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On 9 February 2009 the band released their debut single, "One Night in October" as both a digital download and a vinyl. The single received praise from BBC Radio 1 DJs Huw Stephens, Zane Lowe and Sara Cox, all of whom played the song on their respective shows. The single debuted at number 3 on the independent chart, having been released through Lucky Number Records. Having signed with Columbia Records during 2008, the band then proceeded to releasing their second single, "Adultery", which was released on 26 October 2009. The band began promotion of the single through touring as a support for bands such as Hockey, The Twang and The Noisettes.	On February 9, 2009, the band released their debut single "One Night in October" through Lucky Number Records on vinyl and via digital download. The single debuted at number 3 on the independent chart and received praise from BBC Radio 1 DJs Huw Stephens, Zane Lowe, and Sara Cox, all of whom played the song on their respective shows. Having signed with Columbia Records during 2008, the band released their second single "Adultery" on October 26, 2009. The band promoted the single by touring, acting as support for bands such as Hockey, The Twang, and The Noisettes.	Copyedit for clarity and conciseness.	wiki
He has been close friends with 8th division captain Shunsui Kyōraku since his youth. The two frequently work together. In various Bleach omake chapters, Jūshirō is fond of giving people, especially Tōshirō Hitsugaya, strange or unwanted gifts for no apparent reason.	He has been close friends with 8th division captain Shunsui Kyōraku since his youth, and the two frequently work together. In one sketch, Jūshirō gives Hitsugaya a comically oversized stocking full of candy and other treats.	Rephrase most of this.	wiki
An example is a market for nails where the cost of each nail is $ 0.10 and the demand decreases linearly, from a high demand for free nails to zero demand for nails at $ 1.10. If the market has perfect competition, producers would have to charge a price of $ 0.10, and every customer whose marginal benefit exceeds $ 0.10 would have a nail. However, if there is one producer with a monopoly on the product, it will charge whatever price will yield the greatest profit. The producer would then charge $ 0.60 and thus exclude every customer who had less than $ 0.60 of marginal benefit. The deadweight loss would then be the economic benefit foregone by such customers because of monopoly pricing. Conversely, deadweight loss can come from consumers if they buy a product even if it costs more than it benefits them. To describe this, if the same nail market had the government been giving a $ 0.03 subsidy to every nail produced, the subsidy would push the market price of each nail down to $ 0.07. Some consumers would then buy nails even though the benefit to them is less than the real cost of $ 0.10. That unneeded expense would then create a deadweight loss, with resources not being used efficiently. In an example of taxes instead of subsidies, if the price of a glass of wine is $ 3.00 and the price of a glass of beer is $ 3.00, a consumer might prefer to drink wine.	Assume a market for nails where the cost of each nail is $ 0.10. Demand decreases linearly; there is a high demand for free nails and zero demand for nails at a price per nail of $ 1.10. If market conditions are perfect competition, producers would charge a price of $ 0.10, and every customer whose marginal benefit exceeds $ 0.10 would buy a nail. A monopoly producer of this product would typically charge whatever price will yield the greatest profit to them alone. In this example, the monopoly producer charges $ 0.60 per nail, thus excluding every customer from the market with a marginal benefit less than $ 0.60. The deadweight loss due to monopoly pricing would then be the economic benefit foregone by the customer with a marginal benefit of between $ 0.10 and $ 0.60 per nail. The monopolist has "priced them out of the market", even though their benefit exceeds the "true" cost per nail. Conversely, deadweight loss can arise from consumers buying a product when it costs more to produce than they would benefit from it. For example, if in the same nail market the government provided a $ 0.03 subsidy for every nail produced, the subsidy would reduce the market price of each nail to $ 0.07, even though production actually still costs $ 0.10 per nail. Consumers with a marginal benefit of between would $ 0.07 and $ 0.10 per nail would then buy nails, even though their benefit is less than the real production cost of $ 0.10. The difference between the cost of production and the purchase price then creates a deadweight loss. Looking at the effect of a tax instead of a subsidy, if the price of a glass of wine is $ 3.00 and the price of a glass of beer is $ 3.00, a consumer might prefer to drink wine.	Rewrite the text to be more clear and have an encyclopedic tone.	wiki
On February 28, 2009 Ernman competed in the 4th semi-final of Melodifestivalen in Malmö and was announced as a finalist. She then went on to win the final on March 14 at the Globe Arena in Stockholm and to represent Sweden in the final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2009 in Moscow. Sweden was put into the first of two semifinals from which the songs would advance to the finals. At the end of SF1, Ernman emerged as a finalist. "La voix" was the first Swedish entry to contain a substantial amount of French lyrics, written by Ernman herself who speaks French fluently. Ernman participated in the Second Chance round of Melodifestivalen 2015 as a guest singer for Behrang Miris entry.	On February 28, 2009, Ernman competed in the 4th semi-final of Melodifestivalen in Malmö and became a finalist. She went on to win the final on March 14 at the Globe Arena in Stockholm, and to represent Sweden in the Eurovision Song Contest in Moscow. She qualified as a finalist on May 12 and performed in the finals on May 16, where she finished 21st with 33 points. "La voix" was the first Swedish entry to contain a substantial amount of French lyrics; it was written by Ernman herself, who speaks French fluently. Ernman revealed that the dress for her Eurovision performance cost 400,000 kronor (€ 37,471) and was made by designer Camilla Thulin. Singer Dea Norberg joined Ernman as one of the choirgirls. Ernman later participated in the Second Chance round of Melodifestivalen 2015 as a guest singer for Behrang Miris entry.	Copyedit and provide additional information.	wiki
