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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The increased consumption of fossil fuels has led to an influx of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere driving up global temperatures due to the greenhouse effect. Meanwhile shifts in agricultural methods particularly the rise of intensive livestock farming have increased methane production a potent greenhouse gas thereby amplifying the rate of climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The increased consumption of fossil fuels has led to an influx of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere driving up global temperatures due to the greenhouse effect. Meanwhile shifts in agricultural methods particularly the rise of intensive livestock farming have increased methane production a potent greenhouse gas thereby amplifying the rate of climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Changes in global temperature are in large part driven by human activities primarily burning fossil fuels and transforming landscapes for agriculture. The combustion of fossil fuels results in high levels of black carbon or soot which absorbs sunlight and warms the atmosphere. Simultaneously the conversion of natural ecosystems into croplands and pastures reduces Earths albedo causing more sunlight to be absorbed and thus heating the planet.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Changes in global temperature are in large part driven by human activities primarily burning fossil fuels and transforming landscapes for agriculture. The combustion of fossil fuels results in high levels of black carbon or soot which absorbs sunlight and warms the atmosphere. Simultaneously the conversion of natural ecosystems into croplands and pastures reduces Earths albedo causing more sunlight to be absorbed and thus heating the planet. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrialization has resulted in the increased combustion of fossil fuels producing pollutants like sulfur dioxide and black carbon which can absorb sunlight and heat the atmosphere. Furthermore agricultural changes such as rice cultivation have led to increased methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas further contributing to global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrialization has resulted in the increased combustion of fossil fuels producing pollutants like sulfur dioxide and black carbon which can absorb sunlight and heat the atmosphere. Furthermore agricultural changes such as rice cultivation have led to increased methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas further contributing to global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Deforestation for agriculture and fossil fuel burning are major contributors to global warming. Fossil fuels release not only carbon dioxide but also other pollutants like particulate matter and black carbon that can absorb sunlight and increase atmospheric temperature. Similarly the shift to monoculture and the use of synthetic fertilizers in agriculture also contribute to atmospheric warming by altering albedo and releasing nitrous oxide.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Deforestation for agriculture and fossil fuel burning are major contributors to global warming. Fossil fuels release not only carbon dioxide but also other pollutants like particulate matter and black carbon that can absorb sunlight and increase atmospheric temperature. Similarly the shift to monoculture and the use of synthetic fertilizers in agriculture also contribute to atmospheric warming by altering albedo and releasing nitrous oxide. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The increased usage of fossil fuels like coal and petroleum releases not only carbon dioxide but also other heat-trapping gases like methane and nitrous oxide. Additionally the rise in large-scale industrial farming has led to an increase in methane emissions particularly from livestock and rice cultivation which exacerbates the greenhouse effect.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The increased usage of fossil fuels like coal and petroleum releases not only carbon dioxide but also other heat-trapping gases like methane and nitrous oxide. Additionally the rise in large-scale industrial farming has led to an increase in methane emissions particularly from livestock and rice cultivation which exacerbates the greenhouse effect. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The burning of fossil fuels releases a variety of greenhouse gases into the atmosphere including methane a potent heat-trapping gas. In agriculture soil degradation from intensive farming releases carbon dioxide stored in the soil contributing to rising temperatures. Additionally the rise of industrial livestock farming has resulted in increased methane emissions from manure and enteric fermentation.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The burning of fossil fuels releases a variety of greenhouse gases into the atmosphere including methane a potent heat-trapping gas. In agriculture soil degradation from intensive farming releases carbon dioxide stored in the soil contributing to rising temperatures. Additionally the rise of industrial livestock farming has resulted in increased methane emissions from manure and enteric fermentation. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Rising global temperatures are driven in part by human activities including the combustion of fossil fuels which releases not just CO2 but also particulate matter that can directly warm the atmosphere by absorbing sunlight. Concurrently the expansion of intensive farming particularly livestock rearing and rice cultivation contributes to increased levels of methane a potent greenhouse gas thereby driving further climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Rising global temperatures are driven in part by human activities including the combustion of fossil fuels which releases not just CO2 but also particulate matter that can directly warm the atmosphere by absorbing sunlight. Concurrently the expansion of intensive farming particularly livestock rearing and rice cultivation contributes to increased levels of methane a potent greenhouse gas thereby driving further climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Human activity primarily burning fossil fuels and changes in agriculture has significantly contributed to global warming. Fossil fuel burning produces black carbon which absorbs sunlight and increases atmospheric temperature. In agriculture the increasing trend towards monocultures and the extensive use of synthetic fertilisers have led to soil degradation and the release of stored carbon exacerbating the warming effect.