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Coral reefs which form a lagoon or lake are called natural breakwaters. The view of Izena's rocky southern coastline is well known as one of Japan's best, with the rock formations 'Umi Gitara' and 'Agi Gitara' dramatically rising from the land and sea. The names of Izena Island and Iheya Island are generally referred together as they are separated only by a narrow strait. The landscape of Ihaya and Izena are alike with sugarcane fields and cattle farms.	Coral reefs form a lagoon or lake and are natural breakwaters. The view of Izena's rocky southern coastline is well known as one of Japan's best, including the rock formations 'Umi Gitara' and 'Agi Gitara' dramatically rising from the land and sea.	Edit for conciseness.	wiki
Upon encountering the alchemist in London, he curses Ryu's right arm with the Grip of Murder which thrives on all the lives Ryu has taken, causing the Dragon Sword to be absorbed into Ryu's arm. After escaping the Prime Minister's mansion when it was destroyed by an incoming missile, Ryu returns to the JSDF Yunagi. There, he and JSDF member Mizuki McCloud watch as the Regent demands the immediate surrender by the nations of the world in seven days, or face annihilation. After the Yunagi intercepts a signal coming from the Rub 'al Khali desert, Ryu departs there with Mizuki and is visited by Ayane, who delivers to Ryu the Tenshin clan's treasured Jinran-Maru sword, at Hayate's request. Fighting past hired killers and desert assassins, Ryu makes his way to a tower in the desert, where he meets the Regent of the Mask once again. Ryu attacks but discovers that the Regent is a mirage, and battles an armed helicopter. Ryu returns to the Yunagi, where he meets Mizuki's daughter Canna and Cliff Higgins, Mizuki's brother-in-law.	Upon encountering the alchemist at the Prime Minister's residence in London, he curses Ryu's right arm with the Grip of Murder which thrives on all the lives Ryu has taken, causing the Dragon Sword to be absorbed into Ryu's arm. Later, Ryu and JSDF member Mizuki McCloud watch as the Regent demands the immediate surrender by the nations of the world in seven days, or face annihilation. After the JDSF's ship, Yunagi intercepts a signal coming from the Rub 'al Khali desert, Ryu departs there with Mizuki and meets Ayane, who gives him the Tenshin clan's treasured Jinran-Maru sword at Hayate's request. After defeating an attack helicopter, Ryu returns to the Yunagi, where he meets Mizuki's daughter Canna, and Cliff Higgins, Mizuki's brother-in-law.	Edit for conciseness and grammatical errors.	wiki
They can also manifest biochemical changes, including the production of volatile organic compounds (VOCs) or the up-regulation of genes producing other defensive enzymes, many of which are toxic to pathogens or herbivores (16,17,18,2). Jasmonates are a class of VOCs produced by the jasmonic acid pathway, which are used in plant defense against insects and pathogens and can cause the expression of proteases which defend against insect attack (18). Plants have many ways to react to attack, including VOCs, which studies report can coordinate defenses among plants connected by mycorrhizal networks. A plant sharing a mycorrhizal network with another that is attacked will display similar defensive strategies and will increase the production of toxins or chemicals which repel attackers or attract defensive species. Terpenoids are a large class of VOCs existing constituently in plants or made as a response to stress, which act much like methyl salicytate, and AM fungus can activate plant defensive reactions, called priming, by causing them to increase the production of terpinoids.	They can also manifest biochemical changes, including the production of volatile organic compounds (VOCs) or the up-regulation of genes producing other defensive enzymes, many of which are toxic to pathogens or herbivores (16,17,18,2). Salicylic acid (SA) and its derivatives, like methyl salicylate, are VOCs that help plants recognize infection or attack and organize other plant defenses and exposure to them in animals can cause pathological processes (17,19). Plants have many ways to react to attacks, including the production of VOCs, which studies report can coordinate defenses among plants connected by mycorrhizal networks. Many studies report that mycorrhizal networks facilitate the coordination of defenses between connected plants using volatile organic compounds and other plant defensive enzymes act as signals. Priming happens when a plant’s defenses are activated before an attack.	Add more details to the section.	wiki
On September 12, 1976, the Snug Harbor Cultural Center was officially opened to the public. In 2008 the Snug Harbor Cultural Center and the Staten Island Botanical Garden merged to become the Snug Harbor Cultural Center and Botanical Garden. The Trustees of the Sailors ’Snug Harbor in the City of New York continues its work today. It remains committed to the mission of the original 1801 will of Captain Robert Richard Randall to care for needy mariners and continues to operate with funds from the endowment. There are mariners all over the country who meet eligibility requirements and are in need of financial help who are assisted by the Trust. There is no longer a retirement home under the operation of the Trust; while administrative functions are conducted from the office located at 40 Exchange Place, Suite 1701 NY, NY 10005. The Sailors' Snug Harbor Archives are preserved at the Stephen B. Luce Library, SUNY Maritime College. Visitors to Snug Harbor can access it via public transportation by taking the S40 Richmond Terrace bus from the St. George Ferry Terminal to the Snug Harbor front gate.	On September 12, 1976, the Snug Harbor Cultural Center was opened to the public. In 2008, the Cultural Center and the Staten Island Botanical Garden merged to become the Snug Harbor Cultural Center and Botanical Garden. Randall's Trust no longer operates a retirement home, but the Trustees of the Sailors ’Snug Harbor in the City of New York' continue its work using funds from the endowment to help mariners all over the country who meet eligibility. Its office is at 40 Exchange Place, Suite 1701 NY, NY 10005. The Sailors' Snug Harbor Archives are preserved at the Stephen B. Luce Library at SUNY Maritime College in the Bronx. The S40 Richmond Terrace bus travels from the St. George Terminal to the Snug Harbor front gate.	Copyedit and rewrite to make more concise	wiki
