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[CW] Write about your character losing his or her virginity, with no sexual terminology whatsoever. | Case Number: 010250341 - Drug Facilitated Sexual Assault
Date: May 11, 2011
Incident Type: Drug Facilitated Sexual Assault
Address of Occurrence: Rm 269, 2235 35th Avenue
Witnesses:
Jean Pellitier, Friend
Jordan Byrne, Friend
Kaoru Shizuka, Friend
Evidence:
Blood samples
Urine Samples
Clos... | 1 | 0 | 46 | 22,200 |
[CW] Write about your character losing his or her virginity, with no sexual terminology whatsoever. | One record spins fast not the fastest but faster than average and maybe baby it croons. Mirror! You follow me. I face the mirror and maybe baby, maybe glide the lipstick tube across my lips.
Bubblegum-pink.
Bubble-smack! POP. Bubble gum, maybe baby, pink.
Maybe, baby, maybe means maybe.Maybe, I remember, hurling the li... | 1 | 0 | 46 | 22,201 |
[WP] Day 759 of the slow zombie invasion, a helicopter gunship tore up some zombies. I waved at it but i don't know if the pilot saw me. | It had been difficult living alone, but I managed it. Day by day, ever since the start of the apocalypse I would survive on my own scavenging from the streets and raiding any buildings I could find. In the two years it had been since the turn the amount of people I saw every day slowly decreased. After a little more th... | 2 | 0 | 6 | 22,202 |
[WP] Day 759 of the slow zombie invasion, a helicopter gunship tore up some zombies. I waved at it but i don't know if the pilot saw me. | The problem wasn’t the people; people are big and full of weaknesses, and once they’re slowed, they’re not that hard to kill. The real problem was the rodents. Rats, squirrels, weasels, mice. Those little fuckers are the ones that really spread it quickly, and those little shits are the ones who really brought everythi... | 2 | 0 | 6 | 22,203 |
[WP] A man, groggily from being recently awake, walked into the garage to find his daughters' stuffed animals hanged from the ceiling. | I awoke with a startle, someone was in my garage.
Holding a flimsy baseball bat as protection, I trended lightly down the stairs. Was it buglers? Neighborhood rascals? Police? Regardless I can't let them in.
My strategy was simple, take them by surprise. With on swift motion, I broke down the door leading to the ga... | 4 | 0 | 4 | 22,204 |
[WP] You find a secret door in the back of your closet. What can possibly be at the bottom of the stairs? | [deleted] | 1 | 0 | 4 | 22,205 |
[WP] You find a secret door in the back of your closet. What can possibly be at the bottom of the stairs? | "Weird, I never noticed this".
My mom was at work and I didn't want to bother her with a phone call. My dad left his phone on the sofa again. He sometimes complains how I never answer his calls.
Right before construction was done on our home my bedroom was once my parent's bedroom. Nothing was really done to it, exc... | 3 | 0 | 4 | 22,206 |
[PI] ETERNAL BLUE - FEB CONTEST | You don't happen to have it in epub? | 1 | 0 | 33 | 22,207 |
[PI] ETERNAL BLUE - FEB CONTEST | This is really good :) | 3 | 0 | 33 | 22,208 |
[PI] ETERNAL BLUE - FEB CONTEST | I enjoyed this so much I didn't even notice it took me over an hour to read it. Now I really need to walk my dogs. | 1 | 0 | 33 | 22,209 |
[PI] ETERNAL BLUE - FEB CONTEST | Very solid story, a polished and effortless read. I really enjoyed the gruesome universe you created and the detail of Jake's inner monologue. Looking forward to more of your work! | 1 | 0 | 33 | 22,210 |
[PI] ETERNAL BLUE - FEB CONTEST | What an enthralling tale. Riveting in places. I have to say that this is one of the best submissions I have seen so far.