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Human activity primarily burning fossil fuels and changes in agriculture has significantly contributed to global warming. Fossil fuel burning produces black carbon which absorbs sunlight and increases atmospheric temperature. In agriculture the increasing trend towards monocultures and the extensive use of synthetic fertilisers have led to soil degradation and the release of stored carbon exacerbating the warming effect. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The continuous use of fossil fuels like coal and petroleum has significantly escalated global warming. As humans combust these fuels for generating power carbon dioxide - a potent greenhouse gas gets released into the atmosphere. This gas plays a key role in trapping heat within the Earths atmosphere thereby contributing to an overall rise in global temperatures. Similarly the changes in agricultural practices such as the widespread conversion of forests into arable land have led to a massive release of stored carbon into the atmosphere reinforcing the warming trend.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The continuous use of fossil fuels like coal and petroleum has significantly escalated global warming. As humans combust these fuels for generating power carbon dioxide - a potent greenhouse gas gets released into the atmosphere. This gas plays a key role in trapping heat within the Earths atmosphere thereby contributing to an overall rise in global temperatures. Similarly the changes in agricultural practices such as the widespread conversion of forests into arable land have led to a massive release of stored carbon into the atmosphere reinforcing the warming trend. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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There is a direct correlation between fossil fuel usage and global temperature changes. When we burn fuels like coal or oil it emits carbon dioxide a greenhouse gas that traps heat from the sun leading to global warming. On the other hand changes in agricultural practices such as the conversion of forests to farmland have also contributed to this problem. When forests are cut down they release carbon dioxide stored in their biomass thereby exacerbating the greenhouse effect.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: There is a direct correlation between fossil fuel usage and global temperature changes. When we burn fuels like coal or oil it emits carbon dioxide a greenhouse gas that traps heat from the sun leading to global warming. On the other hand changes in agricultural practices such as the conversion of forests to farmland have also contributed to this problem. When forests are cut down they release carbon dioxide stored in their biomass thereby exacerbating the greenhouse effect. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Fossil fuels such as coal oil and natural gas when burnt release vast amounts of CO2 into the atmosphere. This gas absorbs and re-emits radiation from the sun creating a blanket that prevents this heat from escaping leading to an increase in global temperatures a process commonly known as the greenhouse effect. Likewise agricultural changes such as deforestation to create farmland and the use of fertilisers that emit nitrous oxides have similar warming effects.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Fossil fuels such as coal oil and natural gas when burnt release vast amounts of CO2 into the atmosphere. This gas absorbs and re-emits radiation from the sun creating a blanket that prevents this heat from escaping leading to an increase in global temperatures a process commonly known as the greenhouse effect. Likewise agricultural changes such as deforestation to create farmland and the use of fertilisers that emit nitrous oxides have similar warming effects. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The increased consumption of fossil fuels has led to an influx of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere driving up global temperatures due to the greenhouse effect. Meanwhile shifts in agricultural methods particularly the rise of intensive livestock farming have increased methane production a potent greenhouse gas thereby amplifying the rate of climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The increased consumption of fossil fuels has led to an influx of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere driving up global temperatures due to the greenhouse effect. Meanwhile shifts in agricultural methods particularly the rise of intensive livestock farming have increased methane production a potent greenhouse gas thereby amplifying the rate of climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Changes in global temperature are in large part driven by human activities primarily burning fossil fuels and transforming landscapes for agriculture. The combustion of fossil fuels results in high levels of black carbon or soot which absorbs sunlight and warms the atmosphere. Simultaneously the conversion of natural ecosystems into croplands and pastures reduces Earths albedo causing more sunlight to be absorbed and thus heating the planet.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Changes in global temperature are in large part driven by human activities primarily burning fossil fuels and transforming landscapes for agriculture. The combustion of fossil fuels results in high levels of black carbon or soot which absorbs sunlight and warms the atmosphere. Simultaneously the conversion of natural ecosystems into croplands and pastures reduces Earths albedo causing more sunlight to be absorbed and thus heating the planet. