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[WP] A very old tree which allows people in its shade to completely understand each other. Someone has come to destroy it. | A man is traipsing up the hill, axe in hand. He reaches the top and stood before the gigantic tree. The man wets his lips and steps into the tree's shade. As he stepps in, he notices a boy in the corner of his periphery. The boy is smiling warmly, the summer breeze flowing through his hair. The man watches him and his ... | 3 | 0 | 169 | 22,600 |
[WP] A very old tree which allows people in its shade to completely understand each other. Someone has come to destroy it. | The Old Tree by the lake was, in my opinion the only true wonder of the world. Being charged with its protection, I made sure only the sincere made it within reach of it's enlightening shade.
It was a Sunday, the one day of the week nobody was allowed to visit the tree, when a man in a black suit came up to it, wield... | 13 | 0 | 169 | 22,601 |
[WP] A very old tree which allows people in its shade to completely understand each other. Someone has come to destroy it. | High stone walls stretched up and around, attempting to blot out the horizon with a solid line of stone. The wall extended ominously in front of Ava, casting a shadow onto the ground before it. Nothing grew there, in the dark patches cast by the wall. She tightened her hold on her horse's reigns as she approached the l... | 5 | 0 | 169 | 22,602 |
[WP] A very old tree which allows people in its shade to completely understand each other. Someone has come to destroy it. | The old man sat on the dirt with his back against the tree. The tree which had stopped wars, the tree which had saved his marriage with his sweet Marla, the tree that saved his son from his dark path.
The tree rustled, sprinkling the old man with leaves. A figure appeared not very far away. He was clad in leather armo... | 1 | 0 | 169 | 22,603 |
[WP] A very old tree which allows people in its shade to completely understand each other. Someone has come to destroy it. | She approached the tree, axe in hand.
As far back as her peoples' history extended, the Knowing Tree, as it had come to be called since before her grandfathers grandfather was a boy, had stood in the clearing. A relic of an ancient age, all who stood in it's shade were granted understanding and peace. Would be conque... | 7 | 0 | 169 | 22,604 |
[WP] A very old tree which allows people in its shade to completely understand each other. Someone has come to destroy it. | It wasn't long before war broke out after the discovery of The Sympathetic Shade. We still have not found The Fountain of Youth or managed to skillfully perform alchemy, but humanity stumbled upon a special tree three short years ago. This tree has the remarkable ability to mend and coalesce the consciousness of two in... | 1 | 0 | 169 | 22,605 |
[WP] A very old tree which allows people in its shade to completely understand each other. Someone has come to destroy it. | I saw his body begin to quake. Well, not at first. At first he stood there, statuesque, full of pride, the epitome of strength. This aged marine was the embodiment of discipline, self-control, and brutal abuse.
I took my dad to the cove in hopes of him seeing me for who I was, understanding that I am not a broken... | 2 | 0 | 169 | 22,606 |
[WP] A very old tree which allows people in its shade to completely understand each other. Someone has come to destroy it. | [deleted] | 1 | 0 | 169 | 22,607 |
[WP] A very old tree which allows people in its shade to completely understand each other. Someone has come to destroy it. | Winter had come early this year. The barren branches bespoke a quiet dignity. Nobody rested among the exposed roots. Nobody nuzzled into the grassless patches worn away by countless others. This behemoth tree maintained the unique ability for those in its watchful shadow to completely understand each other. Conflicts h... | 1 | 0 | 169 | 22,608 |
[WP] A very old tree which allows people in its shade to completely understand each other. Someone has come to destroy it. | The Rinpoche sat in lotus position in the tactical command center on Airfortress Alpha, and waited nervously for a report that his elite paratrooper squad had landed. Given how thin resources were, this was his last chance to destroy the Atriavia. Everything was on the line, the entire revolution, the hopes and strug... | 2 | 0 | 169 | 22,609 |
