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Now, offshore places could cause some danger for species as they migrate or change important habitat for feeding, breeding, and nursing. Info on accidental encounters and death rates is low, cause of the little number of places working in offshore areas. NOAA has started looking into longline sea gear that could be use... | Offshore facilities could affect some endangered species as they migrate or alter essential habitat for feeding, breeding, and nursing. Information on incidental entanglement and mortality is limited, because of the small number of facilities working in offshore areas. NOAA recently investigated longline aquaculture ge... | A little bit informal | formality |
Dale, Here are the confirms for the Gas Daily option products that I need created. The product has no special requirements for setting the strike etc. if there are any questions please call me asap. I would like to have these products online by the October expiry which is next wWednesday. Please let me know when it w... | Greetings Dale, Enclosed are the confirmations apropos the Gas Daily option products that need to be generated. The product contains no specific instructions for setting the strike et cetera. If there are any queries do not hesitate to contact me with intense haste. It would be most felicitous to get these products onl... | Make this more formal | formality |
The amount of folks that had a card went up from shy of 100,000 in FY1993 to 680,000 in FY2000. After auditors talked about how they’re worried that the government had issued too many credit cards and gave extreme credit limit factors that made card misuse even risker gave out a memo in April 2002 that made it where ag... | The number of cardholders grew from under 100,000 in FY1993 to 680,000 in FY2000. After auditors expressed concerns that the government had issued too many credit cards and provided excessive credit limitsâfactors that raised the risk of card misuseâOMB issued a memorandum in April 2002 that required agencies to ex... | Make my writing more formal | formality |
Here are the first mass measurements of lyman-@xmath0 galaxies moving away from us at high speeds. We looked at details from nine different galaxies from four different surveys and came up with velocity measurements. These measurements allow us to study lyman-@xmath0 galaxies on a super-galactic scale. The resulting... | We present the first dynamical mass measurements for lyman-@xmath0 galaxies at high redshift, based on velocity dispersion measurements from rest - frame optical emission lines and size measurements from hst imaging, for a sample of nine galaxies drawn from four surveys. These measurements enable us to study the nature... | Too informal, rewrite | formality |
The most common problem is pneumonia, and the one after that is enterocolitis. Gangrene of the lungs, palate, pharynx, esophagus, anus or vulva may also cause conflict. Hemorrhaging of the facial artery or it's branch is an uncommon mode of death. This is because the arteries in the gangrenous becomes corked by thrombi... | The complication most frequent is pneumonia, and the next entero-colitis. Gangrene of the lungs, of the palate, pharynx, or oesophagus, of the anus, and of the vulva, may supervene. Hemorrhage from the facial artery or its branches has been noted as an exceptional mode of death (Hueber), the rule being that the arterie... | Make this more formal | formality |
The New Markets Tax Credit, NMTC, was put into place by the Community Renewal Tax Relief Act of 2000, known as P.L. 106-554, to get investors to put money into low-income communities, LICs, that usually don't have any means to get resources. The NMTC is super competitive about giving tax credit awards and it's all unde... | The New Markets Tax Credit (NMTC) was enacted by the Community Renewal Tax Relief Act of 2000 ( P.L. 106-554 ) to encourage investors to invest in low-income communities (LICs) that traditionally lack access to capital. The NMTC is a competitively awarded tax credit overseen by the Community Development Financial Insti... | Too informal, rewrite | formality |
Dawn, Doesn't it suck to be at work and know that someone else is out of the country? I just want to let you know how much I suffered while you were gone. I realize now just how bad you must want out of this group. Without you or Jennifer there was no real conversation the whole week!! Chris just works quietly. Ja... | Dawn, do you find yourself in the doldrums due to being at work while someone else is traveling abroad? I would like to inform you as to the extent of my suffering while you were venturing. I recognize how severely you would like to participate in a different group. Due to you and Jennifer’s absences, the caliber of co... | Make the text more formal. | formality |
Robert Corrigan (c. 1816 – 19 October 1855) came from Tyrone County. His folks came to Canada after 1831 and lived on lots in Saint-Sylvestre, Lower Canada, a mostly Roman Catholic place. He started farming and started believing in Anglicanism. This caused him to butt heads with a lot of people and caused, at least sec... | Robert Corrigan, (c. 1816 – 19 October 1855) was born in County Tyrone. Corrigan's family immigrated to Canada sometime after 1831 and settled on lots in Saint-Sylvestre, Lower Canada a predominantly Roman Catholic area. He became a farmer there and converted to Anglicanism. This caused a great deal of strife and led... | Too conversational, rephrase it to be more formal? | formality |
So, the manor's first ever owner was Ansis Muiželis of Daugava's ferries and his son Albrecht Muiželis. And Albrecht's first wife was the Anna, sister to Johann Stienhauer. Later down the line, Albrecht's son, John Heinrich Muiželis, became owner of the manor. He was a merchant of Riga's 2nd guild and court judge of Co... | The first known owner of the manor was Ansis Muiželis of Daugava's ferries and his son Albrecht Muiželis. Albrecht's first wife was Johann Steinhauer's sister Anna. Later the manor was owned by Albrecht's son - John Heinrich Muiželis, a merchant of Riga's second guild and court judge of Conscience. They also gave birth... | Too conversational, rephrase it to be more formal? | formality |
"I guess Mrs. Belden made him suspect Berrie. He was already bitter, and when he found them eating together when he came up, he almost burst and barreled toward Wayland like an animal. Obviously he couldn't take on a big man like Cliff, and he hit his head on a rock. If Berrie hadn't choked the oaf he would've killed t... | "I suppose Mrs. Belden filled him with distrust of Berrie. He was already jealous, and when he came up with them and found them lunching together, he lost his head and rushed at Wayland like a wild beast. Of course he couldn't stand against a big man like Cliff, and his head struck on a stone; and if Berrie hadn't thro... | Make my writing more formal | formality |
Dear Rick, Thanks for speaking with me today. Here is the position description for the KWI President of the Americas Opportunity. I feel that this is a tremendous opportunity to be an integral player with a very exciting relatively early stage Applications Software company, in the very exciting and hot Energy Commod... | Greetings Rick, Thanks for conversing with me today. Enclosed is the position described for the KEI President of the Americas Opportunity. I I feel that this is a tremendous opportunity to be an integral player with a very exciting relatively early stage Applications Software company, in the very exciting and hot Ener... | Too informal, rewrite | formality |
Obviously, in any of these practices, there is a need to take heat away. Taking the heat away from an LED array while keeping fine optical coupling in a takeable system can be hard. In a camera structure where the doctor must hand-hold the camera, it wouldn't be comfortable to add the LEDs in the camera head because of... | Of course, in any of these applications, there is a need to remove heat. Removing the heat from an LED array while maintaining good optical coupling in a removable system can be a challenge. In a camera system where the surgeon has to hold the camera in their hand, it would be uncomfortable to include the LEDs in the c... | A little bit informal | formality |
