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Coral reefs which form a lagoon or lake are called natural breakwaters. The view of Izena's rocky southern coastline is well known as one of Japan's best, with the rock formations 'Umi Gitara' and 'Agi Gitara' dramatically rising from the land and sea. The names of Izena Island and Iheya Island are generally referred t... | Coral reefs form a lagoon or lake and are natural breakwaters. The view of Izena's rocky southern coastline is well known as one of Japan's best, including the rock formations 'Umi Gitara' and 'Agi Gitara' dramatically rising from the land and sea. | Edit for conciseness. | wiki |
Upon encountering the alchemist in London, he curses Ryu's right arm with the Grip of Murder which thrives on all the lives Ryu has taken, causing the Dragon Sword to be absorbed into Ryu's arm. After escaping the Prime Minister's mansion when it was destroyed by an incoming missile, Ryu returns to the JSDF Yunagi. The... | Upon encountering the alchemist at the Prime Minister's residence in London, he curses Ryu's right arm with the Grip of Murder which thrives on all the lives Ryu has taken, causing the Dragon Sword to be absorbed into Ryu's arm. Later, Ryu and JSDF member Mizuki McCloud watch as the Regent demands the immediate surrend... | Edit for conciseness and grammatical errors. | wiki |
They can also manifest biochemical changes, including the production of volatile organic compounds (VOCs) or the up-regulation of genes producing other defensive enzymes, many of which are toxic to pathogens or herbivores (16,17,18,2). Jasmonates are a class of VOCs produced by the jasmonic acid pathway, which are used... | They can also manifest biochemical changes, including the production of volatile organic compounds (VOCs) or the up-regulation of genes producing other defensive enzymes, many of which are toxic to pathogens or herbivores (16,17,18,2). Salicylic acid (SA) and its derivatives, like methyl salicylate, are VOCs that help ... | Add more details to the section. | wiki |
On September 12, 1976, the Snug Harbor Cultural Center was officially opened to the public. In 2008 the Snug Harbor Cultural Center and the Staten Island Botanical Garden merged to become the Snug Harbor Cultural Center and Botanical Garden. The Trustees of the Sailors ’Snug Harbor in the City of New York continues its... | On September 12, 1976, the Snug Harbor Cultural Center was opened to the public. In 2008, the Cultural Center and the Staten Island Botanical Garden merged to become the Snug Harbor Cultural Center and Botanical Garden. Randall's Trust no longer operates a retirement home, but the Trustees of the Sailors ’Snug Harbor i... | Copyedit and rewrite to make more concise | wiki |
The Singapore Army (,;) is the branch of the Singapore Armed Forces (SAF) defending Singapore by land military operations. It is the largest of the three armed services. The SAF is mainly a conscript army and most of its units are manned by reserves. The mission of the Army is to deter aggression, and should deterrence... | The Singapore Army (,;) is the branch of the Singapore Armed Forces (SAF) tasked with land land operations. It is the largest of the three service branches. The SAF is primarily a conscript army that, in the event of war, mobilizes most of its combat power by calling up military reservists. The mission of the Singapore... | Copyedit for flow, and readability. | wiki |
Simon Cage from the Daily Express gave the album three out of five stars and said that she "has a winning way with ostentatious hats but Lady Gaga’s true talent is actually selling the same album over and over again. Matthew Richardson from Prefix Magazine reviewed The Sound of Arrows remix of" Alejandro "and said that... | Simon Cage from the Daily Express gave the album three out of five stars and felt that although she "has a winning way with ostentatious hats", Gaga's true talent lies in selling the same album over and over again. Considine, while reviewing the album for The Globe and Mail, complimented the piano and voice version of ... | Paraphrase and remove copyright material from paragraph to replace with new information. Correct grammatical mistakes. | wiki |
Because of this, it is advisable to try to give trauma victims (or any patient in pain) pain-killers (such as morphine) as soon as possible-to prevent pain sensitisation. Pain tolerance is distinct from a pain threshold. The minimum stimulus necessary to produce pain is the pain threshold. One's pain tolerance is the l... | Because of this, trauma victims (or patients in pain) are given pain-killers (such as morphine) as soon as possible-to prevent pain sensitization. Pain tolerance is the level of pain needed to force a person to 'give up'. | Condense the information. | wiki |
Once she did, the men attached to the key (s) came down to the car and the champion tried to start the car. If she did, she won the vehicle and retired undefeated. If she did not, the correct key was shown and used by White to open the trunk of the car. Inside was a prop that was related to a consolation prize the cham... | Once she did, the men attached to the key(s) came down to the car and the champion tried to start the engine. If the car started, the champion retired undefeated and won the car. If not, she won a consolation prize and White informed her which key would have been the correct choice. She then would use that key to open ... | Rewrite the description of the car key award stunt. | wiki |
This is such a serious (mortal) illness, and rapidly becoming a Pandemic, that if you think you have it .... RUN ... don't walk to the closest doctor. You need an infectious disease specialist. We know people using Food Grade DE and Zapper but those people also see doctors. Let your doctor know what you want to do. The... | This is such a serious (mortal) illness, and rapidly becoming a Pandemic, that if the infection is even remote .... RUN ... don't walk to the closest doctor. Contact an infectious disease specialist. People that use Food Grade DE and Zappers also see doctors. The doctor should not have any problem with things that cann... | Edit for a formal tone. Correct particle usage. | wiki |
Medvedev: If there are fewer complaints, this is the first sign that the situation is more or less normal. Lukin: This is the first sign that the situation is returning to normal. But of course, I'm a bad messenger, because I only deal with complaints, not compliments, so I pay less attention to them. But there are a n... | Medvedev: If they are filing fewer complaints, it is the first sign that the situation is more or less normal. Lukin: This is the first sign that the situation is getting better. Granted, I am not the best messenger, because I work with complaints rather than complements, so I pay less attention to that aspect. But the... | Include more idioms to make it sound natural. | wiki |
Knobbed Pacific iguanas occupy a variety of microhabitats and primarily reside on the coast of western Peru and Ecuador. They can be found in deserts, lomas, and even beaches. In regards to their microhabitats, knobbed Pacific Iguanas are present in a wide array of places usually depending on the time of day. In the mo... | Knobbed Pacific iguanas primarily reside on the coast of western Peru and Ecuador. They can occupy a variety of microhabitats such as deserts, lomas, and beaches. In the morning, they prefer open areas that have access to the sun. During midday, they use bushes, tripped logs, or abandoned buildings. And during the nigh... | Rewrite and condense the information. | wiki |
On January 6, 1917, Rutherford, aged 47, was elected President of the Watch Tower Society, unopposed, at the Pittsburgh convention. By June the rumblings surrounding Rutherford's elevation to President were turning into what he called a "storm" that ruptured the Watch Tower Society for the remainder of 1917. The seeds ... | On January 6, 1917, Rutherford, aged 47, was elected president of the Watch Tower Society, unopposed, at a convention in Pittsburgh. Author Tony Wills claims that nominations were suspended once Rutherford had been nominated, preventing votes for other candidates, and within months Rutherford felt the need to defend hi... | Expand on the scandal of Rutherford's election. | wiki |
Laverty move to MotoGP with Aspar MotoGP Team riding Honda RC213V-RS open-spec bikes. He finishing in 22nd place with best result 12th at Catalunya. Laverty still remain for the team with new partner Yonny Hernández in 2016 season, but he will ride Ducati Desmosedici GP14.2. | For the season, Laverty moved to MotoGP with the Aspar Racing Team, riding a Honda RC213V-RS open-specification motorcycle. He finished the season in 22nd place in the riders' championship standings, with a best result of 12th in Catalunya. Laverty will remain with the team & nbsp; – now riding Ducati Desmosedici GP14.... | Clean up the MotoGP section. | wiki |
