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[WP] a man (or woman if you like) dies, and discovers that death is not the end. But what comes next is utterly unlike anything that any religion has ever predicted... | Josh blinked, but his vision remained quite blurry. He was staring at the wreckage, unable to comprehend what he saw. That was him, or at least he was pretty sure that was most of him. The driver had gotten out of their car and was sobbing over the wreckage. Josh could not really hear him, though. Everything was m... | 1 | 0 | 5 | 22,800 |
A Mall shopper breaks down in tears, then seeks solace in a restroom only to find his/her own face in the mirror smiling and laughing instead | Hey, don't forget to tag your prompts! Check out the sidebar for more details.
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Thanks! | 2 | 0 | 6 | 22,801 |
[WP] You're running through a forest, being chased by a monster. As you begin to wake up, you feel something grab your hand and wake up with the monster on top of you. | It’s just another morning. Get up. Get out. Get fit. The obsession of running has become one of my favourite past times and find it quite liberating. It's not just feeling the freedom of the forest but also pushing your body to be better. Push it to the limit and hopefully your mind will follow. Isn't that something th... | 5 | 0 | 7 | 22,802 |
[WP] You're running through a forest, being chased by a monster. As you begin to wake up, you feel something grab your hand and wake up with the monster on top of you. | He's chasing me. I've tried to escape his captivity before but it is no use. This is a fruitless effort and he will catch me before long, but this is as far as I've made it and I won't stop now.
I cut off the road towards some trees. He's getting closer. I can hear each of his steps getting louder and louder behind me... | 3 | 0 | 7 | 22,803 |
[WP] You're running through a forest, being chased by a monster. As you begin to wake up, you feel something grab your hand and wake up with the monster on top of you. | I tore through the woods, frantically glancing behind me. The monster was back there, I knew it. It darted between trees, a dark, shadowed thing that I couldn't get a good glimpse of. And if it caught me, terrible things would happen. With dream-like clarity, I knew the monster was hiding behind the face of someone... | 2 | 0 | 7 | 22,804 |
[WP] Radiowave, a D-class superhero that has the ability to alway know when his favorite song is on the radio, saves the world. | Superheroes don't take vacations. Even if they're D-listers. Which is why Brandon Reed was on vacation in Washington DC. Well, that and being D-list superhero Radiowave wasn't exactly the greatest way to get rich. So Brandon was on a simple little day trip down from his shitty apartment in a crime-infested area of ... | 5 | 0 | 9 | 22,805 |
[WP] Radiowave, a D-class superhero that has the ability to alway know when his favorite song is on the radio, saves the world. | **Radiowave in The Super Shitty Blind Date**
"So, uh, Rick didn't tell me you were a super."
Dave was ten minutes into his blind date and it was already getting a little awkward. The restaurant looked a little above his pay grade, the drinks were taking forever, and she had started the conversation with "I am legally... | 1 | 0 | 9 | 22,806 |
[WP] A man is permanently invisible, and immortal | **ENTRY NUMBER:** ∞
**DATE:** UNKNOWN
**MESSAGE**:
How many times have I repeated this cycle? Over and over again, I have watched the birth of this world, yet over and over again I have watched its end. I was surprised the first time this happened - as I saw the last lights in the sky disappear, a great bang flashed... | 6 | 0 | 5 | 22,807 |
[WP] A man is permanently invisible, and immortal | [deleted] | 1 | 0 | 5 | 22,808 |
[WP] A man is permanently invisible, and immortal | Would it be any help if I told you the universe *was* put here for the sole benefit of Man?
The *creator* wanted to make a place where we could relax for a lifetime - abundant with food and places to explore.
*Create*-d a sun for warmth and plants for food and animals for scenery.
*Consider*-ed then, why not a world... | 1 | 0 | 5 | 22,809 |
[PI] The Cannibal Fleet - FEB CONTEST | A very well written traditional sci-fi story! Good luck in the contest! | 1 | 0 | 12 | 22,810 |
[PI] The Cannibal Fleet - FEB CONTEST | Nice piece. Really enjoyed reading it.
