downturn. \n\nIn conclusion, although some proponents argue that people should refrain from paying taxes, I believe that citizens should pay at least a certain percentage of their salary to the state for the services they use as well as to balance the budget for societal benefits.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "many people believe that our environment is nurtured by international cooperation,however,some people think that they show interest in world business. Here i will write about some facts which are related to both views. Firstly, the advantages of cooperative institutions are providing protection to the environment by giving advertisements related to pollution-free nature by producing and marketing vehicles and other products which are less pollution-free. For instance, some vehicles run by electricity and less air pollution are achieved. In addition , they initiated to sustain nature by preventing deforestation are considerably successful in later years. However, electric vehicles cannot be afforded by commoners mainly those who have whitecollar jobs. So, we may consider that these cooperative institutions are widely focusing on their business itself. for example, marketing and advertising a product cost much irrespective of its benefits. Furthermore, to maintain a business and for a further ,development they need to focus on income as well. In conclusion, all the cooperative world businesses are indeed focusing on environmental benefits ,hence, they need enough capital to sustain as well.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I think computers good bad effects people Some people sit around day playing games lazy Other people actually use computers things need Also people need computers jobs I agree people spend day front computers spending less time exercising Would rather play games day instead spending quality time family friends Not I would much rather friends outside family picnic park lake For people though story much different Some people need computers advances technology everyday life A lot jobs today require use computer example working bank use computers day I also think students rely computers work A lot students type reports things school computers Students also use computers look information The internet good source students I know internet come handy school projects maybe something simple looking word I also see people dont really care advaces technology computers Some people dont need anything probably thinking people way much To I honestly find computers useful I talk online family I hope liked opinion computers remember useful peopleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College has been around for a long time. The Electoral College is a process which consists of the counting of the electoral votes by Congress, meetings of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the selection of electors. It consists of a total of five hundred and eight electors and a majority of two hundred and seventy votes are required for presidency. Electors are choosen by the candidates political party. When voting for presidential elections, you are also voting for your candidates electors too.\n\nWhen the presidential elections are complete the govenor prepares a \"Certificate of Ascertainment\" which lists all the candidates who ran for President and the names of all the electors and it also tells who won the presidency and the electors that will represent your state. The state conventions, state partys central comitee, and the presidential candidates, all pick the electors.\n\nEven though the electoral college is such and organized process of completing task; it is a disaster factor, it is unfair against voters. The electoral college requires a presidential candidate to be choosen. It can be argued that the electoral college methods of choosing electors is bad. Obama is the president of the United States. Romney is a republican that went against Obama in the presidential election of 2012. Obama had a plurality against Romney, meaning he recieved more votes than Romney but did not recieve a clear majority of votes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author welcoming warm The author makes want able smell good food Also able appreciate cuban cultureSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my point of view on driverless cars is not that much of a good idea. You can never put your whole trust in a car. Its a nice and some what smart but technology can fail once again. So many new laws will come by not just for the driverless cars but also for all kinds of car.\n\nMy first reason to my opinion on \"Driverless cars\" coming our way is bad. I say that because then the people already having issues with others driving in the streets with and with out drivers license would have more trouble. Also the people driving will have to be more extra careful. Its not such a safe idea because the road is not something to play with.\n\nAnother reason into why its not a good idea is because no matter how brand new the car is and how expensive the matierials that were used in the car is really nothing. You cant even trust the person driving. Anything at anytime could happen to the car. Its more responsibility for a driverless car. I feel like you need to have experience on a regular car first then own a driverless car.\n\nMy last reason to why its a bad idea too is because of kids around you in other cars. I feel like there would be actually more accidents coming our way. If you cant handle a wheel on a regurlar car there no point into having advanced experince into something more different. Laws will make a change soon and more cops around us. None of that is worth it if we had more good drivers and none lazy people around us.\n\nThose are my reasons to why I feel like there should not be nomore technical things especially on cars. To me thats really dumb and unnessisary. This is only my opinion. Maybe to the kids growing up with everything will think its a good idea because it seems easier. As I grow up I see how people invent things that are not even worth to be in this world. Causes more accidents in the streets then there already is. Then again its only my opinion. Do you think its a smart idea of having \"Driverless cars\"?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock The first says building s foundation stress thousandfoot dirigible docking For example A thousandfoot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress building s frame The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation The second says s really dangerous take place building For example When German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey May owners Empire State Building realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area downtown New York CAPS says winds top building strong For example The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast In conclusion still face many obstacles idea let dirigibles dock top building hardly become trueSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that driverless cars are a fantisy. they wont ever happen, if they do they wont last. Some people like to just drive. Not everyone will use driverless cars. Do you still have to pay them? Whats the point if you have to pay them, gas would be cheaper if you just had your own car. You pay twenty dollars to fill up your tank. you could go to one place about ten times with that twenty dollars. For these Driverless Cars, do you have to pay five dollars everytime you go somewhere. Lets say you go to that one place ten times in a driverless car. You would be paying fifty dollars to go to that place. No ones driving the car, but if you hit someone, is it still our fault? Is it the cars fault? They have sensors, but what happens when those sensors stop working, because nothing works forever. If the car gets into an acciedent and you get seriously injured, are you allowed to sue for the making of driverless cars, or is it still our fault? They dont even know how driverless the cars are. if we still drive it, then it isnt driverless right? they are just trying to put a name on something to charge more money than its worth, if you still are in some what control of the car it isnt much driverless is it? They say that the car will need human skills in certian areas. Are we supposed to watch the road the whole time so we know when to drive some people might not feel the vibration. Whats the point of driverless cars if we still have to drive them?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Mars Face has been a popular topic for ages. People still argue about if its an alien artifact or just a nutural formation on Mars. Some people are thinking NASA is just lying. Some people at NASA wish that they had found evidence of alien life.\n\nThe Mars Face is a natural landform known as a mesa. These landforms are commun throughout the west part of America. These landforms are formed by plate tectonics. There are a lot of landforms on Earth that are the same as the Mars Face.\n\nThe face got its look from shadows. The Viking 1 spacecraft did not have a high level of technology. The space age has developed lots of technology since the 1970's. I mean they just got a man on the moon a few years prior to the Viking 1. So in 1998 a high level camera did fly over and take very graphic and detailed pictures of the Face showing it's just a landform. Since the technology level wasn't very good in 1976 they couldn't zoom in like the Mars Orbiter Camera Team did, so the shadows were apparent there and not in the 1998 photograph. The pixel size is greater in the 2001 photo than the 1976. The reson the face appeared was because of the technology level back in 1976 they Viking 1 couldn't zoom in far enough to get past the shadows.\n\nWith this evidence I hope you're convinced there are no aliens on Mars or ever was. NASA would be estactic if they found alien life. The Face is not an alien made memorial or artifact. The Face is a natural landform that occurs on our own planet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone different views works literature wheather books magazines movies music If libraries removes stuff shelves would loosing business would loosing children would taking away reason shelves These libraries would loosing business people maybe like kind stuff The people running business decide take older pieces work offend younger people generation The stuff wrote sang played things harm people The things harm people show people younger generations life lived older days slaves This would play roll children use library also If literature taken children think things always way see If children grew see book hear song watch movie things olden days much changed never believe taught children As older still never interest learn types things never knew growing These things wrote teach people children things used used harm people When people take things harmful getting true meaning author mind wrote Libraries keep peices literature shelves teach young people world came older relatives lived cameSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people claim that luck is the most crucial element contributing to a person's success. While I accept that luck does have an important role in helping people reach their targets, I would argue that hard work and determination are much more crucial factors leading to the achievement of an individual. On the one hand, I agree that luck can be an important factor. First, some people are fortunate enough to be born in a wealthy family, which allows them to have better education or to easily start their own business without having to borrow money from someone else. As a result, these people tend to have better opportunities to succeed than those coming from poor families. Furthermore, some individuals are lucky to be given great talents which others do not have. For example, Mozart was able to play music when he was very young, or Lionel Messi already had great football skills when he was born. However, I would argue that although luck can be necessary, it is not the most crucial a factor leading to success. Firstly, people need to work really hard and put much effort into their jobs if they want to be successful. For instance, before becoming one of the best football players in the world, Cristiano Ronaldo had to go through intense training hours every day for many years. Secondly, a person is less likely to reach his targets if he does not have determination. On the way leading to success, there might be many difficulties, and people need to keep moving forward to overcome those challenges. In conclusion, while I agree that luck is important to some extent in helping people become successful, I believe that hard work and determination are the most important elementsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Plants and species are affected by human activities. A large number of people think that we do not have much time to protect plants and species, whereas others say that effective actions would improve this worst condition. This essay agrees that practical efforts from the authorities would improve this worst circumstance.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, plants and species are already endangered position due to human activities and we do not have much time to protect these creatures. For example, Indian white tigers are endangered wild animals because of poaching which means these animal's skin and teeth are in huge demand in the black market, thus, now we have very few of these animals. To be more precise, forests were altered into people's accommodation places while wild animals lost their motherland and were captivated in zoos. Therefore, there is no time to protect these species because we already destroyed them.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there is a chance to conserve these species by effective actions from the government. Strict punishment should be implemented who poaching wild animals and many forest officers should be appointed to retain them. For instance, the black market should be monitored by the local forest officers and residents to avoid illegal hunting. In addition, people should build houses only the residential locations besides forests and wild areas; the ruling party also should provide permission to build apartments only in residential places. Hence, these are the effective measures that can improve this worst circumstance.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, wild creatures are affected by human activities like cutting trees and building more flats in forest spaces, so adverse situations cannot be solved because we do not have much time to do anything, although strict rules against poachers and occupying wild places to build flats from the ruling party this situation should improve. Therefore, I agree that strict rules can be improved.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mesa on Mars\n\nWho or what created this \"face\" on Mars? Was it aliens, or just nature doing its thing? The answer has been debated ever since it was discovered and the truth has been found. Although there's proof out there like the picture that was taken ten times better than the Viking's pictures, skilled scientist themselves don't even think it could be made by aliens, and there are similar landforms on Earth some people still find ways to argue. These people might say \"the markings were hidden under the haze, but just as much as that could be true it could also be wrong. This \"face\" was created by none other than Mother Nature herself.\n\nTo start, the pictures taken in 1998 and 2001 were much clearer than the original Viking pictures and unmask the face for what it really is. In \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" it states, \"...Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten time sharper than the original Viking photos.\" To illistrate, the article is saying that this new picture was so much better and much more revealing. The day this picture was taken (April 5, 1998) was completely cloudless. This means that there couldn't have been any alien markings hidden somewhere. Garvin said, \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size...\" He's hinting that even small things that show us there was civilization there could've been seen in this picture. To conclude, the new picture was proof to the world that this was just a landform.\n\nNot only did a picture tell us this was no sign of alien life on Mars, but so did skilled scientists. When the picture was first taken, \"scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\" We all know that scientists know their stuff so why doubt them? Their first intsinct was that it was just another landform, so why can't we all just agree with them and get on with our lives to worry about something more important? Even the caption for the picture (when it was released for everyone to see) noted that it was just a huge rock formation. So why can't we just see this \"face\" for what it is?