The weapons were long, weighed, took a carrying party of 300 men to bring them to the front line and assemble them, and were operated by a crew of eight. The Livens Large Gallery Flame Projector was designed to be used from a shallow tunnel dug under no man's land. The weapon consisted of a long chamber containing the ... | A Livens Large Gallery Flame Projector was long, weighed, and it took a carrying party of 300 men to bring it to the front line and assemble them. The weapon was designed to be used from a shallow tunnel dug under no man's land and was operated by a crew of eight. The Livens Large Gallery Flame Projector consisted of a... | Copy edit to flow better, and lead one sentence into the other. | wiki |
In several instances throughout the nation, a municipality has merged with a county into one jurisdiction so the county seat is coextensive with the county. This is the case in the City and County of San Francisco, CA, and in the City and County of Philadelphia, PA. New York City is famously coextensive with five count... | In several instances, a municipality has merged with a county into one jurisdiction so the county seat is coextensive with the county. This is the case in the City and County of San Francisco, California, and in the City and County of Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. A similar arrangement is found in Tennessee's Metropolita... | Replace the Braselton, GA, example with Nashville, Tennessee. | wiki |
The Hittite Kingdom were concerned with threats to its southern Mediterranean coast and further afield. The final monarch of the Hittite Empire was Suppiluliuma II, who is particularly known for commanding the Hittite fleet in the first recorded naval battle in history in 1210 BCE, against the Alashiyan Fleet, (Cypriot... | The Hittite Kingdom was concerned with threats to its southern Mediterranean coast and further afield. The final monarch of the Hittite Empire was Suppiluliuma II, who was particularly known for commanding the Hittite fleet in the first recorded naval battle in history in 1210 BCE; this was a battle against the Alashiy... | Add mention of the Battles of Alashiya | wiki |
Binary search can also be used to transform decision into optimization, and typically incurs an overhead logarithmic in the numerical precision, resulting in weakly polynomial algorithms. When applicable, parametric search finds strongly polynomial algorithms, but with an increase in time complexity (compared to the de... | The bisection method (binary search) can also be used to transform decision into optimization. Although this method can only find a numerical approximation to the optimal solution value, it does so in a number of calls to the decision algorithm proportional to the number of bits of precision of accuracy for this approx... | Expand on the concepts presented | wiki |
Modern jet combat aircraft and helicopters have a variety of complex electronic and weapon systems that are specific to a particular aircraft. This led to a genre called the "study sim" that focuses on modelling an aircraft's systems as accurately as possible. Advancements in computer technology led to the development ... | The "study sim" is a genre of simulation games that focuses on modelling an aircraft's systems as accurately as possible. Advancing computer technology made this possible, with the development of highly detailed models that improved upon the fidelity of avionics, weapons systems, physics, flight models, graphics, etc. ... | Make sure to put the definition at the beginning of the paragraph. | wiki |
Humans are also a big contributor to the New Zealand damselfly survival. With the power to redirect steams. This then leaves the ponds dry so the larvae unable to survive and also the eggs unable to hatch. This also happens with nature when ponds and streams dry up from droughts resulting in larvae unable to survive. | Humans also contribute significantly to New Zealand damselfly survival with their power to redirect streams, leaving dry ponds with larvae unable to survive and eggs unable to hatch. Natural events, such as droughts, can also cause ponds and streams to dry up with similarly deadly results for larvae and eggs. | Rewrite some of the section to be more clear. | wiki |
He became an apostolic protonotary on January 11, 1927. He was named President of the Pontifical Commission for Russia on December 21, 1934, and Assistant at the Papal Throne on January 19, 1936. He was created Cardinal-Priest of Santa Maria in Via Lata by Pius XI in the consistory of December 13, 1937. Pizzardo was Pr... | He became an apostolic protonotary on 11 January 1927. Pope Pius XI appointed him Titular Archbishop of Cyrrhus on 28 March 1930, and on the following 22 April, Titular Archbishop of Nicaea. Pizzardo received his episcopal consecration on 27 April of that same year from Eugenio Cardinal Pacelli, with Archbishop Giusepp... | undo unnecessary Americanizations | wiki |
Interstate 35, a long north-south Interstate Highway having termini in Laredo, Texas and Duluth, Minnesota, is the only existing Interstate highway ro be 'split' into two two separate Interstates designated by location to serve different destinations. Interstate 35 splits in eastern Minnesota at Forest Lake, Minnesota ... | Interstate 35W is the name of the western half of Interstate 35, which is used in two regions along its length. I-35 is a long north-south Interstate Highway having termini in Laredo, Texas and Duluth, Minnesota, and is the only existing Interstate highway to be 'split' into two separate interstates designated by locat... | Rearrange the information and provide more context. | wiki |
Elsa opposes the military means applied by her saviours but nonetheless they all together must run for dear life. Their situation exacerbates when their new fight is brought to the attention of Elsa's kidnappers who also join the chase to hunt them all down. If any of them shall survive some of them have to sacrifice t... | Elsa opposes the military means applied by her saviours. Their situation exacerbates when their new fight and the subsequent man chase is brought to the attention of Elsa's kidnappers. They reinforce those who are in the course of hunt the refugies all down. If any of them shall survive some of them might have to sacri... | Add a few details to the plot | wiki |
The 1994 Nabisco Dinah Shore was played at Mission Hills Country Club in Rancho Mirage, California. This was the 23rd edition of the Kraft Nabisco Championship, and the 12th edition as a major championship. It was played from March 24–27. This was the first Dinah Shore held after the tournament host's death on February... | The 1994 Nabisco Dinah Shore was a women's professional golf tournament, held March 24–27 at Mission Hills Country Club in Rancho Mirage, California. This was the 23rd edition of the Nabisco Dinah Shore and the twelfth as a major championship. Tournament host Dinah Shore died of cancer a month earlier on February 24. O... | Add Wiki information, improve the flow of prose, and correct grammar where necessary. | wiki |
The level also contains a very interesting block of andesite with relief-texture. Recent research has proved that this stone was used as a melting pot for copper. The stone was not brought here from outside but was part of the andesite layer unearthened while hollowing. To be able to use it as a melting pot, 57 holes w... | The level also contains a very interesting block of andesite with relief-textures. Recently, it was shown that this stone was used as a pot to melt copper. The stone was hune for the andesite layer stone from within the complex. In order for it to be used as a melting pot, 57 holes were carved into the stone. The prehi... | Try to make the text sound less like a tourist brochure | wiki |
On October 1, 2003, after recording for the duration of the summer, Entity Paradigm's full-length debut album was released which was slated for a 25 September 2003 release date. Irtiqa, produced by Zulfiqar J. Khan, Fawad A. Khan and Mekaal Hasan, was a critical accalaim in Pakistan. Irtiqa saw top-ten singles includin... | On October 1, 2003, after recording songs during the summers, the band released their debut full-length studio album, which was slated to be for a September 25, 2003, release date. Irtiqa, produced by Zulfiqa J. Khan, Fawad A. Khan and songwriter-producer Mekaal Hasan, became a critical acclaim in Pakistan and became o... | Provide information about how their music did in India. | wiki |