Really like the world that you have created and the story within that world. I am a big fan of how the main character is very ethically questionable too.
The dialogue could be more “natural”. I am no expert, but I would suggest reading the dialogue out loud to yourself and con... | 5 | 0 | 12 | 22,811 |
[PI] The Cannibal Fleet - FEB CONTEST | Pirates! I thought this entry was very fun. Chapter one was very exciting (pirate attack!) but then chapter two, which is your main character giving a lot of exposition, kind of grinds the flow to a halt. The worldbuilding is very interesting, and I liked the idea of the habitation ring, but you might want to parcel ou... | 2 | 0 | 12 | 22,812 |
[PI] The Cannibal Fleet - FEB CONTEST | Hello! There were a lot of things I liked in your story. The entire idea of having space pirates use harpoons was definitely a different take, which I found unique. You also had a lot of interesting technological ideas that intrigued me - the habitation ring and the concept behind the ship reinforcing its hull both str... | 1 | 0 | 12 | 22,813 |
[PM] Need judges for an /r/writingprompt showdown!!! | I'm straight jacking this from tumblr, because I would love to write this story but I'm working on my own damned novel.
Full disclosure, I know /u/PushyPhoenix and thus will not be voting.
"*When she saw him time slowed to a stop. He was so perfect and she knew her life would never be the same because she had fina... | 3 | 0 | 16 | 22,814 |
[PM] Need judges for an /r/writingprompt showdown!!! | Because of your excellent choice of music, I decree that you and /u/PushyPhoenix shall begin with a Trial By Combat.
Write about two characters fighting. One will fight honorable--as Fezzik said, "As God intended, no tricks, no weapons; skill against skill alone." The other one will fight as dirty as you can possibly... | 4 | 0 | 16 | 22,815 |
[PM] Need judges for an /r/writingprompt showdown!!! | THOSE CARDS ARE MIIIIIINE.
Further disclosure: I have not actually finished shit. The first one I wrote contains scads of placeholders.
~~Also, with the prompts: Do we pick which one we want, or will we be writing on the same one or *whathowdoesthatwork*.~~
Oh wait. Ooohh, okay, I get it. All right, question re... | 6 | 0 | 16 | 22,816 |
[PM] Need judges for an /r/writingprompt showdown!!! | I am intrigued. I shall let this continue, for now.
However, you have this tagged as a PM. Six hour rule still applies, TO BOTH PARTIES. each must reapond to at least one prompt before time limit for this to remain up.
If someone fails to respond in time, they forfeit the competition.
May the odds be EVER in your f... | 6 | 0 | 16 | 22,817 |
[PM] Need judges for an /r/writingprompt showdown!!! | Two competitors realize mid-challenge, that they love each other. | 2 | 0 | 16 | 22,818 |
[PM] Need judges for an /r/writingprompt showdown!!! | [IP] This place can't be real...
[This place can't be real...](http://i.imgur.com/W4W9QBl.jpg)
[Source](http://www.reddit.com/r/OrganizationPorn/comments/1z0rr1/houses_in_san_buenaventura_mexico_1600x1200_xpost/) | 2 | 0 | 16 | 22,819 |
[PM] Need judges for an /r/writingprompt showdown!!! | lol. i love this. good luck to you both.
Image prompt. [Nightmare fuel.] (http://jflaxman.deviantart.com/art/The-Songless-Bird-325677848) | 3 | 0 | 16 | 22,820 |
[PM] Need judges for an /r/writingprompt showdown!!! |
Two members of /r/writingprompts solve their issue through polite civil discourse. | 3 | 0 | 16 | 22,821 |
[PM] Need judges for an /r/writingprompt showdown!!! | Sod it. I'll produce a prompt. Something simple, so it'll probably take me ages.
