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[FF] Second Chance. (Contest)
All your life you get told to use it wisely. “You only get one shot,” they remind you monthly at school, “so make it count!” Most people wait until they’re in serious danger. Just as they think they’re about to die, they take the plunge and then bam! There they are, ten minutes younger, ready to dodge the bullet. Fores...
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[FF] Second Chance. (Contest)
*0:00* The man took a drag of his cigarette and then took a swig out of the bottle. He hates the flavor of nicotine and whiskey together, but they calmed his nerves and that's exactly what he needed. The man is a witness. He saw something that he wasn't suppose to see, he saw something no one was suppose to see... *...
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[FF] Second Chance. (Contest)
>Title: Fossey's Heart Jannette Fossey was a strange sort of famous. Think Steve Jobs and Genghis Khan wrapped in Marilyn Monroe: brilliant, deadly, beautiful. The network had given me — a fresh-faced anchor soaring in the 18-49 demographic — 15 minutes of airtime to get to Fossey's heart. If only the interview was...
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[FF] Second Chance. (Contest)
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[FF] Second Chance. (Contest)
My name is William Benton, and I've made a huge mistake. I'm currently plummeting towards the ground at......a really fast speed. However fast gravity is. Fuck, I should've paid attention in science class. I should've done a lot of things. What the fuck am I doing. I still can do a lot of things. I don't need to do thi...
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[FF] Second Chance. (Contest)
First submission to this sub! > Title: Saviour A tear and mucus filter stifled her hysterical cries. "No! Ugh. God no. Please. You gotta go back! Use the leap! P-p-please! Karl. *sniff* Go back and stop it. You have to!" The leap. It was my chance to change what happened. She used hers while we were dating. Dati...
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[FF] Second Chance. (Contest)
I staggered forward, and my hand landed on the wreckage in front of me. "Fuck!" I screamed. It was scalding hot. The flames licked at my hands and danced high in the night sky. Blood dripped from my face and splashed to the ground, leaving a gruesome trail of crimson in my wake. As I trudged forward through the debri...
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[FF] Second Chance. (Contest)
Should I? Yes. No. Yes? No? Fuck. I hated this. Every time I fucked up, I always debated whether or not to use *It*; “The Second Chance.” I preferred to call it for what it really was: “The Curse”. Every single day, wondering whether to use it or not, and being the eternal optimist, I never fucking do. I didn’t use it ...
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[FF] Second Chance. (Contest)
Here's my submission. Word Counter tells me it's exactly 300 words long. May the best writer in here, win! --- I firmly believe children are idiots. Here’s the story behind that: listen and you will agree, there is no doubt. You see, I used to be a child myself for years. I ran everywhere for no known reason, gig...
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[FF] Second Chance. (Contest)
I have made mistakes. As I lie on this rotten mattress, short of breath, sweating out what life I have left, I know it is time to cash in. It takes everything that is left in me to go back to where it began. As seamlessly as changing a film reel I am back. It is the summer of ‘09 and I am there. At Brian Faulk’s go...
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[FF] Second Chance. (Contest)
This was the seventh and final day of my training, seven days of nothing but memory training and repeated rehearsal of the same procedure. What torturous boredom! Then again, five grand for seven days of my time and my ConJump wasn't that bad of a deal. A ConJump is something that everyone can only do once in their li...
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[FF] Second Chance. (Contest)
Blood drips from my scalp. My arm hangs broken. The other driver crawls from his overturned SUV. "What a wreck," I say. "One of us should use our Second Chance." He raises an eyebrow. "Good idea. Why don't you do that?" I scoff. "Why don't you use yours?" I can tell he still has his Second Chance. There's a purpli...
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[FF] Second Chance. (Contest)
Aw nuts. I like this prompt, and am too late! Good idea, OP. Well-suited to flash.