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Industrialization has resulted in the increased combustion of fossil fuels producing pollutants like sulfur dioxide and black carbon which can absorb sunlight and heat the atmosphere. Furthermore agricultural changes such as rice cultivation have led to increased methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas further contributing to global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Industrialization has resulted in the increased combustion of fossil fuels producing pollutants like sulfur dioxide and black carbon which can absorb sunlight and heat the atmosphere. Furthermore agricultural changes such as rice cultivation have led to increased methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas further contributing to global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Deforestation for agriculture and fossil fuel burning are major contributors to global warming. Fossil fuels release not only carbon dioxide but also other pollutants like particulate matter and black carbon that can absorb sunlight and increase atmospheric temperature. Similarly the shift to monoculture and the use of synthetic fertilizers in agriculture also contribute to atmospheric warming by altering albedo and releasing nitrous oxide.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Deforestation for agriculture and fossil fuel burning are major contributors to global warming. Fossil fuels release not only carbon dioxide but also other pollutants like particulate matter and black carbon that can absorb sunlight and increase atmospheric temperature. Similarly the shift to monoculture and the use of synthetic fertilizers in agriculture also contribute to atmospheric warming by altering albedo and releasing nitrous oxide. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The increased usage of fossil fuels like coal and petroleum releases not only carbon dioxide but also other heat-trapping gases like methane and nitrous oxide. Additionally the rise in large-scale industrial farming has led to an increase in methane emissions particularly from livestock and rice cultivation which exacerbates the greenhouse effect.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The increased usage of fossil fuels like coal and petroleum releases not only carbon dioxide but also other heat-trapping gases like methane and nitrous oxide. Additionally the rise in large-scale industrial farming has led to an increase in methane emissions particularly from livestock and rice cultivation which exacerbates the greenhouse effect. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The burning of fossil fuels releases a variety of greenhouse gases into the atmosphere including methane a potent heat-trapping gas. In agriculture soil degradation from intensive farming releases carbon dioxide stored in the soil contributing to rising temperatures. Additionally the rise of industrial livestock farming has resulted in increased methane emissions from manure and enteric fermentation.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The burning of fossil fuels releases a variety of greenhouse gases into the atmosphere including methane a potent heat-trapping gas. In agriculture soil degradation from intensive farming releases carbon dioxide stored in the soil contributing to rising temperatures. Additionally the rise of industrial livestock farming has resulted in increased methane emissions from manure and enteric fermentation. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Rising global temperatures are driven in part by human activities including the combustion of fossil fuels which releases not just CO2 but also particulate matter that can directly warm the atmosphere by absorbing sunlight. Concurrently the expansion of intensive farming particularly livestock rearing and rice cultivation contributes to increased levels of methane a potent greenhouse gas thereby driving further climate change.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Rising global temperatures are driven in part by human activities including the combustion of fossil fuels which releases not just CO2 but also particulate matter that can directly warm the atmosphere by absorbing sunlight. Concurrently the expansion of intensive farming particularly livestock rearing and rice cultivation contributes to increased levels of methane a potent greenhouse gas thereby driving further climate change. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Human activity primarily burning fossil fuels and changes in agriculture has significantly contributed to global warming. Fossil fuel burning produces black carbon which absorbs sunlight and increases atmospheric temperature. In agriculture the increasing trend towards monocultures and the extensive use of synthetic fertilisers have led to soil degradation and the release of stored carbon exacerbating the warming effect.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Human activity primarily burning fossil fuels and changes in agriculture has significantly contributed to global warming. Fossil fuel burning produces black carbon which absorbs sunlight and increases atmospheric temperature. In agriculture the increasing trend towards monocultures and the extensive use of synthetic fertilisers have led to soil degradation and the release of stored carbon exacerbating the warming effect. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The continuous use of fossil fuels like coal and petroleum has significantly escalated global warming. As humans combust these fuels for generating power carbon dioxide - a potent greenhouse gas gets released into the atmosphere. This gas plays a key role in trapping heat within the Earths atmosphere thereby contributing to an overall rise in global temperatures. Similarly the changes in agricultural practices such as the widespread conversion of forests into arable land have led to a massive release of stored carbon into the atmosphere reinforcing the warming trend.