[WP] A very old tree which allows people in its shade to completely understand each other. Someone has come to destroy it. | They started in 5th grade. My “vision cascades.” Followed by the crippling headache and dizziness and the vomit. One a day, each worse than the last, and they abruptly stopped after about a year. Didn’t tell anyone until years later. Nobody was gonna send me for tests. Nobody was gonna tell me I had brain tumors.... | 2 | 0 | 169 | 22,610 |
[WP] A very old tree which allows people in its shade to completely understand each other. Someone has come to destroy it. | “Come, let me know you.” I say. My voice is a whisper that catches along my throat and barely drags past my teeth. “Please, let me understand who you are.” You stand there out of the shade, just out of reach. I stand here enveloped and waiting, nestled against the knotted and burled trunk. I want to hate you, to ra... | 2 | 0 | 169 | 22,611 |
[WP] A very old tree which allows people in its shade to completely understand each other. Someone has come to destroy it. | I relaxed in the shade of the large oak tree in my backyard. It was a hot, sticky, summer day, like so many before it. I laid back, staring into the branches of the lovely tree. This tree had been through it all. Through the death of my dad in Germany in '45, through my mother's death a year later. This tree had been m... | 1 | 0 | 169 | 22,612 |
[WP] A very old tree which allows people in its shade to completely understand each other. Someone has come to destroy it. | The walls around the shrine are seventy feet tall, made of an amalgamation of stone, steel-cement, stress and fear. The circumference touches the city which it belongs to, but only just - keeping its corruption and its men at bay. A lone root has been tentatively testing the walls for the past century or two without si... | 2 | 0 | 169 | 22,613 |
[WP]: one day, the protagonist realises they have the ability to get people to give them anything they want by asking nicely | The monk continues to listen, he had been listening for three hours by now.
"And the last, oh great monk! Give me the power to play the most beautiful sounds from my flute, and I promise I will use it well!"
The monk continues to stare at the eager young man.
"So...? Is it possible?", asked the young man.
"You're d... | 3 | 0 | 8 | 22,614 |
[PI] Eternal Earth - FEB CONTEST | I liked the idea of starting from an alien POV. I also liked the twist at the end, explaining why Jennica had to be the one to go. The story itself was a bit "YA" for me, but I liked it and there's definitely an audience for this sort of thing!
Your writing is technically proficient, but I found it swung from dry to m... | 3 | 0 | 11 | 22,615 |
[PI] Eternal Earth - FEB CONTEST | This is a novella that I feel could stand to be a little bit longer, the end left me wanting more! There are plenty of opportunities throughout the story that I feel you could expand and add more to the characters of Jennica and Dan.
That being said, the very beginning was a little bit slow to me, but it picked up onc... | 3 | 0 | 11 | 22,616 |
[PI] Eternal Earth - FEB CONTEST | Because there are so many stories to read, I'm going to give two pieces of positive feedback and two pieces of negative feedback. Congrats on finishing such a long piece of writing!
1. My opinion is always that sci-fi should let us look at ourselves, as humans, using the lens of the fantastic. Aliens are probably the ... | 3 | 0 | 11 | 22,617 |
[PI] Eternal Earth - FEB CONTEST | I don't really have anything new to add in terms of critique or comments, just wanted to say I enjoyed reading this story. Good luck! | 2 | 0 | 11 | 22,618 |
[PI] Eternal Earth - FEB CONTEST | I really enjoyed it! Solid characterisation, and it's well written. I thought it was well paced, personally. I enjoyed seeing things from the point of view of the aliens up on the ship. I do agree with the others criticizing the convenient coincidences though. | 1 | 0 | 11 | 22,619 |
[PI] Eternal Earth - FEB CONTEST | >she traced a long finger around the window, connecting speckles of stars to one another.
I like that part. It sounds like something a bored space traveler would do.
Also, that twist. Nice.
