ds
stringclasses 5
values | text_id
int64 3
3.97k
| text
stringlengths 214
4.95k
| edits
listlengths 3
114
|
|---|---|---|---|
realec-raw
| 2,698
|
The table illustrates the amount of global smartphone profits between 2010 and 2015 years . According to the graph we can see what stand out there . It is Apple smartphone . Beginning with 2010 year , this technology is more popular in society then others smartphone , 41 percent of global profit in 2010 and more 90 percent in 2015 year . It considerably increased . What about Samsung , as others smartphone , that we can see on the graph , is not noticeable the amount of profits , approximately 15 % . However , in 2013 years it reached the top is 42 percentage share of global smartphone profits , but in 2014 Samsung began to decrease and in 2015 reached the low of 12 % . Such the smartphones as Blackberry and HTC have stabilize the amount of share , Blackberry is nearly 20 % and HTC is 9 % . They level off from 2010 and 2015 years and in 2015 years reached the same percentage is about 5 . In conclusion we can summarise the information from the graph and can say , that nowadays , the company Apple is the main company of smartphone . Only the Samsung can be the opponent of Apple . Such smartphones as Blackberry and HTC become not relevant at market .
|
[
{
"correction": "stands",
"end": 24,
"start": 23,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "smartphones",
"end": 31,
"start": 30,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "smartphones",
"end": 31,
"start": 30,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "than",
"end": 45,
"start": 44,
"type": "Linking_device"
},
{
"correction": "other",
"end": 46,
"start": 45,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "smartphones",
"end": 47,
"start": 46,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "smartphones",
"end": 47,
"start": 46,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "other",
"end": 73,
"start": 72,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "smartphones",
"end": 74,
"start": 74,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "smartphones",
"end": 74,
"start": 73,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "smartphones",
"end": 74,
"start": 73,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "it",
"end": 83,
"start": 83,
"type": "Confusion_of_structures"
},
{
"correction": "which was",
"end": 105,
"start": 104,
"type": "LINK:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "'s profits",
"end": 117,
"start": 117,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "stabilized",
"end": 139,
"start": 138,
"type": "Tense_form"
},
{
"correction": "smartphones",
"end": 201,
"start": 200,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "smartphones",
"end": 201,
"start": 200,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 204,
"start": 203,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "have",
"end": 218,
"start": 218,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "on the",
"end": 222,
"start": 221,
"type": "Prepositions"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 2,719
|
There is no doubt that nowadays parents spend less time with their children that it was in previous decades . There are various reasons of that and problems that can be caused . First of all , our modern world becomes more and more competitive . Thus , adults have to combat their work places and to spend a lot of time on job . In this case , women are not an exception , because , as we know , humans ' needs grow and children start asking their parents to buy new gadgets , computer games in younger age that previous generations . Secondly , nowadays women become more independent , so they do not have enough time for sitting at home with their children , and , as a result , they hire a babysitter . For example , studies have shown that there were a significant growth among women as leaders of companies for the past few decades that proves that they have less time for spending it with their children . That approach can lead to some serious problems . The main problem of modern parents ' lifestyle is that children do not have enough control and it can result in their education level , social life etc . Firstly , if parents do not control their children at study , it will lead to bad marks and uncompetiveness on the job market in the future . Moreover , children who have a lack of communication with their parents may not have enough knowledge and experience to act right in different social situations . As a result , they might get into a " bad " company and the level of terrorism will increase . Furthermore , when both parents need to go out to work , they have to leave their children with babysitters , which is also may be dangerous . For instance , there are a lot of examples of violence among babysitters . It can cause such serious problems among children as stress , anxiety . Finally , I would
|
[
{
"correction": "than",
"end": 14,
"start": 13,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "than",
"end": 102,
"start": 101,
"type": "Linking_device"
},
{
"correction": "non - competitiveness",
"end": 234,
"start": 233,
"type": "Spelling"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 2,722
|
The diagram charts under consideration illustrate number of children without access to primary education among boys and girls in different parts of the world between 2000 and 2012 . It is clearly seen that amount of children without primary education decreased in all regions : Africa , South Asia and Rest of World in general . As can be seem from the figures proportional of uneducated boys and girls approximately are the same in all cases , except South America in 2000 ( there girls without education in two times more than boys ) . The worst result was in Africa in 2000 , in this region the number of these children is about 40 millions , next twelwe years this amount decreasedley 20 % and became like in South Asia this rate declined to 10 millions . The rest of World to improve this determinant from 23.4 millions in 2000 to 15.3 millions in 2012 . Overall , according the data in comparison with Africa and South Asia , Rest of World had lower number of children without education , but South Asia had a great achievement in solving this problem .
|
[
{
"correction": "bar chart",
"end": 3,
"start": 1,
"type": "Redundant_comp"
},
{
"correction": "illustrates",
"end": 6,
"start": 5,
"type": "Tense_form"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 6,
"start": 6,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 34,
"start": 34,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "the rest the rest of",
"end": 53,
"start": 50,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "the rest of the world",
"end": 53,
"start": 50,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "as whole",
"end": 55,
"start": 53,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "is can be seen",
"end": 60,
"start": 57,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "seen",
"end": 60,
"start": 59,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the ratio",
"end": 64,
"start": 63,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "is",
"end": 71,
"start": 70,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "were",
"end": 84,
"start": 84,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "was",
"end": 113,
"start": 112,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "twelve",
"end": 119,
"start": 118,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "decreased decreased",
"end": 123,
"start": 122,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "decreased by",
"end": 123,
"start": 122,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ", where",
"end": 131,
"start": 131,
"type": "PRON:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "the the",
"end": 142,
"start": 141,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "the world",
"end": 142,
"start": 141,
"type": "Determiners"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 2,745
|
As over more people stat to talk about air pollution and global warming , some persons argued that the amount of air travel should be reduced to keep out nature . I absolutely disagree with this statement . In my essay I will talk about different points of view surrounding that issue . I can not follow the idea of reducing of air travels . Firstly , a lots of business processes depend on flights and some of them will not function as fast as they could be in case of reducing of air travels . Such situations may lead to economic and financial disoursters which are likely to be more dangerous for population . For instance , in case of unusual situation on stock market top management of investment banks will not be able to come to emergency conference very fast , what can have an awful consequences . Some people claim that such important percons can travel by car on blocked highways with traffic jams . Nevertheless , there is no transport faster than a jet . Secondly , these protectors of humanity should recall the fact that jets are the most safety transport that people have ever made . For instance , in countries with a small amount of flight people use other transport and because of that the statistics of depth during the traveling is worse then in other countries . It means that measures of reducing flight will not have a positive impact as it is supposed to have . At conclusion I would say that in contemporary world people need to have a lots of air travel as they develop very fast and the most fastest way of traveling must be exist .
|
[
{
"correction": "start",
"end": 5,
"start": 4,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "save",
"end": 29,
"start": 27,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 68,
"start": 67,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "do",
"end": 88,
"start": 87,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "disasters",
"end": 105,
"start": 104,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "disasters",
"end": 105,
"start": 104,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 147,
"start": 146,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "persons",
"end": 157,
"start": 156,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "safe",
"end": 195,
"start": 194,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "safe",
"end": 195,
"start": 193,
"type": "Comparison_degree"
},
{
"correction": "flights",
"end": 213,
"start": 212,
"type": "Countable_uncountable"
},
{
"correction": "means of",
"end": 216,
"start": 216,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "plane crashes",
"end": 225,
"start": 224,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "than",
"end": 231,
"start": 230,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 242,
"start": 241,
"type": "Countable_uncountable"
},
{
"correction": "the amount of flights",
"end": 242,
"start": 241,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "In In",
"end": 256,
"start": 255,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "In conclusion ,",
"end": 257,
"start": 255,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 262,
"start": 262,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 269,
"start": 268,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "are being are",
"end": 276,
"start": 275,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "are being developed",
"end": 276,
"start": 275,
"type": "Voice"
},
{
"correction": "are the fastest",
"end": 283,
"start": 279,
"type": "Comparison_degree"
},
{
"correction": "they are the",
"end": 281,
"start": 279,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 287,
"start": 286,
"type": "Voice"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 2,763
|
A huge number of air travel is unnecessary , but they destroy our cology and support air pollution and global warming . It is reasons for question : should goverment reduce the number of air travel for air company and use lows for it ? I disagree with opinion to reduce the air chants by goverment . The first reason is ii can provide many ways for monopolistic in air market and many people can lose the most fast way to travelling . For example , I was born in Kurgan , but I am studying in Moscow . Way between Kurgan and Moscow is 2150 kilometres . It is more than 40 hours to trip on the train . However , I fly on airplane durig 2.5 hours every holidays , and I value it . Laws for reduce air travel delete this way for me . I will be bad for customers . The second reason is it can decrease science activity in air sciences . However , problem with pollution and global warming is very dangerous for all people . I think goverment can introduce laws which stimylate air company invest to air reseaches for decreasing pollutions of air planes . It can solve problem with pollution and others ecological problem without reducing air travel . Air companies have large profit . It should invest in researching , ecological programs and searching ways to reduce pollution from air company . I think it is the best decision , which goverment can introduce .
|
[
{
"correction": "ecology",
"end": 14,
"start": 13,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "strengthen",
"end": 16,
"start": 15,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "a reason",
"end": 25,
"start": 24,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "companies",
"end": 39,
"start": 38,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "laws",
"end": 42,
"start": 41,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 48,
"start": 48,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "flights",
"end": 54,
"start": 53,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "that it",
"end": 62,
"start": 61,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "monopolies",
"end": 68,
"start": 67,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "fastest",
"end": 79,
"start": 77,
"type": "Comparison_degree"
},
{
"correction": "A distance",
"end": 100,
"start": 99,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "hour",
"end": 115,
"start": 113,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "by",
"end": 118,
"start": 116,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "am getting on a plane",
"end": 126,
"start": 123,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "for",
"end": 127,
"start": 126,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "for",
"end": 127,
"start": 126,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "apreciate",
"end": 135,
"start": 134,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "make will",
"end": 143,
"start": 142,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "will",
"end": 142,
"start": 142,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "It",
"end": 149,
"start": 148,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "that",
"end": 159,
"start": 159,
"type": "PRON:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "stem",
"end": 162,
"start": 161,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "scientific",
"end": 163,
"start": 162,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 170,
"start": 170,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "stimulate",
"end": 191,
"start": 190,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "companies",
"end": 193,
"start": 192,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 193,
"start": 193,
"type": "Infinitive_constr"
},
{
"correction": "in",
"end": 195,
"start": 194,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "researches",
"end": 197,
"start": 196,
"type": "Countable_uncountable"
},
{
"correction": "researches",
"end": 197,
"start": 196,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "air pollution caused by",
"end": 202,
"start": 199,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "caused by",
"end": 240,
"start": 239,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "planes",
"end": 242,
"start": 240,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "take",
"end": 255,
"start": 254,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 2,766
|
The given car chart illustrates changes in the number of children by region for whom primary education is unavailable . It compares the foresaid feature in 2000 and 2012 . Moreover , as is shown in the graph , each column is divided by the gender of children almost everywhere . There is an evident downward trend . The number of children without access to primary school education slumped during the period under consideration . The changes were more drastical in the South - Asian region , where only 1/3 of the children who did n't have access to education in 2000 did so in 2012 . The allocation by gender shows that in 2000 much more girls were deprived of education than boys . In 2012 these numbers became practically equal . Moreover , in South Asia more girls had access to education than boys . However , in Africa such a downward tendency in the percentage of girls without accss to education can not be noticed .
|
[
{
"correction": "bar",
"end": 3,
"start": 2,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "where",
"end": 15,
"start": 13,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "aforesaid",
"end": 24,
"start": 23,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "it",
"end": 33,
"start": 33,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "fell",
"end": 69,
"start": 68,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "drastic",
"end": 80,
"start": 79,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "drastic",
"end": 80,
"start": 79,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "drastic",
"end": 80,
"start": 79,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "South Asia",
"end": 86,
"start": 81,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "had it",
"end": 104,
"start": 102,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "access",
"end": 162,
"start": 161,
"type": "Spelling"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 2,799
|
Nowadays in the large part of families it is ordinary when children spend less time with their parents while they are not working due to age , rather they did in the past . Obviously , it can cause some different problems . However , the item in topic seems to be a mixed blessing , as there are many reasons for this point . Firstly , when child grows up , he creates his own world , with self point of view , self sight in the things and of course , with his own people - friends , and later , family . So , usually when both parents go out to work their children have their own families , or , at least , a partner . This item defines the following thing : our already not young child lives separated , in other words , far from his parents . This is the one reason . Secondly , also the obvious poin , is that when the child become older , some important things is appearing , such as education or job . This is why students or employees can not spent a lot of time with close people , in particular , with their parents , because of general business . No need to say , it always causes problems . The first and the most dangerous if that old parents are staying alone . There are no one to help them with everyday issues , no one to care about them or , finally , to simply talk with them . So , old parent feel themselves lonely . The second problem is that because of spending less time with parents than in the past , children sometimes break good relationships between them and parents . Senior people see their falt in the lack of attention to their children , and for second one this is the main argument : they do not look well after them , and this is the root of all their life problems . Sad , but true . In conclusion it should be said , that everyone is free to choose their own way in life , and to choose , how to communicate with parents . But ethics rules warn us not to forget about our parents , because this is our first and most important family .
|
[
{
"correction": "do not work",
"end": 23,
"start": 20,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "than",
"end": 28,
"start": 26,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 48,
"start": 48,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 68,
"start": 68,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "his / her own",
"end": 80,
"start": 79,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "own",
"end": 85,
"start": 84,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "view of",
"end": 87,
"start": 85,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "or her",
"end": 95,
"start": 95,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 115,
"start": 115,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "children are not young anymore children",
"end": 142,
"start": 138,
"type": "Confusion_of_structures"
},
{
"correction": "children",
"end": 142,
"start": 141,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 152,
"start": 151,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "first",
"end": 158,
"start": 157,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "point",
"end": 166,
"start": 165,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 171,
"start": 170,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "becomes",
"end": 173,
"start": 172,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 179,
"start": 178,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "are",
"end": 179,
"start": 178,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "That",
"end": 188,
"start": 187,
"type": "Pronouns"
},
{
"correction": "spend",
"end": 196,
"start": 195,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "that",
"end": 221,
"start": 220,
"type": "PRON:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "is",
"end": 233,
"start": 232,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "is",
"end": 242,
"start": 241,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "parents",
"end": 271,
"start": 270,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "off",
"end": 295,
"start": 295,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "fault",
"end": 307,
"start": 306,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 318,
"start": 318,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 352,
"start": 352,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "they are",
"end": 394,
"start": 392,
"type": "Coherence"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 2,800
|
The graph introduces the percentages of global smartphone profits during for the five years from 2010 . There are huge changes for such a short time period as 5 years . The line of Apple had 40 % share in 2010 , then Apple 's percentage slightly raised for next two years , but in 2013 the percentage of this company reduced in 10 % . Apple has the biggest percentage on the whole graph with over 90 % in 2015 . Korean company Samsung had almost the same percentages in the first and last year with about 15 % , but in 2013 Samsung reached a peak with over 40 % . Other two companies had 10 % and 20 % HTC and Blackberry relatively I the first year of this graph . Both companies almost have about zero percentage in 2015 , therefore Apple has the main global smartphone profit about 90 % .
|
[
{
"correction": "increased",
"end": 48,
"start": 47,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 49,
"start": 49,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "had",
"end": 68,
"start": 67,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "in 2010",
"end": 133,
"start": 126,
"type": "REF:LONG"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 2,812
|
This is diagram look we average time spent doing sport and exercise in England in 2012 age . It is diagram we look whot , men is ages on 16 then 24 average two handred a ten - two minutes . Men on twenty - five then foyti fore average time spent doing sport 153,8 minutes . The ages 35 then 44 show porydka one handred twenty minut 's . Kogda women average 92,8 minutes . Women the age on 16 then 24 average time spent doing sport 114,1 minutes , thises on menshe 166 minutes chem men . Men on 45 to 54 age average time is sport 114,2 minut 's , a women 70,2 minutes . This is menshe whot men on foti for minut 's . It is graf we look , whot chem starshe people tem menshe average time spent doing sport , and men average time more a women .
|
[
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 2,
"start": 2,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "showing",
"end": 4,
"start": 3,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "us",
"end": 5,
"start": 4,
"type": "Pronouns"
},
{
"correction": "exercises",
"end": 12,
"start": 11,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "that",
"end": 24,
"start": 23,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "that",
"end": 24,
"start": 23,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "trained",
"end": 26,
"start": 26,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "of",
"end": 27,
"start": 26,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "from 16 to",
"end": 31,
"start": 28,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "on",
"end": 32,
"start": 32,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "hundred",
"end": 35,
"start": 34,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "hundred",
"end": 35,
"start": 34,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "twelve",
"end": 39,
"start": 35,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "fourty",
"end": 48,
"start": 47,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "on",
"end": 49,
"start": 49,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "did",
"end": 53,
"start": 52,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "for",
"end": 54,
"start": 54,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "from 35 to",
"end": 61,
"start": 59,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "about",
"end": 64,
"start": 63,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "hundred",
"end": 66,
"start": 65,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "minutes",
"end": 68,
"start": 67,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "minutes",
"end": 69,
"start": 67,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "When",
"end": 71,
"start": 70,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "on",
"end": 72,
"start": 72,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "for",
"end": 73,
"start": 73,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "of the age from 16 to",
"end": 82,
"start": 77,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "on",
"end": 83,
"start": 83,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "this is",
"end": 92,
"start": 91,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "less",
"end": 94,
"start": 93,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "of the age from 45 to 54",
"end": 105,
"start": 100,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "did",
"end": 108,
"start": 107,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "minutes",
"end": 111,
"start": 110,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "minutes",
"end": 112,
"start": 110,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "spent",
"end": 115,
"start": 113,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "women spent for sport",
"end": 115,
"start": 113,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "less",
"end": 121,
"start": 120,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "than",
"end": 122,
"start": 121,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "than",
"end": 122,
"start": 121,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "by",
"end": 124,
"start": 123,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "forty",
"end": 125,
"start": 124,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "minutes",
"end": 127,
"start": 126,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "minutes",
"end": 128,
"start": 126,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "the graph",
"end": 132,
"start": 131,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "at",
"end": 134,
"start": 134,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "that",
"end": 136,
"start": 135,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "that",
"end": 136,
"start": 135,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "older",
"end": 138,
"start": 137,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "less",
"end": 141,
"start": 140,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "spent on average more time for sport women .",
"end": 154,
"start": 149,
"type": "Confusion_of_structures"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 153,
"start": 152,
"type": "Determiners"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 2,813
|
I agree is some people say that the main purpose of social media such as Facebook and Vkontakte should he to share information and knowledge . Others say the main purpose should be simply to entertain . Because I am use social media such Vkontakte . VK help me share information on my frends and more new information ask my intrestit . Rasvitiu social media such help to rasvitie the inthernet . I use the internet - vk , because this help me select my frends . And blagodary social media such as Facebook and Vkontakte , I lisen to music .
|
[
{
"correction": "with the opinion",
"end": 6,
"start": 2,
"type": "Confusion_of_structures"
},
{
"correction": "be",
"end": 20,
"start": 19,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "that",
"end": 28,
"start": 28,
"type": "PRON:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 40,
"start": 39,
"type": "Tense_form"
},
{
"correction": "as",
"end": 44,
"start": 44,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "helps",
"end": 48,
"start": 47,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 52,
"start": 51,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "friends",
"end": 54,
"start": 53,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "serving",
"end": 59,
"start": 58,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "interests",
"end": 61,
"start": 60,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "Developed",
"end": 63,
"start": 62,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "development",
"end": 69,
"start": 68,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "Internet",
"end": 71,
"start": 70,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "respectively",
"end": 77,
"start": 76,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "helps",
"end": 82,
"start": 81,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "find",
"end": 84,
"start": 83,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "friends",
"end": 86,
"start": 85,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "thanks to",
"end": 89,
"start": 88,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "listen",
"end": 99,
"start": 98,
"type": "Spelling"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 2,818
|
It is chart shows changes in the number of children without access to primary school education . I am summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and making comparisons where relevant . If looking in the chart then we vision what boys and girls in the 2012 years going to school very few , then in the 2000 years . And this very good . I think , what in the modern world children must have study in school ( before in colleges or university ) and this chart agree with me . In the 2012 years children without access to primary education have a less in 10 - 50 % at the 2000 years . In the Africa this ~10 % , in the South Asia this ~70 % and Rest of World ~15 - 20 % . In South Asia very big changes : in the 2000 years girls without access to primary school education 21.6 millions and in the 2012 years 4.8 millions . 16.8 millions only girls study in primary school and I think that this awesome . In the final my esse I 'd like said what modern world take care about children and we should to fun it is .
|
[
{
"correction": "The",
"end": 2,
"start": 0,
"type": "Confusion_of_structures"
},
{
"correction": "summarising",
"end": 20,
"start": 19,
"type": "Tense_form"
},
{
"correction": "on",
"end": 26,
"start": 26,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "they are",
"end": 34,
"start": 34,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "see",
"end": 44,
"start": 43,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "that",
"end": 45,
"start": 44,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "2012",
"end": 52,
"start": 49,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "2000",
"end": 63,
"start": 60,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "that",
"end": 73,
"start": 72,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "universities",
"end": 89,
"start": 88,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "agrees",
"end": 94,
"start": 93,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "2012",
"end": 101,
"start": 98,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "had",
"end": 108,
"start": 107,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "less than",
"end": 111,
"start": 108,
"type": "Comparative_constr"
},
{
"correction": "in",
"end": 116,
"start": 115,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "2000",
"end": 119,
"start": 116,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 122,
"start": 121,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "the percentage was",
"end": 124,
"start": 123,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 129,
"start": 128,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "the percentage was",
"end": 132,
"start": 131,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "in the rest of the world",
"end": 138,
"start": 135,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "the percentage was",
"end": 142,
"start": 138,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "there were",
"end": 146,
"start": 146,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "2000",
"end": 154,
"start": 151,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "there were 21.6 million girls without access to primary school million",
"end": 163,
"start": 154,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "million",
"end": 163,
"start": 162,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "2012",
"end": 168,
"start": 165,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "million",
"end": 170,
"start": 169,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "million",
"end": 173,
"start": 172,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "Only million million",
"end": 174,
"start": 171,
"type": "Confusion_of_structures"
},
{
"correction": "it is",
"end": 184,
"start": 183,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "At the end of",
"end": 189,
"start": 186,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "essay",
"end": 191,
"start": 190,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "would like to say",
"end": 195,
"start": 192,
"type": "Modals"
},
{
"correction": "that",
"end": 196,
"start": 195,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 196,
"start": 196,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "takes",
"end": 199,
"start": 198,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "of",
"end": 201,
"start": 200,
"type": "Prepositions"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 2,821
|
Nowadays , there are numerous numbers of social media . Most popular of them are Facebook and Vkontakte . People use them different reasons . Some people try to find information and knowledge which are needed by them . Others think that social media should entertain them . These points of view will be discussed in this essay . In my opinion , social media can contain useful information , which could help us , and also entertaining content that make us laugh . Firstly , social media networks , such as Facebook and Vkontakte , contain information about everything . Everybody can share information about your interests , hobbies . Also , most people like share guides of anything , that could help anyone else . If you try to seek something , you will find it . But these guides are so many that can confuse users , it is a difficult problem of social media . Secondly , although there is useful information in social media , there is a content that make laugh and smile you . If you can not find something useful , it does not mean that you should not consider it as helpness . Everybody can find purpose of it because of their wishes .