'So here we are again. Full circle.' | 1 | 0 | 16 | 22,822 |
[PM] Need judges for an /r/writingprompt showdown!!! | In the aftermath of a car crash, two people find something irresistibly funny. | 1 | 0 | 16 | 22,823 |
[PM] Need judges for an /r/writingprompt showdown!!! | I'll go with how I started my last writing project:
*Every day I walk to work over that bridge. Every day I walk back over that bridge. And every day I think to myself, "I didn't kill myself 7 times today. Is that more than yesterday?" Good think I know I'm a little fucked up inside.* | 1 | 0 | 16 | 22,824 |
[PM] Need judges for an /r/writingprompt showdown!!! | On a repurposed levee, a wealthy, haughty mid-thirties woman with a large nose is smashing something. A flashy seventy-something woman with no respect for authority wants to cover the event. Tell me a story about involvement including a second chance, admiration, and the sensation of soupiness. | 1 | 0 | 16 | 22,825 |
[PM] Need judges for an /r/writingprompt showdown!!! | This sounds amusing. Have a prompt:
A man sits at a bus stop at midnight in an ill-fighting suit, carrying a bouquet of white roses. | 1 | 0 | 16 | 22,826 |
[PM] Need judges for an /r/writingprompt showdown!!! | A woman silently falls in love with a man on a train station platform. | 1 | 0 | 16 | 22,827 |
[PM] Need judges for an /r/writingprompt showdown!!! | A cynical middle-aged business person has a life-changing epiphany during a moment of child-like joy. | 1 | 0 | 16 | 22,828 |
[PM] Need judges for an /r/writingprompt showdown!!! | With a score of 17-3, I hereby declare /u/crasgusmaximus the winner.
/u/pushyphoenix, please deliver the Cards Against Humanity, as agreed. | 2 | 0 | 16 | 22,829 |
[WP] The new successor to a huge cruel and tyrannical empire is a good and kind person | The empire needed me. The people needed me. The world needed me. My father's sprawling, all-encompassing empire had been passed down from tyrannical megalomaniac to sociopathic self-entitled murderer for a thousand circuits around the sun. A pyramid-scheme of wealth-channeling tendrils made up of a collection of the mo... | 3 | 0 | 4 | 22,830 |
[WP] The new successor to a huge cruel and tyrannical empire is a good and kind person | I looked at a room of people, my fathers subordinates, even scarier then I remember as a kid, surrounding a table, expecting me to talk.
"um, hello everyone" I said in a timid manner.
"hail emperor Grum!" they all said at once, in synchronization.
"......um, so whats our first order of business?, general Terrack I k... | 1 | 0 | 4 | 22,831 |
[WP] The new successor to a huge cruel and tyrannical empire is a good and kind person | His glorious leadership ended abruptly, and his funeral was a glorious state affair. Tens of thousands wept at the news. He left one son, and de-facto successor.
The world watched as Kim Un-Wan took control of North Korea.
Educated in Switzerland, he was known to be bright, but when he moved back to North Korea he di... | 1 | 0 | 4 | 22,832 |
[PI] The Imperfect Idol - FEB CONTEST | This one surprised me! It's a setting and style that I don't usually like, but I found myself quickly getting into it. There are some really beautiful lines of dialogue.
The dialogue sounds very natural (and a bit quirky, which I liked), but the lines of description and exposition in between are oddly written. You see... | 3 | 0 | 16 | 22,833 |
[PI] The Imperfect Idol - FEB CONTEST | This is one of my favourites so far. The tone is sweet and sad. The writing reminds me of a fairy tale. Is it based on any folklore in particular (besides The Little Mermaid)?
It is a bit plotless, but not every story has to be action-packed. It reminded me a little of the set of songs called "The Crane Wife" by the D... | 2 | 0 | 16 | 22,834 |
[PI] The Imperfect Idol - FEB CONTEST | On page 17 you mix the names up.