Back in 1995, North in her grass bikini got the feature in the Sports Illustrated Swimsuit Edition. She has taken off since then landing in advertisements for Alberta Ferretti, Versace, Saks Fifth Avenue, Givenchy, J.Crew, Valentino, Chanel, and Banana Republic. North has sashayed down the runways for heavy hitters lik... | In 1995, North featured in the Sports Illustrated Swimsuit Edition in which she wore a grass bikini. Since then, she has been featured in advertisements for Alberta Ferretti, Versace, Saks Fifth Avenue, Givenchy, J.Crew, Valentino, Chanel, and Banana Republic. North has walked the runways for Christian Dior, DKNY, and... | Too conversational, rephrase it to be more formal? | formality |
For our purposes, anytime we say "contract", we're referring to any agreement with the Federal Government to do work on public property that's worth more than $1,000,000. Similarly, whenever we say "contractor", we mean the person or group who is looking to do that sort of work for the Federal Government. Finally, th... | In this Act:(1) Contract.--The term ``contract'' means any contract with the Federal Government, exceeding $1,000,000 in amount, for the construction, alteration, or repair of any public building or public work of the United States.(2) Contractor.--The term ``contractor'' means an individual or entity that has been awa... | Make the text more formal. | formality |
Trade press, recruiting firms and others recently have made numerous calls to Enron employees seeking information about the company, its employees and other matters. In some cases, these callers have used false identities, as in, "I'm from the SEC and I need you to provide me with?" If you receive a call from someone i... | The trade press, certain recruiting agencies, and numerous other actors have been repeatedly contacting Enron employees seeking a variety of information about company matters. There have even been cases of these callers assuming false identities, e.g., "I am with the SEC and must insist that you provide me with x." If ... | Improve the formality of the text. | formality |
Late on October 25th, we received information about a nonspecific threat to the Enron Center. We communicated with law enforcement officials who found the threat unsubstantiated and without merit. Nonetheless we take all threats seriously and have increased the security presence at the Enron Center still further. Once ... | Late on October 25th, we obtained data concerning a nonspecific threat to the Enron Center. We imparted our concerns with law enforcement officials who found the threat unsubstantiated and lacking any degree of merit. Nonetheless we prioritize all threats and have amplified the security presence at the Enron Center. On... | rephrase it to be more formal? | formality |
We're looking at the possibility of probing large extra-dimensional models at the lhc through neutral triple gauge boson production processes. In theories with additional dimensions, these events happen coz of the exchange of a tower of huge graviton modes between the sm particles. We analyze the @xmath0, @xmath1, @xma... | We study the prospects of probing large extra dimension model at the lhc through neutral triple gauge boson production processes. In theories with extra dimensions these processes result from the exchange of a tower of massive graviton modes between the sm particles. We consider @xmath0, @xmath1, @xmath2 and @xmath3 pr... | Too conversational, rephrase it to be more formal? | formality |
In Boy Scout parlance, when holding a knife the area within the radius of the arm and blade length combined is called the blood circle (or safety circle in contemporary use). This area can be envisioned as a hemisphere with a person and a sharp instrument at its centre. In one example, an area within the radius of the ... | In Boy Scout terminology, when using a knife or axe, the area within the radius of the arm and blade length combined is called the blood circle or safety circle. This area can be envisioned as a circular plane with a person and a sharp instrument at its center. Presumably, anyone within this radius is at risk of being ... | Improve the text's accuracy. | wiki |
For these works, which began in March 2005 and were scheduled to last until at least April 2006, one of the tunnels remains closed during off-peak hours (19:00 to 07:00 daily). This work, however has been beset with problems, the works were completed in 2010. Signs informing road users of the temporary tunnel bore clos... | Work began in March 2005 and was scheduled to last until at least April 2006, with one of the tunnels closed during off-peak hours (19:00 to 07:00 daily). However, problems that were encountered meant the work was only completed in 2010. The roadworks coincided with the "Hold Your Breath" project which aimed to add an ... | Copyedit and change to past tense to reflect completion of the work. | wiki |
This has created a problem among in these areas. Locals must take extra precaution in keeping their windows and doors tightly shut, for monkeys will get inside and raid their homes. Government officials claim they have lost important files due to monkeys getting into them. They have bitten people and threatened visitin... | This has forced locals to keep their windows and doors tightly shut lest monkeys raid their homes. Government officials claim to have lost important files to monkeys. The monkeys have bitten people and threatened visiting foreign dignitaries. Attempts to control the monkey population, including relocation, sterilizatio... | Improve language quality; fix grammar and spelling. | wiki |
Mass fractions are typically around 0.8 to 0.9, with lower numbers corresponding to higher efficiency for the rocket overall. When applied to a stage, higher numbers indicate a more efficient design, since there is less non-propellant mass. A lower mass fraction for the rocket means that it uses fuel efficiently, reser... | Mass fractions are typically around 0.8 to 0.9. When applied to a rocket, as a whole, a low mass fraction is desirable since it indicates a greater capability for the rocket to deliver payload to orbit for a given amount of fuel. Conversely, when applied to a single stage, a higher mass fraction corresponds to a more e... | Clarify the purpose of mass fraction and edit for clarity and punctuation. | wiki |
}} The site was also specifically chosen because of the close proximity of a plentiful coal supply for the power station. Nearby were the Ellington and Lynemouth collieries. Ellington Colliery was sunk in 1909, and Lynemouth in 1927. The two collieries were eventually joined underground in 1968 by the Bewick Drift near... | The site was also chosen because of the Ellington and Lynemouth collieries. Ellington Colliery sunk in 1909, with Lynemouth Colliery sinking 18 years later. However in 1968, the two collieries were connected underground by the Bewick Drift, from which coal was brought to the surface. The power station was constructed n... | Copyedit for clarity. | wiki |
The Rocky Horror Picture Show is the 1975 film adaptation of the British rock musical stageplay, The Rocky Horror Show, written by Richard O'Brien. The film is a parody of / tribute to B-movie, science fiction and horror films of the late 1940s through early 1970s. Director Jim Sharman collaborated on the screenplay wi... | The Rocky Horror Picture Show is a 1975 musical comedy horror film directed by Jim Sharman from a screenplay by Sharman and Richard O'Brien. It is based on The Rocky Horror Show, a musical stage play scripted and composed by O'Brien. The film is a humorous tribute to the science fiction and horror B movies of the late ... | Rewrite the text to be more understandable. | wiki |
Multimodality is considered particularly important given the importance of the visual mode in contemporary communication. Theorists such as Gunther Kress and Theo van Leeuwen are developing Halliday's notions by providing new "grammars" which identify the available resources for making meaning in other semiotic modes. ... | Accounting for multimodality (communication in a range of semiotic modes-verbal, visual, and aural) is considered particularly important, given the importance of the visual mode in contemporary communication. Theorists such as Gunther Kress and Theo van Leeuwen have developed Halliday's notions by providing new "gramma... | Rewrite for clarity and encyclopedic tone | wiki |
On September 8, 2009 the RiverRats announced that Shawn Liotta would return to Erie as the head coach for the 2010 season. Hauser will maintain a smaller stake in the team, which immediately dropped the RiverRats name. The team will remain in the AIFA, and the team adopted the corporate name "Erie Professional Football... | On September 8, 2009 the RiverRats announced that Liotta would return to Erie as the head coach for the 2010 season. The team remained in the AIFA, and the team adopted the corporate name "Erie Professional Football, Inc." in December 2009, in anticipation of a new franchise name to be announced in January 2010. Hauser... | Change to have a consistent past tense throughout the paragraph. | wiki |