|
[
{
"correction": "The most",
"end": 11,
"start": 10,
"type": "Comparison_degree"
},
{
"correction": "for",
"end": 22,
"start": 22,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "for",
"end": 37,
"start": 36,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "makes",
"end": 81,
"start": 80,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "his or her",
"end": 107,
"start": 106,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 116,
"start": 116,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "about",
"end": 119,
"start": 118,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "find",
"end": 132,
"start": 131,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "there are so many guides",
"end": 145,
"start": 140,
"type": "Confusion_of_structures"
},
{
"correction": "it",
"end": 146,
"start": 146,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "makes",
"end": 176,
"start": 175,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "makes you laugh and smile",
"end": 180,
"start": 175,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "helpless",
"end": 201,
"start": 200,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "according to",
"end": 210,
"start": 208,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "his or her",
"end": 211,
"start": 210,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 2,827
|
Lets try to find benefits of longer prison sentences . How it will influence on number of most violent crimes ? Changing of number of this situations will be near by zero becose by the great majority laws this type of crime means life long prison sentence or execution . Si it is hard and useless to try to find more cruel laws . If prisoner deal mostly harmless crime than after out of jail he have no reason to repeat it becose he know the consequences . Harder laws bring harder mistakes than judgement became wrong like it was in Chikatila 's situation then absolutlly innocent man was killed instead serial maniac Chikatilo . So I see no way to give longer prison sentences . I think that crime should be canceled before they have been . This is difficult but mos right way to reducing crime rate .
|
[
{
"correction": "Let 's",
"end": 1,
"start": 0,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "will it",
"end": 13,
"start": 11,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "the amount",
"end": 16,
"start": 15,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 17,
"start": 17,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "Changes",
"end": 22,
"start": 21,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "in",
"end": 23,
"start": 22,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 23,
"start": 23,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "these",
"end": 26,
"start": 25,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 31,
"start": 30,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "because",
"end": 33,
"start": 32,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "of",
"end": 38,
"start": 38,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "So",
"end": 51,
"start": 50,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "made",
"end": 67,
"start": 66,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 71,
"start": 70,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "will",
"end": 76,
"start": 76,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "do it again",
"end": 82,
"start": 80,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "because",
"end": 83,
"start": 82,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "knows",
"end": 85,
"start": 84,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "when",
"end": 94,
"start": 93,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "Chikatilo",
"end": 102,
"start": 101,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "when",
"end": 105,
"start": 104,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "absolutely",
"end": 106,
"start": 105,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "of",
"end": 111,
"start": 111,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "prevented",
"end": 133,
"start": 132,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "prevented",
"end": 133,
"start": 132,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "taken place",
"end": 137,
"start": 136,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the the",
"end": 143,
"start": 142,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the this",
"end": 143,
"start": 142,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "this is the only",
"end": 143,
"start": 142,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "reduce",
"end": 147,
"start": 146,
"type": "Category_confusion"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 2,835
|
There if the problem with air travels because they impact on environment and improve global warming . As a result , the government wants to delay travels for business and leisure . As for me , I agree with a big importance of climat and air pollution but I think that this law will make more problems . I have three explanations why the law which reduces amount of business and leisure travels is a bad idea . To start with , the business travel is very important for a communication between companies from different countries . This communication provides countries by new financial assets which help for economy growth . If the government prohibit business travel , the stream of money can confront a lot of difficults and foreign companies will stop communicating . Then the country will threat a lot of losses which slowen the economic growth . The second point is a possible lack of entertainment for population . If they like relaxing at other countries , the government should n't prohibit to do it . Because there are countries which specialized on leasure and it is their part of the world work distribution . The last but not least , if government does n't allow to travel to other countries , they should make own entertainment sphere which replaces foreign one . However , it is a big investment and a lot of time which are not available for some countries . The opposite side supposes that the air pollution is a very crucial problem and each country should fights against if because of global warming . It is dangerous because of a raising temperiature which kills some types of animals and plants . However , plants produce clear air for people in order to the global warming is a serious problem for future generations . As for the second point of view , I believe that there are a lot of other problems which causes global warming such as waste , car traffic and others . So that I suggest that the government should reduce impact of these factors which help people and environment . All in all , the law reducted amount of air travel is illogical and global warming is caused by a lot of factors which are easy for interacting .
|
[
{
"correction": "is",
"end": 2,
"start": 1,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "climate",
"end": 44,
"start": 43,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "cause",
"end": 55,
"start": 54,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 67,
"start": 67,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "prohibits",
"end": 115,
"start": 114,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "will be able to",
"end": 123,
"start": 122,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "difficulties",
"end": 128,
"start": 127,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "be under the",
"end": 139,
"start": 139,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "slow down",
"end": 146,
"start": 145,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "in",
"end": 167,
"start": 166,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "specialize",
"end": 185,
"start": 184,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "leisure",
"end": 187,
"start": 186,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 223,
"start": 223,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "fight",
"end": 264,
"start": 263,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "it",
"end": 266,
"start": 265,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "rising",
"end": 278,
"start": 277,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "rising",
"end": 278,
"start": 277,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "temperature",
"end": 279,
"start": 278,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "kinds",
"end": 283,
"start": 282,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "so",
"end": 299,
"start": 296,
"type": "LINK:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "wastes",
"end": 335,
"start": 334,
"type": "Countable_uncountable"
},
{
"correction": "reducing",
"end": 367,
"start": 366,
"type": "Derivation"
},
{
"correction": "reducing",
"end": 367,
"start": 366,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "reducing",
"end": 367,
"start": 366,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "to interact",
"end": 388,
"start": 386,
"type": "Category_confusion"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 2,872
|
The given chart compares data about number of children who have not frequented primary school education from 2000 to 2012 . As can be seen from the chart , the great deal of children without access to primary school education was in Africa in 2000 ( over 45 millions ) where the number of girls was slightly higher than boys . Consequently , in 2012 we can observe that generally , the number of children declined to 18.2 and 14.5 millions respectively , that depicts a significant rise of children that access to primary school education . Additionally , we can see almost the same number of children without access primary education in South Asia in 2000 ( 21.6 and 11.1 millions respectively ) . In contrast to Africa 's data of 2012 , South Asia shows that in 2012 it was a considerable rise of number of children who access primary education ( 4.8 and 5.1 millions respectively ) . Moving to the rest of world , it can be seen that during all period of time the number of student without acess to primary education was declined and almost equal number of both girls and boys access to primary school education in 2012 .
|
[
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 6,
"start": 6,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "did not frequent",
"end": 13,
"start": 10,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "million",
"end": 49,
"start": 48,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "million",
"end": 81,
"start": 80,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "million",
"end": 122,
"start": 121,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "there",
"end": 141,
"start": 140,
"type": "Pronouns"
},
{
"correction": "accessed",
"end": 151,
"start": 150,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "million",
"end": 158,
"start": 157,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 166,
"start": 166,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "students",
"end": 182,
"start": 181,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "access",
"end": 184,
"start": 183,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 188,
"start": 187,
"type": "Voice"
},
{
"correction": "there was almost equal quantity",
"end": 193,
"start": 190,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "quantity",
"end": 193,
"start": 192,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "who accessed",
"end": 199,
"start": 198,
"type": "LINK:LONG"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 2,936
|
Ecological problems , that identify as for human technological progress , are getting worse and worse everyday . Air traffic jam , nowadays , is upgrading beneficially ; but our environment is suffer from it . From my point of view , air travelling should be cross down only in some private extent . I try to demonstrate this issue from economical and social sides . First of all , it is the most fastest kind of transport , a plaining flight , as no one ecological sourse could exchange it . For instance , some business negotiations , valuable meetings and international conferences are unimagibale without convinientant confortable conditions , getting to the destanation . Moreover , some post offices and express delays would have no profit , if government decide to cut down and international and domestic flights . Secoundly , people , especially in Russia , finally get access of visiting different countries all over the world . I strongly believe that an aviation has to be free for majority of people . However , dealing this issue , I suppose , that private flights could be reduce for protecting our nature and surviving climate . For example , if some rich businessmen prefer travelling by train or by car , I would save an enormous amount of fuel , that has spent for surviving only 10 people on a board . Anyway , there is an opinion that in any case flying in the sky badly effect on our environment and only way is to stop an aviation . I suppose , the problem could be solved upgrading materials , methodics of proving flights , sources of energy and other important elements that have a great harmful impact on an ecology . For instance , while planes have crashed , and such accidents happend much more frequantly than pilots expected , could fall down to the Ocean or just bump into ground . I believe , that reducing such negative effect a society and government will able to help progressing aviation and save a natural beauty of environment . All in all , technological progress brings benefits and failures for the both society and government . Nontheless , there is no sence to deny success in air traffic jam , but make all attemps to upgrade metods , how to reduce a harmful impact .
|
[
{
"correction": "suffering",
"end": 33,
"start": 32,
"type": "Tense_form"
},
{
"correction": "crossed",
"end": 47,
"start": 46,
"type": "Voice"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 74,
"start": 73,
"type": "Comparison_degree"
},
{
"correction": "plane",
"end": 81,
"start": 80,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "airplane",
"end": 82,
"start": 79,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "source",
"end": 88,
"start": 87,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "unimaginable",
"end": 106,
"start": 105,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "convenient",
"end": 108,
"start": 107,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "comfortable",
"end": 109,
"start": 108,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "while",
"end": 111,
"start": 111,
"type": "LINK:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "destination",
"end": 115,
"start": 114,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "deliveries",
"end": 124,
"start": 123,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "deliveries",
"end": 124,
"start": 123,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "decides",
"end": 132,
"start": 131,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "Secondly",
"end": 142,
"start": 141,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "to visit",
"end": 154,
"start": 152,
"type": "Confusion_of_structures"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 166,
"start": 165,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 172,
"start": 172,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "with",
"end": 179,
"start": 179,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "reduced",
"end": 191,
"start": 190,
"type": "Voice"
},
{
"correction": "the survival of",
"end": 228,
"start": 227,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 233,
"start": 232,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "a has a",
"end": 251,
"start": 249,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "has a bad",
"end": 250,
"start": 249,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 255,
"start": 255,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 261,
"start": 260,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "by",
"end": 271,
"start": 271,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "methods",
"end": 275,
"start": 274,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "happened",
"end": 308,
"start": 307,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "frequently",
"end": 311,
"start": 310,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "develop",
"end": 344,
"start": 343,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "develop",
"end": 344,
"start": 343,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 351,
"start": 351,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "Nonetheless",
"end": 371,
"start": 370,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "sense",
"end": 376,
"start": 375,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "attempts",
"end": 388,
"start": 387,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "methods",
"end": 391,
"start": 390,
"type": "Spelling"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,482
|
The graph provides information about amounts of energy that five different countries extract from fossil fuels . Overall , there are five countries , which are China , United States , India , Sweden and France . It is clear from the graph that China showed the highest rate in 2015 , while Sweden had the smallest . First of all , it is evidently seen that Sweden had one of the highest level of energy from fossil fuels in 1970 , more than four fifths of all the energy , but then it decreased dramatically and in 1990 it was less than a half , then , it continued to decline slowly . Secondly , United States have significant percentage . The graph illustrates that in 1970 all the energy in UNited States was from fossil fuels , then , it slightly decreased and in 2015 it was only about two tenth less ( 83 per cent ) . Going back to China it is clear , that in 1970 they had more than a half of energy from fossils , then it increased slightly and in 2015 it was the highest amount among mentioned 5 countries ( approximately 90 per cent ) .
|
[
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 6,
"start": 5,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "the amount",
"end": 6,
"start": 5,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 28,
"start": 28,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "levels",
"end": 74,
"start": 73,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "extraction",
"end": 76,
"start": 76,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 96,
"start": 96,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 108,
"start": 107,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 116,
"start": 116,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "had",
"end": 119,
"start": 118,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 119,
"start": 119,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "of the energy extracted from fossil fuels",
"end": 121,
"start": 121,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 133,
"start": 132,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "the United",
"end": 133,
"start": 132,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 141,
"start": 140,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "this amount",
"end": 142,
"start": 141,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 144,
"start": 144,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "tenths",
"end": 153,
"start": 152,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 164,
"start": 164,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 178,
"start": 178,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "fuels",
"end": 181,
"start": 181,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "this amount",
"end": 184,
"start": 183,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 186,
"start": 186,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 195,
"start": 195,
"type": "Articles"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,485
|
Nowadays some people state that , firstly , a building should be useful and then it can be a piece of art . Others argue with them . Personally I agree with the statement and I am going to prove it futher . First of all , everything on the Earth has its purpose , any building is not an exeption . There is no doubt , there may be more than one purpose but nevertheless I am sure that the use of something is the most essential . In another way , I suppose , there would be so much " rubbish " on our planet and even incredible buildings would not be needed . The balance between the first purpose of a building and the importance of its beauty should be found . Secondly , not every person is fond of architecture because of different reasons . A lot of people all over the world live their lifes in the most usual way . They have a job which is not in their favour but they should earn enough money to meet all daily needs of their families . Travelling and adoring architecture are traditionally features of some rich persons . For others it is rather more important to educate their child in comfortable schools where pupils can be in safety or to take care of their health in hospitals where they can be sure that nothing bad could happen if any member of their families would have to go there for some time . Such people just have no time to think about appearences of the buildings . In coclusion , the first purpose of any building is to be useful for people and after that the architects have an opportunity to do their best . The beauty of buildings is not in priority for everyone whereas its safety of comfortable being there are vital in daily life for each of us .
|
[
{
"correction": "first of all",
"end": 7,
"start": 6,
"type": "Linking_device"
},
{
"correction": "first first of",
"end": 8,
"start": 5,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 29,
"start": 29,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "further",
"end": 42,
"start": 41,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "exception",
"end": 61,
"start": 60,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 74,
"start": 74,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": ", nevertheless ,",
"end": 76,
"start": 75,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 107,
"start": 107,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "lives",
"end": 160,
"start": 159,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "lives",
"end": 160,
"start": 159,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 176,
"start": 176,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "traditional",
"end": 197,
"start": 196,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "children",
"end": 214,
"start": 213,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "appearances",
"end": 267,
"start": 266,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "conclusion",
"end": 273,
"start": 272,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 309,
"start": 309,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 311,
"start": 310,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "and",
"end": 313,
"start": 312,
"type": "Linking_device"
},
{
"correction": "comfort",
"end": 316,
"start": 313,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,489
|
It is considered that architects must care about the buildings ' functionality rather than their appearance . I completely disagree with the statement . From my point of view , every new construction has to match the surroundings and have a sophisticated appearance as it becomes a part of history and cultural heritage , to let alone the fact that the ability to serve the needs must constantly be put into the construction . Architecture always represents the period it was built and the prevalent style people accept . Randomly constructed mixture of styles may only worsen the overall look of the city and create dissatisfaction with the place . For instance , when the Effel Tower was built in Paris , people called it ugly and abysmal because of its completely different style . Moreover , the cities ' atmosphere influences even people 's mental health , that is why architects should carefully analyse the impact that their work of art may have . Safety is the most important criterion that every model - maker has to mind . There must be no miscountings or flaws , as it can inflict damage to thousands of people . That is why i would say that serving special purposes is an underlying feature when building a new city 's item . At the same time , architects should not neglect the idea and comfort . For example , in Singapoure there are more and more environmentally friendly skyscrapers , all covered with greenery , that not only suits the atmosphere , but also serves the needs . In addition , beautifully built cities attract tourists from all over the world . To conclude , people are concerned with the convenience and their everyday impressions , so the architects ' work is both about technical part and creativity . The last one influences citizens ' mentality , and more globally , our cultural heritage .
|
[
{
"correction": "not to mention",
"end": 57,
"start": 54,
"type": "Linking_device"
},
{
"correction": "not to mention",
"end": 57,
"start": 54,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "be constantly",
"end": 69,
"start": 67,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "Eiffel",
"end": 116,
"start": 115,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "miscalculations",
"end": 185,
"start": 184,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 188,
"start": 187,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "they",
"end": 190,
"start": 189,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "I",
"end": 202,
"start": 201,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "of",
"end": 232,
"start": 231,
"type": "Linking_device"
},
{
"correction": "Singapore",
"end": 239,
"start": 238,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "which",
"end": 254,
"start": 253,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 302,
"start": 302,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "latter",
"end": 310,
"start": 308,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "and ,",
"end": 316,
"start": 314,
"type": "Punctuation"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,491
|
Nowadays the most discussed issue is functions of contemporary housings . A vast majority of people argue that buildings should have attractive appearance , while others claim that it have to be useful and serve its options . I believe that it is highly important for modern structures to be good - looking and have fascinating features . Fisrt and foremost , in our age of city sprawliing and urbanisation and high demands of people , it is becoming more and more crucial for city population how it is look like . People 's wantings become higher and complicated . That is to say , these days humanities have more technical and other possibilities to make building useful and magnificent in the same time . To cite an example , many cities nowadays comepete between each other for best achitecture solutions . Goverments try to decide how to make cities and suburbs looking contemporary and technical - friendly . There are competitions between architecturers for best urban - planning progects . They seek to make a building not only modern and functional , but also to make it look pleasant for man 's eye . That is why , modern buildings are still decorated with remerkable features and are made in fancy geometrical forms . Another argument in favour of importance of structures appearence is that the buildings construction is a suitable way of expressing artists and architectures individuality and creativity . In this way , artists may not only express their onw ideas in modern buildings , but also can bring art education in society . To cite an example , modern artist who make graffities and street art in general , bring new art views and direction in public . Graffity on buildings , espeially , make old buildings play new bright colours , and people are tend to be in favour of this idea nowadays . Thus , it is still essential for cities population how their city space are designed . Taking everything into consideration , despite growing people demands for functional issues of city buildings , it is still quite significant for the major part of them how should structures be planned and decorated . In spite of the increasing role of tecnology and usefulness of buildings , people do not forget about its creative features . Hence , i am convinced that architecture design will be significant for a long - term period .
|
[
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 1,
"start": 1,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "they",
"end": 29,
"start": 28,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "purposes",
"end": 37,
"start": 36,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "sprawling",
"end": 68,
"start": 67,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "looks",
"end": 90,
"start": 89,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "needs",
"end": 95,
"start": 94,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "stronger",
"end": 97,
"start": 96,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "more more",
"end": 99,
"start": 98,
"type": "Comparison_degree"
},
{
"correction": "more complex",
"end": 99,
"start": 98,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "humanity",
"end": 108,
"start": 107,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "at",
"end": 121,
"start": 120,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "compete",
"end": 134,
"start": 133,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "with",
"end": 135,
"start": 134,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "Governments",
"end": 143,
"start": 142,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "look",
"end": 153,
"start": 152,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "architects",
"end": 164,
"start": 163,
"type": "Derivation"
},
{
"correction": "projects",
"end": 170,
"start": 169,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "remarkable",
"end": 206,
"start": 205,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "of",
"end": 212,
"start": 212,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "structure",
"end": 223,
"start": 222,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "appearance",
"end": 224,
"start": 223,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "building",
"end": 228,
"start": 227,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "architects",
"end": 238,
"start": 237,
"type": "Derivation"
},
{
"correction": "architects",
"end": 238,
"start": 237,
"type": "Possessive"
},
{
"correction": "own",
"end": 253,
"start": 252,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "especially",
"end": 297,
"start": 296,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "is",
"end": 333,
"start": 332,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "people 's growing",
"end": 343,
"start": 341,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "technology",
"end": 378,
"start": 377,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "I",
"end": 395,
"start": 394,
"type": "Capitalisation"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,494
|
The line graph given compares statistics about energy from fossil fuels between China , the USA , India , France and Sweden during the period from 1970 to 2015 . First of all , we should admit some main tendency . The most rapid growth is noticed in eastern countries , such as India and China . However , the decrease happens in European countries , such as France and Sweden . The most stable changes are up to the United States . Comparing the data , we can see that the most rapid increase of energy use is noticed in India , which changed from 35 percents to 75 . As for the most rapid decrease , it is shown in Sweden , where the percentage changed from 82 to the less than 30 . We should also remind that this country has the biggest change in the data between all the others . Speaking about the United Stetes , the line here goes down from almost 100 percents to 85 .
|
[
{
"correction": "given line graph",
"end": 4,
"start": 1,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "tendencies",
"end": 40,
"start": 39,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "was",
"end": 46,
"start": 45,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 48,
"start": 48,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "happened",
"end": 62,
"start": 61,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "were",
"end": 77,
"start": 76,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "in",
"end": 79,
"start": 78,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "was",
"end": 99,
"start": 98,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "where it",
"end": 104,
"start": 103,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "percent",
"end": 108,
"start": 107,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "was",
"end": 120,
"start": 119,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "be aware",
"end": 140,
"start": 139,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "had",
"end": 144,
"start": 143,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "States",
"end": 160,
"start": 159,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "there",
"end": 164,
"start": 163,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "went",
"end": 165,
"start": 164,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "percent",
"end": 170,
"start": 169,
"type": "Noun_number"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,521
|
It is generally believed that architects must make a project of beautiful , breathtaking buildings . But now people start realize that it is not so crucial , also they assume that we build house for certain aims . I tend to think that buildings should look perfectly and be with some art features . Buildings are everywhere and we feel satisfaction , if we see an amazing house or strange scyscrapes . Architects must produce interesting buildings which will take our attention and show our life . What I mean here , is that create modern and beautiful house is vitaly important for saving our culture . The great example of it is Moscow centre 's buildings . When we walk in centre we can easily understand previous culture by looking at oldfashion houses . By the way , we must build new houses acording to our modern culture for our next generations . Another special consideration is that beautiful buildings can take people 's attention . If in the city a lot of breathtaking buildings , a lot of people will want to see it and visit . Aethtethic and famous places can be interesting for tourists , also , nobody wants to visit boring , grey city . For example , many people want to take a picture of 5 popular Moscow city buildings . They are made from glass and look really outstanding . There is no denying that a lot of tourists come to Russia to visit it . In conclusion , i would like to say that it is crucial to build houses not just for their main purpose , but for aethtethic pleasure .