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[WP] After a series of scientific breakthroughs, it is discovered that a human life span is measured in Hit Points, and you find out you are on your last one, where the slightest damage will mean the end of you. How do you die?
*Sniff* An ulcer, can you believe it? *A goddamned ulcer*, an easily treated weak patch in your stomach, chewed away my life. Granted, I didn't have much HP to begin with, Mom only had 500 and Pops, well, let's just say he had a lot less going on than what he told the ladies, leaving me with a measly 250 HP. I prob...
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[WP] Big Toothpaste's secret conspiracy is about to be revealed. What is it, and what happens?
We held the knife dumbfounded. The Toothpaste company had done it all along. They were the ones secretly plotting, waiting. If this secret got out it would change the world as we knew it. Now the decision is ours. Do we let the rest of the world know? Do we change the course off the entire earth? I looked my friend dea...
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[WP] Big Toothpaste's secret conspiracy is about to be revealed. What is it, and what happens?
“This is a big deal, Jim. This is a big fucking deal.” It wasn’t unusual to see Charles in the throes of rage, but it was rare for his face to turn such a robust shade of red. He paced up and down in front of Jim’s desk, gesturing wildly, his tightly-knotted tie flopping against the girth of his waist. “We’re out. Th...
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[WP] Big Toothpaste's secret conspiracy is about to be revealed. What is it, and what happens?
George was in a moral dilemma. With what he had discovered, dental hygiene will never be the same again. In fact it would be non existent. Would it have to be? He began to weighing his options, must he share the truth? Yes, there is no right in this. He stared at the numbers, looked at the endless list of chemicals and...
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[WP] "He may not like the rain, but he sure loves the snow"
He may not like the rain, but he sure does love the snow. A gasp. A moment of confusion flooded the brain. Looking up at the ceiling Smith mashed his eyelids together over and over while his vision recovered from its intermittent blurriness and the text "Fragile" printed on the ceiling became familiar and readable aga...
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[CW] Tell a story where the length of the nth word corresponds to the nth digit in pi
Did we share brain waves earlier today? I had this thought, but with syllables in lines of poetry. It struck me as a strange thought. And yet here it is. Did we watch the same youtube video or something?
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[CW] Tell a story where the length of the nth word corresponds to the nth digit in pi
"Why", I said. I loved thousands of people. Seven now stand silently, hopefully, wishing for my ear. This is all I could get. It's so hard to know where you're at in PI. Nice idea, I'm just too scatterbrained to make anything of it.
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[CW] Tell a story where the length of the nth word corresponds to the nth digit in pi
Nay, a word I write willingly in docile tones can never mitigate anathemas prodded, forbidden all, of big unweildy heft, spewed up rudely when all was disarray. ^(Sheesh, that took forever. Time to go home from work or I'd continue. One sentence is all you get.)
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Art. I view a piece carefully. I'm thrown, dread hit. Great painting; beautiful, however, malicious. Art is sin. Disaster lies within it. Beware. 3/14159/2653/58979/323/8462/6
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[WP] A person or group of people are stuck in a room with a dead body or multiple dead bodies
Left alone in a room of death, Smell so putrid I hold my breath, Blue in the face, I quiver with fear, From my eye bleeds a single tear, Door was locked when I arrived, Exit is that which I'm deprived, I plead with God, gasping for air, Wondering if He would even care, Why am I...
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[WP] A person or group of people are stuck in a room with a dead body or multiple dead bodies
While peering down at the bodies scattered around the room, his mind finally found the way out of its amnesia. In his maniacal stupor, he had managed to slaughter them all, he left no man unharmed. He panicked, he had no recollection of how he killed them, or let alone, how he even got to this place. This place...it...
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[WP] A person or group of people are stuck in a room with a dead body or multiple dead bodies
“I don't see how the giant robots could take down even gianter monsters from space, that's all I'm saying.” “Did you even watch the movie Josh? Geez. I've explained this to you at least a doze-” Lydia let out a long groan. The stuffy light booth was the last place she wanted to be cooped up on a Friday night. She'd h...