It was released in the United States on August 21, 1981, and grossed $ 30.56 million at the box office. The film received positive reviews from critics, who praised Rick Baker's make-up special effects. The film won the 1981 Saturn Award for Best Horror Film and the inaugural Academy Award for Outstanding Achievement i... | Released in the United States on August 21, 1981, it received positive reviews regarding Rick Baker's make-up special effects, and grossed $ 30.56 million at the box office. From Baker's effects, the film won the the 1981 Saturn Award for Best Horror Film and the inaugural Academy Award for Outstanding Achievement in M... | Copyedit edit to make the text sound more natural. | wiki |
Dorothea Buck was born in April 1917, the fourth of five children in Naumburg an der Saale, where she also grew up. However, she found the "complete speechlessness" to be especially humiliating: the patients among each other had no speech and conversations between staff and patients were unusual. Due to the "Law for th... | Dorothea Buck was born in April 1917, the fourth of five children in Naumburg an der Saale, where she grew up. In 1936, at the age of nineteen, she was diagnosed with schizophrenia at Von Bodelschwinghschen in Bethel. There she was exposed to permanent baths and cold water head pourings for "disciplining," then common ... | Include history of diagnosis. | wiki |
Many harpsichords have exactly one string per note. There are several reasons why it is sometimes an advantage to have more. When there are two choirs of strings at the same length, it is possible to arrange for them to give different tonal qualities, and thus to increase the variety of sound produced by the instrument... | While many harpsichords have exactly one string per note, more elaborate harpsichords can have more. This provides two advantages: the ability to vary volume and the ability to vary tonal quality. Volume is increased when the mechanism of the instrument is set up by the player (see below) so that the press of a single ... | Rewrite the section to add clarity. | wiki |
Another characteristic of ISUP made possible by SS7 with NFAS is the exchange of signaling information during the middle of a call. Also possible with SS7 is Non-Call-Associated Signaling, which is signaling that is not directly related to the establishment of a telephone call. An example of this is the exchange of the... | Another ISUP characteristic made possible by SS7 with NFAS is the exchange of signaling information during the middle of a call. This includes the exchange of registration information used between a mobile telephone and a home location register database, which tracks the location of the mobile. | Make it more concise. | wiki |
Each team member is qualified in six different weapon types and highly-adept at CQC (Close Quarter Combat). The player's objective is to complete 30 missions of action, strategy, stealth, rescuing, escorting and various types of essential goals to stopping the terrorists. The player does not have unlimited pistol ammun... | Each team member is qualified in six different weapon types and highly-adept at close quarters combat (CQC). The player's objective is to complete 30 missions of action, strategy, stealth, rescuing, escorting, and various types of essential goals to stop the terrorists. Besides a graphical update and new cast of charac... | Rewrite to make the text concise. | wiki |
A Vampyre Story was always intended to be a saga, and even before the game's release Autumn Moon Entertainment began working on a sequel. 'will continue the action right after the events of A Vampyre Story, which ended with a cliffhanger. Originally slated for a release in 2009 or 2010, the game encountered financial p... | "A Vampyre Story" was intended as the opening chapter of a larger saga, and Autumn Moon Entertainment commenced production on the sequel prior to the game's release, described as "picking up directly after the events of A Vampyre Story, which ended with a cliffhanger." Originally slated for a release in 2009 or 2010--a... | rewrite the sequel and prequel section | wiki |
Horton Bay is a beach located on the south of the Gower peninsula near Port Eynon Bay in Wales. It is accessible from the nearby village of Horton via a steep hill. The beach has a car park sited a few minutes away. Even with its accessibility, it is usually a very quiet beach but it is popular with surfers. Sand can b... | Horton Beach is located in Port Eynon Bay on the south coast of the Gower peninsula in Wales. It is reached from the nearby village of Horton via a steep hill, and has a car park sited a few minutes' walk away. Despite its accessibility and its popularity with surfers, the beach is usually very quiet and it has sand ev... | Change the name to Horton Beach throughout the text. | wiki |
As early as 1948, Melitta Schmideberg observed that emotionally deprived parents may unconsciously regard their children as parental figures'. "Spousification" and "parental child" (Minuchin) offered new routes to explore the same phenomenon, while the theme of 'intergenerational continuity of boundary violations' in p... | Melitta Schmideberg noted in 1948 how emotional deprivation could lead parents to treat their children (unconsciously) as substitute parent figures. "Spousification" and "parental child" (Minuchin) offered alternative concepts exploring the same phenomenon; while the theme of intergenerational continuity in such violat... | Rewrite with more paraphrasing and examples. | wiki |
Tantalum electolytic capacitors with solid electrolyte don't have wear-out failures so they don't have a life time specifiation in the sense like "wet" aluminum electrolytic capacitors. Aluminum electrolytic capacitors with non-solid electrolyte have an exceptional position within the area of electronic components beca... | Tantalum electrolytic capacitors with solid electrolyte don't have wear-out failures so they don't have a life time specification in the sense like "wet" aluminum electrolytic capacitors. The life time of solid capacitors ends when a specified percentage of components, f. e. 1 & nbsp;%, have failed during their random ... | Go more into detail of how the life time of solid capacitors end. Copyedit. | wiki |
The Blueair Aware sends air quality data, updates and alerts in real time to a smartphone, when used with the Blueair Friend app. The Blueair Friend app monitoring outdoor and indoor air quality. It is a reliable wellness tool that informs you about the outdoor air quality, in real time, and recommends what measures yo... | The Blueair Aware sends air quality data, updates, and alerts to a smartphone when used with the Blueair Friend app. The Blueair Friend is an app monitoring outdoor and indoor air quality. It reads the outdoor air quality and recommends the user's measures to stay healthy in case of bad air quality. The Blueair Friend ... | Attempt to make the text sound less like an advertisement. | wiki |
Migrating Canada and Graylag Geese frequent the nearby fields on their way up from the Solway Firth / Caerlaverock or coming down from Spitzbergen in the winter. Duncan McNaught in 1895 records that he found a kingfisher's nest at an arms length inside an earthen burrow at Chapelton on the Annick. The river water quali... | Migrating Canada and Graylag Geese frequent the nearby fields on their way up from the Solway Firth / Caerlaverock area or coming down from Spitzbergen in the winter. | The name 'Glazert' may come from the celtic, glas in Gaelic meaning grey or green and dur meaning water. The river's water quality is generally quite g... | Provide additional information. | wiki |
Zego is a London based insurtech start-up that offers flexible motor, personal and commercial insurance. The company sells policies-which range from an hour to a year-online, via phone and on its app. Founded by former Deliveroo employees Sten Staar and Harry Franks, as well as the former head of engineering at Hubble ... | Zego is a London based insurtech start-up that provides flexible motor, personal and commercial insurance. The company sells policies ranging in length from an hour to a year. Customers purchase these online, via phone and through Zego’s app. Zego was founded by former Deliveroo employees Sten Saar and Harry Franks, al... | Copyedit to remove POVs and make the text have a neutral tone. | wiki |