I only have a few things to point out, if you don't mind a little critique. For one, your narrative voice is awfully repetitive. Your choice of words is wonderful, don't get me wrong--descriptions w... | 3 | 0 | 33 | 22,211 |
[PI] ETERNAL BLUE - FEB CONTEST | My favorite kind of stories are the ones where the ending catches you off guard. This one definitely falls into that category; it was both disturbing and deeply moving. So hats off to you for a really great, wonderfully written story.
My only critique: I didn't totally buy the direction in which Jake and Margot's rela... | 1 | 0 | 33 | 22,212 |
[PI] ETERNAL BLUE - FEB CONTEST | I found myself floored by this piece. Seriously, it's still on my iPad because it was too good to remove. Your imagery is something to behold. The world is so clear and sharp. The one problem I have is your use of the word 'and'. In a lot of places it was simply unnecessary and there were parts of the book where I simp... | 1 | 0 | 33 | 22,213 |
[PI] ETERNAL BLUE - FEB CONTEST | Great story! One of my favourites so far. Your writing is very good. The descriptions are clear and well-done without being overly wordy, and you had some great turns of phrase ("her face looked like a cup of tea with two sugar cubes floating in it"). It reminded me a bit of Stephen King's writing.
The world you built... | 1 | 0 | 33 | 22,214 |
[PI] ETERNAL BLUE - FEB CONTEST | This is a really impressive and vivid portrayal of a stark and violent word. The story flows along seamlessly and there are some really beautiful uses of simile throughout. I enjoyed the quiet moments between Jake and Margot, as well as the other more disturbing and horrifying scenes. I found Jake's immature and creepy... | 1 | 0 | 33 | 22,215 |
[PI] ETERNAL BLUE - FEB CONTEST | Hi!
I thought you managed to create a really strong atmosphere (the Citizens gave me the creeps!) and I liked the underlying ideas about happiness and the meaning of life and all that.
I found the story lacking in some places, such as the characters' motivations. I did notice the "and" thing pretty often, but that ... | 1 | 0 | 33 | 22,216 |
[PI] ETERNAL BLUE - FEB CONTEST | I just wanted to say that this was great! Good job and good luck! | 1 | 0 | 33 | 22,217 |
[EU] Historical fiction in the Pokemon world | I knew his trainer was dead just as much as he knew my pokemon were as well.
The battle's frenzy and chaos had been over long ago, but there isn't a real finality to battle when both sides have lost. Those who "survived" the onslaught only to be left behind mostly dead had to live with the choice of either giving int... | 3 | 0 | 7 | 22,218 |
[OT] Well guys the 50,000 subscribers contest is over so let's compile a list of all the submission posts just to make things easier. Just comment the link! | The contest is NOT over. 11:59 PST is the final entry time. That is about four hours from now. Guess who already compiled a list with links to each story? The guy who is creating the official voting thread. Me.
This post has been removed, thank you for the enthusiasm however. | 1 | 0 | 1 | 22,219 |
Willy Wonka's chocolate factory and Aperture science labs have merged into one company. What experiments are now going on there? |
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Willy Wonka's chocolate factory and Aperture science labs have merged into one company. What experiments are now going on there? | The merger was interesting, and not entirely bloodless. There was a quick and brutal conflict between the Oompa Loompas and the Turrets, before the newly 'born' GLaDOS Wonka put a stop to that. With edible science, there was only one thing of which Chell was certain.
The cake is not a lie. | 54 | 0 | 129 | 22,221 |
Willy Wonka's chocolate factory and Aperture science labs have merged into one company. What experiments are now going on there? | Well, I guess, since I'm stuck here, I might as well say how I got here. Not like I've got anything else to do except talk to you, you gibbering fuck.
You'd think that OSHA would've shut these two corporations down *years* ago, but noooo, apparently they're valuable or some bullshit. After the merger, sending me to ... | 20 | 0 | 129 | 22,222 |
Willy Wonka's chocolate factory and Aperture science labs have merged into one company. What experiments are now going on there? | The white room smelled of dust and mildew, its mostly white walls made of old ceiling tiles and smudged with what Gloria hoped was not blood. To her right, a tremendous window looked out on the testing facilities of Willy Wonka's Science Factory, bustling with activity. From there she could see the far wall of the main... | 16 | 0 | 129 | 22,223 |
Willy Wonka's chocolate factory and Aperture science labs have merged into one company. What experiments are now going on there? | Today Wonkature Sciences is proud to introduce the candy cube. This tiny delicious morsel contains patented time release portals where highly nutritious food products sit at the other end. In other words: eat a sweet and get your daily nutrients in one go!