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[WP] You live in a world where death is impossible, but birth still is possible. What is everyday life like?
"How...is this possible?" Tom stared at me. My hands quivered as I held the stick in my hands. I shrugged. "This technology is like a century outdated, I doubt it could be accurate," I said in a low voice, confused, but only slightly worried. A month ago, Tom and I were fine. Everyone was fine! There hadn't been any n...
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[CW] Poem a day Twitter challenge
I'm in... Looks like it's time to make a twitter though.
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[WP] "All we can do now is wait"
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[WP] "All we can do now is wait"
"All we can do now is wait" My girlfriend held my hand while I slowly clicked "save". That was it. My writing was finally posted. I wrote stories ever since I was a little kid: fan fiction, sci-fi, historical fiction, you name it. I never showed my writing to another living soul. Over time, my literature became...
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[WP] "All we can do now is wait"
“All we can do now is wait.” “Is it? Oh...I was hoping we could do something...less boring.” “Like what?” “You know.” “Know...what?” “Something less boring.” “I don’t understand what you’re getting at.” “…” “Seriously, what?” “Nothing.” “Oh, come on...” “No, it doesn't matter, nothing.” “Don’t say that-” “...
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[WP] "All we can do now is wait"
This is going to be the last time. No more after this. No more. We have been trying to conceive for four years now, without any success. I still remember the first time we decided we wanted a child. She was lying down on the bed, looking straight up at me. “Let’s have a baby,” “Are you sure?” “Yes, I’m sure.” Her ...
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[WP] "All we can do now is wait"
"She's in." Arthur said without putting the binoculars down. Amy stood up from the little electronic device that still made a faint beeping sound, it's little dish antenna spinning lazily. "Great. Now it's all up to her." In the distance, the aformentioned woman had climbed into the hulking form of the zeppelin, van...
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[WP] "All we can do now is wait"
Fat. Ugly. Worthless. Useless. Lazy. Stupid. Foolish. Empty. Unwanted. Alone. This is what I feel when my eyes open each day. I don't have thoughts of the day to come. I don't recount the dreams of the night before, they are usually things I'd rather forget anyway. I start to think of you, a flutter of happ...
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[IP] The Forgotten Forts.
(I chose not to read the background and go solely off of the image) - I gasped for breath, spitting out sea water and trying to use the energy I had left to stay above water. The waves were hitting me on every side. Behind me, my ship burned, attacked by the most feared pirates in the seas. He took all our supplies an...
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[OT] The best writing tips you know
Only include things that are unnecessary, if they become necessary later on (Don't rant). An example is in Harry Potter with the Godric's Hollow symbol. It starts off as describing something that seems like nothing, but turns out to be important.
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[OT] The best writing tips you know
No specific rule is ever golden, and sometimes the best writers break all of them. There's only one general rule I try to follow no matter what, and that is *Don't let the reader walk away feeling like their time has been wasted.* That doesn't mean you have to teach them something and it doesn't necessarily mean you ...
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[OT] The best writing tips you know
Write it, no matter how shitty it is. You'll never get a final draft if you don't get through the first one. And you're going to revise it anyway. Allow yourself to write some total bullshit just so you can get the words on the paper and have something to work with.
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[OT] The best writing tips you know
Just added: http://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/wiki/writer_tips There is also a link in the sidebar. Please feel free to add any links to articles or threads you think will help out new writers.
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[OT] The best writing tips you know
When you're stuck try a different perspective. Believe me the worse points of a book, story, or essay are the parts where you can feel the author rushing; trying to cut through a writer's block by being as vague and emotionless as possible. They often hope that the reader forgets such embarrassing moments of weak wri...
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[OT] The best writing tips you know
SYNONYMS. No one likes to see repetitive words in a story. Nouns are fine, but try and replace verbs and adjectives.