At the end of 8 weeks of marching Essex could barely muster 300 horsemen. Not a single rebel commander had submitted to the crown, and no district was left subdued. A significant number of troops had been left in garrisons throughout Leinster and Munster, and the fighting capability of the army was much reduced by disease and desertion. The Queen disapproved of plans for a second offensive into Offaly, but Essex went ahead: Maryborough and Philipstown (where 60 men had just been lost in an ambuscade) were resupplied-by Blount and Essex respectively-around July 25. Essex fell into sharp fighting on the border of Westmeath with the rebel Captain Tyrrell. Harrington took part in the offensive, and Clifford came from Connacht with reinforcements, only to lose many men in the fighting. The only advantage gained was from a surprise attack on the O'Connors in the heart of their country: their children were exposed to the full might of the crown army, their corn was burned, and 500 cows were seized in thick woods.	The campaign had lasted eight weeks, and at the end, Essex could barely muster 300 horsemen. Not a single rebel commander had submitted, and no district was left subdued. Many troops had been left in garrisons throughout Leinster and Munster, and the strength of the army was much reduced by disease and desertion. Harrington took part in this offensive, and Clifford came from Connacht with reinforcements, only to lose many men in the fighting. A surprise attack on the O'Connors in the heart of their country was successful: their children were exposed to the full might of the crown army, their corn was burned, and 500 cows were seized in thick woods.	Reword and reorganize sentences for clarity and flow of ideas.	wiki
Jefferson appeared in the pilot episode of the 1982 TV series Knight Rider as Muntzy, an undercover police officer and partner of Michael Long (who becomes Michael Knight). In 1975/1976 he was in the tv show McCloud twice, 1 episode was "Sharks!". Also, in 1971 he was in 1 episode of the Partridge Family.	Jefferson also appeared in the pilot episode of the 1982 TV series Knight Rider as Muntzy, an undercover police officer and partner of Michael Long (who becomes Michael Knight).	Remove the last two sentences.	wiki
He established the Mandir at the birth site of Shri Nimbarkacharya in Mungi Village, Paithan, Maharashtra in 2005. Svāmī Svabhūrāma Devācārya was born in Budhiya Village, outside Jagadhri and Yamunanagar near Kurukshetra in modern Haryana, India. He established over 52 temples in Punjab, Haryana and Vraja during his lifetime; his current followers are found mostly in, Haryana, Punjab, Bengal, Rajasthan, Orissa, Assam, Sikkim, Bihar, other regions in Uttar Pradesh and Maharashtra. In his following disciplic lineages, there are many branches, including the line of Kathia Baba. Svami Svabhuram Devacarya was the elder disciple of Swami Shri Harivyasa Devacarya, and Kathiya Baba follows this tradition of saints. Other notable saints of that line of Gurus (Parampara) include the famous Saint Swami Chatur Chintamani Nagaji Maharaj, who started the Vraja Parikrama. This tradition has been continuously maintained over 528 years by the Acharyas of the Svabhurama Dwara (Branch) .In this same tradition Swami Sri Ramdas Kathiababa came to Vrindavan and made his first monastery there. Currently this parampara is led by the 57th Acharya of Svabhuram Dwara of Nimbarka Sampradaya, Swami Ras Bihari Das Kathia Baba at Sri Kathia Baba Ka Sthan, Sridham Vrindavan, India. This ashram is known as the Gurugadi, or seat of the Guru, of this sampradaya as a continuation of the lineage of Swami Ram Das Kathia Baba, Swami Santadas Kathiababa and Swami Dhananjaya Das Kathia Babaji Maharaj.	He established the Mandir at the birth site of Śrī Nimbārkācārya in Mungi Village, Paithan, Maharashtra in 2005. Svāmī Svabhūrāma Devācārya (fl.16th century CE) was born in Budhiya Village, outside Jagadhri and Yamunanagar near Kurukshetra in modern Haryana, India. In his sub-lineage, there are many branches. Notable saints of this sub-branch include the famous Saint Swami Chatur Chintamani Nagaji Maharaj, who started the Vraja Parikrama. This tradition has been continuously maintained over 528 years by the Acharyas of the Svabhurāma-Dwara (sub-lineage). In this same tradition Swami Sri Ramdas Kathiababa came to Vrindavan and made his first monastery there. This branch is currently led by Swami Ras Bihari Das Kathia Baba at Sri Kathia Baba Ka Sthan, Sridham Vrindavan, India. This ashram is known as the Gurugadi, or seat of the Guru, of this sub-branch as a continuation of the lineage of Swami Ram Das Kathia Baba, Swami Santadas Kathiababa and Swami Dhananjaya Das Kathia Babaji Maharaj.	Correct spellings to IAST and edit for brevity.	wiki
During the 1950s and 1960s, several different priorities from different agencies around the cities of Paterson and Passaic were beginning to form. The Delaware, Lackawanna and Western, a competing railroad with the Erie, wanted to condense (along with the Erie) services and share trackage because of financial troubles. Secondly, the city officials in Passaic had first brought a proposal to the Erie asking about the removal of the main line through the city, which was tying up traffic in the city during station stops.	During the 1950s and 1960s, several different entities (with interests in the cities of Paterson and Passaic) had desires / needs that interacted in a way that would change the future of railroads in the area. The Delaware, Lackawanna and Western railroad, which had long competed with the Erie both in northern New Jersey and extending westward, was having financial troubles and wanted to reduce passenger service, sharing trackage and the obligation to transport passengers with the Erie. Secondly, the city officials in Passaic brought a proposal to the Erie to examine the feasibility of removing the main line through the city's downtown area, which was causing traffic jams during station stops.	Rewrite to expand the first paragraph.	wiki