Liu Biao died in 208 and was succeeded by his younger son Liu Cong, who surrendered Jing Province to Cao Cao when Cao launched a campaign to attack the warlords in southern China. Liu Bei and his followers headed south towards Xiakou (夏口), which was guarded by Liu Biao's elder son, Liu Qi, and was independent of Cao Ca... | After Liu Biao died in 208, his younger son, Liu Cong, succeeded him as the Governor of Jing Province. When Cao Cao launched a campaign later that year to eliminate opposing forces in southern China, Liu Cong voluntarily surrendered and yielded Jing Province to Cao Cao. Liu Cong and his followers headed further south t... | Add appts and titles + restore full names to avoid confusion | wiki |
Grosvenor House was one of the largest private townhouses situated on Park Lane in London. The house was the home of the Grosvenor family (better known as the Dukes of Westminster) for more than a century. Their original London dwelling was on Millbank but, after the family had developed their Mayfair estates, they mov... | Grosvenor House was one of the largest private townhouses situated on Park Lane in London, England. The house was the London home of the Grosvenor family (better known as the Dukes of Westminster) for more than a century. Their original London residence was on Millbank, but after the family had developed their Mayfair ... | Expand upon the history of Grovesnor House and Grovesnor House Hotel. | wiki |
The Atlas V and Delta IV rockets were developed under the NSSL program by Lockheed Martin and Boeing respectively, both launching in 2002. Delta IV Medium was retired on 22 August 2019, but Delta IV Heavy rockets will keep launching heavy payloads. Astrobotic Technology's Peregrine lander will launch on the first Vulca... | ULA operates the Atlas V and Delta IV rockets, which were developed under the National Security Space Launch (NSSL) program by Lockheed Martin and Boeing respectively, both launching in 2002. The Delta IV Medium was retired on August 22, 2019, but Delta IV Heavy rockets will continue to be used to launch heavy payloads... | Rewrite and expand the information. | wiki |
In 1911 Nesterov began with its formal training as the pilot, which he graduated on 11 October 1912 with the examination to the pilot. Short time late he also passed the examination to be a military pilot. In May 1913 he became leader of a relay in Kiev, with which he completed also night flights. Nesterov recognized t... | In 1911, Nesterov began formal training as a pilot and graduated on 11 October 1912. A short time later, he also passed the examination to be a military pilot. In May 1913, he became the leader of a relay in Kiev, completing night flights at that time. Nesterov believed that an airplane could fly a Loop, a feat not pre... | Clean up the translation and correct grammatical errors. | wiki |
Unofficial single, Someday entered the Gaon chart on August 21 selling 1,629,879 digital download sales from August 21 to August 28 and is able to climb on the second week a total of 6 spots from its debut at Top 140. Meanwhile, "Neverland" entered the chart landing at Top 50 garnering a total of 6,151,934 digital down... | Unofficial single, "Someday" entered the Gaon Chart on August 21 after selling 1,629,879 digital download sales from August 21 to August 28. It climbed six spots in its second week on the chart from its debut at Top 140. Meanwhile, "Neverland" entered the chart landing at Top 50 for garnering a total of 6,151,934 digit... | Remove the last sentence, copy edit. | wiki |
The Big Three were a trio of professional basketball players for the Miami Heat of the National Basketball Association (NBA) from the 2010–11 NBA season to the 2013–14 NBA season. The "Big Three" consisted of LeBron James, Dwyane Wade, and Chris Bosh. All three of those players were selected within the first five picks... | The Big Three were a trio of professional basketball players for the Miami Heat of the National Basketball Association (NBA) from 2010 to 2014, that consisted of LeBron James, Dwyane Wade, and Chris Bosh. All three were selected within the first five picks of the 2003 NBA draft, and became scoring leaders for their res... | Expand on the topic of the Big Three | wiki |
Moreover, there are bachelor degrees in medical sciences (BMedSc). The best of the first-class BMedSc graduates each year can possibly begin the four-year MBChB course. An increasingly popular option for medical students is to undertake a prestigious intercalated degree, in which they take a year out from the MBChB deg... | The School also offers bachelor degrees in medical sciences (BMedSc) leading to further study at postgraduate level. Medical students may also intercalate to the final year of the BMedSc course to attain an additional degree. The College of Health Sciences at the University of Zimbabwe was modeled after the Birmingham ... | Simplify and trim wordage. | wiki |
Thrasyllus of Mendes whose full name was Tiberius Claudius Thrasyllus (flourished 1st century BC & 1st century, died 36, Greek: ὁ Τιβερίος Κλαύδιος Θράσιλλος or ὁ Θράσιλλος της Μένδης). Thrasyllus was an Egyptian Greek who originally came from a Greek family in Mendes, Egypt. He was an Alexandrian grammarian, editor of... | Thrasyllus of Mendes whose full name was Tiberius Claudius Thrasyllus (flourished 1st century BCE & 1st century, died 36 CE, Greek: ὁ Τιβερίος Κλαύδιος Θράσιλλος or ὁ Θράσιλλος της Μένδης). Thrasyllus may have been an Egyptian Greek from a Greek family in Mendes, Egypt. Although he is often mentioned in secondary sourc... | Edit to reflect the uncertainty of Thrasyllus' origins. | wiki |
The film was then released theatrically in the United States on, 2012. The film's production company, Endgame Entertainment, negotiated a deal with FilmDistrict at the Cannes Film Festival in May 2011. In turn, FilmDistrict chose to release the film in the United States with TriStar Pictures. | The film was then released theatrically in the United States on, 2012 by FilmDistrict, who obtained the domestic rights from production company Endgame Entertainment at the 2011 Cannes Film Festival. In turn, FilmDistrict chose to release the film with TriStar Pictures. | Describe the type of deal Endgame Entertainment and FilmDisctrict agreed to. | wiki |
Harcourt also published mass-market paperback books with Pyramid Books, which it bought out in 1974 and renamed Jove Books, then later selling it to the Putnam Berkley Group in 1979. World Book Company opened its first office in Manila in 1905 and published English-language educational materials for schools in the Phil... | Harcourt also published mass-market paperback books with Pyramid Books, which it bought out in 1974 and renamed Jove Books, and eventually sold to the Putnam Berkley Group in 1979. In 1991, General Cinema Corporation, a diversified company (that operated not only a national chain of movie theaters, but also retailers s... | Edit for conciseness, comprehension, and organization. Grammatically correct where necessary. | wiki |
Racers paddle down the coarse using the fastest jets of water. They follow the edges of wave trains to go fast. Also racers paddle in as straight a line as possible going down the river. Usually racers will run the river 2 or 3 times a day, a day or two before a race. When they are not sure which way is fastest, they w... | Racers paddle down the course using the fastest jets of water. To go fast, they follow the edges of wave trains and hold as straight a line as possible down the river. Because of the high speeds, racers frequently run a river two or three times a day in training for a race. If it is unclear which line is fastest, two p... | Rewrite the text more clearly. | wiki |
Richards, was an influential English literary critic and rhetorician. He was educated at Clifton College and Magdalene College, Cambridge, where his love of English was nurtured by the scholar Charles Hickson 'Cabby' Spence. His books, especially The Meaning of Meaning, Principles of Literary Criticism, Practical Criti... | Richards (Ivor Armstrong Richards 26 February 1893 – 7 September 1979), was an English Educator, literary critic, and rhetorician whose work contributed to the foundations of the New Criticism. Ivor Armstrong Richards was educated at Clifton College and Magdalene College, Cambridge, where his intellectual talents were ... | Copyedit for English spelling, punctuation, syntax as well as phrasing | wiki |