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[OT] The best writing tips you know
BE CONFIDENT
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[OT] The best writing tips you know
The best tip is the one you do with a fedora. Stay classy.
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[OT] The best writing tips you know
Write what you enjoy reading. Kinda a no-brainer but I've seen people stumble overi t.
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[WP] You meet your dream celebrity and he/she falls in love with you. However, your significant other is still in the picture. Decision time.
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[WP] Write A Poem That Begins With Hating Someone, And Ends With Loving Them.
He's always here, whenever I like it or not. He would easily make everyone distraught. Even anger them to the point where they would scream in the bathroom. He would appear at random times, inside parties or even classrooms. I always hated him with a passion, murderous passion. But he would love me, always stickin...
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[CW] Champions of Story - 3 Words, 1 Genre, 5 Minutes
Eye patches everywhere. Peg legs everywhere. Citrus everywhere. These were well to do pirates. They would not have scurvy. Still Santa Claus hunted. Something was missing. Something brought him here. Sifting through the gold, the cutlasses, the cannon balls, he knew it had to be here, it had to be on this pirate ship. ...
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[CW] Champions of Story - 3 Words, 1 Genre, 5 Minutes
Detective Carlson wasn't sure what to expect as he neared the crime scene. Pirates Cove had been a family dinner theatre attraction for years, and now this tragedy would smear its image in the city forever. Passing the caution tape, he boarded the pirate ship, now teaming with white-coated forensic analysts and poli...
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[CW] Champions of Story - 3 Words, 1 Genre, 5 Minutes
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[CW] Champions of Story - 3 Words, 1 Genre, 5 Minutes
"All the children means all the worlds children!" In that instant we saw his jolliness fade. He usually kept it together, but when Santa Claus got angry, you didn't want to get in his way. We were talking about a pirate ship, and this one child, Willie, who had sent Santa a letter from it. Adorable little scrapper. Th...
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[MP] "Big Feelings", by Shlohmo
I smile as I let the sound of bugs and the cool, misty night air fill my senses. I glance over at her, laying by my side, her big poofy hair tickling my ear and her scent just barely registering. The moonlight hits her face, then it doesn't. I look up again. Sure, it was cute in the movies when the couples watch cloud...
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[MP] "Big Feelings", by Shlohmo
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[WP] You are a time traveller from 1985 arriving in 2014.
Marty McFly opened the gull-wing door of the steaming Delorean DMC-12 with shock and confusion again washed over the entirety of his face. From a nearby hilltop, he saw it. Hill Valley, circa 2014. Something.. was different. This wasn't the 2014 he visited before. There were no flying cars, no wonderful hydrated pizzas...
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[OT] New sidebar link! Tips for New Writers!
These are really helpful! Good move, it definitely will help a lot of people out. ^Cough ^Cough ^^^me.
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[WP] A time machine goes haywire and causes an entire city to swap places with itself from the past.
*July 16th, 1880.* *The city has effectively been under siege for three months now. We have all been issued identifying papers and most of our personal items have been confiscated. I hid my phone in the ceiling of the men's room in the lobby, but it died after the first day and couldn't get a signal anyway. Imagi...
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[WP] A time machine goes haywire and causes an entire city to swap places with itself from the past.
There is an episode of Eureka (awesome sci-fi show everyone should watch) that would pretty much fill this prompt. It's called "Crossing Over".
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[WP] Smoke has a collective memory of scenes and emotions of the people whose lives it has been involved in.
*Sparks waltz around me. I won't let them touch me, but I doubt they even want to. After all, I am their friend. My gasoline, my match, my love for the heat. I let them free. I let them live, grow... and dance!* "Whoa, whoa, whoa... Jake! You didn't put anything extra in this hooka, did you?" "No way bro. Just the ge...
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[WP] Smoke has a collective memory of scenes and emotions of the people whose lives it has been involved in.