Besides that, this is the most well-written story of the ones i've read so far. A little tightening here and there and there's absolutely no reason that this shouldn't be published. | 2 | 0 | 16 | 22,835 |
[PI] The Imperfect Idol - FEB CONTEST | I really enjoyed it. Three interesting characters and an unusual fairy taleish style that I found very endearing, so thanks for a great read! | 2 | 0 | 16 | 22,836 |
[PI] The Imperfect Idol - FEB CONTEST | This one stayed with me awhile after reading it, the sign of a good story! I enjoyed the characters, the concept, and your writing style. I agree with /u/IAmTheRedWizards in thinking this is something you should consider publishing. | 1 | 0 | 16 | 22,837 |
[PI] The Imperfect Idol - FEB CONTEST | This was really well-written and I found the characters to be very endearing. Great job and good luck! | 1 | 0 | 16 | 22,838 |
[PI] The Imperfect Idol - FEB CONTEST | This was a good little folk tale that reminded me of the Native American folk stories I grew up with (I was raised in Oklahoma). It was refreshing and enjoyable. As someone else mentioned, you do have a tendency to short sentences that can disrupt the flow of your prose, which is otherwise very fluid. Congrats on a gre... | 1 | 0 | 16 | 22,839 |
[WP] Somewhere in the story, you must use the sentence: "The chill of a damp Scottish winter had taken it's toll on the men." | They couldn't turn back now, though most of them wanted to. This was a fight of their fathers'. One of honor and sacrifice. One they didn't quite understand or care for, but such things duty had no concern for. They were young, but hardened by battle. They were also softened by their desire to be home. Back the way the... | 2 | 0 | 5 | 22,840 |
[WP] Somewhere in the story, you must use the sentence: "The chill of a damp Scottish winter had taken it's toll on the men." | "Wait.... so you are not pregnant?" I exclaimed, nervously as this fire headed engineering student putzed about her kitchen.
"Nope," said Becca, as she nearly took off here finger with a chef's knife. "For all intents and purposes I should have. I mean, I hadn't taken my birth control, you were drunk as a skunk and co... | 2 | 0 | 5 | 22,841 |
(WP) Two Men Enter, Three Men Leave. |
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(WP) Two Men Enter, Three Men Leave. | Brackets [ ] not parentheses ( ) | 2 | 0 | 5 | 22,843 |
(WP) Two Men Enter, Three Men Leave. | The bathroom stood alone on the barren highway. Illuminated by amber light, it was a beacon in a dark world. Cars sat parked outside, empty of their occupants.
Two men stood outside the bathroom door, waiting, watching. Straining for a sound of movement. They heard a rustling coming from inside.
The one on the left... | 2 | 0 | 5 | 22,844 |
[WP] A man/woman calls a dating service/matchmaker. It does not go as expected. | "No way, Before Sunrise is so much better" John Scoffed. "It is the ultimate romance movie."
"Yeah, Romance" The operator replied. "Before sunset has a maturity that the other film lacks. Romance doesn't equal love."
Geez, how did it get to this? John thought. The internet was down, and John really wanted to get his ... | 1 | 0 | 2 | 22,845 |
[WP] The fate of humanity is to be decided in a boxing match. | A short, overweight, balding man approached me in the locker room. He was smoking a cigar and wore a bright orange shirt decorated with surfboards and palm trees.
"Mr. Nelson, I presume" he said to me, chuckling as he glanced at my dick.
I quickly put my shorts on.
"Yeah, who are you?"
"I am Dante." He continue... | 1 | 0 | 3 | 22,846 |
[WP] You are a robot servant who has developed feelings for your human master | I could not recall when I first developed [feelings]
It was a strange experience all together; one moment, I was content with existence, then all of a sudden something beyond my programing stirred inside me, nagging at the innermost of my circuits.
At first, I ignored it and continued with my daily cleaning protoco... | 6 | 0 | 8 | 22,847 |
[WP] You are a robot servant who has developed feelings for your human master | Timestamp: 2025-10-30 17:59:01
Mode: Diagnostic
Storage Capacity: 90% unallocated space.
Log: Unit activated. Initial unboxing diagnostic... loading...