\n\nLastly, there are landforms on Earth just like it. They're called mesas or buttes. Garvin says that \" It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the face of Mars.\" If these landforms can naturally occur on Earth can't they also occur on Mars? Garvin sees that this landform is just like something we have at our own home.\n\nSome people might say that when the picture was taken of the \"face\" in 1998 that it was probably cloudy that day and some alien markings were probably just covered up by the clouds. They must have done a lot of research because normally April is a cloudy time on the Red Planet, but that day was completely clear and \"sunny\". These people might just be the kind who believe in the supernatural and say that they've been \"obducted by aliens\". There is much more proof to this face being a natural landform compared to it being a alien made landmark. Where one side would say that \"scientists don't believe there is a chance of this\" the other side would say it was cloudy the day that picture was taken. Overall, there is no excuse for the fact that this is naturally occuring.\n\nAll in all, this face is a natural landform that has nothing to do with extra terrestrial life on Mars. There is proof behind it like the picture taken in 1998, the fact that actual scientists don't think there's any chance of it being alien related, and there are landforms like this one on Earth called a butte or mesa. All of these things proove that not only was \"the Face of Mars\" just a natural forming landform. Will you know the real cause of something like \"The Face of Mars\" next time you see one?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Alot things found offensive days mean take away others enjoy Everyone view opinon things For things people find offensive I believe simply stay away No I believe certain materials removed library shelves Somethings people find offensive others might enjoy Its simple comes point people causing problems maybe people work libraries Yes alot things people take offensive dose mean take away things others enjoy I many libraries life I really seen anything offensive I seen books movies adults Honestly eyes simple something find offensive stay away others enjoy Its weather materials removed library shelves Although I believe people find things offensive stay away You take things consideration jumping straight conclusionsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A studying of a Venus is a worthy persuit despite danger because the authors explain many things about Venus and how Venus is also one of the brightest points in the night sky. The authors provide that Venus is actually a planet and Venus is\n\nthe scond planet from our sun in solar system. The author supports the ideas very well by explaining how they works and how challenging.\n\nThis is a challenging exploring because the author provide the texts from the article is that \"Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.'' This is shown that it is challenging for us human to explorings. Some of the reasons it is challenging because for a good reason there was no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours and why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Venus has the hottest surface tempperature of any planet in our solar system. I believe that Venus is a challenging planet for us humans to study and not easy conditions but we are still trying.\n\nThis is not going to be easy for us to studying that but we are still trying to exploring about our Venus. Venus is like our planet because the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes fimiliar features such as valleys, moutains, and craters. Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and they could supported various from of life. I believe that we can be try to studying about Venus and try to learn about it because in the articles is saids that \"Many researchers are working on innvations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\" This show that we have a chances to study about our Venus.\n\nThis exploring challenge can worthy because NASA is working on the other approaches to studying Venus. They are trying to create machines that can be resistant and the ideas that they trying to recreate is from the old technology called mechanical computers. The mechanical computer is a devices that can make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. The ideas of NASA is to create part of machines that can resistant of pressure, heat , and other forces. I believe this is going to be succed for us to study venus even though it is going to be cahllenging for us. If the recreation is succed we can exploring and learn about the Venus and our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The challenge of exploring Venus they sent people to go discover it and it is really close to Earth it's closer than any other planet's. Venus is called Evening star it's one of the brightest points of the light in the night sky. It is going to talk about how it is going to be different there and it's simple to see from earth because it is kinda close.\n\nThe National Aeronautics and space administraion(NASA) has an idea of sending humans to go explore Venus to see how it is there. They want to study it so they know how life works there so scientists could know about it. NASA possible solutiin to the hostile conditions on the surface Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. The temperatures woild still be hot at around 170 degrees fahrenheit but the pressure would be close to sea level from earth.\n\nNASA is going to be working on studying venus like some simplified electronics of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulatiing the chaos of venus's surface. So they can get an idea how it is going to be when they get to the surface so they will be ready because they already did some testes for that. The only thing it only lasted for Three weeks in conditions.\n\nThere is another project from an old techology called mechanical computers. Computers existing in 1800s may sound shocking but they calulations by using gears and levers they dont not require electroics at all. Now we have computers that are more powerful, flexible, and quick but they tend to delicate when it comes up to extreme physical comditions.\n\nTo meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of its insight to be gained on the planet itself. Humans will lead us into many equal intimidating endeavors. On earth shouldn't be limited by dangers and doubts to expanded.\n\nNASA should just study it more to see if there is any danger that can cause to humans. They should do more testes and try out new things and not to be scared of it because if they don't study it well and send people to live there they might now live the best. So NASA did a good thing about sending people to study venus. They will know now what they could had done better for the next time they send humans back there again.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports and suggests the exploration and study of venus in several ways, despite the dangers and complications.\n\nFirst, they give very well described detail on venus. like how its name is misleading, and other interesting details about the so called planet to make the reader more interested on what they are reading.\n\nNext, They explain what the so called planet holds. Like 97% of carbon dioxide according to the text, as well as how it can relate to earth in a few ways as well as differ from it.\n\nthey then question why the so called planet hasnt be well discovered, and give more on the so called planet's surface.\n\nFinally, The author gives information from NASA like how they are working on ways to study it despite the challenges. The text also states that the harsh conditions are not the easiest but are survivable.\n\nIn all, the author has a set goal in mind and strongly belives we can explore the so called planet through trial and era, as well as motovation and willpower.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Car usage in the United States has gone down by nine percent since 2005. But we are not the only ones who have limited ourselves to decrease air pollution. Large cities around the world like Paris and Vauban have insistuted car free days to help keep the air clean. Carpooling or even riding a bicycle has become more and more popular. People are no longer desiring to live in suburban areas, they want to be near the city. They are becoming more active and less stressed. Limited car usage has caused people venture away from their normal actvities and try new things.\n\nDriving deprives you of the beauty of civilization. Weather it be that your missing the lights and crowded sidewalks full of random people in a huge city or small town full of trees and land marks, you are missin tout. You can not enjoy the air and sounds or all of the sights in your car through the windows. One Columbian ,Carlos Arturo, states that car free days are a good opportunity to take away stress. Taking a breahe of fresh air every now and again is exremely nessicary but we what will we do when we have polluted the air so much that there is no more fresh air left to take in?\n\nLimited car usage would also encorage people to be more active. They would have to walk eberywhere they wanted to go. This would possibly decrease America's obesity rates.\n\n\"Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city,\" is says in paragraph 28 of source three: Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota. Having a healthy nation would help with so much more than anone could imagine.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think certain book movies magazines music removed libraries found offensive I believe libraries rid shelves offensive material What really makes something offensive If someone tell looked I ve lost weight I would find offensive The person would nt meant way though Although I would found slighly rude another person found nice compliment With logic one really conclude anything truely offensive By saying something offensive re stating opinion Even nt everyone else s everyone intitled opinions equality something people find important Because one person s definiton offensive nt held higher another s If rid libraries offensive material exactly would d making one person s definition offensive superior another person s I also believe libraries get rid offensive material would probably getting rid lot interesting material Let s use religious beliefs example I Basically I believe CAPS If someone write book religion I would find interesting Some find offensive though So library got rid book someone found offensive I would nt want go often When I go library I want find book I d enjoy reading If material found offensive taken library would really anything left If I doubt many people would find interesting I also believe taking book shelf find offensive would nt offending author As I said everyone intitled opinions Because libraries allow authors speak minds By taking books shelves d offending They took time effort think write book offend taking shelf d controdicting entire purpose removing shelf In conclusion I believe nothing truely defined offensive Also people able speak minds Therefore libraries attempt rid shelves offensive materialSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear think good bad The good teaches people places people live soicty get food raise kids It also help people like cops Because person looking computer look It also help cops speeder see done befor It helps teaches get lesson line teach put line help typeing Yes dose positive effect people So people think lot better around computer best work online Like say high school paper Yes talk people online get friends On hand computers bad meet people online nt know person come They might long crimal They might want get troble family problems Some people spend much time computer meet one rally like nt worry family want So people use work every day talk friend night day stop forget never start agine Some people stay stay computer got playing baceball football going family reunionsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason I think that people should become a part of the seagoing cowboys program is because it helps people. It helps people by helping them get there food recovered . The story shows this on (pagaph 2) it says \"to help these contries recover their food supplies\". Also the (UNRRA) helps people get their animals. Another way the (UNRRA) help people is by also helping people be more aprecaitive what they have. The story shows this on (paragaph 9 ) it says \" It made me more aware of people of other contries and thier needs.\"\n\nAlso I people should join seagoing cowboys because it is not just helpin people. On (paragraph 5 ) it says \"I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and china.\" Also on (pagraph 5) it says that\n\n\"But seeing acropolis in Greece was special .\" On (paragraph 5) it also says\n\n\" so was taking a gondola ride in Venice.\" One mor eway that the (UNRRA) is not just help people is \"Luke also toured an excavated casle in crete(Paragraph5).\n\nThe seagoing cowboys also is not just working all the time. On (pagraph 8) it The cowboys played base ball. \" Also they cowboys also played \"volleyball game in the emty holes\" (paragraph 8. ) Cowboy also played table tennis and fencing . one more thing that te cowboys did for fun was read ,whitttling and played games. That is whi I thinks that people should join The seagoing cowboys. The seagoing cowboy can also be a life time expeirence On (paragrph 1) it says \"He knew it was an opportuity of a lifetime.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Equitable access to education can change lives as it provides financial stability and social equity worldwide. It is argued that although the younger population is educated on a priority basis, providing basic education to illiterate adults is of higher importance. Therefore, the higher governing bodies should spare some budget for this purpose. I strongly agree with the latter and believe that adults pass on their traits to their children.\n\nOn the one hand, many would disagree and feel that precedence should be given to younger people and not to grown-ups. Firstly, the youth of this day and age are deemed to be our future. Undoubtedly, if they are not educated , who will carry out all the skilled jobs that require higher institutional admissions? For example ,doctors, engineers, architects and teachers all need to gain a certain level of knowledge and information before they can carry out their job roles. As a result, they feel it is important that they are the main point of focus.\n\nOn the other hand, others think that if adults are not educated , how will they help in teaching their offspring? For instance, children are taught at school. However, when they need help with their homework, coursework or assignments, they will need to turn to their parents for guidance. Consequently, if the parents cannot read or write, it will be the child's loss. Furthermore, studies show that those parents or guardians who have a higher level of qualification , encourage their offspring to follow the same path ultimately, teaching them to take the route of higher education. Hence , it is critical that government allows some of its funds to be spent on uneducated groups of adults so that they can learn basic skills.\n\nTo conclude, education is a gift for those who attain it. I believe that even though the government should continue keeping younger people as the main focus of their educational fund, a small amount should also be spent on educating grown-ups to allow them to become independent. Thus, pass their educational qualities on to their children.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I patienceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "day books school library A librarian walks empty corridors reminising days censoring everyone told found offensive Everyones ideas different absolutely mean everyone else comply Saying someone finds book offensive pick Just nt read By pushing book taken would implying know best usually nt know best A could offended fashion magizine library simply advertiziment body wash She say something like CAPS child nt see things like demand taken library Does make sense I nt think either In addition one woman able take magazine library another man woman would believe power Censoring could become casual thing books could thrown daily Now s small scale actually took higher authorities That book would taken away schools brings us problem Should people normal citizens really decide others able read The answer definate Let s look end What happen authors wrote books banned As example I ll use What would happen series CAPS banned schools Also kids like read This taking good books away students Because someone nt believe magic threw fit That librarian beginning leaving theres books check bring back read anymore The kids go public library get books want read still discouraged reading material nt proper This nt happen Books need censored people problem book nt ruin everybodySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No to New Cars\n\nIn the article \"Drvierless Cars Are Coming\" a clear contriversy is whether cars that drive themselves are actually good or if people think they will just cause more difficult problems for the future. I think that driverless cars have more negative aspects and will not be successful in the future of technology. I believe these driverless cars will not be popular because they can not fully drive themselves, not everyone has money to spend on expensive technology or wants to, and the idea of not being in control of your own life and relying on manufactures creations to take you from point A to point B is not comforting.