|
[
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 20,
"start": 20,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "they also",
"end": 30,
"start": 28,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "houses",
"end": 35,
"start": 34,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "purposes",
"end": 38,
"start": 37,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "perfect",
"end": 48,
"start": 47,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "have",
"end": 51,
"start": 49,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 63,
"start": 62,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "skyscrapers",
"end": 72,
"start": 71,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "skyscrapers",
"end": 72,
"start": 71,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "attract",
"end": 81,
"start": 80,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 93,
"start": 92,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "creating",
"end": 96,
"start": 95,
"type": "Participial_constr"
},
{
"correction": "houses",
"end": 100,
"start": 99,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "vitally",
"end": 102,
"start": 101,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "A",
"end": 109,
"start": 108,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "that",
"end": 113,
"start": 112,
"type": "Pronouns"
},
{
"correction": "the city centre the",
"end": 124,
"start": 123,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "the city the",
"end": 124,
"start": 123,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "the city",
"end": 123,
"start": 123,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "old - fashioned",
"end": 134,
"start": 133,
"type": "Compound_word"
},
{
"correction": "according",
"end": 146,
"start": 145,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "attract",
"end": 164,
"start": 163,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "there are",
"end": 172,
"start": 172,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "and visit it",
"end": 189,
"start": 186,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "Aesthetically Aesthetically",
"end": 191,
"start": 190,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "Aesthetically beautiful",
"end": 191,
"start": 190,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 206,
"start": 206,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "City",
"end": 226,
"start": 225,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "the 5 popular Moscow City",
"end": 226,
"start": 222,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "them",
"end": 253,
"start": 252,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "I",
"end": 258,
"start": 257,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "aesthetic",
"end": 279,
"start": 278,
"type": "Spelling"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,529
|
Nowadays buildings play a crucial part in the view of the city . Some people believe that amazing and extraordinary constructions reflect city and its culture in general . However , there is an opinion that architects should not pay much attention on the construction 's view because it is more important to build something that will follow building 's purpose . Personally , i truly believe that it is a very controversial issue . On the one hand , architects should take the safetiness of the construction on the first place . It is not a secret that there are some materials , for example , glass which looks fascinating . However , it may become a dangerous material if an architect decides to create a huge business skyscraper only following his / her aesthetic point of view . On the other hand , modern technologies are improving extremely fast these days and architects can both build comfortable for using constructions and make them breathtaking and gorgeous . It used to say that there is no need to divide the main cause why do people need a new construction and why do n't proffesionals make it as a work of art . In my point of view , architects should also pay attention on the building 's look as it reflects the aesthetic part of our culture . Moreover , with such opportunities which we are provided it is not a problem to create both stunning and comfortable constructions which could turn into the works of art . In conclusion , it is always important to remember that buildings take a huge part in the reflection of the city and country and it can also represent our culture so with all modern technologies architects can easily create buildings which can be both useful and gorgeous .
|
[
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 1,
"start": 1,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 22,
"start": 22,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 43,
"start": 42,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "view of a construction",
"end": 47,
"start": 44,
"type": "Possessive"
},
{
"correction": "a particular a",
"end": 61,
"start": 60,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "a particular",
"end": 60,
"start": 60,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "I",
"end": 65,
"start": 64,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "put",
"end": 83,
"start": 82,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "safety",
"end": 85,
"start": 84,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "safety",
"end": 85,
"start": 84,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 108,
"start": 108,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "look",
"end": 110,
"start": 109,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "commercial",
"end": 129,
"start": 128,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 130,
"start": 130,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "or",
"end": 134,
"start": 133,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 153,
"start": 153,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "convenient",
"end": 161,
"start": 158,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "is usually said",
"end": 173,
"start": 170,
"type": "Confusion_of_structures"
},
{
"correction": "professionals",
"end": 195,
"start": 194,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "proffesionals do professionals",
"end": 195,
"start": 192,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "From",
"end": 204,
"start": 203,
"type": "Linking_device"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 215,
"start": 214,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 234,
"start": 234,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "with provided",
"end": 238,
"start": 238,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "with ,",
"end": 238,
"start": 238,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "be turned",
"end": 253,
"start": 252,
"type": "Voice"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 255,
"start": 254,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "play",
"end": 271,
"start": 270,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 282,
"start": 282,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 281,
"start": 281,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "they",
"end": 284,
"start": 283,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 289,
"start": 289,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "the modern technologies",
"end": 293,
"start": 292,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 294,
"start": 294,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 299,
"start": 299,
"type": "Punctuation"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,533
|
Nowadays there is a belief that for a building it is more important to serve its purpose rather than to look stunning . Architects are supposed not to think about the beauty of buildings when they construct them . In my opinion , all the buildings should look attractive for the eyesight . To begin with , when a building is constructed the architect should pay attention to its appearance for other human beings because it represents a country 's heritage . A building 's style may say a lot about its history . When people visit different countries first of all they want to see the architecture of a certain country , so it would be more pleasable for them to be facinated by a beautifully constructed building because they will desire to know more about its history and the architect . For example , last year I was paid a visit by my foreign friend and when I asked her what if it was important for her if the building was beautiful and awe - inspiring . She told me that a building should look attractive to attract millions of visitors who travel to a country or who just live in this area in order to inspire them to build the same buildings and be proud of ingenuity of human race . Moreover , for human beings who live in abandoned and demolished places one of the joys that would make them happy and satisfied is the construction of stunning buildings . Besides , it will be a good incentive for their children to contemplate a career in architecture when they grow up . Instead of becoming , for example , a thief they may be likely to choose a profession of an architect . More than that , when a modern building is designed well , it is painted in bright colours rather than dark ones , it will be almost always more pleasable to work in such a place . To conclude , I believe modern architects should make buildings more beautiful because they depict our history , architecture style and heritage . Therefore , architects should bear in mind how their buildings will look like .
|
[
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 1,
"start": 1,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "to not",
"end": 28,
"start": 26,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 50,
"start": 49,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "eye",
"end": 52,
"start": 51,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 62,
"start": 62,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 71,
"start": 70,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 78,
"start": 77,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "The style of a building",
"end": 86,
"start": 82,
"type": "Possessive"
},
{
"correction": "cab",
"end": 87,
"start": 86,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 99,
"start": 99,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 111,
"start": 109,
"type": "DET:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "pleasing",
"end": 119,
"start": 118,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "fascinated",
"end": 124,
"start": 123,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 129,
"start": 129,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 157,
"start": 157,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 171,
"start": 170,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 197,
"start": 196,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 219,
"start": 219,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 236,
"start": 236,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "would",
"end": 258,
"start": 257,
"type": "Modals"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 285,
"start": 285,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "if",
"end": 309,
"start": 309,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "is",
"end": 323,
"start": 321,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "pleasing",
"end": 327,
"start": 326,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "architectural",
"end": 353,
"start": 352,
"type": "Category_confusion"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,537
|
Many people stand by the idea that since it is impossible to help every single person all over the world , each government should support only its own citizens . I completely disagree with such position , because I believe in a global community , where people take responsibility for each other despite their nationality . In order to prove my point of view , I will now present a couple of arguments and examples . First of all , giving a helping hand to foreign people in need , whether it 's migrants or citizens of a struggling country , will also benefit humanity as a whole . In other words , if a developed country aids the developing one in establishing a better economical , political , or social conditions , the world economy will later on get a new strong player . Secondly , giving migrants or inhabitants of remote areas the opportunity to recieve a well - rounded education only increases the amount of great minds ready to solve contemporary issues and develop our world further . For example , if only a small amount of the money and resources spent on researching the cosmos and building the rocket ships would have been spent on educating more people all across the globe , we would now have maybe ten times more people competent to explore the distant glaxies . Last but not least , saving others is also a matter of morality . Governments should not just creat an invisible domes around themselves and ignore the cries of other people they see as aliens . To sum up , although there are many ways one could decide whether it is better for the countries to mind their own business or actually help each other , in my opinion , creating a global community , where everyone is connected is the only path humanity should take .
|
[
{
"correction": "",
"end": 37,
"start": 36,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "they are",
"end": 93,
"start": 91,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "they are",
"end": 93,
"start": 91,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "also benefits",
"end": 104,
"start": 101,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "economic",
"end": 126,
"start": 125,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "an",
"end": 155,
"start": 154,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "receive",
"end": 158,
"start": 157,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "move",
"end": 177,
"start": 176,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "galaxies",
"end": 232,
"start": 231,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "The governments",
"end": 248,
"start": 247,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "create",
"end": 252,
"start": 251,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 253,
"start": 252,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 312,
"start": 312,
"type": "Punctuation"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,569
|
Architecture is the ancient science that is needed to make the buildings where we live , work and rest more beautiful to our eyes . It works with the shapes , colors and materials to turn a utilitary building into a piece of art . The importance of architecture is not to argue about . Let us imagine a situation where all the living houses look the same , as well as offices , department stores and all the other building and constructions . Built using the cheapest materials availible , with no decoration and paint of them they would bring many benefits to economy of the city or the country they are located in . It would be easier to plan the city outlay if all the buildings were the same . Could be a good idea ? But there is one and only yet very important reason why this is not possible . We , humans , are unlike ants or any other social animals . We can not make all the things the same to make them as productive as possible . Our mood , health and personal productivity is highly dependant on what wee see and this is a scientific fact . There are same patterns in people 's psychology that decide what we consider beutiful or ugly . It has been so since ancient times . That is why we try to build our cities the way they are pleasant to look at . The proof to my words could be the apartment blocks of the same type built all over USSR in the sixties . The idea was to engineer a building that is of low cost and fits as many families in it as possible . The rapidly growing population and low budget have made the restricton on the decoration , so these apartment blocks were not looking very good to most people . Even so the whole districts and sities started to appear over the country consisting solely of these new buildings . People were given free living space , which is an unarguable benefit , but once they got a possibility to move to another place they did since no one wants to live in an ugly gray box . Nowadays most of these buildings are the cheapest accomodation availible and are deconstructed in many cities to be replaced with new hugh quality housing . This is why architecture is very important to our lives and the look of the buildings exterior and interior are both essential for our well - being . Each city on the planet has its unique design , which makes it beautiful and distinguishes it from others . Especially good looking pieces of architecture are admired all over the world . They attract tourists from other places to simply look at them . Living in a place where everything looks good is a dream for most of the people in the world , I believe .
|
[
{
"correction": "",
"end": 11,
"start": 10,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "utilitarian",
"end": 38,
"start": 37,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "utilitarian",
"end": 38,
"start": 37,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "something",
"end": 51,
"start": 51,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 69,
"start": 68,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "buildings",
"end": 81,
"start": 80,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 85,
"start": 85,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "available",
"end": 90,
"start": 89,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 98,
"start": 98,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "layout",
"end": 125,
"start": 124,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "this",
"end": 134,
"start": 134,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 145,
"start": 145,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "dependent",
"end": 195,
"start": 194,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "we",
"end": 198,
"start": 197,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "beautiful",
"end": 220,
"start": 219,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "restriction",
"end": 304,
"start": 303,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 323,
"start": 323,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "cities",
"end": 328,
"start": 327,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "available",
"end": 389,
"start": 388,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "high",
"end": 401,
"start": 400,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "in",
"end": 412,
"start": 411,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 414,
"start": 414,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "looks",
"end": 417,
"start": 416,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "building 's",
"end": 420,
"start": 419,
"type": "Possessive"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 450,
"start": 450,
"type": "REF:LONG"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,575
|
In the modern world the topis about urbanistics are widely discussed in the society . Some people are sure that buildings should look beautiful . Others argue that beauty is not the most important purpose for it and architets is not abot it . I think that here should be a balance between opinions . First of all , inordinary buildigs decorate cities and help citizens to forget about daily routine . Often it becomes popular places to meet , to walk and to relax for everybody . In my opinion , the Zaryadie park in Moscow is a good example for this point of view . Meanwhile , some buildings can be liked not by all people and then will be a lot of those , who are against these projects . Moreover , interesting architecture of buildings attracts a lot of travellers from different part of the world . It is an extra income for cities and countries . Hotels , cafes , shops and other parts of the touristic indusrty develop economics . On the other side , a big variety is not always good to the city . Different styles of architecture in one place distract atmosphere in the city . For example , if in the city center of old European city people build a contemporary skyscraper , it will be disgusting . To sum up , I would like to say that the main for every city is that it should be attractive and convinient for all citizens and tourists . Understandable transport system , parks , shops are obligatory for every modern city as buildings and good people whoo care about it .
|
[
{
"correction": "topics",
"end": 6,
"start": 5,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "urban studies",
"end": 8,
"start": 7,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "a building",
"end": 37,
"start": 36,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "architecture",
"end": 39,
"start": 38,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "architecture",
"end": 39,
"start": 38,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "about",
"end": 42,
"start": 41,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "there",
"end": 48,
"start": 47,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 53,
"start": 53,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "extraordinary",
"end": 60,
"start": 59,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "extraordinary",
"end": 60,
"start": 59,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "buildings",
"end": 61,
"start": 60,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "see beyond",
"end": 68,
"start": 67,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 69,
"start": 69,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "they",
"end": 74,
"start": 73,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "become",
"end": 75,
"start": 74,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 118,
"start": 118,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "there",
"end": 120,
"start": 120,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 127,
"start": 126,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "parts",
"end": 147,
"start": 146,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "industry",
"end": 173,
"start": 172,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "can help",
"end": 173,
"start": 173,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "economy",
"end": 175,
"start": 174,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "for",
"end": 189,
"start": 188,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "interfere with",
"end": 200,
"start": 199,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 200,
"start": 200,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "an",
"end": 214,
"start": 214,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "modern",
"end": 221,
"start": 220,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "purpose",
"end": 240,
"start": 240,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "convenient",
"end": 251,
"start": 250,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "Clearly understandable",
"end": 258,
"start": 257,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "just",
"end": 270,
"start": 270,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "who",
"end": 276,
"start": 275,
"type": "Spelling"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,578
|
The given graph gives an information about a difference between earnings of men and earnings of women in Japan , USA , UK , Germany and New Zealand in years between 1980 and 1995 . The difference is presented in percents . By the first glance we can observe a decreasing of the earning difference through the years in all countries except Germany , where from 1980 to 1990 the difference decreased by approximately 12 percents but then in 1995 it increased by 2 percents . In Japan we can also see a period of increasing difference by 1 percent by the year 1985 . Since then the percentage difference got lower by 11 percent in 1995 comparing with the peak . In USA the income difference went down by incredible 20 percents between 1980 and 1995 without any unexpected rises . UK shows the lowering of the difference percentage from 36 in 1980 to 26 in 1995 . By looking at the chiffres of New Zealand we see that in this country the difference decreased by 19 percents approximately with the biggest percentage fall between 1985 and 1990 when the percentage decreased by almost 13 percents . We may now overlook the total shift in the income difference of each country comparing each country . The biggest inequality in the income of men and women is presented in Japan even though this inequality had decreased . Then goes UK . In the US the difference percentage decreased and by the year 1995 it is on a third place in the difference chart between all countries presented on the graph . Germany goes next with just a slightly bigger percentage that New Zealand , which has a smallest percentage difference in income between men and women .
|
[
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 8,
"start": 7,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 20,
"start": 20,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 22,
"start": 22,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "a a",
"end": 30,
"start": 29,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "a period",
"end": 30,
"start": 29,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "percent",
"end": 41,
"start": 40,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "percent",
"end": 41,
"start": 40,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "At",
"end": 43,
"start": 42,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "percent",
"end": 76,
"start": 75,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "percent",
"end": 76,
"start": 75,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 76,
"start": 76,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "percent",
"end": 85,
"start": 84,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "percent",
"end": 85,
"start": 84,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 96,
"start": 96,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 123,
"start": 123,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "percent",
"end": 133,
"start": 132,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "percent",
"end": 133,
"start": 132,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 142,
"start": 142,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "showed",
"end": 144,
"start": 143,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "%",
"end": 152,
"start": 152,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "%",
"end": 156,
"start": 156,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "numbers",
"end": 165,
"start": 163,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "percent",
"end": 179,
"start": 178,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "percent",
"end": 179,
"start": 178,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "percent",
"end": 197,
"start": 196,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "percent",
"end": 197,
"start": 196,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "them",
"end": 215,
"start": 213,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "was",
"end": 227,
"start": 226,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 239,
"start": 239,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 248,
"start": 248,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "was",
"end": 255,
"start": 254,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "went",
"end": 273,
"start": 272,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "than",
"end": 281,
"start": 280,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "had",
"end": 286,
"start": 285,
"type": "Tense_choice"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,579
|
After Nikita Khruchev 's ' Ottepel ' a lot of identical buildings appeared in almost all russian towns and cities . People that had a problems with housing then recieved an opportunity to own their personal space and not to sharing it with any other families . The people 's need to have their own flats and the speed of building those so - called Khrushevkas did now permit the architects to make great and beautiful projects , so now we can admit grey depressing box - shape condominiums . Does this type of city developement fulfilling all the needs of the citizens ? Sometimes we ca n't predict what is better on some stage of the history . By the time of ' Ottepel ' it was only possible to build faceless condominiums to give people some place to live . Even nowadays the gouvernement approves projects of the same individuality and beautifulness leves as ones of Khruschevkas . This is caused by a fast growth of the cities . When the city population increase so fast so many people just ca n't rent a flat the only possible decision is to build more and more quikly built big condominiums and not to think about their exterior a lot . It is also relevant for the cases of hurricaines and other unexpected nature cruelties when people just lose their houses . But sometimes this kind of building is used simply to gain more money from less work , because even though those buildings do not require a lot of time and resources to be produced and built , a flat in one of faceless buildings costs a lot of money . I , personally , do not think that the only purpose of buildings is to live in . The atmosphere that creates the building itself is an important thing to think about being an architect . The house should be a home , so why do n't produce beautiful condominiums instead of grey ones to make its habitants ' lives better ? The appearance of the building is the main thing that creates an appearance of the entire quarter . This is also why the condos should be bright and looking like a piece of art . The new quarters appearance can create a new thinking models for people that live in . So , architects can surely be avare only about a purpose of a building , not about its look , but it will create a depressed , strict world . No one wants to live in such a dark place .
|
[
{
"correction": "Khruschev",
"end": 3,
"start": 2,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "Thaw",
"end": 6,
"start": 5,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "many",
"end": 10,
"start": 7,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 25,
"start": 24,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "received",
"end": 30,
"start": 29,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "share",
"end": 41,
"start": 40,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "observe",
"end": 83,
"start": 82,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 84,
"start": 84,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "houses",
"end": 89,
"start": 88,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "development",
"end": 96,
"start": 95,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "fulfil",
"end": 97,
"start": 96,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "at",
"end": 113,
"start": 112,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "Thaw",
"end": 125,
"start": 124,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "houses",
"end": 134,
"start": 133,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "government",
"end": 146,
"start": 145,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "beauty",
"end": 154,
"start": 153,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "beauty",
"end": 154,
"start": 153,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "beauty",
"end": 154,
"start": 153,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "level",
"end": 155,
"start": 154,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "increases",
"end": 176,
"start": 175,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "increases increases fast ,",
"end": 178,
"start": 175,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": ".",
"end": 187,
"start": 187,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "The",
"end": 188,
"start": 187,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "quickly",
"end": 198,
"start": 197,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "houses",
"end": 201,
"start": 200,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "much",
"end": 210,
"start": 208,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "hurricanes",
"end": 220,
"start": 219,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "natural",
"end": 224,
"start": 223,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "disasters",
"end": 225,
"start": 224,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "by",
"end": 246,
"start": 245,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "working working",
"end": 248,
"start": 246,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "working",
"end": 248,
"start": 247,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 249,
"start": 248,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 250,
"start": 250,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "them",
"end": 299,
"start": 299,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 323,
"start": 322,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "not",
"end": 329,
"start": 327,
"type": "Negation"
},
{
"correction": "houses",
"end": 332,
"start": 331,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "inhabitants",
"end": 340,
"start": 339,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "block",
"end": 361,
"start": 360,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "blocks",
"end": 382,
"start": 381,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "them",
"end": 394,
"start": 394,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 397,
"start": 397,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "aware",
"end": 402,
"start": 401,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "aware of",
"end": 404,
"start": 401,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "although",
"end": 416,
"start": 415,
"type": "Linking_device"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,591
|
In our time are saved a lot of historical buildings all around the world . We admire , because this buildings serve its purpose for years . All the time architects built beautiful buildings , but serve they its purpose ? By my opinion , if architect want to build something what will stay in history for a long time , he build something not tipical , interesting and he works with art , to create something beutiful , and sometimes can forget about how long it will be saved . For example , the building in the Rome , were people every day do a billion photos . But why ? Because this bulding is very old and it serve its purpose , of corse , something is broken , but specialy this makes this building not tipical and interesting for people all around the world . In the modern world , architects try to create buildings for a long time . I think it 's because they use a lot of time and money , and they try to do a good building which will serve for a long time . In our world we have a million talented architects which every day think about how to create something new , what nobody built . And i think that it 's more important to built and create only good buldings which will serve for a hundred and more years , but it is important to not forget about this to look beauty and special , not like everything around us . It 's too hard to be special and good architect in the world , were everyone of them wants to build something new , and to be in history like a great architect . But they should n't forget that they buildings should be not just beautiful , but and for a long time .