Technology Roadmapping, a form of technology planning, can aid a company in a competitive environment. Technology planning is needed to identify and develop the technologies required in the company. Once these technology enhancements or new technologies are identified they can be developed internally or collaboratively... | Technology Roadmapping can help a company in different enviroments commercial enviroments. It is used to to find and develop the technologies needed in the company. When the enhancements are identified they can be developed internally or collaboratively with external partners. | Make the text more readable and comprehensive. Remove jargon. | wiki |
Sye is the only remaining language on Erromango. There have been the four languages Sye, Sorung, Ura and Utaha. The latter three can be regarded as extinct, however, until recently there was a very small number of speakers of Ura. Terry Crowley counted six speakers in the mid-1990s. The branch of South Vanuatu language... | Sye is close to being the only language on Erromango. There were once four—Sye, Sorung, Ura and Utaha—but the latter three are nearly extinct, apart from a handful of recently discovered Ura speakers. Terry Crowley counted six speakers of Ura in the mid-1990s. The South Vanuatu languages comprise these four languages. | Add "nearly" before "extinct." | wiki |
Secretary General of the Truth and Reconciliation Commission. Effectively started work in March 2016 after she appointed the advisory council. Aim is to investigate the Burundian genocides. As sec gen of truth & rec implemented a programme to idenify and exhume mass graves, identify victims and pereptrators where possi... | Niragira was later appointed Secretary-General of the Zambian Truth and Reconciliation Commission, whose aim is to investigate the Burundian genocides. She appointed an international advisory council in March 2016, which allowed the work of the commission to begin. The commission has implemented a program to identify a... | Clean up paragraph about Truth and Reconciliation Commission. | wiki |
In his attempt to give a financial independence to the monastery, Saint Timotheos bought pieces of the land around, displacing the sepherds away to a place called Labrika, near the modern Koropi. This fact caused Timotheos and other land owners to conflicts, such as Saint Philothei of Athens. Some Pieces of the land th... | In his attempt to give financial independence to the monastery, Saint Timotheos bought pieces of the land around, displacing the shepherds away to a place called Labrika, near modern Koropi. This fact led Timotheos and other landowners to conflicts, such as Saint Philothei from Athens. Some pieces of the land were clai... | Copyedit and expand the information. | wiki |
Some aspects that human tutors can do that intelligent tutoring systems are still limited by are in the areas of dialogue and feedback. One reason for these limitations are that human tutors are able to interpret the affective state of the student. Current research has been focusing on how to improve on these areas of ... | Intelligent tutoring systems are less capable than human tutors in the areas of dialogue and feedback. Human tutors are able to interpret the affective state of the student. Research is looking for how to improve these areas of ITS to make it more effective. | Copyedit for grammatical errors and to make the text more concise. | wiki |
The Id dominates, because neither the ego nor the super ego is yet fully developed, and, since the infant has no personality (identity), every action is based upon the pleasure principle; nonetheless, the ego is developing during the Oral stage. Therefore, the infant gradually understands that gratification sometimes i... | The Id dominates, because neither the ego nor the super ego is yet fully developed, and, since the infant has no personality (identity), every action is based upon the pleasure principle. Weaning is the key experience in the infant’s Oral stage of psychosexual development, his or her first feeling of loss consequent to... | Make the text more concise | wiki |
As a result of this the systems are themselves chiral and will often react differently to the different enantiomers of a given compound. However studies have shown that only the (S)-(+) enantiomer is responsible for this effect. As such enantioselctive synthesis is of great importance. However it can also be difficult ... | As a result of this living systems possess a high degree of chemical chirality and will often react differently to the various enantiomers of a given compound. However studies have shown that only the (S)-(+) enantiomer is responsible for the drugs benificial effects. However L-penicillamine is toxic as it inhibits the... | Rewrite this passage and include an example | wiki |
Agile marketing is an organizational effectiveness strategy that drives growth through focusing team efforts on those that deliver value to the end-customer. This emerging practice in marketing applies key principles of agile software development to increase speed, quality, flexibility, and effectiveness of a marketing... | Agile marketing is an organizational effectiveness strategy that uses self-organizing, cross-functional teams doing work in frequent iterations. It aims to drive growth by focusing team efforts on those that deliver value to the end-customer. This emerging practice in marketing applies selected principles of agile soft... | Rewrite this in a more nuetral tone. | wiki |
Through the city from east to west is a Trans-Caspian Railway Turkmenbashi-Balkanabat-Bereket-Ashgabat-Mary-Türkmenabat. Also from Ashgabat to the north-east departs new Trans Karakum railway (Ashgabat-Karakum-Dashoguz), on which the movement is open from February 2006. In May 2009, the city municipality has completed ... | The Trans-Caspian Railway (Turkmenbashi-Balkanabat-Bereket-Ashgabat-Mary-Türkmenabat) runs through Ashgabat from east to west. Since 2006 there has also been a train line towards the north, the Trans Karakum railway. In May 2009, the restoration of Ashgabat railway station was completed. | Rewrite the text for clarity. | wiki |
Envy-freeness (EF) is a criterion of fair division. In an envy-free division, every agent feels that their share is at least as good as the share of any other agent, and thus no agent feels envy. A resource is divided among several agents such that every agent i receives a share X_i. Every agent i has a subjective pref... | Envy-freeness, also known as no-envy, is a criterion for fair division. It says that when resources are allocated among people with equal rights, each person should receive a share that is, in his or her eyes, at least as good as the share received by any other agent. In other words, no person should feel envy. Suppose... | Modify the phrase "subjective preference" to "personal preference". | wiki |
According to Seligman, the more happy people are, the less they are focused on the negative. They also tend to like others more, which creates an overall happiness which then correlates to a higher level of satisfaction with their life. However, others have found that life satisfaction is compatible with profoundly neg... | According to Seligman, the happier people are, the less they are focused on the negative. Happier people also have a greater tendency to like other people, which promotes a happier environment, which then correlates to a higher level of the person's satisfaction with his or her life. However, others have found that lif... | Edit for punctuation, wordiness, syntax, as well as which/that confusion. | wiki |
He was made the club's captain after Richard Brittain's departure. Davies made his Ross County debut in the season's opening game, when he played 90 minutes in a 2–0 loss to Celtic. On 13 March 2016, Davies led Ross County to their first major trophy with a 2–1 victory over Hibernian in the Scottish League Cup. Althoug... | Upon joining the club, Davies was given the club's captaincy following Richard Brittain's departure. In his first game as captain, Davies made his Ross County debut, in the opening game of the season, where he played 90 minutes in a 2–0 loss against Celtic. On 13 March 2016, Davies captained Ross County to their first ... | Include more information. | wiki |
This dining centre has four different dining places which consist of a sushi place, a cafe, an Indian place, and a restaurant that has multiple different options. There are many different options when choosing a place to eat and the type of food you are looking for. These dining centres are all owned by individual owne... | This dining center has four different dining places which consist of a Sushi place, a cafe, an Indian place, and a restaurant that offers various options. These dining centrers are all owned by individual local owners. | Remove the second sentence. | wiki |