Now that's a pill anyone can swallow!
Warning: ingestion... | 9 | 0 | 129 | 22,224 |
Willy Wonka's chocolate factory and Aperture science labs have merged into one company. What experiments are now going on there? | This was a triumph
The merger is complete: HUGE SUCCESS
Fusion of chocolate and observation
Aperture/Wonka
We make all the treats
Because we can
For the joy of all the kids
Except the one who are dead.
But there's no sense fretting 'bout the children we killed
Now the brat's grieving parents will be secretly t... | 8 | 0 | 129 | 22,225 |
Willy Wonka's chocolate factory and Aperture science labs have merged into one company. What experiments are now going on there? | [deleted] | 1 | 0 | 129 | 22,226 |
Willy Wonka's chocolate factory and Aperture science labs have merged into one company. What experiments are now going on there? | Caroline didn't like the 'great' Mr Wonka. She didn't like his candy. She didn't like his cloths. She certainly didn't like his god awful factory and all those filthy little imps inside. She didn't like the abomination that was his laboratory, the mess he called a production line and his death-trap of an elevator. And ... | 2 | 0 | 129 | 22,227 |
[OT] Hi r/WritingPrompts, I made an app that you might like! | Sounds like fun. Any plans for Android? | 2 | 0 | 12 | 22,228 |
[OT] Hi r/WritingPrompts, I made an app that you might like! | Visited the page, looks like a lot of fun. Definitely something I think my creative writing club in university would have fun with. Unfortunately, I don't many or even any of us have iPhones :S | 3 | 0 | 12 | 22,229 |
[OT] Hi r/WritingPrompts, I made an app that you might like! | I'm going to play this with my friends, looks really fun. I love when developers write clever descriptions for their apps! | 3 | 0 | 12 | 22,230 |
[OT] Hi r/WritingPrompts, I made an app that you might like! | Could we have some sort of online sharing system? | 3 | 0 | 12 | 22,231 |
[OT] Hi r/WritingPrompts, I made an app that you might like! | Kewl | 1 | 0 | 12 | 22,232 |
[OT] Hi r/WritingPrompts, I made an app that you might like! | You aren't charging anything? I would have thrown you five bucks for this. | 2 | 0 | 12 | 22,233 |
MADNESS OF BRADBURY'S OUTPOST - FEB CONTEST |
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MADNESS OF BRADBURY'S OUTPOST - FEB CONTEST | Closer. You forgot to type [PI] in the title. Look at the front page at other submissions and you will see what I mean. Lol | 2 | 0 | 1 | 22,235 |
[WP] I was driving on a long roadtrip and I started noticing the traffic coming the other direction was growing larger and larger... | "Do we have to listen to this?"
I don't respond. It had been a long trip. We didn't talk unless we needed to. 'You hungry?' 'How much longer?' 'I can't believe...' I lean in and hit scan on the radio. The NPR story about how a young Arab woman championing education in the Middle East becomes a top 100 chart song for... | 2 | 0 | 5 | 22,236 |
[WP] I was driving on a long roadtrip and I started noticing the traffic coming the other direction was growing larger and larger... | You'd think "Hooked on a Feeling" would get old, but we grew up with *Reservoir Dogs* and so every few hours that soundtrack would find its way back into the CD player. And after making it out of Eastern Oregon without getting shot we needed some solidarity. It's not that Ethan looked incredibly Jewish, it's just tha... | 2 | 0 | 5 | 22,237 |
[WP]The holocaust is a lie created to cover up something far worse | We didn’t know what to do, what to say. We tried to cover it up, but rumours were beginning to creep along the grapevine. So we said they were Jews; they had been hated for years by others, so we thought this might be no different. We didn’t realise there were so many of them.
