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On 9 February 2009 the band released their debut single, "One Night in October" as both a digital download and a vinyl. The single received praise from BBC Radio 1 DJs Huw Stephens, Zane Lowe and Sara Cox, all of whom played the song on their respective shows. The single debuted at number 3 on the independent chart, ha... | On February 9, 2009, the band released their debut single "One Night in October" through Lucky Number Records on vinyl and via digital download. The single debuted at number 3 on the independent chart and received praise from BBC Radio 1 DJs Huw Stephens, Zane Lowe, and Sara Cox, all of whom played the song on their re... | Copyedit for clarity and conciseness. | wiki |
He has been close friends with 8th division captain Shunsui Kyōraku since his youth. The two frequently work together. In various Bleach omake chapters, Jūshirō is fond of giving people, especially Tōshirō Hitsugaya, strange or unwanted gifts for no apparent reason. | He has been close friends with 8th division captain Shunsui Kyōraku since his youth, and the two frequently work together. In one sketch, Jūshirō gives Hitsugaya a comically oversized stocking full of candy and other treats. | Rephrase most of this. | wiki |
An example is a market for nails where the cost of each nail is $ 0.10 and the demand decreases linearly, from a high demand for free nails to zero demand for nails at $ 1.10. If the market has perfect competition, producers would have to charge a price of $ 0.10, and every customer whose marginal benefit exceeds $ 0.1... | Assume a market for nails where the cost of each nail is $ 0.10. Demand decreases linearly; there is a high demand for free nails and zero demand for nails at a price per nail of $ 1.10. If market conditions are perfect competition, producers would charge a price of $ 0.10, and every customer whose marginal benefit exc... | Rewrite the text to be more clear and have an encyclopedic tone. | wiki |
On February 28, 2009 Ernman competed in the 4th semi-final of Melodifestivalen in Malmö and was announced as a finalist. She then went on to win the final on March 14 at the Globe Arena in Stockholm and to represent Sweden in the final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2009 in Moscow. Sweden was put into the first of two ... | On February 28, 2009, Ernman competed in the 4th semi-final of Melodifestivalen in Malmö and became a finalist. She went on to win the final on March 14 at the Globe Arena in Stockholm, and to represent Sweden in the Eurovision Song Contest in Moscow. She qualified as a finalist on May 12 and performed in the finals on... | Copyedit and provide additional information. | wiki |
At the end of 8 weeks of marching Essex could barely muster 300 horsemen. Not a single rebel commander had submitted to the crown, and no district was left subdued. A significant number of troops had been left in garrisons throughout Leinster and Munster, and the fighting capability of the army was much reduced by dise... | The campaign had lasted eight weeks, and at the end, Essex could barely muster 300 horsemen. Not a single rebel commander had submitted, and no district was left subdued. Many troops had been left in garrisons throughout Leinster and Munster, and the strength of the army was much reduced by disease and desertion. Harri... | Reword and reorganize sentences for clarity and flow of ideas. | wiki |
Jefferson appeared in the pilot episode of the 1982 TV series Knight Rider as Muntzy, an undercover police officer and partner of Michael Long (who becomes Michael Knight). In 1975/1976 he was in the tv show McCloud twice, 1 episode was "Sharks!". Also, in 1971 he was in 1 episode of the Partridge Family. | Jefferson also appeared in the pilot episode of the 1982 TV series Knight Rider as Muntzy, an undercover police officer and partner of Michael Long (who becomes Michael Knight). | Remove the last two sentences. | wiki |
He established the Mandir at the birth site of Shri Nimbarkacharya in Mungi Village, Paithan, Maharashtra in 2005. Svāmī Svabhūrāma Devācārya was born in Budhiya Village, outside Jagadhri and Yamunanagar near Kurukshetra in modern Haryana, India. He established over 52 temples in Punjab, Haryana and Vraja during his li... | He established the Mandir at the birth site of Śrī Nimbārkācārya in Mungi Village, Paithan, Maharashtra in 2005. Svāmī Svabhūrāma Devācārya (fl.16th century CE) was born in Budhiya Village, outside Jagadhri and Yamunanagar near Kurukshetra in modern Haryana, India. In his sub-lineage, there are many branches. Notable s... | Correct spellings to IAST and edit for brevity. | wiki |
During the 1950s and 1960s, several different priorities from different agencies around the cities of Paterson and Passaic were beginning to form. The Delaware, Lackawanna and Western, a competing railroad with the Erie, wanted to condense (along with the Erie) services and share trackage because of financial troubles.... | During the 1950s and 1960s, several different entities (with interests in the cities of Paterson and Passaic) had desires / needs that interacted in a way that would change the future of railroads in the area. The Delaware, Lackawanna and Western railroad, which had long competed with the Erie both in northern New Jers... | Rewrite to expand the first paragraph. | wiki |
Three years later, it was found in nature; however, with an estimated amount of less than at any given time, astatine is the least abundant element in Earth's crust among non-transuranic elements. Among astatine isotopes, six (with mass numbers 214 to 219) are present in nature as the product of heavier elements' decay... | Three years later, it was found in nature. Astatine is the least abundant element in the Earth's crust among the non-transuranic elements, with an estimated total amount of less than at any given time. Astatine is a highly radioactive element. All its isotopes have half-lives of less than 12 hours, decaying into bismut... | Remove information regarding what isotopes are found in nature. | wiki |
In the spring of 1978, CBS News reported on the surprising developments in Laredo in a half-hour prime time "CBS Reports" narrated by Texan native Billy Don "Bill" Moyers. The CBS documentary detailed many of the scandals in the Martin administration, including the looting of taxpayers through fradulent purchase orders... | In the spring of 1978, CBS News reported on the surprising developments in Laredo in a half-hour prime time CBS Reports narrated by Texan native William Daniel "Bill" Moyers. The documentary detailed many of the scandals in the Martin administration, including the looting of taxpayers through fraudulent purchase orders... | Rewrite and expand the text to add more detail. | wiki |
It results due to an abnormality in the neck. The bones associated with abnormalities that cause the symptoms are of the cervical vertebrae (C1-C7) in the neck. Cervicocranial syndrome is either congenital and could be caused by (ex: Chiari disease, Klippel-Feil malformation) or acquired (ex: arthritis, trauma). | It is a combination of symptoms that are caused by an abnormality in the neck. The bones of the neck that are affected are cervical vertebrae (C1-C7). Cervicocranial syndrome is either congenital or acquired as a result of injury or disease. Some examples of diseases that could result in cervicocranial syndrome are Chi... | Reword some of the first paragraph | wiki |
Space Jam: A New Legacy premiered in Los Angeles on July 12, 2021, and was released in the United States by Warner Bros. Pictures on July 16 simultaneously in theaters and through HBO Max for one month. The film has grossed $ 162 million worldwide and received generally negative reviews from critics, who criticized its... | Originally premiering in Los Angeles on July 12, 2021, Space Jam: A New Legacy was released nationwide across US theaters by Warner Bros. Pictures on July 16 and through HBO Max for one month, eventually grossing $ 162 million worldwide. Critically, the film was a failure, with reviewers targeting its amount of product... | Return the text to standard formate. | wiki |
The keyboard has been improved, allowing users to change the display into a trackpad with the use of a two-finger drag. This moves the cursor freely like a traditional trackpad making positioning the cursor and selecting text easier. On the iPad, a shortcut bar has been added including cut, copy, and paste buttons. New... | On iPad, a two-finger drag on the keyboard moves the cursor freely like a traditional trackpad making positioning the cursor and selecting text easier. A shortcut bar has been added including cut, copy, paste, undo and redo. When shift is inactive, lowercase letters are displayed, instead of the all-caps representation... | Make it easy to understand how the iPad keyboard works. | wiki |