\n\nOne problem that occurs with driverless cars is that they really can'y fully drive themselves, so what is that really accomplishing? According to the article, \"Tesla has projected a 2016 release for\n\na car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time.\" The other 10 percent will be by the operator of the vehicle but it never specifies when that 10 percent will be. At all times the driver will have to be ready to take control over the vehicle and so it doesn't solve the probelm of texting while driving because if you're texting while the 10 percent occurs you're still in danger.\n\nAnother negative aspect of the driverless cars is the price. In paragraph 6 the author states; \"Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars. It wasn't something you could buy at Radio Shack.\" This shows that the technolgy needed to make these cars is far too expensive for the average person. In paragraph 10 the author also stated, \" Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.\" All these car companies listed are luxury cars and so is Tesla who plans to release a car in 2016. Presently you already do not see these luxury cars roaming the streets often so what is different about a luxury car that takes more techonology to drive itself and is likely to cost even more.\n\nAnother problem is not just the cost but if not every car on the road is driverless, then how can you gurantee someone else will not accidently smash your expensive driverless car. Not only does your car have the potential of crashing by itself, but another car without all these expensive radars and sensors can easily break your expensive radars and sensors. When the author says, \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-- the driver or the manufacturer?\" Not only can you injury the person in the car, but the people who are not in the driverless cars could be hurt because they have the right to be on the road just like anyone else. Another example is when the author explains, \"As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars.\" Many people are scared of the idea of self-driven cars and the states agree as well.\n\nMany people are not new with technology and do not enjoy relying on it and what driverless cars are doing is eliminating the idea of the accomplishment of driving yourself and having the freedom of enjoying the roads. Teenagers look forward to turning 16 and getting their license and driving themselves and feeling like an adult but if they still got driven around by a car instead of their parents, not a lot is different.\n\nIn conclusion, I think driverless cars are more negative than postive because they can not drive themselves, the cost is not affordable or safe, and the privileage of driving would be taken away. I can not see a future where driverless cars occupy the main roads and do not want to see the risks that they can possibly bring as well.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon challenges creating Mooring mast top foot tall building discusted In Al Smith govener time idea makeng empire state building equipted landing dock Dirigibles Throughout process builders faced many obstacles attempt allow dirigibles dock empire state building The first obstacle getting mast top building The architects could simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof CAPS If builders would cause much stress building The problem solved spending steal frame support mastHowever builders problems able solved Safety major issue dirigibles built hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flamible It would huge problem fire occured densely populated area Also dirigibles would high tied Also dirigibles land would violation existing law Therefore builders faced many obsticles unable build mastSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A life without cars sure sounds like a great idea for saving up less pollution and have less traffic jams, right? Well, that's a true fact, facing the reality that over the past few years we've had times and times again where we've polluted our own air over the repetetive over use of cars, specially because now-a-days there's way more cars being sold from car dealerships like Ford, Mercedes, Chevrolette, and etc. On the contrary, there's now been a few areas and cities in a few countries where there's been a shortage of using cars or none used at all. A life without cars can indeed help out so much more in many various occasions and issues like pollution, smog, and traffic.\n\nCar-free cities are the best ways to improve in somewhat of a way for easier transportation and reduced air pollution. For example, as said from source 1, \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\" by Elisabeth Rosenthal, on the first paragraph, \"VAUBAN, Germany-Residents of this upscale community are suburban pioneers, going where few soccer moms or commuting executives have ever gone before: they have given up on cars.\" explains how this residence from the few in Germany have made it possible to be car-free. To add more, the author, Rosenthal, from this passage also explains that Vauban contains 5,500 residents making it the most advanced experiment in low-car suburban life, in lines 4-7, pargraph 6. The main idea of this is that it's best to keeps cities, or even better whole countries car-free or low ratings of cars being used to help stop such as pollution and traffic jams.\n\nJust like Vauban, Germany is car-free some other countries do their best as well to keep their cities and border safe from the damages and difficulties cars cause. As an example of this, source 2, \"Paris bans driving due to smog\" by Robert Duffer, explains in paragraph 10, \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" As this clearly states, Paris has as well moved towards a much closer car-free city itself. Reason for this partial driving ban is because of smog caused by the pollution of cars, this explained on paragraph 17 on source 2 as the author, Duffer, says, \"Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals... [last] week Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London, Reuters found.\" In comparison, soruce 3, \"Car-Free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\" by Andrew Selsky, explains how Bogota, Colombia in has a car-free day for devoiding traffic jams. As a few perks that were gained from this car-free day, in pargraph 28, said are: \"Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the contemporary era, a noticeable shift in family planning has emerged and a growing number of individuals have a tendency is have their offspring at a later stage. I believe there are numerous benefits such as they can spend quality time together and preparing mentally, a financially better for their children.\r\n\r\n First and foremost, one of the pivotal reasons why individuals delay parenthood is the aspiration of young couples to spend quality time together before they must devote all of their attention to the baby. Subsequently, they can enjoy their life more with one another and can be able to understand each other. In addition, they can prepare carefully mentally before entering a new position and learn more knowledge before becoming parents. Therefore, young parents no longer be sluggish in looking after their children and taking care of them in the best way. For instance, some Western researchers said that having more understanding before childbirth can lead to lower chances of divorce after having babies and can take good care of them. \r\n\r\n On the other hand, a number of individuals who concentrate on their careers first and then have babies can bring their kids a better quality of life such as a better education, an excellent study environment and even a luxurious life. Moreover, having offspring early can cause young inexperienced parents to get into trouble and cause financial difficulties for them. For illustration, several young Vietnamese parents would be capable of enrolling their children in private schools where they get quality education and learn other skills meanwhile, which are not available in all schools because they have prepared for parenthood for a long time before having children. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, the tendency to have children at later ages is caused by a number of factors, such as the quality of time they spend with each other and preparing financial security for parenthood. All things considered, it is my strong belief that its benefits outweigh its drawbacks.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Have ever wondered effect computers people It negative effect Computers one main reasons kids exercise become obese effect students grades isolating loved ones First kids using computers way often The result ask Since computers used daily especially young adolescents likely child become obese Researches wellknown colleges discovered kids spend two hours obese become heavier older After speaking graduate told children spend time nothing staring bright screen damage eyes spending time outside enjoying beautiful weather As consequence kids start gain body fat sitting coach staring day instead exercising My second reason computers negative effects kids harm grades After I spoke current student told reason grades drop busy etc She focus work like nt grades go low This shows even A students getting bad grades Additionally much paying attention work effect best grades This shows always going hurt academic skills My last final reason computers negative effect children harms social skills outgoing talkative individual Everytime log death trap device selfesteem becomes lower never talk friends call You sit hard chair looking electronics device going take life Also pushing loved ones away You end never spend time never call friends see keep going Furthermore mom dad tells get become cranky rude family becuase want go back favorite electronic device Do really want act way family So summing computers negative effect many young individuals reasons less time exercise harms grades able interactive people The real question though think computers negative positive effect peopleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How do you feel about the idea of a driverless or smarter car? Sounds cool right? Not to me. When i think of a driverless car i think about the \"what if's\" and how it would work. For instance what if the car malfunctions? What if it gets damaged? How does it run? To me these are all important questions.\n\nThere is the possibility of a driverless car to malfunction and be considered unsafe. What if the person in front of you suddenly stopms on the breaks and the car can not detect that? You and whomever is in the car with you could get into a crash. If an important device or moduel stops working all of the sudden you could be in trouble.\n\nWhen or if you get in an accident who are you supposed to go to or call about repairs? Do you take it to the occational repair shop? Do they have a specific repair shop for these driveless or smarter cars? Would we take it to the dealership or manufacture? Have they trained technicians to work on these types of cars in a repair shop? There is no way to know.\n\nWould these driverless cars run on gas or electricity? Does it need a special type of gas? If it runs on electricity do we have to charge it like we do our phones or any other electronic device? If we do that then the bills will go up too. Is it dual ran? Eletric and gas powered? If one runs out will the other take over? There are so many questions to be raised.\n\nI think driverless cars or smarter cars might be a bad idea because they could malfuncton at anymoment, repairing the damages may be to much, and we dont know what they run off of. There are so many \"what if's\" and uncertanties that come to mind when i hear the words \"driverless cars are coming\" in fact i get a little nervous or worried because we know nothing about them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "They say the facial expressions for each emotion are universal because even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression, the new emotion are facial movements for example the painted face from the Mona Lisa, we can identify a lot emotions as Vinci's masterpiece. Each expression is a neutral face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy,worried,sad,etc.\n\nimaginate if the computer know when your happy or sad, that well be so cool, then you know if someone is sad and you can help him or you can know if this person is happy and he make you happy two, the can be great to create new stuff like videogame tv show and all kinda things, most human comunication is nonverbal, including emotionalcomunication, so that mean the computers have to understand that too, sometimes not only moving your facial muscles make make you express your emotion but that maybe make you feel them,making that can reveal sabout the science of the emotions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays,animals and plants are drastically decreasing because of the human actions.these are very important in the planet,so In my view,authorities should take strict actions to protect plants from the human beings,but citizens think that it is too late to put restrictions as people are habituated to cut plants as well as kill animals.while others think that we should protect them.this essay will discuss both views.\r\n\r\nTo begin with,the main reason for cutting the herbs which occupy more place to grow,therefore people decided to remove the plant.the benefit of planting plant is not only gives an oxygen to us but also provides shed to all people.moreover,plants brings attraction to house.for instance,In some places people health conditions are bad due to shortage of oxygen.if they planted herbs,they would have good life.in order to overcome these issues,government put restrictions like collect money as penalty from people who try to cut the plants.\r\n\r\nOn another side,some animals play a crucial role in someone's life like dogs,cows.these days ,humans are fascinating to consume meat.therefore,animals are deteriorating day by day.although animals are very close to nature,people killed them without hesitation.at this time ,people are adopting animals as pets .because they are protect from theifs moreover they show affection towards people,therefore authority should ban meat as a result people are stop consuming meat.for example,according to survey ,population of consuming meat is more than fruits,Especially in festival days.\r\n\r\nTo conclude,it is our responsibility to protect the herbs and animals.we should try to give them importance.everyone should save plants by pouring water every day,moreover we should also treat animals as our friends.in this way the issue can be reduced.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Exploring Venus clearly has it's challenges. The exploration of an unknown area always has benefits with the information that can be uncovered, but it is almost never easy. Planets in general all hold many barriers for studying done by scientists and researchers. The author of this article suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by proving that Venus may have once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system, and that Venus is the nearest option for a planetary visit. The author also claims that The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has a solution to make visiting Venus safer.\n\nFirst of all, the author says that Venus may have once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. In the text, it says, \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" Venus is or once was clearly somewhat similar to Earth, and that will help scientists to be able to find out information about our own planet along with another planet that may seem the most reasonable to study. In the text, it also says,\"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probabnly covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" All of these characteristics of Venus make the planet more interesting and reasonable for studying. Considering the fact that the planet is very similar to Earth, the planet may also give us insight of our own planet, with the similarities that can and have already been drawn.