|
[
{
"correction": "preserved",
"end": 5,
"start": 4,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "many",
"end": 8,
"start": 5,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "many are preserved all around",
"end": 10,
"start": 3,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "them",
"end": 17,
"start": 17,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "these",
"end": 20,
"start": 19,
"type": "Pronouns"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 23,
"start": 22,
"type": "Pronouns"
},
{
"correction": "build",
"end": 32,
"start": 31,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "do do",
"end": 37,
"start": 36,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "do they serve",
"end": 38,
"start": 36,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 39,
"start": 38,
"type": "Pronouns"
},
{
"correction": "In",
"end": 42,
"start": 41,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "an",
"end": 46,
"start": 46,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "wants",
"end": 48,
"start": 47,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "that",
"end": 52,
"start": 51,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "or she",
"end": 62,
"start": 62,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "builds",
"end": 63,
"start": 62,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "typical",
"end": 66,
"start": 65,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 68,
"start": 68,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "or she",
"end": 70,
"start": 70,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "beautiful",
"end": 78,
"start": 77,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "he or she",
"end": 83,
"start": 81,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "kept",
"end": 90,
"start": 89,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 98,
"start": 97,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "where",
"end": 101,
"start": 100,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "building",
"end": 115,
"start": 114,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 118,
"start": 118,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "serves",
"end": 121,
"start": 120,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "course",
"end": 126,
"start": 125,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "especially",
"end": 133,
"start": 132,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "typical",
"end": 139,
"start": 138,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 153,
"start": 153,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "is",
"end": 167,
"start": 166,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "who",
"end": 203,
"start": 202,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "that",
"end": 214,
"start": 213,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "has",
"end": 215,
"start": 215,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "buildings",
"end": 232,
"start": 231,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "it",
"end": 251,
"start": 250,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "looking",
"end": 253,
"start": 251,
"type": "Verbs"
},
{
"correction": "beautiful",
"end": 254,
"start": 253,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 269,
"start": 269,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "where",
"end": 278,
"start": 277,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 287,
"start": 286,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "stay",
"end": 290,
"start": 289,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "not",
"end": 301,
"start": 300,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 304,
"start": 303,
"type": "Pronouns"
},
{
"correction": "? ? ?",
"end": 313,
"start": 311,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,619
|
Our world is full of the cities , some of them are works of art , others have good planning . Cities are growing all the time , villages are becoming bigger and the people 's living area is extending . I convinced , that building must serve its purpose , but architects should not forget about the beauty . Every person has need of beauty , no one wants to live in the grey world . I think , that the purpuse of architects is to build something creative . Some people can say , that population of the city need certain buildings , that will serve its purpose . Of course , city needs shops , schools and fabrics , but if the architect has a talent , any building will become a masterpiece . Also , there are a lot of places in our world that seem very similar . Industrial cities has a very simle architecture and sometimes it is difficult to say the name of the city by the first look . Lots of people will disagree with me , because there are many historical and cultural monuments , that can give identity to the city . The problem is that this monuments look like dimonds among the boxes . In conclusion , i 'd like to say , that it is not necessaty to build works of art all the time and everywhere , nevertheless architects should pay attention at buildings they create . As for me , architector is a really artistic profession , people who want to do this work must understand their importance and significance for the city . Nobody wants to live in gray cities full of similar boxes , does n't it ?
|
[
{
"correction": "",
"end": 6,
"start": 5,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "The The",
"end": 22,
"start": 21,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "The cities",
"end": 22,
"start": 21,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 32,
"start": 32,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "am",
"end": 42,
"start": 42,
"type": "Voice"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 44,
"start": 43,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 45,
"start": 45,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 58,
"start": 57,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 63,
"start": 63,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "for",
"end": 65,
"start": 64,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 80,
"start": 79,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "purpose",
"end": 83,
"start": 82,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 84,
"start": 84,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 96,
"start": 95,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 97,
"start": 97,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "needs",
"end": 102,
"start": 101,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 105,
"start": 104,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 109,
"start": 108,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 114,
"start": 114,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "factories",
"end": 121,
"start": 120,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "many",
"end": 144,
"start": 141,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "have",
"end": 156,
"start": 155,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "simple",
"end": 159,
"start": 158,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 160,
"start": 160,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "A number",
"end": 178,
"start": 177,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 185,
"start": 184,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 194,
"start": 193,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "and",
"end": 197,
"start": 197,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "diamonds",
"end": 211,
"start": 210,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "I",
"end": 219,
"start": 218,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 224,
"start": 223,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "necessary",
"end": 229,
"start": 228,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 241,
"start": 241,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 241,
"start": 241,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 246,
"start": 245,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 246,
"start": 246,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "an an",
"end": 255,
"start": 254,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "an an",
"end": 255,
"start": 254,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "an architect",
"end": 255,
"start": 254,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "do",
"end": 292,
"start": 290,
"type": "Negation"
},
{
"correction": "they",
"end": 293,
"start": 292,
"type": "REF:LONG"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,635
|
In the modern world it is nearly impossible to find cities in which the same architectual styles are presented . Moreover , modern architects do not bother themselves with trying to put their project of building in the whole image , picture of a city . As a result , historical buildings , modern ones made of plastic , concrete and glass stand side by side . It creates a special eclectic effect , which can be sometimes fascinating but not usually . Investors do not want to waste their money on the appearance of the building , it 's purpose is much more important . Our epoch does not need art in everyday life , it needs pragmatic way of creating . Lots of people possibly would not agree with that . Human eye loves beauty , it needs to see streets , which are kind of art itselfves . In the previous centuries architects used to pay a great attention to the style of the building they were creating . The results of their work are still around us . We travel abroad just to see beautiful buildings of the past . In most cases , modern world can not provide us such a sightseeing , because all that was created in the late 40 years , especially in Russia , can not be compared with the past architectual works in its artistic value . For instance , there are two main streets in Moscow , which are familiar enough to judge : Novyj Arbat and Staryj Arbat . The last is the old one . The buildings there were created in 19th century and even earlier . They all have a couple of floors , but no more than 5 . Citizens are able to see the sky and roofs of these buildings , which phycologically relaxing . What is important , it does not affect its ability to serve its purpose . At the same time , the parallel stret - Novyj Arbat - is completely different . It was rebuilt twice in the 20th century , in it 's beginning and in 1990s . All the buildings there are probably the opposite of beauty , but they serve their purpose . These buildings mostly are shopping malls and bars . There is no need to think how these kinds of buildings looks like because people spend time inside it more than outside . Probably this arguement is the one that architects use . To conclude , there should be a golden middle between beauty and the main purpose of the building . Architects should work both for the serving for pupose abilities and appearance of the building . There is a possibility of changing the city from beautiful to the strange place where one grey concrete box stands beside the beautiful palace of the 19th centure . Besides , this image imfluences citizens a lot . Modern city life gets more like a strange movie about another planet , than the city before the beginning of capitalisation .
|
[
{
"correction": "architectural",
"end": 16,
"start": 15,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "architectural",
"end": 16,
"start": 15,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 35,
"start": 35,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "big",
"end": 39,
"start": 38,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 74,
"start": 73,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "its",
"end": 100,
"start": 98,
"type": "Pronouns"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 118,
"start": 118,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "A number",
"end": 124,
"start": 123,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "would not possibly",
"end": 129,
"start": 126,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "The The human",
"end": 135,
"start": 133,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "The human",
"end": 134,
"start": 133,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 144,
"start": 143,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 146,
"start": 146,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "themselves",
"end": 150,
"start": 149,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "themselves",
"end": 150,
"start": 149,
"type": "Pronouns"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 155,
"start": 155,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 160,
"start": 159,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 206,
"start": 205,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 208,
"start": 207,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "architectural",
"end": 231,
"start": 230,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "architectural",
"end": 231,
"start": 230,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 256,
"start": 255,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the the New",
"end": 257,
"start": 255,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the New",
"end": 256,
"start": 255,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 259,
"start": 258,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the the Old",
"end": 260,
"start": 258,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the Old",
"end": 259,
"start": 258,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 302,
"start": 302,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "psychologically",
"end": 309,
"start": 308,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "is psychologically",
"end": 309,
"start": 308,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "street",
"end": 334,
"start": 333,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 336,
"start": 335,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the the New",
"end": 337,
"start": 335,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the New",
"end": 336,
"start": 335,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": ", the the the New",
"end": 338,
"start": 334,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "its",
"end": 354,
"start": 352,
"type": "Pronouns"
},
{
"correction": "1990",
"end": 358,
"start": 357,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "them",
"end": 404,
"start": 403,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "argument",
"end": 411,
"start": 410,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 415,
"start": 415,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "The The",
"end": 438,
"start": 437,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "The architects",
"end": 438,
"start": 437,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 443,
"start": 442,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 445,
"start": 444,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "purposeful",
"end": 446,
"start": 445,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "purposeful",
"end": 446,
"start": 445,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 448,
"start": 448,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "century",
"end": 481,
"start": 480,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "influences",
"end": 487,
"start": 486,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 487,
"start": 487,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 504,
"start": 503,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "capitalism",
"end": 512,
"start": 511,
"type": "Category_confusion"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,642
|
The line graph demonstrates how much energy has been produced from fossil fuels in five countries , namely China , Sweden , India , United States and France during the 45 - year period from 1970 to 2015 . The indexes are given in percent . From the graph is clear that the two European countries have taken measures to decrease the usage of energy from fossil fuels . Although America tends to have sinked it by the year 2015 , the process have gone gradually , in contrast to the two countries . Sweden takes the first place in ecological terms due to the fact that fossil fuels have become not significant energy source during the 45 - year period . The percentage of usage of such an energy decreased dramatically between 1970 and 1985 from 82 to 45 percent with small and short increase in the late 70s . After 1985 energy production from fossil fuels sinked gradually and then remained almost the same , including some fluctuations and finally reached 25 percent . France has had the similar trend , the sharp reduction in getting energy from fuels continued until 1985 too and stood at 61 percent . United States have decreased the index from about 97 to 83 percent during the whole period . China is one of the countries with negative trend , due to the reason that the role of fossil fuels there has risen . By the year 1978 the production of energy increased from 60 to 70 percent and then started to rise gradually and reached 88 percent by the end of the period . From the graph is obvious that France , Sweden and America have aimed to introduce more alternative energy sources , while other countries tend to have difficulties with the realization of it .
|
[
{
"correction": "in",
"end": 18,
"start": 18,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 24,
"start": 24,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "it",
"end": 49,
"start": 49,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "tended",
"end": 72,
"start": 71,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "to sunk",
"end": 75,
"start": 73,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "sunk",
"end": 75,
"start": 74,
"type": "Tense_form"
},
{
"correction": "sank",
"end": 159,
"start": 158,
"type": "Tense_form"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 201,
"start": 201,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "has",
"end": 204,
"start": 203,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 225,
"start": 225,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "it",
"end": 276,
"start": 276,
"type": "REF:LONG"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,644
|
The given line graph represent facts about the quantity of fossil fuels energy . The graph devided into different countries . The graph also shows the percentage and years . According to the graph , it can be clearly seen that it also existe two groups of lines . The former constantly increase ( US , India ) and the latter ( China , France , Sweden ) decrease for over period given . Looking to some of details , it is noticeable that in the first group lines of France and Sweden lead in the simmilar way . The line of France and Sweden began at 90 % sharp and 80 % , then , after a little fluctuating , it significantly drop to almost 60 % and 40 % from 1970 to 1985 than it still decrease to 45 % and 25 % in 2015 . The US line is different . It began around 97 % and slowly decrease to 80 % all of the time . Moving forward , lines of the second groupe has a similar way . The line of India rise dramaticaly from 35 % to around 70 % between 1970 and 2015 . The line of China began at 60 % sharp and slowly increase . It exist a small decreasing between 2010 and 2015 .
|
[
{
"correction": "represents",
"end": 5,
"start": 4,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "divided",
"end": 17,
"start": 16,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "there are",
"end": 42,
"start": 41,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "exist",
"end": 44,
"start": 43,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "increases",
"end": 53,
"start": 52,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "decreases",
"end": 69,
"start": 68,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 72,
"start": 71,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "the given period",
"end": 73,
"start": 71,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "looking at",
"end": 76,
"start": 74,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 78,
"start": 78,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "similar",
"end": 97,
"start": 96,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "lines",
"end": 101,
"start": 100,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "fluctuation",
"end": 120,
"start": 119,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "they",
"end": 122,
"start": 121,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": ", ,",
"end": 136,
"start": 135,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": ", then",
"end": 136,
"start": 135,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "they",
"end": 137,
"start": 136,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "begins",
"end": 156,
"start": 155,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "it is it is",
"end": 162,
"start": 160,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "it is slowly decreasing",
"end": 162,
"start": 160,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "group",
"end": 178,
"start": 177,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "have",
"end": 179,
"start": 178,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "rises",
"end": 188,
"start": 187,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "dramatically",
"end": 189,
"start": 188,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "begins",
"end": 206,
"start": 205,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "There",
"end": 215,
"start": 214,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "exists",
"end": 216,
"start": 215,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "decrease",
"end": 219,
"start": 218,
"type": "Category_confusion"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,645
|
It exist opinion that buildings created by architects must to be pleasant to eyes . But there are also other opinion . Some people believe that architects create their buildings according their fantasy . These people convinced that architects no need to think about people opinion because the most important thing is final look of the building . I totally agree that state of view , I believe that the messages and the main idea of buildings is more important than opinion of people who would think that it is probably ugly . Several buildings , created , for example , in XIX or XX century , compted as unpleasant . Critics and sitizens compted that it was strange to create that For instance , the Eiffel Tour , created by famous french architect as a participant in the competition in XX century , was an innovation in the world of art because of construction with iron and interesting form . In that time it was not common for people to see something like that , but in the modern world people suggest that the Eiffel tour is the masterpiece of art and architecture . Moving forward , buildings can represent the creative idea of autors . The examole to this sentence can be the house in Moscow , which produced in form of the egg . This house located in historical part of the sity and it looks special and non - regular . To sum up , I believe that architects should create their buildings in the way the want because all of the art object still relevant even if it is unpleasant for some people .
|
[
{
"correction": "There",
"end": 1,
"start": 0,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "exists",
"end": 2,
"start": 1,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "an",
"end": 2,
"start": 2,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 10,
"start": 9,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "is",
"end": 18,
"start": 17,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 31,
"start": 31,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "are",
"end": 36,
"start": 36,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "do not",
"end": 40,
"start": 39,
"type": "Negation"
},
{
"correction": "'s",
"end": 45,
"start": 45,
"type": "Possessive"
},
{
"correction": "with with",
"end": 62,
"start": 61,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "with this",
"end": 62,
"start": 61,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "point",
"end": 63,
"start": 62,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "considered",
"end": 108,
"start": 107,
"type": "Derivation"
},
{
"correction": "considered",
"end": 108,
"start": 107,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "considered to be",
"end": 109,
"start": 107,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "citizens",
"end": 114,
"start": 113,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "considered",
"end": 115,
"start": 114,
"type": "Derivation"
},
{
"correction": "considered",
"end": 115,
"start": 114,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "considered",
"end": 115,
"start": 114,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": ".",
"end": 122,
"start": 122,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "for",
"end": 138,
"start": 134,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 154,
"start": 154,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "authors",
"end": 206,
"start": 205,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "example",
"end": 209,
"start": 208,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "for",
"end": 210,
"start": 209,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "is",
"end": 220,
"start": 220,
"type": "Voice"
},
{
"correction": "city",
"end": 236,
"start": 235,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "irregular",
"end": 244,
"start": 241,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "they",
"end": 259,
"start": 258,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "objects",
"end": 268,
"start": 267,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "are",
"end": 268,
"start": 268,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "they",
"end": 273,
"start": 272,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "are",
"end": 274,
"start": 273,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,647
|
Should buildings be beautiful or sensible ? Some people say , that serving a purpouse is a main goal of building , while others argue that buildings are works of art and their appearance values . In this essay I will try to illuminate both views and join one of the sides . Those who claim that buildings have to be considered as works of art , argue that houses , skycrapers and blocks of flats are things those we see every day , especially in big cities . They should be at least pleasant to look at . Otherwise it can be very uncomfortable to exist in urban spaces which are filled with only typical monotone and boring buildings . It can cause social as well as psychic problems for the people who live there . In addition , the whole amount of city buildings produce its special spirit , and it is very important for it to feel comfortable and attractive both for citizens and tourists . Other people are more concerned with practical needs . They believe that works of art cost much and there is no opportunity to build as many such buildings as it is needed for all the citizens . Therefore it is better to build more cheeper and less attractive buildings in order to give places to live for all the people in the city . Moreover , art is a personal deal while the buildings are for many people . Some can dislike the thing that others consider beautiful , and it is unethical to violate personal tastes . Personally , I agree with ones who stand for artificial value of buildings . Statistic shows us , that in areas with ugly and old buildings crime rate is mugh higher than in those with ones meant to be works of art . That means , appearance of the building affects wealth of the neigbourhood , and good surroundings can protect someones life . This is a point which should not be missed .
|
[
{
"correction": "",
"end": 11,
"start": 10,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "purpose",
"end": 15,
"start": 14,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 20,
"start": 20,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "value",
"end": 35,
"start": 34,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 47,
"start": 47,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "skyscrapers",
"end": 72,
"start": 71,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "which",
"end": 79,
"start": 78,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "be",
"end": 160,
"start": 159,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "about",
"end": 175,
"start": 174,
"type": "Prepositional_adjective"
},
{
"correction": "cheaper",
"end": 214,
"start": 212,
"type": "Comparison_degree"
},
{
"correction": "cheaper",
"end": 214,
"start": 213,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "thing",
"end": 240,
"start": 239,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 285,
"start": 284,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "much",
"end": 297,
"start": 296,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "neighborhood",
"end": 322,
"start": 321,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "someone 's",
"end": 329,
"start": 328,
"type": "Spelling"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,655
|
There is a widespread belief that building should firstly serve to its goal and then has a beautiful design , so architects should only construct buildings for a concrete purpose and not think about works of art . In my opinion , it is also significant to build beautiful and impresssive constructions , so this essay will disagree with these statements . First of all , most people need places to visit , and there is a vital concern for any government to make all for their citizens and give a freedom to artists . For instance , some government 's buildings like hospitals , justice palaces , banks are not so impressive that is why people might not enjoy looking at them , and also they do not give a freedom for architects to create what they want . Therefore , in any country there are modern shopping centres , contemporary office centres and just beautiful buildings which not only serve to their purposes , but also appeal people to visit them . This leads to a positive atmosphere in the city , and also give an opportunity for architects to create . Secondly , the architecture of a city is very important issue in a sense of developing national culture and tourism . Usually , the most attractive feature of a country is its beauty . This beauty is often connected with architecture style of a country , so if the government is interested in appealing tourists and wants to make the cultural history of the city , the should invest money in creation of beautiful buildings as in construuction buildings with only purpose . However , some people suggest differently . They suppose that beautiful buildings without concrete purpose is a waste of money , while a city is needed in buildings with relevant goals which has a positive impact on the city . As for me , it is significant to build both types of buildings , but I am convinced that it is possible to make a building modern and stylish , and in the same time important for government . To sum up , both types of buildings are significant , but in my opinion it is impossible to exclude beauty in architecture and that is why it is vital to develop both of them . Only this approach will lead to a normal ratio between culture and beauty and architectural needs of any city .
|
[
{
"correction": "have",
"end": 16,
"start": 15,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "impressive",
"end": 51,
"start": 50,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "of",
"end": 80,
"start": 79,
"type": "Prepositional_noun"
},
{
"correction": "everything",
"end": 85,
"start": 84,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 113,
"start": 113,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 131,
"start": 130,
"type": "Discourse"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 163,
"start": 162,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 169,
"start": 169,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "gives",
"end": 187,
"start": 186,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 202,
"start": 202,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "of",
"end": 208,
"start": 206,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "terms",
"end": 208,
"start": 206,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "architectural",
"end": 235,
"start": 234,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 248,
"start": 248,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "it",
"end": 261,
"start": 260,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "construction",
"end": 272,
"start": 271,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "buildings",
"end": 303,
"start": 301,
"type": "Voice"
},
{
"correction": "needs",
"end": 304,
"start": 301,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "have",
"end": 310,
"start": 309,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "at",
"end": 349,
"start": 348,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "from",
"end": 378,
"start": 377,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,671
|
There are two views of different factors which can influence to us in our childhood and both of them might be important . In the one side , family is the first powerful influence in the child 's life . People who named the family influence to each other every day and it is very important to the small child , because he or she has not another factors of changing and this factors may do not changing for years . So , family is the first but not the last powerful . In the other side , the influence from outside can change a lot in child 's life . Small man finds friends and haters and they influense to each other . The teachers in school change the child 's type of thinking because they make him to do exersices those have only the one or two right answers . Of course , this factor can not be only positive but the friends and haters , teachers and hobbys make harmony in child 's life . All of this factors change the child , make him to grow up . To sum up , the first part of our life we spend in family and , of course , it take the big development in child 's future . In the second part in our life we contact with a lot of people but the family do not end it 's influence . Child grow up and stand a person . So , I do not think that this two powers of influence child 's development have differents proportion in our life .
|
[
{
"correction": "about",
"end": 5,
"start": 4,
"type": "Prepositional_noun"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 11,
"start": 10,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "On the one hand",
"end": 27,
"start": 23,
"type": "Linking_device"
},
{
"correction": "say that family members",
"end": 45,
"start": 45,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 47,
"start": 46,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "not change",
"end": 78,
"start": 75,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "factor",
"end": 92,
"start": 92,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "On the other hand",
"end": 97,
"start": 93,
"type": "Linking_device"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 107,
"start": 107,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "influence",
"end": 120,
"start": 119,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "influence",
"end": 121,
"start": 119,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "or her",
"end": 139,
"start": 139,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "him or her",
"end": 141,
"start": 139,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "exercises",
"end": 142,
"start": 141,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "which",
"end": 143,
"start": 142,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 146,
"start": 145,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "hobbies",
"end": 171,
"start": 170,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "create",
"end": 172,
"start": 171,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 174,
"start": 174,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "or her",
"end": 188,
"start": 188,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "him or her her",
"end": 191,
"start": 188,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 205,
"start": 205,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "is",
"end": 213,
"start": 212,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "is",
"end": 213,
"start": 212,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "for",
"end": 217,
"start": 216,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 217,
"start": 217,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "of",
"end": 226,
"start": 225,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "its",
"end": 243,
"start": 241,
"type": "Possessive"
},
{
"correction": "grows",
"end": 247,
"start": 246,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "becomes",
"end": 250,
"start": 249,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "becomes",
"end": 250,
"start": 249,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "types",
"end": 263,
"start": 262,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "on",
"end": 265,
"start": 265,
"type": "Prepositional_noun"
},
{
"correction": "different",
"end": 270,
"start": 269,
"type": "Spelling"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,700
|
Parents always argue about how to raise their children and thereby they influence them with their own opinions . As it is believed childen should be influenced more by their family , but the outside world has its also very important role in becoming a person . I think , if people could find a balance in it , then both children and parents will be happy . There are several great advantages of family 's influence on child . On the one hand , i strongly belive that family relationship built child 's character and behaviour more than anything else . For example , when you go for a walk , you always see people with different reactions on the same situations . It only depends on your personal qualities , which are brought to you by your family members . On the other hand , the outside world has even more pluses for child 's identity . Firstly , child gets his own taste in whatever he wants . Of course , if affects his personality but that is how the real world works . People , who spend time in their childhood both : inside with a family and outside with friends are more likely become successful in an adult life , than childen , who had never seen a real world by their early 18 - th . However , there are some disadvantages in each type of influence . First of all , childen can start a friendship with a bad company . It can leed to drug and alcohol addictions . As for me , i had a friend who was spending his leisure time outside and then become very aggressive . Moreover , there is a big problem with over - carring a child . Not giving a children pocket money can lead to a robbery and irresponsibility for their actions . In conclusion , i would like to say that parents should find a balance in how to raise and influence their children . Both influences could give a non - strong mind of a child his own view on the world which will help him in a groun - up life .