A month into Hitler’s election, we recei... | 5 | 0 | 11 | 22,238 |
[MP] Write about the picture in this video while listening to the song. Make me cry. | [deleted] | 2 | 0 | 3 | 22,239 |
[WP] You begin to suspect your spouse is not who you thought they were. | The smell of coffee serenaded my nostrils as I took a deep breath. I stretched out on the bed, taking advantage of the ability to sleep in a little. The kids had stayed the night with a friend, and Alan was in the kitchen fixing breakfast. I loved when he got inspired to cook. He was amazing in the kitchen, and had the... | 6 | 0 | 5 | 22,240 |
[EU] Godzilla suddenly appears in the DC comics universe. Describe what happens | A gaunt figure glided eerily along the ocean depths, unhindered by the lack of oxygen or the enormous pressures of the deep sea.
Dream took a seat against one of the enormous, monolithic structures towering above him. He sighed and leaned his head back, his presence bewildering several schools of fish passing by in th... | 1 | 0 | 4 | 22,241 |
[PI] Super Dwarf! FEB CONTEST | Also, does anyone know how I can display this document differently? I don't want it to take up the whole screen. Am I even allowed to change it now? | 1 | 0 | 10 | 22,242 |
[PI] Super Dwarf! FEB CONTEST | I just finished reading this and it was pretty entertaining. I enjoyed your descriptions of the doctor and his actions especially - they were very funny. My girlfriend kept asking what I was chuckling at while reading this. Thanks for sharing. | 2 | 0 | 10 | 22,243 |
[PI] Super Dwarf! FEB CONTEST | Hi! I think you did a nice job in striking a goofy, zany tone. I especially liked the chapters with Dorf learning to speak.
The second-person-present writing is interesting; I felt like I was reading a Choose Your Own Adventure.
I was a little confused by the framing at the beginning and end, and what was going on wi... | 1 | 0 | 10 | 22,244 |
[PI] Super Dwarf! FEB CONTEST | You have a solid sense of humor, and a playfulness of tone that I envy. The premise is especially strong, and it's easy to see how you started with a strong idea that you loved. However, the story also reads like you were making it up as you went along, without any plan or idea of how it would end, especially the endin... | 1 | 0 | 10 | 22,245 |
[PI] Super Dwarf! FEB CONTEST | You have a wonderfully strong comic voice and I found myself laughing throughout the book. This is definitely something I would read the full-length version of and I would most definitely enjoy the series, so keep on working! There are mechanical hiccups here and there, but that is only to be expected due to the nature... | 1 | 0 | 10 | 22,246 |
[PI] THE TOWER OF THE LOBSTER'S PROMISE - FEB CONTEST | That is a seriously awesome title. | 3 | 0 | 6 | 22,247 |
[PI] THE TOWER OF THE LOBSTER'S PROMISE - FEB CONTEST | Oh, why did it have to be another story that hits the upper end of the word limit yet kept my interest to the end? This was a marvelous tale. It's weird to say, but my biggest complaint was that this wasn't longer as I would have liked to see Farhan's powers grow a bit more slowly and to have his transformation grow mo... | 4 | 0 | 6 | 22,248 |
[PI] THE TOWER OF THE LOBSTER'S PROMISE - FEB CONTEST | This was so very good. I've read about a third of the novelettes and this one... great. So damn good. I hope this story gets some love.
Thanks for sharing. Good luck! | 3 | 0 | 6 | 22,249 |
[PI] THE TOWER OF THE LOBSTER'S PROMISE - FEB CONTEST | What a fantastic story! This was a treat to read.