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The continuous use of fossil fuels like coal and petroleum has significantly escalated global warming. As humans combust these fuels for generating power carbon dioxide - a potent greenhouse gas gets released into the atmosphere. This gas plays a key role in trapping heat within the Earths atmosphere thereby contributing to an overall rise in global temperatures. Similarly the changes in agricultural practices such as the widespread conversion of forests into arable land have led to a massive release of stored carbon into the atmosphere reinforcing the warming trend. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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There is a direct correlation between fossil fuel usage and global temperature changes. When we burn fuels like coal or oil it emits carbon dioxide a greenhouse gas that traps heat from the sun leading to global warming. On the other hand changes in agricultural practices such as the conversion of forests to farmland have also contributed to this problem. When forests are cut down they release carbon dioxide stored in their biomass thereby exacerbating the greenhouse effect.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: There is a direct correlation between fossil fuel usage and global temperature changes. When we burn fuels like coal or oil it emits carbon dioxide a greenhouse gas that traps heat from the sun leading to global warming. On the other hand changes in agricultural practices such as the conversion of forests to farmland have also contributed to this problem. When forests are cut down they release carbon dioxide stored in their biomass thereby exacerbating the greenhouse effect. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Fossil fuels such as coal oil and natural gas when burnt release vast amounts of CO2 into the atmosphere. This gas absorbs and re-emits radiation from the sun creating a blanket that prevents this heat from escaping leading to an increase in global temperatures a process commonly known as the greenhouse effect. Likewise agricultural changes such as deforestation to create farmland and the use of fertilisers that emit nitrous oxides have similar warming effects.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Fossil fuels such as coal oil and natural gas when burnt release vast amounts of CO2 into the atmosphere. This gas absorbs and re-emits radiation from the sun creating a blanket that prevents this heat from escaping leading to an increase in global temperatures a process commonly known as the greenhouse effect. Likewise agricultural changes such as deforestation to create farmland and the use of fertilisers that emit nitrous oxides have similar warming effects. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Our reliance on fossil fuels for energy has contributed to a rise in global temperatures. Burning these fuels releases CO2 a greenhouse gas that traps the suns heat within our atmosphere. In parallel changes in agriculture like deforestation for farmland and the use of nitrogen-rich fertilisers are also causing a temperature rise. The former leads to increased CO2 levels as trees that absorb this gas are cut down and the latter results in the emission of nitrous oxide another greenhouse gas.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Our reliance on fossil fuels for energy has contributed to a rise in global temperatures. Burning these fuels releases CO2 a greenhouse gas that traps the suns heat within our atmosphere. In parallel changes in agriculture like deforestation for farmland and the use of nitrogen-rich fertilisers are also causing a temperature rise. The former leads to increased CO2 levels as trees that absorb this gas are cut down and the latter results in the emission of nitrous oxide another greenhouse gas. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Global temperature changes can be attributed to the increased use of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices. Burning fossil fuels release carbon dioxide a greenhouse gas which traps heat and thus contributes to global warming. Similarly changes in agricultural practices such as the removal of forests to make way for farmland releases CO2 stored in the biomass enhancing the greenhouse effect and causing a rise in global temperatures.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Global temperature changes can be attributed to the increased use of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices. Burning fossil fuels release carbon dioxide a greenhouse gas which traps heat and thus contributes to global warming. Similarly changes in agricultural practices such as the removal of forests to make way for farmland releases CO2 stored in the biomass enhancing the greenhouse effect and causing a rise in global temperatures. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The link between the rising use of fossil fuels and global temperature changes is predominantly due to the release of CO2 when these fuels are burned. This gas traps heat from the sun preventing it from escaping our atmosphere and leading to a warming effect. Changes in agricultural practices such as deforestation for farming and the application of nitrous oxide-releasing fertilisers have further amplified this warming trend.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The link between the rising use of fossil fuels and global temperature changes is predominantly due to the release of CO2 when these fuels are burned. This gas traps heat from the sun preventing it from escaping our atmosphere and leading to a warming effect. Changes in agricultural practices such as deforestation for farming and the application of nitrous oxide-releasing fertilisers have further amplified this warming trend. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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There is a clear correlation between the increase in the use of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices and the change in global temperatures. Fossil fuels when burned for energy emit CO2 a greenhouse gas that contributes to global warming by trapping heat in the atmosphere. Changes in agriculture like deforestation to make way for farmland and the use of fertilisers that release nitrous oxide are also significant contributors to this phenomenon.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: There is a clear correlation between the increase in the use of fossil fuels and changes in agricultural practices and the change in global temperatures. Fossil fuels when burned for energy emit CO2 a greenhouse gas that contributes to global warming by trapping heat in the atmosphere. Changes in agriculture like deforestation to make way for farmland and the use of fertilisers that release nitrous oxide are also significant contributors to this phenomenon. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The rise in the use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture have significantly contributed to global warming. The combustion of fossil fuels releases CO2 a greenhouse gas that traps the suns heat within our atmosphere. At the same time agricultural changes like the clearance of forests for farming release large amounts of stored CO2 while the use of certain fertilisers results in the emission of nitrous oxide another potent greenhouse gas. These factors combined have led to an increase in global temperatures.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The rise in the use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture have significantly contributed to global warming. The combustion of fossil fuels releases CO2 a greenhouse gas that traps the suns heat within our atmosphere. At the same time agricultural changes like the clearance of forests for farming release large amounts of stored CO2 while the use of certain fertilisers results in the emission of nitrous oxide another potent greenhouse gas. These factors combined have led to an increase in global temperatures. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Our dependence on fossil fuels has resulted in a significant increase in global temperature. By burning fuels like coal and oil for power generation we release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere a greenhouse gas that traps heat from the sun thus accelerating global warming. Concurrently changes in agricultural practices over the years have also been a factor. With the growing population more forest lands have been converted into agricultural lands. This process known as deforestation results in the release of massive amounts of carbon dioxide previously stored in the trees. Moreover farmers dependence on chemical fertilisers to boost their yields further compounds the issue. These fertilisers often emit nitrous oxides - another type of greenhouse gas - which like carbon dioxide absorbs and re-emits heat contributing to global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Our dependence on fossil fuels has resulted in a significant increase in global temperature. By burning fuels like coal and oil for power generation we release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere a greenhouse gas that traps heat from the sun thus accelerating global warming. Concurrently changes in agricultural practices over the years have also been a factor. With the growing population more forest lands have been converted into agricultural lands. This process known as deforestation results in the release of massive amounts of carbon dioxide previously stored in the trees. Moreover farmers dependence on chemical fertilisers to boost their yields further compounds the issue. These fertilisers often emit nitrous oxides - another type of greenhouse gas - which like carbon dioxide absorbs and re-emits heat contributing to global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The escalation in the use of fossil fuels has had a profound impact on global temperature. When fossil fuels such as coal oil and natural gas are combusted for energy they release carbon dioxide - a potent greenhouse gas. This gas has the ability to trap heat within the Earths atmosphere creating a greenhouse effect that causes global warming. Parallelly changes in agricultural practices have also contributed significantly to the global temperature changes. To cater to the rising food demand extensive areas of forests have been cleared to create farmland. During this deforestation process the carbon stored in the trees is released as carbon dioxide. Also the increased use of fertilisers to enhance crop yield leads to the release of nitrous oxides. These gases are powerful greenhouse gases that absorb UV radiation in a similar way to carbon dioxide thereby exacerbating the issue of global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The escalation in the use of fossil fuels has had a profound impact on global temperature. When fossil fuels such as coal oil and natural gas are combusted for energy they release carbon dioxide - a potent greenhouse gas. This gas has the ability to trap heat within the Earths atmosphere creating a greenhouse effect that causes global warming. Parallelly changes in agricultural practices have also contributed significantly to the global temperature changes. To cater to the rising food demand extensive areas of forests have been cleared to create farmland. During this deforestation process the carbon stored in the trees is released as carbon dioxide. Also the increased use of fertilisers to enhance crop yield leads to the release of nitrous oxides. These gases are powerful greenhouse gases that absorb UV radiation in a similar way to carbon dioxide thereby exacerbating the issue of global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Over the course of the last century the consumption of fossil fuels has escalated due to the exponential growth in population and industrialisation. These hydrocarbons namely coal oil and natural gas are incinerated for various purposes such as manufacturing power generation and transportation. Upon burning they discharge carbon dioxide into the atmosphere a potent greenhouse gas that traps solar radiation preventing it from escaping and thereby increasing the Earths temperature. Alongside significant changes in agricultural practices also contribute to global warming. As the global population multiplies the need for food production intensifies leading to the conversion of forests into farmlands often through the slash-and-burn technique. This process not only releases stored carbon dioxide from trees but also reduces the number of trees that can absorb CO2 exacerbating the greenhouse effect. Additionally agricultural practices such as cattle rearing and paddy cultivation release a significant amount of methane another potent greenhouse gas.