The Singapore Army (,;) is the branch of the Singapore Armed Forces (SAF) defending Singapore by land military operations. It is the largest of the three armed services. The SAF is mainly a conscript army and most of its units are manned by reserves. The mission of the Army is to deter aggression, and should deterrence fail, to secure a swift and decisive victory. In peacetime, the Army is to be ready and capable of conducting a spectrum of operations to protect Singapore's national interests and the well-being of its citizens. The Singapore Army focuses on leveraging technology and weapon systems as "force-multipliers". Aside from hardware, the Singapore Army heavily invests in its "software". Largely made up of tertiary-educated conscripts and career regular soldiers, who are continually upgrading their skills with higher education, well-trained and technically proficient. To familiarise all soldiers with practical fighting experience in case of national exigencies, military exercises up to division level are conducted many times annually, training almost all combat NS units to full-spectrum, full-scale war scenario stimulation. Divisional exercises involve the integration of the national air force and navy to train its troopers with its combined arms, tri-service joint operations. Due to space constraints, some large-scale exercises are conducted overseas unilaterally. Reservists (NSmen) take part in overseas exercises periodically and there is constant evaluation on NS units to improve their operational readiness. Bilateral training and exchanges are also common between friendly nations. The Singapore Army is currently undergoing the transformation into a 3rd Generation fighting force. The SAF's evolution into its 3rd Generation involves combining advances in technology and training while using networking to integrate the tri-services into an integrated fighting force. This will provide even greater operational-readiness and flexibility during war and peace time.	The Singapore Army (,;) is the branch of the Singapore Armed Forces (SAF) tasked with land land operations. It is the largest of the three service branches. The SAF is primarily a conscript army that, in the event of war, mobilizes most of its combat power by calling up military reservists. The mission of the Singapore Armed Forces is to deter armed aggression, and to secure a swift and decisive victory should deterrence fail. Additionally, the Army is tasked with conducting peace-time operations in furtherance of Singapore's national interests and foreign policy. These range from disaster relief to peacekeeping, hostage-rescue and other contingencies. The Army views technology as a force-multiplier and a means to sustain combat power given Singapore's population constraints. Jointness across three branches of the SAF is integral to the Army's warfighting doctrine. Joint operations the Army has undertaken with the Navy and Air Force include amphibious landings and critical disaster relief in the aftermath of the 2004 Indian Ocean earthquake. The Army has a technically proficient, relatively well-educated draftee pool and officer corps (non-commissioned and commissioned) reflective of the population at large, and has sought to leverage this to ease its transition into a more sophisticated, networked fighting force. Combat readiness is a linchpin of Army policy, and military exercises up to divisional level are conducted many times yearly, simulating full-spectrum operations, up to and including full-scale war. Divisional war games are a combined arms, tri-service affair involving the Republic of Singapore Navy and Air Force. Because training space is limited in Singapore - artillery fire would quickly traverse the island, for example - some military exercises are conducted overseas. Reservists periodically train abroad, their units regularly evaluated for combat readiness. The Army also trains bilaterally with some host nations, and military exchanges are frequent. Training is billed as "tough, realistic and safe," with a premium on safety, given the sensitivity of military deaths in a largely conscript army. Following the Revolution in Military Affairs, and in tandem with modernizing its weapons systems, the Army is forging a transition to a more network-centric fighting doctrine that better integrates the Air Force and Navy.	Copyedit for flow, and readability.	wiki
Simon Cage from the Daily Express gave the album three out of five stars and said that she "has a winning way with ostentatious hats but Lady Gaga’s true talent is actually selling the same album over and over again. Matthew Richardson from Prefix Magazine reviewed The Sound of Arrows remix of" Alejandro "and said that they" have been releasing material in a slow trickle, but the quality has been such that people are still paying attention. While we're all waiting for their album to drop, hopefully sometime before the world ends, this remix that the duo did of Lady Gaga's "Alejandro" has recently surfaced. Robert Copsey from Digital Spy commented that "The Remix feels like a fairly natural progression, as opposed to the cynical label cash-in often associated with this sort of release.	Simon Cage from the Daily Express gave the album three out of five stars and felt that although she "has a winning way with ostentatious hats", Gaga's true talent lies in selling the same album over and over again. Considine, while reviewing the album for The Globe and Mail, complimented the piano and voice version of "Poker Face" adding that the latter was "the smartest track on her newest remix album". He felt that the song "brings out her inner Elton John." Robert Copsey from Digital Spy noted that the release of The Remix was a more natural progression than music labels trying to "cash in" by releasing something not associated with the artist. Stephen Thomas Erlewine from Allmusic gave the album three out of five stars but felt that the tracklist could have been shortened.	Paraphrase and remove copyright material from paragraph to replace with new information. Correct grammatical mistakes.	wiki
Because of this, it is advisable to try to give trauma victims (or any patient in pain) pain-killers (such as morphine) as soon as possible-to prevent pain sensitisation. Pain tolerance is distinct from a pain threshold. The minimum stimulus necessary to produce pain is the pain threshold. One's pain tolerance is the level of pain needed to force a person to 'give up'.	Because of this, trauma victims (or patients in pain) are given pain-killers (such as morphine) as soon as possible-to prevent pain sensitization. Pain tolerance is the level of pain needed to force a person to 'give up'.	Condense the information.	wiki
Once she did, the men attached to the key (s) came down to the car and the champion tried to start the car. If she did, she won the vehicle and retired undefeated. If she did not, the correct key was shown and used by White to open the trunk of the car. Inside was a prop that was related to a consolation prize the champion won instead.	Once she did, the men attached to the key(s) came down to the car and the champion tried to start the engine. If the car started, the champion retired undefeated and won the car. If not, she won a consolation prize and White informed her which key would have been the correct choice. She then would use that key to open the trunk of the car, inside which was a prop to give the champion some idea of what her consolation prize was.	Rewrite the description of the car key award stunt.	wiki
This is such a serious (mortal) illness, and rapidly becoming a Pandemic, that if you think you have it .... RUN ... don't walk to the closest doctor. You need an infectious disease specialist. We know people using Food Grade DE and Zapper but those people also see doctors. Let your doctor know what you want to do. The doctor should not have any problem with things that cannot hurt you. They don't have any side effects.	This is such a serious (mortal) illness, and rapidly becoming a Pandemic, that if the infection is even remote .... RUN ... don't walk to the closest doctor. Contact an infectious disease specialist. People that use Food Grade DE and Zappers also see doctors. The doctor should not have any problem with things that cannot hurt (no side effects). Food Grade Diatomaceous Earth is classified by the FDA as a food (additive).	Edit for a formal tone. Correct particle usage.	wiki