Aside from the western terminus of Missouri Route 98, the only other site is the Hail Ridge Golf Course, and a local street leading to Jesse Viertel Memorial Airport. Interstate 70 Business is a Business Loop of I-70 in Columbia, Missouri between Exits 125 and 128. Interstate 70 Business is a Business Loop of I-70 in S... | Aside from the western terminus of Route & nbsp; 98, the only other site is the Hail Ridge Golf Course and a local street leading to Jesse Viertel Memorial Airport. Interstate & nbsp; 70 Business (I-70 Bus.) is a business loop of I-70 in Columbia between exits & nbsp; 125 and 128. Interstate & nbsp; 70 Business (I-70 B... | Make more concise. | wiki |
Wierwille's older brother, Harry Wierwille, became The Way's Secretary-Treasurer in 1952, and in 1954, Wierwille asked his friend and supporter, Ermal Owens, to serve as Vice President of The Way. Together, Victor, Harry, and Ermal formed The Way's original Board of Trustees; however their Trustee positions were not of... | Wierwille's older brother, Harry Ernst Wierwille, became The Way's secretary-treasurer in 1952, and Wierwille's friend, Ermal Owens, joined as vice president in 1954. Together, the three formed the original Board of Trustees, however their positions were not officially recognized until the Board of Directors authorized... | Copyedit for clarity and conciseness. | wiki |
As of 2011, evidence suggests that Hatha Yoga may be at least as effective at improving health outcomes as other forms of mild physical exercise when added to standard care. What is found most concerning regarding the legitimacy of Hatha Yoga as a method of healing is the current lack of specificity and standardization... | As of 2011, evidence suggests that Hatha Yoga may be effective at improving health outcomes as a form of mild physical exercise when added to standard care. Hatha Yoga does not have specific and standardization regarding its practice. A study suggested for creation of supported practices that could be distributed and a... | Rewrite the text to be neutral. | wiki |
Before there can be scientific experimentation, organizations must be compliant with good governance. This means that testing must be moral and practical. Many organizations such as SPICE a geoengineering group that was formed in the U.K. were required to go through stages of evaluation before testing could be cleared ... | Before there can be scientific experimentation, organizations must be compliant with good governance, meaning that testing must be moral and practical. Many research organizations such as SPICE (Stratospheric Particle Injection for Climate Engineering) a geoengineering research project that was formed in the U.K. was r... | Add more information about SPICE | wiki |
Sandfly is a colloquial name for any species or genus of flying, biting, blood-sucking Dipteran encountered in sandy areas. In practice, nearly any fly found on a beach could be called a "sand fly". Some of these insects are a type of midge, which do not bite. Sand fleas or no-see-ums do bite and are a 1/4 of an inch i... | Sandfly (or sand fly) is a colloquial name for any species or genus of flying, biting, blood-sucking Dipteran encountered in sandy areas. Outside the United States, sandfly may refer to members of the subfamily Phlebotominae within the Psychodidae. While horse flies are large flies, noseeums (sandfleas) and Old-World s... | Provide more information regarding the genus of these incects. | wiki |
The service is currently contracted to Metroline. The 209 was introduced in 8 March 1997, as a renumbering of route 9A, running from London United's Shepherds Bush Garage. Route 9A began on 18 July 1992 to replace the withdrawn section of route 9 between Hammersmith and Mortlake due to a weight restriction restricting ... | Running between Hammersmith bus station and Mortlake, it is operated by Metroline. Route 209 commenced operating as route 9A on July 18, 1992, between Kensington and Mortlake to replace route 9 between Hammersmith and Mortlake due to a weight restriction restricting double deck buses over the weak Hammersmith Bridge. I... | Tidy up and additional information as regards the history of the route | wiki |
He did not received any academic education. Among his personal exhibitions we can mention Wall Series ". In 1983 he presented" Ramón Carulla ". In 1998 we can mention" Ramón Carulla. During his artistic life he tooked part in many collectives exhibitions like "I Bienal de Artistas Noveles de Cuba". | He did not receive any academic education. Cuban Collection Fine Art, Coral Gables, Florida, U.S.A., 1988. During his artistic life, he took part in many collective exhibitions like "I Bienal de Artistas Noveles de Cuba." | Correct spelling and verb tenses. | wiki |
Ndadaye put forward a platform titled, "Our proposals to build a new Burundi", comprising 46 specific measures involving political, economic, and socio-cultural issues. Advocating change, he and his allies made frequent use of the phrase "new Burundi" (Kirundi: uburundi bushasha). He advocated disbanding the Tutsi-domi... | Advocating change, Ndadaye and his allies made frequent use of the phrase "new Burundi" (Kirundi: uburundi bushasha). He put forward a platform titled, "Our proposals to build a new Burundi", comprising 46 specific measures involving political, economic, and socio-cultural issues. He advocated disbanding the Tutsi-domi... | Re-arrange the order of information | wiki |
Hemalurgic spikes can be reused. If a spike is removed from one person it keeps its Hemalurgic charge for sometime after and it can then be used by someone else to gain the ability or power that spike has. The power granted can be a different one from what the original user had (if the spike was used to steal a group o... | Per the law of Hemalurgic decay, the longer the spike is outside a living body, the more the Hemalurgic charge diminishes, but Hemalurgic spikes can be reused. If a spike is removed from one person it keeps its Hemalurgic charge for a time, able to be used by someone else to gain the ability or power within that spike.... | Put the last sentence in the beginning. Copyedit. | wiki |
Chaturmas means the four months of the monsoon, during which ascetics stay in one place. Staying in one place during the monsoon reduces the risk of causing accidental death to numerous insects and smaller forms of life that thrive during the rains. During this period, it is a suitable time for lay Jains to have an ann... | Chaturmas is the four-month monsoon period during which ascetics stay in one place to reduce the risk of accidentally killing insects and other small forms of life which thrive during the rains. This period is suitable for lay Jains to renew their faith by listening to teachings of the dharma, meditation and vartas (ac... | Expand and add more specific information. | wiki |
Even if the transfer case can provide 2wd by disconnecting the front driveshaft, there is still some friction being applied to the front wheels. The friction is provided by the remaining connected drivetrain, The front axle shafts and front differential are still connected even if the front driveshaft has been disconne... | Even if the transfer case can provide 2wd by disconnecting the front driveshaft, the front wheels are still connected to the remaining drivetrain components (mainly the front differential and front axle shafts). Unlocking the front hubs disconnects from everything, and is not dependent on the front driveshaft being dis... | Remove the phrase, "There is still some friction being applied to the front wheels." | wiki |
Upon Lilulu discovering that she was being listened in on, she chases after Nobita and Doraemon. After returning to their own world, Zanda Claus tries to get through the portal as well, resulting in its destruction; seemingly separating the two worlds forever. The two have completely forgotten about the bowling ball or... | Lilulu discovers that Nobita and Doraemon eavesdropped on her and chases them. After Nobita and Doraemon return to their own world, Zanda Claus tries to get through the portal as well, which results in its destruction, seemingly separating the two worlds forever. Nobita and Doraemon have forgotten about the bowling bal... | Copyedit and resume at episode 9. | wiki |
Ali Baba and the Forty Thieves is a 1944 adventure film directed by Arthur Lubin and starring Maria Montez and Jon Hall. The film is derived from The Book of One Thousand and One Nights but its story departs greatly from the tale of the same name and includes an actual historic event. The film is one of series of "exot... | Ali Baba and the Forty Thieves is a 1944 adventure film from Universal Pictures, directed by Arthur Lubin, and starring Maria Montez and Jon Hall. The film is derived from The Book of One Thousand and One Nights, but its storyline departs greatly from the tale of the same name and includes an actual historic event. Whi... | Edit the section that includes the plot, correct grammar, and condense for conciseness. | wiki |