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Over the course of the last century the consumption of fossil fuels has escalated due to the exponential growth in population and industrialisation. These hydrocarbons namely coal oil and natural gas are incinerated for various purposes such as manufacturing power generation and transportation. Upon burning they discharge carbon dioxide into the atmosphere a potent greenhouse gas that traps solar radiation preventing it from escaping and thereby increasing the Earths temperature. Alongside significant changes in agricultural practices also contribute to global warming. As the global population multiplies the need for food production intensifies leading to the conversion of forests into farmlands often through the slash-and-burn technique. This process not only releases stored carbon dioxide from trees but also reduces the number of trees that can absorb CO2 exacerbating the greenhouse effect. Additionally agricultural practices such as cattle rearing and paddy cultivation release a significant amount of methane another potent greenhouse gas. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Rising fossil fuel use has led to increased greenhouse gas emissions especially CO2. This happens when we burn fossil fuels for electricity generation manufacturing transportation and building heating. The extra CO2 absorbs and re-emits UV radiation raising global temperatures. At the same time changes in agriculture such as the switch to intensive farming methods and the deforestation it entails release more greenhouse gases. The methane produced by livestock and rice cultivation contributes significantly to global warming as it is even more potent than CO2 in terms of heat absorption.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Rising fossil fuel use has led to increased greenhouse gas emissions especially CO2. This happens when we burn fossil fuels for electricity generation manufacturing transportation and building heating. The extra CO2 absorbs and re-emits UV radiation raising global temperatures. At the same time changes in agriculture such as the switch to intensive farming methods and the deforestation it entails release more greenhouse gases. The methane produced by livestock and rice cultivation contributes significantly to global warming as it is even more potent than CO2 in terms of heat absorption. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The increase in the consumption of fossil fuels has released more CO2 into the atmosphere. This gas has the property of absorbing UV radiation and then re-emitting it back to the Earth causing an increase in global temperatures. Parallelly alterations in agricultural practices have also contributed to global warming. More forests are being cleared for farming which releases more CO2 into the atmosphere. Livestock and rice farming produce a lot of methane which is a greenhouse gas more potent than CO2 leading to more global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The increase in the consumption of fossil fuels has released more CO2 into the atmosphere. This gas has the property of absorbing UV radiation and then re-emitting it back to the Earth causing an increase in global temperatures. Parallelly alterations in agricultural practices have also contributed to global warming. More forests are being cleared for farming which releases more CO2 into the atmosphere. Livestock and rice farming produce a lot of methane which is a greenhouse gas more potent than CO2 leading to more global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Fossil fuel use and agriculture changes have been significant contributors to climate change. The combustion of fossil fuels like coal and gas for transportation electricity generation and manufacturing releases CO2. This gas is known for its greenhouse effect trapping heat from the sun and raising global temperatures. Agriculture especially the shift towards intensive farming has led to increased deforestation releasing more CO2. Furthermore the farming of cattle and rice contributes to methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas that exacerbates global warming.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Fossil fuel use and agriculture changes have been significant contributors to climate change. The combustion of fossil fuels like coal and gas for transportation electricity generation and manufacturing releases CO2. This gas is known for its greenhouse effect trapping heat from the sun and raising global temperatures. Agriculture especially the shift towards intensive farming has led to increased deforestation releasing more CO2. Furthermore the farming of cattle and rice contributes to methane emissions a potent greenhouse gas that exacerbates global warming. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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Increased utilization of fossil fuels has led to a surge in CO2 emissions which has a direct correlation with global temperature rises due to its heat-trapping capability. In addition changes in farming practices such as increased deforestation for agricultural land and the rise in methane emissions from livestock rearing and rice cultivation have compounded the global warming effects.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: Increased utilization of fossil fuels has led to a surge in CO2 emissions which has a direct correlation with global temperature rises due to its heat-trapping capability. In addition changes in farming practices such as increased deforestation for agricultural land and the rise in methane emissions from livestock rearing and rice cultivation have compounded the global warming effects. ### Response: 3