The expressed proteins can then be screened for variants which exhibit favourable properties. Typically the properties that are to be improved by screening a randomized mutant library are the binding affinity of antibodies or other protein-protein interactions, the activity of enzymes, or the stability of a protein. Mu... | The expressed proteins from these libraries can then be screened for variants which exhibit favourable properties (e.g. stability, binding affinity or enzyme activity). This can be repeated in cycles of creating gene variants and screening the expression products in a directed evolution process. | Remove jargon to make the text more readable. | wiki |
Take the medication prescribed by the physician regularly alone cannot prevent the epilepsy. Following Life style changes along with medications such as exercise, reduce stress, good sleep hygiene and healthy diet will prevent absence seizure. Research shows that patient with ketogenic diet have fifty percent reduction... | Medication alone cannot prevent absence seizure. It need to be supplemented by life-style changes such as exercise, stress reduction, good sleep hygiene, and healthy diet. Research shows that patient with ketogenic diet have 50% reduction in seizure episodes and 34% of patients become seizure free. | Improve syntax and remove errors in grammar. | wiki |
These have included Tasmanian Digital Television, launched in late 2003 in partnership with Southern Cross Broadcasting, and Mildura Digital Television in January 2006, with Prime Television Limited. On 30 May 2007, Southern Cross Broadcasting announced its sale of NWS to the WIN Corporation for A $ 105 & nbsp; million... | These included TDT, launched in late 2003 in partnership with Southern Cross Broadcasting, and MDT in January 2006, with Prime Television Limited. On 30 May 2007, WIN purchased NWS from Southern Cross Broadcasting for A $ 105 & nbsp; million. Despite the station's ownership of Nine Perth, the regional WIN WA service co... | Go into more detail about the conflict between Nine Network and WIN. | wiki |
John Larroquette submitted the episode "Son of Coma Guy" for consideration in the category of "Outstanding Guest Actor in a Drama Series". He did not receive the nomination. Lisa Edelstein and David Morse each submitted this episode for consideration in the categories of "Outstanding Supporting Actress in a Drama Serie... | John Larroquette and David Morse submitted the episode "Son of Coma Guy" for consideration in the category of Outstanding Guest Actor in a Drama Series. Lisa Edelstein also submitted this episode for consideration – in the category of Outstanding Supporting Actress in a Drama Series. She did not receive a nomination. | Combine the information from the two paragrpahs | wiki |
Chapman also wanted a less expensive engine to replace the costly all-alloy Coventry-Climax FWE used in the Elite. Chapman wanted an engine based on a model built in large volumes to keep costs down. Lotus required a low cost, compact, yet powerful engine for the Elan, as the custom-built all-aluminium Coventry Climax ... | Chapman also wanted a less expensive engine to replace the costly all-alloy Coventry-Climax FWE used in the Elite; one instead based on a model built in large volumes to keep costs down. | Take all information beyond the first two sentences out. | wiki |
Winteregg is a station on the Bergbahn Lauterbrunnen–Mürren mountain railway. It is a passing place for trains running in opposite directions. There is also a restaurant there and during the winter months a four man chairlift with a bubble (constructed in 2009 and first used in the 2009-2010 season) takes skiers up the... | Winteregg is a railway station on the Bergbahn Lauterbrunnen-Mürren, a hybrid cable car and rail link that connects the villages of Lauterbrunnen and Mürren in the Bernese Oberland region of Switzerland. Winteregg is the point at which trains on the rail link between Lauterbrunnen and Mürren pass. There is also a resta... | Clarify that Winteregg is a railway station | wiki |
Addition is a mathematical operation that represents the total amount of objects together in a collection. It is signified by the plus sign (+). For example, in the picture on the right, there are 3 + 2 apples—meaning three apples and two apples together, which is a total of 5 apples. | Addition (often signified by the plus symbol "+") is one of the four elementary, mathematical operations of arithmetic; with the others being subtraction, multiplication and division. The addition of two whole numbers is the total amount of those quantities combined. For example, in the picture on the right, there is a... | Provide more information. | wiki |
At the age of 2 his father died. He lived with his mother in Alexandria until 1954, when he moved to Athens at the age of 17, in order to study Physics in the University of Thesssaloniki, Greece. He developed an early interest in reading novels and history and even in the time of his High School years in Alexandria, he... | His father died when he was two years old. He lived with his mother in Alexandria until 1954. He was an avid reader of fiction and history, and as a high school student in Alexandria had his short stories published in Tahidromos and Anatoli, the Greek daily newspapers of the city. In 1954 he moved to Greece to study Ph... | Make output more fluid, and copyedit. | wiki |
Before the 1870s, these estates often encompassed several thousand acres, generally consisting of a home farm, kitchen gardens (utilised to supply the mansion with meat, milk, fruit and vegetables), and several farms let to tenants. While such estates were sufficiently profitable to maintain the mansion and provide a p... | Before the 1870s, these estates often encompassed several thousand acres, generally consisting of several farms let to tenants; the great house was supplied with food from its own home farm (for meat and dairy) and a kitchen garden (for fruit and vegetables). While such estates were sufficiently profitable to maintain ... | Remove any information regarding what the holdings yielded previously. | wiki |
Woods started out the round being three off the pace, but with a 66 he took his first lead ever in a professional major championship. At the end of the day, Woods created a gap of three shots over his closest pursuer, Colin Montgomerie from Scotland. Woods shot a 65 in the third round to increase his lead from three sh... | Woods started the round three strokes back, but a 66 gave him his first lead in a professional major championship, three shots ahead of Colin Montgomerie from Scotland. Woods shot a 65 in the third round to increase his lead to nine shots; the closest competitor was Costantino Rocca from Italy. Woods won his first majo... | Fix tense, other minor edits for grammar and clarity. | wiki |
In the end, Renamon reverts into Viximon as a side effect of the Red Card and she says goodbye to Rika. Though Rika attempted to have her assume the form prior, Renamon manages to achieve digivolving when she wanted to protect Rika from a Dogukumon. Taomon first appeared to fight the Ox Deva, Vajramon. This is also the... | When Renamon reverts into Viximon as a side effect of the Red Card, she says goodbye to Rika. Though Rika attempted to have her assume the form prior, Renamon manages to achieve digivolving when she wanted to protect Rika from Dogukumon. She fights with various spells and charms to harness the powers of the magical ene... | Remove any unnecessary information. | wiki |
There are plenty of applications of 3D sound synthesis. It can help increase the sense of presence in virtual environment. It can be used for teleconferencing system, tele-ensemble system, producing more realistic environments and sensations in some conventional applications like gaming and other media. Also sound can ... | There are plenty of applications of 3D sound synthesis such as the sense of presence in a virtual environment by producing more realistic environments and sensations in games and other entertainments, teleconferencing system, and tele-ensemble system. The 3D sound may include the location of a source in three-dimension... | Rewrite the article to make it concise. | wiki |