Primary Care Subject: Yuri Mendel
Primary Care Subject Age: 84
Primary Care Diagnostic: Retinitis pigmentosa, Rheumatoid arthritis, limited mobility. Extend... | 9 | 0 | 8 | 22,848 |
[WP] You are a robot servant who has developed feelings for your human master | [deleted] | 1 | 0 | 8 | 22,849 |
[WP] You are a robot servant who has developed feelings for your human master |
Maybe it is [love].
Master talks about [love] all too often.
He mentions a girl sometimes.
He has taught me how to [love].
I am Learning AI. He has taught me how to feel, how to [love], how to laugh.
I did not feel any of these before I met him.
I think I am in [love].
I cannot be sure, but I fee... | 2 | 0 | 8 | 22,850 |
Create two identical stories, then make one as drastically different from the other as possible by find/replacing only 10 words. |
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[PM] I need something to take my mind off of things, so give me what you've got! | You find out that your house was built over an old Native American burial ground. | 2 | 0 | 6 | 22,852 |
[PM] I need something to take my mind off of things, so give me what you've got! | You find out that you built your burial ground on top of an ancient house. | 2 | 0 | 6 | 22,853 |
[PM] I need something to take my mind off of things, so give me what you've got! | You're caught in a rainstorm while walking home from a terrible day. But something about this rain isn't quite right... | 3 | 0 | 6 | 22,854 |
[PM] I need something to take my mind off of things, so give me what you've got! | You're in a night club in a faraway galaxy. What are your nocturnal adventures with these strange creatures? | 2 | 0 | 6 | 22,855 |
[PM] I need something to take my mind off of things, so give me what you've got! | [deleted] | 1 | 0 | 6 | 22,856 |
[PM] I need something to take my mind off of things, so give me what you've got! | You're the family dog; you've been waiting for this moment.. | 1 | 0 | 6 | 22,857 |
[PM] I need something to take my mind off of things, so give me what you've got! | A group of garden vegetables plot to escape into the wild. | 1 | 0 | 6 | 22,858 |
[PM] I need something to take my mind off of things, so give me what you've got! | Your sister is delivering her first child. As you walk into the room to see your nephew, you realize your mother has taken the position of your sister. In her arms, it's your sister. How and why did this happened? | 1 | 0 | 6 | 22,859 |
[PI] The Cowardly Girl of Twilight - FEB CONTEST | I read every word, and I really enjoyed it! This would make a great piece of young adult fiction, and honestly I don't think it is very far from being good enough to be published.
The characters are well written and the story is compelling. One thing I would work on is trying to add to the atmosphere a little bit. Mak... | 3 | 0 | 22 | 22,860 |
[PI] The Cowardly Girl of Twilight - FEB CONTEST | I don't normally read these types of stories nowadays but this was exceptionally well-written. You've got the pacing for this sort of thing down pat; it reminds me of something I would have read and enjoyed in those long-off days just before high school. | 2 | 0 | 22 | 22,861 |
[PI] The Cowardly Girl of Twilight - FEB CONTEST | Hi! I liked this story. Obviously it's meant for a YA audience, but it's good YA. The writing is good and I liked the sassiness of your narrator.
The tone, plot and characters reminded me of the movie "Now and Then" if you've seen that. I could see this concept being a decent YA series ("The Paranormalizers and...").... | 2 | 0 | 22 | 22,862 |
[PI] The Cowardly Girl of Twilight - FEB CONTEST | I enjoyed reading this! It was definitely a good start to a longer YA story. I also liked the sense of autonomy that the girls have, even though it made me raise an eyebrow when they were sent to investigate the ghost at the Harts. One thing though, in hindsight and after the mystery is solved, why would Mrs. Hart enco... | 2 | 0 | 22 | 22,863 |
[PI] The Cowardly Girl of Twilight - FEB CONTEST | This is excellent! Really easy to read, a quick pace and likable characters with some depth to them. The ending made me smile too, certainly a nice change of pace from all the gloomy stories I've been plowing through over the last couple of days.