All of the original action figures came with minicomics that told stories involving the characters. In the earliest comics, He-Man is a wandering barbarian on Eternia, a world dealing with the aftermath of a Great War that has devastated the civilizations that once reigned, but has left behind fantastical machinery and... | The original action figures were packaged with minicomics that told stories about the characters. In the early comics, He-Man is a wandering barbarian on Eternia, a world dealing with the aftermath of a war which devastated its civilizations and left behind fantastic machinery and weapons. The war opened a rift between... | Copy-edit up to the Bases section | wiki |
In 1975, the Malacca Public Library Corporation was enacted to establish the Malacca Public Library. The corporation was then established 2 years later in 1977 located at Hang Tuah Hall. In 1993, the Malacca Public Library Enactment (Amendment) Act 1993 went in force. The library was finally moved to its current locati... | In 1975, the Malacca Public Library Corporation Enactment was approved to establish the Malacca Public Library Corporation. The corporation was then established in 1977, with the enforcement of the Enactment which was amended in 1993. The main library was first located at Hang Tuah Hall before it moved to its current l... | Rewrite some parts of the history | wiki |
: Light observation helicopter for the JGSDF. Built by Kawasaki Heavy Industries under licence in Japan. Based on the OH-6A Cayuse helicopter.: Light observation, scout helicopter for the JGSDF. Built by Kawasaki Heavy Industries under licence in Japan. Based on the Hughes Model 500D helicopter. | : Light observation helicopter based on the OH-6A Cayuse for the JGSDF. Built by Kawasaki Heavy Industries under license in Japan.: Light observation, scout helicopter based on the Hughes Model 500D for the JGSDF. Built by Kawasaki Heavy Industries under license in Japan. | Re-order the information. | wiki |
Triplex Safety Glass was a famous British brand of laminated glass, often seen on automotive and aircraft windscreens. It makes toughened glass for automotive and aerospace markets. The Triplex Safety Glass Company Ltd was founded by Kent-born Reginald Delpech (30 March 1881-29 May 1935) in 1912. | Triplex Safety Glass is a British brand of toughened glass and laminated glass. The marque is often seen on vehicle and aircraft windscreens. The Triplex Safety Glass Company Ltd was founded in 1912 by Kent-born Reginald Delpech (30 March 1881-29 May 1935). | Rewrite text in the present tense. | wiki |
Graham supplied no fewer than four of the main characters' voices – Parker, Gordon Tracy, Brains, and Kyrano. Paul Maxwell (Fireball XL5), Charles "Bud" Tingwell and John Tate were not credited on-screen in either series, though Maxwell and Tingwell received credits in the first movies. The first film, Thunderbirds Are... | Graham supplied no fewer than four of the main characters' voices – Gordon Tracy, Parker, International Rescue's resident scientist, Brains, and Tin-Tin's father, Kyrano. Maxwell (the voice of Zodiac in Fireball XL5), "Bud" Tingwell and Tate received no on-screen credit in either series, although Maxwell and Tingwell w... | Expand the text and information. | wiki |
Through Republic Act 797, Palawan Teachers College was transformed into Palawan State College on February 27, 1984, authorizing it to continue offering its existing collegiate courses and to add courses in arts, sciences, and technology. Finally, on November 12, 1994, PSC was renamed as the Palawan State University thr... | Through Republic Act 797 on February 27, 1984, the Palawan Teachers College was transformed into the Palawan State College enabling it to continue offering its existing collegiate courses and to offer new courses in the arts, sciences, and technology. Finally, on November 12, 1994, PSC was renamed as the Palawan State ... | Remove information regarding the buildings. | wiki |
At the College there are 6 houses per year, excluding the 6th Form (Year 12). Pupils then sit the NFER test. The test is designed to help teachers predict what kind of grades the pupils will achieve later in their career at the school. This process is commonly known at the school as "Banding", and does not solely rely ... | At the College there are 6 houses per year, excluding the Sixth Form (Year 12). Afterwards, pupils sit the NFER test, this along with teacher recommendations determines the corresponding set for the pupil. Also, from the beginning of the next half term, pupils are placed into Houses. | Improve the grammar and wording. | wiki |
A turn less than 360 ° is often called a pivot. Multiple, consecutive rotations are typically named according to the number of complete rotations, e.g. double turn or triple turn. Spotting technique is typically used during turns. Spotting is when the head is held stationary (not allowed to rotate) with the eyes focusi... | A turn less than 360 ° is sometimes called a pivot. Multiple, consecutive turns are typically named according to the number of 360 ° rotations, e.g. double turn or triple turn. Spotting is a technique that is often used when executing turns, in which a performer executes a periodic, rapid rotation of the head that serv... | Add more information about spotting. | wiki |
| The two stage drainage ditch, with the introduction of the benches creates a larger area on a cross-sectional basis than a natural, trapezoidal channel. This has the effect of reducing flooding in adjacent upland areas and less saturated conditions, leading to better subsurface drainage performance and thus, growing ... | The two-stage drainage ditch with the introduction of the benches creates a larger area on a cross-sectional basis than the existing, natural, trapezoidal channel. This is shown in the diagram below. Consequently, this has the effect of a reduced propensity to flooding in adjacent upland areas of the watershed and, thu... | Edited text | wiki |
From that day on, he used the paintbrush whenever people needed help. When he saw that people had no water to use in the fields, he drew a river and the river came to life. People could bring water from the river to the field and save a lot of time and energy. When he saw it was difficult for people to till lands, he d... | From that day on, Ma Liang used the paintbrush to help others with their needs or troubles. When he saw that people had no water to use in the fields, he drew a river which instantly becomes real where they can draw water from to take to the field and save a lot of time and energy. Ma Liang drew cows and water buffalos... | Edit for grammar, tense, and readability. | wiki |
Eobard Thawne is a fictional character portrayed by Tom Cavanagh and Matt Letscher in the television series of the Arrowverse, primarily The Flash and Legends of Tomorrow. The character is based on the DC Comics character of the same name and commonly known by the alter ego Reverse-Flash. Letscher portrays Thawne's ori... | Eobard Thawne, otherwise known as the Reverse-Flash, is a fictional character appearing in various television series set within the CW’s Arrowverse, most notably The Flash and Legends of Tomorrow. Portrayed by actors Tom Cavanagh and Matt Letscher, the character is based on the DC Comics villain of the same name. Letsc... | Rearrange the information. | wiki |
Immediately after the passing of the stranger, candles would not stay lit in the room where his corpse was. In subsequent days, many annoyances were experienced around the Livingston house, including the sounds of horses galloping, crockery breaking for no apparent reason, and burning embers jumping from the fireplace ... | After the stranger died, it is said that candles would not stay lit in the room where his corpse was, sounds of horses galloping and crockery breaking were heard, and burning embers jumped from the fireplace hearth. Supposedly, sounds of heavy shears making clipping noises were heard in various parts of the house, and ... | Make it more obvious that this a myth | wiki |
This protein was shown to be a dendritic cell survival factor and is involved in the regulation of T cell-dependent immune response. T cell activation was reported to induce expression of this gene and lead to an increase of osteoclastogenesis and bone loss. This protein was shown to activate antiapoptotic kinase AKT /... | It is a dendritic cell survival factor and helps regulate T-cell-dependent immune responses. T cell activation induces RANKL expression and can lead to an increase in osteoclastogenesis and bone loss. A further role for RANKL in immunity was found in sinusoidal macrophages in lymph nodes that alert the immune system to... | Condense the information and remove unnecessary words and phrases. | wiki |