Do not use transliterations derived from Russian names for cities of regional significance in Ukraine, e.g. write, not. The city referred to in English as is an exception to this rule. Do not use the standard Ukrainian transliteration, which is, as this is not in common use. | Generally, do not use transliterations derived from Russian names for cities of regional significance in Ukraine. Notable exceptions where common English usage does not conform to the Ukrainian national transliteration include the names of the cities of and do not use the standard Ukrainian transliterations, because th... | Copyedit for errors in the text. | wiki |
In anatomy, serous membrane (or serosa) is a smooth tissue membrane consisting of two layers of mesothelium, which secrete serous fluid. The inner layer that covers organs (viscera) in body cavities is called the visceral membrane. A second layer of epithelial cells of the serous membrane, called the parietal layer, li... | In anatomy, serous membrane (or serosa) is a smooth tissue membrane of mesothelium lining the contents and inside wall of body cavities, which secrete serous fluid to allow lubricated sliding movements between opposing surfaces. The serous membrane that covers internal organs is called a visceral membrane; while the on... | Remove lines which state that the serous membrane consists of two layers. | wiki |
The game functioned similarly to its predecessor Ten Pin Alley, however offered players a stripped down and simplified version of the original making the game less about the physics of ten-pin bowling and more about an enjoyable arcade game. Ten Pin Alley 2 offered players only two gameplay modes, a practice mode and a... | The game functions similarly to its predecessor Ten Pin Alley, but offers players a stripped down and simplified version of the original, making the game less about the physics of ten-pin bowling and more about an enjoyable arcade game. Ten Pin Alley 2 has two gameplay modes, a practice mode and a tournament mode. The ... | Change to presemt tense. Go less into the poor controls of Ten Pin Alley 1. | wiki |
Dog walking is also a form of pet sitting since it involves coming to the pet’s home to provide exercise and companionship. Caring for pets in the clients ’homes is what separates pet sitters from boarders or dog daycares. Links to services other than pet sitting are not permitted on the PSI's Pet Sitter Locator. | Dog walking is considered to be a form of pet sitting as well since it involves coming to the pet’s home to provide exercise and companionship. Caring for pets in the clients homes is what separates pet sitters from boarders and dog daycares. | Remove last sentence. Copyedit. | wiki |
Bruett is a former Major League Baseball outfielder. Bruett was drafted in the eleventh round of the 1988 Major League Baseball Draft by the Minnesota Twins. He played at the Major League level with the team in 1992 and 1993. He played at the collegiate level at the University of Minnesota. | Joseph Timothy Bruett is a former professional baseball outfielder. He played parts of two seasons in Major League Baseball for the Minnesota Twins in 1992-93. Bruett played at the collegiate level at the University of Minnesota. He was drafted in the eleventh round of the 1988 Major League Baseball Draft by the Twins. | Rearrange the information for clarity. | wiki |
Later, Kamla pretends to have lost her memory. Survi gives birth to Khushi, whom Kamla kidnaps. Kartik and Survi separate, presuming Khushi dead. On a train, one of the kidnappers hands Khushi to Survi who adopts her, unaware she is her biological daughter. Khushi surbhi daughter lives with Survi and runs into Kartik, ... | Kamla acts later to have lost her memory and kidnaps Khushi (Survi and Kartik's newborn daughter), leading them to separate as they assume her dead. On a train, one of the kidnappers hands Khushi to Survi who adopts her, unaware she's her real daughter. Khushi lives with Survi and runs into Kartik, who bonds with her. ... | Edit for conciseness and comprehension. | wiki |
Managers of radio and television stations prompted tighter control over content, which led to Stern feeling "dead ... inside" in a creative sense. On March 18, the FCC proposed a $ 27,500 fine, the maximum amount per offense, for sexual and scatological discussions from a July 26, 2001 broadcast on WKRK in Detroit. Via... | Managers of radio and television stations prompted tighter control over content, which led to Stern feeling "dead ... inside" creatively. The FCC issued a $ 27,500 fine to Infinity on March 18, 2004, the first concerning material on The Howard Stern Show since 1998. The forfeiture was made after a listener filed a comp... | Provide information on the transcript cited. Copyedit. | wiki |
If your insight proves correct, at expiration you get $ 100 (i.e., the full contract value). So, your profit equals $ 100 minus your initial investment plus fees. If you were incorrect, you lose only your initial investment plus fees. | If the investor's insight proves correct, at expiration the investor gets $ 100 (i.e., the full contract value). Profit equals $ 100 minus initial investment plus fees. An investor would only lose the initial investment (plus fees) if the investor is incorrect. | Remove second person and make sure it is grammatically correct | wiki |
Fantasy of Flight is an aviation-related attraction near Polk City, Florida, USA that takes visitors back to the pioneering days of early flight, World War I, World War II and beyond. The attraction opened in 1995, and became the new home for much of Weeks 'collection of aircraft that were housed at the Weeks Air Museu... | Fantasy of Flight is an aviation-related attraction in Polk City, Florida, USA that takes visitors back to the pioneering days of early flight, World War I, World War II and beyond. The attraction opened in November of 1995, and houses the world's largest private aircraft collection on display. It became the new home f... | Go into greater detail about the attraction | wiki |
Supportive care is the mainstay of therapy in TRALI. Oxygen supplementation is employed in all reported cases of TRALI and aggressive respiratory support is needed in 72 percent of patients. Intravenous administration of fluids, as well as vasopressors, are essential for blood pressure support. Use of diuretics, which ... | The mainstay of therapy in TRALI is supportive care. Oxygen supplementation is employed in all reported cases of TRALI, and 72% of patients require aggressive respiratory support. To support blood pressure, intravenous administration of fluids, as well as vasopressors, are essential. In treating TRALI, diuretics are to... | Rephase the first half of the treatment section. | wiki |
There is maternal care in all species of mammals. 95% species exhibit female-only care. In the remaining 5% of species, there is biparental care. There are no known cases of male-only care. Higher mammals (excluding the monotremes, namely the echidna and the platypus) share two major adaptations for care of their young... | There is maternal care in all species of mammals, and while 95% of species exhibit female-only care, in only 5% biparental care is present. Thus, there are no known cases of male-only care in mammals. The major adaptation shared by all live-bearing mammals for care of their young after birth is lactation (the feeding o... | Do not mention gestation, and provide more inforation on when males provision the pregnant females. | wiki |
He possibly accompanied the tour to Port Elizabeth in 1862. The Bland family were still in the company. In 1862 Sefton Parry went to Port Elizabeth for three months and took on the lease of the White’s Road Theatre. He opened with Planche’s Grist to the Mill on 2 June. | He possibly accompanied the three month tour to Port Elizabeth in 1862 where Parry took on the lease of the White’s Road Theatre. Parry opened with "Planche’s Grist to the Mill" on 2 June. The rest of the Bland family were still in the company. | Rewrite to remove duplicated information, | wiki |
This building is donated by Mr.Nego who is from World Child Care organization. It is for the children who are homeless and helpless by Nargis cyclone in 2008. The principle collects those children who are effected by Nargis and he supports them not only survival but also education. There are round about 150 children an... | This building is donated by a Mr. Nego from the World Child Care Organization, for the children rendered needy and homeless by the 2008 Nargis cyclone. The principal supports and educates about 150 children and 15 teachers to take care them. | Remove grammatical errors and improve sentence structure. | wiki |