A Slalom racer's method of diverting gates with his outer hand or arm (normally protected from the impact by a pole guard) in order to draw his body's center of gravity closer to the fall line and increase his speed. In cross-blocking, the racer's feet get sufficiently close to the pole that, due to inward lean, the ra... | Cross-blocking is the method that a slalom racer uses to draw his body's center of gravity closer to the fall line and increase his speed. This is done by diverting gates with his outer hand or arm (normally protected from the impact by a pole guard). The racer's feet get sufficiently close to the pole that, due to inw... | Make the text easier to understand. | wiki |
East of the Thar Desert, the region running from Punjab and Haryana to Kathiawar experiences a tropical and sub-tropical steppe climate. The climate of Haryana is similar to other states of India lying in the northern plains. It is very hot in summer (up to a high of 50 deg Celsius) and cold in winters (down to a low o... | East of the Thar Desert, the Punjab-Haryana-Kathiawar region experiences a tropical and sub-tropical steppe climate. Haryana's climate resembles other states of the northern plains: extreme summer heat of up to 50 ° C and winter cold as low as 1 ° C. May and June are hottest; December and January are coldest. | Copyedit for conciseness. | wiki |
Later during the season, Tommy Oliver (Jason David Frank) is introduced as a villain, but later becomes the sixth member of the team. Together they continue to foil Rita's plans along with her henchmen Goldar (Sakamoto), her second in command, Squatt and Baboo (Watanabe, Kusaka) the bumbling duo, and Finster (Iiboshi),... | Tommy Oliver (Jason David Frank) is introduced as a villain, but later becomes the sixth team member. Together they continue to foil Rita's plans along with her second-in-command Goldar (Sakamoto), the bumbling duo, Squatt, and Baboo (Watanabe, Kusaka) and the monster maker Finster (Iiboshi). Meanwhile, Bulk and Skull ... | Copyedit and add more information. | wiki |
The Complete Idiot's Guides is a product line of how-to and other reference books published by Dorling Kindersley (DK) that each seek to provide a basic understanding of a complex and popular topic. The term "idiot" is used as hyperbole in claiming ensured comprehension. The approach relies on explaining a topic via ve... | The "Complete Idiot's Guides" is a product line of how-to and other reference books published by Dorling Kindersley (DK). The books in this series provide a basic understanding of complex and popular topics. The term "idiot" is used as hyperbole to reassure readers that the guides will be basic and comprehensible, even... | Copyedit the first paragraph's series description for clarity. | wiki |
Hurricane Shary was a short-lived Atlantic tropical cyclone that stayed over open waters in late October & nbsp; 2010. The eighteenth named storm and eleventh hurricane of the unusually active 2010 & nbsp; Atlantic hurricane season, Shary originated from a weak area of convection associated with an upper-level and surf... | Hurricane Shary was a short-lived tropical cyclone that stayed over the open waters of the North Atlantic in late October & nbsp; 2010. Initially not expected to exceed wind speeds of 50 & nbsp; mph (85 & nbsp; km / h), Shary defied predictions and became a minimal hurricane on October & nbsp; 30, passing well east of ... | Go into detail regarding the storm. | wiki |
The team moved to Fox Cities Stadium and renamed themselves the Wisconsin Timber Rattlers at the start of the 1995 season. The season attendance at the last seven seasons at Goodland Field (1988-94) ranged from 46,576 to 85,310, while the season attendance of the first at Fox Cities Stadium ranged from 207,823 to 233,7... | The team moved to Fox Cities Stadium and renamed itself the Wisconsin Timber Rattlers beginning with the 1995 season. The season attendance for the last seven years at Goodland Field (1988-94) ranged from 46,576 to 85,310, while the season attendance for the first year at Fox Cities Stadium ranged from 207,823 to 233,7... | Add Alex Rodriguez as notable resident and correct grammatical mistakes. | wiki |
Name letters may be noticed more and, consequently, perceived to be more frequent or familiar than other letters, causing a subjective familiarity mechanism to enhance their attractiveness. Earlier research into the impact of exposure has shown that even when the objective frequency is identical, differences in subject... | Early research into the impact of exposure showed that differences in subjective frequency, that is, how frequently subjects thought a stimulus appeared compared to others, yielded different results even when the actual frequency was identical. Name letters may be noticed more and, consequently, perceived to occur more... | Rewrite for clarity with more accuracy. | wiki |
Goode is known for co-starring opposite Mandy Moore in the 2004 film Chasing Liberty, playing the romantic interest of Moore's character. Beforehand, Goode had played the brother of Inspector Lynley in the BBC production Inspector Lynley Mysteries: A Suitable Vengeance and had parts in the TV-film Confessions of an Ugl... | Goode played the brother of Inspector Lynley in the BBC production Inspector Lynley Mysteries: A Suitable Vengeance and had parts in the TV-film Confessions of an Ugly Stepsister and the Shakespeare play The Tempest. In 2004, Goode co-starred opposite Mandy Moore in the romantic comedy Chasing Liberty, playing the love... | Give an overview of Goode's acting career. | wiki |
According to FiveThirtyEight, an opinion poll analysis website, Johnson voted in line with President Trump on average 97.7% of the time during his tenure. So I want to use my time to call on this chamber, for members to rise and observe a moment of silent reflection. In April 2018, Johnson defended EPA head Scott Pruit... | According to FiveThirtyEight, Johnson voted in line with Trump on average 97.7% of the time during Trump's tenure. On December 18, 2019, Johnson held a moment of silence for Trump voters during House debates on articles of impeachment, saying, "This is a sad day for America." In April 2018, Johnson defended EPA head Sc... | Expand and provide more information. | wiki |
Many species found within Echinaster are red, orange, or pink in nature. Life history and lifespan are attributed to many different factors. Some of these factors include variation in reproduction such as: egg size, embryonic development, parental investment, larval type, etc. Echinaster are able to start reproduction ... | Many species found within Echinaster are red, orange, or pink in coloration. Sea stars can live up to 35 years in the wild under the proper conditions, but the lifespans of Echinaster can be variable and affected by environmental factors such as salinity, temperature of water, light availability, and pollution. Further... | Expand upon the Life History and Reproduction sections | wiki |
In the early 1980s animator and director Hayao Miyazaki asked permission to create an animated adaptation of Earthsea. However, Le Guin, who was unfamiliar with his work and anime in general, turned down the offer. Years later, after seeing My Neighbor Totoro, she reconsidered her refusal, believing that if anyone shou... | In the early 1980s Hayao Miyazaki asked to create an animated adaptation of Earthsea. Le Guin, who was unfamiliar with his work and anime in general, initially turned down the offer, but later accepted after seeing My Neighbor Totoro. The third and fourth Earthsea books were used as the basis of the film released in 20... | Edit for brevity, punctuation, and typos. | wiki |
Watson was runner-up to Martin Kaymer at the PGA Championship at Whistling Straits, after losing a playoff that was initially also going to include Dustin Johnson before he was given a two stroke penalty. Watson led the playoff after the first hole, but hit his 2nd shot in the water hazard at the last hole. Kaymer even... | Watson was runner-up to Martin Kaymer at the PGA Championship at Whistling Straits, falling in the three-hole aggregate playoff that initially included Dustin Johnson before he incurred a two-stroke penalty on the 72nd hole. Watson led the playoff after a birdie on the first hole, but Kaymer birdied the par-3 second ho... | Expand the text and add more specific information. | wiki |