|
[
{
"correction": "on",
"end": 4,
"start": 3,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 9,
"start": 9,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 23,
"start": 23,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "children",
"end": 24,
"start": 23,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "also has its",
"end": 39,
"start": 36,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "I",
"end": 86,
"start": 85,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "believe",
"end": 88,
"start": 87,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "or her",
"end": 164,
"start": 164,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "or her",
"end": 177,
"start": 177,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 189,
"start": 188,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 197,
"start": 196,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 208,
"start": 208,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "children",
"end": 217,
"start": 216,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "18s",
"end": 231,
"start": 228,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "children",
"end": 249,
"start": 248,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "lead",
"end": 261,
"start": 260,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "I",
"end": 272,
"start": 271,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "became",
"end": 285,
"start": 284,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "caring about a child too much",
"end": 301,
"start": 296,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "I",
"end": 323,
"start": 322,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "terms of raising and influencing",
"end": 339,
"start": 334,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "weak",
"end": 350,
"start": 347,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "or her",
"end": 355,
"start": 355,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "or her",
"end": 364,
"start": 364,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 366,
"start": 365,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "grown",
"end": 367,
"start": 366,
"type": "Spelling"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,703
|
These pipe charts illustrate the number of students in three programmes in the UK University in 2012 , people are divided to the groups based on their age . There are science , arts and sports courses and the amount of students on each is approximately the same . The amount of students who are 40 years old and above in the arts courses three times more than in the science courses , aged people preferred this programme more than others . By the way , there is an opposite tendence with young people , their number are the largest at the science courses and the smallest in the sports and health courses . Additionally , students of the health and sports course are mostly middle - aged . There is one pattern , that there is no programme with similar number of participants , they are not divided equally . In each course there is one dominated group of students and two smaller ones . For example , in the first pipe chart the group of young students dominated , in the second aged people were the biggest share and in the third middle - aged people have the highest number .
|
[
{
"correction": "pie",
"end": 2,
"start": 1,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 37,
"start": 37,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "on",
"end": 69,
"start": 68,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "tendency",
"end": 91,
"start": 90,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "tendency",
"end": 91,
"start": 90,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "numbers",
"end": 97,
"start": 96,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "courses",
"end": 123,
"start": 122,
"type": "NOUN:NUM:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 132,
"start": 131,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "of the fact that",
"end": 134,
"start": 132,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "dominant",
"end": 158,
"start": 157,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "on",
"end": 170,
"start": 169,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "pie",
"end": 173,
"start": 172,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "on",
"end": 182,
"start": 181,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "chart",
"end": 184,
"start": 184,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "on",
"end": 192,
"start": 191,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "pie chart",
"end": 194,
"start": 194,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "had",
"end": 199,
"start": 198,
"type": "Tense_choice"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,704
|
There is one controversary question about what kind of influence affected the person in their childhood the most . Some people think , that the main effect is provided by family , while the other think that the child mostly affected by a things from the outside world . First of all , no one can disagree that child 's first friends are his family and relatives . Children get their genes and main characteristics from parents and in the beginning of baby 's life they spend a majour amount of time together . Furtermore , parenting is all about affecting and raising the child from your own point of view . Only parents can decide , how to teach their child basic knowledge about morality and behaviour . They are mentors and teachers , who can push you and make you do things , even which you do not want to . On the contrary , there is a few arguments for the opposite point of view . Even though child get basic skills and way of thinking from their parents , he or she is free to change this way of life . Many children and mostly teenagers have a pattern to disagree with their parents and to pick up their own interests . Additionally , they get affected by their peers and friends , who could be extremely insisting . For example , when there is a disagreement ot misunderstanding between parents and the person , first people , who the child will want to talk to , are his or her friends . In my opinion , the child or teenager should decide , what kind of person he will be in the future , not their parents . I truly believe , that even though somebody lives his parents , he can not ignore the original part of his personaluty . Teachers , friends , classmates , they all have a bigger influence than the family . However , I do not underestimate the family 's affection , but I am positive , that this affection works only in the beginning of adaptation . Every person adaptates with society and should bring some qualities and skills from there . Parents can not teach their child everything , because he will not want them to . Family is a person 's comfort zone and development could be only when you are outside of it . To summarize , only a person decides , whether he will be affected or not . Although all kind of people the person communicates with have an opportunity to put their opinion and veiws instead of another , this information is mostly accepted , when it is not coming from your relatives .
|
[
{
"correction": "controversial",
"end": 4,
"start": 3,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "controversial",
"end": 4,
"start": 3,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "controversial",
"end": 4,
"start": 3,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "others",
"end": 35,
"start": 33,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "is",
"end": 39,
"start": 39,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 77,
"start": 77,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "major",
"end": 89,
"start": 88,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "Furthermore",
"end": 95,
"start": 94,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 117,
"start": 116,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "his or her",
"end": 181,
"start": 180,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "insistent",
"end": 232,
"start": 231,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "or",
"end": 242,
"start": 241,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 249,
"start": 249,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 252,
"start": 251,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 261,
"start": 260,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "or she",
"end": 283,
"start": 283,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "with his lives with his",
"end": 304,
"start": 302,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "with his or her",
"end": 303,
"start": 302,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "or she",
"end": 306,
"start": 306,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "personality",
"end": 315,
"start": 314,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "adapts",
"end": 362,
"start": 361,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "adapts",
"end": 362,
"start": 361,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 397,
"start": 397,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 417,
"start": 416,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
},
{
"correction": "or she",
"end": 419,
"start": 419,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "opinions",
"end": 441,
"start": 440,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "views",
"end": 443,
"start": 442,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "in front",
"end": 444,
"start": 443,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "others",
"end": 446,
"start": 445,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 453,
"start": 452,
"type": "Verb_pattern"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,716
|
It is often argued that the family makes the biggest influence on a child as some people believe that the society outside the family like friends or classmates influences more . In my opinion , the greatest part in every child 's development plays his or her family . Firstly , it is scientifically proved that the most important years of every person 's life are the first 5 years of existance . In this period of time a child gets an incredible amount of information , learns to walk and talk and his or her own personality starts to form and develop . Though classmates , teachers and friends may make a huge impact on a person , during this important period a child mainly communicates with his family . For example , there are lots of people who have attitudes or tastes that are similar to those of his parents even though they do not notice them at all . It is because of these highly important early years spent with the family . Secondly , it is a quite often situation when a person choose his or her parent as a role model . Lots of people all over the world try to imitate mother 's or father 's behaviour as they consider it as an excellent one . It is also obvious that many people choose for role models some famous people like movie stars . However , this type of imitation is not so successful as the first one as a person is aware of only few aspects of a role model 's life , while he or she knows a mother or a father extremelly good . A person can copy not only certain manners but a whole pattern of behaviour . For example , my sister had nothing in common with my mother until her marriage and now she treats her children just how our mother treated us . To conclude , the family influances greatly on a child as it goes with him through the early ages and , moreover , parents are often choosen as role models .
|
[
{
"correction": "every child 's family plays the greatest part in his or her development",
"end": 48,
"start": 35,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "existence",
"end": 72,
"start": 71,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 78,
"start": 78,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 92,
"start": 92,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "or her",
"end": 129,
"start": 129,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 151,
"start": 150,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "chooses",
"end": 188,
"start": 187,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 254,
"start": 254,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "extremely",
"end": 281,
"start": 280,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 291,
"start": 291,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "influences",
"end": 332,
"start": 331,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "chosen",
"end": 353,
"start": 352,
"type": "Spelling"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,720
|
Nowadays the question of influence in child 's life is starting to be more and more significant . Different parts of argument have different opinion . First side claims that the influence of nurture in family is most powerful , and second side says that child 's outside environment plays more important role . In my point of view , both family and outside factors like friends or school teachers are significant and help child to form his personality . Family gives child his nurture and foundation for a furthure formation . It teachs him how to speak and how to behave to different people , it warns child about dangers of the world . For example , infamous communication with unknown man in the street . Furthermore , family also gives it 's child some basics of etiquet for his furthure communication with other children . Moreover , it gives a foundation for child 's socialization outside the home . In most cases family also helps child to form his futher interest in life for animal , science or sports for example ; outside environment may develop it then or totally change it , but especially family constructs most of child 's interests in life . Then friends , school , teachers and other outside factors help child to socialize ; child is learning how to communicate , he learns basics of ierarchy in environment . Child learns facts about formal communication with his teacher or any other adult ; for instance , in South Korea child have to know different kinds of language 's grammatic , formal and informal , to talk with older people and with his friends . It takes a great part in his personality 's formation in society . In conclusion , I would like to say that the outside environment 's influence may be called the continuation of family nurture . They both play role in child 's life , and that would be difficult to imagine child 's future without powerful participation of both of these parts .
|
[
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 1,
"start": 1,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "become",
"end": 13,
"start": 12,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "sides",
"end": 20,
"start": 19,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "opinions",
"end": 25,
"start": 24,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "The first",
"end": 27,
"start": 26,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "helpful helpful",
"end": 74,
"start": 73,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "helpful for",
"end": 74,
"start": 73,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 74,
"start": 74,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "or her",
"end": 78,
"start": 78,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 82,
"start": 82,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "or her",
"end": 84,
"start": 84,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "future",
"end": 90,
"start": 89,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "future / further",
"end": 90,
"start": 89,
"type": "Compound_word"
},
{
"correction": "teaches",
"end": 94,
"start": 93,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "or her",
"end": 95,
"start": 95,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "it can be",
"end": 118,
"start": 118,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "an",
"end": 118,
"start": 118,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "an",
"end": 121,
"start": 121,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "etiquette",
"end": 139,
"start": 138,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "future",
"end": 142,
"start": 141,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "future / further",
"end": 142,
"start": 141,
"type": "Compound_word"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 164,
"start": 164,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "it 's",
"end": 167,
"start": 167,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "or her",
"end": 171,
"start": 171,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "then develop it",
"end": 190,
"start": 187,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 218,
"start": 218,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 222,
"start": 222,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "or she",
"end": 230,
"start": 230,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "hierarchy",
"end": 234,
"start": 233,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "The child",
"end": 238,
"start": 237,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "or her",
"end": 245,
"start": 245,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 257,
"start": 257,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "has",
"end": 259,
"start": 258,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "grammar",
"end": 267,
"start": 266,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "or her",
"end": 280,
"start": 280,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 323,
"start": 323,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 334,
"start": 334,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "strong",
"end": 339,
"start": 338,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,734
|
The question about how important for buildings to look beautiful have always been important and interesting for discussion . Some people belive that it is more important for architects to make buildings that will serve its purpose than buildings that will look beautiful and that could become the works of art . As for me , I literally can not agree with such opinion . I agree with other people , who are belive that buildings could be not only gray and boring , because architects are artists , but they also know all technologies to make a usefull building , that will stay for a long time and that will serve its purpose . There are some reasons to agree with this opinion . First of all , beautiful buildings in the cities could become important and interesting places for tourists . Also if you see colourful and interesting buildings , you will be happier , than if you see both things every day . It will be boring if you will live in the permanent same colour and design . Also I think that it is really important for architects to be not only people who need to make a good building for using , but they also want to be artists . I think that they want to make our life better and more colourful . Overall , ofcource it is really important for buildins to srve its purpose and to be good incide , but it also really imporant for people , what they see outside , in the daily routine on the streets . I belive that architects need to make buildings that could look like works of art . Maybie it is cheaper to produce a building that will not look beautiful , but if everyone will think so , will we have such a beautiful cities like St. Petersburg , or Moscow ? I think this sities without beautiful buildings will look dead , or nacked , if it is impossible to imagine such a beautiful plases without interesting architecture . Thanks for architects , that makes beautiful building we can live and see every day the works of arts and i think that people , who think that for buildings is more important to serve its purpose than to look interesting and beautiful are not right .
|
[
{
"correction": "is it",
"end": 5,
"start": 5,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "has",
"end": 11,
"start": 10,
"type": "VERB:SVA:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "believe",
"end": 22,
"start": 21,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "that",
"end": 74,
"start": 72,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "believe",
"end": 74,
"start": 72,
"type": "Voice"
},
{
"correction": "not be",
"end": 79,
"start": 77,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "useful",
"end": 99,
"start": 98,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 101,
"start": 100,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 157,
"start": 156,
"type": "Comparison_degree"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 173,
"start": 172,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "of course",
"end": 232,
"start": 231,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "buildings",
"end": 238,
"start": 237,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "serve",
"end": 240,
"start": 239,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "inside",
"end": 247,
"start": 246,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "important",
"end": 253,
"start": 252,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "believe",
"end": 271,
"start": 270,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "Maybe",
"end": 286,
"start": 285,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 317,
"start": 316,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "that that",
"end": 323,
"start": 322,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "that these",
"end": 323,
"start": 322,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "cities",
"end": 324,
"start": 323,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 331,
"start": 330,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "naked",
"end": 333,
"start": 332,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "place",
"end": 344,
"start": 343,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "any",
"end": 345,
"start": 345,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 350,
"start": 349,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 352,
"start": 351,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "make",
"end": 354,
"start": 353,
"type": "VERB:SVA:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "buildings",
"end": 356,
"start": 355,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "buildings where",
"end": 356,
"start": 355,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "I",
"end": 369,
"start": 368,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 373,
"start": 372,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "it",
"end": 378,
"start": 378,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,740
|
There is a prevelant strong belief that it is of primary important for buildings to be optional . People who claim so stress that it is not nesessary to think about beauty making the building . As for me , I can not quitely agree with this statement . I clain that purpose is significant , but we should not forget about art . In my opinion , every building should compare both purpose and beauty . I am sure that it is nesessary to make facilities not only for art . To begin with , according to the article , there was a gap in 2009 in Saint - Petersburg . One architecturer desired to built a little palace in the center of city . The pproblem was that this city lacks to extra place . This proposal was not approve . Secondly , all famous buildings which was created many years ago as the houses for reach people now have transformated into museums , theatres or galleres . In my view it proves that building should serve the purpose . On the other hand , every coin has two sides . I believe that a building should be both profitable and beautiful . I would like to stress that every city has its own plan . It means that a building should be the part of city end meet its requers . Beautiful architecture makes city more popular for visiters . To my mind it stimulates financial benefits . Obviously I 'm sure it is not hard to make such building . For example , the bank on the Kuznetsky Most street . It looks like old building , which can be considered as a part of our cultural heritage . Indeed it is a modern one . This example illustrates the proper process and idea of building . In conclusion I would like to remember a wise proverb : Many men , many minds . Undoubtedly , some people claim that buildings should only serve the purpose , dispite the art . As for me , I partly agree with this statement . However , I would like to stress that every building should be beautiful and tend to be a part of art . It is of great significance , because such buildings shape our city .
|
[
{
"correction": "prevalent",
"end": 4,
"start": 3,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "necessary",
"end": 28,
"start": 27,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "while",
"end": 32,
"start": 32,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "quite",
"end": 44,
"start": 43,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "quite",
"end": 44,
"start": 43,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "claim",
"end": 51,
"start": 50,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "necessary",
"end": 84,
"start": 83,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "architect",
"end": 114,
"start": 113,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "architect",
"end": 114,
"start": 113,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "build",
"end": 117,
"start": 116,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "problem",
"end": 128,
"start": 127,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "lacked",
"end": 135,
"start": 132,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "approved",
"end": 142,
"start": 141,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "were",
"end": 150,
"start": 149,
"type": "VERB:SVA:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "rich",
"end": 159,
"start": 158,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "transformed",
"end": 163,
"start": 162,
"type": "Derivation"
},
{
"correction": "transformed",
"end": 163,
"start": 162,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "transformed",
"end": 163,
"start": 162,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "galleries",
"end": 169,
"start": 168,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 173,
"start": 173,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "and",
"end": 230,
"start": 229,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "requirements",
"end": 233,
"start": 232,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "requirements",
"end": 233,
"start": 232,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 237,
"start": 237,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "visitors",
"end": 242,
"start": 241,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 246,
"start": 246,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 252,
"start": 252,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "A good example is",
"end": 267,
"start": 264,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "an",
"end": 278,
"start": 278,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 313,
"start": 313,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "despite",
"end": 342,
"start": 341,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "partially",
"end": 351,
"start": 350,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "has",
"end": 381,
"start": 379,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,746
|
Some people believe that it is very important for buildings to be beautiful , while , on the contrary , others think it is better for houses to serve its purpose rather than to look good on the streets . From my point of view , all buildings must be strong and people should feel very comfortable in them . Firtsly , the building must be protected from the weather . Secondly , it is important for people who live in to feel very safe . Moreover , the house must be liked by people in both ways : an interior and the view from the street . The streets in the city ot in the town must be beaautiful , as it is a part of the place we live in : they should be pretty , look familiar and make the sence of one town , it also should speak about the spirit of the area or city itself . In my humble opinion , it is really bad when all houses are different , some of them are new , others are in bad condition , some are styled in one way , others in another , etc . However , tourists are always keen on taking pictures of architecture in different countries , as it keeps the spirit of the place , as I said . I , myself , do like taking photos near beautiful buildings . It keeps the pleasure of the moment in that place and at that time . For example , there are Moscow City district near the Kutuzovsky Avenue in Moscow . Its main feature is the high sky scrappers made of glass , and there are always a lot of travellers there , who prefer this places for making photos nowadays . The construction of the buildings are very heavy , but it is made by professionals , so the sky scrappers are strong and there is no risks at all . It is not only heavy , but really pretty and it keeps in minds of the world citizens for a long time . Consequently , it is both serving its purpose of the high buildings and is very pretty . In conclusion , I would say I believe that the special acts for renewing old houses is really good for the government which want only the best for its citizens and for the people to feel safer and live in the beautiful city and country .
|
[
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 30,
"start": 29,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "structurally sound",
"end": 51,
"start": 50,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "Firstly",
"end": 61,
"start": 60,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "said building",
"end": 81,
"start": 81,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "as",
"end": 99,
"start": 99,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "as",
"end": 102,
"start": 102,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 112,
"start": 111,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "or",
"end": 114,
"start": 113,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 116,
"start": 115,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "beautiful",
"end": 120,
"start": 119,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "sense",
"end": 144,
"start": 143,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ";",
"end": 148,
"start": 147,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": ":",
"end": 177,
"start": 176,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "is",
"end": 262,
"start": 261,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 262,
"start": 262,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 267,
"start": 266,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "are",
"end": 276,
"start": 275,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "- rise",
"end": 278,
"start": 278,
"type": "Compound_word"
},
{
"correction": "skyscrapers",
"end": 280,
"start": 278,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "is",
"end": 287,
"start": 286,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 294,
"start": 293,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "is",
"end": 309,
"start": 308,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "skyscrapers",
"end": 323,
"start": 321,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "are",
"end": 328,
"start": 327,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "They are",
"end": 335,
"start": 333,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "just",
"end": 337,
"start": 336,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "they",
"end": 344,
"start": 343,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "stay stay on the",
"end": 347,
"start": 344,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "stay on the",
"end": 346,
"start": 344,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 350,
"start": 348,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "they are",
"end": 360,
"start": 358,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 363,
"start": 362,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "- rise",
"end": 367,
"start": 367,
"type": "Compound_word"
},
{
"correction": "high - high -",
"end": 368,
"start": 365,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "are",
"end": 370,
"start": 369,
"type": "VERB:SVA:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "special actions",
"end": 385,
"start": 382,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "actions",
"end": 385,
"start": 384,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "to renew",
"end": 387,
"start": 385,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "are",
"end": 390,
"start": 389,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "beneficial",
"end": 392,
"start": 391,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 394,
"start": 393,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "only wants",
"end": 398,
"start": 396,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "only wants",
"end": 398,
"start": 396,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 406,
"start": 405,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 414,
"start": 413,
"type": "Articles"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,748
|
Not many people think of architecture as an art medium nowadays . Some architects of the past have been praise for some of their creations as it wasr regarded as a work of art , however , our contemporaries believe that the functions of a building must recieve more attention than its appearance . This essay will discuss this subject and give a personal point of view . To my mind , arcitects should definitely not overlook the looks of their creations , because they are as important as the structure of theirs . It is worth mentioning that a steady and reliable living space is important for dwellers who live in hazardous areas such as Japan , where an earthquake can easily destroy a badly built house . But only a minority of people would agree to live in a dull - loking house . There are many pieces of evindence that repeating patterns and lack of pleasing surroundings may be damaging for one 's satisfaction level and in some cases even lead to depression . Therefore , it is an architects duty to produce a construction plan , which follows safety and does not avoid beauty concerns . Furthermore , an experienced specialist may achieve a sustainability of a building , while still preserving its aesthetically pleasing appearance . For instance , a library in Hainan is famous for its attractive , yet functional planning of bookshelves . Their design resemples a ladder , which provides an easy access for remotly placed books as well as maintains a minimalistic beauty of a simple bookshelf . To conclude , there certainly are ways of making both functional and elegant construction for a willing architect . There is no denying that a building should serve its purpose . Nonetheless , architecture industry should strive to remain itself a form of art and try not to become some form of manufactory .