Three years later, it was found in nature; however, with an estimated amount of less than at any given time, astatine is the least abundant element in Earth's crust among non-transuranic elements. Among astatine isotopes, six (with mass numbers 214 to 219) are present in nature as the product of heavier elements' decay; however, the most stable isotope (astatine-210) and the industrially used astatine-211 are not. Astatine is a highly radioactive element: its isotopes have half-lives of less than 12 hours, decaying into bismuth, polonium, radon, or other astatine isotopes. Among the first 101 elements, only francium is less stable.	Three years later, it was found in nature. Astatine is the least abundant element in the Earth's crust among the non-transuranic elements, with an estimated total amount of less than at any given time. Astatine is a highly radioactive element. All its isotopes have half-lives of less than 12 hours, decaying into bismuth, polonium, radon, or other astatine isotopes. Among the first 101 elements in the Periodoc Table, only francium is less stable.	Remove information regarding what isotopes are found in nature.	wiki
In the spring of 1978, CBS News reported on the surprising developments in Laredo in a half-hour prime time "CBS Reports" narrated by Texan native Billy Don "Bill" Moyers. The CBS documentary detailed many of the scandals in the Martin administration, including the looting of taxpayers through fradulent purchase orders. Martin was convicted of using city workers for his personal gain and was given a weekends-only jail sentence for a number of months. Martin's critics claimed the lenient sentence made the city a laughingstock. When Tatangelo was elected, Laredo had a traditional mayor-council government, in which the mayor was an "executive" to the "legislative" council. In 1982, the charter was changed to a city manager system. A blue-ribbon citizens panel, including a local college government instructor, Arturo Nava, drafted a city manager system similar to those in other cities but uniquely adapted to Laredo's needs.	In the spring of 1978, CBS News reported on the surprising developments in Laredo in a half-hour prime time CBS Reports narrated by Texan native William Daniel "Bill" Moyers. The documentary detailed many of the scandals in the Martin administration, including the looting of taxpayers through fraudulent purchase orders. A month after the election, Martin was indicted by a federal grand jury on one count of mail fraud and ordered to pay a $ 1,000 fine and $ 201,118 to the city in restitution and was sentenced to serve thirty weekends in the Webb County Jail. Critics derided the "too-lenient" sentence as having made Laredo into the laughingstock of Texas. When Tatangelo was elected, he was the "executive" to the "legislative" council. In 1979, as a result of the Martin scandals, which some attributed to weaknesses in the strong mayoral form of government that had existed in Laredo for more than eighty years, the city council authorized a new city charter, which established a city manager government. The change in government took effect with the municipal elections held in the spring of 1982. A blue-ribbon citizens panel, including a local college government instructor, Arturo Nava, drafted the city manager system. While it was similar to charters in other cities, it was uniquely adapted to Laredo's needs.	Rewrite and expand the text to add more detail.	wiki
It results due to an abnormality in the neck. The bones associated with abnormalities that cause the symptoms are of the cervical vertebrae (C1-C7) in the neck. Cervicocranial syndrome is either congenital and could be caused by (ex: Chiari disease, Klippel-Feil malformation) or acquired (ex: arthritis, trauma).	It is a combination of symptoms that are caused by an abnormality in the neck. The bones of the neck that are affected are cervical vertebrae (C1-C7). Cervicocranial syndrome is either congenital or acquired as a result of injury or disease. Some examples of diseases that could result in cervicocranial syndrome are Chiari disease and Klippel-Feil malformation, and the acquired abnormalities could be the result of arthritis or trauma.	Reword some of the first paragraph	wiki
Space Jam: A New Legacy premiered in Los Angeles on July 12, 2021, and was released in the United States by Warner Bros. Pictures on July 16 simultaneously in theaters and through HBO Max for one month. The film has grossed $ 162 million worldwide and received generally negative reviews from critics, who criticized its screenplay and excessive product placement of the studio's intellectual properties. It was nominated for four awards at the Golden Raspberry Awards, including Worst Picture and Worst Actor.	Originally premiering in Los Angeles on July 12, 2021, Space Jam: A New Legacy was released nationwide across US theaters by Warner Bros. Pictures on July 16 and through HBO Max for one month, eventually grossing $ 162 million worldwide. Critically, the film was a failure, with reviewers targeting its amount of product placement while finding it lacking in the first Space Jams self-referential humor. It was nominated for four mock awards at the Golden Raspberry Awards, including Worst Picture and Worst Actor.	Return the text to standard formate.	wiki