For some reason, it reminded me of the sort of story John Green would tell. | 2 | 0 | 11 | 22,620 |
[PI] Eternal Earth - FEB CONTEST | I agree with the majority of the points around here. I felt like I was reading a book about a thirteen year old girl, not a twenty-three year old. Good ideas, wish it was expanded on more, and in a way things just felt a bit over the top. I mean, Dan was just grabbing onto her. Kind of ridiculous.
Overall? A good stor... | 1 | 0 | 11 | 22,621 |
[PI] Eternal Earth - FEB CONTEST | Hey, I don't really have anything new to add that other reviewers haven't already mentioned (Jennica's immaturity, contrived nature of the plot). I just wanted to leave a comment to let you know I really enjoyed this story, I found it really easy to get into. I especially like the way you used the alien PoV. | 2 | 0 | 11 | 22,622 |
[PM] Please help me avoid this editing funk | A man tries to get back at a fried who slept with his wife, but ends up accidentally killing the president. Explain what happened. | 2 | 0 | 5 | 22,623 |
[PM] Please help me avoid this editing funk | A man is shipwrecked on a deserted island. His only companion is a mermaid who visits him every day at the shore. | 1 | 0 | 5 | 22,624 |
[WP] Select a Grimm Fairy Tale. Reboot it in a sci-fi setting. | Tale - [The Three Little Men in the Wood](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Three_Little_Men_in_the_Wood)
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"I don't quite understand, Father. What's happening?"
"I told you, Eliza, I'm being remarried."
I was in shock, neither knowing what to say or what to think really. Mother had only died three nights ago in ... | 2 | 0 | 23 | 22,625 |
[WP] Select a Grimm Fairy Tale. Reboot it in a sci-fi setting. | [deleted] | 1 | 0 | 23 | 22,626 |
[WP] Select a Grimm Fairy Tale. Reboot it in a sci-fi setting. | Story - Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs.
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"Snow White, this is Rose Red and Three Bears, We'll be your escort down to the planet. The princess's father is awaiting her arrival at the capital."
"Rose Red, we copy. Glad to have you as escort." Star Glider known as Snow Wh... | 1 | 0 | 23 | 22,627 |
[WP] Select a Grimm Fairy Tale. Reboot it in a sci-fi setting. | Adette Rose had the great misfortune of being human. She had two plain, brown eyes, a generous supply of plain brown hair, pale skin and a soft smile. She was normal as could be, forgettable, and hated by her mother and sisters.
Dr. Halag Von Isely had once been beautiful and intelligent, a scientist and philosopher w... | 2 | 0 | 23 | 22,628 |
[WP] Select a Grimm Fairy Tale. Reboot it in a sci-fi setting. | The Devil With the Three Golden Hairs
Emperor Alcion's fleet numbered over 2000 starfaring vessels, all of which had converged upon a tiny offworld planet 2000 lightyears away from the Etruia, the seat of power of the League of a thousand planets. None of the officers knew why, except for the chronomancers....
"Truel... | 1 | 0 | 23 | 22,629 |
[WP] Select a Grimm Fairy Tale. Reboot it in a sci-fi setting. | Agent Red clapped the locks down on the briefcase. Above her, an older, stern woman spoke from a video feed. This woman was the top in the chain of command at Red’s corporation: the infamous and the unyielding Grandmother. Her gray hair was pulled back into a tight bun. Her face was creased, angular, and unsmiling. The... | 2 | 0 | 23 | 22,630 |
[PI] Wolf Block - FEB CONTEST | Very interesting and original premise! | 2 | 0 | 9 | 22,631 |
[PI] Wolf Block - FEB CONTEST | Well this was interesting as hell. Fantastic job! | 2 | 0 | 9 | 22,632 |
[PI] Wolf Block - FEB CONTEST | Just fantastic!
I would read a full novel of this in a heartbeat! Great entry, and good luck! | 2 | 0 | 9 | 22,633 |
[PI] Wolf Block - FEB CONTEST | This was a good read. I think that climax was a little rushed, because you go into so much detail, describing your protagonist as a closed-minded person and she folds comparatively quickly. It also feels like only the first chapter of a much larger story, which would make sense, since its relatively short.