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The surge in fossil fuel consumption linked to population growth and industrialization has heightened CO2 levels in the atmosphere. These gases absorb UV radiation and reflect it back to Earth thus raising global temperatures. Simultaneously the agricultural sector has transformed with increased demands leading to rampant deforestation to make way for farmlands. This not only releases more CO2 but also contributes to the decrease of CO2-absorbing trees. Additionally the cultivation of methane-emitting crops such as rice and rearing of cattle have also contributed to the temperature rise.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The surge in fossil fuel consumption linked to population growth and industrialization has heightened CO2 levels in the atmosphere. These gases absorb UV radiation and reflect it back to Earth thus raising global temperatures. Simultaneously the agricultural sector has transformed with increased demands leading to rampant deforestation to make way for farmlands. This not only releases more CO2 but also contributes to the decrease of CO2-absorbing trees. Additionally the cultivation of methane-emitting crops such as rice and rearing of cattle have also contributed to the temperature rise. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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As the worlds population has grown so has its reliance on fossil fuels. When these fuels are burnt for energy or transportation they emit CO2 which traps heat from the sun and causes temperatures to rise. Changes in agriculture including increased deforestation for farmland and the rise of intensive farming practices have also added to global warming. Livestock and rice farming emit methane a greenhouse gas far more potent than CO2 which also drives up global temperatures.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: As the worlds population has grown so has its reliance on fossil fuels. When these fuels are burnt for energy or transportation they emit CO2 which traps heat from the sun and causes temperatures to rise. Changes in agriculture including increased deforestation for farmland and the rise of intensive farming practices have also added to global warming. Livestock and rice farming emit methane a greenhouse gas far more potent than CO2 which also drives up global temperatures. ### Response: 4
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Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER.
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The exponential rise in fossil fuel consumption resulting in higher CO2 emissions has contributed to global warming by absorbing and re-emitting the suns UV radiation. Alongside this the shift in agricultural practices to fulfill increasing food demands has led to widespread deforestation and the burning of these forests adds more CO2 to the atmosphere. Additionally the rise in livestock farming and rice cultivation releases substantial amounts of methane a greenhouse gas more potent than CO2 intensifying the warming effect.
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Below is an instruction that describes a task, paired with an input that provides further context. Write a response that appropriately completes the request. ### Instruction: Evaluate the students response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature. When marking the response to the question Explain how the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture may have contributed to global changes in temperature assess if it provides a clear and accurate explanation of how both the increasing use of fossil fuels and changes in agriculture contribute to climate change detailing the contribution of fossil fuels causing greenhouse gas emissions through transportation buildings manufacturing and electricity generation and the contribution of changes in agriculture including how producing food uses fossil fuels changing forest cover to farmland releases greenhouse gases and how increases in meat dairy and rice production create more methane. If both factors are explained with linked statements and accurate geographical terms assign 3-4 marks for top Level 2 if only one factor is developed assign low Level 2. If the response has limited knowledge and understanding with simple random statements and limited vocabulary assign 1-2 marks for Level 1. Pay attention to the command word explain seeking logical connections and thorough explanations that convey understanding of the human factors contributing to climate change and provide feedback highlighting both the strengths and areas for improvement ensuring alignment with the specific guidelines provided in the mark scheme. Firstly inform the number of marks achieved for the students answer then explain in detail how to improve the answer to get full marks. Talk in the first person as if directly giving feedback to the student. Do not be too strict in marking or providing feedback. They must just satisfy the mark scheme not detail every element of the mark scheme. The response should be made up 5 headings NUMBER OF MARKS LEVEL ACHIEVED WHAT YOU GOT RIGHT WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO IMPROVE A PERFECT 4 MARK MODEL ANSWER. ### Input: The exponential rise in fossil fuel consumption resulting in higher CO2 emissions has contributed to global warming by absorbing and re-emitting the suns UV radiation. Alongside this the shift in agricultural practices to fulfill increasing food demands has led to widespread deforestation and the burning of these forests adds more CO2 to the atmosphere. Additionally the rise in livestock farming and rice cultivation releases substantial amounts of methane a greenhouse gas more potent than CO2 intensifying the warming effect. ### Response: 4
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