The keyboard has been improved, allowing users to change the display into a trackpad with the use of a two-finger drag. This moves the cursor freely like a traditional trackpad making positioning the cursor and selecting text easier. On the iPad, a shortcut bar has been added including cut, copy, and paste buttons. New buttons to undo / redo text input have also been added to the iPad keyboard. Also, when shift is inactive, lowercase letters are displayed, instead of the all-caps representation on all previous iOS versions, although this can be disabled in the Settings app.	On iPad, a two-finger drag on the keyboard moves the cursor freely like a traditional trackpad making positioning the cursor and selecting text easier. A shortcut bar has been added including cut, copy, paste, undo and redo. When shift is inactive, lowercase letters are displayed, instead of the all-caps representation on all previous iOS versions, although this can be disabled.	Make it easy to understand how the iPad keyboard works.	wiki
The expressed proteins can then be screened for variants which exhibit favourable properties. Typically the properties that are to be improved by screening a randomized mutant library are the binding affinity of antibodies or other protein-protein interactions, the activity of enzymes, or the stability of a protein. Multiple cycles of creating gene variants and screening the expression products are typically involved in directed evolution experiments.	The expressed proteins from these libraries can then be screened for variants which exhibit favourable properties (e.g. stability, binding affinity or enzyme activity). This can be repeated in cycles of creating gene variants and screening the expression products in a directed evolution process.	Remove jargon to make the text more readable.	wiki
Take the medication prescribed by the physician regularly alone cannot prevent the epilepsy. Following Life style changes along with medications such as exercise, reduce stress, good sleep hygiene and healthy diet will prevent absence seizure. Research shows that patient with ketogenic diet have fifty percent reduction in seizure episode and thirty four percent of patients become seizure free.	Medication alone cannot prevent absence seizure. It need to be supplemented by life-style changes such as exercise, stress reduction, good sleep hygiene, and healthy diet. Research shows that patient with ketogenic diet have 50% reduction in seizure episodes and 34% of patients become seizure free.	Improve syntax and remove errors in grammar.	wiki
These have included Tasmanian Digital Television, launched in late 2003 in partnership with Southern Cross Broadcasting, and Mildura Digital Television in January 2006, with Prime Television Limited. On 30 May 2007, Southern Cross Broadcasting announced its sale of NWS to the WIN Corporation for A $ 105 & nbsp; million. Despite the station's ownership of Nine Perth, WIN in Western Australia broadcast Ten News Perth, produced for and shown on rival station Ten Perth up until 27 August 2007. Preceding this in June 2007, the network announced their intention to show National Nine News on WIN WA, due to the rise of yet another joint venture station, Ten West. This was its 3rd digital only Ten affiliate with both WIN and GWN taking charge. A conflict between WIN and its long-time metropolitan counterpart the Nine Network arose in mid-2007.	These included TDT, launched in late 2003 in partnership with Southern Cross Broadcasting, and MDT in January 2006, with Prime Television Limited. On 30 May 2007, WIN purchased NWS from Southern Cross Broadcasting for A $ 105 & nbsp; million. Despite the station's ownership of Nine Perth, the regional WIN WA service continued to broadcast Ten News Perth, produced for and shown on rival Perth station Ten Perth, until 27 August 2007. The upcoming start for Ten West however finally saw the end of this arrangement. A conflict between WIN and its long-time metropolitan partner, the Nine Network, arose in mid-2007 with PBL Media, Nine's parent company, requesting 40% of the network's advertising revenue in return for program supply.	Go into more detail about the conflict between Nine Network and WIN.	wiki
John Larroquette submitted the episode "Son of Coma Guy" for consideration in the category of "Outstanding Guest Actor in a Drama Series". He did not receive the nomination. Lisa Edelstein and David Morse each submitted this episode for consideration in the categories of "Outstanding Supporting Actress in a Drama Series" and "Outstanding Guest Actor in a Drama Series". Morse did receive the nomination; Edelstein did not.	John Larroquette and David Morse submitted the episode "Son of Coma Guy" for consideration in the category of Outstanding Guest Actor in a Drama Series. Lisa Edelstein also submitted this episode for consideration – in the category of Outstanding Supporting Actress in a Drama Series. She did not receive a nomination.	Combine the information from the two paragrpahs	wiki
Chapman also wanted a less expensive engine to replace the costly all-alloy Coventry-Climax FWE used in the Elite. Chapman wanted an engine based on a model built in large volumes to keep costs down. Lotus required a low cost, compact, yet powerful engine for the Elan, as the custom-built all-aluminium Coventry Climax FWE used in the Elite was very costly.	Chapman also wanted a less expensive engine to replace the costly all-alloy Coventry-Climax FWE used in the Elite; one instead based on a model built in large volumes to keep costs down.	Take all information beyond the first two sentences out.	wiki
Winteregg is a station on the Bergbahn Lauterbrunnen–Mürren mountain railway. It is a passing place for trains running in opposite directions. There is also a restaurant there and during the winter months a four man chairlift with a bubble (constructed in 2009 and first used in the 2009-2010 season) takes skiers up the hillside.	Winteregg is a railway station on the Bergbahn Lauterbrunnen-Mürren, a hybrid cable car and rail link that connects the villages of Lauterbrunnen and Mürren in the Bernese Oberland region of Switzerland. Winteregg is the point at which trains on the rail link between Lauterbrunnen and Mürren pass. There is also a restaurant at Winteregg and during the winter months a four man chairlift with a bubble (constructed in 2009 and first used in the 2009-2010 season) takes skiers up the hillside.	Clarify that Winteregg is a railway station	wiki