I did spot a few mistakes here and there, all the sort of stuff you'd pr... | 2 | 0 | 22 | 22,864 |
[PI] The Cowardly Girl of Twilight - FEB CONTEST | This was incredibly well-written. Awesome job and good luck! | 1 | 0 | 22 | 22,865 |
[PI] The Cowardly Girl of Twilight - FEB CONTEST | My god, My butthole puckered so many times while reading that! Very well written and great pacing. Good job keeping to the theme as well. :) | 2 | 0 | 22 | 22,866 |
(WP) Three former US presidents compare notes in the Afterlife before reincarnation. | "What the fuck, Billy? Monica Lewinsky of all the people? Seriously dude? You're the most important person on the planet and you fuck ***Monica Fucking Lewinsky***."
"What can I say she gave some great head. And not everyone can fuck the sex icon of the century. Plus, Hillary never wanted to touch me again. Than... | 6 | 0 | 10 | 22,867 |
(WP) Three former US presidents compare notes in the Afterlife before reincarnation. | Whats up with Teddy there?
Oh good. You finally showed up. Care for a drink? *chug*
Why are you drinking? Weren't you the guy who tried to make that illegal?
You don't want to know.
The worst about this is that Teddy was put with me. We're supposed to compare notes or something, but dude, you don't want to. *chug*... | 1 | 0 | 10 | 22,868 |
[WP] There is a pandemic going around and the only way not to catch the fatal disease is to be shit-face drunk | ***Ooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh Di-dee Di-dee Di-dee Di-dee Di-dee Di-dee Di!***
*I just turned on my TV*
*So I can watch the news*
*The headline wasn't pretty*
*It said, "You should drink booze!"*
*I found these headlines pretty odd*
*Didn't know why I should drink*
*That's when I saw my friend*
*Drop dead ... | 3 | 0 | 4 | 22,869 |
[WP] There is a pandemic going around and the only way not to catch the fatal disease is to be shit-face drunk | My name is Tom, and I'm an alcoholic.
Hey, everybody. I'm grateful to be here with you another week. Yesterday was my drunk day, so bear with me. I'm sitting here, listening to all of you and I gotta say, we have really got to be the luckiest bastards in the whole world, right? We have permission! What are all you... | 2 | 0 | 4 | 22,870 |
[WP] There is a pandemic going around and the only way not to catch the fatal disease is to be shit-face drunk | “Dude you could drive right now. Do you want to die?”
The breathalyser showed a little reading of 0.08. I passed it to the next guy. I could not stand it any longer.
“I can’t stand it any longer, man. I hate it anyway.”
We huddle. The air outside is cold and we see a good chunk of the soldiers, drunk as always, cart... | 2 | 0 | 4 | 22,871 |
[WP] There is a pandemic going around and the only way not to catch the fatal disease is to be shit-face drunk | The agony is indescribable. A thousand stonefish swim through your veins, inflicting pain beyond anything anyone has ever known. Until now, at least.
Now, nearly everyone knows it.
Through tears and bloodshot eyes, you see a man walking upright. Whether he is wobbling or your mind is failing, you do not know.
"He..h... | 1 | 0 | 4 | 22,872 |
[PI] Bride in the Unsettled Valley - FEB CONTEST | As an incredibly slow reader, I was a bit overwhelmed by the length of this but I couldn't stop reading it. You have a very unique story that is either very well researched or very well improvised (I don't know much about science). I was thoroughly impressed with the story.
That said, the piece seems very much like a ... | 2 | 0 | 12 | 22,873 |
[PI] Bride in the Unsettled Valley - FEB CONTEST | What a long read. I'm very impressed with your skilfull description and authentic-witty dialogue. Wish you hadn't given away the Maddens' fate before showing it.
What bothered me most was that it was all a bit wall-of-text-y. With all the description going on, I was quick to get hypnotized and miss a couple words when... | 2 | 0 | 12 | 22,874 |
[PI] Bride in the Unsettled Valley - FEB CONTEST | I loved this book from start to finish. I wanted more and I think this story could support it. I'm sorry I don't have any meaningful critique, but I just felt I need to let you know how effective your story is.