Anyways, t... | 2 | 0 | 9 | 22,634 |
[PI] Wolf Block - FEB CONTEST | Hi! I liked this story. Your writing is good and clear, and I was drawn in by wanting to know what Wolf Block is. You did a nice job establishing the mystery.
You did a nice job, as well, characterizing Bunierti in short order: tough, smart, but not terribly social and bitchy-rich enough to threaten using lawyers and... | 2 | 0 | 9 | 22,635 |
[PI] Wolf Block - FEB CONTEST | I really enjoyed this! Your writing style is clear and easy to read, it flows well and the pacing of the plot was just right. Good characterisation of Bunierti, and the overall mysterious atmosphere left me wanting to see more. | 2 | 0 | 9 | 22,636 |
[WP] You start to wake up from a dream with a beautiful woman. As you fight to stay in the dream you grab her hand and when you wake up she has been made real. | "Get off me, get the fuck off me!"
Lancelot was getting choked to death by this new person who only now entered the realm of reality. Well, choked to death by french kissing, but you get my point.
Get off of me you... You beautiful monster!" Lancelot kicks her off the bed and runs into the hallway.
"What am I gonna... | 3 | 0 | 18 | 22,637 |
[WP] You start to wake up from a dream with a beautiful woman. As you fight to stay in the dream you grab her hand and when you wake up she has been made real. | I don't know how I got here. I try to remember, but every time I do, all I see is you. My vision feels like a tunnel, as if you are the light at the end, and everything else is a dark mess of inconsequential nothingness. Something is wrong. I can feel it. I can see it. Your features are as smooth as a peaceful body of ... | 2 | 0 | 18 | 22,638 |
[WP] You start to wake up from a dream with a beautiful woman. As you fight to stay in the dream you grab her hand and when you wake up she has been made real. | Sleep seem to be the only place I find refuge these days. A crappy job, a crappy apartment, and a crappy social life. At least when I sleep, I can dream. I may not get a guarantee of a happy dream, but at least there's a glimmer of hope. A chance to have some brief glimpse of utter happiness. Why else to I wake to damp... | 10 | 0 | 18 | 22,639 |
[WP] You start to wake up from a dream with a beautiful woman. As you fight to stay in the dream you grab her hand and when you wake up she has been made real. | As the alarm played the strains of whatever shitty music the DJs had chosen that morning, I reached out my hand, my eyes resolutely shut as I struggled to hold onto the last images of the dream, already disappearing in the early morning light.
Brunette. She'd been a brunette. Or maybe raven-haired. Perhaps a dark redh... | 1 | 0 | 18 | 22,640 |
[FF] Ink costs more than human blood | [deleted] | 1 | 0 | 11 | 22,641 |
[FF] Ink costs more than human blood | When he finally came to, he found himself strapped upright to a cold, metal chair, bound at his hands and feet with what felt like leather belts. Opening his reluctant eyes and forcing himself to wake up, he found himself half-consciously gazing at nothing but a cold, distant darkness, offering no hints of where he cou... | 2 | 0 | 11 | 22,642 |
[FF] Ink costs more than human blood | *“Ink cost more than human blood.”
The printer said with glee.
So I suggest to be a man...
and choose parsimony!*
The old folk song was etched deep within my mind since I was little, a nightmare tale for children who spent too much time reading late at night. It wasn’t so much that reading was inherently evi... | 5 | 0 | 11 | 22,643 |
[FF] Ink costs more than human blood | The fifth-graders stared through the glass at the black and purple letters on the paper.
“It looks gross,” little Priscilla said. “Why would you want letters to be black, anyway?”
“Well, Priscilla,” I said, shuddering slightly. I’d been teaching for decadess now, and it still sent a shiver down my spine that the red... | 3 | 0 | 11 | 22,644 |
[WP] A sniper and his spotter discover their assigned target is actually an alien. | "Should we call boss?"
"Goddammit James, keep your aim!"