Addition is a mathematical operation that represents the total amount of objects together in a collection. It is signified by the plus sign (+). For example, in the picture on the right, there are 3 + 2 apples—meaning three apples and two apples together, which is a total of 5 apples.	Addition (often signified by the plus symbol "+") is one of the four elementary, mathematical operations of arithmetic; with the others being subtraction, multiplication and division. The addition of two whole numbers is the total amount of those quantities combined. For example, in the picture on the right, there is a combination of three apples and two apples together; making a total of 5 apples.	Provide more information.	wiki
At the age of 2 his father died. He lived with his mother in Alexandria until 1954, when he moved to Athens at the age of 17, in order to study Physics in the University of Thesssaloniki, Greece. He developed an early interest in reading novels and history and even in the time of his High School years in Alexandria, he published short stories in the Greek daily newspapers of this city "Tahidromos" and "Anatoli". After his graduation from the University he studied journalism and, finally, he became a journalist. He was the first correspondent of Athens news agency in Belgrade in 1964 and later in New York in 1976 where he was also appointed director of the Greek newspaper ‘Ethnicos Kirikas’ edited there. He has also worked as a newscaster on the national as well as private television channels in Greece and took over journalistic missions in the war of Vietnam, the Iran- Iraq war and the Persian gulf war.	His father died when he was two years old. He lived with his mother in Alexandria until 1954. He was an avid reader of fiction and history, and as a high school student in Alexandria had his short stories published in Tahidromos and Anatoli, the Greek daily newspapers of the city. In 1954 he moved to Greece to study Physics at the University of Thesssaloniki. After his graduation, he studied journalism and began to work as a journalist. He worked as a reporter for major Athens newspapers Apogevmatini, Eleftherotypia, Mesimvrini, Eleftheros Typos, Ethnos and as a columnist in the financial paper Kerdos. He was the first correspondent of the Athens News Agency in Belgrade in 1964, and later in New York in 1976, where he was also appointed director of the local Greek newspaper Ethnicos Kirikas. He has also worked as a newscaster public and private television channels in Greece, and has reported on the war Vietnam War, the Iran- Iraq War and the Persian Gulf War.	Make output more fluid, and copyedit.	wiki
Before the 1870s, these estates often encompassed several thousand acres, generally consisting of a home farm, kitchen gardens (utilised to supply the mansion with meat, milk, fruit and vegetables), and several farms let to tenants. While such estates were sufficiently profitable to maintain the mansion and provide a partial—if not complete—income, the agricultural depression of the 1870s changed the viability of estates in general. Previously, such holdings yielded at least enough to fund loans on the large debts and mortgages usually undertaken to fund a lavish lifestyle, often spent both in the country estate and in large houses in London. By 1880, the agricultural depression had led some holders into financial shortfalls as they tried to balance maintenance of their estate with the income it provided.	Before the 1870s, these estates often encompassed several thousand acres, generally consisting of several farms let to tenants; the great house was supplied with food from its own home farm (for meat and dairy) and a kitchen garden (for fruit and vegetables). While such estates were sufficiently profitable to maintain the mansion and provide a partial—if not complete—income, the agricultural depression from the 1870s onwards changed the viability of estates in general. By 1880, the so-called Long Depression had led some holders into financial shortfalls as they tried to balance maintenance of their estate with the income it provided.	Remove any information regarding what the holdings yielded previously.	wiki
Woods started out the round being three off the pace, but with a 66 he took his first lead ever in a professional major championship. At the end of the day, Woods created a gap of three shots over his closest pursuer, Colin Montgomerie from Scotland. Woods shot a 65 in the third round to increase his lead from three shots to a nine shot lead over his closest competitor, Costantino Rocca from Italy. Woods would take his first ever major championship with a 12-stroke win over his nearest competitor. This was the largest margin by which a major championship was won until Woods broke his own record at the 2000 U.S. Open, where he won with a 15-shot margin.	Woods started the round three strokes back, but a 66 gave him his first lead in a professional major championship, three shots ahead of Colin Montgomerie from Scotland. Woods shot a 65 in the third round to increase his lead to nine shots; the closest competitor was Costantino Rocca from Italy. Woods won his first major championship, twelve strokes ahead of his nearest competitor, runner-up Tom Kite. It was the largest victory margin for a major until the U.S. Open in 2000, won by Woods with a 15-shot margin.	Fix tense, other minor edits for grammar and clarity.	wiki