|
[
{
"correction": "praised",
"end": 20,
"start": 19,
"type": "Tense_form"
},
{
"correction": "they was",
"end": 28,
"start": 26,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "was",
"end": 28,
"start": 27,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "works",
"end": 32,
"start": 30,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": ";",
"end": 35,
"start": 34,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "receive",
"end": 48,
"start": 47,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "architects",
"end": 73,
"start": 72,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "looking",
"end": 144,
"start": 143,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "evidence",
"end": 152,
"start": 151,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "repetitive",
"end": 154,
"start": 153,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "level of satisfaction",
"end": 168,
"start": 166,
"type": "Possessive"
},
{
"correction": "architect 's",
"end": 183,
"start": 182,
"type": "Possessive"
},
{
"correction": "regulations",
"end": 193,
"start": 193,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "which follows safety regulations and does not avoid beauty",
"end": 199,
"start": 189,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 208,
"start": 207,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "resembles",
"end": 243,
"start": 242,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "remotely",
"end": 253,
"start": 252,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "minimalist",
"end": 261,
"start": 260,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "minimalist",
"end": 261,
"start": 260,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the minimalist",
"end": 261,
"start": 259,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "a construction which is both functional and elegant",
"end": 281,
"start": 276,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 300,
"start": 300,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "mass production",
"end": 320,
"start": 319,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,777
|
The infrormation illustrated in the bar charts indicate different types of courses attended by people of diverse age group in the UK during a period of one year , in 2012 . Overall , it is immediately apparent from the graphs that the most popular course among young people was science whereas sports and well - being programmes are popular with adults and art lessons with 40 - aged people and senoirs . It is clear from the charts that the most popular attraction for youngsters is lessons in science , constituing 55 per cent of total respondents whereas art lessons are the second most popular course with 30 per cent of visitors . In a similar fashion , scientific studies and sport lessons made up the largest proportion of adults , visiting coursers , accounting for 30 and 62 per cent respectively . By contrast , art science attendence constitutes the majority of visitors made by 40 + and seniors , becoming the most popular attraction among this age group as opposed to other twice as less popular activities .
|
[
{
"correction": "information",
"end": 2,
"start": 1,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "indicates",
"end": 8,
"start": 7,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 16,
"start": 16,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 29,
"start": 28,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 51,
"start": 51,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "were",
"end": 59,
"start": 58,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 62,
"start": 62,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "people aged 40",
"end": 70,
"start": 66,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "were popular people aged 40 and seniors .",
"end": 72,
"start": 65,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "seniors",
"end": 72,
"start": 71,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "young people",
"end": 86,
"start": 85,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "constituting",
"end": 92,
"start": 91,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 98,
"start": 98,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "make",
"end": 125,
"start": 124,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "visiting courses",
"end": 134,
"start": 131,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "courses",
"end": 134,
"start": 133,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "course course",
"end": 149,
"start": 148,
"type": "Possessive"
},
{
"correction": "course 's",
"end": 149,
"start": 148,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "attendance",
"end": 150,
"start": 149,
"type": "Formational_affixes"
},
{
"correction": "attendance",
"end": 150,
"start": 149,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "represented",
"end": 156,
"start": 155,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "people aged 40",
"end": 159,
"start": 157,
"type": "LEX:LONG"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 171,
"start": 171,
"type": "Punctuation"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,788
|
There is no doubt that buildings can not be described only as a special places to live there , work or something else - many years ago people became to build really exciting and beautiful buildings ; for them buildings was not only buildings , they were a special kind of art . Nowadays some people believe that the most important thing for buildings is to serve their purpose . I tend not to believe in it and now I tell you why I think so . To begin with , buildings around you can change your life . In my opinion , if you see beautiful and colorful buildings every day , you became happier . It is very important , because life in big cities is stressful , so people should have more positive things in their days . Secondly , all over the time people , who has a lot of money , always do not want to be like other people . I think , really amazing building is an excellent way to be another . If you see a big house with great sculptures on it , you of course decide that it is a rich man 's house . Contrastly , there are a lot of people that are not love modern art , so they can decide not to buy a flat only because the architects , who made the buildg , did something very special and modern . I think , there are not many people who wants to live , to illustrate , in a house , that is fallen ( there is one in Praga ) , only art - lovers . But these buildings can be not only house , I think , it is a very good idea for a mall , for example . To conclude , buildings are important thing of our social life . That is why buildings should be works of art , but only if they are relevant to use them .
|
[
{
"correction": "",
"end": 13,
"start": 12,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "in",
"end": 18,
"start": 17,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 24,
"start": 23,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "started",
"end": 29,
"start": 28,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 39,
"start": 39,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "were",
"end": 41,
"start": 40,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 43,
"start": 43,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 63,
"start": 63,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "will",
"end": 80,
"start": 80,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "become",
"end": 115,
"start": 114,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "you become",
"end": 115,
"start": 112,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 122,
"start": 121,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "existence",
"end": 140,
"start": 139,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "have",
"end": 151,
"start": 150,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "much",
"end": 154,
"start": 151,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "much money always do",
"end": 156,
"start": 148,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 169,
"start": 169,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "different",
"end": 179,
"start": 178,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": ", of course ,",
"end": 195,
"start": 193,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "or woman 's",
"end": 203,
"start": 203,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "In In",
"end": 206,
"start": 205,
"type": "Linking_device"
},
{
"correction": "In contrast",
"end": 206,
"start": 205,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "many",
"end": 212,
"start": 209,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "do",
"end": 215,
"start": 214,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "building",
"end": 238,
"start": 237,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 249,
"start": 248,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "want",
"end": 256,
"start": 255,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 262,
"start": 261,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "Prague",
"end": 275,
"start": 274,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "apartment apartment",
"end": 290,
"start": 289,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "apartment houses",
"end": 290,
"start": 289,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "they",
"end": 295,
"start": 294,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "are",
"end": 296,
"start": 295,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "things",
"end": 314,
"start": 313,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "be used",
"end": 337,
"start": 336,
"type": "Voice"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,793
|
The depicted grapf reflect percentage difference in income between men and women in different countries between 1980 and 1995 . 5 countries all over the world were included in this searces ( there are Japan , USA , UK , Germany and New Zeland ) . There are 2 main groups which could be distinguished : the first gropup is New Zeland and Germany where difference was always low comparing to the second group which is Japan , USA and UK . In 1980 this 3 countries had percentage difference in earnings about 35 - 40 % . The biggest percentage of difference was in Japan and it was 40 % , while New Zeland and Germany had only about 20 - 23 % which is almost twice lower . New Zeland had the lowest percentage which is 20 % . With time this difference became lower in all countries and in 1995 it came to 30 % in Japan , 23 % and 20 % in UK and USA , and about 12 % in New Zeland and Germany . Japan still has the highest difference but USA and UK decreased this difference rapidly and there appeared three groups : the lowest are still New Zeland and Germany , middle is UK and US and the highest is Japan . Also , New Zeland is the only country which had growth in percentage difference in this graph . It is between 1990 and 1995 .
|
[
{
"correction": "graph",
"end": 3,
"start": 2,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "reflects",
"end": 4,
"start": 3,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "differences",
"end": 6,
"start": 5,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "these",
"end": 30,
"start": 29,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "searches",
"end": 31,
"start": 30,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "were",
"end": 34,
"start": 33,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 36,
"start": 36,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 38,
"start": 38,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "Zealand",
"end": 44,
"start": 43,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "group",
"end": 59,
"start": 58,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "Zealand",
"end": 62,
"start": 61,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 64,
"start": 64,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 65,
"start": 65,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "compared",
"end": 70,
"start": 69,
"type": "Voice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 74,
"start": 74,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 78,
"start": 78,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 80,
"start": 80,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "these",
"end": 85,
"start": 84,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "Zealand",
"end": 115,
"start": 114,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 124,
"start": 124,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "was",
"end": 126,
"start": 125,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "as low",
"end": 129,
"start": 128,
"type": "Comparative_constr"
},
{
"correction": "Zealand",
"end": 132,
"start": 131,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 136,
"start": 136,
"type": "Relative_clause"
},
{
"correction": "was",
"end": 138,
"start": 137,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 150,
"start": 150,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 167,
"start": 167,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 169,
"start": 169,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "Zealand",
"end": 178,
"start": 177,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "had",
"end": 184,
"start": 183,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 188,
"start": 188,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 190,
"start": 190,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "were",
"end": 204,
"start": 203,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "Zealand",
"end": 207,
"start": 206,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "those in the",
"end": 210,
"start": 210,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "were",
"end": 212,
"start": 211,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "were",
"end": 212,
"start": 211,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 212,
"start": 212,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the USA",
"end": 215,
"start": 214,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 215,
"start": 215,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "was",
"end": 219,
"start": 218,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "Zealand",
"end": 225,
"start": 224,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "was",
"end": 226,
"start": 225,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "was",
"end": 241,
"start": 240,
"type": "Tense_choice"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,802
|
Some people believe that the aim of the buildings is to be beautiful , but the others claim that buildings should serve their first and main purpose . On the one hand , it is pretty obvious that the main idea of buildings is to help people in different spheres and not being the works of art . The first point is that there are different types of buildings which simply do not have a need in looking beautiful or pretty . For example , hospital buildings or factories do not have a need in being a piece of art , the main idea of these types of buildings is to simply exist for people in every country because it does not matter how the hospital , for example , looked like , it is more important to just have a normal and safe building for a hospital in a town . The second point is that it is apparent that making a piece of art from a simple building can cost a lot of money and it is important to understand that not every government of the country has an opportunity to spend a lot of money on creating a works of art , their main goal should be just simply providing these facilities to people and not thinking about how these essential buildings ( for example , schooles , hospitals and so on ) are looked like . On the other hand , some people believe that it is also important to make well - looked and even amazing buildings and to do not stop on creating simple and typical ones . Firstly , beautiful buildings can really change the whole look of the town . The main benefit from this point is that citizens will really enjoy living in such city . Secondly , well - looked buildings can increase the amount of touristes in the city . If government will provide money for architects to create interesting and beautiful buildings , many people from all over the world would have a desire to come and see these building . And , what is more more important , more touristes mean an increasing in the economics of the country . All in all , there are two opinions about the idea of buildings . I strongly believe that it is more important for a building to serve its purpose than to look beautiful and interesting .
|
[
{
"correction": "",
"end": 16,
"start": 15,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 50,
"start": 50,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "to be",
"end": 53,
"start": 52,
"type": "Lack_par_constr"
},
{
"correction": "to look",
"end": 78,
"start": 74,
"type": "Modals"
},
{
"correction": "to be",
"end": 96,
"start": 91,
"type": "Modals"
},
{
"correction": "looks",
"end": 131,
"start": 130,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "looks",
"end": 132,
"start": 130,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "country 's government",
"end": 189,
"start": 185,
"type": "Confusion_of_structures"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 191,
"start": 190,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 201,
"start": 200,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": ";",
"end": 205,
"start": 204,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "to provide",
"end": 213,
"start": 212,
"type": "Infinitive_constr"
},
{
"correction": "to think",
"end": 220,
"start": 219,
"type": "Lack_par_constr"
},
{
"correction": "schools",
"end": 230,
"start": 229,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "look",
"end": 238,
"start": 236,
"type": "Voice"
},
{
"correction": "good - looking",
"end": 258,
"start": 255,
"type": "Compound_word"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 262,
"start": 262,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "just",
"end": 268,
"start": 266,
"type": "Coherence"
},
{
"correction": "create",
"end": 269,
"start": 268,
"type": "Lack_par_constr"
},
{
"correction": "of",
"end": 292,
"start": 291,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 303,
"start": 303,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "good - looking",
"end": 310,
"start": 307,
"type": "Compound_word"
},
{
"correction": "tourists",
"end": 317,
"start": 316,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 319,
"start": 318,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "provided",
"end": 325,
"start": 323,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "buildings",
"end": 352,
"start": 351,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "tourists",
"end": 363,
"start": 362,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "means",
"end": 364,
"start": 363,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "increase",
"end": 366,
"start": 365,
"type": "Category_confusion"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,806
|
it is believed that there is more importance for buildings to be suitable for its purpose than to have a significant architecture . Also , it is concidered that architects should not pay attention on beauty of the building during the construction . In my opinion , both components are essential . First of all , buildings should serve perfecrly to its purpose . It is important when there are any dangerous situations such as fire or flood . It is better when a plan of building may be easily understand , so in accidents people would find exits as fast as possible . Schools or hospitals may be created with simple construction , because such buildings have a huge importance . Nevertheless , it is possible to make them look beautiful . Moreover , appearance of the city is important for citizens and tourists and therefore for economy , too . It influences people mood , because it is pleasent to visit buildings with intresting and beautiful architectur . In addition , locals may have a good attitude towards their place of living ; it may be important for goverment . Also , it has a cultural value ; citizens would be much educated if they surronded by beauty . In conclusion , i would like to say that buildings should be beautiful , because it is essential for cities and people who live there . At the same time , they should be suitable for their purpose .
|
[
{
"correction": "It",
"end": 1,
"start": 0,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "it",
"end": 5,
"start": 4,
"type": "Confusion_of_structures"
},
{
"correction": "important",
"end": 8,
"start": 7,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 15,
"start": 14,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "remarkable",
"end": 21,
"start": 20,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "considered",
"end": 28,
"start": 27,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 35,
"start": 34,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 35,
"start": 35,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "perfectly",
"end": 60,
"start": 59,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 62,
"start": 61,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "some",
"end": 71,
"start": 70,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 86,
"start": 86,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "understood",
"end": 91,
"start": 90,
"type": "Voice"
},
{
"correction": "can",
"end": 97,
"start": 96,
"type": "Modals"
},
{
"correction": "using simple constructions",
"end": 113,
"start": 110,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "'s",
"end": 155,
"start": 155,
"type": "Possessive"
},
{
"correction": "pleasant",
"end": 161,
"start": 160,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "interesting",
"end": 166,
"start": 165,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "architecture",
"end": 169,
"start": 168,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 191,
"start": 190,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the government",
"end": 191,
"start": 190,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "great architecture",
"end": 195,
"start": 194,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "better",
"end": 204,
"start": 203,
"type": "Comparison_degree"
},
{
"correction": "were",
"end": 208,
"start": 207,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "were were",
"end": 208,
"start": 207,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "were surrounded",
"end": 208,
"start": 207,
"type": "Voice"
},
{
"correction": "I",
"end": 215,
"start": 214,
"type": "Capitalisation"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,822
|
There is no question that a lot of people watch sports on TV and somewhere outside . The popular beleif is that such activity is a real waste of time . I partially agree with this statement . There are some arguments for unnecessarity of watching sports . The first of these is that people do n't get any usefull information from it . Unfortunatelly , watching sports does n't teach us anything and people do n't get any information about the surrounding world from it . It would be better , for example , to go to the library or watch some scientific channeles . Another argument is that if a person begin to watch sports on TV quite often , he starts to lead sedentary lifestyle . For example , while doing such activity , people usually lie down on sofas eating some food . That can even hurt a persons health . There are , however , equally strong arguments in favour on watching sports on TV or at live events . Firstly , people nowadays work a lot and they got really tired after job . Watchig some sports can help a person to get rid of a stress . Also it is a good way to get some positive emotions . All of this can even promote the future productivity in work . Another related argument is that watching some sports is a good reason to meet friends or gather family in order to spend time together . It helps people better communicate with each other and have fun . To conclude , there is a widely held view that watchig sports on TV or outside is quite unncessary . And this point of view is n't unfounded . But in contrast to this opinion there are a lot of strong arguments for positive infuential of such an activity .
|
[
{
"correction": "belief",
"end": 20,
"start": 19,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "about",
"end": 43,
"start": 42,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "uselessness",
"end": 44,
"start": 43,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "them",
"end": 52,
"start": 51,
"type": "Pronouns"
},
{
"correction": "not",
"end": 57,
"start": 56,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "Unfortunately",
"end": 65,
"start": 64,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "not",
"end": 70,
"start": 69,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "not",
"end": 77,
"start": 76,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "channels",
"end": 105,
"start": 104,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "begins",
"end": 114,
"start": 113,
"type": "Tense_form"
},
{
"correction": "or she",
"end": 123,
"start": 123,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 126,
"start": 126,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "relax",
"end": 141,
"start": 139,
"type": "LEX:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "person 's",
"end": 153,
"start": 152,
"type": "Possessive"
},
{
"correction": "of",
"end": 166,
"start": 165,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "get",
"end": 185,
"start": 184,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 188,
"start": 188,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "Watching",
"end": 191,
"start": 190,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 205,
"start": 205,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "Watching sports",
"end": 219,
"start": 216,
"type": "LEX:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "at",
"end": 226,
"start": 225,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "communicate with each other better",
"end": 261,
"start": 256,
"type": "Word_order"
},
{
"correction": "watching",
"end": 276,
"start": 275,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "unnecessary",
"end": 284,
"start": 283,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "about",
"end": 308,
"start": 307,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "influential",
"end": 310,
"start": 309,
"type": "Spelling"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,827
|
It is often said that countries that countries should avoid importing foood and produce it for their population . That point of view is sane , and I mostly agree with this meaning , but only with some remarks . First of my arguments is that producing is usually cheaper than buying so it is good for economics not to import food , but make it . The government that is not buying expensive food from another countries can spend the money for enhansing the level of people 's life or improving scientific researches . Secondly , in case of conflict with countries exporting food , the importing country will have a deficite . People will lose some of their favourite product because of shopping the import . But if the country is not buying food , but making it , a deficit will not happen . And it is not just about food , but firstly it is medicine and weapon . However , there is one problem that lies in possibilities . Countries just can not produce every kind of food on their own . Sometimes the climate or another things just forbid to produce food . For example , it is impossible to grow bananas or pineapples in cold north countries . I think we should nesessary mention it , because if we do not import some rare kinds of food , then people start to miss it and become unhappy . In conclusion , I want to say that it is not true to provide radical meanings as complete avoiding an import .
|
[
{
"correction": "food",
"end": 12,
"start": 11,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "The first",
"end": 41,
"start": 40,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 64,
"start": 64,
"type": "Infinitive_constr"
},
{
"correction": "does not buy",
"end": 73,
"start": 70,
"type": "Tense"
},
{
"correction": "other",
"end": 77,
"start": 76,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "enhancing",
"end": 84,
"start": 83,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "food - exporting countries",
"end": 105,
"start": 102,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "deficit",
"end": 113,
"start": 112,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "imported",
"end": 127,
"start": 126,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "about",
"end": 159,
"start": 159,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "all",
"end": 180,
"start": 179,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "other",
"end": 192,
"start": 191,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "does not allow",
"end": 195,
"start": 194,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "necessary",
"end": 220,
"start": 219,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "them",
"end": 241,
"start": 240,
"type": "REF:LONG"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,841
|
There is no question that a lot of people watch sports on TV and somewhere outside . The popular beleif is that such activity is a real waste of time . I partially agree with this statement . There are some arguments for unnecessarity of watching sports . The first of these is that people do n't get any usefull information from it . Unfortunatelly , watching sports does n't teach us anything and people do n't get any information about the surrounding world from it . It would be better , for example , to go to the library or watch some scientific channeles . Another argument is that if a person begin to watch sports on TV quite often , he starts to lead sedentary lifestyle . For example , while doing such activity , people usually lie down on sofas eating some food . That can even hurt a persons health . There are , however , equally strong arguments in favour on watching sports on TV or at live events . Firstly , people nowadays work a lot and they got really tired after job . Watchig some sports can help a person to get rid of a stress . Also it is a good way to get some positive emotions . All of this can even promote the future productivity in work . Another related argument is that watching some sports is a good reason to meet friends or gather family in order to spend time together . It helps people better communicate with each other and have fun . To conclude , there is a widely held view that watchig sports on TV or outside is quite unncessary . And this point of view is n't unfounded . But in contrast to this opinion there are a lot of strong arguments for positive infuential of such an activity .
|
[
{
"correction": "belief",
"end": 20,
"start": 19,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "uselessness",
"end": 44,
"start": 43,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "useful",
"end": 60,
"start": 59,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "Unfortunately",
"end": 65,
"start": 64,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "viewers",
"end": 72,
"start": 71,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "channels",
"end": 105,
"start": 104,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "begins",
"end": 114,
"start": 113,
"type": "Tense_form"
},
{
"correction": "they",
"end": 123,
"start": 122,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 126,
"start": 126,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "This",
"end": 148,
"start": 147,
"type": "Pronouns"
},
{
"correction": "harm",
"end": 151,
"start": 150,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "person 's",
"end": 153,
"start": 152,
"type": "Possessive"
},
{
"correction": "of",
"end": 166,
"start": 165,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "get",
"end": 185,
"start": 184,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "work",
"end": 189,
"start": 188,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "Watching",
"end": 191,
"start": 190,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "these",
"end": 219,
"start": 218,
"type": "Pronouns"
},
{
"correction": "contribute to",
"end": 222,
"start": 221,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "at",
"end": 226,
"start": 225,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "opportunity",
"end": 240,
"start": 239,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "watching",
"end": 276,
"start": 275,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "unnecessary",
"end": 284,
"start": 283,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the positive influence",
"end": 310,
"start": 308,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "influence",
"end": 310,
"start": 309,
"type": "Category_confusion"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,885
|
The line graph illustrates how changes the amount of profits of Apple , Samsung , Blackberry and HTC for the period of five years . Over the period from 2010 to 2015 , Apple 's figure had upward trend , when Blackberry and HTC had downward trend and Samsung rised to its highest point and then decreased to the start level . It is clear that the highest percentage of share at 40 % in the year 2010 had Apple . Samsung 's and Blackberry 's figures were about 20 % which was a half lower than Apple 's , and the lowest percentage had HTC that was around 10 % . In 2011 , the figures of HTC , Samsung and Blackberry were the same at 20 % , while Apple 's percentage of share rose to 60 % and 78 % in 2012 . In 2013 , the percentage of profit in Apple decreased to 60 % , when Samsung 's figure reached a peak at about 40 % . In the same year Blackberry 's and HTC 's profit continued to fell . In 2015 , Apple reached its highest point at more than 90 % , while Samsung 's figures dropped to about 15 % and HTS 's and Blackberry 's to less than 10 % .