"That thing isn't going anywhere. It stood still for like what now? Five minutes?"
"Three minutes actually", said Jon. James went back to his scope.
"What's that thing doing now?", asked Jon.
"I don't know, nothing. It's like it's waiting for something."
"... | 7 | 0 | 18 | 22,645 |
[WP] A sniper and his spotter discover their assigned target is actually an alien. | They have noticed me.
I am sitting on a bench, watching the people on the sidewalk walking, talking, living. With my New York Yankees baseball cap on, no one can notice the only distinguishing feature that marks me apart.
They don't know I'm a foreigner. I've been on this planet long enough to know what they call for... | 8 | 0 | 18 | 22,646 |
[WP] A sniper and his spotter discover their assigned target is actually an alien. | [deleted] | 1 | 0 | 18 | 22,647 |
[WP] A sniper and his spotter discover their assigned target is actually an alien. | “Don’t fuck this up” the first words out of General Harell’s mouth had been ominous. Not initially, mind, Harell was known for his foul mouth. The man swore like a particularly drunk sailor, meaning all the time. Jake was sure the man had sworn in front of every officer and soldier in the army. He had certainly seen hi... | 3 | 0 | 18 | 22,648 |
[WP] A sniper and his spotter discover their assigned target is actually an alien. | Everyone here is assuming the alien will kill the snipers...
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*blam* the man fell over, dead.
"What the hell?" Hank muttered.
"What?"
"Look at this!" I peered in through my friend's scope. Green? The fucker had green blood?
"Hank, did you see?"
"Green, yeah." I stared into his eyes.
"Now what?"
"We coul... | 4 | 0 | 18 | 22,649 |
[WP] A sniper and his spotter discover their assigned target is actually an alien. | “How’s your sight line now?” asked Luna.
Denio looked through the scope of his tan rifle pointed down the hillside over looking the wooded valley below and grunted “It fucking sucks. This spot’s almost no good. C’mon man this shit might not fly. I can’t see half of the fucking compound”
“Yeah I’m picking up what your... | 1 | 0 | 18 | 22,650 |
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[PI] Forever Mask - FEB CONTEST | I wish I could express how much I enjoyed this. I liked the writing style very much and I liked this universe. I had a very good mental image of everything that was going on, too; I felt it was a really good job of world-building in a shorter story.
I don't really have much in the way of criticism. I was kind of curio... | 1 | 0 | 9 | 22,652 |
[PI] Forever Mask - FEB CONTEST | I enjoyed it, but I agree with you that it needs rewriting.
Here's some things to keep in mind when you tackle it:
Word repetition. For example, in the first three paragraphs, you use "mask" four times, and that's not counting it being half the title. Obviously, it's important, but repetition should be used sparing... | 1 | 0 | 9 | 22,653 |
[PI] Forever Mask - FEB CONTEST | This was an excellent piece. The world was clear and expansive without being overwhelming for a project of it's size. The ending does just what you said, but to me it seemed like a prequel to the actual story about the war. You've set up something great at the end for a very exciting full-length piece--to the point whi... | 1 | 0 | 9 | 22,654 |
[PI] Forever Mask - FEB CONTEST | Hi! This was a good story. I liked how you depicted Paris's attachment to his mask. I liked him as a character in general and would be interesting in learning more about his past as a badass fighter in a robot suit.
I also liked the German influences (although if in "devil arms" you wanted to refer to "arms" as in wea... | 1 | 0 | 9 | 22,655 |
[PI] Forever Mask - FEB CONTEST | You have an interesting world, but I have to admit that I didn't even realize he was a mecha pilot until I read your notes on this page. I had presumed he was a fighter pilot, and while I realized that an "orbital suit" wasn't a ship, I don't know enough about the genre to realize it was a mecha. It might have been wor... | 0 | 0 | 9 | 22,656 |
[WP] Jesus H. Chrysis | [OT] Maybe I should have described the front cover. Moses surfing on the inside of the parted red sea, wearing sunglasses. | 1 | 0 | 0 | 22,657 |
[WP] The world is, in fact, flat. Everybody has been lied to/misinformed. | I couldn't believe it.