He stared upward, peering through the swirls; windows into the past. The smoke hung for a few moments in the cold air, keeping the man’s gaze steady. As the door beside him opened, he waved the smoke away. A young woman emerged, and her eye quickly caught the final wisps vanishing, “Sorry about that,” he said, “Ba...
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[WP] Murphy's law has become a brutal reality.
"Run phase three testing." "Sequence confirmed." "Execute." The room full of anxious scientists watched the front of the room where Dr. Wiggin stood. He took a long look around the room, made the sign of the cross and pushed enter. A hundred men held their breath and watched the screen. After sixteen seconds the ro...
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[WP] Murphy's law has become a brutal reality.
At first it started small. The wiry, aging farmer had no idea that his tractor's parking brake was almost shot, and that he had parked on just enough of an incline to snap the brake. He was underneath it, his hands soaking in grease and his hair filling with Midwestern dust; the air was hot and Kansas humid around him....
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[WP] Murphy's law has become a brutal reality.
As the dust storm died down, the outline of the abandoned buildings became clearer. Xiawen recognized the ruin that had once been Potala Palace and breathed a muffled sigh of relief through her gas mask. The hospital was not far away. She immediately stood still and cleared her mind, thinking only about her objective....
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[WP] Murphy's law has become a brutal reality.
In less than eight hours, Andrew Milstone would be a brewer. Andrew danced in his thoughts as he lie in bed, huddled underneath layers of down and fabric against the chill of winter; it was his excitement that kept him shivering. His eyes snapped open every time he tried to close them, staring at a wall that, it would ...
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continue the story!
(sorry this reads like a screen play or a script, i'm new to this" *a meeting in a shadowy room with shady characters* codename Walrus:"gentlemen, i'm glad you could all make it on such sort notice, i think you'll find it was worth the trip" code name Leopard:"would you just get on with it? i was at my kid's ba...
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continue the story!
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[WP] A young man's fantasies start coming true. At first he enjoys himself, but things quickly get out of hand.
It had started simply enough. Brian sprawled on the floor in front of the sofa in his parents living room, flipping through the TV stations. He paused on a commercial for Wendy's boasting a "fresh, never frozen" burger. He couldn't even pinpoint the exact moment he had felt it happen. One moment he was sitting there, w...
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[FF] The Hazards of filming in Space. (Feedback for every response. Min. 200 words. Max. 1000 words.)
haha This was the easiest one I've ever done!
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(WP) A Young Man's Sister is dying in a Hospital. They never got along, but what does he say to her as she goes?
I lay upon my Sister's bed weeping, Awaiting her soon eternal sleeping, Though we had some awful times, I give to her these final rhymes, "Oh Sister, today you pass unto the above, Though we quarreled, I know there was love, You stole my Pokemon cards, caused me tears, Honestly, it's been a...
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(WP) A Young Man's Sister is dying in a Hospital. They never got along, but what does he say to her as she goes?
What are her favorite flowers? Lilies? Lilacs? I have forgotten. I think I purposely forgot. How many years ago did I last speak to her? Too many. I was a fool. I should have been there for her. But I wasn't. I only thought of myself. I abandoned her. Now I am here, and would trade everything if I could change fate. I...
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(WP) A Young Man's Sister is dying in a Hospital. They never got along, but what does he say to her as she goes?
“Hey sis. How are you doing?” It was already difficult to tell if she was alive. If it wasn’t for her heavy, desperate breathing, you would have thought she was a corpse. “So I heard the news and I came.” She turned her head and glanced at his direction. Black, lead eyes. Thank you they seemed to say. “I felt like ...
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(WP) A Young Man's Sister is dying in a Hospital. They never got along, but what does he say to her as she goes?
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[MP] How many words is a song worth?
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[WP]: A wolf, crow or other intelligent wild pack animal wanders too close to a human establishment and encounters a mirror. It returns to tell about the experience as a ghost story. Tell it to us.