|
[
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 6,
"start": 5,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the amount of profits of Apple , Samsung , Blackberry and HTC changed",
"end": 18,
"start": 5,
"type": "Standard"
},
{
"correction": "over",
"end": 19,
"start": 18,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "the figure for Apple",
"end": 36,
"start": 33,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "an",
"end": 37,
"start": 37,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "while",
"end": 41,
"start": 40,
"type": "Conjunctions"
},
{
"correction": "profits of",
"end": 41,
"start": 41,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 45,
"start": 45,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 47,
"start": 47,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "those of",
"end": 48,
"start": 48,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "rose",
"end": 50,
"start": 49,
"type": "Tense_form"
},
{
"correction": "starting",
"end": 60,
"start": 59,
"type": "Suffix"
},
{
"correction": "Apple had the highest percentage of share at 40 % in the year 2010",
"end": 80,
"start": 66,
"type": "Standard"
},
{
"correction": "The figures for Samsung and Blackberry",
"end": 87,
"start": 81,
"type": "Confusion_of_structures"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 91,
"start": 91,
"type": "Non_defining"
},
{
"correction": "of of Apple 's profits",
"end": 99,
"start": 95,
"type": "Numerical"
},
{
"correction": "of Apple 's profits ,",
"end": 99,
"start": 95,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "was that of",
"end": 105,
"start": 104,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": ", which",
"end": 107,
"start": 106,
"type": "Non_defining"
},
{
"correction": "nearly",
"end": 109,
"start": 108,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the share of Apple",
"end": 136,
"start": 131,
"type": "Confusion_of_structures"
},
{
"correction": "then to",
"end": 141,
"start": 141,
"type": "Linking_device"
},
{
"correction": "while",
"end": 161,
"start": 160,
"type": "Conjunctions"
},
{
"correction": "shares",
"end": 182,
"start": 182,
"type": "Absence_comp_colloc"
},
{
"correction": "fall",
"end": 185,
"start": 184,
"type": "Tense_form"
},
{
"correction": "the figures of Samsung",
"end": 204,
"start": 201,
"type": "Confusion_of_structures"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 209,
"start": 209,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "those those of HTS and Blackberry",
"end": 215,
"start": 210,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "those of HTS and Blackberry ,",
"end": 215,
"start": 210,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "Malyshok",
"end": 221,
"start": 220,
"type": "note"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,890
|
In a modern world most of parents prefer to dedicate their life to career rather than to stay at home and take care of their offsprings . They decide to put kids into a kindergarden or ask grandparents for help . Anyway , this decision do not always benefit the children 's fostering and can raise some essential issues . Several reasons for such families choice can be suggested . First of all the adults would like to have a high income , therefore they do not want to miss job opportunities if there are some . Secondly such people wish to dain more experience in order to become successful and rich . In this case they will not have to worry about money when they are retired . Finally , some young mothers find it boring to spend all the with babies , nurishing and entertaining them . They decide to make their life brighter and , what is not less important , more independent from their husbends . However , such choices lead to situations , when children do not spend enough time with their parents , and it causes following problems . As for the first one , kids suffer from lack of attention and control , and it can result in involving them into troubles , such as street fighting , smoking , drinking alcohol or some criminal issues . Secondly , instead of playing having some delightful discussions with parents , children dedicate all the spare time to computer and any other electronic gadgets . These can influence their mental health and even cause some diseases , such as computer addiction . Finally , if all its members lose interest in daily routine of each other and they fall apart . It can end up with cheating on , different types of depression , misunderstanding and maybe even divorces . To sum up the wish if the adults to earn plenty of money is clear and understandable . But they always should remember , that their kids do not appreciate them for dollars and most of times the problems , caused by attention lack , can not be solved by any finances .
|
[
{
"correction": "",
"end": 2,
"start": 1,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "place",
"end": 31,
"start": 30,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "does",
"end": 46,
"start": 45,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "well - being",
"end": 53,
"start": 52,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "family",
"end": 65,
"start": 64,
"type": "Noun_attribute"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 73,
"start": 73,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "no article",
"end": 74,
"start": 73,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 80,
"start": 79,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 98,
"start": 98,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "gain",
"end": 103,
"start": 102,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 116,
"start": 116,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "time",
"end": 141,
"start": 141,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "nursing",
"end": 145,
"start": 144,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "of",
"end": 167,
"start": 166,
"type": "Prepositional_adjective"
},
{
"correction": "husbands",
"end": 169,
"start": 168,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 178,
"start": 177,
"type": "Defining"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 192,
"start": 192,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 256,
"start": 255,
"type": "Redundant_comp"
},
{
"correction": "This",
"end": 261,
"start": 260,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "deviations",
"end": 271,
"start": 270,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 291,
"start": 291,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "the family",
"end": 293,
"start": 292,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "will",
"end": 293,
"start": 293,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "in",
"end": 301,
"start": 300,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "each other",
"end": 303,
"start": 303,
"type": "Absence_comp_colloc"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 318,
"start": 318,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "of",
"end": 321,
"start": 320,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 322,
"start": 321,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "should always",
"end": 337,
"start": 335,
"type": "Standard"
},
{
"correction": "money",
"end": 348,
"start": 347,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the time",
"end": 352,
"start": 351,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "lack of attention",
"end": 359,
"start": 357,
"type": "Confusion_of_structures"
},
{
"correction": "caused by lack of attention",
"end": 360,
"start": 354,
"type": "Attr_participial"
},
{
"correction": "Чулдина",
"end": 368,
"start": 367,
"type": "note"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,896
|
Nowadays air pollution , global warming and other environmental problems are very urgent . One of the reasons of them is a rising amount of air travelling for business and leisure activities . Some people believe that government should decrease air flights by introducing strict laws , while others are not agree with this idea . As for me , I strongly disagree with this idea . First of all , according to the statistic much more poisonous gas and exhaust fumes are produced by cars , due to this fact it will be more useful to introduce more laws for reducing amount of cars which is constantly rising nowadays . Moreover , reducing the amount of air flights will cause some kind of economic crises for air flight companies and influence the number of people who will start use their private transport such as cars , and using of trains and ferries is also will increase . However , this kinds of transport produce more waste in the atmosphere . As a result , this laws for reducing air travel will not be effective and useful for the environment and will lead to crisis . However , decreasing of number air travel will lead to some positive effects as more strict rules for technical equipment of planes , as a result , air flights will become not only more nature friendly , but also safier for passengers . In conclusion , I must say that reducing the amount of air travel by introducing laws be government is a quite useless idea which will not help to decrease air pollution or global warming significantly , but will lead to serious economic problems all over the world .
|
[
{
"correction": "for",
"end": 19,
"start": 18,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "these problems",
"end": 20,
"start": 19,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 37,
"start": 37,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "reduce",
"end": 40,
"start": 39,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "reduce the number reduce",
"end": 40,
"start": 39,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "do",
"end": 50,
"start": 49,
"type": "Tense_form"
},
{
"correction": "opinion",
"end": 66,
"start": 65,
"type": "Redundant_comp"
},
{
"correction": "statistics statistics",
"end": 75,
"start": 74,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "statistics",
"end": 75,
"start": 74,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "gases",
"end": 79,
"start": 78,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "to reduce",
"end": 102,
"start": 100,
"type": "Infinitive_constr"
},
{
"correction": "the the",
"end": 103,
"start": 102,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the number",
"end": 103,
"start": 102,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 105,
"start": 105,
"type": "Non_defining"
},
{
"correction": "number",
"end": 116,
"start": 115,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "crisis",
"end": 126,
"start": 125,
"type": "Often_confused"
},
{
"correction": "airlines",
"end": 130,
"start": 127,
"type": "Redundant_comp"
},
{
"correction": "using",
"end": 140,
"start": 139,
"type": "Verb_Inf_Gerund"
},
{
"correction": "or",
"end": 148,
"start": 147,
"type": "Conjunctions"
},
{
"correction": "these",
"end": 161,
"start": 160,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "these",
"end": 176,
"start": 175,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 200,
"start": 199,
"type": "Transitive"
},
{
"correction": "may",
"end": 204,
"start": 203,
"type": "Modals"
},
{
"correction": "stricter",
"end": 212,
"start": 210,
"type": "Comparative_adj"
},
{
"correction": "will result in",
"end": 223,
"start": 218,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "becoming",
"end": 227,
"start": 225,
"type": "Participial_constr"
},
{
"correction": "safer",
"end": 236,
"start": 235,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "restrictions",
"end": 255,
"start": 254,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 256,
"start": 255,
"type": "Redundant_comp"
},
{
"correction": "quite a",
"end": 260,
"start": 258,
"type": "Standard"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 262,
"start": 262,
"type": "Non_defining"
},
{
"correction": "Kaprielova",
"end": 287,
"start": 286,
"type": "suggestion"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,900
|
It is believed by some that people should travel using plane only due to emergency cases . Otherwise , we should not be allowed to us planes as they contaminate our environment . I completely disagree with this statement . In my opinion , planes is one of the greatest inventions in the history and we should take the best out of it . First of all , planes is fastest way to travel to other countries . Nowadays , people just can not afford themselves spending days and weeks on travelling by cars or ships . It is too long and they are too busy to waste time on such long journeys . What is more , with globalization , the world is changing very quickly and innovations in one country have immediate effects on others . This is why business trips should be fast , so that people had the chance to adapt to changes properly . However , some people are certain that air travels have disasterous effect on environment condition . Nobody can argue that , but in fact , cars , ships and other means of transport do as much harm to nature as planes . If we compare a plane for 150 passengers and 150 personal cars , it is clear that the first option is better . Another argument against planes is a huge possibility of air crash . However , statistics proves that plane is the safest kind of transport . To summarize , I would like to say that although a huge plane seems the biggest threat to our environment , in reality , it is not . Furthermore , air travel is the safest and fastes way to reach the destination .
|
[
{
"correction": "Some people believe that we",
"end": 7,
"start": 0,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "by",
"end": 10,
"start": 9,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "in",
"end": 14,
"start": 12,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "use",
"end": 26,
"start": 25,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "plane",
"end": 45,
"start": 44,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 54,
"start": 54,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "make the best",
"end": 61,
"start": 57,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "travelling by plane",
"end": 69,
"start": 68,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 70,
"start": 70,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 86,
"start": 84,
"type": "Redundant"
},
{
"correction": "to spend",
"end": 87,
"start": 85,
"type": "Verb_Inf"
},
{
"correction": "car",
"end": 94,
"start": 93,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "ship",
"end": 96,
"start": 95,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 127,
"start": 127,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "should have",
"end": 151,
"start": 150,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 152,
"start": 151,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "flights",
"end": 168,
"start": 167,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "disastrous",
"end": 170,
"start": 169,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 172,
"start": 172,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "former",
"end": 220,
"start": 219,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "high probability",
"end": 232,
"start": 230,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "fastest",
"end": 286,
"start": 285,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "any",
"end": 290,
"start": 289,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "Kaprielova",
"end": 292,
"start": 291,
"type": "suggestion"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,904
|
National governments nowadays are seriously concerned about air travelling due to high levels of air pollution and effect called global warming , thatswhy they have to decide whether they should invent laws to decrease the number of flights or find another solvation . On one hand , great amount of air travel is damaging nature every day , not only because they consume huge number of resources , such as fuel , oil , but also because of poisoned gas and waist thrown into the air . Moreover , some people say that air travel in many cases is unnecessary , because we have lots of other ways of transport . In addition , this type of travel cause serious and dangerous long - term outcomes , especially global warming , hence contemporary governments have to take measures to prevent future disasters and destruction of the nature . On the other hand , introducing new laws to reduce the usage of air transport significantly seem to be too strict and not adequate to the situation , because it is still the fastest and the most comfortable way of moving from one place to another . Consequently , we have to focus not only on trying to decrease number of flights , using laws , but also on saving nature in general , taking actions against every source of pollution . Moreover , there are lots of alternative ways in solving problem of air pollution , except making laws : for example , finding new efficient sources of energy or improving air cleaning systems , or even making engines more efficient and less polluting . In conclusion , I would like to say that the best solution is to improve effectiveness of engines and to make the amount of gas thrown into the atmosphere fall down , until we find a new way of transportation , which would be faster , more comfortable and less damaging to our planet . To add , I think that appropriate option is to find a way to improve present transport , but not to get rid of it .
|
[
{
"correction": "its",
"end": 17,
"start": 17,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "that 's why",
"end": 23,
"start": 22,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "introduce",
"end": 31,
"start": 30,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "solution",
"end": 42,
"start": 41,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 44,
"start": 44,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 47,
"start": 47,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 63,
"start": 63,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "poisonous",
"end": 79,
"start": 78,
"type": "Suffix"
},
{
"correction": "waste",
"end": 82,
"start": 81,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "causes",
"end": 119,
"start": 118,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "effects",
"end": 126,
"start": 125,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "seems",
"end": 165,
"start": 164,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "stringent",
"end": 169,
"start": 168,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "stringent stringent inadequate inadequate to",
"end": 172,
"start": 168,
"type": "Absence_comp_colloc"
},
{
"correction": "inadequate",
"end": 172,
"start": 170,
"type": "Prefix"
},
{
"correction": "air travel",
"end": 178,
"start": 177,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 207,
"start": 207,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "measures",
"end": 224,
"start": 223,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "to solve",
"end": 240,
"start": 238,
"type": "Infinitive_constr"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 240,
"start": 240,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "besides",
"end": 246,
"start": 245,
"type": "Often_confused"
},
{
"correction": "such as",
"end": 252,
"start": 249,
"type": "Redundant_comp"
},
{
"correction": "reduce",
"end": 295,
"start": 294,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 315,
"start": 314,
"type": "Defining"
},
{
"correction": "In addition",
"end": 331,
"start": 329,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 336,
"start": 335,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "a suitable",
"end": 336,
"start": 335,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "Смирнова",
"end": 355,
"start": 354,
"type": "note"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,905
|
The following chart provides information about the amount of time spent , in general , on sports activity by the English citizens of different age and gender . According to the chart , men , especially young ones , dedicated more time to sports than women . For example , males in the age of 16 - 24 do exercises in the course of nearly 300 minutes , while women of the same age hardly could spent more than 100 minutes . However , in some cases the number of active women can be higher than men . As it can be observed , women in the age of 55 - 64 tend to be a bit more active than representatives of another gender . Another important feature , which is demonstrated by the chart , is that older people showed less activity than younger ones . While male teenagers spent almost 300 minutes on sports , the eldest people did not exercised more than 50 minutes . Overall , it can be observed that men in England are more active in doing sports than women , and the younger people spend more time on exercises than the older ones .
|
[
{
"correction": "at",
"end": 52,
"start": 51,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "did",
"end": 59,
"start": 58,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the day",
"end": 64,
"start": 64,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "for",
"end": 64,
"start": 64,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "time active women do sport",
"end": 92,
"start": 88,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "that of",
"end": 96,
"start": 96,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "at",
"end": 106,
"start": 105,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "little",
"end": 117,
"start": 116,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the other",
"end": 123,
"start": 122,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "demonstrated by the chart",
"end": 136,
"start": 128,
"type": "Attr_participial"
},
{
"correction": "exercise",
"end": 163,
"start": 162,
"type": "Tense_form"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 189,
"start": 188,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "exercise",
"end": 196,
"start": 195,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "older do",
"end": 200,
"start": 197,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "Сазонова",
"end": 201,
"start": 200,
"type": "note"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,913
|
The bar chart illustrates changes in the amount of children without access to primary school education during the period of 13 years ( 2000 - 2012 ) by sex and region . Overall , the main trand is that the number of such boys and girls has declined in all of the world . The most significant fall was in South Asia form approximately other tendention : the level of gender discrimination has declined too . In 2000 the number of girls without primary education was 2 times higher than the number of boys , but in 2012 the proportion became approximately equal . It is clear that the biggest number of children without access to school was in Africa in 2000 . It has fallen by 18,2 millions girls and 14,5 millions boys in 2012 . The general trand also affected the rest of the world . In proportion the situation quite the same as in Africa , but in absolute numbers it is the fall from 12,8 mill to 7,6 mill girls and from 10,5 mill to 7,7 mill boys .
|
[
{
"correction": "number",
"end": 8,
"start": 7,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "presented",
"end": 27,
"start": 27,
"type": "Attr_participial"
},
{
"correction": "trend",
"end": 37,
"start": 36,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 47,
"start": 46,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "all over",
"end": 51,
"start": 48,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "showing",
"end": 63,
"start": 62,
"type": "Participial_constr"
},
{
"correction": "showing",
"end": 63,
"start": 62,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "another tendency",
"end": 66,
"start": 64,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "tendency",
"end": 66,
"start": 65,
"type": "Suffix"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 73,
"start": 72,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "as high as",
"end": 90,
"start": 88,
"type": "Numerical"
},
{
"correction": "had",
"end": 125,
"start": 124,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "18.2 million",
"end": 129,
"start": 127,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "14.5 million",
"end": 133,
"start": 131,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "trend",
"end": 140,
"start": 139,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "If the ratio is taken into account ,",
"end": 150,
"start": 148,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "was",
"end": 152,
"start": 152,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "the level of uneducated children",
"end": 164,
"start": 163,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "fell",
"end": 167,
"start": 164,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "12.8 million",
"end": 170,
"start": 168,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "7.6 million",
"end": 173,
"start": 171,
"type": "Numerals"
},
{
"correction": "Смирнова",
"end": 183,
"start": 182,
"type": "note"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,914
|
I could not agree more that air travel is one of the cause of global warming and air pollution because of its greenhouse gases . However , I think that government regulation of this public transport hits the liberty . Let us analyze everything in detail . First of all , there are basic human rights which say that any travel should be free , despite the purposes . It means that authoritys could not order which travel is unnecessary . For example , statistics shows that about 50 % of people all over the world have very hard work , so they need continious rest . In this case it is illegal to ban rases to resorts . In addition , I believe that the majority of modern countries are democratic . Consequently , the government has not power to introduce such radical laws without public discussions . For instance , in Australia the authorityes got an idea to change the national flag in 2009 . But many cityzens were agains and after voting it was saved the old flag . On the other hand , my opponents argue that it is very dangerous to the natural environment to allow huge amount of air travel . I can not agree with that at all . I believe that the main cause of air pollution is greenhouse gases from our cars . Airplane is very expensive machine , so the amount of them is quite little in the world . However , there are thousands and thousans cars in our streets . All things considered , I strongly believe that governments should n't introduce laws to reduce the amount of air travel .
|
[
{
"correction": "can be considered a hit to personal freedom",
"end": 39,
"start": 36,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "claim",
"end": 58,
"start": 57,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "no matter for what",
"end": 67,
"start": 65,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "authorities",
"end": 73,
"start": 72,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "enough",
"end": 105,
"start": 104,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "flights",
"end": 116,
"start": 115,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "no",
"end": 139,
"start": 138,
"type": "Negation"
},
{
"correction": "authorities",
"end": 156,
"start": 155,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "citizens",
"end": 170,
"start": 169,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "against",
"end": 172,
"start": 171,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "against it",
"end": 172,
"start": 171,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "the the",
"end": 175,
"start": 174,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the vote",
"end": 175,
"start": 174,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "the old flag was saved",
"end": 181,
"start": 175,
"type": "Standard"
},
{
"correction": "for",
"end": 196,
"start": 195,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 201,
"start": 201,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "a very expensive mechanism",
"end": 237,
"start": 234,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "mechanism",
"end": 237,
"start": 236,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "there are few of them",
"end": 246,
"start": 239,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "millions thousands",
"end": 257,
"start": 254,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "thousands",
"end": 257,
"start": 256,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "Сазонвоа",
"end": 283,
"start": 282,
"type": "note"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,919
|
The chart illustrates the amount of children , which are do not have an opportunity to get education in primary school from 2000 by gender and areas . From the first glance , it is clear that Africa took the first place in the amount of children , which can not be educated in primary schools . The interesting fact , that the propotion of boys and girls is aproximately equal , everywhere , exept South Asia in 2000 . The number of girls as twice as bigger than boys ( 21,6 and 11,1 ) . Moreover , South Asia had the smallest number of uneducated children in 2012 . That was only 10 millions . Overall , it is crussialy important that the number of children without access to primary education was decreasing per years . However , Africa in 2012 still has the biggest amount , which is equal to number of children in South Asia in 2000 . However , the main trend is positive .
|
[
{
"correction": "number",
"end": 5,
"start": 4,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "who",
"end": 9,
"start": 7,
"type": "Defining"
},
{
"correction": "did",
"end": 11,
"start": 10,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "in",
"end": 22,
"start": 21,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "and in 2012",
"end": 23,
"start": 23,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "presented by gender and region",
"end": 27,
"start": 23,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "region",
"end": 27,
"start": 26,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "level",
"end": 45,
"start": 44,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "who",
"end": 49,
"start": 47,
"type": "Defining"
},
{
"correction": "could",
"end": 50,
"start": 49,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "It is interesting",
"end": 61,
"start": 57,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "proportion",
"end": 64,
"start": 63,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "anywhere",
"end": 70,
"start": 69,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "South",
"end": 74,
"start": 71,
"type": "Pronouns"
},
{
"correction": "anywhere",
"end": 74,
"start": 71,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "except",
"end": 75,
"start": 74,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ", ,",
"end": 80,
"start": 79,
"type": "Linking_device"
},
{
"correction": ", where",
"end": 80,
"start": 79,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 81,
"start": 80,
"type": "Capitalisation"
},
{
"correction": "twice",
"end": 85,
"start": 84,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "twice as big as",
"end": 89,
"start": 84,
"type": "Numerical"
},
{
"correction": "that of",
"end": 89,
"start": 89,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "It",
"end": 111,
"start": 110,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "crucially",
"end": 121,
"start": 120,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "over",
"end": 135,
"start": 134,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "the years under observation",
"end": 136,
"start": 135,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "had",
"end": 144,
"start": 143,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "number",
"end": 147,
"start": 146,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "was",
"end": 150,
"start": 149,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 152,
"start": 152,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "was",
"end": 167,
"start": 166,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "Пикалова",
"end": 169,
"start": 168,
"type": "note"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,928
|
Social media usage is on the rise and no are debates as to what its main purpose is , with some claiming it is information and knowledge sharing , and others refuting that sites such as Facebook and VK exist purely for entertainment . In this essay I will examine both of these views followed by a reasoned conclusion . More and more people use social media websites for educational purposes and thus regard this as the main aim of these sites . Indeed , not only many institutions and organisations have their own pages on social media site with sufficiently full and up - to - date information , but also it can be used by ordinary people as vital news outlet . For instance , during so - called « Black - out » , the series of resonant race - related protests aimed at combating unjust police brutality in the USA , social media such as Twitter and Facebook were often the only source of information for people not directly involved in the protests , as the conventional media relayed scarce or incorrect reports . There is undoubtedly another facet to social media , namely its entertainment value . A wide variety of games , quizes , musical playlists , visual collages etc . can be found on VK or FB any given day . It is because of this facet that many argue that social media should simply entertain , because it is a rare safe haven among a sea of negative information coming from elsewhere . Admittedly , you need only turn on your TV to see a report on a war or other tragedy within a few minutes . However , it is agreed that social media 's main purpose is after all , relaying information and knowledge . Entertainment value can still be found widely , one could say that the entire modern culture is built on entertainment . With this in mind , social media is unique in that it posseses a rare accessibility quality , usable for the widest array of people and is thus too important to neglect when discussing its information value . In conclusion , there is no consensus generally as to the main purpose of social media , but it is agreed that sharing information is more vital than mere entertainment as it possesses some unique qualities in this capacity such as accessibility .