Medvedev: If there are fewer complaints, this is the first sign that the situation is more or less normal. Lukin: This is the first sign that the situation is returning to normal. But of course, I'm a bad messenger, because I only deal with complaints, not compliments, so I pay less attention to them. But there are a number of positive points. An organization such as Agora, which as I wrote in my conclusion, have not exactly endeared themselves to the authorities-they've noticed that some very positive developments have occurred in some court cases. On the one hand, they continue to complain about the judges, on the other hand there are things that command respect. For example, with aggressive nationalists-fascists, in other words-the courts are beginning to take a much harder line.	Medvedev: If they are filing fewer complaints, it is the first sign that the situation is more or less normal. Lukin: This is the first sign that the situation is getting better. Granted, I am not the best messenger, because I work with complaints rather than complements, so I pay less attention to that aspect. But there is a whole set of positive factors. For example, AGORA organisation Association of Human Rights Organisations which may not be suspected of any warm attitudes toward the authorities, notes some very positive changes in certain court cases. On the one hand, people file complaints about judges and continue to complain, but on the other hand, there are elements that garner respect. For example, the courts have begun to take more adequate measures when dealing with aggressive nationalists, Nazis and some other destructive social elements.	Include more idioms to make it sound natural.	wiki
Knobbed Pacific iguanas occupy a variety of microhabitats and primarily reside on the coast of western Peru and Ecuador. They can be found in deserts, lomas, and even beaches. In regards to their microhabitats, knobbed Pacific Iguanas are present in a wide array of places usually depending on the time of day. In the morning, they prefer to be in open areas or places with sun. During the midday, they are usually in bushes, tripped logs, or abandoned buildings. At night, they occupy the area between rocks to maintain proper body temperature.	Knobbed Pacific iguanas primarily reside on the coast of western Peru and Ecuador. They can occupy a variety of microhabitats such as deserts, lomas, and beaches. In the morning, they prefer open areas that have access to the sun. During midday, they use bushes, tripped logs, or abandoned buildings. And during the night, they reside between rocks to maintain their ideal body temperature.	Rewrite and condense the information.	wiki
On January 6, 1917, Rutherford, aged 47, was elected President of the Watch Tower Society, unopposed, at the Pittsburgh convention. By June the rumblings surrounding Rutherford's elevation to President were turning into what he called a "storm" that ruptured the Watch Tower Society for the remainder of 1917. The seeds had been sown in January when Johnson was sent to England following Russell's death with orders to inspect the management and finances of the Society's London corporation.	On January 6, 1917, Rutherford, aged 47, was elected president of the Watch Tower Society, unopposed, at a convention in Pittsburgh. Author Tony Wills claims that nominations were suspended once Rutherford had been nominated, preventing votes for other candidates, and within months Rutherford felt the need to defend himself against rumors within the Brooklyn Bethel that he had used "political methods" to secure his election. By June, the dispute surrounding Rutherford's election as president was turning into what he called a "storm" that ruptured the Watch Tower Society for the remainder of 1917. In January of that year following Russell's death, Paul Johnson was sent to England with orders to inspect the management and finances of the Watch Tower Society's London corporation.	Expand on the scandal of Rutherford's election.	wiki
Laverty move to MotoGP with Aspar MotoGP Team riding Honda RC213V-RS open-spec bikes. He finishing in 22nd place with best result 12th at Catalunya. Laverty still remain for the team with new partner Yonny Hernández in 2016 season, but he will ride Ducati Desmosedici GP14.2.	For the season, Laverty moved to MotoGP with the Aspar Racing Team, riding a Honda RC213V-RS open-specification motorcycle. He finished the season in 22nd place in the riders' championship standings, with a best result of 12th in Catalunya. Laverty will remain with the team & nbsp; – now riding Ducati Desmosedici GP14.2 motorcycles & nbsp; – for the season, where he will partner Yonny Hernández.	Clean up the MotoGP section.	wiki
The weapons were long, weighed, took a carrying party of 300 men to bring them to the front line and assemble them, and were operated by a crew of eight. The Livens Large Gallery Flame Projector was designed to be used from a shallow tunnel dug under no man's land. The weapon consisted of a long chamber containing the fuel, a diameter pipe and a nozzle on the surface. The nozzle was hidden in the chamber underground until needed, then pushed upwards through the earth by a pneumatic cylinder.	A Livens Large Gallery Flame Projector was long, weighed, and it took a carrying party of 300 men to bring it to the front line and assemble them. The weapon was designed to be used from a shallow tunnel dug under no man's land and was operated by a crew of eight. The Livens Large Gallery Flame Projector consisted of a long chamber containing the fuel, a diameter pipe and a nozzle on the surface. The nozzle was hidden underground until needed, stored in a chamber at the end of a sap, then pushed upwards through the earth by a pneumatic cylinder.	Copy edit to flow better, and lead one sentence into the other.	wiki
In several instances throughout the nation, a municipality has merged with a county into one jurisdiction so the county seat is coextensive with the county. This is the case in the City and County of San Francisco, CA, and in the City and County of Philadelphia, PA. New York City is famously coextensive with five counties or boroughs: the Bronx (which is Bronx County), Brooklyn (Kings County), Manhattan (New York County), Queens (Queens County), and Staten Island (Richmond County). Braselton, Georgia is widely known for being in four counties: Jackson County, Barrow County, Gwinnett County, and Hall County.	In several instances, a municipality has merged with a county into one jurisdiction so the county seat is coextensive with the county. This is the case in the City and County of San Francisco, California, and in the City and County of Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. A similar arrangement is found in Tennessee's Metropolitan Government of Nashville and Davidson County, which consolidated the governments of city of Nashville and Davidson County, although a few municipalities still exist with some governmental functions. New York City is coextensive with five counties or boroughs: the Bronx (which is Bronx County), Brooklyn (Kings County), Manhattan (New York County), Queens (Queens County), and Staten Island (Richmond County).	Replace the Braselton, GA, example with Nashville, Tennessee.	wiki