Arizona has currently had five drawings for this game. These tickets are printed in ascending ordering starting at 1. Tickets stop being sold when a pre-determined number of tickets have been purchased (usually around 300,000) or on a certain date, whichever comes first. Numbers are then randomly drawn, one (sometimes ... | Arizona has held five Millionaire Raffle drawings. These tickets are printed in ascending order. Sales end when a pre-determined number of tickets are purchased (usually 300,000) or on a certain date, whichever comes first. Numbers are then randomly drawn, with one, or two (depending on the raffle) winning $1 million. ... | Clean up the Millionaire Raffle section | wiki |
During that time, Ramakrishna and other newspaper enthusiasts felt the need of a Malayalam newspaper from Travancore. Two newspapers Kerala Darpanum and Vanjivibhujhika were started in 1900. His friends and well wishers persuaded him to take up the editorship of Kerala Darpanum newspaper. Due to immense resistance from... | Ramakrishna Pillai and other newspaper enthusiasts had felt the need for a Malayalam newspaper. Kerala Darpanum and Vanjivibhujhika were already being published since 1900. Though his friends and well-wishers persuaded him to take up the editorship of Kerala Darpanum. It was difficult to manage studies and the editorsh... | Copyedit and condense the text slightly. | wiki |
In the early years of the twentieth century very few people indeed were vegetarians. The figure given for the United Kingdom during World War 2 was a mere 100,000 out of a population of some 50 million ... around 0.2 percent of the total. However, by the 1990s the figure was estimated as between 4.2 percent and 11 perc... | In the early years of the twentieth century, very few people were vegetarians. The figure given for the United Kingdom during World War 2 was 100,000 out of a population of some 50 million — around 0.2 percent of the total. By the 1990s the figure was estimated as between 4.2 percent and 11 percent of the British popul... | Copy edit for brevity and readability. | wiki |
Moreno wrote several books under the literary pseudonym, Laure Dynateur, including a cookbook called L'Aide-Mémoire du Nouveau Cordon-bleu, with more than 2,000 recipes. Moreno chose his pseudonym, because, when pronounced, the name sounds like the French word for computer, l'ordinateur. Another book, Théorie du Bordel... | Moreno wrote several books, includineg Théorie du Bordel Ambiant, a collection of his ideas and reflections. He also authored books under the literary pseudonym Laure Dynateur, including a cookbook entitled L'Aide-Mémoire du Nouveau Cordon-bleu with more than 2,000 recipes. Moreno chose this pseudonym because, when pro... | Reorganize some sentences for clarity. | wiki |
Co-administration of levofloxacin with anti-acids containing magnesium hydroxide or aluminum hydroxide leads to the formation of insoluble salts that are not readily absorbed from the intestinal tract. Peak serum concentrations of levofloxacin may be reduced by 90% or more, leading to therapeutic failure. Similar resul... | When levofloxacin is taken with anti-acids containing magnesium hydroxide or aluminum hydroxide, the two combine to form insoluble salts that are difficult to absorb from the intestines. Peak serum concentrations of levofloxacin may be reduced by 90% or more, which can prevent the levofloxacin from working. Similar res... | Present this information in an easier to understand format | wiki |
: Harmony Kendall is a woman that never outgrew high school. Vapid, shallow and eternally at the age of a high school senior. Bitten by a vampire during the third season of Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Harmony has made recurring appearances on both shows, displaying the same ineptitude she did as a mortal. Hired by Wesley... | : Harmony Kendall is the type of woman that never moved on after her popular high school years. She is still vapid, shallow and remains eternally at the age of a high school senior. Bitten by a vampire during the third season of Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Harmony has made recurring appearances on both shows, displaying ... | Expand Harmony's entry. | wiki |
All cells have proteins attached to their membranes that are responsible for performing a vast array of functions. There are several ways for proteins to be attached to a cell membrane. Several enzymes are needed to make glycosylphosphatidylinositol (GPI), a molecule that anchors proteins to the cell membrane. The most... | All cells have proteins attached to their membranes, often serving as a mode of communication or signaling between the cell and the surrounding extracellular milieu. These signaling proteins are physically attached to the cell membrane in various ways, commonly anchored by glycolipids such as glycosyl phosphatidylinosi... | Clarify the function of proteins on the membrane. | wiki |
10+ units of BTR-3U bought from Ukraine in 2001. Kyiv signed a US $ 500 million contract in 2004 to supply 1000 BTR-3U light-armoured personnel carriers (APC). Purchased as kits to be assembled locally. The assembling was set to finish in 2013. According to Building the Tatmadaw report, Myanmar Army is operating more t... | 10+ BTR-3Us bought from Ukraine in 2001. Kyiv signed a US $ 500 million contract in 2004 to supply 1000 BTR-3U armoured personnel carriers (APCs). Purchased as kits to be assembled locally until 2013. According to Building the Tatmadaw report, the Myanmar Army was operating more than 500 BTR-3Us as of 2008. According t... | Rewrite the text to make it more concise. | wiki |
There is a large debate on whether or not cheerleading should be considered a sport for Title IX purposes. On January 27, 2009, in a lawsuit involving an accidental injury sustained during a cheerleading practice, the Wisconsin Supreme Court ruled that cheerleading is a full-contact sport in that state, not allowing an... | There has been debate on whether or not cheerleading can be considered a sport for Title IX purposes. On January 27, 2009, in a lawsuit involving an accidental injury sustained during a cheerleading practice, the Wisconsin Supreme Court ruled that cheerleading is a full-contact sport in that state. The risk of cheerlea... | Expand on if Cheerleading is considered a sport or not. | wiki |
Park Ji-hyo (Hangul: 박지효; born February 1, 1997), better known mononymously as Jihyo, is a South Korean singer. After participating in the survival television show Sixteen in 2015, she became the leader and main vocalist of the South Korean girl group Twice, under JYP Entertainment. She's the longest JYP trainee for ha... | Park Ji-hyo (born February 1, 1997), professionally known by the mononym Jihyo, is a South Korean singer and a member of the K-pop girl group Twice, under JYP Entertainment formed by the reality show Sixteen. The leader and main vocalist of the group, she is known for her strong voice, dance skills, and charisma. Park ... | Rephrase passage and delete excessive information. | wiki |
Blood pressure (BP) is the pressure (force per unit area) exerted by circulating blood on the walls of blood vessels, and constitutes one of the principal vital signs. The pressure of the circulating blood decreases as it moves away from the heart through arteries and capillaries, and toward the heart through veins. Wh... | Blood pressure (BP) is the pressure exerted by circulating blood on the walls of blood vessels, and is one of the principal vital signs. During each heartbeat, BP varies between a maximum (systolic) and a minimum (diastolic) pressure. The mean BP decreases as the circulating blood moves away from the heart through arte... | Rewrite the lead to make it clearer. | wiki |
The Frolic, an opium trading brig wrecked near Point Cabrillo Light in 1850. The wreckage was rediscovered in 1984. It was the subject of the 2003 episode "Gold Rush Disaster: The Frolic" of the History Channel series Deep Sea Detectives. | The opium trading brig, Frolic, wrecked near Point Cabrillo Light in 1850. The wreckage was rediscovered in 1984 and was the subject of a 2003 episode of the History Channel series Deep Sea Detectives entitled "Gold Rush Disaster: The Frolic." | Edit grammar and sentence structure. | wiki |
"Tryin 'To Get The Feeling Again" is a song written and composed by David Pomeranz. It was sung by 1970s superstars Barry Manilow and the Carpenters. Manilow's version was included on his album, Tryin' To Get The Feeling, whose "title selection" it was. However, the Carpenters's version was not released till 1995, twel... | "Tryin 'To Get The Feeling Again" is a song written by David Pomeranz and recorded most notably by Barry Manilow. It was also recorded by the Carpenters but their version was not released till 1995 on their 25th anniversary CD. Manilow released his version as a single in 1976 from the album Tryin' To Get The Feeling. | Rewrite to remove duplication and unnecessary information. | wiki |