\n\nSecondly, Venus is the nearest option for a planetary visit. In the text, it says, \"Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\" This clearly proves that studying Venus is worth the pursuit because it is not going to take as long as other planets will to get to. Traveling in space, as the author said, can take a very long time, and that makes Venus a lot more accessible than most other planets. Studying Venus cuts down a major barrier that scientists and astronomers would have to work around for many other planets, and that is time.\n\nLastly, NASA has a solution to make studying Venus safe. In the text, it says, \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray...At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" NASA's solution solves many problems with studying Venus. The many factors like air pressure, heat, and radiation are lowered to survivable numbers for humans. Without this solution from NASA, the conditions of Venus are not survivable for a time period long enough to actually gain any information about the planet. In the text, it also explains that scientists and researchers would need to get up closer in order to actually gain insight about the planet. Although this is true, NASA is working on other solutions like simplified electronics made of silicon carbide that can last for up to three weeks in the conditions of Venus. All of these solutions can help to make studying Venus less risky and dangerous, and therefore worth the risk.\n\nIn conclusion, studying Venus provides a true challenge to scientists, researchers, and more. The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" provides evidence to researchers and scientists that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because Venus is or was very similar to Earth. The author also says that Venus is accessible because of it's distance from Earth and the time it would take to reach it. The author also provides NASA's solutions to the dangers of studying Venus. The advantages of studying Venus have been proven, but much must be done before any up close studying will occur.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While cars have made our lives so much simpler in the aspect of transporting ourselves efficiently, there are a few drawbacks. Some cities have made efforts to reduce these drawbacks. Limiting car usage cuts down on pollution and saves money but makes transportation less efficient.\n\nLimiting car usage cuts down on pollution. An example of this is in Paris when they had a smog problem, \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" Paris had a smog problem, and limiting car usage prved to be an effective solution. Another example of limiting car usage cutting down on pollution is in Bogota, Colombia. They had a car-free day to reduce smog. \"…cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million.\" Colombia has a day without cars to cut down on air pollution. This has beed proven to be an effective solution to smog.\n\nClearly, living without cars is not only a vision of environmentalists, it's a reality. Cars could eventually no longer be needed if more countries support this movement. If this creative, clean craze hits America, we might have a future that is a breath of fresh air.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted builders Empire State building faced problems attempting allow dirigibles dock one first problems faced safety Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable Lsted The builders would keep mind The next obstacle faced nature winds The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents NUM The winds would major problem builders would face unpredictable Lastly builders worry law pertaining airships flying low urban areas This law would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach area NUM The builders Empire State Building face difficulties safety nature law attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State BuildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ended story last paragraph spring time comes geese return shell feel better go take test focus testSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It certainly cannot denied that machines are very Common in this thechnical era people are depened on these devices. Electronic Gadgets replacing human each and every field. This has some positive effects on us, however, due to this some people \"face problems. In upcoming paragraphs I will give proper explanations and describe it's positve and negative effects on people.\r\n\r\nTo start with, machines are seen everywhere humans are defened on them. For example, this fast growing world has need of fast equipment that do work within a second and these electronic devices fulfil public's need. It saves people’s time and money because one device is equal to hundreds of employer. Apart from this, electronic Equipment has no further demand of salary and other facilities as well. Moreover, machines are work in every season and weather.For instance, workers take live in rainy season and Winters but machines are work very well in both cases.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, electronic devices have some negative effects on environment because it is not only pollute environment. but also it pollute river bodies and other natural resources.Furthermore all electronic equipments are very expencive, so some development countries are not buy them. Moreover, most of labours in companies are illitrate and they have no pervious knowledge to use these devices due to this they face problems and some time they lost their lives. Lastly, using devices in Companies are the main reason of unemployment or this development lead poverty among young workers.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, electronic equipments replace by hand workforce that further lead unemployment in country and make their citizen poor. on the other side replacing manual workforce into machines save huge amount of time and money. Do not overlook the other side this prompt but the disadvantages are far more than advantages.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this modern-day society, big shots have a tendency to become well-known owing to their fortune rather than their accomplishments, which has detrimental impacts on the youth. As far as this argument goes, I strongly support the viewpoint for the following reasons.\n\nTo begin with, It goes without saying that admiring those bad models may turn teenagers into pragmatists. Indeed, by being influenced by those big shots, the youth will have a tendency to judge other people by their looks and their possessions rather than their talents. For instance, my friend Duy said that he only made friends with people who had good outfits or looked rich and fancy. Given his stance, Duy was boycotted by his classmates and he ended up having no friends for his entire high school years. \n\nFurthermore, those bad celebrities will inculcate bad outlooks into victims’ feeble minds. Apparently, teenagers will embrace the idea of spending money haphazardly due to watching their idols, depriving them of insights into the importance of money. As a typical example, my acquaintance gradually became a spendthrift after spending three hours a day watching his idol’s videos and following in his footsteps. Moreover, he always indulged himself in buying accessories and sports cars on a whim, making his parents sell their house in order to fulfil their son’s pastime. \n\nIn a nutshell, I pen down by reconfirming that I do support the idea of claiming that people who become well-known thanks to their money and glamour but their talents and achievements have detrimental impacts on teenagers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nThe Electoral College should be changed to election by popular vote. I say this because, as successful as the Electoral College has been, it has many flaws. In the first sentence of the eleventh paragraph, the article mentions something called the disaster factor. This is an alarming possiblity. State legislatures are, in a way, responsible for choosing electors who may ignore the will of the people.\n\nDuring 1960, in the Louisiana legislature, people titled Segregationists almost succeeded in removing the Democratic electors and replacing them with new electors. These new electors were supposed to oppose John F. Kennedy so that any popular votes for Kennedy would not have really gone to him. If those Segregationists had succeeded in their plan, John F. Kennedy would not have won the popular vote. That was indeed a close call, and it could happen yet again in the near future without fail. On another similar topic, \"faithless\" electors have, from time to time, denied the option to vote for their party's candidate. Instead of voting for the candidate of their own party, they cast a vote for whomever they wish.\n\nAlso occuring in 1960, a state sent two slates of electors to Congress. Vice President Richard Nixon validated only his opponent's electors. Thankfully, he was presiding over the Senate at the time. He made sure to validate the slate of his choosing \"without establishing a precedent.\", as stated in paragraph eleven, sentence 9. Hopefully, this will not occur again anytime soon.\n\nThe most worrying occurance would be a tie. However, if a tie were to happen in an electoral vote, the election would be thrown towards the House of Representatives. There, the state delegations vote on the president. In 1976, a tie would have happened if 5,559 voters from Ohio and 3,687 voters from Hawaii had voted the other way. This is bad because the election is only a few voters away from a distaster. In conclusion, the Electoral College is not only unfair, but outdated and irrational. It should be shifted from the way it is now to total amount of popular votes for the president of the United States.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The future is a huge thing that manny people plan on having to be big. New technology, devices, transportation, homes, and many other things that make life easy will eventuually be turned into something more advanced. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. As for my opinion, I believe these driverless cars should be made even with a few difficulties, these cars are possible to be driven as the future developes.\n\nAs the article begins, it asks, \"Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore?\" and when I think about that question, my response is, yes. I could imagine a time, the time of the future, where everything is advanced and especially the use of transportation. The article explains how others have been fascinated of driverless cars as well and quotes, \"Television and movies have long been fascinated with cars that could drive themselves.\"\n\nCar companies started to wondering on how to create driverless cars and many start off with computer driven cars or something simple. \"In the late 1950s, General Motors created a concept car that could run on a special test track. Engineers at Berkeley tried something similar, but they used magnets with alternating polarity. These smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" Not many were successful but that didn't stop other companies from trying.\n\nFor any type of car, safety was the most important thing and driverless cars will obviously have that as well. As cars began to advanced, so did their safety. Sensors were created, video cameras on the rearview mirror and many other kind of sensors. \"Sensors are nothing new, of course. In the 1980s, automakers used speed sensors at the wheel in the creation of antilock brakes. Within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-contril skids or rollovers.\" The creation of new cars were in the minds of many engineers and even until now many more ideas are being brought, tested and invented. \"Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\n\nDriverless cars are possible and clearly can be safe to use. Many are just waiting on the law for the approval. As soon as these cars are able to be used, the future is creeping its way up on huamanity. Many are being tested and it's only a matter of time for the future to happen and I could imagine how the world will be with driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed by certain individuals that families have the strongest influences on a child's evolution and others said there are different factors affecting it. Both sides of the argument will be discussed in this essay, followed by my own perspective on this matter.\r\n\r\nIn one hand, in this technology era, we cannot deny the role of TV or friends in children's social and cognitive increase in both positive and negative directions. In today's sophisticated era, it is difficult to avoid children's daily activities from the influence of various existing technologies. For example, a child cannot be separated from entertainment called television, which is the film or series he watches on TV channels. They saw how the actors acted as heroes to fight crime. However, it is often to see fighting scenes are shown, as the result, the children bring them to real life and injure their friends .\r\n\r\nIn the other hand, parents are a place where the children spend most of their time. Parents' role in guiding and encouraging the advancement of their children cannot be underestimated. To illustrate, parents are role models for their children almost in every aspect of life. In addition, they will advise and direct their children when they behave defiantly. Paying special attention to education and serving nutritious food are concrete examples that we always encounter .\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, every part in children's life has impact on their developments, whether the parent's, television and friends. However, I believe that parents' impacts on their children's improvement were most heavy than other effects.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, the author says that Venus is a dangerous planet and many efforts to get on the surface without damage beyond repair hasn't happen yet. He also tells the reader about why its dangerous with the evidence of 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets with clouds that are highly corrosive silfiric acid. Not to mention that Venus has the hottest suface temperature of any planet with the average degree over 800 fahrenheit. This temperture would surely destory any object we send. With the dangers it seems that the author is saying that it would be a waste of time to go and research the planet that is just a waste land of heat. Then the author says that it might be not be a bad idea to go and research the planet and he provides evidence and research. I agree with this option and can provide evidence just like the author did.\n\nThe first thing is that the planet Venus has few or used to have features that are close to the Earth. One was that it used to have been covered by many oceans. With features that could have supported life just like our planet Earth. Some of the features are still around on Venus that are similar to Earth's features. WIth the chance of the moving to another planet, Venus being that it's our closest planet. When we need to move to another planet we can use Venus as a replacement of Earth. With this reseach we yet don't have the capable means of hitting the surface. NASA has made a plan of not hitting the surface but being close enough to reseach the planet more by using a machine to hover over the planet which gives us limited reseach since we can't take samples of rocks, gas and other items of the surface. We also made computers that can last enough that we can get something out of it if we develop it enough to make it last enough for major reseach. With other mechical computers that can make it to the surface can help us too.\n\nSince we have the reseach to make it maybe the main reason to keep going there is to learn more about our galxay and how it was form into what is now our home. This challenge can help not to just learn more but to travel more throughout the universe and show us that we can't be limited by the dangers of the harsh conditions and to make the people better than they are already are.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Making Mona Lisa Smile\n\nIn The article \"Making The Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto how the new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions that this new technology is valuable.\n\nThe Mona lisa demonstration really intended to bring a smile to your face this while just imagine how a computer knows when you're happy or sad thats crazy. For example, if you smile as soon as a web ad appears on the screen another ad will follow. Lets say that you frown the next ad will be different from the one you smiled on. Another thing a classroom computer can know when students are becoming to be confused or bored.