I have the same critique points as Unintendo, and I share his/her sentiment that I wish this entry was longer. I was enthralled by your storytelling. | 2 | 0 | 6 | 22,250 |
[PI] THE TOWER OF THE LOBSTER'S PROMISE - FEB CONTEST | I enjoyed this. The pacing is good, and both the story and the characters interesting enough to make me keep going. I'll echo /u/Unintendo's comments about the inconsistencies with the setting and tone of the dialogue, but setting that aside, I thought you did very well at consistency with the names. Fantasy names c... | 3 | 0 | 6 | 22,251 |
[PI] THE TOWER OF THE LOBSTER'S PROMISE - FEB CONTEST | That was fantastic! I liked that it was a modern retelling of Jekyll and Hyde, and I liked the "boss levels" at every story of the tower. Thank you, this was a fun read. | 2 | 0 | 6 | 22,252 |
[PI] THE TOWER OF THE LOBSTER'S PROMISE - FEB CONTEST | Seriously great and hilarious title (and much respect for taking the random title generator and just running with it).
You did a nice job building a world around the title. Farhan is initially a believable, flawed character; you do a good job setting up that he's sort of shy and unpopular. I like the Middle Eastern-in... | 3 | 0 | 6 | 22,253 |
[PI] THE TOWER OF THE LOBSTER'S PROMISE - FEB CONTEST | I really enjoyed it! I think it could use some chapter breaks though, and I'm slightly disappointed with the lack of talking lobsters. | 2 | 0 | 6 | 22,254 |
[PI] THE TOWER OF THE LOBSTER'S PROMISE - FEB CONTEST | This was a very interesting read. I really liked the names, although the confused me at times, and I like how you trailed off from the standard European medieval titles and grabbed Arabic ones instead. The feeling and atmosphere of a mage tower, other worlds and stuff like that was certainly there, your descriptions be... | 1 | 0 | 6 | 22,255 |
[PI] THE PROFANE CARTOGRAPHER OF THE COSMOS - FEB CONTEST | Forgot to mention, it's about 8400 words. And thank you to /r/WritingPrompts for inspiring me to stop overthinking everything and just write - this is the first contest of this type I've entered! | 1 | 0 | 8 | 22,256 |
[PI] THE PROFANE CARTOGRAPHER OF THE COSMOS - FEB CONTEST | Hey, just read your story. Good luck in the contest!
Some criticism -
I like the setup, that some doodling IT woman unwittingly maps out the universe, gets a visit from the future . . . But you turned it into a timetravel story. And nothing that happened in space had anything to do with her interesting abilities. ... | 2 | 0 | 8 | 22,257 |
[PI] THE PROFANE CARTOGRAPHER OF THE COSMOS - FEB CONTEST | After reading this I appreciated the effort you put into explaining the time travel. I also really liked that you accounted for the movement of the Earth on the first jump. I think you glossed over this same fact at the end, though - I'm not certain she would land somewhere safe.
I also thought this was a great idea w... | 2 | 0 | 8 | 22,258 |
[PI] THE PROFANE CARTOGRAPHER OF THE COSMOS - FEB CONTEST | You've got some interesting ideas here, no doubt about that. But I'm having some problems with the tone.
Maya's observations about Yorick, before the reveal, are too spot-on. Since you open with a spaceship, we the readers know Yorick is obviously not from around here, and obviously you do as the author...but you're... | 1 | 0 | 8 | 22,259 |
[PI] THE PROFANE CARTOGRAPHER OF THE COSMOS - FEB CONTEST | Hello, possible fellow Torontonian! Funny that this is the second story in the contest I've read that's set in Toronto, and mine is, too. A lot of us are nerds, I guess.
Love this title! I admit I have a soft spot for the stories that went all-out with the nutty titles from the one title generator.
I was drawn into ... | 2 | 0 | 8 | 22,260 |
[PI] THE PROFANE CARTOGRAPHER OF THE COSMOS - FEB CONTEST | First off, congratulations on a very interesting story with some very cool elements. It's obvious that you've really thought through the time travel and future elements and there were some truly unique concepts.