The Hittite Kingdom were concerned with threats to its southern Mediterranean coast and further afield. The final monarch of the Hittite Empire was Suppiluliuma II, who is particularly known for commanding the Hittite fleet in the first recorded naval battle in history in 1210 BCE, against the Alashiyan Fleet, (Cypriots) leading to a resounding Hittite victory. The battle was recorded in inscriptions of the Egyptian Pharaoh Ramses III that is the earliest reference we have to a true sea battle.	The Hittite Kingdom was concerned with threats to its southern Mediterranean coast and further afield. The final monarch of the Hittite Empire was Suppiluliuma II, who was particularly known for commanding the Hittite fleet in the first recorded naval battle in history in 1210 BCE; this was a battle against the Alashiyan fleet and it led to a resounding Hittite victory. The battle was recorded in inscriptions of the Egyptian Pharaoh Ramses III; the inscriptions are the earliest references to a true sea battle. The navy was involved in a series of three military engagements known as the Battles of Alashiya, which included action at sea and on land between the Hittite Navy and Army against the Alashiyan Navy and Army.	Add mention of the Battles of Alashiya	wiki
Binary search can also be used to transform decision into optimization, and typically incurs an overhead logarithmic in the numerical precision, resulting in weakly polynomial algorithms. When applicable, parametric search finds strongly polynomial algorithms, but with an increase in time complexity (compared to the decision algorithm) that may be larger than logarithmic. Thus, algorithms based on parametric search are more satisfactory from a theoretical point of view.	The bisection method (binary search) can also be used to transform decision into optimization. Although this method can only find a numerical approximation to the optimal solution value, it does so in a number of calls to the decision algorithm proportional to the number of bits of precision of accuracy for this approximation, resulting in weakly polynomial algorithms. Instead, when applicable, parametric search finds strongly polynomial algorithms, but with an increase in time complexity (compared to the decision algorithm) that may be larger than logarithmic. Because they are strongly rather than weakly polynomial, algorithms based on parametric search are more satisfactory from a theoretical point of view.	Expand on the concepts presented	wiki
Modern jet combat aircraft and helicopters have a variety of complex electronic and weapon systems that are specific to a particular aircraft. This led to a genre called the "study sim" that focuses on modelling an aircraft's systems as accurately as possible. Advancements in computer technology led to the development of highly detailed models that improved upon the fidelity of avionics, weapons systems, physics, flight models, graphics, etc. and allowed for fully interactive cockpits where virtually every control was mapped and functional.	The "study sim" is a genre of simulation games that focuses on modelling an aircraft's systems as accurately as possible. Advancing computer technology made this possible, with the development of highly detailed models that improved upon the fidelity of avionics, weapons systems, physics, flight models, graphics, etc. and allowed for fully interactive cockpits where virtually every control was mapped and functional. This was important as modern jet combat aircraft and helicopters have a variety of complex electronic and weapon systems that are specific to a particular aircraft.	Make sure to put the definition at the beginning of the paragraph.	wiki
Humans are also a big contributor to the New Zealand damselfly survival. With the power to redirect steams. This then leaves the ponds dry so the larvae unable to survive and also the eggs unable to hatch. This also happens with nature when ponds and streams dry up from droughts resulting in larvae unable to survive.	Humans also contribute significantly to New Zealand damselfly survival with their power to redirect streams, leaving dry ponds with larvae unable to survive and eggs unable to hatch. Natural events, such as droughts, can also cause ponds and streams to dry up with similarly deadly results for larvae and eggs.	Rewrite some of the section to be more clear.	wiki
He became an apostolic protonotary on January 11, 1927. He was named President of the Pontifical Commission for Russia on December 21, 1934, and Assistant at the Papal Throne on January 19, 1936. He was created Cardinal-Priest of Santa Maria in Via Lata by Pius XI in the consistory of December 13, 1937. Pizzardo was Prefect of the Congregation for Seminaries and Universities from March 14, 1939 until his resignation on January 13, 1968. He was named Secretary of the Holy Office (the equivalent of what is now called Prefect of the Congregation for the Doctrine of the Faith) on February 16, 1951 by Pope Pius XII, for whom he had worked many years in the Secretariat of State. He was Cardinal Bishop of Albano from June 21, 1948.	He became an apostolic protonotary on 11 January 1927. Pope Pius XI appointed him Titular Archbishop of Cyrrhus on 28 March 1930, and on the following 22 April, Titular Archbishop of Nicaea. Pizzardo received his episcopal consecration on 27 April of that same year from Eugenio Cardinal Pacelli, with Archbishop Giuseppe Palica and Francesco Marchetti-Selvaggiani serving as co-consecrators. He was named president of the Pontifical Commission for Russia on 21 December 1934, and an Assistant at the Papal Throne on 19 January 1936. He was created Cardinal-Priest of Santa Maria in Via Lata by Pius XI in the consistory of 13 December 1937. Pizzardo was Prefect of the Congregation for Seminaries and Universities from 14 March 1939 until his resignation on 13 January 1968. He was named Secretary of the Holy Office (the equivalent of what is now called Prefect of the Congregation for the Doctrine of the Faith) on 16 February 1951 by Pope Pius XII, for whom he had worked many years in the Secretariat of State. He was Cardinal-Bishop of Albano from 21 June 1948.	undo unnecessary Americanizations	wiki