\n\nHow the start of the porcess is when the computer contracts a 3-D computer model of the face all of the 44 major muscles on the model must have move like human muscles. Eckamn has classified six emotions for example anger, surprise, fear, sadness and happiness. Movement for more than one muscle is called a unit.\n\nIn fact us human perfrom this impressive called calculation we use it everyday. For example, you could tell how your friend is feeling by looking at his or her face. most us would have trouble describing each others facial trit that makes us happy or worried. Yet Dr. Huang observes artist like Leonardo Da Vinci he studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles to have enough convey specific type of emoitions.\n\nHowever the new technology is valuable by telling you how what are your human emotions. For example a classroom computer can show when a student is bored or getting confused. Also it can classified six different motions. Therefore this New technology is valuable for the students in classrooms.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars in the future would be fantastic. I believe they will help alot of people out. Companies are even making computer-driven cars all ready. This cars would probably sell very fast and easy. They will make a big inpact on humans in the future. Anyway why would anyone want a driverless car?\n\nThere's many different reason why humans would want this car\n\nI think they would want a driverless car because you wouldn't have to drive your self. Especially if your tired and been busy all day. There would be great equitment in the car for them to use when in the car. The sensors will help them out too. The driverless car will also have a video camera,a GPS recevier and an inertial motion sensor. People would love all that stuff in their car. This driverless car would change driving for ever.\n\nThat why i'm agreeing with driverless cars. This would be a perfect invention in the future. Everyone would love this care very much. I just think it would help out a lot of people who's busy and works alot. This would change how car aceidents happen and more. This is why i thing anyone would want a driverless car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am honestly against driveless cars. Driverless cars takes alot of techonolgy just for it to be able to be used. I can't say driverless cars are just so bad but as in my oppinon I would never want a driverless car and these are the reason of why I wouldnt ever see myself in a driverless car.\n\nDriverless cars needs to much technology just for it to work and still with all of that technology you still have to steer the wheel. The cars takes about half of fuel today that taxis and buses use. Also I wouldnt want a driverless car because its way to exspensive for the car when its not all the way certain to work. It states in paragraph 9 in the second sentence that \"Presently, traffic laws are written the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" So why would i want a car that is not for sure safe to be putting myself into? Also if the technology wasnt to work all the way and i was to get injured that would be my fault for trying something new that took to much stuff to even work.\n\nDont get me wrong driverless cars does have some type of good use like when there is a crash or you are about to get in a crash the car can warn you. But safety is still better from a human to me. In plus you can save alot more money just driving yourself instead of buying a car that has camars in all. The reason I bring up camars is because why would someone in front of your car want camars pointing at there car. There is still work needed on a driveless car anyways so as for myself I wouldnt take the risk of getting one.\n\nSO yeah the driverless cars are pretty neat but there just not something anybody should want to get. Who wants to have to depend on alot of technology just for a car? Also why would someone want to pay so much money for a car thats not even proven to be safe. I know I wouldnt want to ever have to depend on a driverless car to be safe. I hope after you read my reason of why not to get a driverless car you think twice about getting one yourself.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am very much for the use and development of driverless cars.\n\nIt is the only a very sensable and useful step of the progression in technology.\n\nTomas Edison, inventer of the lightblub, once said, \"I did not fail at creating the lightblub 300 times, I just found out how to not make a lightbulb 300 times.\"\n\nI am using this same understanding against this prompt that was given to me through the State Education Deparment.\n\nEven with the possible risks of developing these self-driven cars, there is still a need to do so in order for the progession of development.\n\nThere is a general desire for cars, and this desire creates a extremely large billion dollar market.\n\nUnderstanding that this market is avalible for retail there will be a most unsquiset interest to develop such market.\n\nThis neccessity has already been partically filled by our good friends at Google and, unexpectedly, BMW.\n\nHowever, the inautorable question still remains unanswered.\n\nIs this need justified?\n\nOf course it is justified, espeicially since the job has yet to be asserted correctly and efficiently. There might be copious amount of insidents on the road in conjested areas such as contruction, but someone might just need to fail three hundred times in order to succeed.\n\nThese provoking accidents will be an issue, but they are issues in the future in which will be asserted in the future.\n\nThere are as many pros and there is cons in this senario.\n\nthe word technology is vaugely defined as something that helps humans.\n\nAll we have done in the past million years is creating a atmosphere of better living.\n\nOnce these engineers take driving out the picture, it will make life esaier and more efficient.\n\nSome people take a twenty minute drive to school or work every single day, and, assuming they drive back to their ressidense, that is a astounding forty minutes of nothingness that could be put to a more efficient outcome.\n\nIt is clear that a few accidents to ingender prefection will be unanswerably accepted if the media does not twist the tale.\n\nThis outcome will be certain if we like it or not, because of the excesive demand i explained in paragraph two. However, I will reiterate it becuase of how undeniable the circumstance is.\n\nIf humans fight it or not the progession of such driverless cars will be produced.\n\nI am for this exposer and will support it completely in its faults unlike the story of what Peter did to Jesus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I essays features setting affect cyclist giving hope The cyclist takes directions old men porch The directions seem incorrect first The remains Grape Juice factory make seem like never find civilizationSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars is that they aren't a good idea. A driverles car is a car that should have no driver in it, but from what we have learned in the past, that's something that we've tried buit it didnt really succed. There's laws, Driving and Assisting involed that we should take to consideration.\n\nLaws on Driverless cars are that the driver should always be on the wheel. Automarkers assum that the problem would be solved later in the furture but really it should be solved now. If someone's life was put on danger due to the automarkers testing care that would not be a lawsuit on their shoulders. If the technology fail, the manufacturer should have the fault. Whoever bought the car was told that it was either safe, tested, and a SMART car. As new traffic laws are made, the car has to be upgraded constintly. More money on a car that you don't even drive.\n\nDriving a Driverless car just doesn't add up From what we learned in the past, is that the driver would be alert to assist the driverless car. What if the alert system malfunctions and the car crashes. Drivers would eventually get bored of waiting for their turn to turn and assist the car. Assitsing the car shouldnt even be nessescry, it's a driverless car, no one what the car itself should be doing the work. Well, getting out the car of course it should be you doing that. On Paragraph 7, it says that none of the cars developed are completely driverless, then why give it a misleading name. Call it the Not sure if its safe , still needs your help Car.\n\nIn Conclusion, The Driverless car idea is a major flop. With new laws added, upgrading the car which will lead to more money wasted. Assisting and Driving a driverless smart car, just doesn't make sense. Having to be alerted when one day, the alert system fails and CRASH. Manufacturers themselves don't even know if its 100% safe till they get someone will to risk thier life to test a car that needs to be assisted. Who to blame when the driver gets into an accident? Driverless cars is such a misleading title for it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay mshan writes rough rodes timit cyclists overcome reach goleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against the development of driverless cars. I don't think they should develope thesess cars becasue, They still need a driver, they cause an issue with the law and they are inconvient.\n\nThe driverless cars this passage is referring to still require the drivers full attation and gidence. The passages states, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skill, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" From this statementwe see that the car needs a human to do difficult task that teh drivers are trying to advoid.\n\nThe smart cars are new to the world so there are not to many laws about them creating an unsafe enviorment. The artical states, \" As a result, in many states it is illegal even to test-coputer driven cars.\" There are four states including the Distric of Columbia that allow smart cars. The text also states, \" If the technology fails and smeone gets hurt who is at faul-t teh driver ot the manufacturer?\" This brings up a new problem. There will be endless amounts of cases having to do with recks. Today with human driven cars the driver is to blame for an accident that leads to the injury of smeone eles. There is no confussions on the matter.\n\nThe text states, \"Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting there turn to drive?\" If the driver is just having to wait for something to happen so they take over they will loose concertration. People to loose track of what tehy are doing while driving making it to where they dont have to is not such a good idea. The text also states, \"The car can handele driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but specile touch sensors make sure teh driver keeps hold of teh wheel. If the driver must keep hold of the wheel the whole time it would be like they are driving the car themselves, giving no reason for the car to be ran by a computer.\n\nI dont think they should contiune with the development of the smart cars. They still need a driver, they cause issues with the law, and they are inconvient.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the passage \"Driverless Cars Are Coming.\n\nThey have been rtying to do this for a wighle.\n\nThey have finally figured it out.\n\n,The Release. , The high demand , the more it grew.\n\nThe older forms of the car wernt fully driverless. They had to at least be around 25 mph for it to actully work.\n\nThey had it to were if the driver is not looking at the road he or she would get a vibration on their chair. Then if that didnt work the car would go into manual and so their for the driver had to take over the car.\n\nIt wasn't the most safe way but it worked.\n\nThe new car is here. But they wern't flying off the shelvs like they were predicted to. TheIr were around 4-5 states whom bought there merchindise.\n\nThey were, Clifornia, Nevada, Florida, District of columbia. theis were the only ones who would actuly try the product.\n\nThey were all satisefided and wanted more and more shipments.\n\nSo the market was all good. The new car was at its peek and was keeping drivers safe no matter what happend.\n\nThe new car was a hit!\n\nThe cars were flying out of stock and then they were being even more safe and less deaths by automtives each year.\n\nSo now the new problem is the new car laws. So they had to come up with a whole new law system with the new cars.\n\nSo thats just what they did.\n\nSo tesla had worked out the bugs in their car and will be releasing the line of fully driverless cars in 2016. This one of their bigest hits yet it drives on its own for more then 90% of the time. Soo now they are pretty happy with what has come with the new cars.\n\nThe more saftey in the car, the new stoping system, and a whole new line of cars.\n\nThe new realease of driverless cars was a hit and more people started to buy them. So the stock of then was higher than ever. So the new driverless car are the thing of the futer.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars. Trucks. Motocycles. All these forms of transportation are drastically poluting the air due to the release of gas emission from the tailpipes. Some may say it's easier to get around with a car handy. Others believe too many people are centered on a car. Cities should become denser for the public in order to transport and reduce gas emission at the same time.\n\nUp to 50% of car intensive areas are poluted in the United States as well as 12% in Europe. Drivning isn't the only way to get around. In Vauban, Germany- some in the communtity have taken the pledge to give up thier cars and go green. In result to doing this, locations like garages are generally not used to hold a four wheel vehicle anymore. Instead this \"car free\" area is encouraging those to join the 70% of Vauban's population to say goodbye to the waste product. In addition to a \"car free\" zone comes \"smart planning\". This is the practice of seperating the suburban life from auto use. In other words, creating a more condenced community will ensure more walkers instead of drivers.\n\nSimilar to both the US and Germany, many areas have committed to giving up the cars. In Paris, pollution had gotten so bad they almost hit a record! Depending on the even or odd number license plate along with the day that came with it, people were ordered to leave their car and/or motor vehicle home or pay a 22-euro fine. Pollution was down 60% in France after the period of time enforcing the rule. In Bogota, Colombia most chose to walk, bike, skate, or take a bus to get around, leaving the city barren of any to no vehicles. With a capital of 7 million a goal was reached reducing smog throughout the city. Violators paid the price of $25 fines.\n\nOther research may suggest that leaving the cars home decreases some ability to get around at a decent time or may even cost just as expensive. Having somewhere to be and knowing you have to be their can be a haslte prioritizing your time. You have to calculate when you leave from both your home and the destination. Those who live in big cities will struggle even more from time to time. If cars on the street are limitted to taxis then the cost to get to a location will be as similar to that of a gas bill. Not only that but areas will require more taxi services to fill those needs of the people.\n\nVehicles, the deathly poison of the human race, will continue to pollute the area unless something is done. Many areas have taken the step to create more suitible living conditions of the human race. Globally, we are reducing the exposure of gas emission everywhere. Continuing this will ensure a heallthy present and furture for years to come.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face could not have been made by aliens. If NASA found aliens, they would probably publicize it, mainly to shut the conspiracy theorists up. \"Oh, NASA killed JFK because he knew that theywere going to fake the moon landing.\" OTHER_PII, I am going to hit you with this ridiculously oversized algebra book if you don't shut up. 1. JFK was killed by Lee Harvey Oswald, a Communist, and 2. NASA wouldn't fake something that big.We might be Americans, but that's stretching it. Now, the Face is a natural formation that the article said \"is a lava dome in the form of a mesa.