Ceanothus tomentosus is a species of shrub in the buckthorn family Rhamnaceae known by the common name woollyleaf ceanothus. It is native to several of the mountain ranges in California and Baja California, including the Sierra Nevada and the Peninsular Ranges. It grows in dry, shrubby habitat such as chaparral. This i... | Ceanothus tomentosus, with the common name Woollyleaf ceanothus, is a species of shrub in the buckthorn family Rhamnaceae. It is native to several of the mountain ranges in California and Baja California. Ceanothus tomentosus grows in dry, shrubby habitat such as chaparral. The habitat includes the Sierra Nevada and th... | Give a detailed and concise description of the Wollyleaf bush, such as its scientific name, habitat, etc. | wiki |
The band weaves three-part vocal harmonies into energetic rock and roll jams one moment, and drops into captivating, atmospheric Americana ballads the next. With members hailing from Vermont, Colorado, Alaska, and Connecticut, each cutting their teeth in the music scene throughout the mid-nineties, THUNK is inspired by... | The band uses three-part vocal harmonies to accentuate high energy rock and roll jams, but also delve into atmospheric, down-tempo Americana ballads. With members hailing from Vermont, Colorado, Alaska, and Connecticut, each cutting their teeth in the music scene throughout the mid-nineties, THUNK is inspired by artist... | Copy edit for brevity and readability. | wiki |
White was born on May 2, 1943, in Thief River Falls, Minnesota, and moved to Vermont in 1972. She received her bachelor's degree from the University of Iowa, Iowa City, Iowa, in political science and sociology in 1965 and her master's degree in Community Development and Community Education in 1972 from Southern Illinoi... | White was born on May 2, 1943, in Thief River Falls, Minnesota. White moved to Vermont in 1972. She currently lives in Putney, Vermont with her husband, Bill White. She received a bachelor's degree in 1965 from the University of Iowa in Iowa City in political science and sociology. She earned a master's degree in 1972 ... | Reorganize the information. | wiki |
Pottermore, a website with information and stories about characters in the Harry Potter universe, launched in 2011. On its release, Pottermore was rooted in the Harry Potter novels, tracing the series's story in an interactive format. Its brand was associated with Rowling: she introduced the site in a video as a shared... | Rowling introduced the Pottermore website in a video as a shared media environment to which she and Harry Potter fans would contribute in 2011. Rooted in the Harry Potter novels, tracing the series' story in an interactive format, the site was substantially revised in 2015 as an encyclopedia of Harry Potter and include... | Rephrase and shorten the information about Pottermore. | wiki |
Another important application type is text editor. It occupies the whole area of display, shows a text document, and allows the user to edit the document. This has in part been replaced by word processors. The first word processors used text to communicate the structure of the document, but later work outside of the te... | Another important application type is that of the text editor. A text editor occupies the full area of display, displays one or more text documents, and allows the user to edit the document. This has in part been replaced by word processors, which often provide rich formatting features that text editors lack. The first... | Make the text longer. | wiki |
The first edition of her poems, "Apple Blossoms," was published in Milwaukee, by Strickland, in 1874; the second edition by Jansen, McClnrg & Co., Chicago, in 1877. Griswold continued a regular contributor to the New Covenant after John Wesley Hanson took control, in 1869, until it united with The Star in the West, con... | Griswold continued to be a regular contributor to the New Covenant after John Wesley Hanson took control, in 1869, until it united with The Star in the West, continuing to communicate with the public through its pages in prose and verse. The first edition of her poems, "Apple Blossoms", was published in Milwaukee, by S... | Copyedit for clarity and conciseness. | wiki |
For several years, and in conjunction with the Kaleidoscope dance Theatre, the three and other guests taught classes in sessions called the Winter and Summer Dance Intensives until 1999 when the full name of the New York Dance Festival was embraced. The Festival had grown in notoriety and size for providing an ever-inc... | For several years, and in conjunction with the Kaleidoscope Dance Theatre, these three and other guests taught classes in sessions called the Winter and Summer Dance Intensives until 1999 when the full name of the New York Dance Festival was embraced. The Festival had grown in notoriety and size for providing an ever-i... | Rewrite to shorten the paragraph. | wiki |
He was a competitive young man from his childhood itself, being the eldest son of a prominent businessman Prem Fernando; He was able to grow up close to the business world where he is very successful in now. Ranushka was a very bright student at his studies; He attended Maris Stella College Negombo and Colombo Internat... | He was a competitive young man from his childhood itself, being the eldest son of a prominent businessman Prem Fernando; Growing up close to the business world has contributed to his current business where he is very successful in now. Ranushka was a bright student at his studies; He attended Maris Stella College Negom... | Rewrite the text to be more concise. | wiki |
A Doctor's Report on Dianetics: Theory and Therapy gives credit to the concepts of Dianetics which the author adheres to, and also cites the particular issues that Winter disagrees with. Winter agreed with L. Ron Hubbard's concept of the engram, writing that engrams can be formed in the prenatal stage, but he disagreed... | A Doctor's Report on Dianetics gives credit to certain concepts of Dianetics and also cites the particular areas that Winter disagrees with. Winter agreed with Hubbard's concept of the engram, writing that engrams can be formed in the prenatal stage, but he disagreed with Hubbard's concept of the "sperm dream", asserti... | Rewrite for brevity | wiki |
He was drafted by the Texas Rangers in the 38th round of the 2013 Major League Baseball draft, but he did not sign and played college baseball at the University of Oklahoma. As a junior at Oklahoma in 2016, Neuse hit .369 / .465 / .646 with 10 home runs and 48 runs batted in and was the winner of the Brooks Wallace Awa... | The Texas Rangers selected him in the 38th round of the 2013 Major League Baseball (MLB) draft, but he did not sign. Neuse enrolled at the University of Oklahoma, where he played college baseball for the Oklahoma Sooners. As a junior at Oklahoma in 2016, Neuse hit .369 / .465 / .646 with 10 home runs and 48 runs batted... | update career stats, ce in lead | wiki |
Destiny Loretta Evans (born October 1993) is a fictional character on the ABC soap opera One Life to Live. The role was portrayed by Shenell Edmonds. Edmonds was put on contract in May 2010 with her first contract episodes airing the week of June 7. Edmonds remained on the show through the series finale on January 13, ... | Destiny Loretta Evans is a fictional character on the ABC soap opera One Life to Live. The role was portrayed by actres Shenell Edmonds. Edmonds was bumped up from recurring to a contract lead role in May 2010, with her first contract episodes airing the week of June 7, 2012; she remained with the serial through its fi... | Move birthdate to end of article. | wiki |
Hennessey owns the division Hennessey Special Vehicles, in which they build the Hennessey Venom sports cars. The division is tasked to learn from their experiences with their Venom sports cars and apply it to its newest variation, in which it will succeed the previous one. All vehicles sold under Hennessey Special Vehi... | Hennessey owns the recently-established Hennessey Special Vehicles division, in which it builds the Hennessey Venom sports car line-up. The division is tasked to learn from its experiences with the Venom sports car and apply it to its newest variation, the Hennessey Venom F5, which will succeed the Venom GT. All vehicl... | Make this more concise. | wiki |