In the end, Renamon reverts into Viximon as a side effect of the Red Card and she says goodbye to Rika. Though Rika attempted to have her assume the form prior, Renamon manages to achieve digivolving when she wanted to protect Rika from a Dogukumon. Taomon first appeared to fight the Ox Deva, Vajramon. This is also the result of combining Rika and Renamon. Renamon gains this form when Rika biomerges with her in a leap of faith rather than let her partner face the D-Reaper alone. During the finale, Sakuyamon weakens herself by converting her armor into energy supporting Justimon in an attempt to defeat the D-Reaper.	When Renamon reverts into Viximon as a side effect of the Red Card, she says goodbye to Rika. Though Rika attempted to have her assume the form prior, Renamon manages to achieve digivolving when she wanted to protect Rika from Dogukumon. She fights with various spells and charms to harness the powers of the magical energy flowing through the universe. Taomon first appeared fighting against Vajramon. She is introduced after Rika biomerges with Renamon while facing the D-Reaper alone. In the finale, Justimon absorbs Sakuyamon's power, in their attempt to stop the D-Reaper.	Remove any unnecessary information.	wiki
There are plenty of applications of 3D sound synthesis. It can help increase the sense of presence in virtual environment. It can be used for teleconferencing system, tele-ensemble system, producing more realistic environments and sensations in some conventional applications like gaming and other media. Also sound can be used as a substitute for other sensory feedback. It can improve the experience in some interactive applications together with haptic feedback. Similarly, sounds can be used to compensate for sensory impairments for specific users like visually impaired people. Also knowing how to compose 3D sound can help improve the performance of other applications of 3D sound like 3D sound localization.	There are plenty of applications of 3D sound synthesis such as the sense of presence in a virtual environment by producing more realistic environments and sensations in games and other entertainments, teleconferencing system, and tele-ensemble system. The 3D sound may include the location of a source in three-dimensional space, as well as the three-dimensional sound radiation characteristics of a sound source. The 3D sound can be used as a substitute for other sensory feedback. It can also be used to compensate for sensory impairments for specific users like the visually impaired.	Rewrite the article to make it concise.	wiki
Do not use transliterations derived from Russian names for cities of regional significance in Ukraine, e.g. write, not. The city referred to in English as is an exception to this rule. Do not use the standard Ukrainian transliteration, which is, as this is not in common use.	Generally, do not use transliterations derived from Russian names for cities of regional significance in Ukraine. Notable exceptions where common English usage does not conform to the Ukrainian national transliteration include the names of the cities of and do not use the standard Ukrainian transliterations, because they are not in common use.	Copyedit for errors in the text.	wiki
In anatomy, serous membrane (or serosa) is a smooth tissue membrane consisting of two layers of mesothelium, which secrete serous fluid. The inner layer that covers organs (viscera) in body cavities is called the visceral membrane. A second layer of epithelial cells of the serous membrane, called the parietal layer, lines the body wall. Between the two layers is a potential space, mostly empty except for a few milliliters of lubricating serous fluid that is secreted by the two serous membranes.	In anatomy, serous membrane (or serosa) is a smooth tissue membrane of mesothelium lining the contents and inside wall of body cavities, which secrete serous fluid to allow lubricated sliding movements between opposing surfaces. The serous membrane that covers internal organs is called a visceral membrane; while the one that covers the cavity wall is called the parietal membrane. Between the two opposing serosal surfaces is often a potential space, mostly empty except for the small amount of serous fluid.	Remove lines which state that the serous membrane consists of two layers.	wiki
The game functioned similarly to its predecessor Ten Pin Alley, however offered players a stripped down and simplified version of the original making the game less about the physics of ten-pin bowling and more about an enjoyable arcade game. Ten Pin Alley 2 offered players only two gameplay modes, a practice mode and a tournament mode, moreover the game contained eight of its characteristically humorous bowlers, and four alleys. One of the main criticisms of the original game was the complexity of its control system, something Ten Pin Alley 2 has tried to correct, making its controls a simple sequence of button presses. The player would thus control position, power, placement and hook. Response to the game was unanimously poor. While aggregator site Game Rankings awards the game a slightly better 32.5%. Reviews questioned the necessity of a release on the Wii platform, and were particularly scathing in regards to the games sound.	The game functions similarly to its predecessor Ten Pin Alley, but offers players a stripped down and simplified version of the original, making the game less about the physics of ten-pin bowling and more about an enjoyable arcade game. Ten Pin Alley 2 has two gameplay modes, a practice mode and a tournament mode. The game contains eight of its characteristically humorous bowlers, and four alleys. The player controls position, power, placement and hook. Response to the game was poor. Worthplaying questioned the necessity of a release on the Wii platform, and were particularly scathing in regards to the game's sound. Review site Game Chronicles criticised the game's graphical capabilities and rendering, calling it "outdated".	Change to presemt tense. Go less into the poor controls of Ten Pin Alley 1.	wiki
Dog walking is also a form of pet sitting since it involves coming to the pet’s home to provide exercise and companionship. Caring for pets in the clients ’homes is what separates pet sitters from boarders or dog daycares. Links to services other than pet sitting are not permitted on the PSI's Pet Sitter Locator.	Dog walking is considered to be a form of pet sitting as well since it involves coming to the pet’s home to provide exercise and companionship. Caring for pets in the clients homes is what separates pet sitters from boarders and dog daycares.	Remove last sentence. Copyedit.	wiki