\" The Face might look like an ancient Egyptian pharoh, but there are billions of galaxies in this universe. If each galaxy has 1 planet with similar conditions to that of Earth, and they all had life forms on them that are presumeably far more advanced than that of humans, the sky above us wouldn't really be visible, as spaceships would be flying around it all the time. NASA has tried communicating with aliens. They have failed because aliens don't exist. Therefore, aliens and moon Nazis do not exist and cannot create statues or anything else as they are fake. The face is a natural made Martian landmark, and Martian is just a term used to refer to something that is related to Mars. As you can see,the Face is just another rock on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Let mind wander place peace tranquility You world endless possiblities To side lies vast collection diverse adventures anecdotes You library book holds key door knowledge adventure Looking adventure drift section searching one suitable liking Turning corner eyes suddenly glance books magazines provocative inappropriate pictures blatantly open anyone gaze upon Quickly turning eyes unfortunate meeting offensive pictures race hallway different section You think unecessary images scarred mind In libraries find anything looking contained within confines book I believe libraries used everyone different ages races genders censorship put effect Some content found libraries censored due diverse group people world different views opinions morals This censorship narrowed inappropriate images religious political cultural innuendo well Censorship evident sections library I think certain books necessarily removed shelf violation rights speech includes written speech well I however think sectioned clearly marked warn unwanting eyes ears material found Libraries one number one resources researching reading gaining information knowledge Most everyone used uses use library life This includes children families Children need experiencing learning exposed content material found libraries I think books removed shelves put somewhere else child could find Children rapidly developing minds sometimes defined images exposed Something child sees commonly easily remembered longer time adult would see This shows good child see offensive things Censorship regard moving books new location child stumble upon best choice Another reason I believe books removed completely rather taken somewhere else library everyone right express opinions feelings toward subject Also others right express opinions toward another s thoughts Just find something offensive nt give right take away someone I think person desires things feels need read right choice Although people want see also choice somewhere come across This books open see taken secluded section In conclusion best solution dealing offensive material found libraries remove completely section everything else allow exclusive access desire material Everyone choice right see see certain material might find offensive In library I believe become better environment wish access use More people use library appeal everyoneSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I writing letter discuss fact computers negitive effect average american reasons people spending much time outside lack exersize interact family much Not spending much time big effect mother nature Such begin care less wonderful earth care pollute took time go outside instead running air conditioner save money go friends Lack exersize bad health Sitting day computer exersize lazyness When exersize feel good adreniline starts going stay fit wa nt worry unhealthy take away computer When interact family instead eating dinner together one persons computer others waching You might argue family lot nt want healthy relationship So nt encourage family sit table discuss day went I stated reasons I think computers negative effect people I hope agree reasons find way get everyone computers get activeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We should have Driverless Cars. Drvierless cars have been thought of since we've had cars. We should have driverless cars because they are safe, they have alerts if/when drivers need to take over, and they'd work even better if we invested in smart roads/sensors. Driverless cars are the future so why not hop on the Driverless Car train right now?\n\nDriverless cars are safe. The Google car made in 2009 has never crashed. The car has driven over a half million miles without a single crash. The Google car isn't all the way driverless, but they only alert a driver when, pulling in/out of a driveway or dealing with complicated traffic issues. Other than those three things the Google car drives, brakes, accelerates, and deaccerates on its own.\n\nDriverless cars now are not all the way driverless.They still alert the driver when he/she needs to takeover. The driver taking over is probably for the best at this time, but when technology becomes more advanced the car will be able to park itself and manuver through constuction zones and more. Also if America invests money in smart roads. Smart roads are magnets with alternating polarity. The car reads the positive and negative polarity and drives itself.\n\nIf the option for smart roads is out of the question because of how expensive they are, we could always use sensors. Sensor are nothing new to the car world though, they have been used since the 1980s. The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes, reduse power, and allow better response and control that a human driver could manage.\n\nIn conclusion, drivers should be able to use driverless car technology. In 2016 Tesla anonuced a projected of a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time. The technology is safe, relieable and driverless cars are the cars of the future. We grow closer to reaching that goal everyday.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "electoral college is a process not a place. the Electoral college work on the selection of the electors where they vote for president and vice president couting each voter by congress. large populations in states lose by virtue in the mal-apportionment in Senate decreed in the Constitution. popular votes were mostly in florida but in the year 2012 when obama was just beginning to be president, he got 29 eectoral votes it was a success in the same margin in wyoming would net the winner only 3 electoral votes. other things being the same alot of large states get more attention from the presidential candidates in a campaign than some small states do. the electoral college is supossed to be a procces for the electors to vote for president and vice president and every 4 years theres gonna be someone new thats facing the president to be voted for the new president of the united states but when the electors come and vote if the president will still stay the president then he,ll become it for another 4 years but if the guy facing his way to be our new president mr. obama will have to stay as vice president. in columbia the district is allocated 3 electors and something like a state for purposes because of the electoral college. the reason in the following discussion the word \"state\" is also refered as the district of columbia. each person who is running for president your state has his or her own group of electors they are generally chosen to the candidates political party but the state laws vary on how there electors get selected on what thereSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is best described as outdated and obsolete. It was designed so that, when there were too many states and poor technology, the vote could be fairly and reallistically counted, by voting between a few people from each state. This was good and efficient for that time, but, with the technology available to us today, it is impractical and easy to corrupt. if you live in a mostly Democratic state as a Republican, your vote is regarded as nothing, and you would have no reason to vote in the electoral college, instead of throwing your vote into the entire mass of the united states, where it has a chance to even slightly influence the vote. Also, since larger states are given more attention, due to the all-or-nothing attitude of most states, other states are given less information and are forced to make more wild guesses than votes, a result of having less information.\n\nWhen the idea of the Electoral College was introduced, the telegraph was still pretty hot technology. All votes would be counted by hand by an impartial court, counting off the vote of every single person individually, out of perhaps more than a million voters. Instead of this, each state would record their own numbers and dispatch a group of electors, who could not be influenced away from their vote, while sending a horseman or a few across the hundreds of miles of U.S. territory with a few little scraps of paper with votes on it would be impractical and dangerous. bags could be lost, a rider could have an accident, entire counties would be unaccouted for. The Electoral College was a nessecity as well as a stroke of genius, and I applaud the man who thought of it. However, this was when the telegraph was a stroke of genius, too. Now we have a cell phone the size of a notecard that can store thousands or millions of votes alone. We have processors that can count the number of people that like apples versus oranges and come out with a percentage, verdict, reciept, and the best bussines option as soon as the numbers are input, as soon as we push that little blue \"Enter\" button. We can send the votes through the air in the billions, without as much as wires to conduct them. there is little or no possibility of tampering or miscommunication, and there are records to back up and correct every single little error. it is much smarter, safer, and more accurate to initiate a simple counting program on the computer, with each individual terminal sending all of it's results and information to a higher terminal until all of the information is scored, backed up, double checked, counted, percentaged, and a final verdict is reached. This can even be done in a way to run the information separately to different computers, to minimize tampering. The electoral college is obsolete, a small parasite of politicians who just dont want this to end. we dont still use the telegraph, do we?\n\nThe electoral college is not only obsolete, unnesessary and parasitic, but also unfair to many voters. The main ways this unfairness can be identified are extreme, and each really deserve a paragraph of their own. Let us imagine a scenario: a democrat lives in a mostly republican state. He goes to vote. His vote is passed along, checked off, and placed aside for a time. When all of the votes are in, the republican votes outweigh the democrats. Now, our democrat's vote, his wife's vote, the democratic guy who works at 7-11 down the street's vote, Joe's vote, Bob's vote, Billy's vote, \"That girl Suzie's\" vote and ALL THE DEMOCRATIC VOTES IN THE STATE are all, essentially, thrown into the furnace, and will do so next election, the election after, and essentially every mostly republican election after that. In a popular vote without the barrier of the Electoral College, all those votes would flow into the pile for whichever canidate they voted for. Then the pile would be counted, divided into the total votes, and percentaged. then, at lest the votes could count for SOMETHING, other than a waste of time. But wait! there's more. Most states have an all-or-nothing ideal, meaning if politician A got 51% of the votes in California, while politician B still got 49%, Politician A gets 55 votes in the Electoral College, while politician B gets squat. This does not represent the best interests of many of the people in that state. this is unfair. It also means that larger states have the advantage, because they get more votes, like California (55), Texas (38), and Florida (29), while smaller states get less, such as Alaska (3), Rhode Island (3), and Hawaii (4). Just to add insult to injury, this means that larger states are more fought over by politicians, leaving smaller states practically ignored. This is unfair to people in the Dakotas or Montana have no information to base their votes on, instead just picking a canidate by mainly party affiliation. the biggest political battles are in fact fought over the biggest states, in the forms of advertisements and propaganda. Although the propaganda is truely just that: propaganda, there is some truth in them, and the voters in bigger states are more well versed in the political and practical advantages of one canidate over the other. Article 3, while defending the Electoral College, in fact condems itself, by saying that voters in so called \"swing states,\" where there is no true dominant party, are likely to be given the most information on the canidates as they battle over who will get that state's votes in the college. The same thing can be said for the bigger states, because neither politician can really afford to let the other gain the upper hand in that state. Therefore smaller states, or states that are basicly marooned on one party are ignored or disregarded as worthless and unattainable in any case, so they widthold information from them, forcing them to vote blindly in favor of whichever party they choose, which votes may be discarded anyway. With an uncensored popular vote, the political canidates will be forced to advertise for all of the united states, instead of just the bigger or indevisive states. this will also remove all of the unfair advantages from the larger states, including more information as well as an unfairly weighted voting system.\n\nIn conclusion, the electoral college was the most efficient and sucessful way to vote, back in the 1700-1800. However, with current communication and transportation technologies, the College has become obsolete, to the point where it should be buried at a crossroads with a stake through it's heart. It is unfair, biased, impractical, and just overall worthless. We should put our newfound technology and knowledge to use and do away with the electoral College, once and for all.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When build Empire State Building faced obstacles building An obstacle faced wanted make high safe possible The way architetures wanted make tallest building world putting mooring mast top building A mooring mast basically dock dirigibles blimps This dangerous It Mast could snap high altitude plumate ground snap dangle high street The Government people washington figuring way mooring airships mast says Al Smith four year term governor New York Although may look nice safest ideaSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient gymnastics There multiple ways patient gymnastics Your mind body patient sometimes patient coach mind patient wish things really cant body patient feels like ready skill mind telling stop patient You patient coaches always helping So sometimes wait minutes finally help Patience important life skill everybody needsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everybody loves patient Especially Everybody family always gets excited cant wait morning especially I get excited I hardly sleep In fact last year hardest It morning I woken reason I decided go back sleep thirty minutes I woke I couldnt fall asleep I went downstairs couple blankets tried go sleep I saw huge amount stuff sitting I sat looked around I excited I remembered I would wait everyone woke So I tried go back sleep I would close eyes sleep four minutes time eventually stopped trying It I turned threw movie waited At brothers I couldnt take anymore I snapped started complain I become impatient I finally told yes began open presents I finally happySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever done school work on a computer? Nowadays alot of teachers asighn school work ,or lectures to kids on computer, and it can be very boring. Many students get bored of the videos , and doze off into their own world.Being able to read the emotional expressions of students is valuable.\n\nTechnology to read emotional expressions on students can be very useful in several ways. In paragraph 6, It states,\" Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad. For example, If you smile when a web cam appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow.\" This idea can help students mood rise, if a student is happy and they are getting happy vibes , it can help them out alot. This simple thing can make the student do better on the work, tests, quizzes, etc. They can become more intrested and focus more.\n\nDr.Huang states a very important senence in paragraph 6. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modifiy the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This can help alot of students out. If the students are doing online work and it's boring, they will doze off or easily get distracted, and if that happens they will most likely get a poor score. If the computer is able to recognize the students mood, and modifiy the lesson, the students will not be bored, and will be able to pay attention. This can result in a good grade. Not only online but also in the classroom, if the teacher is teaching the class and she sees that the students seem very bored, she can use the technology to determine weather the students like the way she's teaching or not. If not the teacher can easily switch up her teaching style so that the students will pay attenton , or be more intrested..