Interstate 35, a long north-south Interstate Highway having termini in Laredo, Texas and Duluth, Minnesota, is the only existing Interstate highway ro be 'split' into two two separate Interstates designated by location to serve different destinations. Interstate 35 splits in eastern Minnesota at Forest Lake, Minnesota and Burnsville, Minnesota, the more easterly Interstate 35E serving St. Paul, Minnesota and the more westerly Interstate 35W serving Minneapolis. It essentialy supplants the old U.S. Highway 8, now decommissioned, north of Minneapolis and old U.S. Highway 65, also decommissioned, south of Minneapolis. Interstate 35 splits in northern Texas at Denton, Texas and Hillsboro, Texas, the more easterly Interstate 35E passing through Dallas, Texas, and the more westerly 35W passing through Fort Worth, Texas. It supplants the old U.S. Highway 81 through and south of Fort Worth and largely supplants the extant U.S. Highway 377 between Denton and Fort Worth.	Interstate 35W is the name of the western half of Interstate 35, which is used in two regions along its length. I-35 is a long north-south Interstate Highway having termini in Laredo, Texas and Duluth, Minnesota, and is the only existing Interstate highway to be 'split' into two separate interstates designated by location to serve different destinations. The reason for this is partly political, as both Minnesota and Texas have "twin cities" that each wanted Interstate 35 to themselves. Any alternate numbering scheme would likely cause "gaps" in the interstate, leading to confusion. The companion route to I-35W is the eastern Interstate 35E. Interstate 35 splits in eastern Minnesota at Forest Lake in the north and Burnsville to the south. Mileposts and exits are numbered independently on I-35W, while they are contiguous with the rest of the interstate on I-35E. Exit number 1 on I-35W is in Forest Lake. The highway itself is marked as an "exit" from I-35E. This segment is 39 miles in length, about two miles shorter than its companion route. Interstate 35 splits in northern Texas at Denton to the north and Hillsboro to the south.	Rearrange the information and provide more context.	wiki
Elsa opposes the military means applied by her saviours but nonetheless they all together must run for dear life. Their situation exacerbates when their new fight is brought to the attention of Elsa's kidnappers who also join the chase to hunt them all down. If any of them shall survive some of them have to sacrifice themselves.	Elsa opposes the military means applied by her saviours. Their situation exacerbates when their new fight and the subsequent man chase is brought to the attention of Elsa's kidnappers. They reinforce those who are in the course of hunt the refugies all down. If any of them shall survive some of them might have to sacrifice themselves while the others, including Elsa, run for dear life.	Add a few details to the plot	wiki
The 1994 Nabisco Dinah Shore was played at Mission Hills Country Club in Rancho Mirage, California. This was the 23rd edition of the Kraft Nabisco Championship, and the 12th edition as a major championship. It was played from March 24–27. This was the first Dinah Shore held after the tournament host's death on February 24, 1994. On the Tuesday of tournament week it was announced that the LPGA had elected Dinah Shore an honorary member of its Hall of Fame. The championship was won by Donna Andrews after a two shot swing took place between her and Laura Davies on the 72nd hole. Andrews scoring a birdie while Davies made bogey.	The 1994 Nabisco Dinah Shore was a women's professional golf tournament, held March 24–27 at Mission Hills Country Club in Rancho Mirage, California. This was the 23rd edition of the Nabisco Dinah Shore and the twelfth as a major championship. Tournament host Dinah Shore died of cancer a month earlier on February 24. On the Tuesday of tournament week, it was announced that the LPGA had elected her an honorary member of its Hall of Fame. Donna Andrews won her only major title by a stroke over runner-up Laura Davies; a two-shot swing took place on the 72nd hole, as Andrews scored a birdie while Davies made a bogey.	Add Wiki information, improve the flow of prose, and correct grammar where necessary.	wiki
The level also contains a very interesting block of andesite with relief-texture. Recent research has proved that this stone was used as a melting pot for copper. The stone was not brought here from outside but was part of the andesite layer unearthened while hollowing. To be able to use it as a melting pot, 57 holes were carved on the surface of the stone. The copper ore, about 10 cm in length, would be put into one of those holes and would be hammered using a hard piece of rock. This technique has been known since the Prehistoric Periods. The copper brought to Kaymakli Underground City was probably dug from a quarry between Aksaray and Nevsehir. The fact that there are a lot of storage rooms and places to put earthenware jars in the wineries on the 4th floor indicates that the people living in this underground city were economically stable. Even though the whole city has not been completely opened, and since only 4 floors have been uncovered, it is certain that Kaymakli is one of the largest underground settlements in the region. The number of the storage rooms in sucn a small area supports the idea that a great number of people resided here.	The level also contains a very interesting block of andesite with relief-textures. Recently, it was shown that this stone was used as a pot to melt copper. The stone was hune for the andesite layer stone from within the complex. In order for it to be used as a melting pot, 57 holes were carved into the stone. The prehistoric technique was of placing into each of the holes copper ore, about 10 cm in length, and then hammering each of them into place using a hard piece of rock. The copper brought was probably dug up from a quarry between Aksaray and Nevsehir. Economic stability could be seen in the high number of storage rooms and areas to store earthenware jars in the wineries on the fourth floor. Kaymakli is considered one of the largest underground settlements in the region. The high number of the storage rooms in such a limited area appear to be indicative of the need to support a large underground populace. Currently, only a fraction of the actual city is open to tourists.	Try to make the text sound less like a tourist brochure	wiki
On October 1, 2003, after recording for the duration of the summer, Entity Paradigm's full-length debut album was released which was slated for a 25 September 2003 release date. Irtiqa, produced by Zulfiqar J. Khan, Fawad A. Khan and Mekaal Hasan, was a critical accalaim in Pakistan. Irtiqa saw top-ten singles including "Waqt", "Hamesha", "Aghosh" and "Kahan Hai Tu". "Irtiqa" was the first mainstream concept album to be released by a Pakistani artist. "Irtiqa" means "progress" or "evolution" in Urdu, and the album revolves around this theme. The sound of Irtiqa was very melodic and doom paced, influenced by heavy metal and progressive rock, heavily relied on fast keyboards and drums and heavy guitar riffs. Entity Paradigm also travelled throughout the country to promote Irtiqa.	On October 1, 2003, after recording songs during the summers, the band released their debut full-length studio album, which was slated to be for a September 25, 2003, release date. Irtiqa, produced by Zulfiqa J. Khan, Fawad A. Khan and songwriter-producer Mekaal Hasan, became a critical acclaim in Pakistan and became one of the first mainstream concept album released by a Pakistani artist. Singles like "Waqt" EP Waqt video, "Hamesha", "Aghosh" and "Kahan Hai Tu" all topped the local music charts. The single "Waqt" also charted at top in India. Irtiqa, meaning progression, revolved around a theme of evolution. The soun of the album is very melodic and doom paced, influenced by heavy metal and progressive rock, heavily relied on fast keyboards and drums and heavy guitar riffs. The band also went on a tour all across the country to promote their debut album release.	Provide information about how their music did in India.	wiki