Frightened, he is unable to react quick to avoid the gut punch and crumbles before the Insect. Busuzima exclaims that she can't do that, shocked that his plans have to come to naught, though remembers that the nine-tailed fox is still there, and decides to use her instead. Mana panics and runs away as Busuzima chases a... | In his fright, he is unable to react quickly enough to avoid a gut punch, and crumples before the Insect. Mana muses over the completion of the seal as Busuzima laughs, telling her that it is all over for Ryoho, and that now he will be taken away and experimented on. Then he pauses, and yells in horror, realising what ... | Provide additional details and ensure proper grammar and syntax. | wiki |
Ten songs competed in the contest. A 9-person jury selected the top 5 songs, with televoting selecting the final winner. The winner of Dansk Melodi Grand Prix 1993 was the Tommy Seebach Band with the song "Under stjernerne på himlen" (Under the stars in the sky), composed by Tommy Seebach and host Keld Heick. Tommy See... | Ten songs competed in the contest with two rounds of voting selecting the winner: a 9-person jury selected the top 5 songs which progressed forward to a public televoting which selected the final winner. The winner of Dansk Melodi Grand Prix 1993 was the Tommy Seebach Band with the song "Under stjernerne på himlen", co... | Expand the article and add relevant information. | wiki |
The Kings finished 3rd of the 9 teams competing in the National League. This was enough for a play-off place and in the home 1st leg of the semi-final against Coventry Storm the Kings ran out 49-44 winners. Disappointment was to follow in the away leg where the Kings were beaten 54-39 with Coventry progressing to the f... | The Kings finished third of the nine teams competing in the National League. This was enough for a play-off place, and in the home first leg of the semi-final against Coventry Storm, the Kings ran out 49-44 winners. In the away leg, the Kings were beaten 54-39, with Coventry progressing to the final against Cradley. In... | Provide information Lambert and Morley's finishing place in the National League Pairs, and Rider's League respecitively. Also provide more information on the 2020 British speedway league. | wiki |
During the credits of "Bart Has Two Mommies" she is seen in heaven with Bob Hope and God wondering how her boys are doing. Her ghost also appears in the opening sequence for "Treehouse of Horror XIII". Maude appeared as a primary character in a flashback in season 20's episode, Dangerous Curves. Maude was also seen in ... | Her ghost appears in the opening sequence for "Treehouse of Horror XIII," and during the credits of "Bart Has Two Mommies," she is seen in heaven with Bob Hope and God, wondering how her boys are doing. Maude appeared as a primary character through flashback in season 20's "Dangerous Curves." She was also seen in the s... | Improve flow by rearranging sentences. | wiki |
Albert III died at 35,000 feet (10.7 & nbsp; km) in an explosion of his V2 on September 16, 1949. Albert IV, on the last monkey V-2 flight, died on impact on December 8 that year after another parachute failure. His flight reached 130.6 & nbsp; km. | On September 16, 1949, Albert III died below the Kármán line, at 35,000 feet (10.7 & nbsp; km), in an explosion of his V2. On December 8, Albert IV, the second mammal in space, flew on the last monkey V-2 flight and died on impact after another parachute failure after reaching 130.6 & nbsp; km. | Add more details to the deaths of Alberts III and IV. | wiki |
However, he hasn't received any Award even after receiving 6 nominations. Also, no Director has ever won if one has been nominated twice in the same year – Gulzar in 1974, Basu Chatterjee in 1977 and Hrishikesh Mukherjee in 1980. Sai Paranjpye was the first of four women to have won this award, the second being Zoya Ak... | However, he hasn't received any award even after having being nominated 6 times. Sai Paranjpye was the first of 4 women to have won this award, the second being Zoya Akhtar, the third being Ashwiny Iyer Tiwari, and the fourth being Meghna Gulzar. | Shorten the paragraph. | wiki |
The following table shows some of the main flowers and accents used to create a custom-made corsage and can be included in a nosegay and boutonnière. For each event, a corsage may vary on the type of style and design that will be used when creating. Looking at a more modern point of view the younger generation will be ... | The following table shows some of the main flowers and accents used to create a custom-made corsage and that can be included in a nosegay and boutonnière. A corsage's style and design may vary depending on the event. The younger generation tends to use wrist corsages, which themselves may vary in style and size dependi... | Make this easier to follow and edit out simple mistakes | wiki |
In an official 143 page statement of the grounds for the acquittals, the judges were swayed by a court ordered independent expert review that discredited DNA evidence key to the prosecution case. The failure of Knox and Sollecito to provide precise accounts of there activities was a very differnt things to giving a fal... | In an official 143 page statement, the grounds for the acquittals included a court ordered independent expert review that had discredited DNA evidence key to the prosecution case. Failure to provide accounts of activities that exactly matched was a very differnt thing to giving a false alibi according to the judges, an... | Copyedit for clarity, and brevity. | wiki |
In South Korea (Republic of Korea) the fiscal year starts on 1 January and ends 31 December. In Spain the fiscal year starts on 1 January and ends 31 December. The fiscal year for individuals runs from 1 January to 31 December. | In South Korea, the fiscal year is the calendar year, 1 January to 31 December. In Spain, the fiscal year is the calendar year, 1 January to 31 December. In Sweden, the fiscal year for individuals is the calendar year, 1 January to 31 December. | Include Sewden to the list. | wiki |
A typical performance takes approximately 80 minutes, much longer than his early works or most music written by his peers in the avant-garde. However, it is only mid-length by the standard of his late works. For the entirety of the piece, the musicians follow a simple alternating pattern: the string quartet plays a sus... | A typical performance takes approximately 80–90 minutes, which is much longer than most music written by his peers in the avant-garde or even Feldman's own early works. However, it is only moderate length by the standard of his late works. Although scored for the same instrumentation as a piano quintet, the piece—as it... | Make this longer. | wiki |
Henson apparently failed to notice a bug in Seggelmann's implementation, and introduced the resulting vulnerability, Heartbleed, into OpenSSL's source code repository on December 31, 2011. Heartbeat support was enabled by default, causing affected versions to be affected by default. The vulnerable code has been adopted... | Henson apparently failed to notice a bug in Seggelmann's implementation, and introduced the flawed code into OpenSSL's source code repository on December 31, 2011. The vulnerable code was adopted into widespread use with the release of OpenSSL version 1.0.1 on March 14, 2012. Heartbeat support, with the vulnerability t... | Clarify the relationship between OpenSSL and Heartbleed and restructure sentences. | wiki |
Significantly, he is the grandson of the First Spinjitzu Master, who was the legendary inventor of the show's fictional martial art of Spinjitzu and the creator of the realm of Ninjago. He is also the son of Garmadon, the elder son of the First Spinjitzu Master, and Misako, an archaeologist. The series relates the hist... | Significantly, he is positioned as the grandson of the First Spinjitzu Master, who is described as the legendary inventor of the show's fictional martial art of "Spinjitzu" and the creator of the fictional realm of Ninjago. He is also the son of Lord Garmadon, the elder son of the First Spinjitzu Master, and Misako, an... | Condense the information to its most important points. | wiki |
Its team of editors deliver specially priced deals on ebooks that span a range of categories. Early Bird Books is one of Open Road Integrated Media's six content brands. In total, Open Road Integrated Media’s content brands reach more than 1 million newsletter subscribers. In April of 2016, Early Bird Books newsletters... | Its team of editors create specially priced deals on ebooks that span a range of genres. In addition to its e-newsletter, Early Bird Books ’website provides readers with content focused on books, authors, and literary news, including author interviews, book excerpts, and thematic reading lists. Early Bird Books is one ... | Condense the text | wiki |