My critiques are pretty much in line with everyone else. I realize that the cartography is part of the titl... | 1 | 0 | 8 | 22,261 |
[PI] THE PROFANE CARTOGRAPHER OF THE COSMOS - FEB CONTEST | Hi, I thought the idea of alien cartographers so novel and I'm glad you wrote it out! I have the same challenges reading this that were raised by other readers, particularly why she needs to go to the future (aside from being cool and for introducing some neat time travel concepts), the ending was rushed and seemed has... | 1 | 0 | 8 | 22,262 |
[WP] People born on February 29th only physically age one year for every four years | Sadness condensed inside Patrick, a rounded cluster of pain, anguish and loneliness. Releasing via precipitation, it clattered to the floor, as if from a shower-head on the highest setting.
"But...but I"
Coach Jackson waved a meaty, calloused hand an inch away from the waterspout.
"I know Pat. You did your best,... | 5 | 0 | 13 | 22,263 |
[WP] People born on February 29th only physically age one year for every four years | [deleted] | 4 | 0 | 13 | 22,264 |
[WP] Everyone has a day long amnesia on the same date every year. On this day people don't act normal as evident by strange signs the next day. | The 24th of March- it was the date a lot of adults tried to avoid, or more specifically the 23rd, but as unfortunate as it was, some just couldn’t. We could not record what happened within that 24-hour gap of the 24th, all devices seemed to jump the day, and we all stood in the same spot that we were in before the jump... | 2 | 0 | 18 | 22,265 |
[WP] Someone who cried so much, it made him laugh | The wind eddied through the cavernous hallway where Isaac sat, back to the window, cradling his once lover in his arms. The eyes of Annika stared blankly towards the ceiling, her once full rosy face was now grey and thin, her mouth was gaping. Isaac wiped his eyes on his sleeve, but he could no longer prevent the tears... | 2 | 0 | 3 | 22,266 |
[PM] I like to write short stories with twists. Hit me! | A date is interrupted by a terrorist attack. | 1 | 0 | 7 | 22,267 |
[PM] I like to write short stories with twists. Hit me! | I'll offer you [this](http://www.reddit.com/r/WhatIfAliens/comments/1vcypo/what_if_aliens_arrive_and_they_are_from_the_past/) or [this](http://www.reddit.com/r/WhatIfAliens/comments/1v0zts/what_if_simulated_universe_scenario_within/) as the basis for a short story. I'm not the greatest writer, and I'm looking for someo... | 1 | 0 | 7 | 22,268 |
[PM] I like to write short stories with twists. Hit me! | Write about a child with an imaginary friend, and the day said imaginary friend starts interacting with the kid's parents. | 1 | 0 | 7 | 22,269 |
[PM] I like to write short stories with twists. Hit me! | A man is dating a beautiful woman but decides that he should break up with her. She's a serial killer that really doesn't want to let him go. | 1 | 0 | 7 | 22,270 |
[WP] In a cave, some hikers discover a water-filled vertical shaft to a long-abandoned mining operation. Scare me. | [deleted] | 3 | 0 | 7 | 22,271 |
[WP] In a cave, some hikers discover a water-filled vertical shaft to a long-abandoned mining operation. Scare me. | "Holy shit." Willie whispered. Jason echoed the cry. Their cries were all the tunnel needed to finish it's collapse, sealing them in. Willie dropped his flash light and watched it go bouncing across the ground before plunging into the dark water beyond. He hurried over to the pool and watched it sink into the abyss bel... | 7 | 0 | 7 | 22,272 |
[WP] In a cave, some hikers discover a water-filled vertical shaft to a long-abandoned mining operation. Scare me. | Dylan was still spreading the contents of his soaked-through pack around the fire when he heard his name echo from the back of the cave again. He sighed and rose, traipsing back towards the bobbing headlamp that marked Eli’s location. The white beam swept toward Dylan as he approached, and then quickly back down to t... | 3 | 0 | 7 | 22,273 |
[WP] In a cave, some hikers discover a water-filled vertical shaft to a long-abandoned mining operation. Scare me. | "How far do you think this goes?" She asked me.