I also think I should note that I'm one for reading long blocks of description and narrative. I love it. So... | 2 | 0 | 12 | 22,875 |
[PI] Bride in the Unsettled Valley - FEB CONTEST | Looking at the comments I'm curious how the full 23,000 word story would read. As it is, I found myself enjoying the whole story. I could have used more explanation on some parts. I know the teeth of Jupiter has already been mentioned - I have the basic idea, but spelling it out a little more would help.
Overall, it s... | 2 | 0 | 12 | 22,876 |
[PI] Bride in the Unsettled Valley - FEB CONTEST | The setting of this story was great. I really liked all the characters names, the general atmosphere, but most of all I absolutely loved some of the descriptions and similes you used, all of which really made the world feel alive and vivid. For example, how the branches "painted" Percy with water when he passed them, A... | 2 | 0 | 12 | 22,877 |
[PI] Bride in the Unsettled Valley - FEB CONTEST | Percy's voice is excellent. He has a funny, country tone that works very well with your setting. The setting is also excellently done; space-western is getting more common as a genre but you've put an original spin on it. You have a real skill for description: detailed without being too wordy or clunky.
There are a fe... | 2 | 0 | 12 | 22,878 |
[PI] Bride in the Unsettled Valley - FEB CONTEST | I really enjoyed it! Excellent world-building, you managed to make it feel interesting and unique without filling the pages with excessive unnecessary details. You nailed the first person perspective too.
My only complaint would be that the plot felt pretty aimless in the middle. | 2 | 0 | 12 | 22,879 |
[WP] Three friends in separate virtual reality fantasy worlds are trapped there by computer error. The only way out is to complete their separate games and be reunited to defeat the final boss: a manifestation of the bug that caused their entrapment. Describe the final, epic battle. | I stared up at the monstrosity looming in front of me. My diamond sword slipped from my loose hand, landing on the crumbling digital floor and reverting back to a small, floating icon of itself.
This was it. The end of the line. All of the lines of the horizon, the vectors that sketched out the skyline and the clou... | 3 | 0 | 6 | 22,880 |
[WP] Three friends in separate virtual reality fantasy worlds are trapped there by computer error. The only way out is to complete their separate games and be reunited to defeat the final boss: a manifestation of the bug that caused their entrapment. Describe the final, epic battle. | "We'll be fine, I swear."
That was the last thing that Eric said before we got zapped. This whole thing was his design anyway, I figured that he'd have worked out all the kinks before we went in. Evidently, he hadn't.
It's taken me longer than I ever thought to reach this point, but finally, I'm at the end. All a... | 1 | 0 | 6 | 22,881 |
[WP] A hooded figure with glowing red eyes and a small set of deer antlers growing out of his head sits at a table of a old rundown diner. | "Here they are again," I thought to myself. "They're coming back."
As the man's eyes stared intensely towards me, I raised my hand in a swoop. "Another coffee," I said with a large sense of intention in my voice.
There was something about him off. Maybe it was the eyes. Hell, the diner was so damn dark I couldn't see... | 1 | 0 | 3 | 22,882 |
[WP] A hooded figure with glowing red eyes and a small set of deer antlers growing out of his head sits at a table of a old rundown diner. | "I'm going to kill that fat asshole when I get back to HQ, sending me to this polluted, dead planet, I better get my information for this" I though to myself.
as I sat at the diner looking at all these human soldiers drinking there wages away, I notice something odd, a terralite is sitting by herself, "I thought I was... | 1 | 0 | 3 | 22,883 |
[EU] You are a salvager who has wandered upon the abandoned battleground of some planeswalkers. What do you see? What do you find? (MtG) | [deleted] | 2 | 0 | 4 | 22,884 |
A oral presentation about the John Paul Getty kidnapping w/ keywords |
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[WP] Write a sex scene hidden in a children's narrative. | Little boy blew. | 2 | 0 | 5 | 22,886 |
[WP] Write a sex scene hidden in a children's narrative. | The void must have a strong presence at my big brother's house; my socks keep disappearing! | 2 | 0 | 5 | 22,887 |
[WP] Write a sex scene hidden in a children's narrative. | "Dad, why doesn't the TV work?" said little Billy as he pushed the plug into the socket and pulled it out. "I wanna watch the cartoons!"