The equity will decrease whenever the book value of the business decreases. This can also take place in many ways. For example, when machinery depreciates, the assets of the firm declined, which is registered in the liabilities side of the firm's balance sheet as a decrease in shareholder's equity. | Equity will decrease, for example, when machinery depreciates, it is registered as a decline in the value of the asset, and on the liabilities side of the firm's balance sheet as a decrease in shareholder's equity. | Simplify, and trim extra wordage. | wiki |
It is located at Balderas Avenue number 202, at the historic center of Mexico City. It is the goal of the museum to preserve and diffuse Diego Rivera's artistic work, as well as organizing temporary exhibits and conferences and events, talks, concerts and other art activities. In order to transport the mural from the h... | It is located at Balderas Avenue number 202, in the historic center of Mexico City. It is the goal of the museum to preserve and disseminate Diego Rivera's artistic work, as well as organize temporary exhibits and conferences and events, talks, concerts and other art activities. The museum was built in 1986, with the g... | Include more information about the museum. | wiki |
Because of the chord's symmetrical nature (superimposing more minor thirds on top of the the dim 7 produces no new pitches), there are only three different diminished seventh chords possible. Each of the diminished seventh chord's tones can be traced to its own hidden root. It is unclear to which key the chord belongs ... | Because of the chord's symmetrical nature (superimposing more minor thirds on top of the dim 7 produces no new notes), there are only three different diminished seventh chords possible. The diminished seventh chord can appear in the first, second, or (least common) third inversion. Each inversion is enharmonic with ano... | Include enharmonic properties of dim 7 chord. | wiki |
Maithils living on Indian side are officially called Bihari. Discrimination against Maithil community in India is not based on race, caste or color. The discrimination is entirely based on geography. One can clearly see the economic gap between Mithila region and other part of Bihar lying on South of Ganga river. In th... | Maithils in the Indian side are officially known as Bihari. Discrimination against the Maithil community in India is not based on race, caste or color but on geography. The economic gap between the Mithila region and the other area of Bihar south of the Ganges is apparent. The Mithila region is relatively undeveloped, ... | Improve grammar throughout the text. | wiki |
It is important to mention that in many instances, there was not a direct relationship between a carucate and the actual size of the land taxed. Therefore, the land extension of the Manor was much smaller than 240 acres. The Priory of St James was founded in 1146 by Baldwin de Redvers, the 1st Earl of Devon, a kinsman ... | In many instances, there was not a direct relationship between a carucate and the actual size of the land taxed. Therefore, the land extension of the Manor was likely much smaller than 240 acres. The name appears in the Domesday Book, where it is recorded that the Viking of Whipton and the nobleman Roger Blunt were Lor... | Expand the text and add more information. | wiki |
Cavener would spend the next few years honing her artistic style through a series of apprenticeships and fellowships in Nashville, Tennessee and at the Charles H. Cecil Studios in Florence, Italy. Though she had been trained in the classical atelier style throughout her studies, this traditional way of sculpting that f... | Cavener would spend the next few years honing her artistic style and research through a series of apprenticeships and fellowships in Nashville, Tennessee and at the Charles H. Cecil Studios in Florence, Italy. Trained in the classical atelier style throughout her studies, Cavener became restless with the more tradition... | Expand on the topic. | wiki |
Dhuey's work has appeared in a number of print and digital media platforms on discussions relating to the economics of education. Her research that indicated there were considerable advantages for older children in classroom environments is mentioned in pieces published in the Wall Street Journal, the Toronto Star and ... | Dhuey's work has contributed to discussions on the economics of education across a number of print and digital media publications. Dhuey's findings on the considerable advantages for older children in classroom environments, and the rise of academic redshirting, are mentioned in pieces published in the Wall Street Jour... | Rewrite some of the sentences for more clarity. | wiki |
The locomotive was withdrawn from service in August 1962. Selected for preservation, it was restored at Doncaster Works, where the work was completed in April 1963. Almost ten years of storage then followed, during which it was moved several times. | Withdrawn from British Railways service in August 1962, and selected for preservation within the national collection, it was restored at Doncaster Works. With work completed in April 1963, it was followed by almost ten years of storage, during which it was moved several times. | Copyedit and combine sentences. | wiki |
Kadiri Baburao is an Indian Politician from Kanigiri constituency of Andhra Pradesh and is the current Member of the Legislative Assembly (India) (MLA) of the constituency. He has started his political career in TDP when he was young with the encouragement and support of his best pal Nandamuri Balakrishna. He was born ... | Kadiri Baburao is an Indian politician of Andhra Pradesh and is the current Member of the Legislative Assembly (MLA) for the Kanigiri constituency. He began his political career in the Telugu Desam Party (TDP) with the encouragement and support of Nandamuri Balakrishna. Baburau was born in Seelamvaripalli village, Chan... | Remove any grammatical errors and make sure it is polished. | wiki |
He was consecrated a Bishop on August 15, 1954, and attended all the sessions of the Second Vatican Council between 1962 and 1965. John XXIII named Sales Apostolic Administrator of Natal, and on July 9, 1964 Pope Paul VI transferred him to the See of São Salvador da Bahia also as Apostolic Administrator. On October 29,... | He was consecrated a Bishop on August 15, 1954. John XXIII named Sales Apostolic Administrator of Natal, and on July 9, 1964 Pope Paul VI transferred him to the Primatial See of São Salvador da Bahia also as Apostolic Administrator sede plena. Bishop Sales attended all the sessions of the Second Vatican Council between... | Expand the given text. | wiki |
Therefore, rich biodiversity allows Pak Nai to become Site of Special Scientific Interest. Some species of crabs such as Perisesarma bidens and Ilyoplax tansuiensis are highlights of Ha Pak Nai. In addition, Ha Pak Nai used to be an oyster bed, thus, there is still remains of oyster shells all over the flat. Apart from... | The mangroves in Ha Pak Nai harbor various species and are highly conserved by environmentalists. The rich biodiversity of this area has prompted the government to name it as a Site of Special Scientific Interest. Ha Pak Nai used to be an oyster bed, thus, there is still remains of oyster shells all over the flat. Some... | Copy edit. | wiki |
This Tradition was skipped in 2020 due to the COVID-19 Pandemic. For this event, the brothers of Beta Theta Pi shovel approximately 14 tons of sand into the fraternity house basement, and install a boardwalk and a lifeguard station that doubles as a DJ booth. During Spring Term, Lawrence University hosts a music festiv... | For this event, the brothers of ΒθΠ shovel approximately 14 tons of sand into the fraternity house basement, and install a boardwalk and a lifeguard station that doubles as a DJ booth.This tradition was skipped in 2020, due to the COVID-19 pandemic. During spring term, Lawrence hosts a music festival, LU-aroo (a play o... | Mention the fact that the event was skipped after describing how it is set up. | wiki |
Events have neither duration in time nor extent in space. The tokens typically used in popular expositions of relativity to represent events—sparks, firecrackers, lightning bolts and the like—are not events because they have finite durations and extents. Unlike the analogies used to explain events, mathematical events,... | The word "event" used in relativity should not be confused with the use of the word "event" in normal conversation, where it might refer to an "event" as something such as a concert, sporting event, or a battle. These are not mathematical "events" in the way the word is used in relativity because they have finite durat... | Clarify the meaning of this section. | wiki |