"I don't know, Lea." I shrugged and peered into the flooded shaft.
We had been hiking in this area since we were children and had never come across this place before. David, who was standing behind us, suggested that perhaps the recent earthquake had revealed the entra... | 1 | 0 | 7 | 22,274 |
[PI] RELO - FEB CONTEST | This was an absolutely amazing story. Hope to vote for you :) | 2 | 0 | 11 | 22,275 |
[PI] RELO - FEB CONTEST | This has a strong plot, although there is some trouble between the balance of showing and telling--especially with the page or two of exposition at the beginning, and a few characters that broadcast their emotions too radically in a short period of time (Kat seems to move especially quickly between emotions.)
One or t... | 3 | 0 | 11 | 22,276 |
[PI] RELO - FEB CONTEST | I found this to be a very well-written story and an entertaining read. The idea is great and you do a wonderful job of setting up the world. Whereas I found the world to be very convincing, I was a little lost on Reis' motivations. His ultimate plan seemed incongruous with what I imagine the outside world to be. I'm be... | 3 | 0 | 11 | 22,277 |
[PI] RELO - FEB CONTEST | Good story! I'm already looking forward to seeing what will happen next. | 2 | 0 | 11 | 22,278 |
[PI] RELO - FEB CONTEST | Hi! Great story! I was pulled in immediately. Your writing is clear and easy to follow, and the plot is well-paced and absorbing.
I ordinarily don't like beginnings that are exposition-heavy, but you did a nice job of it. The world-building is interesting and I wanted to know more. I wanted to understand why Tor was a... | 3 | 0 | 11 | 22,279 |
[PI] RELO - FEB CONTEST | I enjoyed it. Really gripping, I couldn't stop reading. I do have a few minor gripes though. The villains were a bit moustache twirly for my tastes, and I think you overused the word "petite" to the point where it got weird.
I'm looking forward to part 2, you should post it on here as a [PI]. | 1 | 0 | 11 | 22,280 |
[WP] Tell us the story of Twitch plays Pokemon | [deleted] | 5 | 0 | 3 | 22,281 |
[WP] Tell us the story of Twitch plays Pokemon | [deleted] | -3 | 0 | 3 | 22,282 |
[WP] Tell us the story of Twitch plays Pokemon | Rogue lay in bed face up, curled in a ball underneath his sheets. His body trembled from the top-down, trapped somewhat by the masking tape used to fix him into this position. The doctors said that his condition was incurable, and that he should be euthanized to spare him the pain. But his mother rejected this, insisti... | 1 | 0 | 3 | 22,283 |
[WP] A time traveler appears in front of a child and kills it, claiming with irrefutable evidence that it would have grown up to commit horrible acts. Describe the court case that follows | "Do you swear to tell the truth and nothing but the truth?"
He tentatively nodded. No matter what he said, he knew they wouldn't understand. You see, his name is Brian Gale who came from a world not too far away. Not in respect to space, but rather in respect to time. Time travel was finally made possible in 2099 due ... | 14 | 0 | 35 | 22,284 |
[WP] A time traveler appears in front of a child and kills it, claiming with irrefutable evidence that it would have grown up to commit horrible acts. Describe the court case that follows | Well, in the US we don't punish future crime, because this isn't some shitty sci-fi movie.
You killed an innocent kid.
You're sentenced to [sentence varies depending on jurisdiction]. | 4 | 0 | 35 | 22,285 |
[WP] A time traveler appears in front of a child and kills it, claiming with irrefutable evidence that it would have grown up to commit horrible acts. Describe the court case that follows | *I’m sorry for playing fast and loose with the prompt – the image that came to mind was from before the trial. Anyway, 900 words.*
Alberto had spent two hours with the delusional murderer. As district attorney he had spoken with a lot of hard cases. This one was just weird. A case more for the psychiatrists than the l... | 7 | 0 | 35 | 22,286 |
[WP] A time traveler appears in front of a child and kills it, claiming with irrefutable evidence that it would have grown up to commit horrible acts. Describe the court case that follows | The case wouldn't leave the news. The scientific and metaphysical questions were boundless but the questions in the news were largely irrelevant. One reporter wanted to know what would happen with Justin Bieber's impending charges, they would give updates as they received them. It was easy to see that someone on high w... | 1 | 0 | 35 | 22,287 |
[WP] A trained assassin's final mission is to kill her husband. What does she do? | I hear him enter through the back door, "Honey, you in?"