Liu Biao died in 208 and was succeeded by his younger son Liu Cong, who surrendered Jing Province to Cao Cao when Cao launched a campaign to attack the warlords in southern China. Liu Bei and his followers headed south towards Xiakou (夏口), which was guarded by Liu Biao's elder son, Liu Qi, and was independent of Cao Cao's control. Cao Cao sent 5,000 riders to pursue Liu Bei and they caught up with him at Changban (長阪), Dangyang (當陽), resulting in the Battle of Changban.	After Liu Biao died in 208, his younger son, Liu Cong, succeeded him as the Governor of Jing Province. When Cao Cao launched a campaign later that year to eliminate opposing forces in southern China, Liu Cong voluntarily surrendered and yielded Jing Province to Cao Cao. Liu Cong and his followers headed further south towards Xiakou (夏口; present-day Hankou, Hubei), which was guarded by Liu Biao's elder son Liu Qi and was independent of Cao Cao's control. Cao Cao sent 5,000 riders to pursue Liu Bei, and they caught up with him at Changban (長阪) near Dangyang, resulting in the Battle of Changban.	Add appts and titles + restore full names to avoid confusion	wiki
Grosvenor House was one of the largest private townhouses situated on Park Lane in London. The house was the home of the Grosvenor family (better known as the Dukes of Westminster) for more than a century. Their original London dwelling was on Millbank but, after the family had developed their Mayfair estates, they moved to Park Lane to build a house worthy of their wealth, status and influence in the 19th century. The house was requisitioned during the First World War, and later sold and demolished. The Grosvenor House Hotel stands on its site.	Grosvenor House was one of the largest private townhouses situated on Park Lane in London, England. The house was the London home of the Grosvenor family (better known as the Dukes of Westminster) for more than a century. Their original London residence was on Millbank, but after the family had developed their Mayfair estates, they moved to Park Lane to build a house worthy of their wealth, status and influence in the 19th century. The house was requisitioned during the First World War, and it was subsequently sold and then demolished in the 1920s. The Grosvenor House Hotel was built on its site. The site was originally occupied by a small house named 'Gloucester House' (after Prince William Henry, Duke of Gloucester and Edinburgh, who owned it), with the front entrance on Upper Grosvenor Street. This house was purchased by Robert Grosvenor, 1st Marquess of Westminster, in 1805 for £ 20,000.	Expand upon the history of Grovesnor House and Grovesnor House Hotel.	wiki
The Atlas V and Delta IV rockets were developed under the NSSL program by Lockheed Martin and Boeing respectively, both launching in 2002. Delta IV Medium was retired on 22 August 2019, but Delta IV Heavy rockets will keep launching heavy payloads. Astrobotic Technology's Peregrine lander will launch on the first Vulcan certification flight, expected in 2021 from SLC-41 at Cape Canaveral Air Force Station.	ULA operates the Atlas V and Delta IV rockets, which were developed under the National Security Space Launch (NSSL) program by Lockheed Martin and Boeing respectively, both launching in 2002. The Delta IV Medium was retired on August 22, 2019, but Delta IV Heavy rockets will continue to be used to launch heavy payloads. ULA is developing Vulcan, a heavy-lift launch vehicle that will replace its existing fleet. Astrobotic Technology's Peregrine lander will be launched on the first Vulcan certification flight, which is expected to occur in 2021 from SLC-41 at Cape Canaveral Air Force Station.	Rewrite and expand the information.	wiki
In 1911 Nesterov began with its formal training as the pilot, which he graduated on 11 October 1912 with the examination to the pilot. Short time late he also passed the examination to be a military pilot. In May 1913 he became leader of a relay in Kiev, with which he completed also night flights. Nesterov recognized the connections of the turning flight of airplanes, and stated that an airplane could fly a Loop. Nobody at first believed him, but Nesterov proved his theory on 27 August 1913 been the first pilot to fly a loop.	In 1911, Nesterov began formal training as a pilot and graduated on 11 October 1912. A short time later, he also passed the examination to be a military pilot. In May 1913, he became the leader of a relay in Kiev, completing night flights at that time. Nesterov believed that an airplane could fly a Loop, a feat not previously performed. Despite the doubts of his peers, Nesterov proved his theory on 27 August 1913 and became the first pilot to fly a loop.	Clean up the translation and correct grammatical errors.	wiki
Unofficial single, Someday entered the Gaon chart on August 21 selling 1,629,879 digital download sales from August 21 to August 28 and is able to climb on the second week a total of 6 spots from its debut at Top 140. Meanwhile, "Neverland" entered the chart landing at Top 50 garnering a total of 6,151,934 digital downloads and streams from August 28 to September 3, 2011. Meanwhile, Neverland dropped out of Hanteo Charts 4 days after its release, however it zooms back to Number 1 on September 15, 2011.	Unofficial single, "Someday" entered the Gaon Chart on August 21 after selling 1,629,879 digital download sales from August 21 to August 28. It climbed six spots in its second week on the chart from its debut at Top 140. Meanwhile, "Neverland" entered the chart landing at Top 50 for garnering a total of 6,151,934 digital downloads and streams from August 28 to September 3, 2011.	Remove the last sentence, copy edit.	wiki
The Big Three were a trio of professional basketball players for the Miami Heat of the National Basketball Association (NBA) from the 2010–11 NBA season to the 2013–14 NBA season. The "Big Three" consisted of LeBron James, Dwyane Wade, and Chris Bosh. All three of those players were selected within the first five picks of the 2003 NBA draft. James was selected by the Cleveland Cavaliers in 2003 and announced his free agent move to the Miami Heat on his TV special called The Decision. Wade was selected fifth by the Miami Heat. Bosh was selected by the Toronto Raptors and then signed a free agency contract to play for the Heat. Each of the players from the Miami Heat's "Big Three" was the franchise scoring leader for the franchise that drafted them. They led the Heat to the NBA Finals in each of their four seasons playing together.	The Big Three were a trio of professional basketball players for the Miami Heat of the National Basketball Association (NBA) from 2010 to 2014, that consisted of LeBron James, Dwyane Wade, and Chris Bosh. All three were selected within the first five picks of the 2003 NBA draft, and became scoring leaders for their respective franchises prior to joining the Heat. After resigning Wade following the 2008-09 season, the Heat secured the signings of both Bosh and James in free agency, with the latter being announced an an exclusive television special. The trio led the Heat to the NBA Finals in each of their four seasons together, and won back-to-back championships in 2012 and 2013. After losing the Finals the following season, James opted out of a contract extension, and returned to play for the Cleveland Cavaliers. The trio have been credited for helping to revolutionize the NBA, with many more teams seeking to adopt the "Big Three" model of courting established NBA superstars to their franchises, in order to win championships. Franchises such as the Los Angeles Clippers and the Cavaliers have adopted the method in recent years, to varying degrees of success.	Expand on the topic of the Big Three	wiki