Laura Leiner (born 22 April 1985) is a Hungarian writer. Her most notable series is the A Szent Johanna gimi (Jean d’Arc Secondary Grammar School). It is based on her ideas, and any part of the book happened with her in the real life. Her first book was published in 2003. | Laura Leiner (born 22 April 1985) is a Hungarian writer who made her publishing debut in 2003. Most notable is the series A Szent Johanna gimi (Jean d’Arc Secondary Grammar School), which is based on events in her own life. | Mention her publishing debut first. | wiki |
The Árbol del Tule (The Tule Tree), is the tree with the largest diameter of any tree in the world. It is a Montezuma Cypress (Ahuehuete in the Nahuatl language) and has a diameter of 11.42 m (circumference 35.87 m), and a height of 43 meters. It is located in the church grounds in the town center of Santa María del Tu... | It has the largest diameter of any tree in the world. The tree is 43 m tall, has a circumference of 35.87 m, and has the largest diameter of any tree in the world at 11.42 m. It is a Montezuma cypress (Taxodium mucronatum) & ndash; called Ahuehuete in Nahuatl. The age of El Tule is unknown, with estimates ranging betwe... | Rearrange some sentences and do some copyediting. | wiki |
Lower urinary tract symptoms (LUTS) refer to a group of clinical symptoms involving the bladder, urethra, sphincters, and, in men, the prostate. Both women and men can be affected by lower urinary tract symptoms; however, it's more common for the term to be applied to men. With LUTS becoming the preferred term for pros... | Lower urinary tract symptoms (LUTS) refer to a group of clinical symptoms involving the bladder, urinary sphincter, urethra, and, in men, the prostate. Although LUTS is a preferred term for prostatism, and it is more common for the term to be applied to men, lower urinary tract symptoms also affect women. A patient can... | Rewrite the first paragraph to clarify. | wiki |
She was later noted for her portrayal of a devoted wife, in Hiyani (2006), a school teacher in Fathimath Nahula's highest-grossing film Yoosuf (2008) and Hiyy Rohvaanulaa (2008), all of them result in Gaumee Film Award nominations for Best Actress. The success was continued with the family dramas Maafeh Neiy (2010), Sa... | She was later noted for her portrayal of a devoted wife in Hiyani (2006), a schoolteacher in Fathimath Nahula's highest-grossing film, Yoosuf (2008), and in Hiyy Rohvaanulaa (2008), all of which resulted in Gaumee Film Award nominations. She established herself as the most prominent leading actress of Maldivian cinema ... | Copyedit and provide additional information. | wiki |
National University of Ireland, Maynooth (NUIM; Irish: Ollscoil na hÉireann, Má Nuad;), was founded in 1997 by the Universities Act, 1997 as a constituent university of the National University of Ireland. It is Ireland's second oldest university institution, tracing its origins back to the foundation in 1795 of St Patr... | The National University of Ireland, Maynooth (NUIM; Irish: Ollscoil na hÉireann, Má Nuad;), was founded by the Universities Act, 1997 as a constituent university of the National University of Ireland. It can be considered Ireland's second oldest university institution, having been formed from St Patrick's College, Mayn... | Clean up the paragraph's language. | wiki |
Faculty of Applied Sciences has Dept. of Natural Resources, Dept. of Energy and Environment, Center for Bioresources and Biotechnology, Dept. of Biotechnology and Coca-Cola Dept. of Regional Water Studies. Faculty of Policy and Planning has Dept. of Policy Studies, Dept. of Business Sustainability and Center for Regula... | The Faculty of Applied Sciences has the Department of Natural Resources, Department of Energy and Environment, Center for Bioresources and Biotechnology, Department of Biotechnology, and Coca-Cola Department of Regional Water Studies. The Faculty of Policy and Planning has the Department of Policy Studies, Department o... | Cleanup for sounding like a publicity brochure in places and not like an encyclopedia article | wiki |
| Arlington International Film Festival || 2010 || Arlington || Massachusetts || International || The festival focuses on Multicultural awareness and stresses also the importance of the artistic and educational value of films from all around the world. Entries accepted from anywhere in the world. | Atlanta Film Festiva... | | Arlington International Film Festival || 2010 || Arlington || Massachusetts || International || Focuses on multicultural awareness and the artistic and educational value of films from all around the world. | Ashland Independent Film Festival || 2001 || Ashland || Oregon || International || Presents international and ... | Edit out subjective or unsubstantiated information. | wiki |
A quantum dot laser succeeds in minimizing temperature-sensitive output fluctuations, something not possible with previous semiconductor lasers. Fujitsu and the University of Tokyo have developed a 10 Gbit / s quantum dot laser not affected by temperature, for use in optical data communications and optical networks. Pr... | A quantum dot laser is designed to minimize output fluctuations due to temperature variations. This is a feature not possible with previous semiconductor lasers. A 10 Gbit / s quantum dot laser for use in optical data communications and optical networks was developed by Fujitsu and the University of Tokyo to show the d... | Describe what the laser is meant to show. | wiki |
In the United States, osteopathic physicians are trained and are certified to practice medicine. They represent a branch of medicine called Osteopathic Medicine. Osteopaths trained elsewhere are trained only in manual osteopathic treatment, generally to relieve muscular and skeletal conditions, and are referred to as o... | In the United States, osteopathic practitioners are legally restricted from referring to themselves as "osteopaths" to avoid confusion with osteopathic physicians who are medical doctors trained and certified to practice in the branch of scientific medicine called Osteopathic Medicine. Osteopathic practitioners, on the... | Rewrite to avoid confusion with osteopathic physicians and correct punctuation as needed. | wiki |
As the shell moves down the barrel during firing, it creates a high pressure in front of the projectile and the evacuator is filled with high pressure air through the holes. As the shell passes farther, the pressure behind it begins to drop, and suddenly returns nearly to atmospheric pressure as the shell leaves the ba... | When the gun is fired, high pressure gas generated by the burning propellant pushes the projectile forwards. When the projectile passes the holes drilled into the barrel, the propellant gasses are free to flow into the reservoir. When the projectile leaves the gun, the pressure in the barrel drops and the gas stored in... | Correct the description of how the evacuator works. | wiki |
This experience gave her a new life mission: to make South Indian classical music global. One of the many instances when her dream saw fruition was when the BBC Proms invited her to perform at London’s Royal Albert Hall. Aruna has also performed, among other important international venues, at New York's Carnegie Hall, ... | This experience gave her a mission to make South Indian classical music global. She performed at the BBC Proms at London’s Royal Albert Hall, and has also performed at New York's Carnegie Hall, at Paris' Théâtre de la Ville, and at Morocco's Fes Festival of World Sacred Music. | Copy edits and remove promotional content | wiki |
Canadensis renovates their major facilities on a constantly rotating basis. In 2000 Canadensis built a 9,000 square-foot art center overlooking one of the three pools. It is also the home to the Newspaper office where campers can go and help create the camp newspaper, The Canadensis Courier. In addition, Canadensis has... | Canadensis renovates its major facilities on a consistently rotating basis. It is also home to the newspaper office where campers can go and help create the camp newspaper, "The Canadensis Courier". In 2008, Canadensis made the addition of an outdoor amphitheater. Built in 2008, "Aunt T's Amphitheater" overlooks Lake L... | Correct punctuation and apply proper capitalization. Edit to include only information about the newspaper, the amphitheater, and recent renovations. | wiki |