Daria fandom was marked through its entire run by shipper debate. From the series' first season, the main conflict was over whether the title character, Daria Morgendorffer, should have a relationship with Trent Lane, a slacker rock-band frontman, whom Daria met through his sister, Jane. A common argument against this ... | Daria was marked throughout its run by shipper debate, primarily over whether the title character should have a relationship with Trent Lane. A common argument was that it would signal a turning away from the more subversive aspects of Daria's character, such as bitter criticism of romantic relationships. The show's wr... | Go less into who the characters are, and what happened regarding Trent in the third season finale. | wiki |
Typhoon Thad was the worst storm to affect Japan in two years. Thad developed into a tropical storm on August 16. Thad moved north and northeast, maturing into a typhoon by midday on August 18. The next day, the storm attained its peak intensity of. | Typhoon Thad was considered the worst storm to affect Japan in two years. Originating from a monsoon trough, Typhoon Thad was first classified on August & nbsp; 15 and was upgraded into a tropical storm the next day. Meanwhile, Thad moved north and northeast and attained typhoon intensity midday on August & nbsp; 18. T... | re-write MH based on TCR | wiki |
In 2005, Sixteenth Air Force moved to Ramstein AB, Germany where it became the first of the United States Air Force's newly conceptualized Warfighting Headquarters in support of Headquarters United States Air Forces in Europe. Currently 401 AEW is the only wing assigned to Sixteenth Air Force in its new role. All wings... | In 2005, Sixteenth Air Force moved to Ramstein AB, Germany, to become USAFE's new Warfighting Headquarters. Currently, the 401st Air Expeditionary Wing, responsible for ongoing U.S. Air Force contingency support in the Balkans, is the only wing assigned to Sixteenth Air Force in its new role. All other wings that were ... | Copyedit, re-arrange some sentences. | wiki |
Logical consequence (also entailment) is one of the most fundamental concepts in logic. It is the relationship between statements that holds true when one logically "follows from" one or more others. A valid logical argument is one in which the conclusions follow from its premises, and its conclusions are consequences ... | Logical consequence (also Entailment) is a fundamental concept in logic which describes the relationship between statements that holds true when one statement logically follows from one or more statements. A valid logical argument is one in which the conclusions follow from the premises, because the conclusions are con... | First paragraph rewritten for clarity. | wiki |
Water Management Hierarchy (WMH), is a hierarchy of priority for water conservation that consist of elimination, reduction, outsourcing / reuse and regeneration. The highest priority for water conservation is to eliminate followed by reduced the water demand. After that, reuse directly or outsourcing such as rainwater ... | Water Management Hierarchy (WMH), is a hierarchy of priority for water conservation. Levels of the hierarchy, from the highest to the lowest in terms of priority for water conservation include elimination, reduction, outsourcing / reuse and regeneration. The most preferred option is elimination followed by reduction of... | Reduce jargon and bring clarity to some points | wiki |
London Victoria station, also known simply as Victoria, is a central London railway terminus and London Underground complex. It is named after nearby Victoria Street. The area around the station has also become an important interchange for other forms of transport: a local bus station is in the forecourt, and a termina... | London Victoria station, generally known as Victoria, is a central London railway terminus and London Underground complex named after nearby Victoria Street. With over 73 million passenger entries and exits between April 2010 and March 2011, Victoria is the second-busiest terminus in London (and the UK) after Waterloo,... | Provide more information on the size of the terminus. | wiki |
This is usually done between teenagers. A street race is when any one person meets up with another person on a backroad or highway with their supped up cars and then they race. There are things called “pink slips” which are usually what people bet with on very serious street races. These pink slips basically sign your ... | The participants are often teenagers. A street race involves two or more people informally meeting on a road, which can vary in size and quality, then racing together. There are “pink slips” which are found in formal, better organised street races that contain prizes for winning. These result in a potential loss of own... | Rewrite and copyedit for clarity | wiki |
However, single nucleotide polymorphism (SNP) is one of many mechanism that leads to increased risk for type 2 diabetes. To locate genes and loci that are responsible for the risk of type 2 diabetes, genome wide association studies (GWAS) was utilized to compare the diabetic patient group and the non-diabetic control g... | However, single nucleotide polymorphism (SNP) is one of many mechanisms that lead to an increased risk for type 2 diabetes. To locate genes and loci that are responsible for the risk of type 2 diabetes, genome-wide association studies (GWAS) were utilized to compare the genomesdofiabetic patient group and the non-diabe... | Copyedit for grammatical accuracy and clarification. | wiki |
A Trojan horse, or Trojan, is a destructive program that masquerades as an application. The software initially appears to perform a desirable function for the user prior to installation and / or execution, but (perhaps in addition to the expected function) steals information or harms the system. Unlike viruses or worms... | A Trojan horse, or Trojan, is software that appears to perform a desirable function for the user prior to run or install, but (perhaps in addition to the expected function) steals information or harms the system. The term is derived from the "Trojan Horse" story in Greek mythology since it is a destructive program that... | Revert to last version by ClueBot. | wiki |
Vapor gases evaporate into the cavity from the surrounding medium; thus, the cavity is not a perfect vacuum, but has a relatively low gas pressure. Such a low-pressure bubble in a liquid begins to collapse due to the higher pressure of the surrounding medium. As the bubble collapses, the pressure and temperature of the... | Vapor gases evaporate into the cavity from the surrounding medium; thus, the cavity is not a vacuum at all, but rather a low-pressure vapor (gas) bubble. Once the conditions which caused the bubble to form are no longer present, such as when the bubble moves downstream, the surrounding liquid begins to implode due its ... | Elaborate on the process of vapor embolism | wiki |
There are many pyramids throughout the site, with the tallest one reaching a height of 23 meters, as well as a number of large palace-like buildings surrounding several plazas. There are also two ball courts and various residential areas. There are many altars as well as sculptures with inscriptions. There are also man... | There are many pyramids throughout the site, with the tallest one reaching a height of 23 meters, as well as two ball courts, a number of large palace-like buildings surrounding several plazas, and various residential areas. There are also many sculpted stone stelae and altars. While some of them are plain and others e... | Make sentences flow into each other. | wiki |
Filming began on February 25, 2019 in New Orleans, exactly one year after Smith suffered a massive heart attack. Filming was initially set to begin Summer 2017, then moved to August 2018, then to November of that same year, and then moved again to February 25, 2019. Kevin Smith releases a weekly documentary called Road... | Filming was initially set to begin Summer 2017, then moved to August 2018, then to November of that same year. After the various delays, filming finally began on February 25, 2019, in New Orleans exactly one year after Smith suffered a massive and near fatal heart attack. During the filming of the movie, Smith released... | Change the order of information presentation | wiki |
After retiring, Detective Dooley and jerry lee have there retirement party with all of there friends. After there party Dooley is drunk and so Was Jerry Lee. They step foot into LA Micro Labs and find a dead security guard apparently shot by the criminals. So then jerry lee track down the criminals and that's how every... | After retiring, Detective Dooley and Jerry Lee have a retirement party with all of their friends. After the party, Dooley and Jerry Lee are both drunk. They step foot into LA Micro Labs and find a dead security guard, apparently shot by criminals who have stolen a chip. Jerry Lee and Dooley must now track down the crim... | Correct spelling and grammar. Remove the advertisement. | wiki |