Created by William Shatner and co-authors Judith and Garfield Reeves-Stevens. No official name has been given to the series by Shatner, the Reeves-Stevenses, or Pocket Books. The series has been been given the colloquial name "The Shatnerverse" by fans. The novels have been retroactively organized into three trilogies ... | Created by William Shatner, and co-written by Judith and Garfield Reeves-Stevens, the concept series explores events following James Kirk's resurrection by agents of the Romulan Star Empire after the character's death in Star Trek Generations. Shatner outlined the concept for the series while filming Kirk's final scene... | Rephrase passage to be more clear and brief. | wiki |
Bane abducts a child for an undisclosed ransom but it is rescued by Batman. Lady Shiva approaches Batman to inform him of an intruder using the Lazarus Pit and requests him in identifying who it was. Catwoman steals the ransom with Batman following her. During the pursuit, Batman's grapple is shot by a masked vigilante... | After Batman rescues an abducted child from Bane for a ransom, Lady Shiva approaches Batman to inform him of a Lazarus Pit intruder and requests him in identifying who it was. Batman agrees to do so while Catwoman steals the ransom with Batman following her. During the pursuit, Batman's grapple is shot by a masked vigi... | Rewrite this, providing more details. | wiki |
Giuliana Setari Carusi (Pescara), Italy, currently lives in Paris, France, after having lived many years in New York, United States. Giuliana Setari Carusi approaches the contemporary art world with the role of collector, next to her husband Thomas, they have, for thirty years a collection of contemporary art internati... | Giuliana Setari Carusi (Pescara) is an Italian art collector. She currently lives in Paris, after many years in New York. Giuliana Setari Carusi and her husband Tommaso have founded thirty years ago a collection of contemporary art that is well-known internationally. Since 2001 she is founding president of the non-prof... | Copyedit for clarity. | wiki |
As the number of visual objects increases, the information available for each object will decrease due to less cognitive processing, hence task relevant objects must bias the competition. Functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI) has shown that attention effects at a neuron level can be explained using ‘’ bias compe... | As the number of visual objects increases, the information available for each object will decrease due to increased neural workload and decreased cognitive process capacity. This suggests that for an object in the visual field to be cognitively processed there needs to be a way to bias the cognitive resources towards t... | Expand on the topic. | wiki |
The situation is analogous to that of some English words that sound the same, such as "meet" and "meat". These two words were pronounced and respectively during the time of Chaucer, as evident by spelling. Today they sound the same, but are distinguished by spelling. | The situation is analogous to that of some English words that are spelled differently but sound the same, such as "meet" and "meat", which were pronounced and respectively during the time of Chaucer, as shown by their spelling. | Make sure the description of "meet" and "meat" is easy to understand. | wiki |
Lipids are usually made up of a molecule of glycerol and other molecules. In triglycerides, or the main lipid, there is one molecule of glycerol, and three fatty acids. Fatty acids are considered the monomer in that case, and could be saturated (no double bonds in the carbon chain) or unsaturated (one or more double bo... | Lipids are usually made from one molecule of glycerol combined with other molecules. In triglycerides, the main group of bulk lipids, there is one molecule of glycerol and three fatty acids. Fatty acids are considered the monomer in that case, and may be saturated (no double bonds in the carbon chain) or unsaturated (o... | Make the text concise. | wiki |
Brown's Station, New York was a village located in the Esopus Valley in southeastern Ulster County, New York. It was the easternmost village in the town of Olive, New York, and was named after Alfred Brown, who owned and tended to the Brown Farm House that was in the village. In the village, there were farms, boarding ... | Brown's Station, New York, is a village that no longer exists. It was located in the Esopus Valley of southeastern Ulster County, New York (USA), and it was submerged by the waters of the Ashokan Reservoir, an artificial lake built between 1906 and 1915 to supply fresh water to New York City. The easternmost village in... | Rewrite to improve clarity. | wiki |
Some may argue that they are the hardest working ships in the Navy. The oceanographic survey ships have no homeport; they are forward-deployed surveying the ocean 365 days every year. Because the ships are always conducting operations, oceanographers from NAVOCEANO fly to locations around the world to meet the ship and... | Perhaps the hardest working ships in the Navy, the oceanographic survey ships have no homeport and are forward-deployed, surveying the ocean 365 days every year. To avoid interrupting continuous operations, oceanographers from NAVOCEANO relieve their fellow surveyors by flying to locations around the world to meet the ... | Copyedit for readability | wiki |
Hamula has served as a bishop, elders quorum president, stake Sunday School president and member of a high council. He also was of the Mesa Arizona Red Mountain Stake, as well as the Mesa Arizona Salt River Stake. Latter he served as a stake young men president. In fact Hamula was the first president of the Mesa Arizon... | In the LDS Church, Hamula has served as a bishop, elders quorum president, stake Sunday School president, a member of a stake high council, and a stake Young Men president. He was also the president of the Mesa Arizona Salt River Stake and the first president of the Mesa Arizona Red Mountain Stake when it was organized... | Clean up text; add info about First Quorum of the Seventy. | wiki |
Satya Pal Singh Baghel (born 21 June 1960) is an Indian politician. He was elected to the Lok Sabha for the Samajwadi Party thrice, and once to the Rajya Sabha. In 2019, Baghel was elected to Lok Sabha from Agra as a member of the BJP. On July 7, 2021 he was sworn in as the Minister of State (MoS) for Law and Justice i... | Satya Pal Singh Baghel (born 21 June 1960) is an Indian politician and current Minister of State in the Ministry of Law and Justice in the Second Modi Ministry. A member of the Bharatiya Janata Party, he got elected to the 17th Lok Sabha from Agra. He previously was a member of the Samajwadi Party, in which he got elec... | Make it more concise and remove abbreviations. | wiki |
An electric field (sometimes E-field) surrounds an electric charge, and exerts force on other charges in the field, attracting or repelling them. Electric fields are created by electric charges, or by time-varying magnetic fields. Electric fields and magnetic fields are both manifestations of the electromagnetic force,... | An electric field (sometimes E-field, often denoted E) is created by an electrically charged body in the space that surrounds it and results in a force exerted on any other charges placed within the field, either attracting or repelling them. Like magnetic fields, electric fields are a manifestation of the electromagne... | Make the introduction more easy to read. | wiki |
| 2013 || $ 12.2m || $ 4.3m || $ 1.7m || $ 1.9m || $ 1.8m || By comparison, 2013 annual reported revenues were 62m Euros for Ireland, 61m GBP for Wales and 39m GBP for Scotland. | 2012 || $ 10.2m || $ 4.3m || $ 1.7m || $ 1.6m || $ 1.1m || By comparison, annual reported revenue for the 2012-13 year were 61m GBP for Wale... | | 2013 || $ 12.2m || $ 4.3m || $ 1.7m || $ 1.9m || $ 1.8m || 2013 annual reported revenues were 62m Euros for Ireland, 61m GBP for Wales and 39m GBP for Scotland. | 2012 || $ 10.2m || $ 4.3m || $ 1.7m || $ 1.6m || $ 1.1m || Annual reported revenue for the 2012-13 year were 61m GBP for Wales, 54m GBP for New Zealand, an... | The phrase "By comparison, annual reported revenues" was removed. | wiki |
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