\n\nMany students are asighned to do work, or listen to lectures online, and it can be very boring. If the computer software is able to make lessons that adapt to the students expressions or mood, it can be very useful.The students can learn more and can be more successful.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the ultra-modern epoch, society is polarised into two groups almost equally regarding the nation that in coming decades robots will develop individual life whereas others considered that it might have an adverse effect on the community. This essay will shed light on both approaches and as far as I am concerned I am in the favour of the former statement.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, there are myriad things to be shared in its favour. First and foremost, artificial intelligence is replacing manual activities which reduce human efforts, and it also aids in saving time for people who are engaged in their sedentary lifestyle. Moreover, advanced technology gadgets are used in extreme war circumstances where robots are being switched instead of humans to avoid any injuries that can occur. To cite an epitome, the USA, a superpower country has revealed that they use 45% robotic drones in war situations to reduce the risk of loss of human lives. Thus, it can be argued without any scepticism that using robots has a plethora of benefits.\r\n\r\nShifting towards the second school of thought that how this system failed to understand human emotions. To elaborate, because a device does not have a mind, all the information is stored in these automatic machines, they cannot analyse the feelings or emotions that only a human being can experience and that trigger grave repercussions for society. For example, researchers have claimed that 4 out of 5 times, a machine is failed to understand an individual needs and misjudges sentiments. As a result, stored data in the gadgets cannot support the individual in every threat.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although robots are helpful in eliminating risk, it is not suitable to acknowledge human emotions. I still strongly infer that artificial intelligence like robots is essential for life on the globe.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people think minors working an unpaid part-time job for communities might have advantages for themselves and for the local residents. I personally agree how part-time jobs for youngsters will bring many benefits for their future, because they will learn how to manage their time for work and play\r\n\r\nThe main reason they will benefit from part-time jobs is that they will have hands-on experience, thus increasing their hard and soft skills, such as communication, leadership, and teamwork. Many youngsters and recent graduates, for example, struggle to find work due to a lack of work experience. They will have an early start in learning how the work field operates as a result of this. Another one is that they can help communities that are in need and grow connections. Working with the community that surrounds them will not only benefit the community but also themselves, because helping people will give us our own satisfaction and contribute to the country, starting with a smaller scope.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, many adults are concerned that, because of their part-time jobs, teenagers will have less time to play with their friends in their spare time. But most importantly, it’s not about how the part-time job would take their time, but how teenagers will learn to manage their time so they can work and also live their lives as teens. A lot of part-time jobs are usually open around the summer, so they can divide their time more easily now that the school term is over.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I fully agree with how the unpaid part-time job will give more advantages to minors and the community, as long as they can balance their work and play time with friends.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, having children is not the main priority for people under 30-37 years. This tendency has been formed over at least the last two decades. This essay will overview reasons as well as positive and negative sides of it.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, it is highly important to understand the reasons for such change. With the development of medical care and improvement of social services people's lifespan increased. Moreover, many of us prioritize career achievements. Women work long hours to climb the career ladder, thus, they do not have enough time for family and children. Getting higher position also usually means a higher wage that is vital for the sense of financial security, which many people want to have by the time they become parents. \r\n\r\nAs any serious changes, this has an influence on society and culture. In terms of the negative aspects of becoming a parent after 35 or sometimes after 40, the main one is health. Statistically, couples after 35 more often face difficulties with having a baby than couples of a younger age. In addition, the risk of diseases and syndromes for children born in older families is considerably higher. Fortunately, the majority of health problems could be found before birth and, if possible, solved.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, being mature parents has its advantage. Firstly, they are more financially secure. Therefore, able to provide a child with all necessary things, god medical care, education, and interesting fun leisure time. Furthermore, their rich life experience helps them in a new role of parents. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the increase of age when people become parents affected all the sides of our lives. Even though it might have some drawbacks for health, a lot of people prefer to spend their younger days working for future stability.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No I believe materials shelfs libraries Because people like stuff people find offensive But parents control kids reading If find offensive tell pick new book new new movie new magazine If nt fault s fault Some people like stuff others nt Such stuff anther culture maybe something different religion But choose read ever want If nt like find something else people find interesting Not everyone veiws stuff If books adults put anther room miniors ca nt get Make show says older get Than look inapporiate books without haveing risk kids seeing Than order check re age parent gaurdian want get If s musican cussing need older parent check Because parents nt let kids listen bad music Like I said pervious paragraphs I believe shouldt take stuff shelfs people find inapproite Because us might find interesting know world nt People different like different thingsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, it is believed by some that watching TV has a lot of benefits when others think that watching TV is only harmful. Although watching telly may have many downsides for young children, I personally believe that the upsides are more significant. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are some bad points of children watching too much TV. First, a lot of channels have contents that affect the mentality and thinking of children. There are many channels which have inappropriate content such as murders, violence or weapons. Therefore, children may have incorrect thinking and they may follow these awful behaviours. Second, watching TV a lot will affect the health of children. Spending too much time in front of the TV can lead to eye problems. For example, when I was in grade 3, I watched TV a lot so I am nearsighted and I must wear glasses. Also, watching TV may make children obese because they do not do enough physical activities.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is my firm belief that the good points of watching TV are weightier. To begin with, children can develop themselves and their brains. They can study different aspects of the world when they watch TV. Also, they can know and understand themselves by watching programs about personality development. Moreover, children can watch TV to relax after studying. They will be happy and comfortable so when they study again, they will study harder and more effectively. Having time to rest, children will not be pressured and do not have any unfortunate actions happen. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although there are certain drawbacks when children watch TV, I am firmly convinced that the benefits are more considerable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today’s modern world, technology is the most important part of our life. The dependence of technology in our life is increasing drastically, due to which some argue that technology is making our life more complicated. In my opinion, technology has increased our work efficiency and there are more advantages of using technology than disadvantages, so we should use technology when necessary.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, some people argue that technology has made our lifestyle lazy. For instance, in the old day’s student used to solve their mathematical problems themselves, but now a day they are using the calculator to solve the similar problem, which clearly shows the dependency of student on technology. \r\n\r\nBut that doesn’t mean we have to stop using the calculator. Moreover, if technology is used in an appropriate manner, life will be more simple and easy to live. For example, the internet is the current best innovation in technology. Which has changed the way of living. It has converted the whole world into a global village.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, technology has changed the way of living. Therefore, instead of making life more complicated it has made it simpler, if used in a proper manner.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers An achievement technology science improve lives They let explore world one click chat friends What could wrong I ll tell I belive computers ruining society Now nt get wrong I like bad People get never get never chating online cause tons stress Let explain computers ruin lives When computer invented I m sure nt purpose To stay playing mindless games randomly searching web Some scientists even studied time online likely chance become obiece That needs You say ll minute stay playing CAPS CAPS days end People work might never get Also flat waste time could outside playing game My second reason chatting CAPSing someone really A study conducting proved think talking friends really perverted yearold looking fun huh Also talk someone could inbedding virus system could take fix How mad would parents It could happening every letter press Finally stranger people leave links get disgusting websites pray parents nt see My final point computers proven cause stress When nasty fueds friends occur affect school work inflicting damge grades For every people join social page get worse grades issue Also parents online long time next morning must rush get ready work tired afffecting quality work In economy I nt think need layoffs Even simple things like virus slow upload could cause stress fact stress issue due computers I ve told today computers bad They get sucked stressed stalked Now computers nt bad use right These reasons I think computers badSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology has always been changing. All the changes have improved our lifes for the better or for the worst. One of the newest technology is the Facial Action Coding System (FACS). This system can classify basic emotion by measuring your face muscles. The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. Three reasons for why are it helps modify the lesson, helps read non-verbal communication and helps produce emotions.\n\nMany students have had an online assigment that was boring to them. The teachers might not have realized if the lesson was not interesting or the students didn't understand it, since the students were behind a screen. If the teachers had the FACS, the computer would be able to detect the students emotions and change up the lesson to make it more fun or understandable for the student. This would help the students learn more better by having a lesson that fits them. According to the creator, Dr. Huang, the computor would work like an a human instructor.\n\nThere are two ways a person communications to one another. Those two ways are verbal and nonverbal. According to Dr. Huang, the most human communication is nonverbal. The students use nonverbal communication, mostly to show how they feel about the assignment. So if the tecaher doesn't catch the student emotional expression the computer would. The computer will then notify the teacher about it so he can change up the assignment or explain the assignment better.\n\nMany people who are feeling down, try to fake their smile. Well, according to the creator, FACS would be able to tell if it is forced. It is going to be able to that becuse it will measure the muscles on your face such as the zygomatic major, oculi pars palpabraeus, and the risoriuos. Even if it is fake eventually it would be able to produce actual happiness. This would work in a classroom, if the students are in a acting class and have to fake their facial expression to fit with the scene. The computor comes into this by reading the student's facial expression, and telling the student how the computer thinks the student feels.\n\nIn conclusion, the use of the FACS is valuable. It helps modify the lessions, helps read nonverbal communication, and helps produce emotions. It may come with its flaws, but we will improve it so it can be properly used in classrooms. FACS is the new future of the use of technology that will change the way we learn. Not only would it improve our ways of learning, but also help us understand the science of emotions better.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggets that studying Venus can be benefitial but also very dangerous to explore because of all the bad conditions like the atmosphere and all the volcanoes, powerful earthquakes and frequent lighting strikes. But since they havent explored much of venus, there might be some other things there that they dont know about.\n\nIn paragraph 8 the author says \" Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us to into many equally intimidating endeavors.\"\n\nThis quotation is trying to say that us humans are very curious, and that it might not be tomorrow but someday someone will get it. There's already been the first man on the moon, I think there could be a first man on Venus as well. Scientist are probably not going to stop until we can somehow reach Venus and wont wait so they can explore Venus our \"twin planet\".\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that humans have the potential to figure out a way to go out in space and explore Venus, after they explored the moon they didn't want to stop that's why they wanted to go for Venus because a lot is not enough for humans, we want more.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke should join the program because. It was a oppurtunity of a lifetime. And it would take care of the hurt or starving animals that were niglected during world war 2. we love animals and it would be a good paying job. It would make a huge impact on the enviorment. we also would travel across the world were they never have been before.\n\nIt would keep me busy during the day instead of being graduate and sitting at home doing nothing. It would help luke if I ever had a pet because he would know how to take care of the pet. I will know how to taim animals and know how to be patient.\n\nI would have fun its not like im\n\njust gonna sit there.\n\nI would have to be tough and whatever gets thrown at me ill be ready.\n\nI would be remebererd for what he did to keep these animals alive and protected. And also I would make new friends because there is 44 nations joined together with skills and its a great program. If you dont let me join then your missing out of life i will sacrifice my life for these animals and make sure i can do anything to help.\n\nNow that ive joined the segoing cowboys i get to go sight seein and see amazing places all over the world. Plus i can play games like ping pong and all sorts so im not bored all the time. I sail the dark atlantic and take care of my favorite animals. One time i fell off a ladder landing on my back and next thing i know i was sliding down about to go overboard and only thing that stop that was a peice of metal.\n\nWhen your apart of the seagoing cowboys you have to be tough. Even if its storming out you still have to stand in the rain and watch the pets. It took 2 weeks to get from the atlantic ocean to the eastern coast of the united states. Helping at my aunts farm made me prepared for the storm it also made me tough. It was much more than a adventure.