He takes a moment to let down his bag and receive a response, hearing nothing he heads to the bedroom.
After a minute or two he emerges, freed from his tie and shiny shoes he makes his way to the bathroom.
The stage is set, I am ready. For the last 2 ... | 8 | 0 | 9 | 22,288 |
[WP] A trained assassin's final mission is to kill her husband. What does she do? | Diana dared to put a little skip in her step as she headed to the park to recieve her final orders. She'd been embedded in this hellhole of a country for 10 months, and she'd been on this assignment for even longer. It had all started two years ago when she'd been assigned to seduce a diplomat, so that she could get ac... | 3 | 0 | 9 | 22,289 |
[WP] A trained assassin's final mission is to kill her husband. What does she do? | From across the room, the blocky, red numbers changed. *3:57*. Nearly 4 in the morning. She should have been asleep already, and almost any other night, she already would have been unconscious, wrapped in her husband's arms.
Her husband. She twisted her engagement ring, the stone catching on the space between her f... | 1 | 0 | 9 | 22,290 |
[MODPOST] The 50,000 Subscriber Novelette Contest Voting Thread! Get ready to read! | I am so fucking pumped to start reading, and let the best writer win! | 6 | 0 | 85 | 22,291 |
[MODPOST] The 50,000 Subscriber Novelette Contest Voting Thread! Get ready to read! | Good luck to all involved. I am enjoying reading these. It is such a great thing. | 14 | 0 | 85 | 22,292 |
[MODPOST] The 50,000 Subscriber Novelette Contest Voting Thread! Get ready to read! | Well, now I know how I'm spending my spring break. | 5 | 0 | 85 | 22,293 |
[MODPOST] The 50,000 Subscriber Novelette Contest Voting Thread! Get ready to read! | Hey, would you mind if I told /r/cyberpunk about this? I'm sure there would be a few of them that would enjoy reading sci-fi all day long. They aren't allowed to vote, so they can't really botch anything, right? | 6 | 0 | 85 | 22,294 |
[MODPOST] The 50,000 Subscriber Novelette Contest Voting Thread! Get ready to read! | So, at 7500 words per entry, this contest alone generated a *minimum* of 540,000 words. That's pretty astounding.
Would anyone be interested in counting all the words and getting an absolute number? With one other person we could divide the entries in half and use an online word counter to get a more exact figure. ... | 7 | 0 | 85 | 22,295 |
[MODPOST] The 50,000 Subscriber Novelette Contest Voting Thread! Get ready to read! | I've started to read through them and intend to leave detailed feedback for everyone. Question, though -- I've been leaving the feedback on the individual pages for each story, not here. Should it be here, instead? I was wondering about whether my comments would influence others' reads of the stories.
EDIT: ooh, first... | 10 | 1 | 85 | 22,296 |
[MODPOST] The 50,000 Subscriber Novelette Contest Voting Thread! Get ready to read! | [deleted] | 3 | 0 | 85 | 22,297 |
[MODPOST] The 50,000 Subscriber Novelette Contest Voting Thread! Get ready to read! | I would say, RELO is absolutely amazing. My vote goes to him.
EDIT: For now. I guess I have to read the others. | 5 | 0 | 85 | 22,298 |
[MODPOST] The 50,000 Subscriber Novelette Contest Voting Thread! Get ready to read! | I've skimmed them and the story 'Immortal Game' by /u/Brad_Collins really appealed to me, and I'm voting for it. Maybe it's the genre, maybe it's the subject, maybe it's the writing - but I enjoyed it. | 4 | 0 | 85 | 22,299 |
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