Guys....the spookiest thing just happened! So there I was, just checking out that area the humans had held the last two days, when I saw this...thing. It was like a shadow, my shadow. It knew exactly what I was going to do, and it was able to mimic my every movement. I don't know what exactly it was, but I didn't know ...
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[CC] I think this might be the best I've written in this subreddit so far. Give me your thoughts?
Some formatting would be very helpful. A return and double space makes a new paragraph.
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[CC] I think this might be the best I've written in this subreddit so far. Give me your thoughts?
I love the foreshadowing with the garbage bags, nice touch! That was a fun read. You should work out your formatting though. Hit the enter key a couple times to form a blank line to separate your paragraphs, or use the tip from /u/Nibron.
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[CC] I think this might be the best I've written in this subreddit so far. Give me your thoughts?
It was good. I especially liked the bit about how the Leafs suck. But seriously, you didn't throw a few dumb robotic puppet protagonists in there. You made people, with real opinions, thoughts, ideas. You made a real story.
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[CC] I think this might be the best I've written in this subreddit so far. Give me your thoughts?
Great twist! I really enjoyed the read. One thing though, try not to use the same word repeatedly to convey the same idea. I forget where it was, but there was a post a while back on how to expand all of your character adjectives. Instead of saying "with a sudden: suddenly: suddenly" (last three or four paragraphs) may...
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[CC] I think this might be the best I've written in this subreddit so far. Give me your thoughts?
That was pretty good. The fact that he doesn't exactly stop the project leaves the possibility for it to still happen and go wrong.
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[CC] I think this might be the best I've written in this subreddit so far. Give me your thoughts?
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[WP] Time freezes for all but one man, and does not restart. What does he do?
Chuck wandered through the countryside estate he most recently found himself in, the hallways and rooms silent and empty, abandoned and forgotten. It felt as if this place had been long ignored, and yet there was no dust, no sign of neglect. How many days it had been since someone else had walked these halls? Had the d...
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[WP] Time freezes for all but one man, and does not restart. What does he do?
I could remember back to when I was a little kid, back to when I had a million what ifs pinging around my skull, driving my imagination wild. What if I could become invisible? What if I had a million dollars? What if I was born a dog? What would all that be like? Usually, probably out of the naiveté of being a kid, l...
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[WP] Time freezes for all but one man, and does not restart. What does he do?
Jessica finished buttoning up her blouse and looked for her research partner, Artyom. She was as angry as she was elated. The scientific breakthroughs they made that day would change the world. But where was he? She didn't piece together what happened until the next day when the news storm hit. Nowadays, that fateful ...
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[WP] Time freezes for all but one man, and does not restart. What does he do?
The condemned man stood bound on the gallows, listening passively to the long litany of charges against him. Capital theft. Sedition. Arson. Triple homicide. Commandeering a warship. High treason. With each offense the shouts of the gathered mob grew even greater, even more thirsty for blood. With each offense the crim...
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[WP] Time freezes for all but one man, and does not restart. What does he do?
The man held the little teddy bear in his hands and smiled at it. He pushed back his greasy hair, filthy from weeks of not bathing, and wiggled his shoes, which were held together with duct-tape. He coughed a dry hacking cough. He laughed, "Mr Wiggles, my friend, be happy that teddy bears don't get sick." He coughed...
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[WP] Time freezes for all but one man, and does not restart. What does he do?
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[WP] Time freezes for all but one man, and does not restart. What does he do?
Stepping into the gleaming control room at CERN, Chang rubbed the laughing buddha's belly. It was a tradition before any major event here. It brings Good luck, they said. He really needed it today. After all, today was the first of a series of experiments he had helped design to reveal the true nature of reality. What ...
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[WP] Time freezes for all but one man, and does not restart. What does he do?
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[WP] Time freezes for all but one man, and does not restart. What does he do?