Their Content Library consists of more than 2,500 titles spanning new Hindi films like Ishqiya, Slumdog Millionaire, Ajab Prem Ki Ghazab Kahani, Omkara, Dil Toh Baccha Hai, Chandni Chowk to China, Bheja Fry 2, amongst others. Hindi film classics like Mughal-e-Azam, Shree 420, Mera Naam Joker, Anand, Amar Akbar Anthony,... | Their Content Library consists of more than 2,500 titles spanning new Hindi films such as Ishqiya, Slumdog Millionaire, Ajab Prem Ki Ghazab Kahani, Omkara, Dil Toh Baccha Hai, Chandni Chowk to China and Bheja Fry 2, amongst others. They are one of the largest independent content aggregators of Bollywood and CGI animate... | Remove a majority of film examples. | wiki |
Dancing with the Stars (Taniec z Gwiazdami) is a Polish light entertainment reality television series broadcast on TVN across the country. It's the Polish version of the popular Dancing with the Stars franchise which has been sold to more than 30 countries across the world. Dancing with which was adapted from the Briti... | Taniec z Gwiazdami is a Polish light entertainment reality television series broadcast by TVN. It is the Polish version of BBC's popular Dancing with the Stars / Strictly Come Dancing franchise which has been sold to more than 30 countries worldwide. | Make the text shorter | wiki |
The Lamborghini Espada is a grand tourer built by Italian car manufacturer Lamborghini between 1968 and 1978. The car was designed by Marcello Gandini of Bertone. The name "Espada" means "sword" in Spanish, referring to the sword that Toreros use to kill the bulls. The Espada was originally fitted with a 4.0 L V12 engi... | The Lamborghini Espada is a 4-seat grand touring coupé built by Italian car manufacturer Lamborghini between 1968 and 1978. The car was designed by Marcello Gandini at Bertone. Gandini drew inspiration from two of his previous Bertone show cars, the Lamborghini Marzal, displayed at the 1967 Geneva Auto Show, and the Ja... | Fix wording and grammar. Remove specification information. | wiki |
Group Formation: groups are often picked at random, or they are determined by what members have similar schedules. Picking groups at random is an effective way to ensure diversity in the group. Groups formed based on who has similar schedules is often a smart choice to ensure members of the group are able to meet in pe... | Before delving into the process of creating an article, it's beneficial to have a plan of action. This is where deciding group members comes to play, as well as most of the deadlines and scheduling. The first step is to find you group members. This can be done at random to ensure diversity within groups, or it can be b... | rewrite the group formation and assigning roles section | wiki |
During the episode broadcast 19 February 2015, viewers saw Ian accuse Jane of being his daughter Lucy's killer, demanding she reveal to him what happened that night. During the 'flashback' episode, airing the same evening, Bobby was revealed to be Lucy's killer, with it also being revealed that Jane covered for him by ... | During the episode broadcast 19 February 2015, viewers saw Ian accuse Jane of being his daughter Lucy's killer, demanding that she explain what happened that night. During the 'flashback' episode that airing the same evening, Bobby was revealed to be Lucy's killer, with Jane covering for him by moving Lucy's body to Wa... | Remove inforemation regarding Bobby being born, and Ian's refusal to acknowledge that he may be Bobby's father. | wiki |
It is located 16 km west of the district headquarters in Badhgam. It is also located 15 km from the State Capital Srinagar, Jammu. Kawoosa Khalisa's zip code is 193401 and the postal head office is located in Magam. Kawoosa Khalisa is surrounded from the west by Breng Block, from the north by Wakura Block, from the eas... | It is located 16 km west of the district headquarters in Badhgam and 15 km from the state capital, Srinagar, Jammu. Kawoosa Khalisa is bordered to the west by Breng Block, to the north by Wakura Block, to the east by Pattan Block, and to the south by Badgam Block. Nearby cities: Srinagar, Sopore, Baramulla, Bandipore. ... | Clean up grammar and sentence structure. Remove unnecessary location information. | wiki |
Dykra was ruled by Golden Horde between 1240-1362 and was conquered by Algirdas, who was Grand Duke of Lithuania after Battle of Blue Waters. But, she was retook by Temur Qutlugh, who was khan of Golden Horde in 1399 after Battle of the Vorskla River. She was bounded to the Crimean Khanate in 1441. | Dykra was ruled by Golden Horde during 1240-1362 but was conquered by Algirdas, Grand Duke of Lithuania, after the Battle of Blue Waters. In 1399, after the Battle of the Vorskla River, the territory was taken back by Temur Qutlugh, the khan of Golden Horde. In 1441, Dykra became part of the Crimean Khanate. | Copyedit to remove errors and clean up the text. | wiki |
Though Kouga learned the value of friendship, he is forced to watch his friends being devoured by the Horror Raizon, keeping the beads they got from Wataru on his person in memory of them. Kouga is not a very sociable person, more so after his father's death and he always keeps his feelings to himself and puts up a dea... | Though Kouga learned the value of friendship, he is forced to watch friends being devoured by the Horror Raizon, keeping the beads they got from Wataru on his person in memory of them. Though he later trained under the Makai Knight Kengi, it still took over a decade since his father's death for Kouga to not only finall... | Provide much more information into Kouga's personal life and relationships rather than his cadence and internal feelings. Mention the event where he spared Kaoru's life. | wiki |
Skoda was a barquentine built in Kingsport, Nova Scotia in 1893 by shipbuilder Ebenezer Cox. Skoda, a barquentine weighing 658 tons, was built in Kingsport, Nova Scotia in 1893. She was built by Ebenezer Cox and marked the end of his thirty year shipbuilding career, and was also the last vessel built and launched in Ki... | Skoda was a barquentine built in Kingsport, Nova Scotia, in 1893 by shipbuilder Ebenezer Cox, marking the end of an era as the last vessel built by Cox and the last large vessel built in Kingsport. Skoda, a 658 ton barquentine, was built in Kingsport, Nova Scotia, designed by veteran master shipbuilder Ebenezer Cox. Th... | Revise text for clarity and readability. | wiki |
Starting in 1963 this high elevation airport in the Sierra Nevada just south of Lake Tahoe had a few airline flights: the first were Lockheed L-049 Constellations of Paradise Airlines. After a bad accident Paradise disappeared and Pacific Air Lines F27s took over in 1964. Jet airliners weren't allowed until the 1980s. ... | Beginning in 1963, this high elevation airport in the Sierra Nevada mountains just south of Lake Tahoe had few airline flights: the first were operated with Lockheed L-049 Constellation propliners by Paradise Airlines. However, following a fatal accident in the mountains near Lake Tahoe, Paradise disappeared and Pacifi... | Copyedit for clarity, and readability. | wiki |
Moenkopi sits in the center of a wide valley. It is located at 36 ° 6'42 "North, 111 ° 13'15" West (36.111741, -111.220699). According to the United States Census Bureau, the village has a total area of 1.6 & nbsp; square miles (4.1 & nbsp; km²), none of which is covered by water. As of the census of 2000, there are 90... | Located in the center of a wide valley, Moenkopi is located at (36.111741, -111.220699). According to the United States Census Bureau, the CDP has a total area of 1.6 square miles (4.1 km²), all land. As of the census of 2000, there were 901 people, 242 households, and 202 families residing in the CDP. | Remove all language implying that Moenkopi was a village; it is not. | wiki |
After arriving back in the area of the seven hills, the effort was beset with conflict. They disagreed about the hill upon which to build. Romulus prefered Palatine Hill and Remus Aventine hill. When they could not resolve the dispute, they turned to the gods to show them the way. They each searched for an auspice to s... | After arriving back in the area of the seven hills, they disagreed about the hill upon which to build. Romulus preferred the Palatine Hill, above the Lupercal; Remus preferred the Aventine Hill. When they could not resolve the dispute, they agreed to seek the gods' approval through a contest of augury. Remus first saw ... | Rephrase some sentences and edit for grammar. | wiki |