I was standing in the conference room befuddled at the revelation that what I had been taught all of my life was a very carefully manufactured lie. The other members of the Flat Earth Society were sitting in their chairs looking at me with sympathetic understanding that a previous worldview had ... | 3 | 0 | 8 | 22,658 |
[WP] At the edge of the galaxy a lone Imperial Star Destroyer pick up a strange signal. | Just another day in the Unknown Regions. Patrolling and Scanning. The ship gossip was that the Emperor and Grand Admiral fear some sort of attack from these outlying regions of space, but everything we have scanned says otherwise. Regardless, if the Grand Admiral believes the Unknown Regions to hold an unseen threat, I... | 2 | 0 | 2 | 22,659 |
[WP] A person giving medical aid learns that they can touch the Reaper, who turns out to be extremely ticklish. | "There's no pulse!"
"Paddles!"
I quickly leaned over to the other side of the ambulance and reached into a the cabinet. As I reached for the box, the vehicle hit something in the road, jarring the cab.
"Fuck sake!" Jim cried, climbing back into the bench he was sitting in. "Craig, PADDLES!"
"I know, I know," I ex... | 3 | 0 | 12 | 22,660 |
[WP] A person giving medical aid learns that they can touch the Reaper, who turns out to be extremely ticklish. | 'I can never catch a break. I'm ON my break and I can't catch a break.'
This was the thought that went through Dr. Andrea Timms' head when she heard the cars colliding. In retrospect, it was a slightly harsh thing to think but 17 years as a trauma surgeon leave you somewhat numbed to the sympathies that Junior Doctor ... | 2 | 0 | 12 | 22,661 |
[WP] Give me a extremely detailed story, don't miss anything. Hide a mystery in it, and tell no one of it. | Jonathan felt himself being pushed awake. He had dreamed of her again, seven nights in a row. He felt a pit, deep in his stomach, the size of a baseball. It constantly weighed him down, keeping him off his feet. He had to wake up, he had to forget, he had to go somewhere else. Work, yes, work will do. It's enough of a ... | 3 | 0 | 17 | 22,662 |
[WP] You find a room in your office building that sends you back ten minutes into the past every time you enter it | I'd discovered the old cleaning cupboard around a year before. But I had never really needed it before. I mean, going back in time, ten minutes just seemed a bit useless. Especially in the office... At home, for a lie in, I'd have made much more use of it, but not here.
Today was different. I ran, I never run, but I ra... | 3 | 0 | 5 | 22,663 |
[WP] You find a room in your office building that sends you back ten minutes into the past every time you enter it | I glanced down at my watch as I ran along, trying desperately not to let the loose bundle of papers tucked under my arm come undone. The bouncing of my limbs made it hard to read the time, but I finally caught a glimpse of the clock face.
Shit. I was already five minutes late, and I had no idea where the meeting roo... | 7 | 0 | 5 | 22,664 |
[WP] The Illuminati try to tell everyone that this whole "secret society going for world domination" thing was a huge misunderstanding, with little success. | [deleted] | 2 | 0 | 11 | 22,665 |
[WP] The Illuminati try to tell everyone that this whole "secret society going for world domination" thing was a huge misunderstanding, with little success. | "And while the worldwide events are still unfolding, we have the extreme pleasure to be the first to have on our program: Illuminati Grand Master John Stewart Weishaupt III., ruler of the noocracy and hence in the quake of the recent events, all of planet Earth. Thank you for being with us tonight, your Highness."
"Mi... | 2 | 0 | 11 | 22,666 |
[PI] Half-Light Heaven - FEB CONTEST | Verrrry interesting. Absurd. Enticing.
I know this is a first draft, but that makes feedback all the more important rather than excusing any conceivable faults. So I'll try to give some constructive criticism.