People believe that when the rapture came, there would be a great catastrophe that would roam all over the world while people will be whisked into heaven. The ones who are damned are left on Earth to experience the end of the world. I believe I have just experienced rapture. Actually, I didn’t even realize it had happe...
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[WP] A man is driven to madness by his toothbrush.
The second shelf. That damned second shelf. Every morning, and every night, I put my toothbrush on the first shelf. And every day, when I reach for it, it's on the second shelf. It was maddening. Who was moving it? Who was tormenting me?! I didn't deserve this. And then, one day, I saw him do it. He looked just like me...
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[WP] A man is driven to madness by his toothbrush.
I think I ended up digressing a little (and it ended up about double the length I intended). I had also envisaged a different ending, but I kind of wrote myself into this one: The rain beat down in an unrelenting, typically English torrent as Lawrence hurried towards his doorstep. His perfectly-polished shoes sank ...
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[WP] A man is driven to madness by his toothbrush.
He spat the last remaining minty foam into the sink, noticing some pinkish swirls in the viscous melange of oral fluids. He then tongued the backsides of his teeth. A powerful wave of frustration came over him. The rough texture of plaque was still present despite vigorous scrubbing. He stared hatefully at his toothbr...
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[WP] A man is driven to madness by his toothbrush.
The man held the toothbrush in his hand quizzically. He furrowed his brow and began twitching. Foam escaped from his mouth as he fell and hit his head on the ceramic sink. He laid on the floor, unconscious, in the fetal position. "Tom! Tom! Are you okay," asked his wife outside the locked door. She pounded, "Open up!...
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[WP] A man is driven to madness by his toothbrush.
I brush the back of my hand against the brissles of my brush, standing alone in the tub that contains it and the tooth paste. It seems so non-chalant that, if it were a cartoon character, it would be whistling whilst staring with raised eyebrows at random spots around the bathroom. I feel the wetness of it's head, and...
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[IP] 21st Century Bourbon Whiskey
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[WP] People that die in the ocean become mermaids
Emily walked along the shore, staring out into the glistening blue sea as the sun set. This was her favourite place to be after a long day. Especially today. You see, Emily had broken up with her boyfriend when she found him cheating on her with her best friend. Today just wasn't Emily's day. She sat on the sand, and ...
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[WP] People that die in the ocean become mermaids
When I lost control of the wheel my grasp on the world around me slipped away. The pounding in my head when I came to was like jackhammers on pavement. I felt my gears grinding, my thoughts twisting and scraping against each other, rather than streamlining and flowing cleanly. There was blood everywhere, but it wasn't ...
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[WP] People that die in the ocean become mermaids
I take a deep breath. After all it'll be one of the last ones that I'll ever be having. One more breath. Just one more breath. I thought as I stood on the edge of the cliff. I had always liked the ocean when I was younger. Was always fascinated by just looking out on the coastline. But now it all felt different. I th...
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[WP] People that die in the ocean become mermaids
We don’t say anything anymore. We aren’t the yapping dolphins that entwine their paths playfully or with joy. We are more like the shark, I think, Quiet and focused, We travel together but we needn’t say anything anymore. We are the ones cursed by the albatross. We filled our lungs with salt water. We struggled...
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[WP] People that die in the ocean become mermaids
"OH look at dis guy!" said Tony. "I know we sent you to sleep with da fishes but i didn't think you'd take it literally." "Fuck you, you walking bastard. I gotta deal with fin rot. Do you know what kind of pain in da ass dat is? You motha fuckers!" said Big Pussy "Hey! Take it easy. I'm not here to bust your ball...
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[WP] People that die in the ocean become mermaids
Stars permeated the midnight blue sky above The Sundmaður as it rested on the still waters of the Norwegian Sea, as the Northern Lights danced to their own ethereal tune, painting swathes of neon from horizon to horizon. To the South, the tip of Iceland marked its presence by means of a lighthouse. Astrid stood on the ...
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