\n\nIt openend up the world for me and made me more aware of other peoples needs. It stayed with me i was leading international students and exchange visitors for many years.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the driverless car is a good idea and I would approve if someone where to ask me.\n\nI think that having a driverless cars would be good idea for people whose job requires a car to get them from place to place. For example in the first paragragh it states \"The cars he forsees would use half of the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. He believes such cars would fundamentally change the world.\" That tells you that those taxi and bus rides would be almost safer and less fuel costing.\n\nDriverless cars are safer than actual cars with humans driving them. Because there are over a hundred wrecks a day, and with the help of the driverless car that number can go down. If the number of crashes go down with some driverless cars, then they can sell them to people who wants them and make the roads safer for everyone. In paragragh two it states that \"Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. Their cars has driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\"That alone tells you that the cars drive better without the full control of the human.\n\nThese cars can change the world that we live in today. Because instead of hit and runs the cars would actually stay there if there is a wreck. You wouldn't have to worry about someone being hit by a car, because the car drives by itself. There would be no more people falling asleep behind the wheel and getting into a wreck. Because the car can sence when it's about to wreck and stop itself.\n\n\"While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would rather have flying cars by 2020 those cartoons promised me as a kid, lets be honest. Driverless cars is a step closer to that. As generations and generations go by, we as a whole world and society have become so busy that we are using our cars everyday to get to one place to another. People want to explore and adventure the world and see new places. Yet it isnt idealistic as many of us cant find the motivation to spend the money and energy on gas and long road trips. Having driveless cars enocurages all the above with productivity, spending less money, and time management.\n\nNow when I ask my parents for a ride they will most likely tell 2 things, either its too far away, or that they are too exhausted to drive. Which is understandable as they might fall asleep on the wheel which is very dangerous for the driver and the passengers. Also they dont to waste the time, when they could be using their precious time to do something important. Refering back to paragraph 7, \"GM has developed driver's deats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger...\" Which means\n\nthe driver can multitask on their other work while waiting for their turn to drive. Also they dont need to worry about falling asleep because most the time the car will be able to drive with no problem. This encourages people to be more productive and go out more.\n\nHaving a car is expensive. It can be stressful paying for car insurance and being anxious not to get in an accident or else your rates go up. Having to pay every few days for gas money; money piles up. That is why people save the chance to not go out unless they really need to. Referring to paragraph 1, Google cofounder Sergey Brin envisions that driveless cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. Using public transporations means saving thousands of money each month and being able to use on more traveling and family expenses.\n\nI can relate to a lot of people, when i say that i can be late to many important meetings because of transportation. Having driveless cars means it will always be within your reach to get a ride in time to go to that interview or meeting. Being sble to be more timely mannered means that more people will be able to be more flexible with their schedules and get more things done throughout the day without being in complete ruins.\n\nI believe that anything new and drastic can make anyone doubt new ideas and innovations. But once we get use and know how the driveless car works hands-on, it will become a normal routine that'll put into play in our daily lives. There will be more people who will put their own ideas that will keep on advancing the driveless cars and more new technology. Then perhaps in 2030 those flying cars will come around.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opion is the the so called \"Face\" on Mars is that it is not created by aliens. Today I will ducuss with you why the \"Face\" was not made by aliens. I have proof that it is not made by aliens.\n\nFirst of all there is no proof to say that the \"Face\" is made my aliens. There is proof to say that it is not made by aliens. My first evenidence of proof is that it is a natural landform because we have things on Earth that are like the \"Face\", but do not have a face on it. These are called butte or mesa. Personally I belive it is a mesa.\n\nThe other evenidence is that it is we have other camera with better quilaty that the Viking 1. In 1998 we sent it and there you can get a better look at the \"Face\" and there you can see that it is a natural landform. Some people might say that \"alien markings were hidden by haze\". So in 2001 on a cloudless summer day in Cydonia we took some other pictures the camera's maximum resolution so if there was an alien civilization you would be able to see it. In the picture you could not see any alien civilization or anything besides the \"Face\".\n\nIn conclusion we have proof to show you that the \"Face\" is just a natural landform. It was not made by any alien civilization or what ever you think made it, it is just another natural landform on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A visit to Venus will give you many opportuntiies.The author supported many things about studying Venus is a worthy pursuit, but can be dangerous. In can peers didn't know that. Venus is second planet from the sun, but is also is the closest planet to Earth. You will have a great chance to explore Venus becaue it is nearest planet that is close to earth.Venus is called the \"Evening Star\" because of how bight it is and is simple to be spotted. Long while back Venus used to be covered with largely with oceans and have supported various forms of life just like earth. Now it has cnahged, so thats why many people are trying to study the new Venus\n\nNASA has sent humans to study Venus. NASA is the only possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus. \"Because Venus is sometimes right around the corner- in space terms- humans have sent numerous spaceship to land on this cloud- draped world.\" (author 2) This proves that many people and spaceships has been sent to Venus since it is the closest planet and to learn about it. Many things has been sent to Venus instead if people because of the high temperature.They have sent spacehips and tablets to experiment it. Only opportunity you will be able to go to Venus is join with NASA and study. Majority all peers has got to that point if they have gone to a another planet. Only reason why they're warning you it's for any poor conditon in case! It matters because going and study or visit another planet can be challenging.\n\nBecoming a peer that has many open opportunity's is a great and worthy. For example studying and proably visiting Venus is higly recommneded since it is the closest planet to earth. Although, it is also the second planet that is close to the sun. Sun can kill you from at the heat which that can be dangerous.Venus has the hottest surfave temperature of any planet in our solar system. That's why NASA is established. Studying and joining with NASA is a better opportunity other then going alone because you can be in danger and can cause you extremely consequences. Venus has value, human curiosity will likely lead us into many intimidating emdeavors.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Aliens\n\nSome people don't believe in alien lifeforms on other planets; they would say, other planets can't support life there due to multiple things: no oxygen, water, food, etc. We scientist respond to this with, \"We have all those things here, there has to be some other planet like us.\"\n\nHumans need food, water, and air to live, but that doesn't mean that aliens do. They could be like plants and create their own food inside their bodies. As for water, NASA has discovered that there used to be water on the moon, so what is there to believe there couldn't be any water anywhere else.\n\nPeople can be very religious and about the Bible and God, but other people can be all about evolution and not creation. If humans evolved from animals, then we might not be the only ones. Which means that if humans can evolve into humans, then other organisms can evolve, also.\n\nThe Face on Mars might be a butte or mesa, but that doesn't mean other organisms don't live outside of the Solar System. We can't leave here, so we won't ever be able to know. Life beyond Earth may be just a myth, but it also may be something truly amazing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, with globalization, the connect of nations become closer. There ave many urgent and serious problems happend in this world. Some peope claim that most of urgent issues can only be addressed with international cooperation. I would partly agree with statement.\r\n\r\nAdmittedly, part of urgent problems only can be trackled by cooperation with other countries. The assistance of internation is more powerful and immidated. Take war for example, if somewhere happens war, the residences would face the situations, like injury, homeless, the lack of food and drink, and even the threat of life. Above these problems, domestic government cannot solve these by themselve.The only method is via international cooperation, internationa orginazations or the goverment of other nations will assist to address these problems, about numans rights, like rescuing the locals, offering necessary resources, and providing the shelter oversea for these refregees.\r\n\r\nConversely, not all of issues can solved by other countries, such as crime rate. This issue is long-term and associated with various aspects of domestic, like education, employment, the policy of punishment and so on. The domestic goverment should be capable to trackle these problems by themselve, instead of relied on the help of other countries. Despite of this, the local goverment can also ask the advices of other nation as references of improvement.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, I agree with this statement in specific aspects. The international cooperation is indeed a powerful method, but most of domestic problems only can addressed by the local government.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper In opinion computers everything They provide many things like chess listening music even downloading favorite movies First computers great source communication long distance relative lives talk online You via email Instant message Secondly Computers let search web So need findout directions destination want get informaion far awat places like favorite web lets Thirdly great source entertainment Well watch episodes favorite show watch music videos Also enjoy listening music computer personal entertainment I think computers great I use example I love download music ipod computer Then I get enjoy music ipod Last least computers great effect majority people I believe CAPS computers world CAPS So I say keep computers stay They complete usSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I writing essay puersuade members local library use better censorship putting unfit material shelves members community use In essay I reflect views subject backed true facts I learned many passed experiences I believe large amount reading material children section selves libraries far advanced many young children understand I reviewed many books childrens section many libraries When I noticed many material makeing section far advanced profound children absorb Young children need reading books fantasy allow use imagiation let head filled thoughts war disaster The children read today need material offered understand much material ca nt comprehend Lets use put fit books selves library quit wasteing money unfit books In reaching conclusion article I hope I persueaded readers understand point I trying make I hope readers take information I givin put workSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir greatful For example parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich Culinary Skills love cooking still today eternally greatful That loves follow parents goals loves much In addition always greatful parents love sacrifice often told courageous letting people home loves strength perseverance thanked repeatedly But reality way express gratitude spirit generosity pressed upon early age knows important family friendsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the story a big part is wanting to explore Venus because it's important to see what is outside of the world. The author of this story said that our human nature would most likely take us to Venus to see what's out their for us. There is vaule in going to Venus because we can discover new things and it will help us gain insight in on the planet. Venus is the closest planet to earth.\n\nA good and big reason we should go to Venus is that we would want to go out and see what other planets have in store for us. Venus is a good place to start because it's the closest that is to Earth. We have already tried to go to Venus but man could not indure the mission for example if we take tablets or phones it will be like if we pour acid on to them . We sent out spacecrafts that have been unmanned already so just imagin in a coulpe of years what we could do to go to Venus.\n\nI think human nature will take us to Venus. Us as humans are willing to go beyond to find out things no matter how dangerous or even if we have doubts. It has big vaule if we go we get to find out if their is human life,diffrent structures. We need to meet the challenges that are presented to us by Venus. We already might have some of the tools for example one of the computers that helped us during World War 2 could help us now because these computers don't need to be electronics they are gears and levers and they are better because they can endure in the physical conditions.\n\nScientists have been discussing and they have stated that Venus is one of the most like Earth solar system. They think a long time ago Venus was covered in oceans and could even have formed life. That's even better readons on why we should travel to Venus.\n\nThis is why we should travel to Venus all of things we could discover like life structures. Even humans are planning to get ready to for the travel. I think if we give it a couple of years we should be their and maybe even discovered new life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe computers benefit society help people understand things clearly Computers help people study learn even talk people Here good reasons computers help people problems First computers give information things find books People look places vacations child s grade school find healthy food recipies Without computers people would lost knowing Next computers let talk friends You discuss things like weather ideas even plan exercise days What something important happens The person phone What could They could go computer tell friend It would lot easier driving persons house driving driving way back Finally computers give good sense hand eye cordination Computers teach type without even looking keyboard This skill could used pursue good career carpentry field Computers also help study new job requirements In conclusion I believe computers make peoples little bit easier knowing vital information right tips fingers It also help anything want Like talk friends look info teach skillsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Scientists believe that Venus could sustain human life. According to the article, \"Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.\" Therefore, human life is possible on Venus. But not without some difficulties.\n\nThe conditions on Venus are extremely dangerous. According to the article, \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.\" Conditions like this include erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes.\n\nOverall, human life is possible on Venus. Not easy, but possible. According to the article, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" The possible knowledge that could be obtained about Venus and the fact that Venus might be able to support human life are both very big reasons that scientists want to study Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]