I really have only one complaint, and it is one of style. Your character descriptions, while well-worded, ar... | 1 | 0 | 12 | 22,667 |
[PI] Half-Light Heaven - FEB CONTEST | I was going to write a long review, but mrironglass pretty much covered everything I was going to say. You wrote an excellent little piece and I'd love to see the next draft! | 2 | 0 | 12 | 22,668 |
[PI] Half-Light Heaven - FEB CONTEST | I like the idea you have, of Aaron "studying the connection of what may be to the soul to the body", but I think you could work a bit on the execution. Without the blurb I'm not sure I would have got that from the story.
Your writing is technically good but I found myself a little confused as to what was going on at t... | 2 | 0 | 12 | 22,669 |
[PI] Half-Light Heaven - FEB CONTEST | I agree with what some others have said - this was a really good idea and had a lot of interesting concepts that certainly merit more exploration. Still, there were some parts I was simply confused about what was occurring - mostly when they were at the party. I also had a hard time differentiating some of the characte... | 1 | 0 | 12 | 22,670 |
[IP] The boy and his demon guard. | ‘Must you play that infernal device, boy?’ The behemothian demon stared balefully at the elfin figure sprawled across the ornate seat.
‘Hush, Rupert,’ said the boy. ‘I’ve almost figured it out.’ He held a mandolin in his lap, his elegant fingers caressing the strings.
The demon snorted, and a cloud of fizzing steam... | 5 | 0 | 2 | 22,671 |
[OT]A writing game | Once there was.... | 1 | 0 | 12 | 22,672 |
[OT]A writing game | [deleted] | 1 | 0 | 12 | 22,673 |
[OT]A writing game | The knife fell... | 1 | 0 | 12 | 22,674 |
[PI] The Society of Nemesis - FEB CONTEST | I like the idea of this story (bickering exes in space!) but the execution needs work. For a concept like this, the dialogue needs to be consistently sharp. There are points where it is, but other scenes fall flat, especially the one in the bar, where the characters' sniping at each other is resolved pretty quickly giv... | 2 | 0 | 12 | 22,675 |
[PI] The Society of Nemesis - FEB CONTEST | Fun read. One thing I really enjoyed about this story is the various settings. The different planets, space stations, hyperspace - all that and more made this feel like an expansive universe. I also enjoyed the background of your heroes. At first I was a little wary - how does a journalist and a forensic accountant end... | 1 | 0 | 12 | 22,676 |
[WP] Whilst two kidnappers are holding a person hostage, they find out they've kidnapped the wrong guy. | The animal was hooded and cuffed in the corner of the van. It was a large hood, they needed one big enough for his figure. Kidnapping one of his celebrity status meant they had to be prepared, and having the right size of hood was simply the first step.
Then there was the issue with the cuffs, the guy had tiny wrist... | 6 | 0 | 23 | 22,677 |
[WP] Whilst two kidnappers are holding a person hostage, they find out they've kidnapped the wrong guy. | "How could you think this guy was the one we wanted?" The taller kidnapper waved his hand in my direction. "For chrissake he looks like he just gone done managing a Burger King. What the fuck were you thinking?"
Light was flooding in through the blinds, projecting from the street level where every cop and newscaster h... | 2 | 0 | 23 | 22,678 |
[WP] Whilst two kidnappers are holding a person hostage, they find out they've kidnapped the wrong guy. | "Alright! We got the bastard!" The driver cheered as he sped off in the van.
"Yeah, got 'em while they was sleepin'! All we had to do was throw the bag over 'ere head and drag 'em out!" The man next to me said.
I smiled under the hood. Oh, those poor miserable fools. They had no idea that they'd kidnapped very danger... | 1 | 0 | 23 | 22,679 |
[WP] Whilst two kidnappers are holding a person hostage, they find out they've kidnapped the wrong guy. | I stared at the young lady with the blonde hair. Muffled sobs could be heard beneath the hood, though I could have sworn I had gagged her. We pulled up at the dilapidated compound where we would be for the next few days.