|
[
{
"correction": "now",
"end": 9,
"start": 8,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "there",
"end": 9,
"start": 9,
"type": "Absence_comp_colloc"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 15,
"start": 14,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "and will then give",
"end": 55,
"start": 54,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "they",
"end": 113,
"start": 112,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "they they also",
"end": 114,
"start": 111,
"type": "Standard"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 120,
"start": 120,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "protesting against",
"end": 148,
"start": 147,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 199,
"start": 198,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "quizzes",
"end": 209,
"start": 208,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "on",
"end": 224,
"start": 224,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "they",
"end": 246,
"start": 245,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "are",
"end": 247,
"start": 246,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "in",
"end": 252,
"start": 251,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 253,
"start": 252,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "everywhere",
"end": 260,
"start": 259,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "only need to",
"end": 267,
"start": 264,
"type": "Standard"
},
{
"correction": "another",
"end": 279,
"start": 278,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 307,
"start": 306,
"type": "Redundant"
},
{
"correction": "are",
"end": 334,
"start": 333,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "they",
"end": 338,
"start": 337,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "possess",
"end": 339,
"start": 338,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "spectrum",
"end": 349,
"start": 348,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "are",
"end": 353,
"start": 352,
"type": "Lack_par_constr"
},
{
"correction": "be neglected",
"end": 358,
"start": 357,
"type": "Voice"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 361,
"start": 360,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "informational",
"end": 362,
"start": 361,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "a more important feature",
"end": 391,
"start": 389,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "there are",
"end": 397,
"start": 395,
"type": "Confusion_of_structures"
},
{
"correction": "Torubarov",
"end": 407,
"start": 406,
"type": "note"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,934
|
Nowadays in many families children spend less time with their parents than they did in the past . It happend because both parents go to work and have less time to spend with their children . To understand this trend in a more deep way it is important to take a closer look at the reasons of this phenomena and at the possible problems in can cause . According to the sociological classification of societies , we now live in post - industrial one . One of its typical features is the dominant position of nuclear family - a family of parents and children where two parents often go to work . Both mother and father have to go to work also because of severe financional conditions and the necessity to pay for the housing and child 's education . Moreover , now that we live in a modern society , women also have an opportunity of self - realization through work and of building a successful career . However , this trend may cause negative effects in the society . Children who grop seeing their parents seldom lack primary sociolazation , the most important one . It will then lead to the situation where people grow up without basic social and communication skills . Then , children feel not enough love and support from their parents and may unconsiously reproduce such family model in future , raising the generalizations of underloved individuals . Lack of parental love and attention causes anxiety , nervous conditions and even mental diseases , for example , depression . In conclusion , described phenomena takes its origins from high demands in modern society and also wide range of opportunities for women . Unfortunately , it affects society in a whole and particulary children in a bad way , creating a new model of reality where money means more than love and family values .
|
[
{
"correction": "happens",
"end": 20,
"start": 19,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "deeper",
"end": 44,
"start": 42,
"type": "Comparative_adj"
},
{
"correction": "deeper , it",
"end": 45,
"start": 42,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "for",
"end": 57,
"start": 56,
"type": "Prepositional_noun"
},
{
"correction": "phenomenon",
"end": 59,
"start": 58,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "it",
"end": 65,
"start": 64,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "society",
"end": 84,
"start": 83,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 95,
"start": 95,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "financial",
"end": 126,
"start": 125,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "neccessity",
"end": 130,
"start": 129,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "their children",
"end": 138,
"start": 136,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "their children",
"end": 137,
"start": 136,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "in",
"end": 148,
"start": 147,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "realising themselves",
"end": 160,
"start": 157,
"type": "Lack_par_constr"
},
{
"correction": "grow up",
"end": 184,
"start": 183,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "socialization",
"end": 191,
"start": 190,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "skill",
"end": 196,
"start": 195,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "later",
"end": 200,
"start": 199,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "do n't feel",
"end": 220,
"start": 218,
"type": "Tense_form"
},
{
"correction": "unconsciously",
"end": 230,
"start": 229,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 232,
"start": 232,
"type": "Countable_uncountable"
},
{
"correction": "generations",
"end": 240,
"start": 239,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "breakdowns",
"end": 255,
"start": 254,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the described phenomenon",
"end": 270,
"start": 268,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "phenomenon",
"end": 270,
"start": 269,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 281,
"start": 281,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "on the",
"end": 295,
"start": 293,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "particularly",
"end": 298,
"start": 297,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "Калашникова",
"end": 320,
"start": 319,
"type": "note"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,937
|
The given bar chart reflects how much sport is done by various sex and age groups in England . As it can clearly be seen , among the covered groups of males and females from 16 to over 75 years old , the younger spend more time on exercising , however , getting older , more and more people tend to reduce training length or abandon sports at all . To provide more detail , one can note that for both men and women the period of maximum time spent for physical activities is from 16 to 24 years , when human organism is at the apex of strength , fitness and development ; at the same time , young people are less vulnerable to diseases that would stop them from doing sports or limit them to a certain degree . It is also notable that at this period men do more than twice more sports than women . For the following two age groups , however , this difference decreases , and , according to the chart , whilst women tend to do exercise for 92,8 minutes at average for almost twenty years , the number of minutes men from the next age groups spend significantly decreases from 282,1 minutes to 153,8 and then to 120 minutes . By the age at 64 , as it can be observer on the chart , women prove to do even more sports than men . After this period , again , a rise in the average amount of time spent on training by men can be seen , and at 75 years , men devote time to sports in the same proportion to women as they did during the 16 - 24 year - old period .
|
[
{
"correction": "gender",
"end": 13,
"start": 12,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "be clearly",
"end": 24,
"start": 22,
"type": "Standard"
},
{
"correction": "observed",
"end": 29,
"start": 28,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "duration",
"end": 64,
"start": 63,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "sport",
"end": 67,
"start": 66,
"type": "Often_confused"
},
{
"correction": "information",
"end": 74,
"start": 73,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "on",
"end": 91,
"start": 90,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "body",
"end": 103,
"start": 102,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "peak",
"end": 107,
"start": 106,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "it",
"end": 136,
"start": 135,
"type": "Ref_device"
},
{
"correction": "during",
"end": 147,
"start": 146,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "did",
"end": 151,
"start": 150,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "as much sport as",
"end": 157,
"start": 154,
"type": "Numerical"
},
{
"correction": "ninety two point eight",
"end": 187,
"start": 186,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "on",
"end": 189,
"start": 188,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "two hundred eighty two point one",
"end": 210,
"start": 209,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "one hundred fifty three point eight",
"end": 213,
"start": 212,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "of",
"end": 223,
"start": 222,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "observed",
"end": 230,
"start": 229,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "from",
"end": 231,
"start": 230,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "are shown",
"end": 236,
"start": 235,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "as",
"end": 282,
"start": 281,
"type": "Conjunctions"
},
{
"correction": "when",
"end": 284,
"start": 283,
"type": "Conjunctions"
},
{
"correction": "the latter",
"end": 285,
"start": 284,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "do it",
"end": 286,
"start": 285,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "when they were 16 - 24 years old",
"end": 295,
"start": 286,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "Приходина",
"end": 296,
"start": 295,
"type": "note"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,950
|
There are many opinions about vital functions of social media including Facebook and Vkontakte . Some people argue that sharing knowledge is the most essential for social media . However , others contradict that entertaining is also important . On the one hand , nowadays social media are very convinient for downloading information . That is why so many people every day in the world save different files there . It is also much cheaper to use social media for information 's containing and sharing , because such alternative as downloading sites or port mail are not only take more time for using them but also expendurs of using them are way more higher . Furthermore , many pages in Vkontakte were created for sharing some books , lectures and other types of educational materials , which people can use for extention the frontier of their knowledge . So , social media became portals for sharing usefull information . On the other hand , social media also became sites where people can simply watch some funny videos or just spend time . Many people around the world watch movies , TV series and etc . in Vkontakte , because it is much cheaper than buying originals . Moreover , sometimes everyone wants to rest , their leisure time doing nothing and for that they use social medie . I personally believe , that such sites as Facebook and Vkontakte should entertain they public , because nowadays in real life we always face with some cruel or sad situations and social medie give us a chance to rest and it is basically a tool for making us happy . Furthermore , people in Japan called hikkikomori , who lives without leaving the house , always use social medie for interaction or entertainment . It is the way they can leave happily . In conclusion , social medie nowadays became the usuall thing without the we can not imagine our lives . By using them we can educate ourthelves and each other and also sometimes to keep being entertained . At the end , social medie are not simple sites and they are not supposed to have only one main function .
|
[
{
"correction": "argue",
"end": 33,
"start": 32,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "convenient",
"end": 50,
"start": 49,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "upload",
"end": 66,
"start": 65,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "in the world upload different files to upload networks every to",
"end": 69,
"start": 60,
"type": "Standard"
},
{
"correction": "to social networks",
"end": 69,
"start": 68,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "to keep and share information",
"end": 85,
"start": 79,
"type": "Infinitive_constr"
},
{
"correction": "alternatives",
"end": 89,
"start": 88,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "mail ports",
"end": 95,
"start": 93,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "mail ports",
"end": 95,
"start": 93,
"type": "Standard"
},
{
"correction": "expenses",
"end": 107,
"start": 106,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "expenses for",
"end": 108,
"start": 106,
"type": "Prepositional_noun"
},
{
"correction": "far",
"end": 112,
"start": 111,
"type": "Inappropriate_register"
},
{
"correction": "too high",
"end": 114,
"start": 112,
"type": "Coherence"
},
{
"correction": "to share",
"end": 125,
"start": 123,
"type": "Infinitive_constr"
},
{
"correction": "Thus",
"end": 149,
"start": 148,
"type": "Linking_device"
},
{
"correction": "have become",
"end": 153,
"start": 152,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "useful",
"end": 157,
"start": 156,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "have become",
"end": 168,
"start": 167,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "kill",
"end": 180,
"start": 179,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 192,
"start": 192,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 195,
"start": 195,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "the original the",
"end": 206,
"start": 205,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "the original versions",
"end": 206,
"start": 205,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "in doing nothing in",
"end": 218,
"start": 215,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "doing nothing in their leisure time",
"end": 220,
"start": 215,
"type": "Standard"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 220,
"start": 220,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "media",
"end": 227,
"start": 226,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ", for one ,",
"end": 230,
"start": 229,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "their audience",
"end": 243,
"start": 241,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "audience",
"end": 243,
"start": 242,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "come across",
"end": 253,
"start": 251,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 258,
"start": 258,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "media",
"end": 261,
"start": 260,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": ", ,",
"end": 268,
"start": 267,
"type": "Conjunctions"
},
{
"correction": ", as",
"end": 268,
"start": 267,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "to make",
"end": 275,
"start": 273,
"type": "Infinitive_constr"
},
{
"correction": "live",
"end": 288,
"start": 287,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 291,
"start": 290,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "media",
"end": 297,
"start": 296,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "with others",
"end": 299,
"start": 299,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "This",
"end": 305,
"start": 302,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "live",
"end": 309,
"start": 308,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "media",
"end": 316,
"start": 315,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "have become",
"end": 318,
"start": 317,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "usual",
"end": 320,
"start": 319,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "a usual",
"end": 320,
"start": 318,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "which",
"end": 323,
"start": 322,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "social networks",
"end": 333,
"start": 332,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "ourselves",
"end": 337,
"start": 336,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "In",
"end": 349,
"start": 348,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "media",
"end": 354,
"start": 353,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "simply",
"end": 357,
"start": 356,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "Миконова",
"end": 370,
"start": 369,
"type": "note"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,969
|
The graph provides information about the changing trends among the brands is the decrease in selling in the whole period of time - this referrs to Samsung , Blackberry and HTC . However , the brand Apple stays appart with the sharp rise of selling , showing the share from 40 per cents in 2010 to approximately 92 per cents in 2015 . It had some fluctuations between 2012 and 2013 years demonstrating a slight decrease in the percentage of share - about 10 per cents were lost , falling from 70 to 60 percents . The former brands demonstrating the decrease tendency have one brand showing the rise of the global shore between 2011 and 2013 going up from 20 to 40 per cents it is Samsung . This firm affected the fall of profits and share of Apple in 2013 , which was described before . Nevertheless , the former did not succeed in the rising tendency and fall gradually to approximately 15 per cents share in 2015 . Summing up , the common trend of law percentage of shares and income demonstrated rated by Samsung . Blackberry and HTC is overweighted with almost full 5 - year period success of the Brand Apple .
|
[
{
"correction": "sales figures of Apple ,",
"end": 26,
"start": 10,
"type": "Redundant_comp"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 29,
"start": 29,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "apart",
"end": 39,
"start": 38,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "sales",
"end": 45,
"start": 44,
"type": "Category_confusion"
},
{
"correction": "growth",
"end": 49,
"start": 48,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "cent",
"end": 53,
"start": 52,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "cent",
"end": 60,
"start": 59,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "profit",
"end": 81,
"start": 80,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "cent",
"end": 86,
"start": 85,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "per cent",
"end": 95,
"start": 94,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "other",
"end": 98,
"start": 97,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "demonstrated",
"end": 100,
"start": 99,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "tendency towards the decrease",
"end": 103,
"start": 101,
"type": "suggestion"
},
{
"correction": "with",
"end": 104,
"start": 103,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "share",
"end": 113,
"start": 112,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "per cent",
"end": 125,
"start": 124,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "cent :",
"end": 125,
"start": 124,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "was",
"end": 127,
"start": 126,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "accounted for",
"end": 132,
"start": 131,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "gradually",
"end": 161,
"start": 160,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "gradually fell",
"end": 162,
"start": 160,
"type": "Standard"
},
{
"correction": "cent",
"end": 167,
"start": 166,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "low",
"end": 179,
"start": 178,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "profits",
"end": 182,
"start": 181,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "was",
"end": 184,
"start": 184,
"type": "suggestion"
},
{
"correction": "were",
"end": 193,
"start": 192,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "were",
"end": 193,
"start": 192,
"type": "suggestion"
},
{
"correction": "overpowered",
"end": 194,
"start": 193,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "by",
"end": 195,
"start": 194,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 205,
"start": 203,
"type": "Redundant_comp"
},
{
"correction": "Suvorova",
"end": 207,
"start": 206,
"type": "note"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,970
|
Nowadays it is argued that children lack attention from their parents because the latter are busy with their work . This essay will introduce the major reasons for such a phenomenon with the coming out problems ending up with reasoned conclusion . One of the main reasons for such a change in parents - child relations is the necessity of earning extra money for the proper kid 's development in future . This means that the contemporary society bounds the flexibility of parents ' choices about their kid 's future - they all have to find a good kinergarden for the child provided with facilities of developing talents - among them are sports arts and music schools . Resulting in the shortening of spare time spent with children , parents have to ask the older generation for help - calling grandparents to look for the kids , for instance . However , this probable solution for a problem may seem good only from the first sight - it causes another difficulty in itself : the notion of « parents » changes and trans forms as kids have two « pairs of parents » and the roles in family completely mix up . This means the dychotomic problem for both parents and children . The former loose connection with the beloved , for whom they work and try to do their best , and the latter lack opportunity to gain experience about the contemporary society with changing values ( incomparable with the « grand - parents » generation earned . The good illustration may be the kids grown up by their grandparents in the 1990s , when the economic crises and socially instable situation in Russia did not provide any offer wayout for the parents , but hardworking for their children 's future . This wide - spread practice resulted in childrens ' fuling of being emotionally weak and afonuised from the harsh world outside - many of them refused going to . University and to work , as they have not gained the new values and need of survival in competitive economic system . Summing up , the economic needs for competitiveness and both survival farcing parents to do extra work resulted in shortcoming of the time which could be spend on bringing up the kids and giving them experience about contemporary society 's situation . Despite the grandparents are in most cases ready to keep , they can not transfer the values of the new world to the kids and their results in the loss of the way and paths of life for the grown - up adults in future .
|
[
{
"correction": "to earn",
"end": 61,
"start": 59,
"type": "suggestion"
},
{
"correction": "imposes limitations on",
"end": 79,
"start": 78,
"type": "suggestion"
},
{
"correction": "kindergarten",
"end": 99,
"start": 98,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "for",
"end": 106,
"start": 105,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 113,
"start": 113,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 114,
"start": 114,
"type": "suggestion"
},
{
"correction": "This results",
"end": 119,
"start": 118,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "so",
"end": 129,
"start": 129,
"type": "Linking_device"
},
{
"correction": "after",
"end": 144,
"start": 143,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 156,
"start": 155,
"type": "suggestion"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 157,
"start": 156,
"type": "Coherence"
},
{
"correction": "at",
"end": 163,
"start": 162,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "transforms is redundant when there is changes",
"end": 184,
"start": 181,
"type": "Redundant_comp"
},
{
"correction": "or three",
"end": 188,
"start": 188,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 197,
"start": 197,
"type": "suggestion"
},
{
"correction": "are completely mixed",
"end": 200,
"start": 198,
"type": "suggestion"
},
{
"correction": "a",
"end": 206,
"start": 204,
"type": "Coherence"
},
{
"correction": "lose",
"end": 216,
"start": 215,
"type": "suggestion"
},
{
"correction": "society of",
"end": 251,
"start": 251,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "their grandparents '",
"end": 256,
"start": 251,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "crisis",
"end": 279,
"start": 278,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "unstable",
"end": 282,
"start": 281,
"type": "Prefix"
},
{
"correction": "other",
"end": 290,
"start": 289,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "",
"end": 295,
"start": 294,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "working hard",
"end": 297,
"start": 296,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "feeling",
"end": 313,
"start": 312,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "to go",
"end": 330,
"start": 328,
"type": "suggestion"
},
{
"correction": "had",
"end": 340,
"start": 339,
"type": "Tense_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the new",
"end": 350,
"start": 350,
"type": "suggestion"
},
{
"correction": "forcing",
"end": 366,
"start": 365,
"type": "Spelling"
},
{
"correction": "shortage",
"end": 374,
"start": 373,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "spent",
"end": 381,
"start": 380,
"type": "Voice"
},
{
"correction": "Although",
"end": 397,
"start": 396,
"type": "Linking_device"
},
{
"correction": "help",
"end": 406,
"start": 405,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 420,
"start": 420,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "this",
"end": 422,
"start": 421,
"type": "SYN:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "wrong choice of",
"end": 430,
"start": 425,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "Suvorova",
"end": 442,
"start": 441,
"type": "note"
}
] |
realec-raw
| 3,972
|
Some people believe that social networks , including Facebook and Vkontakte , are aimed at entertaining users while others consider them to be a way for sharing information and knowledge . In my opinion , people use social media mainly to disseminate or gain some relevant informational content . Vkontakte or Facebook contain such a lot of data as books , films , audio files or just different facts . We use all of them to learn something new or to discuss with our friends . Furthermore , nowadays social networks are a place where educational resources can be found . There are special pages where teachers arrange lectures about certain themes or where students can share their knowledge with each other . What is more , social media has become a really important way to disseminate information . For example , if somebody is seriously ill and needs to have too expensive medical treatment , his relatives gain requires sum of money from different users of a social network . However , there is a different opinion . There are those who think that social media is a way only to entertain ourselves . They claim that the majority of people use it in spare time just to relax by chatting with friend and watching funny videos . There is some truth in what they say but I can not support their point of view . I 'm sure that modern people are aimed of gaining profit , so even in their leisure time they try to get some necessary information . In conclusion , social networks have become an important resource through which we can share data and our knowledge .
|
[
{
"correction": "aim",
"end": 14,
"start": 12,
"type": "Voice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 17,
"start": 17,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "to share",
"end": 27,
"start": 25,
"type": "Infinitive_constr"
},
{
"correction": "get",
"end": 44,
"start": 43,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": ",",
"end": 65,
"start": 65,
"type": "Punctuation"
},
{
"correction": "something",
"end": 82,
"start": 82,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "have",
"end": 130,
"start": 129,
"type": "Agreement_errors"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 157,
"start": 156,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "can appeal to can",
"end": 159,
"start": 158,
"type": "Absence_comp_sent"
},
{
"correction": "can appeal to can",
"end": 159,
"start": 158,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "the",
"end": 160,
"start": 159,
"type": "Participial_constr"
},
{
"correction": "the required",
"end": 160,
"start": 159,
"type": "Articles"
},
{
"correction": "to",
"end": 164,
"start": 163,
"type": "Prepositions"
},
{
"correction": "can appeal to the required sum required sum to different users of a social",
"end": 170,
"start": 158,
"type": "Standard"
},
{
"correction": "using social networks",
"end": 187,
"start": 185,
"type": "Absence_explanation"
},
{
"correction": "networks",
"end": 187,
"start": 186,
"type": "lex_item_choice"
},
{
"correction": "them",
"end": 204,
"start": 203,
"type": "REF:LONG"
},
{
"correction": "their",
"end": 205,
"start": 205,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "friends",
"end": 214,
"start": 213,
"type": "Noun_number"
},
{
"correction": "this",
"end": 233,
"start": 232,
"type": "Determiners"
},
{
"correction": "nowadays",
"end": 242,
"start": 241,
"type": "Word_choice"
},
{
"correction": "focused on",
"end": 246,
"start": 244,
"type": "lex_part_choice"
},
{
"correction": "Жукова",
"end": 283,
"start": 282,
"type": "note"
}
] |
Subsets and Splits
No community queries yet
The top public SQL queries from the community will appear here once available.