Moreover, there are bachelor degrees in medical sciences (BMedSc). The best of the first-class BMedSc graduates each year can possibly begin the four-year MBChB course. An increasingly popular option for medical students is to undertake a prestigious intercalated degree, in which they take a year out from the MBChB degree to complete a BMedSc degree in just one year. The College of Health Sciences at the University of Zimbabwe was modelled after the Birmingham Medical School.	The School also offers bachelor degrees in medical sciences (BMedSc) leading to further study at postgraduate level. Medical students may also intercalate to the final year of the BMedSc course to attain an additional degree. The College of Health Sciences at the University of Zimbabwe was modeled after the Birmingham Medical School.	Simplify and trim wordage.	wiki
Thrasyllus of Mendes whose full name was Tiberius Claudius Thrasyllus (flourished 1st century BC & 1st century, died 36, Greek: ὁ Τιβερίος Κλαύδιος Θράσιλλος or ὁ Θράσιλλος της Μένδης). Thrasyllus was an Egyptian Greek who originally came from a Greek family in Mendes, Egypt. He was an Alexandrian grammarian, editor of Plato and Democritus, however was most noted as an astrologer. Thrasyllus encountered the future Roman Emperor Tiberius, the putative heir to the first Roman Emperor Augustus, on the Greek island of Rhodes, where Tiberius had been exiled.	Thrasyllus of Mendes whose full name was Tiberius Claudius Thrasyllus (flourished 1st century BCE & 1st century, died 36 CE, Greek: ὁ Τιβερίος Κλαύδιος Θράσιλλος or ὁ Θράσιλλος της Μένδης). Thrasyllus may have been an Egyptian Greek from a Greek family in Mendes, Egypt. Although he is often mentioned in secondary sources as coming from Alexandria (Oxford Classical Dictionary), there is no primary source that confirms this origin. It is possible that Tiberius Claudius Thrasyllus, the astrologer of Tiberius who is famously mentioned in Tacitus (Annals of Rome) and Suetonius (Lives of the Caesars) was not the same individual as Thrasyllus of Mendes. Although Thrasyllus of Mendes was an Alexandrian grammarian and editor of Plato and Democritus, Tiberius Claudius Thrasyllus is most well-known as the astrologer of the Roman Emperor Tiberius. Thrasyllus encountered the future Emperor, putative heir to the first Roman Emperor Augustus, on the Greek island of Rhodes, where Tiberius had been exiled.	Edit to reflect the uncertainty of Thrasyllus' origins.	wiki
The film was then released theatrically in the United States on, 2012. The film's production company, Endgame Entertainment, negotiated a deal with FilmDistrict at the Cannes Film Festival in May 2011. In turn, FilmDistrict chose to release the film in the United States with TriStar Pictures.	The film was then released theatrically in the United States on, 2012 by FilmDistrict, who obtained the domestic rights from production company Endgame Entertainment at the 2011 Cannes Film Festival. In turn, FilmDistrict chose to release the film with TriStar Pictures.	Describe the type of deal Endgame Entertainment and FilmDisctrict agreed to.	wiki
Harcourt also published mass-market paperback books with Pyramid Books, which it bought out in 1974 and renamed Jove Books, then later selling it to the Putnam Berkley Group in 1979. World Book Company opened its first office in Manila in 1905 and published English-language educational materials for schools in the Philippines. The company later moved to New York, where it became a test publisher. Much of the company’s success was based on the work of Arthur S. Otis, who was best known for the intelligence tests he developed for the U.S. Army. Millions of World War I draftees took Otis ’tests. World Book Company became the first publisher of group-administered tests measuring mental ability when it published Otis’ Group Intelligence Scale in 1918. Otis joined World Book in 1921. By the time World Book merged with Harcourt Brace in 1960, it had a portfolio of educational tests, including the Stanford Achievement Test (1923), the Metropolitan Achievement Test (1932) and the Otis Mental Ability Test (1936). World Book Company was not related to World Book, Inc., the Chicago-based publisher of encyclopedias and other reference books. In 1991, General Cinema Corporation, a diversified company that operated retailers such as Neiman Marcus and Bergdorf Goodman, as well as a national chain of movie theaters, acquired Harcourt Brace Jovanovich for more than $ 1.5 billion. In 1993, General Cinema Corporation renamed itself Harcourt General and restored the publishing division’s name to the historic Harcourt Brace & Company. At the end of the year, Harcourt General divested its cinema division. Harcourt Trade Publishers is a member of the Reed Elsevier Group plc (NYSE: RUK and ENL), which is a publisher and information provider operating in four global industry sectors - science and medical, legal, education, and business. Reed Elsevier comprises the following divisions: Elsevier (science and medical), LexisNexis (legal), Harcourt Education (education), and Reed Business (business). On 15 February 2007, Reed Elsevier announced its intention to sell its education arm, Harcourt Education, of which Harcourt Trade Publishers is a part.	Harcourt also published mass-market paperback books with Pyramid Books, which it bought out in 1974 and renamed Jove Books, and eventually sold to the Putnam Berkley Group in 1979. In 1991, General Cinema Corporation, a diversified company (that operated not only a national chain of movie theaters, but also retailers such as Neiman Marcus and Bergdorf Goodman), acquired Harcourt Brace Jovanovich for more than $ 1.5 billion. In 1993, General Cinema Corporation renamed itself Harcourt General, and restored the 1921-1960 name "Harcourt Brace & Company" to its publishing division. At the end of the year, divested its cinema division. Harcourt Trade Publishers was a member of the Reed Elsevier Group plc (NYSE: RUK and ENL), a publisher and information provider operating in four global industry sectors - science and medical, legal, education, and business. Reed Elsevier then comprised the following divisions: Elsevier (science and medical), LexisNexis (legal), Harcourt Education (education), and Reed Business (business). On 15 February 2007, Reed Elsevier announced its intention to sell its education arm, Harcourt Education, of which Harcourt Trade Publishers was a part.	Edit for conciseness, comprehension, and organization. Grammatically correct where necessary.	wiki