The Pokémon series has quite a few species of turtles, including Squirtle, Wartortle, Blastoise, and Torkoal, are all in the Kanto Region. Shuckle, in the Johto Region. Turtwig, Grotle, and Torterra are all in the Sinnoh Region. Last but not least, Tirtouga and Carracosta are in the Unova Region. Blastoise, the most ev... | The Pokémon series has a few specie resembling turtles or tortoises. Squirtle, Wartortle, and Blastoise are the water-type 'starter' Pokémon in the Kanto Region. Turtwig, Grotle, and Torterra are likewise the grass-type starter Pokémon of the Sinnoh Region. Shuckle, in the Johto Region, can often be mistaken for a styl... | Expand the text and remove Torkoal. | wiki |
The LD20b was completed in 1971.First flights have been out from EDSZ Rottweil-Zepfenhahn (Germany), piloted by a Me 109 pilot.Next flight has been from Friedrichshafen, Germany, piloted by Arnold Wagner, airline pilot, Swiss aerobatic champion and designer of the Hirth Acrostar. Maintanance was done by L.K.Kienlein.Th... | The LD20b was completed in 1971. Its flights were made from EDSZ Rottweil-Zepfenhahn (Germany), piloted by a Me 109 pilot. The next flight from Friedrichshafen, Germany, piloted by Arnold Wagner, an airline pilot, the Swiss aerobatic champion and designer of the Hirth Acrostar. After its presentation at Friedrichshafen... | Rewrite in a more natural tone and correct punctuation/grammatical errors. Expand upon abbreviations. Remove contact information. Include more information about the maintainance of the aircraft and ownership. | wiki |
However, in practice, quantum mechanics began by being applied to the micro regime, while treating the macroscopic regime as classical. Since all our laboratory observations are in the macroscopic regime, logically speaking, we should apply QM first to the macro regime before applying it to the micro regime. This has r... | This equation applies, in principle, to both microscopic regimes (atoms, sub-atomic particles) and to other larger regimes (mesoscopic, macroscopic and cosmological scales). However, in practice, quantum mechanics began by applying the wave equation to the micro regime, while treating the macroscopic regime as classica... | Clarify that the wave equation applies to both microscopic and macro regimes. | wiki |
The Flora of India is one of the richest of the world due to a wide range of climate and topography. It is thought there are over 15000 species of plants in India. Plant divisions are shown below and some examples of genus and species are also shown. This is not a comprehensive list and if you can add to it then please... | The Flora of India is one of the richest of the world due to a wide range of climate, topography and environments in the country. It is thought there are over 15000 species of flowers in India and probably many more plants. Major plant divisions (sub divisions) are shown below with examples of genus and species. Whilst... | Provide more information on the list, and copyedit. | wiki |
Hinduism in Latvia is a minor religion. Hinduism spread to Latvia mainly by ISKCON and Brahma Kumaris. Many Latvian people showed interest in Hinduism and visited the Riga temple. They also attended festivals such as the annual Ratha Yatra. Hare Krishna Food for Life in Riga is famous. Yoga is gaining popularity in Lat... | Hinduism in Latvia is a minor religion, spread mainly by ISKCON and Brahma Kumaris. As of April 2006, 11 congregations of Hare Krishna ISKCON are registered in Latvia. In 2005, Hare Krishna gave its membership figures as 127 to the Justice Ministry. Brahma Kumaris have three centres in Latvia: in Riga, Daugavpils, and ... | Come from a more statistical perspective. | wiki |
Some planes got lost and arrived over the DZ late if at all. Others only dropped part of their load before turning back damaged and one could not find the DZ so returned to base. From around 00:50 the rest of the brigade, transported in 108 C-47 Dakotas, and 17 Horsa gliders carrying their heavy equipment had crossed t... | Some planes got lost and failed to reach the DZ or arrived late. Others were damaged before dropping all their paratroops and turned back, and one returned to base after failing to find the drop zone at all. From around 00:50 the rest of the brigade, transported in 108 C-47 Dakotas, along with 17 Horsa gliders carrying... | Copyedit for clarity. | wiki |
Asynchronous communication is a mediated form of communication in which the sender and receiver are not concurrently engaged in communication. Asynchronous communication is communication taking place at different times or over a certain period of time. The term has acquired wide currency in online learning, where excha... | Electronically mediated communication is often asynchronous in that the participants do not communicate concurrently. Examples include email and bulletin board systems, where participants send or post messages at different times. The term acquired currency in online learning, where exchanges between teachers and studen... | Give examples of asynchronous communication, and provide a more brief definition. | wiki |
Though he was no more than a penniless gambling addict, when he was greeted by Ginji at the race track, he used that opportunity to live in the underworld where the wicked hold on to the money.: An alumnus of the Tokyo Metropolitan Police Department. Of all the members, he tends to have a particular faith in Morita. He... | Though he was no more than a penniless gambling addict, after being approached by Ginji Hirai at the racetrack, he decides to live in the underworld where the wicked hold on to the money. On one hand, he has the sharpness and genius to see through his opponents' lies and win, but he also possesses monstrous luck, somet... | Provide more information. | wiki |
Svante Thuresson, born on February 7 1937 in Stockholm, Sweden is a Swedish jazz musician and singer. He started as a drummer and his carrier realy took of in 1963 when he joined the band Gals and pals. Svante has continued doing music and has been a famous face in the swedish jazz music scene for over four decades. In... | Svante Thuresson (born February 7, 1937, in Stockholm, Sweden) is a Swedish jazz musician and singer. He started his career as a drummer before joining the band Gals and Pals in 1963. Svante represented Sweden in the Eurovision song contest in 1966 with "Nygammal vals" and came in second place; he performed with Lill L... | Correct punctuation errors. | wiki |
Lerman founded the Liz Lerman Dance Exchange in 1976. She cultivated the company's unique multi-generational ensemble into a leading force in contemporary dance until July 2011, when Lerman passed the leadership of her company to Cassie Meador, and the company is now called simply Dance Exchange. In addition to her wor... | Lerman founded the Liz Lerman Dance Exchange in 1976 and led the company's multi-generational ensemble until July 2011, when Lerman passed the leadership of her company to Cassie Meador ,; the company is now called simply Dance Exchange. Lerman's early work was strongly associated with the inclusion of older people alo... | Provide additional informaiton. | wiki |
Mobil is ExxonMobil's primary retail gasoline brand in Florida, New England, New York, Southern California, the Great Lakes and the Midwest. Exxon is the company's primary gasoline brand in all other regions of the United States, especially the southeastern United States. The Exxon brand has a significant market presen... | Mobil is ExxonMobil's primary retail gasoline brand in California, Florida, New York, New England, the Great Lakes and the Midwest. Exxon is the primary brand in the rest of the United States, with a significant presence in New Jersey, Pennsylvania, Texas and in the Mid-Atlantic and Southeastern states. | Reduce the list of states with a significant Exxon presence. | wiki |
Electronically Controlled Pneumatic brakes are a type of modern railway brakes. Traditional pneumatic (compressed air) brakes are applied sequentially from car to car along the train, but ECP braking uses electronic controls to activate air-powered brakes on all the wagons at the same time. Applying the brakes uniforml... | Electronically Controlled Pneumatic brakes are a type of modern railway brakes which offer improved performance compared to traditional pneumatic (compressed air) brakes. Traditional systems apply the brakes sequentially from car to car along the train, meaning that up to 2 minutes can elapse between operation of the c... | Include more information comparing the brake system. | wiki |
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