In 2012, the first phase of Surfbury, as the locals have called it after the similar Poundbury, Ducal planned development on at Tregunnel Hill, southwest of Newquay with 174 homes. Plans were approved for the development at Nansledan in Newquay, also consider part of Surfbury, east of the town centre in December 2013. ... | In 2012, work began on a 174-home development at Tregunnel Hill, southwest of Newquay, referred to locally as "Surfbury", after the Poundbury project in Dorset. Plans were approved in December 2013 for a similar development at Nansledan in Newquay, east of the town center, which would include 800 homes, shops, a superm... | The section on Surfbury development is streamlined. | wiki |
In 1912, the Hersheys were to travel on the ill-fated British luxury liner RMS Titanic. However, they canceled their reservations due to last-minute business matters Hershey was needed for, contrary to the popular belief that it was due to Hershey's wife, Kitty Hershey, falling ill. Kitty Hershey had been ill for sever... | In 1912, the Hersheys were booked to travel on the ill-fated British luxury liner RMS Titanic. They canceled their reservations at the last-minute due to business matters requiring Hershey's attention, and not due to Kitty Hershey falling ill as is popularly believed. At this point, Kitty Hershey had been ill for sever... | Rewrite the text to make it more readable. | wiki |
As a consequence, the polar diameter of Earth increases, and because the mass and density remain the same, the volume remains the same; therefore the equatorial diameter is decreasing. As a consequence, mass moves closer to the rotation axis of Earth. This means that its moment of inertia is decreasing. | As a consequence, the polar diameter of Earth increases, and the equatorial diameter decreases (Earths volume must remain the same). This means that mass moves closer to the rotation axis of Earth, and that Earths moment of inertia decreases. | Make this easier to understand | wiki |
After weakening slightly, Luis passed near Antigua and made landfall in Barbuda early on September & nbsp; 5. Later that day, the storm also brushed Saint Barthélemy, Saint Martin, and Anguilla. While a Category & nbsp; 2 hurricane, Luis made its closest approach to Bermuda, which occurred on September & nbsp; 9. By th... | After weakening slightly, Luis passed near Antigua and made landfall in Barbuda early on September & nbsp; 5, before brushing Saint Barthélemy, Saint Martin, and Anguilla. On September & nbsp; 10, Luis rapidly accelerated northeastward and weakened to a Category & nbsp; 1 hurricane. Luis made landfall on the Avalon Pen... | Rewrite for conciseness. | wiki |
The first Page 3 image was a photograph of 20-year-old model Stephanie Khan that ran in the 17 November 1970 issue. Published intermittently at first, the feature soon became a regular part of the newspaper and is credited with boosting circulation of The Sun significantly in the 1970s. An accompanying website, Page3.c... | The first Page 3 image of 20-year-old model Stephanie Khan ran in the 17 November 1970 issue. Published intermittently at first, Page 3 soon became a regular feature in The Sun and is credited with helping to boost its circulation significantly in the 1970s. | Copyedit throughout and remove the website. | wiki |
For example, if a tornado is in progress near Colby, live continuous coverage will be seen on KLBY. While the normal program will appear on the rest of the network. At 11:58 pm, on February 16, 2009 KUPK analog, VHF channel 13, and KUPK-DT 13.1 digital, UHF channel 18, were both switched off forever. At 12:01 am, Febru... | For example, if a tornado is in progress near Colby, live continuous coverage will be seen on KLBY, while the normal program will appear on the rest of the network. The Broadcasting and Cable Yearbook says KUPK signed on November 8, while the Television and Cable Factbook says October 28. Each low-power station in this... | Remove any unpolished sentences and add info about translators | wiki |
Rick attempts escape multiple times, only to discover that there are multiple virtual realities encased in one another. However, despite system glitches, Jerry remains completely unaware while trying to sell his advertising slogan for apples. Rick finally games the aliens by giving them a fake recipe for the concoction... | As Rick attempts escape, he discovers that there are multiple virtual reality layers on top of each other. Jerry, on the other hand, despite numerous system glitches, remains completely oblivious, and keeps trying to sell his advertising slogan for apples. Rick finally games the aliens by giving them a fake recipe. The... | Copyedit and shorten this. | wiki |
The Crawford Automobile was a highly regarded small-production car made in Hagerstown, Maryland throughout the 1910s and early 1920s. The company also made a sporting version of the Crawford, called the Dagmar, starting in 1922. The last Crawfords were sold in 1923, but the Dagmar continued until 1927. | The Dagmar was a sports version of the Crawford Automobile, made by the same highly-regarded small-production company in Hagerstown, Maryland throughout the 1910s and early 1920s. The first Dagmars were made in 1922, and although the last Crawfords were sold in 1923, the Dagmar continued until 1927. | Rewrite to focus on Dagmar. | wiki |
In computing and electronic systems, binary-coded decimal (BCD) is a digital encoding method for numbers using decimal notation, with each decimal digit represented by its own binary sequence. In BCD, a numeral is usually represented by four bits which, in general, represent the decimal range 0 through 9. Other bit pat... | In computing and electronic systems, binary-coded decimal (BCD) is a binary encoding of decimal numbers where each decimal digit is represented by a fix number of bits, usually four or eight. Special bit patterns are sometimes used for a sign or for other indications (e.g., error or overflow). | Make the first paragraph easier to understand. | wiki |
This is a very complex yagya including 129 ishti yagya, 2 pashu yagya, 7 darvi homas and 6 soma yagyas. There are the most amazing types of gifts given to the priests (purohitas) who are performing this yagya.Two gold-coated mirrors should be given to the "adhwaryu", who is one of the main priest in this yagya. The mai... | This is a very complex yagya including one hundred and twenty nine ishti yagya, two pashu yagya, seven darvi homas and six soma yagyas. There are the most amazing types of gifts given to the priests (purohitas) who are performing this yagya. Two gold-coated mirrors should be given to the "adhwaryu", who is one of the m... | Copyedit with attention to grammar, punctuation, word choice, and tone. | wiki |
Anderson died in Panama at the age of 64 while on a cruise to South America. An autopsy revealed that he had accidentally swallowed a toothpick from either a martini olive or while eating hors d'oeuvres. On March 5, 1941, after several days of abdominal discomfort which developed into peritonitis, Anderson and his wife... | Anderson died at the age of 64 while on a cruise to South America. On March 5, 1941, after several days of abdominal discomfort, which developed into peritonitis, Anderson and his wife disembarked from the cruise liner Santa Lucia; and the author was taken to the hospital in Colón, Panama, where he died on March 8. An ... | Clarify by rearranging a couple of sentences. | wiki |
The puppet segments are used only on the PBS telecasts of Caillou, from 2000 to 2003 in order to fill the show's time slot. While Caillou has slots for commercials, and the English Teletoon shows ads during the breaks, PBS does not show paid advertising during the program. The newer shows do not include puppet segments... | The puppet segments were used only on the PBS telecasts of "Caillou" from 2000 to 2003 as continuity to fill time usually taken up by commercial breaks during the original Teletoon broadcasts; later episodes on PBS did not include the puppet segment continuity. | Rewrite paragraph that describes puppet segment continuity | wiki |
From there it continues in a westerly direction to the town of Inkerman (Belokamensk) where it enters the Bay of Sevastopol, on the southwest coast of the peninsula. The Chorna lends its name to the Battle of Chornaya River of 1855. The Crimean town of Inkerman, a key location during the Crimean War, is located along t... | From there, it continues in a westerly direction to the town of Inkerman (Belokamensk), where it enters the Bay of Sevastopol on the southwest coast of the Crimean peninsula. Inkerman was a key location during the Crimean War of 1853–1856, and the Chorna lends its name to the Battle of Chornaya River of 1855. | Merge three sentences about Inkerman and the Crimean War into two sentences while correcting punctuation as needed. | wiki |