Racers paddle down the coarse using the fastest jets of water. They follow the edges of wave trains to go fast. Also racers paddle in as straight a line as possible going down the river. Usually racers will run the river 2 or 3 times a day, a day or two before a race. When they are not sure which way is fastest, they will use 2 boats and float through the different sections to see which boat was the fastest.	Racers paddle down the course using the fastest jets of water. To go fast, they follow the edges of wave trains and hold as straight a line as possible down the river. Because of the high speeds, racers frequently run a river two or three times a day in training for a race. If it is unclear which line is fastest, two paddlers simultaneously float the different options and see which boat is fastest.	Rewrite the text more clearly.	wiki
Richards, was an influential English literary critic and rhetorician. He was educated at Clifton College and Magdalene College, Cambridge, where his love of English was nurtured by the scholar Charles Hickson 'Cabby' Spence. His books, especially The Meaning of Meaning, Principles of Literary Criticism, Practical Criticism, and The Philosophy of Rhetoric, proved to be founding influences for the New Criticism. The concept of 'practical criticism' led in time to the practices of close reading, what is often thought of as the beginning of modern literary criticism. Richards is regularly considered one of the founders of the contemporary study of literature in English. Richards began his career without formal training in literature at all; he studied philosophy ("moral sciences") at Cambridge University. Richards 'earliest teaching appointments were in the equivalent of what might be called "adjunct faculty" positions; Magdalene College at Cambridge would not pay a salary to Richards to teach the new and untested field of English literature. Instead, Richards collected tuition directly from the students as they entered the classroom each week. In 1926 he married Dorothy Pilley Richards, whom he had met on a climbing holiday in Wales. Richards' life and influence can be divided into periods, which correspond roughly to his intellectual interests. An assessment of Richards 'work and biography requires mention of C. K.Ogden, collaborator on three of the most important projects of Richards' life and work. In Foundations of Aesthetics (co-authored by Richards, Ogden & James Woods), Richards maps out the principles of aesthetic reception which lay at the root of his literary theory (the principle of "harmony" or balance of competing psychological impulses). Additionally, the structure of the work (surveying multiple, competing definitions of the term "aesthetic") prefigures his work on multiple definition in Coleridge on Imagination, in Basic Rules of Reason and in Mencius on the Mind.	Richards (Ivor Armstrong Richards 26 February 1893 – 7 September 1979), was an English Educator, literary critic, and rhetorician whose work contributed to the foundations of the New Criticism. Ivor Armstrong Richards was educated at Clifton College and Magdalene College, Cambridge, where his intellectual talents were developed by the scholar Charles Hickson 'Cabby' Spence. Richards, Principles of Literary Criticism (1926), Practical Criticism (1929), and The Philosophy of Rhetoric (1936). The New Criticism was a formalist movement in literary theory, which emphasized the close reading of a literary text, especially poetry, in effort to discover how a work of literature functions as a self-contained, self-referential æsthetic object. Richards to teach the new and untested academic field of English literature. Richards collected weekly tuition directly from the students, as they entered the classroom. In his private life, Ivor Armstrong Richards married Dorothy Pilley Richards in 1926; they had met on a mountain climbing holiday in Wales. In the 1929–30 biennium, as a visiting professor, Richards taught Basic English and Poetry at Tsinghua University, Beijing. Richards he was the director of the Orthological Institute of China. In Foundations of Aesthetics, by Richards, Ogden, and James Woods ,, Richards presents the principles of aesthetic reception, the bases of the literary theory of "harmony" (balance) of competing psychological impulses. The structure of the Foundations of Aesthetics — surveying the competing definitions of the term æsthetic — prefigures the multiple-definitions work in Coleridge on Imagination, presented in Basic Rules of Reason and in Mencius on the Mind.	Copyedit for English spelling, punctuation, syntax as well as phrasing	wiki
Technology Roadmapping, a form of technology planning, can aid a company in a competitive environment. Technology planning is needed to identify and develop the technologies required in the company. Once these technology enhancements or new technologies are identified they can be developed internally or collaboratively with external partners. For both approaches technology roadmapping can be used as a tool to plan and coordinate the set of activities involved in the processes.	Technology Roadmapping can help a company in different enviroments commercial enviroments. It is used to to find and develop the technologies needed in the company. When the enhancements are identified they can be developed internally or collaboratively with external partners.	Make the text more readable and comprehensive. Remove jargon.	wiki
Sye is the only remaining language on Erromango. There have been the four languages Sye, Sorung, Ura and Utaha. The latter three can be regarded as extinct, however, until recently there was a very small number of speakers of Ura. Terry Crowley counted six speakers in the mid-1990s. The branch of South Vanuatu languages was constituted by the above four languages.	Sye is close to being the only language on Erromango. There were once four—Sye, Sorung, Ura and Utaha—but the latter three are nearly extinct, apart from a handful of recently discovered Ura speakers. Terry Crowley counted six speakers of Ura in the mid-1990s. The South Vanuatu languages comprise these four languages.	Add "nearly" before "extinct."	wiki
Secretary General of the Truth and Reconciliation Commission. Effectively started work in March 2016 after she appointed the advisory council. Aim is to investigate the Burundian genocides. As sec gen of truth & rec implemented a programme to idenify and exhume mass graves, identify victims and pereptrators where possible and rebury them with appropriate funerals. The first mass grave was excavated in June 2017. Aims to implement a scheme of compensation payments in time. It is estimated that there are around 2,500 such graves in the country.	Niragira was later appointed Secretary-General of the Zambian Truth and Reconciliation Commission, whose aim is to investigate the Burundian genocides. She appointed an international advisory council in March 2016, which allowed the work of the commission to begin. The commission has implemented a program to identify and exhume mass graves, identify victims and perpetrators where possible and rebury bodies with appropriate funerals. The first mass grave was excavated in June 2017; a further 2,500 are estimated to exist in the country. Niragira has promised to implement a system of compensation for the victims and their families.	Clean up paragraph about Truth and Reconciliation Commission.	wiki