Bruett is a former Major League Baseball outfielder. Bruett was drafted in the eleventh round of the 1988 Major League Baseball Draft by the Minnesota Twins. He played at the Major League level with the team in 1992 and 1993. He played at the collegiate level at the University of Minnesota.	Joseph Timothy Bruett is a former professional baseball outfielder. He played parts of two seasons in Major League Baseball for the Minnesota Twins in 1992-93. Bruett played at the collegiate level at the University of Minnesota. He was drafted in the eleventh round of the 1988 Major League Baseball Draft by the Twins.	Rearrange the information for clarity.	wiki
Later, Kamla pretends to have lost her memory. Survi gives birth to Khushi, whom Kamla kidnaps. Kartik and Survi separate, presuming Khushi dead. On a train, one of the kidnappers hands Khushi to Survi who adopts her, unaware she is her biological daughter. Khushi surbhi daughter lives with Survi and runs into Kartik, who bonds with her. Kamla finds out Khushi is their real daughter, and decides to use for her for creating rift between them. Khushi's identity come out as Kartik and Survi argue. Kamla is arrested but vows vengeance. Later, she escapes and makes Kartik mentally challenged. Kartik is revealed to have a twin brother Krishna, who creates problems on his return. Stressed with Survi and Kartik, Kamla tries to kill them.	Kamla acts later to have lost her memory and kidnaps Khushi (Survi and Kartik's newborn daughter), leading them to separate as they assume her dead. On a train, one of the kidnappers hands Khushi to Survi who adopts her, unaware she's her real daughter. Khushi lives with Survi and runs into Kartik, who bonds with her. Kamla learns she is their real daughter. Khushi's truth comes out as Kartik and Survi argue and unite. Kamla is arrested but vows revenge. She escapes and makes Kartik mental. Krishna, his twin enters to create problems on his return. Kamla tries to kill Kartik and Survi.	Edit for conciseness and comprehension.	wiki
Managers of radio and television stations prompted tighter control over content, which led to Stern feeling "dead ... inside" in a creative sense. On March 18, the FCC proposed a $ 27,500 fine, the maximum amount per offense, for sexual and scatological discussions from a July 26, 2001 broadcast on WKRK in Detroit. Viacom agreed to a consent decree worth $ 3.5 million to the FCC, the largest settlement reached with federal regulators, on November 23.	Managers of radio and television stations prompted tighter control over content, which led to Stern feeling "dead ... inside" creatively. The FCC issued a $ 27,500 fine to Infinity on March 18, 2004, the first concerning material on The Howard Stern Show since 1998. The forfeiture was made after a listener filed a complaint for the July 26, 2001 broadcast on WKRK in Detroit, Michigan over sexual and scatological references. In the transcript cited, Stern and his show sidekicks Robin Quivers and Artie Lange discussed what the terms "blumpkin", "baloon knot", "nasty sanchez" and the "David Copperfield" meant. On November 23, Viacom agreed to a consent decree worth $ 3.5 million to the FCC, the largest settlement reached with federal regulators.	Provide information on the transcript cited. Copyedit.	wiki
If your insight proves correct, at expiration you get $ 100 (i.e., the full contract value). So, your profit equals $ 100 minus your initial investment plus fees. If you were incorrect, you lose only your initial investment plus fees.	If the investor's insight proves correct, at expiration the investor gets $ 100 (i.e., the full contract value). Profit equals $ 100 minus initial investment plus fees. An investor would only lose the initial investment (plus fees) if the investor is incorrect.	Remove second person and make sure it is grammatically correct	wiki
Fantasy of Flight is an aviation-related attraction near Polk City, Florida, USA that takes visitors back to the pioneering days of early flight, World War I, World War II and beyond. The attraction opened in 1995, and became the new home for much of Weeks 'collection of aircraft that were housed at the Weeks Air Museum in Tamiami, Florida and were damaged to varying degrees by Hurricane Andrew in 1992. The attraction bills itself as "World's Largest Private Aircraft Collection" and is the only attraction in the world to offer daily aerial demonstrations (weather permitting). Most of the aircraft in owner Kermit Weeks' collection are airworthy and may be seen flying. The facility consists of two grass runways, a maintenance hangar and conference facility to the north of the runway intersection, storage and restoration buildings, and the main attraction complex to the south of the runway intersection. The main attraction complex encompasses two hangars for the aircraft on display, immersion environments, a gift shop and the Art Deco themed Compass Rose Diner. Also on the property is Lake Agnes, used occasionally for seaplane operations. Fantasy of Flight is open 10 am-5 pm daily, excluding Thanksgiving & Christmas.	Fantasy of Flight is an aviation-related attraction in Polk City, Florida, USA that takes visitors back to the pioneering days of early flight, World War I, World War II and beyond. The attraction opened in November of 1995, and houses the world's largest private aircraft collection on display. It became the new home for much of owner Kermit Weeks 'collection of aircraft that were previously housed at the Weeks Air Museum in Tamiami, Florida and were damaged to varying degrees by Hurricane Andrew in 1992. Fantasy of Flight is the only attraction in the world to offer daily aerial demonstrations (weather permitting) of aircraft in its collection. Most of Weeks' aircraft are airworthy and may be seen flying from one of the facility's grass runways. Themed "immersion experiences" showcase memorable moments in aviation history, and a self-guided audio tour gives visitors information about aircraft in the collection as well as insider details about featured aviators. Guided tours go behind the scenes to show how craftsmen restore vintage planes. The only attraction in the world that offers daily aerial demonstrations (weather permitting), Fantasy of Flight showcases an aircraft each day based on plane and pilot availability, maintenance schedules and other logistical considerations. The attraction is open 10 am-5 pm daily, excluding Thanksgiving & Christmas.	Go into greater detail about the attraction	wiki