"Get out. Do not try anything silly, for I can guarantee that the second you try to break free, yo... | 2 | 0 | 23 | 22,680 |
[WP] Whilst two kidnappers are holding a person hostage, they find out they've kidnapped the wrong guy. | Phillips wished for noise-cancelling earphones as he struggled to get some shuteye on the C-37A. Though he was at the aircraft's fore, the aft-located engines droned ceaselessly with a volume surprisingly loud for a civilian aircraft. True, he'd flown on Black Hawks, Chinooks, and Ospreys that were far louder than this... | 1 | 0 | 23 | 22,681 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | [deleted] | 388 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,682 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | [deleted] | -8 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,683 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | [deleted] | 1 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,684 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | [deleted] | 1 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,685 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | [deleted] | 1 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,686 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | History will remember me as a monster, but they will never know the truth. They know the man, they call him Adolf, that slaughtered 12 million civilians, that built camps to rivaldeath itself, that murdered and killed and left a world to rot.
They will know hell.
And, frankly, that's why I'm writing this today. I sit... | 215 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,687 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | [deleted] | 2 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,688 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | Jesus this is brilliant!
What if Adolf's life was a misery.. he, his family and his culture were under huge oppression from the Wasserman rule. By the year 2314 they controlled the media as far as the US - this one family dictated more than the Roman Empire ever dreamed of.. without breaking borders. It was all about ... | 16 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,689 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | The world will remember me as a monster, but that's only because they haven't met true monsters yet...
In my world the "Great War" really was the war to end all wars. Humanity never wanted to experience a tragedy like that again. People say time lessens tragedies, but that's not true, time immortalizes them. The furt... | 169 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,690 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | [deleted] | 1 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,691 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | I was born in April 20, 1889. But I was conceived in August 5, 2527.
You can't zap a person back in time when he's destined to become one of the most infamous murderer of all time, people will learn study up on his past, why he became like that, why would anyone want to be this way?
I had no choice. I was sent as a s... | 794 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,692 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | [deleted] | 11 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,693 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | *Writing this is not so that some future person can discover me and hail me as a hero. It is simply for the purposes of keeping me sane and on task. I pray no one finds this, as I have instructed all of my bodyguards to destroy any trace of it upon my death.*
They are not to read it, under penalty of death.
*I will s... | 443 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,694 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | They don't understand my plight nor sympathy for my cause; they stare with eyes full of judgment and I can see the hatred behind them... even as a man of reason, I'm finding this decision difficult.
I wish there was a better way, a diplomatic solvency to this problem but alas, it is all but a choice between one bloodb... | 2 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,695 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | The reporter sat down and adjusted his tie. He nervously handled a manila folder. He reached over and picked up the glass of water sitting on the desk. He marveled at the ice cube as it floated in the glass. Ice? Here, on a train? He snapped to attention as he heard the door open behind him.
"Minister Goebbels, i... | 84 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,696 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | "Press it" commanded Adolf.
With one press of a button Adolf travelled back in time, saw his family fade right before his eyes piece by piece. He would want to keep this memory - this final glimpse of his two kids and wife.
How far back did he travel? He did not know. Where he came from they had no use for time, no s... | 20 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,697 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | Disclaimer: What I am about to write is only a story. All views expressed are those of the characters alone.
"Do you understand the mission?"
"Yes, sir."
"Then repeat it. Who is your first target?"
"A Austrian boy, age 12, by the name of Adolf Hitler."
"And what are you to do when you find him?"
"I am to kill him... | 44 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,698 |
[WP] Adolf Hitler is a time traveler who starts world war two to save us from something far more terrible. | First prompt I've ever done. Criticism wanted!
***"The greatest atrocity is not that it happened, but that it was allowed to happen"*
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At times, I say to myself that I am only a man. At other times, I say I am a monster. I ask to all with open minds and open hearts, "how can one man become many?"
The answer is a c... | 6 | 0 | 1,366 | 22,699 |
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