Due to the somewhat small popularity of the game, not many ports were released for it. Including the arcade, there is only one port made for the Atari 2600. Plans for the game on the 5200 were made, but was quickly scrapped along with Super Pac-Man due to the Video Game Crash of 1983. It was also to be ported to the il... | Due to the somewhat limited popularity of the game, Atari 2600 gained the only released port. Plans for the game on the 5200 were made, but were quickly scrapped along with Super Pac-Man due to the Video Game Crash of 1983. A homebrew version for the 7800 was the subject of an April fools day joke on the AtariAge forum... | Rewrite a joke into the text. | wiki |
During his first twelve months, he composed a cantata for every occasion of the liturgical year where such concert music was requested, not during Advent and Lent when tempus clausum was observed. It resulted in his first cantata cycle. In his second year in Leipzig, he set out to compose another cycle with the added r... | In Leipzig, cantata music was requested for Sundays and Feast days of the liturgical year with the exception of Advent and Lent when tempus clausum was observed. During the first twelve months, Bach composed new works for almost all of these occasions, later called his first cantata cycle. In his second year in Leipzig... | Rewrite and reorganize the information. | wiki |
In the mid-nineties she left Tel Aviv, obtained BA Degrees in Psychology and in Philosophy from Tel Aviv University, where she also completed a PhD in Cognitive Psychology, and moved to the UK where she married the late Jon Driver. Her first faculty job was at the MRC-Applied Psychology Unit (now the Cognition and Brai... | Lavie obtained BA Degrees in Psychology and Philosophy from Tel Aviv University, where she also completed a Ph.D. in Cognitive Psychology. In the mid-nineties, she left Tel Aviv, and was the first (and still the only) psychologist to receive the prestigious Miller fellowship postdoctoral training in Anne Treisman’s lab... | Reorganize the text in a more chronological order. | wiki |
The contamination and lawsuit became the subject of a biographical film released in 2000, Erin Brockovich, which starred Julia Roberts as Brockovich. The film was critically successful, with Roberts winning Best Actress in a Motion Picture – Drama and Best Actress at the Golden Globe Awards and Academy Awards respectiv... | The contamination and lawsuit became the subject of Erin Brockovich, a 2000 biographical film which starred Julia Roberts as Brockovich. The film was a critical success, with Roberts winning a Golden Globe Award for Best Actress in a Motion Picture – Drama and an Academy Award for Best Actress. Brockovich, who said tha... | Condense information about awards that were won and order the rewrite for the importance of information. | wiki |
One of these lines, the route from Port Shepstone to Paddock via Izotsha, was eventually privatised as the Port Shepstone and Alfred County Railway (ACR) when the SAR ceased operations there in 1986. The ACR conducted both freight and tourist passenger operations, the tourist train becoming known as the Banana Express.... | One of these lines, the branch from Port Shepstone to Paddock via Izotsha, was eventually privatised as the Port Shepstone and Alfred County Railway (ACR) after the SAR ceased operations there in 1986. The ACR conducted both freight and tourist passenger operations, with the tourist train becoming known as the Banana E... | Provide more information on locos 77 and 83. | wiki |
People with PTE may be given antiepileptic drugs to prevent further seizures. However, though antiepileptics prevent seizures while they are being taken, they do not reduce their occurrence once the patient stops taking the drugs. Antiepileptic drugs may be associated with adverse side effects. Antiepileptic medication... | Antiepileptic drugs may be given to prevent further seizures; these drugs eliminate seizures for about 35% of people with PTE. However, antiepileptics only prevent seizures while they are being taken; they do not reduce the occurrence once the patient stops taking the drugs. People whose PTE does not respond to medicat... | Rewrite this and remove the reference to side effects. | wiki |
A wellhead is a general term used to describe the equipment used to provide control mechanisms between downhole and surface equipment in a well. As such, wellheads are attached to the top of the tubular strings and are located on the surface for land wells or on the sea bed surface for offshore wells. Offshore wellhead... | A wellhead is a general term used to describe the component that is used to suspend casing strings and provide sealing functionality for oil wells. Wellheads can be located on platforms, subsea or onshore. The primary components of a wellhead system are the casing head, casing spools, casing hangers, packoffs and isola... | Make sure the definition of wellhead is accurate | wiki |
She works as a radio jockey on the show Khubsurut Sana Ke Sath on Radio Mirchi 98.3 FM.She is currently playing the lead role in colors krishnadasi as Aradhya. Sana is working as an RJ on Radio Mirchi 98.3 FM since August 2004 to present. Whilst listening to Mirchi one day in class, Sana heard an RJ inviting listeners ... | She works as a radio jockey on the show Khubsurut Sana Ke Sath on Radio Mirchi 98.3 FM. She is currently playing the lead role of Aradhya in Krishnadasi. Sheikh is working as an RJ on Radio Mirchi 98.3 FM since August 2004. Whilst listening to Mirchi one day in class, she heard an RJ inviting listeners to audition to b... | Correct punctuation and spacing. Remove narrative information and rewrite for formality. | wiki |
Pol I is part of the alpha / beta protein superfamily protein class, which consists of alpha and beta segments that are scattered throughout any given protein. E. coli DNA Pol I consists of four domains with two separate enzymatic activities. The other three domains work together to sustain DNA polymerase activity. E. ... | Structurally, Pol I is a member of the alpha / beta protein superfamily, which encompasses proteins in which α-helices and β-strands occur in irregular sequences. E. coli DNA Pol I consists of multiple domains with three distinct enzymatic activities. A fourth domain next to the palm domain contains an exonuclease acti... | Expand on DNA Pol I. | wiki |
The biggest change to the gameplay comes from Blades, sentient beings that can produce a weapon to be used by a combatant, who is referred to as a Driver. These are the characters that will make up the player's party in the game. As players progress, Drivers are given the ability to summon Blades by opening items calle... | The biggest change to the gameplay comes from Blades, sentient beings who can produce a weapon to be used by a combatant, referred to as a Driver. These characters that make up the player's party in the game. | Remove the last sentence. | wiki |
A number of α5IA analogues exist that, like α5IA, selectively and partially agonize some GABA receptor subtypes while inverse agonizing others, which may provide a nootropic effect without the associated anxiogenic effects of general GABA inverse agonism. The AMPA transmitter and the AMPA receptors are currently being ... | A number of α5IA analogues exist that, like α5IA, selectively and partially agonize some GABA receptor subtypes while inverse agonizing others, which may provide a nootropic effect without the associated anxiogenic effects of GABA inverse agonism. Ligands and modulators of the AMPA receptor, an ionotropic glutamate rec... | Add information about ligands and modulators of the AMPA. | wiki |
The 2009 leadership race for the Wildrose Alliance Party of Alberta officially began on June 6, 2009, when leader Paul Hinman officially announced his resignation as leader of the party. A total of three candidates have declared their candidacy for the position: Danielle Smith, Jeff Willerton and Mark Dyrholm. The lead... | The 2009 leadership election for the Wildrose Alliance Party of Alberta began on June 6, 2009, when leader Paul Hinman officially announced his resignation as leader of the party. Three candidates have declared their candidacy for the position: Danielle Smith, Jeff Willerton and Mark Dyrholm. The leader will be chosen ... | Rewrite to get rid of redundancy and copyedit. | wiki |
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