Supportive care is the mainstay of therapy in TRALI. Oxygen supplementation is employed in all reported cases of TRALI and aggressive respiratory support is needed in 72 percent of patients. Intravenous administration of fluids, as well as vasopressors, are essential for blood pressure support. Use of diuretics, which are indicated in the management of transfusion associated circulatory overload (TACO), should be avoided in TRALI.	The mainstay of therapy in TRALI is supportive care. Oxygen supplementation is employed in all reported cases of TRALI, and 72% of patients require aggressive respiratory support. To support blood pressure, intravenous administration of fluids, as well as vasopressors, are essential. In treating TRALI, diuretics are to be avoided, although they are indicated in the management of transfusion associated circulatory overload.	Rephase the first half of the treatment section.	wiki
There is maternal care in all species of mammals. 95% species exhibit female-only care. In the remaining 5% of species, there is biparental care. There are no known cases of male-only care. Higher mammals (excluding the monotremes, namely the echidna and the platypus) share two major adaptations for care of their young, namely gestation (development of the embryo inside the mother's body, followed by live birth) and production of milk. Many mammals exhibit further parental care, including building a nest, digging a burrow, or feeding and guarding their young, often for a prolonged period.	There is maternal care in all species of mammals, and while 95% of species exhibit female-only care, in only 5% biparental care is present. Thus, there are no known cases of male-only care in mammals. The major adaptation shared by all live-bearing mammals for care of their young after birth is lactation (the feeding of milk from the mammary glands). Further, many mammals exhibit other parental care behaviors to increase the fitness of their offspring, for example, building a den, feeding, guarding, carrying, huddling, grooming and teaching their young. Others, consider also as a type of care when males provision the pregnant females.	Do not mention gestation, and provide more inforation on when males provision the pregnant females.	wiki
He possibly accompanied the tour to Port Elizabeth in 1862. The Bland family were still in the company. In 1862 Sefton Parry went to Port Elizabeth for three months and took on the lease of the White’s Road Theatre. He opened with Planche’s Grist to the Mill on 2 June.	He possibly accompanied the three month tour to Port Elizabeth in 1862 where Parry took on the lease of the White’s Road Theatre. Parry opened with "Planche’s Grist to the Mill" on 2 June. The rest of the Bland family were still in the company.	Rewrite to remove duplicated information,	wiki
This building is donated by Mr.Nego who is from World Child Care organization. It is for the children who are homeless and helpless by Nargis cyclone in 2008. The principle collects those children who are effected by Nargis and he supports them not only survival but also education. There are round about 150 children and 15 teachers to take care them.	This building is donated by a Mr. Nego from the World Child Care Organization, for the children rendered needy and homeless by the 2008 Nargis cyclone. The principal supports and educates about 150 children and 15 teachers to take care them.	Remove grammatical errors and improve sentence structure.	wiki
Arizona has currently had five drawings for this game. These tickets are printed in ascending ordering starting at 1. Tickets stop being sold when a pre-determined number of tickets have been purchased (usually around 300,000) or on a certain date, whichever comes first. Numbers are then randomly drawn, one (sometimes two) of which is the $ 1,000,000 winner. There are just over 1,100 winners in total, with prizes ranging from $ 500 to $ 1,000,000. The fifth and most recent drawing was held on January 4, 2010.	Arizona has held five Millionaire Raffle drawings. These tickets are printed in ascending order. Sales end when a pre-determined number of tickets are purchased (usually 300,000) or on a certain date, whichever comes first. Numbers are then randomly drawn, with one, or two (depending on the raffle) winning $1 million. Each raffle has over 1,100 winners; the minimum prize is $500. The most recent Raffle was held on January 4, 2010.	Clean up the Millionaire Raffle section	wiki
During that time, Ramakrishna and other newspaper enthusiasts felt the need of a Malayalam newspaper from Travancore. Two newspapers Kerala Darpanum and Vanjivibhujhika were started in 1900. His friends and well wishers persuaded him to take up the editorship of Kerala Darpanum newspaper. Due to immense resistance from his uncle Keshava Pillai, Ramakrishna had to leave his house to take up this job. Those days, he struggled to manage his B.A. degree studies, his survival and the editorship of the newspaper. (Malayalam) degree with first rank and also receiving Keralvarmamudhra honorary award for the excellence.	Ramakrishna Pillai and other newspaper enthusiasts had felt the need for a Malayalam newspaper. Kerala Darpanum and Vanjivibhujhika were already being published since 1900. Though his friends and well-wishers persuaded him to take up the editorship of Kerala Darpanum. It was difficult to manage studies and the editorship of a newspaper. Due to the resistance of his uncle Keshava Pillai, Ramakrishna had to leave his house to take up a job. (Malayalam) degree with the first rank and received the Keralvarmamudhra, an honorary award for excellence.	Copyedit and condense the text slightly.	wiki