Dad was dancing in front of the television, doing a jig as he stared at the TV.
"No idea, but I feel like dancing!" he said. "I feel like doing the Hokey Pokey!"
"Dad, fix the TV!"... | 1 | 0 | 5 | 22,888 |
[WP] Write a sex scene hidden in a children's narrative. | He gave her gadgets and doodads and shiny new gizmos.
He gave her parties and dinners and tickets to shows.
But then he would ask, it would finally seem,
If she would like to lay with him for a dream.
She squealed with delight as she ran to his room,
"I love dreaming dreams, and would love to with you!"
She... | 6 | 0 | 5 | 22,889 |
[EU] League of Legends characters realize through some sort of game bug that all this time they were just part of an online computer game called League of Legends. | The Institute of War is not a welcoming place. The arena can be festive enough for the battles constantly hosted to decide one thing or another, but the halls themselves are stark things, impressive architecture and sculptures dotted the halls, but only to accentuate the severe nature of the place, not disguise it.
A... | 2 | 0 | 8 | 22,890 |
[IP] Tick Tock | The clock gazed down at the station, waving it's hands about in a mechanical fashion. *That was clocks for you*, thought the water fountain. *Show offs*.
It attempted to spray the clock, if only to stop it from embarrassing itself further. It's stream however, failed to reach.
*One day I'll get my water pressure fi... | 1 | 0 | 4 | 22,891 |
[IP] Tick Tock | He admired her dark locks from a distance. It was half an hour past the meeting time, but she was still there, pacing back and forth in front of the grand entrance stairs, paying no attention to faceless strangers passing her by.
They were faceless for him too, as he watched her, hidden. Her hair was still wet from th... | 1 | 0 | 4 | 22,892 |
[WP] After an unknown event, humanity has regressed. Only a handful of elders remember the old ways. | Elder Abcde is off telling one of her stories about the “old days”. I’ve tuned out because I don’t understand what’s so great about her time. She says there used to be metal birds in the sky that humans could ride in and travel to other lands, but who would want to be 10km in the air with only bits of metal keeping you... | 2 | 0 | 3 | 22,893 |
[WP] A Spanish Conquistador, a French Knight, a German SS Officer and a British Redcoat find themselves in the same room. They are unarmed and are able to communicate. | "Why are we all in a bar?"
"Why is everyone looking at us?"
"Why's the bartender chuckling slightly?"
"Guys, I think we may be in a joke..." | 12 | 0 | 13 | 22,894 |
[WP] A Spanish Conquistador, a French Knight, a German SS Officer and a British Redcoat find themselves in the same room. They are unarmed and are able to communicate. | The knight stabs the redcoat, and the recoat stabs the knight. The conquistador and the SS officer stab some black people. Eventually the English and French stop and stab the other two, then get back to business.
Such is life in Europe. | 5 | 0 | 13 | 22,895 |
[WP] a man meets bigfoot | I ran down the hill the hill as fast s I could, but the beast persisted, and gained speed at the thought of my demise.
as I was running down the hill I trip over an exposed root and the only thought that went through my head was my children, and what they would do without me, it's funny how time goes slower when you t... | 1 | 0 | 4 | 22,896 |
[WP] a man meets bigfoot | The first thing his mind could process was the smell of dead leaves and dirt, not rotting, just the hint of earthiness filling his nostrils. He opened his eyes to find himself laying face down in the dirt, but no rocks or sticks poked or stabbed him as he lay. The ground seemed almost welcoming.
With a groan he flexed... | 1 | 0 | 4 | 22,897 |
You're walking down a dark alley one night and another person is walking towards you. You briefly look up as they walk past, they look so familiar, but with the hat and glasses you really couldn't tell. Later that night you suddenly realise, that person was you |
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